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INTO LIGHT REVIEW: Hm.. Vera’s little aura and optimism seems a kinda foreshadowing.. or rather the halo effect of the light on her… Ah, so flashback dream… like how you have reality poke in the “five years” warning shot before it all goes downhill from there. I wonder I chip’s a service...

well, thanks for clarifying. I look forward to your other works.

the hunting game review Hm so we get a mon perspective, they seem to be a thing today.. well at least from the ones I’ve been reviewing… I find it amusing that ‘mon speak differing languages based off the region probably much like their trainers… and my mind immediately went to imagining the...

I'm not a fan of the shorter word count... but how about a tournament set u? Where judges do a group of say five entries and the winner of that set goes up against the other winners... I mean there is a point system so it'd be easy to implement. as for the longer timeframe and fewer contests...

I doubt I'm gunna get them all done but I am still trying to knock off that contest master list... here's the ones on the site I need to tackle and I'm going to get as many as I can... "Hunting Game" by Spiteful Murkrow 9.21.2022 "Into Light" by...

HI here for the post-contest line-by-line reaction... Hmm "memory for me"... I wonder if the POV character's going to be a psychic type or just capable of mind reading perhaps... interesting how the POV is speaking to the trainer to be, speaking of that previous time like that person's...

We got a new one... XD analysis View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dk_Q4KPBqXg&ab_channel=JaidenAnimations

Alright, I'm tackling this review as a line-by-line reaction... and let's get started. Initially, I wondered if this was literal or just an overblown fear of the dark per Alianna... well time will tell I'm sure... Per the analogies our pov character is offering, comparing scenery to bones, ect...

Line by line reaction here we go... (And please bare with me this will be a via phine review so expect typos. Misspell/grammar issues, and no direct quotes) Like how first line in we get evil overlord list entry... Well sorta. Card carrying bare minimum per the summary (formatting got...

So I found this and it feels like it fits... So it sits?

So writing on a phone bare with me as I got weird spell check on this thing... This will be a line by line reaction. I remember reading this in the pre formal release collection thingie and being surprised at it realistic harshness. Laughs. Gotta love the mon world. A Reclusive Sentient...

well, I missed that. I had initially wondered if it was the lab but Cy's reaction made me think that it might be a base or sorts.. my bad.

Update 10.6.2022 and we're up to date again.... so yay? I'll poke at this when more stories pop up but I think that was like -does math- 11/20, we'll see if the other nine land at some point. I'm hoping to toss a review off on whoever posts their contest work on this site... let's see how...

I've been waiting ages to tear into this... so let's get started... (draws out cake cutting knife) I found it initially very amusing that Mit' is using the grunts hosting a birthday party as a means to sneak off considering... everything. Also the time of publication and your own personal...

Welp that went. Kudos to our top threes and to everyone who helped with judging and running things! I've some polishing to do then a formal repost... I'll post a link here when it's up to speed.

On revives... a line-by-line reaction I’m surprised they weren’t given a concrete timeframe for how much “little” really is. Miracle seeds and garden, I’m guessing it’s a pun and am both amused and mildly confused for it… Again love the touch of mythology... I can see a PC character strolling...

Reunion capes review 1 (I'll pop the others up as different posts as time permits) I like the warmth of the explanation, you can hear the item favoritism shining through… though I have to wonder what happens if you’re reunited in a battle and they are surrounded. (I’m shamelessly imagining...

Hi, so I did a line-by-line reaction... hope you like... Ah, the dreaded internet safety convo… though seriously it’s not as common as you’d think…. And the follow-up of “and if –insert group of friends- jumped off a cliff follow up… or rather the insinuation of such… ah so the cast are mon...

Found this guy.. feels right.

I can sometimes do that though most of the time it turns into a "ung I forgot to finish this" sorta thing.... Id say the only work i can do that with is my old ff7 fanfic "the shinra files" https://archiveofourown.org/series/1133753 Velfs work aka her spirited away stories are always a good...