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Pokémon Fledglings

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. quilava-fobbie
  6. sneasel-kate
  7. heliolisk-fobbie
Righto, coming back round for another V-Wheel, it's been a while since I've read Fledglings, and normally I'd try and get a couple of chapters read, but the massive change up on my current work has taken up alot of the time I was hoping to use to read and review this, so Chapter 12 will have to do.

Nah, it’s all good. The average chapter length creeps up a bit towards 10k not long from where you’re at, so getting used to reviewing singular chapters isn’t the end of the world.

Compared to the chapters I've read before, this one is much, much more neatly packaged and focused which makes a very enjoyable change of pace and an overall better read. The chapter doesn't meander to a few different locations with relatively small and basic events, and instead gets right to the point proper. Even better still, you managed to successfully manage to different perspectives/events throughout the chapter, effectively granting the chapter a double purpose. Since I'm always banging on about every chapter having a purpose, this is an especially awesome thing to see!

Glad to hear that you enjoyed it. I can’t speak for whether or not every chapter will stick the landing for you, but making chapters all feel like they had a purpose is a pretty big part of @Virgil134 and my approach for handling narrative in this story.

One side of the story focuses back on the town, and the arrival of the Company. I don't remember every detail about them, but the writing was excellent here in portraying the sense of dread with their arrival, then the gradual shift to a more hostile stance as actual fighters and guards emerged proper. It's really interesting to see that presence make itself known and how the town organically reacts to their presence depending on who's there. It's something that I found really awesome there! It also offers a bit of insight into the characters, as whilst there isn't much development there, it's nice to see the perspective of Hatteras and Osmund in a few ways. The worldbuilding is again subtle but brilliant, with more detail about the wider world with empires and how the world used to actually be like. I won't lie I'm hooked onto that kind of detail, especially given my fic GoB has similar imperial stuff sneaking in, and I'm a sucker for post-peak civilization stuff. Sprinkle in the cliff hanger, and that section alone would have carried the chapter perfectly well! It's honestly one of the best chapters I've read in a fic or a story for a while just from that alone!

I mean, worldbuilding is one of this fic’s raison d’etres and we put in a lot of effort to make a world that feels like it’s living and breathing. So I’m really glad to hear that you had fun seeing our hard work. ^^

The second side I don't think held up as well, and that boils down namely to the fact that it's a Mystery Dungeon focused segment again, which has been difficult to picture in the past. Unlike the town focused on, the purpose is a little more basic here as instead of introducing a good bit of worldbuilding and additional characters, it instead serves as mainly updating the progress of main cast. In fact, that is essentially what that part of the chapter is all about. There isn't really any development for my favorite baby burd and the characters here, just showing the aftermath of the previous chapters encounters, the responses of the older, more experienced guildmembers to their younger charge's progress and... yeah, that's about it. Compared to the other half of the chapter it doesn't quite hold my interest the same way.

Hrm, a bit unfortunate, though I think you’ll see as of the next chapter that that second half happened for a reason.

That being said, the real star was Elty here. Compared to everyone else, we do get a bit more insight into his character here, and his antics are fun to read about as he ends up getting caught in trouble in the dungeon. We also get a few hints on his past too, and I do like the mixed responses the rest of the team gives to his fire-type antics of old, ranging from horror to pure bafflement. It was actually entertaining to read through as well. In addition, that part of Chapter 12 does lead to a promising start for Chapter 13.

I mean, such is life when you had a job that would make you deeply unpopular but are comically inept at it. Though glad to hear that Elty made a good impression on you. ^^

The writing itself is fine, and I didn't see any mistakes with there either. Overall, this was an interesting chapter in that it felt kinda more like two smaller chapters stuck together, which was nice, as it made the chapter feel both focused and engaging throughout. On the other hand, there was a distinct difference between the two sections of the chapter itself. One that really hooked onto me and kept me fully engaged, whilst the other one wasn't as fun, but does get helped along by the more engaging segment to the next chapter. Either way, it was enjoyable, and does make me excited for the next chapter!

Hrm, a little unfortunate that there was a bit of a split in the parts of the chapter you got engaged with, but we appreciate you for calling balls and strikes as you saw them. We’ll be looking forward to seeing you around again sometime in the future. ^^
 
Chapter 89: Finishing Touches New

Virgil134

PMD Writer
Partners
  1. sylveon
  2. weavile
  3. kommo-o
  4. noivern
  5. mothim
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That night, the Siglo Swellow's members gathered in the mess hall, just as they had done many times before. The ship's sailors sat near the different tables throughout the room, as Team Traveller and Team Zephyr had come together around a larger table that had been cleared out at the center.

Beatrix and Vicente counted off the Pokémon in the room as the last few stragglers came in. A few Pokémon were absent, having missed the proceedings from what everyone presumed was a lack of energy from a day's hard work. Even Pyry and Pekka had come for the occasion… even if they seemed to be trying their hardest to convince the rest of the gathering otherwise they wanted to be anywhere else from the sluggish daze they'd been in since they belatedly regained sobriety. A few of the nearby sailors shot the two disapproving frowns, including Natrix and Philips, the Raichu of the pair folding his arms with a sharp scoff.

"You know, the plan called for you two to act drunk, not be drunk," he grumbled

"Yeah, just how dense do you have to be to mix that up?!" Natrix snapped.

The Gabite and Vibrava both flinched from Natrix's scolding and cradled their heads. The comedown from their rum had left the pair with splitting migraines, which made so much as a stern bark affect them like a stiff blow to their heads.

"Ngah! Ei niin kovaa!" Pekka buzzed. "My head's still killing me!"

"Y-Yeah, can't this meeting wait until we're feeling better?" Pyry whined.

"No!" Kline bellowed, slamming his forepaws against Pyry and Pekka's table as the two jumped up with startled cries. "Every minute counts here, and we can't afford to put this off because you two decided to be irresponsible idiots!"

The pair shrunk back, giving whining moans over Kline's alleged "lack of empathy" as the Zygarde irkedly shook his head and looked away. Nida cocked a brow as she looked at Kline, bringing a paw to her mouth puzzledly.

"Actually, why haven't we started the meeting yet, Kline?" the Nidorina asked.

"We're still waiting on Alice," Calidus replied. "She said she wanted to buy some provisions for the ship before our meeting."

The Talonflame's explanation prompted the other Pokémon in the mess hall to trade uneasy stares and whispers with one another. Vicente himself was among them, as the Hitmontop looked over at the Fire-Type worriedly and tilted his head.

"For almost two hours? Is she alright?" he asked. "It shouldn't have taken that long to-"

"Back!"

Everyone looked over to the entrance of the mess hall at the sound of a Sneasel's voice and approaching footsteps. There, they saw Alice coming into the room, holding a bulky shopping bag in her right claw and chewing at what appeared to be some sort of brown cookie. The Sneasel finished her snack, before shooting a beaming grin and proudly raising the bag in full view of the gathered audience.

"Hope you all look forward to tasting some of Vollezee's snacks, since I got a bag of those gevulde koeken and speculaas that Percy told me about!" she cheered. "It only took visiting three bakeries to get enough for everyone!"

Loud, disapproving groans went about the room. While some, like the former pirates, seemed more excited about the prospect of free food, most of the gathering, including Percy and Calidus, buried their faces in paws or wings upon discovering Alice had kept them all waiting for a snack run. Kline took the revelation particularly poorly, as he stomped up to the Sneasel with his fangs bared in visible irritation.

"Alice! What on earth would make you think that was a good idea?!" the Zygarde snapped.

An impish smirk spread over the Sneasel's face, the Dark-Type giving no answer beyond a small shrug of her shoulders.

"Because those stroopwafels were great and this way everyone on the crew gets to enjoy some of the local food?" she retorted. "Besides, how can you hold an important meeting without some snacks?"

"Team Sentinel knows we're in the city!" Kline fumed. "They could've ambushed you while you were going about!"

Alice blinked quietly for a moment, seemingly taken aback by her teammates's reply. After her initial hesitation, she looked the other way and gave a dismissive wave back to Kline.

"Well, they didn't, so… yeah. Besides, when was the last time anyone from Team Sentinel set up a trap around some random bakery?"

Percy let out a low grumble and pinched his brow. While Alice was certainly quick on her feet, she certainly could try a 'mon's patience at times. But there would be plenty of time to chew her out later, right now, they had more important things to worry about.

"Enough," the Gliscor sighed. "We don't exactly have the luxury of time to work with, so let's just get this briefing started."

Percy motioned for the Pokémon about him to come closer to the center table. Team Traveller and their companions waited for the sailors to approach and peer over, while Alice went around passing out snacks in the background, with Elty and Pleo taking a particular shine to the sweets. The Gliscor pulled a long roll of paper from under the table and unfurled it on its surface, revealing a rough drawing of a set of four floorplans that were drawn near each of the corners, which Kline pinned down with a forepaw.

"We made a map of the Archive to help plan things out," Percy began. "It's not as good as it could be, since we had to copy most of the floorplans in a hurry from a library, while we drew the basement level based off what Kline saw."

"It's as detailed as we could've hoped for half a day's observations," Kline insisted. "Anyhow, the Archive is sectioned off into a secure wing to its west by iron doors on the ground floor. The access to the basement level is behind them, with the actual Vault sitting in the center of it."

The Zygarde lifted his paw, moving it along the paper until he stopped at the center of the leftmost floorplan. Just then, a few crumbs dribbled onto the paper, prompting him to glance up and see Alice eating a cookie over the paper. After a brief, wordless glare, the Sneasel pulled back with a roll of her eyes, leaving Kline to dust the floorplan off in annoyance, before pointing at an unfilled circle that had been drawn in a gap between thick lines representing the Vault's walls.

"The door to the Vault and its locks are all made from solid metal. From the glimpses I could see whenever the guards opened the door, the interior also seemed reinforced on all sides," Kline explained. "Even if it wasn't constantly being watched, we'd never be able to break into it through brute force without alerting every guard in the Academy to our presence."

Guardia gave a puzzled tilt of her head, before giving a curious poke at the map with her club.

"That… sounds a lot harder to get into than I thought," the Cubone said. "I thought that we had a way of getting in, though. Will it really work against doors that are built so strong? While Team Sentinel's lying in wait for us?"

Kline paused briefly at Guardia's question, before shaking his head back and continuing on.
"I don't think that whatever Team Sentinel is planning is meant to happen before we make it into the Vault. Otherwise, they'd already have started searching places for us, like the docks," Kline insisted. "But that's a problem for us to get to a bit later. The solution to the issue of how to get into the Vault is simple: we have the Company open it for us."

The Zygarde's declaration drew nervous whispers and grumbles from most of his audience, a few sailors muttering comments such as "he's joking, right?" or "eso es una locura". Strangely enough, Team Traveller's members seemed wholly unbothered, as Pleo raised one of his purple-dyed wings up and piped up.

"They will, actually!"

Pleo waddled over to his bag and after pulling back the flap, stuck his head in. He briefly nosed about inside, before he took out his goggles and set them on the table. The Lugia's eyewear drew some puzzled frowns and brow raises from the audience, before the young Protector spoke up to explain himself.

"Sophie told me that my goggles were something that would normally be kept inside the Vault, and that if I brought them over the Pokémon there would take them," Pleo chirped. "We can use that to get into the Vault!"

The Lugia's plan drew skeptical looks from the rest of the room. The sailors tried to keep their doubts more polite and reserved, while the former pirates were much more forthright. After all, everything about the description of the Vault had made it sound like even a Protector would have trouble breaking it down, so then…

"Eh? How's that supposed to work?" a Sableye questioned.

"Yeah!" a Quilava added. "The Company's not just going to let you waltz in and snatch that ledger just because you have some way of getting the door open!"

"No, but they would if there was a big enough distraction happening from inside of it," Kline answered. "As long as I got in, it'd be trivial for me to both provide such a distraction and hide my presence afterwards. It'd also give Pierce and the others all the cover they need to come in as Company reinforcements."

Kline's explanation was met with puzzled murmurs from the rest of the gathering. An Unfezant peered over with a blank stare, furrowing his brow in disbelief.

"Wait, it does?" Pat wondered. "I'm not sure if I follow you there."

"Kline can turn invisible, remember?" Guardia replied. "If he changes back into that "Core" form he normally goes around in someplace where he's not being watched, we can sneak him in without the guards knowing. He could even do it right here below deck!"

"That's right. It shouldn't be that hard to sneak him in along with those goggles. And as long as he moves his Cells away from the ship before he goes in, it'll look like he's coming from everywhere at once." Elty insisted. "Once he gets in, he just changes back into his current Forme, raises a little hell, and there you go. A ticket for us to send in those 'reinforcements' to help out."

Elty beamed and wagged his tail, only to stop and trail off after noticing the ship's crew still seemed to be unconvinced. A Sliggoo narrowed his eyes, before casting a glance over at the Pokémon around the central table.

"Then who exactly are we sending in as 'reinforcements'?" the Dragon-Type asked.

"Older Pokémon who have a feel for the campus grounds and aren't already well known by the guards," Calidus insisted. "That's where we would come in."

"Right, the guards wouldn't be likely to turn down our help if we were in Company colors," Alice explained. "Once we're in, the inside of the Vault would be a mess, so it wouldn't raise any alarms if the Ledger didn't turn up right away."

"Exactly," Kline said. "Additionally, the very properties that make the Vault so robust also make it hard for others to watch from the outside, even from the likes of a Luxray trying to peer in."

The Zygarde moved his paw back to the location of the Vault on the floorplan, where there inside, four dots had been drawn in a pattern that looked like a diamond or a cross.

"That's why there's a small team of four guards normally posted inside with badges for Psychics to sense if something is amiss," he continued. "As soon as they're overpowered, I can throw their badges into a corner, and the Company would then be none the wiser to Percy and the others switching out the Ledger for a dummy book."

The moment Kline finished speaking, Pyry and Pekka's eyes lit up. Even in the midst of their hangovers, the two sensed an opportunity for adventure and rare loot. With everything the Zygarde had told them, it sounded like they could literally just walk in and take whatever they wanted!

"Ah! That's easy!" Pyry cried, before Pekka chimed in with a buzzing flit of his wings.

"Yeah! We'd be able to find that Ledger in-!"

"You two are staying on the ship," Kline snapped. "The guards already know you quite well from your drunken brawl earlier, so you'd only cause trouble if you came along."

The Gabite and Vibrava froze for a moment, their enthusiasm deflating as the two Dragon-Types looked away with a pair of quiet sulks. Undeterred, Alice walked up and gave the pair some reassuring pats.

"Eh, don't take it too personally, it's just what's most practical. Besides, you two are pretty experienced sailors, and we're going to need all the help we can get to make sure we pull out of here in one piece," she insisted. "I'm assuming that Team Sentinel's prepared some sort of nasty surprise for us when we attempt to leave, and if we can't slip out in spite of it, then all of this will have been for nothing."

Pyry and Pekka blinked and hesitated at Alice's reassurance, before grudgingly conceding the point. Towards the center of the gathering, Beatrix shook her head, casting a wary glance off at Kline and the others.

"On that note, once you have the Ledger, how are you planning on getting back before anyone notices?" the Illumise captain asked. "Even with our disguises, we shouldn't risk lingering around more than we need to."

"Filbert and the others showed us a shortcut out of the Archive," Crom explained. "It goes right to the canal that runs through the main building, which connects directly to the central one of the entire city. As long as Dimitri's waiting in the water, we should be able to get out in a hurry."

"With only one swimmer?" Beatrix pressed. "Especially if you're expecting Team Sentinel to attack you after leaving the Vault?"

"One swimmer and three fliers. We're not exactly sitting this one out, and it should be just enough to carry everyone," Percy reminded. "As for Team Sentinel, we'll be putting together some orbs and seeds we can use to delay pursuers if something goes wrong on our way out. If Team Sentinel does come after us, it'll help us even the odds a bit."

The Siglo Swellow's crew mulled the Gliscor's reply, and the more they talked the matter over to themselves, the more and more it sounded like this plan could actually work. The sailors' mood began to take on a more confident turn, as Kiran looked around and gave a quiet ruffle of his feathers.

"… I know that this is a big risk, but we all knew that before we came here," the Swellow insisted. "Are there any objections to this plan?"

A few 'nays' came back in reply, as more and more joined in. Before Team Traveller knew it, the crew had whipped themselves up into an eager mood, with a couple more enthusiastic Pokémon chiming in with cries of 'Let's get on with it!' and 'We'll have that Ledger in no time!'. Team Traveller and their companions breathed out sighs of relief, as Kline stepped forward and gave a grateful nod back at the surrounding sailors.

"Thank you for trusting us. And rest well," the Zygarde said. "We've got a big day tomorrow, and we'll need to be at our best for it."



As the beating heart of the Company, Canalhouse City's more trafficked districts hummed with activity at almost all hours of the day. Even well past nightfall, the streets and canals remained busy with more nocturnal Pokémon who roused from their daytime slumber to take the place of their diurnal compatriots.

It was that hustle and bustle that had been Albert's motivation to finally get off the Siglo Swellow after almost three days without setting foot ashore. He, Charlie, and Marilyn needed a change of scenery from the ship's decks, and as the three con artists made their way along the central canal of Canalhouse City, the crowds on shore, the swimmers and watercraft in the canal, and the surrounding canalhouses more than satisfied that yearning.

The Nuzleaf soaked in the hubbub of the world around him and let out a content sigh. Perhaps when all of this was over, they'd come back and ply their trade here. After all, in a city this size, there were bound to be no shortage of suckers. The Grass-Type turned off to gawk at a passing raft, when from the corner of his eye, he spotted Marilyn fidgeting uneasily, before the Eevee shot a worried glance up at him.

"Albert, should we really be going this far out from the ship at this hour?" she murmured. The Eevee's question drew a dismissive scoff from her Nuzleaf teammate, who turned back with his hands on his hips.

"It's fine, Marilyn. We're not the ones who are wanted here," Albert insisted. "And after all the work that slave driver of a snake's put us through since Buyeom, we deserve a night out on the town."

Marilyn hesitated a moment, before perking her ears up and letting a small smile spread over her muzzle.

"I mean, I suppose seeing a showing of The Luxray King wouldn't be the end of the world," the Eevee chuckled.

Albert shot a cheerful grin back at his junior partner and continued on a ways, only for his eyes to notice that Charlie's gaze remained fixed at the paving stones underfoot. Before the Nuzleaf could pry further, the Riolu raised his head, shooting a small frown back at his ringleader.

"How much longer are we going to have to do this though?" Charlie asked, prompting the Nuzleaf to raise a brow in reply.

"Eh? What do you mean by that?" he asked.

"I mean, when are we going to go back to how things were?"

Albert blinked and bit his tongue in awkward silence for a moment. The Nuzleaf's features drooped, before he shook his head with a low sigh.

"Look, I know it hasn't been fun, but it's been barely over a week since we got sucked into all of this," the Grass-type insisted. "Just hang in there a little longer."

"And what about David, huh?"

Albert fell silent at Charlie's question. He said nothing in response, after all, just what could he say? The Riolu balled his paws up at his partner's lack of answer, and grit his teeth in frustration.

"We're just supposed to sit and let him rot while none of those jerks care about helping to get him back?!" Charlie cried. "How long are they going to make us do this?!"

The Nuzleaf slowed to a stop as he passed the mouth of an alleyway, before hanging his head. As Charlie and Marilyn caught up with their leader, they saw him hesitate and heard him let out a quiet sigh, before turning back to them with a glum expression.

"Charlie, we're three 'mons, and we don't even know where those square-necks took him!" Albert exclaimed. "I get that you're worried, but be reasonable here! What do you expect us to do?! Just go up to those 'Team Sentinel' goons to give them a piece of our mind?"

"That can certainly be arranged."

Albert froze, before seeing a dark-furred arm shoot in front of him and wrap around his throat from behind. The Nuzleaf felt himself get dragged back, when he abruptly heard the sound of strong wingbeats along with Charlie and Marilyn letting out stifled yelps. The Grass-Type flailed his arms and thrashed as he tried to break free of his assailant pulling him into the inky shadows of a darkened alley. Albert tried to turn and see his attacker, when he felt icy claws dig into his neck and his blood run cold.

Albert's mind went blank in a panic, and the next thing he knew, he was being thrown against a wall, with Charlie and Marilyn meeting the same fate after a pair of large, bat-like wings tipped with red claws did much the same. Albert sucked in a sharp breath and turned around, where much to his horror, he saw Ketu and Aldrich staring down at them.

"Now there's some faces I never expected to see again," Ketu said. "You know, you really should consider covering your tracks when sneaking off from your ship this late."

The Weavile sauntered over with a threatening smirk, flashing his claws as he neared the cornered shysters.

"I'm sure that there's a long, not terribly interesting story behind why you're here, but let's cut to the chase here," he snapped. "We've got some questions for you, and you're going to answer them. Right now.."

For a moment, the only thing Albert could hear were the sound of his, Charlie, and Marilyn's panicked breaths, as his eyes darted about for any sign of a way to escape. His Riolu and Eevee companions dug their paws in, trying their hardest to summon defiant scowls, only for their eyes to betray their barely-suppressed fear of the Weavile and Noivern accosting them.

"A-As if we'd ever work with the likes of you again!" Marilyn piped.

"Y-Yeah! You left us out to dry once already!" Charlie snapped. "How stupid do you think we'd be to trust you again?!"

Aldrich leaned in towards the two younger Pokémon with an overpowering glare, the pair letting out frightened squeaks as he bared his fangs and let out a low snarl.

"I don't think you understand just how bad of a situation you're in right now," the Noivern said. "You'd be wise to pipe down and answer our questions."

Albert, Charlie, and Marilyn squirmed and shrank back against the wall. After being satisfied he'd cowed the three into submission, Aldrich let out a sharp huff, narrowing his eyes as he continued to speak.

"In case you haven't noticed already, you're not going to fight your way through us. Not to mention we just caught you red-handed impersonating Company personnel," the Noivern harrumphed. "That alone would get you stuck picking Apricorns in a field for years, or considering what your current buddies are up to right now, rotting behind bars on Nagrobek."

Ketu's expression eased up a moment, and reached out a claw. The three flinched, expecting a sudden blow at any moment, when they peeked up and saw the Dark-Type staring back at them with a smile that seemed almost amiable.

"But there's no need for things to come to that. We're reasonable Pokémon and open to negotiating," Ketu insisted. "After all, we already have some idea of why you're here."

Albert and his companions stiffened up at the Weavile's words. They hadn't expected to run into these bastards again, and yet they already knew why the Siglo Swellow drug them along?

"You- You do?" Charlie gulped.

"A little bird told us that your new friends are going around searching for pieces of something called the 'Knights' Ledger'. We also heard that they're sitting on one of them right now," Ketu said. "Help us find it, and we'll pull some strings so that way you can see your little blob friend again. You do miss him, don't you?"

Charlie and Marilyn hesitated at the Weavile's question. Every bone in their body was screaming not to trust him and that Noivern. B-But those two knew where David was and how to find him! They could very well make good on their offer. Could. But even if they made good on it, at what cost would it come?

"I-I…" Marilyn stammered. "We…"

"The crew dips their toes into smuggling," Albert suddenly cut in. "If I had to guess, they probably have that Ledger of theirs shoveled away in Captain's Quarters."

Albert quietly sucked in a sharp breath and blinked nervously, casting a glance slightly downward. Ketu and Aldrich's eyes widened briefly, as if they were surprised by his answer, before the Weavile studied him with a scrutinizing gaze. After a brief moment of hesitation, Ketu narrowed his eyes, as ice suddenly sprouted on his claws. The Nuzleaf reflexively raised his hands to try and shield his face, only to feel an icy punch at his stomach. Freezing agony shot through Albert's body, the Grass-Type bowling over from the blow and crumpling to the ground much to Charlie and Marilyn's yelping alarm.

The Nuzleaf lay in place wheezing for air trying to nurse his frigid and bruised stomach. Just then, he felt himself get yanked up by his head leaf and Ketu's claws wrap around his throat as their points dug into his skin. Albert drew in shallow, frightened breaths as he looked up, and saw Ketu's face leaning in against his, his eyes locked into a piercing glare.

"Next time I hit you, it won't just be a little love tap," the Weavile spat. "So let's try this again. Where is the Ledger?"

Albert hesitated and grimaced. While he hadn't gotten that close to the Siglo Swellow's crew, he still felt uneasy about throwing them under the ship—to 'mons who'd left David trapped in an Apricorn and ratted them out to the guards on Buyeom, no less! Why, there was exactly zero reason to trust a word that came from this cat's mouth!

Pain shot through the Nuzleaf's neck as he felt Ketu tighten his grip and dig his claws deeper into his skin. Whatever he thought of undermining the Siglo Swellow, one thing was crystal clear: this 'mon was ready to kill him if he didn't say something that satisfied him.

… He just wanted to know a location, right? It's not as if the Siglo Swellow wouldn't be able to defend the Ledger if he was able to slip away and pass a warning along to them, right?

"Look, they're always going in and out of the second-to-last sleeping quarters from the bow on the ship's port side. I've never seen it for myself, but I've heard wood clattering a few times when passing by there," Albert insisted. "If they really have this 'Ledger' you're going on about, there's gotta be some sort of compartment in there where they're hiding it!"

Ketu paused and fell silent at the Nuzleaf's reply, the Dark-Type pulling his claw back as he stepped back and curled his muzzle up into a knowing smile.

"See, I knew I could count on you to come through, Albert."

Aldrich shuffled his wings, turning to his Weavile partner with a small frown.

"Is there anything else you need from them, Ketu?"

The Weavile stopped and pondered for a moment, before closing his eyes with a wave of his claw back in response.

"Nah, I think I can work with what these jokers gave us."

"L-Look, you have what you want," Marilyn stammered. "So let us go already!"

The Weavile rolled his eyes and nonchalantly pulled back the flap of the satchel around his shoulder. There at the top, Albert and his companions saw the rind of a White Apricorn poking out. The three froze and felt the color drain out of their faces, looking up to see the Dark-Type shooting them a threatening smirk.

"And keep you from being able to say 'hi' to your Ditto friend again?" Ketu asked. "Now what kind of person would I be if I did that?"

Aldrich beat his wings together and brought a swirling, overpowering gale down on the three con artists, throwing their bodies about limply like a trio of Substitutes. As the winds of Aldrich's Hurricane died down, the alley returned to silence beyond the faint churn of lagoon water and Canalhouse City's nightlife in the background.

Ketu glanced over the unconscious forms of Albert and his companions, before he brought a White Apricorn down on Albert's head. A flash of light swallowed up the Nuzleaf as he collapsed into the Apricorn. The Weavile scoffed and reached with a thick cloth into his bag and pulled out another white nut before repeating the process with Charlie, and then once again with Marilyn. Ketu deposited the three now-filled Apricorns into Aldrich's bag, before turning his attention back to his teammate.

"So they really do have a volume of the Ledger," the Weavile remarked. "I dunno what they did to pull that one off, but no reason to complain about a lucky break."

Aldrich looked down at the Apricorns briefly and covered up the mouth of his bag, when he glanced over at Ketu with a wary twitch of his ears.

"You know, we could've taken care of this half an hour ago," the Noivern began. "Alice had her guard down with that shopping bag of hers, and she would have had a better idea of where the Ledger was being kept anyway."

Ketu flattened his ears and looked away towards the ground. After a moment's hesitation, the Weavile turned back with a low, bitter-sounding mutter.

"Yeah, well, it wasn't that easy and you know it," Ketu said. "She wouldn't break like some random sailor, which is why we waited for a group like these guys to turn up. Besides, things worked out fine, didn't they?"

The Noivern raised a brow and looked at Ketu skeptically for a moment. After a noticeable pause, the bat closed his eyes and relented with a sigh.

"Fair enough."

"Anyway, I'll let you take care of putting these jokers on the first ship to Nagrobek. As for me…"

Ketu walked out onto the street and turned his head slightly, his eyes picking up the sight of the lights from the Company's military harbor on the other side of the central canal. The Weavile crossed his arms, before a small smile formed on his face.

"I've got a mission to prepare for right now."



Much to her relief, Salvini's job guarding the Academy's grounds went by that day without incident. Her companions had gone without seeing anyone from Team Traveller, and after hours, they all had an urge to spend time with one another.

