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Pokémon Fledglings

Chapter 89: Finishing Touches

Virgil134

PMD Writer
Partners
  1. sylveon
  2. weavile
  3. kommo-o
  4. noivern
  5. mothim
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That night, the Siglo Swellow's members gathered in the mess hall, just as they had done many times before. The ship's sailors sat near the different tables throughout the room, as Team Traveller and Team Zephyr had come together around a larger table that had been cleared out at the center.

Beatrix and Vicente counted off the Pokémon in the room as the last few stragglers came in. A few Pokémon were absent, having missed the proceedings from what everyone presumed was a lack of energy from a day's hard work. Even Pyry and Pekka had come for the occasion… even if they seemed to be trying their hardest to convince the rest of the gathering otherwise they wanted to be anywhere else from the sluggish daze they'd been in since they belatedly regained sobriety. A few of the nearby sailors shot the two disapproving frowns, including Natrix and Philips, the Raichu of the pair folding his arms with a sharp scoff.

"You know, the plan called for you two to act drunk, not be drunk," he grumbled

"Yeah, just how dense do you have to be to mix that up?!" Natrix snapped.

The Gabite and Vibrava both flinched from Natrix's scolding and cradled their heads. The comedown from their rum had left the pair with splitting migraines, which made so much as a stern bark affect them like a stiff blow to their heads.

"Ngah! Ei niin kovaa!" Pekka buzzed. "My head's still killing me!"

"Y-Yeah, can't this meeting wait until we're feeling better?" Pyry whined.

"No!" Kline bellowed, slamming his forepaws against Pyry and Pekka's table as the two jumped up with startled cries. "Every minute counts here, and we can't afford to put this off because you two decided to be irresponsible idiots!"

The pair shrunk back, giving whining moans over Kline's alleged "lack of empathy" as the Zygarde irkedly shook his head and looked away. Nida cocked a brow as she looked at Kline, bringing a paw to her mouth puzzledly.

"Actually, why haven't we started the meeting yet, Kline?" the Nidorina asked.

"We're still waiting on Alice," Calidus replied. "She said she wanted to buy some provisions for the ship before our meeting."

The Talonflame's explanation prompted the other Pokémon in the mess hall to trade uneasy stares and whispers with one another. Vicente himself was among them, as the Hitmontop looked over at the Fire-Type worriedly and tilted his head.

"For almost two hours? Is she alright?" he asked. "It shouldn't have taken that long to-"

"Back!"

Everyone looked over to the entrance of the mess hall at the sound of a Sneasel's voice and approaching footsteps. There, they saw Alice coming into the room, holding a bulky shopping bag in her right claw and chewing at what appeared to be some sort of brown cookie. The Sneasel finished her snack, before shooting a beaming grin and proudly raising the bag in full view of the gathered audience.

"Hope you all look forward to tasting some of Vollezee's snacks, since I got a bag of those gevulde koeken and speculaas that Percy told me about!" she cheered. "It only took visiting three bakeries to get enough for everyone!"

Loud, disapproving groans went about the room. While some, like the former pirates, seemed more excited about the prospect of free food, most of the gathering, including Percy and Calidus, buried their faces in paws or wings upon discovering Alice had kept them all waiting for a snack run. Kline took the revelation particularly poorly, as he stomped up to the Sneasel with his fangs bared in visible irritation.

"Alice! What on earth would make you think that was a good idea?!" the Zygarde snapped.

An impish smirk spread over the Sneasel's face, the Dark-Type giving no answer beyond a small shrug of her shoulders.

"Because those stroopwafels were great and this way everyone on the crew gets to enjoy some of the local food?" she retorted. "Besides, how can you hold an important meeting without some snacks?"

"Team Sentinel knows we're in the city!" Kline fumed. "They could've ambushed you while you were going about!"

Alice blinked quietly for a moment, seemingly taken aback by her teammates's reply. After her initial hesitation, she looked the other way and gave a dismissive wave back to Kline.

"Well, they didn't, so… yeah. Besides, when was the last time anyone from Team Sentinel set up a trap around some random bakery?"

Percy let out a low grumble and pinched his brow. While Alice was certainly quick on her feet, she certainly could try a 'mon's patience at times. But there would be plenty of time to chew her out later, right now, they had more important things to worry about.

"Enough," the Gliscor sighed. "We don't exactly have the luxury of time to work with, so let's just get this briefing started."

Percy motioned for the Pokémon about him to come closer to the center table. Team Traveller and their companions waited for the sailors to approach and peer over, while Alice went around passing out snacks in the background, with Elty and Pleo taking a particular shine to the sweets. The Gliscor pulled a long roll of paper from under the table and unfurled it on its surface, revealing a rough drawing of a set of four floorplans that were drawn near each of the corners, which Kline pinned down with a forepaw.

"We made a map of the Archive to help plan things out," Percy began. "It's not as good as it could be, since we had to copy most of the floorplans in a hurry from a library, while we drew the basement level based off what Kline saw."

"It's as detailed as we could've hoped for half a day's observations," Kline insisted. "Anyhow, the Archive is sectioned off into a secure wing to its west by iron doors on the ground floor. The access to the basement level is behind them, with the actual Vault sitting in the center of it."

The Zygarde lifted his paw, moving it along the paper until he stopped at the center of the leftmost floorplan. Just then, a few crumbs dribbled onto the paper, prompting him to glance up and see Alice eating a cookie over the paper. After a brief, wordless glare, the Sneasel pulled back with a roll of her eyes, leaving Kline to dust the floorplan off in annoyance, before pointing at an unfilled circle that had been drawn in a gap between thick lines representing the Vault's walls.

"The door to the Vault and its locks are all made from solid metal. From the glimpses I could see whenever the guards opened the door, the interior also seemed reinforced on all sides," Kline explained. "Even if it wasn't constantly being watched, we'd never be able to break into it through brute force without alerting every guard in the Academy to our presence."

Guardia gave a puzzled tilt of her head, before giving a curious poke at the map with her club.

"That… sounds a lot harder to get into than I thought," the Cubone said. "I thought that we had a way of getting in, though. Will it really work against doors that are built so strong? While Team Sentinel's lying in wait for us?"

Kline paused briefly at Guardia's question, before shaking his head back and continuing on.
"I don't think that whatever Team Sentinel is planning is meant to happen before we make it into the Vault. Otherwise, they'd already have started searching places for us, like the docks," Kline insisted. "But that's a problem for us to get to a bit later. The solution to the issue of how to get into the Vault is simple: we have the Company open it for us."

The Zygarde's declaration drew nervous whispers and grumbles from most of his audience, a few sailors muttering comments such as "he's joking, right?" or "eso es una locura". Strangely enough, Team Traveller's members seemed wholly unbothered, as Pleo raised one of his purple-dyed wings up and piped up.

"They will, actually!"

Pleo waddled over to his bag and after pulling back the flap, stuck his head in. He briefly nosed about inside, before he took out his goggles and set them on the table. The Lugia's eyewear drew some puzzled frowns and brow raises from the audience, before the young Protector spoke up to explain himself.

"Sophie told me that my goggles were something that would normally be kept inside the Vault, and that if I brought them over the Pokémon there would take them," Pleo chirped. "We can use that to get into the Vault!"

The Lugia's plan drew skeptical looks from the rest of the room. The sailors tried to keep their doubts more polite and reserved, while the former pirates were much more forthright. After all, everything about the description of the Vault had made it sound like even a Protector would have trouble breaking it down, so then…

"Eh? How's that supposed to work?" a Sableye questioned.

"Yeah!" a Quilava added. "The Company's not just going to let you waltz in and snatch that ledger just because you have some way of getting the door open!"

"No, but they would if there was a big enough distraction happening from inside of it," Kline answered. "As long as I got in, it'd be trivial for me to both provide such a distraction and hide my presence afterwards. It'd also give Pierce and the others all the cover they need to come in as Company reinforcements."

Kline's explanation was met with puzzled murmurs from the rest of the gathering. An Unfezant peered over with a blank stare, furrowing his brow in disbelief.

"Wait, it does?" Pat wondered. "I'm not sure if I follow you there."

"Kline can turn invisible, remember?" Guardia replied. "If he changes back into that "Core" form he normally goes around in someplace where he's not being watched, we can sneak him in without the guards knowing. He could even do it right here below deck!"

"That's right. It shouldn't be that hard to sneak him in along with those goggles. And as long as he moves his Cells away from the ship before he goes in, it'll look like he's coming from everywhere at once." Elty insisted. "Once he gets in, he just changes back into his current Forme, raises a little hell, and there you go. A ticket for us to send in those 'reinforcements' to help out."

Elty beamed and wagged his tail, only to stop and trail off after noticing the ship's crew still seemed to be unconvinced. A Sliggoo narrowed his eyes, before casting a glance over at the Pokémon around the central table.

"Then who exactly are we sending in as 'reinforcements'?" the Dragon-Type asked.

"Older Pokémon who have a feel for the campus grounds and aren't already well known by the guards," Calidus insisted. "That's where we would come in."

"Right, the guards wouldn't be likely to turn down our help if we were in Company colors," Alice explained. "Once we're in, the inside of the Vault would be a mess, so it wouldn't raise any alarms if the Ledger didn't turn up right away."

"Exactly," Kline said. "Additionally, the very properties that make the Vault so robust also make it hard for others to watch from the outside, even from the likes of a Luxray trying to peer in."

The Zygarde moved his paw back to the location of the Vault on the floorplan, where there inside, four dots had been drawn in a pattern that looked like a diamond or a cross.

"That's why there's a small team of four guards normally posted inside with badges for Psychics to sense if something is amiss," he continued. "As soon as they're overpowered, I can throw their badges into a corner, and the Company would then be none the wiser to Percy and the others switching out the Ledger for a dummy book."

The moment Kline finished speaking, Pyry and Pekka's eyes lit up. Even in the midst of their hangovers, the two sensed an opportunity for adventure and rare loot. With everything the Zygarde had told them, it sounded like they could literally just walk in and take whatever they wanted!

"Ah! That's easy!" Pyry cried, before Pekka chimed in with a buzzing flit of his wings.

"Yeah! We'd be able to find that Ledger in-!"

"You two are staying on the ship," Kline snapped. "The guards already know you quite well from your drunken brawl earlier, so you'd only cause trouble if you came along."

The Gabite and Vibrava froze for a moment, their enthusiasm deflating as the two Dragon-Types looked away with a pair of quiet sulks. Undeterred, Alice walked up and gave the pair some reassuring pats.

"Eh, don't take it too personally, it's just what's most practical. Besides, you two are pretty experienced sailors, and we're going to need all the help we can get to make sure we pull out of here in one piece," she insisted. "I'm assuming that Team Sentinel's prepared some sort of nasty surprise for us when we attempt to leave, and if we can't slip out in spite of it, then all of this will have been for nothing."

Pyry and Pekka blinked and hesitated at Alice's reassurance, before grudgingly conceding the point. Towards the center of the gathering, Beatrix shook her head, casting a wary glance off at Kline and the others.

"On that note, once you have the Ledger, how are you planning on getting back before anyone notices?" the Illumise captain asked. "Even with our disguises, we shouldn't risk lingering around more than we need to."

"Filbert and the others showed us a shortcut out of the Archive," Crom explained. "It goes right to the canal that runs through the main building, which connects directly to the central one of the entire city. As long as Dimitri's waiting in the water, we should be able to get out in a hurry."

"With only one swimmer?" Beatrix pressed. "Especially if you're expecting Team Sentinel to attack you after leaving the Vault?"

"One swimmer and three fliers. We're not exactly sitting this one out, and it should be just enough to carry everyone," Percy reminded. "As for Team Sentinel, we'll be putting together some orbs and seeds we can use to delay pursuers if something goes wrong on our way out. If Team Sentinel does come after us, it'll help us even the odds a bit."

The Siglo Swellow's crew mulled the Gliscor's reply, and the more they talked the matter over to themselves, the more and more it sounded like this plan could actually work. The sailors' mood began to take on a more confident turn, as Kiran looked around and gave a quiet ruffle of his feathers.

"… I know that this is a big risk, but we all knew that before we came here," the Swellow insisted. "Are there any objections to this plan?"

A few 'nays' came back in reply, as more and more joined in. Before Team Traveller knew it, the crew had whipped themselves up into an eager mood, with a couple more enthusiastic Pokémon chiming in with cries of 'Let's get on with it!' and 'We'll have that Ledger in no time!'. Team Traveller and their companions breathed out sighs of relief, as Kline stepped forward and gave a grateful nod back at the surrounding sailors.

"Thank you for trusting us. And rest well," the Zygarde said. "We've got a big day tomorrow, and we'll need to be at our best for it."



As the beating heart of the Company, Canalhouse City's more trafficked districts hummed with activity at almost all hours of the day. Even well past nightfall, the streets and canals remained busy with more nocturnal Pokémon who roused from their daytime slumber to take the place of their diurnal compatriots.

It was that hustle and bustle that had been Albert's motivation to finally get off the Siglo Swellow after almost three days without setting foot ashore. He, Charlie, and Marilyn needed a change of scenery from the ship's decks, and as the three con artists made their way along the central canal of Canalhouse City, the crowds on shore, the swimmers and watercraft in the canal, and the surrounding canalhouses more than satisfied that yearning.

The Nuzleaf soaked in the hubbub of the world around him and let out a content sigh. Perhaps when all of this was over, they'd come back and ply their trade here. After all, in a city this size, there were bound to be no shortage of suckers. The Grass-Type turned off to gawk at a passing raft, when from the corner of his eye, he spotted Marilyn fidgeting uneasily, before the Eevee shot a worried glance up at him.

"Albert, should we really be going this far out from the ship at this hour?" she murmured. The Eevee's question drew a dismissive scoff from her Nuzleaf teammate, who turned back with his hands on his hips.

"It's fine, Marilyn. We're not the ones who are wanted here," Albert insisted. "And after all the work that slave driver of a snake's put us through since Buyeom, we deserve a night out on the town."

Marilyn hesitated a moment, before perking her ears up and letting a small smile spread over her muzzle.

"I mean, I suppose seeing a showing of The Luxray King wouldn't be the end of the world," the Eevee chuckled.

Albert shot a cheerful grin back at his junior partner and continued on a ways, only for his eyes to notice that Charlie's gaze remained fixed at the paving stones underfoot. Before the Nuzleaf could pry further, the Riolu raised his head, shooting a small frown back at his ringleader.

"How much longer are we going to have to do this though?" Charlie asked, prompting the Nuzleaf to raise a brow in reply.

"Eh? What do you mean by that?" he asked.

"I mean, when are we going to go back to how things were?"

Albert blinked and bit his tongue in awkward silence for a moment. The Nuzleaf's features drooped, before he shook his head with a low sigh.

"Look, I know it hasn't been fun, but it's been barely over a week since we got sucked into all of this," the Grass-type insisted. "Just hang in there a little longer."

"And what about David, huh?"

Albert fell silent at Charlie's question. He said nothing in response, after all, just what could he say? The Riolu balled his paws up at his partner's lack of answer, and grit his teeth in frustration.

"We're just supposed to sit and let him rot while none of those jerks care about helping to get him back?!" Charlie cried. "How long are they going to make us do this?!"

The Nuzleaf slowed to a stop as he passed the mouth of an alleyway, before hanging his head. As Charlie and Marilyn caught up with their leader, they saw him hesitate and heard him let out a quiet sigh, before turning back to them with a glum expression.

"Charlie, we're three 'mons, and we don't even know where those square-necks took him!" Albert exclaimed. "I get that you're worried, but be reasonable here! What do you expect us to do?! Just go up to those 'Team Sentinel' goons to give them a piece of our mind?"

"That can certainly be arranged."

Albert froze, before seeing a dark-furred arm shoot in front of him and wrap around his throat from behind. The Nuzleaf felt himself get dragged back, when he abruptly heard the sound of strong wingbeats along with Charlie and Marilyn letting out stifled yelps. The Grass-Type flailed his arms and thrashed as he tried to break free of his assailant pulling him into the inky shadows of a darkened alley. Albert tried to turn and see his attacker, when he felt icy claws dig into his neck and his blood run cold.

Albert's mind went blank in a panic, and the next thing he knew, he was being thrown against a wall, with Charlie and Marilyn meeting the same fate after a pair of large, bat-like wings tipped with red claws did much the same. Albert sucked in a sharp breath and turned around, where much to his horror, he saw Ketu and Aldrich staring down at them.

"Now there's some faces I never expected to see again," Ketu said. "You know, you really should consider covering your tracks when sneaking off from your ship this late."

The Weavile sauntered over with a threatening smirk, flashing his claws as he neared the cornered shysters.

"I'm sure that there's a long, not terribly interesting story behind why you're here, but let's cut to the chase here," he snapped. "We've got some questions for you, and you're going to answer them. Right now.."

For a moment, the only thing Albert could hear were the sound of his, Charlie, and Marilyn's panicked breaths, as his eyes darted about for any sign of a way to escape. His Riolu and Eevee companions dug their paws in, trying their hardest to summon defiant scowls, only for their eyes to betray their barely-suppressed fear of the Weavile and Noivern accosting them.

"A-As if we'd ever work with the likes of you again!" Marilyn piped.

"Y-Yeah! You left us out to dry once already!" Charlie snapped. "How stupid do you think we'd be to trust you again?!"

Aldrich leaned in towards the two younger Pokémon with an overpowering glare, the pair letting out frightened squeaks as he bared his fangs and let out a low snarl.

"I don't think you understand just how bad of a situation you're in right now," the Noivern said. "You'd be wise to pipe down and answer our questions."

Albert, Charlie, and Marilyn squirmed and shrank back against the wall. After being satisfied he'd cowed the three into submission, Aldrich let out a sharp huff, narrowing his eyes as he continued to speak.

"In case you haven't noticed already, you're not going to fight your way through us. Not to mention we just caught you red-handed impersonating Company personnel," the Noivern harrumphed. "That alone would get you stuck picking Apricorns in a field for years, or considering what your current buddies are up to right now, rotting behind bars on Nagrobek."

Ketu's expression eased up a moment, and reached out a claw. The three flinched, expecting a sudden blow at any moment, when they peeked up and saw the Dark-Type staring back at them with a smile that seemed almost amiable.

"But there's no need for things to come to that. We're reasonable Pokémon and open to negotiating," Ketu insisted. "After all, we already have some idea of why you're here."

Albert and his companions stiffened up at the Weavile's words. They hadn't expected to run into these bastards again, and yet they already knew why the Siglo Swellow drug them along?

"You- You do?" Charlie gulped.

"A little bird told us that your new friends are going around searching for pieces of something called the 'Knights' Ledger'. We also heard that they're sitting on one of them right now," Ketu said. "Help us find it, and we'll pull some strings so that way you can see your little blob friend again. You do miss him, don't you?"

Charlie and Marilyn hesitated at the Weavile's question. Every bone in their body was screaming not to trust him and that Noivern. B-But those two knew where David was and how to find him! They could very well make good on their offer. Could. But even if they made good on it, at what cost would it come?

"I-I…" Marilyn stammered. "We…"

"The crew dips their toes into smuggling," Albert suddenly cut in. "If I had to guess, they probably have that Ledger of theirs shoveled away in Captain's Quarters."

Albert quietly sucked in a sharp breath and blinked nervously, casting a glance slightly downward. Ketu and Aldrich's eyes widened briefly, as if they were surprised by his answer, before the Weavile studied him with a scrutinizing gaze. After a brief moment of hesitation, Ketu narrowed his eyes, as ice suddenly sprouted on his claws. The Nuzleaf reflexively raised his hands to try and shield his face, only to feel an icy punch at his stomach. Freezing agony shot through Albert's body, the Grass-Type bowling over from the blow and crumpling to the ground much to Charlie and Marilyn's yelping alarm.

The Nuzleaf lay in place wheezing for air trying to nurse his frigid and bruised stomach. Just then, he felt himself get yanked up by his head leaf and Ketu's claws wrap around his throat as their points dug into his skin. Albert drew in shallow, frightened breaths as he looked up, and saw Ketu's face leaning in against his, his eyes locked into a piercing glare.

"Next time I hit you, it won't just be a little love tap," the Weavile spat. "So let's try this again. Where is the Ledger?"

Albert hesitated and grimaced. While he hadn't gotten that close to the Siglo Swellow's crew, he still felt uneasy about throwing them under the ship—to 'mons who'd left David trapped in an Apricorn and ratted them out to the guards on Buyeom, no less! Why, there was exactly zero reason to trust a word that came from this cat's mouth!

Pain shot through the Nuzleaf's neck as he felt Ketu tighten his grip and dig his claws deeper into his skin. Whatever he thought of undermining the Siglo Swellow, one thing was crystal clear: this 'mon was ready to kill him if he didn't say something that satisfied him.

… He just wanted to know a location, right? It's not as if the Siglo Swellow wouldn't be able to defend the Ledger if he was able to slip away and pass a warning along to them, right?

"Look, they're always going in and out of the second-to-last sleeping quarters from the bow on the ship's port side. I've never seen it for myself, but I've heard wood clattering a few times when passing by there," Albert insisted. "If they really have this 'Ledger' you're going on about, there's gotta be some sort of compartment in there where they're hiding it!"

Ketu paused and fell silent at the Nuzleaf's reply, the Dark-Type pulling his claw back as he stepped back and curled his muzzle up into a knowing smile.

"See, I knew I could count on you to come through, Albert."

Aldrich shuffled his wings, turning to his Weavile partner with a small frown.

"Is there anything else you need from them, Ketu?"

The Weavile stopped and pondered for a moment, before closing his eyes with a wave of his claw back in response.

"Nah, I think I can work with what these jokers gave us."

"L-Look, you have what you want," Marilyn stammered. "So let us go already!"

The Weavile rolled his eyes and nonchalantly pulled back the flap of the satchel around his shoulder. There at the top, Albert and his companions saw the rind of a White Apricorn poking out. The three froze and felt the color drain out of their faces, looking up to see the Dark-Type shooting them a threatening smirk.

"And keep you from being able to say 'hi' to your Ditto friend again?" Ketu asked. "Now what kind of person would I be if I did that?"

Aldrich beat his wings together and brought a swirling, overpowering gale down on the three con artists, throwing their bodies about limply like a trio of Substitutes. As the winds of Aldrich's Hurricane died down, the alley returned to silence beyond the faint churn of lagoon water and Canalhouse City's nightlife in the background.

Ketu glanced over the unconscious forms of Albert and his companions, before he brought a White Apricorn down on Albert's head. A flash of light swallowed up the Nuzleaf as he collapsed into the Apricorn. The Weavile scoffed and reached with a thick cloth into his bag and pulled out another white nut before repeating the process with Charlie, and then once again with Marilyn. Ketu deposited the three now-filled Apricorns into Aldrich's bag, before turning his attention back to his teammate.

"So they really do have a volume of the Ledger," the Weavile remarked. "I dunno what they did to pull that one off, but no reason to complain about a lucky break."

Aldrich looked down at the Apricorns briefly and covered up the mouth of his bag, when he glanced over at Ketu with a wary twitch of his ears.

"You know, we could've taken care of this half an hour ago," the Noivern began. "Alice had her guard down with that shopping bag of hers, and she would have had a better idea of where the Ledger was being kept anyway."

Ketu flattened his ears and looked away towards the ground. After a moment's hesitation, the Weavile turned back with a low, bitter-sounding mutter.

"Yeah, well, it wasn't that easy and you know it," Ketu said. "She wouldn't break like some random sailor, which is why we waited for a group like these guys to turn up. Besides, things worked out fine, didn't they?"

The Noivern raised a brow and looked at Ketu skeptically for a moment. After a noticeable pause, the bat closed his eyes and relented with a sigh.

"Fair enough."

"Anyway, I'll let you take care of putting these jokers on the first ship to Nagrobek. As for me…"

Ketu walked out onto the street and turned his head slightly, his eyes picking up the sight of the lights from the Company's military harbor on the other side of the central canal. The Weavile crossed his arms, before a small smile formed on his face.

"I've got a mission to prepare for right now."



Much to her relief, Salvini's job guarding the Academy's grounds went by that day without incident. Her companions had gone without seeing anyone from Team Traveller, and after hours, they all had an urge to spend time with one another.

Her idea for an activity had been the one to ultimately win her friends' favor, namely to spend the evening together over drinks at a tavern near her new lodgings, not far from the modest apartment she'd grown up in for much of her childhood. Before long, the four found themselves happily wiling away their time and sobriety at a simple wooden bar in a room dimly lit with warm candlelight, as a Gothorita barkeep darted to and fro between customers.

The four spent the evening at a set of stools set out at the bar, with Hertsog at one end, Salvini at the other, with Phyllis and Payak between the two. The Ariados of the lot sat at a taller seat and raised a clay cup by slipping one of his legs into a holder, before bringing it to his mandibles. Payak gave a wary swig of the cup's contents and clicked his mouthparts, Salvini watching carefully from a shorter seat to his left to study his reaction as she gave a curious tilt of her head.

"So, what do you think?" the Grovyle asked.

"Well, it's not rakia…" Payak began. "But the jenever here isn't half bad! I think I could get used to it."

A small smile settled over Salvini's face as she watched Payak take another sip from his drink. It was nice to see that in spite of their circumstances, Payak was finally warming up to her old home, and what would be her companions' for the foreseeable future. The Grovyle reached for her cup on the counter, when she saw Hertsog staring down idly at his own drink. Phyllis had evidently noticed it too, as the Marked Leafeon tilted an ear back and pawed uneasily at his side.

"Is something the matter, Hertsog?" she asked. "You've been awfully quiet tonight."

The Mienshao turned his attention from his cup and glanced over at his Marked colleague. Hertsog blinked briefly, seemingly drifting in his own thoughts, before shaking his head with an apologetic sigh.

"Izvinyavaĭ," he replied. "I've just had things from work on my mind."

Salvini, Payak, and Phyllis traded glances with each other. Even if Hertsog was usually more reserved than them, it wasn't like him to be this withdrawn when they went out for drinks together…

"Did something happen on the job?" Payak asked.

Hertsog remained silent for a moment, and picked up his cup to drink from it, before setting it aside and turning on his stool. Salvini helped herself to the rest of her own cup's contents, noting that the Mienshao had a serious, guarded expression. Hertsog nodded back to Payak, before speaking up in a low voice, just loud enough for him to be heard over the chatter of the other patrons in the background.

"There was a disturbance that happened around the Archive earlier today," the Fighting-Type explained. "Apparently some drunken students had gotten into a fight with each other. Normally I wouldn't think too much of it…"

The Mienshao trailed off for a moment, before shaking his whiskered head with a low sigh.

"But there's just been some strange things happening lately, and it stood out to me," he remarked. " What about you? Did any of you see anything strange during your patrols?"

Salvini flinched mid-drink as Hertsog spoke, and broke down into startled coughing. The Grass-Type accidentally spat up a good half of her remaining drink onto the counter and tried to calm herself, when she turned and noticed her teammates staring at her.

The Grovyle brushed her mouth with the back of her hand as the Gothorita barkeep shuffled up and shot a sour frown at her. Salvini grimaced briefly, where after a bit of awkward stammering, she forced a sheepish smile over her face in front of her teammates.

"S-Sorry, I was just drinking a little too quickly," she insisted. "The stuff burns a little."

The Gothorita summarily wiped down the counter in front of her, Salvini squirming from embarrassment and deep unease as her teammates continued to eye her. Payak was the first to turn his attention back to his drink, shooting an askew glance back from the corner of his eye.

"I mean, I knew you liked your jenever, but I didn't think you were that eager to get through your drink, Salvini," Payak murmured. "Though to answer your earlier question, Hertsog, I don't think that I have seen anything strange."

Phyllis shuffled her forepaws uneasily at the Ariados' words. She seemed to visibly weigh whether or not to say anything for a moment, before opening her mouth to speak up.

"Actually… the other day I saw a Cubone and a Growlithe in the library that reminded me of the ones we ran into on Mengir," the Leafeon said. "I… told myself that it was probably nothing, since there's no logical reason why they'd be here, but…"

The Grass-type visibly shivered and pinned her ears back, as her voice came out in a low, worried whine.

"I… I know that it's going to sound crazy, but… what if that demon really did come back?" she asked. "What if he's right here in Canalhouse City while nobody even knows about it?"

Phyllis's questions were at once answered by a dismissive scoff, as Payak turned and glanced at her from his stool with an unimpressed frown.

"Nima? This story again? Phyllis, it was just a case of mistaken identity, it happens," the Ariados chittered. "There's no reason for you to still be so wound up over some overgrown Wingull!"

"… And if things weren't that simple, Payak?"

Payak and the others paused and blinked as Hertsog's question hung in the air. Payak turned on his seat to face his Fighting-Type companion, who was staring at him with a serious gaze, making the Bug-Type warily raise a brow.

"Eh? What are you getting at, Hertsog?" the spider wondered.

"Let's just assume for the sake of argument that Phyllis is right," the Mienshao began. "We… obviously wouldn't agree on whether or not what she saw was a demon, but… would you still be dismissing her concerns so quickly?"

The Ariados fell silent and hesitated for a moment, before giving a puzzled tilt of his head.

"You mean, if those brats really were here again?" the Bug-Type asked. "What are the odds of that happening, let alone that that bird with them actually being a Protector?"

Hertsog shook his head back and narrowed his eyes with a small frown, raising his voice to continue to press his point.

"I'm well aware of what the odds are, Payak. Again, this is a hypothetical," the Fighting-Type said. "If Phyllis is right and there really is… such a unique Pokémon like that in the city, would you still feel this way?"

Payak fell silent for a moment, before he quietly pulled his legs close to his body and grudgingly spoke up in reply.

"I mean, I guess I wouldn't… since that'd mean that bird really is a Protector. That's not the sort of 'mon you would want to get on the bad side of, especially not for how much we're getting paid," the Ariados admitted. "But why would the Company get involved with trying to 'monhandle a Protector like that?"

Salvini cleared her throat to suppress a nervous titter, which Payak thankfully didn't seem to pick up on. After a moment to compose herself, the Grovyle let her attention drift back to Hertsog, as he shook his head with a low murmur.

"I don't know, but Phyllis has been adamant that one of the Pokémon we ran into on Mengir was a 'demon'," the Mienshao insisted. "If nothing else, it makes sense to be a bit open-minded."

Salvini blinked at Hertsog's statement. While she hadn't expected him to be nasty about Phyllis' fears, hearing him even entertain the possibility she was onto something was… unexpected, to say the least.

"What… makes you say that?" the Grovyle asked. Her Mienshao companion remained silent at first, turning his gaze down at the counter with a shake of his head.

"There's… just been a lot about what's happened to us over the past couple weeks that doesn't make any sense to me," Hertsog replied. "I'm well aware of what the official explanation was, but between the way Commander Briggs and Administrator Zorn were conducting themselves, and the rumors circulating about what happened with those riots in Tidemill City… there's just some things that don't add up about what those two told us on Mengir."

Hertsog reached for his cup and gave it an idle swirl, before letting out a quiet sigh and speaking up to reassure his teammates.

"It's probably nothing, but still. It's not unreasonable for Phyllis to think there might have been something more to what happened back there," he insisted. "And perhaps whatever did happen there is not as behind us as we thought. After all, the higher-ups aren't doing a whole lot to act otherwise."

A brief silence fell over the group, as one after the other, the four returned to their drinks. Salvini reached for her cup of jenever and as she raised it to her mouth, she could hear Phyllis quietly murmuring a 'thanks for having my back there' to Hertsog.

The Grovyle shot an aside glance at the former Mienshao captain, wondering to herself if the Fighting-Type genuinely believed the words he'd said on the Phyllis' behalf earlier, or if he'd just said them as a courtesy to help her mood.

… Either way, she supposed it didn't matter much, since for all she knew, Team Traveller would turn tail and sail out of port tonight. Right now, perhaps it was best to just focus on her drink and have a good time with her friends.



The next morning, the skies over Canalhouse City were overcast and gray. The gloom above did little to lift Darzin's mood as he flew through the air, the dampness reminding him of a home he'd long lost, while the chill brought back unwelcome memories of his first few cold nights away from it.

Not that he'd have been in better spirits even without the weather weighing down on him. Much of the past couple days had gone by in a fruitless search for the Siglo Swellow, as time and again, his attempts to shadow the Guardian of the Seas and his friends kept failing due to him losing sight of them amid the crowds of the city. He had also made an attempt to find their ship and capture Lugia there, but in spite of combing the expected docks high and low, there was no trace of the dark gray sails they'd flown on Haipheh.

On top of it all, the indignity of Team Sentinel's ambush yesterday also lingered on the Dragonite's mind. After everything he'd endured to try and use the Guardian of the Seas as a bargaining chip with the rest of the Board, it'd be a snowy day on Sormus before he'd let that Kommo-o and his cronies ruin all his efforts at the last moment!

"Hrmph, if those meddling spies think that they can steal Lugia out from under me, they've got another thing coming."

He hadn't been able to track down their personnel files in a mere day, but even so, he had… methods that would hopefully take the lot of them off the board as competitors. The Dragonite shifted his glance over at his right claw, which he'd tightly balled up into a fist around a scrunched-up indigo cloth. The Dragon-type gave a firm squeeze at it, before training his attention down at the city's islets below.

Darzin flew ahead as the military harbor came into view among the gabled rooftops. The Dragonite looked down among the network of canals and streets below, studying the surroundings when he chanced to come across a waterside terrace directly south along the canal running past the harbor. There, the Dragon-Type spotted a Kommo-o and a Noivern seated among the tables and blinked, circling about for a better look. Alongside the two Pokémon was the same Sylveon from the day before, and a Mothim that he didn't seem to recognize, but could have sworn he'd seen somewhere before. But even between the three faces that he could recognize, it was clear that this was the group he was looking for.

"And here I thought I'd need to comb the Academy to find them again," he grumbled. "Let's hurry up and move this along."

Darzin swooped down from the air and landed on his feet in a low crouch, his arrival causing a noticeable thump that drew the attention of the nearby Pokémon away from their drinks and meals.

"There you are!" Darzin fumed. "Where on earth have you all been?!"

Team Sentinel looked up from the table, with Ellsberg jolting up and letting out a surprised buzz at the sight of the Dragonite.

"H-Huh?! Administrator Darzin?!"

The Bug-Type wondered briefly what on earth the Administrator was doing away from his duties at the Records Department, only to notice Sorge, Aldrich, and Zelle's reactions transform into frowns of sour annoyance. Zelle narrowed her eyes, throwing a feeler over her face and dragging it downwards with a low groan.

"You have got to be kidding me…"

"No, I'm not kidding," Darzin snapped. "And you'd do well to respect your superiors here!"

Sorge shot a dark glare across the table and balled his left claw into a fist. The Kommo-o paused when he noticed from the corners of his eyes that there were other Pokémon in Company lavenders staring at them. Sorge hesitated briefly and exhaled, before forcing a more muted expression over his face and leaning in with a quiet growl.

"You should rein in your attitude," the Kommo-o snarled. "How do you expect this to end any different than yesterday?"

Sorge noted that Darzin didn't seem fazed by the implied threat and instead bared his fangs back. Was it the other Company Pokémon nearby giving him such boldness? Him misreading their strength? Or just him being that much of a glutton for punishment?

Sorge didn't know, and frankly didn't care too much about the reason. Whatever had made the Dragonite think it was a good idea to seek them out, he was advancing on them all the same, and clearly eager for a confrontation.

"Bold of you to think that you're in any position to publicly deny me!" Darzin exclaimed, holding out an accusatory claw. "Though if you'd like to try your luck with expulsion from the ranks, go ahead and-"

"Hey there, buddy! Good to see you again!"

Darzin felt a sharp slap against his back as a wave of dizziness settled over him. The Dragonite whirled his head around and saw a Weavile smirking up at him just as his vision went blurry. The Dragon-type Administrator lurched in a confused stagger, only for Ketu to slip past him as he patted at his back.

"C'mon, It hasn't been that long since we saw each other!" Ketu exclaimed, shooting a smarmy smile up at Darzin. "Why, with that sort of treatment, you'd think we were enemies or something!"

Darzin tottered and struggled to keep his balance. He turned to his left in an attempt to follow the Weavile's voice but merely faced empty air.

"Ngah… who are-?"

The Dragonite wobbled forward, as Ketu waited for the Dragon-Type to raise a foot to turn to face him again, only to give a shove mid-stride that pushed the reeling Administrator off-balance. Darzin stumbled ahead a few steps before righting himself in confusion, leaving Ketu to fold his arms as he called out to the Dragonite in a smug tone in front of the nearby onlookers.

"Might want to lay off the jenever though if you're getting that wobbly from it, though," the Weavile insisted. "We need a moment to touch base first, so let's catch up with each other in a bit. For now, why don't you get some fresh air to clear your head?"

Darzin staggered into the table of a hapless party of guards, where he upended the group's meal and drinks with a chorus of yelps and protests.

"Hey! Watch it!"

Satisfied with his clawwork, Ketu ignored the unfolding commotion in the background and took a seat beside the other members of Team Sentinel, kicking his feet up onto the table with a sly grin as he let the splintered husk of a spent Totter Seed fall under the table. All the while, Ellsberg looked on in bewilderment, watching Darzin walk around in a daze, before turning his attention back to the others.

"What on earth just happened?" he asked, drawing a dismissive scoff from Aldrich in reply.

"Hrmph, Darzin beclowned himself yet again," the Noivern said. "Though what else is new?"

Ketu cast a glance back at Darzin after the sound of him bumping into another table rang out, before turning back to his Noivern teammate with a small shrug.

"Not too much. Like we expected, it looks like today's the day that Kline and his friends are going to try to hit up the Vault," the Weavile said, prompting Aldrich to look at him expectantly.

"I take it that you're ready to handle your end of things, then?" the Noivern asked.

Ketu fell quiet for a moment and studied the mouth of the military harbor, before giving a wary nod back to his friend.

"Mostly. I've got an idea of where to find the Ledger and it shouldn't take too long to zero in on it," he replied. "I'm pretty sure I could snatch it and get out on my own if I had to, but I could use a distraction on that schooner to buy me some more time."

Ketu's teammates remained quiet and thought to themselves what could be used to create a distraction on such short notice. A pained yowl rang out and caught the group's attention, as they glanced over to a nearby table and spotted a hapless Liepard getting up whimpering from a still-dazed Darzin having stepped on his tail. The five traded looks with each other, before Zelle raised a feeler and pointed off at the lurching Administrator in the background.

"You mean a distraction like that?" she asked. Ketu turned and let his gaze linger on the Dragonite for a moment, before giving a grunting nod in affirmation.

"Yeah, he'll do," he said. "Let's go ahead and point him where we need him to go."

Sorge started to get up, when much to his surprise, Darzin turned back and began lumbering towards them on his own. The rest of Team Sentinel rose from their seats as well, expecting Darzin to crash into their table, when he abruptly veered towards Sorge. He threw his right arm out to steady himself, his claw falling onto the mouth of the Kommo-o's bag. Sorge's eyes lit up with fiery indignation and he grabbed the Dragonite's arm with his left claw, digging into it just enough to draw a pained yelp and a few ruddy droplets.

"That's quite enough, Darzin," Sorge snapped.

The Kommo-o shoved the Dragonite away, sending him stumbling back and pratfalling onto the paving stones behind him. Darzin sat there, shaking feeling back into his arm and nursing his rump as a few stifled snickers came from the surrounding onlookers. The Dragonite frowned with a low, annoyed growl, before getting up and sharply glaring back at Sorge.

"What do you think you're-?!"

"Reacting as any other Pokémon would to having his stuff rifled through," Sorge harrumphed. "Even as an Administrator, you surely know better than to expect a 'mon to just accept that!"

The Dragonite bared his fangs back, but didn't get much of a reaction aside from an unimpressed frown from Zelle, who rolled her eyes and turned her attention towards Ketu.

"Hrmph, we've wasted enough time on this," the Sylveon insisted. "We should get going if we want to wrap things up within the hour. That schooner near the mouth of the military harbor isn't going to take care of itself."

Darzin blinked and fell silent after the Fairy-Type's words. Had she just slipped up? He wouldn't have expected Pokémon from the Intelligence Division to have such loose lips, but he certainly wasn't about to complain about it.

The Dragonite wondered for a moment how on earth Lugia and his companions would have docked their ship in the military harbor for multiple days. After all, only Company ships were allowed to dock at its piers!

… Then again, they surely would've had an easier time infiltrating the Academy if they had passed themselves off in Company colors. And it wouldn't be hard to confirm things one way or another. Why, the harbor was literally visible from this terrace! It'd only take a quick look to verify if that schooner was there, and if it was… well, snatching Lugia thanks to that Sylveon's mistake would be as convenient a way as any to repay the Kommo-o and his underlings for their intrusion.

The Dragonite turned and headed off from the terrace with an audible huff, only for Ketu to call out from behind him.

"Leaving already?"

Darzin looked back, flexing the digits of a free and empty right claw much as if they'd grown stiff from exertion. Curiously, the Dragonite seemed to be at ease, as the faintest glimmers of a smile crossed his face, before being suppressed into a deep scowl.

"I'm a busy 'mon, Weavile," he huffed back. "Besides, even if you were extremely rude throughout it, I got what I wanted from our meeting."

Darzin leapt up, taking wing as he flew up into the gray sky and sailed along with the churning air currents above. Back on the ground, Team Sentinel's members watched as the Dragonite Administrator slipped off, before Aldrich let out a low scoff.

"Tch, he's not still trying to scheme against us, is he?"

"Hmph, just let him think he's accomplishing something," Sorge said. "Though there's your distraction, Ketu. Make the most of it while you can."

"Right," the Weavile replied. "Good luck out there with the mission."

Team Sentinel's members left the terrace and set off, Ketu heading off for the military harbor as his teammates began to make their way towards the Academy. All the while, as Sorge's team drifted off further into the city, the Kommo-o's bag jostled with his movements, and little did he know that there at its top, the corner of an indigo cloth could be seen poking from it.



Author's Notes:

- gevulde koeken - Dutch: A type of cookie made with a soft center filling made of almond paste. lit. "filled cookies"
- Nima? (Нима?) - Bulgarian: Expression used to express skepticism or surprise, analogous to "Really?" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
 
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Chapter 90: Casting the Die

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. quilava-fobbie
  6. sneasel-kate
  7. heliolisk-fobbie
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While Team Sentinel set out to prepare their ambush, Nida and the younger members of Team Traveller found themselves back in their same scouting position within the Archive's hallways that they were in two days ago. There, Crom held onto the pocket mirror that had been lent to them by the ship's crew, using it to see around the corner for his teammates. On the other end was a Machamp and a Slowbro with a shell on his arm in dark blue armor standing guard in front of the iron doors into the secure wing. Crom lingered for a moment at the sight of the pair's reflection, before he sucked in a sharp breath and turned to his teammates.

"Is everyone ready?" he asked. Elty hesitated and briefly looked in the direction of where the guards were, before shaking his head with a quiet sigh.

"I think this is as ready as we're going to get, Crom. Let's just make sure we've got the names of those guards we saw straight."

Pleo ruffled his feathers as he peeked past the corner at the Machamp and the Slowbro. The young Protector shrank back, giving a worried look to his teammates with a nervous stammer.

"B-But what if something goes wrong?" he murmured. "What if they catch on to us? Or-?"

"Cálmate, Pleo. It's okay."

Pleo paused as Nida leaned in and moved her paw over him, giving a reassuring pat and small smile in reply.

"We went through worse than this to help you escape from Tidemill City," the Nidorina insisted. "At least this time there's a chance we can get away without fighting."

