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Ambyssin

Gotta go back. Back to the past.
Location
Residency hell
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. silvally-dragon
  2. necrozma-ultra
  3. milotic
  4. zoroark-soda
  5. dreepy
  6. mewtwo-ambyssin
Time to return to Jade & Loog’s Bogus Journey.

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-So, like, if Sebastian’s surrounded by multiple powerful psychics, what’s stopping one of them from sifting through his memories, discerning Latios’ location, then killing him? What are the rules, damn it?!
-Well, as long as Lugia’s bringing up letting Rocket try to capture it… just let Jade catch you and avoid that ever being an issue, ya oversized wingull! That’d solve the entire fic! :V
-Respectable Aqua and Magma? So, like, the former are pirates that go around attacking anyone who tries to dump pollution in the ocean and the latter aggressively pursues litterers. Basically, they’re two parts of the Captain Planet team.
-Ah, yes, the old “I just want you to inconvenience them, but not outright stop them b/c if they have some success it can benefit me” gambit. But if the whole Indigo Plateau thing was a set up, why use two high-ranking executives who might be better served attacking Aqua and Magma? ^^;
-Using the Emerald locations for their hideouts, are we? it’s not like it’s the only game that shows both of their hideouts or anything
-And then Rudy developed a caffeine addiction. F.
-If this chat with Swift and monologue isn’t giving me “Someone’s gonna die” flags, I dunno what is. Given the attitude, I’d put money on Jet getting offed.
-I’m glad Jade expects things to go wrong, because things are going to go wrong because your author doesn’t want you to be happy, Jade.

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-Yes, Jade, it could be magma. Didn’t you see their redesigned base in ORAS? (Maxie has glasses in your art, so I’m assuming you went with ORAS as the reference visually.)
-It appears Courtney’s going off her ORAS persona. So, yeah, definitely the remakes. we gonna see megas, then?
-Ah, yes, super death. Not quite as bad as ultra death, but still bad.
-Pasty-faced, rotund Tabitha kept his habit of being shocked by children, I see.
-Hell yeah, Godzilla just no-sells the gunfire and fucks everyone up. I suppose this is a display of what pseudolegends are capable of in-universe.
-Interesting Helping Hand(?) depiction from Linoone. And I appreciate giving Magma grunts a slight bit more variety than what the games give them.
-Wreck their shit, Latias! You got this, sweetie.
-Pretty sure you need to combine Grass and Water Pledge for a swamp, not Whirlpool and Sand Tomb. >:(
-Courtney’s little outburst spark tendencies are still present, hee hee.
-Oh, I guess they just teleported the executives over or something. Sure. But what would’ve happened if one or both of them had gotten killed by Lugia or Ho-Oh, huh? I stand by it being not the smartest decision on Rocket’s part.
-Entei used Eruption, I believe? I don’t think Maxie’s base insurance is gonna kick in for this one.
-Darren: Nobody expects the Moltres Inquisition! Raven: Screw you guys, I’m going home!
-MeGAS coNfiRmED!!!!!!

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-And we’ve got yet another reminder that Jade’s mind is permanently fucked up from all this stuff and she can’t not think about all this combat stuff. It is, admittedly, starting to get a bit heavy handed for me at this point. [insert Ace Ventura “War… is hell” GIF here]
-150 miles? Using freedom units in this Japan-inspired region? For shame! 50 points from Chibindor.
-Aqua’s ORAS designs are just infinitely better than their RSE ones. :V
-When Archie mentions it’s rich that Magma came to help, you follow the dialogue with Tabitha folding his arms, which makes it seem like it’s Tabitha saying that. Need to be careful of that going forward.
-Avast, ye scurvy Rocket landlubbers! It be Cap’n Arrrrrrchie and his Mega Anchor! At least he gets one shining moment before Raikou or Zapdos show up to wreck his shit.
-... or Groudon could wake up. If megas are here, nothing’s stopping you from turning it primal and having Desolate Land completely neutralize Team Aqua.
-Or Groudon could wake up and Raikou could show up to wreck shit. Yeah, wow, you certainly don’t like giving your protagonists any hope, do you? Puhuhuhu…
-Courtney actually gets to have a moment of badassery! y’know she might make a decent crack ship with lexx if she wasn’t head over heels for maxie.
-Taking hostages with Articuno, hmm? It looks like Archie got stuck in… Ender’s game. 😎
-[deadpan] oh no ender got the blue orb and teleported away. Who could have possibly seen this coming except everyone? Again, no hope allowed. Only despair.

43
-Skarmory with holes. Swiss Cheese Skarmory. Swissmory.
-Welp, it gets a lot less funny when you have Jet show up with the same conundrum, but with the added possibility of nearly drowning.
-Wait, if Team Rocket has Master Balls, what was stopping Raven from just chucking one the moment she woke Groudon up with the Red Orb? Like, don’t even give it time to emerge from the Cave of Origin like that. Unless… oh dear…
-Another dialogue misalignment: you have Starr scoff after Latias speaks to Steven. But also, ayyy, Steven! I can forgive excluding the Kanto E4. :3
-Ha ha imagine if the League was secretly bankrolling/sponsoring the Rockets’ work, how fucked up would that be? I sure hope that’s not true. I sure hope.
-Yup, okay. It’s definitely dawning on me that Team Rocket might be less interested in Groudon and Kyogre and more interested in Shenron. Should’ve gathered the Dragon Balls instead of those orbs. Would’ve been way easier.
-It’s interesting seeing you have Lugia clash with Kyogre like this. I realize this fic was conceptualized long ago and the “order” you made is entirely Tohjo-focused, but the fandom seems to have collectively adopted the general headcanon of Kyogre being stronger than Lugia. Or you have people like me who headcanon Lugia as serving under Kyogre, ha ha.
-And there’s the confirmation: they’re after the space noodle.
-And, right on cue, there is the space noodle. As angry and ALL CAPS as Primal Dialga. Yeah, I’m personally more of a “used bold text for a loud booming voice” than an ALL CAPS guy.

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-Okay, good, Space Noodle doesn’t always speak in caps. Thank, uh, it?
-Choice Specs on Articuno? It seems like it’s only shot around Ice Beams so far. :P
-If only Space Noodle had its Delta Stream to weaken the Ice Beams. Where are some meteors when you need ‘em?
-oh my god they DID give Articuno specs, didn’t they? Lmao.
-Are… are Groudon and Kyogre the godly equivalent of an old married couple? [blinks] The way they talk so casually about this leads me to that conclusion. There’s nothing else I can really gleam from it.
-Aww, they’re both terrified of Mega Space Noodle. That’s adorable.
-I didn’t even let myself get interested in the possibility of Jade properly getting the orbs to Groudon and Kyogre because of the way this fic works. We hadn’t seen Sebastian, so naturally he shows up and things descend into complete and utter bedlam. And then you have to end things off by being a jerk to Latias, too. Meanie. With the way the Draco Meteors are described, I’m willing to bet that Latios is also outfitted with some sort of item. His own Choice Specs, perhaps? Or a Life Orb? Soul Dew got nerfed into uselessness with Gen VII, but I suppose you could ignore that, too. I don’t think it’s a Latiosite because he’d have used it by now.

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-I feel like at some point the protags need to address the whole “catch to avoid Rockets catching” thing because it’s having the same grating effect on me as a reader that HoC’s Divine Decrees did: an artificial element being put in place for the sake of creating tension where there doesn’t need to be any.
-Also, gotta say, this fic being filled to the brim with Master Balls makes them somehow feel a lot less special than they’re canonically made out to be. I’m going to assume Giovanni just booted up PKHeX or rigged the box ID lottery game. :P
-Yeah, I had a bad feeling Latias was going to be a “casualty” of choosing to pursue Sebastian. Again, what is it with you people and having Team Rocket be mean to latis?
-And on top of that, Team Rocket gets away with Space Noodle I guess. Fission Mailed and all that jazz.

I confess I haven’t actually read the Animorphs series, but I’ve heard the ending throws some people for a loop. Since we’re past the halfway point, I find myself wondering if the “best” ending this fic could possibly hope for is a bitter one, as opposed to a fully depressing one. In other words, I do think I’m starting to slip into the “darkness-induced audience apathy” side of things. Since, well, I’ve finished a string of fifteen chapters where pretty much nothing went right for the protagonists and I expect the next chapter or two to try and offer them some bit of hope. However, I now also expect that to be nothing more than smoke and mirrors. Hell, I wouldn’t be surprised if Jade expects the next… whatever to fail and it does end up happening.

Don’t get me wrong, it is well written. If your goal is to make the reader feel as though misery awaits in future chapters, then you’ve certainly accomplished that. I would love to be proven wrong. But I must admit I’m the kind of guy who likes this kind of stuff for the escapism aspect. I mean, it’s not like past!Chibi could’ve known what an awful state the world would be in when they began this endeavor. So, I can only read something that leaves me feeling bummed and depressed for so long before I just have to give up the ghost altogether.

Again, I would love to be proven wrong. But since people bring up Animorphs when talking about your fic (including you in the blitz hype thread), I can’t say I have much hope.

So, the fic so far gets a “Mukuro Ikusaba, the sixteenth student hidden in the academy. The one they call the Ultimate Despair. Watch out for her./10.”
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. quilava-fobbie
  6. sneasel-kate
  7. heliolisk-fobbie
Heya, took a while, but as mentioned, I'm back to take another bite at the apple for reviewing The Legendarian Chronicles. Namely by taking a solid dive into...

Chapter 1

June 5

Summer days were made for this—made for the blast of wind in my face and the rush of exhilaration as my bike flew down the street. The slightest twinge of fear pricked at the back of my head, but it was easy to shove aside. My eyes focused straight ahead, blocking out everything else. Teeth clenched. Fists tightened on the handlebars as I closed in on my target. Just a few more seconds and I’d pull back on the handlebars at just the right moment and—

“Aw yeah!” I yelled, throwing a fist towards the sky as my bike flew through the air. No matter how many times I jumped that same ramp, those precious few seconds of being airborne were the greatest thing in the world. I landed several feet away with a thud and immediately veered my handlebars to double back in a wide arc, waving toward the top of the hill.

“Did you see how much air I got?!” I yelled.

Well I suppose this explains a lot about how Jade thought to get sucked into being a mole within TR. Just from her first appearance post-Prologue, you’ve established she’s a risk-taker from the jump.

“Big deal, I can beat that!” Rudy called out to me while speeding downward on his bike. The usual determined grin covered his tan face; his dark eyes were wide and full of confidence as he raced downward. Neither of us were really experts at this whole biking thing, but who cared? It was by far the best way to spend the after-school hours, and summer offered the promise of biking every day.

I sluggishly pedaled upward, still watching him race toward the ramp. Which is why I never saw it coming.

Out of nowhere, a black blur shot into the street, skidding to a halt right in front of me. I swerved instantly to avoid hitting it, but then—crap, I was heading for a parked car—had to turn! I spun way too far, my front wheel hit the curb sideways, and then I found myself toppling over into a sprawled heap on the grass.

Uhh… yeah, that’s one of the attendant side-effects of taking risks for thrill-seeking. There were already a couple moments like this in the portion of the story that I’d gotten up to, so talk about your ominous foreshadowing…
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Well, that was random. But there was really only one thing that could have done that. Sure enough, only a few seconds passed before I felt heavy paws on my chest. Black fur covered my entire field of vision, and the air was filled with musty, hot breath and uneven panting.

“Ow… get off, Ebony!” I yelled, shoving the Houndour away. She lumbered off, but sat down less than two feet from me, apparently fighting the urge to jump on me again.

I sighed exasperatedly. “You’re never gonna get tired of this game, are you?” Sure, she knew me, but still felt determined as ever to ‘protect’ her home and her owner—who was now standing next to his bike, cracking up.

Jade: “Wait, am I even wearing a helmet right now? Since if not, I’m pretty sure this ‘protection’ could’ve given me a head injury had my landing been a little off.” .-.
Ebony: “*Well your head is uninjured, so nothing to fear! My protection did its job.*” ^^

“Pfft—shut up, Rudy,” I laughed, climbing to my feet and wiping the grass from my baggy shirt and jeans. “How’d Ebony get out this time?” I glanced back at the energetic puppy, who was now wagging her stubby tail with the hope that she could play with us.

“Dunno,” Rudy said, shrugging. “I guess I didn’t close the backyard up good enough. At least Chloe didn’t follow her.” He grabbed Ebony’s collar and led her toward his backyard. The Houndour followed without struggle, though she made an exaggerated show of dragging her paws as heavily as possible.

I can already hear the loud “I was helping!” on the way out. :V

“Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you—I get to bring Ebony with me when I leave,” Rudy spoke up casually, like I already knew what he was talking about.

“Huh?” I said, not really sure what he was getting at. And then my brain clicked into place. “Wait, wait… You’re leaving on a training journey?”

“Yeah, didn’t I tell you?” he asked.

“No. You didn’t,” I said flatly, a sinking feeling growing in my stomach. Really, he waited until now to tell me something like this?

Jade: “... What on earth is it with my friends and leaving me out of major life changes these past few months?” >_>;

“Yeah? Er, sorry… but you can’t be surprised. I mean, school just got out, I passed the exam—why would I wait? It’s like the most perfect time to start training.”

Unfortunately, he was right. Summer really was the best time to start a training journey, even though you could apply to take the exam at any time after passing the required two years of Pokémon handling courses beforehand.

I’m actually pretty sure that’s the same take that PokéSpe uses since I could’ve sworn there was at least one arc where one of the regional protagonists basically had it as a self-imposed challenge to get through the League in 80 days of summer break or something like that. Still fun to see little worldbuilding assumptions lying about here and there like those.

“You realize you’re pretty much the only person I know who hasn’t left on a journey yet?” The words were out of my mouth before I’d had time to fully think them through.

He shrugged. “I guess? But that’s only because I’m starting late.”

“Getting your license at thirteen isn’t that late. My not having a license at fourteen? That’s late,” I grumbled.

Rudy: “... You said the same thing back when you were eleven.” :|
Jade: “Look, not everybody’s able to just go out onto a route gushing about their Rattata in the middle of grade school, okay?” >.<

“Oh come on,” Rudy said, looking kind of bored with my complaints after having heard them a dozen times. “I still say you should just take Swift and leave, license or no license.”

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I stared at him. “I’m not gonna train Pokémon illegally. I’m not that stupid.”

Rudy: “So in other words, I should expect you to set off sometime in about a week-”
Jade: “Rudy!” >.<
Rudy: “What? There’s 50 chapters of this story, and I refuse to believe you’re just going to bum around home here for more than 3 of them.”
Jade: “(More like one if that title is anything to go by.) Look, it’s the thought that counts!” >_>;

“Alright, alright, it was just an idea,” he said, waving a hand impatiently. “I’m just saying if I failed the exam twice, that’s what I’d do—just take Ebony and leave. Though it would kinda suck not getting a starter.

Yeeeeeeeah, that sounds like a pretty good reason to get a license.


“Yeah, that’s definitely the worst part about training illegally,” I said. Then again, this was a nice place to change the subject. “So… which starter are you gonna pick, anyway?”

Rudy gave me a look like I was the dumbest person in the world. “Do you seriously think I would pick anything other than Charmander?

So in other words, in a more normal journey, Rudy wouldn’t have made it past Cerulean City for most of the summer.
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“Right,” I said, rolling my eyes. “Because already having one fire Pokémon just isn’t enough. This way you can light even more random crap on fire.” I guess the flame-tailed Charmander would be a perfect match for him, in that case.

Remind me to never visit Rudy’s house if they use natural gas for heating and haven’t been keeping those pipes up to date.
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“I just hope they don’t run out of starters at the League registration building…” Rudy mumbled to himself as we led Ebony along a rock path to a fenced-off area of his backyard. “Maybe if Dad takes me there today—it is Friday—but so many trainers have already started…”

“Heyy, that’s right—Charmander is the most popular Kanto starter. You might get stuck with Bulbasaur,” I said tauntingly.

“Shut up,” he laughed. “I don’t like grass-types.”

Really? I had no idea.”

Ouch. Even in this world, Bulbasaur gets shafted.
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We stepped onto the grass and over to the fence where Rudy opened a gate and let Ebony in with Chloe. The latter wagged her fluffy tail nonstop as she nosed up against the fence, obviously hoping for a chance to play with us. When neither of us responded, the Growlithe turned around and immediately decided to roughhouse with Ebony instead. Rudy threw a glance around the rest of the backyard before suddenly clapping a hand to his forehead.

“Oh crud! I forgot to do my chores—my dad’s gonna kill me!” he exclaimed.

“I could help,” I said, shrugging.

He considered the offer for a bit, running a hand through his spiky black hair. “No, if my dad gets home and sees that you’re here… I wasn’t even supposed to be playing in the first place. Help me get the ramp in and then I gotta get to work.”

Jade: “Gee at this rate, you’re going to sleep in and get stuck with a Pikachu as a consolation prize of a starter or something like that.”
Rudy: “Look, just help me get the ramp in so I’m not grounded for the rest of summer.” >_>;

I groaned mentally as we ran back to the front yard—figures that something like this would come up. We grabbed opposite ends of the ramp and carried it to his garage, setting it in a corner next to the large pile of boxes that took up most of the space. He wheeled his bike in and slammed the garage shut.

“I’ll see ya, Jade,” Rudy said, running to the backyard.

“Later,” I said, swinging a leg over my bike and riding down the street to my house. Well, a perfectly good day of biking had been cut short. The only thing I could think of to pass the time was… bike some more. It seemed like a nice day to go riding around town for a little bit, in any case… just to take my mind off things.

I hadn’t realized it the first time, but there’s a lot of little details regarding what Jade does and finds fun that really lends themself well to foreshadowing the sorts of activities she’ll be doing later on in the story. Like I don’t think Jade would’ve exactly been as effective an adventurer if her first instinct was to beeline home and play Capsule Monsters all day in her bedroom.

I dunno if it was something that has always been there in this story, but it’s a nice touch to help tee things up for the wild ride to come.

I grabbed my wallet from my room, quickly scribbled a note to my mom on the first piece of scrap paper I could find, and was about to head outside when a fluttering noise from the other room made me stop. The source of the noise was the Pidgey sitting atop his wooden perch in the corner, flapping his wings lightly. He gave a few chirps, not saying anything in particular but hoping to get my attention in the smallest way possible.

“You don’t have to be so shy, Swift—you know you can come with me whenever I go for a ride,” I said, smiling and holding out my arm as the tawny bird flew over to perch on my shoulder. With that, I walked outside and mounted my bike once again, and the Pidgey took flight overhead, chirping contentedly.

I actually wonder if it’s possible to get a pudgy Pidgey with flight problems in this setting from overfeeding like in the anime. Not that Jade or her family have been having any problems with that.

I wandered the streets of Viridian City, glancing around at the various storefronts that I passed, half tempted to stop by the card shop or the c-store, but deciding against it. I mostly just wanted to ride aimlessly under the shade of the trees, enjoying the cool breeze and the empty sidewalks that came with it still being early in the afternoon. Every so I glanced up at the sky through the trees, hands drifting from the handlebars as my mind wandered back to the previous conversation.

What exactly is a ‘c-store’ again? Convenience Store? Or something else?

Rudy was leaving. Going on a training journey, like everyone else. And as much as I hated to admit it… I was glad when he didn’t have the credits to take the exam last year.

I’d never had all that many friends, but it seemed like for each one that left, I always had someone still here. Starr had been the first to leave, five years ago. Then Ajia three years ago, then all the aspiring trainers in my year, and then everyone I knew in the year below me. I didn’t even want to be a professional trainer; I just wanted to go with them. First I screwed up by failing Pokéspeech so many times that I didn’t have enough credits the summer after I turned twelve. Then failing the test the summer after I turned thirteen. And now this year. The crushing feeling of seeing that failing score… for the second time.

I completely forgot that there was that much of a timeskip between the prologue and here. I think. I suppose that answers what on earth happened with the 7 years the plot was set over, though.

I hated to think about it, and yet I didn’t want to do anything but think about it.

I was now nearing the edge of Viridian city; the trees and buildings on either side of the road had grown further apart, replaced with open stretches of tall grass. I’d just reached the point where the road merged with the highway to Johto, with trails leading north branching off into the forest—this was usually where I turned around. I glanced up at the sky and was about to call Swift, but he wasn’t there.

“…Swift?” I called out hesitantly, half expecting him to hear me and suddenly fly into view, even though the sky was completely open. Where had he gone? He had never done this before.

Jade: “Oh yeah, that’s not ominous… Swift? Where are you?”

“Swift!” I yelled, pedaling hard to power my bike along the route. A feeling of unease was spreading through the back of my mind. This wasn’t like him. Had something happened to him? There was no way, but I couldn’t see any sign of him in the entire… sky. I’d just realized. The sky was empty. No birds anywhere within sight, and these fields were usually full of Spearow.

“That’s… weird…” I muttered to myself. My eyes traced the horizon, hunting for any possible clue, when I spotted a plume of smoke within the trees to the north. What was that?

Jade: “... You know, this would probably be a good time to go someplace to borrow a phone and call the fire department.”
- Jade looks back at the apparent brush fire in the distance -
Jade: “... Or I could bike up there and check it out myself.”


Feeling almost compelled to head that way, I turned and rode along a trail leading north—towards the forest. I reached the treeline within minutes and kept going, unsure of whether I’d be any nearer to finding Swift when I could barely see the sky anymore. Still, I kept getting a vague feeling of significance, like this was important somehow. I couldn’t explain it, and the more time passed, the more stupid I felt.

I have to wonder if there was some sort of paranormal call going on or if that’s just Jade’s sense of adventure taking over since… yeah, I probably would not have done this at her age on my own. Though then again, I wouldn’t have biked for fun either. :V

I was just about to turn around when I caught sight of a winged figure passing over the trees above me.

“Swift?!” I yelled, not expecting much. It could have been any bird.

Except it wasn’t. It was him.

“Swift!” I exclaimed, holding out my arm for him to perch. “Why’d you fly off like that? What’s going on?”

Jade: “And boy was it really fortunate to find you here. Why on earth did you fly towards the fire?”
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His expression was reserved like usual, but distinctly troubled. He motioned a wing in the direction I’d been heading.

“Did you check out the smoke or something? Is there a fire?” I asked.

The Pidgey nodded. I glanced over my shoulder, but now that there was a thick canopy of trees above us, I couldn’t make out the smoke anymore. Then again… weren’t there a lot of fire-types living in the area? Fires had to be pretty common.

As an aside, but at least in the neck of the woods where I grew up, you could tell where places had been burned periodically since it’d have much thinner undergrowth. So… yeah, the fact that things are burning this bad even if there’s an expectation of regular brush fires is kinda a big red flag that something’s up.

Swift gave a low string of chirps. This time they had meaning, and I knew at least enough Pokéspeech to catch the words, “*It’s bad… come see.*”

He took flight again towards the ridge north of us, and I followed in silence for several minutes. In time, the air was filled with a thick haze, and a horrible stench burned my nose. And still we continued on until we reached the edge of the destruction. One moment we were within the thick of the forest, and the next, there was nothing but the charred remains of tree trunks and blackened bits of what had once been grass and leaves. Flurries of ash saturated the air, stinging my eyes. And that noxious odor just wouldn’t go away.

I stopped dead. For whatever reason, I realized that the odor saturating the air was burning flesh. These woods had been filled with Pokémon, all of them now dead. My brain really had no idea how to process any of it. Who on earth expected to see something like this on an ordinary day?

I shall refrain from making the tactless barbecue joke, even if I suspect someone like Ebony might’ve had she been present.
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“C’mon…” I muttered to Swift. “We don’t need to be here. We shouldn’t be here.”

But then I caught a glimpse of flame amongst the ashes, burning feebly at the edge of a dark mass. I leaned my bike against a tree before approaching it hesitantly, my eyes widening once I got a good look at it.

It was breathing.

The mound was alive. It was a Charmander.

I stared, unable to believe it. The lizard’s orange scales were burnt black, and with each breath its body shuddered, almost as if it were cold. The flame that should have burned bright yellow on its tail was little more than a tiny scarlet ember that flickered constantly.

I take it that Fire-types have relatively low heat resistance in this setting? Or is this a side effect of something like being weakened from oxygen deprivation? Since… yeah, in a bad enough firestorm, you’ll die from asphyxiation before you burn up.


Shaking slightly, I reached a hand towards it. I didn’t know why—it was like my arm was moving on its own. So far, the Charmander hadn’t reacted to my presence. I took a deep breath before awkwardly attempting to pull the blackened scraps of wood and leaves away from it. The lizard jerked suddenly upon having its skin exposed to the air, and I snapped my hand back. Okay, so trying to clean its wounds was a bad idea; what was I thinking. It wasn’t like I had any water or bandages anyway. In fact, water probably would have made things worse.

The fire-type didn’t move again after that. It was still breathing though, so I could only guess that it was out cold.

“I wouldn’t stay here much longer if I were you.”

Well that’s certainly a jump scare there.

I jolted at the sudden voice. Someone else was here? I threw a glance over my shoulder and sure enough, a figure was approaching me. The smoke obscured him at first, but eventually he came into view. He was several years older than me—at least eighteen or so—and quite a bit taller than me, with wavy brown hair and icy blue eyes. He was dressed in a black shirt with a long gray coat, navy blue cargo pants, and thick, gray boots. And he was currently examining me with a reserved expression that made me feel like I was being x-rayed. Somehow, his overall air was that of someone much older.

“What did you say?” I asked.

“You shouldn’t be here,” he repeated. “They wouldn’t want any witnesses, and”—he paused mid-sentence and suddenly asked, “Are you a Pokémon trainer? You look old enough to be one.”

“Um, no… not yet,” I admitted. After a few seconds of awkward silence, I asked, “Are you?”

Stalker: “I’m eighteen and in the middle of the woods next to the site of a giant fire, did you think I’d really come out here without Pokémon?”
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Jade: “Look, it was a valid question, alright?” >_>;

“I’d have to be if I wanted to carry these around,” he replied, pointing to the small red and white spheres clipped onto his belt. Right—only licensed trainers were allowed to use Pokéballs.

Now gazing at the ravaged landscape, he muttered, “Amazing how much damage humans can cause. The fire’s spread too far, though… how do they plan to keep it unnoticed?” I wasn’t entirely sure whether he was talking to me or just commenting to himself.

“Who did this, do you know—?”

“There’s no point trying to explain it,” he interrupted, walking further in the direction I had originally been going. “Just follow me.”

Jade: “Uh… on second thought, can you just text me some photos? I should probably get this Charmander to a Pokécenter and-”
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Stalker: “Nice try, you’re not running away from the plot that easily. (Also, I’m pretty sure you don’t have a cellphone right now, let alone one with reception.)”

I glanced back down at the pitiful form of the unconscious Charmander. I didn’t want to risk hurting it by moving it, but what choice did I really have? Was I supposed to just leave it here to die? I hesitated as long as possible, but then finally wrapped my arms around the lizard’s limp body, taking care to avoid its tail flame, tiny though it was. Its skin felt raw and sticky against mine and gave off a radiating heat.

Well that’s certainly a mental image there.
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The trainer was now just a hazy figure in the distance with all of the soot clouding the air, and I had to walk quickly to catch up with him. “How recently did all of this happen?”

“So recently that it’s still happening,” was the only response. We reached the edge of a ridge that overlooked an open valley between the forested hills. It was there that I saw what he was talking about.

A brilliant flash of fire tore across the mountainside before stopping suddenly in the middle of the clearing and unleashing a blazing heat wave outward. When the flames cleared, I saw it. A fantastically bizarre beast stood before us, shaking its head and ruffling its long brown mane. Jagged spikes framed its back, and a silky, cloud-like tail billowed constantly. The creature whipped its head around to take in its surroundings, and when it turned in our direction, I couldn’t help but stare open-mouthed. Its face was, in short, amazing—rimmed by brightly colored crests of red along the side, blue over the muzzle, and a crown of yellow over its eyes.

Entei. The Beast of the Volcano. A Legendary Pokémon of Johto. Right here, right in front of us, for real.

Jade: “Remind me to never respond to invites to barbecues from this guy.” ._.
Stalker: “Trust me, he won’t give you one. He certainly didn’t for the Pokémon around here.” >_>;


Suddenly, I heard a roar of engines to the right. A huge group of jeeps and trucks burst into the clearing, filled with countless armed adults. Entei recoiled backward, pelted by bullets—they were shooting it? The auburn beast slammed its shackled paws to the ground and let loose a wave of fire, incinerating everything within the valley. But then the flames cleared, revealing the vehicles’ protective energy shields. Around two dozen Pokémon charged forward from behind the jeeps, unleashing torrents of water at their target. Entei stood its ground with a determined glare, but I could still see it wincing in pain as steam poured off its body. I could still hear the fury in its roar as it tried to flee, gripped by the glow of something preventing its escape.

Surprised they didn’t opt to just hide behind cover and snipe at him with the likes of Hydro Cannon, since… yeah, considering what he did to the forest as collateral, you don’t want to get physically close to Entei.
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“What… how can they…? Why…?” I stammered.

There was a pause. Then came the reply, “Have you heard of Team Rocket?”

I tilted my head. “Well… pretty much everyone has heard of Team Rocket, right?” The notorious organization that had run this region’s criminal underworld for as long as anyone could remember. But knowing anything about them—that was a different story.

Stalker: “Take a good look, since this is what they do.”
Jade: “I-I thought they just stole kids’ lunch money and stuff like that…”
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“To the general public,” he continued, without acknowledging I’d said anything, “Team Rocket is nothing more than a widespread group of criminal gangsters. What the public doesn’t know is that for the past twenty years, the team has been making a slow push for total control over all of Kanto and Johto. On the surface, they’re still the same thieves, smugglers, and traffickers they’ve always been. But that just hides the fact that there’s another side to the team that no one knows about.” He motioned to the ongoing struggle down in the valley.

Words failed me. Everything he had said was kind of overloading my brain, and the only thing I could manage was, “How did you find out about this?”

The corners of his mouth turned up slightly. “Not all Rockets are satisfied with the direction the team is headed. Some of them have their own plans. Some of them are working against Giovanni from within the team.”

Jade: “So in other words, people like you.” >_>;
Stalker: “I’m allowed to have contacts, you know!”
Jade: “Yeah no, giving that whole spiel that only someone with knowledge of Team Rocket could have. There’s no way you’re not one of those dissident Rockets you just brought up.” >_>;

“Giovanni?” He couldn’t mean… the Giovanni? Leader of the Viridian Pokémon Gym?

“The current boss,” he clarified.

I shook my head. “Hang on, hang on. You’re telling me those crazy rumors that he’s involved with Rockets—they’re not just true, but he’s the boss?!

He nodded.

Jade: “Again. Not. Helping. Your. Case.”
Stalker: “Look, can you just let the story do the hard work of confirming or disproving your theory and listen to my exposition here?” >_>;

I couldn’t help staring. “You’re serious? That’s supposed to be, like… tabloid fodder for conspiracy nuts. If it’s actually true… shouldn’t more people know?”

“You underestimate the team’s influence,” he replied with a slight laugh. “They have agents working all over. Turning him in wouldn’t do anything.”

Stalker: “Mostly because he’d be out on the street within an evening.”
Jade: “Oh great, I feel so at peace from knowing all this already.” >.<

Well that was… unnerving. Really, what was I supposed to say to that? With a glance back at the blazing hillside, I asked, “Shouldn’t we do something? I mean, if we don’t—”

“We?” he said, his voice tinged with amusement. “You have a pet bird and a half-dead lizard; I’d be the one doing everything. And I know my limits. I can’t stop them alone.”

I glanced down at the dying Charmander in my arms, feeling rather miserable about all of this. Really, why did he even bother explaining anything only to flat-out tell me I was useless?

Jade: “Wait a minute, ‘you can’t stop them’? What are you getting at?”
Stalker: “Bold of you to think that you’re just going to be able to go home after all of this.”
Jade: “...”
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“What would you say,” he began slowly, with an unusual tone, “if I told you that a large-scale takeover might soon be within their grasp?”

I whirled around to face him, gaping in shock. “What?”

“That’s why they’ve taken to capturing Legendary Pokémon. If the heads of the combat unit had Legendaries at their disposal, there would be no stopping them.” His tone was perfectly casual, as though Team Rocket being on the verge of a regional conquest was normal, everyday conversation.

Stalker: “It is normal, everyday conversation. For me.”
Jade: “Yeah, well try keeping your frame of reference adjusted for a fourteen-year old girl here!” >.<


I was frozen, unable to process all of this. “…What do we do about that? Why are you telling me this?”

He gave me a very serious look. “Are you interested in helping stop Team Rocket’s Legendary project? Would you be willing to fight them?”

Jade: “Wait, you expect me to give a response right now?” ._.
Swift: “*Uh… Jade, not that this isn’t horrible for the poor Pokémon, but I really think you should go home and think this over before you do anything rash.*”
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I stared. How exactly was I supposed to fight them, and how did he expect me to? Didn’t he just say that there was no way I could help? I kept waiting for him to say something like “it would be nice if it were possible,” but his expression was cold and unflinching.

“How… what do you mean?” I asked.

“If you were able to stop Team Rocket from catching Legendaries, would you?”

I wanted to say “well, who wouldn’t?” but that didn’t seem like a very good answer. I found myself simply nodding.

Swift: “*JADE!*” >v<
Jade: “Oh come on, Swift. If you knew that you could make a difference, why wouldn’t you go ahead and try to stop them?”
Swift: “*Because it was a hypothetical question, and you’re a fourteen-year old without a trainer’s license!*” >v>
Jade: “... He hasn’t asked for a commitment yet?” ^^;
Stalker: “Yeeeeah, about that…”

He considered me for a while before reaching into his coat pocket and pulling out a small card. “This is your formal invitation to join a team against the Rockets,” he said, handing it to me. “I’ve been handing these out to people just starting their journey. Once you become a trainer, I want you to meet me at the location specified on the card, and I’ll tell you more.”

“But how—?” I began.

“What’s on that card is all I can say for now,” he said firmly. “Don’t lose it, and don’t reveal it.”

Swift: “*... Is it too late to lose the card and pretend that we never saw anything?*” ·v·
Stalker: “What do you think, little bird?”
Swift: “*I… think that I’m really not going to like the answer to that question.*”
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He unclipped a ball from his belt and pushed a button on it, causing it to enlarge and open. A flash of white light burst from inside and took the form of a tall dragon. Shiny, flaming orange-colored scales covered most of its thickly muscled body, save for a massive pair of blue wings. My eyes widened—it was a Charizard, the fully evolved form of Charmander. I’d never seen one in person.

He replaced the Pokéball and climbed onto the dragon’s back. It flexed its wings and outstretched them, flapping against the air and sending flurries of soot into my face. I shielded my eyes reflexively until the reptile had lifted off.

“I’ll see you,” the trainer said before soaring out of sight.

Jade: “Hey wait a minute! I didn’t give you a formal ‘yes’! And you can’t just leave me here right next to forty mafia goons with a half-dead Pokémon in my arms!
Stalker: “Circumstances have a way of sorting out priorities! Oh, and one more thing!”
Jade: “What?
Stalker: “Try being quieter!