Her idea for an activity had been the one to ultimately win her friends' favor, namely to spend the evening together over drinks at a tavern near her new lodgings, not far from the modest apartment she'd grown up in for much of her childhood. Before long, the four found themselves happily wiling away their time and sobriety at a simple wooden bar in a room dimly lit with warm candlelight, as a Gothorita barkeep darted to and fro between customers.

The four spent the evening at a set of stools set out at the bar, with Hertsog at one end, Salvini at the other, with Phyllis and Payak between the two. The Ariados of the lot sat at a taller seat and raised a clay cup by slipping one of his legs into a holder, before bringing it to his mandibles. Payak gave a wary swig of the cup's contents and clicked his mouthparts, Salvini watching carefully from a shorter seat to his left to study his reaction as she gave a curious tilt of her head.

"So, what do you think?" the Grovyle asked.

"Well, it's not rakia…" Payak began. "But the jenever here isn't half bad! I think I could get used to it."

A small smile settled over Salvini's face as she watched Payak take another sip from his drink. It was nice to see that in spite of their circumstances, Payak was finally warming up to her old home, and what would be her companions' for the foreseeable future. The Grovyle reached for her cup on the counter, when she saw Hertsog staring down idly at his own drink. Phyllis had evidently noticed it too, as the Marked Leafeon tilted an ear back and pawed uneasily at his side.

"Is something the matter, Hertsog?" she asked. "You've been awfully quiet tonight."

The Mienshao turned his attention from his cup and glanced over at his Marked colleague. Hertsog blinked briefly, seemingly drifting in his own thoughts, before shaking his head with an apologetic sigh.

"Izvinyavaĭ," he replied. "I've just had things from work on my mind."

Salvini, Payak, and Phyllis traded glances with each other. Even if Hertsog was usually more reserved than them, it wasn't like him to be this withdrawn when they went out for drinks together…

"Did something happen on the job?" Payak asked.

Hertsog remained silent for a moment, and picked up his cup to drink from it, before setting it aside and turning on his stool. Salvini helped herself to the rest of her own cup's contents, noting that the Mienshao had a serious, guarded expression. Hertsog nodded back to Payak, before speaking up in a low voice, just loud enough for him to be heard over the chatter of the other patrons in the background.

"There was a disturbance that happened around the Archive earlier today," the Fighting-Type explained. "Apparently some drunken students had gotten into a fight with each other. Normally I wouldn't think too much of it…"

The Mienshao trailed off for a moment, before shaking his whiskered head with a low sigh.

"But there's just been some strange things happening lately, and it stood out to me," he remarked. " What about you? Did any of you see anything strange during your patrols?"

Salvini flinched mid-drink as Hertsog spoke, and broke down into startled coughing. The Grass-Type accidentally spat up a good half of her remaining drink onto the counter and tried to calm herself, when she turned and noticed her teammates staring at her.

The Grovyle brushed her mouth with the back of her hand as the Gothorita barkeep shuffled up and shot a sour frown at her. Salvini grimaced briefly, where after a bit of awkward stammering, she forced a sheepish smile over her face in front of her teammates.

"S-Sorry, I was just drinking a little too quickly," she insisted. "The stuff burns a little."

The Gothorita summarily wiped down the counter in front of her, Salvini squirming from embarrassment and deep unease as her teammates continued to eye her. Payak was the first to turn his attention back to his drink, shooting an askew glance back from the corner of his eye.

"I mean, I knew you liked your jenever, but I didn't think you were that eager to get through your drink, Salvini," Payak murmured. "Though to answer your earlier question, Hertsog, I don't think that I have seen anything strange."

Phyllis shuffled her forepaws uneasily at the Ariados' words. She seemed to visibly weigh whether or not to say anything for a moment, before opening her mouth to speak up.

"Actually… the other day I saw a Cubone and a Growlithe in the library that reminded me of the ones we ran into on Mengir," the Leafeon said. "I… told myself that it was probably nothing, since there's no logical reason why they'd be here, but…"

The Grass-type visibly shivered and pinned her ears back, as her voice came out in a low, worried whine.

"I… I know that it's going to sound crazy, but… what if that demon really did come back?" she asked. "What if he's right here in Canalhouse City while nobody even knows about it?"

Phyllis's questions were at once answered by a dismissive scoff, as Payak turned and glanced at her from his stool with an unimpressed frown.

"Nima? This story again? Phyllis, it was just a case of mistaken identity, it happens," the Ariados chittered. "There's no reason for you to still be so wound up over some overgrown Wingull!"

"… And if things weren't that simple, Payak?"

Payak and the others paused and blinked as Hertsog's question hung in the air. Payak turned on his seat to face his Fighting-Type companion, who was staring at him with a serious gaze, making the Bug-Type warily raise a brow.

"Eh? What are you getting at, Hertsog?" the spider wondered.

"Let's just assume for the sake of argument that Phyllis is right," the Mienshao began. "We… obviously wouldn't agree on whether or not what she saw was a demon, but… would you still be dismissing her concerns so quickly?"

The Ariados fell silent and hesitated for a moment, before giving a puzzled tilt of his head.

"You mean, if those brats really were here again?" the Bug-Type asked. "What are the odds of that happening, let alone that that bird with them actually being a Protector?"

Hertsog shook his head back and narrowed his eyes with a small frown, raising his voice to continue to press his point.

"I'm well aware of what the odds are, Payak. Again, this is a hypothetical," the Fighting-Type said. "If Phyllis is right and there really is… such a unique Pokémon like that in the city, would you still feel this way?"

Payak fell silent for a moment, before he quietly pulled his legs close to his body and grudgingly spoke up in reply.

"I mean, I guess I wouldn't… since that'd mean that bird really is a Protector. That's not the sort of 'mon you would want to get on the bad side of, especially not for how much we're getting paid," the Ariados admitted. "But why would the Company get involved with trying to 'monhandle a Protector like that?"

Salvini cleared her throat to suppress a nervous titter, which Payak thankfully didn't seem to pick up on. After a moment to compose herself, the Grovyle let her attention drift back to Hertsog, as he shook his head with a low murmur.

"I don't know, but Phyllis has been adamant that one of the Pokémon we ran into on Mengir was a 'demon'," the Mienshao insisted. "If nothing else, it makes sense to be a bit open-minded."

Salvini blinked at Hertsog's statement. While she hadn't expected him to be nasty about Phyllis' fears, hearing him even entertain the possibility she was onto something was… unexpected, to say the least.

"What… makes you say that?" the Grovyle asked. Her Mienshao companion remained silent at first, turning his gaze down at the counter with a shake of his head.

"There's… just been a lot about what's happened to us over the past couple weeks that doesn't make any sense to me," Hertsog replied. "I'm well aware of what the official explanation was, but between the way Commander Briggs and Administrator Zorn were conducting themselves, and the rumors circulating about what happened with those riots in Tidemill City… there's just some things that don't add up about what those two told us on Mengir."

Hertsog reached for his cup and gave it an idle swirl, before letting out a quiet sigh and speaking up to reassure his teammates.

"It's probably nothing, but still. It's not unreasonable for Phyllis to think there might have been something more to what happened back there," he insisted. "And perhaps whatever did happen there is not as behind us as we thought. After all, the higher-ups aren't doing a whole lot to act otherwise."

A brief silence fell over the group, as one after the other, the four returned to their drinks. Salvini reached for her cup of jenever and as she raised it to her mouth, she could hear Phyllis quietly murmuring a 'thanks for having my back there' to Hertsog.

The Grovyle shot an aside glance at the former Mienshao captain, wondering to herself if the Fighting-Type genuinely believed the words he'd said on the Phyllis' behalf earlier, or if he'd just said them as a courtesy to help her mood.

… Either way, she supposed it didn't matter much, since for all she knew, Team Traveller would turn tail and sail out of port tonight. Right now, perhaps it was best to just focus on her drink and have a good time with her friends.



The next morning, the skies over Canalhouse City were overcast and gray. The gloom above did little to lift Darzin's mood as he flew through the air, the dampness reminding him of a home he'd long lost, while the chill brought back unwelcome memories of his first few cold nights away from it.

Not that he'd have been in better spirits even without the weather weighing down on him. Much of the past couple days had gone by in a fruitless search for the Siglo Swellow, as time and again, his attempts to shadow the Guardian of the Seas and his friends kept failing due to him losing sight of them amid the crowds of the city. He had also made an attempt to find their ship and capture Lugia there, but in spite of combing the expected docks high and low, there was no trace of the dark gray sails they'd flown on Haipheh.

On top of it all, the indignity of Team Sentinel's ambush yesterday also lingered on the Dragonite's mind. After everything he'd endured to try and use the Guardian of the Seas as a bargaining chip with the rest of the Board, it'd be a snowy day on Sormus before he'd let that Kommo-o and his cronies ruin all his efforts at the last moment!

"Hrmph, if those meddling spies think that they can steal Lugia out from under me, they've got another thing coming."

He hadn't been able to track down their personnel files in a mere day, but even so, he had… methods that would hopefully take the lot of them off the board as competitors. The Dragonite shifted his glance over at his right claw, which he'd tightly balled up into a fist around a scrunched-up indigo cloth. The Dragon-type gave a firm squeeze at it, before training his attention down at the city's islets below.

Darzin flew ahead as the military harbor came into view among the gabled rooftops. The Dragonite looked down among the network of canals and streets below, studying the surroundings when he chanced to come across a waterside terrace directly south along the canal running past the harbor. There, the Dragon-Type spotted a Kommo-o and a Noivern seated among the tables and blinked, circling about for a better look. Alongside the two Pokémon was the same Sylveon from the day before, and a Mothim that he didn't seem to recognize, but could have sworn he'd seen somewhere before. But even between the three faces that he could recognize, it was clear that this was the group he was looking for.

"And here I thought I'd need to comb the Academy to find them again," he grumbled. "Let's hurry up and move this along."

Darzin swooped down from the air and landed on his feet in a low crouch, his arrival causing a noticeable thump that drew the attention of the nearby Pokémon away from their drinks and meals.

"There you are!" Darzin fumed. "Where on earth have you all been?!"

Team Sentinel looked up from the table, with Ellsberg jolting up and letting out a surprised buzz at the sight of the Dragonite.

"H-Huh?! Administrator Darzin?!"

The Bug-Type wondered briefly what on earth the Administrator was doing away from his duties at the Records Department, only to notice Sorge, Aldrich, and Zelle's reactions transform into frowns of sour annoyance. Zelle narrowed her eyes, throwing a feeler over her face and dragging it downwards with a low groan.

"You have got to be kidding me…"

"No, I'm not kidding," Darzin snapped. "And you'd do well to respect your superiors here!"

Sorge shot a dark glare across the table and balled his left claw into a fist. The Kommo-o paused when he noticed from the corners of his eyes that there were other Pokémon in Company lavenders staring at them. Sorge hesitated briefly and exhaled, before forcing a more muted expression over his face and leaning in with a quiet growl.

"You should rein in your attitude," the Kommo-o snarled. "How do you expect this to end any different than yesterday?"

Sorge noted that Darzin didn't seem fazed by the implied threat and instead bared his fangs back. Was it the other Company Pokémon nearby giving him such boldness? Him misreading their strength? Or just him being that much of a glutton for punishment?

Sorge didn't know, and frankly didn't care too much about the reason. Whatever had made the Dragonite think it was a good idea to seek them out, he was advancing on them all the same, and clearly eager for a confrontation.

"Bold of you to think that you're in any position to publicly deny me!" Darzin exclaimed, holding out an accusatory claw. "Though if you'd like to try your luck with expulsion from the ranks, go ahead and-"

"Hey there, buddy! Good to see you again!"

Darzin felt a sharp slap against his back as a wave of dizziness settled over him. The Dragonite whirled his head around and saw a Weavile smirking up at him just as his vision went blurry. The Dragon-type Administrator lurched in a confused stagger, only for Ketu to slip past him as he patted at his back.

"C'mon, It hasn't been that long since we saw each other!" Ketu exclaimed, shooting a smarmy smile up at Darzin. "Why, with that sort of treatment, you'd think we were enemies or something!"

Darzin tottered and struggled to keep his balance. He turned to his left in an attempt to follow the Weavile's voice but merely faced empty air.

"Ngah… who are-?"

The Dragonite wobbled forward, as Ketu waited for the Dragon-Type to raise a foot to turn to face him again, only to give a shove mid-stride that pushed the reeling Administrator off-balance. Darzin stumbled ahead a few steps before righting himself in confusion, leaving Ketu to fold his arms as he called out to the Dragonite in a smug tone in front of the nearby onlookers.

"Might want to lay off the jenever though if you're getting that wobbly from it, though," the Weavile insisted. "We need a moment to touch base first, so let's catch up with each other in a bit. For now, why don't you get some fresh air to clear your head?"

Darzin staggered into the table of a hapless party of guards, where he upended the group's meal and drinks with a chorus of yelps and protests.

"Hey! Watch it!"

Satisfied with his clawwork, Ketu ignored the unfolding commotion in the background and took a seat beside the other members of Team Sentinel, kicking his feet up onto the table with a sly grin as he let the splintered husk of a spent Totter Seed fall under the table. All the while, Ellsberg looked on in bewilderment, watching Darzin walk around in a daze, before turning his attention back to the others.

"What on earth just happened?" he asked, drawing a dismissive scoff from Aldrich in reply.

"Hrmph, Darzin beclowned himself yet again," the Noivern said. "Though what else is new?"

Ketu cast a glance back at Darzin after the sound of him bumping into another table rang out, before turning back to his Noivern teammate with a small shrug.

"Not too much. Like we expected, it looks like today's the day that Kline and his friends are going to try to hit up the Vault," the Weavile said, prompting Aldrich to look at him expectantly.

"I take it that you're ready to handle your end of things, then?" the Noivern asked.

Ketu fell quiet for a moment and studied the mouth of the military harbor, before giving a wary nod back to his friend.

"Mostly. I've got an idea of where to find the Ledger and it shouldn't take too long to zero in on it," he replied. "I'm pretty sure I could snatch it and get out on my own if I had to, but I could use a distraction on that schooner to buy me some more time."

Ketu's teammates remained quiet and thought to themselves what could be used to create a distraction on such short notice. A pained yowl rang out and caught the group's attention, as they glanced over to a nearby table and spotted a hapless Liepard getting up whimpering from a still-dazed Darzin having stepped on his tail. The five traded looks with each other, before Zelle raised a feeler and pointed off at the lurching Administrator in the background.

"You mean a distraction like that?" she asked. Ketu turned and let his gaze linger on the Dragonite for a moment, before giving a grunting nod in affirmation.

"Yeah, he'll do," he said. "Let's go ahead and point him where we need him to go."

Sorge started to get up, when much to his surprise, Darzin turned back and began lumbering towards them on his own. The rest of Team Sentinel rose from their seats as well, expecting Darzin to crash into their table, when he abruptly veered towards Sorge. He threw his right arm out to steady himself, his claw falling onto the mouth of the Kommo-o's bag. Sorge's eyes lit up with fiery indignation and he grabbed the Dragonite's arm with his left claw, digging into it just enough to draw a pained yelp and a few ruddy droplets.

"That's quite enough, Darzin," Sorge snapped.

The Kommo-o shoved the Dragonite away, sending him stumbling back and pratfalling onto the paving stones behind him. Darzin sat there, shaking feeling back into his arm and nursing his rump as a few stifled snickers came from the surrounding onlookers. The Dragonite frowned with a low, annoyed growl, before getting up and sharply glaring back at Sorge.

"What do you think you're-?!"

"Reacting as any other Pokémon would to having his stuff rifled through," Sorge harrumphed. "Even as an Administrator, you surely know better than to expect a 'mon to just accept that!"

The Dragonite bared his fangs back, but didn't get much of a reaction aside from an unimpressed frown from Zelle, who rolled her eyes and turned her attention towards Ketu.

"Hrmph, we've wasted enough time on this," the Sylveon insisted. "We should get going if we want to wrap things up within the hour. That schooner near the mouth of the military harbor isn't going to take care of itself."

Darzin blinked and fell silent after the Fairy-Type's words. Had she just slipped up? He wouldn't have expected Pokémon from the Intelligence Division to have such loose lips, but he certainly wasn't about to complain about it.

The Dragonite wondered for a moment how on earth Lugia and his companions would have docked their ship in the military harbor for multiple days. After all, only Company ships were allowed to dock at its piers!

… Then again, they surely would've had an easier time infiltrating the Academy if they had passed themselves off in Company colors. And it wouldn't be hard to confirm things one way or another. Why, the harbor was literally visible from this terrace! It'd only take a quick look to verify if that schooner was there, and if it was… well, snatching Lugia thanks to that Sylveon's mistake would be as convenient a way as any to repay the Kommo-o and his underlings for their intrusion.

The Dragonite turned and headed off from the terrace with an audible huff, only for Ketu to call out from behind him.

"Leaving already?"

Darzin looked back, flexing the digits of a free and empty right claw much as if they'd grown stiff from exertion. Curiously, the Dragonite seemed to be at ease, as the faintest glimmers of a smile crossed his face, before being suppressed into a deep scowl.

"I'm a busy 'mon, Weavile," he huffed back. "Besides, even if you were extremely rude throughout it, I got what I wanted from our meeting."

Darzin leapt up, taking wing as he flew up into the gray sky and sailed along with the churning air currents above. Back on the ground, Team Sentinel's members watched as the Dragonite Administrator slipped off, before Aldrich let out a low scoff.

"Tch, he's not still trying to scheme against us, is he?"

"Hmph, just let him think he's accomplishing something," Sorge said. "Though there's your distraction, Ketu. Make the most of it while you can."

"Right," the Weavile replied. "Good luck out there with the mission."

Team Sentinel's members left the terrace and set off, Ketu heading off for the military harbor as his teammates began to make their way towards the Academy. All the while, as Sorge's team drifted off further into the city, the Kommo-o's bag jostled with his movements, and little did he know that there at its top, the corner of an indigo cloth could be seen poking from it.



Author's Notes:

- gevulde koeken - Dutch: A type of cookie made with a soft center filling made of almond paste. lit. "filled cookies"
- Nima? (Нима?) - Bulgarian: Expression used to express skepticism or surprise, analogous to "Really?" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
 
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Chapter 90: Casting the Die New

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. quilava-fobbie
  6. sneasel-kate
  7. heliolisk-fobbie
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While Team Sentinel set out to prepare their ambush, Nida and the younger members of Team Traveller found themselves back in their same scouting position within the Archive's hallways that they were in two days ago. There, Crom held onto the pocket mirror that had been lent to them by the ship's crew, using it to see around the corner for his teammates. On the other end was a Machamp and a Slowbro with a shell on his arm in dark blue armor standing guard in front of the iron doors into the secure wing. Crom lingered for a moment at the sight of the pair's reflection, before he sucked in a sharp breath and turned to his teammates.

"Is everyone ready?" he asked. Elty hesitated and briefly looked in the direction of where the guards were, before shaking his head with a quiet sigh.

"I think this is as ready as we're going to get, Crom. Let's just make sure we've got the names of those guards we saw straight."

Pleo ruffled his feathers as he peeked past the corner at the Machamp and the Slowbro. The young Protector shrank back, giving a worried look to his teammates with a nervous stammer.

"B-But what if something goes wrong?" he murmured. "What if they catch on to us? Or-?"

"Cálmate, Pleo. It's okay."

Pleo paused as Nida leaned in and moved her paw over him, giving a reassuring pat and small smile in reply.

"We went through worse than this to help you escape from Tidemill City," the Nidorina insisted. "At least this time there's a chance we can get away without fighting."

Pleo calmed slightly at the Poison-Type's words, the five collectively inhaling sharply as they rounded the corner and forced smiles over their faces as they approached the Machamp and Slowbro. As they neared, they noticed the pair watching them keenly, Elty opting to break their silence by greeting them with a friendly wag of his tail.

"Oh, hey there!" the Growlithe cheered. "We've got an artifact for the Vault!"

Elty and his companions watched as the Machamp and Slowbro traded dubious glances with each other. After a moment to stew over the youngsters' claims, they turned back, both of the guards sporting deep, disbelieving frowns.

"Ja hoor," the Machamp scoffed. "And I'm the king of Conntow."

"Look, don't you have classes or something?" the Slowbro growled. "If there really was something being brought to the Vault today, we'd have heard of it."

The five grimaced reflexively at the guards' hostile reception, trading hesitant glances with each other. After a moment to steel herself, Nida stepped forward, stopping to take the lid off the box in her paws and reach inside.

"I think there must be some sort of misunderstanding, since we were specifically told by Daan to bring our artifact here," she insisted. "And I can't imagine that nobody would've told you about this."

Nida fished out Pleo's goggles, proudly holding them up before the Machamp and Slowbro. The Machamp narrowed his eyes, folding both sets of his arms and giving a sharp harrumph in reply to the Nidorina.

"A set of goggles? Really?" the Machamp said. "If you were going to pull some kind of prank on us-"

"Hold on a moment," the Slowbro insisted. "Those goggles are made of plastic."

The Machamp blinked as the Slowbro reached over and took the goggles from Nida. The Slowbro pawed over the goggles and inspected them with a quiet, entranced awe, before stopping and giving a wary glance back at the youngsters in front of him.

"How on earth did you kids get this?" he asked.

"It's a treasure passed down in our friend's family which we found out was really a human artifact," Guardia explained as she pointed at Pleo. "We didn't realize it was so rare and valuable until another Pokémon pointed it out. That's why we got the box for it."

The Machamp looked down at the goggles, and then back at the box in Nida's paws. With a shake of his head, he deposited the plastic accessory back inside and clamped the lid back over it, taking the box into a pair of his hands. The Machamp went over to the doors to the secure wing, leaving his Slowbro counterpart to look after him before turning back to Team Traveller's members with a low huff.

"Hrmph, we get the point," the Slowbro remarked. "Though, I'll need to have a word with Daan about communicating properly."

Team Traveller's members nodded back as the Machamp opened the iron doors and slipped into the dim, blue-lit hallways behind. The Fighting-Type dutifully made his way through the halls, down the stairs into the basement, and much as he had innumerable times before, eventually found himself in front of the entrance to the Vault. A party consisting of a Garchomp, a Klinklang, and a Doublade stood at attention by the entrance, as the Machamp headed over to the Steel-Type of the group holding out his box.

"Got a new addition for the collection, Liv," the Machamp said, prompting the Klinklang and the others to narrow their eyes skeptically.

"Eh? Just out of the blue?" the Klinklang asked.

"Yeah, I was surprised too," the Machamp replied. "But apparently it's a real artifact."

The Machamp pulled the top off the box and showed the goggles to his colleagues. At once the guards fell silent, the Klinklang examining it as the Doublade peered over and the Garchomp reached for a metal badge pinned against his scarf and pressed a claw down against it. There was a brief murmuring conversation between the Garchomp and an unseen presence on the other end—the guards' security dispatcher. After a moment's pause, the Garchomp let go of his badge and motioned at the Machamp to bring the goggles over.

"You're clear," the Garchomp insisted. "We'll get the door open right away so you can hand it off to the Internal Team."

The Garchomp stepped up to a metallic knob labeled with little stripes engraved into its metal, dutifully paying attention to them as he stopped the dial at a series of stripes. Left, right, and then left again. After stopping the dial on a final stripe, a heavy click sounded out, prompting the Dragon-type to grab onto a battered crossbar and turn it clockwise with an audible creak until it came to a firm stop. The round door of the Vault slowly swung open afterwards, revealing a Gengar, a Wobbuffet, a Malamar, and a Sawk gathered at the other end waiting for them.

"Here's the artifact," the Klinklang insisted. "Sounds like you'll have some excitement on the job today after all."

The Gengar of the four walked up and took the box out of the Machamp's hands, giving a nodding grunt in reply as the Fighting-Type drifted back down the hallway. The other guards outside set to work at once pushing the vault door closed with a sharp creak, as it closed shut with a loud click and its bolts slid back in place. The Gengar turned around as his fellow guards eyed the box curiously, before the Ghost-Type motioned for a pause.

"Let's find a spot for this first," he ordered. "You'll have plenty of time to gawk at whatever's in here after it's been shelved."

The Sawk, Malamar, and Wobbuffet moved away as the Gengar made his way for the back of the Vault, passing artifacts that were set on display throughout it. In a glass case, there was a discolored white plastic box that stood on its side next to a rod of the same color and composition with buttons laid out in a line on it. A little ways away, there was a large, flat plastic panel with a thin frame that was hung on a wall, and a red tome on a shelf that had a cover graced with a prominent line with two arms that branched out at its top.

The Gengar paid none of them any heed as he walked over to a tall shelf at the back of the Vault. There, he came to a small table set aside for sorting artifacts, when he suddenly realized that the box felt strangely light for its size. The Ghost-Type blinked a moment, and set the box down on the table, pulling the lid back to inspect it. The Gengar quickly discovered that the container was seemingly empty, but for a set of white-colored goggles made of unusually well-preserved plastic.

"Hrmph, they didn't need something this big for an artifact as small as this," the Gengar scoffed.

The Gengar stuck a hand into the box to grab the goggles, when he felt it brush up against an invisible lump inside, prompting him to abruptly pull his hand back.

"Huh?!"

The Gengar looked into the box, where a green, serpentine creature with a single eye seemingly appeared from thin air, and stared up at him with a flustered blink. Kline narrowed his eye into a glare, and at once, light bathed the box as alike-sized objects began to converge in on him through the Vault's walls, much to the Gengar's wide-eyed alarm.

"H-Hey! What the-?!"



Outside, just to the north of the Vault, Ander, Calidus, and Percy waited on a small grassy knoll hemmed in by canals on two sides. The three sat and rested, where they posed as guards supposedly on break from patrolling the Academy's grounds, and cast a glance in the direction of the Archive, where the rest of their teammates had been waiting on another portion of the knoll closer to the Archive's northern wall.

Ander let his gaze briefly linger on the others, before uncomfortably tapping the flats of his scythes together and turning to his nearby teammates.

"Did Kline say at all what we were supposed to look out for?" the Marked Scyther asked.

Calidus shook his head back in reply, casting a wary glance back at the building ahead of them.

"He didn't, actually. Just that we'd know when it's time," the Talonflame replied, prompting Ander to shoot a puzzled glance back. "I mean, Percy and I have some ideas of what we could expect, but-"

The Fire-Type paused as he and his teammates suddenly saw green lights zipping in from all around them. The lights converged on the Archive, and after a few seconds, they felt the ground violently shake. Distant shouts suddenly broke out inside and around the building, Kline's handiwork, they presumed. Without a moment to spare, Percy got up and motioned for the others to follow along.

"Well, that's as good of a sign as any," the Gliscor said. "Come on. We need to get that Ledger before other guards come to investigate."

The three hurried along, ducking into the Archive with the rest of their teammates as they rushed down the hallways. Before they knew it, they were at the iron doors leading into the building's secure wing, where there at the front, a startled-looking Machamp and Slowbro peered back towards the doors, seemingly hesitating over whether to go in or not. Percy and the others' approaching footsteps and wingbeats turned the pair's attention towards them, prompting the two guards to reflexively block off the entrance.

"Hey! What do you think you're doing here?!" the Machamp exclaimed.

"We're here to see what on earth is going on, of course!" Kiran shot back. "A bunch of lights just came in and we could feel the ground shake from outside! Are you seriously telling us that everything's fine in here?"

The Machamp and Slowbro hesitated a moment, when they heard faint shouts ring out from beyond the iron doors. The pair traded uneasy glances with one another, before the Machamp sighed and shook his head, hurriedly pushing the doors open as the Slowbro motioned for the Swellow and his companions to follow.

"Alright, but let's hurry up!" the Poison-Type insisted. "The disturbance came from inside the secure wing!"

Kiran and his peers hurried along past the iron doors and after the guards. They made their way through corridors bathed in cool blue light, turning when prompted by the Machamp and Slowbro, and making their way down the flight of steps into the basement, until at last they came across the Vault door.

There, the guards on duty were arguing with one another, the Garchomp hurriedly trying to turn a few knobs, only to fumble with a low growl and be forced to try again. The group slowed as they neared, prompting Pladur to suck in a sharp breath and warily approach the guards with a puzzled tilt of his head.

"What on earth happened here?" the Fraxure asked.

"We don't know! We brought in an artifact not even ten minutes ago and then a bunch of green lights shot in through the wall!" the Klinklang at the door explained. "After that, there was a crash and the sound of a struggle inside!"

"Just hurry up and get that thing open already!" Percy barked. "The culprit can't possibly have gotten far!"