Pleo calmed slightly at the Poison-Type's words, the five collectively inhaling sharply as they rounded the corner and forced smiles over their faces as they approached the Machamp and Slowbro. As they neared, they noticed the pair watching them keenly, Elty opting to break their silence by greeting them with a friendly wag of his tail.

"Oh, hey there!" the Growlithe cheered. "We've got an artifact for the Vault!"

Elty and his companions watched as the Machamp and Slowbro traded dubious glances with each other. After a moment to stew over the youngsters' claims, they turned back, both of the guards sporting deep, disbelieving frowns.

"Ja hoor," the Machamp scoffed. "And I'm the king of Conntow."

"Look, don't you have classes or something?" the Slowbro growled. "If there really was something being brought to the Vault today, we'd have heard of it."

The five grimaced reflexively at the guards' hostile reception, trading hesitant glances with each other. After a moment to steel herself, Nida stepped forward, stopping to take the lid off the box in her paws and reach inside.

"I think there must be some sort of misunderstanding, since we were specifically told by Daan to bring our artifact here," she insisted. "And I can't imagine that nobody would've told you about this."

Nida fished out Pleo's goggles, proudly holding them up before the Machamp and Slowbro. The Machamp narrowed his eyes, folding both sets of his arms and giving a sharp harrumph in reply to the Nidorina.

"A set of goggles? Really?" the Machamp said. "If you were going to pull some kind of prank on us-"

"Hold on a moment," the Slowbro insisted. "Those goggles are made of plastic."

The Machamp blinked as the Slowbro reached over and took the goggles from Nida. The Slowbro pawed over the goggles and inspected them with a quiet, entranced awe, before stopping and giving a wary glance back at the youngsters in front of him.

"How on earth did you kids get this?" he asked.

"It's a treasure passed down in our friend's family which we found out was really a human artifact," Guardia explained as she pointed at Pleo. "We didn't realize it was so rare and valuable until another Pokémon pointed it out. That's why we got the box for it."

The Machamp looked down at the goggles, and then back at the box in Nida's paws. With a shake of his head, he deposited the plastic accessory back inside and clamped the lid back over it, taking the box into a pair of his hands. The Machamp went over to the doors to the secure wing, leaving his Slowbro counterpart to look after him before turning back to Team Traveller's members with a low huff.

"Hrmph, we get the point," the Slowbro remarked. "Though, I'll need to have a word with Daan about communicating properly."

Team Traveller's members nodded back as the Machamp opened the iron doors and slipped into the dim, blue-lit hallways behind. The Fighting-Type dutifully made his way through the halls, down the stairs into the basement, and much as he had innumerable times before, eventually found himself in front of the entrance to the Vault. A party consisting of a Garchomp, a Klinklang, and a Doublade stood at attention by the entrance, as the Machamp headed over to the Steel-Type of the group holding out his box.

"Got a new addition for the collection, Liv," the Machamp said, prompting the Klinklang and the others to narrow their eyes skeptically.

"Eh? Just out of the blue?" the Klinklang asked.

"Yeah, I was surprised too," the Machamp replied. "But apparently it's a real artifact."

The Machamp pulled the top off the box and showed the goggles to his colleagues. At once the guards fell silent, the Klinklang examining it as the Doublade peered over and the Garchomp reached for a metal badge pinned against his scarf and pressed a claw down against it. There was a brief murmuring conversation between the Garchomp and an unseen presence on the other end—the guards' security dispatcher. After a moment's pause, the Garchomp let go of his badge and motioned at the Machamp to bring the goggles over.

"You're clear," the Garchomp insisted. "We'll get the door open right away so you can hand it off to the Internal Team."

The Garchomp stepped up to a metallic knob labeled with little stripes engraved into its metal, dutifully paying attention to them as he stopped the dial at a series of stripes. Left, right, and then left again. After stopping the dial on a final stripe, a heavy click sounded out, prompting the Dragon-type to grab onto a battered crossbar and turn it clockwise with an audible creak until it came to a firm stop. The round door of the Vault slowly swung open afterwards, revealing a Gengar, a Wobbuffet, a Malamar, and a Sawk gathered at the other end waiting for them.

"Here's the artifact," the Klinklang insisted. "Sounds like you'll have some excitement on the job today after all."

The Gengar of the four walked up and took the box out of the Machamp's hands, giving a nodding grunt in reply as the Fighting-Type drifted back down the hallway. The other guards outside set to work at once pushing the vault door closed with a sharp creak, as it closed shut with a loud click and its bolts slid back in place. The Gengar turned around as his fellow guards eyed the box curiously, before the Ghost-Type motioned for a pause.

"Let's find a spot for this first," he ordered. "You'll have plenty of time to gawk at whatever's in here after it's been shelved."

The Sawk, Malamar, and Wobbuffet moved away as the Gengar made his way for the back of the Vault, passing artifacts that were set on display throughout it. In a glass case, there was a discolored white plastic box that stood on its side next to a rod of the same color and composition with buttons laid out in a line on it. A little ways away, there was a large, flat plastic panel with a thin frame that was hung on a wall, and a red tome on a shelf that had a cover graced with a prominent line with two arms that branched out at its top.

The Gengar paid none of them any heed as he walked over to a tall shelf at the back of the Vault. There, he came to a small table set aside for sorting artifacts, when he suddenly realized that the box felt strangely light for its size. The Ghost-Type blinked a moment, and set the box down on the table, pulling the lid back to inspect it. The Gengar quickly discovered that the container was seemingly empty, but for a set of white-colored goggles made of unusually well-preserved plastic.

"Hrmph, they didn't need something this big for an artifact as small as this," the Gengar scoffed.

The Gengar stuck a hand into the box to grab the goggles, when he felt it brush up against an invisible lump inside, prompting him to abruptly pull his hand back.

"Huh?!"

The Gengar looked into the box, where a green, serpentine creature with a single eye seemingly appeared from thin air, and stared up at him with a flustered blink. Kline narrowed his eye into a glare, and at once, light bathed the box as alike-sized objects began to converge in on him through the Vault's walls, much to the Gengar's wide-eyed alarm.

"H-Hey! What the-?!"



Outside, just to the north of the Vault, Ander, Calidus, and Percy waited on a small grassy knoll hemmed in by canals on two sides. The three sat and rested, where they posed as guards supposedly on break from patrolling the Academy's grounds, and cast a glance in the direction of the Archive, where the rest of their teammates had been waiting on another portion of the knoll closer to the Archive's northern wall.

Ander let his gaze briefly linger on the others, before uncomfortably tapping the flats of his scythes together and turning to his nearby teammates.

"Did Kline say at all what we were supposed to look out for?" the Marked Scyther asked.

Calidus shook his head back in reply, casting a wary glance back at the building ahead of them.

"He didn't, actually. Just that we'd know when it's time," the Talonflame replied, prompting Ander to shoot a puzzled glance back. "I mean, Percy and I have some ideas of what we could expect, but-"

The Fire-Type paused as he and his teammates suddenly saw green lights zipping in from all around them. The lights converged on the Archive, and after a few seconds, they felt the ground violently shake. Distant shouts suddenly broke out inside and around the building, Kline's handiwork, they presumed. Without a moment to spare, Percy got up and motioned for the others to follow along.

"Well, that's as good of a sign as any," the Gliscor said. "Come on. We need to get that Ledger before other guards come to investigate."

The three hurried along, ducking into the Archive with the rest of their teammates as they rushed down the hallways. Before they knew it, they were at the iron doors leading into the building's secure wing, where there at the front, a startled-looking Machamp and Slowbro peered back towards the doors, seemingly hesitating over whether to go in or not. Percy and the others' approaching footsteps and wingbeats turned the pair's attention towards them, prompting the two guards to reflexively block off the entrance.

"Hey! What do you think you're doing here?!" the Machamp exclaimed.

"We're here to see what on earth is going on, of course!" Kiran shot back. "A bunch of lights just came in and we could feel the ground shake from outside! Are you seriously telling us that everything's fine in here?"

The Machamp and Slowbro hesitated a moment, when they heard faint shouts ring out from beyond the iron doors. The pair traded uneasy glances with one another, before the Machamp sighed and shook his head, hurriedly pushing the doors open as the Slowbro motioned for the Swellow and his companions to follow.

"Alright, but let's hurry up!" the Poison-Type insisted. "The disturbance came from inside the secure wing!"

Kiran and his peers hurried along past the iron doors and after the guards. They made their way through corridors bathed in cool blue light, turning when prompted by the Machamp and Slowbro, and making their way down the flight of steps into the basement, until at last they came across the Vault door.

There, the guards on duty were arguing with one another, the Garchomp hurriedly trying to turn a few knobs, only to fumble with a low growl and be forced to try again. The group slowed as they neared, prompting Pladur to suck in a sharp breath and warily approach the guards with a puzzled tilt of his head.

"What on earth happened here?" the Fraxure asked.

"We don't know! We brought in an artifact not even ten minutes ago and then a bunch of green lights shot in through the wall!" the Klinklang at the door explained. "After that, there was a crash and the sound of a struggle inside!"

"Just hurry up and get that thing open already!" Percy barked. "The culprit can't possibly have gotten far!"

The Garchomp slid the knobs into place when a dull click sounded out, prompting him to turn his attention to the crossbar and hurriedly whirl it about clockwise. The Vault door creaked open, and on the other end, Percy, his teammates, and the gathered guards found a scene of general disorder. All about, shelves had been upended and glass cases lay shattered into pieces, including one with a white box and rod that now lay toppled onto their sides.

The group made their way inside, where they spotted forms of the Internal Team lying limply on the ground, with fresh gouges ripped into their armor and little signs of life beyond an occasional weak groan. The guards posted at the door looked about with blank stares, the Machamp wincing after seeing a flat, plastic panel hanging ajar with a radial crack near one of its corners.

"Yeesh, what a mess," the Machamp murmured.

"Is there any sign of a breach in there?" the Slowbro asked.

The Garchomp looked around the upended vault. In spite of the mess of relics and damaged displays lying about, there was no obvious sign of forced entry. Wherever he looked, the walls of the vault remained unbroken, as did the floor and ceiling. The Garchomp mused aloud to himself if someone might have teleported or phased in, before having a moment of dawning realization and whirling about to Percy and his teammates with an impatient scowl.

"Look, don't just stand around like that!" the Garchomp grunted. "Either help us make sure all the relics are still here or go get a medic!"

Percy and the others fanned out into the room, as their members slowly worked their way towards the room's shelves, which seemed to be the most logical place to start searching for a book. Being ever the bold type, Alice was the first to make her way to one, coming to a stop at an upended shelf in the middle of the left end of the Vault. There, she pawed through artifacts of metal and plastic strewn about the floor, when she heard Pladur call her from behind.

"Alice, come here a minute."

The Sneasel looked up and saw the Fraxure motioning for her a little way towards the front of the Vault. There, next to his feet, she caught a glimpse of a bulky, worn red object half-buried wedged in the space under a toppled shelf. She made her way over and pulled the shelf back upright, where the pair quickly discovered the object was an old tome with a glyph on the cover that looked almost like a two-branched wand.

"Good eye there," she whispered back.

Alice quickly feigned a stumble and let a red tome spill out of her bag. Its pages were blank, but so long as she kept the cover closed, nobody here needed to know that. The Sneasel hastily shoveled the Ledger into her bag as Pladur stooped down and picked up the dummy book, hesitating as he brought it up to the uprighted shelf when he heard a sharp growl and looked over to see the Garchomp among the guards shooting a sharp glare at the two of them.

"Hey! Be careful with that!" the Dragon-Type snapped. "Everything in here's worth more than you'll ever make in your lifetimes!"

"Ack! Sorry!" Pladur stammered. "It's just that when you said to help inventory-"

"Just get out of our way and go and help set up a perimeter or something!" the head guard ordered. "This entire building's needs to be put on lockdown over this, and if you just sit there dawdling, the culprit will slip away beforehand!"

Pladur looked off at the other end of the Vault just in time to see Percy lower his claw to the ground and quickly shove an unseen mass into his bag. That must've been Kline, and assuming it was, it was sign enough for the Fraxure that their time here in this building was complete.

"Okay! Okay!"

Pladur made his way to the Vault's entrance and called for the others on his team to follow, the seven hastily retracing their steps through the secure wing of the Archive. They snaked through the blue-lit hallways, up the steps to the ground floor, and then back out the cast iron doors at the entrance, where sure enough, they'd returned to the hallways that Nida and the others had been skulking over the past couple days. As the group made their way towards the service entrance, they breathed sighs of relief, only for a quiet hiss to suddenly come from Percy's satchel as Kline irkedly poked his head out.

"Pierce, where is my cushion?" the Zygarde snapped.

"Sorry, but we needed the extra space for items today," the Gliscor answered. "I'm sure you can manage one mission without a silk cushion."

Pladur, Kiran, and Ander traded flummoxed stares and blinked as they ran, before the Fraxure cocked his head back at Percy and gave a puzzled quirk of his brow.

"Wait, you had a silk cushion in there-?"

The group's attention shot forward as they looked up to see a flash of pink fur exit the service entrance and skidded to a stop. There, just in front of the exit that the kids had told them about was Hertsog, followed by Salvini, Payak and Phyllis from Mengir. The seven froze for a moment as Hertsog and the others stopped and stood in place with dumbfounded stares.

"Huh?! Kiran?!"

After an initial moment of surprise, the Mienshao stepped forward with his arms at the ready to strike and his eyes narrowed into a sharp glare.

"What are you doing here?" the Fighting-Type demanded. "And why am I getting the feeling that whatever's going on right now is somehow related to you?"

Kiran faltered for a moment, shifting in place uneasily as he struggled with how to even begin to explain their circumstances… let alone in a way that wouldn't just prompt Hertsog and the others to attack them and tip off the other guards.

"… Er… well, you're not wrong," the Swellow began, before hastily beating his wings out in interjection. "B-But it's for a good reason, we swear!"

Salvini rolled her eyes at the Flying-Type's reply, curling her mouth down into an unimpressed frown.

"… Seriously? That's the best you can come up with, Kiran?" the Grovyle grumbled. "You're supposed to be trying to dispel our suspicion right now!"

"Just what sort of reason would justify all of this?" Hertsog pressed.

Kiran and his teammates hesitated, Ander and Pladur seemingly having the beginnings of an explanation on the tips of their tongues, only to think better of it and suddenly clam up. Then, Kiran shook his head, before sucking in a sharp breath to speak.

"… Like we said last time. We're trying to clear a friend's name," the Swellow said. "His name is Pleo. He's one of my pupils along with Crom back on our home island. My understanding is that you've already met him alongside some younger companions of his."

Salvini immediately froze after Kiran's words and from his reaction, Hertsog had evidently also found the name he mentioned to be familiar. Payak and Phyllis traded uneasy glances as their friends fell silent, before the pair stiffened up—it suddenly dawning on them that there was a reason why the name sounded so familiar…

"T-Those are those pirates from Mengir!" Payak cried.

Phyllis' eyes shot wide and the Marked Leafeon's breaths came shallow and quick at the realization that her suspicions about the Growlithe and Cubone from the other day were onto something. Worst of all, it wasn't just the pirates from Fensedge Village that were present, but none other than the demon that was with them was here too!

Kiran grimaced briefly at the guards' reaction, before deciding to throw caution to the wind and press on with his explanation. Hertsog and the others held their fates in their paws at the moment, so if they were going to win them over without a risky fight, they needed to say something—and fast.

"… Those are the charges they are facing, yes," Kiran sighed. "But look, they really were falsely accused and we just wanted to-"

"N-Ne!"

Phyllis crouched in front of Kiran and the others and bared her fangs, shooting a frantic stare back at her friends, and especially at the Mienshao among them.

"H-Hertsog, please! You can't just let this happen!" she begged. "They're going to set that demon loose!"

"We know that," a voice quietly buzzed back. "But we're doing that because the alternative of letting you capture him is worse."

The Leafeon blinked and hesitated for a moment as the Marked Scyther from Kiran's party approached, stooping down as he neared. The mantis breathed in sharply, before kneeling and looking into Phyllis' eyes.

"Look. I… can't say that Pleo's not a demon. I recognize him as well as you do from our scriptures," Ander said. "But I know that this entire time I've been with him, he's been kindhearted and he's trying to be something different than what we feared."

The Bug-Type shook his head, before letting out a quiet buzz and continuing on.

"But that's not why your employers have been lying to you about him," he said, prompting Alice to join in.

"That's right! If the Company gets him, they're going to try and use him as a weapon," the Sneasel insisted. "I might not buy your whole thing about him being a 'demon', but if they succeed, he'll be a lot closer to becoming one like that than if you just let us try to clear things up here!"

Phyllis evidently never had the thought cross her mind, as she remained frozen in place after the Scyther and Sneasel's explanation, and visibly wavered. Ander tapped the flats of his scythes briefly, before continuing on with a quiet, faltering tone.

"I don't blame you for being afraid of Pleo. And honestly… part of me is still scared of him," the Scyther admitted. "But just standing back and letting the Company have their way with him isn't going to make it less likely that he'll make our fears come true! Surely you realize that by now."

Phyllis stared back in silence after hearing Ander's words and looked away for a moment, as Hertsog and Payak seemed to paralyzed with indecision. The three cast a glance over to Salvini, when they noticed that their Grovyle partner seemed to be unfazed. At once, everything about her behavior, about why she'd let Pleo and the others go, became clear. Some way, somehow, she'd known, that the pirates they were after were really just a bunch of kids and…

"S-So that bird really is some sort of Protector?!" Payak stammered, prompting Calidus to shoot a sharp frown in reply.

"Ugh, learn to read the room, Ariados," the Talonflame muttered.

For a brief moment, Hertsog seemed to be genuinely uncertain as to what to do. Payak and Phyllis both shrank back, both having lost their will to fight for their own reasons. Hertsog paused and visibly hesitated when he felt someone put a hand on his shoulder. The Mienshao looked down, where he saw Salvini looking up at him with a torn look.

"Hertsog…. do… do we really have to do this?" the Grovyle murmured.

The Mienshao said nothing back for a brief, silent moment that seemed to last an eternity, before his features eased and he shook his head back.

"No. We don't."

Hertsog stepped away from the door, and motioned at his companions to follow. One after the other, Salvini and her teammates complied, as Kiran and his fellows gave disbelieving stares back at the Fighting-Type. The Mienshao breathed in and said nothing at first, before shooting a sharp frown over at them.

"As far as we're concerned, we never saw you or your friends, Kiran," Hertsog said. "Just make the most of your lead and don't count on us coming to your rescue if you get caught."

Kiran gave a grateful nod back to the four, before pushing the door open with his wing.

"Thanks for letting us go… and we will!"

Kiran held the door open as he and his teammates slipped off, letting it close behind them. Salvini's thoughts turned back to the fateful night she and Pleo first crossed paths as she glanced off at the rest of the city through the window. She didn't know if Kiran and his teammates would prove successful in clearing Pleo's name, but… for their own sake, she hoped that some way, somehow, they would manage to pull through.



At that very moment, Canalhouse City's military harbor remained abuzz with activity much as it normally did. The din of Pokémon milling about hummed along the air, as lavender-scarved creatures of varying shapes and sizes loaded and unloaded cargo, and others tended to various ships in Company sails. The noise could be heard all about the surroundings, including through the windows of a small, stone, two-story building near the mouth of the harbor bearing a simple sign in runes marking it as the Harbormaster's office.

There, in an office on the second floor with a plaque bearing the label of the Harbormaster on the door, an Omastar rested behind a low table. The room was furnished with a set of simple drawers against the wall, with some framed paper certificates and a Mystic Water hung above it. At the other end of the table, a Grimmsnarl in a Second-Rank scarf stood at attention, casting an idle glance off at the window, where the harbor and its piers could be seen.

"Did any word come down about when we were supposed to raid that schooner?" the Omastar asked.

"No sir," the Grimmsnarl replied. "No word since the last visit from Sorge and his team."

The Omastar Harbormaster frowned back and sighed, turning his gaze back out towards the lavender-sailed ships in the harbor.

"I would've thought they would've kept us more in the loop," the Omastar murmured. "I don't understand why they would feel a need to be so secretive about-"

A sharp crash rang out from the room's entrance, the Omastar and Grimmsnarl whirling about with a start. Much to the pair's astonishment, there, barging in past a door that had just been thrown open, was a Dragonite in an Administrator's scarf, who barreled towards them as the Harbormaster looked on in stunned surprise.

"Administrator Darzin?!" the Omastar asked. "Can I help you?"

"Yes," the Dragonite growled. "Has a party led by a Kommo-o come by recently talking about a suspicious ship or the sort?"

The Harbormaster blinked in surprise for a moment, before shifting in his seat and speaking up.

"There was one who came a couple days ago," he replied. "Why?"

"I need you to field some guards right now and dispatch them towards the Academy."

The Omastar and Grimmsnarl turned and stared at each other blankly over the Dragonite's words, both seemingly at a loss for how to reply. The Grimmsnarl was the first to break the silence, as the guard looked back at Darzin and folded his arms with a dismissive harrumph.

"Yeah, good luck with that one," he scoffed. "We've got our own problems to deal with right now."

"Er… Administrator, you are aware that I have a harbor to watch here, right?" the Omastar questioned. "Why on earth would I need to field 'monpower out to the Academy of all places?"

Darzin narrowed his eyes, holding out an accusing claw as he raised his voice with an impatient growl.

"Because you've been probed by Imperial Spies over the past couple days!" the Dragonite insisted. "And the fastest way of apprehending them in this city is to send someone already familiar with them to track them down."

The Harbormaster and Grimmsnarl stiffened up, as Darzin began to pass along descriptions of Sorge, Aldrich, and Zelle. Per his account, he'd chanced to run into them scheming in a back alley while on a flight about Canalhouse City, and been threatened to keep quiet, though not before he could make off with proof of them having an Imperial handler.

"I was able to recover this from them," Darzin explained. "You'll likely be able to find their true colors among their belongings."

The Omastar and Grimmsnarl doubted him for a moment, only for the Dragonite to fish out the strip of Nagant's scarf he'd kept from their encounter on Mengir and pass it over to the Omastar. Even if it was no longer useful as leverage over her, judging from how much the Omastar was taken aback by it, he still had some use for it…

The Omastar flipped the cloth strip about his tentacles and pawed at it carefully. On one side was a strip of red and white cloth, but on the back, there was Imperial indigo. The fabric's weave was even the same that Pokémon from its ranks wore. The Harbormaster hesitated as he thought back to Sorge and the assistance he and his subordinates had provided over the past four days. Surely Darzin wouldn't be lying about such a matter and the evidence was what it was, but there had to be another explanation for what had happened…

"Administrator, this must be a misunderstanding of some sort," the Omastar said. "Sorge and the others could've just seized that from someone else."

"That's right!" the Grimmsnarl exclaimed. "Those three literally came by earlier this week to point out an Imperial ship that's impersonating one of our own here!"

Darzin let out a terse scoff in response, turning his snout up and narrowing his eyes back at the Omastar and Grimmsnarl.

"And did they help you apprehend it?" the Administrator demanded.

The Harbormaster fell silent at the Dragonite's question. While Sorge and the others did point out the schooner that had been flying false colors, they had been adamant that the ship wasn't to be interfered with until it attempted to leave and not a moment sooner.

"Well… no, they didn't," the Omastar said. "But they insisted that apprehending it would be a sensitive matter."

"Yes, so they could distract you from their actual escape vessel!" Darzin cried.

The Omastar looked out the window towards a two-masted schooner near the mouth of the harbor, as Darzin followed his gaze. After seeing the Omastar's attention settle on the ship and the Water-Type visibly hesitate, the Dragonite deduced that he'd succeeded at planting seeds of doubt in the Harbormaster's mind and also confirmed the Siglo Swellow's location after that Kommo-o's Sylveon friend clumsily gave away its presence in the military harbor earlier.

Satisfied, the Dragon-Type sensed his opportunity to press his advantage. The Administrator let out a sharp harrumph, before shooting an impatient frown down at the Harbormaster.

"Go ahead and close the harbor to traffic," Darzin ordered. "I'm going to go and pay that decoy of theirs a closer inspection."

The Harbormaster paused and pawed uneasily at his scarf, before looking back up at the intricate one about the Dragonite's neck. Even with Darzin's diminished stature, it was far from wise to get on the wrong side of an Administrator. And if this was just the Dragonite blowing hot air, it would surely be easy to disprove him later by giving Sorge and his team a cursory questioning.

"Go and track down Teun from the swimmers and take a party out to the Academy to find Sorge and the others," Omastar said, turning to the Grimmsnarl. "If this is all a misunderstanding, I'm sure it can be cleared up quickly."

"… Yes, sir," the Grimmsnarl sighed.

The Dark-Type saluted and quickly slunk out of the office. After the Grimmsnarl departed, Darzin began to make his way for the door himself, prompting the Omastar to raise a brow and call after the Dragonite.

"Administrator, if you're wrong about this, it'll be you against an entire ship," the Harbormaster insisted. "Let me square away some reinforcements to help before you-"

"Hrmph. That won't be necessary right now," Darzin scoffed. "Focus on your duty and let me see if this matter can be dealt with quietly first."

The Harbormaster quirked a brow back puzzledly, but was too late to stop the Dragonite. By the time the Omastar had raised his voice to ask for a further explanation, Darzin had already set off, retracing his way outside the office, down a flight of steps and out onto the docks as he made his way through the crowds of Pokémon for the schooner docked near the harbor's entrance.



As Kiran and the others went into the Archive, the rest of Team Traveller began to make their way towards the Academy's main building in order to slip out of the complex. Not far from it was the place they and their teammates had agreed to meet with Dimitri after the heist, where they would make their way back to the ship together. Their own part in the mission to break into the Vault had gone smoothly enough, and the green lights they saw overhead and the sharp jolt they'd felt while walking earlier was as good of a sign as any that Kline had succeeded in getting into it…

Maybe it was nothing, but the entire time, Pleo couldn't help but worry that something would go wrong. Would the guards figure out that Kiran and the others were fakes? Would they get caught while trying to switch around the Ledger with their dummy book? The young Protector shuffled his wings uncomfortably, before giving a worried glance over at his teammates.

"Do you think everyone is doing alright?" the Lugia asked.

"Well, we haven't seen or heard any sign of an open battle going on around Academy after Kline did his thing," Elty replied. "So… probably?"

"I think they're managing and don't need our help. Let's just focus on making it to our meeting place," Guardia insisted. "The longer we stick around here, the more likely it is that something will go wrong with our mission."

Team Traveller hurriedly made their way along the canal, making their way across the islets via the bridges linking them, until they crossed the last one to the site of the northern half of the Academy's main building. There, the five rounded the corner, towards the passage into the middle of the compound and its courtyard…

"Hold it right there!"

… when a sharp, barking shout rang out from behind them. Nida and her companions froze, turning to see Gerhard approaching them with a Lucario and a Runerigus at his sides, the lot of them sporting harsh glares. The five flinched for a moment, before Crom steeled himself and tried to force a smile over his face.

"Oh! Uh h-hi, Professor Gerhard!" the Druddigon gulped. "Is something the matter?"

"Yes," the Alakazam huffed back. "Did you really think that I wouldn't notice you've been impersonating students in my class?"

The youngsters felt their blood run cold and grimaced. It had always been a risk that their luck would run out passing themselves off as students in the Academy, but they never expected that it would happen now of all times. Elty pinned his ears back and pulled his tail in tight against his legs, the Growlithe nervously backpedaling from the scowling Professor and the accompanying guards.

"I… uh… Don't you have that lightshow from earlier to deal with?" he gulped. "W-We were just leaving anyway, so see you later!"

He turned to run, only to suddenly see his body glow with a blue aura and feel himself get lifted up off the ground. Elty looked down in alarm to see he was floating in midair and flailed briefly, before turning back to see Gerhard holding out a hand with his eyes glowing a blue sheen.

"Leuk geprobeerd, but there's no shortage of guards already looking into that," the Alakazam scoffed. "If you know what's good for you, you'll come along to answer a few questions. Quietly."

Team Traveller's members recoiled at Gerhard's words. It clearly wasn't a suggestion, but an order. The thought of attempting to fight their way through him crossed their minds, but between the Alakazam's Third-Rank Company scarf and him already having Elty at his mercy, they were surely in for a hard battle. Pleo blanched and shrank back briefly, wavering over what to do, when he noticed the forms of a Shinx and Magikarp darting up from behind Gerhard.

"Professor Gerhard? What are you doing?" the Magikarp asked.

"Yeah!" the Shinx chimed in. "Those are the transfer students!"

Why, it was Leonard and Murdo! Professor Gerhard seemed to be taken aback by the two cutting in, and lost his grip on Elty, who faceplanted onto the ground. Taking advantage of the Alakazam's distraction, Leonard quickly stepped in between Team Traveller and Gerhard, with Murdo propping himself up and poking his head over the edge of the canal to join in. The pair looked over at the Professor and the surrounding guards, giving pleading expressions up at them.

"I mean, sure they've been a bit slow to catch up," Leonard murmured. "But they haven't done anything wrong."

The Shinx's insistence prompted Gerhard to raise a spoon at him with a sharp frown.

"I suggest you mind your own business, Leonard," the Alakazam harrumphed. "This doesn't concern you."

"Yes it does! You're trying to get a bunch of our classmates in trouble just because you don't like them!" Murdo cried. "How is that fair?!"

Gerhard brushed past Leonard and narrowed his eyes back at the Magikarp in the canal, his patience having worn thin with the two's interruptions.

"They've gotten themselves in trouble because they're not students, Murdo," the Professor scoffed. "They never had any paperwork turn up like every other student that's transferred in-"

"Yes, because I had them transferred in."

Nida, Pleo, Crom, Elty, and Guardia felt their ears prick at the sound of a deep, rumbling voice and turned around, only for the color to drain from their faces. There in front of them were Filbert, Braam, and Quin hurrying in, followed along by the glaring form of a Nidoking in a Company scarf with a more intricate pattern than any of them had seen before.

Th-That was Director Inler! Gerhard and his guards had their eyes widen briefly, only for the wizened Alakazam to blink back at the Nidoking facing him down.

"You had them transfer in? I… never heard of you personally ordering any student transfers before," he murmured. " And you sound a bit hoarse, Director."

"Hrmph, it happens when he spends all day yelling at incompetents like you," Filbert huffed.

"Yeah, opa was just telling us about how he'd met with Nida and her friends' parents on a recent tour of the islands," Braam chimed in. "That's how he wound up promoting them so they could come here!"

Gerhard wavered a moment and the Psychic-Type bit his tongue as a flash of genuine worry came over his prideful face. After a moment to collect his thoughts, the Alakazam composed himself and brushed uneasily at his scarf.

"Then it should be a simple matter of finding the paperwork-"

The Nidoking cleared his throat, letting out a growl that came out slightly different from his earlier speech. The Poison-Type muttered a "Why am I still keeping this guy around?" just loud enough for everyone to hear, before glaring daggers back at the Alakazam professor.

"Gerhard, I'm the Director," the Nidoking spat. "I'm not letting my orders get held up over a few pieces of paper!"

"Yeah, it probably got lost in the mail or something," Quin insisted. "Are you really going to make the Company's Director look bad by kicking out the kids of the 'mons he just promoted?"

The Lucario and Runegrigus guards both traded uneasy glances with one another, as Gerhard began to grow flustered. After giving a tug at his scarf, the Psychic-Type shuffled back and visibly hesitated.

"I… suppose I can double-check my office," the Alakazam said. "I'm sure there's a perfectly reasonable explanation for this, Director."

Gerhard hurriedly took his leave along with the Lucario and the Runegrigus, leaving Team Traveller to stare off confusedly, before warily turning back towards the Nidoking. Wasn't this the Company's Director? Their enemy? Then why on earth had he helped them?

The Nidoking narrowed his eyes in reply, and shook his head with a sharp frown. After opening his mouth, the Poison-Type began to speak, except this time, a young, high-pitched voice came out with a scoff.

"Hrmph, you five sure know how to get into trouble."

Team Traveller's members jumped back at the realization that that was Sophie's voice. Sure enough, the form of the Nidoking abruptly flashed magenta and dissipated, barring a few flecks of light that clung more stubbornly in the air as the form of a Zorua took its place. There, Sophie stepped forward, walking up to Nida and the others with an icy scowl.

"I knew something didn't add up about you," she scoffed. "You five wanna explain why you've been lying to everybody this whole time?"

The group hesitated for a moment. Should they just be honest with Sophie? Could they be honest with her? Everyone traded uneasy glances with one another, before Nida sucked in a sharp breath and began to speak.

"We… needed to find something here in the Academy," the Nidorina explained. "Something that Pleo really needed."

Sophie raised a brow and shot back a dubious frown. She didn't look particularly impressed with Nida's explanation, but even so, she felt more curious than upset for some reason.

"I assume that it wasn't just some book from the library?" she questioned. "And that that tremor and those green lights in the sky earlier wasn't just a coincidence?"

"I mean… sorta. We came here because Pleo's… in trouble for some things that aren't his fault," the Druddigon replied, giving an uneasy paw at the back of his neck. "And there was supposed to be something here that we could use to help get him out of it."

Sophie fell silent and let her eyes drift to the ground. She paused briefly, before closing her eyes with a quiet murmur.

"So then it has something to do with him being a 'purple-feathered' Wingull, huh?"

Nida blinked at the Zorua's response and noticed her teammates get visibly taken aback. Did Sophie know Pleo's true identity? Would she see through them if they denied her question? After a moment's hesitation, Nida shuffled her paws, before answering back warily.

"Something like that, yes," she said. "B-But look, we need to get going and we don't have time to explain this right now!"

Sophie said nothing back, prompting Leonard and Murdo to blink and shoot puzzled looks at the young fox.

"… Sophie? What exactly is going on here?" Leonard wondered.

"Yeah, if Pleo's really not a Wingull, then what sort of Pokémon is he?" Murdo pressed.

The Zorua hesitated for a moment, before her expression eased and she shook her head with a low sigh.

"… I have a couple ideas, but it's not really important right now. Though, Nida's right," she insisted. "You five need to get out of here before you get into real trouble."

Guardia blinked at Sophie's reply. 'Real' trouble? How could they get into worse trouble than what they were in just a minute ago?

"Wait, we do? Didn't you all just get us out of trouble?" the Cubone asked. "What else is wrong?"

"Well for one, I saw the real Inler going around campus earlier," Sophie replied. "If Gerhard runs into him, your little secret will be out and he'll come looking for you again. If that happens, Inler will probably want to know why you were pretending to be students here and going around saying your parents were friends of his."

Team Traveller's members felt their faces fall into a collective grimace. Yes, running into Director Inler on their own would be getting into real trouble. Trouble that they weren't sure they could overcome. Filbert seemed to pick up on their unease, flicking his ears and twitching his whiskers in thought, before turning over to Leonard and Murdo and motioning with his head off at them.

"Leonard. Murdo. Take Nida and the others off-campus," he said. "They should be able to slip off into the rest of the city while we keep Gerhard busy."

Leonard nodded back at the Nidoran's instructions, with Murdo joining in from the canal's water. Whatever was going on with Pleo and the others, they weren't letting an old pill like Gerhard ruin things for them.

"Right!" Murdo burbled, as Leonard chimed in with a small puff of his chest.

"Piece of cake!"

Filbert, Braam, Quintin, and Sophie darted off after Gerhard's group, as Leonard and Murdo hurried Team Traveller through a passage into the main building's courtyard. The five hastily ducked across, where Pokémon had just started to file out for midday breaks. The group made their way past the shadow of the Haxorus statue of the Company's Founder, where there, just as the group neared the eastern entrance…

"Oh, there you are!"

Team Traveller blinked and froze after they heard a Luxray's voice along with the sound of quiet footsteps approaching. Curiously, Leonard's eyes seemed to light up at the voice, as he bounded ahead towards it.

"Ah! Mom!"

Pleo and the others blanched as dead ahead of them, a Luxray in a Company Administrator's scarf rounded the corner. The five shrank back with frightened grimaces, Leonard going up and nuzzling Farn as Murdo swam up alongside her, blissfully unaware of their companions' reaction.

"What are you doing here?" Murdo asked, prompting the Luxray to bob her tail and smile back.

"Today's my turn to take you two home, remember?" Farn replied. "Work ended a bit early for me today, so no reason to just keep you waiting if-"

She trailed off as she noticed five Pokémon inching away from her in the background. The Luxray eyed them warily, noting that the lot of them looked as if they had seen a ghost, and stiffened up after realizing that she'd seen them. A Nidorina, a younger Druddigon, a Growlithe, a Cubone… and some manner of seabird she couldn't place. Why did the bird of the lot feel strangely familiar to her?

"And who are those friends of yours in the background?" Farn asked.

Leonard blinked for a moment, realizing that perhaps it wasn't the best idea to tell his mother that he was technically spending time with wanted troublemakers. The Shinx rubbed his forepaws together as he fumbled with his words briefly, before offering up what he hoped would be a satisfactory explanation.

"Oh. They're… uh… our classmates!" he insisted. "That's Nida, and Pleo, and-"

Farn tensed up at her son's mention of 'Pleo', as a sudden realization dawned over her. Ellsberg had mentioned the name in his first report from Tromba as the one that the islanders called the ‘Guardian of the Seas’. She didn't have an explanation for why the bird wasn't a silvery white like he was supposed to be, but between the Growlithe, and there being an evolution of a Nidoran much like the wanted posters she'd helped Lyn distribute… it just couldn't be a coincidence.

The Luxray bat her tail back and forth impatiently and narrowed her eyes with a low growl, making Murdo and Leonard pause uneasily. Leonard flattened his ears, pawing uneasily at his mother's foreleg with a worried tilt of his head.

"Mom? Is something wrong?" he asked.

Farn's glare at Team Traveller lingered for a moment, before reeling in her mood and giving a small smile down at Leonard.

"It's nothing, dear. It's just that those friends of yours look… familiar," she said. " I want a chance to talk with them on my own. You should go ahead without me and go home with Murdo."

Murdo poked his head out of the water with a puzzled blink, looking between Farn and Team Traveller's members with a confused burble.

"Huh?" the Magikarp asked. "But we can just wait here for-"

"Now, you two."

Murdo and Leonard flinched from the Luxray's harsh tone and shrunk back as she shot a piercing scowl with her red eyes that evidenced that she wasn't in the mood to debate the matter. The pair gave grudging farewells to Team Traveller, Pleo and his companions watching helplessly as the pair drifted off, before a low snarl turned their attention back to Farn.

The five saw the Luxray glaring daggers at them, prompting them to turn back and run into the passage surrounding the courtyard. Pleo and his companions tore along for dear life as they heard electricity crackle behind them, circling around the courtyard back for the complex's exit. They blew past a stall selling books and brushed past students with yelps, when they saw the archway ahead of them.

"Ah! Up ahead!" Nida cried.

The Nidorina charged through with her teammates and exited the Academy's complex, before immediately ducking into a side street as they kept running along. A sudden blur of blue and black leapt overhead, where they saw Farn coming to a crouching stop ahead of them. Nida looked around in a panic when she saw an entrance to an alleyway to her left and hurriedly shepherded her teammates along as Farn lunged at them. The group tore along, when they came to a brick wall ahead of them blocking their path.

"A-Ah! It's a dead end!" Pleo cried.

The Lugia stooped down and thought to let his teammates aboard, only to realize that Nida had gotten a lot bigger since she'd evolved, and Crom was larger than he was. Whatever thoughts he had of ferrying his friends to safety ended with the sound of a faint electrical crackle, as he and his companions turned back to see Farn drawing near them, ready to pounce.

"Hrmph. I don't know how you've managed to sneak in here, or why Lyn's left it to me to handle his duties," the Luxray began. "But I know who you are, and you all seem to know who I am."

Farn bared her fangs and let sparks dance in her fur, drawing frightened squeaks from the lot as Elty pinned his ears back with a low whine. Satisfied she'd communicated her strength, the Administrator let out a low harrumph and looked square into Pleo's eyes.

"So I'm sure that you already know what I can do," she growled. "Come quietly, Lugia, and I'll see your friends have a future to look forward to."

Pleo cringed and quietly shivered. Farn was an Administrator, and one whose attacks would hurt him a lot more than Darzin's. Could they even beat her like this? Would it even matter when their fight would almost certainly draw the attention of the guards?

The Lugia grimaced as his mind went blank, when he was suddenly snapped to attention by Crom stepping forward, visibly trembling, but forcing a brave face all the while.

"A f-future?! That's what you call standing back and letting you bully Pleo?!" the Druddigon asked. "Turning him into some sort of weapon?!"

"Th-That's not a future, that's a nightmare!" Elty exclaimed. "Take your offer and shove it!"

"As if we'd just roll over for you, Rentorar!" Guardia snapped, giving a nervous swing of her club. "If you want Pleo so bad, you're going to have to fight us for him!"

Pleo sucked in a sharp breath and shook his head. What on earth was he thinking considering giving in like that? These were his friends, and just like on the night when they'd fled Lyn, they were ready to dig in and fight. Sure Farn was scary, but they'd gotten tougher since then, and there was no sense in letting the Administrator psych them out like this.

"I-I'm their Protector, not yours!" the young Lugia insisted. "If they're going to fight, then I'm going to help them!"

"Yeah, and we already beat Darzin before and he's an Administrator just like you!" Nida piped. "We'll take our chances here!"

Farn blinked puzzledly for a moment. These whelps had fought with Darzin before? How on earth did-? The Luxray narrowed her eyes back into a harsh glare. Whatever had happened there, she could get to the bottom of it some other time. All that mattered now was capturing the Guardian of the Seas right here, right now, and ending the stalemate with the Empire once and for all.

"Hrmph, so be it," she snarled. "If you can't listen to reason, I'll shock it into you!"

Sparks danced on the Luxray's pelt, as she arched and shot out a wide spread of blue electrical bolts. Team Traveller's members reflexively flinched as Guardia ran forward, the electric tendrils abruptly changing course and arcing towards her as they struck her with a sharp crackle, but otherwise did nothing but leave static to dance on her scales. Farn blinked, and curled her mouth down into a small, annoyed frown.

"Hrmph, I should've known there was a reason behind your boldness," the Electric-Type remarked.

"Yeah, you should've," Elty spat back. "Here's something else for ya!"

The Growlithe lunged forward, breathing out a spray of searing, bluish-white flames that found their mark on Farn's shoulder. The Luxray reflexively winced from Elty's Will-O-Wisp as a burn began to spread over the site of impact, prompting Nida's eyes to light up as she sprang ahead and motioned to her teammates to follow.

"This is our chance! Come on!"

The Nidorina darted forward, poison slicking over her left forepaw as she ran a Poison Jab square into Farn's left side. Guardia followed up by flinging her club into a whirling Bonemerang that clipped the Luxray twice, along with a bluish, fiery Dragon Rage from Crom, and the telltale cone of golden rings of an Extrasensory from Pleo.

The Luxray lost her footing briefly and sprang back, freeing up about half the distance of the alleyway. If they could just fight their way out into the open, then however poorly or not they were matched up against Farn, they could make a break for it and escape!

Except… they first had to fight through her, and given the crouching pose she was reassuming and how she didn't seem particularly hurt from their salvo, she was going to make them fight tooth and nail for every step forward.

"Hrmph, so you can at least keep yourselves from being swept," Farn scoffed. "But let's see how well you can handle a targeted strike!"