“Later…?” I said, more to myself than him. How and why I’d see him later was beyond me. I looked at the small card he had given me and read.

If you have received this card, it is because you have been recognized as either a beginning trainer with the potential for skill, or an ambitious young trainer willing to face danger for the sake of stopping Team Rocket. If you are serious about joining a rebellion against the Rockets, then meet in Vermilion harbor prior to July 3 for further instruction.

Talk about vague. Still, it made sense, just in case Team Rocket got a hold of one of the cards. But was he really just giving them out to random trainers? Why was he doing this? And how on earth had I gotten myself mixed up in all of this?

I turned back to the battle that was still continuing. Everything about it was completely mind-boggling. The ridiculously powerful fire beast was still struggling to ward off its attackers, but its strength was waning. I still wanted to help it somehow, even though I knew I couldn’t do anything. It was frustrating, and I felt stupid about it. With a sigh, I sat down and continued to watch.

Swift: “*... Uh, Jade? Why are we still here again instead of trying to get that Charmander medical attention? Or… I don’t know, being anywhere else?*” >v>
Jade:
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And then it happened. The Rockets and Entei were now only about a hundred yards away from where I was sitting. One of the jeeps near the front of the formation suddenly broke from the group and began speeding up the hill in my direction. I stared stupidly at the vehicle racing towards me, unable to work though what it meant.

“Don’t… don’t tell me they…” My eyes widened as the realization hit me like a brick.

I’d been spotted. And they were coming for me.

Jade: “Oh, so that’s why that mysterious Charizard guy was telling me to be quieter…”
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Swift: “*We could’ve avoided all of this if we’d turned and left earlier!*” >v<

Alright, as for my overall thoughts. There were a couple of bits where I admittedly when "huh, but why don't you just [X]?", but they were largely easy to ignore after remembering: A: This fic was written before smartphones were mainstream. B: The protagonists are junior high students, so they're not always going to be on their A-game for taking the most sensible and logical course of action, since... yeah, I remember my time back at that age, and in retrospect, I was pretty dumb.

There's a lot of little flourishes to this first chapter that looking back seem to work really well at teeing up things to come. I dunno how much of it was always there and how much of it has been rolled in over successive revisions over the years. But stuff like Jade exhibiting a bit of a reckless and daredevil streak for what she chooses to do for entertainment makes it suddenly seem more believable that she'd let herself get sucked into the plot that TLC has going on in it.

Kudos, @Chibi Pika , I'll be looking forward to giving you at least one more review for your story in the next week and a half or so.
 
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Alrighty, time for some Blitz review replies. I'll be rounding up reviews about once a week. Next update should hopefully be the flashback extras!

How come everyone is impressed with Flygon and Absol? While they are clones, aren’t they just regular Pokémon at the end of the day?
It's mostly just that they're really high level! Most of the rebels' teams are approaching level 30, so sparring with level 50s is a big :O :O :O moment for them.

Wouldn’t this logically hurt Firestorm same way if another Pokémon used a Fire-Type move at him?
His own fire shares his aura, so he can't be hurt by it.

I see Darren has good taste in Pokémon.
Sneasel will go on to be a staple of his team for many chapters and she keeps sneaking her way into being the focus of way more scenes than I expected. :P

Anyway, this whole situation with the orb is pretty interesting! Definitely getting some “chosen one” vibes here as well. Will look forward to seeing how this will continue on top of all the stuff currently going on with Team Rocket. Their actions are totally gonna start the war, aren’t they?
Maaaaaaybe :3

I feel like this went a bit too easy for them. While I can appreciate not dragging things out by having Jade and Darren having to jump through several hoops just to get the right uniforms, it feels a little convenient that while infiltrating a Team Rocket base they can just go up to a closet, pull out officer uniforms, and put them on with no problem.
Yeah, it was mostly just that I didn't want them to deal with such a boring problem, although to Team Rocket's credit, any normal grunt wouldn't have been able to get access like they did. Most of the Rebellion's shenanigans are possible through Stalker's questionable resources.

If Firestorm or Sneasel are instead using an actual move, then maybe it can work, but from the way Jade was talking about this I didn’t really get the impression that that was her idea. If they do that they’re not just cutting through the wall, but also striking it with force.
It was pretty much just meant to be Slash, yeah. The sheet metal on the trailer isn't very thick, so they could cut through it in theory (noise is a valid concern, though.)

I’m not sure I understand. Didn’t they say earlier that they couldn’t teleport out? What changed? Since they didn’t know at first that they had to stay in the trailer to find out where the machine would get transported to, meaning that in the prior scene teleporting to someplace safe where Kadabra has been before would have been perfect for them.
Ah, in the previous scene, they were in the Rocket base, and you can't teleport from in there (I need to find a way to make that more clear without having them talk about it like they both don't already know.)

Pikachu KOing all of them with a mere Thundershock (even though Thundershock isn’t a multi target move and probably shouldn’t even be able to hit all of them, let alone be that damaging)
Ahh, I'm probably too used to anime portrayals of moves, what with Pikachu's Thundershock often hitting all three of the TRio.

I could be forgetting some things here, but has anybody ever gotten hit by a bullet?
Oh my god, of course the main character gets shot right after I make a comment about how nobody ever gets hit XD;
This was pretty great. xD But yeah, I get what you meant earlier. Although, this was pretty much the only mission where guns were a threat, since the Raikou mission was all stealth, and the plane incident had the protags behind cover most of the time. But I do have to admit there is a chapter upcoming that... is a bit of a major tone shift. Aaaand it's one of those things where I know it's divisive.

That… must be a very big Absol if she can carry a human on her back, since normally Absol are about the size of a large dog. Perhaps Darren is just really small? Since it’s not just about carrying him, she also has to maneuver quickly and fight all while having someone that’s about her weight (if not more) on her back. That should logically slow her down significantly, but it doesn’t seem to be the case.
Darren is indeed pretty scrawny for a 13-year-old, and I think of Absol as roughly the size of a large wolf. Someone like Jade definitely wouldn't be able to pull that off (in fact, Stygian later has to drag Jade away from a critical situation and struggles with it.)

While I understand that Suicune is a Legendary Pokémon and that they’re supposed to be very powerful, him being bulletproof (or at least being able to shrug off multiple bullets with literally zero effects) honestly breaks suspension of disbelief for me.
Ah, that's fair, but I was trying to show that Legendaries are really durable in this setting. That scene in particular was an homage to a scene I'm fond of from Princess Mononoke, where the wolf god Moro throws a half-dozen oxen off a cliff and barely flinches when she's shot by a cannon rifle.

Wait a minute, did you explicitly tie your story into the whole AZ thing going on in mainline at some point down the pipe in your story? Or was that just a happy accident that happened to just align with canon a decade down the road?
Lolol, it was a happy accident. For a long time I kept waffling on the time span, but then setting the cataclysmic era during the Kalosian war ended up being a convenient answer.

Okay, I'm gonna be nitpicky here, but I personally feel that if it doesn't blow up an intended plot build-up, it probably makes sense to drop in a sentence or two hinting a bit more concretely what those rumors are about.
Ohh, nah, the rumors were just meant to be the fact that Starr was leaving, hopefully it's a bit more direct in the edits.

Starr: "... Have you tried using a search engine, Jade?" :|
Jade: "To be fair, are phones with internet capabilities even mainstream in this setting? Since it certainly wasn't when this story was first written." ^^;
Bwaha, they weren't, but I've been slowly updating the march of technology over the years. (Jade's just too young to own a smartphone there.)

Okay, so I'm admittedly spoiled to the twist behind Starr's line there thanks to Blacklight. But it was something even before that happened that made me go 'hmm' internally when I first saw it. Since Viridian has a certain reputation in Kanto mainline.
Ahaha yep, that sure has been a common association over the years. :P So much so that I actually decided to bump the Viridian mention down a few paragraphs (hey, no longer being side-by-side is a lot less blatant!)

Well I suppose this explains a lot about how Jade thought to get sucked into being a mole within TR. Just from her first appearance post-Prologue, you’ve established she’s a risk-taker from the jump.
You know, it wasn't intentional, but I really like how Jade and Rudy's bike riding does kinda lay the foundation for her being an adrenaline junkie. :P

I completely forgot that there was that much of a timeskip between the prologue and here. I think. I suppose that answers what on earth happened with the 7 years the plot was set over, though.
Yep, and this'll also get reinforced with some of the childhood flashbacks that I'm currently adding to the earlier chapters.

Jade: “... You know, this would probably be a good time to go someplace to borrow a phone and call the fire department.”
- Jade looks back at the apparent brush fire in the distance -
Jade: “... Or I could bike up there and check it out myself.”
Bwaha, nice. (In the edits, she'll at least think to herself that this ought to be a job for the rangers, until Swift points out the Charmander.)

I have to wonder if there was some sort of paranormal call going on or if that’s just Jade’s sense of adventure taking over since… yeah, I probably would not have done this at her age on my own. Though then again, I wouldn’t have biked for fun either. :V
Ehh, mostly just the call to adventure, but given the fact that it kinda words like there is something psychic going on there, I'm better off editing.

I take it that Fire-types have relatively low heat resistance in this setting? Or is this a side effect of something like being weakened from oxygen deprivation? Since… yeah, in a bad enough firestorm, you’ll die from asphyxiation before you burn up.
That part was a little confusing, and I'm thinking of rewording it. Basically fire-types should have good heat tolerance, and I want Jade to be kind of shocked that a fire-type was this badly affected (because it was Entei, of course.)

Swift: “*... Uh, Jade? Why are we still here again instead of trying to get that Charmander medical attention? Or… I don’t know, being anywhere else?*” >v>
Bwahaha. Yeah, having her put him in a Pokeball is really gonna help make it less glaring that she doesn't go for help. )Side note, but I loved the little bits of character dialogue in this review, they were a lot of fun. x3)

Lolol I love how majestic the opening scene is, only for it to end up in what is basically an obnoxious psychic phone call.
I was so glad I got to include Mew in the new Prologue--having her there made it a lot more characterful. x3

Pokespeech! I see where Free got the idea from, eheheh. Or wait, is it the other way around? I know one of you had your fic inspired by the other, but I forget which is which.
Ahaha, it's pretty safe to say that anything shared between LC and TQftL was either made up independently or me borrowing from her. :P (In this instance, translated Pokespeech had been in LC for ages, but having it taught in school was thanks to TQftL.

After hearing so much about Starr as an Incineroar, it’s honestly a little weird to read about her as a human. 🤣 And…I’m assuming Blacklight Starr is older, right?
Bwaha, yeah, it's kinda funny getting back into the swing of writing her as a human. xD (Prologue Starr was 12, BLC Starr was 19.)

Oh, so trainers start at 12 here! Makes sense to me. 12 sounds more reasonable than 10, lol. And ouch, failing the exam twice…I wonder what about the exams she failed, exactly? Is she just not a good test taker?
Yeah, it's not a hard age limit, it's just customary for kids to journey during middle school, so it roughly ends up being 12. Schools hold testing at the end of the year. Now--technically, Jade could have applied to test more frequently than that, but the paperwork was intimidating so she kept putting it off, and she wasn't terribly motivated to study because she was convinced she'd fail anyway. It was a bit of a self-fulfilling prophesy. In the revisions, I want to have her convinced that she brought it on herself.

Wait wait but where is Charmander??
…oh, okay he’s still there. For a second it sounded like she didn’t have him in her arms anymore, with the word “flailing” being used.
Yeah, it was a little hard to imagine her flailing while also holding him. :P I'm planning to have Stalker give her a Pokeball so it's not so ridiculous.

Jeez dude, have some chill, a pidgey isn’t going to do much all on its own. Also side note, but I enjoy seeing you have guns in your pokeworld. Helps me feel more at ease about having guns in mine, if I’m being honest!
Tbh I think he was being pretty ridiculously extra there, shooting at a Pidgey. xD (It's probably getting nixed in the revision, lol)

Lololol Rudy is a real one. Please tell me he sticks around.
Absolutely ;P

I loved Firestorm and Swift stepping up to protect their trainer! I love the bond between them and Jade in general! They both really care about her!
I really like giving them moments to bond with each other! Glad you like 'em.

One thing, though, while the places themselves were described excellently, I had a hard time following with positioning. It was difficult for me to tell where characters were in relation to each other, or how the ship was structured. Maybe you could add a bit more detail about that?
That's fair! I'm planning to do some tweaks to that part so that Jade isn't literally running all over the ship anyway, as it was kind of weird that she didn't run into anyone (even at 3 am.)

-Using the Emerald locations for their hideouts, are we? it’s not like it’s the only game that shows both of their hideouts or anything
Emerald is the only valid interpretation, I refuse to put the Magma base in the sea. xD

-Oh, I guess they just teleported the executives over or something. Sure. But what would’ve happened if one or both of them had gotten killed by Lugia or Ho-Oh, huh? I stand by it being not the smartest decision on Rocket’s part.
Eh, the idea was for them to not directly engage with any legends, if any even showed up.

-MeGAS coNfiRmED!!!!!!
Would you believe that megas are actually super-critical to the plot? xD Can't say which ones though. Of course, the fact that Jade has four mega-able Pokemon has led to tons of comments. :P

-It’s interesting seeing you have Lugia clash with Kyogre like this. I realize this fic was conceptualized long ago and the “order” you made is entirely Tohjo-focused, but the fandom seems to have collectively adopted the general headcanon of Kyogre being stronger than Lugia. Or you have people like me who headcanon Lugia as serving under Kyogre, ha ha.
Hey, hey, Lugia's in the base 680 crowd just as well as Mewtwo, Rayquaza, and the other higher legends, and yet Kyogre is only 670. I rest my case. :V (Buuuut, the conception of Kyogre as the true lord of the sea would largely be Primal Kyogre, which ahahahaha... yeah, it could wipe the floor with the others.)

-I feel like at some point the protags need to address the whole “catch to avoid Rockets catching” thing because it’s having the same grating effect on me as a reader that HoC’s Divine Decrees did: an artificial element being put in place for the sake of creating tension where there doesn’t need to be any.
Yeah, I definitely would have liked to bring it up in Chapter 49, but it was too crowded, and my reasoning was mostly just that the protags never actually got to discuss it before they were forced to rush off into another mission. They finally get the breathing room to discuss in after the Hoenn arc. I can at least say that just having all the patrons catch themselves is not the end-all-be-all solution that certain characters think it is.

-Also, gotta say, this fic being filled to the brim with Master Balls makes them somehow feel a lot less special than they’re canonically made out to be. I’m going to assume Giovanni just booted up PKHeX or rigged the box ID lottery game. :P
Aaaaaand this is what happens when Red isn't around to prevent the Silph takeover. 🙃

I confess I haven’t actually read the Animorphs series, but I’ve heard the ending throws some people for a loop. Since we’re past the halfway point, I find myself wondering if the “best” ending this fic could possibly hope for is a bitter one, as opposed to a fully depressing one. In other words, I do think I’m starting to slip into the “darkness-induced audience apathy” side of things. Since, well, I’ve finished a string of fifteen chapters where pretty much nothing went right for the protagonists and I expect the next chapter or two to try and offer them some bit of hope.
Yeah, that's fair, the Hoenn arc was definitely the longest stretch of 'ogod' that the protags have seen yet. But I'd argue that chapter 39 was definitely a win for them, as they freed Moltres and added another chosen to boot. And the next four chapters will be pretty much devoid of mortal peril, with some lighthearted shenanigans in the 48/49 range. Even when things go badly for the protags, I like to give them moments to enjoy each other's company. Can't say too much about the ending, of course, but it doesn't have much in common with Animorphs. It's going to be very anime.

So, the fic so far gets a “Mukuro Ikusaba, the sixteenth student hidden in the academy. The one they call the Ultimate Despair. Watch out for her./10.”
i am slain

Thanks for the liveblogging! I laughed a lot. x3
 

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Back again, reviewing chapter 37! Only been like a year since my last actual review.

She rested her chin on her palm. “It wasn’t long after the revolt, so… two years ago.” Her voice held an air of disbelief, like she was amazed that it had already been so long. “The resistance had broken apart after our falling-out with the commander, and I didn’t know what to do. I didn’t have any more connections within Team Rocket, Sebastian had just flat-out told me I was a tool, and I didn’t have any power to make a difference in the fight anymore.”

I hesitated, unsure of how to word my next question. “Was… was it painful for you too? Being chosen?”

Ajia nodded slowly. “It’s a test of resolve. All of the negative emotions connected to the fight, all at once. You’re either consumed by them, or push through and join your spirit with the patron’s.”

Part of me couldn’t help suspecting that she hadn’t had quite as much uncertainty or trauma to fight through. But… no, that wasn’t fair. Ajia had endured more than her fair share of pain. Making it into some kind of suffering competition wouldn’t do any good.
I don't know, Jade, sounds like Ajia was in a pretty depressing place when chosen, too. Like, she sounds like she was totally lost and powerless. Couldn't say exactly how much trauma but I'm willing to bet it was plenty.

“You know, it’s kind of weird that the two of us both got mixed up with Team Rocket, completely separate from each other,” I said distantly. “I mean, what are the odds, right?”

Ajia smiled. “Maybe it was fate.”
Wonder to what extent Ajia believes this. (Does Mew believe in fate, is this another instance of does LC is TQftL)

Hearing that name was like a stab through the heart. It’d been so long since I’d had to think about how he’d used all of us.
Ajia said his name earlier, though, even specifically in reference to having said she was a tool - this kind of makes me think she ought to have had a bigger reaction when Ajia said that, or at least go like "Yeah, Ajia'd just said he'd used her, too, hadn't she?"

“I think… I think part of me wanted someone else to go through this with me,” she went on.

[...]

Ajia sighed deeply, her eyes sliding to the floor. “I shouldn’t want that. I shouldn’t be glad that your life will be in danger too. I didn’t want to be the reason you got dragged back into this, after you asked me to knock it off.”
I feel like reading this again I'm getting a stronger sense of Ajia. She's very aware of and guilty about the idea that she may have done something selfishly, and able to reflect on that and feels compelled to try to acknowledge (if not exactly apologize) for it.

“*Ah, yes,*” she said, a look of recognition crossing her face. “*None of us is really sure why those seven were selected to be patrons. It happened so long ago.*”
Ah, this all makes more sense now. The legendaries have literally died and been reborn multiple times since, so being patrons is just an uhhh I guess?? for them. The patrons gained the literal power to forge these bonds, the others did not, and nobody knows how or why anymore.

“This is such BS,” he muttered. He was pacing, fists swinging at his side, eyes staring at the ground with such intensity that it looked like he was trying to set it on fire. “They’re gonna have to put the League on hold. Who knows when it’ll be back up? If ever!” He gave a particularly hard kick that scattered a wave of gravel through the air.

I tapped my fingers together, glancing away. I had no idea whether or not he wanted me to comment, but saying anything felt too awkward, so I stayed silent.

“I was gonna make the top cut, I know it,” he said, clenching his hands in front of his face. “Only eight trainers went 4-0, and the girl I lost to was one of ‘em, so losing to her didn’t hurt my score much.” He glanced back and forth between me and Darren, clearly upset that neither of us had said anything. Then he pointed a finger at Darren and yelled, “You were probably gonna make it too! Doesn’t that bother you?”
Aww. Kind of fun to read this after Rudy manages to essentially get the League put back on.

“What are you guys talking about?” Rudy piped up all of a sudden, as if he’d only just noticed we were talking without him.
What has Rudy been doing while Jade and Darren were talking, though, other than listening to them? Might be good to have some indication; it feels a bit like he disappears for a while and then pops back into existence.

In an instant, his annoyed and frustrated air just vanished. He stared wordlessly for several seconds before turning away sharply, fists clenched.
It feels a little awkward to me, I think, that my first thought when you say his annoyed and frustrated air vanished is that he's suddenly happy, or excited, which then immediately turns out to be way the opposite emotion of what you were actually going for. If I were you I'd rephrase it some way, so that it's not just saying his frustration vanished.

Rudy spun around suddenly, fixing me with a serious look. “I don’t want any crap like this happening again, got it?” he said, jabbing a finger toward me. “If we free Moltres, that’ll put a stop to it, right?”
Moltres's chosen, ladies and gentlemen

The Rockets had other Legendaries. They were still a threat, even without Moltres. But still… dull images of that night kept drifting to the surface of my thoughts. If we could put a stop to that, even in one small way… it was worthwhile. But I already knew why it was important. That didn’t change that they didn’t need to be involved.
Something about the two "But..." sentences here feels awkward to me.

I let out a groan and sank back against the wall, sliding down it until I was sitting on the floor with my arms clasped around my knees. At this rate, our best option would just be to leave for Indigo without telling Starr and hope that everything went well enough that there wouldn’t be any cause for alarm when we got back. Or something. That idea felt kind of dishonest, but I couldn’t think of anything better at this point.
Why is she not even considering just telling Starr? Surely since Starr already knows about Ajia being Mew's chosen (...right? She was there for the conversation with Sebastian?), it really can't hurt that much for her to also know about Jade, right? Maybe I've forgotten something from a previous chapter, given it's been ages, but it feels kind of weird Jade's not even thinking about whether the secrecy here is even remotely necessary, or whether she should ask Lugia about it.

“So now you’re banking on them showing up,” Kari said with a bit of a smirk.

“Hey, you just said you didn’t expect them to take it lying down,” Ajia countered.

Kari paused, looking reluctantly impressed. “Fair enough. You do your thing, the rest of us will do our part to protect everyone from the collateral damage. Cuz’ judging from the attack on Viridian… there’s gonna be a lot of it.”
Seems funny they (well, Kari) aren't considering what if the legendaries know they'd be targets and therefore don't show up. Like, maybe if Ajia had a line about thinking the legendaries'd probably be keeping an eye on the situation one way or another in case they get a chance, and will move in if they see an opening?

And through it all, Jet looked… worryingly unconcerned.
Oh boy

“*It’s great,*” she said brightly, and my heart sank through the ground.

“It’s… really not,” I said, a little more flatly than I intended.

Her face fell. Confused, the Floatzel glanced around at her teammates. “*I just wanna be a hero like you guys.*”

Swift gave her a sympathetic half-smile, like he wasn’t sure how to tell her that there was nothing heroic about it at all. Firestorm stared downward, looking troubled.

“I… that’s not…” I put a hand to my face, struggling to find the right words. “Look, I know the rebel stories sound, well… cool. But it’s not cool living them. I hope I haven’t made it sound like that, cause it’s really, really not.”

“*You saved legendaries. And you weren’t even that strong when you did,*” Jet pointed out like she was stating the obvious. “*I’m strong. I could help.*” The hopeful look on her face was heartbreaking.
Oh no Jet.

I stared blankly at her. His original what? She still wasn’t saying what—hang on. ‘Original’ wasn’t marked as a descriptor in her words—it was an object. His original.
Little glimpse of Pokémon speech grammar that I appreciate.

I couldn’t explain why, just something told me to keep Firestorm out. The Charizard glanced around upon realizing that he was the only one still out, then tilted his head at me.
Something about the repetition of "out" bugs me here even though it's not a word that usually would.

“*I don’t want things to go back to the way they used to be,*” Firestorm said, tail curling around himself. He paused and then added, “*I don’t want to go back to the way that I used to be.*”

I blinked, taken aback. “Hey, hey. That wasn’t who you are, alright? You’d just evolved, it was a crazy stressful situation, and you lost control.”

“*That doesn’t make it less real,*” he said, closing his eyes.
Aww, Firestorm.

The corners of his mouth turned up slightly. “*I’m supposed to be the one to help you.*”

I smirked. “Hey. None of that.”

Firestorm chuckled. “*Hah… sorry…*” He shook his head and then straightened himself upright,

“Ready to go?” I asked, holding out a fist.

His gaze sharpened, some of the fire back in his eyes. “*Yeah.*” he said, tapping his own fist against mine.
Lovely little moment.

I enjoy the description of the pseudo-telepathy - how it all blends together with Jade's own thoughts at first until it finally clicks into place, and how Jade finds the way to communicate back. I think you nailed making it feel disorienting and weird and alien and making that tangible.

<By focusing on my presence, you’re opening a specific thought to me. Otherwise your mind will just be in the way. I suppose if I really wanted to I could force it aside, but…> It paused, dancing around the idea awkwardly. <Well, that wouldn’t do us any good.>

I bristled. That wasn’t too comforting a thought. Sure, it was nice that I had the option of opening specific thoughts to Lugia, rather than just giving it access to the entire jumbled up internal monologue all the time. But if it really wanted to…? On the positive side, surely I’d be able to feel if the Legendary were prying into other parts of my mind than normal?
Going to bet Lugia forcibly trying to get into Jade's mind is going to be a thing, since you're bothering to establish this. Which sounds like fun!

Lugia paused, its mind dancing around the subject. <So… what I’m saying is good luck. I would hate to have to select a new chosen so soon after finding one.>

My stomach curled in on itself. That wasn’t exactly something I wanted to think about.

Lugia’s mind flushed with awkwardness. <That was… a joke. I will see you when this is done.>
Lugia, being hilarious

One way or another I do have to say this chapter felt really long, for me. It is fairly long, but something about the sheer number of different conversations that happen here while I'm constantly anticipating they're about to get going to rescue Moltres only for there to be even more conversations, and a lot of them feeling... I guess not that substantial, for their length? I'm having some trouble articulating it, but one way or another it doesn't feel like there's very much tension or stakes to the exchanges in this chapter, and ultimately it feels like they're sort of spinning in place a bit, just Jade talking to what feels like an endless array of different people about how they're about to go rescue Moltres but never actually getting around to doing it. I vaguely recall feeling the same way when I first read this chapter. On the one hand downtime between all the action is good, but I guess for the most part this chapter felt less like downtime than like... stretched-out anticipation?

I can't help but wonder if it'd be possible to condense it, one way or another. You'd probably have a better idea than I do, with a firmer overview of what happens before and after, what character moments are important and whether any of them could potentially be moved elsewhere, and so on; all I can tell you is unfortunately it felt kind of draggy to me.

There are definitely good moments in here, though. My favorites are Jet failing to appreciate the stakes and the whole Lugia telepathy bit at the end, which I really enjoyed the execution of - you really make the reader appreciate the alien sensations of it, and the interaction with Lugia in general is interesting, sets up character conflicts, and suggests interesting things to come.

Hoping to tackle chapter 38 tomorrow!
 

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Hoenn and Kanto weren’t all that close—it was something like a 6-hour train ride. Teleporting clear to another region was literally unheard of.
Is Hoenn not an island in this? I have to admit I reread this three times feeling very confused. Unless they somehow took a 6-hour train ride over the ocean.

I guess Hoenn isn't an island here. This was very jarring though, but then again its possible this was mentioned before I just forgot.

Mew, insisting on helping everyone even though she was so clearly overwhelmed. Almost like…
EHEHEHEHEH I love these little similarities that crop up between chosen and their patrons

STARR AND HO-OH ANYONE??

It was weird hearing her voice the same doubts that had been plaguing me all day. Weird to realize that maybe she was just as overwhelmed by it all as me. No matter how much she seemed in control.
ppsshhhh,, Aija is fine, just fine, I doubt any of this is weighing on her or bothering her at all. She's doing just great.

I all seriousness though this was a lovely moment of realization for Jade to see that despite Aija's best efforts to put a front, she feels a lot of pressure.

“Guess I’m… going to visit Stalker,” I said to myself.
I'm sure this is only a good idea. Although I do appreciate Jade having a backbone and just choosing to do what she wants, thats always a fun a thing. And this one is actually one of the better ones, even if its risky in a way.

On one hand Sebastian is untrustworthy, manipulative and deceptive. Jade risks getting twisted or manipulated. But then, she's right they need answers and that filthy bugger has them. I think I approve of this one ultimately.

“*I’m just saying, you might want to chill,*” Aros said with a bored tone.
Listen I'm not bias or anything but anytime Aros appears on screen this story goes from amazing to literaly perfection. Might wanna consider more Aros. In fact, if you got ride of Jade and replaced her with Aros, I'm sure no one would mind ;)

His expression hardened. “*I’m an experiment. I’m supposed to be better than regular Pokémon. That’s not bragging, that’s just how it is.*”

I blinked. Oh. This was… more involved than I’d thought.
:((( Poor Aros though.

Thats a nifty but sad twist on the experiments thing. This ironclad belief you are literally just supposed to be better than other pokemon. I'm sure Aros is doing just fine though.

Alright so now that the fun bits and the most important bits (the Aros bits) are done, we get to the conversation with him.

So what follows has nothing to do with writing skills and everything to do with personal feelings...
I HATE SEBASTIAN SO MUCH

Ohhhhhh my gosh I wanna wring his stupid neck and suplex him into a pit of Ekans. He acts so SMUG and never tells anyone ANYTHING and then WHINES that nobody 'gets' his ridiculous little 'master plans' and always talks in double speak and LIES. He's disgustingly manipulative and selfish.

And he can talk all he wants about his machinations helped the chosen come together but he's still a lying BUM.

And for that matter, what did he actually say??? Barely any new info!! Oh booohoooo you ruined my plans that you didn't even know I HAD! Maybe you should plan better Sebastian!!!

UGH. If I ever saw him in real life I'd punch his dumb nose in so hard. It's so arrogant of him to act like everyone else is supposed to get on his level when his "actions" are that of someone who is a bad guy. And he acts so smart but he's not smart enough to figure out no one wants to put up with his stupid behind the scenes manipulation??? Not very brilliant of you is it, huh???

I don't care if you had a sad life or you're some kind of interdimensional weirdo or the personification of fate itself somehow.

Although, rant aside, what the heck is he? I hope I don't have to wait long to find out, drawn out teases drive me insane.

Anyways Lol I had to screm. Fear not, Sebastian is written just fine I just despise characters who do that, hehe. But you did a good job with him.


I understand that you’re upset, but I just said that my intent was to create allies.
YOU JUST SAID INTENT DOESN'T MATTER, ACTIONS DO YOU FILTHY LIAR

She’d ruined everything. Everything has been going perfectly, only for it to all fall apart at the last second. Why didn’t she understand? Why didn’t anyone understand? Why did everyone need everything explained to them?
Ahem. Anyways.

Rich of you to act like you get to prance around and do whatever you want and expect nobody to take issue with this. For someone so smart you sure are a dolt Sebastian. Hmmm

Anyways all that aside this was a good chapter. Seeing Jade making her own chocies is always great and Aros content is top notch here. You did a lot in a short amount of time. I loved the little moments of realization from Jade about Aija, loved the opening of everything just happening in a sort of daze, and even a glimpse of some Starr content.

Seeing Starr with the background context of BL makes everything a little more interesting.

Although the cliffhanger really is driving me nuts.

Great chapter all around, gud fic pls update mor ;)
 

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Chapter 38

A thick air of tension hung in the air as the four of us—me, Ajia, Rudy, and Darren—flew toward Indigo.
Slightly clunky repetition of 'air'.

As for Moltres itself, the firebird seemed to be soaring in a wide arc over the whole city. Our group landed on the roof of a building on the western edge of the city, far from its current location.
"City" twice here struck me a little too.

Swift took off, and the two of us soared low over the tournament site. Had to keep our eyes out. While Swift focused ahead of us, I constantly turned my head in all directions, scanning for any enemies sneaking up on us. I was not going to let us get caught off guard again. Occasionally Moltres crossed into the airspace overhead, and I held my breath until it passed. We weren’t the target here—had to remember that.

It was now easy to see the squads of rangers taking formation north of the city. And from what Kari had said, the Elite Four had to be among them, ready to strike back if Moltres got too close. There were probably enough Pokémon there that they could take down the legend in an all-out fight. But the idea of actually fighting a Legendary wasn’t exactly high on anyone’s priority list. The fact that we even had a mental idea of how many regular Pokémon it took to bring down a legend… It was something I took for granted, but would register as totally foreign to anyone else.
I like this buildup a lot - we get a sense of the scope of what's going on and the anticipation of Shit Going Down.

I knew we had to find them, but the back of my mind, I was desperately hoping that we wouldn’t.
Think there's a word missing in "but the back of my mind".

Lugia and Ho-oh paused, glancing at each other. I could only guess that they were confused as well. But then it finally hit me. By sticking low to the city, Moltres was forcing Lugia and Ho-oh to fly low to engage. If they stayed too high, the firebird would have more than enough time to dodge their attacks. And the Rockets themselves were all sticking low to the city as well, so it would be easy for them to fire Master Balls from out of sight. Which meant that for any of the free Legendaries to strike back, they’d either have to put themselves in harm’s way, or attack the city. Of all the dirty tactics.

Lugia must have noticed the same thing, because it asked, <Is there any reason we can’t simply destroy them?>

Any reason other than the fact that it was implying callously murdering our enemies? Sure. The resulting destruction was exactly the thing we were trying to avoid. We were not turning this into another Viridian incident.
Something very Animorphs about this.

I felt a prickle of anger well up inside me. Did he seriously think we were afraid to attack him? Or was he just that unconcerned with our presence?
Jade wants to matter

A window ahead of us suddenly exploded with dragonfire, raining shards of glass down from above. I buried my face in Swift’s feathers and tried my hardest to ignore the slivers of pain crossing my arms. I’d felt worse. Had to stay one step ahead of him. If he was chasing us, he wasn’t firing at the Legendaries. Just had to stay one step ahead. This was what we’d trained for. I could handle this.
I like how she's constantly reassuring herself throughout all this, in general.

Dammit, they weren’t paying attention and the Rockets were closing in!

Time slowed. A crack split the air, my eyes caught the flash of movement, the Master Ball, its target unaware. In my mind I saw it hit, saw that flash of red from the time I’d fired a ball just like it, heard Lugia’s horrified scream and then—

A brightly glowing ball of mist deflected it at the last second, shot from thin air. I gaped at it in disbelief. And then a huge wave of relief crashed over me so hard that I almost lost my grip on Swift. Latias—Latias had saved them from certain capture.

And then out of nowhere, Lugia’s voice stormed to the front of my thoughts and yelled, <Warn me next time!>

<Sorry, I’m still getting used to this!> I replied. I’d seen it happen, I could have said something, I should have said something. I’d just completely forgotten that was even an option. But that was the entire reason we had Latias playing defense, right?

A spear of irritation pierced my thoughts like a burning hot iron, and I only barely stopped myself from grabbing my head. Geez, Lugia’s emotions were stronger than I thought. I’d known that I’d be able to feel them, but man this was distracting.
I like this a lot. Jade still getting used to being able to communicate with Lugia - yeah, in that sudden moment as she's flashing back to how Lugia tortured her, of course she just doesn't think to go find the Lugia-shaped bit of her brain and think a warning at it. Yet of course Lugia's angry to be so nearly captured only to find Jade was there staring right at it, and feeling that is hugely disorienting, and that causes Jade to lose Ender. In her first outing as a legendary's chosen, it kind of just hinders her.

Out of nowhere, a sudden needle of anxiety pierced my head. Every muscle in my body clenched tightly as I was hit with the overwhelming feeling that this was very not okay, despite having no idea why or how or what was—

Wait. Wait wait wait, this feeling wasn’t mine.

<What happened?!> I asked Lugia.
Another very good bit.

Raven, was her name? She was riding the same Flygon as last time—the one that had soundly defeated Aros, this time wearing a blue and white scarf.
Fun touch - I'm assuming they want to be sure they'll be able to tell their own Flygon from Aros.

Why did I have to keep running into all the Executives? Why couldn’t Ajia? Or Mew? Anyone who would stand a better chance than me.
Awwh Jade's insecurities

I didn’t get a chance to make that decision before she spotted us though.
I haven't been commenting on you leaving out commas in dialogue sometimes, but this is narration and I really don't think there's any appreciable tone thing conveyed by not having a comma before 'though' here.

I like the Gengar hiding in the shadows a lot.

And then a brown blur leaped up from a nearby rooftop, aiming right for us. Swift flared his wings to stall our flight. Too late. Blood splattered through the air. I stared stupidly, feeling my brain short-circuit trying to process it, my breath frozen, my stomach melting. Kabutops. It had slashed him clean across the neck, staining his feathers bright red.

No. No no no! At once, I found my hand flying to my belt, fumbling with his Pokéball. Had to recall him before it was too late. Had to recall him before it was too late. Each second felt like an agonizing eternity as my shaking fingers found the button and pressed it and then recalled Swift in a beam of red.

I’d recalled him in time, right? He’d live, right? He had to. He had to.

Falling. I was falling. I’d just recalled the Pokémon I was riding on. But I had to recall him. I had to, it was the only way he’d make it. He was in stasis now. He had to make it. Still falling, had to do something. But he had to make it. Still falling. But Swift—still falling, had to do something.
This is such a great oh shit moment and I love it. Especially Jade being so distracted thinking about Swift that it doesn't even properly register that she's falling and needs to do something about it.

Love Jade not recognizing Curse and just panicking about it. The battle turns so fast and we feel how deep in it Jade is.

<What the hell was that?!> I demanded.

<You said it was getting away,> Lugia replied defensively.

I stifled the urge to scream. <How is blasting the city supposed to help?! You could’ve hit someone.>

<Well if you’ve got it under control, I’ll just go back to what I was doing,> the legend said, its thoughts tinged with irritation.
Lugia what. Why did you think randomly slicing up a building would help. I'm guessing it just had no better way to even try to do anything about it and would have felt useless if it hadn't.

Firestorm took a deep breath. He couldn’t use Protect again, so his claws went metallic. A scythe swung for his neck and he blocked it with a clang. Another one, from the other side; his other arm snapped up just in time.
I am having a bit of a hard time imagining a Charizard being able to block Kabutops' scythes going for his neck with just his claws. Surely the claws just aren't big enough to block a blade so much as slightly deflect it? And Charizard's arms aren't long enough to block swings at his whole neck?

“Thought we hadn’t figured out how you stole Mewtwo from us?” Raven asked, her words tinged with ice.

A bolt of lightning fired from Gengar’s fingertips, catching the tail end of a waterjet. The Floatzel inside let out a scream as the electricity coursed through her.

“Thought we didn’t know Mew would be here?”

With a vicious snarl, Flygon smashed Stygian’s head into the side of a car repeatedly. Fiery claws tore red gashes across her snow-white fur.

“The only question is how you’re working together with those monsters.”

One after the other, the Absol and Floatzel collapsed onto the road, out cold. All of them down but Firestorm, who continued to grapple with Kabutops, claws locked firmly around its scythes.

“I’m curious to know. But not curious enough.”

Kabutops slammed a clawed foot against the ground, and pointed stones burst through the pavement, right under Firestorm. The Charizard’s eyes went wide; he coughed hard, blood dripping from his mouth. Then he staggered backward, sinking to one knee before finally collapsing.
Love the way you interlace her words with her Pokémon brutally taking down Jade's one by one.

<Hang on?! I don’t have time!> I’d be dead before it got here! What the hell good was being chosen if I was going to die alone with my patron nowhere near me?!
Yup, that's about the size of it. Being chosen hasn't done Jade any good here.

“You can’t do that! Who the hell do you think you are?!” Raven screamed after us.
May energy

“That wasn’t dumb luck… that was planned,” Ender called out, loud enough for us to hear him. “You were working together with them the entire time, weren’t you?” He laughed. “I think we’ll be taking that into consideration next time.”
Another nice oh shit.

What a chapter! I'd been looking forward to reading this one again. Just one long action scene that's super engaging throughout, full of good moments and punches. All starts out okay trying to distract Ender, lots of Swift getting to shine, but then things get bad and the whole bit against Raven is just super tense and feels impossible. Communication between Jade and Lugia sucks and they entirely fail to actually work together for the entire fight - for largely understandable reasons, being just bonded and each having their hands full (and Jade having trauma flashbacks). They do manage to succeed in freeing Moltres, but only because Latias was there - if not for her, not only would they have failed, both Ho-Oh and Lugia would have been caught. All in all, we successfully advance the plot, but also get a strong sense that they're way out of their depth, that Ender and Raven are terrifying, that with Ender's deduction at the end the Rockets'll be better prepared next time. Oh boy. Half exhilaration, half absolute dread.

It was fun on the second read to pay more attention to what you're doing with the Jade-Lugia relationship here - the whole bit about how awkwardly (or not at all) they work together is definitely very deliberate, and I look forward to reexamining how the following chapters develop it with a fresher memory of this one.
 

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Rrevised Prologue Review

Yoooo you finally did it! I'm so proud of you! And what an improvement! The old version really did feel like it made sense purely as a moody cinematic thing in the first half, teasing the reader that the fic would be, as the title suggests, about Legendaries such as big loog themself. The second half basically just established that Jade exists and is sad her friend moved away for (dramatic irony) Mafia Reasons. It badly needed not just a polish to meet your current prose standards, but a rethink regarding what it actually achieves.

This new version has tighter prose in general, which is nice, but the real strength in my opinion is the addition of Mew visiting in person. It's cute and memorable and interesting, it sets up a character dynamic, and it means there's dialogue amidst the description and narration. Fun dialogue! Even just a short exchange prompts a lot more investment in the reader, for sure.

More minor changes, such as the tone being less stilted(?) in Lugia's portion and little worldbuilding details to appreciate in the second portion are also good changes. In aggregate, the improvement is considerable. I particularly like the note about Starr getting a totodile, since that's exactly what she does later. I bet one day an eagle-eyed reader will start from the beginning and pick up on that and use it as evidence for you-know-what. I also like that the bit about the Order and prophecy just flows a little better and is a bit more comprehensible, in light of Lugia having just interacted with Mew in order to prompt those thoughts. Pretty sure I harped on that when I first reviewed this! It's a small thing, but it adds up.
 

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Heya, back to round out Legendarian Chronicles with one last review before Review Blitz winds down for the year. So let's get right back into things with...

Chapter 2

I immediately took off back the way I came, mind racing. They were coming for me—why were they coming for me? Swift flew nearby as I sprinted through the woods, still completely floored by everything. I could feel my heart pounding and my lungs burning as I choked on ash, but the sudden burst of fear kept me running onward. I threw a glance over my shoulder—I wasn’t running nearly fast enough. They were gaining on me.

... Because you literally just sat and watched an organized crime syndicate drag off a Pokémon that if known by the authorities would potentially bring down existentially threatening raids of their offices? You are in Kanto, and organized crime in Japan historically hasn't exactly been terribly subtle about its presence to broader society. ^^;

Swift: "*Again Jade, we could've left to get the Charmander medical treatment earlier, but nooooo...*" >v>
Jade: "Look, it was a bad idea, I get it, just keep running! Er... flying! And don't look back!" O_O;

My only hope was to reach my bike—nothing was more important than that. If I managed to, then I could make it to town before they caught me and then lose them on the side streets. Just that tiny bit of hope was enough, but was I too far away?

Swift: "*... Jade, don't these people have jeeps? How are you supposed to outrun that on a bike?*" ·v·
Jade: "Look, I'm pretty sure I can duck down a forest trail or something on my bike that a jeep can't. And can you not do this right now, Swift?!" >_>;

I couldn’t help looking over my shoulder again, and—they were right behind me. What was I supposed to do now?! I wasn’t going to make it in time!

Swift: "*Jade, on three we duck into the brush and try to shake them. One... Two...*"

The jeep sped past me and skidded to a stop in my path. I spun around and tried to run in the other direction, but the driver threw open the door and grabbed me by the back of my shirt.

Swift: "*Er... too late.*" ·v·

“No! No, stop, damn it—” I yelled, flailing as hard as I could, but it was no use. The Rocket flung open the back hatch and threw me into the rear of the jeep without saying a word. And then he climbed back into the front seat and drove off as though nothing had happened.

Ah yes, that whole "fighting Team Rocket" thing is just going swimmingly right now.

- Meanwhile through the rear window, a Pidgey beats his wings and tries to keep pace with a speeding TR jeep -
Swift: "*Again, I told you this was a bad idea, Jade!*" >v<

I lay there in a crumpled heap, my heart racing and my breath shallow and as my brain was still trying to work through what the hell had just happened. I hadn’t meant to be there—I had just… been there. I willed myself as hard as I could to at least sit up and figure out my situation. But nothing in my body would respond. Not for the longest time. Until finally, clenching my teeth as hard as I could, I managed to force everything out of my mind for one moment and look over the back seat without drawing attention to myself.

:sceptical:


Uh... no, I distinctly remember you going to try and get a closer look after Stalker ditched you there, Jade. You just hadn't meant to get caught. >:V

Four… there were four Rockets in the jeep. The driver was tall, burly, and looked older than most of the others—probably more experienced too, judging by a number of badges pinned to his vest. My eyes slid to his reflection in the rearview mirror—he had thick black hair and dark eyes surrounded by a stern and commanding face. Just looking at him was intimidating; I couldn’t help ducking behind the seat.

For some reason, my brain finally registered that my arms felt warm. Right, I was still holding the wounded Charmander. It was still unconscious, but also still alive. Then my eyes wandered to the window… and caught sight of buildings? We were nearing Viridian. But why? Why hadn’t we rejoined the group going after Entei? If we drove through Viridian instead… would it be possible for me to yell for help?

You'd have thought that someone would've noticed the dying Charmander while kidnapping the teenaged girl and just dumped it on the side of the road, but... that'd be a pretty depressing and short story otherwise, so let's just chalk this up to that much-fabled Rocket competence. ^^;

No. The windows were up now, and each of the Rockets was armed. There was no way out of this.

I sank back against the seat, still numb with shock. How on earth had I managed to get myself into this? It was the sort of thing you always imagined would happen to someone else. I still couldn’t help trying to come up with something, anything that I could do, even though there was nothing. Nothing—that fact alone was the most paralyzing.

I mean, you could try and force the back hatch open and fall out in a more public space where it might be tactically smarter for the Rockets to just drive off instead of answer questions, but... yeah. I don't blame that not occurring to a 14-year old with a half-dead lizard in her arms and these guys presumably aren't exactly obeying the likes of stop signs that would give an opening to pull that stunt off without sustaining serious injuries. ^^;

After some time, I pulled myself up to look out the window again. We’d just passed the outskirts of Viridian, now heading into the forests to the east of the city. And then I saw him. Swift was still flapping his wings quickly to follow the jeep, struggling to keep up—it was almost a painful sight. Upon seeing that I was watching him, he soared downward to fly alongside the window, his eyes meeting mine.

“Just go,” I mumbled, though he couldn’t hear me. “There’s nothing you can do…”

Swift: "*Look, your parents wouldn't want me to not do my utmost to try and help you and you're not fully right there either, Jade. If nothing else, I can yell at you about how all of this was completely avoidable.*" >v>
Jade: "Okay, let me amend that statement, there's nothing practical you can do right now." >.<

I jumped suddenly at the sound of a gunshot and whirled around. My stomach melted into nothing—one of the Rockets pulled out a small handgun and began shooting at Swift. But then just as quickly, the driver held a hand up to stop him.

“Don’t waste your bullets on a Pidgey,” he said.

I mean, I don't know how gun laws work in LC, but in Japan... yeah, this is something that would potentially get handgun grunt into hot water with his superiors in TR proper since gun crimes bring down a lot more police scrutiny than their counterpart crimes committed with the likes of bladed weapons or blunt objects.

But hey, I suppose there's perks to heavily infiltrating the social structure of two regions. Including being able to skimp out on subtlety.

I quickly turned to look out the back window and saw Swift flying high up in the sky. When he was sure that the Rockets weren’t paying attention, he swooped low again and waved his wing at me. And I could’ve sworn I saw him nod to me before taking off to the north. I stared after him; part of me couldn’t help feeling more alone now. But what was he planning to do?

Swift: "*Do you seriously think I'm letting the plot get rid of me that easily, Jade?*" -v-;
Jade: "Swift, you're a Pidgey, pitted up against four mafia goons. Four armed mafia goons. I'm allowed to be a little skeptical, okay?" >_>;

Upon reaching a small clearing that had been stripped of tress, the jeep suddenly skidded to a halt. I couldn’t see anything more from the back window, and the Rockets in the front seats were blocking my view in front of the car. The driver got out and slammed the door.

I leaned forward to peer out the backseat window and watched as he kneeled and lifted up a small hatch in the grass. Underneath were a keypad and a small screen. He punched in a long passcode and pressed his hand against a scanner before closing the hatch.

And then, amazingly, the ground starting to sink, revealing a wide ramp that descended into darkness. He walked back and got into the car again before driving downward. As we neared the end of the tunnel, the entrance behind us closed, and I could see lights far ahead in the distance. And then we emerged into a massive, dimly lit underground hangar, filled with trucks, small aircraft, and on the far end, a huge jet. I stared around at it all, the realization slowly dawning on me—Team Rocket was every bit as huge as the Charizard trainer had implied.

Jade: "How on earth did you get all this stuff anyways?" .-.
Handgun Grunt:
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Tyson: "Steve, the correct answer with prisoners is 'None of your business, sod off'." >_>;

The driver parked the jeep in an area to the side, and the Rockets all exited the vehicle. I watched as the driver walked off toward one side of the hangar, where a heavy computerized door stood. He pulled a card out of his pocked and touched it to the scanner, unlocking it before entering what looked like an office hallway.

And so, I was left alone in the jeep. Well, not quite alone—the Charmander was still here, after all. I looked down at where I had set it. A tiny flare flickered at the end of its tail, so it was still alive, at least. It probably wouldn’t survive much longer though. That fact made the already bleak situation feel even more crushing.

I jolted at the loud bang of a door being thrown open. A young man stormed out wearing an irritated expression, closely followed by the driver, who was looking weirdly submissive. The former Rocket had to be higher rank or something. If they were arguing, then this would probably be a chance to find out more about my situation, at the very least. Acting more on impulse than anything, I threw myself over the back seats so I could open the back door a crack and hear them.

... Wait a minute, this entire time, none of the Rockets thought to zip tie Jade precisely to avoid her having this sort of mobility while just leaving her in their jeep?
:what:


I mean, they absolutely would've had an upper hand in a struggle, but... yeah, that seems like a recipe for getting objects thrown at your driver or something like that if their captive had been someone a bit less "freeze up and panic" than a random junior higher.

“Of course no one ever feels like telling me a damn thing about the mission status,” the higher-ranked Rocket snapped. “And what the hell made you think it would be a good idea to grab some random kid who happened to see it? Sure, she reports someone poaching a Legendary, big deal. No one would have any idea that it was us. But now she sure as hell knows too much. Honestly, Tyson, I don’t even know why I—”

... I stand by that Rocket competence comment from earlier, since the Rocket Captain is raising some pretty solid points here. If Tyson had kicked Jade out along the road earlier, the worst that could've happened would've been a police report would've gotten filed at a likely compromised police department, Jade gets a scare, and all of this just vanishes into the ether beyond some disbelieving schoolmates when Jade tries to talk about the time she was kidnapped by Team Rocket for 20 minutes.

Well, aside from the fact that she saw Stalker, but Tyson still could've been a bit smarter about where he immediately brought his prisoner than straight to a secret airbase. o<o

Rocket Captain: "And furthermore, if you were going to grab some random kid, why would you bring her back to the base with the secret hangar instead of some random warehouse we stash goods to be fenced?!" >_>;
Tyson: "Look, it seemed like a good idea at the time! Look, she's a junior higher. How hard can it be to tie down a loose end here?"
Jade: "I... don't think I like where this conversation is going with that 'tie down a loose end' comment." O_O;

“That’s not all,” the driver continued defensively. “I saw him. The one we’ve heard rumors about from the new recruits. Course, he was far off so I didn’t see what he looked like, but I know she did.”

A very heavy pause followed.

“Don’t tell me you’re taking that crap seriously?” his superior asked. “I don’t know what you’ve heard, but all I’ve heard is that some dumbass is going around gathering a bunch of twelve-year-olds against us.”

Rocket Captain: "Tyson, are you kidding me? Look, someone has to have a Beheeyem on staff, don't they? Just let it work its magic on her to wipe the last day or so of memories and get this kid out of here already!" >_>;
Tyson: "... Pretty sure that all of those aren't accessible to our unit on short notice... but listen, we want her memories for now since..."

“I heard he was a part of the revolt.”

Yet another pause. This time the other Rocket seemed at least slightly intrigued. “So he might know more about us than we figured. But how many others left us that day? Have any of them accomplished much? I don’t see how this is any—”

He was interrupted by the ring of a cell phone. Tyson answered it and proceeded to listen for nearly a minute while his superior watched, still looking a bit irritated. After some time, Tyson gave a short response quietly and hung up.

“Well?” the other Rocket snapped.

“Shortly after I left, it was looking like Entei was going to escape into the Tohjo Mountains. And then—you’re not gonna believe this—the Johto combat unit showed up,” Tyson reported while his superior made an exaggerated sound of disgust. “They took control of the situation, and of course one of their agents was the one who threw the ball that caught Entei. Only now he’s refusing to hand over; he’s waiting for orders from the Johto commander.”

Boy, sure is a good thing that you're just talking about all of this right in front of the girl that you snatched from the woods and didn't bother using something like Sleep Powder on. I mean, I get that you're not planning on letting her go normally at this point, but might want to engage in some loss-mitigation since... yeah, this entire plot would've played out pretty differently if Jade had never gotten wind of just how serious things were with TR and just went back to being a normal junior higher. :V

I felt myself go rigid with shock. They had actually caught it? They’d caught Entei?

“The idiot. Boss’s word isn’t enough for him?” his superior muttered, folding his arms.

Tyson shrugged. “It’s the Johto force. You know how they are.”

“Tch… always making their own terms for everything…” he scoffed. “Anyway, we’re almost ready to ship the experiments to the secondary headquarters for testing, along with the supplies and machinery.” The higher-ranking Rocket jerked a thumb toward the black plane on the far side of the hangar. “Since you’re back, and you have a… vested interest in that program, I want you on board.” At this point, he let out a sigh. “Now, about the kid…”

Ah yes, interservice rivalries. Except with organized crime syndicates. So how many internal losses are incurred between the Kanto and Johto units engaging in... -ahem- aggressive disputes with each other over conflicting plans? Since if the Johto branch is brazen enough to just roll in on another branch's field of operation... :V

“Should I just kill her?” Tyson cut in, and my heart stopped.

“Well, if you’re convinced that she knows anything, it could be useful. But I don’t have time to question her, and I know none of the admins do.” Rather unexpectedly, he laughed. “I know, this is perfect—most of the department heads are at Celadon HQ right now. Stick the girl on the transport jet; let them deal with what to do with her.” With that, he walked off to discuss things with some of the other Rockets.

Tyson: "... You know if you're concerned about a body turning up, we could try to just go with your earlier idea with the Beheeyem-"
Rocket Captain: "Tyson. Get. Her. On. The. Jet." >_>;

I collapsed into let out a huge sigh of relief. My situation hadn’t improved, but just knowing that I wasn’t dead yet was enough to make me feel better. But then a few seconds later, I spotted Tyson walked back toward the jeep. I immediately climbed into the trunk and pretended like I hadn’t moved at all.

“Well, it’s your lucky day,” Tyson said with a sneer as the back hatch opened. “If you keep your head down and answer the executives’ questions, they might not mind letting you live after all, though I’m not offering any guarantees.” He grabbed me by the wrist and jerked me out of the jeep. I racked my brain for something to do—some sort of resistance to show that I wasn’t just some helpless kid. I couldn’t think of anything.

Rocket Captain: "... Tyson, you're bantering with your prisoner and not hitting her with Sleep Powder first thing after opening the hatch why? It's not that long of a flight to Celadon City." >:|
Tyson: "I... er... don't have any such Pokémon assigned? Look, Boss, she's a junior higher. I can handle detaining a junior higher..."
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“Here,” Tyson said, handing me off to one of his subordinates. “Throw her in one of the containment cells on the transport jet. Don’t forget all the standard procedures.

... Says the guy who brought a junior higher straight back to the base with the secret airplane hangar. >:V

“What about the kid’s Charmander?” the Rocket asked with a glance back in the jeep.

“That thing isn’t dead?” Tyson said, raising an eyebrow. “I don’t know… we’ve got tons of Pokéballs—I’ll have someone else put it with the stolen Pokémon.”

Actually, wait. Where is Tyson's boss during all of this? Did he already bounce? Since you'd think if he was still present, he'd have some commentary on all of this.

Tyson walked off in another direction, and the Rocket holding me started heading for the large, black airplane in the opposite corner of the hangar. Several mechanics looked to be making sure everything was in order, and other Rockets were loading supplies into the cargo hold; Tyson’s subordinate escorted me in that direction. Large crates of machinery and boxes of various supplies filled the area, and more were being loaded in. The Rocket paused to unlock a panel along the side, and then I was thrown into a small metal room. He proceeded to check that I didn’t have any weapons or Pokéballs on me—pretty much the only thing I did have was my wallet.

“So…” he said, flipping through it and pulling out my school ID, “Jade Arens, fourteen years old. I’ll be sure to get that on file. And… what do we have here?” I felt like kicking myself when he pulled out the wad of cash I had stuffed in there. It was my birthday savings, which I’d intended to use on a training journey someday, though I had never quite figured out how exactly. A part of me had known all along that it was a stupid idea to carry it around like that, but… there wasn’t much I could do about it now.

After having found the money, the Rocket didn’t bother looking anything else I had in there and simply tossed the wallet into a bin with what I assumed were other stolen items. He then chained my hands and feet to the wall before shutting the door.

Ah yes, living up to the petty thief rep that TR has with in-setting normies quite well there. :V

Though... yeah, they are really fortunate that they drew a (seemingly) bulliable junior higher, since yeah. Given how livid the Rocket Captain was at first over Tyson bringing back a junior higher to a secret base, you'd think they'd at least get the idea of blindfolding her just in case if by some freak accident she turned out to be a fic protagonist and slipped away from them instead of... you know, letting her see everything about this hangar and a plane that presumably has a visible tail number on it so that way it doesn't raise alarm bells with civilian air dispatchers.

... Though then again, it's Team Rocket, so I guess I shouldn't be so surprised that the lower ranks would make an unforced error or two here or there.

I was alone. For how long, I had no idea. I couldn’t see my watch. I had no way of knowing how long I spent in that cell with the only sound being the occasional clunk of more cargo being loaded onto the plane. It was nerve-wracking just standing there drenched in sweat mixed with soot and not knowing how much longer until something happened, or even what would happen. I almost just wanted to get it over with… but then immediately drove the thought from my head when I realized what it meant. Couldn’t afford to think like that—I wasn’t going to die. I was going to figure a way out of this. Except… there was no way out. What was I supposed to do?

After what felt like hours, I heard another door shut and then the heavy thud of what must have been the cargo hatch closing. My body tensed up; the air was now filled with the steadily growing roar of engines. I felt movement—the plane accelerated suddenly, and I felt myself slant backward as it sped up the long ramp that exited the hangar. And with that, we were airborne, and I was heading off to an unknown fate.

Jade: "Well, this day couldn't possibly be going worse right now." >_>;

I wanted to clear my head, but the thoughts wouldn’t leave. What would I have done differently if I had the chance to redo this day? Going into the forest… that was probably my biggest mistake. Or maybe following the mysterious trainer I’d met. But if what he said about Team Rocket’s imminent takeover was true…

I think that 'go gawk at Entei fighting the Rockets' was the point of no return there, since... yeah. There wasn't an indication that Jade had been spotted until after that. :V

A sudden clang jarred me from my thoughts. Footsteps neared my cell, and I tensed up instinctively. What did they want now? I had no idea what I expected to see when the cell door handle turned and opened.

…But I definitely wasn’t expecting what I did see.

A teenage boy about a year or two older than me stood in the doorway. He was about my height, with thick, dirty-blond hair, baggy clothes, and was currently looking rather pleased with himself.

“Hello there,” he said. “It looks like I’m rescuing you. My name’s Spencer—I think we’re gonna be good friends.”

Jade: "I'm sorry, what. How on earth are you-?!" O_O;
Spencer: "Maybe let's wait for explanations until after you're out of these restraints, huh?"

I blinked. I had about a million questions, but about the only thing I could say was, “What?”

I... actually completely forgot that this was Jade's response. :V

He frowned. “That’s all the response I get? Boring.” He stood aside, allowing a sleek tan and black-furred beast to step in front of him. The final form of Johto’s fire-type starter, if I recalled correctly. “Alright Typhlosion, I need you to melt these chains, so we’re gonna need it hot.”

Jade: "... Not that I'm not eager to get out of these things, but isn't that going to cause me serious burns by convective heat transfer?" ._.
Spencer: "... We'll aim for the part of the chains furthest from you?"
:joltyshrug~1:


The Typhlosion leaned down and grasped a bundle of the chains, holding them behind its head. Suddenly, a blazing ring of fire burst out from the red burners around its neck, torching through the metal with a wave of sparks. The room instantly filled with sweltering heat.

Wait, just how hot is that fire if it can do that to metal chains? Like you'd think that they'd deform and start to melt from the heat and Spencer's Typhlosion would need to give a stiff tug or something to actually break the links, but... .-.

Granted, this would work about as described in the text if it was something like zip ties, but... yeah, unless if I'm missing a detail from that description, that metal sure seemed wimpy to just more or less atomize from coming contact with fire like that.

Jade: "Or I guess we could just pass out from heatstroke. That works too."
:fearfullaugh~1:

Typhlosion: "*You know, if you'd rather have stayed chained up, we could've just moved on without you.*"
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Still trying to make sense out of this seemingly random turn of events, I asked, “What are you doing here? And how did you know I was here? Who are you?”

“I already told you my name,” Spencer said matter-of-factly, folding his arms. “And, uh, I guess if you wanna know how I’m here, you’ll have to ask him.” He motioned a thumb over his shoulder.

A voice behind him said, “Yeah, Jade, I hope you’re happy, because I hadn’t planned on getting stuck on some stupid Rocket jet like this.”

What. That voice… it couldn’t be…

Spencer stepped aside, revealing a rather disgruntled Rudy standing in the cargo bay.

“How did you get here?” I asked, completely floored.

Jade: "And since when did you fight Rockets without telling me?" >_>;
Rudy: "Jade, are we seriously doing this right now?" >.<

He groaned slightly, putting a hand to his face. “Well, Spencer needed to find his Pokémon first, and luckily it was the same place they’d taken you, so we snuck on board and then we came here for you.”

I would have clapped a hand to my forehead if it hadn’t been chained up. “Okay, just… what? That doesn’t answer my—how about you actually start at the beginning? How did you know I was here?”

“Alright, alright,” Rudy said impatiently, as though details like that didn’t matter and he wanted to get them out of the way as quickly as possible. “It’s because of Swift. I’d walked to your house to show off my license, and I saw him pecking the windows in a fuss, and—what’s with that look?!” My jaw had dropped upon hearing the word “license.”

“You got a license. Already?!”

Spencer: "(Psst, is she always like this?)"
Rudy: "(More than you could ever know.) Again, Jade. Priorities here..." >_>;

“Oh, come on. Enough questions already,” he said, waving a hand aside. He wasn’t totally paying attention, though, and was now preoccupied with staring at the ongoing blaze. The heat was getting a bit overwhelming.

“Hey, uh, is Typhlosion almost done?” I asked.

Almost right after I said that, the fire beast extinguished its blaze and pulled the chains apart with a snap, which was a relief. I took a few steps to stretch out my legs, the chains clattering around as I walked.

... Oh right. Spencer's Typhlosion actually does actually weaken the chains and pull them apart. You might want to make that earlier description sound a bit less like he just blowtorched through them if there's still weakened chain links to pull apart after this entire conversation. ^^;

Spencer: "Might want to watch your step since some of those links are red-hot right now."
Jade: "Okay, seriously, wasn't there a more precise way you two could've handled this?" >_>;
Typhlosion: "*... Starting to think we should've carried out that mission first and freed her once we figured out how to get off this plane.*"
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“Guess you’ll have to deal with those for a while,” Spencer said as I stepped out of the cell. “Any closer and he’d have melted your hands and feet off.”

Spencer: "Now granted, I suppose that'd have been one way of getting you free, but-"
Jade: "No, no, I'll live with the loose chains, thanks!" ._.;

I didn’t really mind—just being free was enough. Really, just them being there was enough to make the entire situation feel better somehow. I wasn’t alone in this; with three of us there was no way we wouldn’t find some way out.

“So…” I said turning towards Rudy. “Am I even gonna get the full story as to how you got here? And how the heck do you already have a license for that matter?”

Rudy: "Jade, does this really have to happen right now while we're on a Team Rocket airplane?" >_>;
Jade: "Yes. Now fess up, Rudy." >:|
Rudy: "... Ugh, fine..."

“Oh, er… right. See, my dad got home right after you left. He would’ve been upset with me for not finishing my chores, except my test results had come in the mail and I passed everything,” Rudy said, beaming. “So, my dad took me to the place and he signed the form and I got my license and a Pokémon and everything.” He stopped there, but then realized that I was looking at him expectantly, wanting to hear the actually important part of the story. “But yeah, uh, I went over to your house, and no one was home, and Swift was flying around like crazy. From what little I could make out, he was saying you were in trouble? So I followed him out into the forest and that’s when I ran into Spencer here.”

“Yeah, my Pokémon were stolen from me a few days ago,” Spencer explained. “I’d been scoping out the entrance to the hideout for a few days, but I had no idea how I was ever gonna get inside. Rudy showed up in the area, and then about an hour later a bunch of jeeps were returning to the base, so we took the chance to sneak in behind ‘em.”

- Jade looks over at Spencer -
Jade: "Oh, so Rudy hasn't been secretly fighting Rockets for like a year or something crazy like that."
Rudy: "Nope. More like sneaking and hiding from them for about 2 hours." ^^;
Spencer: "From the way that the Rockets were dealing with you, I was kinda hoping to come across someone a bit more... experienced." >_>;

I stared, impressed. “You guys snuck into a Rocket base? What was your plan?”

“No plan, really. Just kind of improvising, y’know?” Spencer said, laughing awkwardly. My face fell somewhat. Okay, so maybe my newfound ally wasn’t the most capable.

Understatement of the century here.

“We hung out by a cargo area where we could avoid being seen, but still hear what all the passing Rockets were talking about,” he explained. “Then I overheard stuff about transporting Pokémon and supplies and a prisoner.”

“And just look at this awesome mess it’s gotten us all into,” Rudy added, half-jokingly, half-accusingly.

Jade: "I suppose this means that you don't have a plan for how we're going to get off this plane without being drug off kicking and screaming by armed Rockets?" -_-;
Spencer: "I... was working on that?"
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“You didn’t have to come and get me,” I said, a little bit insulted, even if it was true that he wouldn’t have been in this mess had it not been for me.

He sighed. “I didn’t know any of this would happen, so that doesn’t matter now. We’re here now. This Team Rocket crew sounds like bad news, so we’ve gotta do something.”

- Jade points around at the airplane's fuselage -
Jade: "What exactly when we're stuck on an airplane?" :|
Rudy: "... I don't suppose that Swift happens to know Fly, does he-?"
:uhhh:

Jade: "Rudy, Swift's a Pidgey. What, do you think we live in a video game or something where birds a tenth of our size can fly us across Kanto?!" >_>;
Spencer: "Also, I'm pretty sure said Pidgey isn't here, so..."

Easy for him to say. He hadn’t seen how dangerous they could be.

“Well…” I said, “I guess we’re not really in any danger right now, so we’ve got time to plan.”

Jade: "I mean, for all I know, it's about 30 minutes to plan since I'm pretty sure Celadon City isn't that far away from Viridian, but let's try and think positive here?"
:fearfullaugh~1:


“Exactly. Anyway, why don’t we start by screwing up as much of the crap on this plane as possible.” It struck me that Rudy had almost exactly the attitude that the Charizard trainer had been looking for in his anti-Rocket recruits.

With a glance around at the crates surrounding us, I replied, “Screw up things how? I don’t think we can just go around blowing up random crap while flying.”



“Well, for one thing… what do we do about the rest of the stolen Pokémon?” Spencer asked, motioning towards an open box filled with Pokéballs. “I already got mine back, and—”

“Hey wait, that’s right!” I exclaimed, running over to the box. “I had a Charmander with me before I was captured. It should be in there!”

Now it was Rudy’s turn to gape incredulously. “You have a Charmander? What in the—how?”

Jade: "Long story, but for the record, if you come across a half-dead Pokémon in the woods, do yourself a favor and just go off to get it medical treatment. You'll save yourself a lot of headaches." ^^;
Rudy: "That's... some rather specific advice you have for me there." ._.;

“I found it out on Route 22, where I got captured. It’s… kind of a long story.” I shifted through some of the Pokéballs in dismay. “How am I ever gonna figure out which one it’s in?”

“Here,” Spencer said, pulling out his Pokédex and opening it. I stared in fascination as he held the Pokéballs up one by one to the device’s scanning lens. After about twenty or so of them, he announced, “Here we go. Low-level, unregistered Charmander. Heh, it’s asking if I want to register it to myself. And, uh… its energy is reeaally low. I know they always say you have to defeat the Pokémon before it’ll let you train it, but come on now.”

Jade: "... Uh... yeah, does it count if a forest fire started by a big, angry gerbil does the defeating for you?"
:fearfullaugh~1:

Spencer: "... Is there anything left of this Charmander with readings like these?" .-.

“I didn’t catch it,” I said a bit defensively, despite his joking tone. “It was half-dead when I found it. I’ve gotta like… find some healing items or something.” I turned to gaze vaguely around all the supply boxes in the cargo hold.

“Alright. You fix your Charmander, I’ll go see if I can find anything useful,” Rudy said, taking the opportunity to wander off. I could have sworn I heard him mumble, “We should totally set some of this junk on fire at least.”

And then the three of them followed through on Rudy's plan and passed out from inhaling toxic fumes and Legendarian Chronicles had a downer ending in the second chapter. The end.
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I headed in the opposite direction, opening boxes and scanning their contents as I went. I’d wondered what jet was intended to transport, but now it seemed like the answer was almost anything. Most of the crates were filled with heavy machinery and old computerized devices, but then others were packed with battle enhancements for Pokémon or stronger variations of the Pokéball. Finally, I scored—a box near the front of the plane was packed with medical supplies. I picked up the first thing I could find and read the label.

“‘Full Restore: Guaranteed to soothe burns, frostbite, poison, rashes, close open wounds, and heal any other damage done to your Pokémon’… sounds great.” I noticed the rather unappealing price tag of 3000p—good thing I wasn’t buying it.

