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I swear I reviewed part 1, but apparently not. So I'll review 1&2. Anyways! First time review! I really enjoyed this tale. Very lighthearted and kind of 'silly', but not actually silly. A Dwebble as an MC is unusual, and interesting. Using a bug-like pokemon to strike this balance between...

Very much good, definitely enjoyed. Happy to be reading this again. You're probably one of my fav authors, just because our styles tend to line up good I think. Your story and world choices are very appealing. This chapter was good. It felt a bit summary-ish, but its not so bad, considering...

Ahh, another chapter. This time from a Bisharp's point of view. I'm really loving all these different POVs. Narsil. Great chapter name too, I get that reference. Totally digging it. I enjoyed reading the details and understanding what kind of pokemon I was following this time. It's almost like...

Reviewed Suicune's choice, chapters 2-5 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-suicunes-choice.265/post-17518 1670 words. *phew* +1 for theme cause I reviewed chap 1 last week

Alright, beeg review time! Finally got caught up on this!!! Alright so you already know I love your prose. The way you weave worldbuilding and character and detail into sentences is awesome. Let's go into my chapter breakdowns. Chapter 2 Alrighty so this was such a sad but tense chapter. Haru...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-17368 Reviewed that weird fanfic about N again. Seems right up your alley ;) 917 words, +1 for theme cause its something I'm catching up on

So after yesterday's review I had to come back for more. If anything, I was curious to see what direction this unusual story would tell. I'll be reviewing uh... the next two parts? So... Three and Four. I don't actually have much in the way of 'critique' as much as observations and reactions and...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-17252 reviewed some fic called Envy of Eden.... definitely never heard of it before. Was pretty dang interesting. Qualifies for this weeks theme too! 910 words!

ALrighty, gonna try and squeak in a review right before blitz for this week ends. Read 'chapters' 1 and 2. Let's begin. The prose was fascinating. You chose to write in a sort of semi-second person, which is an interesting choice. It works very well for a story told in an unusual way. The...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-17160 Reviewed chapters 1-3 of Of Sand and Shadows 578 words, +1 for theme

Alrighty! This is probably my first Orre fic I can think of. From what I gather, it seems to be a rewrite of Pokemon Colosseum, which is great. It's been years and years since I played those games, so this is practically fresh to me. I read chapters 1-3, so I'll give my thoughts on those...

Reviewed The Meaning of Power https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-meaning-of-power.515/post-16902 Never reviewed before either so I also get +1 for theme 582 words

Time for my review blitz! Gonna have a shot at this with my new rating system. I'll discuss 7 key points I think are critical in any story. [Main Character, Side Character, Plot, Subplot, Antagonist, Theme, Prose] MC: Silver here seems very well written. You've given solid insight into his...

Now, this is interesting. The "rebuke" coupled with the line before it about Koa not wanting to see Zubat hurt is supposed to read more like he's snapping at Zubat cause he got scared that Zubat nearly got himself hurt. A bit like how a parent might snap at a kid who almost ran into a busy...

Reviewed chapter 25 of Legendarian Chronicles https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-16712 593 words I believe. No theme for this week ofc

I feel obliged t leave a review cause idk, why not? I'm going to be frank. Cause I like this story. So far I don't have any problems with grammar, plot, pacing, prose etc. I think its all very solid. really enjoyable. The reveal that Starr is apparently Giovanni's daughter is only mildly...

Ash, an Inspiration by Warmongers of Simora FFN Rating: K ASH AND OTHER CANON TRAINERS Adventure/Humor Keywords: Ash, Alola, alola fic, mentorship, team dynamics, mature ash Chaptered, Ongoing [This Ash-centric fic takes an unusual route. It picks up after Kalos, takes place in Alola...

Reviewed a section of LC. Not specifically a single chapter, but a broad overview. Doesn't count for the theme though. 1281 words. https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-16656

So as long as review blitz is going, I figured I'd leave another review. Naturally, given I am coming into reading LC late and there's chapters upon chapters ahead of me, you can feel free to ignore any criticisms that will be addressed later. Alright, so I'll try my best to cover my thoughts...

Reviewed chap 1 of Suicune's Choice (which also qualifies for theme!) 697 words supposedly. https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-suicunes-choice.265/post-16634