Farn dug her heels in and sprang forward at Pleo, baring her teeth as shadowy flecks danced among them. The Lugia froze out of terror, watching as the Luxray sailed at him with her paws outstreched and maw open for a crushing bite, when Crom suddenly cut in in front of him, followed by a sharp cry.

"Agh!"

Pleo reflexively beat his wings and hopped back as Farn tumbled with Crom's body, the Druddigon having been pushed behind and to the side from their mutual collision. The Luxray jumped back and recoiled, pulling back as her forelimbs sported disheveled fur and her cheek now had a reddening, dribbling scrape from brushing up against one of the spikes on Crom's arms. Pleo hurriedly looked over at Crom, where, much to his alarm, he spotted the Druddigon laying on the ground on his side, whining in pain as a set of puncture wounds oozing blood now studded his right arm.

"Crom!"

Crom got up, cradling his arm as he grit his teeth. The Druddigon pinned his wings back, shaking his arm to try and nurse feeling back into it when he noticed Farn hesitate and wince from her burn.

"Ngah… i-it's alright, Pleo! Just stay on her!"

Pleo obliged, cracking his beak open as he once again hit Farn with an Extrasensory. Nida focused just as she had in her attempts to practice Ice Beam since leaving Tromba, when she felt her mouth suddenly turn frigid and a chilly sensation linger in her throat.

"Take this!"

The Nidorina spat up a whitish beam from her mouth and struck the Luxray's face. Th-That was the Ice Beam that mami had helped her learn!

The beam threw Farn off balance as lingering frost flecked her face's fur, leaving her open for Crom to dash in with a rake of his claws that trailed white flecks of light. The Luxray staggered back, as Elty and Guardia threw in a fiery somersault and an overhead swing of her club, forcing Farn out onto the lane along the canal. Team Traveller's members hurriedly ran ahead and out of the alley, where the Luxray Administrator let out a low growl and arched her back as Team Traveller stared her down.

"Fine, I've tested the waters enough," she snapped. "Let's remind you of what you're up against!"

Farn lunged ahead with her maw opened wide. For a fleeting second, the group saw ice build up along her fangs, before she pounced on Guardia and sank them deep into her shoulder.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAH!"

Farn lifted Guardia and shook her in her mouth as she screamed in agony. The Cubone's cries lingered briefly and then faded away, before the Luxray threw the Ground-Type aside limply onto the cobbles. Pleo and his companions looked on in blank shock, as Guardia laid there in a heap, with her chest weakly rising and falling.

The four backpedaled towards their fallen comrade, the color draining from their faces while their breaths came out shallow and tense, as Farn drew near with a sharp snarl. With Guardia defeated, there was nothing protecting them from the full force of Farn's electric attacks, and even in spite of their hail of attacks earlier, she didn't seem to be showing many signs of visible fatigue.

Team Traveller's members watched in horror as Farn began to spark, the Luxray readying a Discharge, only to pause and let the sparks die off as she noticed something behind them. Nida and the others stood in blank shock for a moment and traded confused glances, when a low, growling voice cut in.

"Hrmph. That's quite enough."

The group slowly turned around when their jaws flopped open. There, walking up to them along with Gerhard and his guards was a Nidoking in the same scarf pattern that Sophie had as part of her disguise.

That was Inler, the real one!

The four let out startled yelps and flinched at the glowering Nidoking, as Gerhard held out a hand and motioned at them.

"That's them, right there, Director," the Alakazam huffed. "Those are the imposters I was telling you about!"

Inler narrowed his eyes and scowled down at the trembling youngsters, letting a low growl out from the back of his throat.

"Oh trust me, Gerhard, they're a lot more than that."

Team Traveller's members shrank back in a trembling panic, as Nida held out a paw and let out a stammering cry.

"A-Ah! Y-You're the Company's Director!" she squeaked.

"That's correct," Inler scoffed. "And you should give up if you know what's good for you."

Pleo froze and felt a chill run down his spine. This was the Director of the entire Company. The same Pokémon who Nerea had said to be strong enough to overpower her strongest teammates all at once with just a few blows. Even if he didn't have guards helping him, how were they supposed to fight a 'mon like that?

… Why did they have to fight like this anyways? Pleo stood there trembling for a moment, when in the midst of his fright, he steeled himself and raised his voice back at the Nidoking…

"Wh-Why are you doing this to us?" the Lugia demanded. "Why can't you let us go?!"

Inler flicked his ears and dug his feet into the ground with a low huff. Even in spite of his old age, the Nidoking knew how to project a presence, and the piercing, overpowering glare he leveled was no exception.

"Because the needs of this company, of this world, are bigger than you," the Poison-Type icily replied. "And we can't afford to wait on you to realize that."

"What on earth is that supposed to mean?!" Nida demanded.

"Anyilla's been waiting for forty years in order to be unified under one banner again," Inler said. "One that's grown and learned from past mistakes."

The Nidoking lowered his head, narrowing his eyes as he pawed at the ground, seemingly readying for a charge.

"And if you think I'm prepared to just throw that away for the sake of the feelings of a child who doesn't understand how fragile Anyilla's hope for a better future is, then you're sorely mistaken."

Nida and the others felt their blood run cold as they saw Inler advance on them, as Farn and the rest of his party fell back in opposing directions. The Nidorina watched as the Nidoking crouched and braced his feet, her mind running blank as she realized he was about to spring up with an Earthquake…

"N-Not so fast, square-neck!"

Nida snapped to attention after seeing Elty spew up a spray of whitish cinders at the Nidoking which caught him on his hip. Inler grimaced briefly, before jumping up and stomping the ground as it churned under his feet. Waves shot through the surface of the ground and flung cobbles into the air, and then Nida felt herself get launched upwards. The Nidorina bounced off one of the walls, before pitching back to earth and hitting the pavement, laying there panting much to Pleo's alarm from above.

"A-Ah! Nida! Get up! Get up!"

Pleo batted his wings together and threw a churning Whirlwind at Inler that pushed him back towards Gerhard. The Lugia dove down and tugged at her, dragging her up with a dazed groan. From the corner of her eye, they could see a wobbly Crom helping Elty onto his feet with a pained whine. Down the street, they could see Inler steadying himself, as he, Farn, and Gerhard with his lackeys were coming for them from both sides readying attacks.

The pair's mind went blank. They couldn't win. Not like this. Nida fanned out her barbs, as Pleo pulled his head in towards his chest and flinched, looking away as their enemies converged on them.

"Hold it right there!"

The sound of a sharp, squawking cry rang out, as a crackling Petrify Orb zipped in between them from across the canal and doused them all in a hail of sparks. Nida yelped and felt her limbs lock up, her breathing turning shallow and panicked as she heard her friends cry out. Inler and the others evidently hadn't expected the orb either, as in the midst of their petrification, their eyes widened in surprise. Nida frantically tried to turn her head to no avail as she heard approaching wingbeats, when she suddenly felt a feathery shove and looked up to see Kiran staring down at her.

"That was a good 50% closer than it needed to be," the Swellow sighed. "Sorry about the rude entrance. Are you all alright?"

Nida panted briefly, before she turned to her friends and let out a wavering sigh of relief as they were similarly shoved out of their petrification by Dimitri, Kline—now back in his dog-like form, and their other teammates. After taking a moment to let the team's turn of fortunes set in, she shook her head and turned back to Kiran.

"W-We're fine," she insisted.

A little further off, Calidus nudged Elty free from the effects of the Petrify Orb. The Talonflame glanced off warily at the Director and his subordinates to ensure they were still safely immobilized, before looking down at the Growlithe with a ruffle of his feathers.

"Come on, we'll patch you all up while we're moving," the Talonflame remarked. "This encounter's certainly not going to make getting out of the city any easier for us…"

"Gah… you don't have to tell me again, " Elty insisted, flattening his ears out. "Though would it have killed you all to get here sooner?"

All the while, Inler and his subordinates stared in dumbfounded shock, as Farn spluttered incredulously at the scene.

"You-!" the Luxray cried. "What do you think you're-?!"

"Stepping in to help some friends. Though stick around for a while!" Alice jeered. The Sneasel pulled her eyelid down and blew a raspberry at the immobilized Board members, before suddenly getting cut off by an impatient huff.

"Alice, let's go already!" Kline snapped.

The Zygarde tugged her along by her claw, as Dimitri got into the water and Nida and Crom climbed onto him. At the same time, Elty helped to hoist Guardia onto Calidus' back before joining himself. One by one, Dimitri and the team's fliers pushed off and knifed ahead along the canal as Kline ran alongside them on their path for the Siglo Swellow. All the while, Crom glanced behind them back towards the Nidoking Director and his allies, before turning ahead as he felt his stomach begin to knot up.

"Why does this all feel strangely familiar?" the Druddigon asked.

"Because we went through something like this back in Tidemill City?" Elty replied.

Nida glanced back as the Academy slipped away from them, and then at the maze of canals up ahead. It really did feel almost like they were back in Tidemill City again, but even so, the Nidorina couldn't help but feel a gnawing feeling in the pit of her stomach that something was wrong…

"I just hope it ends as well as it does too."



Author's Notes:

- Ja hoor - Dutch: "Yeah, sure"
- Ne! (Не!) - Bulgarian: "No!" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
- Leuk geprobeerd - Dutch: "Nice try"
- Rentorar (レントラー) - Japanese: "Luxray" (Official Romanization)
 

Kiba Makuro

Junior Trainer
Pronouns
He/Him, They/Them
Hello Fobbie I’m here for 2 Terabytes of fun, that’s right P-Wheel!

I’m covering Chapter 2 of Fledgelings - Watch Your Step

This chapter is a fairly standard one; it is Nida and her team going through a Mystery Dungeon.
But of course it's not that simple before that we get a little experience of what the Guild is looking like just from the outside after the storm. It helps the audience remember that they're still recovering and maybe they couldn't handle it if it got any worse. We see some other characters so it doesn't just feel like there's only a few people there which is nice. This scene doesn't linger for too long.

Nida finally catches up with Kiran and with Crom. We can really kind of feel their ages in this part and that's really nice you mentioned that it's inspired by The Last Airbender. I had to take that into consideration when thinking about the dialogue choices and phrasing and such. Of course you know all of the “four nations” and whatnot isn't exactly present yet. But eventually we'll get there being that the island is not where we'll stay for too long.

It's nice that your treatment of ferals is handled respectively in Fledglings per end point to it being a more friendlier PMD fake and thus you wouldn't want to get into the extremes. I also do remember unfortunately a spoiler of something related to what Nida says that the ferals'll enjoy life on a rescue team if you just change their mind. Recruitment of Mystery Dungeon Pokémon is a very integral gameplay component, at least the first three games mind you of PMD. Not a lot of fics use this, from what I can tell the majority of the characters are just the former human or just Pokemon from towns which is not how the games work but to be fair only the Pokemon from towns are the ones you can really have conversations with so it's fair enough.

Anyway at the end of the dungeon we get their inexperience highlighted particularly Nida's and Crom however the full extent is not in my opinion showing off but it doesn't help that they weren't at their full potential against the Krabbies. And on a request looking for something so simple like apples things can get chaotic just like in the actual games but goodness they are lucky they have Kiran with them. And signs of the “monster” further in the cave are interesting.

We're finally getting to our ‘fledgling’ so to speak and I wonder how the team will handle the situation considering they're only just figuring things out now. it seems like their foes are going to get much more dangerous if we have the summary to go off of. Of course they're going to grow along as well; they can't say pushovers forever; this would be a rather sad story.

I don't want to whine about the prose too much because it's a different style than what I'm used to one and two it's older content. Considering fledgling is over a decade and I haven't heard of talks of any rewrites and which I don't blame you I don't even want to rewrite anything that's a year old anymore at this point. If anything it's not like the prose got purple with extremely long descriptions but I felt like there was some unnecessary and a few clunky clarifications. Perhaps it is also for younger readers' sake to clarify as it is more in that range.

The religion of the world is also interesting. The Creator, obviously Arceus, has temples that are even in the depths of a Mystery Dungeon, or perhaps right outside of it. The Distortions are causing all of the areas to get warped per se which is a concept that's very fun to do. Seeing this temple with Nida and the team regarding offerings and what's so important about this ‘monster’ lets us get a bit more world building. We don't know everything but we're just getting a little taste and that's nice especially with the mural because a lot of people tend to forget that not all of ancient history was written down a lot of it was painted and it makes the world feel lived in when there's different types of History presented like this.

Nida, Crom, Kiran, and that ‘monster’ along with many others have much more in store in Fledgelings and I find myself excited now that this looks to be the turning point. Even a decade later, keep up the good work!
 

FennecWitch

Fiery Beacon
Pronouns
she/her
Been a while since my last review of Fledglings, so glad to be back to it with this V-Wheel! Just doing chapter 2, today.

I went back to check and it is indeed the same chapter symbol for this one as last one. I don't think I questioned it last time, but now I'm curious as to what it actually represents. My best guess for what it looks like is a broken egg.

…Wait a second.

Hmm, so it doesn't match the description of the egg from last chapter. I may be wrong, then.

Into the chapter, then.

The following morning, Nida found herself bounding down the now-muddy paths of Bluewhorl towards the Guild Hall.

"I'm late, I'm late," she panted, dashing past the shops on the shoreline plaza, dodging between Pokémon and weaving around the occasional footstep of someone much larger than her.
So I can't actually remember if what Nida and Kiran's mission was was mentioned last chapter. I did a quick skim and couldn't find it, but I'm sure it'll come up.

The storm had been about as kind to the town as it had been to Nida's home; that is to say, not at all.
I feel like you could cut "that is to say, not at all" here, since the previous chapter and following sentences make that clear anyway. It just kinda feels like spelling out the joke. (Not that I feel like it's meant to be read as a joke; I think it just loses some of the effect by explaining the sarcasm)

"Guildmaster Hatteras has been busy all morning trying to get everything back in order around here," the Swellow said, pointing at an Ampharos surveying tears along the different pieces of canvas on the tent.
…You know, I probably should've expected the Guildmaster to be an Ampharos considering I think there was an Ampharos-shaped structure described last chapter.

"Yeah! We could probably finish up halfway just in the first room!" Crom said, his beating wings displaying a hidden side of youthful eagerness much like his shorter partner's.
This line from Crom feels a bit out of nowhere since this is the first time he's mentioned to be in the scene. Him being there makes sense, given Nida being late and him being a member of the team, but I feel like you could mention him being there before this line.

"That sorta work sounds right up your alley, tykes," a familiar Sentret volunteered as he passed by.
I checked and this is indeed the same Sentret who did this last chapter. That's hilarious. I smell a running gag.

"If any outside Pokémon will have been blown in again," Nida finished.
This is an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where it'll go.

. . . his words soon trailed off after seeing his red-and-blue charge also looking at him.
Swellow is also pretty red and blue. Nida needs to get some fur dye to fit the theme.

"Monster! Monster!"
Took me a second to catch whether this was meant to be Crom or the Spinarak but I'm pretty sure it's the Spinarak. Interesting that ferals can speak in this world. They have some level of sapience, then. I wonder what makes them ferals, in that case.

"Sounds like a really tough way to live,"
I agree. I wonder why they do. Checking back with the prologue to refresh my understanding, I understand the ferals' origins. That doesn't seem to suggest that they can't choose to not be ferals if they want, though. I feel like this concept is probably not within the scope of this story, though.

Another depicted those same birds being struck by arrows of light and falling to earth.
Good thing I just checked the prologue again; I understand what this means!

"Leth geth going, kidth," Kiran prodded the two in-between mouthfuls of bread.
Part of me really wants to nitpick that the "s" to "th" lisp feels like it wouldn't do that with a beak but this way definitely conveys that Kiran has food in his mouth better than trying to go for full biological accuracy.

I also don't even know; maybe it might work? That lisp happens when your tongue extends too far past your teeth and while Swellow would have tongues, they don't have teeth. But maybe extending the tongue beyond the beak would be comparable? That wouldn't really happen with food in his mouth, though. I'm definitely overthinking this.

The other nitpick is that it'd be "beakfuls of bread" but I don't think that's actually an issue.

"Do you remember the rules of going in?" Kiran asked his two charges at the mouth of the cave.

"Stay together in the fog, don't wander off the path, and don't run into the dungeon," Nida and Crom recited, groaning at having to partake of this ritual reminder.
Excellent way of giving the audience exposition when it's something the characters would all already know, with them all being in-character.

"So, what do you think we should do with the apples that are left over after this mission, Nida?"
It did take me a few lines to be able to determine this was Crom. Stuff like this I don't think is necessarily an issue, since it becomes evident, but thought I'd mention it anyway. Realistically you can't cater for every potential reader misunderstanding.

Nida couldn't help but giggle at the idea of trying to clock someone with an apple; it was one of those silly, nonsensical ideas that had a way of taking the edge off someone.
I'm not sure whether the "someone" here is meant to suggest that it makes Nida see Kiran in a less serious light, or if the "someone" is her feeling less scared.

The apples are probably good to throw at people, as long as they're ripe. At a certain point, I feel like apples get pretty squishy. Which would take me out of the fight a bit, if I got one splattered on me. So still kinda useful.

After a few steps further, they found themselves able to see their paws, claws, and wings once again in the haze.
I feel like I can picture how this line was written. Originally with "hands" or "feet", before realising that Nida has paws. And then realising Clom has claws. And then that Kiran has wings. I don't know; just found the listing of body parts here kinda funny.

"I mean, I know that the Distortion in here probably has something to do with it, but still..."
Wonder if "Distortion" here is at all related to the Distortion World.

"The lower levels apparently open out to deep in the seas off the shore," Kiran said while taking his wing back to his side.
I feel like this phrasing is a little weird, but I'm not sure how you could fix it without chaning the meaning. ". . . open out to the bottoms of the seas. . ." isn't quite right.

Just cutting "to" feels like it flows better maybe?

They also, at Crom's request, tested Kiran's theory of apples as a substitute for Gravelerocks… on Kiran himself.
Wonderful. I'm sure there's a joke here about one bird with one apple or something.

"Are we sure there's nothing else we want from the first level? Once we set down these stairs, the Distortion will seal the entrance by the time we reach the next floor," the Swellow asked cautiously.
Very relatable feeling when playing Mystery Dungeon games.

"Erm… Not quite," Kiran said, pointing out where the ceiling for the chamber would normally be. In its stead was the incredibly distant-looking layout of the floor they had just came from. Upside down.
This is super cool both conceptually and visually.

". . . I wonder what it feels like to be able to walk upside down without falling," Crom said as he stared up at the inverted floor.
I'm sure you could ask a Treecko or something. Or maybe that Spinarak you scared off.

"There are definitely apples in here… I can smell them," Nida replied.

"Oh! Oh! I smell them too! But… I don't see any apples," Crom added, drooping his wings a little.

"Maybe it would be best for you two to lead the way on this floor, I'm afraid I can't smell much of anything."
I love it when fics draw attention to varying levels of species' sense of smell.

"Rats… How on earth do they make stinging seem so easy?"
This is a fun line for a Nidoran.

It was then, in the corner of her eye, that the relative movement of being dragged along a stone cave floor caused a slim object to come into view.
I feel like this is kinda overexplaining what's happening. "the relative movement of being dragged along a stone cave floor" just feels like a lot of detail for the subject of that clause. I think you can cut at least one prepositional phrase (probably the last one, since we already know it's a stone cave floor) to improve the flow.

"Rrgh… You! Bird! So you think that you can blow us around like the monster did last night? Well, you're sorely mis-!"

Kiran quickly cut off the Krabby's rant with a stiff swat from his wing, which flung the crustacean unconscious into the pool with his dazed companions.
This made me laugh.

The two were rather scuffed up, which made Kiran silently grateful that he merely had some scrapes on his foot and damaged plumage to tend to. . .
I feel like you probably shouldn't be saying stuff from Kiran's perspective like this when so far it's seemed to be strictly third person limited and it's kinda jarring to switch perspectives mid-scene.

Crom's left wing was turning red and had scales scraped off in the place where the Krabby that attacked him had latched on, with other scuffs from the creature's free appendages. Nida's right flank was covered in sudsy glop, showing red in between the strands of her pelt and the barbs underneath, with her hind right leg visibly limping from having been caught in her attacking Krabby's claws.
The rest of the paragraph is really nice attention to biology, though.

"Make sure to eat the pulp at the least, it's where most of the nutrients and healing properties are,"
This is really cool information too, as well as good exposition (though I think that should be a semi-colon?)

"Past that wall over there," Crom replied, pointing out a slab of cave rock with a bend to the right that went around it.
This is another very long phrase describing one thing with no commas or sentence breaks. But at the same time, I think it'd negatively affect the pacing of the scene if you split it into two sentences, so I'm not sure how you'd fix that.

But then again, hadn't that Spinarak on the path called Kiran a monster?

"I'm pretty sure that the 'monster' is just some Pokémon that's slightly bigger than them," she huffed.
This is good payoff for that scene. I love it.

The fourth floor that day had its furthest wall composed of water which crashed against some unseen lip and cascaded down into some abyss far, far below. At least, it seemed that way. It was hard to truly know where one thing began and another ended in this tangled pit. The floor was a bit easier to make sense of, consisting of small outcroppings of rock that jutted out of a layer of water meandering forward from the cascade at the rear.
No specific comments; this is just a really strong and evocative description.

"Heh, heh, looks like it's mission accomplished!" she proclaimed as she drew near to the alcove, preparing to hop across another small waterlogged gap.
Didn't anyone ever tell you not to say things like that, Nida? :P

She had no sooner just left the ground when she suddenly heard a surprised squawk from Kiran, "Nida, wait!"

"Huh-?"

She crested the lip of the ledge, and noticed a faint crosshatched pattern on the stone below.

Her feet rested upon it.

To her horror, there was a soft, but audible click.

"Tra-!"

Then the floor gave way beneath her, and the Nidoran found herself tumbling head over heels through thin air.
The detail of the trap being a specific pattern is super cool.

Not at all where I expected this chapter to end, though. I did end up writing this review over multiple sessions but that was a very quick 5k words. Definitely makes me want to keep reading, so it's a very well-done cliffhanger.

(There's some joke to be made about falling off a cliff rather than hanging on, in this case.)

But yeah, that's the review. Honestly another really solid chapter. I feel like the characters and world were expanded nicely and the action scenes were well done. Excited to read more!
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. quilava-fobbie
  6. sneasel-kate
  7. heliolisk-fobbie
@Kiba Makuro
Hello Fobbie I’m here for 2 Terabytes of fun, that’s right P-Wheel!

Well, I’m afraid that I can only take half the credit here since @Virgil134 is also here from the writer’s desk.

Nida finally catches up with Kiran and with Crom. We can really kind of feel their ages in this part and that's really nice you mentioned that it's inspired by The Last Airbender. I had to take that into consideration when thinking about the dialogue choices and phrasing and such. Of course you know all of the “four nations” and whatnot isn't exactly present yet. But eventually we'll get there being that the island is not where we'll stay for too long.

Yeah, it’s not exactly a 1:1 with ATLA’s setup, it’s more in general vibes, though glad to see that you’re enjoying things so far.

It's nice that your treatment of ferals is handled respectively in Fledglings per end point to it being a more friendlier PMD fake and thus you wouldn't want to get into the extremes. I also do remember unfortunately a spoiler of something related to what Nida says that the ferals'll enjoy life on a rescue team if you just change their mind. Recruitment of Mystery Dungeon Pokémon is a very integral gameplay component, at least the first three games mind you of PMD. Not a lot of fics use this, from what I can tell the majority of the characters are just the former human or just Pokemon from towns which is not how the games work but to be fair only the Pokemon from towns are the ones you can really have conversations with so it's fair enough.

Which is a bit unfortunate, really. Since it honestly always felt a bit weird to me for how the archetypical PMD fic puts a hard barrier between the Pokémon in towns and the Pokémon in dungeons when it’s normally the way you expand your teams in the games not named ‘Super’. From very early on, I decided that it wasn’t something that I wanted to do in this story as a default encounter since even sapient Pokémon have no shortage of reasons for wanting to fight each other.

Anyway at the end of the dungeon we get their inexperience highlighted particularly Nida's and Crom however the full extent is not in my opinion showing off but it doesn't help that they weren't at their full potential against the Krabbies. And on a request looking for something so simple like apples things can get chaotic just like in the actual games but goodness they are lucky they have Kiran with them. And signs of the “monster” further in the cave are interesting.

Nah, they’re just young and inexperienced. While they won’t have this much bad luck even in other battles close down the pipe, it’ll take some more learned experience to get them to make the most of their potential.

I don't want to whine about the prose too much because it's a different style than what I'm used to one and two it's older content. Considering fledgling is over a decade and I haven't heard of talks of any rewrites and which I don't blame you I don't even want to rewrite anything that's a year old anymore at this point. If anything it's not like the prose got purple with extremely long descriptions but I felt like there was some unnecessary and a few clunky clarifications. Perhaps it is also for younger readers' sake to clarify as it is more in that range.

I think this is an area where we’ll just have to agree to disagree since we favor more “visual” writing styles. For what it’s worth, in more recent chapters, we tend to be a bit more economical about breaking out the description, especially in fast-paced moments like battles.

The religion of the world is also interesting. The Creator, obviously Arceus, has temples that are even in the depths of a Mystery Dungeon, or perhaps right outside of it. The Distortions are causing all of the areas to get warped per se which is a concept that's very fun to do. Seeing this temple with Nida and the team regarding offerings and what's so important about this ‘monster’ lets us get a bit more world building. We don't know everything but we're just getting a little taste and that's nice especially with the mural because a lot of people tend to forget that not all of ancient history was written down a lot of it was painted and it makes the world feel lived in when there's different types of History presented like this.

Well, the bits aside from Arceus are likely to be much less well-known outside of Tromba, but there’s little flourishes like these on most islands in this story, so glad to hear that you enjoyed this one.

Nida, Crom, Kiran, and that ‘monster’ along with many others have much more in store in Fledgelings and I find myself excited now that this looks to be the turning point. Even a decade later, keep up the good work!

Glad to hear you had fun with the chapter, and I hope we’ll see you around again sometime. ^^

@FennecWitch
I went back to check and it is indeed the same chapter symbol for this one as last one. I don't think I questioned it last time, but now I'm curious as to what it actually represents. My best guess for what it looks like is a broken egg.

…Wait a second.

Hmm, so it doesn't match the description of the egg from last chapter. I may be wrong, then.

Nah, it’s the same egg.

…You know, I probably should've expected the Guildmaster to be an Ampharos considering I think there was an Ampharos-shaped structure described last chapter.

Yup, there’s little bits of foreshadowing here and there in this fic since it’s one of those where not many details are truly superfluous. o3o

This line from Crom feels a bit out of nowhere since this is the first time he's mentioned to be in the scene. Him being there makes sense, given Nida being late and him being a member of the team, but I feel like you could mention him being there before this line.

We went back and tweaked this.

I checked and this is indeed the same Sentret who did this last chapter. That's hilarious. I smell a running gag.

You would be correct there.

Took me a second to catch whether this was meant to be Crom or the Spinarak but I'm pretty sure it's the Spinarak. Interesting that ferals can speak in this world. They have some level of sapience, then. I wonder what makes them ferals, in that case.

It’s the Spinarak. We made a minor tweak to make it more obvious.

I agree. I wonder why they do. Checking back with the prologue to refresh my understanding, I understand the ferals' origins. That doesn't seem to suggest that they can't choose to not be ferals if they want, though. I feel like this concept is probably not within the scope of this story, though.

You’ll actually get to see this explored in some later episodes.

Part of me really wants to nitpick that the "s" to "th" lisp feels like it wouldn't do that with a beak but this way definitely conveys that Kiran has food in his mouth better than trying to go for full biological accuracy.

I also don't even know; maybe it might work? That lisp happens when your tongue extends too far past your teeth and while Swellow would have tongues, they don't have teeth. But maybe extending the tongue beyond the beak would be comparable? That wouldn't really happen with food in his mouth, though. I'm definitely overthinking this.

Something something “translation convention for the readers”, thus why all the dialogue’s not in PokéAni style “repeat clippings of species names with the occasional growl” right now

It did take me a few lines to be able to determine this was Crom. Stuff like this I don't think is necessarily an issue, since it becomes evident, but thought I'd mention it anyway. Realistically you can't cater for every potential reader misunderstanding.

We went and added a speech tag, since it shouldn’t stick out too much from the rest of the surrounding context.

The apples are probably good to throw at people, as long as they're ripe. At a certain point, I feel like apples get pretty squishy. Which would take me out of the fight a bit, if I got one splattered on me. So still kinda useful.

Hold onto that thought there.

I feel like I can picture how this line was written. Originally with "hands" or "feet", before realising that Nida has paws. And then realising Clom has claws. And then that Kiran has wings. I don't know; just found the listing of body parts here kinda funny.

I don’t recall that being how that part came together, but we went and made collapsed it into “limbs”.

Wonder if "Distortion" here is at all related to the Distortion World.

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I feel like this phrasing is a little weird, but I'm not sure how you could fix it without chaning the meaning. ". . . open out to the bottoms of the seas. . ." isn't quite right.

Just cutting "to" feels like it flows better maybe?

We went and cut the “to”. It does seem to flow a bit better that way.

This is super cool both conceptually and visually.

Glad to hear that you liked it, we went out of our way to try and sell the idea that Mystery Dungeons were “abnormal” spaces in this story.

I'm sure you could ask a Treecko or something. Or maybe that Spinarak you scared off.

Well, I think that it’s a bit late to do either of those ideas, alas. 😅

I love it when fics draw attention to varying levels of species' sense of smell.

Yeah, we like adding little reminders that our cast aren’t human here and there. Glad to hear that it landed well for you.

I feel like this is kinda overexplaining what's happening. "the relative movement of being dragged along a stone cave floor" just feels like a lot of detail for the subject of that clause. I think you can cut at least one prepositional phrase (probably the last one, since we already know it's a stone cave floor) to improve the flow.

We went and rephrased the part you highlighted.

I feel like you probably shouldn't be saying stuff from Kiran's perspective like this when so far it's seemed to be strictly third person limited and it's kinda jarring to switch perspectives mid-scene.

No, it’s third person omniscient with some bleedover into characters’ perspectives, so this actually isn’t an error here.

This is really cool information too, as well as good exposition (though I think that should be a semi-colon?)

Also tweaked this.

This is another very long phrase describing one thing with no commas or sentence breaks. But at the same time, I think it'd negatively affect the pacing of the scene if you split it into two sentences, so I'm not sure how you'd fix that.

We also went and tweaked this. It was the matter of adding a couple additional words.

This is good payoff for that scene. I love it.

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Didn't anyone ever tell you not to say things like that, Nida? :P

Such is life not being self-aware that you’re in a story.

The detail of the trap being a specific pattern is super cool.

These are actually based on the trap icons in the game, just made more subtle and blended into the environment better so it’s more believable that Pokémon would step on them accidentally.

Not at all where I expected this chapter to end, though. I did end up writing this review over multiple sessions but that was a very quick 5k words. Definitely makes me want to keep reading, so it's a very well-done cliffhanger.

(There's some joke to be made about falling off a cliff rather than hanging on, in this case.)

Well, we hope that you’ll come back, since the chapters after this one are the parts where things start getting really exciting.

But yeah, that's the review. Honestly another really solid chapter. I feel like the characters and world were expanded nicely and the action scenes were well done. Excited to read more!

Glad to hear, and @Virgil134 and I will be looking forward to whenever you come back to this story. ^^

And thanks for your patience, everyone. The next couple weeks will be a bit more active in this story since we’ll be pushing out a two-parter along with the next batch of trivia to send off the Vollezee arc and start bringing this version of Fledglings more up to speed with current events offsite.

And with that, let’s get right into:
 
Chapter 91a: At Great Cost, Part 1

Virgil134

PMD Writer
Partners
  1. sylveon
  2. weavile
  3. kommo-o
  4. noivern
  5. mothim
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After Farn shooed them off, Murdo and Leonard uneasily made their way home from the Academy, only to come across Zorn about halfway there. The Gyarados was initially at a loss for why on earth the two would've left the Academy on their own, and after a brief explanation from them, grew increasingly concerned about what had happened between Farn and these 'friends' of theirs.

After flagging down a small group of mostly-swimming guards, Zorn made his way up the canal towards the Academy with Murdo and Leonard in tow. The whole time, he grumbled under his breath, wondering what on earth had come over Farn to make her do something so reckless. He'd be sure to give her a piece of his mind for letting his child go unattended in such a fashion. And yet, he couldn't shake the sense that something was wrong.

It just wasn't like Farn to do something like that, especially without a good reason. Then, what exactly had happened to make her drop everything with the kids and focus on these friends of theirs? Murdo and Leonard seemed similarly taken aback by everything, as the Magikarp splashed in the water and looked up at his father with an uneasy expression.

"Dad?" Murdo asked. "What's going on?"

"Yeah, why are we going back to school with all these guards?" Leonard chimed in.

A few possibilities crossed his mind: perhaps she'd chanced to stumble across pirates or spies and didn't want the kids to be exposed to her… dealing with them. But it was hardly wise to excite young and impressionable minds with such topics, or at least not when they were idle speculation. The Academy wasn't that far ahead, and whatever the truth was, it'd become clear soon enough.

"There was just something about what you two said about those friends of yours that worried me a little," Zorn explained. "Maybe, it's nothing, but…"

Murdo shifted his fins uncomfortably in the water, and Leonard pinned his ears back from his perch atop Zorn's head. Both of the youngsters seemed uneasy about the Gyarados' reaction, as if they knew that something was wrong and that they didn't want to tell him.

"Do you mean the way Leonard's mom suddenly got all upset with them?" the Magikarp asked. "Do you know why she did that? It's not like they did anything wrong!"

"Yeah, mom said that she needed to talk with them alone!" Leonard exclaimed. "And then she wouldn't let us listen in! She never does that!"

Zorn started to shake his head back in reply, only to stop himself after hearing Leonard yelp with a start. Right, he was carrying a passenger now. The sea serpent quickly muttered an apology, before lowering himself into the water and casting a guarded glance down at his child.

"Look, whatever's going on, I'm sure that I can get to the bottom of it…"

The Gyarados trailed off as he looked towards the side of the canal, off at the mouth of an alleyway near the entrance of the Academy's main building. A party of guards in Company lavenders had gathered and stood at attention, while at the center, Farn was shooting a piercing glare at a flustered-looking Alakazam, all while Inler pointed a claw accusingly at the Psychic-Type. Zorn blinked at the sight, as he realized the Alakazam was none other than the Academy's Headmaster. He was too far away to hear the conversation between the three and wondered for a moment what was happening, when Gerhard gave a chastened bow right before the guards hurriedly dispersed.

Zorn paused at the head of his party of swimmers for a moment, and looked down at Murdo. The Magikarp squirmed uneasily in the water and raised his voice in a concerned tone.

"Why are you looking like that, dad?" Murdo asked. "Is something wrong?"

Zorn gave no reply as he stopped and watched Inler ordering around the Alakazam professor, who quietly flinched under his gaze. The Gyarados raised a brow, when he could've sworn he heard his earholes pick up some sort of comment about 'letting them get away'.

… This didn't seem like a matter that was wise to just swim off from. Zorn made his way over to the edge of the canal and lowered his head down to the street level, glancing to his Magikarp child trailing after him. The Gyarados noted Murdo had a worried stare from the corner of his eye, before letting out a rumbling sigh.

"… I'm going to need a moment, you two," he explained. "I think that this has something to do with work."

"But you're supposed to be off work right now!" Murdo cried, splashing his fins in protest.

Zorn said nothing as he bobbed his head to motion to Leonard to get off, the Shinx reluctantly jumping to the street's pavestones. As soon as his passenger got off, he reared up and looked down at the youngsters with the most reassuring smile his fierce features allowed.

"Just go on ahead of me, alright? I'll be back home before you know it."

Murdo and Leonard hesitated for a moment and looked up pleadingly at the Gyarados for a moment, only to waver as he stubbornly refused to move from his place. The pair began to grudgingly drift away along the canal, when Zorn turned his attention over to a pink Jellicent and a pink Gastrodon from his following party and motioned with his head after the two children.

"You two, take the kids home," he grunted. "This is probably going to take a while."

The Jellicent and Gastrodon nodded back to the Gyarados Administrator, before hurrying off to shepherd Murdo and Leonard along. Zorn coiled in the water and swam over for the patch of the stone lane on the other end of the canal. He arrived just in time to see Gerhard hurry off as Inler let out a sharp huff and Farn glowered under her breath. … A group of Pokémon had gotten away from the Academy? But who? And what had they been doing?

"Director? What are you doing here around campus?" Zorn asked. "What happened here?"

"We just caught Lugia and his companions impersonating students," the Nidoking growled. "They stole something from the Academy's Vault a few minutes ago and are currently on the loose here in the city!"

Zorn jolted back in the water, the ripples from his body churning it enough to make a small wave that doused the faces of a few of his accompanying swimmers. The abrupt soak drew a few reflexive cries of protest, which were quickly suppressed after a brief glance back up at the Administrator's scarf. Fortunately for them, Zorn's mind was distracted from Inler's sudden revelation, as he tried to make sense of how on earth the Protector they'd had Lyn chasing across Anyilla for the past month could've possibly just come into Vollezee on his own.

"Wait, what? But why on earth would-?"

"That's not relevant right now. What is relevant is finding them here before they can get away!" Farn snapped. "With how long they kept us stalled with that Petrify Orb, they could be anywhere right now!"

Inler paused and brought a claw to his chin in thought, before a dawning realization came over him. The Director turned to his Gyarados subordinate, and motioned off towards the direction of the island's lagoon.

"Lyn's ship is still in the lagoon right now. Get him and whoever else you can summon along the way to blockade its exits," the Nidoking ordered. "It's the most likely escape route the Protector and his entourage would try and take if they came here by ship. Farn and I will try to cover the other scenarios by mobilizing the guards to comb the city in case they attempt to lay low or escape overland."

Zorn narrowed his eyes and gave a firm nod back to his superior.

"Understood, Director."

The Gyarados beckoned the guards with him to follow with a sharp cry, before swimming off through the canal's water as quickly as his fins could carry him. He knifed through the water as Inler and Farn hurried off in the opposite direction. All the while, the Administrator and his guards shooed passing Pokémon and watercraft out of their way as they tore ahead southwards for the cerulean waters of Vollezee's lagoon.

If they could get to the Protector in time, the Company's future, their future, was theirs for the taking.



At that same time, a little ways north of the Academy, Sorge, Zelle, and Ellsberg rested next to a row of canalhouses overlooking a canal and its surrounding paths from a cobbled residential street. The small strip of tall, gabled-roofed buildings had been quiet, with few companions other than a couple clotheslines that fluttered with the wind. Not that one would expect any different in the middle of the day from a street like this with no obvious businesses to speak of. Most of their occupants would be off at work, or if they were nocturnal, fast asleep.

More importantly, the buildings and the neighboring canal formed a blind corner shaped much like a wedge. Any Pokémon heading northwards along the canal's bordering street would never see them while passing, or at least not without stopping to look back.

The sound of approaching wingbeats turned the trio's attention skyward, where they saw Aldrich swoop in over the rooftops and come to a stop on the ground. Sorge and the others glanced over as the Noivern looked back at them, before the bat gave a firm grunt in reply.

"I spotted them coming from the Academy," Aldrich said. "Looks like they'll pass by here, just like we expected."

"Excellent," Sorge replied, a small smirk coming over his face. "Then we don't have a moment to lose."

The Kommo-o fished through his bag and pulled out a peach-colored orb with mist swirling in it—the Slumber Orb from the items they'd prepared for their ambush. It, along with the other orbs of its sort, had been primed by the four in anticipation of Team Traveller and Team Zephyr's arrival. And not a moment too soon if Aldrich's report was anything to go by.

Zelle braced herself, readying herself to attack at a moment's notice. Meanwhile, Aldrich looked up at the gabled roofs above and motioned at Ellsberg with a claw.

"Come on, Ellsberg," he said. "We'll be able to pincer them better if we come down on them from above."

Ellsberg nodded back and already started to flutter up, the Noivern crouching and readying his wings to take wing after him, when a voice suddenly called out from behind them.

"Excuse me."

Aldrich paused as Sorge put the Slumber Orb away, before they and their teammates whirled about to see a Second-Rank Grimmsnarl at the head of a small party of guards. A Second-Rank Milotic, along with a yellow-eared Raichu floating on her tail with a First-Rank scarf, and a similarly-garbed Scolipede. Team Sentinel's members blinked for a moment, before Zelle sharply glared at the Grimmsnarl.

"Do you mind?" the Sylveon demanded. "We're in the middle of something here!"

The Grimmsnarl and his fellows shrank back, keenly eyeing the scarves of the Sylveon and her companions. They clearly saw every single Pokémon in her party held Second-Rank or higher. The Raichu and the Scolipede traded uneasy glances, before the Grimmsnarl stepped forward and gave an apologetic bow.

"My apologies," the Grimmsnarl offered. "It's just that Administrator Darzin called in a complaint about you and the Harbormaster sent us to go and check up on you."

Team Sentinel found themselves at a brief loss for words, Aldrich tilting his head puzzledly before realizing that the whole encounter must've been from some harebrained plot by Darzin to try and get back at them. The Noivern narrowed his eyes, before scowling at the guards with a sharp scoff.

"'Administrator Darzin'? Seriously?"

"Look, we don't want to do this any more than you do," the Milotic insisted. "He probably just woke up on the wrong side of the bed or something. But as a sanity check… the lot of you wouldn't happen to be carrying any Imperial paraphernalia for whatever reason, right?"

Ellsberg let out an annoyed huff and flitted up into the Milotic's face with a piercing glare.

"If this is your idea of a joke, then it's not funny! Of course we don't have any Imperial garb on us!" the Mothim snapped. "Back off, or I'll make you regret wasting our time!"

The Milotic blinked as Ellsberg attempted to loom over him, before coiling and turning his snout up with a dismissive scoff at the display.

"Oh yeah, I'm trembling in fear right now, Mothim," he harrumphed.

Ellsberg fumed with an angry buzz, only for Aldrich to motion for quiet with a wing.

"I don't know what you've been told, Grimmsnarl, but this is just wasting both our time right now," the Noivern growled.

The Grimmsnarl leading the guards let out a sharp sigh. He pinched his brow and shook his head, before looking back and raising a hand to try to motion for calm and settle the four down.

"Look, we have to give something back to the Harbormaster," the Grimmsnarl insisted. "Just let us do a quick bag check and we'll get out of your hair. That's reasonable, isn't it?"

The group rolled their eyes and grumbled at the Grimmsnarl's stubbornness, and stole glances back at the canal. After a moment's hesitation, they quickly decided that it was better to yield to the guards' demands. After all, Team Traveller and Team Zephyr would be coming through at any minute, and it wouldn't too be hard to cut things short if they had to.

One after the other, Team Sentinel's members presented their bags. Aldrich was the first to offer his for inspection, then came Ellsberg, followed by Zelle, the Grimmsnarl doing little more than to open them and lightly paw around at their surfaces. At the very end, Sorge stepped forward, handing his bag over when the Grimmsnarl opened its mouth and an indigo cloth flopped out.

"Huh? What the-?"

The Grimmsnarl stooped down and picked the cloth up, holding it up to reveal that it was an Imperial scarf, complete with a single, white leaf pattern. Ellsberg's eyes widened as the moth recoiled with a start, shooting an alarmed stare back at his Kommo-o teammate.

"E-Eh?! Sorge!" Ellsberg yelped. "When on earth did that get in there?!"

Sorge looked down at the scarf blankly. How could an Imperial scarf have gotten into his belongings? He'd had an eye on his bag the entire time today! There wouldn't have been an opportunity for anyone to go through it aside from…

The Kommo-o grit his teeth as his mind turned back to when Darzin bumbled into him and grabbed at his bag back on the terrace. He had no idea how the Dragonite managed to slip it in such a short time, but all signs pointed to the culprit being none other than…

"That dirty, worthless-!"

"Ahem."

Sorge and the others turned their attention back to the guards, with the Scolipede, Raichu, and Milotic still gaping in stunned surprise. The Grimmsnarl at their fore was a visible exception, as he narrowed his eyes into a stern frown and motioned at the Kommo-o and his companions to follow along.

"I'm… not sure what exactly is going on, but you four need to come and answer a few questions," Grimmsnarl said. "Peacefully."

Team Sentinel's members gave sharp glares in reply, as Aldrich made his way forward and flashed his teeth in irritation.

"Look, we don't have time for this," the Noivern snapped. "If you need answers, you can wait for them later!"

The Grimmsnarl crouched and assumed a fighting stance. The Dark-Type moved a hand towards a satchel about his waist, visibly grabbing at a wand as he bared his teeth back.

"No, we can't wait," the Grimmsnarl insisted. "You need to come. Now."

Team Sentinel's members hastily fell behind Aldrich as the Noivern sprang up and cast a deafening, reverberating shockwave from his ears. The Boomburst knocked the Grimmsnarl and his companions off their feet, with Zelle wasting no time lunging forward to fling the brilliant wave-like light of a Dazzling Gleam down the street. Ellsberg hesitated briefly as the Grimmsnarl and Milotic staggered up after the barrage, when Sorge ran in with a Poison Jab and sprawled out the Grimmsnarl with a blow to his stomach. The Milotic desperately attempted to form an Ice Beam in his mouth to intervene, only for a Bug Buzz to zip in and send him crumpling to the ground.

Ellsberg flitted in place, looking about in worried confusion at the sight of the four unconscious guards on the street. Zelle sized up the felled guards for a moment and rolled her eyes with a low grumble.

"Oh well that's going to be a mess to explain," Zelle sighed, prompting Aldrich to shake his head back with a low growl.

"We'll have time to clear things up afterwards when we settle things with that fat newt! Just focus on the-!"

Aldrich abruptly trailed off and he wiggled his ears after having noticed a sound off in the distance. The Noivern turned his head to follow it, only to see it was headed straight towards the Company's military harbor. The bat let out a startled cry of realization, before gritting his teeth with an aggravated snarl.

"Gah! We missed them!"

The Mothim looked off at the empty canal and grimaced, before shaking his head with a sharp buzz.

"They can't have gotten far!" Ellsberg insisted. "Let's chase them down-"

"No."

Sorge shook his head back insistently and turned away from the empty canal.

"There's too many places they can give us the slip in if we try to pursue them like this," the Kommo-o explained. "They're headed for the military harbor and coming from the south. I know a shortcut to its eastern entrance, so we can wait for them there and try again."

Ellsberg and the others hesitated a moment, before the Mothim let out a sigh and let his antennae droop.

"Hrmph, figures this wouldn't be easy…" he grumbled. "I just hope there's no more surprises with this operation."

The Bug-Type gave no further protest, as Sorge slipped off ahead past the still-groaning guards sprawled out on the ground. One by one, Ellsberg and the others followed, melting off into the shadows towards the military harbor and its ships.



In Canalhouse City's military harbor, the docks teemed with activity from various lavender-scarved Pokémon milling about, tending and provisioning ships of different sizes that had been berthed at the piers. Amidst the hubbub, Ketu rested against a stack of crates along the path linking the piers together, tapping his claws against his arm impatiently and occasionally glancing up at the sky with an expectant gaze.

He figured Darzin would've arrived by now. The Dragonite didn't seem like the type to suddenly get cold feet, yet here he was. Waiting on him.

He'd seen Team Traveller and their companions leave their ship almost an hour ago, and the Academy was a mere twenty minutes away by overland travel. Only an idiot would assume that they planned their mission around taking scenic routes to and from it, so it was likely they were already on their way back.

He wasn't the only one making that same assumption, either. The entire time following Team Traveller's departure, the crew of the Siglo Swellow had spent it readying their sails and hurriedly cramming aboard a few last-minute provisions. The way he saw it, he had about five minutes before he'd need to just wing things without Darzin, lest he risk blowing his shot at Team Traveller's volume of the Knights' Ledger entirely.

Ketu's ears flicked as he suddenly heard a faint woosh along with a startled "Watch it!" from the skies above. The Weavile glanced up, just in time to spot Darzin zipping in and heading straight for the Siglo Swellow. The Dark-Type shook his head, and narrowed his eyes with an impatient harrumph.

"Took him long enough…"

Ketu began to make his way towards the Siglo Swellow, right as Darzin swooped down for the ship's deck. While he neared, the Dragonite landed on the deck with an audible thump. The surrounding sailors looked up with a start as the ship began to slightly rock underfoot, immediately blanching after they noticed that there was now a Dragonite with a Company Administrator's scarf standing on the middle of their deck.

"A-Ah!" a Golduck yelped. "You're-!"

"Administrator Darzin," the Dragonite snarled. "It's come to my attention that you lot have a Pokémon of interest for the Board among your crew. I'll be escorting him off. Now."

After the initial moment of startled shock wore off, the sailors hastily dug themselves in, some taking cover, with stronger members bracing themselves for battle. From her place at the stern, Beatrix hesitated at the sight of the Dragonite Administrator, before she hurriedly flitted over towards Darzin. Along the way, she noticed a few of the sailors already starting to ready attacks and went wide-eyed. The moment so much as a Gravelerock sailed at Darzin, their cover was good as gone, so for now, they needed to just hang in there.

"Hold it! At ease, everyone!" she buzzed.

The Illumise cast a quick glance down at the docks. Team Traveller and Team Zephyr would be back soon. Once they were safely back aboard with the Ledger, a broken cover would be something that'd be more manageable, especially with two Protectors aboard and a third in the waters waiting offshore to lend aid.

… But they weren't there yet, and a lot could happen in the span of a few minutes, or a few seconds for that matter, considering Darzin's strength. For the time being, it was best to try and string him along until the others made it back.

"We have no idea what you're talking about, Administrator," Beatrix insisted. "This ship is only used to transport goods, not prisoners."

"Don't try to play dumb, Illumise!" Darzin growled back. "I know who you lot really are and you're in no position to refuse me here!"

While Beatrix and Darzin argued back and forth on the deck, towards the Siglo Swellow's stern, Ketu sized up the windows of the captain's quarters of the ship from a nearby dock. He carefully studied their glass panes, when he noticed that one of them had been slightly left ajar.

Just the opening that he needed.

After a brief glance towards the ship's deck to make sure that nobody was paying attention to him, he leapt forward and latched onto the side of the hull with his claws. The Weavile dug his claws in between the planks and planted his feet against gaps in the timbers for footing, before throwing one set of claws up after the other to make his way up to the open window. A quick peek inside revealed it to be seemingly unoccupied, as he pulled the window open and hoisted his body over the sill, coming to a crouching stop behind a wooden desk as he closed the window behind him.

"So far so good…" he thought to himself.

Ketu looked around the room as he studied his surroundings. There was an upholstered chair tucked up against the desk, with a map and a folded spyglass on it. To the right, there was a door left ajar to a bedroom where a bed with a mattress could be seen through it, and off to the wall beside it, there was a shelf with some books in a neat line, and a portrait of a Volbeat… nothing that was of interest to him.

The Weavile carefully made his way over to the cabin's door and cracked it open, peering through it to see an empty hallway lit up by glass lanterns stuffed with blue glowmoss. After pausing a moment to listen in and hearing nothing but the sound of the water and the ship's timbers creaking, Ketu slunk forward into the hallway, creeping ahead as muffled shouts and cries coming from the deck began to reach his ears. He listened to the voices briefly, and while he couldn't make out specifics, he could definitely hear a Dragonite's voice bellowing and ranting among them. From how long it was going on, Darzin probably hadn't gotten into a fight on the deck just yet. Why on earth was he not surprised that that fat newt would blow around some hot air before getting into a scrap?

"They're certainly not making this hard. Now… where are those sleeping quarters?"

Ketu took the light off its mount and continued forward. He was in a quarterdeck, so unless he was going to announce his presence to the entire crew by walking outdoors onto the main deck, he needed to find a set of stairs. The Weavile snuck along the hallway, when he noticed an alcove to his right, and lowered the lantern to spot a steep set of stairs heading down alongside a railing. A bit simple in construction, but perhaps he shouldn't have expected better from a merchant ship that prioritized speed over everything else.

Ketu grabbed the railing, making his way down the steps as he entered a fresh hallway. He made his way forward, creeping past doors and inspecting them as he passed. A storage room, the mess hall…

The Weavile's ears pricked up at the sound of approaching footsteps and worried voices. Ketu hurriedly cupped a paw over his lantern and ducked into a nearby room, hiding just behind the doorway as a Dwebble and Bayleef passed.

"Espera, Administrator Darzin is up there?" the Dwebble asked. "But how could he have-?"

"I don't know either, but come on," the Bayleef insisted. "Things could get dicey."

Ketu crouched as ice began to form in his free claw and he began to mold it into a large, flechette-like shard. He braced himself, expecting the Dwebble and Bayleef to turn back at any moment, only for the two to carry on none the wiser. The Weavile flicked the Ice Shard aside and raised his lantern, where at once he saw piles of straw on the floor and hammocks strung up from the rafters.

That was as good a sign as any that he'd found one of the sleeping quarters.

"Nrgh. Kiran? Is that you?"

The Weavile turned with his lantern and caught the sight of a Skarmory stirring in the corner. He hurriedly covered his light and began creeping for the door, only to notice the Steel-Type raise his head briefly, before settling back down and curling up to sleep.

… A Skarmory should've been able to see that sort of light from such a short distance. For a moment, Ketu wondered if that was the same unfortunate sod that Aldrich said he'd blinded a few days ago, when his thoughts turned back to Albert's explanation of where the Ledger's hiding-place was…

"Second last from the bow, on the ship's port side …"

He was pretty sure that he was on the port side of the ship right now. And the second-to-last sleeping quarters from the bow would be the second one he encountered coming from the stern…

The one right next to the room he was currently in!

Ketu hurriedly ducked out and slipped into the room the next door over, where after raising his lantern for light, he found he was indeed in another set of sleeping quarters. One that was fully empty this time.

The Weavile paused and realized that he distinctly recalled Albert telling him and Aldrich that he'd heard wood clattering in the room where the Ledger was supposed to be. A quick glance at the doorposts revealed that the wall to the hallway was too thin to viably hide a hollow space. The side bordering the hull was similarly out as a potential hiding place, since smugglers of all 'mons would know better than to mess with the part of their ship that held back the sea. So that just left the side walls and the floor to check.

Ketu made his way over to the left wall as the floor's wood creaked underneath. He carefully ran his claws along the gaps of the timbers, only to find them tightly joined. A few exploratory knocks similarly revealed a lack of hidden hollows behind it.

He frowned, and retraced his steps to the other wall, where he repeated the same process… and found much the same. That left the floor to check, but with a good chunk of it covered in straw at the moment… where would he even start?

Creaaaak…


Ketu's ears swiveled as he suddenly heard a sharp creak underfoot, far sharper than any he'd heard while walking around earlier. The Dark-Type crouched and ran a claw carefully along the floor, where he felt it catch on a gap and the wood lift up slightly underneath.

"That's certainly not normal…"

The Weavile pulled the wood up to reveal a panel over an empty compartment below. Well, mostly empty anyways, aside from the wooden chest tucked in the corner. He leaned forward and picked it up, pulling the lid back, where sure enough, there was the blue cover of a tome with a cross-shaped glyph on its cover. Ketu curled his mouth up into a smirk at the sight.

"Heh, this is too easy…

"Stop trying to stall me! I know you have that bird, and I'm leaving with him even if I have to have the guards raid your ship right here and now!"

Ketu pinned his ears at the sound of Darzin's shout coming through the timbers above. He guessed that was as good a sign as any that it was time to hurry up and leave.

He hurriedly slid the panel back over the compartment with a quiet clatter, before throwing the ledger into his bag and slinging it over his shoulder. The Weavile made his way to the exit and ducked out into the hallway, just in time for the blue glow from his lantern to catch the forms of a Raichu and Servine coming into view. The pair froze and went wide-eyed, the Servine raising his nubby arms with a startled cry.

"Hey, what the-?!"

"Who are you?!" the Raichu demanded. "And what do you think you're doing here?!"

Ketu crouched and shifted himself into a defensive position, gritting his teeth back with a sharp snarl.

"Just someone who was leaving," he spat. "By the way, you should get some better security."

The Weavile suddenly blew forward a frosty gust of wind that swept up the Servine and Raichu, who fought to keep their footing. Philips sparked and tried to shoot a Thunderbolt forward at his assailant, only for the Weavile to exploit his slowed gait and swiftly rake his claws trailing shadowy wisps over the Raichu's stomach, flinging him into the wall where the Electric-Type bounced off of it and faceplanted limply onto the floor. Natrix froze with a start for a moment, before sharply hissing and somersaulting onto his head.

"You'll pay for that, you dirty square-neck!"

The Servine twirled his body about as leaves began to fly from his tail and swirl around him, the Leaf Tornado's flechettes zipping at the Weavile and digging into his pelt. Ketu grimaced from the cutting leaves, before lunging forward as his left claws slicked over with ice. The Dark-Type brought his Ice Punch into a sharp uppercut, catching Natrix in his stomach and sending him flopping over onto his back unconscious. Ketu paused for a moment, shaking some stray ice off his left claw as he looked over the fainted sailors with an unimpressed harrumph.

"Tch, why do they always insist on getting in the way?" he scoffed.

"Hey! There's someone down here!"

Ketu pinned his ears and turned back towards the stern, the same direction that he'd snuck in from the captain's quarters. Guess he wasn't using that exit to get back out. The Weavile took off running for the bow and eventually hurriedly rounded a corner where he came face to face with a Trumbeak who recoiled with a start and squawked in alarm.

"Ah! You're-!"

"Stick around a while!" Ketu snapped.

He hurriedly threw the Trumbeak aside before blowing an Icy Wind that froze her wing to the wood of the wall. The Dark-Type continued on as futile, squawking protests of "Wait, stop!" rang out behind him. He found an exit onto the main deck not long afterwards, clambering up a ladder just as concerned murmurs rang out from above and the head of a Sliggoo peered over.

"What in the-?"

Ketu swiftly threw an Ice Punch at the Sliggoo's face, flinging the Dragon-Type back with a pained yelp. The Weavile sprang up onto the deck, where Darzin and the gathered sailors whirled and stared at him with incredulous gapes. A few surprised cries went about the sailors as Darzin blinked at the sight of the Weavile, before narrowing his eyes into a sharp glare.

"You again!" the Dragonite snarled. "What do you think you're doing interfering with my mission?"

Beatrix stared at Ketu, before her mind put two and two together from the Dark-Type's species and the Company garb about his neck. This was that Weavile from Team Sentinel! The Illumise reflexively batted her wings, pointing a tarsus at him with an accusing glare.

"Better question, what are you doing on my ship?!" she demanded.

A Golduck hurriedly spat a jet of water at Ketu, prompting him to spring up and latch onto the rigging of the center mast. From above, the Weavile peered down, giving a sneering smirk down at his bewildered audience.

"Oh, I just figured I'd stop by to pick up some interesting reading material aboard your ship," the Weavile said. "Not that it was exactly hard thanks to that dim-witted skink distracting you all."

Confused murmurs went about the sailors as to what the Dark-Type meant with 'interesting reading material' and using Darzin as a distraction. The Dragonite for his part seemed to take particular offense at the Weavile's statement, as he snarled up at the Second-Rank.

"'Distraction'?! Whatever you think you did, you're going to explain it, you furry runt!" Darzin exclaimed. "And you'll be giving your findings over to me right now!"

"Pfft, don't make me laugh," Ketu scoffed back. "Though if you're that insistent on me giving you something, how about this?"

Ketu reached into his bag and lobbed a Luminous Orb at the deck. He closed his eyes and dropped down as a blinding flash and startled yelps rang out, before whirling on his heels and taking off running for the bow. The Weavile's attention turned to a coil of rope near the railing tied to one end that looked like a recently untied mooring.

"That'll work nicely."

The Dark-Type stooped mid-stride and grabbed the rope, jumping over the railing and tightening his grasp around the fibers. Ketu felt the rope tighten and swung forward, letting go just as he was about to level out with the ground and then dropped into a rolling crouch in front of a startled Centiskorch and Duosion in Company lavenders. The Weavile looked back just in time to see Darzin going up to the bow's railing. The Dragonite shook some sense back into his head from the aftereffects of the Luminous Orb, before he noticed Ketu down on the pier and met his gaze with narrowed eyes and a low growl.

"Why you-!"

Darzin was suddenly cut off by a Sleep Seed sailing in and bursting against his hide. A small puff of peach-colored smoke suddenly erupted as the Dragonite's eyes grew unfocused, and he pitched forward over the railing and crashed into the water below with a loud splash. From above, Pyry hurried and peered over, looking down at the water with a beaming grin as he cheered on the product of his handiwork.

"Hah! I got him!" the Gabite cried. "I got him!"

"See!" Pekka buzzed, turning to Beatrix with a beaming grin. "Told you we could be useful-!"

The Vibrava trailed off after looking towards the docks and seeing the lavender-scarved Centiskorch and Duosion staring up at him incredulously, with almost an army of other square-necks similarly staring up from their work about the docks. Pyry and Pekka froze and grimaced, realizing that they'd come to blows with a Company Administrator in the middle of what had to be one of the biggest gatherings of square-necks in the middle of their capital.

"Uh-oh," Pekka gulped.

Further down the docks, Ketu nonchalantly made his way along with his bag slung over his shoulder as other Pokémon in Company lavenders continued to look at the Siglo Swellow. After realizing the other Pokémon were just staring dumbly at the scene and not doing anything, the Weavile gave a quiet frown, before he whirled around and pointed off at the schooner with a sharp cry.

"Hey! That schooner is a fake and their crew just attacked an Administrator!" Ketu shouted. "Stop standing there and get them!"

The nearby grunts began to make their way over, some with disbelieving expressions, others already growling and hostile. Ketu sauntered off and cracked a smug smirk, not bothering to look back at the Siglo Swellow as crashes and shouts along with the sounds of a fierce battle began to ring out behind him.

"That went better than I thought."



While Ketu was searching the interior of the Siglo Swellow, the world went by for Guardia in a darkened blur. The first thing she felt after she woke up was the feeling of a seed in her mouth, and a dull, frigid pain on her shoulder. The Cubone immediately noticed that she couldn't feel her club in her grasp, cracking her eyes open to see she was lying down on her stomach on something red-orange and feathery. A quick glance up revealed Elty holding her steady with his paws and looking at her with her bone in his mouth.

Guardia sat up and spat the Plain Seed in her mouth off to the side. She reflexively snatched the bone and pawed at the feathered surface beneath her, before she woozily nursed her head. The bone lizard noticed she still heard the sound of rushing air and heard dull beats from around her, before turning to the Growlithe as he clung tight to the surface they were on.

"Nrgh… Eltenios? Wh-what going on?" Guardia groaned.

"You got wiped by Farn with an Ice Fang and missed out on Inler walking in on us," the Growlithe explained. "Kiran and the others bailed us out with a Petrify Orb, and now we're on our way back to the ship."

Guardia turned her head to see black and orange wings, along with windows and rooftops zipping past. The Cubone stiffened up and realized she wasn't on the ground at all, and looked over to see Calidus' head in front of her. She cast a brief glance downward to see canals and cobbled streets pass underneath, before she reflexively flinched and groaned back at Elty.

"Urgh… if I'd known we were going to fly again, I'd have asked you to wait with reviving me."

Elty looked back, pinning his ears against his body with an unimpressed frown. He supposed Guardia's reaction was better than her screaming bloody murder and whimpering like in the past, but he still had to wonder how on earth the Cubone found it in her to complain about being revived of all things.

"Yeah, well, beggars can't be choosers," he grumbled, prompting Calidus to cut in with a sharp cry.

"Stay alert, you two," the Talonflame insisted. "Team Sentinel is probably plotting an ambush of some sort, so we might be in for a dicey landing."

Guardia looked up and saw the masts of the ships docked in the military harbor a short distance ahead. They were almost in the clear, so whatever Team Sentinel was planning for them, it soon wouldn't matter.

She tensed up as the sound of shattering glass suddenly rang out from behind her. Calidus' eyes widened and he abruptly pulled up, Guardia and Elty clinging on tightly as he did. The pair looked back and saw a hail of sparks as startled yelps rang out. There, much to their alarm, they saw Kline, Percy, Crom, Pladur, and Ander all frozen in place, with a few tumbled over stiffly to the ground.

"Ack!" Guardia cried. "What just-?!"

Calidus wheeled around as he and the others noticed that something was amiss, and hurriedly attempted to go back for their teammates when a quartet of figures in Company garb abruptly rushed out from an alley. There, standing between them and their stricken teammates were Sorge, Aldrich, and Zelle from Team Sentinel, with Ellsberg accompanying them to boot, each of them tensed and ready for battle. The Kommo-o briefly noted the spent shards of the Petrify Orb and grumbled quietly about how he "didn't mean to throw that one" to himself. Zelle kept her attention focused on Team Traveller and Zephyr's members in the interim as she flared her feelers and bared her fangs with a malicious smirk.

"Did you really think it'd be that easy?"

"Move in and secure Subject Red!" Sorge exclaimed.

Everything that happened afterwards went by before Elty, Guardia, or any of their stunned teammates could react. The Kommo-o bellowed and ran in as flecks of green dragonfire began to dance on his claws. The Dragon-Type brought his claw forward with a vicious swipe that caught Kline in the chest, launching him into a nearby wall with a dull thud. Right after he hit it, Aldrich spat up a burst of fiery blue light, with Ellsberg following with a slicing gust of air and Zelle with a glowing pink orb that pinned Kline to the wall and left visible cracks around the site of impact.

The Zygarde fell forward and hit the ground limply. His hound-like body melted into green lights that dispersed, leaving behind his Core lying facedown on the pavestones with a low groan.

"N-Nrgh…"

Sorge lunged for Kline and scooped him up into his claws. The members of Team Traveller and Team Zephyr that were still able to move reflexively ran ahead, with Nida bounding forward at the head of the group, just in time for Zelle to crouch and block their path.

"So you decided to try and stay to help your friends instead of running off," the Sylveon sneered. "How touching… and stupid."

Nida raised her barbs and dug her feet into the cobbles, before bracing herself and shifting her body into a fighting stance.

"Come on everybody, just like we planned!" the Nidorina shouted. "Let's put our strategy to use on these guys!"

At once, Elty charged ahead as Nida swung at Zelle with a Poison Jab, the Growlithe running off towards Sorge as attacks rang out behind him. As the Kommo-o fell back with Kline held firmly in his claw, Elty called out to him while bluish cinders began to build up in his mouth.

"Oi! Over here!"

He hastily spat up a Will-O-Wisp onto Sorge's flank. The Kommo-o grit his teeth and grabbed into his bag, pulling out a glassy orb with what looked like peach clouds swirling inside it.

"You'll have to do better than that, Sorge!"

In a flash, a blur of black and red shot in, lobbing a shadowy ball at his face. The Dragon-Type recoiled as the ball erupted into tendrils that settled over his body with a dark aura, the mark of a successful Embargo. Sorge abruptly lost his grip on the Slumber Orb and watched as it clattered to the ground, still intact from the drop. He grit his teeth and attempted to smash the Orb with by slamming his arm down onto it, when his assailant darted in and kicked the primed Slumber Orb away and into the water of the nearby canal with an audible splash. The Kommo-o's eyes widened, the Dragon-Type growling as he looked down to see the culprit—a most familiar Sneasel—shooting a smarmy smile up at him.

"Didn't anyone tell you that throwing things around was dangerous?" Alice taunted.

Sorge snarled and threw a punch at the harrying Sneasel, who sprang out of the way as Pleo came to her aid with an Extrasensory. At the same time, Kiran hurriedly flew in overhead as Dimitri trailed him from the water, only for Ellsberg to get in their way with a cutting gust. Further aside, a ball of peach-colored mist sailed through the air, zipping along just as Aldrich weaved out of its way. The Noivern looked back at the culprit and saw Guardia had a Slumber Wand at her ready with her teeth grit in frustration. Aldrich huffed, before curling his mouth up into a taunting sneer.

"Did you really think you could take me out with that little Wand of yours?"

"She can with this!"

An orange blur dove in from the side as Calidus barreled into Aldrich with a tackle trailing blue streaks in the air after him. The Noivern shot back from impact and hurriedly beat his wings to regain his balance when another orb of peach-colored mist zipped in and hit him in his face. Aldrich snarled in frustration and frantically tried to bat the mist away, only for his movements to grow sluggish, and the Noivern to slump out of the air and onto the street with an audible thud.

"Grah!"

Meanwhile, Zelle staggered back as Nida struck her from underneath in the chest with a Poison Jab. Nida sprang back and hopped to attention, flicking off some stray poison from her forearm. A faint shiver ran down Zelle's back, which Nida quickly pieced together to be a sign that her foe had been poisoned from her blow. The Nidorina couldn't help but take some satisfaction from it, as she shot a smug smirk over at her foe.

"Poisoning you a second time?" she scoffed. "Guess today's just my lucky day!"

Zelle fought back a wince, narrowing her eyes as she curled her mouth up into a knowing smile.

"Are you sure about that?"

The Sylveon closed her eyes in focus as an orb of blue light built over her head, before it dispelled in pulsing waves with a sound that reminded Nida almost of a bell chiming. At once, Zelle's gait seemed to return to normal, while Aldrich's eyes snapped open and he sprang back into the air. Worse still, an alarmed yelp from Elty turned Nida's attention to Sorge, where she saw his reddened patch of burnt scales had returned back to a normal, healthy gray color. Nida's mouth flopped open, as a sharp huff turned her attention back and saw Zelle staring at her with a small smirk.

"What's wrong? Your strategy not working out?" the Sylveon taunted. "As if we weren't going to learn from your little gimmicks from last time!"

Nida stood there dumbfounded for a brief moment and grit her teeth. They needed to have some sort of breakthrough, and if they couldn't wear Team Sentinel down with ailments like they had originally planned, they needed something else to tip the balance.

The Nidorina noticed her other teammates still stood there petrified behind Sorge, when it occurred to her: if they just gave them so much as a little shove, they would be able to fight alongside them again. Nida crouched, letting out a low growl as poison visibly accumulated along her forepaw and she braced her feet to leap forward.

"You've got another thing coming if you think all we can do is just 'gimmicks'!" she huffed. "Everyone! Go for the others!"

Nida threw her paw forward with another Poison Jab, only for Zelle to spring back and fire a Psychock that knocked Nida off her feet. Further ahead, Elty and Alice attempted to force their way past Sorge, only for the Kommo-o to cut them off by launching the Growlithe into his Sneasel teammate with a Dragon Tail. The lane devolved into a confusing fray, with Dimitri and Kiran knifing through the water and air as Aldrich churned up a Hurricane in the background. At once, Dimitri dove into the canal as Kiran banked sharply away from the vortex. The Swellow then saw Percy and the others cross his line of sight, when a sharp buzz rang out from below him.

"That's as far as you go, Swellow!"

A blue aura suddenly enveloped Kiran's body as he futilely flailed his wings in place against an unseen force, prompting the Swellow to look down and see Ellsberg with his eyes aglow and his right tarsus held out. The Mothim moved his tarsus with a sharp sweep, flinging Kiran into a wall that he bounced off of with a loud squawk, the Swellow barely righting himself in time to avoid crashing to the pavement.

Meanwhile in the water, Dimitri surfaced in the wake of Aldrich's Hurricane. Looking around, he saw Team Sentinel's members were still blocking the approach to their teammates. The Kabutops wondered briefly how he was supposed to sneak past to free them, when he looked at the water around him and his eyes lit up in realization.

"Everyone, brace yourselves!" he cried. "I'll try and hold back, but this is gonna sting!"

Team Traveller's able members hastily obliged and threw parting attacks in their wake, as Team Sentinel attempted to follow to get out of the way of Dimitri's coming Surf, only to be bogged down with incoming blows and missiles. Just then, Dimitri churned up the canal's water, forming a cresting wave that he rode up onto the lane. The Surf crested onto the street, crashing into Team Sentinel's members before it carried on with diminished force into Ander, followed by the rest of his petrified teammates.

Dimitri came to a stop as startled cries rang out. He grimaced briefly, wondering if he'd perhaps overdone his attack when he saw Ander and the others get up, coughing and spitting up water, Ander in particular giving an annoyed shake of his head.

"Ugh, could've done without the Surf there," the Scyther grumbled.

"Let's just make the most of it!" Percy insisted. "Crom! Ander! Give Pladur some cover! We've only got one shot at turning this fight around!"

Pladur launched into a rhythmic, frenetic dance as Ander hastily scarfed down a Quick Seed and Crom stepped forward to spit up a gout of dragonfire to cover his father. Crom's Dragon Rage sailed along, driving Aldrich back as Ander stormed ahead at Zelle with his scythes drawn. The Bug-Type swung at the Sylveon, who hurriedly side-stepped as she moved her feelers about in a circle and spewed out a plume of fire. Ander dove out of the way of the Mystical Fire with a startled buzz as it zipped past him, before steeling himself and circling around his opponent. From above, Aldrich righted himself and narrowed his eyes at Pladur, before firing a fiery blue ray at the Fraxure's position.

"Dad! Look out!"

Pladur wrapped up his Dragon Dance and looked up with a startled yelp as he saw Aldrich's Dragon Pulse bear down on him. The Fraxure flinched and looked away when a violet blur shot in and the hiss of dragonfire rang out. There above him was Percy, his claws spread wide as he held up a barrier of light that blocked the incoming ray. The Gliscor scanned his surroundings as the Dragon Pulse dissipated and saw Sorge slipping off behind Aldrich and Zelle with Kline in his grasp.

Percy grimaced. On the one hand, he doubted Team Sentinel would just back off from Pleo if they didn't have to. On the other hand, if they managed to leave with Kline… No, it was no use thinking about that. He needed to change their script, and fast. His eyes darted over to Alice and Elty as they jumped back from a stray Air Slash from Ellsberg, and after seeing Kiran fly in to help handle Aldrich, he hurriedly dove down and called out to the Sneasel and the Growlithe.

"Alice! Elty! I need your help to get Kline back!" the Gliscor cried.

Elty peered over with a puzzled stare briefly. "What? But what are you-? Yip!"

Before Elty could finish his words, he felt Percy yank him up by the scruff of his neck. Elty flinched briefly and landed onto Percy's back, latching on as he felt the Gliscor spring up and take to the air. The Growlithe tried to catch his breath as the Ground-Type evened out, seeing the canal and narrow street below him along with Alice falling back from Ellsberg as Pleo drove him off with a bolt of electricity. After a brief moment to study the situation below, Percy shook his head and called down to his Sneasel teammate.

"Alice, keep Sorge busy for a moment!" the Gliscor exclaimed.

"Way ahead of ya!" the Sneasel replied.

Alice ran ahead, springing up over an incoming Moonblast and running along the wall of a nearby building for a few steps. Before her momentum gave out, she leapt and jumped behind Sorge, spitting up an icy wind at his back. The Kommo-o winced as his joints numbed up from the wind's chill, whirling about with a sharp glare to face the Sneasel. Undeterred, Alice shot an impish grin up at the dragon as she motioned tauntingly for her foe to come near.

"Never pegged you as the type to just run from a fight, Sorge!"

Sorge gritted his teeth and pulled back a fist that trailed streaks of green light about his knuckles, letting his voice come out in a low, dangerous growl.

"Hrmph, you really have learned nothing over the years!"

Sorge lunged ahead with a Drain Punch, only for his blow to miss as Alice sprang aside, taking the time to pull an eyelid down and stick out her tongue.

"Look who's talking here!" she taunted. "By the way, you should look behind you!"

Sorge ignored Alice and readied another Drain Punch, when Percy suddenly shot in and slammed into the dragon's back from above with a diving tackle that left afterimages in its wake. The Kommo-o pitched forward and tried to break his fall with his free claw, only to slip off the paving stones' wet surface and hit the ground on his belly. Kline bounced from his grasp, prompting Elty to quickly pounce on the fainted Zygarde and throw him onto his back.

"Gotcha!"

Elty hurriedly brought Kline back to Nida's side as she fished through her bag and pulled out a Tiny Reviver Seed. She wasn't sure how Kline consumed seeds without a mouth, but figured that moving it below his snout was as good a place as any to start. After a few frantic prods, she felt warmth and pulled her paw back as green light bathed the seed and pulled it against Kline's body. … Was that how he 'ate' things?

The light dissipated as Kline's eye flickered open and a Plain Seed fell to the ground, the Zygarde uneasily rising onto his tail and looking about wearily.

"Nrgh… what happened?"

"You got knocked out," Elty said. "Turns out that Team Sentinel was planning an ambush after all."

Kline looked about just a set of shockwaves in the air zipped past and hit the canal's water with a loud splash, making him stiffen up and see Team Sentinel regroup and try to press Team Traveller and Team Zephyr's members. The Zygarde pivoted on his tail, looking back to Elty with a nod and low grunt.

"Right," he replied. "Then let's not waste any time here!"

Kline braced himself as his body came alight with a green glow, and flecks of green light converged on him from every direction. From up ahead, Zelle spotted the swirling green lights as Kline's form grew and began to transform back into a hound-like shape, prompting her to fan out her feelers with a sharp hiss.

"Oh no you don't!"

The Sylveon sprang forward as pinkish light built up in front of her, before throwing it at the Zygarde in an undulating wave. Alice and Percy hastily zipped in, forming barriers of light that stopped the Dazzling Gleam and directed it around Kline as they skidded back. The Protects held, and in a few brief moments, the green lights subsided as Kline returned to his canine Forme, digging his paws in before he threw his head back and bellowed out to his teammates.

"Now! Press your advantage!"

One after the other, Team Traveller and Team Zephyr's members threw their blows and missiles forward. Calidus dove ahead with a Brave Bird, Kiran spread his wings for a Wing Attack, and Elty lunged ahead with a fiery somersault. Off by the water, Dimitri drove a scythe into the pavement. A loosened chunk of stone shot up afterwards, before Dimitri abruptly swept his other scythe forward as the stone followed its trail and launched ahead at Ellsberg, smacking the Mothim out of the air. Sorge turned his head briefly as Ellsberg crash-landed onto the ground, before he once again noticed green light coming from Kline's body. There he saw the Zygarde growling, with his dog-like body having become wreathed in a green aura that gave off a glowing light.

"You thought you could take us down easily, didn't you?" Kline scoffed. "Well, let us show you just how wrong you were!"

Kline sprang up and brought his paws downwards, churning the ground underfoot as the pavement cracked around a string of green lights that snaked their way for Sorge and Zelle. The pair's eyes widened briefly, before a string of pillars of brilliant green light shot up as the ground erupted around them. Pleo and his companions flinched at the sound of rending earth and heavy stone falling into water, watching as a great cloud of dust suddenly filled the street.

Team Traveller and the rest of Team Zephyr watched as the dust settled, revealing a stretch of cracked and broken pavement. The entire left side of the street was half-sunken in the canal, with Sorge and Zelle lying on the ground. Then, much to everyone's horrified astonishment, the pair righted themselves and dusted themselves off, Sorge brushing a bit of dirt off his scales as he narrowed his eyes with a low growl and raised his voice to call out to his teammates.

"Aldrich, Zelle! Throw up some cover!"

Sorge entered into the frenzied motions of a Dragon Dance as Aldrich and Zelle stepped to the front of their group. Aldrich spread his wings and Zelle her feelers, throwing up a pair of overlapping barriers of light—the signature sign of freshly-cast Protects—just in time to cut off a wave of Team Traveller and Team Zephyr's attacks. The group grimaced, watching as their blows and missiles bounced off the barriers. Undeterred, Kline narrowed his eyes and turned to his allies with a sharp cry.

"Everyone! Keep your fire focused on their Protects and pin them down together!" the Zygarde shouted.

"Huh?!" Nida exclaimed, shooting a puzzled stare back. "But our attacks won't do anything to them like-!"

"Just trust me on this!"

Nida looked at the Protects, before shooting an Ice Beam forward. Guardia joined in and attempted to flank Team Sentinel from the side with a Bonemerang, Ander doing the same with a hack with his scythes. Some of their attacks landed against the Protects, others zipped just past their edges. A few of the attacks made Aldrich and Zelle stumble back, but the barriers still held strong, while Sorge and Ellsberg were driven ever closer behind the Noivern and Sylveon to maintain cover. From behind his shield, Sorge let out a sharp scoff, readying his claws as he stared back through the barrier, clearly preparing himself to lunge forward once it lifted.

"Do you really expect us to be impressed with a little show like that?" the Kommo-o growled.

"No, but you might be by this!" Kline shot back, before turning over to Pleo.

"Pleo! Get a Thunderbolt ready! You'll know where to aim when you see it!"

Pleo braced himself and focused on his Zygarde teammate, wondering what he was planning. All of a sudden, he felt a sharp pat and saw his body get overtaken by a bluish aura, with a similar one settling over Kline's body. A brief glance down revealed Elty to be at their sides, as the Growlithe looked up with a sharp yip.

"Here! Whatever you're up to, you could use a boost for it!"

Kline crouched as the Helping Hand's blue aura still radiated off his body, before spewing out a torrent of violet sludge that hit the ground and began to pile up into a wave. As the Sludge Wave began to crest, Pleo's eyes lit up in realization of Kline's words.

"Ah! That's it!"

At once, Pleo spread his wings and shot out a bolt of electricity at the poisonous wave, filling its surface with crackling static as it bore down on Aldrich and Zelle.

The Noivern and Sylveon held firm as the wave approached, only for their eyes to widen as the lights of their Protects abruptly dimmed. The electrified Sludge Wave overtook them and carried on into Sorge and Ellsberg, as the sound of sharp cries filled the air. Nida looked on in astonishment as the wave swept the four down before it subsided, seeing Ellsberg limply lying on the ground as Zelle and Aldrich were slower to rise than they'd been after earlier attacks. Even Sorge seemed to be struggling, as the Kommo-o attempted to get up from his knees and back onto his feet, only for him to grimace and freeze after his limbs locked up and static danced on his scales.

"Ah! We're finally getting the upper hand!" Nida cried. "Come on! While they're still-!"

Before Nida could finish her statement, she was forced to hastily leap to the side as Aldrich spat up a beam of dragonfire that just missed her feet. A quick glance over revealed the Noivern flicking some poisonous sludge off his wings with a disgusted snarl and a fierce glare, before turning his head towards his Sylveon teammate with an agitated huff.

"Grr… genoeg!" he spat. "Zelle! Hop on!"

Zelle sprang onto Aldrich's back at once, before the Noivern took to the air as Nida and her companions tried to cut them off. Sorge hurriedly stepped in with a rattle of his scales that sent shockwaves into the air and drove Team Traveller and Team Zephyr's members back. After a moment to regain their bearings, they looked up and saw Aldrich further down the street, wheeling around with his fangs bared.

The Noivern beat his wings together and brought together an overpowering, swirling gale that flew down the canal and surrounding streets. From her place on her teammate's back, Zelle spread her feelers as a halo of sky-blue light formed between them. The light abruptly gathered into a ball, the air in front of her swirling and forming a second gale that she flung forward at Aldrich's Hurricane. As the two vortexes collided with each other, they combined and grew large enough to fill the entire space along the canal, making Percy's eyes widen with alarm as he called out to his allies.

"Quick! Get up those Protects-!"

But it was too late. The enlarged Hurricane picked up more speed than expected, and overran the Gliscor before he could finish putting up his barrier of light. From the middle of the group, Crom looked over at Nida as she stared on blankly, trying to dive for her when the raging winds overtook him and blew him into a wall. The next thing Crom remembered was the winds howling above him and buffeting his scales. The winds finally cleared and he flopped forward onto the pavement, feeling aches and stinging pains racking his body and hearing disoriented cries all about him.

"N-Ngh…"

Crom staggered up panting, the world spinning around him. As he struggled to piece together his surroundings, he could make out damaged facades from the surrounding buildings with torn-up shutters and blown-in windows. A look around revealed Alice, Elty, and Kiran to all be visibly tottering in disoriented dazes, with other members of his and Percy's team hurrying up to try and aid each other. The Druddigon couldn't get a good view of where Aldrich and Zelle were, but caught the sight of Sorge eating a Lum Berry and blanched, realizing the effects of Alice's earlier Embargo had worn off.

For a brief moment, Crom stood there at a loss at the confusion all around him. It was then that his eyes came across a blue lump lying up against a damaged doorway, the color draining from his face as he saw it was…

"Nida!"

Crom's eyes shrank to pins as he realized that his attempts to shield Nida had come too late. The Druddigon started to run ahead, only to bump into a large, bulky creature, and see Ander had stepped out in front of him in a tottering daze. The Dragon-Type's eyes darted between the Marked Scyther and his Nidorina companion, before realizing Ander was much closer to him, and that if she were still on her feet, Nida surely wouldn't want him to pass over Ander just to come to her aid. Crom stopped and felt around for a Lum Berry in his bag as he waved down the Bug-Type with his free claw.

"Ah! Ander! Hang in there!" the dragon insisted. "I can heal-!"

A sudden, icy flechette zipped in, catching Ander in the side of his head. The Scyther crumpled up and hit the ground, leaving Crom staring in shock. As the Druddigon whirled around he saw much to his astonishment a black-and-red blur dart in and come to a crouching stop. The feathers, the fur, those awful, awful claws… Th-that was-!

"K-Ketu?!"

The Weavile tauntingly waved a claw in reply, before curling up his mouth into a devious smirk.

"Did you miss me?" Ketu jeered. "Sorry to keep you waiting, but I had an errand to take care of on that ship of yours. Not that that blue Ledger you kept under the floorboards was very hard to find."

Crom's jaw flopped open and he felt the breath get taken out of him. His teammates were in a similar state of shock as the full weight of the Weavile's words sank in. H-He had their Ledger?!

"H-Huh?!"

Panicked questions swirled through the group's mind, only to be silenced by Zelle letting out loud, derisive laughter. The lot stared at the Sylveon briefly, before she quieted and turned her face up with a mocking sneer.

"Did you really think that we didn't know about your Ledger? That I told you about the Vault from the goodness of my heart?" Zelle scoffed. "No, it was because we wanted a way to be able to control your moves and step in when it was most advantageous for us!"

Pleo looked up at the sky above the military harbor and saw distant shapes and flashes of light zipping around it. He grimaced, realizing the Siglo Swellow was in trouble right now. Was that also Ketu's doing? If so, was there anything about their plan that Team Sentinel hadn't figured out?

"Part of me was worried you'd get caught rooting through the Academy the way you did, but looks like I was right to not underestimate you, Kline," Sorge said. "I knew we could count on you to fetch that Ledger for us, and there's nothing you can do to win right now. Even if you somehow get away, you can't use those Ledgers against the Company if we have any of them."

Pleo looked over to Kline, who seemed to recoil and look much as if he'd suddenly been backed into a corner. His teammates didn't seem much better. The young Lugia quietly gulped, looking to his companions for any indication of how they could turn their circumstances around when he was cut off by a sharp harrumph, as Aldrich flew back in the air and scowled down.