Jade: "Wonder what truck this fell off the back of. Since this is a lot of expensive medical gear." .-.

I held out the Charmander’s Pokéball and carefully pressed the button on its center, making it split open down the middle and let loose a burst of white light that condensed into the fire lizard’s unconscious form. It shivered, but looked to be in the same condition it had been earlier.

I kneeled down and sprayed the liquid all over the Charmander’s skin. The lizard flinched, but soon enough, the charred flesh slowly regained its normal color, leaving only patches of scabs on some parts of its back. It was honestly amazing how quickly Pokémon could heal when given a bit of help. Still, it wasn’t enough that the Charmander’s injuries were gone. It was likely still exhausted and drained of power.

Ah, I see that HP-restoring items still work even when a Pokémon is passed out in this setting. Makes sense since you'd think that a wound wouldn't require consciousness in order to close.

“Hey Spencer!” I called out. “Do you know the name of the stuff that fully restores energy?”

“Hyper Potion?” he said, in a tone that sounded more like he was asking me.

“Not injuries. Energy.”

“Oh right… uh, I think it’s called Elixir? Never used one before—not a lot of stores carry ‘em.”

Somehow I completely forgot that there was a coupling between consciousness and the analogue to Power Points in this setting. Does that mean that if you get a Pokémon down to only being able to use Struggle, that it'd be close to passing out? (Or I suppose it would be either way after using Struggle enough times.
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)

Jade: "... At first I thought you were going to say 'Revive' there, but eh. If it works, it works."

I dug through the box some more. “Got it,” I said, pulling out a yellow bottle labeled “Max Elixir.” I flipped the cap open and poured a small amount into the fire-type’s mouth. Within seconds, the tiny flare on its tail burst into full flame. Slowly, it opened its bright blue eyes and stumbled to its feet.

“Hey, how’re ya feeling?” I asked.

The lizard spun around, eyes wide with alarm. It gave a light whimper, clutching its tail tightly and glancing around at the strange surrounding.

Jade: "... I'll take that as a 'not great'. Anyhow, let me explain here..." -_-;

“This has got to be a pretty big shock. And, uh… you’re probably wondering how you got here. I didn’t mean to take you from your home. It’s just that… you were sort of… dying,” I finished lamely. The Charmander relaxed slightly, but didn’t give much of a reaction to my words. Could it even understand me? As a wild Pokémon, it might never have heard human speech before.

“Can you understand me?” I asked.

It stared, apparently confused at my confusion. “*Yes…*” it said slowly, in a tone suggesting that it found the question very strange.

Well, uh, okay—so you’ve been around humans before. Have you ever been named?”

Somehow I didn't pick up on Pokémon needing to be around humans to learn how to understand their language. Though I suppose it makes sense. If humans have to specifically learn Pokéspeech to understand it in this setting, it'd only be logical the reverse would hold true too.

The fire lizard gave me a long, quiet stare, something shifting in its eyes. After several seconds’ hesitation it replied, “*Firestorm.*

Well that's some cruel irony if I ever heard it given that this lizard almost kicked the bucket to his namesake.
:fearfullaugh~1:


“Alright then,” I said. “So, are you male or female?” I wasn’t quite sure if this was an offensive question or not, but I wasn’t used to Pokéspeech enough to tell a Pokémon’s gender by its voice.

“*Male,*” he answered simply.

I nodded, not really sure what else to ask him. After having gotten over his initial shock, Firestorm was calmly glancing around at his surrounding, seemingly unconcerned with having been taken from his home and not even very curious about his situation.

Jade: "(I should probably be a bit more curious as to why this 'mon is so unbothered going from a forest to the cargo hold of an airplane, but... yeah. Let's worry about that after we get back on terra firma.)" ^^;

The Charmander then said, “Mander char charmander char’charrman?” But it was longer than the previous one-word statements, and I didn’t quite catch most of it. It sounded like a question—something to do with a Pokémon trainer? I was about to ask him if he could repeat it, but then I heard Rudy call out, “Hey Jade, come check this out!”

I stood to my feet and motioned for the Charmander to follow, although on second thought he didn’t really have to—it wasn’t like he belonged to me or anything. After navigating back through the maze of boxes, I found Rudy and Spencer, the former sitting on the ground and undoing the latches on a long metal case.

“Oh hey,” Spencer said, giving a small wave. “Normally I’d say that warnings are meant to be ignored, but I don’t know about this.” He flashed a skeptical look toward Rudy.

I stared blankly. “Huh?”

“Check it out,” Rudy said, holding up the case. Engraved on the top in sleek lettering were the words: “Pokéball Containment Unit.” Beneath that, a label read, “Caution: Experimental Pokémon are extremely unstable and must be kept in the containment unit at all times unless removed by an experiment handler.”

Rudy: "Sweet. Looks like we've got a way off this flying hunk of junk-!"
Jade: "Rudy, shouldn't we not be futzing with this given that these are experiments that Team Rocket made? For all we know, they'll
instantly go for our throats the moment we let them out!" >_>;
Typhlosion: "*Yeesh, isn't she just Miss Positivity right now?*"

“Experimental Pokémon?” I said incredulously. Then again, Tyson’s superior had mentioned something like that…

“Yeah, yeah! Just think—these could be like, super-powerful mutant Pokémon. If we used them to fight the Rockets, we’d be able to get out of this for sure!” Rudy said excitedly.



I hesitated. “That… does seem like our best chance to get out of here, but… we don’t even know if they’ll listen to—hey, don’t let them out now!” I yelled frantically. He had opened the case, revealing several black Poke Balls encased in holders, each labeled with info on the experiment within.

Whelp, too late.

“I’m just looking,” Rudy countered. “I’m not gonna let them out. Huh… these are weird looking, aren’t they?” He pulled one of the black spheres out of its holder and rotated it in his palm.

Jade: "Rudy, if you're 'just looking' then you don't need to hold those balls!" >_>;
Rudy: "I'm just looking closely, okay? Sheesh, chill out already."

“Okay, okay, just wait. We’re not gonna have to fight until this plane lands, wherever it’s going. Spencer, how many Pokémon have you got?”

“Six,” he replied, posing importantly. “Typhlosion here is the strongest, but the rest are pretty powerful too.”

“Alright, that’s good since, uh… Rudy and I will be pretty useless in a fight.” It felt rather lame to admit.

Rudy: "Jade, why did you have to drag me into this?!" >_>;
Jade: "Because you've had your Trainer's License for all of two hours?" >.<

“Hey, what do you mean?! I’ve got two Pokémon,” Rudy shot back.

I clapped a hand to my forehead. “Don’t be stupid, these Rockets are dangerous.”

Jade: "Again. Two. Hours."
Rudy: "That's still two hours more than you!" >:|

“How about when the plane lands, we confuse the experiments into attacking the Rockets, and then we run away during the commotion?” Spencer interjected.

“How do we do that—?”

Out of nowhere, an explosion of black light shot out from within our circle, knocking the three of us backward into a pile of boxes. I sat up shakily, completely stunned. What on earth had just happened?

Spencer looked about as flustered as I felt. “Okay, just… what was that?

I glanced around rapidly, my eyes falling on Rudy, toppled over in a heap with his eyes wide, clutching an opened Pokéball.

Rudy: "... I didn't do it." ._.;
Jade: "'Just looking closely', my foot." >_>;

“What did you…?” I gasped.

“I didn’t open it, I swear!” he yelled back. “It—it let itself out!”

Jade:
:sceptical:

Rudy: "Look, Jade, I know I say a lot of things sometimes, but I really mean this one, okay?" >.<

“Wait, where’s the experiment?!” Spencer cut in frantically.

The three of us whirled around in a panic, all eyes falling on the Pokémon that had appeared behind us. A jagged, lightning bolt-shaped tail twitched. Four paws slowly lifted a small, golden-furred mouse off the floor. No… it couldn’t be…

“It’s… it’s a Pikachu?” Spencer blurted out, stifling a laugh. “A Pikachu?

Jade: "Uh, hey, stoat guy... you... might not want to openly mock the science experiment that for all we know can casually drop this plane out of the air if it's feeling cranky."
:fearfullaugh~1:


Except something looked… off about it. It was missing the familiar red cheek markings. And… the fur on its head was long and stiffly pointed, almost like feathers. And then its eyes snapped open, revealing a pair of piercing, birdlike eyes.

I hesitated. “Guys… I don’t think—”

At once, a flood of lightning poured out of the rodent’s body. I jumped backward without thinking and tripped over a box as a bolt flew dangerously close to where I’d been standing. Right after that, the experiment shot past me in an instant, bolting up to the highest point it could find before unleashing waves of electricity all around.

Jade: "You just had to laugh at it..." >.<
Typhlosion: "*Uh, yeah, that was kinda a bad idea, Spencer.*" O_O;

“Let me see that!” I shouted, practically shoving Rudy out of the way so I could get a look at the label on the Pokéball slot.

Experimental Pokémon 009: Hybrid series - Pikachu / Zapdos. Possesses abnormally high power level and untamable disposition. Experiment classified as failure due to undersized power capacity, unstable energy signature, and immunity to standard experiment control procedures.​

My face fell with dread. “This thing was mixed with the Legendary Zapdos.”

Jade: "I sure hope those Rockets didn't cheap out on electroproofing their plane, since otherwise this is probably gonna be a short flight." o_o;;

“What? No way… That is awesome!” Rudy exclaimed.

“Hey, focus! If we don’t stop it, it could end up taking down the plane!”

So in other words, they did cheap out on electroproofing their plane. :V

“Er, right, I’ll put it back in the ball—”

The Pikachu turned suddenly at the sound of our voices and sent a string of lightning flying toward us, shattering the black Pokéball before we could do anything. I gaped in horror—what were we supposed to do now? Firestorm clutched at my leg in fear. Typhlosion leapt in front of our group and snarled defensively, igniting its neck blaze flames.

Rudy: "Fantastic, could this possibly be going any worse right now?" >.<
Jade: "Rudy! Don't just say that out loud!"
:uhhh:


And then, in the midst of all this, I heard the sound of a door opening.

“WHAT. THE. EVER. LIVING. HELL?!!

My stomach sank even lower as I turned to see an extremely pissed-off Tyson standing in the doorway to the cargo area, his jaw hanging open from shock.

Jade: "That's why you don't say that out loud!"
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“Uhh, hey…” Spencer said awkwardly. “Could you leave for a bit? We kind of have a situation here.”

Tyson stared at us in a sort of stupefied rage before turning his gaze on the experimental Pikachu and clenching his teeth. He then pulled one of the black Pokéballs from his belt and opened it. The flash of light from within took the form of a huge green mantis with an armor-plated exoskeleton. Blank, pupil-less eyes flared mindlessly from a vaguely reptilian head. Light glimmered off a pair of scythe-lined forearms that looked sharp enough to cut the air. Wings twitched, ready to strike at any moment. And from its perch atop the mountain of supplies, the Pikachu stared at the Scyther, eyes wide with what looked like both anger and dread.

Spencer: "... Is that a 'maybe'?"
:fearfullaugh~1:

Tyson: "What do you think, kid?" >:(
Spencer: "I... uh... will just take that as a 'no'."
:uhhh:


“Thought you’d play with the hybrids did you?” Tyson asked with a sneer. “Then have fun facing the strongest of them. Kill them, Razors!”

The three of us couldn’t do anything but sit there, frozen in horror as the blade-armed nightmare shot toward us, too fast to even see.

All:
:AAAAAA:

Jade: "Is the story seriously leaving us on this note?!" O_O;
Narrator: "The story's seriously leaving you all on that note-"
Jade: "That was a rhetorical question!" >.<

Alright, overall thoughts:

My overall thoughts are about the same as in Chapter 1. I enjoyed the chapter, and it does a good job at selling a sense of drama and tension, though there were a few points that made me
:what:
at the logic a bit. Nothing that was too immersion-breaking given that we're dealing with Junior Highers and lower-ranked Rockets here, both of which aren't exactly well-known for their fantastic decision-making abilities, but it did undercut the whole "hidden strength" vibe going on a little. Since operatives like Tyson as presented are really obviously being carried by their betters in TR's plot to use yoinked Legendaries to carry out some regional takeovers.

I do have to wonder if it would've made sense to provide some earlier narrative hint to Rudy and Spencer's presence. Like on one level, it makes sense that Jade wouldn't have picked up any sign of them since she's busy getting yeeted into a chained restraint in a plane's cargo hold. On the other, it does make Rudy and Spencer's appearance feel a bit sudden from a narrative perspective. Not sure if there's really a way to square that circle, especially if in your eventual revision, the Rockets do get a bit more competent about OpSec, but it's something to consider at least.

But those quibbles aside, as you can gather from this review, I had lot of fun reading this chapter again. And I had a lot of fun writing stuff up in response to it too. Good work, @Chibi Pika , and I'll be looking forward to pecking away at your story a bit more regularly through the year.
 
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Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
IT'S BEEN 3000 YEARS BUT THE FLASHBACKS ARE HERE

For those not in the know, the #1 most-requested feature from readers over the years has been more scenes with Jade, Ajia, and Starr being friends in school before Starr moved away. The issue was that I didn't know how to include that content without having an entire miniseries before the fic, which would make for weird pacing. My solution is to include a small flashback scene at the beginning of chapters 5, 6, and 7, which is after the high-stakes plane arc concludes, and after Ajia has already returned in the present day (thus making it obvious that the three girls from the prologue are going to be important.)

So that readers don't have to go back and hunt down the flashbacks, I'll be posting them here for convenience (and for review blitzers.) For those of you just starting the fic, these extras contain no spoilers, but they do contain a fair bit of irony that will make more sense to caught-up readers. Probably avoid reading any comments from readers who are caught-up because those comments will likely have spoilers galore.



January, 5 years ago

“So, are you finally gonna tell us what you’re upset about?” Ajia asked, breaking the tension that had followed us ever since school got out.

Starr let out a frustrated sigh. “Ajia, I thought I already said I didn’t want to talk about it.”

“Ahh, sorry, I’ll stop asking,” Ajia replied, holding her palms out.

The three of us were walking to Ajia’s house. She lived closest to school, so we usually hung out at her place. My house was too far to walk. And I’d never even seen where Starr lived.

Starr’s arms were folded. Her face looked like she was arguing with herself in her head. “Alright fine, it’s Lexx,” she finally said. “That little worm stole my report card.” She glowered at Ajia like it was somehow her fault.

“Has he done anything with it?” Ajia asked patiently.

Starr paused to think about it. “Well, no. But he’s obviously planning to use it as blackmail or something.”

Ajia put a hand to her chin. “Do you want me to talk to him?”

“I wasn’t asking you to,” Starr replied quickly. “Besides, he’s my brother, not yours.”

“That just means he might listen to me,” Ajia pointed out with a sly grin.

Starr let out a snort. “I swear it’s like you’re the only person he listens to sometimes. But of course my parents always go easy on him.”

“Was the report card really that bad?” I asked curiously.

Starr had to tilt her head to look up at me. I was walking on top of the brick wall that ran along the sidewalk, so I was way taller than her.

The look Starr gave me said that she wasn’t too happy with my question. But then she made a face like she didn’t care and said, “Well, if you really need to know, I didn’t pass math or writing.”

Oof. That was pretty bad.

“Don’t give me that look,” Starr said, rolling her eyes. “Are you really doing that much better?”

“I’m passing most of my classes,” I replied defensively. Not Pokéspeech. But that class was impossible anyway, so it basically didn’t count. I didn’t know how anyone managed to pass.

The wall stopped when we reached the end of the block, so I jumped down and landed next to Starr. We were almost the same height, even though she was older than me.

“Anyway, it doesn’t matter,” Starr went on. “When we get to Ajia’s place, I just want to hang out and watch shows and pretend I’m an only child.”

I shrugged. “That’s fine with me.”

Ajia elbowed Starr. “Seriously, do you want me to talk to Lexx? I hate to see my friends fight. Even if they’re related,” she added with a wink.

Starr let out an exaggerated groan. “Ajia, when are you gonna learn that I don’t want you to fix things all the time?”

Ajia laughed. “Sorry, sorry.”

A few seconds passed. Starr rubbed her arm, glancing away. “But like… if you wanted to help, I’m not gonna stop you or anything.”

Ajia’s face lit up. “Sure thing.”



February, 5 years ago

“Alright, I admit it, I’m lost.”

A groan came from the phone. “Are you serious, Jade?”

I screwed my eyes shut, not wanting to look at the phone. I knew she’d be upset.

Starr let out a frustrated sigh. “How did you even… didn’t you get a ride?”

“I rode my bike,” I mumbled. “I thought it would be cool if I found my way by myself, so I told my mom I didn’t need a ride because it wasn’t that far, and then…” My voice trailed off.

Starr didn’t say anything. It was a good thing she couldn’t see my face burning with embarrassment.

“I was excited to finally get to see your house,” I added quietly. “It sounds really nice.” She had a huuuge TV and a pool and a million snacks.

“I gave you the address—can’t you just look it up on your phone?” Starr asked.

“I don’t have my own phone, remember?” Mom said I was too young for one. Usually I didn’t care, except for right now.

Starr was quiet for a while. “Are you calling from the Pokécenter or something?” she finally asked.

I paused. “Yeah.”

“Alright. I’ll be there in five minutes.” And then the call ended.

I blinked in confusion. She was coming here? And so soon? I wasn’t sure what to make of that, so I just went outside and sat down on the bench. It was a cold day. Another reason why trying to go by myself was a dumb idea.

Five minutes later, I heard a clip-clop sound coming from down the road and looked up to see a Ponyta trotting toward me. And Starr was riding on its back.

“Whoa!” I called out, jumping up from the bench. “Where’d he come from?”

“He’s my mom’s,” Starr said as Ponyta stopped in front of me. “I go riding with him twice a week.” Right, she had mentioned getting riding lessons before.

I reached out and ran my hand down Ponyta’s neck. His fur was warm. I was a bit worried about getting too close to his mane, but the flames were just a warm tickle. It felt nice compared to the cold air.

“Sorry to make you come get me,” I mumbled, glancing away.

Starr rubbed the back of her head. “Look, don’t worry about it, okay? You ready to eat way too much popcorn and candy?”

I brightened a little. “Yeah!”

Starr gave Ponyta a pat on the neck, and he took off down the road at a trot. I followed them on my bike, finally starting to feel better.

“It’s really cool that your parents finally let you have friends visit,” I said. I’d never even seen her parents.

Starr glanced over her shoulder with a mischievous grin. “They’re not home.”



June, last year


I sat tapping my feet on the floor as the phone rang once, twice, three times. It would just go to voicemail, like always. I wasn’t sure why I still bothered.

But then, miraculously, a face appeared on the screen.

“Hello?”

I brightened instantly. “Ajia! It’s been forever!”

She gave a sheepish grin. “Ahh, sorry, I know I’ve been really bad about answering my phone lately.”

“Guessing you’ve been… busy with stuff?” Busy, always busy.

“You know it,” Ajia replied with a wink. “What about you? You’re on summer break, right? Have you started your journey?”

“Uh…” I didn’t want to think about failing the test. Not right now. “It might not be for a little while.”

Ajia tilted her head. “Huh… well, let me know when you do, alright?”

I nodded distantly. If I ever did get to leave before she came home.

“Are you coming back to school in the fall?” I asked, a bit too hopeful. I was still torn between wanting her to return home and wanting her to keep journeying long enough for me to join her.

Ajia shrugged. “Well, I’m planning on participating in the Johto League in August. After that, who knows?”

It was pretty rare to keep journeying during high school. I had thought she’d be home after fighting in the Indigo League last year, but…

“Dad’s cool with me staying out longer,” she added. “And I’ve been doing fine with my online homework. So, y’know, I might keep going another year.”

Next year. It felt so far away.

Anything I could talk about from my life felt boring compared to what being on a journey would be like. Who cared if Rudy and I saw a wild Rapidash on Route 26 the other day? Real trainers could see them all the time.

“Have you seen Starr lately?” I found myself asking.

Ajia’s face fell. “No, not for a long time.”

So much for that. I’d had even worse luck getting ahold of Starr than I had with Ajia.

I was still stuck on what else I could say when a large pair of ears poked into the corner of the screen. And then another.

Ajia glanced down at them. “Yes, hello, what do you two want?” she asked in an amused tone. Two curious faces suddenly popped into full view. One violet-furred, one black.

I gaped at the screen. “How on earth did you meet an Espeon and an Umbreon?”

Ajia chuckled a bit at my shocked look. “I got them from a rescue organization. And, you know, I’d been kinda thinking I wanted to train some more team members ever since Furret and Clefable went back home. I need a full team for the Johto League, anyway.”

Espeon tilted his head and said something to Ajia in Pokéspeech. She laughed and shushed him.

A slight grin found its way onto my face. “What did Espeon say?” I’d caught the words ‘interesting’ and ‘story’ but that was about it.

“Ah, he was just making a joke about how we met,” Ajia said casually. “Which reminds me! I’ve got to tell you about what happened in Goldenrod last week. So these two were walking with me and we were looking for some place to eat, and then—”

She rambled on for a while, telling various stories from her journey. It was easy to listen to her and imagine that one day I’d get to have experiences like that.

We didn’t usually get to talk this long. It felt a little bit like old times. I’d enjoy it while I could.
 

Dragonfree

Moderator
Staff
Location
Iceland
Pronouns
she/her/hers
Partners
  1. butterfree
  2. mightyena
  3. charizard
  4. scyther-mia
  5. vulpix
  6. slugma
  7. chinchou
Flashbacks

It's great to see these at last! More buildup of the trio's relationship before it all comes to a head with chapters 23-25 is something the fic really needed, and I imagine it'll do a lot for new readers to get these nuggets, even if they may not quite understand the significance of them until later.

The first one is cute, though it probably does the least for me out of these. It's fairly straightforwardly expository: Starr and Lexx are siblings and Starr is not a fan of his, Ajia is friends with both Starr and Lexx, Jade is failing Pokéspeech but Starr is failing multiple subjects, Jade is tall and Starr is short even though Starr is older (and feels like a character who'd be big and imposing), Ajia wants to fix things all the time. More subtly, I enjoy Starr in it - complaining her parents go easy on Lexx, doesn't like to admit she's failing subjects but still determined to be the sort of person who doesn't care, just wants to spend her time with her friends not thinking about her family, hates the idea of Ajia needing to fix things for her but still appreciates it when she does. All pretty relevant to her character and nice to see.

“I’m passing most of my classes,” I replied defensively. Not Pokéspeech. But that class was impossible anyway, so it basically didn’t count. I didn’t know how anyone managed to pass.
:sadbees: Who could possibly ever become good at Pokéspeech? Certainly not you, five years from now, in the chapter this flashback will be accompanying

The second one's probably my favorite, and not just because I like Starr. It really oozes how Starr is rich and fancy - not just her fancy house and huge TV, but the horseback riding (I guess that wouldn't technically have to be that much of a rich-people thing in the Pokémon world, but still, in context it absolutely feels like a rich-people thing), the assumption that surely every kid has a smartphone, the casual buying of way too much popcorn and candy when her parents are out implying this kid gets to spend money pretty freely and without supervision. It's all so ominous when we Know, but also good setup for the reveal.

And I enjoy Jade a lot in it! Trying to Do the Thing on her own only to get lost and have to ask for help, the innocent admiration of Starr's stuff, how embarrassed she feels about getting lost and needing help.

“I was excited to finally get to see your house,” I added quietly. “It sounds really nice.” She had a huuuge TV and a pool and a million snacks.
This is just such a cute kid way of thinking about it.

“He’s my mom’s,” Starr said as Ponyta stopped in front of me. “I go riding with him twice a week.” Right, she had mentioned getting riding lessons before.
Just casually riding up on a Ponyta, as one does

Starr rubbed the back of her head. “Look, don’t worry about it, okay? You ready to eat way too much popcorn and candy?”
Love Starr's reaction here - she just wants to get to hang out with her friend and forget about everything else, again.

“It’s really cool that your parents finally let you have friends visit,” I said. I’d never even seen her parents.

Starr glanced over her shoulder with a mischievous grin. “They’re not home.”
I bet Jade's never seen her parents. And of course Starr only invites a friend over when she can grab a chance where they aren't home! Gah.

Jade calling Ajia who's been increasingly unresponsive over the course of years as she, unknown to Jade, has been battling Team Rocket, breaks my heart. Poor Jade, feeling so boring and uninteresting when she's not journeying like her cool friends, not wanting to tell Ajia about failing the test, and yearning to just have her friends back, torn between wanting to see them on her own journey and just wanting them home. She just wants to matter and be interesting and be able to Do Things like them!

“Have you seen Starr lately?” I found myself asking.

Ajia’s face fell. “No, not for a long time.”
:(((( Poor Ajia. She's holding in so much and Jade has no idea. She must feel pretty lonely too on the other end of the phone, and at the very least exhausted and stressed and dispirited after everything that's gone on with the Rocket revolt, even if she'll stay relentlessly cheerful and act like nothing's wrong.

So much for that. I’d had even worse luck getting ahold of Starr than I had with Ajia.
I bet you have, Jade

Lovely little reads all in all! Looking forward to more chapters proper as always.
 

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Chapter 20

Oh boy, Astrid does not look happy in that artwork.

a toilet that I wanted to stay as far from as possible

Jade’s still as relatable as ever XD

Astrid stepped through the doorway, her expression cold and disapproving, like she’d rather have been anywhere else. Astrid, who I’d escaped from twice, both times knocking her out with Chibi’s lightning. Except this time there was no way out—I’d be at her mercy.

Yeah… this is gonna suck for Jade, isn’t it? >.<

“Charizard,” my voice said.

“I already know that,” came a reply full of exasperation. Another blast of electricity shot through my body.

Aw, that one was just unfair. Jade technically did answer her question.

Astrid recalled her Raichu

Actually, I wonder how Astrid’s Raichu feels about torturing someone on his trainer’s behalf.

The girl—Stracion—spoke. “Wow, you’re a mess.”

“Thanks,” I muttered dully.

“Anyway, I can’t exactly come in there, so we’ll have to talk across the room… cameras and all that,” she said, pointing to the security cameras in the corners, facing the cells. “Can’t be seen talking to a rebel who’s about to escape.”

Stracion to the rescue! She’s always fun.

“Nah. I think your Pokémon are over there, actually,” she said, gesturing to the desk where the guard had previously been stationed. A Pokéball Containment Unit sat on a shelf behind it, along with a belt pouch.

I’m surprised they’re keeping Jade’s Pokémon so close to her cell. Figured they would store those somewhere else on the base.

The Absol drew herself back, then lunged, swinging her head so the blade cleaved through the bars repeatedly. After the third swing, the cell door clattered to the ground in pieces.

I know we got different headcanons about these sorts of things, but I still find it kinda jarring to see stuff like Stygian just slicing through solid metal bars like butter with that horn. I don’t find it very believable, plus from a meta perspective it would be more interesting to see them having to put some effort into escaping the cell.

The prickling sensation of Feint Attack’s dark aura. The writhing nausea caused by our constantly changing flight path as the two clones pushed on, dodging the Rockets’ deadly force at every turn.

Yeah, this kinda emphasizes my point, since the two clones escape the base and the Rockets with little effort and the guns don’t end up doing anything. I’m just having a hard time believing that these two can get into a situation like this for the third time without getting shot, especially since it’s the second time that it’s happening indoors where they logically shouldn’t have the room to dodge.

Not long afterward, the metallic clang of blades on metal rang out and then cold air pierced every inch of exposed skin like needles.

Oh? What happened here? I’m not sure what’s being described exactly and what those blades are supposed to be.

I didn’t bother trying to unwrap my wound and redress it properly. I’d deal with that bloody mess later. Hopefully much later. Maybe if I waited long enough, I wouldn’t have to do it at all.

The rebels don’t even have a medic who can help patch Jade up? Dang?

“I need to know everything that was said during your interrogation. As word-for-word as possible,” he said.

Jade: *Vietnam flashbacks intensify*

“So overall, what you’re saying is… you didn’t actually give away anything.”

I blinked. My brain was such a hazy mess of shame and humiliation that it took several seconds for his words to register. I really… hadn’t given anything away… had I? Not yet, anyway—I’d been rescued before I’d gotten a chance to. But… was I going to? I didn’t know. I hated that.

Poor Jade is giving herself such a hard time. She did great all things considering!

“Hey Jade, uh… wanna hang out and watch League tournaments? I downloaded the ‘96 Kanto top cut—I heard it was pretty awesome.”

Yeah, I think she has something else on her mind right now, buddy! XD

But hey, at least he means well.

It was stupid. I was home, I was safe… why was it still affecting me? There was absolutely no chance I’d be attacked here. But my thoughts kept straying back to the detention cell, no matter how badly I wanted them to stop. That feeling of being useless, unable to fight back, completely at her mercy, knowing that when push came to shove, I’d betray everyone.

The feeling burned. I clenched my fists, swallowing hard. I had to ignore it. I had to forget it. It didn’t matter. I’d escaped. I was never going back there. She couldn’t hurt me anymore.

I closed my eyes slowly, digging my nails into my palms as hot tears streamed down my face.

It wasn’t real. It didn’t happen.

In my dreams, I saw nothing but lightning.

Yeah, I’d imagine getting tortured would be pretty traumatizing. Still, I think this experience and this hatred of feeling weak can be great for character development and make her stronger in the long term.

Anyway I thought it was a good chapter, even if obviously sad for Jade. I’m excited to see where this will take her character arc.

That said, I do think the escape felt a little rushed, since Jade’s captivity and escape all happened in the same scene, with the breakout itself being pretty short. And as I mentioned earlier, I also thought things went way too easy for Jade and clones, since it seemed like there was nothing the Rockets could do to stop them from escaping, even if the clones in terms of strength shouldn’t be any different from a normal Absol and Flygon. You’d think the Rockets would have done something about their security since last time, but I guess not. Was also a bit of a shame that Astrid didn’t return during the escape.

Also while you did a great job describing the experience of getting tortured from Jade’s perspective, I do find it kinda jarring to see electrocution being described so realistically when Pokémon is inherently a cartoony setting, the electricity was coming from a Pokémon instead of something man-made, and electric attacks normally don’t have such a realistic effect when used in a Pokémon battle. Granted, Jade was already injured and got hit over and over again when she was already down on the ground, so maybe it is kinda justified.
 

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Hey Chibi! This is a chapter review up to what's not here, but on Fanfiction. Still, I'm posting it here as well to remind you to maybe. publish. it here. too? Yes! I hope so. Anyway, here's feedback for what I had read at the time, up to chapter 48 to 50. I'll be honest, I was hoping for more after all this time getting lost in other things to not read this one. Like, maybe five chapters. So, good story pls update.

Onto specific chapter reviews, though... Chapter 48 had an interesting set of arc words what with making choices and choosing to join the war, or whatever it is that's going to happen. Even little things like Jet seemed to tie into the theme, which was interesting. The chapter itself was definitely in the slower side, though. I'm not sure what the next incident will be, though that may also be because it's been a while since I've been able to read through this one!

Hot dogs with just mayo? Disgusting. No better than ferals. I wonder if there's ever a scene where Pokemon have a chat about different tastes they have compared to humans. Maybe there's something that Pokemon think is totally disgusting that humans consider great! Like maybe they think a hamburger is an abomination.

It was cute to see the kinship the Legends had with Pokemon. I don't recall seeing that in any extended level before, during the planning part of chapter 49. Maybe the Legends are getting more comfortable with their human partners, or they're just more acclimated in general after, well, social osmosis? That could be one guess, though I'll also note the foreshadowing of the Legends being more casual with what comes later, that being, the revelation of the fact that the Legends don't know what they're doing. I think having this scene here, with them finally being casual about it all, helped ease the reader into the quiet revelation later on.

There's something funny about Lugia being told "if you're captured, you can't be captured by someone else!" considering...

"Just make Lugia steal a supply"—you're doing this in purpose aren't you? Well, I direct messaged you just to be sure, and you weren't, but come on, that's literally the opening to Gale of Darkness, where snagging Pokemon from Trainers is a thing.

Lugia's assertiveness is amazing despite the fact that its stubbornness is probably the most childish of all the Legends present. Doth protest too much and all that.

The lore of the Legends perpetually reincarnating was interesting and definitely helped with covering some of the bases. Though, it's a little odd that it wasn't revealed until now... Maybe they were busy not dying, but I feel like with all the downtime, it would have been mentioned in passing, right? I guess maybe it was hard to find a place to really put it down.

I have a feeling there's probably more to their past lives than expected. After all, they had to have their power and life experiences somehow, and their innate knowledge. I suspect echoes of their past lives dictate a lot of their tendencies one way or another... But they could also defy it. There was a whole lot of foreboding about what their relationship with humanity means, so maybe in the past the Legends were at even more tenuous relations, somehow? And, if that's the case, could they be fixing that just by partnering up with a human? Maybe that was their plan after all--take advantage of their own inevitable memory loss to "try again" with a nudge in the right direction.

Just a guess. It's probably got many more complexities, even if I'm right.

Jade and the others getting summoned by an Elite Four is the equivalent of the FBI getting the perp and asking questions they already know the answer to. And I have been watching a lot of interrogation videos lately, so all of the things they were saying in there had me cringing at how much they probably just gave away. That's gonna bite them later.

Oh good, this is a classic one. Authority figures being worse than useless because they couldn't give the full picture. At some point giving out that info will look like the best move. Gah, Big Secret plots are annoying in this way. There's always some reason it's not optimal, or some reason they decide not to, when it would have been in their best interests to get it all on the table.

Anyway, as a final note, there's something magical about imagining Mewtwo waiting in a living room for the others to arrive. I like to imagine there being an idle camera there beforehand where he's sitting there, waiting awkwardly, occasionally silencing an outdoor Pokemon with a glare for being too noisy.

All caught up and waiting for more. This time, perhaps with 50% more Mewtwo angsting silently offscreen. Guess that kind of personality is inevitable when you were born with a defied purpose. Thanks again for the read!
 

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You gotta start reviewing more often than every 3000 years, bud. ;3

Anyway, the long await Flashbacks! I've been excited for these for what feels like the entire time I've been reading the fic, and the payoff is so worth it! I remember workshopping ideas with you and lobbying for these to exist in more or less the way that they now do, and for them to provide some insight into Jade's old relationships in a way that makes the reader root for them to get back together, and I feel that you've not only successfully managed to do that, but you've managed to do a ton of foreshadowing and character work in these, too. It's a delight.

I'm particularly fond of the way the past links to the future, and the problems of back then are so relevant to the problems of the present. Starr's resentful and her privileged life is actually the terrible kind, Ajia can't not try to interfere with the Sakaris, and Jade gets in over her head to try and impress people and do neat things. And, of course, the tragedy of them drifting fruther and further apart from one another. The third one neatly manages that for all three pairings, by implication, since this sparse communication between Jade and Ajia is the friendship that's currently getting the most contact. How awful for poor Jade especially.

On top of all that, they're just straight up adorable. They're such true-to-life kids, with kid-level friendships and concerns, bickering away in a way that echoes their later dynamics perfectly. Jade wants to be good at things and to matter and to have fun experiences with her friends. Ajia tries to fix things and manage everything and mediate while concealing information like a motherfucker. Starr is a grumpy little ball of resentment who's trying hard not to care while actually caring a lot. It's great. I love The Gorls. Them.

