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Review line by line, Of auctions aka chapter 7 Ah, the joy of class dispute, fun times. I’m thinking Anabel would have loved this… there was an artist, who got forwarded 30k for artistic fees, he sent along with a blank piece of canvas as “art” and titled it “Take the money and run”. The worst...

A bit early but think of this as a birthday gift... Line by line reaction Posted only here because ao3 really doesn't like me. I’ll admit walking in I am a bit behind and haven’t played the game yet. But I trust your narrative skills to guild me though, we’ll see how it goes. To quote Ron...

Ah you've acquired a perseverance, kudos.

would it also work if the character isn't aware of their status as being on an evil team? I was planning on swinging a tale through the eyes of a trainer's mon and the 'mon has no clue. It's not denial, it's 100 percent oblivious/carefree character type (like think Naive nature with bells and...

Summary: Set pre-Civil War, where “underoos” is barely starting out… learning how to swing and getting his toes wet, the multiverse, and even his Stark apprenticeship are on the distant horizon. So for now, it’s a tale about a boy, a purloined cloak, and an endless argument about tide versus...

I've two options. Looking for either a tone check for the introduction of an MCU AU fic, If you give a Cloak a cookie as of now "Cloak" is G tipped to go up to teen in time. And since throwing anyone at Roost is evil incarnate much less that late in the game chapter, I've changed my other...

150 I think I can do 150, let's see. (end word count was 900) For review tag round... whatever I guess.. a/n: also I tried to use quotes and the whole text I was writing kept... quoting itself... like the whole review, so I wound up changing fonts to show your writing versus mine. Sorry...

Well, if you tipped your head in my cardinal direction during the night I published the final chapter you would have heard the "thud thump thump" of me head-desking as realization set in... On a more serious note, it was a mix-match of "hmm I have a lot of unused notes here" and leaving the fic...

@MikaelBrigman Well, that's a default stance personally... More on topic. Though I nearly obsessively outline I wound up jumping the rails of my own plan in a long fic that I thought I was done with, the end result tabbed on a whole fifteen chapters, rehauled the ending, and wound up...

and how did you make it work? For a scene, story, or tangential character monologue? Feel free to share your example or anyone else's.

Ah but how about mist encouragement on the mist continent. A melding of aqua and magma in a mystery dungeon setting.. After all the more mist/water the bigger the continent right? Sorry my minds in an odd place today... Definitly looking forward to a (potentially) villianous snort-spore of...

well, its a sliding scale. your examples might be the farther edge of it and mine more mundane would be on the safer segment.

Bare with me as I am using my phone. . I'd spin it as... If your character or the canon character you are using in your world/tale is acting out of character, against thier established grain, then its ooc. If its a setting or timeframe variation threaded througout your tale it would fall...

it still could be used to show how far something went over the edge of acceptable, even in an OC character. After all, if the stoic fearless character from your setting is running, and screaming, it's a flag to the other characters or even the reader if the cast is oblivious, that something...

Definitly going to try to toss a one shot this year. It'll be a challenge.

So out of character aka ooc. Either from canon version, or your own characters established characteristics. How do you use it? For drama,humor, due to sleep deprivation? Heres a spot to show off any ooc moments from your tale if you'd like. Avoid it like the plauge? Feel free to share...

She sells seashells by the seashore: A ROOST prequel. An intro: AKA attempting to tab on an intro to ROOST that will be friendly to those utterly unfamiliar with MANGA canon. As long as it has the RD title the chapters within will be under construction. So expect the occasional update. I...

Have you ever read "the once and future king"? There's a very similar story told during Aurthur's childhood arch. Granted there are no curses, but the end result, humanity seemingly shackled with weakness yet being better/more prosperous for it seems to be the main takeaway. I liked your 'mon...

thanks for the nidoking guys!

Laughs I know I was waiting.