"But enough talking," the Noivern snarled. "It's time to take that other Ledger you just stole and put you down for the count."

Aldrich fired a Boomburst at the team, with Sorge joining in with Clanging Scales, Ketu an Icy Wind, and Zelle throwing in another Dazzling Gleam. This time, Percy and Calidus were able to ready their Protects in time, the barriers of light blunting their attacks as Team Traveller and Team Zephyr's members ran for the safe area behind their impromptu shelter.

The din of battle proved to be too much for their less lucid members, as in his confusion, Elty misjudged where the barriers' cover ended and wandered out into the hail of attacks, getting swept off his feet with a sharp yelp and crumpling to the ground limply. Kiran turned his head in a daze at the Fire-Type's cry, fighting with his wings as he lurched in the air and looked down to see a black-and-red blur knifing towards Elty. The Swellow squawked in alarm as he realized that that must surely be Ketu moving in to attack him while he was down.

"Nrgh… hang on Elty!" Kiran cried. "I've got you!"

Kiran swooped down and rammed the figure with a spread-winged tackle that launched it back with a sharp yowl. The Swellow grinned for a moment, only for a moment of lucidity to reveal Alice getting up wincing in pain. From further off, Ketu looked on alongside his companions and gave an unimpressed scoff, before turning towards Ellsberg's fainted body behind them.

"Cover me," the Weavile said. "Gonna patch up a friend."

Ketu ducked back and made his way for the felled Mothim in the background. Percy looked on and grimaced, hurriedly dodging an incoming Moonblast when he glided up and retreated beside Kline as Team Traveller's more able members desperately filled the air with attacks to try and drive Team Sentinel's members away.

"Kl-Kline?" Percy stammered. "What do we do?"

Kline stared ahead blankly as his eyes drifted down towards the ground. Just what could they do? Half their team was incapacitated, and with the half that was still standing, they had no hope of defeating Team Sentinel or even fending them off. Not even his power would make a difference in this situation!

"Your current power, Kline. You still have more."

Kline sidestepped a Dragon Pulse as he heard the voice reverberate through his mind. That was Micky! Right, he was also seeing this through their Cells. Then by more power, he meant…

No. Absolutely not. He couldn't use that. Not here in the middle of the Company's capital where the whole world would see it after a decade of drifting from one island to the next struggling to stay hidden.

Nerea's words replayed in his mind: how she kept pressing him on whether or not he'd be willing to come and help everyone in person. He snapped to attention at the sound of the battle raging about him, where he saw Percy forming another Protect in front of him as he struggled to keep it up.

Everybody was risking everything for him and Pleo at the moment. He was a Protector, and with it came the duty to be there for others. Even if it was at his own expense.

As he dug his paws into the ground, right there, right then, Kline knew exactly what his teammates needed from him.

"… Pierce, I'm going to do the only thing I can do right now," he said. "Just… please, make the most of it."

The Zygarde threw his head back as all of a sudden, a thick hail of green lights converged in every direction, painting the sky aglow much as if they were trails from smoldering fireworks. Percy skidded back as his Protect gave out and went wide-eyed for a moment along with the rest of the group.

"Kline, wacht!"

"That's enough from you!"

A bellowing roar filled the air as Sorge barreled ahead at blistering speed, his teeth grit and his claws trailing flecks of dragonfire. A sudden Whirlwind swept over him and forced him to wedge his claws into the gaps between the paving stones for traction. The Kommo-o looked up to see Pleo attempting to blow him away, and snarled as the lights began to gather around Kline and settle into a towering form. Sorge struggled forward, only for Guardia to lob a whitish orb with what looked like swirling clouds inside. The Blowback Orb shattered on the ground right in front of Sorge, sending him tumbling back from an overpowering gust of wind that spewed out from its remains.

Crom looked on in awe from his place in the torn-up street, when his eyes came across Aldrich diving from above, with dragonfire swirling in his mouth.

"Ah! Up there!" Crom shouted. "Everyone, train your fire on Aldrich's attack!"

In a flash, Aldrich spat up his Dragon Pulse. Without thinking, Crom spewed up a Dragon Rage, while Pladur fired a Dragon Pulse of his own at the Noivern's incoming attack. The pair's dragonfire careened into the fiery ray, kicking up a plume of smoke. As it settled, they looked back at Kline. There, instead of seeing the hound who'd accompanied them all this time, there was a towering green-and-black serpent with what looked like a set of five tendrils coming from the back of his neck.

Guardia stared up with her mouth hanging open. So this was Zygarde's power. The one that he'd been trying to keep away from Elilan and others who would use it for their own purposes. And with so many lights that had come in, he'd surely exposed it to all of Vollezee—the Company's biggest colony—to help them.

"Kline…" she whispered.

"What on earth is going on over there?!"

Aldrich's ears twitched and the Noivern turned and spotted a Hatterene at the mouth of an intersecting street to their right with a small crowd gathering around him. At once, his eyes widened as he looked back at Kline's new Forme, and then again at the crowd. The Noivern's mouth fell open in stunned shock, as the bat motioned over at the crowd with an alarmed cry.

"Ack! Sorge!"

The rest of Team Sentinel followed Aldrich's gaze and grimaced as Team Traveller and their allies followed along and stared back at the gathering onlookers, as Kline flared his tendrils with a derisive scoff.

"What's the matter, Aldrich? Too much attention for your liking?" the Zygarde asked. "Well, I for one say it's time we brought our fight out into the open!"

Kline lowered his head to the ground and rushed down the length of the street in the blink of an eye, before coming to a stop right in front of the crowd. The Pokémon recoiled and hurriedly fell back as the serpent reared up, startled cries beginning to fill the air.

"A-Ack!"

"Wh-What is that thing?!"

A Fuecoco in the crowd with a dark blotch in the shape of a five-tailed comet looked up and stumbled back, stammering in a gibbering panic as she saw the great serpent before her and realized that the hulking figure was none other than a…

"D-Demon! Demon! Everybody run for your lives!"

The Fire-type turned and ran off screaming into a small square located behind her, when the sound of smashing glass rang out and a flash of light pulsed down the side street along with the sound of attacks deflecting off Protects. Kline looked over and saw Team Traveller's members running in carrying their wounded members with them. Stomping footsteps followed afterwards as Sorge and the rest of Team Sentinel approached, still pawing at their eyes from the Luminous Orb's effects as the Kommo-o shot a livid scowl at the Zygarde.

"You idiot," Sorge growled. "Do you realize what you've done by revealing yourself like this?!"

"I do. And I'm not afraid of what will happen afterwards," Kline said, leaning his head forward. "I've been hiding from you for far too long, and I'll do whatever it takes to stop you or anyone else from using Pokémon like us as your tools, even if it means bringing the entire Cradle down on me."

Team Traveller watched as light began to gather about Kline's body and took off running for the Zygarde's side, carrying their wounded teammates along the best they could. As they passed, they watched as Kline shot a hail of green, arrow-like lights down the side street at Team Sentinel, where they exploded on impact.

Clouds of smoke and fragments of wood and stone flew about as Aldrich and a recently revived Ellsberg plummeted to the ground. The crowd erupted into frightened cries and screams, as the gathering onlookers hastily turned and fled from the scene while guards at the fringes of the square began to point out their position. Team Traveller and Team Zephyr hurriedly pulled their wounded into a shopfront just right of the side street's intersection with the square and rifled through their bags for seeds and berries to heal them. In the midst of it, Pleo briefly caught a glimpse of Team Sentinel's members picking themselves up amidst the shattered side street and approaching with low growls.

They didn't have much time, so it was best to make the most of it. Pleo quickly slipped a Reviver Seed into Ander's mouth as the Scyther began to stir. The Bug-Type let out a woozy groan as he raised his head wearily to try and make sense of his surroundings.

"Whuh…? What's going-?"

A loud crash and jolt rang out and startled the Marked Scyther to attention, as he saw the front wall of a building had fallen into the side street they came from and spilled into the neighboring canal. The Scyther looked up and his eyes shrank to pins. There at the mouth of the intersection, coiled and ready to strike, was a great green-and-black serpent, which he recognized as the all-seeing demon his scriptures had spoken of, in—fresh in the middle of laying waste to his surroundings.

"A-AAAAH!"

Ander screamed and desperately scrambled away from Kline, Pleo looking at him with a worried grimace. That fear, why it was just like the fear Ander had of him when they first met on Tromba! Kline reared up, casting a second Thousand Arrows into the air and off in the direction of the military harbor as Ander cringed with a low whimper. The sound of distant crashes and shouts ringing through the air turned the young Lugia's attention towards the military harbor, where he caught sight of Pokémon in lavender scarves hurriedly retreating from smoke curling up further within where Kline's most recent attack had landed.

A loud crash filled the air and made Pleo flinch as he turned and saw the form of a schooner with Company sails pockmarked with small holes and burn marks clip a wooden blockade at the entrance that cut gouges into the hull above the waterline and barge out into the main canal, sideswiping and overturning a small skiff in the process. T-That was the Siglo Swellow!

The Lugia looked back at Kline and watched the serpent slither out of the path of a Moonblast as Percy and his teammates lobbed seeds and attacks at Team Sentinel to keep them at bay. Pleo grimaced and wondered to himself how the five could still be giving them so much trouble, when he suddenly felt a heavy object prod against him, and looked over to see Alice all but shoving the red Ledger into his chest.

"Take the Ledger and get out of here!" the Sneasel cried. "We'll keep Team Sentinel busy!"

"B-But what about you and Kline?" Pleo asked. "A-And the Ledger that Team Sentinel stole!"

The sound of shifting rubble turned Pleo's attention to the direction of the side street they had come from. There, much to his alarm, the Lugia saw most of Team Sentinel's members fatigued but still advancing. Around them, he began to see various guards prowling towards him and his teammates, making the young Lugia blanch and grimace. Percy braced himself and held his claws open at the ready, as he looked back at Pleo.

"You won't have any ledgers if you keep hanging around at this rate! And don't worry about us," the Gliscor insisted. "We've been keeping them on their toes for almost ten years now, so what's one more battle?"

Team Traveller's members hesitated and traded glances between the ship and Team Zephyr's members, paralyzed with indecision. A sharp cry snapped them back to attention as they spotted Calidus in the air, calling out as he passed overhead.

"It's now or never for you!" the Talonflame shouted. "We'll try and draw them away from the harbor, but we're going to have our wings full here!"

Team Traveller watched as Team Zephyr's members threw attacks back at Team Sentinel's position. Percy climbed in the air as ice built around his mouth, while Kline readied another Land's Wrath. Sorge and Aldrich quickly cast a pair of Protects for their teammates, the walls of light forming just as the earth erupted in front of them. Pleo looked off at the Siglo Swellow as it lurched further down the canal, before he threw the red tome into his bag and took wing. The Lugia lowered his head as he flew along, his companions darting after him, fighting against their wounds as Pleo fought back a choking croak from his throat.

"I-I'm sorry."

From behind Sorge's barrier, Zelle spotted Pleo and his teammates fleeing after the Siglo Swellow and narrowed her eyes, turning up to Sorge as the pink arc of a Psycho Cut dashed against his barrier.

"Sorge, do we go after them?"

Sorge glanced after the lot as his barrier began to fade. Just getting the Ledger, Kline, and Pleo altogether had been the lucky break of a lifetime, and it bothered him to think that they wouldn't be able to get them all.

The Protect gave out after Calidus zipped in with an aerial tackle that trailed blue streaks and sent Sorge skidding back. The Kommo-o steadied himself, looking over at Team Zephyr's members before he grit his teeth and flashed his claws. Kline wasn't to be underestimated in this Forme, especially with his friends fighting at his side, and attempting to split up to try and capture all of their initial goals just increased the odds that they'd get none of them. They'd surely have more chances at getting at Pleo later.

Perhaps sooner than they thought. After all, there was a set of sea walls in the lagoon that he and his ship would have to try and fight their way through.

"Leave them!" the Kommo-o ordered. "Capturing Subject Red is more important right now!"

Team Traveller's members fled as fast as their limbs could carry them for the departing ship as the sound of fighting rang out behind them. As they neared, they could see the Siglo Swellow's escorts massed in the central canal and the air above it. A few of them—such as the Mantine who'd ferried them to shore at Pioppo—stopped briefly to let Crom and others Kiran and Dimitri couldn't carry clamber aboard. Crom hopped aboard the Mantine without thinking, the churning water splashing against his scales as they made it to the side of the ship where rope netting had been thrown over the side for them. The Druddigon desperately climbed up, hearing his teammates pant as they did the same with Kiran settling on the deck with Elty and calling for help to tend to him. As Crom made it to the top of the deck, he lost his grip and lurched back towards the open air.

"A-Ah!"

A set of red claws suddenly shot in, Crom looking up to see Pladur leaning over the railing and grabbing onto him.

"I've got you!" his father cried. "Quick, give me your other claw!"

Crom hurriedly complied as Pladur took his other claw, the Fraxure pulling along with a Golduck and a Bayleef to hoist the Druddigon over the railing as the ship continued to lurch forward. Crom hit the deck, lying against the planks as his heart pounded in his chest. After a moment to steel his nerves, he got up and saw the last few members of his team make their way up. A quick headcount revealed that everyone was present as Beatrix flitted over and sized them up, only to instantly trail off.

"Wait, where is Team Zephyr?" she asked.

"Th-They insisted we go on without them," Pladur said. "We wouldn't have made it back here otherwise."

The Illumise captain blanched a moment at the Fraxure's words, looking at the raging battle behind the stern with a quiet grimace as Vicente prodded at her worriedly.

"Captain, I don't think we have much of a choice," the Hitmontop said. "If it weren't for those green arrow things that suddenly came in and tore up the docks, we wouldn't have made it out of the harbor ourselves. We shouldn't push our luck any further here."

Beatrix flitted in place and paused for a moment, before shaking her head and turning to bark out at the nearby sailors.

"Someone get some Oran Berries!" she exclaimed. "It's going to be a hard slog out, and we need everyone we can back on their feet!"

The sailors answered with overhasty 'ayes', before hurrying off and ducking below deck in search of Oran Berries and other healing items for their injured comrades. As the deck buzzed with confusion, Pleo waddled over to the railing and looked out as he could spot lavender-scarved figures trailing after them from the canal, its banks, and the air behind them. He looked off further as his teammates neared him, seeing dust and smoke curl up from the distance. The Lugia caught a brief glance of Kline's serpentine form, along with attacks zipping back and forth going further into the city. Pleo froze afterwards, before drooping his head and wings with a low murmur.

"Kline…"

Crom walked up beside Pleo, and patted his shoulder, trying to force a brave face to reassure him.

"He did his part, Pleo," the Druddigon said. "Now it's our turn."

A Thunderbolt suddenly zipped in and struck the ship right below the railing, making Pleo and his teammates jump back with sharp yelps. Pleo righted himself as attacks from other guards thickened in the air, the young Lugia scurrying off alongside his teammates to take their places alongside the Siglo Swellow's defenders as the schooner tore along desperately for the blue lagoon just off in the distance.



Author's Notes:

- Espera - Spanish: "Hold on" / "Wait"
- wacht - Dutch: "wait"
 
Chapter 91b: At Great Cost, Part 2

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. quilava-fobbie
  6. sneasel-kate
  7. heliolisk-fobbie
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The normal hustle and bustle of the stretch of Vollezee's lagoon just outside of the southern exit of Canalhouse City's central canal came to a splashing halt. Its normal rhythms were upended as the Siglo Swellow barreled out into the open water, pushed along by currents from its escorts in the air and sea. Swimmers hurriedly ducked out of the way as the schooner clipped a few unfortunate watercraft in its path, with barks arising from the water as a few guards and incensed bystanders lobbed attacks after the fleeing ship. Everyone who was able had come to the ship's aid, even if a few needed a hasty rousing with Reviver Seeds.

On the stern, Team Traveller braced themselves as Crom looked off behind them, noticing the attacks from their pursuers growing sparser and more erratic. All the while, the tall houses and spires of Canalhouse City in sight began to shrink as they hit the open water. The Druddigon let his vision linger a moment as a moment of calm began to settle in amid the booms and shouts in the background, before he flopped down on the deck with a sigh of relief.

"Whew, for a second I didn't think we were going to make it," Crom said. He looked up, just in time to see Ander shoot an askew glance back at him, before the Scyther peered off at the distance with a visible grimace.

"Er… we didn't make it," Ander insisted. "Or at least, not yet."

Ander raised a scythe and motioned off ahead of the ship. There, past the lavender sails hanging from the mast, were the tall, red-brick sea walls that had been built on the barrier islands dividing Canalhouse City and its lagoon from the Cradle's high seas. Crom and his other teammates blanched a moment, as Elty spluttered and yelped out of alarm.

"Ch-Chyba żartujesz! How are we supposed to make it past that?!" the Growlithe exclaimed.

Nobody had a good answer to Elty's question. The walls were strong, and if they were anything like Tidemill City's, they were staffed with fierce guards with seafire at the ready. It had already taken a stroke of good fortune for them to slip away from such defenses last time… a thought that made their stomachs knot with unease and their minds fill with uncomfortable worries about whether they'd be able to escape an even tighter net around them.

"Fear not! You won't be facing those ramparts alone!" a voice squawked. "Trizano, the Valiant Knight Skarmory, is here to help!"

Elty and the others turned their heads, and much to their surprise, saw Trizano approaching along the deck. Crom blinked in astonishment at the Skarmory's appearance, as he stumbled over his words with a start.

"T-Trizano?! What are you doing here?!" the Druddigon cried. "I thought you still couldn't see!"

The Skarmory faltered briefly and a flash of hesitation came over his eyes. It faded almost as quickly as it came, before rustling his metallic feathers and shaking his head back.

"I can see shapes and foes right in front of me," Trizano replied. "Pokémon have stood and fought their ground with less. What sort of teammate would I be to let that stop me from a fight where all wings are needed on deck?"

Crom and his companions looked on as Trizano spread his wings and readied for battle alongside them. Something about the Skarmory's bravery was infectious, since with his eager determination, the lot suddenly felt less unprepared for the battle ahead of them.

"R-Right! We can't just give in here!" the Druddigon insisted. "If we all work together, I'm sure we can-!"

"There! Don't let them get away!"

Crom and his teammates turned their heads towards the water behind them as an awful sound rang out and scrawls of pinkish light suddenly zipped in overhead. Much to their alarm, they saw a purple-headed Slowking at the head of a party of guards trailing the ship. The air grew thick from attacks flying back and forth, when all of a sudden, a spray of attacks shot up from below the water, knocking back a Gorebyss and a Prinplup in lavender scarves. The eyes on the Slowking's head shell abruptly widened, when the form of a Dragalge with a red and blue belt about his body abruptly surfaced in front of him, dragonfire dancing around the tip of his snout.

"Uvidimsja, mudak!"

Viktor disgorged a Dragon Pulse square in the Slowking's face and sent him pinwheeling back in the water. The rest of the formation of guards froze briefly, as other Pokémon with the same-colored belts abruptly surfaced and formed a large wave in the water about them. The Dragalge and his allies rode the Surf forward, bringing it down on the guards and washing them away with sharp cries and yelps. The Siglo Swellow lurched from the wave's ripples, as its swimmers hastily clung to the sides of the ship to avoid being pushed away from it while most Pokémon on the deck crouched to avoid losing their footing.

As the ship evened out, Crom looked down, where the water was suddenly alive with Pokémon in blue and red belts converging in tight formation, with none other than Viktor and Nerea alongside them. The Dragalge of the pair shook his head, before shooting a sideways scowl up at the Druddigon and his companions.

"You airbreathers are really not making this easy, you know that?"

"Enough, Viktor. We always knew this was potentially going to be a difficult escape," Nerea insisted. "Just stay alert, since I doubt the Company wouldn't have some sort of trump card…"

BLAM!

Sharp blasts rang out, as small orbs zipped through the air. A couple deckhands were abruptly swallowed up in light and fell to the wood in what quickly became apparent to be Apricorns freshly shot out from cannons. Pleo and his companions turned as the deck descended into chaos, with some sailors scurrying for cover while others attempted to help free their trapped companions.

And then they saw it.

Off on the starboard side with cannons trained was a galleon in Company colors, coming straight at them. The sea and air about it were filled with accompanying fliers and swimmers, while there at its prow was none other than its Samurott captain, crouched and ready to spring forward.

"Th-That's Lyn!" Pleo yelped. "Did he know we were coming?!"

Lyn leapt forward and dove into the water, the cannons on the Argent Aviso's deck firing again as the Siglo Swellow's defenders hurriedly formed a wall of Protects to deflect the incoming projectiles. In the water, Nerea grimaced at the sight for a moment, before she turned to Viktor and motioned off at Lyn and his approaching underlings with a sharp cry.

"Viktor, we can't let him reach this ship!"

The Dragalge grunted in affirmation, before propping himself up over the water as he called out to his fellow clansmons.

"You heard her! Everyone, engage those square-necks!"

Viktor sliced forward in the water, followed by other Pokémon from the Khranitel Rod as they bellowed out battle cries and swam in to intercept Lyn's underlings. They spewed jets of water and various beams as the air ran thick with attacks flying about between both sides. Other members of the ocean clan hung closer to the hull, falling in line to aid the Siglo Swellow's escorts, when a deafening roar suddenly rang out from the other side of the ship.

"GRAAAAAAWR!"

The Siglo Swellow abruptly lurched as a plume of water erupted from the port side of the bow. Pleo and his companions turned their heads and at once felt the color drain out of their faces. There, rearing up with seawater cascading down his scales, was a Gyarados at the head of a party of Company swimmers that had just surfaced from deeper in the lagoon's water, while a group of fliers in matching scarves followed in from overhead. Startled shouts and cries went about the ship and its escorts as they quickly realized from the Gyarados' scarf that that was none other than Administrator Zorn. The sea serpent flashed his fangs as he let out a loud, bloodcurdling growl.

"Going somewhere?!" the Gyarados snarled. "If you think that you can just scurry away from us like a bunch of Wimpod, you're sorely mistaken!"

No sooner than the moment Zorn finished his bellowing entrance did the Company Pokémon with him start to throw attacks at the Siglo Swellow. The sea and air escorts hastily fell back, frantically putting up their barriers in front of the hull just after a few pockmarks had been punched into it not far above the waterline.

From their place on the stern, Team Traveller felt the Siglo Swellow grind to a halt as it fought churning waters from all sides and no longer had the aid of friendly currents to push it forward. Off at the starboard side, Lyn knifed through the water at the head of a wedge-shaped formation, charging close enough to the ship for them to see the reds of his eyes.

At the last second, a sudden deluge of water slammed into the Samurott's formation, driving its ranks and its leader back. The Commissioner steadied himself and fought to keep his place in the water as he saw Nerea and a number of Pokémon from the Khranitel Rod pelting them with attacks. For a brief moment, Nerea turned her head back, waving hurriedly to Team Traveller on the stern.

"We'll hold them off!" the Manaphy cried. "Just help your crewmates clear a way forward for your ship!"

Droplets of water fell from the sky as low, darkened clouds formed over the Siglo Swellow. Back on the ship's port side, Team Traveller hurried off to make good on Nerea's urgings and ran down to the main deck and caught a glimpse of a few Pokémon in the water rearing up and swaying and twirling about rhythmically as rain began to pour from the sky. Much to their concern, the localized downpour seemed to make the Pokémon in the lagoon's water visibly more energetic. Not least of all the Gyarados Administrator among them, who gave a toothy sneer at the Pokémon aboard the ship.

"Let me show you just what you've gotten yourselves into!"

Water began to build up at the back of Zorn's throat, as the defenders on the deck cried out and hurriedly threw up an array of Protects. As soon as their barriers went up, the Gyarados disgorged a massive torrent of water that he swept from left to right along the length of the ship. The Hydro Pump came fierce and forceful, enough so that Team Traveller had to come and help steady a few defenders like an Unfezant and an Elgyem who almost lost their balance while holding their Protects from the sheer force of Zorn's attack.

The defenders' Protects held enough to save the masts from the Administrator's onslaught, but the torrent was still forceful enough to dislodge chunks of unprotected wood from the upper part of the ship. Just past the forward mast, a Simisage lost his footing with his barrier, leaving the jet of water to sail on and mow down an unfortunate Bergmite and Nosepass who both hit the deck in a daze. After his Hydro Pump ebbed away, Zorn slunk deeper into the water, leaving Pleo panting in frightened shock as he wondered to himself how they were even supposed to win this battle.

Were it a straight fight on land, they could maneuver around Zorn. But they were in the sea, in the Gyarados' native domain, and on a ship that could be crippled after enough well-placed attacks of that sort on the wrong places. The young Lugia wavered a moment when he heard the clatter of hooves against the deck's wood and looked to his right to see the Zebstrika from the former pirates approach the railing, flashing a determined grin as sparks danced on his hide.

"Ha! What a bunch of idiots!" the Zebstrika sneered. "This weather's perfect for lighting up swimmers like that Gyarados! If you all can keep his buddies busy, me and the other zappers on-deck can fry him!"

The port side of the Siglo Swellow suddenly came alive with a hail of attacks. Some, like a barrage of rocks from Dimitri, were aimed at the swimmers about Zorn, while others were trained at the fliers above him. The air grew thick with fliers breaking off to chase one another, prompting Pleo to beat out his wings to try and join them, only to be forced to dive for cover from an incoming spray of black orbs. He crouched there panting briefly, when a sharp cry rang out and a Murkrow spiraled out of the air and into the water from a spread-winged tackle from Kiran. Other shouts came from around Zorn, prompting Pleo to turn his attention towards the Gyarados when his eyes lit up in surprise. There, Zorn's defenders in the air and water nearby had been pushed out of the way by the crew and their allies in the water, leaving a clear line of sight with the Company Administrator.

Pleo looked back at the Zebstrika's position and saw a number of other Electric-Types had gathered about him. Judging from the sparks forming on their hides, it looked like they saw their opening too.

"Come and get it, you ugly fish!" the Zebstrika bellowed.

The Zebstrika shot out a wide spray of blue sparks, his position on the deck coming aglow in electric blues and yellows as the nearby Electric-Types threw in attacks of their own. Pleo's eyes lit up as he realized that he too would be able to help their efforts, and with their combined attacks, surely it'd be enough to put Zorn on the ropes.

Pleo breathed in as static began to dance on him, before batting his wingtips at Zorn as a thick, brilliant bolt shot out from between them. He watched it sail through the air, but halfway over to Zorn, it abruptly changed course and struck an empty patch of water just beside the Gyarados.

"Huh?!" the Lugia squawked. "M-My Thunderbolt!"

Pleo's beak slackened as he watched the same thing happen with one attack after another from the Zebstrika's party. The electricity crackled in the water, but the Gyarados showed no signs of being any worse for wear, which was confirmed by him turning his head with a loud snarl. Zorn's gaze fell onto the Zebstrika, who stiffened up and went rigid as the other Electric-Types about him scattered. The Zebstrika remained fixed in place from sheer terror, pulling his head and tail in against his body as he felt his innards sicken with fright as the Gyarados loomed over him.

"A-Aaah…"

The Administrator lunged forward with his maw opened wide at the Zebstrika's head, and clamped down with an audible crunch. The Thunderbolt Pokémon's tail shot up as the Gyarados lifted the kicking and thrashing Electric-Type into the air by his neck. The nearby sailors froze and watched blankly as the Gyarados shook the former pirate back and forth in his mouth. The Company Administrator then bit down a second time, drawing a yelp from the Zebstrika in his jaws, followed by silence as the Electric-Type went limp.

Zorn threw the Zebstrika back to the deck, where he hit the planks with a loud thud and laid there with a weak, whimpering groan. No respite came after the Administrator's attack, as a hail of attacks zipped in and forced Pokémon all up and down the port side of the ship to hurriedly dive behind Protects and whatever cover they could find, including Pleo as he dove behind a set of crates with Crom panting frantically.

"I-I don't understand!" Pleo cried. "Wh-What just happened to all our attacks?!"

Crom turned his attention back to the water, where just past the railing, he could just barely spot the spiky, black form of a Pincurchin surfacing with static dancing on her spikes amid the waves. The Dragon-Type's mouth flopped open, and his eyes lit up in realization.

"A-Ah! It's that Pincurchin there!" the Druddigon cried. "She must be a Lightningrod 'mon!"

The Pincurchin noticed Crom pointing her out and swam away, hastily latching onto a passing dark blue Barraskewda that carried her off in a hurry. Crom spat up a gout of bluish dragonfire after the two, just missing after the fish spirited the Picurchin away. Pleo at once flew up in pursuit, as he called after the pair with a sharp shout.

"Hey! Get back here!"

Pleo built up light in his beak and readied a Weather Ball as the rain rolled off his plumes, only to notice the glowing orb felt damp and cold this time. He spat it up at the Pincurchin and Barraskewda, seeing it come out in a watery ball that sailed along for the two. The Barraskewda spotted the incoming orb at the last moment, diving below the water right as the Weather Ball slammed into the lagoon's surface with little more than a splash to show for its efforts.

Back on deck, Guardia fetched a Stun Seed and looked up to see Kiran flying after the Barraskewda and his passenger with a Slow Wand clasped firmly in his talons. In the water, Dimitri scythed his way through the water for the pair, only for the Pincurchin to shock him with a small bolt of electricity as he neared, breaking his momentum. Guardia readied her Stun Seed, but stopped mid-fling as she noticed the Barraskewda kept breaching and diving back under the surface. The Cubone watched as the fish weaved around one attack after the other, much to her slack-jawed frustration.

"Gah! How's anyone supposed to hit that Bachinuni when that Kamasujaw keeps tugging her around like-?!"

"A-Ack!" a Trumbeak cried. "We're getting boarded-!"

Guardia whirled back and saw Elty, Trizano, and Pladur looking on blankly as the Trumbeak crumpled to the deck. A quick glance over revealed the culprit: a Toxicroak pulling her fist back from a Poison Jab, having freshly boarded by clambering up a hooked rope from the starboard side. A few nearby sailors tried to run in and intercept the Toxicroak, only for a hail of rocks and a jet of water to sail in and drive them off as an orange-furred Lycanroc and a Crawdaunt made their way aboard. More Pokémon in Company scarves followed after, boarding and throwing the defenders on the starboard side into disarray. Trizano ducked out of the way of an incoming Shadow Ball, and after a moment to let his eyes focus, turned back and motioned at Guardia and the others to follow.

"Come on!" the Skarmory exclaimed. "It won't do any good worrying about the Pokémon in the water if we can't even hold our own main deck!"

Trizano pointed his wingtips ahead, Elty, Guardia, and Pladur following them over to see a Heracross and Dusclops in Company lavenders encroaching on them. The lot braced themselves and dug their feet in for battle. Trizano gave a glinting flash of his wings, before lunging for the Dusclops and knocking him back with a spread-wing tackle.

"Sbrigatevi! Before they dig themselves in!"

The others needed no further encouragement as they dove into the fray alongside their fellow sailors. In the water, Viktor and his fellow clansmons were hastily closing ranks around the Siglo Swellow, throwing up Protect barriers to block incoming attacks. The blows began to thin as more and more, various swimmers from Lyn's crew hurriedly broke formation and swam off. Viktor spat a few globs of poison after his withdrawing foes, when he noticed that something wasn't adding up:

The swimmers were turning tail too soon for the amount of fighting they'd put up. Since when were the crews of Company Commissioners this lily-livered?

"One shock of a lifetime, coming right up!"

Viktor turned his head and blanched after seeing a Tauros approaching in the water with an Electabuzz clinging to his back. The bull was swimming along, better than he'd have expected an airbreather with hooves to, and churning up the water into a growing wave as static began to dance on the Electabuzz's pelt.

It was then that the Dragalge realized that the pair were readying an electrified Surf. One that was aimed square at them.

"I don't think so!"

Nerea suddenly popped up in the water in front of the Tauros and Electabuzz and shot a pair of pink orbs at them from her feelers. The Company Pokémon recoiled briefly after getting struck, before the orbs re-emerged from their bodies and traded places. Nerea swam away from the two, just as the duo's eyes shot wide and the Electabuzz abruptly lost his balance and fell into the water. She looked back at the two as they flailed and thrashed about with panicked yelps.

As was to be expected after her Heart Swap. Its effects would last but a short time, but there was always something satisfying about seeing it humble hardened foes. These two goons being no exception.

"A-Ack! Wh-What happened to my hands?!" the Tauros cried.

"What happened to my hooves?!" the Electabuzz yelled. "And why can I see my own body-?!"

And a short time was all that everybody needed to deal with those two. An Ice Beam sailed in from the deck, followed by a hail of other attacks alongside it. The members of the Khranitel Rod joined in with jets and waves of crashing water, making the Tauros and Electabuzz disappear into the churning sea. For a moment, empty, bubbling water remained, before the two Company grunts floated back to the surface unconscious, leaving Nida up at the ship's railing to huff out a puff of icy breath.

"That oughta take care of those two," the Nidorina scoffed.

Any sense of victory was short-lived after an agonized scream rang out from further out in the water. There, Lyn could be seen drawing a seamitar back from a Golisopod who keeled over in the lagoon. Before the water could finish settling, the Samurott shoved the fainted Golisopod aside and stared down a lone Nerea, narrowing his eyes into a piercing glare.

"So you're the Blue Fairy I've heard so much about," he growled. "Somehow I was expecting a bit more from the 'mon who took advantage of my father's kindness and disgraced him."

In spite of Lyn's overpowering demeanor, Nerea remained defiant. She flared her feelers out, shooting a stubborn glare of her own at her much larger foe, even with his brandished blades drawn.

"Hrmph, you clearly haven't come to talk through your family problems," the Manaphy spat. "Though don't be mistaken, Samurott. I am a Protector. I haven't eluded your ilk for all these years by being a pushover!"

Lyn lunged forward with a bellowing roar, barrelling through the water with his blades drawn. Back on the Siglo Swellow, the port side of the ship rang out with yelps as Zorn spewed another Hydro Pump along the length of the deck, the watery jet picking through an increasingly hole-riddled array of Protects that sent various sailors tumbling off their feet with yelps. Among them was Crom, who rolled back along the ship's timbers and came to a stop on his side, weakly lifting his head up in a daze.

"U-Urgh…"

Crom struggled up to his feet, water dripping off his scales as his vision wobbled, when he looked up and saw that the localized rain above the ship was still coming down in buckets. All of that was from just a few Rain Dances? With this sort of weather helping their Water attacks, no wonder why Zorn's underlings were giving them such trouble! Vicente looked over the Rain Dancers in the water, as he seemed to have realized the same and turned over to Beatrix with a worried grimace.

"Captain, we've got to do something about this rain!" the Hitmontop cried. "Those Company 'mons are picking us apart in this weather!"

"Way ahead of you!" Beatrix cried.

Beatrix brought her tarsi together as something that looked like a ball of brilliant sunlight formed between them. She flew up and flung the orb up into the sky, where it burst in the air and parted the clouds above with overbearing sunlight.

Crom looked up in awe as the rain briefly let up, only for the clouds to come rolling back in along with heavy rain. He looked back out to the port side of the ship and blanched upon seeing a Dragonair and a Bruxish wrapping up the tail end of a Rain Dance. What hope did they have of getting rid of this rain when there were more Pokémon ready to use Rain Dance than there were Pokémon among their ranks who could do anything about it?

The Druddigon chanced to notice the Pincurchin surface again and zip by, still clinging to her Barraskewda partner. With her back in full view, this was their chance to pick her off!

"Ah! That Pincurchin's back!" he cried. "Let's try hitting her again!"

Crom ran up to the railing and spat up a Dragon Rage, the others nearby him joining in with their own attacks. Unfortunately for the group, the Barraskewda just kept moving out of the way time and time again. Crom grit his teeth in frustration. They were so close, and yet they still couldn't turn things around!

"Gah! We can't get a clean hit on her!"

Just then, the faint crack of breaking glass rang out, prompting Crom to turn towards Kiran just in time to see his Slow Wand splinter from overuse and silk webbing fly out from its tip. That time, the webbing caught up with the Barraskewda and the Pincurchin, clinging to their bodies as the Barraskewda flailed and tried to brush it off in the water.

Before the two could make any progress freeing themselves from the ensnaring silk, the water below them suddenly erupted in a plume as Dimitri cast a hail of rocks upwards, freshly torn the bottom of the lagoon. The pair shot back and flopped over in the water reeling in a daze. Sensing an opening, the Kabutops turned and waved with his scythe, calling up to the Pokémon on the Siglo Swellow's deck.

"They're down! Get them!"

Crom needed no further prompting for what to do next and immediately spat up a gout of blue dragonfire that struck the Pincurchin in the water. It was then followed by an Extrasensory from Pleo, a Poison Sting from Nida, and a veritable hail of other attacks and items from the deck. As the waters settled, Pleo could make out the Pincurchin and Barraskewda listing in the water, both unable to do much other than burble weakly and float limply in the sea.

"Ah! We got them!" Pleo cried. "We finally got-!"

The Lugia was cut off by a stray rock striking him from behind, where Elty, Guardia, Trizano, Pladur, and a number of sailors were still locked in fierce battle with Lyn's boarding party along the starboard side of the deck. A Graveler had since joined the Dusclops and Heracross, and hurled a final Rock Blast that sent Elty skidding back. The Growlithe fought to keep his balance, panting heavily as he looked to his teammates with a worried stammer.

"G-Gah! I don't know how much more of this we can take!" he barked.

"Pladur!" Trizano shouted. "We need to change the way we're fighting this battle, and fast!"

A sharp hiss rang out as the Heracross from Lyn's crew rounded on them, readying a charging thrust of his horn. Pladur flashed his claws and prepared to strike, when an Air Slash abruptly flew in and struck the Heracross in the head. The Bug-Type crumpled up and hit the deck with a sharp thud, as Pladur looked up to see Pat flying overhead weaving around beams and attacks zipping in.

The Fraxure's eyes lit up as a moment of realization came over him. Pat was one of the ship's fliers, who helped push the ship forward with air currents when it needed extra bursts of speed. There wasn't much the Unfezant could do about the ship right now, but…

"P-Pat! Can you give us a Tailwind to work with?" Pladur asked. "We need to stay on our feet against these guys!"

The Unfezant obliged with a nodding grunt, beating his wings and whipping up a stiff wind that ran at the defenders' backs, pushing their movements forward. Vicente was the first to take advantage of Pat's aid, throwing himself forward with a High Jump Kick that caught an orange Lycanroc in his flank. The Lycanroc screamed in pain as he was launched into the air from the blow, clipping the railing with a yelp before he pitched overboard. Trizano couldn't make out the sight clearly as his vision remained muddy beyond a little over a wingspan away from his body, but after hearing the sound of a loud splash from the water, he realized that with the right moves, Pat had given them everything they'd needed to turn things around on Lyn's boarding party.

"That's it!" the Skarmory cried. "Focus your attacks on whatever will knock them back the most. They can't attack us if they're overboard!"

Trizano brought his wings together and threw a churning Whirlwind forward, which swept up the Dusclops and sent him flying over the railing. A nearby Toxicroak froze briefly before Elty lobbed a whitish orb in front of her, which shattered and similarly flung her overboard with a yelp. There was a sharp cry, when the pair saw the Graveler stagger back cradling his face in the wake of a swat from Guardia's club. A bellowing roar followed, as Pladur charged in with his claws coming alight with dragonfire. The Fraxure lunged ahead, tackling the Rock-Type with a raking swipe of his claws that crunched against stony hide. His strike sent the Graveler's lurching and rolling back against the railing, the Rock-Type's eyes shooting wide with alarm as he pitched over it.

"AAAAAAAH!"

The Graveler's screams were silenced by the sound of his stony body hitting the water, followed by confused shouts and cries for help from the lagoon. Back on the Siglo Swellow's deck, Lyn's underlings had had their ranks thinned considerably by other sailors pushing them back in similar fashions. A Crobat among them hurriedly called out a retreat and flew off from the deck, prompting the others to follow suit and begin to clamber back down the ropes over the side. In the process, a few slipped and fell off the railing after being clipped by errant blows during their retreat.

Elty panted as the last of the square-necks on deck retreated, with the ship's timbers being littered with Pokémon lying slumped over in groaning heaps. A few sailors hurriedly went about to try to treat and rouse their wounded allies, while others like Natrix and Philips turned their attention to fainted Company goons such as a Heracross that was moaning incoherently. The Servine and Raichu grabbed the Heracross and brought him up to the railing, when his eyes suddenly flickered open and shrank to pins at the sight of the lagoon water below.

"N-No wait! What are you doin-?!"

The pair threw the Heracross from the ship and sent him tumbling head over heels until he fell into the sea with a loud plunk. His counterparts still on the deck met similar fates one by one in short order. Back in the water, Viktor turned his head around and noticed that Lyn's underlings were distracted from having to come to the aid of the flailing members of the repulsed boarding party, prompting him to let out a sharp cry to his nearby clansmons.

"This is our chance to push them back!" the Dragalge exclaimed. "Everyone, assume formation!"

Viktor and the nearby swimmers churned up the water into a roaring wave, bringing it down on the Company Pokémon along the Siglo Swellow's starboard side. A chorus of yelps and startled cries rang out, which grew more and more distant as the boarding party and their allied swimmers were washed away by the deluge, and even the Argent Aviso visibly drifted further back from it. After Viktor and the others cleared the waters along the schooner's starboard, her defenders hurried about to try and push the ship forward or go off to relieve the battle on the ship's port side. From the deck, Pleo let out a sigh of relief as the din of battle on that side of the ship seemed to drift further away, only for a pained shout to cut through the air.

"A-Aah!"

There, further off in the water, Pleo and his companions watched as Nerea reeled from a slash from Lyn's seamitar. A few nearby Khranitel Rod Pokémon attempted to come to her aid, only for snarling Pokémon in lavender to cut them off. Nerea grimaced and panted, attempting to steel herself as the Samurott readied his blades and circled his wounded foe.

"You shouldn't expect any mercy from me," he growled. "After what happened to the last 'mon who took pity on you, I know better than to do that."

Lyn tightened his grasp on his blades and threw them back in the air for a downward slash. The Commissioner swung his left seamitar forward at the Manaphy, when a sudden flash of yellow light struck him and his body locked up from the hot, searing jolt of a Thunderbolt. The Samurott bellowed out of pain and reflexively jerked back, before turning towards the source of the attack. There, he spotted Pleo at the Siglo Swellow's railing, dripping purple and silver dye off his plumes from the rain and sticking his tongue out at him.

"Grr, why you-!"

Lyn spat up a watery pulse at Pleo's position, prompting the Lugia to leap out of the way with a startled squawk as it crashed against the railing. The Samurott felt a sharp pain in his back and tumbled forward in the water, whirling around to see dissipating green light from Nerea's nubby arms as she glared back with a sharp scoff.

"Hey! I didn't say we were done fighting!"

Nerea flung another Energy Ball at him, forcing Lyn to hurriedly parry it with a swipe from a seamitar. From the deck of the ship, Pleo darted back up to the railing and looked on as Lyn and Nerea resumed their battle, only to hastily jump aside as a drenched Butterfree plummeted to the deck just beside him.

Wham!

The Butterfree hit the planks with a dull thud, laying there twitching and groaning, making Pleo grimace and turn his head in time to see Zorn pull his tail back still dripping water off of it. The young Lugia noticed that the Gyarados' other underlings in the water weren't close enough to shield him from any blows, prompting him to point ahead with a surprised cry of realization.

"Ah! Zorn's lackeys aren't around him!" the Lugia shouted. "This is our chance to attack!"

Kiran looked over from throwing an Air Slash at a Company Jumpluff, when sure enough, the Company Administrator seemed to be fully open to attack… for now. Without hesitating, the Swellow dove forward and clipped the Gyarados with a Wing Attack, followed by another hail of rocks from Dimitri, a Blast Seed from Guardia and a barrage of attacks from the defenders afterwards. Pleo watched as Zorn thrashed and snarled, the Lugia sucking in a sharp breath as he prepared to attack. It was then when he heard voices amid the din of battle, far clearer than he ought to have.

The voices began to swirl in his mind again: wishing that Kline and the others would be there to help them. To be back home. To be anywhere but here amidst this stormy maelstrom surrounded by snarling goons. Pleo didn't stop to try and figure out whose voices he was hearing. He knew full well from when this had last happened to him.

He was hearing his friends. His fellow allies from right here aboard the Siglo Swellow. These were their thoughts, their hopes, their cries for someone to help them. Pleo still didn't understand why it was that they brought out his powers, but he heard his companions' pleas for help. And as Tromba's- no their Protector, he'd churn the sea and skies to answer them.

Almost by reflex, Pleo focused and readied an Extrasensory as his feathers suddenly grew awash with a silvery white glow, shining through the purple dye dripping off his body. On the deck a short ways away, Ander reflexively cringed at the sight, looking up with a vacant, fearful stammer.

"A-Ah…"

"I won't let you hurt my friends like this!"

Pleo's eyes came aglow with golden light and he opened his beak, spewing out the golden rings of an Extrasensory. The individual rings came out larger and so closely spaced together that his psychic barrage looked more like a Solar Beam than the attack he remembered using against Bunsen. The rings knifed through the water, Zorn diving below the surface just as the enhanced Extrasensory cut through the water and skies, various swimmers and fliers disappearing into its light as the beam carried on into the sea walls in the background. Pained screams and frightened shouts rang out as the darkened skies came alight with a golden glow, Ander flinching with a low, frightened whimper from Pleo's overwhelming assault.

As the Extrasensory cleared, Team Traveller's members looked out over the railing, where most of Zorn's underlings lay fainted or stunned in the water. Those who were still able to were swimming back hurriedly, opting to throw jets of water and beams from a safer distance that the ship's escorts were better able to deal with. A glance over at the sea walls revealed that Pleo's attack had affected them too. There, shapes of Pokémon could be seen scurrying for cover at its top, and the bellows and cauldrons used to keep it seafire had been knocked off their mountings, which made Natrix 's eyes light up in realization

"Ah! That attack messed up their seafire gear!" the Servine exclaimed.

"Then what are we waiting for?!" Philips cried. "Let's get going before they get it back togeth-!"

The Raichu never finished his words, as yelps and shouts of "Look out!" rang out from the water followed by a loud, dull thud. A sharp tremor ran through the ship's timbers and the Siglo Swellow suddenly lurched up from underneath, as much to everyone's alarm, it pitched heavily to starboard. A number of the deckhands lost their footing, some landing against the mast or the railing while others were sent tumbling screaming into the water. Team Traveller's members hurriedly tried to cling to whatever they could for support as the deck's incline grew increasingly vertical, when Elty lost his footing and rolled head over heels with a panicked yelp. The Growlithe hit the railing and bounced when he felt a small hand grab onto his pelt and looked up to see Guardia holding onto him for dear life.

"H-Hang in there, Eltenios!"

Elty looked down at the churning water and felt the color drain from his face, his heart pounding frantically in his chest. The ship then stopped tilting as the hull rocked back to the port side, the momentum of the settling ship throwing Elty and Guardia back onto the deck with a pair of yelps. The two laid stunned on the ship's timbers for a brief moment, when Elty's ears picked up the sounds of Pokémon crying for help from the water. The Growlithe looked over to see sailors thrashing and flailing desperately in the water, and felt a shiver run down his back as he watched a few, including Natrix and Philips, get swarmed by Pokémon in lavender scarves.

A deafening, bloodcurdling roar suddenly rang out. Elty pinned his ears back with a low whine, looking towards the port side of the ship just in time to see Zorn surfacing right beside it and snarling down at the deck.

"Did you really think you could get rid of me so easily?!"

For a moment, Team Traveller froze and paled at the sight of the looming Gyarados. After a moment to shake his head and calm his nerves, Pleo dug his heels in and shot back a defiant glare at the sea serpent.

"W-We've come this far by working together!" the Lugia cried. "Even if you're a tougher Administrator than Darzin, we can defeat you too!"

Pleo shot off a Thunderbolt at Zorn, his teammates joining in with their own attacks at the Gyarados Administrator. Zorn lurched back with a pained bellow as the blows zipped in and found their marks, when a sudden shock of blue and red flew at his head. A cutting gust of wind ran across Zorn's face, prompting the Gyarados to grit his teeth and turn to see a Swellow flying away from his head.

"Annoying little pest!"

Zorn cracked his maw open wide and lunged forward as ice began to wreath his razor-like teeth. Kiran saw him approaching fast and attempted to flee, only for Zorn's jaws to catch up with him and clamp down with an audible crunch.

An agonized scream rang out as Team Traveller looked on at Kiran's struggling form. The Gyarados shook the flailing Swellow in his mouth as the bird's strength ebbed away and his body went limp much to Pleo and his companions' horror.

"K-Kiran!"

Zorn wrenched his head and threw Kiran off to the side, sending him pinwheeling through the air before hitting the water a short distance away. The Gyarados briefly looked after Kiran as lavender-scarved Pokémon converged on the Swellow, before turning back to the ship. He sized up the Pokémon on deck, before narrowing his eyes with a low growl.

"Pathetic," he spat. "Let me show you the true might of an Administrator!"

The Gyarados widened his jaws as brilliant light began to build up at the back of his throat. Pladur's eyes suddenly shrank to pins, as the Fraxure stammered and raised a shaky set of claws at the Company Administrator.

"Th-That's Hyper Beam!" Pladur yelped. "We need to stop him! If he gets that off, we're as good as sunk!"

The Fraxure frantically spat up a Dragon Pulse at Zorn, the rest of Team Traveller joining in with various attacks of their own. Pleo flew ahead, lobbing a crackling Thunderbolt from between his wingtips that made Zorn lurch back in the water, but much to his horror, did nothing to dispel the light in the Gyarados's mouth.

"Burn!"

Zorn disgorged a bright, white-hot beam that cut through the air and sliced into the deck with a loud blast as he began to sweep it sideways. Team Traveller scattered and dove for cover, Pleo attempting to do the same when the beam caught up with him. The Lugia reeled as in a flash, the entire right side of his body was engulfed in searing pain. The next thing he knew, he was shooting back in the air, catching glimpses of the Gyarados spewing his beam onto the deck in a sweeping motion before the young Protector hit the hard wood below with a wet thud.

Pleo's head spun, his vision growing muddy as loud screams and the crack of splintering wood rang out. After a while, the commotion died down beyond scattered shouts, as the Lugia cracked his eyes open with a low whine.

"O-Ow…"

Pleo stumbled up and looked around to see the yards of the front mast hanging broken from it and visible holes burnt into parts of the sails. All around him, Pokémon lay strewn motionless about a deck that now had a large hole punched into it, the felled deckhands visibly burned and showing few signs of life beyond faint breathing or an occasional twitch. Other Pokémon were staggering up, a few like a Quilava who dribbled blood from fresh scrapes had their nerves fail them and limped off to try and hide below deck. Those that remained tried to stand their ground but visibly trembled with fright, as desperate cries filled the air.

"P-Protector! H-Help us!"

"Y-You did it once! You can do it again!

"J-Just do something! Please!

Pleo stared in shock at the hole in the deck and the mangled yards of the front mast. H-How could he do anything about that without his powers to help him? The sound of hoarse panting turned his attention back to Zorn, who was visibly winded from his attack, but still well enough to curl his maw into a mocking sneer.

"Hah! Did you think that I held that back out of the kindness of my heart? I merely waited until your defenses were weakened so I could blast your glorified pile of driftwood apart!" the Gyarados snarled. "Still think you're just going to sail away from me?"

The attacks from the water came in thicker that time, as Zorn's Hyper Beam gave the Company swimmers and fliers still well enough to fight the confidence to draw near once again. Those among the Siglo Swellow's escorts who were still able hastily threw up their Protects again, but with visible gaps in between them, it proved insufficient for the hail of blows that came in. Nida hastily jumped out of the way as a bolt of electricity zipped in right beside her and blackened the wood where she had just been standing, looking up panting to see Zorn's earlier vigor had returned to him as he coiled his body in the water.

"Hrmph. A cute show," the Gyarados remarked. "But this is the end of the line for you all."

Zorn began to ready a Hydro Pump in his jaws as the Siglo Swellow's crew looked on in horror. A few hurriedly tried to interrupt him with attacks, though others like Nida remained frozen in shock. The Nidorina pinned her ears back and flinched, bracing for the Administrator's inbound Hydro Pump when all of a sudden, a loud, distant rumble rang out. A wave about twice Nida's height suddenly rolled in from shore, striking Zorn and the other Pokémon in the water. Startled cries rang out as Zorn was jolted out of his aim and his Hydro Pump sailed harmlessly over the deck, the Gyarados whirling about to see giant columns of green light shooting up among Canalhouse City's rooftops.

"What on earth?" Zorn said.

Nida stared off at the dust and smoke curling up from the distance as the columns dissipated. Was that Kline? The Nidorina quickly looked at Zorn, who began to turn back towards the ship. Nida took advantage of the Gyarados' brief distraction and quickly dipped her paw into her bag. She grabbed onto a Stun Seed and lobbed it at the Gyarados, which broke against his hide with a hail of sparks as the Administrator let out a sharp grunt. After a few brief moments for her to realize that her Stun Seed had hit its mark, she turned and called out to her comrades.

"Quick!" Nida exclaimed. "Now's our chance to strike!"

Team Traveller's members dug in their feet and threw their attacks forward in a barrage at the Gyarados Administrator. Stony flechettes, cutting winds, an icy ray… all of it seemed to visibly wear Zorn down.

But at the same time, it also jolted his body back and freed him up from his petrification. Zorn moved back in the water, building up blinding light in his maw when he heard approaching wingbeats, seeing Pleo nearing visibly winded, with sparks dancing on his plumage and his face curled up in fierce defiance.

"Stop it! Leave my friends alone!"

The Lugia brought his wings together as a Thunderbolt shot out from between them. It wasn't any bigger than his last one, but this time, it struck Zorn square in his head. The Administrator seized up and bellowed in pain as yellow electricity danced around his body briefly, dissipating as the young Lugia flew past.

For a short moment, Pleo watched as Zorn visibly tottered in place. And then, the Gyarados listed and flopped over onto his side in the water with a large splash. As the water stilled, everyone, both from Zorn's underlings and the Siglo Swellow's crew, briefly stared on stunned at the defeated Administrator. The Siglo Swellow's defenders were the first to snap back to attention, as a Qwilfish by the hull piped up to her nearby compatriots.

"Hurry!" a Qwilfish cried. "Go for everyone that fell overboard!"

The Qwilfish was abruptly cut off by an Air Slash flying in from the Company's lines, sending her keeling over limply into the water as Zorn's snarling lackeys approached once again while throwing attacks ahead. Swimmers from the Siglo Swellow and the Khranitel Rod hurried in lobbing back attacks of their own, and after a brief, sharp skirmish, the attacks thinned as the harrying Company Pokémon were driven back.

Nida looked over at the railing as a few dripping Pokémon were pulled aboard from the lagoon, some like a Bayleef coughing up water and visibly shivering, while others like a Dwebble were dragged aboard unconscious. Things were still dicey, but with Zorn lying fainted in the water, surely they could pull through in this battle-

"A-Ah! They're lighting the seafire again!" Crom exclaimed.

Nida looked up following Crom gesturing off at the sea walls in alarm. There, one of the cauldrons had been lit aflame and Pokémon swarmed around a set of bellows they were hastily placing back into position. Viktor caught the sight as well, the Dragalge grimacing briefly, before looking up towards the deck with a stern frown.

"You need to go, now!" he barked. "We'll try and hold out until Kline can catch up with us!"

The Siglo Swellow's deckhands balked. They were just supposed to sail off? Right now? When they were still trying to dig their way out from the damage and disarray Zorn had left behind?

"But we have 'mons overboard-!" Beatrix started, only to be cut off with an ethereal glow from the water.

The Illumise and the others turned their heads to the starboard side of the ship, where they saw Nerea awash in a brilliant blue light. The Manaphy was swimming forward, ahead of the Khranitel Rod's swimmers as Lyn and his accompanying underlings froze, a few hurriedly casting Protects as the water around Nerea began to stir up. Beatrix stared entranced for a moment, before a sharp splash from the water turned her attention to Viktor, who slapped the water's surface with a fin and glared up impatiently.

"We'll do what we can for them, but this might be your last chance to leave without getting burned to a crisp!" the Dragalge insisted. "So hurry up and get out of here!"

Beatrix looked over at Pleo and saw that he was panting and struggling to stay on his feet, dripping dye off his plumes. She looked between the winded Protector, her haggard and frightened crewmates, and the seafire bellows off on the walls. The Illumise hesitated for a moment, before gritting her mandibles and letting out a sharp cry to her surrounding crew.

"Batten down the hatches and full speed ahead! We're setting sail!"

The sailors hurriedly went for the ship's rigging, the Siglo Swellow abruptly lurching from its sails billowing out and the efforts of its escorts. All the while, Nerea went under the water's surface and vanished from view as a towering wave quickly built up. Was that a Surf? The wall of water plowed ahead for Lyn and his underlings, cresting and breaking as a chorus of shouts and screams rang out along the Siglo Swellow's starboard side. On the deck, Crom watched from behind a damaged chunk of railing as Pokémon were thrown about by the wave like Substitutes and the bow of Lyn's ship itself visibly shot up at a precarious angle. The shouts in the water grew more distant as Lyn and his underlings, ship included, were pushed back in the lagoon.

Crom yelped as a Shadow Ball flew right past him, the dragon crouching and hugging the deck along with his teammates as attacks shot overhead from the port side. They looked up at the sea walls as the Protect users still standing on the deck hurriedly cast their barriers, pointing them overhead just as the guards up on the wall rained beams and missiles down on them. Crashes and the sound of splintering wood punctuated the air amid thick cries, and at any moment, Crom expected to see his vision fill with flames all around him…

But it never came.

The Siglo Swellow limped along through the water, making it past the red-brick seawalls while attacks continued to fly in at the ship's stern as Crom's heart pounded in his chest. After what felt like a small eternity, the attacks began to grow increasingly sporadic, infrequent enough for the young Druddigon to warily poke his head up. He almost immediately regretted it, as he saw a party of swimmers in Company lavenders behind them.

"A-Aah!"

The guards threw a spray of jets and beams at the ship, making the Siglo Swellow's crew brace for the worst. A few got up to hurl attacks back from behind the cover of the Protects on deck, while others helped push the damaged ship forward with their currents.

"Huh?"

Much to Crom and the others' surprise, the attacks and shouts from the Pokémon never thickened and the guards in the water didn't continue to give chase. Barring some covering attacks, the groups of swimmers stayed near the entrance of the sea walls, with no ships in Company sails to be seen anywhere nearby. Crom slumped to the deck in exhaustion, looking around as the crew members warily made their way over to tend to the wounded still lying strewn about, a few visibly quivering and trembling from their ordeal.

A quick glance back at the shrinking sea walls revealed thin wisps of dust and smoke curling up from the direction of Canalhouse City, as Crom looked on blankly. Everything that Team Zephyr and Nerea and the Khranitel Rod had done for them, it had been so that way they could escape. Except there was a long, lingering question that gnawed at the dragon's mind before he looked over to Beatrix uneasily.

What would happen to Kiran and the others? To everyone still fighting behind the sea walls?

"Th-They'll make it, right?" he asked.

The Illumise captain gave no answer for a long while, as she stared off at Vollezee Island slowly shrinking off into the distance. The Bug-Type hung her head and gave a glum, uneasy shake in reply.

"I don't know," Beatrix sighed. "But we need to make the most of things."

Crom wasn't sure how to respond. From the long faces he could see on his teammates as they neared, it was evident they were similarly at a loss about what to do. Pleo cast a glance off at the damaged sails on the front mast, before turning to his companions with a deflated murmur.

"… Where do we even go now?" the Lugia muttered.

Crom looked back towards Vollezee's sea walls, as smoke curled up behind them along with rainclouds and flashes of light from the still-raging battle on the other end. The Druddigon felt his eyes mist up as he turned out towards the open sea, letting his head hang as his words came out in a faltering croak.

"… A-Anywhere but here."



Half an hour later, the deck of the Argent Aviso was in disarray from battle. The ship's wood had been pockmarked here and there with holes and fresh battle scars, and a few of the cannons had been damaged beyond use from attacks that had slipped through. The medbay had been overflowed as wounded Pokémon in lavender scarves were laid out for treatment on deck and in the water, among them being Administrator Zorn himself, who was wincing from a Sitrus Berry being applied to a blackened electrical burn on a patch of his scales.

Lyn heard growls and jeers coming from the spar deck and turned to see a sorry procession of roughly thirty Pokémon being drug along bound in ropes, silk bindings, and netting as more able Pokémon from his crew harried them. Most of them were still dripping seawater, some had fake Company lavenders on, while others who were more obviously adapted to aquatic lives had blue and red belts instead. Lyn bared his teeth and narrowed his eyes down at the lot. These thirty or so Pokémon were the ones who hadn't slipped away with that blasted schooner and that ocean clan who'd stuck their noses into things. He would've hoped to have the lot of them bound and gagged here alongside Lugia to finally put an end to this whole saga, but yet again, they'd found a way to slip his grasp. To say nothing of Manaphy, as well.

Lyn made his way down as the captives were shoved in front of him. A Relicanth and a Golisopod, a Servine and a Raichu… the lot of them looked haggard and some visibly squirmed and flinched at his appearance. The Samurott walked over and sized up his prisoners, when his eyes fell upon a sopping Swellow from among their number. Even with his flight feathers freshly cut and Company lavenders on, he still recognized it to be none other than that 'Kiran' from Lugia's companions.

"You."

Kiran sucked in a sharp breath and braced himself as Lyn approached. The Samurott drew his right seamitar from his scabbard and leveled it under the Swellow's throat, the motion drawing a startled squawk and forcing the bird to turn his head up.

"You're one of the Guardian's little friends," Lyn harrumphed. "What did you think you were going to accomplish by coming here?"

Kiran breathed in and out tensely, his eyes drifting down to the point of Lyn's blade at his throat. After a moment's hesitation, he spoke up, trying but not wholly able to fight back an audibly unnerved tone in his voice.

"I came to find a way to keep him safe," Kiran replied. "It's my duty to him along with all of my other pupils."

Lyn narrowed his eyes and pressed the tip of his seamitar firmly in between Kiran's plumage. The Samurott watched his Swellow captive squirm briefly, some of his nearby companions flinching and looking away, expecting the worst. Satisfied he'd sufficiently cowed the lot, Lyn spoke up again and let out a dismissive scoff.

"Well, you're not in much of a position to do that now, are you?" he retorted. "Given the charges that you're facing, I'd strongly encourage you to focus more on keeping yourself safe."

Lyn leaned his head in, close enough for Kiran to feel the Water-Type's breath on him. After lingering a moment to let the Swellow waver and watch him pale in fright, the otter let out a low growl before speaking up.

"Give me a lead to work with, and I'll see to it that you'll return to your island while you're still a spring Torchic."

Kiran seemed to blanch for a moment, only much to Lyn's surprise, a fire seemed to light up in the Swellow's eyes. The Flying-Type glared back and answered with an angry and defiant huff.

"Do you really think that you can just bully anyone into doing your bidding?" Kiran snapped. "As if I'd help the likes of you! Let alone against my own pupils!"

Lyn twitched his whiskers and tightened the grip on his seamitar, when he noticed the same determination in Kiran's eyes start to appear in the others' nearby. In a Servine's, in a Raichu's, and in the eyes of the rest of the Pokémon in impersonated Company garb. The Water-Types from the ocean clan they'd drug aboard similarly seemed to have been infected by the Swellow's defiance, not least among them a Kingdra who flopped against the netting binding him down with a sharp scowl.

"Go swim into a sea vent, air-breather!" Kuda spat. "I'd rather air-drown than get my fins involved in that!"

"Yeah, we're not going to help you capture our Protector!" Natrix cried.

"And he'll stop you!" Philips added. "We know he will!"

"Shut up!"

The bound Pokémon flinched as they heard Lyn raise his voice into a roaring bellow and the thunk of a sharp object embedding itself into the deck's wood. After opening their eyes, they quickly noticed Lyn's seamitar wedged into the deck just by Kiran's left wing. The Samurott gave a dark, overpowering glare at the lot and grit his teeth with an audible snarl.

"Hrmph, I see I'm wasting my time," he said. "You all can try your luck with that defiant attitude in a place more suited for treasonous scum like you: Nagrobek."

Lyn watched as Kiran's and the others' eyes shrank to pins as soon as the words left his mouth. Perhaps that had made his would-be rebels more aware of the gravity of their situation. While the shock of their pronounced fate still lingered, Lyn yanked his seamitar out of the deck and turned over to a Crobat with an absent-minded motion of his blade at his captives.

"Kane, get them back to shore and processed," the Samurott ordered. "Perhaps the Guardian can be made to care about their plight, but I don't have any further use for them right now."

The Crobat gave a low grunt in reply before calling out a "you heard him" to the other sailors nearby. One after the other, Lyn's underlings drug off their prisoners for the brig below deck and for nets hung from the side of the ship, flailing and protesting all the while. As their cries faded into the background, Lyn heard the water churn along the starboard side of his ship, looking over to see Zorn swimming up to him. The Gyarados briefly glanced off at the tendrils of smoke curling up from Canalhouse City, before letting out a growling sigh.

"Ugh, what a disaster," Zorn muttered. "Has there been any report on what on earth happened onshore with that earthquake and those green lights earlier?"

Lyn looked up in the distance and saw a Fearow making his way for his ship. That was Maurier coming back from his assignment to check up on what had happened earlier in the city. Surely just the information Administrator Zorn would be looking for at the moment.

"We should be getting a report just now, actually."

The Fearow banked and flew down, coming to a stop on the railing nearby and saluting with a wing. Lyn sheathed his seamitar and drew forward on all fours, giving an impatient tilt of his head at his scout.

"Maurier, what did you find out there?"

Maurier ruffled his feathers and fidgeted a moment, as he spoke up and seemed to be making a conscious effort to project a confident tone in spite of lingering hints of unease in his voice.

"Er… it's still not fully clear what happened, but the lights were from a running battle in the city between Team Sentinel and this big… snake thing," the Fearow explained. "It's not really clear what it was, but word going around says it was a Protector named 'Zygarde'."

Lyn and Zorn both stiffened up. 'Zygarde'? The very one that Sicula claimed had appeared on Tromba? What on earth had happened there? And more importantly…

"Where is this 'Zygarde' now?" Zorn pressed.

Maurier hemmed and hawed briefly, before continuing his report.

"Well… he made a bit of a mess in the city and then just abruptly vanished," the Flying-Type said. "The other team you dispatched is still combing for details, but if you need more information, maybe it'd make sense to talk with Ketu or Ellsberg."

"Ketu or Ellsberg?" Lyn asked. "Why? What happened with them?"

"I mean, I didn't see them," the Fearow answered. "But they were apparently present with Team Sentinel and saw everything that happened."

Lyn stiffened up as his mouth flopped open at Maurier's report. Ellsberg was off with Team Sentinel during all of this? But why? Was there some sort of assignment the lot had received that he didn't know about?

The Samurott faltered a moment, before nodding back at the bird. He could get to the bottom of that later, sometime when his paws weren't as full.

"Thank you, Maurier. That'll be all for now."

Maurier saluted, before beating his wings and flying off. After the Fearow drifted away, Zorn turned back towards the unsettled city at the other end of the lagoon, shaking his head with a low grumble.

"I can already tell that the next Board meeting's going to be quite something," the Gyarados said. "Though I don't understand how on earth we have this little of a lead about where the Guardian of the Seas would go to."

Lyn turned to the Administrator and cocked a brow puzzledly.

"… We actually have a lead at all?" the Samurott asked. "What is it?"

"Just that schooner was last sighted headed westward. Straight for Imperial waters if its course was anything to go by."

Lyn paused, before he gave a knowing smile. It admittedly wasn't much of a lead, but after the arrangement he'd made on behalf of the Board with the Iron Fleet and Orleigh's Pirate Council… it was enough of one to still turn to his advantage.

"Actually… I think I can work with that," Lyn replied. "We did have that business with the pirates lined up, but I'd like a chance to petition the Board for a few last-minute preparations that I'd need before setting off."

Zorn blinked and gave a puzzled tilt of his head. The Samurott always had a cocky streak, but he wouldn't have this sort of confidence without some reason for it. So then, it beggared the question…

"Just what sort of preparations are you talking about?" the sea serpent questioned.

Lyn turned and peered off at Vollezee's sea walls. After a moment studying the passage out of it and the cerulean seas in the distance, he shook his head and gave a terse grunt in reply.

"Force. And a lot of it."


Author's Notes:

- Uvidimsja, mudak! (Увидимся, мудак!) - Russian: "See you (later), аsshole!" (BGN/PCGN Romanization)
- Bachinuni (バチンウニ) - Japanese: "Pincurchin" (Official Romanization)
- Kamasujaw (カマスジョー) - Japanese: "Barraskewda" (Official Romanization)
- Sbrigatevi! - Italian: "Hurry (up)!" (interjection, addressed to multiple people)
 
Trivia #14 (Yesterday is Gone + Episode 16) New

Virgil134

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Author’s Note: This trivia section was originally posted alongside Chapter 85 on Serebii after its thread received 90,000 views, with the questions about the Board and Inler originally merged into one larger question. Annotations and revised commentary not originally in this trivia section are noted in bolded text.

How did you come up with Vollezee?

Vollezee is another one of those islands that owes its name to referencing a location from the Pokeworld, in this case Alto Mare, or “high sea”, just rendered in the island’s indigenous language of Dutch. Like Alto Mare, Vollezee pulls quite a bit from thematic influence from Venice such as the presence of a large, urbanized lagoon though run through a very Dutch-themed lens.

Thanks to the franchise marching on a bit faster than the story, it was decided to make Galarian Pokemon and Galarian Form Pokémon more concentrated on Vollezee to make it a better thematic parallel with Giotto, which has something similar going on with Alola and was similarly a significant narrative checkpoint. Unlike Giotto, there were already some significant features of Vollezee established prior to Gen 8’s launch, including Nerea being its Protector, which felt like a logical candidate for a Protector of an island so intimately tied to the sea.

How did you come up with Canalhouse City?

Canalhouse City and its surroundings follow the inverse formula of Tidemill City, in its case being the product of taking Venice’s general footprint and plopping Dutch-style architecture on it. While Venice was a huge inspiration to Canalhouse City, there are some noticeable divergences that were thrown in to make it feel like its own beast. For one, it’s significantly closer to land and in a smaller lagoon than the real thing, and has some large-scale construction in the city proper such as a Colosseum-style arena that can support mock naval battles and a prominent military harbor modeled after Carthagian cothons that isn’t present in its real-life counterpart.

That’s not to say that there aren’t some fairly transparent nods to Venice lying around here and there in the city. Hardenheuvel is a fairly direct semantic translation of Dorsoduro, a district in the south of historical Venice that much like the real thing, is host to major centers of learning. Lyn and Osmund’s home districts of Drieboog and De Spitsen are both semantic nods to Ponte dei Tre Archi and Ponte delle Guglie, both of which are bridges in Cannaregio, the traditional working-class district in Venice. Abolitionstraat follows a similar, but looser model in being styled after Calle Larga XXII Marzo, a prominent shopping street in Venice named after the date of Venice declaring independence from the Austrian Empire as the Republic of San Marco, with the name of its counterpart in Canalhouse City tracking the roughly analogous event from a Company perspective.

Canalhouse City is one of those places where the name fell into place fairly quickly, with it named after the English term for a grachtenpand, the traditional Dutch canal house which can be found in Pokémonified style all throughout Canalhouse City and gives it its name.

How did you come up with the Company's Administrators?

As you’ve likely gathered by now, but the Administrators on the Company Board are all takes off of Lapine words for negative concepts and feared folkloric figures from Watership Down, and were developed first along their names, with species being mapped onto them afterwards based off of what was thematically appropriate.

Darzin is named after King Darzin, an enemy to El-Ahrairah of indeterminate species in Watership Down’s internal folklore who the trickster god is able to defeat through his guile and cunning. Darzin was the first of the Board’s members to be cast, expanding Marley’s throwaway comment about having defeated a “cheating Dragonite” into a Board member who used to administer Tromba, but since overstepped and lost prominence by losing control of the island to a revolt and forcing the Company to come to an embarrassing settlement to restore some semblance of order.

Darzin was always intended to be the “weak link” of the Board, since he’s named after a character who gets outright defeated by rabbits in his story of origin. The “cheating” nature led to Darzin being cast as a Dragonite that pulled after Iris’ in terms of attitude with Lance-spec hax, complete with Barrier and an early evolution that was done to explicitly show off a setting dynamic involving Mystery Dungeons Hertsog hinted at all the way back in Episode 7. He has some additional layers to his onion from his constant scheming and attempts to work around the rest of the Board, but that’s a story for future content.

Zorn is a Lapine word for ‘destruction’, which influenced the choice to cast him as a Gyarados, a Pokemon deeply associated with destructive rampages from official fluff, along with the need for the Company to have someone in its high ranks who could be a more natural representative of the vast open sea around the islands it controls. The theme also influenced the decision to make the island he oversees a hub for Apricorn production, since it has applications for warmaking in this setting, and felt appropriate for a character themed around destruction.

Farn is a corruption of ‘tharn’, a Lapine word for the sort of ‘deer in the headlights’ reaction one has when deeply frightened. As a character named after that sort of reaction, Farn was cast as a Pokemon that could plausibly cause it. In her case, as an Intimidate Luxray.

Elilan is a South Asian name that was chosen because it’s an expansion of ‘elil’, the Lapine word that rabbits use to refer to their predators in Watership Down. Along the line, we decided to steer the Administrator who would become Elilan down a ‘trickster’ role, which influenced the decision to cast him as a fox Pokemon, which are a particularly feared predator within the story of Watership Down. Elilan’s depiction has evolved significantly over the course of Fledglings, with his entire subplot arising after Virgil134 took a shine to the character and pointing out that it would only be thematically appropriate for an Administrator modeled after an enemy of rabbits to scheme against his rabbit superior and just running with it. Where those schemes wind up going, you’ll have to sit tight and be patient, since they’ll be playing out as the story goes into its final stretches.

How did you come up with the Company's Director?

Inler sticks to the same name theming as the Board's Administrators, with his name being a Turkish name that is a take off of Inlé, the Lapine word for the moon and also a mythological Grim Reaper figure for rabbits in Watership Down, which helped finalize a decision to cast him as a fellow Nido as a villainous answer to Nida, specifically one that would normally evolve from a Moon Stone. Inler’s name also influenced decisions about filling in portions of his background, with the decision to make him a Pokemon of Mengirese stock finalized shortly after the name was due to there being a Turkish cultural presence within Bulgaria in reality.

How did you come up with the Board's families?

The Board’s family members were developed for two purposes: to fill some plot roles that would arise in the later parts of the story, particularly in the Vollezee arc, and also to give context to the Board’s members to make them feel like they hailed from an organic life and had more going on to them than just their jobs.

Inler’s family was developed first under the idea that he’d have a dynamic where he had alienated his own children by being too wedded to his job, and attempt to compensate for his mistakes with his grandchildren. Thanks to conservation of detail, Inler ultimately only had one child explicitly created, his daughter Fritha, along with her own children Filbert, Braam, Quintin. Much like Inler, the lot of them are walking Watership Down nods, Fritha being a take off of ‘frith’, the Lapine word for ‘sun’, and Filbert, Braam, and Quintin being nods to Hazel, Blackberry (who is a girl in the cartoon adaptation), and Fiver from the story’s main cast. The names that were rolled for them are a name that’s an alternative way of referring to hazel plants and hazelnuts, the Dutch word for ‘blackberry’, and a French name of Latin origin meaning ‘fifth’.

Elilan’s family was designed around respective character roles initially, with their names only coming along later. Elilan’s wife, Lela, was designed as a character who would be a confidante that he would be comfortable sharing his most intimate secrets, and to support him wholeheartedly at every turn. His daughter Sophie was envisioned as a character that would carry on her father’s cleverness and wits, but still have the innocence of childhood and be in the dark as to what her father was up to. The two both drew from a shared pool of names, with Lela winning out for Elilan’s wife thanks to it meaning ‘faithful’ and Sophie for his daughter since it means ‘wisdom’. Alida and Alexa were also names that were in the pool at one point, but left on the cutting table since they didn’t seem as fitting for either character.

Farn and Zorn’s children were the last to be ironed out of the Board’s family members, and exist primarily to show them in contexts where they let down their on-the-job fierceness. Farn’s son Leonard sports a name simply meaning ‘lion’ and sharing the same origin as ‘Leo’ and ‘Leon’, which were considered and passed up on as names along with ‘Lev’ and ‘Hari’. Zorn’s son Murdo sports a name that’s a derivative of ‘Murchadh’, a Scottish and Irish name meaning ‘sea warrior’ which is also the source of two other names that were left on the table, ‘Murphy’ and ‘Murdoch’. ‘Cyprinus’, the name of a genus of carps was also briefly considered but quickly scuttled.

How did you come up with Team Sentinel?

Team Sentinel as a faction was developed in two separate waves of expansion, which coupled both with an initial expansion of Ketu as a character from a background throwaway on the Argent Aviso, and then the later creation of a team of enforcers that Elilan would be able to field in order to help advance his schemes that started out with a working name of “Black Ops Team” and was quickly settled on as “Team Sentinel” thanks to the role of a sentinel being someone who uncovers information and relays it along as a watchman. “Team Odyssey” was also briefly considered for the team’s name but it was ultimately decided against thanks to sounding insufficiently imposing.

Ketu was the first member of Team Sentinel to be developed, and originates from an idea Virgil134 had of a “brilliant but lazy” character with some troll tendencies. His name is a phonetically rendered version of “K2”, the world’s second tallest mountain, which is infamous for being particularly treacherous and dangerous to climb. Ketu’s unused names similarly drew from this well of inspiration and included “Keitu” and “Kaitu”.

Sorge, Zelle, and Aldrich were all developed as an expansion to the narrative role that Ketu filled concurrent to the events of the Giotto Episode, with them being developed around species first which were used as their working names and then having their characters and names being mapped onto them. Given that their role was in part to act as deep cover spies, the three of them wound up rolling names that are all homages to different spies from history.

Sorge was envisioned as the team leader over Team Sentinel, and owes his name to the WWII-era Soviet spy Richard Sorge. Sorge’s unused names that were left on the cutting table are similarly names and surnames of spies, including “Horst” and “Kopkow”.

Zelle was designed as a “cutesy but dangerous” character that pulled from the same overbroad character beats as Larxene from the Kingdom Hearts series. As a femme fatale, it made it easy to zero in on “Zelle” as a name, which is a nod to Margaretha Geertruida Zelle from WWI, better known as ‘Mata Hari’, and the originator of the femme fatale archetype in spy fiction.

Aldrich as a character was the last to have his personality settled, which was decided to give him a bit of a nerdy vibe to make him stand out more from his peers and to give Ellsberg a companion he could closely relate to after the decision was made to bring him into Team Sentinel’s orbit. Much like his peers, Aldrich is once again named after a spy, in his case, Aldrich Ames, a former CIA agent that spied on behalf of the Soviet Union during the Cold War. Aldrich is the member of Team Sentinel with the most unused names under his belt, with Fuchs, Emil, and Emiel all considered but ultimately left on the cutting room floor.

How did you come up with Osmund?

Osmund was developed as the local analogue to the obligatory Sheriff Magnezone archetype for Bluewhorl Town, just drawn from a different species that’s popular in series fandom and taken to its logical evolutionary end point. Osmund’s dynamic as a Company ‘mon having gone native done primarily to help keep the town feeling friendly and homely in spite in the earlier chapters in spite of them obviously having a less-than-happy relationship with their corporate overlords.

The decision wound up helping to fill in the blanks for Osmund’s personality over the course of the story which informed the decision to make him a bit of a troublemaker, in particular when he was younger, yet at the same time always having been in relatively close orbit to the Company.

Much of Osmund’s family life went unsettled for long portions of the story, with the decision to make him a sibling to Salvini made during the process of planning out Episode 7 where it was decided that since Salvini already tracked after Osmund in terms of naming and the decisions she was making on the job, that she might as well have gotten it from someone. Osmund being an orphan from a family of Company guards was similarly decided very late, with the premise only being firmly settled on around the time that Yesterday is Gone was still in its concept phase.

As for his name, Osmund was one of those characters whose name more or less just fell into place. He is named after Osmundales, the taxonomic order to which royal ferns belong to.

How did you come up with Marina?

Marina was developed as a character while Yesterday is Gone was being sketched out, where it was decided that it would be about a time in life where Lyn ultimately wound up putting his life on course to become the character you better know him as. Now at the time, it had already been acknowledged in-story that Lyn had father issues and a less-than-enviable childhood, with Marina filling the other half of Lyn’s parental sphere that had been unfilled up to that point.

Narrative-wise, the decision to have Marina meet an untimely demise was chosen since it felt like a relatively convenient way of explaining the depth of the venom Lyn has towards his father by giving him a family tragedy that he could lay at his feet, and drawing Lyn into orbit around the Company with no emotional counterweight against embracing its worst tendencies (especially after alienating his closest friend at the time).

Marina was also used as a vehicle for showing off some worldbuilding involving the setting. At one point in planning, she was intended to die of bland-name Valley Fever, which is a real-life source of sea otter mortality. That plot point was left on the cutting board since it was decided that it would feel like too much of a stretch since Vollezee’s geography is very different from the conditions that Valley Fever arises from in reality, and algal poisoning was chosen to fill the role instead. The practice of Samurott and other Pokemon of their lines growing secondary scalchops and seamitars was also debuted through Marina, which is based off the real-life practice of samurai wielding a main and a secondary sword as a pair. As for why those secondary blades are smaller than the main blades, the in-setting answer is that they are separated from the body earlier than the main blades are. The meta answer is that it’s an intentional parallel to how samurai swords were paired with each other in real life: one large, and one small.

In terms of species and name, Marina was one of those characters that fell into place quickly, and as such had no alternatives for either that were left on the cutting floor.

How did you come up with Gerhard?

Gerhard is a caricature of a professor that Virgil134 had the (dis)pleasure of studying under while in university, who had a bit of an overbearing and egotistical personality that made him a fairly suitable-fitting map for a leading educator figure aligned with a villainous faction. They say to write what you know, and Gerhard is no exception on that front, with his general mannerisms tracking that of the real-life professor and his spiel about mountains being modeled after a similar lecture he gave to a class involving Mount Everest and Mount Blanc.

For a period of time, it was considered to cast Gerhard as a turtle Pokemon to track after animal stereotypes of them being wise. Torterra was considered thanks to its more ‘ancient vibe’, which was ultimately recycled for Lyn and Osmund’s teacher from Yesterday is Gone, along with Carracosta which carried similar vibes but had the additional wrinkle of being sea-themed in a very waterlogged environment. In the end, Alakazam won out thanks to its canon stereotype of being a smart-alec, which seemed most fitting for a character that was basically a university professor.

On the naming front, Gerhard was one of those characters where the rough name was settled very quickly since it’s based off the real name of the professor he’s modeled after, though the fine details went through a lot of options before one was settled on. The names that were left on the cutting floor included Gerrit, Jurre, and Jorrit, which are all variants of “Gerhard” from various languages.

How did you come up with the Academy?

The Academy carries some broad-strokes influences from the University of Amsterdam, particularly for the design of its central building. For a number of years, Vollezee’s episode was intended to be built around the premise of spiriting the Company’s copy of the Knights’ Ledger out of it, with one subplot that quickly popped up being showing off Team Traveller navigating a school in the vein of “The Headband” from ATLA.

In this case, the Academy was built around the needs of providing such an environment, while making it important enough to the Company to keep a few important artifacts lying around on it, hence its role as an incubator for the best and brightest of the Company’s young talent, and means for leadership to keep its upper ranks in line by keeping a close eye on their children through the Settlement Protocol. It was also used as a way to distinguish the Company more from the Empire, since performance as opposed to family background is a bit more important to them for sorting out their internal ranks.
 

windskull

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Oh, you have a three point bonus now on the leaderboard? Looks like it’s time for me to swoop in and swipe up those points. I’m just reviewing one chapter for now, but If I have time I’ll try to go back to finish at least the rest of this arc before the end of blitz. It looks like I left off on chapter 52, so that’s where we’ll kick things off.

It does, unfortunately, make sense that prices would be higher in dungeon shops. They’re certainly not as safe as selling your goods in town, but there’s a need for it. Capitalism at its finest /j. Good on Guardia for figuring out the way keckleon’s ability works. It just barely gave them the edge they needed to get away, though I’d hardly call it a victory.

I love Ketu just blatantly telling the truth as to why they’re out there. It’s so outlandish that he’d just come out and say it, that it ends up covering them better than it would have if he’d lied first.

I really do enjoy the worldbuilding regarding how storage rocks work. I’m glad that it ends up having a purpose though, because I did admittedly wonder why we were taking the time to discuss it at first.

Ah, I see you’re setting up for the Sibich stuff here. I don’t remember exactly what his angle is, but I do remember the trial coming up in an arc or two, and that it was a fun B plot.

Glad to see the team starting to get back along.

And we end on a cliffhanger!

To give my brief thoughts on the chapter, I like the throughline on the a-plot of the team starting to reharmonize and get back together. And most of the B-plots seem to be setting up for the climax of this chapter, so I’m looking forward to that. For critique, maybe you could argue this could have been divided into two chapters due to the amount of b-plot stuffed into it and causing the a-plot to be dragged out a bit longer than I’d like, but it feels almost like there was a full mini arc in the chapter so I can’t complain too much.

I’ll end here for now and pick up again later. So until then, take care.
 

Nekodatta

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Hi, as I said I really wanted to get more reading done for Fledglings so here I am. I actually read a bit ahead since my last review but since I did a quick reread of the last couple of chapters I may as well give my impressions on those, too.

Chapter 8:
We start off with Pleo waking up in the aftermath of the pirate's attack, and I really like how again and again Pleo's childlike ignorance gets displayed, because obviously he would have no idea what bandages or even medics are, or immediately assume that the pirates still being here means they still need to fight them. I like how diverse the crowd of pirates is and the little details given to the prisoners, like the Jygglypuff being gagged so they can't sing, eh.
The running gag The running gag of Guildmaster/Mayor/Judge Hatteras having to constantly switch scarves is always funny, I wonder how long it will take before someone gets sick of it.
I love how Pleo accidentally not only gets the Community Service idea approved, but also wants to pick someone himself even if he doesn't really understand what it means. That's a way to get a new teammate, I guess, even if a really uncooperative one.
This one was a fun chapter; it gave a bit of a look to how the town would handle captured criminals. I find it interesting that some of the pirates seemed to know what's in the Wastes (or rather isn't), and that exile seems to be a rather common punishment. On one hand, I'm really curious about what's out there, but on the other, I don't really want our little rescue team in the making to be in the situation to find out... Even if I suppose we will, sooner or later.