Chapter 1 Redux!

Huzzah! It's finally here! I'm so pleased! But Cheebs, you didn't even redraw the chapter art? What kind of revision d'you call that, huh? jk jk jk

I like the little tiny changes you've made, from 'yeah' to 'yeaahh' and so on. The first paragraph consequently has better pacing and a sense of building excitement! I'm not gonna try and spot every little fix, but I can tell you've really fine-tuned everything, and I think it shows your command of prose has improved since you last touched the chapter! Some paragraphs are considerably better just from this sort of tweaking, such as the appearance of Ebony, (who is a dog, and also the best puppy). I really like how her coming with Rudy on his journey is introduced through a fun moment that tells us about his character and her capabilities and Jade's mixed feelings about yet another friend leaving without her, and not just his saying so. It really shows how far you've come in keeping the events of a chapter fun and interesting.

I really appreciate the changes to the conversation about starters. What it means for a 'mon to be a starter, the casual mention of a 'mon not being into battling, etc. Love the idea that being a battling 'mon is a professional/vocational choice for them, too. The banter is also more fun and casual and in-character, I think I'm influenced by already being fond of them but I reckon it'll make new readers warm to them faster, too. Stalker's introduction is a lot more striking, I think, with the little changes you've made to it. His provision of a ball for Firestorm is such an improvement, wow, it manages to tie together the scene better, it's specificity and detail, it's good sense, it's characterisation, it's an opportunity to mention the Pact and emphasise consent. Love it. And of course, Jade's energy as she watches the fight and turns away is much better than her previous helpless resignation.

Gotta upgrade my react to a quag after that upgrade to the chapter. Good job, Chibi. You should be proud.
 

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Hoo boy! I wish I'd been keeping notes as I read, but I really wanted to binge this whole thing and... it didn't occur to me until now, now that I'm finished and have Things To Say. Whoops.

So for now I'll just talk about some highlights, purely off the top of my head:

Firstly, the entire Rebellion arc. I loved that. There were definitely some questions, but overall, I loved it. The characters, at least the ones on-screen frequently, all have good, distinctive personalities to them, making it easy to remember who is who. If LC were a movie, this is exactly the type of thing I'd have been picturing my own OC involved in, training and fighting and going on missions alongside Jade, Rudy, and Darren. And what a wild ride it was!

I already did ping you about a couple questions I'd had (that if I'd just read further at the time, I'd have gotten partial answers to), but I kind of want to restate them here. In particular... the entire time reading this arc after Jade was "recruited" by Stalker (the entei scene, not the SS Anne mini-arc), I was assuming there was some existing rebellion, and that Stalker was simply recruiting more assets for it. I suspect I thought this due to Ajia appearing very early on in the fic and essentially outright admitting she'd had prior experience dealing with Team Rocket before that scene. It eventually became clear that, no, the only rebellion was the handful of children that Stalker had recruited, which left me thinking... where was Ajia? How was she connected to all of this? Where's the rest of the rebellion, and why are we not seeing anything they're doing?

While eventually we did get the answers to this... it still left me puzzled all the way up to that point, and I feel it was odd for none of the characters to question it, or at least Jade, given that she already know Ajia's in on it or something similar. It isn't outright stated anywhere that I can recall that there isn't anything more to the resistance, and in fact implied otherwise via Ajia's experience. I kind of wish Jade at least had wondered about this in-story somewhere, too; "Where's the rest of the rebellion? What are they doing? Why isn't Ajia here?" Something like that, if only to acknowledge that yes, that will be important later. I wouldn't say this detracts from the story at all, but it was definitely a puzzling question I had nagging the back of my brain for several chapters.

I also really love the way you do these chaotic legendary battles. It's still relatively easy to follow who's doing what, even in the background, while not really causing any confusion. Given that I'm planning several "free-for-all" battles later in my own fic, you can bet I'll be looking here for inspiration and how to keep them manageable and coherent.

I am a liiiiittle bit disappointed in the lack of fallout from Starr abandoning Team Rocket. She'd been super worried about it. It was presented in such a way that it was a big deal. But they haven't so much as spared her a second thought after having escaped from Giovanni and Mewtwo themselves. (Starr is fantastic, though; love that "grump who cares" type! And the scene where she has to torture Jade was just. Beautiful. Especially knowing her side of the experience.)

I can't help but feel amused somehow by Jade's frustration at the legendaries not understanding how the Chosen stuff works. They're just as in the dark as she is, and she feels as though they should have all the answers. Hey Jade, just because the legendaries are involved in the plot doesn't mean they know what's going on! Just like you!

I notice Sebastian didn't agree to release raikou. I wonder if he/Lexx are planning/have attempted to force raikou to choose one of them (or perhaps another Rocket?) to be their chosen?

Oh, and the master ball cannon thing is absolutely hilarious. I get that it's totally serious, but like... I can't help but laugh at the mental image. That said, Lugia's super afraid of being caught in Sootopolis. I wonder why no one's thought of just... letting the chosen put their patron in a pokeball willingly? That way they wouldn't have to worry about being captured during these sorts of events.

One final thing, more of a minor gripe. I felt like the primals in this most recent chapter were... very underwhelming. Several chapters built up to it happening, whether it was under Team Rocket's control or otherwise, but when it finally happened... they transformed and curb-stomped rayquaza in the span of a paragraph and then were gone. I get that in-universe, the thought was Team Rocket trying to use their new toy to possibly acquire even more but upon seeing the primals appear went "no, we're done here, we are so gone, eff that!". But even so, I kind of wish they got to do just a little bit more, given the type around getting them the orbs. Even if that type was just "primals transform, rayquaza can't land a hit on them, it spends way too much time avoiding their attacks instead of being able to counter before finally taking a hit, and then getting curb-stomped in a single paragraph." That at least would have given them more than just the anti-climactic feeling I got from it.

Anyways, very much enjoying this! Definitely going to be using it for inspiration in the future, and when/if I actually do a proper re-read, I'll try to do a better, proper, chapter-by-chapter review. Just wanted to at least convey my thoughts for now!
 
Chapter 47: Sebastian Shepard

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Thank you so much to everyone who reviewed LC during the blitz! I'll get around to doing review replies throughout the week, but for now, I wanted to continue crossposting finished chapters to get TR caught up to the other sites.

Fair warning, this one is 12k words. It's been a long time coming, but here we go~



~Chapter 47: Sebastian Shepard~

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It had been two days since the world came apart. A boy wandered through the wreckage alone. Each step was slow and arduous. His feet caught on chunks of concrete and charred wood as they made the journey without him telling them where to go. He’d walked this path a dozen times already. Enough times that he could see his own footprints in the hardened mud.

The boy wasn’t supposed to be out here. The rescue teams had cleared the area, and it was still dangerous. But he didn’t want to go back to the emergency shelter. He didn’t want to talk to the rangers, with their prodding and their questions and their insistence on finding some way for everything to be alright when it wasn’t. He just wanted to be alone.

After some time, the boy stopped. He glanced around at the surrounding, and at the houses all burned so thoroughly that it was hard to tell them apart. His eyes locked onto one in particular, tracing the familiar pattern on the charred door. He then sat down quietly in the middle of the ruin and didn’t move for some time.

He hadn’t slept since it happened, and he’d barely eaten. His sense of time was gone. It was like it had happened both two hours and two months ago. He tried to recall images of what had happened but they wouldn’t come. The sights and sounds had all melted into a nightmarish haze. There was… the freak storm that had rolled in from nowhere. Flashes of lightning and fire. Screaming. A terrifying, overwhelming presence, and then…

The boy clutched his head. The memories were there, they were right there, but it was like he couldn’t reach them, and he’d been left with this gaping hole in his heart that he didn’t know how to process. He’d already felt everything a hundred times over. He didn’t think he had any room left in himself to feel anything else.

His face was suddenly wet with hot tears. He rubbed them away furiously but they wouldn’t stop. This was wrong. This wasn’t supposed to happen. He wasn’t sure how he knew that, but it was like nothing was more true in the world.

The only thing he knew was that he couldn’t stay here. There was something burning within him, driving him forward. He wasn’t sure where it’d come from or what it was, but it was the only thing pushing him through the pain.

Keep moving. Become strong. This pain is nothing compared to…

Compared to what? The boy didn’t know. He wasn’t sure if he’d ever know.

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That one, he thought, eyeing the storefront. The one with the Meowth coin in the corner of the window. He’d seen it before, knew what it meant. He also knew that it would be his ticket to moving forward.

The bell jingled as he pushed the door open, then slammed shut behind him with what felt like way too much force. He glanced around at the collection of knickknacks lining dusty shelves. The shop was hot and musty, and the slowly-turning ceiling fan didn’t help much with that. A Houndour leered at him from its bed in the corner.

At the far counter, two men had been chatting with bored faces. When they heard the jingle, they looked up, fixing the boy with expressions that were both curious and… predatory. Like they were sizing him up.

“Well lookie what we have here. How old are you, kid?” the man behind the counter asked.

The boy paused. Eleven was too young. Too naïve-sounding. Everyone had always said he looked older—tall enough to be a teenager.

“Thirteen,” he replied.

The man nodded absentmindedly, like he was thinking about something else. “I see. And what brings you here today?”

“I’m looking to sell some things.”

The man chuckled. “Are you, now? Well, why don’t you come on over and we’ll take a look?”

The boy hesitated. But then he adjusted his grip on his shoulder strap and walked across the shop to pour the contents of his bag on the counter. He hadn’t found much. Some Pokéballs that had escaped the blaze (all empty). Some evolution stones. A rare-looking crownlike rock that he’d found inside a melted glass case, whose owners might not be alive anymore. He wasn’t expecting much for any of it. A place like this, they were guaranteed to rip him off, if they even gave him anything at all. But that wasn’t the real reason he was here.

The shopkeeper and his assistant browsed the items for a few minutes, discussing some things between themselves. Occasionally they glanced at him, and he tried not to let his attention wander. After a few minutes, the shopkeeper fixed him with an incredulous look.

“Now, I’m gonna offer my honest opinion here, kid: you look like shit. What’re you even looking to do with the money you get from this?”

The boy’s expression was cold and unflinching. “I want to get a Pokémon. Preferably from the kind of place that doesn’t ask too many questions.”

At these words, a slow, satisfied grin crept across the man’s features. “I think I might be able to help you out. Hey Jenner, lock the front door, why dont’cha.”

The shop assistant stood up from his seat and casually strode across the shop to turn the lock. Satisfied, the man behind the counter then focused on the boy. “First of all, what’s a kid like you needin’ to come to a place like this to get a Pokémon? Don’t they just give ‘em away at your age?”

“I don’t have a home to go back to and I don’t have a license.”

The man’s eyes seemed to bore a hole right through the boy, searching for anything to latch onto. Any evidence that this could be a lie. Finally, he folded his hands in front of his face and said, “I see. And what if I were to make you a business proposal? I represent an… organization that could get you your license, no problem. And in return, all we ask is that you use your newfound trainer status to perform various services for us. Now, I think those are some generous terms, wouldn’t you agree?”

It would look too desperate to agree to anything right away. He dared to try for more info. “What kind of services?”

The man’s eyes narrowed. “See, that’s not exactly the kind of question you’re supposed to ask in your position. It doesn’t sound very grateful.”

He should have expected that. Time to twist it into something that looked better. “It’s not that. I think it’s a nice offer,” he said, idly twirling one of the Pokéballs on the counter. “I just want to have all the details for something so important.”

The man laughed. It was a condescending sort of laugh. “Would you get a load of this kid?” he said, still chuckling as he cast an amused glance at the assistant. He turned back toward the boy and went on, sneering. “You’ll be a part of some… moneymaking endeavors. Namely in the Pokémon attaining department. Trainers catch Pokémon, right?”

The boy stared. “If I’m going to be doing anything criminal, just say so. I wouldn’t be asking to get my license illegally if I was afraid of that.”

Another roar of laughter. The boy was tired of being laughed at, but he didn’t let it show on his face.

“Doesn’t miss a thing, this one!” the shopkeeper boomed. When he regained his composure, his words grew quieter, sharper. “Let’s say this were something outside the law. I don’t suppose you’d have a problem with that, now would you?”

The boy shook his head. There really wasn’t any other answer he could give, was there?

The man leaned back in his seat, satisfied. “Good, good. It looks like we have an agreement, then. I’ll just hand you off to my superiors, and they’ll handle your registration.” He grabbed a phone from the counter and punched a few buttons. A few seconds passed, then: “Hey send someone from recruit processing up.”

After hanging up, the man surveyed the boy again, an odd look on his face, like he was trying to figure something out. “I think you’ll be a good fit for serving us. There’s something about you, kid. Can’t quite put my finger on it. I’m taking a risk on my recruiting metrics with you. So you better look good on me, you hear?”

The boy nodded. He wasn’t sure what else to do.

After a few minutes, the wall behind the shop counter slid open to reveal a secret passage. A woman stepped through the entrance and glanced at the shopkeeper, who pointed at the boy. She then motioned for him to follow her, and he did, descending a dimly lit staircase.

“What’s your name anyway, kid?” the shopkeeper’s voice called after him.

This was the start of a new life. His old life, and anything from it, was now meaningless. There was no reason to hold onto any of it.

“My name, it’s… Sebastian. Sebastian Shepard.”

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“Alright kid, looks like you’ve been assigned to my squad,” his commanding officer said, pacing in front of him. “It’s my job to make you useful to us as fast as possible, so the sooner we get you on missions, the better.”

Sebastian said nothing. He’d learned by now that was usually the best course of action as a new recruit.

“You got a Pokémon, right?” When Sebastian nodded, she went on, “Alright, let’s see it.”

Sebastian unclipped the lone Pokéball from his belt and opened it. He couldn’t help enjoying the look of shock on his officer’s face once the light took shape.

“A Charmander? Damn, what kinda favors did you have to do to get one of those? Guess they let you have him since he’s a runt.”

“She,” Sebastian said immediately. Charmander was a girl. She’d told him so when he first let her out.

His officer looked at him like he’d just said the dumbest thing she’d ever heard. “The hell? There is no way they’d give some brat a female Charmander, those things are way too valuable.”

“She’s a girl,” he just said.

The officer waved an arm like she didn’t remotely care enough to argue. “Fine, call it whatever the hell you want, I don’t give a shit. Let’s see some precision fire moves.”

They spent the afternoon running through drills. Basic stuff—target practice, evasion, endurance tests. It was exhausting. His officer was definitely trying get him to complain, which was why he didn’t. And Vesta didn’t either.

Sebastian could have chosen a common Pokémon, like a Rattata or an Ekans or a Nidoran. But he’d had his heart set on getting a proper starter Pokémon, and he refused to settle for anything less. And it wasn’t like they’d just given him one, either. He’d had to steal her for himself. He was pretty sure no one expected him to succeed. And even once he’d surprised everyone by pulling it off, he still had to sign away two months’ pay to keep her. He didn’t mind, though. Nothing worth having came easy.

Being on Team Rocket would mean following orders. Following orders would mean doing things he wasn’t proud of. He’d known that going in, and he knew that he couldn’t afford to have second thoughts. But that also meant that he’d need to be on the same page as any of his allies. Starting with Vesta.

“Do you want to be strong?” he asked her a few days into their training.

“*I volunteered to get a trainer,*” the Charmander replied simply. “*I got you instead. Not much different.*”

“There’s a lot of reasons why someone would do that,” Sebastian mused. “The League circuit is a bit different than what we’ll be doing.”

Vesta just shrugged. He wasn’t sure if she just wasn’t thinking through the full implications, or didn’t care.

Sebastian leaned back in his chair slightly, folding his arms behind his head. “I’ve decided I’m going to be the strongest on the team.”

Vesta’s large blue eyes stared at him, unblinking. “*That’s bold. You just started.*”

It wasn’t like he didn’t know how unrealistic it was. He definitely had no intention of telling anyone but her. Though he didn’t enjoy the way no one took him seriously, it would be useful if they didn’t expect anything from him.

“I know it won’t happen overnight,” Sebastian said. “It’s just something I need to do.”

The fire lizard’s gaze was unyielding. “*Why?*”

Why, indeed. He was sure he’d thought about it, but trying to call back the memory of how he’d come up with it was like wandering through a fog. He just… knew it was there. That’s all he really had to go off.

“My old life was destroyed,” Sebastian finally said, and for a moment it was like he was looking through her. “Getting strong is the only thing I have.”

No more feeling. He’d already felt it a hundred times over. No more.

Vesta blinked. Her tail flame flickered a bit, but he didn’t yet know what that meant. “*Strongest on the team,*” she said airily, like she was trying out the idea in her head. “*There’s an appeal to that, if you can pull it off.*”

Sebastian relaxed slightly. “Yeah. I’m glad you agree.”

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Months passed. Sebastian busied himself with jobs for the Rockets. For his first year on the team, that mostly involved catching Pokémon to be sold later. Occasionally they let him join heists. Most likely as a scapegoat in case things went wrong, but it never came to that. There wouldn’t be any opportunities to impress anyone while he was a grunt, but he was content to wait.

Getting more team members was going to be a slow process. He wasn’t aiming for rare or valuable. He wanted power. Unfortunately, power cost a lot of money, and even when he went and got it for himself, his superiors weren’t about to let him hold onto any of it for free.

Not all the Pokémon that Team Rocket obtained got sold. Some were kept in reserve, usually handed off to the combat unit to train into enforcers. Which meant that getting onto the combat unit would be Sebastian’s first goal. Until then, his only focus was paying off his debt for getting to keep Vesta. After that, every ounce of his earnings that didn’t go toward necessities went toward saving up for more team members later.

Kaida came to him from the Dratini that he’d taken from the Dragon’s Den. He chose her because she was curious about humans and wanted to get stronger—not to mention the way that she’d bonded with Vesta right away.

Silvan and Tako came to him during a trip to Hoenn. Silvan, from a League starter house. Tako, from a cave where Sebastian hadn’t really gone on a job—he’d gone because he’d heard about the historic cave paintings deep within. Silvan just wanted a trainer and didn’t care exactly how he came into possession of one. Tako wanted to see the world. Sebastian gave them both what they wanted in exchange for their strength.

Typhon was the last—stolen from a breeder and raised in secret. They’d only discovered him after Sebastian had been training him for six months, after which point Typhon wouldn’t listen to anyone else. Sebastian had to give up his entire savings just to train him.

None of his team members were really his. He’d only been allowed train them because it was useful to the combat unit. And the deal was obviously designed so that they could bleed him dry for years to come. So his plan was simple: he’d just use his team’s strength to rise up the ranks until he became strong enough that no one could tell him they weren’t his.

Two years after joining the team, Sebastian found himself turning fifteen and up for an officer position. That is, they hadn’t offered the position, he’d demanded it. He could tell the executives were skeptical. Reaching officer rank at age fifteen wasn’t unheard of, but it was limited to the extraordinarily talented. So he’d decided that he would be one of them. It was the combat unit. He just had to prove himself strong. That’s what he was good at.

The initial evaluation pit him against the other prospective agents up for promotion. Vesta wiped the floor with them. Grunts weren’t even a challenge anymore. His team would need to rise up the ranks just to keep their skills from stagnating.

Sebastian took his position at one end of the training field before letting out Vesta. Across from him, a combat unit officer sized him up, looking unimpressed. After a few seconds’ thought, she grabbed a Pokéball and let out a Rhydon. Well, if he wasn’t sure before, this sure confirmed it. They didn’t intend to let him advance.

There was no fanfare. The executive overseeing them waved a flag, and the match was on. The two combatants faced each other in an explosive burst of rock and fire. His opponent didn’t just have the overwhelming type advantage. Rhydon was higher level too. He had decent precision, and he liked to anticipate where Vesta would approach from. Lots of ranging, trying to control her movements—he could keep her at bay, hold her back from afar. Vesta’s specialty was long range, but all the moves she needed for the win condition were close-range. Sebastian tried having her feint with Flame Burst before swooping around for a Steel Wing. But his opponent saw that coming, and Vesta took a bad hit from Rock Throw, only narrowly avoiding the Stone Edge that burst up right after. Sebastian could feel his pulse pounding uncomfortably hard. He inhaled deeply, centering himself. Focus only on the win condition. Nothing else.

He changed tactics. Smokescreen first to cut visibility—Stone Edge was hard to aim at the best of times. That’d give Vesta the ability to close the distance without giving Rhydon an opening. It did mean that he couldn’t give play-by-play orders. But he didn’t mind. He had faith in her.

His eyes caught the glimmer of wings glowing white. Metallic blows rang out, chipping through rocky armor with each strike. Her growl split the air as she took a hit in return. But it was worth it to set up the expectation that she’d continue with that move. One more wing strike and the Charizard burst out from the smoke. For a brief moment they made eye contact, and he said, “Keep going with that,” but the look he gave her said otherwise. She read him and dove back into the smoke, where his opponent couldn’t see Vesta’s actions, couldn’t warn Rhydon. Though Sebastian couldn’t see her either, he could hear the rhythmic swishing of her claws sharpening her movements.

Win condition set. Rocks clanged off metal wings. A vicious flurry of strikes followed, then a heavy impact hitting the floor, and when the smoke cleared, Rhydon lay prone.

Sebastian did his best to keep the grin off his face. He turned and met eyes with the executives expectantly. They spoke to each other for a bit, then motioned for him to follow. He kept his face neutral, but inside his heart was pounding with anticipation.

The executives brought Sebastian to the office of the base’s head of operations. They spoke to her in private while he waited outside. Naturally, he listened at the door.

“Not a fan of doing this,” Sebastian heard her mutter.

“The kid’s scary as hell, and his Pokémon are stupid loyal,” his CO said in hushed tones.

“He’s a kid,” came the unimpressed reply.

There was some stammering, followed by, “The way I see it, this gives us the chance to see what he can really do for us.”

When the door finally opened, Sebastian was standing stock-still like he hadn’t moved from where they’d left him. The base head gestured for him to enter, and he did, taking a seat in one of the chairs in front of her desk.

Her eyes bored into his. “This position ain’t just about being some kind of tough guy. You have to be able to lead. You need a commanding presence.”

Sebastian nodded. “I look forward to it.”

She let out an incredulous scoff. But it was obvious that part of her was impressed all the same. She reached into a drawer, rummaged around for something, and then tossed it across the desk. He caught it, and found himself looking down at an officer patch.

“Alright kid, you got your wish,” the base head said, folding her arms. “Welcome to the combat unit. Your training starts at 0600 tomorrow.”

His heart skipped. Holding his excitement back, he bowed deeply and said, “I look forward to it,” before exiting the office.

He’d done it. Not that he’d really been worried about it, but still, it was proof that he could do it. One step closer. He just had to keep working his way up. Two more years until he could try for executive. That’d be a lot harder. He would need some real leverage. But he didn’t have to worry about that until then.

It wasn’t until he’d gone to bed that he remembered that he was only thirteen and no one could ever know.

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Being an officer meant being privy to more combat unit matters. At first it was just small-scale stuff. Higher-profile targets. Riskier missions with more powerful defenses. But after a few months, Sebastian was invited to an orientation meeting that was somewhat unusual for not having the subject announced ahead of time.

As he sat himself into a chair against the back wall, it struck him that he must have been the youngest one in the room. It wasn’t something he paid much attention to on missions (he was almost as tall as the adults by now anyway). But it was still odd to think that he was being trusted with something so exclusive.

How would it feel giving orders as the youngest one in the room?

…Maybe it was a bit early to be entertaining that idea.

After a few minutes, one of the combat unit heads walked up to the front of the room, and under his stern gaze, most of the chatter died down.

“The Legendary Project. I’m just gonna cut to the chase: I know you’ve all heard of it.”

He’d certainly heard rumors. Even if it wasn’t the sort of thing grunts were supposed to concern themselves with, he’d heard talk of it ever since he joined. Before then, even. Town gossip about restless gods and natural disasters. How much of it was true, he couldn’t say.

“All Pokémon exist for the glory of Team Rocket,” the executive said, his expression total stone. “And yet, somehow, no one ever extends that to the strongest Pokémon of all. Commanding their power would be the ultimate symbol of humanity’s triumph.”

His tone was hard to make out, but it almost sounded like he believed what he was saying.

“Anyone able to wield their power would be unquestioned,” the man went on, and by now the room was hanging on his every word. “Just think of how much the League would be willing to pay to anyone that could control the power of nature itself.”

It was a wild, dangerous idea. Sebastian hardly knew how to process it. Humans capturing legends. Was it even possible? Could they even go into a Pokéball? He suddenly wanted to know everything there was to know about the subject. Had their power been formally studied? Did they have energy signatures like ordinary Pokémon?

He only got the answers to some of those things throughout the rest of the meeting. The combat executive was more concerned with practical matters—the missions that had been carried out, the strategies that had been developed, the technology that would be used. There’d even been attempts to create artificial Legendaries, though none had panned out so far. (Artificial Legendaries! Built from DNA just like anything else! It was unreal.) And the team did have some idea of what kind of power they were dealing with from the samples that had been taken. It was a power far beyond what any ordinary Pokémon could dream of. But it wasn’t limitless.

Legendaries were living beings of flesh and blood, physical enough that they could be attacked. Captured. Commanded. Anyone able to wield their power would be unquestioned. Those words echoed in his mind, and even though they’d been referring to the team, he couldn’t help but wonder.

“I understand some of you may have reservations,” the executive told them at the end of the meeting. “I invite you to keep those reservations to yourself until you get over them. The Legendaries might be seen as gods, but the truth is, they’re just Pokémon.”

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In his downtime, Sebastian began researching Legendary Pokémon religiously. He wanted to know everything there was to know about them. Everything from modern accounts of encounters with them to speculative essays on their biology to ancient records of the impact they’d had on human culture.

The latter subject was the most fascinating to him. Almost all of his research brought him back to the cataclysmic era. The time period that had given birth to so many myths and legends that it was sometimes dubbed ‘the times of legend.’ The world was in turmoil. The training pact hadn’t even been settled yet; humans and Pokémon clashed everywhere they crossed paths. Wars raged without end. Legends were called upon to bring peace, but their power had only brought more destruction. Sure, some of the tales were no doubt embellished, but there were records for enough of them. The Great Kalosian War. The Unovan Civil Wars. Legendary power used and abused, time and time again until the legends finally stopped interfering altogether. They’d been secluded ever since. It was hard to imagine there ever was a time when humans and legends interacted freely.

There was one set of writings from back then that intrigued him more than the others. Namely because it spoke of the conflict between human and legend as if it would happen again. And, well… it was hard not to see the parallels with today. Team Rocket was aiming to capture Legendaries. That was exactly the kind of thing that would trigger a Legendary war. And it had been a long time coming too, ever since that mess that had to get covered up eighteen years ago. It was hard to find info on it, but he’d at least found a few sources since joining the project. They were all noticeably one-sided on the topic of who was responsible—he’d have to ask about that at some point. He was sure the answer would be nothing but propaganda, but it would be interesting all the same.

He closed one of his books and picked up another, flipping to a memorized page number and continuing to read. It was a nice day. The weather was starting to get cold how he liked it, but not yet cold enough that he couldn’t sit outside and enjoy the fresh air with his team. Kaida and Typhon were sparring. What had started as just a light warmup had gradually progressed into a violent all-out brawl. The two weren’t very good at holding back. And Tako cheering them on wasn’t helping things.

Typhon was winning. Kaida was getting flustered, her movements growing sloppier. Sebastian’s eye couldn’t help locking onto the flaws. Letting herself get off-balanced when she could have lowered her center of gravity further. Miscalculating how long it would take Typhon to charge up and rushing her moves as a result. But he didn’t say anything. He just made a mental note on feedback for later before returning to his book.

Occasionally he voiced some passages aloud. It helped him think. And part of him expected at least a little feedback from his starter, who was sprawled out on the grass next to him, her tail flame a beacon of warmth in the autumn chill. She didn’t appear to be paying any attention to him, though—she’d been watching Kaida, naturally.

“What did you think about that passage?” Sebastian asked.

The Charizard craned her neck back to look at him, eyes half-lidded. “*Hm? Wasn’t paying attention.*”

“Vesta. You should be more diligent, this is important,” he chided.

She rolled her eyes and nudged him with her wing. Settling the book in his lap, he repeated the passage for her.

Vesta tapped a claw to her scales, mulling it over. “*We already knew humans were gonna clash with the legends. Doesn’t change much.*”

Sebastian chuckled. “I suppose not.” She never did have the patience for abstraction. Still, to him, hearing about the Rockets’ imminent plans, and reading about the same events in 3000-year-old writings was a little bit different. It was no wonder most Legendary enthusiasts online talked about it like it was a prophecy.

He’d never really believed in prophecies. And yet…

At some point Kaida yielded to Typhon and stumbled away from the battle clearing, doing her best to look dignified and professional, like she hadn’t just lost. The Dragonite flopped to the ground with a slight huff and began licking her wounds. Sebastian knew better than to say anything to her when she’d just lost—he’d offer her a potion later. Besides, Vesta didn’t waste a moment before she abandoned his side and went to curl up against the larger dragon. Kaida huddled close to Vesta’s tail flame, closing her eyes in contentment.

A sudden thud hit the dirt, jolting him slightly. He turned to see Silvan, who had apparently just leapt down from a tree, crawling over to him on all fours.

“*Got ya,*” the Sceptile said, leering.

“Is that so?” Sebastian asked, mouth curling slightly.

“*Can’t fool me,*” Silvan replied with a toothy grin, flopping to the grass and closing his eyes contentedly in the sunlight.

Sebastian’s eye was drawn to the glint of red along the edge of Silvan’s wrist blades. “You’ve forgotten to clean up.”

“*Was gonna do it later,*” the Sceptile mumbled, waving a claw dismissively. He rolled over onto his back and crossed his arms behind his head, humming to himself. “*What’cha thinkin’ bout?*” he asked suddenly.

Sebastian looked up at the sky. “Just trying to think of where I want to go from here,” he said distantly.

For the past three years, his path had been clear. Just keep working his way up the ranks. What would he do once he reached the top? Now that it was actually within reach, he had to consider what the answer to that was. Where would he be when the team managed to catch a legend for real?

How strange that he was already thinking of it like it was an inevitability. The tech wasn’t quite there yet. All the past attempts had failed. And yet…

“We all decided we were aiming to be the strongest on the team. That won’t be possible once the combat unit have Legendaries at their disposal,” he went on, talking to no one in particular.

Silvan gave no sign that he’d been paying any attention. The Sceptile’s eyes were closed like he was dozing off. But then, rather unexpectedly, he said, “*Maybe you should do it. Then you can make them do anything you want.*”

A single person, capturing a legend for themselves. What an idea. Most people would call it blasphemy. Catching the Legendaries. It wasn’t supposed to be done. It wasn’t supposed to be possible. There were even some of his fellow Rockets that found the idea horrifying. It was just that deeply ingrained.

“A lot of people might be upset,” he replied, in a casual tone.

“*You’d be the boss,*” Silvan said, grinning all the wider. “*Could just tell them not to be.*”

Sebastian chuckled. “You always have such interesting ideas.”

There was no denying the simplicity of it. As if the higher ups could really refuse the demands of anyone who’d gotten a legend by themselves. But it was ridiculous all the same. It was impossible, right?

These days, he was starting to wonder.

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Sebastian was busier than ever. Same amount of jobs as usual, but with the added pressure of combat unit training. He didn’t mind the latter—both he and his team benefitted. They were getting stronger every day, pouring all their effort into surpassing their peers. Sometimes they even beat executives. They still couldn’t beat the commander though. He was on a whole other level. There hadn’t been many opportunities to fight him lately though—he’d seemed distracted.

Sebastian had been distracted too. His legend research hung over his mind. Especially that one legend in particular. It was starting to feel like it occupied almost all of his thoughts. Especially with most of the combat unit training revolving around the unspoken point that they’d be fighting Legendaries soon.

He couldn’t get it out of his head, no matter how much he tried. Finally, enough was enough. He had to get some closure. And the best way he could think of to do that was to pay a visit to the place where it was written—Midnight Island. He’d take the first magnet train to Kanto in the morning, then fly to the island. He could be back before noon. No one would even notice he was gone.

The sun was still low in the sky when he and Vesta reached the eastern coastline of Kanto. A small island lay ahead, several miles offshore. As they approached, Sebastian’s eyes traced the forests on the island’s northern half. It was impossible to miss—a clearing stripped of trees, with a great stone structure at its center. He pointed it out and Vesta descended, touching down on the dry, dead grass at the clearing’s edge.

The ruins here were off-limits to the public. Apparently there’d been… conflicts in the past. The Legendaries obviously considered it sacred ground. Well, it wasn’t like he minded pushing his luck a bit. If a legend confronted him, all the better.

A heavy feeling hung over him as he approached, looking up at the stone structure looming over him. He’d seen the photos, but that didn’t compare to seeing it here in person. These ruins had been here for 3000 years. He was standing in the same structure that had first been built at the end of the cataclysm.

Sebastian wandered all over the ruins, searching for any new details or information. Something that would hopefully help him make sense of how he was supposed to be feeling about that legend. But the writings were exactly the same as they’d been in his books. Nothing new or unexpected here. Maybe it was a waste of time after all. Still, he did feel he’d gained a sense of appreciation. It all felt more… real than just looking at a bunch of photos in books. These ancient ruins with their inscriptions in modern Tohjoan—more arguments in favor of it being a prophecy. He still wasn’t sure how he felt about that.

A sudden cold wind rushed through the trees, and he pulled his coat tighter to himself. Nothing more to see here—maybe it was best for him to head back now. A bit disappointing, but maybe he’d at least be able to clear his mind from now on.

Sebastian turned around to walk back to where Vesta was napping. No sooner had he taken five steps away from the ruin when it hit him—the distinct feeling of being watched. His heart rate suddenly spiked. He spun around, hand flying to his Pokéball belt, ready to attack at a moment’s notice. But there was no one.

“Hello?” he called out.

No response. Sebastian took a few steps forward until he reached the stone steps once again. For several seconds he didn’t move. He just stood there, eyes scanning the clearing for the tiniest sign of movement. A flicker of purple caught his eye. Then a Gastly peeked around the corner of one of the stone pillars and flicked its tongue at him before vanishing into the woods.

He wasn’t satisfied. There was something else. If he stayed here longer… maybe one of them would confront him. It was a long shot, but…

No, what was he thinking? He wasn’t ready. He couldn’t risk it all now. What if it killed him? He’d have wasted all that time for nothing.

He turned and strode away from the ruins. Not yet. He had to be patient.

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The night was a restless one, just like all the others. He found himself back at the ruins that he’d visited all those months ago. He’d misplaced something here, but he was having a hard time finding it. Searching every inch of the ruin had proved futile. It was here, he was sure of it. He just had to look harder.

His legs were growing tired. Each step felt like it took more effort than the last, until he finally realized that it was because he was sinking. The stone floor had liquefied; his feet were disappearing into the sludge. He tried to pull himself free, but faceless ghosts clung to his jacket, their fingers digging into the fabric, merging with it. Panic started to overtake him. He reached out, trying to free himself, but everything he touched began smoldering, burning brighter and brighter until he couldn’t see anything, and then—

Sebastian’s eyes snapped open. He blinked in the darkness of his dormitory, feeling his pulse pounding in his ears. His mind scrambled to cling to the shreds of dream, but they’d already faded into nothingness.

