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Pokémon Broken Things

Poison 7.1

Persephone

Infinite Screms
Pronouns
her/hers
Partners
  1. mawile
  2. vulpix-alola
Arc Seven: Poison

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?”
-William Shakespeare




Poison 7.1: Corrosion

Plumeria

2016

“You can’t do that.” Your voice is calmer than expected. If you weren’t forced to live in your own head you’d even sound confident. Utterly unsurprised, completely in control.

“The fuck you mean I can’t?”

“You can’t disband Team Skull.”

“Well, like my momma says, I brought it into this world and I can take it out.”

“And you agree with her? That’s a first.”

Guzma sighs and for a moment, the persona fades. “I fucked up, okay? The president was into nightmare jellyfish to like a creepy, stay-away-from-schools degree, and the hammer is coming down on us instead of her. If I take the blame myself and tear it all apart then maybe the rest of you can be spared.”

“To do what?” you growl. “Crawl back to the shitty little lives we were living before? Newsflash, asshole: you weren’t the only one with problems. I’m not leaving hundreds of people high and dry just because they believed in you.”

He smirks again and leans against the wall. Seems the moment of honesty is over.

“Harsh. I like it. Was kind of weird when you worshipped the ground I walked on.”

And maybe you were too harsh. He hasn’t talked much about Ultra Space, but it’s rattled him. “I believed in you. Still do. You can change your mind. Change Skull’s purpose. But you can’t get rid of it. I want you to stay.”

“And if I don’t?” He’s smiling. It’s not his normal smile. This one’s barely there. It can’t command a room. Can’t even command you. It’s probably real. Strange how you’ve never seen it.

“Then I take over.”

“Fine.” He rolls his eyes. “Don’t come crying to me when the cops come.”

You’ve been running from them since you were eleven. If they’re your biggest problem, then you’ll be just fine.

2017​

You don’t really need to deal with this in person. But it’s been a while since you visited your hometown and this is as good an excuse as any. And if you get to make some numskulls feel dumb for asking? Bonus.

“A ghost,” you repeat. “You’re scared there’s a ghost under your bed.”

Machoke shifts awkwardly. He’s bulked out, yeah, but he’s still the same old softie underneath. Golbat doesn’t react. She worked with you before you were the Big Sis of Team Skull and doesn’t buy your bluster. You can’t bring yourself to fix that.

“The whole city’s full of ghosts. Why should I be worried one got inside?”

“It’s acting weird,” Golbat answers. “Not just scaring or lurking. It’s searching through things. Picks fights when it has nothing to gain. And none of our pokémon can get a hit in.”

Their squad is a little weak these days. You’ve been thinking about sending Loudred to them. She’s a great enforcer but the girl deserves a chance at something a little more normal.

“And you want me to deal with this? Do you have any idea how busy I am?”

“With what?” Golbat asks. “TV? I hear Rime City Blues dropped a new season. You through it yet?”

Yes, actually. She doesn’t need to know that right now. Machoke gapes at his subordinate for a moment before pulling himself together. He was young when he joined. Looks up to you a little too much.

“What kind of a ghost are we talking?”

“A banette.”

A banette that no one on the squad can beat. Suspicious. They aren’t the strongest of ghosts. Probably worth checking out.

Besides, you really do need to catch up with Golbat.

*​

It ends up being close to a stereotypical sleepover, something you haven’t had in… six years, probably. Watched a Chinese upload of a movie you couldn’t be bothered to sneak into a theater for, painted each other’s nails, endured some baseless speculation on your love life, even got a little tipsier than you probably should have. It was… fun. You don’t have many friends like that anymore. Well. You never really had many friends like that.

Maybe you’ll find a reason to come back in two or three months.

And so you find yourself drunk in an unfamiliar living room, idly stroking Joanna’s head while Ivan looks on in amusement.

“Oh, you shut up.”

“I have not said anything.”

“You know what I mean.”

The gengar’s form flickers back to his default as he goes back to scanning the room. “No ghosts yet.”

Joanna huffs at the attention shifting away from her and pushes against your gloved hand. The air grows a bit thicker but you only notice because of years of exposure. Poor Golbat. You think she was flirting with you. And she is the kind of person you’d be interested in… if you had any interest at all in other girls. Your salazzle’s taught you that you’re pretty damn straight.

The light shifts and Ivan’s attention focuses like a laser on the distortion. A crumpled shirt draped over the couch lifts up and shakes itself off. There’s the tell-tale purple glow of ghost energy around it.

“What do you want?” you ask. You lazily wave down Ivan for now. If it attacks, you’ll strike back harder.

The shirt collapses. A door creaks open down the hall. “Bane,” a gravelly voice says.

Great. A dramatic ghost. The kind that speaks in ominous variations of its own species name. You get up and follow it, Joanna hugged against your side as Ivan zig-zags in and out of the walls.

The front door is wide open. A cold wind blows through it. The moment you’re through the door it slams shut behind you. Fucking ghosts.

In the corner of your eye, you see a man in a trench coat standing on the hill. It’s gone when you turn to look.

“Joanna, guard the base. Ivan and I will follow.”

It could be a trap. Probably is a trap. But you’re confident you can fight your way out. Maybe more confident than you should be but all your best ideas come when you’re a little drunk. You’ll figure it out.

The banette keeps blinking in and out of existence in your peripheral vision. It’s clearly leading you somewhere. Towards the mountain. That’s fine. You’re a little drunk and your blood is warm.

Finally, it stops.

The banette stands still at the base of the mountain’s lift. Ivan floats off the ground in anticipation.

“Well?”

It hisses.

“He wants us to wait.” Ivan’s voice is unnaturally faint. Always barely perceptible whether you’re right next to him or a football field away.

“For what?”

The lift hums to life as the car descends. Is this a trap from Selene? You don’t remember her having a banette. No. Too far-sighted of her. She would’ve just raided the house the moment she found out what it was being used for.

Finally, the car descends enough you can see its occupant. A young girl in a grey dress, a navy-blue jacket, and thick black leggings. Acerola. The trial captain. Never given you trouble before. What does she want with you now?

“Hi Plumey!” she calls out.

“Plumeria.” You’re not humoring her like she’s a fresh recruit. “What do you want?”

“Ooh, straight to the point. I like it. Well.” The car stops and she takes two dainty steps off to stand by her banette. You recall that she’s the last princess. Shit meant more to you when you were a kid. “The country’s fucked.”

“Excuse me?”

“Country’s fucked.” She takes another step forward before pivoting into a small twirl. “The government arrests and kills whoever they want while poisoning the land. And no one will or—“ She stops spinning and looks directly at you. “—can stop them.”

You cross your arms at the insult. “This isn’t news to me. What do you want?”

“An alliance. I want to see Alola freed but they pay way too much of a spotlight on me. Stuck me in a haole woman’s pet project orphanage and had a cop act as my kind-of-guardian. I need someone who can act in the shadows every now and again.”

“And what, exactly, do you want?” You don’t buy this. She’s in the government she’s bad-mouthing. There’s an angle here. You just aren’t sure what.

“For now? Just read some stuff. I’ll have one of my ghost friends drop it off at that little house you set up. Maybe incorporate some of it into your speeches. Declare you’re for independence—“

“No.”

She stops her apparently aimless pacing. “No?”

“The cops don’t take us seriously. That’s how we’d make them.”

“I have a way to beat them. All of them. Promise. I just… need some help.”

“No can do. If you have something, tell me what it is.”

The trial captain sighs in exasperation, head in her hands. So dramatic. “I can’t. Don’t trust you yet.”

“And I won’t trust you without knowing what you want.”

“Fine. Just read what I send, okay?”

“If I’ve got nothing better to do.”

She pouts / glares at you before reaching out to her banette. Shadows engulf her and she disappears.

