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i spent too long on this help Q: So what's Hunter, Haunted about? Hunter, Haunted is a psychological profile of a young man who has rejected the norms and morality of human society due to his perceived inability to abide by them. Instead, he has turned to an ancient god and his dangerous...

After an unexpectedly long time, I'm back for the second chapter. Here are my thoughts, first for some quotes: I think a comma or dash (since it's interrupted) after "human" would be good to more clearly transition between thought and narration. This kind of reads as just one task? The...

I've been sitting on a lot of material for a longer time now, so I'm deciding to finally post what I have as the second part. I don't know if this will make the third part smaller than the others, but I think getting the boot in my butt to keep writing more is more important than perfect chapter...

Okay, now we are finally done for really reals - here is the epilogue. Same ratings as always. Hope you enjoy. --- EPILOGUE --- It's been about a week since my freakout. I haven't spoken to Him since. Fonz I've only had brief conversations with, and few have mentioned Him. How is He doing...

Hello! I'm here because of Review Roulette. I was initially planning to read both the prologue and the first chapter, but the day turned out hectic and the prologue turned out to be longer than expected. So I notice that the classic PMD introduction is quite short. I think this is a good call...

Thanks for the reply! I can get how this can be confusing, but "feral" is code for "non-sapient" rather than meaning wild. These would be domesticated "feral" mareep, but I wasn't sure if just saying "domesticated mareep" and "domesticated feral" seemed like a mouthful. Well, Sisi couldn't...

haha whoops i guess i forgot to update last week?? thats what uni does to you oh well shouldnt matter now, this is the last part anyway thanks for the replies, and i hope you enjoy the finale. --- Part Four --- “Are we even getting anywhere?” groans Catai, jogging a few body-lengths behind...

Here it is, finally, after two years: the finale of Seiren. Two years, that's how long ago the original version's penultimate chapter was posted, and it never received its conclusion - until now! I need to say, however, that this isn't really the end, as I'm intending to still write a short...

this schedule is really slipping lol Here's Part 3. Enjoy. --- Part Three --- It’s not fair. Sisi curls into a ball, sinking further into her mattress filled with feral mareep wool. More tears run down her cheeks. Why doesn’t Mommy understand? Pletora isn’t the Leggy Snake. She’s super...

Seiren: You'd Think I'd Have Some Political Reason to Destroy This Pop Star's Career But I Just Want My Son to Hug Me Again Hunter, Haunted: I'm Trying To Take A Break From Killing But This Damn Ghost Is Making It Very Hard Vivarium: How Dare You Put Me in Gay Baby Jail HIM/Whelp: This Hot Guy...

Hands of Creation by @Namohysip : Charmander goes to great lengths to prove he's a big boy, including trying weed. The universe is quick to punish him.

Hello everyone! I'm back again with another PMD-esque story, this time a spinoff to the second multiparter PMD fic I've done, Dragony. Knowledge of Dragony is not necessary for reading this story, however, as this only shares the setting and stars some minor characters from it. This also doesn't...

Thank you for the read and reply! I'll try to add those line edits in when I'm not horribly busy. Anyway, here's the second part. Forgot it yesterday because, well, busy. Enjoy. --- Part Two --- “Are we there yet?” Yes, we are, thinks Pletora, but I’ll be damned if I give you the...

Thank you for the read and review! The edit suggestions have been noted, but don't know when I'll get around to implementing those with everything being so hectic right now ;p Work and school, respectively. These mon are indeed sapient and so can function close to how humans do, though the...

The mon in my stories are a bit of a cheat since my human-universe has mon able to gain sapience like humans provided they're raised with the right stimuli during a crucial development period in their youth. If they don't receive enough of the right stimuli in this stage, they're basically at...

Hello again, all! I have another story to post. So back in 2018, I had gotten inspired by several PMD (more or less, we know the deal with that term) works, either through reading them or just hearing about them and the creative stories they tell, and I wanted to try my own hand at one. The...

Oh, I've certainly noticed some themes in my works, with two being specifically strong: 1. An oddball protagonist. Almost every work I've written has had this: a lead character who doesn't fit in and is poorly socially adjusted due to something being strange or otherwise different about them...

Tough call between these, honestly, they're all good prompts. I'd really like to write myself, so I guess that's me out of the judging pool, but I hope to read others' entries anyway!

i'll claim the review by the walrein!

huge thanks for all these reviews! the review event really did good for this story, and i'm super glad. i hope all you new readers are enjoying this story, too. now for the long awaited penultimate chapter. at least until further notice. while this chapter is a longer one, the last scene has...