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hi I come bearing gifts chapter 17 line by line reaction Chapter 17 No, way wait, if hopip wins the combat we can have fresh muton with breakfast… though considering typing they might be having toasted salad. Never mind Leon, try to help out I guess. You know it’s interesting that Leon’s...

Oh gods... so many reviews to do so little time... then (dramatic music) editing. Hope to be around and about a bit more than my recent norm but we'll see how it goes.

Hi, I believe I have something of yours, enjoy. The others will come as time permits. (And welcome back to the writing scene though it's a hair belated!) (Ok a toupee belated.. sentiment still holds) Review/reactions for chapters 10, 11, 12, Chapter 10 It’s weird to hear Jir’ be excited...

Perhaps a compilation of poorly applied tropes and ideas of how to fix would be a better angle rather than bashing? While I get venting has it's place (Sue's are perhaps my least favorite aspect of fandom unless used as satire and I have a personal list that if enough lines get ticked off I...

Hii back again here are chapters 14-16 CHAPTER 14 The way the roof takes a beating I suspect something did the damage rather than nature. Having come up from a looong binge of horror/paranormal shows having something pace above the roof doing damage down and Morty’s proximity… I’m mildly...

an: ran through Grammarly and edited 2.20.2022 “Drink.” “I’m fine.” “You look one minute away from heatstroke.” She was only a little red and maybe getting sunburn, maybe. But it wasn’t that bad. She huffed at his back while he dug out his phone, face twisting to something like hostile as...

hi here for catnip. I tackled the first two chapters and did a line-by-line reaction with your requests in mind. Chapter 1 Loving how we go from “what time is it?” mentality to a “whaaaat”, it’s a nice use and springboard for an amnesiac heroes tale. So from the wake-up, we discover no man is...

Sorry about the confusion. Update the title. My bad. Yeah not r.I. banks just 'mon ones. Honestly I just use bank to pop things into my sun moon games for monotype nonnative nuzlockes. Still I know some people on the competative scene who like to do nostalgic themed stuff like at local...

Yeah not the best news. But some warning is better then no warning... Which means from what I am garnering trading ect from old to new games or just between games is going to be problematic to impossible depending on your situation. On second read seems like theyre forcibly funneling...

Hmm I like the idea of odd jobs... Maybe a washout trainer getting thier toes as something else when they realize they arent fit for a journey for REASONS and it not being the end of the world... It'd be a unexpected twist on the heros journey.... Oh wait this is one-shot land. Yeah that...

your next chapter bundle... as a bundle.. hope you like it. chapters 10-13 review line by line... Chapter 11 Considering how much curry you eat in the canon game and make with your ‘mon I’m surprised Hannah and Leon both aren’t going into withdrawal. Love how the first thing Morty hops to...

Welcome back and with another tale to boot. Nice. I'm definitely getting a "Watership" vibe off of these Nido's. The terminology reminds me of lapin, as do the concerns. Though the city's got a problem if the police are regularly employed with arcanine to deal with rampaging...

What is the cut and run series about? Being revamped. One of Professor Oak's first mentees was a trouble-making hellraiser by the name of Giovanni Sakaki. Not that anyone could concretely confirm anything... Legally. But there were enough incidents that oak was suspicious... At first blush...

Be it learning, physical, emotional, or cognitive... How do your works show, deal, or talk about disability or difference? Anything you hope to see or tried to do on this topic in your own works? See an awesome example in someone elses? This can also be a place to share and care. Helpful...

So so many... I wound up sheering through nine boxes of writing, transferring what felt viable and tossing the rest. Some highlights from the piles of doom...

Also can we submit questions for tales not our own? Wildboots 'crow and a few other have rich detail and lore centric stories and it might be fun to offer questions on those tales as well as our own... Also since I cant discord for the forseeable future may I offer my services as a reviewer if...

Chapters 8.5 Reaction Laughs that’s one way to have a dream be interrupted. A small fuzzy ferret nudging a lolly towards your face… or rather a wrapped candy. Wait, it was still in the wrapper and not say.. pulled out of the mouth and offered like say how squirrels shuffle their food about…...

Hi here to review chapter one as the neglected premiss... What do the elite trainers do when no being challenged? Sounds like fun. Ah but which elites? And what were they watching? Love how it esculates from "indoor day" to outage just like that. Really Glacia just might as well call herself...

I wonder how long that poor gene's been trapped in the loop of awake, realize, then be deleted. I like how you show the contrast of organic being to non organic. How gene' sort of remembers, has a grasp as to what functions were gone and where they would be.... But its one step removed...

Chapter 2 Feeling out a moveset RD: need to smooth out some sentences but ran through Grammarly. “That’s a sandshrew all right, you’ll have to keep him out for a few hours, show he’s tamed, that sort of thing, but the guy seems pretty placid so no problems.” Thus not-Moon’s first catch was...