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Pokémon Fledglings

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Hey, Fobbie. Sorry for the mix-up with your earlier prize review; I’m here to round out the five chapters with comments on Chapter 40. Which is kind of unfortunate to read as a standalone, since it’s mostly battle and otherwise mostly brief scenes of characters coming or going. Definitely transitional fare.

I get the impression that the battle sequence is primarily here to bring together some groups of characters who haven’t interacted in a while as well as introduce a new complication that will prevent the Siglo Swellow crew from catching up with
Pleo’s group for a while. I think that works fine narratively, although from an in-universe perspective it feels a bit weird to me that the pirates are content to just rough people up a bit and then leave, instead of trying to inflict more serious damage. I think the idea may have been that they were losing and the “roughing up” thing was an attempt to save face, but I had some trouble tracking which groups were winning or losing throughout the fight, so I’m unsure.

The various scenes checking in with different factions and introducing new complications definitely bring home just how many different groups of characters there are floating around out there! It does get a bit many for me to keep track of, and I wonder if spreading them out a bit rather than having several together in a chapter like this would make them less overwhelming.

The scenes with Team Traveler were my favorite here. I like that they’re continuing to wrestle with despair and paranoia after what happened on Mengir, and it seems like hope/the loss thereof is likely to be the theme of this arc. Which is great! I think it makes sense for the characters to feel some of their youthful optimism fading at this point in the story, and I’m curious to see how they deal with it. I’m glad they at least got a bit of a break this chapter. Faith in pokemonity restored!

I imagine I’ll be back for more of this story ere long, but expect to see me over on Once a Thief first. Tis the season for some catch-up!
 

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And I have arrived for the first review of our exchange! Happy to get some points with this for the blitz too!

So, the fact that this is a prologue suggests this will not be the format for most of the fic. Bedtime stories often convey truth in the form of lore usually of a simple story or legend. I assume all of the information will be intricately tied to the plot and I'll be paying close attention.

Review word count: 1,638 words

I won't bother counting words for all reviews like this as it takes longer, but I wanted to do it here so you have another example of what to expect from my reviews. (Also the blitz gives a handy counter so why not?)

The soft plodding of footprints in the earth below... whiskers prodding into earthen walls... the scent of grass wafting in from the passage to the left. These things guided the little blue lump of spikes attempting to press forward from the depths of her family’s burrow.
Judging from the fic banner, I assume this is Nidoran who will presumably be one of the main characters. But I also read the one line teaser in the glossary post so I am already aware of the ancient guardian she will unearth. I assume it will be Lugia, but I'm really not sure at this point.

Also, I've heard that after you use "..." the sentence (or continuation of such sentence) is supposed to have a capital letter for the word immediately after the "..." I used to do what I see you are doing here with it. Maybe it's ok to do? Seeing someone like you do it makes me wonder if maybe it IS ok. For example, they would say you forgot to capitalize the "W" in "whiskers". If that is a real error and it is one you prefer to fix, just let me know. Otherwise I will assume it is intentional and is not something you intend to fix.

"Oof!"

She stumbled and fell forward, stunned for a moment, but soon regained her bearings and got up. Flattening out her ears and shaking a few small spines loose, she continued on, grumbling softly about the dumb ledge that tripped her up.
Well, at least tripping doesn't have her fall too far since she is so tiny and walks on four legs!

I wonder if tripping is something that happens on a regular basis? If so, I wonder if the walls are covered in small spines from previous instances of her tripping.

Her annoyance was quickly subsided pushed out of her mind after she caught catching a whiff of dew from the end of the tunnel,. and More importantly, she spotted a faint light indicating marking the moon outside. She’d snuck out of bed to go stargazeing, and she sure wasn’t about going to just let the a walk outside stop get the better of her.
Editing suggestions to cut down on words and help it flow better. From now on, when I have suggestions, I'll include the following instead of words: 📝

I read over stuff in the glossary (just the paragraphs outside of the spoiler tags) and it sounds like you might not always look to improve chapters based on concrit, but with this being your first chapter, I assume you would want it as strong as possible, so I'll put in as much effort as I can. I expect that the opening of a fic (especially a mega-fic like this that you have spent so much time on) ought to be extremely important.

I wonder if part of the reason she tripped was because there wasn't much light for her to see? As it stands, I am left in the dark. (pun intended) :unquag:

The small creature silently crept up the snug tunnel little-by-little.
Hmm. Why is she inching along? Is she afraid of tripping again? Is she trying to keep silent? Both?

Before long, she stepped out of its opening and onto a reed-woven mat outside that was dimly illuminated by the faint glow of moonlight. After a quick pause to stop and listen, she believed discovered her parents hadn’t heard her sneak out of bed or lose her footing. So far, so good…
📝

Four legs, two ears, and two protruding teeth at the end of her muzzle… No scratches or loose barbs from her clumsy trek up the tunnel that would give her away... From the light of the night sky above, she could verifiedy that her fur was still a light blue. Yep, she was had all the markings of a healthy, if still rather young, Nidoran.
📝

So, she inspected herself to make sure no one would suspect she snuck out. Seems like she has strict parents! Or it could just be for how young she was. I'm thinking age is the main factor here.

Around her... there was the mailbox on a wooden post next to the burrow. Throughout the sparsely wooded hillside were a few mats with accompanying posts that were spread before trees and other burrows, while other mats served as beds for sleeping Pokémon.
📝

The distant crashing of waves could be heard, intertwined with faint hooting and the gentle rustling of tree branches swaying in the wind.
This bit was great! Makes me feel like I am out there with her.

Down the hill, nearer to the coast, a small town of shacks, tents, and the like had been erected.

But the attention of the little Nidoran was trained elsewhere that night.

She reared up on her hind legs and turned her gaze skyward. Somewhere in that beautiful, glittering mess—around the moon, between the stars, and the twists and bends of the Rainbow Road were the drifting ones—little stars that moved slowly and without tails. Her mother told her that some of the Pokémon in town called them the "Travelers" and that, through some contrivance, you could tell the time of night based off of where they were.
Wow! Sounds like you added in some actual astrology here! Neat!

But most importantly, she said, if you were up at just the right moment, you could see one, perhaps peeking out from behind the moon.

"Come on, where is it?"

She looked up at the moon... and then above it. Then below it. Then, to its left. To its right. Then back to its center, at the Nidoran in the moon staring down at the world again. But still, she couldn’t find her star.

"...Maybe I heard the story wrong?"

The Nidoran pouted a bit and punted a pebble that had found its way onto the mat. She was about to return to the burrow when the thought crossed her to check the shape of the moon. Perhaps her "Traveler" was still peeking from behind it.

She started from the top, and slowly followed its contour around from the left. It was the same old moon, giving off its same old white glow. The same old Nidoran on its face was still staring down quietly on the world below. Yep, it was the same moon she had seen many a night before.

Except for the ever-so-small bump on the right of it.

"Eh?"

The Nidoran tilted her ears and focused on the bump. It seemed like an rather insignificant speck, except slightly growing, stretching a bit from the moon's face. And suddenly, the speck broke free from the moon, and it all became clear to the little creature.
📝

Such a quiet and curious moment. Something that helps the world seem large and the one gazing seem small. This tiny little moment is that from which a fic of a grand epic scale will flow forth. I like the concept of stargazing. It's very hard to do properly with light pollution. I doubt our Nidoran has that problem here, though. Still, this focus on the sky has me wonder if this fic might have a sci-fi element to it with the exploration of other planets. Most likely not and that would probably be weird for a Pokemon setting, but it's neat to speculate about.

"Wow! They really do come—"

"Going somewhere?!" a deeper voice barked.

"Eeep-"
Ah, I bet one of her parents caught her. The fact that she was so careful suggests it isn't the first time she tried to sneak out. And if her parents were aware of that, they might have been sneaking too which is why she didn't hear them! :eyes:

Before the Nidoran could turn around, she found herself lifted from the ground by the scruff of her neck. As she flailed in protest, she was brought away from the night sky and back into the inky depths of the burrow. Her captor took her effortlessly back along the route she had so carefully traced out to the surface, and unceremoniously dumped her into a straw nest shared by a handful of her fellow blue and purple spike balls.
Ah, so she has siblings, it seems.

After the Nidoran’s captor released their grip on the back of her neck, she flattened her ears and shook off some saliva. The Nidoran whirled around, coming face to face with a Nidorina wearing a white scarf with a blue whirlpool design. The larger Poison-Type stared down at her, her muzzle hardened into an unimpressed frown.

"Really, Nida, just how deaf do you think I am?" the Nidorina whispered sternly.
Nida? A nice name for a little female Nidoran. Assuming it isn't just a general name of familiarity, that is.

"But, Mami-"

"Shh!"

The Nidorina gestured to the Nidoran's siblings, all of them in the embrace of sleep, if somewhat loosely. She flicked her ears and narrowed her eyes to continue her quiet admonishment.

"It's not healthy for a young kit like you to be up into the early morning! Rest will let you grow healthy and strong."
Seeing her interact with her mother is nostalgic and warm. I hope nothing bad is going to happen to her mother... 🥺

"But I was just headed out to see the Travelers-!" Nida protested.

"Is that why you forgot this on your way out?"

Her mother held up a small scarf bearing the same design as her own. Nida shrank a bit in embarrassment. After all, she'd been constantly lectured about the importance of wearing her scarf. It allowed any Pokémon to identify who you were and where you belonged… and she had forgotten it on her way out the burrow.
Huh, like a voluntary collar. Yet another example of proof that her mother cares.

"Er… oops?"

Her mother sighed, and placed the scarf back at the base of the nest alongside a small number of others before turning back to her child.

"Sleep is a blessing, mija. Having enough of it keeps you from making foolish missteps like that."

"But how am I supposed to sleep if you don't tell me a story?" the Nidoran demanded.

"Nida," said the Nidorina, her ears and countenance not-so-subtly hinting at a desire to return to her own nest.

"Well?" Nida persisted.
Nida has displayed being a curious mon with a loving mother who she craves to hear stories from. She is also a bit adventurous. I assume she will be a main character, but I worry she is too young for whatever might be in store for her. I assume whatever that would be would involve traveling.

I also imagine her to get homesick.

She is definitely going to get that story, though!

The Nidorina sized up her daughter, and the other siblings dozing around her, and after giving an irked sigh, decided that dealing with one small and rambunctious spike ball was enough at this hour.

"Fine. Which one do you want this time? The Nidoran in the Moon? The time I fought and beat the cheating Dragonite? Another Warriors of Light tale?"
Hmm I wonder which she will choose? :eyes:

Nida perked up, buoyed by her small victory in staving off bedtime, and thought about just what she wanted to hear.

"I wanna hear the story about the humans, and why they don't live with Pokémon like us anymore," she replied.
Oh! What an intriguing bit of lore! So this is not in a Mystery Dungeon setting and is either in the far future or past when compared to cannon anime/game/manga? I am quite interested! :eyes:

"Nida, haven't you heard that story from the Day Care enough times by now?" the Nidorina asked exasperatedly.

"It's different when you tell it."
This bit made me smile. I love the use of italics here too. :mewlulz:

"I suppose I'll need to start from the beginning, then," the Nidorina sighed, as she drew her daughter's attention to a patch of dirt that she began to move a foreclaw over.

"A long, long time ago, longer than any Pokémon can remember, there lived a peculiar type of creature. One that had not been given strength in their bodies by the gods as we Pokémon have," the Nidorina said as she began to sketch some tall pylons in the dirt.

"In its place, the gods gave them the power to see and understand mysteries, questions, and enigmas... to think in ways completely different to how you or I would. To bring dreams to life, and to work wonders and impossibilities from the world around them, including from its Pokémon."
A description of humans from a Pokemon's perspective. This is surprisingly profound as it doesn't just describe the humans in the Pokemon world, but it kind of describes humans here in the real world as well. From a perspective of curiosity and wonder. :eyes:

The pylons were then crossed, forming a scene of boxlike towers, each piling up against the other.
I like how she draws as she explains. Nice dynamic to include!

"The gods saw it fit to make them mediators of Pokémon. Pokémon would join them, compensating for their lack of strength. In return, they provided food, shelter, and companionship. Just as the gods tended to the world, so too did humans tend to the Pokémon among their midst."

"And they built cities of glass and metal, and rolling boxes that could cross islands in minutes, and planted fields that stretched across the horizon, and-" Nida began to recount.

"Hey now, who's telling the story here? You or me?" the Nidorina interjected while sketching a star in the corner of her picture.
I included a story time in a chapter in my fic too. It really is a nice sort of scene to have. This bit made me smile again. :mewlulz:

"It was an order that brought out the best of both Pokémon and humans," she continued, "But for some, it simply wasn't enough."

The Nidorina moved on to crudely sketch some figures in the dirt. A few birds, others that looked vaguely like horses, and a few squiggly serpents.

"In their arrogance, some of the Pokémon that dwelt among the humans decided that the gods were superfluous, that they would know better how to manage our world. Thus they declared war on the gods to take their place. It was a pitiful chapter that would have surely been thwarted and forgotten… But everything changed when the Star of Destruction shone from above."
Huh... I wonder if those Pokemon were wild or those controlled by humans?

Star of Destruction, huh? That sounds super important. I imagine it has something to do with the final battle of the series. :eyes:

Nida watched as her mother raked her claws over the scene, their impressions coming from the star in the corner and piercing through the towers and crude figures.

"The fiends had made a wicked construct that, upon shining its light, pierced the gods and slew them. Thunder, wind, rain, land, sea, earth… all gone. So the slaughter went up to the three attendants of Arceus."
It kind of sounds like a spaceship or something. Neat! :eyes:

So... it destroyed the planet and some pokegods too? Three attendants... Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina?

"And then that's when everything went wrong?"

It was then that the Nidorina obliterated her painstakingly drawn scene with a barrage of poisonous spikes from her ruff, causing Nida to flinch for a moment.

"Well, what do you know of what happened, mija?"

"The seas rotted, destruction rained from the heavens, the land became dead and filled with ash and distortions hidden in fog... Like the Mystery Dungeon on the other side of the island. That's how the Wastes were formed," Nida dutifully recited.
OH so this is a Mystery Dungeon setting and in this setting there used to be humans! But the setting still might be the future of the mainline series... 🤔

So anywhere outside of the islands are dead, filled with ash and distortions hidden in fog and those places are like Mystery Dungeons. Collectively the places outside the islands are referred to as "the Wastes". This is kind of giving me some Land Before Time vibes.

"Well, is that the end of it?"

"It isn't?" Nida asked, tilting her head.

"Silly kit, I would hope that our home isn't in such a sad state!"

"Oh! Ahehe, right," Nida replied as she turned her attention to a new patch of dirt where her mother began to draw a triangle, and then circle that surrounded it.

"From there, Arceus saw that there were still points of light in the darkness. Places where the blight the Star of Destruction had caused had not yet touched. But in order for life to remain at all in this world, these places would need to be kept separate and protected."
I'm really wondering if they are on an entirely different planet now... Really seems like it! :eyes:

"And that's how our island was made?" Nida asked, as the Nidorina began to draw three circles around the points of the triangle.

"That's how all of the islands were made, mija. Bits and pieces of the old world that Arceus pried from its dying husk with his thousand arms and placed into this sea, the sea that we call the Cradle."
So the fic takes place on islands? This really reminds me of my own fic in this regard! 😮

I guess that means the islands are not separate planets, then?

So being in the Cradle is where things are safe. Outside of that be nightmares. ☠️

Nida watched her mother add more and more circles onto the design in the dirt. It was apparently some manner of important symbol, but that was surely a story for another time. Even so… There was something that the little Nidoran couldn't help but wonder, something she hadn't thought of the other times she'd heard this tale.
Way to add some more intrigue about parts not explained as well as making me very curious what her question is! :eyes:

"But wait, if humans acted as mediators for Pokémon… Who mediates for the Pokémon that came here?"

"At first, there was no one," the Nidorina replied, "And the Cradle was but a mass of feuding creatures of different kinds and different minds… Until our world's creator set down the Compact that governs our world to this day."

"A… Compact?" Nida yawned.

"The Pokémon that lived without humans, the 'ferals' as you've probably heard them called, were free to continue to live on as they did in the past. Growing, breeding, and dying with the course of nature without interference from outsiders. In exchange, they gave up the right to interfere in the lives of Pokémon like us. It is why the predators among the ferals do not dare to consider you or your brothers and sisters as meals… or at least not ones that don't have a death wish."
It seems like you step outside of cannon lore to explain the setting of Mystery Dungeon. Very interesting! Rather than roll with oddity, you seek to explain it. I do the same thing with my fic even if much of the absurdity must be taken at face value, initially.

Nida yawned again more audibly, which caused the Nidorina to shift and lick a paw before continuing on, keenly noticing that her child was at last beginning to grow drowsy.

"As for the humans that remained, the world was too fragile for them, and their role as mediators was given to others to carry out until the world was restored to the way it once was," the Nidorina continued as she watched Nida begin to progressively fidget less and less as sleep neared the Nidoran.
Ah, so the world is expected to be restored? I wonder how? Is it just a matter of letting nature do it's thing and maybe in 1,000 years or more it will be better or is there something specific that needs to happen for said restoration to take place? 🤔

"Others? What are you talking about?"

"Silly, it fell upon the Pokémon that lived among humans to take up their mantle. To become mediators among our different kinds.
So Pokemon who were caught took up this role.

To aid them, they were given four gifts…

"The gift of writing, to allow them to preserve what knowledge of the humans had not been lost.

"The gift of gummis, to free them from the hunger forcing their ranks against each other.

"The gift of timekeeping through the spirits of the departed gods, who remained in the night skies as the Travelers who you and I can see today.

"And lastly, the gift of pacting, through which a Pokémon could make cause with another and join their ranks. To bury past fears and resentments together and live the same life. Friend, foe, feral, it matters not. As long as there is one to ask and there is one to respond."
I love how this explains how Mystery Dungeon is essentially the future of mainline Pokemon and how things changed! Also interesting how there are apparently humans in the world. :eyes:

It kind of functions well as a reminder or a guide for those who are unfamiliar with Mystery Dungeon or who may have forgotten things about it.

The Nidorina couldn't help but sigh contently as she watched her daughter start to settle into the straw of the nest along with her siblings. It had been a long tale, but her goal of putting the little scamp to sleep was almost realized.

"What about the Pokémon that went to war with the gods? What happened to them?" Nida asked, which elicited a pause from her mother before she responded to her daughter's question.

"The ones that did not die in the chaos they caused were allowed to come in by Arceus and our ancestors as a mercy. In return, they, and their children, would forever bear the mark of the star they created, so that no one would ever forget. They became the Pokémon that the others call the 'Marked'."
Interesting. So there is a way to identify them, but for what purpose, I wonder? 🤔

"Eh?!"

Nida immediately perked up to attention while her mother regretted bringing the topic up almost as quickly. The Nidoran tensed up, on guard from her mother's words, as they reminded her these surely ill-meaning Pokémon were still around.

"Shh… Shh... Don't dwell upon it too much, they're far from capable of mounting a war against much of anything these days,” her mother said. “And even if they somehow did, they would be hard pressed against the last thing that Arceus left."

"What's that?" the Nidoran asked, starting to settle down again.

"A hope. When the Cradle was made, new gods were created and left to sleep until they were needed. Why, even here, on tiny little Tromba Island, we have a protector sleeping somewhere hidden away.
So we get the name of the island: Tromba.

So the Guardian protects against plots by the Marked. This suggests the Marked are perhaps like one of the evil teams in the mainline Pokemon games (or perhaps simply is part of the past for this setting)

And as they all wake up, the world we live in will start to be restored to the way it used to be. And eventually, the humans too will come back."
Oh! So the main quest is to wake up the guardians and doing that will prevent the Marked from completing an evil plan. I'm guessing the Marked will be plotting and the heroes will be trying to wake up the guardians.

The end of the fic would be the guardians all being awake, the Marked being defeated, and the world going back to how it was or perhaps something beyond what it originally was? But leading to that will be all the events of the fic.

"Is that why those Pokémon… the Rescue Teams. Is that why they work so hard in that Mystery Dungeon?" Nida yawned.

"Well… It's a bit more mundane than that. Our island's protector is somewhere in there, but so are a lot of the things that our town uses to get by. And it's not a safe place, so there need to be Pokémon to help protect those that go in doing imprudent things… Like little kits going out without their scarves."
Nice way to build up and explain the role the dungeon has. I feel like a lot of Mystery Dungeon fics completely gloss over this.

"Mami, I get it," Nida groaned in annoyance, as her eyelids began to fall.

"But all in all, they're there to give help to Pokémon when they need it most."

"I wish that I could be a Pokémon like that…" said Nida, as her red eyes finally drooped shut and she drifted off to sleep.
Hush, little one. You will be in time. 😘



Author's Notes:

- Mami - Spanish: "mother", "mommy"
- mija - Spanish: "my daughter", used in a sense akin to "dearie" or "sweetie"

Closing Thoughts:
This chapter does a good job of setting up the lore of the fic. All highly interesting lore that I fully expect to be relevant later in the fic. The delivery of the lore works very well as the reader learns along side Nida. I expect there might be a timeskip between here and Chapter 1, but I'm not sure. This has been a wonderful Prologue, overall and I am eager to read more. :veelove:
 

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Hey, Fobbie.

I’m guessing you wrote this since it is Fobbie’s prize review, which I suppose makes sense, but at the same time since we work on Fledglings together, it makes things a little awkward when it’s my turn to respond to the reviews and it’s not even addressed to me. ^^;

I get the impression that the battle sequence is primarily here to bring together some groups of characters who haven’t interacted in a while as well as introduce a new complication that will prevent the Siglo Swellow crew from catching up with
Pleo’s group for a while.

That actually wasn’t the main priority that we had in mind, it was more giving a followup to what happened between Crom and his friends and the Iron Fleet in the past chapter. In general, his subplot in this part of the story basically served as a vehicle to show off the outcomes for the different Pokémon that Team Traveller crossed paths with until they wound up catching up.

I think that works fine narratively, although from an in-universe perspective it feels a bit weird to me that the pirates are content to just rough people up a bit and then leave, instead of trying to inflict more serious damage. I think the idea may have been that they were losing and the “roughing up” thing was an attempt to save face, but I had some trouble tracking which groups were winning or losing throughout the fight, so I’m unsure.

Their goal was to get revenge at the Siglo Swellow by robbing them blind. Obviously that didn’t quite work out, since they gave the Iron Fleet more trouble than expected. When Hess noticed the damage done to his own ship, he decided to retreat. The whole “roughing them up is enough” is indeed an attempt to save face and a bit easier to sell to his crew than “we couldn’t steal nearly as much as we liked because we weren’t strong enough”.

It does get a bit many for me to keep track of, and I wonder if spreading them out a bit rather than having several together in a chapter like this would make them less overwhelming.

I think we’ll have to respectfully disagree there. We feel like having the different perspectives in each chapter adds a lot to showing off a big and living world while keeping tabs on the different characters as things move along instead of siloing the subplots and their progression entirely from each other.

The scenes with Team Traveler were my favorite here. I like that they’re continuing to wrestle with despair and paranoia after what happened on Mengir, and it seems like hope/the loss thereof is likely to be the theme of this arc. Which is great! I think it makes sense for the characters to feel some of their youthful optimism fading at this point in the story, and I’m curious to see how they deal with it. I’m glad they at least got a bit of a break this chapter. Faith in pokemonity restored!

Glad to hear you enjoyed it! They indeed have a bit of a break now, but we’ll see how long that will last before someone will inevitably try to capture Pleo again.

I imagine I’ll be back for more of this story ere long, but expect to see me over on Once a Thief first. Tis the season for some catch-up!

Until next time! I hope you have fun with Once a Thief though. It’s a great fic.

@Tango
And I have arrived for the first review of our exchange! Happy to get some points with this for the blitz too!

Heya, you probably weren’t expecting to hear from me, but Fobbie was glad to see you pop in so soon, and he’s looking forward to getting back to you sometime soon.

So, the fact that this is a prologue suggests this will not be the format for most of the fic. Bedtime stories often convey truth in the form of lore usually of a simple story or legend. I assume all of the information will be intricately tied to the plot and I'll be paying close attention.

I mean, there are some other points in this story where we have storytelling sequences, but otherwise, that’s accurate. The Prologue basically serves as the means to introduce the basics of the setting and its backstory to our readers.

Also, I've heard that after you use "..." the sentence (or continuation of such sentence) is supposed to have a capital letter for the word immediately after the "..." I used to do what I see you are doing here with it. Maybe it's ok to do? Seeing someone like you do it makes me wonder if maybe it IS ok. For example, they would say you forgot to capitalize the "W" in "whiskers". If that is a real error and it is one you prefer to fix, just let me know. Otherwise I will assume it is intentional and is not something you intend to fix.

In general, if the thing after the “...” is a standalone sentence, the word is capitalized, especially since ellipses can be used as a literary device to communicate pauses or trailing off. If you instead would replace the ellipses with a comma, then you don’t capitalize the word after.

Editing suggestions to cut down on words and help it flow better. From now on, when I have suggestions, I'll include the following instead of words: 📝

That actually looks noticeably smoother. Or at least for the most part. We went and patched most of those changes in.

I wonder if part of the reason she tripped was because there wasn't much light for her to see? As it stands, I am left in the dark. (pun intended) :unquag:

Yeah, that’s the idea.

Hmm. Why is she inching along? Is she afraid of tripping again? Is she trying to keep silent? Both?

It’s more that she’s trying to keep silent.


We mostly disagreed with your suggestions here, but we thought the one regarding ‘believed’ made sense. Hopefully what’s there now still looks like an improvement to what you originally read.


Ditto.

So, she inspected herself to make sure no one would suspect she snuck out. Seems like she has strict parents! Or it could just be for how young she was. I'm thinking age is the main factor here.

I mean, it helps that she’s the equivalent of like 5 in this scene and this is happening in the dead of night.


We changed this one.

This bit was great! Makes me feel like I am out there with her.

Which is a general thing that we aim to accomplish with this story. ^^

Ah, so she has siblings, it seems.

And boy does she ever. :copyka:

Seeing her interact with her mother is nostalgic and warm. I hope nothing bad is going to happen to her mother... 🥺

She’ll be fine… mostly.

Nida has displayed being a curious mon with a loving mother who she craves to hear stories from. She is also a bit adventurous. I assume she will be a main character, but I worry she is too young for whatever might be in store for her. I assume whatever that would be would involve traveling.

I also imagine her to get homesick.

She is definitely going to get that story, though!

That’s more or less accurate. As I’m sure you’ll see as you get further along into the later chapters.

Oh! What an intriguing bit of lore! So this is not in a Mystery Dungeon setting and is either in the far future or past when compared to cannon anime/game/manga? I am quite interested! :eyes:

Pretty much, yeah.

A description of humans from a Pokemon's perspective. This is surprisingly profound as it doesn't just describe the humans in the Pokemon world, but it kind of describes humans here in the real world as well. From a perspective of curiosity and wonder. :eyes:

Yeah, a lot of Pokémon in this setting basically view the humans that used to live in their world as High Men and as such look up to them and the things they were capable of.

Huh... I wonder if those Pokemon were wild or those controlled by humans?

You’ll get a very strongly implied answer to this down the road.

So... it destroyed the planet and some pokegods too? Three attendants... Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina?

That’s more or less correct.

OH so this is a Mystery Dungeon setting and in this setting there used to be humans! But the setting still might be the future of the mainline series... 🤔

So anywhere outside of the islands are dead, filled with ash and distortions hidden in fog and those places are like Mystery Dungeons. Collectively the places outside the islands are referred to as "the Wastes". This is kind of giving me some Land Before Time vibes.

Correct! Or at least as far as anyone knows, anyways.

So the fic takes place on islands? This really reminds me of my own fic in this regard! 😮

I guess that means the islands are not separate planets, then?

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It seems like you step outside of cannon lore to explain the setting of Mystery Dungeon. Very interesting! Rather than roll with oddity, you seek to explain it. I do the same thing with my fic even if much of the absurdity must be taken at face value, initially.

Yeah, there’s a general attempt at showing off “this is how Mystery Dungeon dynamics would work” in this story, or at least for the parts that we figured weren’t too “gameplay abstraction”-y or else not something that would actually happen in a living and breathing world.

Ah, so the world is expected to be restored? I wonder how? Is it just a matter of letting nature do it's thing and maybe in 1,000 years or more it will be better or is there something specific that needs to happen for said restoration to take place? 🤔

The baseline expectation is that the Legendaries will come and help smooth things over when they’re reborn.

So Pokemon who were caught took up this role.

The answer is a bit more complicated than that, but generally, yes.

Interesting. So there is a way to identify them, but for what purpose, I wonder? 🤔

That’s a story against another day and another chapter.

So the Guardian protects against plots by the Marked. This suggests the Marked are perhaps like one of the evil teams in the mainline Pokemon games (or perhaps simply is part of the past for this setting)

You’ll get an answer to this in the not-too-distant future during your readthrough.

Nice way to build up and explain the role the dungeon has. I feel like a lot of Mystery Dungeon fics completely gloss over this.

Yeah, they get a bit more billing and focus than they do in a lot of other fics in this scene. After all, it is a Pokémon Mystery Dungeon fic.

Closing Thoughts:
This chapter does a good job of setting up the lore of the fic. All highly interesting lore that I fully expect to be relevant later in the fic. The delivery of the lore works very well as the reader learns along side Nida. I expect there might be a timeskip between here and Chapter 1, but I'm not sure. This has been a wonderful Prologue, overall and I am eager to read more. :veelove:

And we’ll be eager to hear back from you more! Thanks for the review, and we’ll be looking forward to reading your next impressions sometime soon. ^^
 
Chapter 105: Desperate Times New

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
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  2. druddigon
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  4. lugia
  5. growlithe
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  7. sneasel-kate
  8. heliolisk-fobbie
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Hess hadn't seen the sun since being brought indoors, as the guards herded him and the other prisoners down corridors and flights of stairs that went ever-deeper into the earth. The surroundings grew increasingly dark beyond the occasional torch, while the barks of the guards and the groans and frightened murmurs of the other unfortunates being marched along reverberated off the walls. After the third flight down, they entered a tunnel that opened out into a large shaft with a staircase that spiraled downwards.

The Aggron felt a shove to his right and continued on, noticing irregular walls that had been cut from the rock. Off to his left, there was tall metal scaffolding in the middle of a deep shaft. He looked down to try and see where the bottom was, but while he could see the head of the procession about a level below him, the shaft just seemed to keep going and going without an apparent end. Even more strangely, while the shaft topped out not far overhead, the scaffolding in the center kept going up past it through a square-shaped hole hewn from the surrounding rock.

"Just where does that thing go-?"

Hess suddenly yelped as a sharp, searing jab caught him in his back. He stumbled and looked past his shoulder, where there was Junius behind him, brandishing his club with ghostfire dancing on its tips.

"Stop staring at the elevator. Scum like you take the stairs," the Marowak snarled. "Get moving!"

"Okay! Okay!" Hess squeaked.

The Aggron frantically stumbled forward down the steps, eager to put distance between himself and that horrid lizard. He saw Junius lingering and heard him shouting at Pokémon behind him in the procession, prompting him to let out a small sigh of relief. As Hess walked ahead, he looked past the Flareon and the Banette just ahead of him and tried to look for anyone familiar, but he didn't recognize any of the Pokémon in the procession—the only exceptions being a Drapion and a Garbodor from his crew's newer recruits. It was then that the enormity of his situation crashed down on him like a Hammer Arm.

He wasn't going to escape this time. Especially not without the lucky charm that had always been there for him in the past. Given all the stories he'd heard whispered in Orleigh about this 'Pit', these walls and stairs would likely be the last things he ever saw.

And of course, of all the Pokémon that could've been there to put him through all of this, it just had to be a Marowak… and one with that creepy ghostfire at that.

He lumbered along as every so often there'd be a tunnel branching off that had parallel, straight grooves cut into the ground—almost as if they were meant to guide carts or wagons. Or at least like they had at one point, since all of the tunnels were devoid of Pokémon working in them. Curiously, one of the tunnels that he passed didn't seem to go far from the shaft at all. When he glimpsed it, much to his surprise, the passage was blocked not even ten paces down by a set of heavy-looking doors which were made of solid steel, with armored guards headed up by a white Ninetales standing at attention in front of it.

"… Why on earth would a mineshaft need doors like that?"

He did a double take at the sight, as he couldn't make sense of why a mine of all places would need something that expensive, much less why it'd need to be guarded so heavily. He tried to stop to get a better look, when he heard an angry shout from further up the stairs that made him think twice of the idea. The Aggron hurriedly moved along, letting the steps pass by underfoot, when he heard clacking footsteps joining him from behind. He turned and saw they were coming from Trizano, who drew near but averted his gaze the entire time.

He let his attention linger on the bird for a bit. It was hard to think that this was that same Skarmory that kept butting heads with him. He just looked so defeated right now as he trudged forward, a far cry from all times they had fought each other…

"I'm sorry I couldn't get you out of this one, Hess," Trizano murmured.

Hess blinked, before turning to the Skarmory in surprise.

"Get me out of this one?" the Aggron asked. "What do you mean by-?"

Hess was cut off by the sound of a loud clunk, and looked down to see the stairs came to a stop on flat ground. Off to the right, the source of the sound was there: a Klefki pulling a key out of another set of metal doors and returning it to his ring. Hess gave a puzzled tilt of his head at the sight, when Junius brushed past him and made him jump back with a startled yelp. The Marowak let out a scoff and made his way up to the door. He raised his club, and rapped the tip of his bone against the door's surface a few times, before drawing it back and waiting. There was a pause afterwards, before a second lock clicked from the other end. The doors suddenly creaked open, and the guards began to march them through a darkened passage, with light at the end of a short tunnel.

When Hess and Trizano emerged from the tunnel's end, they found themselves in a roughly circular chamber that had been hewn from the surrounding rocks, with bricked-off tunnels that branched off in multiple directions, barring one that, after a closer look, seemed to have several cells lined with metal bars.

The only other feature was a doorway and window hewn into the rock. The door had been fashioned from solid iron, while the window was blocked by metal bars that let out a cool blue glow from a lantern somewhere deeper inside. In front of it was a small group of mostly Psychic-Types led by an Alakazam, with some that looked like they'd be more at home sitting behind a desk writing runes than handling prisoners. The Alakazam and the others regarded the prisoners with disinterested scowls, as Junius went up and began to talk with them just out of earshot.

Confused murmurs went about the prisoners as Hess and Trizano looked around worriedly. Something wasn't adding up, since there wasn't anything around them that looked like it was obviously meant for mining. Or any sign of a place they were meant to go.

A sharp thump rang out against the ground as Junius pounded his bone for attention, before he glanced over the other guards and gestured towards the prisoners.

"Get them into position and clear out anyone who's already in those holding cells," the Marowak ordered. "It's about time these 'mons made themselves useful."

Before either Hess or Trizano could say anything, the guards began to shove them and the other prisoners towards the center of the room. A few yelped as they were pushed along, including Hess, whose voice struck Trizano as sounding almost like an Aron's as Junius came over and herded him forward. Off at the tunnel with the cells inside, other guards filed down it and shouts came from deeper within.

"A-Aah! Let go of me!"

They watched as a dirty and haggard-looking Pangoro was marched out, along with other Pokémon that looked like they'd been kept down here a while. Hess was at a loss as the new batch of unfortunates joined them, as his eyes drifted back closer to the rest of the group. The Drapion and Garbodor from his crew were now visibly stiff and pallid, as the Drapion turned back towards Hess with a worried murmur.

"Captain, what are they going to do to us?"

The Aggron had no response to that, and from their surroundings, Trizano wasn't sure if he could really piece together an answer himself. The Skarmory still couldn't make heads or tails about why this room looked so empty, and scowled back at Junius, fighting against his bindings.

"Just what sort of mining operation is this?" Trizano demanded.

"A remote one," Junius answered, as his expression tightened up into a malicious sneer. "Though don't worry, you'll all get to see it in person really soon."

Junius drifted off over to the Alakazam and his colleagues off at the far end of the room. They were talking about something in hushed tones that neither Hess nor Trizano could make out. Hess noticed a few of the prisoners like an Audino visibly cringe in fright, before giving a puzzled whisper over to the Skarmory beside him.

"Wait, what on earth are they talking abou-?"

Before he could finish his words, he saw a glint as the Alakazam pulled out a green, glowing gem from a satchel. The Aggron's maw hung open from fright, as the color began to visibly flush from his face.

"That's- That's a Teleport Gem…"

Everyone else in the room all but recoiled from shock, as a few startled cries rang out. Even Trizano's eyes visibly shrank, and Hess couldn't remember the last time he'd ever seen him fazed in their past run-ins.

There was a sinking feeling in his stomach as it dawned on him what those Pokémon were likely planning for them. Teleport Gems didn't exactly just wash up on the beach since they required skilled Psychics to both make and use. He could only think of one reason why these 'mons would want to use something so valuable on a bunch of pirates like them right now:

They were going to send them all to the Wastes.

Junius tapped his bone against the ground as he made his way forward, leveling a malicious smirk at the gathered prisoners.

"I do hope you've all had a terrible time here during your brief stay on Nagrobek, but it's time for you to go," the Marowak said. "While most Pokémon would be happy to leave this island, I have a feeling you'll all feel different soon enough."

Junius walked past the group and made his way for the door back to the staircase. About halfway there, he stopped, and turned his head back with a predatory smirk.

"Give my regards to the 'mons on the other side," he said. "They'll introduce you to your new home once you're there… assuming they feel it's worth the effort. Your kind tends to not last long there."

Hess lost his nerves as a few of the pirates broke out into desperate pleas for mercy. The Aggron turned for the door and frantically tried to run, only for Junius to smash his bone deep into his gut. He pitched forward and laid on the ground when he felt his tail get yanked by an unseen force. He looked back, seeing the Alakazam's eyes aglow as the Psychic-Type dragged him toward a circle of Pokémon being herded into place. The other teleporters' eyes lit up in turn, bluish auras settling over the Pokémon in the room. Hess tried to move his limbs, but he was too weak and dazed to fight back, much less as the Alakazam in the circle reached out and hoisted him from the ground with Psychic. He watched in horror as the Psychic-type raised the Teleport Gem with a hand up in the air, as a blinding light overtook them all.

Hess' vision went white and the next thing he knew, he fell and hit the ground with a loud yelp. He lay there for a moment breathing in and out tensely as the air suddenly felt colder with a perceptible breeze, and noticed the dim lighting around them was now more evenly spread out. As the vision returned to his eyes, he woozily stumbled up and saw that there wasn't a tunnel ceiling anymore, but instead a sky filled with ash-colored haze where he couldn't see the sun beyond a muddy light.

Hess noticed there was dust coating his underbelly's scales, and all along the ground under his feet. He dusted himself off and started looking around, seeing other prisoners slowly getting up in a daze. They were in some sort of courtyard: brick buildings with catwalks adorned with Company banners on every side, built in a style unlike any warehouse he'd seen in all his years sailing the Cradle—simple, featureless, and lined with corroded metal bracing. Strangest of all, off in the background of the buildings to the right, there was a giant chimney that loomed over the entire space, alongside one that looked like it was either unfinished or broken halfway up. They looked like the ones that a 'mon would expect attached to a blacksmith's or a foundry, except much, much larger…

"Wh-Where are we?"

Hess gaped around incredulously, only to do a double take as he noticed a few of the Teleporters from earlier were walking past him. Had they seriously come with them all the way out to this place? They were in the Wastes right now, weren't they?

The Teleporters made their way towards a set of steps leading up to the building straight ahead, as a group of surly looking guards came down them. As they traded places, a Clefable from among the Teleporters stopped and talked with a few of the guards, while Hess could've sworn their attention drifted over to him.

All of a sudden, a number of the Company Pokémon in the courtyard turned towards the steps. There at their top, there was some sort of strange creature that looked like some sort of Porygon with a slim, upright body, and a tail that twitched erratically as he floated along, with a Dragapult that followed close behind. As they neared, Hess noticed that the body of the Porygon-looking Pokémon was more rounded than that of a normal Porygon, and his head was disembodied. It took a little bit for Hess to make it out, but there was a Third-Rank Company scarf that had been tied into an armband on his right arm—not that Hess could really see a way for the Pokémon to wear it normally without a neck. The accompanying Dragapult wore his scarf normally, which sported a Second-Rank's pattern, a clear sign that the two were important around here.

The Dragapult had a guarded expression but still blinked and floated back slightly in surprise. He studied the prisoners for a moment, before casting an askew glance at his companion.

"Well that's certainly a larger batch of prisoners than usual," the Dragapult remarked. "Do you think something happened on the island?"

"Oh, I'm sure things are fine, Winslow," the strange Porygon answered. "After all, they wouldn't have sent us such a promising pool of subjects if things weren't under control…"

Hess' attention shifted as a Clefable went up to the pair and handed them a sheet of paper, before producing a silvery, round stone with swirled bands on it. The Aggron's eyes immediately widened. That was none other than his lucky charm!

"Hey! Give that back!" he shouted as he began to make his way forward. "That's my-!"

"Hess, calm down!"

Trizano hurriedly cut in and blocked his path, only for Hess to fume and try to shove the Skarmory aside.

"Get out of my way, you stupid bird! They-!"

Hess trailed off after he noticed the Clefable pointing him out, when the strange Porygon turned to look at him. The Aggron froze as his fighting spirit abruptly dissipated, and began to nervously pace back.

"… Why is he pointing at us like that?"

The strange Pokémon stared at them wordlessly for a moment, before looking at the gathering and floating up into the air over the courtyard. He raised his arms, clapping them together with a droning chirp.

"Welcome, everyone! I am Porygon-Z instance N9Y2XF8DD4E5M, though you may call me Doctor Nyxem—the Pokémon who runs this facility."

There was a brief moment of confusion among the prisoners, as even Hess and Trizano couldn't help but look on with blank puzzlement as the Porygon-Z bobbled about in the air.

"I know this place is different from what you were all expecting, but I can assure you that what we do here is far more important than simply mining tin underneath Nagrobek Island."

Other Pokémon in the gathering started trading worried looks with each other as well, before a Venomoth uneasily fidgeted his wings and broke the quiet with a hesitant mutter.

"More important…?"

"Of course! This is a place where Administrator Elilan has made sure that even Pokémon like you are able to contribute to the good of society!" the Porygon-Z chirped. "Whether that's through keeping the Company's economy up and running, or working more directly with me to help make new scientific discoveries!"

Nyxem's expression didn't change much like it often didn't with Porygon in general, but when he spoke up again, his voice seemingly lowered in its pitch and took on a strangely unsettling chime.

"I know most of you are afraid, but there is no need," the Normal-Type said. "Progress and its needs have a way of being bewildering at first, but you'll learn to adapt… or at least most of you will."

There was a moment of stunned silence, as the air seemed to grow palpable with dread. Worried murmurs floated about when Nyxem turned his head towards his Dragapult colleague and motioned out at the gathering.

"Winslow, separate out the prisoners for their appropriate purposes," he instructed. "I'd like to spend some time with the ones that are more relevant to my research."

"You heard him!" the Dragapult snapped, waving a claw at the gathered guards. "Get these 'mons out of the courtyard and put them to work!"

Several guards made their way over, roughly shoving Hess and Trizano along as the rest herded the remaining pirates off. The Aggron and Skarmory looked on blankly as the guards dragged their captives away over their cries of protest, the Drapion and the Garbodor briefly glancing back at Hess. All the while, a sinking feeling came over their stomachs as dark thoughts filled their minds about what would happen to those Pokémon.

All the while, Nyxem floated in place as the guards brought Hess and Trizano up to him. Much to their surprise, the strange bird barely acknowledged them and seemed to be focused on Hess' lucky charm, as the Porygon-Z telekinetically levitated it in the air.

"Hm, yes. This is most interesting," Nyxem mused. "It's not every day that a Pokémon arrives here along with a corresponding Mega Stone, let alone alongside an Immortal…"

Hess quietly inched away as the Porygon-Z inspected his lucky charm with rapt attention. Why was this bird so fixated on his lucky charm? And why was he so insistent that it was a…

"Mega-what now?" Hess gulped.

Nyxem turned to them as he moved the gray stone into a pouch on the side of his body. It was admittedly a bit hard to tell with how different the Porygon-Z's expressions seemed to be, but Hess swore there was a self-satisfied expression over the strange bird's eyes. The Porygon-Z briefly scanned the Clefable's paper for a moment, before looking back at them.

"You must be Captain Hess," the Normal-Type said. "And this is one of your pirates, I presume?"

"Pirate? Perish the thought!" the Skarmory squawked. "I'm Trizano the Immortal, and I would never stoop to such misdeeds!"

Hess couldn't help but turn and frown at Trizano's outburst, while Nyxem bobbled slightly with a quiet droning chuckle.

"My, my, apologies for being presumptuous, Trizano. Allow me to properly introduce myself," the Porygon-Z replied. "Like I said before, my name is Doctor Nyxem. Beyond my duties running this facility, I also specialize in researching the life energies of humans and Pokémon."

Hess and Trizano both traded confused looks as a wave of sinking dread came over them. Hess tried to shrink back further, only for a Blaziken among the guards to hold him in place.

"I'll admit that your arrival is a surprise to me," Nyxem continued "But I've never been the type to question receiving a rare opportunity like this."

"Wait, but I thought we were mining," Hess said. "Wh-What are you going to do to us? Are we really in the Wastes right now?"

Nyxem let out a small chirp in reply and swiveled his head to look at the Blaziken. He pointed an arm out at Hess and Trizano, before speaking up in that droning voice of his.

"Bring them out to the overlook," the Porygon-Z said. "Let them see for themselves."

The Blaziken and the other guards shoved them along and brought them up the stairs as Nyxem floated ahead of them. After a brief walk through a brick tunnel, they emerged out into an open space with an outer gate up ahead, along with a wall that looked like it'd been made from a combination of piled-up stones intermingling with truly ancient-looking concrete slabs. The guards led them up another set of stairs, as Hess noticed on the wall of the building they came from, that there was a curious circle with a design enclosing a set of stars inside it. Three… four… five of them, with tails that looked elongated upwards, almost as if they were falling. Something about the shape of the logo looked familiar to Hess, but he couldn't put his claw on what or why. He heard a startled squawk from beside him and looked off to his right past Trizano, as his breath caught in his throat:

Beyond the wall, there was a giant, crater-like pit with a path that wound its way up in a spiral, with shapes moving around in it. At the far ends, Hess saw what looked like collections of tents set up. Down just below them at the wall's base, he saw a train of Pokémon lugging along sacks and carts weighed down with rocks—visibly thin, haggard, and caked with dust.

The wall took a turn away from the pit but Hess couldn't get the image out of his mind. Was that what 'The Pit' was? And was that where that Drapion and Garbodor from his crew were going to wind up?

"Ah yes, here we are."

Nyxem abruptly spun around in place, before pointing dramatically out past the edge of the wall, as Hess and Trizano's eyes followed and abruptly widened:

There in front of them, was a plain that stretched on in every direction, with mountains visible in the distant haze that ran from left to right without an obvious stop in either direction. It was a sight that should've been breathtaking, except for the fact that everything was all wrong with it.

The plains were gray and ash-colored, without any signs of trees or even grass growing on them. Dark chasms cut through it in parts, like cracks left behind in shattered stone. The only obvious sign that there had been any water at all here before was a dried channel that resembled a riverbed, which exited out into a depression that looked like it used to be a lake, except it was filled with fog where they'd have expected to see water.

The two of them looked out with blank stares, their mouths fixed into tense grimaces, when Nyxem floated in front of them and raised his arms with a cheery chime.

"Welcome to Torn Outpost! Our research facility for delving into the mysteries of the world, and our little island of civilization on this side of the Veil."

Hess and Trizano stared out at the dead landscape in blank shock. There was an electronic-sounding chirp, when all of a sudden, Nyxem clapped his arms together.

"I'm sure you have plenty of questions, but don't worry," the Porygon-Z said. "Unlike the others in your group, you'll be helping me with my research as test subjects."

He tilted his strange beak downwards as a vaguely malicious glint came over his eyes. Hess fought to suppress a nervous whine, as the strange, unsettling tone came back into the Porygon-Z's droning voice.

"I just know we'll achieve great things together."



When Kline insisted on having a meeting somewhere he'd 'feel natural,' Elty hadn't expected it to be the throne room of Duke Franz's castle. The actual environment was certainly… less regal than he initially assumed it'd be. Between being picked clean after the pirates took it over and it being pockmarked with battle damage from being besieged, Elty wondered if they'd have been better off meeting on one of the ships in the harbor.

Still, it was hard to argue that there wasn't ample space here. He, Team Zephyr, Nagant, Cabot and his friends, and that 'Commodore Valan' Salamence had all come for the occasion and gathered around a table set up with a map of Anyilla and its islands. Kline was certainly putting the chamber's size to use with that massive, serpentine Forme of his, peering down alongside the others as Niilo shot a frowning glance out the corner of his vision.

"… Just saying, was it really necessary for you to come like this?" Niilo asked. "We could've had this meeting nearly an hour ago back in the harbor if you'd just stuck to that smaller form you approached us in."

"If you expect me to be comfortable during this meeting, then yes, it is necessary," Kline replied.

Niilo shrugged in response but otherwise didn't press things further, while over at Valan's end of the room, the Salamence had a deep scowl etched over his face. The entire time, his attention was directed at the Sandslash and his teammates, along with the Growlithe standing beside them.

"On that note, are those four really necessary?" Valan asked. "Not that I'm complaining about how Duke Franz generously provided these accommodations for us, but-"

"Yes."

Kline leveled a piercing scowl of his own back in reply, one that made Valan and Nagant both visibly tense up.

"I'm still not sure if I trust you two, but I do trust them," Kline said. "As such, I'd like them to be present for this meeting, and to hold it in the Forme I'm most comfortable in."

Nagant briefly opened her mouth to protest, only to pause and look aside with a quiet sigh.

"I… understand, Protector," the Clawitzer said. "Though what is it that you wish to discuss with us?"

"I'd like to offer an alliance… assuming you're willing to lend me the strength that I need."

Elty briefly sucked in a tense breath and noticed that the rest of Kline's teammates were reacting similarly. An alliance… with the Empire? The same Empire that had been trying to snatch Pleo away to use him as their Protector to fight for them? How was that not defeating everything that Kline had been trying to accomplish by running around the Cradle with his teammates all these years?

The Growlithe kept the questions to himself, but even so, he seemed to notice a flash of unease come over the Zygarde. It passed almost as soon as it came, as the serpent reared up amidst the tall chamber, and loomed over the gathered Pokémom.

"I won't mince words: things are extremely precarious for your Empire now that the Company has captured Pleo," Kline said. "Thanks to past events that have given me reason to doubt both your and their motivations, I'd normally be content to stay out of things and let you and the Company have at each other."

The Imperials around the table all visibly stiffened up at the Zygarde's remark. Elty saw Berecien's flame flare up as the Ponyta was about to speak up, when Cabot suddenly cut in with a loud protest:

"W-What do you mean 'let us and the Company have at each other'?! We're nothing like the Company!" the Rampardos cried. "They're a bunch of greedy traitors who make all the Pokémon on their islands miserable! If they went and started a war, then-!"

"Enough."

Kline gave a sharp hiss and flared his tendrils, as everyone around the table suddenly quieted down. Kline briefly scowled down at Cabot, before turning to the rest of the group and continuing on.

