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An important plot point in Seiren has the inkay pop star Shirlee be worried about signs of her evolution approaching. She plans to get everstone surgery to fix the situation. It's a minor spoiler, I suppose, so don't open the excerpt below if you don't want further information.

Hey! Here for Catnip, a bit late, sorry about that. Here are my thoughts on Chapter 1. My absolute first thought is Bet-Boy from TPP lore, but then I remember there are like 200 people on Earth tops that even know what that is. I will have to be honest, I would have considered just regular...

oh well why not Name: Shirlee (stage name), Shirley Tanner (real name) Gender: Female Species: Inkay Brief description: Singer-songwriter pop sensation. Bubbly on her good side, but not afraid to snap back if mistreated. Can be somewhat of a diva. Does believe in compassion, progressiveness and...

okay WHOA am I late with this but better late than never. Chapter 5 and 6 thoughts incoming. Chapter 5 I really think this paragraph and a few others could do with some splitting. You get these twists and turns, but they feel like they lose their suddenness and rhythm when bunched together in...

Hey! Here for Catnip, looking at the first chapter. You're gonna want to separate the names / addressing terms from the rest of the sentence by commas. Mind the "Let's eat, Grandma / Let's eat Grandma" example. For the latter, though, you'd end up with a lot of them, so something like may...

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Thank you! I've been proud of it myself, unusually so for a long-time perfectionist. This is a valid point, and one I did notice myself. I think I may have been too afraid to "gloss over" some things after writing intimate first-person prose for so long. I want the peril to seem real, but not...

holy crap i forgot to post these here lol espeon & match: chatot & seesaw: both happen to be tpp references. i just cant quit my roots

hello all! it's time for a new pokécentric story from yours truly. i've been working on it for a while, not helped by the abnormally bad mental stuff i've been going through lately, but finally the first part is written and ready to be posted. i don't know how many parts there will be, but...

yep, enough time has definitely passed by now. was totally waiting and didn't just forget again nope. anyway here's the conclusion to our gripping story. rated teen yet again. enjoy. --- Part Five --- Blazing white energy surfaced on Keith's skin. It tingled, even seared, but Keith didn't...

i dont even care if no one gets the reference. (i might care.)

jess might be a little upset

Thank you both for your reviews! It's seriously amazing to have active readers when this fic used to be something I practically had to coerce people into reading for so long, lol. Hmm... so what I wanted to do with this was to make Red's train of thought feel as realistic as it would in this...

Wow. This was honestly such a beautiful, breathtaking read that it's been tough for me to find the words for commentary. But I'll try! I really thought the narrative here was wonderfully crafted. The first scene sets up a situation completely untrue, but as it's our first exposure to Alu, we...

it's been over a month since the last chapter, it seems. whoops! either way, chapter 3 is finally revised and ready to be read. an entire scene was removed and yet this is still only about 100 words shorter than the previous version. double whoops! either way, rating is teen for this one for the...

late response to ho-oh & dad

is this image real? 99% cant get this right

Okay! I've read chapters 3-6, but I think I'll go over 3-4 in this one and write my thoughts on 5-6 as well as the story as a whole so far in another post later. Chapter 3 I was confused on where this whole scene took place. I would imagine that Chris would be brought to the hospital after...

ua wanted me to post my brisa gift for them here so here it is

"it'll just be a sketch" - canis 'clown emoji' aries