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Glad to see so many responses! And they really prove my theory - names can have many kinds of origins. I think it's reasonable for me to post about my stories now. Let's start with Seiren, as that's my main story over here and it's also the one I consider the first "serious" fic I've written...

Reviewed Chapter 5 of Heroes After All. Base: +3 Weekly: +4 ~1000 Words: +3 Total: 39 + 10 = 49

Hey there! I figured I may as well check out another chapter in the spirit of the review game. Chapter 5 aww hell yea stared* There's potential for getting much more out of this scenario here that I feel like is missed - the corpse is identified right away, when a more gripping approach...

Reviewed the prologue to Soul Dissonance. Base: +3 Weekly: nope ~350 Words: +2 Total: 34 + 5 = 39

Review pile? Allow me to join. *angry sunflora noises* *could not, as it's past tense oh gosh oh frick it's black sabbath oh no It is odd that it would not know this basic rule of life but would know what a plant is and that they're alive despite having no souls, when it seems that the...

Reviewed Chapter 2 of Places We Call Home! Base: +3 Weekly: +4 (I've reviewed the first chapter of PCWH elsewhere) ~300 Words: +2 Total: 25 + 9 = 34

Hey there! I sure took my time getting to the second chapter, didn't I. Well, let's go. Hearing/senses are mentioned being strained in three successive paragraphs, which makes it stick out as repetitive. Extra word here? The mon is named spinarak, but I'm unsure if this is actually...

I will... try. Now my turn (and there no minors so you can go crazy owo):

Reviewed Chapter 12 of The Curious and The Shiny. Base: +3 100+ Words: +2 Total: 20 + 5 = 25

Chapter 12 This reads oddly, shouldn't it be "don't"? Not sure what "its" refers to here, but "their" I would get. trumks hehe good pun incredible realism: my dad says this verbatim every time i vent about my drawing ability this is basically the concept of pokemon ranger if you...

A brief question on how to name a story on another forum made me curious about this. Story names have a lot of variety between them - some are long, some are short, some are literal, some are cryptic. But where did your stories get theirs? How did you choose them? Did they use to be called...

Reviewed the first chapter of Run Boy Run. Base: +3 Weekly: +4 ~900 Words: +3 Total: 10 + 10 = 20

Hey! I've read the first chapter, and here are my thoughts. This is a pretty snappy start to what seems to be a traditional fantasy journey story, with a teenage protagonist having their family killed by forces of the antagonist and awakening to their hidden magical powers through peril. I...

Reviewed Gifts of the Mountain! Base: +3 Weekly: +4 ~1000 Words: +3 Total: 10 @zion of arcadia Weekly is actually worth 4 points, pointing it out so it isn't missed~

I decided to check this story out as I was intrigued by the post you'd made on improving prose and wanted to see what kind of writer you were. I'm glad I did, as it turned out to be a rather unique experience. Like Neb said, there's a strong classic fantasy feel to it which peaks with the riddle...

ho ho ho merry seiren new chapter rated teen with language, violence and some misc mature topics briefly mentioned nnjoy --- CHAPTER NINE And Then Everybody Clapped --- I’m gonna do it. I’m gonna do it. I’ll kill him. I’ll kill the ninetales. No one is around. They weren't planning on...

oh wow i'd completely forgotten about charahub, looks like the world did too... For my absolutely most fleshed out character, that being Red, I have a GDoc that started off as filling in some character information template but got the important addition of a timeline for the stories and...

ow oh and digitigrades walk on the balls of their feet by default grumble grumble Missing period? because two legs good no legs worthless C U R I O U T E red akai would like to know your location Now that I mention it, though? I feel like the "nevermind" should be at the start of...

i mentioned on discord that i'd be willing to volunteer for prizes, but for clarity i'll mention it here too. i could do a few character sketches, maybe even banners depending on how my uni starts off. and heck yeah let's do this thing i really need to kick my ass into reading things!!

aaaaaaaaAAAAAAAA freakin finally. After 6k words worth of outtakes and redos and then the 12k that made it in, Whelp is finally done. That's not to say it's in a rigid, finished state - I definitely want feedback and will try to implement critique if I can. Just... know that it might take a...