"Regardless of my normal opinions, these aren't normal circumstances, as should be obvious from the very fact that we're having this meeting," he said. "Were open warfare to break out again, it could spiral out of control and devastate all of Anyilla."

The room fell dead silent afterwards, with Nagant and Valan remaining visibly on edge as Cabot and his teammates traded worried stares with one another. The Zygarde paused, before quietly shaking his head.

"As the Keeper of Balance, that's too much for me to tolerate," he continued. "As such, I'm forced to entertain the lesser of two evils in order to stop this disaster, which in this case means helping you fight the Company through this crisis."

Elty shot a worried glance over to Percy, who seemed visibly apprehensive as Calidus and Alice looked much about the same. Kline had to have had some sort of plan to get out of this later on, didn't he?

From his end of the table, Valan scrutinized them all the while. There was a lingering quiet, before the Salamence broke it with a rumbling harrumph.

"Hrmph, I suppose that is good enough for now," Valan said. "I brought along maps of Vollezee, so we can-"

"I would strongly advise against mounting an attack on Vollezee at this point, actually."

Blinking stares went around the gathered Imperials, while Kline's own teammates seemed to quietly tense up and steel themselves. Elty furrowed his brow and pinned his ears back, staring up at the Zygarde with a puzzled tilt of his head.

"Wait, but wouldn't the Company have logically taken Pleo to Vollezee?" Elty asked. "Why wouldn't we go there first?"

"Because the Company is expecting that they will be attacked there," Kline explained.

A few whispers went about the Imperials' side of the table. The entire time, Kline's expression remained unmoving, as he motioned down at the map with his tail.

"As I explained to everybody on the way over, I'm able to see through extensions of my body called 'Cells', it's how I knew how to find you," the Zygarde explained. "From what I've been able to see through them, the Company's already in the process of moving ships and troops to Vollezee to reinforce it. If your attempt to attack there failed, the losses that would entail would be severe enough to potentially be an existential threat to your Empire on its own."

Valan and Nagant visibly grimaced in response, which Elty supposed was as good a sign as any that Kline's remarks weren't just idle theorizing on his part. The Zygarde turned his attention back to the map, moving his tailtip down along its currents and sea lanes.

"As such, it makes more sense to strike someplace where they're not expecting to be attacked."

He moved them along the map until he reached an island near the edge of the Cradle and the storms of the Veil. Percy and the others on Team Zephyr shot Kline hesitant looks, and when Berecien and Elty looked, they both let out a shared cry after reading the runes labeling its name. The others just stared with dumbfounded, disbelieving frowns, as Cabot turned his head up towards Kline and spoke up with a puzzled murmur.

"Wait, but that's…"

"Nagrobek? Why on earth would we want to go after some barren rock that's closer to the edge of the Cradle than to Vollezee?" Niilo asked.

"Because it's arguably the second-most important island to the Company after Vollezee," Kline answered. "All the tin the Company produces originates from that island. If it ever fell out of their control for more than a couple of months, it'd cripple their economy."

The Zygarde brought his tailtip back from the map, and looked around the table with his gaze held straight and his voice coming out in a serious tone.

"Normally, it's defended accordingly, too. In more typical circumstances, it's a more difficult target to take than Kenobi Island in spite of being less populated," he explained. "With its ranks thinned to secure Vollezee, Nagrobek is less defended and its fortifications are leaning more heavily than normal on a mercenary outfit that Administrator Elilan likes contracting. You'll never get a better opportunity to attack it than now."

Kline waited expectantly for a response, only to notice that all the Imperials around the table seemed unenthused about the idea and were saying about as much in hushed chatter with each other. From the side, Elty looked down at the map and ran a paw along Nagrobek's place, before he shot Kline a sideways glance.

"Not… that I'm really opposed to the idea of trying to go after the Company on Nagrobek," the Growlithe said. "But how's this supposed to get us any closer to freeing Pleo?"

"Because sometimes the best strategies aren't the most direct ones," Kline replied. "Capturing Nagrobek would break up one of the Company's strongest garrisons and force it to divert attention and resources to trying to take it back. By doing so, you would buy precious time to prepare to assault Vollezee more frontally."

The Zygarde briefly looked over the map, before turning his head up slightly to let his gaze settle on Nagant and Valan's end of the table.

"On top of that, from what I've been able to see, the rest of Pleo's friends are being held prisoner on Nagrobek," he said. "If the Company does manage to put Pleo under their sway, having his friends present when we go to confront them would be the best chance of being able to snap him to his senses."

Elty's fur briefly bristled. Travellers Above, he knew that his friends weren't in a good spot after Hess sailed away from them, but to wind up in Nagrobek in all places? He let his attention drift across the table as Nagant twitched her barbels and seemed to be deep in thought. She hesitated for a moment, before her posture eased and she nodded to herself. She looked back up at Kline and opened her mouth to speak.

"Zygarde, I think that that should-"

A loud thump filled the air as everyone stiffened up from a jolt that shook the table.

"I'm sorry, but this strategy of yours is simply not workable."

Everyone's attention turned to Valan's end of the table, where the Salamence had flared out his wings and craned his head up with an impatient scowl.

"We simply don't have time for a long campaign if the Company is really on the verge of fielding Lugia against us," Valan insisted. "Almost all of your arguments for attacking Nagrobek are arguments for attacking Kenobi instead. If we were going to spend time and resources on an island other than Vollezee, at least Kenobi's location would allow us to disrupt Company shipping routes and use it as a springboard for campaigns on other islands."

A few uneasy hems and haws came from Cabot and his companions, while even Nagant seemed hesitant. The Salamence briefly noted his subordinates' reactions, before shaking his head with a sharp frown.

"And that doesn't solve the issue that this additional campaign would divert resources that we should use to attack Vollezee instead," Valan continued. "The Royal Navy needs to be able to deal a definitive blow to the Company whenever we confront them at Vollezee, so why should we risk weakening or overextending ourselves beforehand?"

Kline uneasily wavered his tail back and forth, before turning to his teammates with a wordless stare. They all seemed visibly hesitant, before Percy gave back a wordless nod. The Zygarde turned back to the others around the table, as he spoke up with a quiet rumble.

"… And would your calculus change at all if I told you that the Company is holding a second Protector captive on Nagrobek?"

At once, confused, overlapping outcries broke out from around the table. From the ground, Elty shot a wide-eyed stare up at Kline and opened his mouth to interject, only for Nagant to hop over towards the Zygarde and raise her voice over the surrounding chatter.

"Zygarde, please elaborate," the Clawitzer said. "This is the first that any of us have heard of this!"

Kline visibly paused for a moment, weighing his next words. After a short hesitation, he began to slowly speak up.

"As Zygarde, I am a being composed of two halves," he replied. "My other half has been held deep within the bowels of Nagrobek's prison for close to a decade now, awaiting the day that his captors can turn us against the world."

Nagant's mouth flopped open from shock, as Cabot and his friends' eyes visibly widened in alarm. Even Valan looked taken aback for a moment, only for the Salamence to pause and shoot a dubious frown back across the table.

"I'm sorry, but a decade?" Valan asked. "If you're as strong as you claim, then why has the Company simply not fielded this 'other half' into battle?"

Nagant pivoted on her tail and stared fixedly at Kline, quietly wondering to herself what his answer would be. The Zygarde once again hesitated, before he looked down and shook his head.

"Because my other half and I are capable of fusing together into a stronger Forme. The Company had hoped to quietly capture me first so they would have our full power at their disposal," Kline explained. "If the Company found out that I was helping you fight against them, they would attempt to press ahead and field my other half as their secret weapon alongside Lugia against your islands. Regardless of the consequences."

Everyone in the room traded worried stares with one another as a tense silence lingered in the air. From his end of the table, Kline straightened up again, and shifted his tail as he settled into place.

"I don't share this matter with you lightly, and truth be told, I don't fully trust you not to misuse our powers," the Zygarde said. "But I know what the Company will do with the two Protectors they have in their grasp. As such, it makes sense to start by fighting the battle they're not expecting, so that way you won't need to fight two Protectors at once."

A pause followed, as all the Imperials at the table seemed to be at a loss for words. Nagant was the first to break the silence, as she looked up with a wary, uneasy expression—one that Elty could've sworn looked almost like she'd been hurt somehow…

"I just don't understand, Protector," she muttered. "Why now? Why did you wait all these years to come back?"

Kline stared back for a moment, before turning his gaze aside with a low murmur.

"With everything that's going on right now, I just couldn't afford to hide away for any longer," he explained. "I admit that there's more to the story, but I don't think I'm ready to share it just now."

The Zygarde turned his head back. It was hard for Elty to make out much of the way of emotions from his face, given that his eyes weren't as expressive as they were while in his Core Forme, but his pose looked heavy… deflated, almost.

"I promise that sometime when things are calmer, that I'll give you a fuller explanation," he said. "But at the very least, do you agree with me now that we should attack Nagrobek first?"

There was a lingering pause at the table, before Valan frowned and spoke up with a low grumble.

"… Fine, I'll admit I can see the argument behind your proposal."

The other Imperials followed along one after the other, with Berecien strangely enough giving his agreement with particular vigor. After waiting briefly for any objections, Kline himself joined in and nodded back.

"Good," he replied. "Since we will need to mount our attack on Nagrobek within a week."

Valan abruptly batted his wings out and jerked his head back with a startled cry.

"I'm sorry, a week?!" the Salamence demanded.

"Yes. Nagrobek's defenses are unlikely to stay weakened past then," Kline replied. "I'm sure that the Company is already looking into levying reserves and newly-pressed recruits to fill the ranks they're thinning outside of Vollezee. They will naturally shore up their more strategic islands first while doing so."

"Zygarde, that's just not possible," Valan shot back, shaking his head.

"Why? Don't you have a big, fancy base on Haipheh?" Alice asked, tilting her head. "Can't you just send some Pokémon from there?"

"No, because even after accounting for the Company pulling ships away and Zygarde lending his strength, we'd be lucky to mobilize even a third of the forces needed to mount a proper landing on Nagrobek in a week. We have other threats that need to be defended against, and there simply aren't enough standing Pokémon ready and fully provisioned to sail out so quickly," he explained. "My original estimate for how long it'd have taken just to mobilize for a full invasion of Vollezee was nearly four weeks. Nagrobek may be less challenging to invade, but it'd still take between two and three weeks just to be in a position to begin sending troops onshore!"

Kline and Valan stared each other down, as the Salamence's face visibly fell. Elty and Team Zephyr stiffened up and grimaced, while Cabot and his friends shuffled about awkwardly. What were they supposed to do here when the first step of Kline's plan already wasn't workable?

There was a moment of silence, before Nagant hopped up between Valan and Kline, her lesser claw raised.

"… Are you certain that we could mobilize a third of the forces we'd need for that campaign within a week, Commodore Valan?" the Clawitzer asked.

"Yes? Though I fail to see how that would change anything, Captain Nugget," Valan replied. "Such 'monpower would be inadequate for taking Kenobi, much less Nagrobek."

"I'm aware of that," the Clawitzer insisted. "I'm not contesting your point."

Nagant let out an exasperated sigh, before she hopped up to the window and pointed a claw out of it. Everyone else made their way up as they saw her claw pointing off at Starpeak Square below, seemingly in the direction of the village's garrison.

"It's just that I think I know how we can get the remaining forces that we'd need in Zygarde's timeframe."



Pleo blearily cracked his eyes open and saw that he was in a dark, formless void. He at first thought he was still in his cell, only to realize that he couldn't feel the metal chains holding his limbs in place or the ship's wood under his feet.

The Lugia jolted upright and moved around as his memories slowly filled in what had happened: he woke up after Lyn opened the door to his cell and the Samurott revealed a red Apricorn that he had brought along with him. Not long after, Lyn ordered a Crobat that'd come along to sedate him, and the last thing Pleo remembered after that point was struggling against his chains as the Crobat flew up to him and cast rings of light from his eyes and suddenly feeling very sleepy afterwards.

He supposed that this place must've been the inside of that red Apricorn from earlier, and he was starting to understand why Pokémon were afraid of these things. Pleo looked around frantically and beat his wings in a panic.

"H-Hey! Let me out of here!"

He flung a cutting gust of air out forwards… although he wasn't sure where it was going, since there wasn't any obvious change to his surroundings. He hurriedly went around to try and find some sort of end to the space he was in, but no matter how long he carried on, he couldn't find one. After a while, there was suddenly a sharp crack as a vein of light opened from above and the world around Pleo lurched, when the Lugia was washed in blinding light. He briefly felt air under his feet and landed on something cold and stone-like, before stumbling forward as he almost tripped.

"A-Ah!"

Pleo squinted as his eyes adjusted to the light, when he heard flowing water in the background. As he looked around, he saw he was in a tall room flanked by water from three ends, with seats set up on a stony section in the middle. He looked up and froze as he saw Inler at the far end staring him down, with Farn and Zorn on opposite sides of the table looking at him in surprise. A little further back was also a Zoroark that he didn't recognize, who was watching him keenly.

It dawned on him that he was in front of the Company's Board, meaning the Zoroark had to be Elilan. He hurriedly tried to scrabble away, only to suddenly feel weight pressing down on him from above. There was a sudden swish of air as he saw Lyn behind him, holding a seamitar up to the side of his throat.

"Don't try anything funny, Guardian," the Samurott growled. "Your friends may not be here at the moment, but that doesn't mean there won't be consequences for them if you cause problems."

Pleo dug his heels in and glared back, only to remember his conversation with Ketu back on Lyn's ship. Ketu knew Lyn a lot better than he did, and the Weavile had been adamant that he needed to at least make Lyn think he was succeeding at pushing him around in order to do anything to help his friends.

He grudgingly stopped struggling as he saw a Graveler and an Electabuzz come up and felt his wings get yanked forward in front of his body. Cold metal dug into his plumage around his wings' wrists, all as Lyn kept his paw firmly clamped onto his left wing's shoulder. After a brief moment, the Graveler and the Electabuzz stepped back and Pleo saw that his wings were tied up with chains again, while Lyn held his grip on him, before pushing him forward in front of the table.

The Pokémon gathered around the table gazed intently. Zorn and Farn had an almost disbelieving air about them, while Inler seemed to have a quiet awe on his face. Curiously enough, Elilan didn't seem impressed, as he propped his head up on a claw and narrowed his eyes with an unamused frown.

"Let me guess, Lyn: another Ditto? Or were you desperate enough to drag some Illusionist off the street this time?"

"I'm sure you would be quite pleased if that was the case," Lyn scoffed. "But unfortunately for you, this is Lugia in the flesh."

The Samurott ran a paw down Pleo's back and grabbed one of his feathers. He pulled his paw back with a sharp pluck, making Pleo squawk in pain and flail as Lyn held up a silvery-white feather in his grasp that sparkled as the sunlight coming through the windows fell on it. Lyn watched as a captivated silence settled on most of the Pokémon around the stone table, as his muzzle curled up into a satisfied smirk.

"Your eyes don't deceive you," the Commissioner said. "Even if his size may not match the legends, this is indeed Lugia, the Guardian of the Seas. Come and see him for yourself."

One by one, most members of the Board began to make their way over and crowd around him. Zorn brought his head down to size Pleo up, while Farn walked up to him. She gave a disbelieving prod at the Lugia, as she turned to Lyn with her muzzle curled up into a knowing smirk.

"He certainly looks better without all that paint covering those feathers," Farn said. "I knew that you had it in you to get things done. See what happens when you handle your tasks with the appropriate degree of firmness, Lyn?"

The Samurott stiffened upright and briefly grew flustered at the Luxray's remark. Pleo wasn't sure what to make of the comment, other than that Lyn clearly hadn't expected to hear it. The sound of slow claps rang out as Pleo looked further down the table to see Inler making his way over to him, all while Elilan still glowered from his seat. Inler either didn't seem to notice or didn't care as he approached, stepping up to Lyn and his captive's side.

"After so many years, we finally have a Protector of our own," Inler murmured. "I was starting to think that I'd never see the day when one was there to help fight under our banners."

Pleo fought against his chains to try and lean away from the Nidoking, leveling a piercing scowl back at the Poison-Type.

"I don't want to fight," he said. "I won't help you and you can't make me."

The Lugia suddenly felt a sharp yank at his chains and looked up to see Lyn had pulled him back into line. From his place in the surrounding pool, Zorn craned his head down again, looming over the young Protector with a sharp frown.

"Read the room, kid," the Gyarados scoffed. "We wouldn't have brought you here if we didn't have ways of making you play along."

"Not if those ways stink as much as your breath," Pleo retorted. "You couldn't even catch me when I was right in front of you last time!"

Zorn's eyes widened briefly, before he grit his teeth and leaned in further towards Pleo, close enough for his barbels to brush him. Much to the Gyarados' frustration, the Lugia remained defiant and blew a raspberry back, prompting Zorn to let a furious growl from his throat.

"Listen up, pipsqueak," the Gyarados snarled. "We've come too far to just let this moment slip between our fangs from some little-"

"Enough, Zorn."

Inler paced forward, motioning for the Gyarados to back off. Zorn grudgingly slunk back as Inler came to take his place, who shot Pleo a piercing glare as electricity danced around his horn.

"I understand that there are some things that might seem confusing to you as a child; being a god of storms with Anyilla's Pokémon counting on you is a heavy burden," the Nidoking began. "A burden that we were willing to help ease you into."

Inler's expression visibly hardened as the Poison-Type angled his horn down towards Pleo. The Nidoking kept his glaring eyes fixed with Pleo's as the Lugia couldn't help but freeze up as the Director's voice took on a menacing tone.

"But we ultimately don't have the luxury of waiting for you to come around. If making you adjust to your new role requires sacrificing your comfort in the process, I'm more than willing to arrange for that to happen," Inler said. "I'm certain that Commissioner Lyn has informed you of some of the ways we have for doing so."

Pleo wavered after seeing the Nidoking's mood turn and static build up along his horn. Was he making it too obvious that he wasn't afraid of them right now? While he doubted that Inler would really hurt him if the Company needed him so badly… what about his friends? Ketu said that he and Elilan would protect them, but if Inler saw that he didn't seem worried about them, would he start asking questions about why he was acting like this when his friends were supposed to be in danger? And if so, could that ruin the deal Ketu wanted to make with him before he even got a chance to make a decision about it?

"Are we clear?"

Pleo jolted up as Inler's growl lingered in his ears, before the Lugia decided not to push his luck. He craned his head down and shrank back, raising his voice in a stammer that he hoped didn't seem too forced.

"Y-Yes."

Pleo's heart skipped a beat in his chest as Inler scrutinized him for a moment. After a noticeable pause, the Nidoking lifted head and looked off towards the door, where a Magnezone and a Honchkrow were waiting.

"Send word to have the Executive Suite below my office prepared for his arrival. We'll keep him there for the time being," the Director instructed. "If those accommodations prove unworkable, we'll naturally have to consider more… secure alternatives."

The honor guards saluted in response, before they opened the doors and left the room. As they closed the doors behind them, Pleo looked back to Inler with a puzzled tilt of his head.

"… What kind of prison is an 'Executive Suite'?"

"It's a place I sometimes retire to for breaks from my work," the Nidoking explained. "One that's more fitting for a Pokémon of your nature to spread your wings… if you can remain cooperative."

… Had Ketu expected that he'd be moved to a place like that? A resting place did sound easier to meet him in than in some sort of prison… Pleo's mind drifted from his train of thought as he heard footsteps and saw Inler making his way back to the head of the stone table.

"Though if I may ask you all to return to your seats: I believe that there is one last order of business we need to account for before we get to the topic of Commissioner Lyn's promotion to the Board," the Nidoking said, before shooting a glance at the Samurott. "Did you find the missing article from the Vault?"

Lyn hesitated for a moment, as Pleo could have sworn he saw his whiskers twitch nervously, before the otter finally spoke up.

"I found some human artifacts among the pirates' loot, but nothing that was reported as missing from the Vault turned up," the Samurott answered. "We're not really sure what became of the Ledger, but since the thieves are presently in detention on Nagrobek, it shouldn't be hard to get to the bottom of things by interrogating them."

Pleo blinked at Lyn's response. He had remembered seeing that Ledian take the Ledger away back on the Starfall Shogun. Although he didn't know what the Iron Fleet did with it while he was asleep, he supposed there was nothing that would've kept one of the other pirate captains from taking it.

Even so, wasn't Lyn being a bit too tense for just saying that he didn't find it? There was a long pause as Inler shot an askew glance at Elilan, before turning his attention back to Lyn.

"See to it that Lugia is questioned first about what he knows about the Ledger in a more appropriate setting," the Nidoking said. "Though I'm not sure if we have the time to wait for results from an interrogation. I will have Olivia dispatch agents to mount an investigation before our enemies realize what's going on. In the meantime, we should focus our attention on something that's been long overdue: namely Lyn's promotion."

Pleo noticed Lyn straightening up as Farn, Zorn, and Inler turned their attention towards the Samurott, Elilan giving a visibly unenthusiastic frown the entire time. After a brief, tentative silence, Inler glanced them over, before bringing his paws together on the table with a stern, serious frown.

"This isn't a trivial decision to make for the Company's future," he said. "While I myself have already made up my mind, it is customary to hear out each member of the Board before making promotions of this nature…"

The Nidoking trailed off briefly, before letting his eyes drift over towards Farn, who was batting her tail back and forth.

"Given that you're the Pokémon who is the closest to Lyn out of anyone on the Board… Administrator Farn, would you care to start things off?"

Lyn waited for a moment as Farn glanced at the Samurott and lingered in her thoughts. From beside him, Pleo briefly noticed that Lyn looked a bit on edge. A small smile settled over Farn's mouth, before she turned back to the head of the table and spoke up.

"I'll admit, things were a bit rockier than I was expecting, but Lyn stuck through his mission and turned things around even when things seemed to be in doubt," the Luxray said. "We're all aware of Lyn's track record and accomplishments prior to this mission, so there's no need for me to repeat them. Given that he delivered Lugia to us in the end, I'd say that he's built upon them well enough to earn this promotion."

Pleo briefly caught Lyn quietly sucking in a breath as Inler's attention turned over to Zorn next, the Nidoking giving an expectant glance.

"And you, Zorn? What is your opinion on promoting Lyn to fill our vacancy on the Board?"

The Gyarados shifted in the water and churned the surface of the pool as he looked over at Lyn with noticeably long face. There was a moment's pause, before Zorn sighed and shook his head with a low murmur.

"I'm not really impressed with how he handled some of the parts of his mission earlier, but he did pull this off through a plan of his own design and execution," the Gyarados remarked. "I'd recommend starting him off slow, but I'll admit he has potential as an Administrator."

Pleo saw the tension leave Lyn's body as an ever-growing smile crossed his muzzle and the Samurott visibly puffed his chest out. He supposed that was one way to tell that Lyn had gotten the promotion he'd wanted. All the while, Elilan remained silent beyond quietly tapping his claws against the table. The Zoroark's reaction didn't escape Inler's notice, as the Nidoking finally turned his attention over to him with his mouth curled into a serious frown.

"Administrator Elilan, do you have anything to add?"

Elilan didn't say anything even as the others around the table turned to face him. Pleo gave a wary glance around as the silence dragged on for a moment, when he noticed that there was a palpable tension in the air between Inler and Elilan. All along his pelt, Pleo noticed the Nidoking had raised barbs much like Nida would when she was upset or startled, while Elilan's eyes were sharply narrowed.

The Zoroark looked at Pleo briefly, before his expression softened slightly. He closed his eyes and turned to face the rest of the Board, shaking his head with a sullen huff.

"I already gave my opinions during that whole incident with the Ditto," Elilan scoffed. "But since everyone here seems to have particularly short memories, I'd like a moment to explain where my opinions are coming from."

The Zoroark opened his eyes again and turned his gaze towards Inler, with a look so fierce that for a moment Pleo thought he was somehow trying to use Glare on the Nidoking.

"Ten years ago, I was the only one on the Board who voted against Darzin's promotion to Administrator of Tromba Island," Elilan said. "Everyone insisted that he'd be a good fit, yet look at what became of that."

Elilan straightened up in his seat, turning his glance towards Zorn and Farn with a withering glare.

"And here we are, finding ourselves at the precipice of confirming another would-be peer that's doomed for failure. Despite the last several years, this Board is about to make the same mistakes again, having learned absolutely nothing," the Dark-Type spat. "Lyn simply is not a good fit for running an island. Not now or ever. Capturing Lugia doesn't change that. It's taken Lyn a month and a half to complete what was supposed to be a three-day mission at most, and in the end he ultimately needed to outsource the actual process of capturing Lugia to pirates of all Pokémon."

"And yet, despite that, he adapted and overcame difficulties in the face of one unexpected development after the other," Inler said. "Qualities I seem to recall you particularly valuing from your subordinates as an Administrator."

The Nidoking and the Zoroark stared each other down, as Pleo noticed everyone else in the room was watching the pair uneasily. There was a tension that hung thick in the air, almost as if the two were both ready to come to blows with each other.

"Your skepticism has been noted," Inler growled. "However, it hasn't changed anything about my own decision, and I think I've heard enough to make it and begin the formal vote on Commissioner Lyn's promotion."

Elilan held his glare for a moment, before sinking back into his seat with a sullen scowl. Pleo couldn't help but fidget uncomfortably against his chains, when a loud harrumph cut through the air. He saw Inler shifting in his seat, before the Nidoking turned his attention around the table.

"All in favor of promoting Lyn to fill former Administrator Darzin's position?"

Farn and Inler himself each raised a paw in assent, Zorn mimicking them as best he could with his tail. The Nidoking brought his paw down and brought them together along the table, before speaking up again, his eyes turning over towards Elilan.

"And everyone opposed to promoting Lyn to fill said position?"

The Zoroark all but rolled his eyes in response, as he raised a paw and let out a disgusted sigh, when there was a sudden rattle from Lyn's end of the table.

