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May I have a Nidoking, please? I completed the review challenge.

hmm, goals, with my situation they're a lot lighter than I'd normally hold myself up to but here they are. Reviews 3 per month for this site, while keeping up my obligations on ao3 May The reading rookiedee, helped me meet these goals. (chapters 20-25 for 26 years) Link to the reviews/story...

Chapter 24 REVIEW Really Hana poking at his relaxation coping methods a bit low ms. Hallmark movie-a-thon… And being trapped with each other, short supplies and no real ability to get out is going to make things so much worse, like a pressure cooker, I suspect a lot I going to hit the fan at...

Chapter 23 review The introduction made me think that Leon was going to narratively lead the charge. But it swapped to Hana who is watching the last hit land. Now part of me wonders if Leon brings his team back to his present time if there might be a reversal of their petrification. But that’s...

A poor sense of math, forgetting to write out the timeline of two main protags who are in and out of each other's lives over a very long term lead to some contradictions that luckily no one but me seems to have noticed in one of my old fics (Two Paths). I wound up realizing it, and having to...

Yes and no thogh "animal" is a code word used in my stories to deal with ferals. In a few unpublished stories of mine in the PMD genre the towns live simply and live off vegetarian/vegan. For the heavy hitting carnivore mon they are reliant on the supplements garnered from dungeons and shared...

more reviews for 21 and 22 Chapter 21 How do you argue with a stanima reserve? I’ve grumbled at the green stamina wheel in BOTW as it’s given out while gliding over an encampment or other, but that’s different. Subtle Leon’s not, I wonder if he ran into poison oak or something? Oh wait...

Chapter 20 review Really poor directional sense and bad placement of self, and a perchance for climbing, I’m starting to wonder if the man’s a cat. All we’d have to do is confirm a fear of water then we can toss another one on the headcanon pile. And to commemorate the event I will see if I can...

Having met my first challenge and being an utter glutton for punishment I think I will use Rookidee as a means to have others gently nudge me towards completing my others. (Also I haven't participated yet and been meaning to, there's that) 26 years, been meaning to get at least to chapter 25...

I look forward to it!

Congrats on the progress. Better late than never right?

Hello, I'm done and wanted to share. My thoughts on Obsession, though the chapter counter is wrong (my word kept "auto-correcting" and scrambling the chapter headings among other fun things when I transferred the forum to word to do line by line) I did complete the requisite chapters 5 chapters...

Review of chapter 19 to present chapter 22 ENTRY 5 of ANIVERSITY EVENT (words 600) Hm really father and son aren’t that far apart with their creator modes. Interest modes? Anyway, it sounds like he’s trying to recreate something that Jir’ saw in the exhibit. Helen’s got a point. If she’s...

Review of 16 ENTRY 4 ANNIVERSARY EVENT (words 516) I wonder as Jir keeps chasing the city mouse lifestyle if he’s aware of the cat at the end of the tale… Or if he’d even care at this point. Hm seems as if Veronica’s dad is something of a similar cut of Jir’s dad, down to the earth and a...

Review of chapter 15 ENTRY 3 for ANNIVERSARY EVENT (300 words) Early bird much Jir’? I imagine a factory like Jir’s father’s running from dawn to dusk so that must be obscenely early. (says the nightowl) Personally, I think Helen’s trying, to connect with Jir’ a bit, she’s at least paying...

Review of chapter 14 ENTRY 2 for ANNIVERSARY EVENT. (280 words) Hm I wish you’d have given a few examples of him doting to contrast with his puppy eye pity ploy a little rather than Jir’s hear-say… but it’d probably break tone too much to dig into it too much. You can hear Jir’ just wailing...

Yeah since my writing fic i am working reviewing cover to coveratthe moment has wildly has variable chapter length definitly need to know the word limits myself...

Review of chapter 13 ENTRY 1 for the ANNIVERSARY EVENT Word count 270 (with response to your review reply) Always a pleasure to go over your work. I’ve plans to get to chapter 20 and then tackle your Arecas work… um would you be able to toss me a link via PM though? It’s easier to manage to...

Chapter 18 To quote potter it always looks cooler than it actually in person. Hana’s learning this now.. a bit shocking, but alright. I guess guess the move would be a more trainer centric eye spy and easy to handle while on foot. Though I suggest Hana make it a neon sign, a big bright one...