More nightmares. It had been nothing but nightmares ever since that day. It hadn’t been like that before… right?

He paused, blinking slowly. Before. What had it been like before? Something about the question didn’t make sense. That was ridiculous. Obviously there was a before. But at the same time, it didn’t feel like he’d just forgotten. Trying to think about it was like trudging through fog, though. He was sure he knew the answer, but.

Well, either way, he wasn’t going to be getting any more sleep. Best to use the time as much as he could. Sebastian slid out of bed, grabbed his books from the shelf, and made his way to the lounge.

It was empty. As usual for 2am. He liked being able to read undisturbed anyway. Sebastian settled himself into his favorite armchair (he’d gotten too tall to curl up in it like he used to), and his fingers flipped to right page as if on autopilot. And then he sank into the writings that he’d read at least a dozen times before.

The hours ticked by. He wasn’t sure what he was looking for. He’d been drawn to researching this subject for as long as he could remember. He couldn’t even really explain why. He just was. His mind kept drifting back to that one legend in particular. He’d read up on it extensively ever since his visit to Midnight Island. It was considered a bit of an anomaly in the mythology community. No other writings referenced the same things it did. There was no overlap with any other stories. It stood alone. It was important. He could feel it.

The time, in the ruins. That odd feeling that had come over him. The feeling of being watched…

Even as the fires of war subside, the balance that they fought so hard to preserve is already on the inevitable path to being torn apart once again.

Legendaries had been spotted on Midnight Island occasionally. That made the ruins an area of Legendary significance, which automatically gave him reason to suspect that the author wasn’t human. So if they did have an agenda, then he could assume it was one that would benefit the legends.

But then… the part about Legendaries making an alliance with humanity. If they’d been doing something like that, wouldn’t word have gotten out? He hadn’t heard of any activity that matched that pattern. On the contrary, the Legendaries were more elusive than ever. And any humans foolish enough to approach them were met with their demise a lot more frequently these days. There had been a lot of debates about it in the online legend-spotting circles. Many people had retired from the hobby as a result.

Seven among the Order—the ones who dedicated both mind, body, and spirit toward ending the war—shall be empowered to forge an alliance with humankind so that both might endure.

Most Legendary enthusiasts regarded the shrine’s writings as a prophecy. Unsurprising—there were a lot of prophecies from the cataclysmic era. Except… the writer had made no intent to state that any of it would happen. Only that it should. A pedantic distinction maybe, but one that stood out to him.

…What if it wasn’t a prophecy at all? What if it was instructions?

He sat there blinking as he processed the thought. If that was true, it changed everything. Instructions. Saying that the alliance needed to happen. Why would the Legendaries need to be told in such a roundabout way? Wouldn’t they already know? Unless it wasn’t aimed at them. But then who…

The seven are bound by their duty to seek out the interlopers to protect the balance of power in the coming era.

Was it… aimed at the reader? Anyone who’d read the legend and had the power to make it happen? That only made sense if the author this didn’t think the alliance would be completed on its own. Someone had to make it happen?

…What if that person could be him?

It was a ridiculous thought. But some part of him wanted to indulge it.

Sebastian stood up and paced back and forth across the lounge, mulling things over. The clock ticked by on the wall. He had no idea how long he’d been here, and didn’t care to check.

Crafting an alliance between human and legend. What would that entail? The Legendaries would need to feel threatened enough that they’d be motivated to do it. They’d need to be put into a situation where they’d have the opportunity to encounter humans who’d make good partners. Humans who had the strength and drive to protect the Legendaries.

No, that wasn’t quite right. How would the Legendaries be able to identify that, anyway?

‘Interlopers’… Those who had interfered in the conflict. People who had protected the legends? Did such people exist?

…If they didn’t, could he make them? He’d already been toying with the idea of finding more allies after what happened with the revolt. If he couldn’t find people who’d protected the legends… why not create them? Recruit trainers to his cause, use his inside knowledge to give them all the tools they’d need to save the Legendaries from his own team. Wouldn’t that make them the perfect candidates?

He was close. He could feel it. Conflicts between human and legendary. An imminent war. An alliance between the two sides. But there was something else that he was missing. What was the purpose of the alliance? Why was it necessary?

For though none may prevail, what is set into motion shall be much greater indeed.

Sebastian stood frozen in the middle of the room, repeating it to himself, over and over. It seemed impossible. But it all fit. The attacks nineteen years ago. Everything that had followed. He had it all backwards. It wasn’t just that he had to keep the legends’ power out of the Kanto force’s hands. That wasn’t it at all. It was—

The realization lifted him up. He felt lighter than air. It wasn’t just that someone had to make sure the alliance happened. Someone also had to be ready for when it failed. If the alliance couldn’t prevent the Revolution, then… someone else needed to have access to the power of the legends. Why not him?

Team Rocket was going to capture the legends. He could rise up the ranks, use all their resources, get to them first. If he had that kind of power… would he be able to handle things when the alliance fell apart? If he was creating the ideal candidates for being chosen, he could also ensure that they were on his side. That way, when the alliance fell apart, he’d have a fallback.

But then… if it was going to fail anyway, then what was the point of it happening? That was a glaring hole. He was still missing some pieces there. Still, this was huge.

Of course, the Legendaries wouldn’t want to be captured—there was no doubt about that. Not at first, anyway. But if he could somehow contain them, explain the situation to them, get them to see things his way. It could be done.

“I’m going to do it,” he whispered to himself, tapping a fist to his palm. “I’m going to capture the Legendaries.” How many, he wasn’t quite sure. But enough of them that he’d have the leverage he needed. It would be difficult. There was a reason no one had ever managed it. He’d have to use all of Team Rocket’s resources to pull it off.

The other issue was the seven. The seven would have to remain uncaptured, no matter what. Or if they did get captured, it would need to be by his side. He would need to figure out who the seven were, first of all. That would be difficult, considering no other writings made any mention of them. He’d have to analyze the patterns of Legendary sightings, try to find a pattern. Something to go off. He’d start with the Tohjo guardians, the obvious candidates since the writings themselves were in Tohjo.

It would be a monumental task.

He couldn’t wait to get started.

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Lexx walked into the office to find papers completely covering every inch of furniture. Sebastian paced back and forth behind his desk, muttering to himself, occasionally flipping through one of the many books that sat propped open on the shelves, which he hadn’t put away in case he needed them again. There was no visible organization to any of it, though he seemed to have no trouble finding what he needed at a moment’s notice.

“Take it I should come back later?” Lexx said, moving to shut the door.

“No,” Sebastian immediately replied without looking up.

Lexx watched as he flipped through a stack of papers until seemingly coming to what he was looking for, scanned it for all of two seconds, and then spun around to look at something entirely different.

“Just taking a stab in the dark, but… when was the last time you slept?”

“Three days ago,” Sebastian replied promptly.

“Mhm,” Lexx replied, letting his eyes trace the pages that had spilled onto the floor. “Wouldn’t it be easier to do all this on the computer?”

“It’s easier for me to visualize like this,” Sebastian answered simply. He’d long since stopped trying to explain.

Lexx shrugged and leaned back against the doorframe while Sebastian refocused his attention on his work. He’d been cross-referencing all the reported Legendary sightings in Tohjo—comparing the frequency, location, time within the past nineteen years versus the years before that. There was a definite shift. He had a few suspects. He just had to rule out a few more factors, and then he’d know for sure who to target, and then—

“So, not that I don’t love being kept in suspense like this, but you said you needed me for something.”

Sebastian started slightly and jerked his head up like he’d just been pulled from a trance. “Right. I need all the info you can get me on the Legendary Project.”

Lexx blinked. “Why?”

“Because,” he went on, “the Kanto force will be moving ahead with their mission plan soon, and I don’t have any way to stop them. There aren’t enough double agents left, and I can’t risk giving myself away yet.”

Lexx clicked his tongue. “I figured that was what the rebel team was for—stopping them before they can get off the ground.”

“It wouldn’t be ready before then,” Sebastian replied, shaking his head. “The training high season hasn’t even started yet. I was planning on starting in May.”

Lexx folded his arms. “Uh huh, so… if you can’t stop them, then what good’s this intel gonna do?”

“I’ll beat them to it,” he answered simply. “I’m going to be the first one to catch a legend.”

Lexx gaped at him incredulously. Words seemed to have failed him.

“If this works, we’ll have the edge on them,” Sebastian explained.

Lexx blinked a bit, finally regaining himself. “I mean… yeah?” he said, rubbing the back of his head. “But we kind of already have the edge on them after that stunt you pulled with Leo.”

Sebastian shook his head. “We could lose that edge just as easily if they capture a legend before us.” He wasn’t willing to take that risk. Not with Legendaries on the line now. The revolt had bought them some time, but it hadn’t taken him any closer to his goals—especially not regarding the legend. Out of the revolt, there was really only one person who had a reasonable shot at becoming chosen. It wasn’t a sure thing at all.

And besides… she’d never side with him. He’d botched that chance. Maybe it was a mistake to tell her the truth, but he wasn’t going to let himself regret being honest. Lying to others only made it easier to lie to yourself. He couldn’t afford to lose sight of who he was and what he was doing.

Lexx was still reeling. He paced back and forth across the office with a hand to his temple. “You’re basically asking me to break into their highest-security systems and steal god-knows how much data without anyone noticing.”

“As soon as possible, yes,” Sebastian replied, completely deadpan. “Unless you don’t think you can,” he added, the edges of his mouth curling slightly.

Lexx snorted. “Ha ha. Look, these things take time, finesse. If I just blunder in, everyone’s gonna know I did it, and…” He paused, shaking his head. “I kinda enjoy my freedom, y’know? Not exactly keen on being under the same level of watch as my sis.”

Sebastian was silent for some time. “This is too important. And they’ll already suspect us once I show up with a legend anyway.”

Lexx chuckled. “So sure you’ll succeed, then?”

“I can’t afford not to be sure. I have to get one first, so I will.”

“Oh my god, always with the drama,” Lexx said, sighing exaggeratedly. “Alright, I’ll see what I can do,” he said, adding in a dismissive wave for good measure.

Sebastian relaxed slightly. “I appreciate your efforts.”

Lexx rolled his eyes. “Ah, don’t go acting all formal on me now. So, let’s hear it—what’s the plan?”

Sebastian paused. He wasn’t entirely prepared to be vetted this early, but… “I’ve been narrowing down potential targets. There’s still more work to be done there, but I have a few leads, so I’ve been making trips to Hoenn in my downtime.”

“Hoenn?” Lexx cut in, blinking in confusion. “What the heck, how? With your schedule? They’ve been working you to death.”

“I’ve been able to make it there and back in the same day,” Sebastian replied casually. “It only gives me a few hours to search, but I’ve made progress.”

Lexx gave a low whistle. “God, you weren’t kidding with the no sleep.”

“In any case,” he went on, locating the relevant stack of papers and handing them to Lexx, “here are the locations I’ve searched. Lots of dead ends, but a few look promising. I need the Kanto force’s research to be sure though, and…” He sighed. “Well, we all know they won’t be sharing it with us after the revolt.”

Having some way to track the legends would make things so much easier. They all had distinct energy signatures. He was sure the Kanto force had been planning to exploit that somehow, but he needed to know for sure.

Lexx shuffled through the notes, skimming them quickly. “You’ve really thought this through, huh.”

Sebastian’s mouth curled slightly. “You won’t find any holes this time.”

“Ah, that’s no fun,” Lexx said with a mischievous glint. “Just means I gotta try harder.”

“I look forward to it,” Sebastian said calmly, collecting some of his books and stacking them, clearing some space on his desk. “I have no intention of making you deal with the fallout if you’re found out,” he added. “I’ll take the brunt of it. We’ll have a much easier time dealing with it once I’ve succeeded.”

“There’s some bold talk,” Lexx said, folding his arms behind his head. “You’re acting like you’ve already gone and done it.”

Sebastian gave a wry grin. “You’re the one who said you wanted to see me turn things upside down.”

Lexx smirked. “Did I say that? You’ll have to refresh my memory. Anyway, I’m not letting you charge ahead without running the final plan by me first. I’m sure I can find some holes if I really try.”

Sebastian chuckled. “That’s what I was banking on.”

Lexx gave a mock salute, then spun on his heels and exited the office. No more than five seconds later, he poked his head back in through the doorway and added, “Can’t promise any all-nighters, though. Some of us actually need sleep.” Then he vanished before Sebastian could say anything else.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sebastian was keenly aware of all the eyes on him. Whispers and rumors surrounded him as he walked down the halls of Mahogany base. He’d known that the news would spread fast. He hadn’t expected it to be this fast, though.

“You can’t be serious.”

“What kinda favors is that kid doing?”

“They’re screwing with us. Gotta be.”

He reached the training center and walked off to the side, perfectly aware of the way that everyone else in the room was staring at him. He ignored them all and prepared for another day of training. Perfectly normal. If they wanted to make a big deal out of it, that was on them.

“This is some kind of joke, right?” a voice called out behind him.

He knew that tone. He knew better than to give it the satisfaction of engagement.

“I mean really, what were the higher-ups thinking?” the voice went on, drawling, amused. “Expecting us to take orders from some teenage brat?”

He’d learned a long time ago not to get defensive. There were some things he’d be judged for, and that was that. Words were meaningless with no power to back them up.

“Don’t you know who you’re talking to?” another voice asked in mock reverence. “That’s the great Sebastian Shepard. You know…”—she paused for maximum effect—“our new commander.”

The man scoffed. “‘Commander.’ Yeah, give that a week.”

Sebastian turned to face him. “Would you like me to show you why?” he asked, and he meant it as a genuine question. No force, no anger in his voice. Those things were unnecessary.

The combat officer hesitated, taking a step back. The snide grin had vanished from his face, and Sebastian couldn’t help feeling a twinge of satisfaction. “That’s not… they said you got one of the guardians.”

“That’s right.”

The man scowled. “Yeah, real tough guy, hiding behind that monster. How about you take me on without it?”

“Why?”

He blinked. “…What?”

Sebastian stared back, unyielding. “Why should I lower myself to your level?” Again, perfectly neutral—no anger, no defensiveness. They’d be easier to set off if he didn’t show any of those things.

It worked. The man’s face contorted into a snarl. “Oh, screw you,” he spat, grabbing a Pokéball. “I’ve had it up to here with you waltzing around like you own the place.” He threw the ball forward, and a Gyarados appeared. Better than Sebastian had been expecting, honestly. He decided to give them a chance.

“Alright. We’ll battle on your terms, then.” He retrieved a Pokéball and let out Vesta.

The two lunged, locked in combat almost instantly, steam filling the air from the clashing of fire and water. Vesta circled her opponent gracefully, always keeping just out of reach. By comparison, the sea serpent’s movements were rough, unpolished, made of poorly timed lunges and waterspouts that lacked focus. Disappointing. Sebastian held back from giving orders. He’d let Vesta decide how to handle it.

She was more direct that he would have been. Barely a minute of intermittent fireballs and she’d already grown bored. Her fist crackled with sparks as she swooped in to end the fight. And then three more bursts of light came from nowhere. Sebastian stared coldly as a Gliscor, Magneton, and Golem materialized behind Vesta. The Charizard spun around on a dime, lashing out with her tail, then when that missed, drawing back a still-sparking fist. An impact, strings of lightning—Gliscor had intercepted her. She followed up with a vicious Heat Wave; Gliscor and Magneton fell back. The latter managed to fire off a Thunderbolt, but Vesta looped around it effortlessly. Then rocks. Then more water. Dodging, weaving, flawless, until a sudden swerve to avoid a second bolt took her too close to the rocks. A Stone Edge clipped her wing, her flight path faltered for just a moment, and another torrent crashed down on her from above. Water streamed over the battlefield. In the end, the Charizard lay on the ground, defeated.

Sebastian sighed disappointedly. “You cheated,” he said as he recalled her.

The man chuckled uneasily. The glint of victory in his eyes was decidedly halfhearted, like he already knew it meant nothing.

Sebastian reached into his pocket and retrieved the Master Ball. “I’ll cheat as well, then.”

His opponent’s face contorted with horror, and it would have been a lie to say that he didn’t enjoy it. The ball opened, a burst of light appeared, and before it had even taken shape, an azure blur was shooting across the battlefield.

He took in each moment. The flicker of alarm on each Pokémon as they just barely had the chance to register something coming before the ball of radiant light struck them down. Four hits, four Pokémon hitting the floor, then his opponent tripped backward as the light came for him. He lay there trembling, staring up at the cobalt dragon floating right above him. Latios’s piercing crimson eyes stared back.

No one moved. No one breathed. Just perfect, unbroken silence. Sebastian let the moment sit. All eyes on him.

“Is there anything else you’d like to say to me?” he asked calmly.

The man was frozen, not taking his eyes off Latios. It took several seconds for him to respond. Finally, he swallowed and shook his head gently.

Sebastian waved his hand, and Latios pulled back. Satisfied, he then turned his back to the others and strode out of the battlefield, Latios following lightly behind him.

He’d never expected anyone to follow him without proving himself. Words were meaningless with no power to back them up.

He strode down the hallway, which was noticeably empty compared to earlier. A flash caught his attention from out of the corner of one eye. He turned and it was Mewtwo. It took him several seconds to process the sight. Mewtwo, standing there alone, in an empty hallway. Sebastian had already begun walking towards the clone when something nagged at the back of his head. This didn’t make sense, did it? But he wasn’t sure why.

He tried to say something, but the words wouldn’t come. Mewtwo was staring right at him, but it was more like he was staring through him, not even noticing him. Sebastian turned around. The hallway he’d come down was gone. The base was gone. Behind him stretched a path winding its way through a landscape straight out of a dream. Chunks of terrain lay suspended in midair around him. The sky twisted and distorted in colors he didn’t have names for. Ethereal light shone down through clouds torn with violet lightning.

A chill runs through him. He has to get out of here. Something terrible is going to happen. He reaches for his belt and—his Pokéballs, where are they? Latios and Latias, they can—

He stops, blinking. Latias? He doesn’t have Latias, just Latios. Why did he think that…?

But then, with a glimmer of red and blue light, the duo appears before him anyway. A wave of relief rushes through him as he starts toward them, each step taking far too long, like he’s walking on clouds. The dragons stare back, their eyes twinkling red and gold in the void. Almost there. He reaches out to them.

And then their faces split open, eyes burning like hot coals, fangs protruding through the sides of their mouths, bodies unraveling into fabric and merging with the walls. Their hearts, still beating in the void that was their chests, crystalize into gleaming gemstones, red and blue. He pulls away in revulsion, every inch of him screaming to get away. But then he’s overtaken by a sudden, powerful, burning need to grab them. He reaches forward, plunging both arms straight through their chests, like the two are made of liquid. He can’t see his hands. He can only grope blindly in the darkness until his fingers clench around his prize.

He rips the gems out of what had previously been the dragons’ chests and holds them close, staring as they pulse with an otherworldly light. Then the gems begin to dissolve. He jumps back, tries to throw them away, but they’re stuck to his hands, molten glass burning through his skin, seeping into his bloodstream. A piercing light shines through his veins, the glow burning brighter and brighter until it’s searing through his flesh. It hurts. He tries to scream, but his voi̬ce is tattered, distor̡ted, like a ̬badly edited aud̘io recording. ̽More ̹voice̻s join in, pressing in from all aroun̈́d. Smothering. Threatening to crush him with their᷉ sheer weight. He feels the words more than he͟ sees̭ ͯth̏em, ̗feels ͆them wea͊ving thems͇elves̪ thro̘ugh his being, dro̹wn᷿i̳ng him, u̾nͤt̹iͮl͠ a͟ s̫iͦn͜g̶l̓e̥ͯ᷃,͉ ̠̙o͖v͓eͦr᷃w͑h͚ėl̑m͋ȋ̶̘n̞g̹ p̮r͟e̯s̛e͞n̆c᷂e̸ a̍p̦p̕e̥ảr᷾s̥,̑ tͫủr̽n͔i͠n̜ḡ i̲t̞s͖ h͞a̜t̿ͬ̆e̪f͈u̽͢͝l̎ ̺̣̳͈͗ͅg̰a͈z᷄e̹ ṭ᷁ͧo͞ h͡i̖m̭ a͍n̳̘᷇͡ͅd̰͍̹̦́ ͎̮r͉͍͎o͇̱͉̕a̡Ĕ̪̰̺͈͍̕ʭ̲̦̣̫͖ͅ£̹̖͙͇̬̲̯̀᷄ʨ̶̯͈̗̹̞Ķ̟͍̙͉̌͝Å̴̷͔͘ă͖̝̭͢m̴̧̛̜̪̫̹͚̜ȅ̴̷̻̣̼̗̖̗̫̟ͅĢ̟̜̱͚͍͉̘̭͈́᷾̕|̸̭̺̣̜̝̜̩̱̪̺̦̕͟͜͞ͅͅĭ̴̠̻̣̦̳͓̜̭͉̣̰̼̣̪̺̳͔̩̗̙̣᷅́͘͢͝ú̵̷͈̗̘͈̮̯̲͓̥́̕ƈ̵̡̧͉͚͍̱͔m̵͎̲̫͇̹̫̯͔͕̫̲͔͇͕͖̪̕͢͝ͅŞ̪͉̠̝̼̯̺͓͉̘̬̕͟ą̧̡̡͏̬̼̱̥̩̜̱͙m̵̶̷̨͉͉̲̮̬͉̼̜̠̹̲᷿̝͕̩̥̪̰͖̜͔̪̙̱̪͓







Sebastian’s eyes jolted open. He sat frozen for a few seconds, breathing heavily while his heart pounded in his chest. Gradually, the room stopped spinning, and his fingers unclenched from the arms of his chair.

Just… just the usual nightmares. Nothing to concern himself with.

Then a voice broke the silence. “*Did you hear me?*”

Oh. It was Latias who’d woken him up. Sebastian rubbed his eyes, turning his gaze to the clock on the wall. 2am. That hadn’t taken long. He stretched before standing up and walking over to the glass pane overlooking the holding cell. Latias stared back at him, her gaze defiant.

“*I said I’ll talk to you. What do you want to talk about?*” Her voice was cold, tinged with blades of anger.

Sebastian closed his eyes, taking a moment to center himself. “I want the chance to explain myself.”

Latias glowered at him. “*What is there to explain? You are no different than the others who seek to enslave us.*”

Was that her argument? This was too easy. “It’s true that I need to borrow the power of the Legendaries, but I don’t want to enslave them.”

She tilted her head incredulously. “*Why would you tell such an obvious lie? You’ve captured and controlled my brother and—*”

“Latios isn’t under mind control,” Sebastian immediately said.

The dragon blinked up at him in shock. “*He has his mind?*”

Sebastian nodded. “Yes. I can prove it to you after this.”

Latias stared downward, struggling to process the revelation. “*But… that can’t be… why didn’t he say anything to me?*”

“He wanted to. But he knew the mission was more important.” Perhaps he shouldn’t have said that. He couldn’t position himself as the thing holding Latios back.

“*What mission?*” She hadn’t noticed. Good.

“Stopping the Kanto Rockets from getting more Legendaries,” he said matter-of-factly. “Nothing is more important than that right now.”

“*Then why not work together with the patrons? You could have helped them! You could have been chosen.*” The same questions Jade had asked. Tedious.

“I didn’t want to be chosen,” Sebastian said firmly. “I’ve known for a long time that wasn’t the best way for me to accomplish my goals.”

Latias stared up at him, utterly perplexed.

“Someone had to take over Team Rocket from within,” he went on, running his fingers gently across the glass. “Someone had to use their own methods against them. And most importantly… someone separate from the chosen had to have control over the Legendaries’ power.”

She stared downward, shaking her head slightly in disbelief. “*But… that doesn’t… why not help them now? You already declared your betrayal.*”

Sebastian was quiet for several seconds. “…I can’t. I still need the Johto Force, and I still need the resources that come with it. Especially if I’m right about what is going to happen next.”

“*What’s going to happen next?*” she asked in a small voice.

The tiniest trace of a grin appeared on his face. She was curious, was she? That would be his way in.

“Right now, I can only tell the ones closest to me—the ones I trust the most. It’s too dangerous to reveal too much.”

She tilted her head. “*Does Latios know?*”

“Yes.” He paused, then added, “He is my most trusted ally.”

Something flickered in her eyes, like he’d been hoping. Her brow was furrowed, like she couldn’t believe that was possible. Then her expression hardened. “*I’ve talked with you like you wanted. Can I see him now?*”

His first instinct was to say no. There was still more he wanted to say. But fulfilling her request would build trust. She’d be more likely to take him at his word later. It was worth it, to sow the seeds of loyalty.

Sebastian nodded. He couldn’t trust her not to kill him if he let her out, so he opened the release hatch again and let Latios out through it. The cobalt dragon had barely taken shape before the smaller red dragon tackled him, throwing her arms around his neck. Latios blinked for a few moments, clearly a bit disoriented. Then his eyes went wide when he realized what was happening, and he embraced Latias back, both dragons chirping happily.

“*I’ve missed you so much,*” Latias said, tearing up.

“*I know,*” Latios replied, screwing his eyes shut. “*I’m so sorry.*”

Latias blinked. “*Don’t apologize!*” she cried, hugging him tighter.

Latios opened his mouth to speak, but it took him several tries to find the right words. “*I’m just so glad that you’re here,*” he said softly. “*Even if it meant you had to be captured.*”

Latias frowned. “*I didn’t… I didn’t realize I’d get to see you again. Otherwise…*” She flattened her ears, looking conflicted. On the one hand, capture. On the other hand, reunion.

Sebastian watched silently. Against his better judgment, he felt conflicted as well. Obtaining Rayquaza still would have been the preferred outcome. But… bringing some comfort to his friend was a benefit as well.

When the two finally pulled away, Latias glanced around like she had just remembered that they were still in a cell. She looked up at Sebastian, her expression noticeably less hostile than it had been before, but still suspicious.

“*What are you going to do with us now?*” she asked coldly.

He decided to turn the question back on her. “Latios is helping me with my plans. He will be remaining by my side. What do you want to do now?” Keep the question vague. Don’t ask her to join outright.

Latias tilted her head, skeptical. She glanced back at Latios imploringly, and he avoided her gaze. “*It’s true,*” he managed.

The red dragon sank lower. “*You’re really going to stay here? Why?*” she asked quietly.

Latios kept his eyes on the floor. “*It’s important,*” he just said.

Sebastian exhaled slowly. Good. He could work with this.

“It’s like I said. We have to be very careful about who knows what we’re doing,” he said, pacing slowly in front of the glass. “That’s why we couldn’t say anything during the Hoenn mission.”

Latias glanced back and forth between him and Latios, utterly perplexed.

“I’m not sure how we’re going to recover from Rayquaza being taken by the Kanto force,” Sebastian went on. “That was a heavy blow.” He gave her a soft yet meaningful look.

Latias’s wings fell. “*I… I had to,*” she said, but she appeared to have some doubts.

“What’s done is done,” Sebastian said simply. “We can’t change our past mistakes, we can only try to move forward and put things right.”

Latias looked down, obviously troubled by his words, and looking like she wanted to say something in protest, but couldn’t figure out what. What argument could she give? If she believed it was her fault, then she had no choice.

But maybe she was feeling too troubled. He would need to give her some encouragement.

“Will you stay here with me and Latios? Will you help us fight? I know the two of you together will be able to make a difference.” Yes. They’d be stronger together.

“*I…*” She glanced at Latios. He tapped his claws together, saying nothing. Obviously, he wanted her to stay, but he didn’t want to tell her that she should.

Latias took a deep breath. “*I still don’t know about this. And I don’t trust you,*” she added, throwing a glare at Sebastian. “*But…*”—she turned back to Latios—“*this is important to you, so… I’ll believe in you.*”

She’d said yes. Of course she had. Was there ever any doubt that she would, in the end? He had her brother. That was all the leverage he needed. It was a small consolation for losing Rayquaza. But at least it was something.

“I have to go. Will you rest for the night in your Pokéball, or in here?” It wasn’t much of a choice. But offering it was good all the same.

“*In here,*” Latios replied.

Sebastian nodded. “Good night.” He turned and strode out of the room, pausing to shut the lights off before he did.

Five months of planning may have gone to waste, but it wasn’t a total loss. There was no changing the past. Only moving forward.






~End Chapter 47~

Next Chapter: Choices and consequences
 

IFBench

Rescue Team Member
Location
Pokemon Paradise
Partners
  1. chikorita-saltriv
  2. bench-gen
  3. charmander
  4. snivy
  5. treecko
  6. tropius
  7. arctozolt
  8. wartortle
  9. zorua
Here to review chapter 14! Been a long while since I read this chapter, but I remember really enjoying it!

Don't quite remember the exact context for this chapter, but I think Jade has broken into a Rocket laboratory in order to rescue Chibi? And she ran into three other hybrids that agreed to help her?

Flygon! I remember liking this character. I think he joins Jade's team?

Ah, so they aren't hybrids, they're clones. Wonder who they're clones of.

I think Razors is the Scyther? Don't fully remember.

I wonder what the Rockets' goals are with all these clones. I don't remember if that was explained as of chapter 47 or not.

I like Jade's snarky internal monologue in this section.

Oh dear. The alarm's been sounded. That's definitely not good.

Ooooh, Jade's pretending to chase them in order to keep undercover. Neat!

And the clones left Jade behind. Oh boy.

Chibi's back!

...and seems to be in very bad shape. Oh boy.

Firestorm, really?

OH BOY. Jade's been found out!

That action scene was really neat! Don't have much to say about it, but I'm guessing that Grovyle is part poison-type?

Well, bad news, both of Jade's Pokemon are poisoned, good news, she's not being sold out!

Stracion definitely seems odd and not fully trustworthy, but at least she's leaving Jade alone.

Chibi's coming with Jade! Woohoo!

Overall, this chapter was fantastic! It was cool to read about the clones again, and Chibi has officially joined the team! I think? Not entirely sure, but it was great nonetheless!

Thank you for writing this!
 
Ch 47 Extra: Masks

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
~Chapter 47 Extra: Masks~

Lexx tapped his foot against the park bench that he was leaning against, humming a tune while idly scrolling through posts on his phone. Nothing too engaging, and he was only half paying attention to any of it. Maybe the news would be more interesting. The destruction of Sootopolis was still the hot-button topic of the day, and he was somewhat curious to see what the mainstream news had to say about it. Did they have any clue what it was really about?

“*I’m bored. When’s she getting here?*” a voice spoke from his shoulder.

Lexx gave the Pichu an amused glance. “Shouldn’t be too long.” It wasn’t like Ajia to be late for things, and she did have access to perfect long-range teleportation, after all.

Still, she was late. Five minutes, to be exact. Pichu gestured suddenly, and Lexx glanced up to see Ajia walking toward them, illuminated by the street lamps. He waved, and her expression flickered slightly. Only a second betrayed the fact that she wasn’t happy to see him.

Her Pichu’s eyes lit up, and she leaped from Ajia’s shoulder to race down the path toward them. His own Pichu jumped down to greet her. The two siblings exchanged a few sparks from their cheeks, then immediately took off chasing each other through the tall grass.

“How is everyone?” Lexx asked, and he sounded genuine. His mask was already up.

Ajia had been expecting him to ask something like that, but that still didn’t make it any easier to give him an answer. “Starr’s livid, and Jade’s worried sick because one of her Pokémon was badly hurt during the Aqua battle.”

Lexx frowned. “Ah geez. I was trying to not hit you guys,” he said, rubbing the back of his head. “I mean, you know it wasn’t anything personal, right?”

Ajia sighed exasperatedly. “That doesn’t make it better.”

Lexx turned away. There was a part of him that knew that. He had to come up with something that would help. “It’s not like my life wasn’t on the line,” he offered. “Pretty sure Raven was out for my throat. Probably still is.”

Ajia gave him a sideways glance. Either she was failing to keep her frustration behind the mask, or this was the amount she was allowing him to see.

That’s how their game always went. Pretend everything was fine. Chat the way they always used to, leaving their allegiances aside. Then, when it was done, they’d go back to serving their sides like nothing had changed. That was just how things were. He hadn’t had any reason to assume that would ever change.

And yet, it had.

He needed to fill the silence. Maybe Ajia would find this interesting: “Jade stopped by yesterday.”

Ajia paused, looking wary. “She did?”

“Yeah. Think she mostly just wanted to chew out Seb,” he added.

Ajia smirked. “Good for her.”

Lexx crossed his arms behind his head. “Seb might’ve told her some things that you don’t know yet. You might wanna ask later.”

Ajia gave him a look that was hard to read. “More like he was trying to manipulate her into believing more of his garbage.”

Lexx waved a hand dismissively. “Nah, she wasn’t having any of it, from what I could tell.”

Ajia smiled, looking rather too pleased. “Good.”

He tiled his head. “Would it really be so bad if she agreed with him, though?”

Ajia was ready for that one. “You know, there’s times where I feel like Starr’s right about you,” she said, and the words cut deeper than he wanted to admit.

“Really? That’s no fun,” Lexx said, playing it off with an overly-defeated face. “I don’t even mind that she hates me, it just sucks being ignored.”

“You know, if you’d just apologize…”

Lexx was quiet for a bit. “Doesn’t feel right to apologize for something I’d do again,” he said simply.

Ajia gave him a hard stare. “You know what she went through because of it, right?” Her words were firm, but still gentle, in that way that she’d perfected. Precision-engineered to reach through his chest and dig into his heart.

Lexx broke eye contact first, and he had the distinct feeling he’d lost that round. “It’s complicated,” he just said.

Ajia shook her head with a faint smile. “I know those sympathy ploys better than anyone.”

Lexx gave a crooked smile. “Not a ploy this time,” he said. But then his gaze hardened. “Seb’s my friend, Ajia.”

“I thought I was your friend.” The mask slipped. Some of the hurt leaked into her voice.

“You are,” he replied quickly, rubbing the back of his head. “I don’t want you to get hurt either. It’s just… well, like I said… complicated.”

Ajia lifted her eyes to meet his. “Does he really see you as a friend, or just another pawn?”

Lexx chuckled slightly, shaking his head. “Ajia. Your tricks aren’t going to work on me like they did with Starr.”

Neither of them spoke for some time after that. Ajia stared out at the half-moon hanging low in the sky ahead of them. Several times, she almost found the right words, but then decided against them.

“Look at us,” she said finally. “Neither of us believe a word the other one says. How did this happen?”

Lexx leaned back against the park bench, following Ajia’s example and staring up at the sky. “You guys could work together with us. Offer’s still on the table.”

Ajia sighed deeply. It had been a long, long time since she’d found that tempting. “I can’t. Not after knowing what he’s planning.”

“Do you really—” Lexx stopped, thinking better of it. Ajia must have considered pressing further, but in the end, she didn’t.

“There’s probably gonna come a time when you’ll have to,” he finally answered.

Ajia fought back a shiver. “I don’t like thinking about that.”