The Board looked over and saw Pleo had raised his still-chained wings. Lyn shoved his wings down with a sharp frown, while the young Lugia saw Inler mirroring the Samurott's expression. Curiously enough, Elilan seemed to be surprised, and for a fleeting moment, Pleo swore he could see a faint, amused smile on the Zoroark's muzzle.

Inler thumped his tail against the floor for attention. After he received it from his audience, he shook his head, turning his attention over to Lyn.

"That makes things official. Welcome to the Board, Administrator Lyn."

Over by the doors to the meeting room, a blue-and-white Vivillion fluttered over and came up to the Samurott's side, presenting a lavender cloth with a pattern of purple squares on it. A flash of disbelieving awe came over his eyes as Lyn took the cloth and unfurled it, revealing it to be a scarf with the same pattern as the other Administrators present.

He took a moment to undo his scarf and put on his new one, before tucking his old one into a satchel. He made his way forward along with Pleo, passing the young Lugia over to Inler, before claiming the empty seat across from Farn's. Lyn sat down and adjusted himself, as a widening grin came over his muzzle. From the side, Inler briefly glanced down at Pleo, before turning his attention to the newly-promoted Administrator with a stern gaze.

"Your first order of business as an Administrator is to show the world our newfound Protector's power and fealty to our cause," the Nidoking said. "I believe that Tromba Island ought to be quite familiar to the both of you. Putting it back under direct rule of an Administrator seems like an effective demonstration, no?"

Pleo felt a sinking feeling in his stomach as he realized that they were talking about Lyn taking over Tromba, with him taking part in it. Lyn idly dusted his chest off with a paw, as the Samurott gave a knowing smirk in reply.

"Quite. I've been able to keep that island in line for years. I'm sure it will be no different whenever I arrive there again," the Samurott said. "Using the Protector's power to take back an island that the Company has lost control of for years seems as solid an idea as any. With the appropriate conditions, I'm sure it would send quite the message to Anyilla and the Cradle's waters beyond."

Pleo's breath picked up as he felt his heart starting to race. Those were all just words, right? He remembered Ketu had mentioned that the Board was planning to use him as a weapon, but they didn't actually have a way of making him fight the rest of Bluewhorl Town for them without threatening his friends… did they?

Whatever the truth of the matter was, he didn't want to find out for sure. He just hoped that Ketu really would be able to see him again before Lyn started his mission. Especially if Bluewhorl Town was really in this much danger.

Was it best to just agree to help him with whatever Elilan was planning? It was harder and harder for him to see ways of avoiding it, but at the same time he just couldn't shake this feeling that helping Ketu and Elilan would end horribly. Kline had insisted over and over again that it would be bad if Elilan's plans, whatever they really were, succeeded. But if he did nothing, both his friends and everyone on Tromba would just suffer and he'd have nothing to show for it.

The Lugia's mind went blank as his gaze drifted to the floor. He wished that someone was there with him. Nida… Crom… Elty… Guardia… or any of the others.

Surely they'd know what to do right now…

He heard a soft thump and saw Inler pulling his leg back from stomping the floor, much as Nida might've thumped her foot for attention. He turned his head up, as the Nidoking looked down at him with a small, knowing smile.

"May this be the start of a fruitful partnership," Inler said. "I do hope that you find the Executive Suite pleasing. It's among the finest accommodations that can be offered for visitors to our offices here… especially cooperative ones."

Pleo tried to scoot away only for the Nidoking's grip on his bindings to stop him. No, he didn't want any of this. He just wanted to be back with his friends and not have to be someone's weapon or agent or anything at all.

Inler had grandchildren of his own, didn't he? Maybe there was a part of him that could still be reasoned with.

"Why can't you just leave me and my home alone?" Pleo demanded. "Can't you just be happy with everything you already have right now?"

Once again, Inler's expression curled into a small frown. He said nothing, before turning his head over to the Samurott beside him.

"Administrator Lyn, kindly bring Lugia to the Executive Suite on your way out," the Nidoking instructed. "Due to the needs of your mission, access to him outside of you shall be restricted to me, my direct subordinates, and a list of whatever Pokémon you submit to me that you feel are necessary for your mission's success. After all, in light of the recent spy ring we discovered, it only makes sense to exercise some caution."

"Quite," the Samurott replied, nodding back. "I will see him there immediately after we are done here."

"Good, I believe that this is a suitable note to leave things off on," Inler remarked. "This meeting is adjourned."

Lyn rose from his seat and went over to reclaim the young Protector as the other Administrators made their way out. Farn and Elilan left the room through the doorway, while Zorn went through the aqueduct that fed into the pool surrounding the meeting table. Much to Pleo's surprise, Lyn didn't leave yet, and only budged once Inler began to make his way for the door. The Samurott followed after him, before raising his voice to speak.

"Actually… there was one last thing I wanted to ask of you, Director," Lyn said. "As an Administrator, I assume I'm entitled to request any Company records that are on file?"

The Nidoking Director paused and turned his head back, quirking a brow with a slight tilt of his head.

"You are, yes," Inler replied. "Just submit a request to the records department. As long as it's not anything unreasonable large in volume, your request should be granted."

"Perfect."

The Nidoking turned and carried on as Lyn tugged Pleo along by his chains. As the Lugia lurched forward, he noticed that Lyn's expression was strangely satisfied. He supposed that was one way to tell that Lyn was happy about things… except there was one thing that didn't quite make sense to him.

Shouldn't Lyn have been asking for things that would help him with his mission to Tromba? Where did these records fit into all of that?



Rodion didn't know what he was expecting after his Marked captors told him and the others that they were going to be leaving the Mystery Dungeon, but it wasn't that they'd take them back to Starpeak Square, nor that he'd just be sitting around in some burnt-out square for hours afterwards. The local Imps had apparently run out of cells in town to keep the pirates they'd captured, probably well before the Marked had brought them here from the way that even Tarquin and that Seviper first mate of his were still stuck waiting here in the open.

So that left him here sitting on the ground with his wrists chafing from the ropes holding them in place and his legs stiff from staying in one place the entire time as the Imps assigned to them did the rounds. The guards were every bit as crabby as the Marked had been and not remotely talkative—not even after that strange Pokémon gathered all those green lights and turned into that towering serpent—and were content to leave him and the others around him wondering aloud about what on earth had happened. He hadn't seen any sign of Hess or Kichiro since arriving, and had only found out through that Haxorus from the new recruits that the two at least managed to make it to the ship.

It was cold comfort considering that he didn't know what had become of them. Had they even made it to Lyn? And if they did, who was to say that Samurott hadn't just stabbed them in the back?

Just having some idea whether they were okay would've made the situation he was in a little more tolerable.

He looked to his left, where Kenny sat, seeing the Quilava nervously stealing glances around him. The Floatzel looked on for a moment before quietly hanging his head. Even when that Imperial crab had caught him back in Orleigh, he'd been able to force a grin over his own face and raise the spirits of the others, knowing that she'd left some of her peons behind and wouldn't want to sail off without them, but now

Well, he just wasn't sure what he could even say or do to lift his crewmates' spirits. What on earth was there even to hold onto right now for hope?

"… Rodion? What's going to happen to us?"

Rodion looked over and saw Kenny tense and wound up, his ears pinned back. Much of their crewmates nearby seemed like they were in similar straits, and many of them were looking over waiting for some sort of response or reassurance.

He hesitated for a moment, before looking back at the Quilava and forcing a small smile over his face.

"I… honestly don't know," the Floatzel admitted. "But whatever happens, I'll be there to face it with the rest of you."

Kenny weakly tried to give a smile of his own in reply, but his heart didn't seem to be in it. Rodion honestly couldn't fault him. Even in the dicey situations he'd been in the past, things didn't ever look this bleak—not even when that Samurott had boarded their ship.

Perhaps this really was the end of the line for them.

All of a sudden, he heard murmurs start to go around the Pokémon in the crowd, including from some of his crewmates next to him. Rodion tried to make sense of what was going on, when Kenny suddenly gave an insistent nose at his shoulder.

"Rodion, something's going on."

Rodion looked away from Kenny and saw a Salamence in Imperial colors coming to a stop in the square just a few paces away. A Gliscor and Talonflame joined him shortly afterwards, along with a group that followed them from further behind on foot:

There was a Sneasel he didn't recognize towards the front. A few Marked from that village in the Mystery Dungeon were there too, but they all looked strangely wound up. But much to his astonishment, that old crab from Orleigh was also there… along with Elty.

The Floatzel narrowed his eyes into a sharp scowl at the sight of the Growlithe. He could've done without seeing him again, but who were the others-?

"H-Huh?! Alice made it out after all?!"

Rodion glanced back and saw that Kenny's vents were pouring fire, while the Quilava looked much like he'd seen a ghost. The Quilava stared wide-eyed at the Sneasel, his mouth hanging open as his voice came out in a squeaking stammer.

"B-But I saw her get left behind on Vollezee! I-I thought-!"

So she was that same Sneasel Kenny had mentioned being with that other Protector, huh? The former pirate? Rodion supposed that it cleared up the question of who those strangers were a little, but why were they there together with that Clawitz-?

"EYAAAAAAH!"

"N-No! Mercy!"

Rodion flinched after hearing a few screams and cries coming from around him, and saw the Marked pirates were visibly cringing and shuddering, while a Marked Kingler was even desperately fighting with his bindings to try and flee. The general mood around them had turned tense, as even Kenny was looking up, his pupils visibly shrunken.

Then he turned to see himself, and his own eyes widened, as there, at the very back of the group, passing a few Marked that were hastily shrinking out of its way, was that towering black-and-green serpent from earlier slithering up and looming over them. The Floatzel stared as the strange Pokémon settled in, his own mouth hanging open as he blinked in disbelief at the sight.

"Well, this one's going to be interesting," he murmured.

The thump of chitin against the ground rang out, as Nagant made her way forward along the group of pirates. Her eyes met Rodion's as she passed, as the Clawitzer stopped and whirled on her tail. She paused and tilted her head incredulously for a moment, before narrowing her eyes back with an unamused scowl.

"Hrmph, I see you didn't learn anything from last time, Floatzel," Nagant huffed. "You're a real glutton for punishment, aren't you?"

"I prefer to think of myself as being determined," Rodion retorted.

Nagant stared back with a long, sour frown, before letting out an annoyed scoff and turning away. All among the captured pirates, puzzled and confused chatter rang out amongst their ranks, as they traded dumbfounded looks among themselves and at the strange serpent looming over them. Even Tarquin was at a loss as to what to make of the newly arrived strangers, as he shifted against his bindings and raised his head with a low growl.

"What on earth do you want?" the Tyrantrum spat. "Shouldn't you be chasing after that bird right about now?"

"Normally, yes," Nagant replied. "Though these aren't normal circumstances right now, so I'm here to make an offer that I think will be worth your while."

Valan shot a sidelong glare at the Clawitzer captain from the corner of his eyes, as his mouth cracked open with an incredulous growl.

"Captain Nugget, you can't seriously be-"

"Commodore, do recall that Zygarde told us we may only have a week to work with," Nagant insisted. "You yourself acknowledged that we can't source the 'monpower we need through normal methods on such short notice."

She trailed off briefly, before looking over the gathered pirates in front of them.

"As such, we can't afford to be too picky about how we get it."

Valan opened his mouth to reply, only for the words to never come out of his mouth. He turned aside with a disapproving growl, as the captured pirates tried to make sense of the Clawitzer's words. Some were clearly puzzled, while others like the Strongjaw Gang's first mate were visibly glowering out of impatience.

"Are you just going to stand there and ignore us, or are you going to explain what's going on right now?" the Seviper spat.

"I will. Once," Nagant harrumphed. "So pay attention."

The Clawitzer hopped over and clambered onto a nearby crate to get a better view of her audience. She took a brief moment to better study a few of the pirates in the crowd, before straightening up on her tail with a withering glare.

"Effective immediately, you're all enlisted sailors of the Royal Navy, under the command of Commodore Valan and myself as part of a mission we will be carrying out alongside Zygarde, the Keeper of Balance," Nagant explained. "Some of you may be brevetted to perform duties beyond what such a rank would normally entail, but your pay and benefits will be the same as any such sailor who has entered the service as part of a penal sentence."

The chatter began to kick up in waves amongst the pirates, as some simply shot their captors dumbfounded looks, while others in the crowd spoke up with skeptical tones, like a Haxorus with a gold-and-silver scarf who huffed back with a sullen growl.

"I'm sorry, but are we supposed to be excited about this?" the Haxrorus demanded. "Who is this overgrown Serperior even supposed to be? Some sort of Protector?"

"Yes, and if it were possible I'd be the first to insist that we do everything to avoid getting a bunch of thugs like you involved in this," Kline hissed back, flaring his tendrils. "Unfortunately for us, our options are limited at the moment."

The gathering remained silent afterwards, as suddenly most of the pirates sat up sharply at attention. There was a lingering tension in the air, as some of the pirates grew uneasy, while others like a Conkeldurr shot back dubious frowns.

"And just what is that supposed to mean?" the Fighting-type pressed.

"Commodore Valan and I will be leading an expedition to liberate Nagrobek Island from the Company," Nagant answered. "It's an island that a lot of you have history with and I'm sure plenty of you have had daydreams and idle plans of storming, so doing that under Her Majesty's sails and the cover of Imperial artillery shouldn't be an excessive ask."

At once, dozens of eyes in the gathering visibly widened and the silence gave way to overlapping cries of protest.

"Storming Nagrobek?!" a Pawniard exclaimed.

"Y-You're sending us off to be cannon fodder!" a Litten stammered.

"Yes? And?" Valan retorted. "I'm failing to see the problem he-"

"Commodore Valan, please let me finish my offer."

Nagant motioned for silence with a claw, as the Salamence glowered back, but otherwise kept his mouth shut after seeing Kline continuing to look on without objection. The Clawitzer at first tried to speak up over the ongoing protests from the pirates, only to fire a Water Pulse into the air. It burst overhead, raining water down on the crowd and after a few scattered yelps, threw the proceedings back into an uneasy silence.

"If you and whatever salvageable ships you have are all the extra strength we can muster for this campaign, your fates will most likely be to become cannon fodder," she explained. "That was why I wanted to give you a chance to improve your odds of self-preservation, and better help our odds of success in the process…"

The Clawitzer pivoted on her tail, before turning her gaze towards Tarquin.

"We'll head to Orleigh first. If you manage to talk your peers there into assisting us with our mission and improving your overall odds of success, we'll naturally be motivated to ensure that you're better equipped for it," she continued. "After Nagrobek is captured and our present campaign concludes, the lot of you will be given suspended sentences for any crimes you committed prior to this point and honorably discharged… once you return any equipment lent to you by the Navy as part of this mission, of course."

Valan cocked his head with a dubious frown, and even Team Zephyr outside of Alice traded uneasy glances with one another. Nagant's appeal didn't seem to be going particularly well, either, as the Water-Type's words were met with glares and snarls from more defiant Pokémon in the group, including none other than the Strongjaw Gang's captain, who let out a scoff in reply.

"Gods, you all must be desperate right now," Tarquin spat. "What sort of motivation is that supposed to be? Let's say we accept your offer, why on earth should we not just mutiny the first chance we can get?"

Nagant narrowed her eyes and abruptly leveled her claw, aiming it at the Tyrantrum's head, prompting a few of the nearby pirates to hurriedly try to scoot out of the way as Kline slithered forward with a sharp hiss.

"For one, I'm more than capable of using my powers to rip your hulls out from under you if you try that," Kline said. "Furthermore-"

"Wait, you two. Give me a moment here."

Just as the water gathering at the tip of Nagant's claw started to form into an orb, a set of white claws pushed them down. Kline and Nagant shifted their glances, seeing Alice looking over at them with a determined look.

"Let me have a chance to talk to them," the Sneasel said. "I can speak your new recruits' language so to speak. They'll probably be more motivated to work for you if you don't start things off by smacking them into line."

The Clawitzer jerked her claw free and scowled at Alice. The pair stared each other down for a moment, before Nagant turned aside with a sigh.

"Fine," the Water-Type said. "But don't drag this out."

Kline and Nagant backed away as Alice paced forward along the crowd, scanning the faces. Most were visibly wary, others were hostile, and a few that she recognized from the Siglo Swellow—like Kenny—visibly cringed as her eyes fell on them. She pinned her ears back with a disheartened frown after seeing the Quilava. She looked away after a moment's hesitation, and turned her gaze towards the center of the group.

"Look, all of you are here right now since you've made some bad choices and they caught up with you," Alice began. "Some of you probably deserve to be in this situation right now, some of you might not since you were pressured or forced into being here. Either way, after what happened here, this would normally be the end of the line for you, but nobody says that things have to end badly here today…"

She continued walking in front of the crowd, opting to focus specifically on the faces in it that were familiar. Her eyes moved from one face that she recognized to another: an Ekans, a Zebstrika, a Sableye… It was hard for her to hide her disappointment, as she shook her head and pawed at her shoulder.

"You're clearly got some skill at raising some hell while coming ashore, and we need 'mons capable of doing that right now," she said. "And I know that deep down, Nagrobek would likely be up there on the list of islands you'd want to raid if you thought you had a chance of succeeding. I'm sure that some of you have friends there you'd want to free, or at the very least avenge them… and now you can do that."

She paused and trailed off, before shooting a pleading gaze out to the crowd with her eyes.

"I've been in your place before, and it's not every day that 'mons like us get a second chance, Much less with a Protector at their backs," she insisted. "You've got a chance to genuinely do good with those skills of yours and chase after something bigger than the next batch of loot. Maybe saying you're you'll rewarded for it is a stretch, but at least you won't be punished for it. So please, won't you help us here?"

There was a moment of blinking silence afterwards. Much to Rodion's surprise, all the Pokémon he'd recruited back into the Iron Fleet from the local garrison seemed to be visibly wavering. He turned his head over to Kenny and saw that the Quilava himself looked like he was seriously considering taking the Sneasel up on her offer.

"Kenny, do you really trust this 'mon?" Rodion whispered.

"I do," the Quilava replied, nodding. "She's one of the few 'mons who stood up for us back on Tromba, and without her we'd still be stuck there."

Kenny fell silent for a moment, before shooting Rodion a pleading look.

"… Maybe we should hear her out?" he suggested. "She didn't steer me wrong in the past, and I don't know if we have any better options right now."

Rodion turned his head to face Alice as she made her way over. He eyed her keenly, his muzzle curling into a small smile as she approached.

"I'll admit, you've got a way with words, Sneasel," he said. "What crew are you from, anyway?"

"The Boltstrike Bandits. We didn't sail into Anyilla all that often back when I was on it, but I'd like to think I can speak your proverbial language well enough," the Sneasel replied. "Also, just call me Alice."

The Boltstrike Bandits, huh? Rodion remembered running into them at sea once, but for whatever reason he couldn't remember that Sneasel being with them at the time. Shame, since he felt that he and Hess would've gotten along well with her.

Maybe it really was for the best to just take up Alice's offer. They were at the mercy of these Imps right now, who sentenced 'mons to death for far less than what had happened here on Gestirn. He knew the alternative wasn't great when the last time they'd gone to Nagrobek seven years ago had already been a close call even when they largely hadn't been on the front lines with the Council's crews.

… He didn't exactly trust that Salamence or Clawitzer to really care about their fates in a dangerous situation all that much… but they clearly respected this 'Zygarde' well enough to let his judgement influence them. As his friend, surely Alice could influence him in turn, meaning they'd have an advocate for them if they went along…

Rodion looked down and closed his eyes for a moment, before shaking his head with a quiet sigh. He opened his eyes again and looked back at Alice, as the ends of his muzzle curled up into a faint smile,

"Alright then, Alice, I'm in. And I'm sure that the rest of my crew-"

"Hey kedama, go walk a plank. Nobody aside from those bottom-feeders is going to go along with this."

Alice paused after a sharp hiss rang out through the air and turned her attention over to Akane, who was leveling a piercing glare alongside her captain.

"Real rich of you to be talking about friendship while we're all tied up like this," the Seviper hissed. "How about we flip this situation around and we can show just how friendly we're feeling at the moment?"

Alice flattened her ears as the mood started to spread from Akane. Other nearby pirates started grumbling and growling their displeasure, prompting the Sneasel to fold her arms back with a small frown.

"Look, I don't expect you all to be friendly right now, just to be rational about your interests here," she insisted. "If you can set aside your feuds and differences to raid a village with this many crews, surely you can do the same with-"

"Take your offer and shove it up your ass, Sneasel," Tarquin growled.

"Seriously, where on earth did you get that speech from?" a red-garbed Conkeldurr scoffed. "Your Guildmaster?"

The mood quickly grew contagious as one pirate after the other joined in scowling and baring their teeth at the Sneasel, their snarls drowning out the few who stared silent and wide-eyed at their peers. From her place in front of the crowd, Alice looked on as her face fell at the pirates' reactions. She sighed and gave an unamused shrug of her shoulders, before she turned and began to walk away.

"Whelp, I tried," the Sneasel said, waving her claw. "Have fun with the crab and flying alligator, since I'm pretty sure they're going to get right to the point with you."

"Very much so," Nagant harrumphed. "Though for reference, I'm a shrimp."

Nagant hopped up and took Alice's place with a steely glare, which much to Elty 's surprise, didn't seem to move more than a handful of pirates' reactions. Valan was similarly unamused, as the Salamence flared his wings and bared his fangs out at the gathered pirates.

"I don't believe the lot of you understand just how precarious your situations are at the moment," Valan growled. "You are facing charges of piracy, mass arson, insurrection, and high treason, all of which would incur harsh sentences were the local Court in a position to try you normally."

"Obviously, that won't be possible with how many of you there are right now," Nagant added. "Which would mean your sentencing would need to be expedited and forgo much of the formal trial process along with your opportunity to plead your cases. Accepting the terms that I offered you earlier will by far be a more pleasant experience for all of us."

"Yeah? Or else what?" an Emboar demanded.

Nagant narrowed her eyes back at the group and turned her head over to a Bewear standing near the edge of the square and motioned over with her claw.

"Bommel, come and show these scoundrels what the rightful reward for their actions would be."

The Bewear lumbered over, and halfway through, Rodion noticed that he was lugging along a hefty sack over his shoulder. The Normal-Type came to the front and set it down with a sharp thump, as the mouth spilled open and a few colored Apricorns spilled out, with one sending the Emboar all but jumping back with a yelp as it almost touched him. Nagant looked back at the gathering, her eyes locked into an icy scowl.

"We begin sentencing tonight for those of you who don't feel like accepting our terms," the Clawitzer snapped. "Whoever chooses this route will get exactly what they deserve under Her Majesty's law to the fullest extent: namely to be put into an Apricorn and sent to their fate in the Wastes."

The gathering went audibly silent, as tense stares and grimaces went about the group. From his place, Rodion stared at the sack himself before setting his teeth on edge.

"… Yeah, that sounds like the Empire I know," he murmured to himself. "Alice really wasn't kidding about them getting right to the point."

A quick uproar broke out, as a few of the more defiant pirates were suddenly cut off by stammering appeals to "hold on a minute here"—including from a few of the stronger-looking pirates like the earlier Haxorus. Nagant rolled her eyes briefly as the Bewear gathered up the stray Apricorns with a heavy cloth, before turning her attention over towards Tarquin's end of the group. The Tyrantrum stared at the Apricorns long and hard and traded a look with his Seviper first mate, when he shook his head with a low growl.

"… Tch, I can see where the Company got its internal culture from," he spat.

Tarquin lowered his head and averted his gaze. His glare looked every bit as fixed and immovable as ever, except the tension in his body had visibly dissipated, as he let out a reluctant grumble.

"I can't make any promises for how the others on Orleigh will take things, but I know when to fold them," the Tyrantrum said. "I'm in."

One after the other, the other pirates joined in, some grudgingly like the Conkeldurr, while others like a Bombirdier joined in with an eagerness that would embarrass even a literal tail-kisser. The sole exceptions were the Marked in the crowd, who visibly squirmed and quailed as their peers yielded, their eyes remaining fixed on Kline.

"N-No, you can't expect us to work for this demon!" a Drizzile stammered.

"Why don't you just kill us and get things over with already?!" a Kingler near the front cried.

Nagant looked over at Kline for a moment, before hopping out of the way. The Zygarde came and slithered forward, coming to a stop in front of the Kingler as he let out a frightened squeal. The other Marked looked on in petrified terror, while the Kingler flinched and curled up, bracing for the end.

Kline let his gaze linger on the quivering pirate, before shaking his head with a low harrumph.

"We already had a feeling that your kind wouldn't be interested in our offer," the Zygarde said. "Fortunately for your sake, you had advocates who arranged for you to receive alternative sentences. They should be coming forward to gather you right now."

Kline briefly looked behind him towards the edge of the square, before slithering out of the way. The Kingler looked back to his fellow pirates and quickly tried to scuttle away, when a furred hand suddenly shot out and dragged him back by his claws' bindings, revealing a Marked Typhlosion giving a withering glare down.

"And where do you think you're going? Just because our village is a haven for those who know the truth doesn't mean that we have to like everyone who takes shelter there," Nina growled. "The lot of you can start by fixing the damage your friends left to our village!"

Nina grabbed the Kingler hind legs and lifted him off the ground, before dragging him off flailing and protesting. A few Marked from Starbreak Square who'd come with Nina stared at Kline wide-eyed for a long moment and visibly squirmed, before the Zygarde sighed and slithered back further. One by one, the other Marked made their way forward with a wide berth and began grabbing the small number of Marked from the captured pirates, leading them off with similar yelps and protests under Nagant's watchful eye in a procession that visibly picked up pace while passing the "demon" in the square.

The Clawitzer began to turn away when she noticed three figures trailing after, and spotted a Marked Combusken, a Grotle, and a Scraggy from her crew attempting to sneak along…

… which summarily came to a stop as she launched a Water Pulse at their feet and threw them off-balance. Nagant hopped over towards the three, throwing her large claw out and dragging the Combusken of the group up by her scarf with a seething hiss.

"That offer didn't extend to you three," she hissed. "Get back to your posts or I'll have you tried for desertion!"

The Combusken let out a startled squawk as Nagant let her go, prompting the three to hurriedly scurry back to the local guards. The shrimp retraced her hops over as Kline slithered back into position, and as she neared the pirates once again, she caught Rodion shooting an askew frown back at her.

"So now what?" the Floatzel asked. "Are you just going to keep us tied up like this?"

"Most of you, yes," she said. "Just because we're running short on places to hold you all doesn't mean that we don't have enough to keep those of you who don't have anything productive to do. As for the rest of you…"

The Clawitzer went up and snapped the ropes holding Rodion's paws in place. The Floatzel shifted his arms, and shook feeling into them as he looked up, and saw the wizened shrimp giving a sharp frown at him.

"Get up and start getting those ships of yours in the harbor that you can salvage sailworthy," she said. "We leave for Orleigh as soon as possible."

The guards began to make their way around and started untying a few of the pirates more obviously suited to ship repairs, while a few others who were passed over at first suddenly loudly and eagerly found a desire to offer their services. As Rodion watched the guards come and start to lead some of the pirates nearby him along, he stood up and shot a sideways glance at Nagant.

"If you're really planning on setting sail 'as soon as possible', I'm going to need a few more friendly paws to help me as the acting captain of my crew," the Floatzel said. "The Quilava with me would be a good place to start."

Nagant rolled her eyes in response, before hopping over and summarily undoing the ropes pinning Kenny's forepaws behind his back. The Quilava uneasily shook feeling into his limbs as Nagant shot Rodion an icy stare.

"Be mindful that we're not going to let you go about as you please just because you're untied, Floatzel," the Clawitzer said. "Don't make us regret this."

Rodion looked over his shoulder towards Kenny just as Elty and Alice walked up to the Quilava, the stoat giving a sheepish grimace as Alice ruffled the fur on his head. The Floatzel let his gaze linger on them, before looking back with a small smirk.

"Heh. Not making any promises there, babushka."



Author's Notes:

- kedama (毛玉) - Japanese: "hairball", "furball" (Hepburn Romanization)
- babushka (бабушка) - Russian: Term for an old lady or a grandmother akin to "granny". (BGN/PCGN Romanization.)
 
Chapter 106: New Normal New

Virgil134

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Elty sat down and ran his paw along the wooden surface of the tavern table that he and his newfound allies were sitting around. Percy and Caldius were on one end, while Berecien and Niilo were on the other. He idly poked and prodded at a tankard filled with beer while his current teammates chatted in the background, as a part of him wondered just how on earth he'd wound up in this situation.

Somehow, in spite of not being among the Pokémon press-ganged into the Royal Navy yesterday, most of today had gone by in a hectic blur. He'd started by helping out the Siglo Swellow by tracking down and haggling for supplies they needed to repair the ship, except that was easier said than done when seemingly the entire waterfront of Starpeak Square was competing for them. It didn't take him long to gather that the Siglo Swellow wasn't going to make it to Orleigh and would have to stay here on Gestirn until it was time for the raid on Nagrobek later in the week.

Percy and Calidus happened to pass by the ship around the time—fresh from coming back from talking Nerea and the Khranitel Rod into going along with Kline's plan, even if from what he'd heard, they'd insisted on supporting everyone else at paw's length and not making themselves known until the actual raid. After realizing that he wasn't ready to leave Team Traveller's fate entirely in others' paws, Elty talked it over with Captain Beatrix and decided to join Team Zephyr until the Siglo Swellow could catch up for the raid. Before he knew it, he was going around with them across Starpeak Square until it was late in the afternoon and they'd decided to take a short break for drinks and wait on Alice to catch up with them, where they ran into Berecien and his friends.

He supposed that things could at least be worse right now. Even if Kline himself didn't seem to know what to do about Pleo just yet, they at least had an idea of how to rescue the rest of Team Traveller, and they weren't short on allies either. Although he wasn't sure how they were exactly going to convince the other pirates on Orleigh to join them into raiding Nagrobek, he figured they'd sort it out during the strategy meeting this evening.

… And yet, why did he still feel like he was staring down storm clouds over the horizon right now?

Maybe it was because despite that Kline had seen them, he didn't know how his teammates were doing at all. Was Pleo alright? And what about everyone else? He'd heard no shortage of stories of how awful the prison on Nagrobek was. What shape would they even be in if they managed to get to them?

"Easy for you to say! You're not the one who got repeatedly humiliated in front of all your friends!"

"Well, no, but you're still alive to try again in the future. That counts for something, doesn't it?"

Elty flicked his ears as he heard voices coming from somewhere past his shoulder. He turned his head, where there, a short way back and across the aisle, he saw Cabot lingering at a table… along with that Hakamo-o guard who'd been his cellmate back in the garrison. Elty hadn't noticed the bandages on guard's body the last time he spotted him, but from the dragon's deflated aura, his pride had clearly been badly wounded over the course of the past few days.

He watched as Cabot gave a pat at the Dragon-Type's shoulder, before giving a small, reassuring smile.

"Don't beat yourself up too hard, alright? Everyone has a bad day, and you're clearly trying, at least," the Rampardos insisted. "Don't worry so much about looking tough to others and just spend some time training yourself up. I'm sure you'll get them next time."

The Hakomo-o's tail wagged slightly and his mood seemed to lift as he turned to his mug. Cabot got up and made his way back to his companions' table. As he settled in, Calidus gave a puzzled tilt of his head.

"Was that Hakomo-o back there a friend of yours?"

"Oh, no, it was just one of the local guards who was a bit upset over some stuff that happened to him during the raid," Cabot explained. "I figured I'd give him some encouragement, since we're on the same side after all."

Cabot raised a tankard from the table—the sweet, burning scent telling Elty that it was rum instead of beer, which the Rampardos had apparently found too bitter. After taking a sip, Cabot paused and turned his head, before shooting Calidus a curious glance.

"On that topic, there's something I don't understand about you and your teammates," he said. "If you've had so much trouble with a team from the Company all this time, why didn't you just join up with the Empire earlier? We would have helped you guys out, for sure!"

Calidus fell silent and set his beak ajar, and looked over at Percy for a moment. The Talonflame was clearly ready to say something, but seemingly thought twice of it. He hesitated briefly, before ruffling his feathers and speaking up.

"Let's just say that Kline values his independence," the Talonflame said. "We've had bad experiences being hunted by that particular team of Company agents, and he didn't want to be in a situation where he was just trading one problem for another."

From beside the Talonflame, Elty raised his cup to his mouth and took a sharp swig, setting it back down on the table by the twine grips on its side. He felt a sharp prod at his shoulder and saw Berecien pulling back a hoof from beside him, with the Ponyta's face screwed into a disapproving scowl.

"… Aren't you a bit young to be drinking?" Berecien asked.

Elty pinned back his ears with a sour frown. He admitted that he wasn't an expert in telling how old Ponyta were, but he couldn't possibly be that much older than him, could he?

"Hrmph, if I'm old enough that I could be press-ganged into your navy, I'm old enough to drink," the Growlithe scoffed.

Berecien shot back an askew glance, before turning his snout back to his own drink and nudging at it with a dismissive huff.

"I was under the impression that you volunteered for this mission in order to get your friends back," the Ponyta retorted. "Just be aware that I'm not going to drag you aboard our ship if you can't hold your liquor."

Elty rolled his eyes before turning his attention back to his own drink. He slipped his paw in between the band and raised the tankard back up to his muzzle, gulping down another mouthful of his beer. He heard the clatter of wood and looked up as the Machop server from the tavern passed by with an almost pyramidal stack of tankards in her grasp. He blinked at the sight briefly, and looked after her when he noticed that off towards the counter, one of the kegs behind it had the triple teardrop emblem of the Iron Fleet etched into it.

As the familiar sigil reminded him, it seemed like he wasn't really able to get away from his old crew. Why, this very tavern had supposedly been their hangout during the pirate takeover, and from the damage and the graffiti left scrawled and carved about, Elty had no reason to doubt what he'd been told.

He stared ahead vacantly and hung his head with a deflated murmur. It had been almost two weeks since that confrontation with Hess and his old shipmates back on Pioppo, but it still felt unreal. Being here, just a few streets away from his old buddies who'd helped pull him out of struggling in the wilds as a pup without his mother, except they now they surely wanted nothing to do with him.

He should've been less fazed by everything, but knowing that the same Pokémon who helped him at his lowest point just hated him now didn't help that pit in his stomach that'd lingered with him since washing up on the beach yesterday…

The thought crossed his mind that maybe it would be worth it to ask Alice to help put in a word for him. She was supposed to have been kept busy since yesterday as a go-between of sorts with the different pirate crews that had been captured, so perhaps she'd be able to see how his old crewmates were doing for him. Surely if she talked to the Iron Fleet, it couldn't go any worse than if he tried it…

Elty brought his gaze up and looked around the tavern, when he noticed that Alice still wasn't there. He turned towards Percy and Calidus, giving a puzzled blink.

"Alice still isn't here yet?" he asked. "I thought she was going to catch up with us at this tavern."

"Things must've been running a bit late dealing with those pirates," Calidus mused.

"She could have just lost track of time while shooting the breeze with that old crew of yours," Percy added. "They did seem like they were the crew that was the friendliest with her, and I saw them doing just as much yesterday."

Elty tilted his head for a moment, before he turned back to the last of his beer. He reached out to slip his paw in through the band, but just left things there for a moment with a tired sigh. From past his shoulder, Niilo turned his head and hesitated for a moment, before gently poking at Elty's shoulder for attention.

"You don't seem to be doing too great yourself," the Sandslash said. "Is something the matter?"

Elty paused for a moment and looked down at his drink. Yes, he supposed he really wasn't doing great right now in between his old friends hating his guts and his new ones being captured by the Company. He finally picked his cup back up, giving the last little bit of beer at the bottom an idle swirl.

"I'm just… worried about things," he replied.

Niilo and his buddies audibly paused afterwards, before Cabot broke the silence with a sighing shake of his head.

"I mean, I can't really blame you there," the Rampardos said. "Knowing that your friends are stuck on Nagrobek of all places-?"

"It's more than that."

Elty finished up his drink before pushing the cup away. He hemmed and hawed briefly as he wondered to himself just how much a bunch of Imps could sympathize with a bunch of pirate problems.

Though if they were so judgemental, would they really be drinking with him right now? Maybe it was worth at least testing the water with them…

"Up until a couple weeks ago, I would've been there alongside the rest of those golden-scarved pirates you press-ganged," Elty explained. "I didn't exactly leave them on the best of terms, and I don't know how they'll feel about seeing me again."

Berecien let out a scoffing "Oh no. Anyway…" under his breath before he turned back to his drink. Elty sharply frowned, quietly wishing that Berecien could've at least tried to hide his disdain towards his old crew. Thankfully, his teammates seemed to be a bit less judgemental, or at least less openly so. Cabot shot the Ponyta a lingering, sidelong glance for a moment, before turning back towards Elty.

"Why don't you just go and talk to someone you know from your old crew?" the Rampardos suggested. "Even if they're still mad at you, they're on a tight leash now, so their reaction can't possibly be worse than whatever it was when you got into that fight."

Elty raised a paw to his chin and thought to himself. No, he supposed that getting mobbed and attacked by his former crewmates probably wouldn't happen again. If for no other reason than that there were guards who were surely keeping them and the other captured pirates in line. At the same time, there was nothing preventing them from loudly voicing their displeasure with him, assuming they even bothered to acknowledge him at all…

Though they liked Alice at least, and if she was really around, surely they'd reel things in a bit. Or at least, enough that it'd be fine to just go up and try to talk with them.

But who he was supposed to talk to was another matter. Even if only some of the Pokémon from the Iron Fleet who'd gotten caught on Gestirn were Pokémon he actually knew, there were certainly quite a few choices to pick from just from what he'd seen from the gathering in the square earlier.

… Maybe it'd make sense to try talking with someone he had a particularly long history with. Someone who was good at smoothing things out and who others would listen to. And he knew just the 'mon to start out with…

"I… need to take care of something in the harbor right now," Elty began. "I'll catch up with you all a little later."

He shuffled out of his seat and landed on the ground on his paws, as the others at the table briefly looked at him in surprise. Calidus tilted his head, before giving a small nod back at the Growlithe.

"Alright, if you don't find us here when you're done, we'll be at the Vasilek," the Talonflame said. "Kline should be waiting for us there along with Nagant and Valan."

Elty gave a nod of his own back before making his way for the tavern's door. Midday sunlight greeted him once he stepped outside, and while he supposed the buildings along the way back to the harbor weren't as bad as the day before now that there were Pokémon pulling down wrecked timbers and clearing away rubble, the place clearly was going to be rough around the edges for a while.

The harbor itself was in a similar state when he reached it, but in spite of the surrounding buildings being gutted and scarred, the docks hummed with activity that almost rivaled the harbor they'd docked in back in Vollezee. There were the swimmers breaking down a wreck near the harbor's entrance with a slow and steady cadence of attacks, the group of pirates on the next dock over inspecting a ship that was streaming seawater down its hull which seemed to be held together by little more than an ice plug and the blind faith of its creators. He eventually found the Mistral Marauder towards the edge, where fresh sails were being hoisted along its mast… in a manner of sorts. Here and there, there were obvious miscolored patches that had been sewn over blackened or torn sailcloth, while a Charmeleon and a Haxorus were loudly going at it on the deck over who between them was at fault for the main topsail getting hoisted upside down…

His attention drifted down towards the pier alongside the ship's hull, when he froze. There, towards the Mistral Marauder's stern, Rodion and Alice were talking to each other in front of one of the gangplanks. The Sneasel was perched on a barrel on the pier, while Kenny was at the Floatzel's side. Elty stiffened up, as over the background clatter of voices and ship repairs, his ears began to make out the Sneasel and Floatzel's voices in the air.

"It's been fun, but I probably should get going now," Alice said. "My friends are probably starting to get a bit worried about why I'm taking so long to come back."

"I suppose it can't be helped… even if we could always fix that later tonight," Rodion offered. "Those Imps never found the rum stash aboard our ship. Perhaps we could have a few drinks later—if you want to, of course."

"Heh, I think I'd like that. Go ahead and save me some," the Sneasel replied, smirking. "I'm sure that Kline will give me an earful about it in the morning, but I'd like to think I've earned myself some fun after the sun sets."

Elty looked on and subconsciously shrank back as he felt his belly churn and a thousand doubts suddenly came to his mind about whether or not this was really a good idea. He wavered briefly when he saw Alice getting up and starting to turn around.

… He'd taken bigger and dumber risks than this in the past, hadn't he? Maybe the thing to do right here and now was just to stop thinking and just speak up.

"Hey! Rodion!"

Kenny turned around and noticed the Growlithe, tugging at Rodion's arm and pointing off towards him. The Floatzel's brow briefly raised as he turned around, when his eyes met Elty's.

Almost immediately, Rodion's face fell, his eyes narrowing into an unamused scowl.

"Oh, it's you again," the Floatzel harrumphed. "Why are you here right now? I thought you said you were happier on that new crew of yours."

… Gods, this was a great start already. Elty uneasily sucked in a breath, awkwardly running a forepaw along the wood of the docks as he met Rodion's and sheepishly spoke up.

"In my defense, I didn't think we were going to run into each other again," the Growlithe said. "Especially not like this."

Kenny reached a paw out and opened his mouth to speak, only to notice Rodion's scowl hadn't budged. Whatever the Quilava was going to say, he quickly thought better of it and bit his tongue and pinned his ears back. From the side, Alice shot an askew glance, looking between Elty and his former first mate, before giving a gentle nudge at the Floatzel's arm.

"I know that you two have history with each other, but I think you should hear him out, Rodion," she insisted. "We'll be entering a dangerous battle in a few days. Whatever's going on between you two, I don't think you should leave it up to fate that you'll get a chance later to sort it out. I've seen no shortage of 'mons who thought the same way and wound up regretting it."

The Floatzel glanced at Alice and visibly hesitated for a moment, before seemingly looking off past a gap in the ships along the dock and out at the harbor's water. He kept his gaze averted for a while, when he let out a grudging sigh.

"… Otlichno. I won't pretend that we don't have scores to settle, but there's no point in me stewing on them until I can slip out of this indigo noose around my neck," he explained. "For now, it's in our interest to work together, even if I'm not happy about it."

"I mean, at least we can still have fun during downtime, right?" Kenny chipped in. "Just like old times!"

Both Rodion and Elty turned after hearing the Quilava chime in and saw him sporting a grin that seemed a bit too eager. Kenny held his smile for a brief moment before noticing that both the Floatzel and Growlithe's moods hadn't changed, as it slid off his face and hung his head in disappointment.

Elty set his teeth on edge and dug his paw into the pier. Gah, why was this so difficult? He'd come here precisely because Rodion seemed like maybe he'd remember all the times that they'd spent together, but it just felt like he was stumbling over his words for what to say!

A flash of realization suddenly crossed his mind. Maybe there was one more thing that he could try…

"I'm still thankful that you took me aboard the crew when I was younger, you know," Elty said. "And for all the time that we spent together afterwards."

Rodion paused briefly, his face briefly easing into a more neutral expression. Kenny looked between Rodion and Elty, giving a puzzled tilt of his head. The Growlithe of the pair pinned his ears back and averted his gaze, fumbling around with his words in his mouth.

"I… don't know if I'd have done everything all the same again, but I know that if it wasn't for you and the rest of the Iron Fleet, that I wouldn't be alive today," he said. "Really, the only reason why we're even on different sides from each other right now is because of Pleo."

He shuffled his paws briefly, before looking up at Rodion's eyes with a pleading gaze.

"But if you're not hunting him anymore, do we really still have to be on opposite sides?" Elty asked. "Maybe it's also a chance to try something different… I mean, I haven't been doing terrible since I left your crew, and Kenny wasn't doing bad on Tromba either."

Kenny reflexively stiffened up and flattened his ears at the Growlithe's comment, as his face suddenly looked as if he'd just been pushed off the dock and into the water.

"Er… just saying, I was a lot happier with the part where we were sailing with the Siglo Swellow than when I was stuck babysitting those Nidoran."

Elty set his teeth on edge and quietly hemmed and hawed in reply. Right, he supposed that didn't quite work like it did with most of his former crewmates, since Kenny's Community Service was supposed to have been particularly unpleasant. He opened his mouth to correct himself, only for Rodion to give a quiet harrumph, his muzzle having curled down into a small frown.

"You're free to do whatever you want, Eltenios, but I wasn't exactly planning on leaving piracy once this is over."

The Floatzel folded his arms, before shaking his head in reply.

"I never was a 'mon that just took orders from anyone with a banner who made up a story about why they deserved to be in charge," he said. "Besides, someone's gotta be out there for 'mons that other pirate crews would look down on or push around. I may always be successful at doing so, but I'd rather go down with my ship free and knowing that I did my best than to live a life tail-kissing some nobles."

Elty quietly set his teeth on edge before turning his attention over at Kenny. The Quilava averted his gaze and pawed at his shoulder, before speaking up hesitantly.

"Yeah, I'd… like to stick with my friends, really," Kenny said. "And aside from you, Pyry, and Pekka, everyone else went back to the Iron Fleet, so…"

Elty's ears and tail drooped. A part of him knew that that was what the two were probably going to say back, but it didn't make it any less disappointing that he hadn't gotten through to them.

"I… see," he murmured. "Thanks for hearing me out, I guess."

He turned to leave, as Rodion looked after him. The Floatzel felt a paw at his shoulder and saw Kenny looking at him with a pleading gaze. Rodion hesitated for a moment, before shaking his head and calling out after the departing Growlithe.

"There's others on the crew that miss you, you know."

Elty turned his head back, where much to his surprise, the Floatzel was walking up to him, the frown on his face having eased ever so slightly.

"I'll admit, Hess was probably too hasty to attack you on Pioppo, but it still hurt when you turned your back on us out there after we looked out for you since you were a young pup. Just about any other crew would've brought out the plank for something like that," Rodion began, before shaking his head. "But that's not what I'd want to do. Even now when most of the others we lost on Tromba are back on the crew again, things just haven't been the same since you've been gone. I get that you care about keeping Lugia and the rest of your new friends safe, but we wouldn't mind if you came back to us afterwards."

Elty looked back at Rodion, and much to his surprise, even if it was muted, there seemed to be an almost wistful look in his own eyes, too. The Growlithe hesitated for a moment, before shaking his head back in reply.

"… I think we both know that's not going to happen, Rodion," he said, trailing off with an awkward shuffle of his paws.

"But, for now, at least… if you need help, I wouldn't mind giving it to you. Or to help fight at your side."

Rodion said nothing for a moment, before looking down with a small smile.

"I wouldn't mind that, either. Besides, even if you don't wind up coming back, nobody said we had to part ways as enemies…" the Floatzel said, as his mouth curled up into a mischievous smirk.

"Well, until we wind up having something to fight over, anyways."

He ran his paw over Elty's head fur with a tentative pet, before giving him an affectionate scratch under his chin. Elty found himself wagging his tail as he just stood there and basked in the Floatzel's affection. He didn't know whether or not things would really work out with Rodion the way Alice had apparently managed with her old crew… but he figured he could live for this for now.

"Hey! Both of you, get back to work!"

Kenny suddenly flared up with a start as the four turned and saw a scowling indigo-clad Tentacruel in the water, prompting the Quilava to hurriedly turn and dart back off for the Mistral Marauder. Rodion shot a sharp frown back at the Tentacruel, before getting up and making his way for the caravel himself.

"I should get back to keeping an eye on things," he said. "We'll all be leaving for Orleigh tomorrow morning and that crab will get on my tails if I don't look like I'm being useful."

He saw Alice shoot a frown of her own at the Tentacruel, before folding her arms with a sour pout. Elty supposed that was a sign that it was time to leave things off here. He nodded back and turned for the shoreline, as the Floatzel called out after him.

"We'll have your back out there. Even if you decide to still go your own way afterwards."

The Growlithe turned his head back, as a smile came over his muzzle.

"We will, too," he replied. "Good luck out there."

The Floatzel gave a parting wave as Elty left alongside Alice and made his way off the dock. Unlike his journey over, this time he held his head up high as he made his way deeper into the battered town around him.

All that was left now was to just get to Orleigh. He wasn't fully sure how they were going to make things work, but he supposed Kline and Nagant would explain whatever plan they came up with today during the meeting tonight.

And whatever happened after leaving Gestirn, Elty was confident that he'd had more friends to face it at his side than he'd assumed just a little earlier.



Even a full two days after testifying before the Board, Salvini just couldn't shake the persistent feeling every time she went down the hallways of the Academy that the walls and ceiling were about to collapse on her. She kept whirling her head around after every unexpected footfall or bump in the hallway, as a part of her mind kept expecting it to be a group of snarling guards—or worse still, Zelle and her friends arriving to drag her away.

She stopped after her most recent glance over her shoulder and pinched her brow, looking up to see that she was in front of the Academy's library. It was just a few more days until she was back on Mengir. Until everything that had happened between her and that Sylveon would be a bad memory—

"Salvini?"

"A-Aah!"

Salvini jumped and whirled around, her arm leaves folding up against each other into blades. There was a flash of lavender fur as she saw Hertsog behind her, the Mienshao all but jumping back with a start himself. There was a moment's pause as Salvini tried to steady her breath, as Hertsog shot a wary, askew glance at her.

"… Salvini?" the Mienshao asked. "Are you alright?"

The Grovyle unfurled her leaves and pawed at her chest. She felt her still-pounding heart race underneath her claws, before shaking her head back with a tired sigh.

"Yeah, I've just been a little on-edge from having to testify before the Board," she said. "After Darzin rushed me like that, it's sometimes hard to really believe that everything's actually over."

"It's alright, I understand," Hertsog said. "There were a fair share of loose ends left after Darzin's arrest, and it's only natural to feel anxious about them."

In spite of the Mienshao's reassurances, his own posture still looked noticeably tense and guarded. It crossed Salvini's mind that something was wrong, when Hertsog suddenly checked his surroundings, before turning and giving a small tug at her arm.

"Though do you have a moment?" he asked. "Something urgent's come up that I think we should talk about."

Salvini faltered, wondering just what could've happened such that Hertsog couldn't just talk about things openly in the hallway. Had something happened to their positions back on Mengir? Had Hertsog found out about the way that Zelle and her teammates had coerced her into giving a false testimony to the Board?

She hesitated, before giving an uneasy paw at her shoulder.

"I… suppose that I can take a little break from keeping an eye on things, yes."

"Good," the Mienshao said. "The others should already be waiting for us."

"… 'The others'?"

Hertsog didn't reply as he began to make his way towards a quieter stretch of hallways. Salvini followed after him and could overhear lectures in some of the rooms that they passed. She supposed it wouldn't be long before it came time for them to let out for their next period. Curiously enough, Hertsog had walked over to a small study room, and propped open the door for her. She stepped through its threshold, where much to her surprise, Phyllis and Payak were already inside, waiting for her.

"Phyllis? Payak?" Salvini asked. "What's going on here?"

The pair traded blinking glances with one another, before turning back to her.

"We were hoping that Hertsog told you already," Payak said. "Since we're all a bit out of the loop at the moment."

"I was just about to get to that, Payak," the Mienshao insisted. "But it's something that we need to discuss in private."

Hertsog stepped into the room and pulled the door shut behind him, before walking over to the windows and drawing a set of blinds closed. Phyllis and Payak both seemed to sense that something was amiss, as they turned worried stares over at their Mienshao captain.

"Hertsog, what's going on?" Phyllis asked.

"Yeah, it's not like you to pull us all aside in the middle of the day like this," Payak added.

The Fighting-Type draped his satchel onto a nearby desk and opened his mouth to speak only to falter, as if he was just about to say something but was struggling with his words. He clicked his tongue and shook his head, before finally speaking up.