The Garchomp slid the knobs into place when a dull click sounded out, prompting him to turn his attention to the crossbar and hurriedly whirl it about clockwise. The Vault door creaked open, and on the other end, Percy, his teammates, and the gathered guards found a scene of general disorder. All about, shelves had been upended and glass cases lay shattered into pieces, including one with a white box and rod that now lay toppled onto their sides.

The group made their way inside, where they spotted forms of the Internal Team lying limply on the ground, with fresh gouges ripped into their armor and little signs of life beyond an occasional weak groan. The guards posted at the door looked about with blank stares, the Machamp wincing after seeing a flat, plastic panel hanging ajar with a radial crack near one of its corners.

"Yeesh, what a mess," the Machamp murmured.

"Is there any sign of a breach in there?" the Slowbro asked.

The Garchomp looked around the upended vault. In spite of the mess of relics and damaged displays lying about, there was no obvious sign of forced entry. Wherever he looked, the walls of the vault remained unbroken, as did the floor and ceiling. The Garchomp mused aloud to himself if someone might have teleported or phased in, before having a moment of dawning realization and whirling about to Percy and his teammates with an impatient scowl.

"Look, don't just stand around like that!" the Garchomp grunted. "Either help us make sure all the relics are still here or go get a medic!"

Percy and the others fanned out into the room, as their members slowly worked their way towards the room's shelves, which seemed to be the most logical place to start searching for a book. Being ever the bold type, Alice was the first to make her way to one, coming to a stop at an upended shelf in the middle of the left end of the Vault. There, she pawed through artifacts of metal and plastic strewn about the floor, when she heard Pladur call her from behind.

"Alice, come here a minute."

The Sneasel looked up and saw the Fraxure motioning for her a little way towards the front of the Vault. There, next to his feet, she caught a glimpse of a bulky, worn red object half-buried wedged in the space under a toppled shelf. She made her way over and pulled the shelf back upright, where the pair quickly discovered the object was an old tome with a glyph on the cover that looked almost like a two-branched wand.

"Good eye there," she whispered back.

Alice quickly feigned a stumble and let a red tome spill out of her bag. Its pages were blank, but so long as she kept the cover closed, nobody here needed to know that. The Sneasel hastily shoveled the Ledger into her bag as Pladur stooped down and picked up the dummy book, hesitating as he brought it up to the uprighted shelf when he heard a sharp growl and looked over to see the Garchomp among the guards shooting a sharp glare at the two of them.

"Hey! Be careful with that!" the Dragon-Type snapped. "Everything in here's worth more than you'll ever make in your lifetimes!"

"Ack! Sorry!" Pladur stammered. "It's just that when you said to help inventory-"

"Just get out of our way and go and help set up a perimeter or something!" the head guard ordered. "This entire building's needs to be put on lockdown over this, and if you just sit there dawdling, the culprit will slip away beforehand!"

Pladur looked off at the other end of the Vault just in time to see Percy lower his claw to the ground and quickly shove an unseen mass into his bag. That must've been Kline, and assuming it was, it was sign enough for the Fraxure that their time here in this building was complete.

"Okay! Okay!"

Pladur made his way to the Vault's entrance and called for the others on his team to follow, the seven hastily retracing their steps through the secure wing of the Archive. They snaked through the blue-lit hallways, up the steps to the ground floor, and then back out the cast iron doors at the entrance, where sure enough, they'd returned to the hallways that Nida and the others had been skulking over the past couple days. As the group made their way towards the service entrance, they breathed sighs of relief, only for a quiet hiss to suddenly come from Percy's satchel as Kline irkedly poked his head out.

"Pierce, where is my cushion?" the Zygarde snapped.

"Sorry, but we needed the extra space for items today," the Gliscor answered. "I'm sure you can manage one mission without a silk cushion."

Pladur, Kiran, and Ander traded flummoxed stares and blinked as they ran, before the Fraxure cocked his head back at Percy and gave a puzzled quirk of his brow.

"Wait, you had a silk cushion in there-?"

The group's attention shot forward as they looked up to see a flash of pink fur exit the service entrance and skidded to a stop. There, just in front of the exit that the kids had told them about was Hertsog, followed by Salvini, Payak and Phyllis from Mengir. The seven froze for a moment as Hertsog and the others stopped and stood in place with dumbfounded stares.

"Huh?! Kiran?!"

After an initial moment of surprise, the Mienshao stepped forward with his arms at the ready to strike and his eyes narrowed into a sharp glare.

"What are you doing here?" the Fighting-Type demanded. "And why am I getting the feeling that whatever's going on right now is somehow related to you?"

Kiran faltered for a moment, shifting in place uneasily as he struggled with how to even begin to explain their circumstances… let alone in a way that wouldn't just prompt Hertsog and the others to attack them and tip off the other guards.

"… Er… well, you're not wrong," the Swellow began, before hastily beating his wings out in interjection. "B-But it's for a good reason, we swear!"

Salvini rolled her eyes at the Flying-Type's reply, curling her mouth down into an unimpressed frown.

"… Seriously? That's the best you can come up with, Kiran?" the Grovyle grumbled. "You're supposed to be trying to dispel our suspicion right now!"

"Just what sort of reason would justify all of this?" Hertsog pressed.

Kiran and his teammates hesitated, Ander and Pladur seemingly having the beginnings of an explanation on the tips of their tongues, only to think better of it and suddenly clam up. Then, Kiran shook his head, before sucking in a sharp breath to speak.

"… Like we said last time. We're trying to clear a friend's name," the Swellow said. "His name is Pleo. He's one of my pupils along with Crom back on our home island. My understanding is that you've already met him alongside some younger companions of his."

Salvini immediately froze after Kiran's words and from his reaction, Hertsog had evidently also found the name he mentioned to be familiar. Payak and Phyllis traded uneasy glances as their friends fell silent, before the pair stiffened up—it suddenly dawning on them that there was a reason why the name sounded so familiar…

"T-Those are those pirates from Mengir!" Payak cried.

Phyllis' eyes shot wide and the Marked Leafeon's breaths came shallow and quick at the realization that her suspicions about the Growlithe and Cubone from the other day were onto something. Worst of all, it wasn't just the pirates from Fensedge Village that were present, but none other than the demon that was with them was here too!

Kiran grimaced briefly at the guards' reaction, before deciding to throw caution to the wind and press on with his explanation. Hertsog and the others held their fates in their paws at the moment, so if they were going to win them over without a risky fight, they needed to say something—and fast.

"… Those are the charges they are facing, yes," Kiran sighed. "But look, they really were falsely accused and we just wanted to-"

"N-Ne!"

Phyllis crouched in front of Kiran and the others and bared her fangs, shooting a frantic stare back at her friends, and especially at the Mienshao among them.

"H-Hertsog, please! You can't just let this happen!" she begged. "They're going to set that demon loose!"

"We know that," a voice quietly buzzed back. "But we're doing that because the alternative of letting you capture him is worse."

The Leafeon blinked and hesitated for a moment as the Marked Scyther from Kiran's party approached, stooping down as he neared. The mantis breathed in sharply, before kneeling and looking into Phyllis' eyes.

"Look. I… can't say that Pleo's not a demon. I recognize him as well as you do from our scriptures," Ander said. "But I know that this entire time I've been with him, he's been kindhearted and he's trying to be something different than what we feared."

The Bug-Type shook his head, before letting out a quiet buzz and continuing on.

"But that's not why your employers have been lying to you about him," he said, prompting Alice to join in.

"That's right! If the Company gets him, they're going to try and use him as a weapon," the Sneasel insisted. "I might not buy your whole thing about him being a 'demon', but if they succeed, he'll be a lot closer to becoming one like that than if you just let us try to clear things up here!"

Phyllis evidently never had the thought cross her mind, as she remained frozen in place after the Scyther and Sneasel's explanation, and visibly wavered. Ander tapped the flats of his scythes briefly, before continuing on with a quiet, faltering tone.

"I don't blame you for being afraid of Pleo. And honestly… part of me is still scared of him," the Scyther admitted. "But just standing back and letting the Company have their way with him isn't going to make it less likely that he'll make our fears come true! Surely you realize that by now."

Phyllis stared back in silence after hearing Ander's words and looked away for a moment, as Hertsog and Payak seemed to paralyzed with indecision. The three cast a glance over to Salvini, when they noticed that their Grovyle partner seemed to be unfazed. At once, everything about her behavior, about why she'd let Pleo and the others go, became clear. Some way, somehow, she'd known, that the pirates they were after were really just a bunch of kids and…

"S-So that bird really is some sort of Protector?!" Payak stammered, prompting Calidus to shoot a sharp frown in reply.

"Ugh, learn to read the room, Ariados," the Talonflame muttered.

For a brief moment, Hertsog seemed to be genuinely uncertain as to what to do. Payak and Phyllis both shrank back, both having lost their will to fight for their own reasons. Hertsog paused and visibly hesitated when he felt someone put a hand on his shoulder. The Mienshao looked down, where he saw Salvini looking up at him with a torn look.

"Hertsog…. do… do we really have to do this?" the Grovyle murmured.

The Mienshao said nothing back for a brief, silent moment that seemed to last an eternity, before his features eased and he shook his head back.

"No. We don't."

Hertsog stepped away from the door, and motioned at his companions to follow. One after the other, Salvini and her teammates complied, as Kiran and his fellows gave disbelieving stares back at the Fighting-Type. The Mienshao breathed in and said nothing at first, before shooting a sharp frown over at them.

"As far as we're concerned, we never saw you or your friends, Kiran," Hertsog said. "Just make the most of your lead and don't count on us coming to your rescue if you get caught."

Kiran gave a grateful nod back to the four, before pushing the door open with his wing.

"Thanks for letting us go… and we will!"

Kiran held the door open as he and his teammates slipped off, letting it close behind them. Salvini's thoughts turned back to the fateful night she and Pleo first crossed paths as she glanced off at the rest of the city through the window. She didn't know if Kiran and his teammates would prove successful in clearing Pleo's name, but… for their own sake, she hoped that some way, somehow, they would manage to pull through.



At that very moment, Canalhouse City's military harbor remained abuzz with activity much as it normally did. The din of Pokémon milling about hummed along the air, as lavender-scarved creatures of varying shapes and sizes loaded and unloaded cargo, and others tended to various ships in Company sails. The noise could be heard all about the surroundings, including through the windows of a small, stone, two-story building near the mouth of the harbor bearing a simple sign in runes marking it as the Harbormaster's office.

There, in an office on the second floor with a plaque bearing the label of the Harbormaster on the door, an Omastar rested behind a low table. The room was furnished with a set of simple drawers against the wall, with some framed paper certificates and a Mystic Water hung above it. At the other end of the table, a Grimmsnarl in a Second-Rank scarf stood at attention, casting an idle glance off at the window, where the harbor and its piers could be seen.

"Did any word come down about when we were supposed to raid that schooner?" the Omastar asked.

"No sir," the Grimmsnarl replied. "No word since the last visit from Sorge and his team."

The Omastar Harbormaster frowned back and sighed, turning his gaze back out towards the lavender-sailed ships in the harbor.

"I would've thought they would've kept us more in the loop," the Omastar murmured. "I don't understand why they would feel a need to be so secretive about-"

A sharp crash rang out from the room's entrance, the Omastar and Grimmsnarl whirling about with a start. Much to the pair's astonishment, there, barging in past a door that had just been thrown open, was a Dragonite in an Administrator's scarf, who barreled towards them as the Harbormaster looked on in stunned surprise.

"Administrator Darzin?!" the Omastar asked. "Can I help you?"

"Yes," the Dragonite growled. "Has a party led by a Kommo-o come by recently talking about a suspicious ship or the sort?"

The Harbormaster blinked in surprise for a moment, before shifting in his seat and speaking up.

"There was one who came a couple days ago," he replied. "Why?"

"I need you to field some guards right now and dispatch them towards the Academy."

The Omastar and Grimmsnarl turned and stared at each other blankly over the Dragonite's words, both seemingly at a loss for how to reply. The Grimmsnarl was the first to break the silence, as the guard looked back at Darzin and folded his arms with a dismissive harrumph.

"Yeah, good luck with that one," he scoffed. "We've got our own problems to deal with right now."

"Er… Administrator, you are aware that I have a harbor to watch here, right?" the Omastar questioned. "Why on earth would I need to field 'monpower out to the Academy of all places?"

Darzin narrowed his eyes, holding out an accusing claw as he raised his voice with an impatient growl.

"Because you've been probed by Imperial Spies over the past couple days!" the Dragonite insisted. "And the fastest way of apprehending them in this city is to send someone already familiar with them to track them down."

The Harbormaster and Grimmsnarl stiffened up, as Darzin began to pass along descriptions of Sorge, Aldrich, and Zelle. Per his account, he'd chanced to run into them scheming in a back alley while on a flight about Canalhouse City, and been threatened to keep quiet, though not before he could make off with proof of them having an Imperial handler.

"I was able to recover this from them," Darzin explained. "You'll likely be able to find their true colors among their belongings."

The Omastar and Grimmsnarl doubted him for a moment, only for the Dragonite to fish out the strip of Nagant's scarf he'd kept from their encounter on Mengir and pass it over to the Omastar. Even if it was no longer useful as leverage over her, judging from how much the Omastar was taken aback by it, he still had some use for it…

The Omastar flipped the cloth strip about his tentacles and pawed at it carefully. On one side was a strip of red and white cloth, but on the back, there was Imperial indigo. The fabric's weave was even the same that Pokémon from its ranks wore. The Harbormaster hesitated as he thought back to Sorge and the assistance he and his subordinates had provided over the past four days. Surely Darzin wouldn't be lying about such a matter and the evidence was what it was, but there had to be another explanation for what had happened…

"Administrator, this must be a misunderstanding of some sort," the Omastar said. "Sorge and the others could've just seized that from someone else."

"That's right!" the Grimmsnarl exclaimed. "Those three literally came by earlier this week to point out an Imperial ship that's impersonating one of our own here!"

Darzin let out a terse scoff in response, turning his snout up and narrowing his eyes back at the Omastar and Grimmsnarl.

"And did they help you apprehend it?" the Administrator demanded.

The Harbormaster fell silent at the Dragonite's question. While Sorge and the others did point out the schooner that had been flying false colors, they had been adamant that the ship wasn't to be interfered with until it attempted to leave and not a moment sooner.

"Well… no, they didn't," the Omastar said. "But they insisted that apprehending it would be a sensitive matter."

"Yes, so they could distract you from their actual escape vessel!" Darzin cried.

The Omastar looked out the window towards a two-masted schooner near the mouth of the harbor, as Darzin followed his gaze. After seeing the Omastar's attention settle on the ship and the Water-Type visibly hesitate, the Dragonite deduced that he'd succeeded at planting seeds of doubt in the Harbormaster's mind and also confirmed the Siglo Swellow's location after that Kommo-o's Sylveon friend clumsily gave away its presence in the military harbor earlier.

Satisfied, the Dragon-Type sensed his opportunity to press his advantage. The Administrator let out a sharp harrumph, before shooting an impatient frown down at the Harbormaster.

"Go ahead and close the harbor to traffic," Darzin ordered. "I'm going to go and pay that decoy of theirs a closer inspection."

The Harbormaster paused and pawed uneasily at his scarf, before looking back up at the intricate one about the Dragonite's neck. Even with Darzin's diminished stature, it was far from wise to get on the wrong side of an Administrator. And if this was just the Dragonite blowing hot air, it would surely be easy to disprove him later by giving Sorge and his team a cursory questioning.

"Go and track down Teun from the swimmers and take a party out to the Academy to find Sorge and the others," Omastar said, turning to the Grimmsnarl. "If this is all a misunderstanding, I'm sure it can be cleared up quickly."

"… Yes, sir," the Grimmsnarl sighed.

The Dark-Type saluted and quickly slunk out of the office. After the Grimmsnarl departed, Darzin began to make his way for the door himself, prompting the Omastar to raise a brow and call after the Dragonite.

"Administrator, if you're wrong about this, it'll be you against an entire ship," the Harbormaster insisted. "Let me square away some reinforcements to help before you-"

"Hrmph. That won't be necessary right now," Darzin scoffed. "Focus on your duty and let me see if this matter can be dealt with quietly first."

The Harbormaster quirked a brow back puzzledly, but was too late to stop the Dragonite. By the time the Omastar had raised his voice to ask for a further explanation, Darzin had already set off, retracing his way outside the office, down a flight of steps and out onto the docks as he made his way through the crowds of Pokémon for the schooner docked near the harbor's entrance.



As Kiran and the others went into the Archive, the rest of Team Traveller began to make their way towards the Academy's main building in order to slip out of the complex. Not far from it was the place they and their teammates had agreed to meet with Dimitri after the heist, where they would make their way back to the ship together. Their own part in the mission to break into the Vault had gone smoothly enough, and the green lights they saw overhead and the sharp jolt they'd felt while walking earlier was as good of a sign as any that Kline had succeeded in getting into it…

Maybe it was nothing, but the entire time, Pleo couldn't help but worry that something would go wrong. Would the guards figure out that Kiran and the others were fakes? Would they get caught while trying to switch around the Ledger with their dummy book? The young Protector shuffled his wings uncomfortably, before giving a worried glance over at his teammates.

"Do you think everyone is doing alright?" the Lugia asked.

"Well, we haven't seen or heard any sign of an open battle going on around Academy after Kline did his thing," Elty replied. "So… probably?"

"I think they're managing and don't need our help. Let's just focus on making it to our meeting place," Guardia insisted. "The longer we stick around here, the more likely it is that something will go wrong with our mission."

Team Traveller hurriedly made their way along the canal, making their way across the islets via the bridges linking them, until they crossed the last one to the site of the northern half of the Academy's main building. There, the five rounded the corner, towards the passage into the middle of the compound and its courtyard…

"Hold it right there!"

… when a sharp, barking shout rang out from behind them. Nida and her companions froze, turning to see Gerhard approaching them with a Lucario and a Runerigus at his sides, the lot of them sporting harsh glares. The five flinched for a moment, before Crom steeled himself and tried to force a smile over his face.

"Oh! Uh h-hi, Professor Gerhard!" the Druddigon gulped. "Is something the matter?"

"Yes," the Alakazam huffed back. "Did you really think that I wouldn't notice you've been impersonating students in my class?"

The youngsters felt their blood run cold and grimaced. It had always been a risk that their luck would run out passing themselves off as students in the Academy, but they never expected that it would happen now of all times. Elty pinned his ears back and pulled his tail in tight against his legs, the Growlithe nervously backpedaling from the scowling Professor and the accompanying guards.

"I… uh… Don't you have that lightshow from earlier to deal with?" he gulped. "W-We were just leaving anyway, so see you later!"

He turned to run, only to suddenly see his body glow with a blue aura and feel himself get lifted up off the ground. Elty looked down in alarm to see he was floating in midair and flailed briefly, before turning back to see Gerhard holding out a hand with his eyes glowing a blue sheen.

"Leuk geprobeerd, but there's no shortage of guards already looking into that," the Alakazam scoffed. "If you know what's good for you, you'll come along to answer a few questions. Quietly."

Team Traveller's members recoiled at Gerhard's words. It clearly wasn't a suggestion, but an order. The thought of attempting to fight their way through him crossed their minds, but between the Alakazam's Third-Rank Company scarf and him already having Elty at his mercy, they were surely in for a hard battle. Pleo blanched and shrank back briefly, wavering over what to do, when he noticed the forms of a Shinx and Magikarp darting up from behind Gerhard.

"Professor Gerhard? What are you doing?" the Magikarp asked.

"Yeah!" the Shinx chimed in. "Those are the transfer students!"

Why, it was Leonard and Murdo! Professor Gerhard seemed to be taken aback by the two cutting in, and lost his grip on Elty, who faceplanted onto the ground. Taking advantage of the Alakazam's distraction, Leonard quickly stepped in between Team Traveller and Gerhard, with Murdo propping himself up and poking his head over the edge of the canal to join in. The pair looked over at the Professor and the surrounding guards, giving pleading expressions up at them.

"I mean, sure they've been a bit slow to catch up," Leonard murmured. "But they haven't done anything wrong."

The Shinx's insistence prompted Gerhard to raise a spoon at him with a sharp frown.

"I suggest you mind your own business, Leonard," the Alakazam harrumphed. "This doesn't concern you."

"Yes it does! You're trying to get a bunch of our classmates in trouble just because you don't like them!" Murdo cried. "How is that fair?!"

Gerhard brushed past Leonard and narrowed his eyes back at the Magikarp in the canal, his patience having worn thin with the two's interruptions.

"They've gotten themselves in trouble because they're not students, Murdo," the Professor scoffed. "They never had any paperwork turn up like every other student that's transferred in-"

"Yes, because I had them transferred in."

Nida, Pleo, Crom, Elty, and Guardia felt their ears prick at the sound of a deep, rumbling voice and turned around, only for the color to drain from their faces. There in front of them were Filbert, Braam, and Quin hurrying in, followed along by the glaring form of a Nidoking in a Company scarf with a more intricate pattern than any of them had seen before.

Th-That was Director Inler! Gerhard and his guards had their eyes widen briefly, only for the wizened Alakazam to blink back at the Nidoking facing him down.

"You had them transfer in? I… never heard of you personally ordering any student transfers before," he murmured. " And you sound a bit hoarse, Director."

"Hrmph, it happens when he spends all day yelling at incompetents like you," Filbert huffed.

"Yeah, opa was just telling us about how he'd met with Nida and her friends' parents on a recent tour of the islands," Braam chimed in. "That's how he wound up promoting them so they could come here!"

Gerhard wavered a moment and the Psychic-Type bit his tongue as a flash of genuine worry came over his prideful face. After a moment to collect his thoughts, the Alakazam composed himself and brushed uneasily at his scarf.

"Then it should be a simple matter of finding the paperwork-"

The Nidoking cleared his throat, letting out a growl that came out slightly different from his earlier speech. The Poison-Type muttered a "Why am I still keeping this guy around?" just loud enough for everyone to hear, before glaring daggers back at the Alakazam professor.

"Gerhard, I'm the Director," the Nidoking spat. "I'm not letting my orders get held up over a few pieces of paper!"

"Yeah, it probably got lost in the mail or something," Quin insisted. "Are you really going to make the Company's Director look bad by kicking out the kids of the 'mons he just promoted?"

The Lucario and Runegrigus guards both traded uneasy glances with one another, as Gerhard began to grow flustered. After giving a tug at his scarf, the Psychic-Type shuffled back and visibly hesitated.

"I… suppose I can double-check my office," the Alakazam said. "I'm sure there's a perfectly reasonable explanation for this, Director."

Gerhard hurriedly took his leave along with the Lucario and the Runegrigus, leaving Team Traveller to stare off confusedly, before warily turning back towards the Nidoking. Wasn't this the Company's Director? Their enemy? Then why on earth had he helped them?

The Nidoking narrowed his eyes in reply, and shook his head with a sharp frown. After opening his mouth, the Poison-Type began to speak, except this time, a young, high-pitched voice came out with a scoff.

"Hrmph, you five sure know how to get into trouble."

Team Traveller's members jumped back at the realization that that was Sophie's voice. Sure enough, the form of the Nidoking abruptly flashed magenta and dissipated, barring a few flecks of light that clung more stubbornly in the air as the form of a Zorua took its place. There, Sophie stepped forward, walking up to Nida and the others with an icy scowl.

"I knew something didn't add up about you," she scoffed. "You five wanna explain why you've been lying to everybody this whole time?"

The group hesitated for a moment. Should they just be honest with Sophie? Could they be honest with her? Everyone traded uneasy glances with one another, before Nida sucked in a sharp breath and began to speak.

"We… needed to find something here in the Academy," the Nidorina explained. "Something that Pleo really needed."

Sophie raised a brow and shot back a dubious frown. She didn't look particularly impressed with Nida's explanation, but even so, she felt more curious than upset for some reason.

"I assume that it wasn't just some book from the library?" she questioned. "And that that tremor and those green lights in the sky earlier wasn't just a coincidence?"

"I mean… sorta. We came here because Pleo's… in trouble for some things that aren't his fault," the Druddigon replied, giving an uneasy paw at the back of his neck. "And there was supposed to be something here that we could use to help get him out of it."

Sophie fell silent and let her eyes drift to the ground. She paused briefly, before closing her eyes with a quiet murmur.

"So then it has something to do with him being a 'purple-feathered' Wingull, huh?"

Nida blinked at the Zorua's response and noticed her teammates get visibly taken aback. Did Sophie know Pleo's true identity? Would she see through them if they denied her question? After a moment's hesitation, Nida shuffled her paws, before answering back warily.

"Something like that, yes," she said. "B-But look, we need to get going and we don't have time to explain this right now!"

Sophie said nothing back, prompting Leonard and Murdo to blink and shoot puzzled looks at the young fox.

"… Sophie? What exactly is going on here?" Leonard wondered.

"Yeah, if Pleo's really not a Wingull, then what sort of Pokémon is he?" Murdo pressed.

The Zorua hesitated for a moment, before her expression eased and she shook her head with a low sigh.

"… I have a couple ideas, but it's not really important right now. Though, Nida's right," she insisted. "You five need to get out of here before you get into real trouble."

Guardia blinked at Sophie's reply. 'Real' trouble? How could they get into worse trouble than what they were in just a minute ago?

"Wait, we do? Didn't you all just get us out of trouble?" the Cubone asked. "What else is wrong?"

"Well for one, I saw the real Inler going around campus earlier," Sophie replied. "If Gerhard runs into him, your little secret will be out and he'll come looking for you again. If that happens, Inler will probably want to know why you were pretending to be students here and going around saying your parents were friends of his."

Team Traveller's members felt their faces fall into a collective grimace. Yes, running into Director Inler on their own would be getting into real trouble. Trouble that they weren't sure they could overcome. Filbert seemed to pick up on their unease, flicking his ears and twitching his whiskers in thought, before turning over to Leonard and Murdo and motioning with his head off at them.

"Leonard. Murdo. Take Nida and the others off-campus," he said. "They should be able to slip off into the rest of the city while we keep Gerhard busy."

Leonard nodded back at the Nidoran's instructions, with Murdo joining in from the canal's water. Whatever was going on with Pleo and the others, they weren't letting an old pill like Gerhard ruin things for them.

"Right!" Murdo burbled, as Leonard chimed in with a small puff of his chest.

"Piece of cake!"

Filbert, Braam, Quintin, and Sophie darted off after Gerhard's group, as Leonard and Murdo hurried Team Traveller through a passage into the main building's courtyard. The five hastily ducked across, where Pokémon had just started to file out for midday breaks. The group made their way past the shadow of the Haxorus statue of the Company's Founder, where there, just as the group neared the eastern entrance…

"Oh, there you are!"

Team Traveller blinked and froze after they heard a Luxray's voice along with the sound of quiet footsteps approaching. Curiously, Leonard's eyes seemed to light up at the voice, as he bounded ahead towards it.

"Ah! Mom!"

Pleo and the others blanched as dead ahead of them, a Luxray in a Company Administrator's scarf rounded the corner. The five shrank back with frightened grimaces, Leonard going up and nuzzling Farn as Murdo swam up alongside her, blissfully unaware of their companions' reaction.

"What are you doing here?" Murdo asked, prompting the Luxray to bob her tail and smile back.

"Today's my turn to take you two home, remember?" Farn replied. "Work ended a bit early for me today, so no reason to just keep you waiting if-"

She trailed off as she noticed five Pokémon inching away from her in the background. The Luxray eyed them warily, noting that the lot of them looked as if they had seen a ghost, and stiffened up after realizing that she'd seen them. A Nidorina, a younger Druddigon, a Growlithe, a Cubone… and some manner of seabird she couldn't place. Why did the bird of the lot feel strangely familiar to her?

"And who are those friends of yours in the background?" Farn asked.

Leonard blinked for a moment, realizing that perhaps it wasn't the best idea to tell his mother that he was technically spending time with wanted troublemakers. The Shinx rubbed his forepaws together as he fumbled with his words briefly, before offering up what he hoped would be a satisfactory explanation.

"Oh. They're… uh… our classmates!" he insisted. "That's Nida, and Pleo, and-"

Farn tensed up at her son's mention of 'Pleo', as a sudden realization dawned over her. Ellsberg had mentioned the name in his first report from Tromba as the one that the islanders called the ‘Guardian of the Seas’. She didn't have an explanation for why the bird wasn't a silvery white like he was supposed to be, but between the Growlithe, and there being an evolution of a Nidoran much like the wanted posters she'd helped Lyn distribute… it just couldn't be a coincidence.

The Luxray bat her tail back and forth impatiently and narrowed her eyes with a low growl, making Murdo and Leonard pause uneasily. Leonard flattened his ears, pawing uneasily at his mother's foreleg with a worried tilt of his head.

"Mom? Is something wrong?" he asked.

Farn's glare at Team Traveller lingered for a moment, before reeling in her mood and giving a small smile down at Leonard.

"It's nothing, dear. It's just that those friends of yours look… familiar," she said. " I want a chance to talk with them on my own. You should go ahead without me and go home with Murdo."

Murdo poked his head out of the water with a puzzled blink, looking between Farn and Team Traveller's members with a confused burble.

"Huh?" the Magikarp asked. "But we can just wait here for-"

"Now, you two."

Murdo and Leonard flinched from the Luxray's harsh tone and shrunk back as she shot a piercing scowl with her red eyes that evidenced that she wasn't in the mood to debate the matter. The pair gave grudging farewells to Team Traveller, Pleo and his companions watching helplessly as the pair drifted off, before a low snarl turned their attention back to Farn.

The five saw the Luxray glaring daggers at them, prompting them to turn back and run into the passage surrounding the courtyard. Pleo and his companions tore along for dear life as they heard electricity crackle behind them, circling around the courtyard back for the complex's exit. They blew past a stall selling books and brushed past students with yelps, when they saw the archway ahead of them.

"Ah! Up ahead!" Nida cried.

The Nidorina charged through with her teammates and exited the Academy's complex, before immediately ducking into a side street as they kept running along. A sudden blur of blue and black leapt overhead, where they saw Farn coming to a crouching stop ahead of them. Nida looked around in a panic when she saw an entrance to an alleyway to her left and hurriedly shepherded her teammates along as Farn lunged at them. The group tore along, when they came to a brick wall ahead of them blocking their path.

"A-Ah! It's a dead end!" Pleo cried.

The Lugia stooped down and thought to let his teammates aboard, only to realize that Nida had gotten a lot bigger since she'd evolved, and Crom was larger than he was. Whatever thoughts he had of ferrying his friends to safety ended with the sound of a faint electrical crackle, as he and his companions turned back to see Farn drawing near them, ready to pounce.

"Hrmph. I don't know how you've managed to sneak in here, or why Lyn's left it to me to handle his duties," the Luxray began. "But I know who you are, and you all seem to know who I am."

Farn bared her fangs and let sparks dance in her fur, drawing frightened squeaks from the lot as Elty pinned his ears back with a low whine. Satisfied she'd communicated her strength, the Administrator let out a low harrumph and looked square into Pleo's eyes.

"So I'm sure that you already know what I can do," she growled. "Come quietly, Lugia, and I'll see your friends have a future to look forward to."

Pleo cringed and quietly shivered. Farn was an Administrator, and one whose attacks would hurt him a lot more than Darzin's. Could they even beat her like this? Would it even matter when their fight would almost certainly draw the attention of the guards?

The Lugia grimaced as his mind went blank, when he was suddenly snapped to attention by Crom stepping forward, visibly trembling, but forcing a brave face all the while.

"A f-future?! That's what you call standing back and letting you bully Pleo?!" the Druddigon asked. "Turning him into some sort of weapon?!"

"Th-That's not a future, that's a nightmare!" Elty exclaimed. "Take your offer and shove it!"

"As if we'd just roll over for you, Rentorar!" Guardia snapped, giving a nervous swing of her club. "If you want Pleo so bad, you're going to have to fight us for him!"

Pleo sucked in a sharp breath and shook his head. What on earth was he thinking considering giving in like that? These were his friends, and just like on the night when they'd fled Lyn, they were ready to dig in and fight. Sure Farn was scary, but they'd gotten tougher since then, and there was no sense in letting the Administrator psych them out like this.

"I-I'm their Protector, not yours!" the young Lugia insisted. "If they're going to fight, then I'm going to help them!"

"Yeah, and we already beat Darzin before and he's an Administrator just like you!" Nida piped. "We'll take our chances here!"

Farn blinked puzzledly for a moment. These whelps had fought with Darzin before? How on earth did-? The Luxray narrowed her eyes back into a harsh glare. Whatever had happened there, she could get to the bottom of it some other time. All that mattered now was capturing the Guardian of the Seas right here, right now, and ending the stalemate with the Empire once and for all.

"Hrmph, so be it," she snarled. "If you can't listen to reason, I'll shock it into you!"

Sparks danced on the Luxray's pelt, as she arched and shot out a wide spread of blue electrical bolts. Team Traveller's members reflexively flinched as Guardia ran forward, the electric tendrils abruptly changing course and arcing towards her as they struck her with a sharp crackle, but otherwise did nothing but leave static to dance on her scales. Farn blinked, and curled her mouth down into a small, annoyed frown.

"Hrmph, I should've known there was a reason behind your boldness," the Electric-Type remarked.

"Yeah, you should've," Elty spat back. "Here's something else for ya!"

The Growlithe lunged forward, breathing out a spray of searing, bluish-white flames that found their mark on Farn's shoulder. The Luxray reflexively winced from Elty's Will-O-Wisp as a burn began to spread over the site of impact, prompting Nida's eyes to light up as she sprang ahead and motioned to her teammates to follow.

"This is our chance! Come on!"

The Nidorina darted forward, poison slicking over her left forepaw as she ran a Poison Jab square into Farn's left side. Guardia followed up by flinging her club into a whirling Bonemerang that clipped the Luxray twice, along with a bluish, fiery Dragon Rage from Crom, and the telltale cone of golden rings of an Extrasensory from Pleo.

The Luxray lost her footing briefly and sprang back, freeing up about half the distance of the alleyway. If they could just fight their way out into the open, then however poorly or not they were matched up against Farn, they could make a break for it and escape!

Except… they first had to fight through her, and given the crouching pose she was reassuming and how she didn't seem particularly hurt from their salvo, she was going to make them fight tooth and nail for every step forward.

"Hrmph, so you can at least keep yourselves from being swept," Farn scoffed. "But let's see how well you can handle a targeted strike!"

Farn dug her heels in and sprang forward at Pleo, baring her teeth as shadowy flecks danced among them. The Lugia froze out of terror, watching as the Luxray sailed at him with her paws outstreched and maw open for a crushing bite, when Crom suddenly cut in in front of him, followed by a sharp cry.

"Agh!"

Pleo reflexively beat his wings and hopped back as Farn tumbled with Crom's body, the Druddigon having been pushed behind and to the side from their mutual collision. The Luxray jumped back and recoiled, pulling back as her forelimbs sported disheveled fur and her cheek now had a reddening, dribbling scrape from brushing up against one of the spikes on Crom's arms. Pleo hurriedly looked over at Crom, where, much to his alarm, he spotted the Druddigon laying on the ground on his side, whining in pain as a set of puncture wounds oozing blood now studded his right arm.

"Crom!"

Crom got up, cradling his arm as he grit his teeth. The Druddigon pinned his wings back, shaking his arm to try and nurse feeling back into it when he noticed Farn hesitate and wince from her burn.

"Ngah… i-it's alright, Pleo! Just stay on her!"

Pleo obliged, cracking his beak open as he once again hit Farn with an Extrasensory. Nida focused just as she had in her attempts to practice Ice Beam since leaving Tromba, when she felt her mouth suddenly turn frigid and a chilly sensation linger in her throat.

"Take this!"

The Nidorina spat up a whitish beam from her mouth and struck the Luxray's face. Th-That was the Ice Beam that mami had helped her learn!

The beam threw Farn off balance as lingering frost flecked her face's fur, leaving her open for Crom to dash in with a rake of his claws that trailed white flecks of light. The Luxray staggered back, as Elty and Guardia threw in a fiery somersault and an overhead swing of her club, forcing Farn out onto the lane along the canal. Team Traveller's members hurriedly ran ahead and out of the alley, where the Luxray Administrator let out a low growl and arched her back as Team Traveller stared her down.

"Fine, I've tested the waters enough," she snapped. "Let's remind you of what you're up against!"

Farn lunged ahead with her maw opened wide. For a fleeting second, the group saw ice build up along her fangs, before she pounced on Guardia and sank them deep into her shoulder.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAH!"

Farn lifted Guardia and shook her in her mouth as she screamed in agony. The Cubone's cries lingered briefly and then faded away, before the Luxray threw the Ground-Type aside limply onto the cobbles. Pleo and his companions looked on in blank shock, as Guardia laid there in a heap, with her chest weakly rising and falling.

The four backpedaled towards their fallen comrade, the color draining from their faces while their breaths came out shallow and tense, as Farn drew near with a sharp snarl. With Guardia defeated, there was nothing protecting them from the full force of Farn's electric attacks, and even in spite of their hail of attacks earlier, she didn't seem to be showing many signs of visible fatigue.

Team Traveller's members watched in horror as Farn began to spark, the Luxray readying a Discharge, only to pause and let the sparks die off as she noticed something behind them. Nida and the others stood in blank shock for a moment and traded confused glances, when a low, growling voice cut in.

"Hrmph. That's quite enough."

The group slowly turned around when their jaws flopped open. There, walking up to them along with Gerhard and his guards was a Nidoking in the same scarf pattern that Sophie had as part of her disguise.

That was Inler, the real one!

The four let out startled yelps and flinched at the glowering Nidoking, as Gerhard held out a hand and motioned at them.

"That's them, right there, Director," the Alakazam huffed. "Those are the imposters I was telling you about!"

Inler narrowed his eyes and scowled down at the trembling youngsters, letting a low growl out from the back of his throat.

"Oh trust me, Gerhard, they're a lot more than that."

Team Traveller's members shrank back in a trembling panic, as Nida held out a paw and let out a stammering cry.

"A-Ah! Y-You're the Company's Director!" she squeaked.

"That's correct," Inler scoffed. "And you should give up if you know what's good for you."

Pleo froze and felt a chill run down his spine. This was the Director of the entire Company. The same Pokémon who Nerea had said to be strong enough to overpower her strongest teammates all at once with just a few blows. Even if he didn't have guards helping him, how were they supposed to fight a 'mon like that?

… Why did they have to fight like this anyways? Pleo stood there trembling for a moment, when in the midst of his fright, he steeled himself and raised his voice back at the Nidoking…

"Wh-Why are you doing this to us?" the Lugia demanded. "Why can't you let us go?!"

Inler flicked his ears and dug his feet into the ground with a low huff. Even in spite of his old age, the Nidoking knew how to project a presence, and the piercing, overpowering glare he leveled was no exception.

"Because the needs of this company, of this world, are bigger than you," the Poison-Type icily replied. "And we can't afford to wait on you to realize that."

"What on earth is that supposed to mean?!" Nida demanded.

"Anyilla's been waiting for forty years in order to be unified under one banner again," Inler said. "One that's grown and learned from past mistakes."

The Nidoking lowered his head, narrowing his eyes as he pawed at the ground, seemingly readying for a charge.

"And if you think I'm prepared to just throw that away for the sake of the feelings of a child who doesn't understand how fragile Anyilla's hope for a better future is, then you're sorely mistaken."

Nida and the others felt their blood run cold as they saw Inler advance on them, as Farn and the rest of his party fell back in opposing directions. The Nidorina watched as the Nidoking crouched and braced his feet, her mind running blank as she realized he was about to spring up with an Earthquake…

"N-Not so fast, square-neck!"

Nida snapped to attention after seeing Elty spew up a spray of whitish cinders at the Nidoking which caught him on his hip. Inler grimaced briefly, before jumping up and stomping the ground as it churned under his feet. Waves shot through the surface of the ground and flung cobbles into the air, and then Nida felt herself get launched upwards. The Nidorina bounced off one of the walls, before pitching back to earth and hitting the pavement, laying there panting much to Pleo's alarm from above.

"A-Ah! Nida! Get up! Get up!"

Pleo batted his wings together and threw a churning Whirlwind at Inler that pushed him back towards Gerhard. The Lugia dove down and tugged at her, dragging her up with a dazed groan. From the corner of her eye, they could see a wobbly Crom helping Elty onto his feet with a pained whine. Down the street, they could see Inler steadying himself, as he, Farn, and Gerhard with his lackeys were coming for them from both sides readying attacks.

The pair's mind went blank. They couldn't win. Not like this. Nida fanned out her barbs, as Pleo pulled his head in towards his chest and flinched, looking away as their enemies converged on them.

"Hold it right there!"

The sound of a sharp, squawking cry rang out, as a crackling Petrify Orb zipped in between them from across the canal and doused them all in a hail of sparks. Nida yelped and felt her limbs lock up, her breathing turning shallow and panicked as she heard her friends cry out. Inler and the others evidently hadn't expected the orb either, as in the midst of their petrification, their eyes widened in surprise. Nida frantically tried to turn her head to no avail as she heard approaching wingbeats, when she suddenly felt a feathery shove and looked up to see Kiran staring down at her.

"That was a good 50% closer than it needed to be," the Swellow sighed. "Sorry about the rude entrance. Are you all alright?"

Nida panted briefly, before she turned to her friends and let out a wavering sigh of relief as they were similarly shoved out of their petrification by Dimitri, Kline—now back in his dog-like form, and their other teammates. After taking a moment to let the team's turn of fortunes set in, she shook her head and turned back to Kiran.

"W-We're fine," she insisted.

A little further off, Calidus nudged Elty free from the effects of the Petrify Orb. The Talonflame glanced off warily at the Director and his subordinates to ensure they were still safely immobilized, before looking down at the Growlithe with a ruffle of his feathers.

"Come on, we'll patch you all up while we're moving," the Talonflame remarked. "This encounter's certainly not going to make getting out of the city any easier for us…"

"Gah… you don't have to tell me again, " Elty insisted, flattening his ears out. "Though would it have killed you all to get here sooner?"

All the while, Inler and his subordinates stared in dumbfounded shock, as Farn spluttered incredulously at the scene.

"You-!" the Luxray cried. "What do you think you're-?!"

"Stepping in to help some friends. Though stick around for a while!" Alice jeered. The Sneasel pulled her eyelid down and blew a raspberry at the immobilized Board members, before suddenly getting cut off by an impatient huff.

"Alice, let's go already!" Kline snapped.