What a waste of a trip.

*​

Acerola’s books arrive in a school backpack outfitted with princess stickers. You can tell half the squad is choking back giggles while you pick it up, but not even Golbat dares laugh directly you to your face in front of a group. You still try to get out as soon as possible.

It’s just books inside. Normal, published books. No secret pamphlets or arcane rituals. Boring. You idly flip through them. A thick volume on Alolan mythology. One on pre-contact agriculture of the Pacific that makes your eyes glaze over looking at it. ‘A Substantial Wrong:’ Alolan Annexation Through Principles of Contemporary and Current International Law. Hard pass. Internal Exile: The Structure and History of Alola’s Regency Committee. You get why this one girl, specifically, is into this stuff but fail to see why anyone else would be.

A sabotage manual. A classic one, but a good one nonetheless. You’ve already read it three times.

The Skychildren. The cover has a man looking up into an ultra wormhole. The colors are a little off but you get what they’re going for. Huh. Book seems older than you’d expect. Worn cover, musty smell. Published… 1951. Didn’t know the eggheads knew what portals looked like back then. You think you’ll actually read that one.

The Skychildren is interesting enough. Dry, old-timey prose and information that’s super outdated after the last year. It’s more about the people who come through than the pokémon. A lot on the old witch of the desert. Even a few new things to you. She was the boogeyman growing up. The reason kids shouldn’t wander out alone so close to the sands. That and the dragons. And crocodiles. But you thought crocodiles were cool so that kind of backfired.

Then the book focuses on more modern fallers. You’d kind of known it happened sometimes. Especially in old legends. But you’d never really thought much about them. Last confirmed one was way before you were born. Apparently not. At least in the 50s a lot of fallers were given new identities and told to keep quiet about it. There was even one who talked to the author who hadn’t known she was a faller at all.

Tapu Lele always creeped you out. The other tapu have their myths and legends and personalities and then there’s her. She just sits in a cave and brainwashes anyone who pissed her off. You spoke to her, once, completely on accident, and really wish you hadn’t. Wrong place, wrong time.

A few days later you find time to pick up the myth book. You’re a quarter Alolan. Your mom was half, but she was never really a “read my daughter a story” type of mom. She wasn’t really any type of mom. Last you heard she’s still out there, somewhere, coasting from one high to another.

You glance around the apartment you’re crashing in this week. One room, barely furnished, an empty case of beer on the counter. Apple didn’t fall far.

You skim through the book. Read some stories in full. Familiar ones. A few with interesting titles. You’re not sure what she’s getting at with this one. Does she want to summon a god? That never ends well. But the dangerous ones—the Tapu, now Lunala—they already live among you. If they could or would overthrow the Americans they would have done it already. Solgaleo? Always framed as being Lunala’s equal. At best you’d tie up Selene. That really just leaves Pele or the ocean itself.

You don’t know if Pele’s real. Maybe just another name for Groudon. Either way you really, really doubt anyone’s going to try summoning an ancient fire or water god for a long time. Humanity’s been there, done that, survived by Rayquaza’s mercy.

The rest of the books barely get any attention. You read the first chapter. Skim a few chapters that don’t sound like they suck too much. You’re pretty sure the ag book’s author wants to fuck a taro plant.

You’ve pretty much forgotten about the books by the time Golbat gives you another call.

*​

This time Acerola meets you in an abandoned café. The lights don’t work. Place is illuminated by will-o-wisps from an unseen ghost. There are two steaming cups in front of her. How? Where’d she get them from.

“Hi Plumey!” She waves at you as you enter. “I brought cocoa.”

You snort in response. The chair screeches against the floor as you pull it away from the table. You at least put your hands on the drink to feel its warmth. But she’s an idiot if she thinks you’re drinking something of unknown origin around her.

“You read what I sent?” she asks. Doesn’t seem surprised or offended that you’re not drinking. Or maybe she’s just trying not to piss you off.

“One and a half books.”

