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I personally feel fine getting the ball rolling on picking a fic or at least discussing a way to pick. Maybe we could aim to start in feb?

Chapter 1: The Perfect Plan for the Perfect Team! Ruined by a Zubat? Chapter 2: A Shocking Encounter! New Friend? Chapter 3: Crushing Defeats and Hard Lessons! Zubat Forgives Koa!

I tried

This is semi related but it's funny you mention writing a thread about reviewing critiquing because that may or may not be something I'm working on...👀 I do want to say I really liked the topics and bonus stuff, I thought those were very good.

I personally feel like for an average fic though, 250 is a good baseline. It worked well for me and I think has a balance between length and content

I agree with dragonfree. 250 is not much but I do think scaling review length to chapter size is fair. To be honest, I'd feel very annoyed if I wrote 8k words but only got a fifty word review so I think I'd expect a proportional length review? In the sense thay if someone is taking time to...

I have uncovered the truth about @Chibi Pika 's LC. Jade's mom. Her true identity. Ever since I started reading LC I wondered... why does Jade not think about her mom much? And then when that incident at Viridian occurs. And Guess who's there??? Ho-Oh. Coincidence? I think not! Ridiculous...

SQUEEZE https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/different-eyes.323/post-20015 397 words, +1 theme!!! DIferent EYES WOOO

HHAHH I CAN DO THIS CHAPTER 2. This will be somewhat brief but I'll probably leave more thoughts another time. First up, chapter 2 is great. I can see a lot of the pacing and structure improvements you made. I think they're excellent. This version of the story is much clearer and the revisions...

Reviewed 26-31 of LC!! 1195 words, +1 theme https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-20006

Well, time to give a broad review of Book 1. Especially chapters 26-31 Not gonna lie, it was a crazy ride. There were some plot choices you know I had some doubts I really liked this line. I think it sums up a lot of feelings throughout the whole of everything that happened. Jade is trying...

Reviewed legends legacy! Was very fun, highly enjoyed. https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/legends-legacy-a-pokemon-mystery-dungeon-adventure.563/post-19846 I would love a review on either Home is Where the Hoenn is Or (preferably) Legendary Adventures

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/legends-legacy-a-pokemon-mystery-dungeon-adventure.563/post-19846 Reviewed legends legacy chap 1 for 597 words +1 theme

Had my eye on this story for a bit, finally for around to a review! I'm typing on my phone, so apologies for any typos. First off, this was a very fun chapter! The beginning was a very simple yet engaging start. This new team is looking for a home, but the real estate industry is a hassle. I...

Reviewed... 8-14... of OSAS... phew. 2919 words... https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-19741

Alright time to BEEG review and catch up for fun. I'm not huge on grammar nitpicks, so when a story is solid in that department, I prefer to focus on themes, prose and plot beats. My big review here will cover everything from 8-14, and give some commentary, broad strokes, and reactionary stuff...

Reviewed 1 chap of WSBS, https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-19702 327 words, +1 theme?

Alright, its time to give thoughts on chapter 1, hooray! First, loved the opening big with Castform and weird weather. I won't go into line by lines much this time, since I didn't see any glaring errors and/or they were already touched on. First up, our MC, Odette! I was very intrigued by her...

Nearly forgot the best bit!

Reviewed chaps 4-7 of Of Sand and Bacon, 1713 words + 1 for theme https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-19358