The Zygarde tugged her along by her claw, as Dimitri got into the water and Nida and Crom climbed onto him. At the same time, Elty helped to hoist Guardia onto Calidus' back before joining himself. One by one, Dimitri and the team's fliers pushed off and knifed ahead along the canal as Kline ran alongside them on their path for the Siglo Swellow. All the while, Crom glanced behind them back towards the Nidoking Director and his allies, before turning ahead as he felt his stomach begin to knot up.

"Why does this all feel strangely familiar?" the Druddigon asked.

"Because we went through something like this back in Tidemill City?" Elty replied.

Nida glanced back as the Academy slipped away from them, and then at the maze of canals up ahead. It really did feel almost like they were back in Tidemill City again, but even so, the Nidorina couldn't help but feel a gnawing feeling in the pit of her stomach that something was wrong…

"I just hope it ends as well as it does too."



Author's Notes:

- Ja hoor - Dutch: "Yeah, sure"
- Ne! (Не!) - Bulgarian: "No!" (BGN/PCGN 2013 Romanization)
- Leuk geprobeerd - Dutch: "Nice try"
- Rentorar (レントラー) - Japanese: "Luxray" (Official Romanization)
 

Kiba Makuro

Junior Trainer
Pronouns
He/Him, They/Them
Hello Fobbie I’m here for 2 Terabytes of fun, that’s right P-Wheel!

I’m covering Chapter 2 of Fledgelings - Watch Your Step

This chapter is a fairly standard one; it is Nida and her team going through a Mystery Dungeon.
But of course it's not that simple before that we get a little experience of what the Guild is looking like just from the outside after the storm. It helps the audience remember that they're still recovering and maybe they couldn't handle it if it got any worse. We see some other characters so it doesn't just feel like there's only a few people there which is nice. This scene doesn't linger for too long.

Nida finally catches up with Kiran and with Crom. We can really kind of feel their ages in this part and that's really nice you mentioned that it's inspired by The Last Airbender. I had to take that into consideration when thinking about the dialogue choices and phrasing and such. Of course you know all of the “four nations” and whatnot isn't exactly present yet. But eventually we'll get there being that the island is not where we'll stay for too long.

It's nice that your treatment of ferals is handled respectively in Fledglings per end point to it being a more friendlier PMD fake and thus you wouldn't want to get into the extremes. I also do remember unfortunately a spoiler of something related to what Nida says that the ferals'll enjoy life on a rescue team if you just change their mind. Recruitment of Mystery Dungeon Pokémon is a very integral gameplay component, at least the first three games mind you of PMD. Not a lot of fics use this, from what I can tell the majority of the characters are just the former human or just Pokemon from towns which is not how the games work but to be fair only the Pokemon from towns are the ones you can really have conversations with so it's fair enough.

Anyway at the end of the dungeon we get their inexperience highlighted particularly Nida's and Crom however the full extent is not in my opinion showing off but it doesn't help that they weren't at their full potential against the Krabbies. And on a request looking for something so simple like apples things can get chaotic just like in the actual games but goodness they are lucky they have Kiran with them. And signs of the “monster” further in the cave are interesting.

We're finally getting to our ‘fledgling’ so to speak and I wonder how the team will handle the situation considering they're only just figuring things out now. it seems like their foes are going to get much more dangerous if we have the summary to go off of. Of course they're going to grow along as well; they can't say pushovers forever; this would be a rather sad story.

I don't want to whine about the prose too much because it's a different style than what I'm used to one and two it's older content. Considering fledgling is over a decade and I haven't heard of talks of any rewrites and which I don't blame you I don't even want to rewrite anything that's a year old anymore at this point. If anything it's not like the prose got purple with extremely long descriptions but I felt like there was some unnecessary and a few clunky clarifications. Perhaps it is also for younger readers' sake to clarify as it is more in that range.

The religion of the world is also interesting. The Creator, obviously Arceus, has temples that are even in the depths of a Mystery Dungeon, or perhaps right outside of it. The Distortions are causing all of the areas to get warped per se which is a concept that's very fun to do. Seeing this temple with Nida and the team regarding offerings and what's so important about this ‘monster’ lets us get a bit more world building. We don't know everything but we're just getting a little taste and that's nice especially with the mural because a lot of people tend to forget that not all of ancient history was written down a lot of it was painted and it makes the world feel lived in when there's different types of History presented like this.

Nida, Crom, Kiran, and that ‘monster’ along with many others have much more in store in Fledgelings and I find myself excited now that this looks to be the turning point. Even a decade later, keep up the good work!
 

FennecWitch

Fiery Beacon
Pronouns
she/her
Been a while since my last review of Fledglings, so glad to be back to it with this V-Wheel! Just doing chapter 2, today.

I went back to check and it is indeed the same chapter symbol for this one as last one. I don't think I questioned it last time, but now I'm curious as to what it actually represents. My best guess for what it looks like is a broken egg.

…Wait a second.

Hmm, so it doesn't match the description of the egg from last chapter. I may be wrong, then.

Into the chapter, then.

The following morning, Nida found herself bounding down the now-muddy paths of Bluewhorl towards the Guild Hall.

"I'm late, I'm late," she panted, dashing past the shops on the shoreline plaza, dodging between Pokémon and weaving around the occasional footstep of someone much larger than her.
So I can't actually remember if what Nida and Kiran's mission was was mentioned last chapter. I did a quick skim and couldn't find it, but I'm sure it'll come up.

The storm had been about as kind to the town as it had been to Nida's home; that is to say, not at all.
I feel like you could cut "that is to say, not at all" here, since the previous chapter and following sentences make that clear anyway. It just kinda feels like spelling out the joke. (Not that I feel like it's meant to be read as a joke; I think it just loses some of the effect by explaining the sarcasm)

"Guildmaster Hatteras has been busy all morning trying to get everything back in order around here," the Swellow said, pointing at an Ampharos surveying tears along the different pieces of canvas on the tent.
…You know, I probably should've expected the Guildmaster to be an Ampharos considering I think there was an Ampharos-shaped structure described last chapter.

"Yeah! We could probably finish up halfway just in the first room!" Crom said, his beating wings displaying a hidden side of youthful eagerness much like his shorter partner's.
This line from Crom feels a bit out of nowhere since this is the first time he's mentioned to be in the scene. Him being there makes sense, given Nida being late and him being a member of the team, but I feel like you could mention him being there before this line.

"That sorta work sounds right up your alley, tykes," a familiar Sentret volunteered as he passed by.
I checked and this is indeed the same Sentret who did this last chapter. That's hilarious. I smell a running gag.

"If any outside Pokémon will have been blown in again," Nida finished.
This is an interesting concept. I'm curious to see where it'll go.

. . . his words soon trailed off after seeing his red-and-blue charge also looking at him.
Swellow is also pretty red and blue. Nida needs to get some fur dye to fit the theme.

"Monster! Monster!"
Took me a second to catch whether this was meant to be Crom or the Spinarak but I'm pretty sure it's the Spinarak. Interesting that ferals can speak in this world. They have some level of sapience, then. I wonder what makes them ferals, in that case.

"Sounds like a really tough way to live,"
I agree. I wonder why they do. Checking back with the prologue to refresh my understanding, I understand the ferals' origins. That doesn't seem to suggest that they can't choose to not be ferals if they want, though. I feel like this concept is probably not within the scope of this story, though.

Another depicted those same birds being struck by arrows of light and falling to earth.
Good thing I just checked the prologue again; I understand what this means!

"Leth geth going, kidth," Kiran prodded the two in-between mouthfuls of bread.
Part of me really wants to nitpick that the "s" to "th" lisp feels like it wouldn't do that with a beak but this way definitely conveys that Kiran has food in his mouth better than trying to go for full biological accuracy.

I also don't even know; maybe it might work? That lisp happens when your tongue extends too far past your teeth and while Swellow would have tongues, they don't have teeth. But maybe extending the tongue beyond the beak would be comparable? That wouldn't really happen with food in his mouth, though. I'm definitely overthinking this.

The other nitpick is that it'd be "beakfuls of bread" but I don't think that's actually an issue.

"Do you remember the rules of going in?" Kiran asked his two charges at the mouth of the cave.

"Stay together in the fog, don't wander off the path, and don't run into the dungeon," Nida and Crom recited, groaning at having to partake of this ritual reminder.
Excellent way of giving the audience exposition when it's something the characters would all already know, with them all being in-character.

"So, what do you think we should do with the apples that are left over after this mission, Nida?"
It did take me a few lines to be able to determine this was Crom. Stuff like this I don't think is necessarily an issue, since it becomes evident, but thought I'd mention it anyway. Realistically you can't cater for every potential reader misunderstanding.

Nida couldn't help but giggle at the idea of trying to clock someone with an apple; it was one of those silly, nonsensical ideas that had a way of taking the edge off someone.
I'm not sure whether the "someone" here is meant to suggest that it makes Nida see Kiran in a less serious light, or if the "someone" is her feeling less scared.

The apples are probably good to throw at people, as long as they're ripe. At a certain point, I feel like apples get pretty squishy. Which would take me out of the fight a bit, if I got one splattered on me. So still kinda useful.

After a few steps further, they found themselves able to see their paws, claws, and wings once again in the haze.
I feel like I can picture how this line was written. Originally with "hands" or "feet", before realising that Nida has paws. And then realising Clom has claws. And then that Kiran has wings. I don't know; just found the listing of body parts here kinda funny.

"I mean, I know that the Distortion in here probably has something to do with it, but still..."
Wonder if "Distortion" here is at all related to the Distortion World.

"The lower levels apparently open out to deep in the seas off the shore," Kiran said while taking his wing back to his side.
I feel like this phrasing is a little weird, but I'm not sure how you could fix it without chaning the meaning. ". . . open out to the bottoms of the seas. . ." isn't quite right.

Just cutting "to" feels like it flows better maybe?

They also, at Crom's request, tested Kiran's theory of apples as a substitute for Gravelerocks… on Kiran himself.
Wonderful. I'm sure there's a joke here about one bird with one apple or something.

"Are we sure there's nothing else we want from the first level? Once we set down these stairs, the Distortion will seal the entrance by the time we reach the next floor," the Swellow asked cautiously.
Very relatable feeling when playing Mystery Dungeon games.

"Erm… Not quite," Kiran said, pointing out where the ceiling for the chamber would normally be. In its stead was the incredibly distant-looking layout of the floor they had just came from. Upside down.
This is super cool both conceptually and visually.

". . . I wonder what it feels like to be able to walk upside down without falling," Crom said as he stared up at the inverted floor.
I'm sure you could ask a Treecko or something. Or maybe that Spinarak you scared off.

"There are definitely apples in here… I can smell them," Nida replied.

"Oh! Oh! I smell them too! But… I don't see any apples," Crom added, drooping his wings a little.

"Maybe it would be best for you two to lead the way on this floor, I'm afraid I can't smell much of anything."
I love it when fics draw attention to varying levels of species' sense of smell.

"Rats… How on earth do they make stinging seem so easy?"
This is a fun line for a Nidoran.

It was then, in the corner of her eye, that the relative movement of being dragged along a stone cave floor caused a slim object to come into view.
I feel like this is kinda overexplaining what's happening. "the relative movement of being dragged along a stone cave floor" just feels like a lot of detail for the subject of that clause. I think you can cut at least one prepositional phrase (probably the last one, since we already know it's a stone cave floor) to improve the flow.

"Rrgh… You! Bird! So you think that you can blow us around like the monster did last night? Well, you're sorely mis-!"

Kiran quickly cut off the Krabby's rant with a stiff swat from his wing, which flung the crustacean unconscious into the pool with his dazed companions.
This made me laugh.

The two were rather scuffed up, which made Kiran silently grateful that he merely had some scrapes on his foot and damaged plumage to tend to. . .
I feel like you probably shouldn't be saying stuff from Kiran's perspective like this when so far it's seemed to be strictly third person limited and it's kinda jarring to switch perspectives mid-scene.

Crom's left wing was turning red and had scales scraped off in the place where the Krabby that attacked him had latched on, with other scuffs from the creature's free appendages. Nida's right flank was covered in sudsy glop, showing red in between the strands of her pelt and the barbs underneath, with her hind right leg visibly limping from having been caught in her attacking Krabby's claws.
The rest of the paragraph is really nice attention to biology, though.

"Make sure to eat the pulp at the least, it's where most of the nutrients and healing properties are,"
This is really cool information too, as well as good exposition (though I think that should be a semi-colon?)

"Past that wall over there," Crom replied, pointing out a slab of cave rock with a bend to the right that went around it.
This is another very long phrase describing one thing with no commas or sentence breaks. But at the same time, I think it'd negatively affect the pacing of the scene if you split it into two sentences, so I'm not sure how you'd fix that.

But then again, hadn't that Spinarak on the path called Kiran a monster?

"I'm pretty sure that the 'monster' is just some Pokémon that's slightly bigger than them," she huffed.
This is good payoff for that scene. I love it.

The fourth floor that day had its furthest wall composed of water which crashed against some unseen lip and cascaded down into some abyss far, far below. At least, it seemed that way. It was hard to truly know where one thing began and another ended in this tangled pit. The floor was a bit easier to make sense of, consisting of small outcroppings of rock that jutted out of a layer of water meandering forward from the cascade at the rear.
No specific comments; this is just a really strong and evocative description.

"Heh, heh, looks like it's mission accomplished!" she proclaimed as she drew near to the alcove, preparing to hop across another small waterlogged gap.
Didn't anyone ever tell you not to say things like that, Nida? :P

She had no sooner just left the ground when she suddenly heard a surprised squawk from Kiran, "Nida, wait!"

"Huh-?"

She crested the lip of the ledge, and noticed a faint crosshatched pattern on the stone below.

Her feet rested upon it.

To her horror, there was a soft, but audible click.

"Tra-!"

Then the floor gave way beneath her, and the Nidoran found herself tumbling head over heels through thin air.
The detail of the trap being a specific pattern is super cool.

Not at all where I expected this chapter to end, though. I did end up writing this review over multiple sessions but that was a very quick 5k words. Definitely makes me want to keep reading, so it's a very well-done cliffhanger.

(There's some joke to be made about falling off a cliff rather than hanging on, in this case.)

But yeah, that's the review. Honestly another really solid chapter. I feel like the characters and world were expanded nicely and the action scenes were well done. Excited to read more!
 
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