Chapter 9
The sparring in the first part of this chapter was nice, Pleo obviously still has a long way to go in learning how to fight (and fly.... And do both at the same time), but the highlight of this chapter is definitely Melissa. How TM work is already a bit weird in the main saga, and even more so in Mystery Dungeon. Add the giant question mark that is "how do Porygon work in Mystery Dungeon", and there's the potential for some very fun worldbuilding there. I love how everyone is completely puzzled at both Melissa and what TMs are.
We get a direct mention of Silph, so there's already some interesting implications about that...
Four results? I'm kinda wondering what other moves that are TM or HM produce a similar effect to Fly, but I can't remember any other notable TM at the moment... (Was Bounce a TM? I think it was)
I wonder what happens if a Porygon has no one to help them out of the ""trance"" while they are busy reading a disc. Or how common they are. But the way the whole procedure was described as this strange, mystical magic ritual was delightful, I loved it.
Oh, and Pleo gets a little accessory made out of that King Rock. With the effect they have as held items in the main games, I'm sure that will be extremely useful.
Looks like next chapter will be the first true Mystery Dungeon exploration for the team! Also, small detail, but I really like how HM02 doesn't make Pleo immediately fly but jump higher, since that's actually what the HM translates to in the original japanesr. Nice touch!

Chapter 10
This was another nice little establishment chapter, we can see the team prepare for their upcoming mission and how the mission itself is going to work. I'm really happy to see team Sawtooth get a proper introduction, I was interested in them as soon as they were first mentioned in passing. Looks like that Upgrade and Melissa are going to have to wait a bit more.
So Pokémon DO eat meat? I have to wonder where it comes from. Some mystery dungeon fics use the "feral Pokémon" approach, but here it's established that ferals are as sentient as the "civilized" Pokemon so... but there seems to be some notion and mention of Pokémon hunting each other, since that whole thing with the Skarmory was mentioned.
The gummies being this age - old passed down recipe is a fun bit of worldbuilding, as is the mention of all the various tries until they got a recipe that's nutrious for every kind of Pokémon. Having to cook food suitable for any possible Pokémon species sounds like an absolute nightmare otherwise. I wonder what they do for Pokémon that explicitly have a very specialised diet? Like a Sableye that eats gemstones? Do they just make do with random rocks?
Or Ghost types that feed off negative emotions and the like ... all Pokémon eat gummies so I guess they are just supposed to be this magical food that works for anything.
Excited to see their very first dungeon mission, will definitely be coming back for more during Blitz!
 

Kiba Makuro

Junior Trainer
Pronouns
He/Him, They/Them
Hello Virgil and Fobbie, I'm here for a quick review tag on United of Chapter 3 Bolt of Blue of Fledgelings!

It's a pretty fun chapter with the toddler Lugia, Team Traveller, and the Tromba Island Guild.

I kinda forgot that Nida fell, especially that it was specifically a Pitfall Trap. Nice seeing a trap a la segway into finding the Lugia fledgling by chance. It feels like some folks wouldn't like how convenient it is but let's be honest it's harder to make a good reason without twisting your head off.

Everyone behaved differently to the Pleo, Crom acting all cute to the Lugia, while Nida is pure bewildered/annoyed, Kiran was surprised and all the older Pokémon immediately bowed down.

The luck being questioned is funny.

Pataki was really funny and I liked the mechanics of a whole teleportation crew. Usually folk don't even use the badge features so it was nice to see both teleporting and the recruitment of Mystery Dungeon mon.

The chapter was a little wordy, rather there's fluff on extra descriptions in sentences but it wasn't a slog to read thankfully. Of course that's just a difference in style.

I like how Nida, Crom, and Kiran recognized that Pleo was the same form on the bell, (in which I forgot unfortunately that happened). However it was a little annoying that you played around with the epithets for the Lugia, there were about 4 or 5 in one chapter alone.

Finally we get some closure on Kiran's position, I was wondering how his temporary position would be explained. Also nice to get a reminder on the town and island's name, it's been about 1 or 2 chapters since the reminder, considering it's going to be partially explored by Pleo and Team Traveller soon. We also get to see some new characters of the Guild, including the Ampharos Guildmaster Hatteras, which fleshes it out a little, as we barely got time to look around. Looking around probably didn't fit the earlier chapters too much, besides chapter 1 so I'm fine.

Now we're learning about the other worries of Bluewhorl town, the pirates and the Company, which I've seen a little of in other reviews. Too bad Lugia here is little weak baby, but there's nothing training can't fix, even for a little sea god Protector.

Anyway nice chapter, sorry for not being too in depth but I'm just here for a little bit, keep the good work you two!
 

Nekodatta

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Here for week 2 and some more chapters!

Chapter 11
First detail I noticed about the chapter is the detail of Crom basking in the sun and gliding using his wings. Maybe since they look so rigid I never quite thought they could use them to fly, but it does make a lot of sense... And it's not that weird.
Aw, Pleo is slowly learning what it means to be a protector and decides to leave the food to that feral Pikachu... This was touched upon in earlier chapters, but I think it's the first time we see that Pleo's egg appearing here seems to be a result of the people of the island praying for something specific (a protector that can control the sea and winds), so this makes me really curious about other islands and the world at large... What did other pokemon hope for to get, say.... Regice? It's fun to think about.
Also I really hope that means we'll see other adorable baby legendaries because nnnngh. This fic really gives me those big epic JRPG vibes, where the story starts in a small place in the middle of nowhere and then the team goes out to explore the world at large. This also makes me really curious about Elty, since he's obviously from some other place and seems used to seeing much bigger offerings and shrines.
The fog experienced to enter a mystery dungeon gives me Dark Souls vibes. Or at least, that's how I am picturing it lol. And I assume that holding each other is to avoid entering the dungeon scattered all over the floor in different places. That's smart!
And it's always fun to see the "something's stirring" phenomenon get mentioned in Mystery Dungeon fics.
Also interesting how the ferals seem to know the ritual used in johto to summon Lugia, seems like little bits of human culture got passed down... Interesting that there seems to be multiple versions. (Lugia's song and this one).
Poor Elty gets zero trust lol, they prefer to empty the bag by using stuff instead of giving anything to him.

Chapter 12
I like that one of the first places to get rebuilt in town is the one that handles the booze, feels pretty realistic lol. And it seems that the "Company" mentioned some chapters ago has arrived early... Fortunately right as Pleo is out of town. So these guys supposely gather taxes but I wonder if it's taxes or "taxes" in a more... Criminal way. Because they seem to act like it with the classic "protection money" extortion.
Immortals...?
Lots of interesting worldbuilding in this chapter. And that Mothim picked up one of Pleo's feathers, ouch... People are going to know that Lugia's egg hatched now.
Oh wow, ship burning. That is pretty serious... Oh nevermind, lol.
You know you did a bad job if even Pleo is roasting you about something, lol.
Oh, so stuff can move around even while you are on a specific floor? That sounds like a nightmare and makes things a lot more difficult... Doesn't that make maps relatively useless however? You can't know if what you are drawing is actually still relevant.
Oh no, Team Sawtooth is going to keep waiting for them on the floor assuming they are still there, that's bad...
... And they won't even have stairs to go on, uh, that's worse.
Aaaand they landed in a Monster House, or at least I assume that's what it is...
This chapter was a nice mix of worldbuilding/setting up future conflicts and dungeon crawling, and I think it worked really well as a mix!

Chapter 13
We get thankfully straight back to where we left off with the Monster House, and I like that the team at least tries to use Pleo's status as the Protector again, even if it failed. Actually, I'm wondering what it would take for random Pokémon to actually *believe* him. People seem to just vaguely know what Lugia and other legendaries even look like, so either they do something that's completely unique to them, or it would be just a matter of showing enough power. But what could a Lugia do that's unique to them? Create storm and whirlpools, but arguably other incredibly strong water Pokémon could do it too... Even if not on such a large scale.
And our Team graduated! I'm sure that they won't have to hastily leave as soon as the "Company" comes back looking for Pleo... I just hope that things don't get too rough.

As scary as that Samurott is, they're also really cool. Their dialogue also seems to imply that Pleo wouldn't be the first "god" they have seen awaken or even contacted? Are some legendaries already on their side?

Like they themselves said, even legendaries when they are young would be easily influenced... I can see a sort of weapon's race to see who can "recruit" more "gods" to their side, or killing them so at least no one else can...

Ironic that it's pretty much what the player does in the post game of every Mystery Dungeon game: recruiting every legendary and becoming a literal unstoppable army compared to any other rescue team.

Really looking forward to how things will develop!
 

StolenMadWolf

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Well howdy again! Coming round to carry a fresh load of silv-oh wait, this isn’t the V-Wheel or regular review. Nope, looks like it’s a Review Blitz, and so I’m going to go ahead and start off Week 2 with Fledglings! I’ve already read a few chapters in the past and will be starting things off with Chapter 13 here. Again, I tend to focus on worldbuilding and characters over grammar and writing, but I’ll try and broaden things out here a bit more this time around. Plus a sort of hybrid approach to reviews this time around. Basically, it will have me do comments as I read the story but not literally post by post this time around, rather than summing things up exactly at the end.

So, time to start things off with Chapter 13. Okay, now it must have been a good few weeks or months since I last read through this, because damn, Traveller have got themselves in trouble… again… but hey, this is a PMD fic, this stuff is bound to happen. Oh, and it’s being called a Monster House as well? Well, actually yes, it does seem to be one, at least on the smaller scale of things compared to what I have seen in the past. Still, our young heroes do attempt to try and negotiate… and once again, poor Pleo hasn’t really got to grips with his powers yet. Well, solid effort little guy, but the Ferals, who are surprisingly talkative, aren’t having it, and so combat ensures. For the first time since I’ve started reviewing PMD fan-fics, we actually see a floor trap activate and get put to use for once. So far so good, the combat is suitably quick and to the point, which helps with keeping me hooked in… although I’m getting amused at the amount of times the team stops to make some snarky comment only to get backhanded immediately afterwards. There is one segment when Crom rolls something towards… someone or something. It doesn’t say.

Then bam! We get an interesting take on the Slow Orb with webs and all slowing everyone down. And wait… Pleo is off and using Gust powers, nice… and still we end up in some kind of trouble. Oh, you are being so sensitive about someone wandering into your home… okay, understandable but the joke’s on you from responding to someone stumbling in with the Pokemon equivalent of baseball bats.

Which leads to the suitably humorous and well timed moment for Pleo to learn to fly! One of my favourite burds is finally flying! Cue to hilarious ganking on the remaining Feral and… of course the inevitable crashlanding. Luckily enough, we soon get the escort team making their return and prompting the ferals to immediately break out running. The rest of the chapter proceeds quickly enough, bringing us to the team finding their target and getting ready to depart… with the typical fan girl. Cue the embarrassment.

As a bonus, it does seem that chapter ends on a good moment, with Nida and Crom getting their much awaited promotion! Not Elty and poor Pleo though, cue a friendly pick me up from the others. That’s nice to see! And so… wait, the chapter is still going… leading to seeing Hattera’s concern over the slow progress of Pleo… and oh dear, now the Company can hazard a solid guess at what Pleo is, and are now very interested in having a go at capturing the poor kid. Welp, I think we’ve got our antagonists.


Well, that was a lengthy chapter, so onward to Chapter 14.

And so we go straight into a practice battle… and welp, Elty does a lot better than expected. I mean, seriously, even considering the community service thing, he should probably be given more jobs at some point just because of his abilities… and of course he get’s taken out by yet another crash landing. As a bonus, we get the footer image with Nida riding Pleo here! Awesome to see that referenced!

And soon enough, things start getting dark again, Pleo is obviously going out of the way to help someone out, but as it turns out, someone actually wants someone else to suffer pretty badly. I can’t remember the entire context, but still… gets me thinking.

Soon enou- oh, wait a second. We’ve got some kind of Pokeball’s present in the setting huh? Okay, interesting seeing them a piece of technology as seemingly a cursed item instead. That’s an interesting take, and did make me think twice for a minute there. Ok, and they are good for making Shakes? Is that a Legends thing I missed?

And as it turns out, poor Pleo is trying to not be mean to some Pokemon again I’m beginning to remember again. Who are also terrified of him. Welp, that’s new. And it nearly leads to a massive scuffle until we have a few terrified reactions. Sure, the reactions are overkill, but people have over-reacted on more than a few occasions in the past.

Except… okay. Oh shit, I remember reading this now. Descendents of those who nearly destroyed the world in the past and such? Okay, their terror is pretty understandable then. Having someone have a go at you for something that your ancestor had done? That’s… actually a pretty horrible way to live. That suddenly made this chapter feel a lot more tragic, and it’s the first time Pleo has got hit with potential horrific revelations. No idea if they are true or not, especially with all the end of the world and demon stuff… but dang, that’s going to be bouncing around in his head for a while.


Okay, these are pretty long chapters, so I’m going to pause here for now. Grammar wise, things are all looking good, just a couple of missing words here and there but nothing that would bother me. Whilst there isn’t much in the way of character development, we are seeing more elements with the individual characters, especially Pleo and Elty. They’re still very much my favourite pair of characters in this fan-fic at the moment. We’re also getting a look at the world beyond Toomba, and soon enough, we get a healthy dose of that from the Company. All in all, it seems like things are beginning to move forward at an increasingly rapid rate, and I will definitely be following up to read through the other chapters down the line! The battles are pretty solid too, with a feeling that the plot is going to accelerate in the next few chapters, I’ve got a sense tingling that a few more are going to be coming up soon.

Either way, an enjoyable read! The only thing I would say is the chapters could quite comfortably be split into two or even three chapters, making them more digestible reads. But I think this was something we discussed in the past before. All in all, it was a fun pair of reads. I’ll be following up with another couple of Chapters during the blitz soon.
 

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This is the VERY DELAYED part of a review trade, now for RB2025which will if all goes well cover Ch.73 - most importantly, its pretty good best doggo screentime!

We’re grabbing Ch.73 “Backed Into a Corner” and some parts of Ch.74 “Moving Along”. Given the constraints of review-based events to have this ready for RB2025, we’ll be focusing this time on a special path: that of best doggo.

Elty: “Yay! Woof!” ^_^
Not you, no, unfortunately. Your current going-throughs have been rather bad for you as of late, plot-wise. :p

But don’t worry I have plans for you.

Anyway, as I was saying:

Ch.73+74: The Path of Alvise​

After the ghostly adventures of the last few chapters, we open up with the cast and crew of the Mistral Marauder ready to part with their missing members, a list which sadly for Hess includes Nori. ^_^

Hess: “It is with a heavy heart that I, Hess, captain of this crew, have to announce that our team of volunteers has been killed in action.”
Crew Vileplume: “Uuuuh sir but we have not even recovered the bodies.”
Hess: [sighs] “Fine then, file them as missing in action.”
Rodion: [hastily jolts down notes]
Crew Drednaw: “Uuuuuh, hey Captain, wouldn’t you even spare the effort to send someone to look for them?”
Hess: “No.”
The Crew: “…”
Hess: “Okay, half-mast!”
Crew Drednaw: [while lowering the flags] “More like half-ass…”
Hess: “Welp this is it, the,” forces a crocodile tear, “fateful end of Nori, Valatos and–”
Alvise: “WATCH OUT BEST DOGGO COMING THRU!
No, really, at least the Team Rocket of this story did something good!

Hess: “…Oh no. I mean, Oh well, at least one returned.”
Valatos: “Hey that was my entrance…” [buzzes angrily]
Hess: [eyes twitching] “Okay, so, two. Two managed to escape alive. I take it Nori is dead? Or undead?”
Nori: [climbs up] “Nope!” ^_^
Hess: “…”
Rodion: “…”
Hess: [angrily raises the flag]
Rodion: “…”
Hess: [crunches looking glass in hand]
Rodion: “Shall I go for the rum, sir?” ^_^
Not even Giovanni could be this lucky lol. But hey, Alvise Valatos’s team carries on with a big victory, as they have managed to rescue more from the crew’s lost crew!

Crew still on-board: “Aaaaah! The undead!”
Valatos, Alvise and Nori: [roll eyes]
And so it is time to have it explained to Hess’s crew, who have missed out most of the cool screentime, that the ghosts are FAKE !! And they made FOOLS out of Hess’s crew. And they also have PLEO!!

Nori: “Reminder, captain, that is the bird we’re looking for.”
Hess: “I can’t ever get two goods out of two, no… should have audited for Shiver me Timbers…”
So, Hess says, it’s about time for payback and the crew now has the mission to head over to town and raid it like the, ya know, the pirates they are. And the crew… doesn’t really seem to like the idea, at least until Hess draws the obvious carrot for the stick:

Meme about Hess’s Crew
Meme about Hess’s Crew

Of course, Nori makes the tactically sound decision of informing his boss of an important technical limitation: the FAKE ghosts are barricaded in into a town. So, Hess’s crew is going against a whole TOWN. Oooh if there was only a means to divert their forces or catch them by surprise somehow.

Hess: “Fine, then you go at it as a ‘distraction’, Nori.”
Nori: “W-w-what? Why me? We just go back!”
Hess: “You volunteered.” [nods sagely]
Nori: “…I don’t see how.”
Hess: “Because I-” [holds a grimace] “-like how you’ve worked so much and I think you deserve to show off more of your-” [grimaces some more] “job qualifications.”
Alvise: “See? He likes us!”
Nori: “A-a-are you sure?”
Alvise: Would that big fella smile like that if it was all a lie?”
Hess’s smile:

View: https://youtu.be/gxpIwQoaMX4


And there you have it, boys. The prize granted for doing the work is, of course, getting to do more work!

I knew capitalism was going to be the ruin of the Cradle… well, before it became the Cradle, I mean.

So, with Hess and his crew going to ready the raid, it’s left to our Team Rocket of sorts to take the helm and advance the plot. There’s no such thing as a break for heroes villains after all!

Valatos: [revising the script]: “This sucks. We barely survived.”
Nori: “Do I even have a union lawyer? How much unhappy are we at this, anyway?”
Quite unhappy and displeased, for one. According to the script if they check it, Alvise reaction is that he whimpers and gulps like a coward…

AS IF!!!

We can’t have that going on, right? In this storyline path we stan Manectric.

Alvise: “Okay everyone!” [stomps on the ground] “This is good news! Let’s get back into action!”
Valatos: “Wait wait wait the script says this absolutely sucks!”
Nori: “Yeah come on, enough chapters of this already… Who are you, and what did you do with Alvise?”
Alvise: [flashes fangs] “What? Did I hear some complaining?”
Nori: “N-n-no…?” o_o
Alvise: “We just got ourselves some more screentime. Besides, didn’t we just agree last review that we’d take revenge on those phonies?”
Valatos: [flips pages]: “…Y-yeah, that does was in the script.”
Nori: “They owe us big after what they did…” [sighs] “Oh well, here we go again.”
Alvise: “BEST DOGGO GOING THRU!!”
Valatos: “The casting dept better gives a very good bonus after this chapter…”
And thus the team goes on, dragged on by Hess, once again. To save the day, to win the day for the rest of the crew, once again. Join the pirates they said, there will be rum they said.


The strategy of sorts put forth by Hess is to wait out by the opening of the MD and send out the good team of three to cause some ruckus. Since technically this does not mean engage directly, there might be some good opportunity that nothing bad will happen…

… at first.

Now, for as much as the skip from the ship to the opening of the MD is instantaneous and uneventful and we don’t even hear the crew complaining, at least it serves it well that on this side of the plot we skip right to Hess putting his preferred team into action.

Elty: “Wait wait wait, how about me?”
Sssshhh, you’re Hess’s preferred spy.

And one of the big advantages of skipping right to the opening area is that a big group standing near an entrance is something that’s quick to find out and quick to flush out, so our friendly Ghost Life Telemarketers show up, ya know, ready to dispense the usual “joiiiiin uuuuuus” treatment…

And they quickly get this treatment instead:

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]View: https://youtu.be/E3GGKF6CsjY[/youtube]


Kichiro: “Serves them well, this crew is now under Lord Pleo’s patronage!” ^_^
Anyway, Hess proceeds to literally kick Valatos’s team into action by tossing some stuff after them so they’d move in into the dungeon. Quite a bad consideration to throw rocks at a Bug-type you want to be active, ya know, but we’ll excuse this one because the Marauder’s crew has every right to be angry.

“How are we even supposed to start fires like he asked us to?” the Marowak complained. “Alvise here’s the only one of us who knows any Fire attacks!”
Nori, you literally have hands!

Not to mention Alvise is the local Zinogre equivalent

Luca from offscreen: [waves flags, asking for screentime]
, so he can just spark shoot at whatever he wants in a forest or that is made of wood, to have it halt and catch fire.

Fortunately, they check their quest bag and they do find some quite useful items…

… among other things, Blast seeds and oily rags.

Like, a good lot of them.

Valatos: “…Wait we’ve been carrying magical gunpowder on our backs all this while???” o_o
Nori: “…A-a-are you sure Cpt. Hess likes me?”
…Good thing Alvise was not practising sparks right there and then! XD


After that bit of a moment, Valatos’s team gets to the task at hand. And what better way to do than fireworks? Smoke, and fireworks.

I had not noticed this before but Alvise tossing some burning oily rags to burn stuff is basically a crude version of the Molotov Cocktail… just without the cocktail. I’m not sure Hess would have allowed the team to spend any of the drinkable flammables there! XD

Still. Alvise says Revolution rights!

Valatos: “Hah! This dump burns easier than a Parasect!”
4× Fire weakness (5× on a bad day)? Wow that’s a burn if I’ve ever seen any.

A Gastly shows up, and the team decides not to pass up the opportunity for some payback.

Gastly: “Eek!”
Alvise: “Awoo! Feel tough enough to take on this big bad wolf?”
Nori: “This attitude again.” [wraps sleeve up] “Time to get Alvise out of thi–”
Valatos: [holds Nori] “Wait wait wait…”
Nori: “…Uh?”
Valatos: [flips pages] “This part is in the script.”
Yup, I swear it was not me this time. :p

About time the story acknowledged the big awoo on screen, yeah! In any event, the Gastly flees away, even going into a Phasing Fail Phail as they go, which results in them fainting from outright fear.

And, as a more or less direct consequence of engaging in that direction, Valatos and team realize the hut they are about to vandalize is apparently the base of operations of the former “telemarketers” so they enjoy setting it on fire some extra.

After that, they get to Vince’s team, which they quickly disarm after Alvise priority-preempts them with an electric attack, allowing the rest of the team to swiftly move in.

“Full room” moves like Discharge and Rock Blast are annoying in PMD aren’t they? :p

And after that, well, it’s Team Traveller! Who are just as surprised to see Valatos’s team here as everyone else has been so far!

Now, this time Team Traveller is outnumbering the raiders, and that could go horribly wrong for Valatos’s team.

…Ooooooor:

Pleo: “You guys are mean and we’re gonna stop you.”
Alvise: [does a headcount] “Sorry princess, but you are getting ground down into reality.”
Nida: “What’s that supposed to mean?”
Alvise: “It means this!”
Alvise has realized there’s no Ground-type who can intercept his attacks, so he’s free to herd-hit the whole oppossing team with some impunity. Because in Fledglings area attacks are broken~.

See, Valatos’s team is having a good day today!

…Or, would be, if they hadn’t spent their entire domestic terrorism supply bag as they realize when Nori attempts to equip to help.

Nori: “That useless debutcho only gave us that one orb and stuff to burn things!”
Once again:

Nori! You literally have hands!

Well, barring that, a skirmish would have to do. Any of a number of wayward attacks can probably start a fire, even if by friction, and oooh boy there is some narrative friction here. Valatos goes against a Legendary (oh and Kiran, Kiran is there too), while Alvise is being his awesome as usual.

Our beloved birb tries to can into Thunderbolt, a Tee-yem that was taught to him before, but as usual in such pivotal moments without significant previous onscreen training, it fails to do anything useful. So, at least in what comes to Electric, we can say that Alive’s thunder remains unstolen! :p

Still, consequences are consequences, and Pleo has a hard time dealing with Valatos. Only with Kiran’s help Pleo gains some respite.

Kiran: “Pleo you need to be 65% more aler- YOW!!!”
Yup, that was Alvise just about to teach a bird a lesson on how to be 73% more alert or else get 81% more well-done, too. Compounded with a thunderbolt / thundershock attack to pin the bird to the ground for good measure. :p

Nida tries to intervene but gets a bone to the gut for her trouble, and then Alvise tries one page from the Stygian Zinogre playbook and goes for Pleo with a lunge cancel into an antiair reach, but it is the canine who gets a Dragon typed attack for his trouble.

Still, this inspires Pleo to just Try Harder. Because all the Pokémon games can be brute-forced! :p

Pleo: “I’m the Protector! I have to use the power of friendship!”
Valatos: “Lol, not gonna work pal. You’ll need four more chapters of training.”
Pleo: “Not if I activate my Ashnime powers!”
Valatos: “Wait wh-”
And boom, Valatos plummets quite solidly to the ground via a Thunderbolt from Pleo.

Also: NOOOOO!!! Alvise’s thunder!

Still, Pleo’s team is on the losing side of this one because, among other things, Alvise is cool enough. So Nida tries to strategize the fight so they can take Nori down beforehand. This still leaves two or three members against Alvise tho.

Alvise: [at a Discharge] “I have over 16000 HP in G Rank! You won’t get to just brute-force me, dweebs!”
All things going into the fight, Nida and Nori have some little altercation, with Crom later joining in.

Alvise: “Do I have to do everything here?”
Yes. Hey, it’s screentime, and we stan Manectric in this house. o3o

Alvise: “Fine then. Incoming!”
Aaaaand Alvise proceeds to take out Pleo.

Pleo: “But my Ashnime moment!”
Alvise: “There’s one king of thunder in this fic! Now all that remains is taking out the little bunny and- hey.”
The power of fr- excuse me, the Power of Friendship, now exudes from Nida as she has to save the plot once again! And she’s surrounded by The Light! Dun dun dun dun DUN DUN DUN.

Alvise: “…Why do I hear boss music?”
Yup! It’s time! Your NIDA is evolving!

Alvise: “Not if I can help it!” [BBBBBBBBB]
Your NIDA continues to evolve!

Alvise: “Argh!” [BBBBBBBBBBBBBs fuuriously]
Your NIDA has evolved!

Woo hoo!

It is the once-in-a-lifetime event Crom has been waiting for. I mean, we all. We all have been waiting for. After lots and lots of chapters and adventures and having to endure the to-do of quite some chaperoning on her part, Nida finally evolves into a Nidorina.

Crom: o_o [blushes]
Nida: “Okay! Time for some more Ashnime moment!”
Crom: “Yes dear.”
Alvise: “I’m the quest boss! I’m not THAT easy to take down!”
The two go at each other, with Alvise doing the tried and true electric spasm attack and having the advantage of distance!

Nida: “Nrgh! Can’t fall into paralysis here!”
Crom: “Come on Nida!” [blushes]
Alvise: “Asobi owari da! You’re cooked now!”
[Nida toughs it out so Crom wouldn’t feel sad!]
Crom: “Marry when.”
Alvise: “N-nani!!!”
Nida, now in a stronger and more resilient body, manages to still breach the distance and get close enough to land a crippling, well-aimed, poison attack pretty much at Alvise’s yugular!

And while the two Pokémon fall, Alvise does not any promptly get back up.

Double K.O.!​

Elty: “Yay!”
Hush, precious spy.

Nida just stays there, sprawled over the mutual technical KO which was a quite close fight, but at least Crom is in good enough condition to get closer.

Crom: “Nida!”
Nida: “Crom!”
Crom: “…Nida!” o_o
Nida: “What?”
Crom: [fidgeties] “…You look adult now.” ^_^
Nida: [blushes] “Crom now’s not the time!!!!”
WHEN, THEN??? WHEN???

Some other time, it seems, because with the battle finished here and the fires beginning to rage, and pretty much everyone unconscious or half there, the current (get it? current?) screentime for Team Valatos has them all but fade into unconsciousness.


Alvise and his team woke up to a wonderful island paradise, with various Pokémon around enjoying eternal life.

Alvise: “Oh? What is this? Paradise?”
Nori: “We beat Pleo? D-did we just win Fledglings?”
Valatos: “Is this what paid vacation time feels like? After all that exhausting screentime?”
Roteck: “See, you are now our guests.”
Nori: [all serious]: “Oooh… so that means you have to entertain us!”
As if! Darth Valter is quick to slap these three now-prisoners back to reality. The three mons, now tied up after their defeat, are brought in to be JUDGED!

Because now, Darth Valter and Emperor Cernum show up into the proceedings.

Darth Valter: “It is now time for you to be assigned your punishment.”
Alvise: “Phah! I’m the designated Zinogre of this chapter! I’m not afraid of you.”
Darth Valter: “Given your role as pirates, I find your lack of fear of the judiciary systems, disturbing.”
The proceedings are going to be quite short, however. Given the town vandalism (hey, I didmention the quasi-molotov cocktails!) and the attempt on one Protector, it seems the punishment for Valatos and team is going to be quite steep.

Valatos: “…Wh-what is that?”
Darth Valter: “It’s a Teleport Gem. We shall use it to assign you to a painful and lasting punishment…”
Nori: [gulps]: “Oh no… no, not the Lost Zone!”
Valter: “No.”
Alvise: “Uh, then the Shukrute?”
Valter: “We speak post-apocalyptic English here, you.”
Valatos: “…Uh, then the Shadow Realm?”
Valter: “No… this is much worse.”
Guardia: “Well, what can be worse? Are you planning to make them weird undead like you?”
Alvise: “I get cool screentime in the Fledglings reviews! I don’t wanna be a zombie!!!”
Valter: “No. You shall be assigned… community service.”
Nori: “…”
Valatos: “…What.”
Guardia: “…This can’t be Sidious.”
As such, Team Valatos is now assigned to what given the circumstances will be a long offscreen time…

…ooooor an escape plot. Who knows!

What might happen to them, we shall know after the next review, because the next one will be some bits of Ch.73 and the majority of Ch.74 but from the other doggo perspective of this arc: Elty!

Elty: “Yay!”
Please don’t leave me without doggo characters to review
 
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Hey guys! I spun a wheel to see what fic I should catch up on next and Fledglings ended up coming up, so I’m back again. I’m going to cover 2 chapters this time, since that will bring me to the end of the arc. So with that out of the way, let’s continue.

Chapter 53
First, we check in on Lyn and Elllsberg, who stumble upon a couple of beaten lackeys. Lyn makes it quite clear why he’s in charge here. A part of me thinks they would have been sliiightly better off if they hadn’t tried to lie. Slightly. There are few pokemon who can get away with trying to pull one over him, and these two aren’t competent enough for that.

Then we have the kids working together to defeat the hippopotas and hipowdon from the last chapter. It’s good to see them getting along again. I do want to critique the fight scene a bit here. I feel like it drags on a bit too long for my tastes. I think part of it might be the prose style, admittedly. There’s a lot of use of names and epithets in the fight. Sometimes it makes sense as it clears up who is taking what action. But at other points it just makes the action feel clunky because of how long it makes it take to get to the point, if that makes sense.

Nagant meets up with the local rulers, which can’t mean anything good for the kids. Especially since they’re only just getting to the mystery dungeon and have no clue what they’re about to walk into. And if I remember what point of the story we’re at… Well, I’ll wait and see if I’m right.

In the scene with Hess, we see that he decides to follow Elty’s word instead of following Sibich. It works out, given what happens to said cofagrigus iirc.

And the kids get out, almost get into a skirmish, and then are welcomed to town. Lets see how things shake out for them now…

Chapter 54
I don’t have as many specific thoughts about this chapter. The kids trying to not be suspicious and ending up being even more suspicious was cute, but they’re lucky that Alius just saw them as a bunch of injured kids and didn’t think it was suspicion worth pursuing.

Meanwhile, Lynn’s got the right idea that the imperials not searching the dungeon means Pleo isn’t there, but for the wrong reasons lmao. But man, he’s not screwing around this time. This is one of the more brutal fights we see on screen, given that someone straight up gets stabbed. Ouch.

And now we have Lynn chasing Nagant, Crom’s group chasing Nagant due to a lucky tip-off, and Hess chasing Crom’s group. There’s something kind of funny about the conga line here.

Because I read this arc in pretty spread out chunks, I don’t really have a lot to say about overall thoughts. I’m glad that the kids were able to make up, and I’m glad to see a shift in the status quo, what with Pleo actually getting caught and how that changes the dynamic.
If I remember correctly, our next arc is the courtroom drama. I’m looking forward to it. Until next time.
 

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Hey guys! The wheel has selected Fledglings once again, so I’m back for another trio of chapters. For now, I’m electing to skip the crossover chapters since they’re not really canon/relevant to the main story. Maybe I’ll come back to it later, but I’d rather focus on plot progression for the time being. With that out of the way, lets jump in!

Chapter 55
Jumping into the second scene since I don’t have much to say about the first, I think that this really shows the difference between Nagant and Lyn. While she’s not going to offer a plethora of help, Nagant recognizes Team Traveler as a bunch of kids and is giving them the opportunity to leave and go home. Compare that to how the same kids have been treated by pokemon in the Company… The Empire isn’t particularly good, but they do definitely read as the lesser of two evils.

I do like that Ketu gets knocked down just a peg by Lyn here. Sure, he lets it just roll off his back, but there are consequences for his haughty behavior. But as one of the more resourceful pokemon, he is (unsurprisingly), leading the first of the three groups that get past the gate and into the city proper.

In the next scene, we get a brief reminder of the fate of Conntow, which (if I remember correctly) is where Nagant is from. I think it ends up coming up a little in this arc, and moreso not too much later, so that doesn’t surprise me.

Not gonna talk about Alvise and Hess’s group yet, as I remember it being relevant soon enough. Same with the beginning of the arc’s plot on Team Traveler’s side. I think it best to wait until they meet the defendants to discuss, which I believe is the next chapter. But I did enjoy the subtle nod to the TTYD trouble center (I think that’s what the reference was.)

Chapter 56

Not only is this a courtroom drama arc, it’s also served with a side of a tournament arc!

First, we have the setup where Pleo is presented to the ruler. I do find it amusing that she gives Nagant Opera tickets instead of what she was actually wanting. Though I’ll also I’ll give Aleria one thing: she does show that she intends to give Nagant her title back. She just doesn’t have the means to right now.

The second part of this chapter sets up the courtroom side of things. I remembered roughly what the plot was, but not all the details. Hoo boy. They have their work cut out for them. Especially since the pokemon are marked.

After that, a not-insignificant part of the remaining chapter involves setting up all the moving pieces in the tournament. Particular highlights include Crom’s group getting the announcement with comedic timing and Ketu getting served some humble pie. On the Maurader side of things, Rodion is ever the voice of reason. But like. He’s not wrong. Just like Lyn, Hess is likely to be recognized, which would put all his plans on ice.

Chapter 57
And finally, Team Traveller is reunited! (Minus one notably absent Pleo, who's stuck watching events unfold.) It’s good to see them finally united, about 50 chapters later. This arc really is a bit of a turning point for the story. The formula has shifted. The kids are back together. Now they just need to work out how to rescue Pleo. But in the short term, they have other problems to deal with. Such as…

The tournament! I don’t really have much to say about the fight, but the audience surrounding it? Damn, they’re brutal. I suppose team Anomaly does have the home field advantage. I do kind of like the idea of a team made up of shinies, except for that one weird ice vulpix. He’s not shiny, he’s just strange.

The tournament does, of course, cause them to run behind for the court trial. I do enjoy the chicanery and all the Ace Attorney references. I’m not super deep into that series, but I understand enough that I get most of the jokes.

Meanwhile, things are heating up between Ketu and Nagant. I can’t remember if they have another notable interaction as far as I got into the party. But I’d love for them to. Nagant is certainly on to Ketu, and he clearly recognizes her as a threat.

Finally, we have the kids getting jumped by Alvise, Valatos, and Nori, who are definitely about to get themselves into a load of trouble before their match. And that was before we considered the appearance of the Don’s men, something I’ll probably talk about in my next review.


I’ll end things off here. Aside from maybe some minor critiques, I don’t have much to say. I think I did see a typo where Rita was referred to as “The Rita,” but I can’t easily go back and search right now. Things are heating up, and we’re not even at the halfway point for this arc (especially given that two of the upcoming chapters are split into two parts does feel like a nice break point for now. So until next time.
 

Arukona

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Hello there! Figured I’d hop on this fic in Week 2 to avail of that ‘reviewed before’ bonus and get some more chapters of this very longfic read. Always a pleasure to jump in and see what the cutest little big birb is getting up to, and I’m looking forward to doing just that. So let’s jump right in and pick up where we left off…

Chapter 27

Ah yes, the old “commander reprimands his subordinates for slacking off” moment. First comparison to come to mind was the “Crashing the mobile artillery into a house?!” scene from XC1 and now I imagine this Rhydon to have the same voice as Vangarre. I’m not sorry.
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I have to praise the unique species pick for Valatos, given how uncommon Yanmega are in PMD fics. Legit can’t think of a single other named Yanmega anywhere.

Administrator Farn certainly gives off intimidating vibes. That makes it an easy guess for which Luxray ability she has, then.

The Braixen was a Zoroark all along? I suppose if they were openly the latter, that would allow distrust to fester, given the usual reputation Zoroark usually get. On another note, that’s yet another Zoroark non-MC character - a trend I’ve seen a surprising amount of in PMD fics. Then again, they are popular...

I can’t exactly blame Lyn for his wariness to cut Pleo’s feathers - Farn’s anger would probably be just as bad if our precious little Lugia came back to them harmed.

"How on earth do you get bested by a bunch of untrained peasants?!" she hissed. "Twice?!"
You’d be surprised at the power of unity in the hands of the many, Farn. After all, that’s how the speakers of Boisocéan’s tongue in our world overthrew their monarchy.

TIL that an ottoman is also the name of a low seat and not just the name of an empire.

Seems there’s some baggage with this Darzin person - I wonder what’s going on there?

Lmao those three are still slacking. They’ll all be doing fifty laps of Kenobi if they don’t get back to work.

For the port towns we’ve seen so far, I always picture Sea Winds and Travelers from FE Echoes as an appropriate music accompaniment.

"But… I can't read, though," he chirped, tilting his head quizzically.
Illiteracy is a bitch. :sadbees:

Oh no, a Marked - not what we need at a time when our gang need to lay low.
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What a warm, welcoming establishment the ‘bokuya is. Not.

Hang on, that Zangoose’s name is Scian - the Irish word for knife. Could it be…? :eyes:

"Hey, I didn't start anything this time!" Scian shot back. "That péist stuck her tongue out at me after giving that spot!"
Holy shit confirmed. We’re getting close to that Irish-speaking island that Fobbie’s alluded to a few times and I await seeing more people like the Zangoose eagerly. :veelove:

On another note, nice having a Zangoose and Seviper tussle, alluding to their long rivalry. :quag:

Now over to the Siglo Swellow where they’ve landed in Boisocéan.

Oof, being hugged by your son with Rough Skin. That’s gotta hurt.
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Oh dear, Elty can’t pay. And now they’ve got an angry barkeep on their hands.

This lot speak in Spanish, and one of them’s a Nidorino. Could there be a familial relation to Nida here? :eyes: Seems like there might be…

Chapter 28

I get the feeling that the Siglo Swellow gang will always be one step behind where Team Traveller are, but when they do eventually catch up, it’ll be a Big Damn Heroes moment with happy reunions abound.

Oh, this is funny - these are Company ‘mons. Looks like there’s a misunderstanding to clear up.

And they get to do Community Service? Oh ho ho, I’m gonna love this. :copyka:

Now back to Kenobi, where our trio appear to be heading into a rougher part of town. A good sign, surely (not).

Aww, poor Nida, with homesickness beginning to hit. :sadwott:

They have sliding doors here? Wasn’t expecting that.

As with researchers, some can be a little too nosy when going about their business - like with how they’re measuring up Pleo here.

Lmao they really thought they’d get volunteers for Apricorns? :mewlulz: Only daredevils would dare sign up for that.

Just about every island has a group of rabbit Pokémon that seem to remember details differently. Sometimes the Prince is a Nidorino, sometimes he's a Lopunny, sometimes he's a Diggersby, and so on," the Poison-Type explained.
That is in the nature of mythology, to have similar version of tales between cultures.

Much to Elty and his teammates' swift regret, Team Taxonomy's members were all too eager to indulge the Growlithe's curiosity. They went through the legends of how Arceus had passed on the skill of writing by teaching Pokémon to form runes with footprints to preserve what they remembered of human knowledge.
This long-winded explanation reminds me of a Paper Mario-esque sceen when a character gives a boring, long-winded speech and the characters all fall asleep.

Deciphering the writings of old - a familiar struggle to archaeologists. I can imagine those studying Linear A can relate to such difficulties.

Those guys are on the bad side of the Cubone and Marowak, huh? I think I see where the next party member’s gonna come into the story…

Back in the bar, and it looks like word of Pleo is getting around.

Hess is in the bar! :veelove:

So capturing Pleo’s gonna be these guys’ stepping stone to getting out of trouble and possibly striking it rich through bounties, eh?

Into the Dungeon itself, where Elty’s as much of a bellyacher as ever.

And it seems like they’re being followed…

Chapter 29

Guessing the team’s reached a rest floor if the ceiling is that high.

So I guess it’s not Nori, Alvise and Valatos they have to worry about first, but ferals instead. Cubone, specifically.

Elty taking the bone and running with it, making dogs everywhere proud (or jealous) as he goes. Lil' pupper~
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These Cubone are surprisingly stubborn foes. And there’s a whole colony of them in here…This ain’t looking good.
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Over to Boisocéan, where Crom is accidentally terrorising the local young;uns. Might be better to hang back and let your dad do the talking here, kiddo.

"B-But they're big and have teeth and claws!" the violet rat squeaked. "And-! And-!"

"Eh?!" Crom protested. "But you just ran to hide behind a Pokémon with bigger teeth and claws than us!"
Wow, Crom, sick burn right there. :mewlulz: That gave me a good chuckle.

Quite a nosy Clawitzer there - and a familiar face at that… :eyes: We’re definitely gonna be seeing more of her in the future, that’s for sure.

Back to Kenobi, where those Cubone from before are getting patched up.

They’re a fiery lot this colony, but not without morals. Fingers crossed they and Team Traveller can work something out.
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Over to that Beheeyem that Nori was referring to, where working life appears to have sucked him dry. I can relate.
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"A female Nidoran, a Gardie, and some strange white seabird with an ugly mug?" Nori questioned.
Oi! Pleo’s not ugly! Take that back! :screm:

Criminals stealing from criminals - an endless circle of theft.

Oh, emeras are a thing in this world? In that case, I’m looking forward to seeing Team Traveller overrun their enemies with Barrage and Type Bulldozer in the next few chapters, and getting through the Dungeon easily with Clairvoyance. :copyka:

Oh no, a Monster House!
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Cue the music.

And damn, even the Petrify Orb tactic didn’t work. This is one hell of a bind they’re in.

And they’re being cornered by the Marowak, along with their iron-clubbed leader? …Perhaps surrendering here might be the better choice after all.

Chapter 30

Interesting lore about Cubone helmets and about the ways they’re mended over time.

Aww, Pleo learning about paint. Cute little birb~
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And as it turned out, that caused the amicable turn that gave the leader incentive to offer them rest.

Back over to Boisocéan, where father, son, mentor and the village outcast are going looking.

