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Hey there! Catnip finally kicked my ass into catching up with Chapter 2, and I'm glad it did. Here are my thoughts. I'm gonna go over my quotes first to get the grammar and other prose stuff out of the way: Missing capitalization in "the". It might also read more clearly if the clerk's...

EDIT (2022-01-02): The story has now received light edits and is no longer the same as it was when it was originally submitted into the competition. If need comes to look at the original version, it is still up on Google Docs here. Results out means it's time to break the stories out of judging...

Hey there! It's been a while, but I've come back for Chapter 3. Here are my thoughts. damn, hollywood got there before they did This was interesting to me. I don't remember if it was specifically said in the game(s) that Orre doesn't have wild Pokémon, but if not, that's a cool way of...

@GrayGriffin Thanks for the review! The prologue I can definitely confirm is not meant to be comedic, so no surprises there - it's meant to establish the strong attachment Red has with Helix, which is really the driving force of the plot. The first chapter, though, is written with the same tone...

Hey there, here for Catnip. I read all three drabbles, but felt that I could only really say anything about the first one. It is somewhat unfortunate that chance assigned me in particular to this drabble collection as I personally happen to really dislike Lusamine, but I'm gonna try my best not...

Hey all! This is a drabble I wrote for a prompt in the Second Anniversary Mini Prompt Bingo. Obviously I didn't finish it in time, but I liked the idea and wanted to finish what I started. The prompt in question was (sort of spoilers) . Surprisingly for me, there are no content warnings to...

Reviewed chapters 1-5. I'd like a review for Hunter, Haunted. Be wary of the content warnings if you go for it. If you don't want to read something rated mature, I'm also fine with a review for Seiren.

Hey there. I've read chapters 1-5 for the review tag, and here are my thoughts. My first point actually has to do with the chapters themselves. They're certainly the shortest I've come across, and while I'm open-minded when it comes to challenging convention, I don't think it really works in...

May 18th Game - Special Bingo Drabble Round! tiny stories, tiny cat! That's right, this round is special! It is specifically for drabbles created for the second anniversary bingo event. If you've written and posted a drabble for the bingo event, come on and join! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups...

Hey there! I read Chapter 2 for Catnip and here are my thoughts. Gengar's mouth takes up so much of its belly that I'm actually not sure if this is his regular mouth described metaphorically or an additional stomach-mouth. It's been a while since I read the first chapter so I don't recall if...

May 10th Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, May 13th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once...

First bingo prompt, A Perfect Apple!, completed! (Don't expect the other ones to be this nice... I spent about 4 hours too many on this.)

Hey there, I've read Tax Time for Bruxish for Catnip and here's my review. First off some commentary: *opens up bulbapedia* man its always the lions that rule the governments in these animal stories... we should look into that howwww literally eats ass as a profession The wording makes it...

Made sure in the Discord this was okay to log, so here's my review for Reaching for My Future, chapter one.

Could I get a PMD-themed bingo card that excludes canon characters and locations from the series? (I remember the stories very poorly)

Hello there. I've read Chapter One. I originally started it with the Review Tag in mind until someone beat me to it, but I was far enough to decide to finish and review anyway. Unfortunately, I have a lot to critique. I like the premise and certain ideas here, but the prose and the characters...

Cannibalism is mentioned in the content warnings, I think you happened to miss it: "disturbing/disgusting concepts and imagery such as intense body horror, cultism, torture and cannibalism, as well as depictions of vomiting" That is the origin of it, actually. This is based on Twitch Plays...

Hello there, I'm here for Catnip, reviewing Chapter 1. Now, I have to start by saying that I have not watched Young Frankenstein, but because I was curious, I consulted a friend that had for certain scenes to get a better idea of how much was from the movie and how much was original. I made some...

wow, this took pretty accurately one month. if i keep this up i might even have some kind of a schedule. anyway! it's time for the chapter i've been memeing so much about, chapter 7. i wonder what gives it its reputation? you'll have to read to find out. rated mature for gore, body horror...

April 13th Game! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, April 15th 23:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens...