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Gah, I'm really liking this story. Stopping at 4 was hard. I'll probably read more later. Anyway, I'll start with a broad overview of the whole story up until now, chapter 7. Very interesting. It's been forever and a day since I played colosseum, so this is all fairly new to me. I absolutely...

Left a review of 1-3 of Eternal Shadows! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-eternal-shadows.509/post-19091 984 words I think, +1 for theme (and a meme!)

Blitz exchange time! I really had a lot of fun with this story. PMD has so many delightfully fun ways to twist the mold. You've decided to go with this little bean Gen, who can't help but lie about where he comes from. I can see this causing him a mighty big deal of trouble later down the...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroica-legends-an-undesired-hope.519/post-19081 Reviewed Heroica Legends. Chap 1 946 words, +1 for theme

Blitz review time! I thought this was a very cool opening. We see little Lucca fighting or hunting this Kartana. Based on your choice of words and his behavior, I could tell that coming to fight a Kartana wasn't new to him, this was something he'd attempted before. Opening on action can...

Home is Where the Hoenn is Summary: There's no such thing as a Flygonite. Or so they say. Hana has never been interested in pursuing impossible things. But when her Flygon, Raga, sets her sights on mega evolution, Hana is forced to find out—how far is she willing to go for something she...

Alrighty, White Swan Black Swan Prologue, 644 words, +1 theme https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-18925

Alrighty, I decided to review the prologue cause this story caught my attention! First up, very intriguing prologue. I thought you did a very good job setting the stage for a lot of really interesting elements. Team Enigma, their big bad leader, and his one and only heir, Armel. You've also...

I'm no expert but I feel comfortable enough offering help anyway. Name: Tetra/Flyg0n Interests: trainer fic, journey fic, some PMD, pokecentric is acceptable. I have a soft spot for trainer journey fics (especially with trainers that don't have it all). And a sprinkle of anime logic. I have...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-suicunes-choice.265/post-18420 Reviewed latest chap of Suicune's Choice, 409 words +1 for theme

Well well well, I think this may be my favorite chapter yet! Well, favorite is hard to pick. But this chapter was really moving. It found very drive, t had this particularly good slow burn feeling. All these discordant little details were coming together into one bold moment. Haru is finally...

Reviewed Chap 9 of Fighting Nature https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/fighting-nature.410/post-18361 568 words + 1 or theme

The blitz beast within me is fed by this new chapter. Good stuff, Really loving this fic. Did you know I shill it on other servers? This chapter really moved the plot along. Things are heating up for our trio. I like the pacing of this fic, between the length and everything else, it feels like...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/dragony.405/post-18305 Reviewed Dragony parts 1-6 with 1674 words +1 for theme

So I decided to review this delightful little fic for blitz! Man am I glad I did. I really scratches that itch for something nice and lighthearted and not so heavy. Just a simple, goofy sort of adventure. I really fell in love with Keith. He's such a dopey, loveable little Eevee, dead set on...

Reviewed EoE again cause I can't help myself - two chapters, 1409 words https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-18281

Can't help myself, I keep coming back to this story. I think Noted really solidified the intent of this story for me? Even though its present in the earlier chapters, the shift to a pokemon that finally doesn't feel like a prisoner/has a different perspective cements what direction I think this...

Thank you very much for the review, it always great to hear the thoughts of readers. I'm particularly glad to hear you enjoy how I wrote my battles, as I very specifically attempt to mimic the anime in a lot of aspects for this story. You make a really good point about the lack of outside...

Envy of Eden 5 - 1128 I believe (unless you cut out the reply to the reviews. Then it'll be a little less) https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-17990 Dragons Dance 3 - 538 words +1 theme...

Back to review this story again, on a new chapter! I can see that you are improving in your writing. Very good! Keep studying and keep growing. I enjoyed chapter 3. I felt like I got a good sense of the brother's personalities shining through, and got to see how they operated on their first...