"Earlier today, I picked up a Second-Rank scarf from headquarters in advance of our journey back to Mengir. While I was there, I learned that the Executive Suites in the Company Headquarters have been sealed off to all employees" Hertsog explained. "On top of that, there's a surprising amount of activity going on in the harbor. A large fleet pulled into port from some mission near Imperial waters yesterday, and word has it that a bunch of ships from off-island are suddenly due to come into port in the coming days."

Salvini tensed up. The military harbor was that active now? When it had barely been cleared up from the fighting there just last week? What would prompt the Company to bring in so many ships and Pokémon on such short notice? Payak and Phyllis both hesitated, as the two shot puzzled glances over at Hertsog.

"Does it have something to do with what happened with Administrator Darzin?" Phyllis asked. "Did the Intelligence Division get wind of a coming raid?"

"I don't know. That's why I pulled you all aside," Hertsog answered. "I wanted to know if any of you had heard anything through the grapevine, since I'm not sure what's going on right now. Other than that it doesn't seem to be good."

The Ariados and Leafeon shook their heads back in reply as Salvini tried to think of what all that strange activity could mean, only for her eyes to suddenly widen in realization:

"It's because of Pleo."

Hertsog and the others' own eyes widened in reply, as both Payak and Phyllis gave incredulous gapes back at her.

"Pleo? As in Lugia?" Phyllis asked.

"Salvini, what makes you so sure?" Payak demanded.

"It's because of the way they made me testify before the Board," the Grovyle explained, shaking her head. "That Sylveon knew everything about what happened on Mengir and blackmailed me into giving me false testimony."

There was a blank look over Payak's face as the Ariados looked like he was in shock, while Phyllis' fur was standing on end. Hertsog himself was tense and visibly alarmed as he traded glances between his companions in confusion.

"But what does any of that have to do with-?"

"She and her friends were after him. She told me to my face right afterwards," Salvini insisted. "The sudden weird behavior, all those ships suddenly sailing here without an explanation being given… it all only makes sense if they captured Pleo and brought him back here."

A stunned silence lingered in the room as one by one, Salvini's teammates grimaced, realizing that the Grovyle's explanation seemed to add up. All of a sudden, Payak jolted up with an impatient chitter, as he already began scurrying for the door and motioned for the others to follow.

"Hayde, we know exactly where to find him," the Ariados said. "The Headquarters isn't that far from here, and-"

"Payak, slow down there."

Hertsog stepped out into Payak's way, prompting him to scuttle back and raise his forelegs with an agitated hiss.

"Hertsog, what on earth are you going about?!" the Ariados demanded. "He's right there, and if we just explain-!"

"They would almost certainly deny his presence, given that they haven't made any public announcements about him so far," the Mienshao reminded. "And if things came down to it, it's not as if we could free him by force. He's in the middle of the Company headquarters and surrounded by guards that are much more experienced than the four of us and who vastly outnumber us."

Payak's enthusiasm quickly dissipated and he visibly drooped afterwards. From what Salvini could gather, Phyllis looked visibly on-edge and alert. What on earth could they even do? Marching in and fighting whatever guards had been posted at the Executive Suites certainly wasn't an option, and if these orders really came from the Board, she doubted she could convince anyone to let Pleo go.

Salvini turned her attention back to Hertsog, who gave an uneasy twitch of his whiskers, before lowering his head with a sigh.

"If there is a way of freeing Pleo, we're not the Pokémon who are in a position to do anything about it right now," Hertsog said. "At the very least, I'm sure that whatever place they're keeping him in the Executive Suites isn't physically uncomfortable."

The Mienshao's mood visibly darkened, as he shook his head and looked away.

"It's his friends that I'm more worried about."

"His friends? Hertsog, what do you mean?" Phyllis asked, tilting her head.

"Remember how Administrator Zorn was ready to deal with them back on Mengir when he had Commander Briggs tell us that they were pirates?" the Mienshao replied. "Who's to say they haven't already been sent back there to meet a fate like that? Or to someplace worse like Nagrobek?"

An uncomfortable silence filled the air as Salvini and her companions balked from a sinking realization: Team Traveller were almost certainly in deep trouble right now. They wouldn't have let Pleo go without a fight, and if Pleo was here in Vollezee right now, his friends had almost certainly been overpowered and captured.

Salvini paused. Even if it was definitely wishful thinking to some extent, the Grovyle admitted there was some logic to Hertsog's theory. But that meant that Team Traveller were being held prisoner somewhere in Company waters with them having nothing more than hunches as to where they could've been sent to. Phyllis looked down at the ground for a moment, before turning back to the Mienshao with a grimacing stare.

"… What are we supposed to do, then?" the Leafeon asked.

"Try and get them released. I can show that things aren't adding up with the way they're being sentenced and maybe try to work something out," Hertsog mused. "I don't know what the odds of me succeeding are, but I have to try."

The Mienshao got up and slung his bag back onto his shoulder, before turning and making his way for the door. He raised a paw and placed it on its push pad, pausing to glance back over his shoulder at his companions.

"There's a couple days left before we are due to return to Mengir. We have until then to try and find out what happened to them and do something," Hertsog said. "If they weren't sent to Mengir, then I'll be taking a different ship to wherever Pleo's friends might be. That way, I could try to secure their release before finally heading back to Mengir…"

He trailed off briefly, before looking over at his teammates and pawing hesitantly at his shoulder.

"That said, I was wondering whether you three wanted to join me, perhaps."

Much to Salvini's surprise, before she could open her mouth, Phyllis and Payak were already jolting up and halfway over to Hertsog at the door.

"Of course we do, Hertsog!" Phyllis insisted.

"Yeah! Why on earth is this even a question?!" Payak added.

It was honestly a little surprising to see the two so eager to try and get Pleo's friends back. Especially Phyllis, but as Salvini echoed their feelings, she couldn't help but feel a bit relieved. Strangely, Hertsog's face remained unmoved, as the Meinshao kept his features locked up into a stern, insistent frown.

"Are you all sure?" he pressed. "There's nothing at all that you have reservations about?"

The three hesitated, as Hertsog stepped towards them and narrowed his eyes with a scrutinizing gaze.

"This isn't exactly a trivial decision I'm asking you to make. If we do wind up having to pay for a second fare, it would have to come out of our own pocket. And if we don't make it back to Mengir on time, we'll be recorded as being absent without leave," the Mienshao insisted. "I'm fully prepared to deal with the consequences if things come to that, but I want to make sure that you three are as well before I get you involved in this."

Both Payak and Phyllis shrank back, as Salvini couldn't help but look down and paw at her lavender scarf. Even if she doubted she'd feel safe until being back on Mengir, it just felt wrong somehow to just go back as if nothing ever happened. At the same time, they'd gone through so much just to have this chance to go back to the island, and for everyone else on her team, it was a chance to finally go back home. If they didn't report back for duty in time to Zorn, they would likely be kicked from the ranks and blacklisted from future employment.

Salvini's gaze drifted over towards the lavender scarf around her neck and paused. Her own parents had worn ones like the one around her neck right now, and the more she thought about it, the more she knew what her parents would've done in her place:

"I am. When my mom and dad were in the Company when I was young, I looked up to them because of the way that they helped other Pokémon while they were on the job," the Grovyle said. "It's why my brother joined, it's why I joined… even if it feels like I haven't been able to do a lot of 'helping' lately."

She stepped ahead, looking up at Hertsog as a determined glint came over her eyes.

"I'm tired of being used, Hertsog," Salvini said. "If it's something that's possible at all, I want to do what I know is right. Even if it's not easy."

Phyllis and Payak joined in themselves just afterwards and echoed Salvini's reply. Hertsog said nothing for a brief moment, as his features eased, and a small smile came over his muzzle.

"Then learn what you can about whatever happened with Pleo and his friends from whatever chatter's going around the ranks right now," he said. "I'll set some time aside for us to check in again tomorrow."

Salvini and her teammates nodded back their affirmations, as the Mienshao pushed the door open and stepped out into the hallway. He waited for the others to follow him out, and after checking his surroundings, leaned in with a hushed whisper.

"Let each other know if you find anything."

"We will," Salvini said. "Just let us know whenever you want to meet."

"I'll hold you to that," Hertsog replied, smiling back. "Though good luck, I'm counting on all of you."



"What, me? Scared? Nah."

Nida flicked her ears and blinked her eyes open with a groan that was equal measures weary and annoyed. As her senses returned to her, they reminded her that she wasn't in a nightmare. She was still lying on the same stale straw that had been dumped in her cell, still surrounded by the same floor and walls made of the same cold stone, and the exit was still blocked off by the same metal bars…

And that blasted Zangoose was up and leaning against them, puffing his chest out and flexing his claws in front of their cellmates. Again.

"You clearly heard wrong. I had skull-for-brains quivering in his tracks back there!" the Zangoose insisted. "As he should've, since nobody messes with me and gets away with it!"

And now, as they had every time the Zangoose had done likewise since coming here, they were staring at him with tired, unamused frowns. Kiran buried his face into a wing with a grumbling sigh, while the others looked even less enthused. The scraggly Luxio from their cellmates was the standout of the group, as he narrowed his eyes with a sour frown.

"And that's why you're in here with the rest of us, huh?" he scoffed.

The Zangoose raised a claw and started to speak, only to pause and pin his ears back. The pirate's loss of composure faded almost as quickly as it started, as he folded his arms back with an insistent huff.

"That was a lucky fluke!" the Zangoose protested. "Put me and that Marowak back together and you'll see how I'd really stack up against him!"

Nida screwed her eyes shut and pawed at her face. Travellers above, here she thought that that Hakamo-o back on Gestirn was an aggravating cellmate. It'd only been two days, and she already found herself wishing she was stuck with that dragon over this loudmouth.

She let her eyes drift towards the ground and idly kicked at the stone flooring underneath. It was hard to believe that it'd really only been two days since they came here. Things had somehow felt much longer than that already…

"Alright, get up you lazy parasites!"

Nida jolted back after hearing a deafening voice and sharp yelp come from the entrance of her cell, when she whirled her head and saw the Zangoose cringing from an Obstagoon walking past the bars. She made her way over with her cellmates to steal a peek of what was going on in the cellblock. All along the different levels, there were other guards making the rounds, including further down the balcony their cell was attached to. She shuffled back as a Slowbro lumbered over with a sharp growl, as the Psychic-Type fetched out a set of keys on a ring and undid the door before propping it open.

The sign that it was time to begin another long and terrible day in this place.

"Oh boy, this again…" Nida muttered.

The Slowbro gave an impatient huff as one by one, Nida's cellmates filed out. She followed after them, pinning her ears and briefly flinching under that Slowbro's gaze as she made her way out onto the wooden walkway. All around the cellblock, other prisoners were filing out… along with some laggards who were drug out into their ranks by the guards with yelps and shouts that punctuated the air.

She shook her head and tried not to listen to their cries, as she shuffled along and made her way through the same routine she'd gone through yesterday: down the length of the balcony to the stairs, where after going down their flights to the ground floor, she and Kiran joined the stream of prisoners being marched out. The guards took them through the same bleak, claustrophobic-feeling halls, and to the same turn to the right into the shower room—if it could even be called that. The place was more or less a hall where prisoners were constantly being herded forward, which began with Pokémon unceremoniously dumping cold water on them from above. After getting soaked, their shower would end with being given a few scant moments to dry off under the ambient warmth of a Sunny Day before getting all but pushed back out into the prison's hallways.

And like those prior days, it was just a short walk afterwards to the prison's cafeteria. The place had been laid out not wholly unlike the chamber they'd first entered the prison in. It looked like it had once been some sort of large room with a tall ceiling, with a balcony running around the length of a large room with slit-like windows. Back on the ground, there were crude tables and seats set out in rows in the middle that were already crowded with tired and sullen-looking faces. Off at the very back, rations were being given out along with trays to carry them, which from the glimpses of some of the other returning prisoners Nida passed on the way over, looked like they were getting stale gummis and a couple of small berries to eat again.

"Next!"

When she and Kiran finally made it up to the counter, the cook behind it unceremoniously dumped their rations onto their trays and shuffled them along. Nida and Kiran grabbed them and made their way through the mess hall. They passed several tables where all manner of weary-looking Pokémon were crowded together, except none of the faces that she saw were ones that she recognized. Not even their other teammates that she and Kiran had discovered were being kept in their same cellblock…

"Kiran, I don't see Pladur and Pyry today," she said. "Did something happen to them?"

"No, they seem to be fine," he replied. "That's them over there."

Kiran raised a wing and pointed off towards the far end of the hall on the left. The tables were emptier there, where under the light of a barred window, she saw Pladur and Pyry were seated at an otherwise-empty table and already picking at their daily rations. Nida shook her head and made her way over alongside Kiran, the two of them sitting down in front of their dragon teammates as their trays clattered against the table's wood.

The pair briefly looked at her, and for a moment Nida opened her mouth to say 'good morning' only to think better of it after seeing their conditions. The two both looked visibly tired with dark circles under their eyes, and both had patches of missing scales here and there on their bodies. Side effects from the past two days of work, she gathered—much like the scrapes under her pelt she'd picked up herself. Kiran visibly looked at a loss for words himself when he sized the two up. He idly pecked at his food for a moment, before finally breaking the silence:

"Did you two sleep well?" the Swellow asked. "You looked exhausted coming back to the cellblock yesterday."

Pyry didn't raise his head to acknowledge them, and idly poked and prodded at his gummis with a claw.

"We're still alive, so it could've been worse, I suppose…"

Nida flicked her ears and shot an askew glance over at Pyry. She knew that things weren't exactly going well, but did the Gabite really need to be so negative on top of everything?

… Maybe that wasn't fair of her. It wasn't as if she'd been able to stay fully positive herself over the last couple days, when she'd been separated from most of her friends and hadn't seen anything of them. Especially Crom. It must've been getting to Pladur too, since he looked visibly uneasy and wound up picking at his food, before glancing across the table.

"Did you two hear anything at all about where Crom was sent to?" the Fraxure asked. "I haven't found any leads at all since we got assigned to our cells two days ago…"

Nida flicked her ears uncomfortably as she stopped her paw in the middle of bringing a gummi to her mouth.

… Was Crom okay? He was apart from his dad all this time. Apart from Kiran. Apart from her. Even if dragons had a reputation for being tough and stubborn types, she could already see day by day how the prison was grinding down Pyry and Pladur, and they were both older than him. Could he really be doing any better than them right now…?

The rustling of feathers snapped her to attention, as she saw Kiran raise a wing and shake his head in reply.

"No, but I managed to talk to Dimitri, and he said that Crom was fine the last time he saw him. Or at least as fine as a Pokémon can be in a place like this," the Swellow replied. "Apparently the two of them are in the same cellblock. Crom's also sharing a cell with Natrix and Philips, so he's in good wings right now, at least. Or at least until we can get back together and get out of here."

Nida saw the faintest outlines of a smile on Pladur's tired face. Even if it was something small, the news had clearly lifted his spirits a bit. The Nidorina turned her attention back to her food as Kiran pecked at his tray. As she finished some off her gummis, it dawned on her that whenever she raised her head, Pyry's tray looked like he'd barely eaten anything from it.

"… What about you, Pyry?" Nida asked. "Have you heard from anyone else? You're supposed to be pretty close to Pekka's cell, is he doing alright right now?"

"I saw him once yesterday, but he seemed to be doing okay, at least…" Pyry murmured. "I- I just…"

He trailed off and looked away, as Nida's thought back to the way Pyry had been in the ship's cargo hold on the way over. The Gabite had spent the entire trip drifting in and out of panic attacks about being sent to Nagrobek. He'd said that he'd somehow found out that his mother had died here. Just what could they even say back to that? He knew this place better than any of them did, and every time the topic came up, he'd grow noticeably hopeless and anxious.

"Are we gonna die in here?"

… Just like he was doing right now. Nida fell silent and glanced towards Kiran, hoping he'd have something to say, but the Swellow seemed at a loss for words himself. There was movement from across the table as she saw Pladur shuffling over and patting Pyry's shoulder, the Fraxure sporting a weak smile.

"Don't give up so quickly, chaval," he insisted, pumping a fist for emphasis. "We're dragons after all. It's in our nature to dig in and face down danger instead of just rolling over."

The more Nida looked at the two of them, the more it struck her that Pladur's smile looked a little forced and his eyes' expression didn't fully line up with his smile. Pyry didn't seem to notice it, since the Gabite seemed to grow visibly less tense after Pladur's reassurance. Even so, a part of Nida wondered whether or not Pladur really meant the words he was saying, since it almost felt like something he'd say to cheer himself up. Or something he'd say to cheer Crom up, since it didn't sound all that different from the sorts of things he'd told the Druddigon to try and lift his spirits while they were being transported over here.

… Could that be why he was doing this? Because he was separated from Crom and needed someone to look after since he wasn't there to do the same for him?

Nida looked about the dining hall as she drifted in her thoughts, and how lonely the table felt even though she was sitting with friends right now. She missed Crom. If only he was here right now, it'd make everything about this prison just a little more bearable…

"Wait, Nida? Is that you…?"

Nida flicked her ears as everyone else's attention turned behind her. Pladur and Pyry both blinked in surprise, while Kiran craned his head back and visibly did a double-take. When she went and followed their gaze, she saw a tired-looking Nuzleaf trudging forward. One who she immediately recognized as being from those con artists from Buyeom that had gone missing when fleeing Canalhouse City…

"Albert?" the Nidorina said. "You're here, too?"

"Yeah, we got ambushed by that Weavile and his teammates after we left the ship to go into Canalhouse last week," the Nuzleaf explained. "I don't know what happened to the rest of you, but I guess you must've gotten caught yourselves."

"… Something like that," Nida sighed, pawing at the back of her head. "It's a long story. But how did they wind up sending you here of all places?"

"I wouldn't know, since we were in Apricorns for most of it," Albert answered. "Once we got let out, we saw that we were in the prison courtyard and got separated afterwards."

The Nuzleaf looked tired. His leaf sported damage along its edge and he had quite a few scrapes on his body. Even so, Albert couldn't help but steal glances around as if he was searching for something, before looking at them with a strangely intent look.

"I was hoping to find the others," he murmured. "Especially since I'd heard that a Ditto was sent here about two weeks ago. I even managed to get myself transferred to a different cell by baiting a couple fights to try and follow a lead, but I haven't found any sign of Charlie, Marilyn, or David at all."

There was an awkward silence around the table, as Kiran shuffled his wings and spoke up.

"Sorry, we haven't seen any sign of them ourselves," the Swellow said.

Albert drooped at the Swellow's response. He averted his gaze briefly and for a moment, Nida thought that he was about to leave, only for the Nuzleaf to look back with a pleading stare.

"Could you… keep an eye out for them, at least?" he asked. "Marilyn and Charlie are just kids, so I can't imagine this place has been easy on them. I can do what I can to look out for any of your friends in return."

Nida couldn't help but blink in reply. It was so strange to think that here they were, actually working with a Pokémon that had lured them into a trap for Team Sentinel just barely over two weeks ago. Though she supposed that they were all in the same boat right now, and beggars couldn't be choosers about the help they received.

"Yeah, we'll do what we can," Kiran said, before gesturing with his wing to the empty seat besides him. "Though why don't you join us? With everything that's been going on right now, it's better to have more friends to try and get through things than less."

The Nuzleaf paused briefly, before stepping up and joining them at the table. Nida turned her attention back to her bowl and began to nibble away at a green gummi, when she heard footsteps passing just behind them.

"Tch, those new 'mons look downright pathetic," a growling voice scoffed. "I swear some of them are still kids."

She turned from her food and froze alongside her teammates after seeing a Slowbro and an Obstagoon looking at them as they walked by. The Obstagoon sized them up briefly, before turning back to the Slowbro with a toothy sneer.

"How long do you think they'll last on ore duty?" the Obstagoon snickered. "100 Thalers says half of them will keel over and need to get drug off the line."

"Meh, we'll find out soon enough," the Slowbro scoffed.

The guards drifted off, as the Nida and the rest of her teammates uneasily returned to what remained of her food. She looked down into her bowl at the remainder of her food, and tried to focus on it, only for the guards' conversation to linger with her.

She decided that she wasn't hungry anymore after that.



Work in the prison was done in a series of chambers just below the different cellblocks. They consisted of open rooms and halls which had in parts been cut from the surrounding stone and in others been formed from poured concrete with straight, flat walls. Nida's work today was the same as yesterday's: going back and forth ferrying crushed-up ore that others called "concentrate". Her journey each time began in a chamber where Pokémon broke up the ore and gathered the concentrate they made into a pile, where Nida and others like her would come and scoop up their contents in bags.

The Nidorina made her way forward, passing exhausted-looking Pokémon like her who were coming and going from the pile of concentrate cradling cloth sacks. She fought against her aching limbs as she shuffled her way to the heap and filled up her bag before hoisting it in onto her back—another load for her journey back to the smelters.

The route back took her past a stretch where Pokémon were hard at work crushing rocks, all under the glare of Pokémon clad in lavender who kept a sharp watch on them amid harsh barks to keep working. She glanced over the unfortunates, where she saw Pladur standing off to the side of a small pile of rocks, as the Dragon-Type stared down at the ground with his mouth flopped open and panting. Nida made her way over to the Fraxure, before setting her bag down beside Pladur and raising a paw out towards him.

"… Pladur? Estás bien?"

The Fraxure looked over at her for a moment, but he wasn't able to form words with his mouth. After a few shaky breaths, he finally managed to find his voice, and spoke up in a shaky stammer.

"I-I'll be fine. Just needed to catch my breath a bit."

Nida shot a sidelong glance at Pladur as he continued to gasp for air. Could he really be telling the truth? He sure didn't look like he'd be fine…

Nida suddenly felt a jolt from behind as she turned and saw Pyry lumbering along, fighting to balance a bag full of crushed ore as the Gabite staggered and wheezed. Pladur visibly stiffened up as he watched Pyry trudge off. The Fraxure began to follow after him only to hesitate after seeing one of the prison guards pass, before turning back to Nida with a worried grimace.

"… Keep an eye on him for me, will you?"

Nida looked after the Gabite herself. She opened her mouth to reflexively tell Pladur that she would, only to catch herself. Her own body was sore from being overworked since arriving here, and if Pyry did get into serious trouble… just what could she do that Pladur or any of her other teammates couldn't…?

She tried to dispel those thoughts from her mind, before wearily nodding back at him.

"I'll do what I can, Pladur."

Nida picked up her bag of ore again and began to follow after Pyry and the small line of beaten-down Pokémon ahead of them. They made their way through a hallway with straight walls that opened up into a tall chamber at its end. The further she and Pyry made their way along it, the more the smell of acrid smoke hung in the air. The air around also grew perceptibly hotter, as Nida looked up after they reached the end of the hallway to see a line of towering brick-and-concrete structures with fiery orange glows at their bases up ahead—the smelters which were kept stoked to help refine the crushed-up ore they'd been gathering into finished tin.

Even two days later, she hadn't quite gotten used to how big these things were. Nida let her eyes linger on the furnaces for a moment, as she noticed Pyry stumble just up ahead. The Gabite was visibly tottering under the weight of the bag as he shakily put one foot out after the other. As Nida caught up with him, she set her bag down and hurried over, helping to support the bag in Pyry's grasp while giving an uneasy paw at the Gabite's arm.

"Pyry, are you alright? Why don't you take a moment to catch your breath?"

Nida grabbed the bag of ore from Pyry's shoulders and helped guide it to the ground. The Dragon-Type all but slumped over afterwards, as he sat against the ground, his breaths coming out harsh and labored. As Nida got a closer look at him, she noticed that all over Pyry's body, there were scuffs and patches and missing scales that she hadn't seen on him earlier in the cafeteria.

She pinned her ears back and grimaced. She knew that Pyry hadn't been taking things well since coming to this prison, but she didn't realize that he'd already been getting so worn down…

"You look a little roughed up," she murmured. "What happened to you?"

"I was breaking rocks earlier. The guards made me keep doing that until I couldn't attack anymore."

Pyry visibly trembled, and hung his head, staring vacantly down at the ground.

"H-How do they expect us to just go on like this?!" he cried. "Can't we rest for even just a little bit?!"

The Gabite's tone of voice felt uncomfortably familiar to Nida. She couldn't put her paw on it at first, when it suddenly dawned on her that he sounded just like he did whenever he complained about working at Crom's bakery back home.

Nida had always dismissed it back then as just Pyry whining about his Community Service, but maybe she had been too harsh on him, since she could certainly understand what he was going through now. They'd both been struggling day in and day out with this work, and from the way his eyes were visibly shrunken, Pyry looked like he was just about the end of his rope. She patted the Gabite, and spoke up in what she hoped sounded like a soothing tone.

"Pyry, it's okay. Just try to pace yourself and take things one step at a time," the Nidorina said. "Kiran said that things are supposed to get easier after the first couple days as we get more used to things."

Or at least, she hoped that they would with how tiring just the past two had been.

Nida suddenly heard voices and saw movement from the corner of her eye, as she spotted two guards eyeing them and starting to approach. She hastily helped Pyry raise his bag back onto his shoulders, before whispering into his ear.

"That's our sign to get going. Come on."

Nida hurried back and grabbed her own bag before the guards could catch up, as she and Pyry made their way towards the smelters. At this point, the heat in the air was downright sweltering, and the smoke was now thick enough that it made her feel light-headed as she breathed. As they walked up the final stretch, they began to make out conveyer belts with Pokémon dumping out the contents of sacks onto them that carried over to the tall furnaces. Weary-looking Pokémon ran along nearby wheels that kept the belts moving, while others who mostly had wings stood near glowing slits at their bases, regularly stoking the furnaces with gusts of wind.

Nida shuffled up to one of the conveyer belts and dumped her bag's contents out. She briefly watched it get carried away with the rest of the concentrate on it, when she heard a familiar, chirping voice, and looked over to see a Swellow stoking the furnace closest to her.