“Seb’s got good reason for not explaining everything,” Lexx said, suddenly fixing her with a serious look. “I’m sure you can relate.”

Ajia grimaced. “I’ve been trying to break that habit. Lying to people to keep them safe. That’s not who I want to be. And besides, he’s not lying to us for our sake. His lies only ever make things worse for everyone. It’s not the same at all.”

Lexx gave her a playful smirk. “Ah come on, that’s not fair. You know we’re not like, trying to make people miserable or anything.”

“That’s what’s happening, though.”

Lexx flinched. He’d crossed a line, and he knew it. But had he really had a choice? They needed to beat the Kanto force no matter what. Nothing else mattered. Right?

Maybe...

Lexx struggled to think of the right words. All the usual confidence had slipped through his fingers behind the mask. “Look. I don’t like things being like this either. So… how about this: I’ll tell you something Sebastian doesn’t want anyone to know yet.”

Ajia shook her head softly. “You know I can’t believe that.”

“You don’t have to,” he said earnestly, holding both palms out. “You can just sort of… think it over and decide if you want to use it or not.”

The wind rustled through the trees, punctuated by the occasional jolt from the two Pichu racing through the tall grass. They’d been at their game ever since Ajia showed up. For them, everything was simple. It didn’t have to be so complicated. No layers of secrets and lies. No masks.

“Alright. Let’s hear it.”
 
Chapter 48: Choice and Consequence

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
Still need to get out some review replies, but in the meantime, time to crosspost~



~Chapter 48: Choice and Consequence~

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Falling. Air rushed past, streaming through my sleeves, whipping my hair back, stinging my face. In the back of my mind, I saw the ground rushing up at me, and my stomach gave an uncomfortable lurch. But still I kept my eyes closed and my limbs outstretched as far as they would go. Focusing. Counting the seconds.

The wind shifted. He was beneath me.

I threw my arms out, caught hold of smooth scales, and immediately locked my arms around Aros’s neck. His flight leveled, our momentum shifted, and my body flattened against his back as we pulled out of the dive at breakneck speed. Then I finally let myself open my eyes to see us shooting above the treetops, no more than fifty feet from the ground.

“Holy crap, you really left that one until the last second, huh,” I said, heart still pounding.

“*I had it under control,*” Aros replied firmly.

“I know,” I said, relaxing slightly. “I trust you.” With how many times he’d saved my life, I couldn’t not.

The cool September breeze was invigorating. My body felt lighter than air as the two of us darted over the foothills of Route 3, our flight comprised of rapid swerves and rolling swoops, ducking and weaving past invisible opponents. Every so often he’d pull an especially wild maneuver and I’d lose my grip, and there’d be that heart-stopping moment of terror as I fell, helpless. Then I’d force it back, and we’d use that opportunity to practice freefalls. And once he’d caught me, we’d know what moves we needed to focus on next. Holding on through barrel rolls wasn’t that hard anymore. Somersaults were another story.

“*I could probably catch you even if you stayed limp and didn’t grab on,*” Aros bragged.

I snorted. “I bet you could. I’d rather save that for when we have Firestorm as backup, though.”

He gave a mildly disappointed huff but didn’t press the topic. It was something we’d have to practice at some point, I just hadn’t quite worked up the nerve yet.

We’d just finished pulling out of another freefall when I spotted the silhouettes of a Pidgeot and Charizard in the distance. I pointed them out to Aros and he made an indistinct sound of displeasure before flaring his wings to slow our flight and aiming for the ground.

“*Bout time you two showed up,*” Aros grumbled once the others had landed alongside us. “*Come on. I need some competition. Bet I can catch Jade faster than either of you.*”

Firestorm rubbed the back of his head. “*Probably? I don’t really care which one of us is faster.*”

“*You should,*” Aros replied immediately.

Firestorm shrugged and threw a glance at Swift like he was waiting for him to speak. Swift pawed at the ground with a talon before meeting my eyes. “*You’ve been training for quite a long time. Shouldn’t you take a break?*” he asked earnestly.

“*Yeah seriously, you’re starting to look more tired than Aros,*” Firestorm added quickly. “*Take a break already.*”

I chuckled a bit. “It’s kinda funny hearing that from you. Remember the way you used to train on Midnight Island?”

Firestorm rolled his eyes. “*We both know I was an idiot Charmeleon. Plus I was trying to evolve. Humans can’t do that, so you don’t have an excuse.*”

“I think you also wanted to show off to Stalker’s Charizard.”

Firestorm blushed and turned away quickly. “*Whatever! Just take a break or we’ll drag you back to the Pokécenter!*” The Charizard gave a small huff before taking off with a gust of warm air.

Alright, they probably had a point. I patted Aros’s neck. “I’m gonna call it here,” I said, sliding down from his back. “Keep training by yourself if you want.” The Flygon looked disappointed for a few moments but then vibrated his wings and took off.

I slowly shuffled over to the closest tree before collapsing against it, a bit lightheaded. My whole body still felt weirdly airy, and it took a good minute or so for my brain to get used to being on solid ground again. Yeah, they definitely had a point. I didn’t even know how long we’d been flying.

Swift sat next to me with his feathers fluffed out for a few minutes before joining Firestorm in the sky. I sat there, watching the two practicing moves together. Firestorm was demonstrating something involving a powerful gust of wind, his wings glowing red as a heat haze warped the air in front of him. It seemed like an odd choice since Swift wouldn’t be able to copy anything like that, but it was still nice to see them having fun. At least someone was.

“*I know what you’re doing,*” a voice said.

I pulled my gaze away from the sky to see Chibi sitting down next to me with a stern look on his face.

“What’s that?” I asked, already feeling like he’d caught me doing something wrong.

“*It’s the same thing I was doing after I first joined you,*” the Pikachu answered, fixing his intense birdlike stare on me in that way that made it impossible to not pay attention.

I strained my memory to think back to last year. He’d spent all his time obsessively training, right?

“I figured that was because discharging power relieves your pain.” Of course, I hadn’t known that at the time, but…

The Pikachu’s ears twitched. “*That’s one reason. The other is because it’s easy to avoid troubling thoughts when your body is flooded with adrenaline.*”

I bristled. “Look, I’m just trying to prepare myself. I can’t even count how many times I got knocked off a flier last mission.”

He looked unimpressed. “*We just established that things can have more than one reason.*”

Alright, he kind of had me there. When I was falling… it was like nothing else existed. And when Aros caught me, the only thought my brain could generate was ‘I survived. I’m alive.

“Yeah, yeah, I hear you,” I said, awkwardly glancing away.

It had been nearly two weeks since the Hoenn mission. It didn’t feel like it though. It felt like everyone else had been moving forward in time, and here I was stuck feeling the exact same guilt and frustration as I had the day after it happened.

“It’s not… bad that I’m still bothered by what happened in Hoenn, is it?” I asked slowly.

Chibi was silent for some time. “*It’s not,*” he finally answered. But there was an odd hesitation in his voice.

“I want to be able to relax and focus on other things like everyone else,” I said, voice cracking slightly. “But the last time I did that, I ignored it all for nine months, and then it was hard to get used to it again.” My mouth went dry, my brain flashing back to that moment when Moltres had appeared, and the illusion was shattered. Relentless flames. Dizzying speed. Falling. Always falling.

Chibi dropped his gaze, looking conflicted. “*You deserve to rest. I shouldn’t have pressured you so hard back then.*” His paws clenched. “*I’m not sure why I did.*”

I tilted my head. Didn’t he, though? “You said it was important, and that we couldn’t hide from that.”

“*It wasn’t your job back then; I just acted like it was. And besides—you have your place in all this now. You’re allied with the Legendaries.*” He paused heavily, a soft breeze ruffling his head feathers. “*It’s made me realize that I still don’t know my place.*”

I blinked at him. “You’re with me—you’re allied with the Legendaries too,” I offered.

Chibi stared downward, brow furrowed. “*For you, it’s by choice. For me it’s… what I am. I was born into this role. Would I still want to do this if it wasn’t literally a part of me?*”

For me, it was by choice. I chose this. I had no right to complain.

I crossed my arms behind my head, looking up at the clouds. “I mean. I dunno what my ‘purpose’ is. Don’t really think I have much of one. Just trying to get by, you know?”

“*You don’t need one,*” he said simply. “*You don’t need to make up for your existence.*”

“You sound like Aros,” I said, giving him a sideways glance. “Well, I guess it makes more sense for you. Legendary heritage and all. I won’t pretend to understand that.”

Chibi shook his head. “*He thinks he needs to be strong. I already know that I am. I just don’t know what to do with it.*” The Pikachu glanced up at me, and his expression softened when he saw my face. “*You don’t need to have an answer for that. It’s just been on my mind, that’s all.*”

I pulled out a few blades of grass, scattering them across my sneakers. “Well, the training’s not just out of obligation, anyway. It’s been nice to have something to work on with Aros. And I think it’s been helping him.”

“*You’re enabling him,*” Stygian cut in suddenly.

I blinked at the sudden interruption. The Absol was sprawled out in a shaded patch of grass by the next tree over, idly sharpening her claws.

“What did you say?” I asked.

“*You’re enabling him,*” she repeated, eyes closed, not looking at us.

I stared at her blankly, completely baffled. Where was this coming from? “Enabling what, exactly?” I asked.

“*His nonsense hopes of proving that he’s strong by being useful in the fight against his creators, and surpassing his original,*” she said without hesitation, as if she’d already had it rehearsed.

I blinked. “Is that what he’s doing? I mean, I already knew that proving himself was important to him, but that? What would even come of that? It just feels…”—I really hated to put it this way, but—“pointless.”

“*It is pointless,*” she said, her ruby-red eyes practically boring a hole through me. “*It is a shallow, stupid goal. It will accomplish nothing.*”

I rubbed the back of my head. “It feels really rude to just tell someone that.” Not that that was usually a concern to her. “What should I be doing instead? Anytime I try to give him advice on anything, he just tells me that I can’t tell him what to do.” I already knew that I couldn’t tell him what to do. That wasn’t what I wanted at all.

Stygian was silent for a bit, mulling over her words. “*I have that same frustration. My words seem to do little. I have tried to convince him that it is time to move on. To find a new path to pursue in life, rather than being bound to this one. He has not given me an answer.*”

So Aros was just using me to avoid making a decision. I mean, I kind of already knew that. And that was fine—if that was what he really wanted, then I’d let him. But while Aros was wasting time, Stygian was impatient to move on.

“You don’t really want to be on the team, do you,” I said finally.

“*I don’t dislike it,*” the Absol said, licking her paws.

I swallowed. “That’s not the best reason to do something.”

“*We all have our responsibilities. You have yours, I have mine,*” Stygian said airily, without looking at me.

“I guess that’s true but…” I trailed off, running a hand through my hair. Part of me still wanted to disagree, but I couldn’t figure out how. Maybe it just wasn’t something I could understand. So I just sat there feeling vaguely frustrated until a thought struck me, and I asked, “If you could do anything at all, what would you do?”

The Absol blinked, taken aback. But then, like she’d already had an answer prepared: “*I want to cross the land on my own feet, at my own pace. Traverse mountains, visit seas. Know that I may do whatever I like, whenever I like, dependent upon no one.*”

I shuffled a foot against the grass. “Sounds lonely.”

“*Maybe. It’s entirely possible that I’d grow tired of it,*” Stygian said distantly. “*But I wish it to be my choice, to follow as I like.*” She switched to meticulously running her claws along her blade, each stroke giving off a smooth scraping sound.

I was having a hard time putting my thoughts into words. “Is that something you want right now?”

She shook her head. “*Not yet. I can’t leave just yet.*” There was no uncertainty. No hesitation. It was just the truth that she’d accepted.

“You really care about each other, huh.”

She was silent for some time. “*You care as well, I know.*”

I sighed heavily. “I try.” It was really all I could do.

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Later that afternoon we ventured into Pewter City to catch up with Rudy and Darren. I hadn’t gotten a reply from Rudy yet, so Darren was first. It wasn’t exactly hard to spot him at the training park, surrounded by his whole team. I waved to grab his attention, and he gave a small wave back once he saw me. Then his team suddenly noticed mine, and within moments, all the Pokémon had rushed forward to greet each other. Firestorm didn’t waste a second before striking up a conversation with Venusaur, who had launched into some outlandish story about beating an Arcanine. Aros and Stygian started a light sparring match with Sandslash and Golduck while Swift and Alakazam commented from the sidelines. And in the midst of it all, Weavile was skulking around with teary eyes, hiding behind Venusaur and trying her hardest not to let anyone see her (and ultimately failing).

“How’s it going?” I asked Darren.

“Ah, you know. Hanging in there,” he replied casually.

I gave the Pokémon a sideways glance and then held a hand against the side of my mouth. “Weavile doing okay?” I asked in a hushed tone.

Darren smiled weakly, but there was a heavy look in his eyes. “We just got done saying bye to Skarmory.”

Oh, right. Darren had mentioned that a few days ago. Skarmory was leaving. He hadn’t signed up for a war when he joined Darren’s team, so… he was leaving, and that was that.

“That must’ve been sad, yeah,” I said quietly. “Sorry you guys had to part ways.”

Weavile let out a particularly audible sniffle that thwarted her efforts to remain unnoticed.

“He said he really did like training with everyone,” Darren said distantly. “Hopes we’ll be safe and everything. Was even hoping he could join us again, once we’re done with… all this,” he said, vaguely waving a hand through the air.

My mouth went dry. “Can’t really blame him,” I mumbled. It was bad enough that the rest of us were stuck being a part of this. At least we’d been trained for it, which was… something.

“Course, he might find another trainer before then, and that’s fine,” Darren went on. “We’ll have to keep an eye out for him in the League next year. Wanna cheer him on.”

“*If he joins another trainer you gotta find ‘em and we gotta fight him!*” Weavile cut in, grabbing the tattered edge of Darren’s jacket and shaking it insistently.

Darren smiled faintly and carefully removed her claws with the practiced motion of someone who’d done it a hundred times. “That’s the idea.”

We wandered around the park for a bit while our teams caught up with each other, then eventually made our way downtown, aiming to locate Rudy. Our group stood out quite a bit, what with there being twelve of us. Most trainers came here early on the gym circuit, since the gym had one of the best programs for newbies. Nearly-full teams were a bit odd—occasionally I caught glimpses of younger kids stopping and staring in admiration.

“Seen Rudy much?” I asked as we walked.

“Here and there,” Darren said with a shrug. “You know he’s busy as all heck. Too important for the rest of us,” he added with a tone of mock sadness.

Ever since the tourney site at Indigo had been closed to the public, there’d been a frustrating lack of news from the League as to what was going to be done with the unfinished tournament. So in the absence of any actual guidance, the finalists had gotten together to organize their own finals. They’d settled on Pewter City for the location. It just seemed natural—it was the closest decent-sized city, it was part of the standard League circuit, and it had decent accommodations for both Pokémon and trainers. Sure, it wasn’t designed to hold anything remotely on the scale of the League finals, but it wasn’t like they were gonna have even close to the audience that the official tournament had on such a short notice. Maybe. The fan reaction had proven way bigger than anyone had expected. Turns out, people really wanted to see a champion get crowned.

The density of people around the stadium was noticeably higher than the blocks we’d just passed. An unusually high number of Pokémon were scattered about the sidewalks too, chatting with each other or idly waiting for their trainers. The parking lot across the street had already been roped off as a designated landing and teleporting zone, and though it was mostly empty right now, I suspected that wouldn’t be the case for very long.

“Target spotted,” Darren said in a hushed voice.

I followed his eye direction to see Rudy talking animatedly with someone in a gym trainer uniform. Nidoking and Breloom weren’t too far from him, currently discussing something with a pair of Graveler. And… Jet was with them.

I hadn’t seen Jet much the past week. She’d opted to spend time with Rudy’s team since they were all busy with the unofficial League revival. And well, I could hardly blame her for finding that stuff more interesting than the kind of training I’d been doing. She’d waffled over learning Protect, complained about practicing it even though I tried to stress how important it was, and then made snide comments about Aros and Stygian’s training until the latter snapped at her. Then she went off to sulk for about five minutes before coming back to complain loudly about all of us like we weren’t within earshot.

But it’d been a few days since then, so maybe she’d be happy to see us now. Rudy was absorbed in his conversation and hadn’t noticed us yet. So I walked up to the Floatzel and asked, “How’ve you been?” while doing my best to keep my tone casual.

“*Fine,*” she replied simply. No elaboration. We hadn’t talked in nearly a week, and she was dedicated to pretending that she didn’t care. And no matter how much I told myself that I shouldn’t… I felt a little hurt by it.

“So you’re doing okay, then?” I asked again.

“*Yeah, why wouldn’t I be?*” the sea weasel said offhandedly, like the question itself was offensive.

Well, I still didn’t feel like I was doing okay. I was very aware of how my mood had bounced all over the place the past week. So that was one reason it seemed appropriate to ask. And she’d been firmly pretending that nothing happened during the Aqua mission and had refused to acknowledge otherwise.

“I just figured I’d ask since we all went through a lot last week, and we haven’t gotten a chance to talk about it,” I said, choosing my words carefully.

“*Don’t feel like talkin’ bout it,*” the Floatzel said, turning away with a dismissive huff.

I struggled to get a grip on my frustration before it could go anywhere. This was… fine. She just didn’t know how to process it all. No one could blame her for that.

“You know you can tell me if you’re not feeling okay, right?” I said as gently as I could.

Jet stuck her nose in the air. “*I don’t gotta tell anyone squat.*”

I sighed. “No, you don’t have to. I just meant that if you wanted to, you could.”

“*Good,*” she said with a tone of finality.

So she hadn’t seen any of us in nearly a week, and this was how she was acting now? What was I supposed to do? I’d given her plenty of space. Was I supposed to just ignore it?

“So, are you planning on hanging out with us again, or are you on Rudy’s team now?” I asked shortly, failing to keep the irritation out of my voice.

Jet rolled her eyes. “*Our team is boring. They never wanna do fun stuff.*” She threw a sideways glance toward her teammates. Firestorm waved awkwardly.

After a pause, Jet added, “*Okay, sometimes Firestorm and Swift do, I guess, but the other three are all serious and crap.*” The Floatzel stuck her tongue out. “*It’s like they live for that stuff.*”

They kind of did. Maybe I should have been encouraging them to break away from that, but… no, they were perfectly capable of making decisions for themselves and didn’t need me telling them what to do.

“I guess it’s just… because of how they were raised, that’s all,” I ended up saying.

They’d been shaped by it all. I’d been shaped by it too. Jet didn’t have to be. She didn’t have to. If I could stop that from happening…

“You know it’s fine if you want to sit out on missions, right?” I said, unsure of where I was going with it.

“*No thanks,*” the Floatzel said flatly, scratching behind her ears.

“I just mean, if you ever have any second thoughts like Skarmory…”

Her fur bristled, and she squinted at me suspiciously. “*You kickin’ me off the team?*”

I blinked. “What? No, no that’s not it at all.”

“*I’m not gonna sit around while you guys are saving Legendaries,*” she said heatedly, tails lashing. “*There’s no way I’m not gonna be a part of that.*”

So the others were too fixated on the war and that was bad, but she was determined to be a part of it too? Which was it?

“You know it’s not just some fun game, right? Please tell me you know that.” The rest of us were stuck, but she didn’t have to be. Why couldn’t she see that?

Jet paused, apparently realizing her argument wouldn’t work on me. Then she let out a snort and said, “*Yeah well, it’s not like we got a choice,*” and something about that phrasing set me on high alert instantly.

“You have a choice. You always have a choice,” I blurted out without thinking, not entirely sure I was saying it to her.

The Floatzel stared at me incredulously. “*The heck are you on about?*” she asked, and I had the distinct feeling that I’d chosen the wrong thing to say. She gave a swish of her tails and turned to leave. “*This is stupid, I’m out.*”

“Wait. Please—” But she was already racing off on all fours, back to Rudy’s team.

Aros hovered over, watching her go. “*Eh, leave her alone, she can do what she wants,*” he said, waving a claw dismissively.

“I know that,” I said exasperatedly. “I’m just worried about her.”

I didn’t want to tell anyone what they could or couldn’t do. I just… didn’t want them to hurt themselves. Was that so wrong?

…Whatever. I didn’t want to think about this right now. There was Rudy. I could count on him having a million things to say, at least some of which could help distract me.

“Hey Rudy, how’s it going?”

He spun around suddenly, face lighting up the moment he saw me. “Jade! We got a date locked in! Friday, the 17th! Runs through the weekend. God, it’s frickin’ awesome, I can’t believe this is happening. I swear we crowdfunded like five times the money we needed for the stadium, and now we’ve got a film crew to broadcast, and they’ve even got Rotom cameras on staff. Got plenty of judges, referees, and stuff—lotta them work at the gym, but Brock’s been pretty psyched about helping out. Couple people even tried to get the Elite Four to show up but no dice so far. Oh, but we did get—”

“Alright, you can slow down, you’re gonna have the chance to tell everyone at the meeting,” Darren chuckled, elbowing him lightly.

Rudy glowered at him for a few seconds. “It’s just cool feeling like I’m actually a part of this, y’know?” he added, giving me an earnest look. “Yeah, I’m just one trainer, but like, we’re making this happen.”

I grinned. “Heck yeah. It’s awesome.”

The inside of the stadium wasn’t decked out half as much as the League stadiums had been, but there were some modest decorations that had obviously been added recently. Banners proclaiming the ‘Unofficial Kanto League Finals’ hung from the ceiling, and someone must have donated their giant Venusaur plush, because it now stood watch over the lobby from atop a huge pedestal.

“The League never actually published who all was gonna make the top cut, but one of the competitors went and calced it anyway,” Rudy explained. “So we’ve got our top 16, and we’re gonna start planning out match times and crap, and then—”

“Did you make it?” I cut in.

He stopped, blinking. “Huh?”

“Did you make the top cut?”

It actually took him a second to register my words, but then his face lit up. “Oh! Yeah! Pretty sweet, huh? Anyway, the place isn’t rigged up for League-tier matches, but pretty much all the Pokémon agreed that they wanted to go all-out, so we had to…”

And he was already off again, rambling about everything from gym trainers volunteering as organizers to higher-caliber protect shields being installed in the stands. The fact that he’d made top cut—the thing that would have been the topic of the day only a week ago—was now only a footnote amongst everything.

Rudy wasn’t standing still. He was getting things done, being a part of something important. I really had to stop feeling sorry for myself. Failing the Hoenn mission wasn’t the end of the world. We’d save Latias. We’d figure out a way to come out ahead. We had to.

“So you’re not gonna be too busy for the meetup tonight, what with how important you are now, yeah?” I asked him, with just the slightest bit of a smirk.

Rudy paused. “Oh hell yeah, looking forward to it.”

“Hell yeah you’re too busy, or hell yeah you’ll be there?” Darren asked, raising an eyebrow.

“Oh, shut your face.”

It would be nice to get all of us together, including the Legendaries. We could come up with a plan for moving forward so that we’d never have to suffer that kind of failure again. We could figure out how to free the captured legends. We had to.

And maybe I could finally stop stewing in my own head. That’d be nice too.






~End Chapter 48~
 

Flyg0n

Flygon connoisseur
Pronouns
She/her
Partners
  1. flygon
  2. swampert
  3. ho-oh
  4. crobat
  5. orbeetle
  6. joltik
  7. salandit
  8. tyrantrum
  9. porygon
Okay I'll try to keep this very very simple (for my own sake). But it might get jumbled or messy. Speculative spoilers ahead.

My theory is simple. In the beginning of Sebastian Shephard, aka boohoo-cry-me-river-man's chapter, it mentions the world coming apart, and prior to that, infinifty and blah blah. And it speaks of pain. But a deep, wrenching pain, a hole.

What could cause such pain? Well, my mind immediately leapt to Pacific Rim, and having some die while in drift. The agony of feeling someone you were basically bonded with torn away.

My guess? The agony of your patron legendary dying as you were connected to them. My guess? Sebastian, (play the tiniest violin), has been tinkering with time, naughty boy, after the loss of his patron.

His legendary died, and he basically came back with a single minded purpose to create the future where this doesn't happen. This is why he seems to be fighting to ensure something but refuses to work with people, because he probably equates that with failed attempt(s?) at stopping the future. Something causes literally everything to unravel, and Sebastian was caught up in it, lost his patron legendary, and then went back in time to change things.

Even if thats not the case I firmly theorize for now that the pain/emptiness he feels is definitely from losing the legendary.

Either that or... he is the pokemon, who lost his human and went back in time or heart swapped or some kind of shenanigans.

Anyways idk if this is contradicted by future chapters released on FFN but it was fun to dump anyways. having a ball with this and can't wait for more.
 
Chapter 49: Human and Legend

Chibi Pika

Stay positive
Staff
Location
somewhere in spacetime
Pronouns
they/them
Partners
  1. pikachu-chibi
  2. lugia
  3. palkia
  4. lucario-shiny
  5. incineroar-starr
Only one more chapter until TR is caught up with the other sites~



~Chapter 49: Human and Legend~

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It felt kind of surreal being back at the same cabin we’d stayed at for two nights following the attack on Indigo. The ranger union was still busy enough that they didn’t have anyone stationed out here, so Ajia was able to pull some strings to let us stay here for a few nights. It was a reasonably secluded spot that would let us actually talk with the Legendaries discreetly, so it was the ideal place to meet up and make plans.

The sun was low in the sky when I arrived via teleport, and the air was thick with the calls of bird and bug Pokémon from the forest. I let my team out to join the others, and the sheer volume of Pokémon out was a bit staggering. Rudy and Darren had left most of their teams here while they went shopping, which meant we had around two dozen Pokémon all scattered about the campsite. The less sociable ones had wandered off into the forest, but the area was still packed. Pichu and the two Raichu ran circles around Arcanine, who was trying her hardest to ignore them. Aros had challenged Aerodactyl to a race and was being soundly thrashed. Ebony and Jet were playing a game where the former would spit an Ember and the latter tried to put it out with a Water Gun before it could hit the ground—which would have been a lot more concerning if Feraligatr weren’t napping nearby. Ajia and Starr were sitting at one of the outdoor tables watching something on a tablet, occasionally laughing.

There was a flash of light, and Rudy and Darren teleported into the yard, both deep in a heated discussion with the energy they normally reserved for really stupid debates. Each of them was carrying way too many grocery bags like they’d been trying to out-carry the other. Alakazam walked next to them, levitating several bags over his head and lifting them just out of reach whenever Weavile tried to grab them.

“Look, I’m just saying, there’s literally no way that Glen is gonna lose to Trini in the semifinals,” Rudy snapped, sounding almost offended.

“Trini’s team has a Gyarados,” Darren replied simply.

“So?! You saw Glen’s Gengar take down a Gyarados in round 3!”

“Yeah, but Trini’s team actually supports Gyarados with status, and Glen doesn’t have an answer to that. One Dragon Dance and it’s a team wipe.”

“Look, I’m telling you, I’ll bet actual money on this,” Rudy kept going heatedly.

Darren raised an eyebrow. “How much are we talking?”

The two of them dumped their grocery bags unceremoniously onto the picnic table, letting the contents spill out. I spotted… lots of marshmallow bags. Probably more than anyone ever needed, although given the sheer number of Pokémon here…

Starr sifted through the bags, unimpressed. “Did you two buy any actual food, or…?”

There was a tearing sound as Weavile finally succeeded at stealing one of the bags from Alakazam only for her claws to tear clean through, sending marshmallows spilling out over the grass. Jet and Ebony immediately abandoned their fire hazard game to start vacuuming up the fluffy white lumps.

“Look, this is like the third time we’ve camped here and we haven’t made s’mores once,” Rudy said indignantly. “I’m pretty sure that’s actually illegal.”

Darren held up one of his bags with a deadpan expression. “I got hot dogs in case we want something slightly more filling than marshmallows.”

Starr gave a reluctantly impressed nod. “That’s slightly better. Though you better have got some toppings for those.”

He looked down at the groceries helplessly. “Uh… I got mayo?”

“Ajia, we’re going to the store right now.”

As the evening went on, everyone got to work cleaning out the firepit. Venusaur sliced up some dead trees with Razor Leaf, and with half of our teams competing with each other to carry more logs, we soon had more firewood than we knew what to do with. Ebony insisted on being the one to start the fire, and then we all got to work roasting hot dogs. Starr poked fun at me for eating mine plain while she’d buried hers in enough toppings that you could hardly tell there even was a hot dog.

Afterward, Rudy was quick to break out the marshmallows, and everyone either crowded around the firepit or bothered the various fire-types in our midst (with Arcanine burning them until people stopped asking her). Jet and Ebony were having a contest to see who could fit more marshmallows in her mouth while Weavile cheered the two on. And after several minutes’ insistence from Firestorm, Chibi finally, reluctantly accepted a s’more from him with a suspicious look.

For a long moment after taking a bite, the Pikachu didn’t say anything. He just sat there with a look of surprised bliss on his face. “*This is… good,*” he admitted quietly before devouring the rest of it.

More s’mores were passed around and half the party soon had chocolate smeared on hands, claws, or faces. Rudy regaled everyone with more details about the unofficial League finals, including the fact that he’d apparently gotten to talk with gym leader Brock the other day.

“I think it’s cool that the community is coming together like this,” Ajia said, sounding impressed. “Especially since it’s almost like the League is just trying to sweep things under the rug.”

Darren gave her a curious look. “Jade mentioned you were volunteering at Indigo. Found any good info?”

Ajia laughed. “I never said I was looking for info! But no, we haven’t found out much. The League HQ wasn’t really anywhere near the parts of the tournament site that got hit, so we haven’t had many opportunities to see what’s going on there.”

“*I offered to sneak us in,*” a raspy voice piped up from next to Ajia. The bushy-maned fox, Zoroark—appearing as his actual self for once, rather than an illusory form.

“It wouldn’t be a good look,” Ajia said, rolling her eyes like she didn’t know what to do with him. “We’re saving that for a last resort.”

Zoroark scoffed, licking a sticky mess of marshmallow and chocolate from his bright-red claws. “*As if we’d get caught.*”

“What about the Legendaries?” Rudy asked excitedly. “You’ve heard what they’re doing, right? Moltres never tells me anything.”

Ajia smiled. “Mew’s been busy touching base with everyone after the disaster, making sure no one else has been targeted, stuff like that.” She paused for a few seconds, eyes flicking to the side, most likely talking with Mew. “She’s about ready to join us with the others, by the way. Any objections?”

Starr raised her hand. “Yeah, how about the fact that I was enjoying my evening Legendary-free.”

Ajia rolled her eyes. “I’ll let her know we’re ready.”

After about a minute, Mew suddenly appeared in a flash of light, along with Lugia, Ho-oh, and Moltres, all standing in the clearing and towering over everyone else. They were immediately mobbed by a large chunk of the party all crowding them and looking up in awe.

This was the first time we had the patron Legendaries here with us since the Hoenn mission. Ho-oh had apparently flown to some distant land across the ocean to the east. Lugia had been sleeping at the bottom of the southern sea. And I honestly wasn’t too sure where Moltres had been.

<You know, we usually have our own meeting spot. It is considerably calmer and quieter than this,> Lugia said pointedly.

“Did you want everyone to show up there instead?” Ho-oh asked, sounding lightly amused.

<No.>

The phoenix chuckled, then turned to look over the whole group. “I’m pleased to see you’re all doing well. I trust you have been resting and recovering from the great ordeal when last we met?”

“Hell nah. Been busy as heck,” Rudy replied in an upbeat voice, jumping up from the picnic table and running over to the legends.

“So I’ve heard,” Moltres commented dryly, tossing its head. I got the suspicion that Rudy had been bombarding his patron with tales from the unofficial League.

<I have not heard much from you,> Lugia said, fixing me with a stare.

I flinched. “I’m feeling a lot better now than I was the other day,” I admitted. Than I was this morning, even. But the others didn’t need to know that part.

Lugia relaxed slightly. <That is good.>

Moltres turned to face Mew, cleared its throat and said, “Per your request, I have been self-isolating since the enemy may have a particularly high reason to target me.”

“Hey, if anyone attacked you, I’d know,” Rudy pointed out, folding his arms. “It’s not like you’d be on your own.”

“I said as much, but Mew insisted,” Moltres replied simply, closing its eyes.

Starr raised an eyebrow at Rudy. “You’re really getting into the whole chosen thing, aren’t you?”

“It’s serious business,” Rudy said, giving her a hard stare.

She shrugged. “Guess Moltres chose right then.”

“Regardless,” Moltres went on dryly, “I am interested in arriving at a course of action that does not require indefinite quarantine.”

Right. That was part of the reason we were meeting up. Coming up with a plan for where to go from here. Between the attack on Indigo and the Hoenn mission, we were just reacting to the Rockets. Unless we came up with some way of learning their plans, or weakening their forces, or strengthening our own, we’d never beat them. And none of us were in a hurry to experience that kind of crushing failure again.

“So,” Moltres said, settling itself into a comfortable position away from any grass or kindling, “let us hear what some of that human ingenuity has to offer, hm?”

My face fell. They weren’t expecting us to already have a plan fully formed, were they?

Ajia rested her chin on the back of her hand, thinking. “Recently, we’ve only been able to react after the Rockets make a move. I don’t think we can expect to come out ahead that way.”

“Obviously we should take the fight to them, then!” Rudy exclaimed, tapping a fist to his palm.

“How would we do that?” I asked. Sure, it was kind of what we’d done on the Rebellion. But we’d had Stalker’s resources back then. It would be a lot harder without them.

Mew idly twirled her tail around herself. <I don’t believe it’s wise to go picking fights unnecessarily.>

“We’ll need a means of gathering information, then. That’s what our human allies are for, yes?” Ho-oh asked, glancing around at everyone earnestly.

I could try asking Stalker what all he knew about the Kanto Force’s plans. Although the idea of talking to him was incredibly unappealing on every level. Also, I still hadn’t told anyone that I’d gone to meet with him, and I didn’t really want to. Especially not Ajia or Starr.

“We could think about infiltrating?” Rudy asked. “Where’s the main hideout now?”

“Cerulean base is currently their main hub,” Ajia said, tenting her fingers. “It’s not as centralized as Viridian was, and most of their manufacturing is outside of town, but—”

“How exactly are you supposed to get into a base?” Starr asked, folding her arms. “You don’t have a working Rocket ID anymore. None of us do.”

Ajia shuffled a foot against the pine needles. “Well, I know you won’t be happy to hear this, but there’s always Lexx…”

Starr scoffed. “There’s no way a Johto ID will work at a Kanto base after the stunt Sebastian pulled, get real.”

“*IDs are optional,*” came Zoroark’s muffled voice from under the picnic table.

Starr squinted at the fox, taking a few seconds to piece together the fact that he’d volunteered to help. “Do you honestly think they wouldn’t have prioritized getting illusion cancellers after that Mewtwo stunt? I know they’re expensive as all hell, but come on.”

“Do you have any better ideas, then?” Rudy asked, glowering at her.

Ajia clasped her hands in her lap. “You could come with us, maybe show us—”

“No thanks,” Starr replied immediately with a scowl.

I rubbed the back of my head awkwardly. This was getting a bit heated.