Margi and Daraen are leaving to escape the Company? I suppose the Company sails on the Siglo Swellow are doing more harm if they’re causing this reaction.

Here’s hoping that Margi and Daraen don’t end up being visited by the Company who vowed vengeance upon them for aiding and abetting Pleo.
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Back to the Cubone colony, where our three heroes are clear sleeptalkers. Might as well have them learn Rest and Snore further down the line to capitalise on this strength. :copyka:

Being hit by a Cubone’s club is certainly a surefire method to wake someone up. On the other hand, ouch, that’s gotta hurt for those on the receiving end.
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Literacy from a feral? Damn, Pleo’s getting outclassed here. :sadbees:

I’m presuming that Cubone being dragged off that they mention was how Nori got involved with Alvise and Valatos instead of being in here among his brethren.

a short snippet describing a great white bird taller than a house with the power to beckon the winds, which sure enough was indeed identified as the Legendary 'Guardian of the Seas', the Protector of an island of waterspouts.
Quite difficult to imagine little Pleo being the size of a house. But he’ll grow into a fine Lugia one day, I’m sure.
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So this is where the ‘trial’ mention earlier begins. Cue the music, then.

Certainly proving your negotiating prowess well here, Elty. Real smooth of you.

So this is where that Cubone from the title card comes into the fold. Welcome to the gang, Shugodeshi.

Or never mind, Guardia. Better name, less long-winded.

Also I see that Elty’s gonna get his fair share of baps in the near future from his new teammate.
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Can’t say I don’t appreciate Guardia’s willingness to not dawdle. Some folks could certainly use that mentality.

I wonder if this patrol might prove to be useful if they happen across those other three that are hunting Team Traveller down.

Chapter 31

Turns out that, for all her ferocity, Guardia doesn’t know squat about the outside world.

Strange how Elty’s gone quiet - does he sense something that the others don’t?

Oh crud, those three are being teleported right into where Team Traveller are.
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I don’t know who I’d want less as a supervisor - the grouchy Samurott commissioner or the Rhydon with the Vangarre voice.

Looks like the team have an uphill battle at first here, but at least they have the numbers advantage with Guardia in tow.

Lightningrod working its magic. In multi-opponent fights, it’s certainly a godsend.

Alas, it’s not enough to turn the tide, and they have to rely on the Dungeon inhabitants to save their asses. Though given the efficiency by which the Dungeon ‘mons manage the three layabout ‘mons, one can’t call them unwelcome backup.

Just noticed that every village elder thus far on Pleo’s side has done a damn good job at standing up to their enemies. Hatteras, Maranda, and now Tetsuzui - great to know that Pleo has such allies by his side.
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But you see, working together is a key foundation of a good fighting ability, Pleo.

Now over to Boisocéan, where Crom’s his curious kid self about what Kenobi’s like.

I suppose every little helps on the way towards climbing the ranks, especially when Team Traveller are the rookies that they are.

And this is where the Clawitzer begins to make their move…

Looks like those three ex-pirates are in for a hiding. Don’t mess with a Cubone colony, that’s the lesson here.

Chapter 32

Do Marowak and Cubone necessarily need their clubs? Given they learn a whole host of other moves that don’t involve their club. Guess Nori should’ve thought of that for situations like this one. :copyka:

Alas our gang is faced with the inescapable truth that Pleo is a ‘mon that catches the eye for his unique appearance - even before folks catch on to the fact that he’s the Protector of Tromba. And now that Lyn’s in port, the options before them are getting more narrow by the second…

Ah, there’s the recognition that Nori’s from the Cubone colonies here on Kenobi.

leaving his companions to shoot unimpressed glares at their companion.
This part feels a bit repetitive - maybe simply reduced “their companion” to “him”?

Always gotta love when baddies get their comeuppance, and that’s no difference here. That’s what you all get for messing with the cutest thing around~
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Seems like the Cubone colonists have a back entrance. But now that begs the question - what are our intrepid foursome going to do now? Over to the next island, presumably?

Thick sea fog makes me think that’ll be the perfect environment for ghosts to come out. In fact, come to think of it, I do vaguely recall seeing a teaser in the #fic-updates in TRCord about a chapter that involved a ghost ship…
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Good to know that Pleo’s big enough to carry a third small ‘mon. Even as a babe, he’s still a capable carrier.

So now the mission is for Pleo to get more power to defend himself with. Hopefully he’ll become a force to be reckoned with. :quag: I wonder if there’ll be someone Legendary tutor he’ll train his power with - that would be cool to see.

‘Dead Zone’ sounds like a hella ominous place - which no doubt means our gang will be going there at some point. Here’s hoping they can survive by the skin of their teeth whenever they head there.
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Already predicting that Vollezee is the Dutch-speaking island and where Valatos comes from.

"The island's inhabited by ferals and all the Pokémon like us live underwater!"
Bold of you to speak badly of ferals in a den of ferals, Elty.

All these options being read out does speak volumes as to just how much the Company controls in this world. Monopolies on land control are never fun for those who have to live under them, and doubly so for those who have to flee them. :sadbees:

"Elty, we're not pirates," Nida hissed.
Well, at this rate, you might well have to be, Nida. :copyka: Mightn’t be so bad - I could imagine Pleo rocking a pirate’s hat pretty well.

Tough crowd, Elty, explaining astrolabes and stars to those who don’t know what those are. :mewlulz:

This talk of using stars as a guide makes me wonder if Kichiro had a specialty in that back in Hess’s crew, given Ledian’s natural affinity with starlight.

Lmao, Guardia’s reactions to flying. :mewlulz: I suppose a Ground-type living in the ground would be completely unused to it.

Hang on a minute, this ship…with a Sandslash and a Clawitzer…is this what I think it is? :eyes:

Oh, there’s a Ponyta as well. Yep, this is what I think it is.
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Now where’s the one I’ve been awaiting most of this fic for…?

"Captain Nugg-" a Cranidos began, only to see the Clawitzer level her big claw at him. The dome-headed dinosaur promptly cried out and hastily amended his words with a startled squeal. "Ack! Nagant! Nagant!"
There he is! Best little dino! Oh, Cabot, you’re finally here! :veelove:

A new faction joins the mix…the Empire, who after a few passing mentions are finally beginning to make their move.

Chapter 33

Ooh, a new chapter background. :eyes: Bye bye, Kenobi, and onto newer pastures.

Intriguing how the little strands of giveaways are how our villains end up catching up to Pleo. If only little info tidbits being dropped could be how our heroes end up finding ways out of situations.
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Bunch of nervous wrecks, our intrepid trio are. Then again, who wouldn’t when flying above open ocean?

Oh crud, that’s a storm, and Pleo’s heading right for it.
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Except he seemed to weather it pretty well. Almost forgot for a minute that Lugia tend to have some ability to control that very thing.

And now we’re on Mengir…albeit not quite. It’d be the equivalent of doing a transatlantic flight from the US to Ireland and landing on Inishbofin. :sadbees:

But after some shenanigans involving a crate, into the town our gang slither.

Oh dear, there’s a visiting Administrator here.
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Though they sound somewhat incompetent, they’re still a Company ‘mon.

And it seems Guardia’s a little too eager to pick fights. Looks like there’s some adjusting from her feral life to get over, so it’s not as though Team Traveller have been handed a Disc One Nuke with her.

Nice to put an enemy’s possessions to use, with the gang using Valatos’s purse for their own means.

Huh, another PSMD-alike in that Swirlix there. I wonder if that was intentional, given what you said before about Hatteras not being a dead ringer for PSMD!Ampharos.

Hearing ‘Nani?’ from Guardia makes me wonder if she’ll ever say ‘Omae wa mo shindeiru’ at any point. Probably not, but a humorous thought nonetheless.

Oh, a Skarmory! :quag: Another favourite ‘mon of mine being a character in this story. This is why I love big cast adventures, because there’s plenty of species about and thus plenty of chances to rope in a reader’s favourite species and get them hooked on the fic that way. Or for current readers, a way to endear them to a character based on species alone (as you’ve no doubt seen with me and Hess).

"Why, I'm the Warrior of Life and Paladin from the ashes of Blackmoon Village! Trizano, the Valiant Knight Skarmory!" the bird answered, revealing beaming eyes that had curious blotches over his pupils to form rough crossing bands. With that, the creature entered a bow, and fanned out his feathers with an audible swish, the light glinting off their edges. "At your service!"
And Trizano is certainly an interesting character with his flamboyant nature. I look forward to seeing more of him in the future.

Oh shoot, Ellsberg’s here. Looks like the gang will have company soon.

A little ways down the back alley, Nida took shelter under a battered, overturned wooden crate and curled up in a nervous ball in the darkness.
Aww, poor Nida. :sadwott: Would gladly offer hugs if she didn’t have her barbs out.

A Grovyle, eh? Any relation to Osmund, perhaps?

"Bluhh… Water… ship... Town!" he cried.
Clever play on words what I’m assuming is one of the main inspirations behind this fic.

This Grovyle totally isn't suspicious at all, no sirree. Not at all.
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And now back to Tromba, where Hatteras is openly musing thoughtfully - not too unlike how I’d imagine a certain other Ampharos from the games doing.

I haven't seen you get an envelope this stuffed since that one last month from that investigator that's been looking for the missus and the kid!"
I might be missing something - what’s the ‘investigator looking for the missus and the kid’ implying and/or referencing?

I hope the Siglo Swellow lot don’t get homesick easily, because that’ll be a lot of letters being sent. Hey, at least the mailmon will be kept in business.

Dang, they wasted no time getting to Kenobi. Just a pity that Nida and co. have already left there. :sadbees:

"Why we can see the Siglo Swellow's masts from-"

The Fraxure pointed off back at the docks towards where the Siglo Swellow ought to be, only to discover that the lavender sails they had disguised the craft with made it blend in a little too well with the other Company ships at dock.
This is why you make your ship distinguishable in some way, Pladur. I know stealth is necessary in a time like this, but this is something of a problem if it blends in too easily.

"Well… I'm Pladur, Chief Cook of the the Siglo… er… Swanna!" the Fraxure offered. "And this is my son, Crom."

"Ah, so I see you take after your dad in more way than one," the Aerodactyl chuckled, extending a claw to Crom. "The name's Kellner. So where'd you two come in from, anyways?"

The two dragons froze for a moment, as Crom wondered what he should try and say back. He couldn't say they were from Tromba… and Boisocéan would be suspicious…but, where else could he claim to be from?

"Uh… we're… from…" Crom fumbled, only to be swiftly cut off.

"The Capital!" Pladur interjected. "We're here for an assignment!"
Great job, you two. Keep that abysmal lying up and the Company will have you in stocks before long. :mewlulz:

"Have those three brought before me!" the lioness' voice bellowed. "I am going to get an explanation about what's going on from them, even if I have to tear it out of their hides!"
Oh boy, Alvise, Nori and Valatos are in for a hiding from their higher-ups. :copyka:

Here’s hoping Crom and Pladur don’t get caught up in trouble here on Kenobi, given what the other half of Team Traveller went through before.

Back to Mengir, where we find a named Gyarados character. Again, unique choice - I’m struggling to think of any other PMD fics with a named Gyarados character.

Boy, Darzin and Zorn sure love arguing. Certainly forgetting about the other important dignitary nearby.

Or judging by Zorn’s reaction, clearly not someone worth his time. Funny how Ellsberg starts out as Lyn’s boss and seems to be uppity and high strung, yet shrinks back in the face of a more menacing Administrator like Zorn.

Only thirty seconds? Not much room for leeway there. Thankfully, Ellsberg only needs five.

Chapter 34
When Ellsberg turned his head back at Darzin, he saw that the bulk of his body had been encased in a layer of ice still spreading from a bite at his left shoulder.
Well, that’s one way to put someone on ice. Quite literally, in this case.

the three set off shoving the hefty Dragonite for the door in fits and spurts and complaints of "could he get any fatter?"
I get the feeling this won’t be the last dig we hear about Darzin’s weight.

"The Protector here on Mengir got shipped off-island before the Petrification of Conntow! And the only one you've told me of is that sea fairy that drifts among the ocean clans and hasn't come ashore in years!"
The Petrification of Conntow? That sounds like a sinister historical event alright, one that brings to mind a town of civilians being turned to stone.

Oh dear, Zorn's got a plan that the team are going to fall for hook, line and sinker. And one that might well land our little Protector in a world of hurt.
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Outside Zorn's chambers, we’re introduced to a whole bunch of new faces here on Mengir. No doubt some readers might complain about this fic having too many characters (they probably have done already), but I like it. If all the characters came in the first few chapters of the fic and not many new characters introduced here, it would make this island a bit sparse in terms of citizenry.

(On a side note to that, I may be taking a few notes here in regards to that for my own fic, regarding not being afraid to introduce more characters to make a region or country feel ‘lived in’, so to speak.)

Seems we have more Marked on this island. Surely it’ll be sooner rather than later that the Company will use one in their plot to catch Pleo, and instead of something like Ander’s reluctance allying with the Siglo Swellow gang, there’ll be a Marked desperate to exterminate Pleo to the point of hunting him down to the ends of the Cradle.

Oh, there’s the Grovyle from before, who’s managed to lure Team Traveller right into their trap. But then as villains tend to do, right when they have the heroes where they want them, they inadvertently provide them with another opportunity to escape.
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The Commander pushed a set of pirate bounties out into the middle of a table. There was one for a Nidoran, another for a Growlithe, and another pair for a Nidorina and Hydreigon.
Dang, if everyone who helps Pleo ends up with a bounty, the Company's gonna have one big stack of papers by journey's end.

I do wonder how well the Guild would take their rules being bent by an outside force. If it’s anything like Tromba, there’ll be some resistance, alright.

Part of me wonders if one of these Company administrators might actually turn a blind eye to Team Traveller at one point, do a Duessel, turn against the Company and help our little heroes out.

That scene with Crom and Pladur in training made me think for a second I missed a section last chapter and I was like, “Wait, were they cornered in the streets of Aisle Town?”
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Heal up those wounds, Crom. Best not to let those get infected.
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The young Dragon-Type picked up conversations about friends, family, tips for how to court a crush… along with chatter about a suspicious ship that pulled in overnight with "white sails with red saltires" from some passing grunts.
Maybe you should listen in on that second convo, Crom. Might help you with Nida further down the line when you're both a bit older. :copyka:

Hmmmm, something very fishy going on with Ander’s bag there, possibly. Or…could it be a Metal Coat?

Oh no, the bounties are here. And I can already imagine a Wingull seeing at Pleo’s wanted poster and yelling, “Oi! He looks nothing like us!” :screm: and tearing it to shreds à la Nia in XC2.

Good to know there’s at least some Company ‘mons that consider the whole Pleo hunt a farce, and Pladur may well have found an ally with Kellner here.

But a pity to know that their search for Nida and Pleo will turn up empty with stale intel at best. :sadbees:

Over to Team Traveller now, and it appears our gang have overslept. That’s what happens when you don’t get your eight hours, kiddos.
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Another Guardia culture clash. I get the sense this might be a recurring theme for a while until our resident Cubone learns more about the world beyond her colony.

Hopefully one day Pleo can get his swimming mission, whether it’s without the rest of the gang or not.

In the meantime, off they go to get food, and good thing they did because in comes Salvini, ready to reel them in.

Tough crowd with the merchants. Not like we’d expect much of them anyways.
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Drawing pictures might be a bit too big an ask for at least one of this gang of four. Though Guardia could manage - she’s probably done it in her colony before - and Pleo with his Lugia yaoi hands mightn’t fare too badly as well.

It was a bit of a peculiar request, but...
Yeah, it’s an outright trap, is what it is.

Lmao Salvini’s reaction to them wanting to play on the sands. :mewlulz: Makes me wonder, though; could this be what makes our resident Grovyle begin to have second thoughts?

Pity the gang don’t have a bucket with them - the ultimate essential tool to building a sand castle. :sadbees:

The day Pleo unleashes a full-strength Aeroblast will be un momento épico.

Gotta feel for Nida and Pleo here with their homesickness. :sadwott: Here’s hoping they can find a path back to Tromba eventually.

Chapter 35

I have to laugh at the fact that the Company ‘mons completely forget the fact they’re dealing with a group of kids. :mewlulz:

Aww, cute to see Crom in awe of all the pretty colours. :veelove: Maybe Tromba could take a few notes, as Kiran says.

Why do I get the feeling Alvise, Nori and Valatos will end up with the Iron Fleet? Given that they’re missing three members (Elty, Pyry and Pekka), and having three ex-pirates show up at their door would conveniently fill those slots. And maybe even result in a betrayal arc from our resident fire pubby when he learns he’s been replaced, if this theory ever does come to fruition.

Just a pity that the bright colourful streetscape of Aisle Town doesn’t translate to quashing of antisocial activity, if that Golem was anything to go by. :sadbees:

So the pirates are a necessary evil, to make sure the Empire doesn’t swoop in and claim Kenobi for themselves.

Oh hey, it’s Guardia’s brethren, making sure the loose end of the book is tied up. Pity that stealth isn’t exactly a forte of theirs.

Damn, they missed an opportunity to tell them about Team Traveller’s whereabouts. And thus the wild goose chase continues for a while longer.

Now over to Lyn, who’s his grouchy self as ever. And now he’s learned that Pleo’s at Mengir, which means there’ll be an even higher chance for the gang to be cornered.

"Let's see how much longer your luck holds, Guardian."
Yeah…as much as I hate to admit it, I do have a feeling as though Pleo’s luck is gonna run out at some point in the near future.

Lmao Guardia still in the ambush preparation frame of mind when being jolted from sleep. :mewlulz:

"Eh?!" Pleo cried "But then we would have woken up late again, and- Ooh, what kind of plant is that?"
Pleo definitely falling into the category of Attention Deficit…Ooh, Shiny! right here.
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Oh, it’s a Blast Seed plant? Looks like the team might have a new ammunition supply. Also I see the blast seeds here take the form of throwable projectile as opposed to a fire breath after ingesting it. Slight pity there - part of me was hoping Pleo would have an interesting experience breathing fire after chomping down on a blast seed.

Scout again! Boy, this is getting to be a familiar routine.

Apricorn farming? …That can’t mean anything good, given what we know about them thus far.
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I reckon this constant alluding to the Grovyle not being able to fathom the movements of Team Traveller is adding credence to my theory that she’s gonna do a Heel-Face Turn and help them out of a jam when the four inevitably clash with the Company in a short while.

Now back to Tromba, where Marley’s still stewing over her lost daughter. But all it takes is a message of hope to raise those spirits, and maybe her message can find its way to Nida and she too can grasp those extra shreds of hope.

‘Defilers’ sure seem to be a common insult hurled at civilised ‘mons by ferals. First Kenobi’s Mystery Dungeon, and now here on Mengir too.

Ooooof, headfirst into a Blast Trap. That’s gotta hurt.
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Funny how aborting the mission would throw the Company’s plans even more out of wack. Then again, maybe it would provide them with the means to capture them on the spot and save Salvini and Hertsog the trouble of having to delve into the Mystery Dungeon.

"We should moving move along," he whispered.
Slight correction here.

Our team isn’t getting out of this Mystery Dungeon unscathed, are they?

Now back to Trizano, where I eagerly await his flamboyant diatribes.

"As for the mission… what can I say? When you're an Immortal, the rush of a job well done fills you with determination!"
As it does for anyone, I’d imagine.

Dimitri, huh? And with that, my headcanon voice for this Kabutops goes to Chris Hackney.

Ah, so Trizano’s diligence in getting missions done is why the mission board in the Guild is so bare. Interesting, interesting. There’s also the matter of his patron - I wonder who that could be?

the Skarmory realized he couldn't leave those kids alone for much longer. Trizano tore out of the tree, flying up and away from the guild compound with a loud rustle that made Darzin whirl his head in a panic.
Oh, he’s gonna be their saviour! :veelove: Nothing better than a favourite ‘mon of mine getting to be the hero.

Chapter 36

Couldn’t resist the Star Wars reference, eh?

This Dungeon’s proving to be a right mess, it is. Almost like it’s a sign that they should head back.

"Nida?" He asked muffledly.

"Hrm?"

"What does it mean to be 'dead'?"
Oh boy, now Nida’s gonna have to explain death to Pleo. This totally won’t end in a squawk of fear from our baby Loog.

Huh, that actually went better than I thought it would. But still, Pleo’s not really better off for it. :sadwott:

there was another painting of a blue deerlike creature springing from the tree with a flash of light, followed by one where the stony tree in the center was absent and the deer roamed freely about a now lush and verdant forest.
So it seems this island’s Protector is Xerneas. It did just occur to me that I don’t recall a mention of Kenobi’s Protector at all - did I just miss that or has it not been revealed yet? Or does Kenobi even have a Protector?

Oh right, the Protector’s egg was moved from Mengir. No wonder the ferals are all in a tizzy and more than a bit cross at outsiders that come in.

The conversation about death before, coupled with this feral Beautifly threatening to kill them, along with Zorn’s plan throwing light handling out the window - there’s no doubt things in this fic are going to take a turn for the violent.
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Turns out that Beautifly can be surprisingly threatening, if their Pokédex entries anything to go by.

And Elty learns Flame Wheel! :quag: Another move for his arsenal.

I get the sense Elty and Guardia will have this petty rivalry going on for a while.

Oh dear, this is a full-blown ambush.
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And thankfully, just when all seems lost, our little Lugia is able to summon his power once again and save the day. Good on him.

But alas there’s still the matter of wounded teammates to deal with. And with the Company poised to strike and claim their prize…this ain’t good.

Over to Kenobi where Pladur turns out to be pants with directions. Leon would be proud.

Oh hey, it’s Kichiro. Ander is right to be concerned, though - familiar recognition between the Iron Fleet and the Trombans could lead to an altercation.

And now that they’re headed to the ‘bokuya, the chances for such a thing have increased by 50%, as Kiran would say.

Poor little Pleo, thinking his friends are dead. :sadwott:

But then Trizano comes in to save the day and comfort him and help him out! :quag: My appreciation for him has shot up all the more.

And now back to the Iron Fleet, where we see Hess. :veelove:

Seems like it’s just as I predicted - those three from before are gonna join the Iron Fleet. (I am curious if the Strongjaw Gang might show up later - by the name, I’m gonna throw out a guess that the leader there is a Tyrantrum.)

Ah, the dominance of vertebrates. :sadbees: Invertebrates in this world must feel somewhat discriminated against if phrases like that are doing the rounds.

"Are we really going to shut them out when the only other recruit we've gotten was that loser Wilhelm?"

"Hey! I'm right here!" a Hoppip protested.
Okay, I had a good chuckle at that. :mewlulz: I love it when characters do this, openly insulting others like this in front of their face. Makes for pretty comedic moments.

Hm, so recruiting Nori was a ploy by Kichiro to unnerve Hess? Fascinating…can’t help but wonder if there’ll be a schism between our resident Aggron and Ledian at some point down the line. Also, why does Hess feel this way about Marowak? Beyond the typing - deadly to Aggron - is there some implied history there that we don’t know about?
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Back to Mengir, where the medic’s warning of not exerting themselves too much is almost definitely going to go unheeded. That’s usually how it goes when you’re on the run, after all.

Hmmm, getting the sense that there’s more to Trizano than meets the eye, especially if he feels some sort of kinship with Pleo. Definitely watching this space for sure. :eyes:

Damn, looks our gang are well and truly cornered. And with them in the state that they are…I suspect this could make for an easy capture on the Company’s part. Hopefully it doesn’t turn out that way…
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Conclusion

And I’ll leave it there for now. It was great getting back to this fic after so long away from it, and with a boatload (partially intended pun there) of new characters to soak in. Of all of them, I absolutely adore Trizano for him being a Skarmory with flamboyant Large Ham tendencies, his willingness to help out Pleo, and the mystery surrounding him and his benefactor that I'm more than a bit curious to find out about. :eyes: Either way, I'll probably be all :veelove: whenever he shows up next.

Also Cabot finally shows up! Something I've been waiting for a while after starting up this fic, and now I'm looking forward to seeing more of him and the Casting Off gang in the chapters to come. :quag:

There's also the usual moments of humour which got a laugh out of me, like when Kichiro insulted Wilhelm the Hoppip or Crom's sick burn towards the dairy caretaker on Boisocéan. :mewlulz: I like that - definitely fits the lighthearted tone this fic is going for.

Although speaking of lightheartedness, I did take note of the turn for the violent things could possibly be taking with Administrators like Zorn being the ones to make up plans that nearly resulted in Team Traveller being obliterated by the ferals in Mengir's Dungeon. It does represent a shift in story tone, but I do hope it's able to balance this shift towards the more
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-worthy aspects that'll probably begin to creep into the story a bit more with the continued Saturday morning cartoon vibes that this fic has been going for and succeeded in getting across.

Regardless of that, very good stuff! Definitely gonna try and pick this fic up more over the coming year.
 

StolenMadWolf

Loony Moony
Pronouns
She/They
Okay, time for my review for the day after a long writing binge on a oneshot, so I’m going to make a return for to Fledglings for this week. Same disclaimers apply as always with these reviews. I’m also going to go ahead and review Chapters 15-16 this time round. So, with that being said, here we go.

Okay, so both of these chapters are much, much more action focused compared to the previous ones. Namely because it focuses on the build up of a big battle, followed by, well, said battle. After several chapters where things have been going on a slow burn, this is a refreshing change of pace. Chapter 15 is the slower of the two, but quickly amps up the pressure. The Company is definitely playing smart and for keeps here. Not only are they bringing a lot of heavy firepower into the field, but they are also going to try and sneak out Pleo first to avoid a crazy fight. And initially, this plan works without a hitch. Pleo has been in a poor mood since meeting the Outcasts, and the team do try to pick him up. But still, things go horribly wrong as the gang are knocked out in seconds, cue a mad panic when everyone realises they’ve been hoodwinked. But they aren’t completely fanboozled, and are soon enough and on their way to try and stop the kidnapping entirely. Meanwhile, Lyn’s off being a dick to everyone in the town, but it is plainly… well, a ploy to buy time for Pleo to get smuggled back on board.

Cue going into Chapter 16. The chapter I’ve been waiting on for a while. It’s time for the first really big battle to begin. Nida and Crom soon see through the escape plan, and manage to get the whole village away of the Company’s plan. And, well, combat ensues. Very big battles like this, even when confined in a narrow area are actually really difficult to write. There are so many different variables to consider here, so it’s easy for information to slip through the net. And this does happen. The actual blows feel powerful and effective, with not too much information given here, which is good, because it does not bog down the actual combat. That is the really good bit. The more difficult bit is that with a larger battle in play, sometimes the detail is left a bit lacking. That means it can be difficult to keep track of the wider picture. Sometimes, this is pretty easy, but at other times, it’s hard to work out exactly what has happened. This can be done effectively from time to time, especially for stuff like surprises. But if not used carefully, you can lose track on where folks are, especially once things are moving quickly.

Putting that aside, the Chapter is exciting. It’s full of action and fun quips across the whole thing. It’s tension and there is a constant back and fro throughout the battle which a lot of battles miss out on. But despite a valiant effort, the village can’t save Pleo, and they are forced to back off… but there seem to be multiple plans in action. All geared towards trying to save Pleo, and that looks like we’re heading back in to the fray in the next chapter.


All in all, very exciting and it’s a fun read! Looking forward to seeing the next chapters!
 

Venia Silente

For your ills, I prescribe a cat.
Location
At the 0-divisor point of the Riemann AU Earth
Pronouns
Él/Su
Partners
  1. nidorino
  2. blaziken
  3. fearow
Well, this is the next part of the review plan for Ch+73+Ch.74 that I had intended to fill in for RB 2024. Hope you guys enjoy it!

Ch.73+74: The Path of Eltenios​

Previously at the same time, at the Mistral Marauder:

Hess: "It is with a heavy heart that I, Hess, captain of this crew, have to announce that our team of volunteers has been killed in action."
Crew Vileplume: "Uuuuh sir but we have not even recovered the bodies."
Hess: [sighs] "Fine then, file them as missing in action."
Crew Drednaw: "...I feel like this crew gets lots of disrespect... I don't think Eltenios would like it much if he returned."
Rodion: "Nonsense! We love Eltenios around here don't we, Captain?"
Hess: "Oh yes, very good spy doggo. Much committed. A shame other doggos are not like that."
Alvise: "WATCH OUT BEST DOGGO COMING THRU!"

Still, Alvise already had an adventure of his own, so for now the important thing is what is Elty doing!

So, back at the Darkwood Square, things are already enough of a mess with Darth Valter trying to arrange for a potential combat zone, which has resulted in TT bein sidelined:

Elty: "If only people listened to us instead of chasing us..." >_>
Guardia: "Just this once, I hate that the Detective Pikachu storyline did not get us more points in Charisma..." <_<
Kiran: "Maybe we can try again? We should be like 9.5% more convincing with each successive try!"
Elty: "Or he can consider us as 9.5% more annoying..."

Kiran decides that yet another try at Diplomacy might help, not that a good clubbing from Guardia might help.

Valter: "Have you chosen, death?"
Guardia: "We've been trying to help you for 0.35 chapters already, you idiot!"
Kiran: "W-we don't know her I swear..."

Elty however, is having second thoughts about how the storyline is unfolding so far, what with Valatos team (ft. Best Doggo) also discovering the location of the village. If only Elty could fix things...

Cernum intervenes to ask what's going on and Team Traveller rightfully points out they have 1.- enough history with Hess to know how to deal and 2.- allies who might join in and help.

Kiran: "We have a 63% effectiveness record against Hess! Nothing about him slips by us!" ^_^
Elty: [silently being a good spy o3o]

Darth Valter is not that much interested in any sort of collaboration however, despite both Pleo and Cernum (two Legendaries) pointing out the technical advantages.

Darth Valter: "I'm sorry but I have contractual obligations as a jerkass. That I enjoy."
Cernum: "Come on Valter, this can't be that bad. You can be a pretend jerkass all you want, but you are scared! That you'll never be as jerk as Kline!"
Kline: "Hey! That's uncalled for! I'm not an unlikable hindrance, right guys?"
Kiran: [compiling statistics on who wouldn't ditch Kline]
Ander: [once again considering the death of the self]
Crom: [recalling conversations with Pladur about what seasonings would go well with Kline]
Cernum: [recalling incidents of domestic terrorism]
...
Kline: "...Guys?"

Given ALL THAT, Valter finally concedes to some form of collaboration, under some limited terms.

Darth Valter: "I'm givin you the ONLY concessions in altering the terms of our engagement. Pray I don't alter them any further."

With that, Dimitri and Ander set to heading back to the ship to fetch help since they can easily provide good evidence that things are OK enough (aka: not in the Shadow Realm) to fetch help.

Dimitri & Ander: "Instant teammates!"

However, it seems someone else has gotten conveniently lost in the commotion, as Elty is suddenly missing from the staying group after his thoughts strayed about his present condition and how things have gone bad for him lately.

(And to be fair, he has good argument to ditch this particular arena mess!)

Nida: "Oh no... you don't think he's ditching us again, is he?"
Pleo: "Rumors are he went off to fix a mistake... he likes us! He wouldn't leave us!"
Kiran: "He totally wouldn't! He still owes 28% of his community service sentence!"
Trizano: "Oh, maybe I can provide some help?"
Nida: "Yes please! Our partner with the designated screentime has left us!"
Crom: [points to self and Nida] "If you can't take us to Elty we'll fade to black for this review!"
Kiran: "..."
Trizano: "...?"
Nida: "..." o.o [blushes]
Crom: [fidgeting] "Um,"
Nida: "Crom now's not the time!"

IF NOT NOW THEN WHEN, NIDA? WHEN???

Nida
: "What we mean to say is we need to chase after him."
Crom: "Yeah, we don't want to fade to offscreen for this chapter."
Trizano: "Say no more! Heroes always have room for screentime! Lets-a-go!"
Guardia: [sheepishly] "C-can I come with too? H-he's a baka and I'm worried..."

But he's your baka, Guardia. Totally shippable. o3o

Anyway, Trizando decides to take the group out on a search for Elty. Trizano and Rotek (and Valter) can sort things out later, heroes have a number of allowances and Trizano definitively has a good standing.

Elty, on the other hand...



Eltenios meanwhile has made it all the way back to the Iron Fleet's positioning, at the entrance of the Mystery Dungeon. After all, he knew this was the only viable access point for a raid. (Really, what is Valter even worrying about? Alvise is already inside o3o)

Hess: "Okay everyone, time to seize the means of production... of rum!"
The Crew: "Woo hoo!"
Hess: "Shall no one get in our way!"
Elty: "BEST DOGGO COMING THRU!"

And just like that, Elty shows up with his old crew. A good amount of them are surprised enough.

a somewhat rounded Growlithe
lol. lmao even.

Crew Litten: "Why am I the only Fire-type without good screentime?"
Pieter: "Forget about that! Captain! He's a traitor! He attacked us earlier!"
Elty: "I have a good explanation for that actually."
Rodion: "Listen, he has attacked us several times..."
Elty: ".... okay that one might be a bit more complicated."
Cpt. Hess: "Enough everyone! Elty has been on secret mission as a spy!"
Pieter: "Wat."
The crew: "...the fuck?"
Elty:


Like, honestly, I get that there's been some time of bad blood building up. It's not exactly anyone's fault really! Elty is constrained by the terms of his Community Service!

Hess: "Come back to report, Elty?"
Elty: "Actually, I wanted to check in vacation time with HR..."
The Crew: "...There are vacation times?????"

...yeah that's not gonna go well lol.

Elty's questioning is instantly questioned back by the rest of the crew, understandable considering the long time of absence and the various recent encounters and whatnot. Curiously enough Kichiro is one to sting further about this.

Kichiro: "Hey I can multiclass as a Priest of Pleo Lord of Storms!" ^_^

Sus, Kichiro. Sus.

Elty attempts to explain the why and how Team Traveler is here and how the Iron Fleet has come to chase them... in theory. Alas, he is promptly informed that the Iron Fleet is here accidentally.

Like, really, it's Hess we're talking about... :p

Prodded further, Elty admits that Team Traveler are his baka and pleads that maybe it would be nice if Hess would pretty please not bother the soft birb any further? Birb already has enough of a difficult life as it is!

However, Cpt. Hess has other plans in mind.

Elty:" "What do you mean you have a plan?"
Crew Pawniard: "Wait, captain, that's dangerous! You are thinking too much!"
Crew Voltorb: "Yeah, it's Hess we're talking about!"
Hess: "Oi! Quit it with the disrespect! And you! Betray those hicks already!"
Elty: "But they're my friends!"
Crew Foatzel: "We are your friends!"
Hess: "Really man, come on, you are part of our crew!"
Elty: "...Well, maybe we could all be friends?" ^_^

Yeah no that does not work like that. While it makes some sense that Hess wants a Protector for pirates, Pleo is kinda sorta already that, so it's not too convenient to force and try his hand after the recent experience in the Empire's capital. Plus, it's not like there's enough legendaries around so that everyone can get a Protector.

(Also if it's for a ship crew, we all know already that precious Cabot and his team ft. best Noble have got dibs on hosting and raising the birb.

Pleo: "They've already entertained me before! As a guest! We can do that again!"
Cpt. Nagant: [seethes in the background]

Still, things don't look good for Elty, now that he's more officially trying to stick with Team Traveler, and Hess is ready to punish Elty for that. Hess tosses a few stones as first and only warning shot, and then Elty is surrounded by the crew. Fortunately, Trizano intervens before Elty gets bumrushed!

Trizano: "Attacking such a smaller mon, Cpt. Hess? For shame. Growlithe are legal for Little Cup."
Hess: "You are quite the annoyance, Trizano! Why can't you just sod off and leave me raid about in peace?"
Trizano: "...You do realize this is my home you're raiding, right?"

With Team Traveler surrounded, Hess and Trizano go at each other; when Guardia and Elty try to intervene, they find themselves attacked by the various members of the Iron Fleet. Hey, at least they're standing with their captain!

Hess: [hushing] "And I didn't even have to promise them rum this time! ^_^

Spite / vengeance / lack of screentime are powerful motivators!

However before TT gets absolutely mowed down, we get some dynamic entry in the form of Pladur and team, ft. Instant Teammates!

Dimitri: "Don't worry we are here!"
Ander: "Not that I don't like the good screentime but why did we have to come here to fight?"
Rodion: "That's exactly what we'd like to know!"
Hess: "Someone has been causing a ruckus."
Guardia: "Welll... Let's ask this baka."
[everyone stops and turns to stare at Elty]
Elty: "Uuuuh.... friendship?"
Kichiro: "Well maybe you should Reflect on that!"

Sure enough, Kichiro in his current role of monk / priest boosts Hess's Team and there they go, tanking hits from Team Traveler including some clubs by Guardia. What's worse for the hero team, is Hess can do EQ, and he shows to be effective enough on that. The only immediate cushion for TT on that is that Hess gets a burn status but that's something Rodion and Kichiro can handle.

So Elty has the idea of getting Kichiro off the game in the first place!

Elty: "Guardia, want to do something crazy?"
Guardia: "I'd rather do something that works!"
Elty: "Por qué no los dos? Just twirl that club with some flair, with a boost?"
Guardia: "Since when do you have good ideas?"

While Guardia is powering up, Hess and Kichiro work up to take down Instant Teammates, much to Guardia's Alarm, but this allows Elty to interfere by calling out Kichiro and taunting him, a timely trickery that draws aggro away from Guardia and Dimitri at a critical moment.

Indeed, this leads to Kichiro getting distracted during sweeping Elty down to the ground, which results in Dimitri recovering and putting Kichiro down to the ground.

Trizano grabs Guardia and Elty and we get some aerial maneuvers, which eventually allow for Guardia to smack Hess with the power of gravity. Rodion grounds Trizano but this still gets Elty in position to go one on one against Hess:

Elty: "Sooooo, about that vacation time..."

Elty gets to Flame Wheel Hess and win that one particular encounter!

Rodion: "Wait, this changes everything!"
Kichiro: "What do you mean?"
Rodion: "He took down the captain... does that mean a Klingon Promotion?"
Kichiro: "...Let's hope not, we still have to answer to the rest of the crew, let's go!"
Darth Valter: "Not so soon, invaders. Your raid time is over."
Hess: "You win this one, but we're leaving a 1-star Yelp review on this site for the Company's records!"
Darth Valter: "A review??? Oh no!"

And with that, Elty manages to somewhat score a relevant victory as the Iron Fleet is forced to recuse themselves from the confrontation.

Still, not everything is as-good, given Cernum now considers the town too exposed. A 1-star Yelp review is maybe not something to scoff at, even if I don't think Boisocéan or even Giotto has better score than 3-star.

Cabot: "We had a great time there! And we made friends with Pleo!"
Berecien: "Eeeeeh, if you want to call it that..."
Cpt. Nugget: [seethes at recalling the checkers game, the call-out to his nobility, the fact that Cabot got assigned the VIP cabin, etc...]



Back with Elty and now Team Traveler is together, Elty ponders his alignment chart for a moment. He discovers that Nida managed to evolve during their previous battle, during which they defeated the Other Best Doggo. Everyone is happy about Nida's evolution, though at least Pladur and Crom are also somewhat worried.

Crom: "She looks more adult now."
Pladur: "Are ya kissing, son?"

That I'd like to now!

After that comes some time of questioning, as the issue of Elty feeling the party in the first place comes to the foreground. Elty tries to explain himself in a number of ways, and sells it well enough.

Elty: "Yay!"

Hush, precious spy.

What's more, Elty gets to enjoy the sight of Valatos and his team ft. Alvise being dragged in for some sentencing, courtesy of Valter and his assortment of undead.

Nori: "We beat Pleo? D-did we just win Fledglings?"
Valatos: "Is this what paid vacation time feels like?"
Elty: "Hah, you wish. I have protag credentials and applied for vacation time and so far this has sucked."

The proceedings are going to be quite short, however. Given the town vandalism on the part of Valatos and team, not to mention the attempt on one Protector and the continued steal of Elty's place as BEST DOGGO, it seems the punishment for Valatos and team is going to be...

...Community Service.

Elty:

And while Elty has every right to enjoy this new development, he's willing to take a bit of high ground and address Valatos and his team directly. He imparts on some of his earned life experience.

Alvise: "What, did you come to rub it in?"
Elty: "Yes but no. See, I am doing Community Service currently, and it's not that bad."
Valatos: "We'd have to go around taking orders!"
Elty: [raises brow] "Which is different from before... how?"
Valatos: "...Okay that's a good point."
Elty: "But listen: If anything, this can get you you lots of screentime!"

And with that, Valatos and his team are sent off to be thrown to the brick.

Elty meanwhile has a bit of a character moment explaining to Guardia that he had hoped, from secondhand experience, that he could have a good parting of ways with Cpt. Hess even if temporary. And it's understandable that he feels very bad that things did not go okay, since he's now basically broken ties with his family.

Guardia: "...B-but you have your family back home, right?"
Elty: "No, not really... I'm dungeonborn and stuff happened, and there was this prison that Kline mentioned..."
Guardia: [clocks club]: "That snake. Ruining things even in backstory!"

Aaaaand there's the fact of that Elty Special I have to get to at some point. Because damn, sad backstories. Aaaaaaa I'm not ready for that!

Still, this means that Elty gets to open up to the team a bit more, and Guardia offers more or less the only assurance she or Nida or Crom can offer: that at least Team Traveler can stick around for each other.

Elty got some development here which was nice because of the whole fiasco with his aborted awesomeness a few chapters back. I can totally understand him asking for vacation time and even more now with his personal stuff coming to the forefront. Because he totally deserves a time to chillax, ya know? Like you know who else?

Suocéverse!Eltenios: [loafing by a meadow while humming to some nifty Eurobeat bop]

I can't blame Cradle!Elty for that vacation request now that things hit "more" for him, but given that Hess's HR is not gonna be too responsive to Elty from here on, I think that paperwork's gotta have to be filed back at Tromba. o3o

Bunsen: "Fat chance! I hold the home island in ransom."
Darzin: [waving emergency flags from offscreen]
Marley: [holding a sting to Bunsen's neck] "Don't count on your screentime too much, meat."

And with that, doggo screentime for these reviews comes to a close. A good advancement on the adventure and Team Traveler finally obtains the Ledger for the KEY ITEMS bag, so we can proceed to the next event flag.

All in all, two whole chapters of pretty good screentime for the best doggos.



Ketu: [sparring] "Someone rang?"

Ssssh Ketu, you don't count as a dog.

Lyn: "Really Ketu, we need to have words about your mysterious screentime. As well as the why are we having screentime in this review."
Ketu: "Well it sounds sensible to me!"
Lyn: "What do you mean?"
Ketu: "I was absolutely, totally fooled with the whole Ditto thing. You didn't think I would have risked my neck into this operation if we weren't sure it was the real deal, didn't you?"
Lyn: "...I mean, sure. Unless you've got something else going on."
Ketu: "Who? Me?" o3o

When this whole thing comes crashing down I'm totally okay with Lyn being the one to slice Ketu open. Just sayin'. o3o

Lyn: "That still does not explain the dog review part."
Ketu: "I mean, Captain, we need the screentime! In this economy!"
Lyn: [sighs] "A fair point..."
Ketu: "Think of it like this: Samurott have dog-like snouts so you can totally count. Plus, we are hounds of war."
Lyn: "...I'll concede that part."
Ketu: "And you are my bitch." o3o
Lyn: "...."
Ketu: "...." ^_^

Once again: sliced. open.

But anyway we now got to the end. See? Doggos!

Luca screentime when.
 
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