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hue This makes sense, but then also kind of doesn't. How is an individual referred to when they're not present? In terms of the family's father, they refer to him by his title of father, but what about siblings? Is it then by their age in comparison to the others, like Curio introduced his...

sdfgsdhgjhgk hey yall i got another chapter for you here and things happeeeeennnn in it ok cool rated teen like always enjoy --- CHAPTER EIGHT Pallet Patrol --- I swear, people are too responsible nowadays. It took a good two freezing hours to finally get someone to fetch me a bottle of fine...

shine must be high in many ways As innnn cooking oil or dinosaur juice? *He? *y'know damn tony chill af Remove comma, I think. oh no oh god she killed people to dissect them and see what makes them tick* *This is the second joke I have made about Curio being a serial killer so I...

hooray! i am very late with this! reason is uni as always. anyway, rating is still teen this time, but unlike before, there are also some... seckshual jokes... 😳 well, enjoy --- CHAPTER SEVEN Digital Dummy --- “Honey, wake up!” I jolt awake from the shout, heartbeat kicked to superspeed in...

you fools thats how theyre gonna Rise Up!! Seems like this is the first mention of this. Pokémon therapy, huh. I wonder what that goodra needs it for. i do wonder now, do goomy swim like jellyfish You're gonna want just one or the other, only or just. missing space Shine was pretty...

Hey, I'm back for Chapter 4, picking up where I left off. I also read the first Bonus Chapter, but I don't remember much of MMM and in general figured that critique of it probably isn't useful. throw some dice to determine whether i make a jojo reference or a charlie brown reference I...

Thank you very much for the read and reply! I didn't even know about stoicism before this, haha. What I was going for is tied to emotional detachment, though, as I'm basically attempting to write a sociopath. It's not really 1:1, though, as there's that whole Twitch business complicating it...

I actually didn't get into Pokémon fanfic or really any fanfic until a few years ago. I think I read a stray one or two, but I don't really remember them having much impact. I followed more comics if anything, and even then not many. (However! I did follow Black Adventures, and it's probably the...

new chapter, get your new chapter here, only zero dollars. rated teen enjoy pls like comment and subscribe --- CHAPTER SIX I Celadon't Want to Be Here --- “Man, it feels so good to drink without having to show a license or ask some guy on the street to buy me some…” Shirlee sighs. Arktos...

uni continues to kick me booty but here we are with chapter 5. wanted to add a scene and trudged through three quarters of it until i realized it just didnt fit into the story properly and had to trash it. sad rated teen as always enjoy --- CHAPTER FIVE Fine Whining --- The lobby of Celadon...

Eevee Keith (pre-Dragony) It sure felt like a dream. If the nice gengar hadn’t told him that it wasn’t, Keith wouldn’t have known the difference. Even now, he wasn’t sure. Tall black buildings, ethereal cyan lights, lush grass. It was definitely an improvement over the slushy, muddy Pelton...

The thing I run into the most problems with in my TPP fics is absolutely the fact that I made pokémon way too intelligent. You can argue that this is somewhat of a problem for all pokéfic writers that base their works on the human world, as making the creatures mentally above animal level (or...

aaaaaa chapter fooour it's late because uni is crazy aaaaaaa chapter name is subject to change because i am reaching so hard aaaaa still rated teen enjoy aaaaaa --- CHAPTER FOUR Video Kills The Radio Star --- I've always known it gets quiet in this house, but only now, after listening to...

Crap, you're totally right. Forgot about the Voices at that part. I'll edit it to be consistent. Oh, that's true. I'll make a mental note to show better in Seiren that Helix does know Red and aspects of His previous life Looking more at the sentence, it does look weird, will fix, as well as...

EDIT 2: A new version of HIM has been posted. Follow this link to it. EDIT: Whelp has been finished and posted! Follow this link to it. So at the time of me writing this, I'm kind of stuck in writing this oneshot called Whelp. It's sort of a sequel to another oneshot named HIM, which is about...

Oh, that's a good point. Red's logic does give him reasons not to kill Shirlee there and then, but I kind of glossed over them before or forgot to include them completely. The first point is that Shirlee is very super famous (super famous, super famous, bitch) and that killing her would lead to...

Here I am, one week later, not a moment too late or soon. Chapter Three, here we go - although I suppose I should first mention that there's alcohol use in this fic, since I forgot to add that to the content warnings in the AN. Will do it now, though. Hope nothing got ruined, oops. Anyway...

Hi there! Been meaning to check this out for a while, but never got around to it until now. Here are my thoughts on the prologue and first chapter. I feel like this paragraph is rendered a bit redundant by the ones that follow, as Haru does end up doing pretty much what's described here and so...

Oh, I didn't expect that kind of response. The usage of italics is meant to represent him mentally replaying His words, as the narration at that point is in a kind of fast-forward-recap mode, hence the past tense in the otherwise present narration. Looking at it with a link to the rubber duck...