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Reviewed the first chapter of Legendary Adventures. I'd like a review on my favorite child, my beloved son, Hunter, Haunted. However, I understand that it is quite graphic and contains things some people would like to steer clear of, so I'm also putting up Seiren as an option. I'd really prefer...

Hey there, read Chapter 1 for the Review Tag. Here are my thoughts. So, first off, I have to be open about my bias. I've never been interested in journey fics, so I'm clearly not in the main demo for this fic, but I'll try to look past it and be as fair as I can with my review anyway. The...

it's only been one month this time! we're slowly getting better. anyway, here we go with the last chapter of the first roughly defined act. very excited, not just because of the content of this chapter, but because we'll be getting to the real good stuff after this... the revision ended up...

Responding to your reply - sorry that it took so long. I'm glad to hear I could be helpful! And in general, I'm happy that you took the review well. In hindsight, I feel like I was harsher than necessary and jumped to some pessimistic conclusions when I should've given more benefit of the...

Heyyyyyy I'm here for chapter 1 and it's not late at allll I swear. This entire scene is an oof and then finding out it's happened multiple times just elevates that into a mega oof. me when im in the zone drawing and my dad tells me its time for bed >:( Establishing the feathers as...

Thank you all from reading and reviewing! Line edit suggestions have been taken into consideration, but again, it will take some time to get to them. I rejected this idea primarily on the principle that having to give up your homeland because of unjust persecution, but there are also those...

Reviewed the prologue of Black Swan, White Swan with all too many words. +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 25

Decided to try this out and read the prologue. Here are my thoughts. I will have to be direct from the beginning and say I did not really enjoy this. I will, however, try my best to be informative about why rather than discouraging. The beginning half of this prologue feels much like something...

Heyy! Part three out of three is here, and it only took a month this time. Big thanks to @NebulaDreams again for betareading parts 2 and 3, and big thanks to all readers and reviewers as well. If there wasn't such a fantastic reception, this probably would have taken even longer to finish...

They do! This wheelchair setup is only there to make them able to move on land when they need to report to the land-based king or something else of the like. They're pejoratives used by dragons to refer to mammals ("hairies") and birds ("dusters", from "feather dusters"). I guess you're...

Reviewed chapter 19 of TCATS! +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 23

Chapter 19 pokemon language confirmed tonal and agglutinative. Anyway, this does still make me wonder the same thing as I did way back, which is how the Pokémon all seem to share a common language. Especially when the description here seems to talk specifically about how Lucario communicate...

Reviewed Chapters 1 and 2 of PMD: Refracted Differences. +2 chapters +1 theme total change: +3 blitz total: 19 I've also finished another art prize, which should bring my total to 19 + 2 = 21. Passing 20, I'd like another spin of the wheel, please!

Hey there! Read chapters 1 and 2. Here are my thoughts. It seems the first chapter is marked with a numeral but the second with a word, which I'm guessing you didn't intend for. Stray capital. I also think this could use a colon instead of a comma (It was of a Pokemon I did not recognize: a...

I forget how much it was established in the story, but eevee evolve by interacting with stones, and I think Mila mentions a "pilgrimage" to a known location with a large Water Stone. I would say it's at least 2m x 2m x 2m and that lapras are just beeg and strong. I thought of it as basically a...

Thank you both for the reviews! Very glad you enjoyed it and found it funny. I love writing comedy, and I love even more when I hear it lands. Well, this is a bit awkward. You see, I happen to have a Scottish friend who already writes all his chat messages in Scots, and I got him to write out...

oh my freakin goodness i actually read and reviewed something within a day wow A Very Rough Day +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 16

Scouring through the forum for Blitz Week 3 challenge eligible fics like the little rat I am, I came across this and took the dive. I'm happy I did! This is a nice oneshot - even with that very, very hatable Mawile - about how much a close friend can really turn a day around. This feels like a...

Been slower this week, but still truckin' along. TCATS - Chapter 18 +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 14

I'm back again! And about time, too. I'd been considering moving over to FFnet to continue for a while, but never found the proper moment, but now that the story's continuing here, I've got no excuse. Chapter 18, here I go. GeL security footage of Curio being bathed GeL security footage of...