"Kiran?"

The Swellow briefly turned from his furnace and stepped over. He shook his feathers out, before raising a wing with a tired sigh.

"Oh, you're back already, Nida," Kiran said. "You were about 10% faster than most Pokémon I've seen make it here, so you might even have some time to rest a bit."

Nida noted that Kiran's feathers looked mussed and frayed, with a layer of dust and soot settled on them. Had those really all come so quickly just from stoking these furnaces for a few hours…?

She briefly glanced over to see Pyry similarly emptying his sack onto a conveyer belt in the background. She hesitated and pawed at her shoulder, casting a sideways glance back at the Swellow.

"You still haven't seen any of the others today?" she asked.

"I thought that I did a couple times, but I couldn't get away from the smelters long enough to get a better look," Kiran answered, shaking his head glumly. "I've heard that everyone else is still doing okay, but I haven't been able to see for myself yet."

Nida flattened her ears and looked away as she heard approaching footsteps and saw Pyry nearing them, when a sharp shout split the air.

"Hey, you useless leech! Nobody said you could rest!"

Nida jolted up after a loud buzz came from further down the chamber. She raised her barbs by reflex and whirled around, just in time to catch a glimpse of a Vikavolt knocking a Cubchoo to the ground. The Vikavolt descended on Ice-Type, shocking the poor Cubchoo and drawing a sharp, pained cry. There was a moment's stunned gape from the prisoners nearby, when a Beartic from their number suddenly came lumbering over, snarling and flashing her claws at the Vikavolt.

"Hey! You get away from him, you dirty square-ne-!"

The Beartic was suddenly cut off by a whitish vortex that left crystals caking her fur, as a Garganacl stomped forward. The Beartic spewed out an icy blast that threw the Garganacl off-balance as other guards rushed in, with the Vikavolt leaving the Cubchoo alone to hurriedly scurry off. By the time the Garganacl had turned to face the Beartic, the Ice-Type had been wrestled to the ground and was thrashing about to break free, just as the Vikavolt came over and flung a crackling stream of electricity forward at her.

Nida, Kiran, and Pyry flinched at the sound of the blow and the sharp yelp that followed. When the dust cleared, the Beartic was lying slumped over on the ground, unmoving as the entire line of ore-carriers came to a stop. The Vikavolt whirled towards them with a sharp glare and loud hiss, his jaws open wide and crackling with electricity.

"All of you, get back to work!"

Everything seemed to pick up afterwards, as the prisoners were all too eager to move along, including Pyry who uncomfortably turned and hurried off carrying his now-emptied sack with his head held low. Nida quickly slung her own over her shoulder to leave, as her eyes happened to drift back to where the Beartic had been. She caught sight of the Garganacl and the other guards dragging the Beartic off into a shaft in the wall, when the Vikavolt at the end grabbed at something along the wall and a stone cap slid shut after him.

She hesitated for a moment, before shooting an incredulous blink back at her Swellow teammate.

"Kiran, they had a door back there all this time?" she asked. "What's it even used for?"

"There's apparently some sort of network of passages the guards use to get around more quickly between parts of this prison," Kiran explained. "I'd guess that that door is probably a part of it."

Nida blinked and gaped off at the stone patch where the hidden entrance had been. She supposed Kiran's explanation made sense since the guards who'd come from it really did seem like they just suddenly came out of nowhere but just how far did it go? And had she overlooked other hidden entrances like that elsewhere in this prison all this time?

She felt feathers brush against her shoulder, and looked back to see Kiran sighing and shaking his head.

"I don't know why they'd need such a thing, but it's probably for the best not to worry about it right here and now," the Swellow insisted. "You should get moving before the guards notice you lingering around."

Nida's thoughts turned back to the whole incident with the Cubchoo and Beartic, before she shook her head and moved along. She supposed it really didn't make sense risking getting caught up in a situation like that. The Nidorina hurried along down the path away from the smelters until she caught up with Pyry and noticed the stream of Pokémon trudging their way up in the opposite direction with filled-up sacks. Most of them were faces she didn't recognize, others were ones she'd remembered snarling and ready for battle from various skirmishes around Gestirn.

And yet they all looked about the same as each other: Tired. Defeated. Beaten down.

Nida wondered if her own face looked like that right now. The past two days had felt like an eternity here, and her own limbs had been sore and stiff even when waking up today. To say nothing about how they felt at the moment after lugging around one bag after another of this crushed-up ore…

She noticed her legs were having trouble moving, and hunched down on all fours to catch her breath. She turned her eyes down at the ground as Pyry abruptly stopped and looked back at her, a worried grimace settling over his toothy maw.

"Nida…? Are you-?"

"I-It's okay, I just need a moment to breathe myself…"

She panted and hung her head as thoughts of her teammates came to mind. Everyone except Elty and Pleo were going through the same thing she was right now. She wondered how Elty was even doing. The last they'd seen of the Growlithe before blacking out was him getting thrown from Hess' ship.

Surely Elty had been pulled out of the water given how close he was to shore when he fell overboard, so he was probably being cared for right now by their friends. Was he working with them on some sort of plan to get them out of this prison? Or had he just given up since there was no more Team Traveller for him to be part of?

Nida could at least take some solace that whatever he was going through, that he wasn't suffering through all of this with them… but what about Pleo?

She remembered how scared and lonely he'd been when she and Elty first found him on Lyn's ship. And he likely had been forced to go through that all over again a second time. Was he being kept in some sort of dark dungeon? Was he still expecting that they'd see each other again somehow, or had he lost hope?

The Nidorina stared at the floor and let her ears droop, when from the corner of her eye, she saw blue scales off to her right. She looked over towards an intersecting hallway, where down its end, there was another line of prisoners that looked like they were laden down with concentrate and headed off for smelters. All of a sudden, she saw a ruddy head at about her height and a pair of jagged-looking wings, when a flash of realization hit her:

"… Crom?"

Nida suddenly sprang to her feet, grabbing her empty sack and bounding along after the figure as she heard Pyry's spluttering protests behind her.

"Hey! N-Nida! Where are you-?!"

She ran after the figure hunched over with his bag, and saw that it really was Crom. Nida darted up, all but throwing her paws around the Druddigon as he stumbled forward with a sharp yelp. Crom briefly fought to keep his grasp onto the bag in front of him, before whirling around as his eyes widened in surprise.

"Ah! N-Nida?!"

Both of them stared for a long moment at each other. Crom's face looked weary and he was visibly covered in scuffs, but even now, Nida could see a faint smile work its way over his face as moisture beaded up in the corners of his eyes. She blinked and felt her own eyes grow bleary, as for the first time since getting marched to her cell, she finally was able to see-

"Hey! What are you doing?!"

Nida whirled her head and saw the Pokémon behind Crom stepping aside to move past him. Further along, Pyry was there, making his way up with his eyes narrowed and an exasperated frown as he caught up and tucked his claw into the Druddigon's bag.

"At least make it look like you two aren't just standing around!"

The Gabite jerked his claw and tipped Crom's bag to the side as some of the tin concentrate inside spilled out onto the ground. Nida and Crom opened their mouths to protest, only to trail off as they saw Pyry crouching down in front of them. He shot his claws out, and clumsily grabbed some of the concentrate, before reaching back for the bag.

"There, now it looks like you're actually doing something," he said. "Just don't drag this out for too long, since you know how those guards are."

Yes, Nida supposed that Pyry's idea would do a better job making it look like they were busy. She nudged Crom and helped him set his sack down to the side, before stooping down herself over the pile of spilled concentrate. The other prisoners behind them briefly glanced and moved along, as the Nidorina and Druddigon continued shoveling crushed-up ore back into the bags, dragging the process out as much as they could.

Nida let her paw linger for a moment, as she turned to Crom and gave a worried tilt of her head.

"Are you okay, Crom?" she asked. "Where are the others?"

"I'm managing, I guess," the Druddigon said. "Natrix and Philips have been looking out for me since I came here. Dimitri and Ander aren't far from me either since their cell's on the other side of my cellblock, and I always meet up with them during mealtimes at the cafeteria. I also know that I've seen Guardia and Pekka once while working the past couple days…"

Crom trailed off and drooped his wings, hanging his head as he gave an uneasy paw at his shoulder.

"It just hasn't been the same without everyone else," he murmured. "Without dad… Without you…"

Nida hesitated as she felt her eyes grow bleary again, before leaning in and nudging at the Druddigon's scales.

"I know. It's hard being apart after we finally got to be together again," she whispered. "But we're managing, too. I'm doing alright, and your papi is as well."

Crom smiled slightly after the mention of his father as Nida flicked her ears. She quickly glanced around for any sign of guards, and after seeing nobody but other prisoners, leaned in towards the Druddigon with a hushed voice.

"We haven't given up trying to find a way out, either," she said. "I'm sure we'll find something… we just need to keep looking for things we could use."

"Don't get the kid's hopes up like that, Nidorina," a growling voice said. "If you're thinking of trying to escape, save yourself the effort. It'll just end up with you being sent to the Pit."

Nida and her companions froze and turned over their shoulder as they saw an Arctibax grasping a large sack staring at them with a weary frown. The Nidorina tensed up and traded a worried glance with Crom. Who was this Pokémon? Would he get them in trouble? Strangely enough, Pyry seemed particularly fixed, as the Gabite sized the Arctibax up for a moment, before his eyes shrank with a sudden flash of realization.

"Ernst? Is that you?"

The Arctibax mirrored Pyry's own reaction, before setting down his sack and approaching, the icy dragon's jaw hanging open out of stunned surprise.

"Wait, Pyry?" the Arctibax answered. "You're still alive?!"

"Yeah, it's me. Even if I guess I'm a bit bigger than how you last saw me," the Gabite said, averting his gaze. "Pekka and I got away back during that raid on Nagrobek… even if I didn't think we'd ever wind up here again."

Nida and Crom traded confused looks with one another, before the Nidorina of the pair turned to Pyry with a puzzled blink.

"Pyry, who is this?"

"This is Ernst. He's an old friend of mine from the Devastating Drakes, the crew I was on before the Iron Fleet," the Gabite explained, before letting out a faint, wistful chuckle. "I even had my first drink with him and Pekka…"

Ernst looked aside, as Pyry briefly looked away and shifted uncomfortably for a moment, before turning back to the other dragon.

"… Are the others still around?"

"Some of them are," Ernst said. "A lot of us got sent to the Pit over the years since you escaped. Never heard anything of them since then, but those of us who are still around are doing what we can to get by."

Pyry visibly stiffened up before hanging his head, and for a moment Nida could've sworn she saw him fighting back tears. When Nida looked back at the Arctibax, she noticed that the Arctibax's claws were missing their talons and the remaining digits had ugly-looking wounds on them, as Crom stiffened up and squirmed at the sight.

"What… happened to your claws?" the Druddigon asked.

Ernst turned away for a moment and seemed to grow self-conscious, before speaking up in a deflated murmur.

"I picked a fight with the guards one too many times. They decided to make an example out of me and remind everyone that there is always more that you can lose," the Arctibax said with a mirthless chuckle. "But hey, at least I still have my fangs and fin. It's more than what some of the others they've punished over the years can say."

Nida's barbs rose as a chill ran down her pelt. This place did stuff like that to the Pokémon here? Crom and especially Pyry were visibly on-edge and squirming, as Nida moved her eyes moved along the rest of Ernst's body. His fin had cuts in it and his hide was visibly scarred. On top of it all, there was a visible, defeated weariness that seemed to linger around the Arctibax like a cloud, in a way that Nida would've never expected from a Pokémon that was supposed to be fierce and strong like how an Arctibax was supposed to be.

Ernst shook his head and looked away, grabbing his sack from the ground. He hesitated for a moment, before turning back and glancing over his shoulder.

"Sorry to see that you wound up back here again, Pyry. Just… do yourself a favor and don't get your hopes up," Ernst said. "I've seen so many Pokémon thought they were going to be the one to finally beat the odds and escape this place, but it always ends badly."

Nida looked on blankly with her companions as the Arctibax began to walk away from them. All this time, she and the others she'd been able to keep in touch with had at least been starting to look for a way out, and they'd even tried to stash a few berries from yesterday's dinner in case they found an escape soon. But if what the Arctibax had said was right, he had been here for years without seeing anyone succeed at escaping…

Could that really have been right? Was everything they were doing to find a way out all for nothing…?

… No, they'd only been here for two days. They'd barely had any time to look around yet. There had to be some way to—

A large jet of water suddenly flew in, sending her, Crom, and Pyry diving for cover with a yelp. They whirled around, where there was a Slowbro with a lavender scarf standing nearby, leveling a bared-fang snarl at them.

"You three! Stop slacking off!"

Nida hurriedly helped shovel the rest of the tin concentrate back into Crom's bag, and helped him pick it back up off the ground. Nida lingered as the Druddigon lumbered along as best as he could, when she suddenly heard a shout and saw Pyry turn and scurry off.

She lost her nerve and darted off herself, hurriedly grabbing her empty sack off the ground and darting back for Pladur's chamber. She kept going until the soreness in her legs caught up with her and she slowed down.

Nida braced herself, only for her ears to twitch as she didn't hear the shouts or footsteps, and instead heard rapid, haggard pants. Her own, along with someone else's. She briefly looked up and saw Pyry ahead of her, the Gabite trudging along and looking about him wide-eyed as if he expected the ceiling to cave in on them at any moment.

The whole time, there was a sinking feeling that settled over her stomach. Somewhere out there, Pleo and Elty were far away from this horrid prison. Except for the first time, she genuinely didn't know how they would ever see each other again.



Author's Notes:

- Hayde (Хайде) - Bulgarian: "Come on" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
- chaval - Spanish: "kid", "lad", "boy"
 

Arukona

A Scribe Penning His Brainworms
Location
Ardalion
Pronouns
He/him
Partners
  1. aggron
  2. sceptile
  3. lucario
Hello, hello! Review Blitz time means a prime opportunity to leap back into doing some more chapters for Fledglings, and on top of that, I still have to repay a favour to Fobbie for beta reading Prelude in Darkness. So no better time to get that done than now, and while I'm at it, jump into a new arc in the story after the climactic finish at Orleigh with another evaded capture by Pleo.

Chapter 50

Judging by that chapter title image, Sormus appears to be a Shifting Sand Land of some kind?

But before we can go there, the Khranitel Rod gang, where all of them appear to be smarting from that onslaught of ferals against them.

They're proposing splitting up, but that might be a bad idea when that never tends to be the best course of action in terms of keeping strength together. Especially when we know that Pleo's up in the air and not captured on the ship.
Viktor led the bulk of his underlings off into the deep blue, hoping that they would be able to find Team Traveller before their ever-increasing foes did.
It's like a race at this point, with the best outcome being that the one the most far behind (the Siglo Swellow crew) will be able to reunite with Pleo.

Speaking of Pleo, up in the air he is with his teammates on his back and Guardia asking the same question that every child has asked on a long car journey. And also it appears someone isn't too fond of heights. :mewlulz:

Oh right, Elty's with them after the brief betrayal he pulled in the last arc. This is probably going to take some smoothing out once Pleo makes landfall, and even then they'll probably keep going with him because leaving him on some random island would probably be viewed as a bit rude at best. Although our resident pupper seems to be cross at the fact that the team took him away, and that he couldn't be with his fleet once again. Again, I'm wondering if there might be a rescue arc for those other Iron Fleet members that were captured by the Imperials.

Nooooo, don't argue to the point of making Pleo cry... :sadwott:

And poor Pleo, doubting himself even more...

Meanwhile, the other half of Team Traveller look to be making waves, although alas probably not quick enough to catch up with our heroes. This is certainly one drawn out game of The Torkoal and the Cinderace, and the Cinderace (the villains, be they Imperials/Iron Fleet/Company) doesn't look to be stopping for a nap anytime soon.

Oh hey, it's Scout again. Making his usual, occasional appearance yet again to give our heroes some pointers.
"Wait, Orleigh?" Natrix demanded. "What were you doing there of all places?"

"I went to drop off one of Hariti's letters there," Scout explained. "In retrospect, I should have just hired a courier."

"Because you were tired after such a long journey?" Crom asked.

"No, you clod!" the brown-furred rodent snapped. "Because I spent half a week tied up in a basement by pirates!"
I'm surprised he hasn't copped onto the possibility that that could happen before now. Surely there'd be some pirate proxy that would be willing to do pirate deliveries for him? Or even native Orleighans like Bech that aren't necessarily pirates?

A full delve into Orleigh for the Siglo Swellow crew....This can only go so well. :unquag: Unless the pirates decide to have an uncharacteristic change of heart.
"For crying out loud, the only thing we have to work with other than our own fighting skills is a Lyle Gun!"
I'm sorry, I know this is meant to be some kind of line thrower for a ship, but my first thought was one of the Siglo Swellow gang brandishing a certain Quilava and wielding him like a flamethrower. :mewlulz:

Speaking of pirates, off to the Iron Fleet, where their losses have punctured a gaping hole in the crew's operations, and Hess is really feeling the loss of Rodion especially. And no matter how much on the bright side they try and look, there's nothing good that can be made of a bad situation like this one. Makes me wonder if Hess might well end up stripped of his duties as a result of the destruction he ended up causing around town.
"Hrmph, seems like you're quite popular these days," the Conkeldurr said. "The Council sent for you again."

Hess blanched at the mention of the Council and buried his head in his claws. There was no way that they could be pleased with the state of the town right now, but surely they'd understand and not turn him into ship cladding... right?
Well, speak of the devil. Looks like we might well just see that. Although as a certified Hess enjoyer, I do not look forward to whatever this punishment will be for him. :unquag:
"Uh… Elty! You've been to Sormus before, right?" Pleo asked. "Did they have 'mah-lah-sah-dah' there too?"
Oooh, someone picked up on a favourite food yet. :copyka: Maybe that'll become the prime offering to Pleo whenever things settle down and he settles into his role as Guardian of Tromba.
Off in the distance, she saw the clouds part, revealing a cluster of dunes punctuated by stony hills on the horizon, and a white-sailed ship carrying along in the water a little ways in front of it..
Betting any money that ship's gonna be relevant in a minute.
"The ship just attacked us, bonehead!" Elty yipped.
Aaaaaaaand called it. Well, damn, that ain't good. :unquag: After they'd just gotten out of a close-call situation, too.

And looks like the old nemesis has reared his head after all this time. Screw you too, Lyn. :screm:
Lyn pounded a paw against the Nektar Weide's railing, growling irritatedly at his missed shot, panting from exertion from having just spat up a Hydro Cannon into the air.
And this is why we use Surf or Hydro Pump instead. Miss with a Hydro Cannon of all moves and you're gonna have a bad time.

Alas, even Lyn realises that, which is why instead we have an Ice Beam along with a torrent of other crew members' attacks that end up bringing Pleo down in the end.

Waking up on sand, huh? Guess that makes a common link between our little Lugia and the PMD2 protag. :copyka: (Yes, I know Pleo's technically in a desert and not a beach, shush.)

Lyn sure is a dogged pursuer. Someone clearly wants his glory - or rather, doesn't want his demotion.

Off they go into Sormus's Mystery Dungeon. Just what does this desert island have to offer our intrepid heroes?

Chapter 51

Looks like a POV of some natives first before we see how our heroes are faring in the desert heat. Speaking of which, now that we're in the desert:
The Psychic-Type panted, finding himself wishing for a nice cool mud puddle or even just a plain old pool of tidewater to plop into and stave off the sweltering heat.
Oh, I can imagine this must be hell for a Grumpig, given how pigs don't have sweat glands and thus can't sweat and therefore would find it hard to beat the heat.

Also a Krokorok character! :veelove: Another fave species of mine makes this fic.
"That's them alright," the Grumpig murmured. "But just where would those brats run off to in a place like this?"
So they know about Team Traveller? Are they looking for them? Perhaps they're bounty hunters looking to seize our heroes for a bit of coin.
"Yeah, let's hurry it up!" the Nuzleaf fumed. "I think my leaf's starting to wilt!"
I mean, what did you think would happen if you came to a desert land like this one? :copyka:
"Captain Lyn wants all of us at the beach!" the Fearow squawked. "He says he found out where those kids went to."
Oh wait. It took me a minute to realise these were Lyn's men, and not natives of Sormus. I guess we'll see what the natives of this land are like in short order.
The crew's murmuring rose to an excited chatter as they dreamt up the size of the bounty on the Protector's head.
Imagining bevvies by the dozen, no doubt.
"I presume you needed me to stay aboard, Lyn?" Ellsberg asked.

"No, Ketu can handle that," the Samurott answered. "I need a flier who can cover my bases in the dungeon, and I want you for that."

"Eh?!" the Bug-Type exclaimed. "But-!"

"You heard him, Elmer," Ketu sneered. "Leave the ship-watching to an actual first mate."
Conveniently leaving out the fact that an Ice-type like you would melt in the desert heat, Ketu. Seems he's got his own plans for Pleo too when they capture him...
the passages of this floor proved rather a tight fit even for the quartet of diminutively-sized adventurers.
Maybe a sign they're growing up, in Pleo and Nida's cases. :copyka:
"Ugh… you know what? Let's just split up," Guardia muttered. "We'll go down our respective paths just far enough to see if they lead anywhere, and then come back. Nothing can go too wrong in that little bit of time, right?"
Do not. Do not do that, good lord, you'll have divided strength in the long run with that attitude. :unquag:

But it's notable in that it shows the heated state the team are in, with Pleo (bless him) trying but failing to be the peacekeeper, and sooner or later this is gonna end in hurt for someone. Maybe even capture for our Protector...

At least these measly ferals won't be those captors, as they scarpered after even a smidge of resistance.
Nida and Guardia scowled at one another, seething wordlessly,
I can just imagine the gritted teeth, locked eyes between them while Pleo looks on in horror at the arguments unfolding before him.
For now, the best plan of action would simply be to focus on getting through this maze.
And hopefully keep your tops from blowing off, of course. Wouldn't do to have a schism at this point in the story (although I wouldn't be surprised if it does happen at some point, given what I recall reading in fic update channels).

Back to Tromba now, where Osmund's back in action! :quag:
"Nah, we Sceptile bounce back from a little cut faster than your average tree in the forest," Osmund chuckled.
Somehow I imagine Kallias over in Dual Wills saying the same thing to his daughter at some point.
"Spent some time brushing up on my card skills, spent a few nights helping Hatteras out with his lighthouse duties, and I spent some time catching up with my sister."
Aha! I knew it! Salvini is related to Osmund!

Nice that Marley doesn't seem bothered at all about having a bounty. But I do wonder if Osmund's warning about bounty hunters taking a shot at her might ever come to fruition....

Now over to Hess, who's getting a hiding from the Council.
"Then why didn't you come to us?!" Ingela demanded.

"I… er… uh…" the Steel-Type stammered. "I didn't think you'd believe me?"
You'd think a known criminal would be good at coming up with plausible lies on the spot, but it appears Hess is lacking in that regard. A pity. :sadbees:
In its place, he felt a stiff slap on the side of his maw, sending him falling down onto his rump with a yelp.
That's one powerful slap to be able to knock down an Aggron like that. Notes taken - don't mess with Dirk.
"Forced labor," the Bisharp growled. "Namely, you'll be hunting down and bringing that bird back here."
Doesn't sound like much of a punishment when that's been one of his primary goals in the first place.
"Or like it did for Amaro after that raid on Nagrobek?” the Dark-Type interrupted, shooting a piercing glare up at Tarquin. “Or what happened to the town after Charles kidnapped an Imperial Governor's kid? Or how about when Kavafian stole sea fire recipes from the Company and got his crew and half the harbor burned up after the Square-necks tracked him back here? And do I even need to get into how Jack got his ship dragged to the bottom of the sea?"
A more than chequered history of this place, heh. Although that comes with the territory of being a no-mon's land pirate haven.
"And starting after sundown tomorrow, you will be persona non grata in port until you come back with him."
Outright banishment, huh? They clearly mean business - as I'd expect from the heads of a pirate haven.

A prisoner exchange is in the air...but something tells me it's not gonna come without strings attached.

Oh hey, this lot. Are they gonna be exchanged in this?
I know you can hear me, portán!" the Zangoose yelled. "Give me some wate-!"

The Normal-Type was abruptly cut off by a stream of water striking his face, prompting a startled blurble as Scian toppled backwards and coughed up the unwelcome "drink".
Ewwwww, that can't be hygienic water to drink. :unquag: Out before the debate about whether Water-types' naturally produced water is safe enough to drink reignites itself.

Cyanea not reading the room once again. And Rodion seems to be sharpish as per usual to figure stuff out. No wonder Hess values him as imperative to the Iron Fleet's operations.
Hess' attention was captured by Rodion, who approached his home ship while futilely tugging at the ropes which bound his wrists together.

"Rodion!"

The Aggron stomped over as quickly as his massive body would allow, the ship's deck creaking under his heavy footfalls, and scooped the Floatzel up into an embrace tight enough to make a Pinsir cringe. The otter flailed against the sudden, crushing hug, pushing against the Steel-type's bulky frame in a vain attempt to escape the brazen show of affection.

"Gack! Hess, do that after I've been unbound!" Rodion protested. "You're strangling me!"

Hess cracked his eyes open and noticed that the gathering was silent other than the sound of waves and breaking wood. The Aggron looked around and saw that the other Pokémon, even the Clawitzer captain, were staring and blinking at his overly enthusiastic affection.
No doubt people in this fandom would look at this exchange and hold up the rainbow flag. 🏳️‍🌈 And honestly, I can see it - that'd be a fun ship. Unless Hess has a special someone somewhere else.

Little does Hess realise that he'll get Elty back in the end if he's successful in his goals. Especially if Elty repeats his course of actions in Orleigh.

Now three batches of villains in the hunt for our little Lugia. How long before there's either a showdown or alliance between them?