“You did say you’d help us,” I pointed out carefully. “Maybe we need to… level on what that means, exactly.” I didn’t want to imply that she had to or anything, but…

Starr was quiet for some time. “Look… this rebel crap is still a bit new to me. Obviously, I’m gonna help out if it’s desperate or whatever, but going out of your way to cause trouble is another thing entirely.”

Ho-oh glanced back and forth between all of us, pensively running a talon across the ground. “Sometimes taking action is ideal. Sometimes waiting and listening. It is always difficult to discern which is better.”

“Yeah but we just said that we gotta take the fight to them or we’ll lose,” Rudy said exasperatedly. “I don’t want anything like that League attack to happen again, you hear?”

Starr let out a huff and rotated herself on the picnic bench so that she was facing away from the others. I turned myself so that I was facing the same direction, tapping my fingers on the table while I tried to think of what to say.

“I don’t like the idea that you’ll be charging into danger,” Starr muttered quietly. “I don’t like thinking about it. You shouldn’t have to.”

“I know,” I said. Hesitantly, I reached out a hand to hers and held it until she squeezed back.

Despite the tension on the human side of the camp, the Pokémon side of the camp was still cheerful and energetic, which was kind of a weird contrast. Some of them were crowded around the Legendaries—mostly Rudy and Darren’s team, although Pichu had somehow managed to climb to the top of Lugia’s head without getting shaken off. Lugia seemed content to let her stay, while Pichu was just glad to have the highest perch.

Searching for some way to start the conversation again, I turned to Mew and asked, “How’d everyone take the news of what happened in Sootopolis?”

<They weren’t as surprised as you might think,> she replied. <They’re used to the idea of humans causing problems with the legends.>

Well, that was depressing. Was it too much to hope that any of them had had good experiences with humans? I didn’t want to believe it was just a given that humans were nothing but trouble for them.

“How many Legendaries do you know?” Rudy asked, scooting forward in his seat. “Do you know all of them in the country? In the world?!

Mew chuckled a bit at his enthusiasm. <I spoke with all the legends I’m acquainted with in Sinnoh. Three of my friends there have had troubles with humans before. But nothing recently.>

I tilted my head, feeling a bit uneasy. They’d had problems with humans before…?

<It’s nothing to do with Team Rocket,> she added quickly, upon seeing my face. Her tone sounded reassuring but I honestly wasn’t sure how reassuring it was. People other than Team Rocket were messing with the legends? We were having a hard enough time with just the Rockets.

“What about here? Is everyone accounted for?” I asked warily.

<Well, there is one thing,> Mew replied hesitantly. <I was unable to locate Suicune or Zapdos.>

A chill came over me. “You don’t think they’ve been captured, do you?”

Mew put a paw to her chin. <I don’t believe so. But there’s no way to know for sure. While I can usually locate the others, if any of them really wanted to avoid me, they could.>

That would be a problem. “Don’t they need to pick a chosen?” I asked. If they were stuck in hiding, how would the chosen pact ever be completed?

“Perhaps that is what they’re off doing—locating a chosen,” Ho-oh mused.

<That is far, far too optimistic,> Lugia said, giving the phoenix a hard stare.

<There’s also the issue that naturally they’ll be trying to avoid the human threat,> Mew added thoughtfully. <So they’ll be more elusive than normal.>

This whole time, they’d had to dance around the Rockets’ forces to avoid being captured. How much easier would it be if they didn’t have to worry about that? And, as I had to keep reminding myself, that was technically possible, but no one had brought it up yet.

…It was worth a shot.

“Last year,” I began slowly, “Mewtwo said that he captured himself, so he was immune to capture.” I could already feel Lugia tensing up. I braced myself, then asked, “Couldn’t the rest of you guys do that?”

<No,> Lugia answered immediately.

I stared up at the dragon-bird, utterly perplexed. “Why not?”

<Why would I willingly accept the device that is designed to enslave us?> Lugia replied dryly.

I stared. “You’re acting like the Master Ball itself would brainwash you. That’s not how it works; they have to program it to do that after the capture.” I wanted to add a ‘wouldn’t you know that better than the others?’ but thought better of it.

<Yes, well… I’m not even convinced that it’s foolproof,> Lugia said dismissively.

Okay, now it was just being difficult on purpose. “You can’t catch a Pokémon that’s already been caught,” I said firmly. That was just a fact. But suddenly I found myself doubting it anyway. Well… if the Rockets had invented a way around that, we’d have heard, right? That’d be a pretty huge deal.

“You know, it wouldn’t even be a Master Ball, right?” I offered. “It would just be a regular Pokéball. Super easy to break, and you could hide it somewhere the rest of us don’t know about, and never tell us.”

Lugia narrowed its eyes. <We are going to stop talking about this right now.>

I stared up at it incredulously. This was kind of an important topic! And Lugia just wanted to drop it without even considering? What the hell.

My Pokegear buzzed. I grabbed it and read a text from Ajia that said, “I’m gonna have Mew try to talk to them later.”

I made eye contact with her. “Okay,” I texted back.

I didn’t like the idea of putting it off ‘til later when it had already been this long, but… it seemed like we didn’t have a choice.

“Right, so… if you guys aren’t doing that, you’ll need a plan for dealing with the fact that both Rocket forces just added another legend to their ranks,” Starr went on. “You’re gonna need some way to compete. They’ll be augmenting their strength. Powerups, equipment, that sort of crap.”

Right… the Rockets’ Legendaries all had battle equipment during the last mission, and there had been way too many instances where they’d been faster or stronger than they had any right to be. That was no doubt part of the reason why they’d trounced us.

“Was anyone else surprised by Articuno using Water Pulse?” Darren asked suddenly.

I blinked at him. “Huh?”

“When the Rockets were attacking Team Aqua. Some of the Magmas tried hitting it with fire, but it put out the fire. Just seemed weird is all,” he said, shrugging. But it was never just that—he was implying something.

And now that I thought about it… Entei and Raikou’s Shadow Ball. While I could hardly pretend to be a Legendary expert, that really didn’t seem like a natural ability for the guardian of storms or volcanoes.

Lugia paused, thinking hard. <I am quite familiar with Articuno’s techniques. I have never known them to use control water before.>

Ajia let out a deep sigh. “I was afraid of something like that. I think they’ve been using TMs on their Legendaries. That’s especially concerning since they just got Rayquaza. Most dragons can learn an incredible variety of elemental moves. Why would the most powerful dragon in existence be any different?”

Oh geez. Yet another way that the Rockets could use their resources to have the advantage on us. Why was this strategy meeting only making things seem more hopeless?

“Why don’t you do the same thing?” Darren asked simply. “If the free Legendaries also have TM moves, they’ll be a lot more prepared to take on the Rockets, wouldn’t you say?”

Lugia tossed its head indignantly. <No. I know how TMs work.>

I stared incredulously. Now Lugia was finding some way to reject TMs of all things? Did it plan on going along with any of our ideas at all? “…They just let you use new moves,” I said flatly.

<Yes, thank you for that one, oh dispenser of wisdom,> Lugia said with an eye roll. <TMs work by emitting a wave that permanently modifies the energy signature of the target. I do not wish to have my energy signature defiled. Would you allow anyone to tamper with your genetics?>

“That is not the same and you know it,” Ho-oh said, waving a wing dismissively. “Energy signatures exist to be modified. Reproductive Pokémon can even pass on their life experiences. It’s quite fascinating.”

Lugia rolled its eyes again, but from the hesitation in its mind, it was clear that it knew Ho-oh had a point but simply didn’t want to admit it. <Fine. Which ones are compatible?>

It took me a few seconds to realize that the dragon-bird was addressing me. “Oh, uh… I don’t know. I mean, no one’s ever tried to use a TM on a Legendary—besides Team Rocket—so it’s not like there’s a handy list of which ones you can learn. I guess we’ll just try them one after another until one works?”

Ajia tapped a fist to her palm. “Alright, sounds like we’ll need to pick up a few TMs. I’ll make a trip to Celadon, they’ve got the best selection.”

“I’m going with you,” Starr replied immediately. When Ajia gave her a surprised look, she added, “Look I don’t get to go to Celadon often enough, and I’m bored as hell with the Indigo volunteering. I need this.”

I figured the trip was going to wait until tomorrow, but within half an hour, Starr was dragging me off the couch, insisting I come with her and Ajia. So we teleported to Celadon City’s mega department store. After two weeks of mostly hanging around Pewter City and its outskirts, the bright lights and relentless crowds were a bit overwhelming. I vaguely followed Starr around the store, occasionally leaving to check on Ajia, who spent the whole time pacing in front of the TM shelf.

“I mean, at the very least we should get copies of the most common elemental moves,” she muttered to herself, running a finger past endless rows of discs. “Flamethrower, Thunderbolt, Ice Beam… probably Rock Slide… Oh, and Protect.”

That seemed reasonable enough… and then my face fell the moment I laid eyes on the price tag. “50,000 pyen?? Seriously? Where are we supposed to get that kind of money?”

“Look, the non-reusable ones are a tenth of that,” Ajia said, gesturing to another shelf. “We’ll get a reusable Protect and a few disposable copies of the others.” Even that was still a lot… but I wasn’t about to protest since it wasn’t my money.

It was supposed to just be in and out, grab the TMs and go, but Starr spent an extra half hour dragging us all over the seemingly endless floors. Ajia kept coming up with new strategy ideas, but it wasn’t like we could just buy everything our teams needed. We didn’t have the limitless resources that the Rockets had.

“God, it’d be nice if we could just steal some of the shit we need from the Rockets,” Starr said as we left the store, bags in hand. “Remind me why we can’t do that again?”

“You were the one who didn’t want us going in the base,” I pointed out.

“Don’t need to,” Starr replied with a scoff. “Just make Lugia steal a supply truck or something. Should be easy.”

“We’ll keep that in mind,” Ajia said cheerfully, with the kind of tone that indicated she had no intention of doing so.

Around 9pm, we teleported back to the cabin with all our purchases, and within ten seconds of Ajia announcing our return, we already had a mob of Pokémon crowding around us. Half of them were deterred by the fact that none of the bags held food, and the other half left once we explained that the TMs were meant for the Legendaries. Thus began the task of deciding which disc to use on who. I really had no idea where to even start. Flamethrower? It was hard to imagine Lugia breathing fire, but who knows—maybe it was possible?

“Are there any moves you’ve ever wished you could do?” I asked Lugia.

<My present skills have been more than enough for any occasion,> Lugia replied airily.

Yes, well… overcoming any obstacle through the sheer power of being a legend wasn’t really an option when the opposing side had Legendaries. Not that I felt like saying as much.

“So you’ve got psychic powers. You can also control water and air… maybe something like… lightning? Or ice?”

<I’ve never particularly felt the desire to wield either of those things.>

I let out a groan. “I’ll just pick something, then.”

Rudy was a lot quicker than me. He’d just returned, dropping a small stack of TMs on the table. “None of these worked.”

Darren picked up the disc on the top of the stack. “You thought Moltres might be able to do Ice Beam?

“Well, how are we supposed to know if we don’t try! And it’s not like they know either,” he muttered indignantly, gesturing to the Legendaries. Moltres quirked an eyebrow at him.

“I guess I could try it,” I said with a shrug before Darren handed over the disc. The plastic wrap had already been removed and the pull tab yanked out. I turned to Lugia and asked, “Want to try this one?”

<Do as you wish,> it replied dismissively, swishing its tail.

I rolled my eyes. It could’ve at least pretended to care.

“Well, here goes.” I pressed the button and the disc inside whirred to life. I was about to ask Lugia if it was working, but I didn’t even need to. The blank look on its face was sign enough. Not only that, but through our link I could actually feel the sense of calm contemplation that had overtaken the legend.

When it was done, Lugia shook its head to clear the haze. <Which move was that?>

“That one was Ice Beam.”

<Ah. Yes. I am familiar with that move.> Lugia closed its eyes in concentration before exhaling experimentally. Tiny bits of ice crystals formed in its breath. <Excellent. I will master this move tomorrow. You will accompany me. I imagine you are more familiar with the technical details.>

I rubbed the back of my head. “I mean. I guess so?” Sure I’d seen the move used and all, but none of my team could do it, so I’d never had to drill anyone on it. Maybe I could find an online tutorial or something.

Darren was helping Rudy narrow in on options that were more likely to actually work for Moltres. Ho-oh was watching them and occasionally offering suggestions. Meanwhile, Ajia and Mew hadn’t actually touched any of the TMs that they’d helped buy.

“What moves are you two going to try?” I asked them.

<There’s no need,> Mew said, smiling. <I’ve already learned them all.>

It took a few seconds for her words to sink in. “Wha—all of them? Every TM?”

<My energy signature is compatible with all elements, and all known techniques that use them.> She held up a paw. Wisps of flame clung to it, flickering into strings of electricity and then fading into glimmers of ice.

I blinked at her, wide-eyed. “Does… does that have anything to do with the stories that Mew was the ancestor of all Pokémon?”

<I don’t know. Perhaps one of my distant past lives actually was,> she said offhandedly, with the kind of tone you’d use for something perfectly mundane.

I stared blankly. “Past… lives?” What was that supposed to mean?

Mew frowned. <Oh. You… didn’t know?>

I couldn’t think of any other response, so I just shook my head.

<It’s so easy to forget that humans wouldn’t have any reason to know that,> Mew mused to herself. Then she smiled faintly and said, <We’re not immortal.>

…What? Of course the Legendaries were immortal. Everyone knew that. They’d been around for… since… all of recorded history. Stories, records of them, going back for eons. Every civilization across the globe had them. And there had never been any sightings of multiples, at least not for the ‘true’ legends.

<Our bodies wear out just like any other living beings,> she went on. <It’s our energy signature that persists indefinitely. When we die, the energy from the body condenses into an egg, which forms a new body.>

I paused, struggling to sort through my endless questions. “So you’re reborn when you die? How often does that happen?

<About five hundred years, give or take.>

For real? That was so much younger than I’d been expecting. Here I’d been thinking they were thousands of years old, and—

And then it hit me. “Wait, but that means… none of you are the same Legendaries that existed in that war 3000 years ago?”

<Correct.>

Seriously? That changed everything.

“Are you the same person as back then?” Darren asked.

A noticeable pause followed. Several of the Legendaries glanced at each other, looking uncomfortable. Mew pondered the question for a bit before answering, <We have the same life force as our predecessors, so presumably the same spirit as well.>

Lugia continued, <But we have no memories from those lives. And our personalities are shaped by our life experiences just like any other being, so… no, I wouldn’t say any of us is the same person.>

Mew sighed exaggeratedly. <Must you always follow the most boring interpretation of the world?>

<I’m just being realistic,> Lugia replied defensively. Mew gave the dragon-bird a playful thwack with her tail.

I couldn’t stop repeating it in my head. Legendaries weren’t immortal. No wonder it felt like they had no idea what was going on half the time. No wonder they didn’t know why the pact existed or why the seven patrons had been selected. They literally weren’t around back when the legend was written!

“Can you be killed?” Rudy asked. He must’ve climbed Moltres’s back at some point, because that’s where he was sitting now.

Moltres turned its neck 180 degrees to face him, looking amused. “Ha! You have some nerve to ask something like that.”

He shrugged. “Just curious.”

The firebird gave a small snort. “Well, yes. Of course we can be killed. Our bodies might be sturdy but they can still be damaged. That much should be obvious by now.” It paused and then added, “The same thing happens when we die regardless of the cause of death, by the way.”

The Legendaries weren’t immortal, they could be killed, and they weren’t even around when the legend was written. It felt like my brain was going to break from processing it all. Others seemed to be taking the news a lot easier—particularly some of the Pokémon.

“*You’re not that old!*” Pichu exclaimed, patting the top of Lugia’s head.

<I’m still over 300…> the dragon-bird replied, sounding disgruntled.

“*I would’ve thought the Legendaries were like… five… ten thousand-thousand years old.*”

“*More than that,*” Weavile piped up.

“*Pretty sure numbers don’t go higher than that,*” Pichu replied matter-of-factly.

The rest of the night passed with relative calm. The Legendaries continued to get heckled by the Pokémon on all our teams. Darren broke out some card games and thrashed the rest of us so badly I thought Starr might flip the table. There was some light sparring, and Feraligatr eventually had to put out a small fire or two. The relaxed tone was strange. It felt like we should have been doing more. More training, more strategizing. More preparation for the next disaster, whenever it came. But we deserved this. I deserved this.

Tomorrow I’d be helping Lugia learn Ice Beam. That was a surreal thought. A hundreds-years old legend, getting help from a human. It was even weirder to stop and think about the fact that they had to just… go along with writings from well before they’d even existed.

I’d been caught up in events way bigger than me. They’d been born into events way bigger than them. We weren’t so different.

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The wind whipped my hair wildly as Lugia and I soared low over the ocean at a breakneck speed. My eyes scanned the island below, searching for anything out of the ordinary. A flash of red feathers, the glint of green scales—anything. Nothing so far…

And then I saw it—a tiny glimmer of yellow flame, barely visible in the stark afternoon sun.

<Below us!> I called.

A jet of red-hot fire shot upward, and I held on tight as Lugia barreled to the left. My teeth rattled, my head spun, but I managed to stay on. I still didn’t like the feeling of riding Lugia. Keeping a grip on its waterproof feathers was a pain, but I was getting better at it. I would’ve killed for a flight harness, but Lugia didn’t exactly like the idea of advertising that it had a rider. At least falling off wasn’t that scary anymore. All the training with Aros had paid off.

Orange wings, approaching us. Firestorm had taken flight, quickly closing the distance to fire another Flamethrower at a closer range.

<Below again, coming up fast!>

Lugia pivoted instantly, firing a torrent of water that easily quenched Firestorm’s flames. It could have blocked the attack with a psychic barrier, but we didn’t want to over-rely on barriers when attacks from actual legends could overwhelm them.

Dragonfire rained down from above. I glanced upward and immediately regretted it as I got a faceful of sun. Ugh. Well, even if I couldn’t see him, Aros was ready to attack from above, and Firestorm was still in position below. Caught between two sides, no way to counter both without a barrier. So Lugia just flared its wings to slow down, causing both attacks to overshoot… or maybe the attacks would have missed anyway. Hard to tell.

<This isn’t terribly effective if they insist on missing,> Lugia pointed out.

<They don’t want to hit me, obviously,> I said.

<Are they under the impression that I would fail to adequately defend you?>

I was definitely not going to answer that. Lugia seemed committed to being miffed about it either way.

While we were focused on them, where was… I glanced over my shoulder and sure enough, there was Swift, wings poised for an Air Slash. I called him out and Lugia swept its tail to the side, sending a rush of wind to intercept Swift’s Air Slash. The Pidgeot dove just in time to avoid the worst of it. But a second blast of wind knocked Aros and Firestorm’s flight paths askew, the latter tumbling head-over-tail until he managed to right himself just before he would’ve hit the sea.

Aros was close enough that I could actually see him now—including the crackle of sparks from his back. My breath froze. Lightning—couldn’t deflect that with wind or water.

<Dive!> I yelled, already tightening my grip.

Lugia threw its wings back and we shot downward, just in time for the narrow bolt to go shooting well past us. That time there was barely any delay at all. Lugia was responding to my thoughts way faster than before. The training was working.

<You’re still fully voicing your thoughts. It would be faster if you just aim your intent at me.> Well, that was a buzzkill.

<I’m… not sure how to do that?> Aiming thoughts at someone was hard enough with words to guide me. I didn’t even know where to begin if it was just abstract intent.

While I was puzzling over that, Firestorm drifted closer to us, his movement slow and inoffensive compared to earlier. “*When’s lunch?*”

I glanced at my watch. 2pm. We’d been at this for a while…

“We can take a break now,” I replied.

<I do not require one,> Lugia said.

I rubbed my eyes. “No, but the rest of us do.”

<Very well.>

Lugia landed on the rocky shoreline and I dismounted. My arms were a bit sore, as usual with prolonged aerial training. It always seemed like I didn’t notice it until taking a break. I retrieved my bag from where I’d stashed it among the rocks and pulled out lunch for me and my team. As we ate, we discussed training, the League, news they’d heard from Rudy or Darren’s teams, gossip from Pokémon competing in the League—normal stuff. It was easy to forget that an afternoon training with a Legendary was anything but normal.

A strange fog surrounded the island. The air within was clear, the sunlight uninhibited. But anyone on the outside wouldn’t be able to see a thing. Lugia had said that any ships approaching would get turned around. And any fliers overhead would just see the sun’s glare off the water droplets. Some kind of psychic trick, I supposed. Lugia apparently had a lot of techniques to avoid having to deal with curious humans. It had proudly told me how it developed the techniques by itself.

While the rest of us had lunch, Lugia passed the time circling the island underwater, occasionally breaching the water inside a swirling waterspout before plunging back into the sea with a mighty splash. I wasn’t sure if it was doing that just because we were watching, but I had to admit it was a cool spectacle.

After he’d finished eating, Swift took off and soared low over the water’s surface, trying to keep pace with the giant seabird swimming below. Chibi took up flinging small rocks into the air with his Iron Tail for Firestorm to hit with small, concentrated fireballs. Aros and Stygian had gone exploring the island, chasing each other up and down the craggy terrain, poking into small caves, and heckling a few of the local Slowpoke. I found myself automatically wondering where Jet had gone before remembering that she was still hanging out with Rudy’s team. I felt a weird sting in my heart at that thought.

After some time, Lugia burst out of the water and did a few loops in the air before landing on the shore near me. Sunlight glimmered off the water streaming down its waterproof feathers. There was something sort of graceful about the fact that Lugia was equally at home in the air and the water.

“Back when we first met, we were underneath these islands, right?” I asked.

<Correct. There is a labyrinth of caves beneath the islands. Countless divers have attempted to explore them. None have reached me. By my design, of course.>

I leaned back against the rocks, stretching my legs in the sun. “Is this your main home, then? Do you have others?”

<There are many seas south of here that I frequent. Various island chains. I once spent a great deal of time exploring the ocean on the far side of the world. But that was years ago. And I’ve decided I prefer this one.>

It suddenly hit me that I really had no idea what it was like being a Legendary. Wild Pokémon spent a lot of time surviving (and… humans did too, come to think of it). But what was it like not having to bother with stuff like that?

“Are there… any things you like doing?” I asked. It was probably a stupid question. But then, I was still getting over the news that the Legendaries hadn’t been around for thousands of years. They hadn’t seen and experienced everything that life had to offer.

Lugia hummed, mulling the question over. <I enjoy traversing the powerful, warm currents through the southern seas. I can easily lose myself in their embrace. Sometimes I go about mapping the layout of the seafloor in my mind. Losing myself in tracing every detail. It’s such a complex system. I’ve tried diving to the deepest depths that I can find. Finding new places to go even deeper. I once spent five years at the bottom, pushing myself to project my mind, my psychic field outward from myself, as far as it could possibly go. Leagues away.>

I stared. “You can sense things that far?”

<Not at the moment. After months of meditation, certainly.>

It was pretty hard to wrap my head around that kind of time scale. Meditating for months was just… mind-boggling. I couldn’t imagine how that wouldn’t be boring. Then again, I guess mapping the seafloor was a lot to process.

<That’s an excessive example, however. Usually I just meditate long enough to guide the nearby currents and storms in my sleep.>

I tilted my head. “Do you really control that stuff? What would happen if you didn’t?”

Lugia paused, as though it hadn’t considered that before. <I suppose… the ocean currents would still flow without my wings, but… I still think of myself as a caretaker of sorts. It is… something like self-expression, for me. I know the others feel the same with their domain.>

It was weird thinking about the role that the Legendaries played in the world. There were still so many things I wanted to know. About their lives. About their past. About the legend. There were a lot of things that they didn’t even know. And the chosen pact was designed 3000 years ago, before any of them were born…

“Can I ask something?”

<Regarding what?> it replied, sounding somewhat guarded.

“It’s about the whole chosen thing. There are a lot of things I’ve been wondering about.”

Lugia relaxed slightly, mulling things over in its mind. <I can’t say everything, and I also don’t know everything about it, but I’ll say what I can.> It still seemed uncertain, but that was probably as good a reaction as I was gonna get.

I shuffled a foot against the gravelly sand. Where to begin… “Okay, so… the pact between human and Legendary… it needs all seven of you to go through with it, right?”

<Correct.>

“What happens when you do?”

Lugia hesitated. Discomfort drifted from its mind. <I’m not sure. I believe Mew knows. But they might be putting on an act for the rest of us just so we’ll feel more reassured. From what I can tell, it will make things easier for us in the war.>

Really? Lugia of all people was alright with something so vague and unexplained as that?

<I really wish I had more information than that. Trust me.>

Ah. So it wasn’t okay with it after all.

I leaned forward, resting my chin against my palm. “Okay, so you, Mew, and Moltres are the only ones to have made a pact so far. Aren’t there only a few months left for Zapdos, Ho-oh, Suicune, and Raikou? Isn’t that… dangerous?”

Lugia glanced away. <It is a cause for concern, yes. Although Mew seems confident that the way the fight is currently progressing has a high probability of yielding more chosen candidates.>

Really? Well, that sure was a lot more confidence than I felt. “You put a lot of trust in what Mew thinks, don’t you?”

Lugia drew itself back, ruffling its feathers. <I dislike Mew’s blind optimism. I wish they were more straightforward and didn’t accept things without explanation. But… yes, I trust them.>

Definitely a hint of embarrassment there. Probably best to change the subject. “So why can’t you just grab any human who’s fought Team Rocket to protect the balance? There’s gotta be a decent number of them.” Hell, Raikou had referred to the entire Rebellion as interlopers once.

Lugia shook its head. <That’s not enough. Remember, there needs to be some sort of connection between the human, the legend, the conflict, and the other interlopers. The threads of fate surrounding them must be sufficiently intertwined. Something about making a proper bond for when things get really ugly.>

“‘Threads of fate’?” I said incredulously. Lugia had been pretty adamant that fate had nothing to do with being chosen.

<Just poetic language,> it said, waving a wing. <It’s obviously something more real than fate. I just don’t know what it is since I didn’t come up with the system. And whoever did was very careful to avoid saying how they did it.>

Huh. Until now, I hadn’t really properly considered the fact that whoever wrote that legend obviously must have been hoping we’d succeed, right? It didn’t make any sense. Why would someone supposedly trying to help just… decide not to give us all the information we needed?

“So you can sense which humans have threads of fate crossed with yours?”

<Correct. That is how we located our chosen candidates. The threads between you and me were especially bright after that night in Viridian City.>

I flinched, trying not to remember it. “What does that… feel like?”

Lugia paused. <You know of creatures that can see colors of light beyond what the rest of us see?> I nodded. <This seems similar to that, only if the light was rarer. Like a tiny glimmer of heat in an otherwise void. No, more like strands of heat.>

Weird. So all that stuff about interlopers and locating the strongest candidates… they could just straight-up see it. That was a lot simpler than I would have guessed.

“So what about Raikou? I never heard anything about when it was captured, and no one seems to want to talk about that, even though it’s kind of important. How will the seven unite without it?”

Lugia exhaled slowly. <We had to free Moltres. We’ll make it our priority to free Raikou as well, now that we finally have time to plan. For one thing, several of your group know the human who took them. We can use that to our advantage.>

The human who took Raikou—Lexx. And Lexx was working for…

“…Did anyone ever consider Sebastian a candidate for being chosen?”

Lugia froze. At first, I wasn’t sure if that name would mean anything to it—by its own admission, it was bad with human names. But then a heavy feeling took hold. It knew. It definitely knew.

<There is something very strange about the human Sebastian,> Lugia said slowly. <He gives off an overwhelming feeling of being tied to the legend. More than anyone I’ve ever seen. But there’s something… wrong about the feeling. It’s the reason why none of us approached him to become his patron. Otherwise we might have, before we learned he was willing to capture us for his own ends.>

“‘Wrong’? What does that mean?”

<I cannot explain it. But I know it as surely as I would know something to be hot or cold.>

Well that was… unnerving. Did he know? Should I tell him? What would come of it? He’d told me all about the fact that he’d tried to turn other people into chosen candidates, but never mentioned anything about himself. If he’d wanted to be chosen, he would have said so, right…?

Lugia shook its head. <We should resume our training. I want to practice that ice technique now.>

Right. We were here for a reason. Couldn’t just waste the day thinking about stuff I had no control over. I stood up, brushed the sand from my jeans, and grabbed my phone from my pocket. “I’ve got an online video here. Took forever to load; the signal’s really bad out here.” I held up my phone with the screen facing out.

Lugia squinted. <Am I supposed to be able to make out what is displayed on that miniscule screen?> it asked dryly. I was about to come up with some kind of reply, but it went on, <No matter. You will have to relay the relevant information then.>

I sighed. “Alright.”

The video was well-made, and the Glalie instructor clearly knew what he was doing. The video was even narrated by him directly (with subtitles), as part of a growing effort to make YouTube more accessible to Pokémon. But that said, something told me the actual process for refining an Ice Beam would be a little bit different for a user with… more limbs.

I could load a different video, but that would require going back to where I could actually get a signal. Didn’t wanna bother with that. We’d just have to wing it.

“What have you got so far?” I asked, looking up at Lugia.

The dragon-bird drew its head back, bright blue particles gathering in its mouth. The energy slowly condensed into an orb, growing larger and larger until finally, it shot forward, breaking into pieces and leaving trails of frost scattered across the sand.

“That looked alright,” I said.

Lugia huffed. <Don’t patronize me. You know how it is meant to look.>

I flinched. The idea of correcting Lugia still just felt… viscerally uncomfortable. “I mean, I guess it’s kind of scattered, like snow. It’s supposed to be a focused beam. It shouldn’t break apart, it needs to hold its shape until the impact point, and then break apart.”

<Perhaps I can psychically force the energy to hold its shape,> Lugia mused.

Something already told me that wasn’t going to work, but Lugia tried it anyway, gathering another round of icy energy and launching it forward. A psychic glow flared up around the beam, but the two energies just exploded outward, dissolving into blue particles trailing upward.

Lugia scowled. I took that opportunity to avoid its gaze and glance back at the video, scrubbing through the timeline. “The instructor says to compress the energy inward to the smallest point. That’s the only way to get a concentrated beam.”

<How is that meant to work? Cold is the absence of energy.>

Seriously? Did it want me to look up the physics on how ice moves work or something? I scrolled down and—thank god, the video description actually explained some of the details. “Uh… it says here you have to… configure your energy signature for the ice element, which is… characterized by a negative pressure? So even though you’re pouring infinity energy into the beam, it’s actually pulling heat from the target, which makes it seem cold.” What was any of this. “And for Ice Beam specifically, the uh… ‘void point’ has to be as small as possible, or else it just pulls heat from the surrounding area and loses strength.” I paused, feeling like an idiot. “I don’t have any idea if that’s helpful, but—”

<It is.>

The dragon-bird fired several more beams, each one slightly different than the last—some thicker, some brighter. Some trailing snow, others raining shards of ice. The beams kept their shape, but the impact point wasn’t freezing over the way it was supposed to.

It probably wasn’t a good idea to say this, but: “It’s okay to not get it right away.”

<Maybe for you.>

I winced. Lugia must have realized its words had stung, because its feathers ruffled awkwardly. <That was… not meant to be a slight. I just cannot afford to be lacking. The enemy is powerful and relentless. My power is no longer sufficient, so my skills must be.>

I hadn’t really thought about it like that before. Lugia had always seemed so… confident in its strength. Even last night…

<It’s been years since I’ve had to learn to use my power in new ways,> Lugia went on, its tone airy and offhanded, like it was merely thinking aloud. I felt its mind digging deep into its memory, like swimming through a distant past. A time of discovery, exploration, and experimentation. A time when everything was new and exciting.

“What’s it like? Having that much power?”

It was a stupid question. Still, Lugia paused in surprise, like it had never considered it before. After several seconds’ thought, it replied, <It is… as natural to me as breathing. I can’t imagine not having it.>

Lugia attempted to focus the ice into a beam once more. The beam swerved, missing the target completely.

<At the same time… there is also the pressure to use that power correctly. To figure out what that means.>

Another beam. A wave of snow cascaded over the rocks.

<It’s frustrating, the feeling of being inept at something. Of wanting to force the skill into being through willpower alone.>

Another beam. Waves of cold radiated out from the impact.

<But it’s also… new. It’s different. Interesting.> Lugia glanced toward me. <I’m told that humans excel at both new and different. You’re so weak compared to Pokémon, and yet your lives are filled with such… novelty.>

Another beam. Spires built up from the impact point, glittering in the sun.

<Normally, if I wished to hone my powers, I would spend years meditating upon them. But we do not have that kind of time. Humans live their lives so quickly. You must learn quickly as well.>

It took me a few seconds to realize Lugia was trying to pay me a compliment. Unsure of how else to respond, I rearranged my face into something that hopefully looked grateful.

“It looks like it’s coming along. There’s a bit here that talks about how to control the way it reacts with the target.” I said, scrolling down further. “I just wish at least one of my Pokémon knew Ice Beam. They could’ve demonstrated.”

<It’s a shame that we do not have Articuno here,> Lugia said offhandedly.

I blinked. Lugia’s tone was casual, like that fact was merely an inconvenience. But there was an undercurrent of heaviness lurking underneath.

“What was Articuno like?” I found myself asking, without really knowing why.

Lugia started slightly, as though it hadn’t expected me to ask. <Articuno was…>—it struggled to find the right words—<Kind. Supportive. They saw beauty in almost anything. Their mastery over ice was enchanting. They could make the most dazzling displays of wind and snow.>

I could feel a distinct pressure from Lugia’s mind holding its feelings back. Little bubbles of emotion rose to the surface anyway, despite its best efforts.

<I did not always see eye to eye with them. I had to hold my words, to not say things I might regret. They were always so sensitive.>

A heavy feeling took hold in my chest. As obvious as it seemed, this was the first time it had really hit me—the Rockets enslaving the Legendaries wasn’t just wrong because it was a crime against nature or something like that. It was wrong because the legends were people. I’d been thinking of it all this time in such a backwards way. Still seeing each of the legends mainly as a force of nature and not… a person. A person who deserved to exist and be free, just like everyone else. A person who had others that cared about them, who’d been hurt by their loss.

I could feel that ache in Lugia’s heart. And instead of getting help from someone it had known for literally hundreds of years, all Lugia had was some small, weak nobody that hadn’t even lived a tenth as long.

<Articuno would have made a fine patron. They would gladly have taken a human under their wing. I don’t understand why they could not have.> Lugia’s mind crackled with frustration. Now, more than ever, it wished that we had answers as to why the seven patrons had been chosen. At least I knew why I’d been picked. But Lugia… Lugia had inherited a legacy from 3000 years ago, and didn’t even know why. A legacy that it didn’t feel like a proper fit for.

“I’m sure that Articuno would be proud of the effort you’re putting in. Learning its element like this?”

Lugia didn’t respond to that. It just stared off to sea, idly nudging some of the fallen snow with its foot.

I rubbed my arm. “Mew could probably help with the whole Ice Beam thing. I really don’t know much.”

<No,> Lugia said immediately. I tilted my head, nonplussed. It ruffled its feathers, mind awash with embarrassment, realizing that it had answered too quickly.

<I will work on it with you.>






~End Chapter 49~
 
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