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Hey there! I've been seeing you and other talk a lot about this story, and my curiosity's finally gotten the better of me. I was originally just going to read and review the first chapter, but after how short it was, I went for the second, too. And I do also know how annoying it can be to...

I was thinking of the latter and wasn't sure what noun to use. Exactly why in a parallel universe he'd be crazy into theater. I wasn't actually thinking of moves at all, but rather some real life birds' tendency for mimicry strengthened by this universe's mon being quick to learn human...

Hey there! I was excited to get this fic assigned as I'd been wondering what the edits you'd talked about were like. I was initially worried that it wouldn't be that different and I wouldn't have enough to say, but turns out reading something a year or two after the first time is a pretty fresh...

big review!! i am quagging!! it's also a fantastic excuse to describe one's own take on a mon's appearance. red does know a bunch of pokemon due to watching nature documentaries, but he's no expert on ghosts so a rare, mainly unovan species would not be something he'd know. yep, that was the...

March 31st Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Friday, April 2nd 23:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

Oh, yeah, this is definitely one of the many ball-and-chains this fic has on its leg. The version of the Pokémon universe used here is better described in the fic that comes before this chronologically, Seiren, but I've really tried to avoid having that be required reading since its story is...

Hey there! Here's your Catnip review. So I decided to read the first chapter as I usually do, but I have to say that I was slightly confused by the index. I wasn't sure if I should count 1A and 1B as separate chapters or one split into two until I checked the individual posts (and saw the...

Therapist, certainly, but Dr Marsh is a psychiatrist who's more interested in diagnoses than consoling patients. Granted, her behavior is still somewhat unprofessional, but I'd like to think Dr Marsh isn't like that with everyone and knows more than she lets on in this case. Furthermore, she was...

Second chapter! It really had been a while since I read the first, so thanks again for the cliff notes, much appreciated. While I did also skim it again for a refresher, I didn't go line by line, so apologies if I complain about something here that was settled in the previous chapter. I looked...

two months this time, huh. well, i shift part of the blame on the oneshot contest. and most of it on my mental health that seems to have had the stability of a house of cards lately. anyway! first chapter of act 2. we have reached the fun zone. and another milestone: in this chapter we meet...

March 10 Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Friday, March 12th 23:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

As fate keeps pushing us together, I have read the first chapter for Catnip and these are my thoughts. We definitely move away from the tone of the prologue in this chapter, getting something much slower and grass-roots than evil lairs and monster kills. I'm a fan of that as it lets us take in...

February 19 Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Sunday, February 21st, 23:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens...

*grabs your mask and pulls it off, revealing dr sigmund freud* aHA it was YOU all along Oh you know :) Actually, it isn't (unless I reread it wrong 10 times as I just made sure): the greater omentum is a curtain-like anatomical structure that hangs in front of the intestines, covering them...

Hello there! I've read Shelly Episode 1, which I think you meant for me to look at (you didn't give me a number). As this is not the first chapter in the thread, I will probably be missing some context that chronological readers would have, but I'll trust your confidence in submitting this and...

Something I totally planned because I am a genius yes. Well, the reason I stay away from italics for thoughts in this story for the most part is that the line is so blurred. Drawing it in one place would make me have to draw it everywhere else and I'd end up debating myself forever on whether...

I went back and that does sort of happen in Whelp, though Red's since managed to get over the thought of killing another intelligent being and doesn't need to mask it for himself anymore. *pops champagne because hunter haunted has now been called kafkaesque* super meat boy: the untold story...

There it is, the fic that gave me the idea to start learning Spanish! And two years later... I've quit it in favor of Russian. How embarrassing. Anyway - it's definitely as you said, this first chapter is certainly not the same as the one I read all that time ago. I didn't get far enough with...

I wanna sign up as a judge this time! I need to make myself better at reading, and I'm likely to read many of the entries anyway.