Speaking of our little Lugia, back to him, where things inside the sandy ruin Mystery Dungeon appear to not be going too well. :sadbees:
From the increasing fatigue the four felt, it was obvious that the night was not getting any younger, though even so, the team had a strangely hard time finding a stable zone to spend the night in.

"Nida?" Pleo yawned. "When are we going to sleep?"

"… I dunno, Pleo," the Nidoran admitted. "We haven't found a suitable place in any of the last floors we checked. Just keep looking a little longer."
If this were Fire Emblem Echoes, eating food would get that stamina back. Particularly the special delicacy of that game: raw flour. :copyka:

Awww, poor Pleo, with his peacekeeping attempts once again falling on deaf ears. :sadwott: What would it take for this lot to all reconcile? Because being chased by Lyn isn't enough on its own at this stage.
"The sooner dawn breaks, the sooner we can get going, get out of here, and get on with our lives."
What, a life of endlessly running? That's your current reality, Elty, and not one that looks to be changing anytime soon.

Back to Nagant's crew, and it seems they're checking out the Subway. But you know what they say about a criminal always returning to the scene of the crime - in that Pleo's not a criminal and thus he's not returned there! Ha! :copyka:

Oh hey, Darzin. Haven't seen your fat ass in a while, and I'd prefer if I didn't. :screm:
All the while, the crustacean couldn't help but shake the nagging sensation as if she was just a small hurdle away from a breakthrough...

But just what could that hurdle be? And did she have what was needed to surmount it?
It's a Lyn-sized hurdle, Nagant. One that'll probably lead to a battle between Water 'mons, amidst which your target will escape from your grasp yet again.

Speaking of that target, back to him, where the gang are only now just figuring out that Guardia's been the source of the cries this whole time.
"… It was my father. He was the one who watched over me when I was growing up ," she explained, prodding weakly at the sand with her bone. "Up until the big accident."
Oh no, tragic backstory time.
"He was out with a scavenging party from our colony in the mountains," Guardia said. "They were going along a high ridge when the earth woke up…"
He was lost to an earthquake... :sadwott:
"Hey… I get it, alright?" Elty murmured. "I've gone through something like that myself…"
Does Elty have lost parents like Guardia does? There had to have been a story about how someone like him ended up on the Iron Fleet. Just what was his backstory before, then?

Looks like there's the usual huddling up on a cold desert night trope going on here. It's at least one step towards getting the team's harmony back together...but it seems like they're still somewhat disunited, all things considered.

Chapter 52
Next morning for the gang, where I reckon yesterday's arguments won't just disappear in the night.
"Bum bah de dum bum bum bah de dum~"
There a particular song in mind meant to go along with this humming, or is it just random?
On it, a Kecleon cheerily idled with a hum as a bulkier counterpart and a grizzled-looking Kecleon with a stomach scar sat in the background playing cards, occasionally looking up and eying the rest of the carpet.
I'm noooot sure I'd want to be saying, "Who are you looking at?" to either of the latter two. I fear for anyone who was caught stealing from them.

Except....that's exactly what got the team roped into thanks to Elty's greed. :unquag: How do you all not know the first rule of dealing with the Kecleon Shop is not to steal from them?
"Gah!" Nida cried. "We can't shake 'em!"
Because they're freaking Kecleon. What did you think would happen? :screm:

Clever use of taking advantage of Kecleon's Colour Change ability in battle there. Not something I see too often in fics on account of fights with Kecleon not really being depicted that much.

And now in the aftermath, and for once Elty's the one realising the power of friendship and Nida isn't. Then again, from her POV, Elty isn't really a 'friend' right now...
Pleo paused a moment before ruffling his feathers and starting off, only to feel a presence nose him from behind.

"Hey, Pleo."

The young Lugia turned around, and saw Elty looking at him, giving a grateful nod and wag of his tail. He was… happy? It had felt so long since the last time he'd seen him like this.

"Thanks for backing me up back there."
A compliment? From Elty? Am I dreaming? :wowzard: Maybe spending more time with Team Traveller really is softening him up.

Back to Nagant's crew, where Cabot's in the scene! :veelove: Love this little plucky dino.
Among them, there was one, very visible exception, consisting of a Weavile perched on a small mound of large ice blocks lying down basking in the sun's rays as his throne slowly melted away at the bottom.
Someone clearly thinks highly of himself. Clearly we have a glory-seeker on our hands here, one with loftier ambitions than even Lyn or Ellsberg.
"Are you Imps all this nosy? I was just catching some rays here."
Given that you're an Ice-type, Ketu, wouldn't that be somewhat...dangerous? I mean, not like he's a Cryogonal or Vanillish, but still, I'd imagine sun-related illnesses probably come easier to Ice-types than others.

Rather surprised Ketu's so openly admitting that they're Company spies. Espionage through plain sight can be a tad risky as a strategy, just saying.
"Hrmph. Did you happen to see any Pokémon fly by at least?" the shrimp demanded. "A bird with white plumes and a long neck?"

"Nope."

A skeptical frown began to spread over Nagant's face, the Clawitzer none too pleased with the short and dismissive answer the Weavile gave her.

"Are you sure?" she pressed.

"Yup."
A lie...or a technical truth? I think the former because Ketu was there for Lyn's attack the day before...
"… Have word sent to the Duke in Copperband Village" Nagant ordered. "We might not be able to narrow things down on our own, but he can certainly help."
So it seems that Sormus might well be an island that'll turn hostile against our heroes. Then again, it could be like Kenobi, where in spite of it seeming like a hostile island, they had their allies and found Guardia in it.

Back to Team Traveller, where they appear to have found a Kangaskhan Rock. I suppose by Guardia's words, the Storage Shop is run by different 'mons on different islands. Ones that have hyperspace pockets, presumably. /j

Oh crud, Lyn's men have found them. And now in comes the trap. :unquag:
"… It's probably just the desert sun playing tricks on you," the Grumpig reassured. "Come on, we'll get you taken care of once we're out."

"Yeah. Just come along and we'll get you out of this dive," the Krokorok added. "Sure beats crate work any day."
You could've just said you were part of a guild on Sormus and that could've washed...And judging by how Nida cops on next line, this veiled talk didn't serve you two the best, huh?

And now into a fight, where Ken and Hooke do seem to be rather skilled. Well, until Ken gets Tottered and snaps at Hooke.
His rescuer was none other than Guardia, the Cubone staring down the Company Krokorok as he rose back to his feet, seething.

"Oi, you overgrown mogura!" Guardia spat. "You've got the rest of us to deal with!"
Someone clearly only has Drilbur and Excadrill for frame of reference, I see. :copyka: So it goes when Guardia lived on a different island cave for all of her life.
The crocodile bounced off of the Pokémon-shaped stone, and flopped sprawled-out against the ground, groaning incoherently out of pain.
That's gotta smart. Ken's gonna be seeing stars for a good while after this. 💫
"That- That was for Crom!" Nida panted. "And don't you forget it, you Company scum!"
Yes, Nida, show your fiercer side. I reckon your mamí would be proud of you for that. :copyka:
Not knowing what to do with the remainder, but deciding that it was best to not let Ken and Hooke easily recover it, Nida opted to dump the bag and its contents down the Kangaskhan-shaped rock.
That Kangaskhan's gonna be surprised at the inundation of items they'll be receiving, I bet.
As the Poison-Type handled the rest of the bag's contents, Elty and Guardia traded quiet glances with each other, each waiting for the other to speak first.

"Hey... about that fight there…" Guardia murmured. "Thanks for pulling in for me."

"Well, it's just what was needed then," Elty said. "It's no big deal-"
Awwww, they're reconciling. :veelove:

Back over to Rosequartz Town, where everyone's cleaning up after the big attack by Nagant, and also Kichiro appears to be getting along not at all swimmingly with Wilhelm. He's just trying his best :(
The pair flew along in a course tracing the docks of Rosequartz Town, passing a Gurdurr overseeing a repair on a trashed pier.
>looks at Gates!Gurdurr and remembers he started out in the business of scamming people

Hmmmmmmm. I wonder if this is his AU counterpart. :copyka:
"… Hey wait a moment, that's our job they're talking about," Kichiro murmured.

He looked around and spotted a flat roof nearby, flitting down and coming to a stop atop it. The Bug-Type set down his pitch buckets and lined them up to provide cover before peering over at the group of Shadow Brigade Pokémon. The Ledian turned to motion for his partner to follow, only to see Wilhelm flit past… and keep going. The beetle hastily dragged the Grass-Type into his perch before he could get spotted, stifling the pink Pokémon's yelp as he shushed and motioned for silence.

"Ugh… this again?" the Combusken grumbled. "I thought we concluded that it was just hearsay!"

"I dunno, Sela. I've been hearing it too," Hanuna murmured. "And Sibich did try to go after the demon while he was in town…"

"All the more reason why he wouldn't!" Sela insisted. "He's seen how dangerous that thing is for himself, there's no way he'd risk scaring us and a third of his crew off with some goose chase!"

"Oh come on, you can't admit that something doesn't smell about this," Eric countered. "Going off to do an operation on Giotto with all three of his ships? Just a day after the port got trashed?"
Ohhhh...Oh, I see. :eyes: Sibich doesn't want Hess taking the glory of capturing Pleo, so here he comes in to do it himself. Literally doing a:
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"Going off to do an operation on Giotto with all three of his ships? Just a day after the port got trashed?"
Or wait, maybe this doesn't relate to Pleo...but something else, if he's headed off to Giotto? (Also, hey, I recognise that place as Cabot's homeplace.:quag:)
"My source from within the Imperial Admiralty told me to expect the haul of a lifetime out there," Sibich explained. "Setback or none, it's not a matter to dismiss lightly."
A source within the Imperial Admiralty...aka the faction that just destroyed this town. That's not gonna reflect well if it turns out Sibich is affiliating with them, unless the 'source' is a spy on their part (which wouldn't be unehard of, given they're pirates).
"Yeah! Captain Sibich can hide stuff in his body!" Wilhelm exclaimed. "Who knows what else he's keeping in there-"
Skeletons in the closet, quite literally. Or coffin, in this case. (This referring to a Pokédex entry, or just Cofagrigus's natural body as a sarcophagus?)

Off to Pleo and co. once again, where it's Wave 2 of Lyn's men - Jan and Locke, specifically. And I imagine not long after this will be the big bad Samurott himself. But first, evasion tactics through hiding among pillars, which as any Fire Emblem player will tell you is a good strat for avoiding foe's attacks. These kids have grasped that much
Pleo took the lead, the young Protector waddling on into the corridor ahead... and directly onto a small tile with a swirly design set in the stony floor underfoot.

Click!

The Lugia squawked as the ground under his feet abruptly spun around, sending the bird whirling in place and stumbling forward.
How tragic that they used the tactic of confusion to their opponents only to have it happen to them later on. Would this be what some call karma?
"Oi, you Company clods!"

The pair of Company Pokémon looked ahead just in time to see the dog waiting for them, giving a taunting shake of his rump in their direction.

"Want a piece of this, come and get it!" he jeered.
That's certainly a taunt. Is this Elty using Taunt? If so, that's...certainly a way to pull off that move. :eyes:

Bunch of Spin Tiles in here. Whoever designed this Dungeon must love wild rides - maybe a divine Spinda.

But it's a good thing to see that the team are mending their quarrels - and it's making Pleo happy too! :veelove:

Now back to the Siglo Swellow gang, where things are a bit more touch-and-go for them. Once again, in a time when Pleo needs to be reclaimed by a ship, and specifically this ship, they're lagging faaaaaaaar behind. :screm:
"Protivnik sleva!" a Kingdra cried. "Keep your eyes on those Company rats!"

"Someone jam their rudder!" a Relicanth shouted.

The crew of the Siglo Swellow looked around and saw that the seafaring marauders had hemmed in their escorts, the lot shrinking back out of intimidated pallor. There, directly behind Crom and his companions, the brown and violet form of a Dragalge sliced through the water, coming to a growling stop next to the hull.

"You're not going anywhere fast," Viktor snarled.
Well, looks like changing the sail colours was not a smart move in the end. What are you gonna do now, guys?
"Hm, looks like it's another sandy floor…" the Nidoran murmured.
A sandy floor in a sandy Dungeon? *gasp* Who would've thought?!
"Eh? I've never seen a floor this open before…" Nida murmured.
In video game terms, that means a boss is incoming.
Breathing a sigh of relief, Elty trotted along towards the exit, counting his lucky stars that the worst this accursed leg of their journey had to offer was finally over with.

"Who dares tread on our territory?!"

As if on cue to disprove the Growlithe, a cry rang out and a torrent of grit exploded from the ground, obscuring the vision for each member of Team Traveller as they screwed their eyes shut against the stream of sand. After the initial plume of dust, the quartet of youngsters were able to crack open their eyes, now able to see the source of the disruption: a massive, tawny Hippowdon leered them down through the sandstorm, flanked by three equally irritable-looking Hippopotas.
I DIDN'T MEAN TO CALL IT LMAOOOOOO :mewlulz: :unquag:

Welp, looks like we got a fight on our hands for next time. Team Traveller just can't catch a break, can they?

Chapter 53
But before we can get to that fight, a POV from Lyn and Ellsberg, where they appear to be having no luck in their hunt for Team Traveller. Good, I say! :screm:

Seems Ken and Hooke really don't know much about the art of lying well to your superiors. They need to take a few notes from Ketu, methinks.

I somehow forgot that Ellsberg could get serious and wasn't to be messed with when he threatens to inflict more scars on these two mooks of theirs.
"I've tolerated enough failure on this mission already! If I hear of you shirking work, I'll throw you from the ship so you two can swim back to port!"
A certain Wigglytuff elsewhere does often say, "Don't shirk work!" so I find myself surprised Lyn's happened upon a variant of that same motto. :mewlulz:
At this rate, we'll have to wind up searching Copperband itself for him."
There's our town name on Sormus.
"… We'll see," the Samurott sighed. "Though I'm starting to suspect from this mission that if I want anything done, I'm going to need to do it myself."
This is only occurring to you now, Lyn? No wonder you've failed to catch Pleo this whole time.

Now back to our heroes, who are contending with that angry Hippowdon. (Part of me wonders if it might have been better to reorder this scene to be first, just so the baton is immediately picked up on from the cliffhanger of last chapter.) So cue the music:

And not just Hippowdon, but three Hippopotas too! And kicking up enough Sandstorms to make a Rock-type practically impenetrable. :unquag:
The dog looked on, panting, and upon the realization of his victory sinking in, he began to puff his chest out in satisfaction.

"Heh," Elty chuckled . "I'm on fire today-"
Celebrating too early, aren't we- :screm:

This Hippowdon's one fierce opponent. Could gobble one of our heroes if given the chance.

But luckily, thanks to some team up attacks between our heroes, they pulled off a victory with aplomb. :quag: I liked the battle choreography near the end, of the teamwork displayed by each member of Team Traveller.

Back to the Siglo Swellow, where things aren't quite going so well.
"Lo siento! Lo siento! We really don't mean any harm or want to start a fight!"

In the midst of the sea of glares, a slight change stirred. It was only a few faces here and there, whose hardened scowls began to show signs of unease. The most obvious of them was a Kabutops towards the front, who blinked at the foreign tongue, and swam up warily to press for more information.

"Huh? What's with that accent?" Dimitri murmured. "Why you're talking just like that Nidoran did when she passed through with her friends-"
Fortunate for them that there's a connection to be had with how the Otvagans aided Nida and thus recognise the Tromban dialect here.
"Sure you are," Kuda snorted. "And I fly around in the sky in my spare time."
I mean, some mostly seabound 'mons can do that. Like a certain little Lugia you helped out not long before.

But at least they're clearing up the misunderstanding. A bit of explanation and words go a long way, as it turns out~

And they're getting good info out of it, as now they know Orleigh isn't where our intrepid heroes are right now. So maybe this'll be the opportunity for them to get ahead in the race for Pleo...? :eyes:

And now the Siglo Swellow gang have a new recruit in Dimitri. Hopefully he becomes a worthy ally, even if his joining with them wasn't a decision of his own making. But I doubt Pladur, Crom and Kiran have any reason to fear a betrayal given Dimitri's previous helping of our little heroes.

Over to Copperband Village (desert town in a PMD fic? I think I'd guess of what its theme would be), where Nagant's getting her negotiations ready. But now it's a question of just how stubborn the Duke and Duchess will be in terms of giving the captain free reign to do as she pleases.
"Ah, Captain Nugget!" the Bug-Type greeted. "We've been expecting you!"
Pffffft. Even the higher-ups get it wrong. :copyka:

Volcarona leaders, huh? They do seem to slot well into the role. I might have done something similar myself in my fic. :copyka:

Come to think of it, wasn't Niilo, the Alolaslash from Casting Off Finnish-speaking? Maybe there's a connection there.
"I encountered the Protector back on Orleigh yesterday," Nagant explained. "While there, I learned a bit about his habits and tendencies, which may be valuable in capturing him."
You did much more than encounter him, Nugget. And now a bunch of pirates would love to see you boiled like the shrimp you are. :screm:

It does seem that the Duke and Duchess are willing to aid Nagant in this. But they seem affable enough that I wonder if they might change their minds once they see little Pleo for themselves.

Back out at sea, where Hess and Rodion are whipping everyone into shape once again. And Kichiro gets called the wrong name, again. (He and Nagant would bond well over that. That, or call each other their respective wrong names on purpose.) :copyka:

Hmmm, I can't help but notice that Kichiro seems to be doubtful of Hess's position as captain and I can't help but wonder if that might lead to anything. Maybe a mutiny from him at some point?

We know Pleo's on Sormus, just like Hess is surmising, but what kind of treasure could Sibich be seeking out on Giotto? Keeping tabs on this point for sure.
"Uhm… I was going to say, maybe it doesn't really matter where that Protector is…" the Grass-Type said. "Won't we have a great adventure no matter where we go?"

The Ledian stared blankly as the Hoppip flitted expectantly in place, prompting him to bury his head in a hand and pinch his brow.

"… What did I ever do to deserve this?" the Bug-Type groaned.
He's trying his best, Kichiro. Don't be so hard on him. :(

Back to Team Traveller, where they appear to have stumbled into a mine and were found by some workers. And among them's a Meowstic! :veelove:

Must be a menacing sight with a Tyranitar of all 'mons looming over them. But at least he understands and gets down to business in bringing them up to town. Now it's a question of just how long they can stay here without being spotted...

Chapter 54

Oh, so Sormus is doing all this extraction for the Empire. What a shameful existence. :sadbees:
"Well, there's always selling to the miners in town, and some of them take up work as mercenaries," Aulis responded.
And that's how Niilo got into the merc business, I see.
"A white bird with a long neck…" a squeaky voice murmured. "What sort of a description is that to work with?"

"I dunno, isn't that basically a Swanna?" a high, ghostly voice asked. "Shouldn't be too hard to spot, right?"
I mean, hey, at least it's an upgrade from 'overgrown Wingull'. Still, I imagine any Swanna wouldn't take too kindly to being compared to Pleo.
"… Eh? But why wouldn't you go to a medic's hut first?" Aulis demanded. "You're rather scuffed up."
That's a second nickel in the 'Fobbiefic that has the main characters avoiding medical attention because they might get spotted' jar. :copyka:
"I'll stop by in the morning to check up on you in the morning."
Repetition.
"Right," Nida answered. "Gracías."
That the first time 'Gracías' has been uttered all fic? That's a surprise to me.

Not exactly the Hilton Hotel here, but hey, it's a smidge better than the lodgings in Orleigh.
"How do we know if Dimitri made it here? And if so, how would we find him?"
Oh, I think you'll be delighted once you've found out who that Kabutops ended up joining forces with... :copyka:

Back to Lyn, who's still had no luck in capturing our little Lugia. Good! May he remain uncaught.
Lyn blanched, raising a shaking paw to his brow and pinching. Two weeks… Two weeks since what was supposed to be a simple capture and transport, and here the matter had blown up to the point where the Empire was now privy of his pursuit.
Someone's not good at his job, it would seem~
"... No. I'm going in person this time," he growled. "I'm done playing games and am going to get that Protector back, no matter what it takes."
And now he's getting serious. Will this newfound determination turn up anything for him or the Company?
Hey you!"

The Graveler froze after feeling a prickling brush on his lower shoulder. The Rock-Type grudgingly turned around, where waiting for him were a Maractus and Sandygast in Imperial scarves, scowling impatiently.

"We couldn't help but overhear about your friend," the Maractus growled. "Would you be able to answer a few questions for us?"

"Uh... questions?" the Graveler stammered.

"Yeah, how do you know about this 'mon," the Sandygast demanded. "And what's your relation to him?"
Ooooh, the enemy factions are getting testy with each other. This could prove interesting. :copyka:

Except when Lyn shows up. Nope, nope, I'm not interested anymore. Shit's gotten real. :unquag:

Also wow, he really did start a whole-ass brawl inside the inn with those Imperials.

Out onto the streets now, where it's not one of Lyn's men that corners them, but Berecien, Cabot and Niilo instead. Two factions to contend with...It ain't lookin' good for our heroes. :unquag:

And especially not when Nagant herself shows up, ready to swoop in and claim the prize after said prize(s) have taken a hard beating from her underlings' attacks.
Nida pinwheeled along the ground, coming to an unconscious, thudding stop after striking a wall headfirst. The courtyard quickly simmered down, the only sounds being panting from Team Traveller's attackers and the chatter of an unimpressed Clawitzer.
Nope, that's a rout. A sound defeat for Team Traveller...could this well be their capture? :sadwott:

Meanwhile, there's Lyn, who looks to have gained the ire of the Imperials as well. I would say there could be an unexpected alliance, but somehow I don't think Lyn would be willing to relent on that one.

And as we've come to expect at this point, Lyn's displaying that anger of his to his crewmates. I'd hate to be one of them - our resident Samurott does not look fun to have as a boss.
As Lyn and his ship stalked the Vasilek over the open waves, the humble Siglo Swellow quietly pulled into Copperband's port.
Finally, they caught up! :screm: Only took them four islands. Alas, it's nooooot quite enough when our villains have made off with the other half of Team Traveller.
"Gah… how can Pokémon work in this weather?" Crom whined. "It's baking hot right now!"

"Heh, much like they do at home," Pladur chuckled. "Work in the shade, and take a nice long siesta during the midday."
Just like proper Spaniards, I see. More than just the language the Trombans share a similarity with. :copyka:
The Druddigon and his companions paused and glanced around the harbor before their eyes settled off in the distance. There beyond the harbor's entrance was a three-masted frigate with indigo sails sailing off for the horizon… Was that the naval ship?
If only they knew just who was on board that ship... :sadbees: Please let the Poké drop sooner rather than later.
"It's funny…" the Kabutops murmured. "It's actually what I explained to your other teammates as well."

"Eh? You did? Did they also ask about what the Pokémon here do?" Crom asked. "How are any plants supposed to grow like this?"

"Well, a lot of the Pokémon here, both in town and in the wilderness are adapted to living life without a lot of food and water," the Kabutops explained. "To make ends meet, they dig out copper and other metals-"

WHUMP!
Good thing that lecture was interrupted. We as the readers maybe don't need to hear it a second time. ^^;
"What reason?!" Aulis snapped. "Just how much trouble can a Nidoran, a Growlithe, a Cubone, and a fat Wingull cause?"

The group's jaws dropped at the Tyranitar's words. A Nidoran? A Growlithe? A 'Wingull'? They didn't know anything about a Cubone, but that description could only be...

"Gark!" Kiran squawked. "That's the kids!"

"Wait," Pladur murmured. "You guys never mentioned anything about a Cub-"

"Excuse me!"
Thankfully, it would appear the Poké did drop earlier than expected on that occasion. :quag:

Thanks to be to Aulis for that tip. Now Team Traveller has a good chance of fully reuniting!
A wave of determined vigor washed over the tired crew, one shared thought settling over the gathered faces in spite of their anxiety and fatigue...

They were not going to let those kids go without a fight.
I love this sudden burst of determination, and now they're gearing up for a great big showdown soon that'll hopefully see them reclaim Pleo at last. :veelove:

Back to the Mistral Marauder, where they're unfurling different coloured sails. Given how well it went for the Siglo Swellow gang, I wouldn't be surprised if the Otvagans swarm the Iron Fleet too.

Seems like the Iron Fleet are gonna get in this too. There's one heck of a showdown awaiting if there's gonna be four clear factions about to clash.
"There's a case of rum under in the steerage," the Steel-Type sighed. "I'll break it out if we change course."

At once the crew's demeanor became visibly more energized. From the top of the masts to the surrounding seas, the mention of rum made the brigands' eyes light up with newfound enthusiasm.

"Works for me!" a Seadra from the water exclaimed.

"Yeah!" the Litten added. "Let's change course!"
Well, that's one way of keeping your men in line; keep them fuelled with the bevvies. :copyka:

And that appears to be the end of the Sormus arc? That was certainly quicker than I was expecting; I got the whole thing done in one reviewing session.

Conclusion

I'll end the review there. The next few chapters appear to be of the crossover with Guiding Light that was hinted at (which I'm certainly very intrigued by :eyes:), but that might deserve its own review separate from these chapters.

I really like what's being built to at the end here, that after all this time lagging behind, that the Siglo Swellow stand a good chance now of reclaiming Pleo for themselves. In spite of the fact that Team Traveller have been officially captured by the Imperials, I suspect our intrepid heroes will find some way of getting out of their situation, whether by the outside force of their fellow Trombans or their own will. Maybe a mixture of both. There's great characterisation shown on all sides, with the Siglo Swellow crew, the Iron Fleet, our beloved Team Traveller, and the Imperials. Some great action sequences in all parts of the chapters, the best of which was the skirmish in Copperband Town (even if it did lead to our heroes' capture :sadwott:) which was every bit as tense and nerve-wracking as the enemy discovering Team Traveller's location.

I look forward to seeing what happens next time. Maybe Team Traveller will finally get the reunion they've so desperately needed all this time. :veelove:
 
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