She tilts her head in response.

The Skychildren and the mythology book.”

She frowns and takes a sip before hissing at the hot beverage and blowing in through the top of the lid. “Not what I was hoping for. I guess it’ll do.”

You just keep staring her down. “What do you want?”

“I do have a plan for freeing Alola. And I do need your help doing the things that I can’t.”

“That’s it, then? Replace Lusamine with yourself. She had money to fund us? Do you?”

She shakes her head.

“Yeah, sorry, not taking IOUs at this time.”

“Would you change your mind if I told you more?”

“Maybe.” You’re curious at least. Is she really mad enough to summon Kyogre or Groudon?

“The Black Alchemist. You read about her?”

The black—that’s an… unfortunate name. Or a racist one. “The witch?”

“Yeah, her. She gave my ancestor one final weapon. But I need help to activate it. I can do some of it, but…”

Oh. She is mad.

“You mean you want to try and tame a legendary and point it at your enemies? Worked great for the last six guys.”

“It would be under our control.”

You can’t help but snort. She looks genuinely hurt as she takes a sip of her hot chocolate. Good. She needs to get the idea out of her head.

“It would be under control because it would be one of us. It’s not some sealed monster, it’s an apotheosis ritual. A way to merge with the spirits and become a god.”

You can’t tell if that’s better or worse. “And why should I trust you with godhood?”

“Not me.” She sighs. “Can’t be me. It needs my blood and a faller’s. Then it can be used to awaken someone else.”

That’s more interesting. A whole new variable. Who she chooses to empower.

“Who’s the faller, then?”

“I don’t know.” Oh. Back to square one. “There’s only one right now and they’re an actual cop. We’d have to wait for someone better.”

“Can’t we just make them bleed?” That seems like the kind of thing she’d want your help with. And you have nothing against roughing up the pigs.

“Has to be voluntary. The alchemist was worried we’d just stab her.”

You raise an eyebrow. “Could she just be lying? Said she put the restriction on but didn’t.”

“Maybe. But we’d be playing our hand too early. I think we have one shot at this before the Americans figure out what we’re trying to do.”

“And how long will that take?”

She shakes her head and sets the cup back down. It sounds light. Almost empty. “We can’t know. Just make plans and hope.”

‘We.’ Acerola keeps saying ‘we.’ Like you’re already on board. Interesting choice of words.

“What, exactly, would Skull be doing?”

“Just bringing people around to the idea for now. Building up a group of people we can depend on when the time comes. Maybe messing with some enemies. Once we have a faller, we can talk about bringing them on board and getting the instrument.”

“The instrument?”

She looks down. “I’d rather keep that to myself for now.”

Maybe it’s a literal instrument. You’ve heard they used a flute to summon Lunala. But if there was another legendary flute you’re pretty sure the government would be doing everything they could to find it and lock it away.

“Who has it? Or is it still buried?”

“It’s in a museum on the islands. They don’t know what they have. Brought me in to consult since…” Since she’s the princess. “My parents owned a bookshop and collected old stuff.” Or that. “They stole the books and made it a library. Said their will gave it up. Gave me up, too. She wouldn’t have. They just wanted me to know my place.”

Sucks. Not unexpected but it sucks.

“And if you win, what do you plan to do?”

“I gave you a guide—”

“On politics and agriculture. What are you doing with kids without a home?”

“Oh.” She pauses. “They got adopted, I think. Kin didn’t just mean blood back then.”

Right. Of course she’d interpret that as orphans like her. “And what if the birth parents are alive but shouldn’t have kids?”

“I’m open to ideas.”

“Then maybe I’m open to a few ideas, too.”

*​

Acerola gives you a myth and a place. Just go to Wela Volcano and talk about the creation of the islands and how we’re insulting Pele by destroying her land. The kind of green bullshit that even the liberals might go for in theory, even if they’ll turn on you the moment the monkeywrenching starts. Lets you hit a few of the worst companies without tipping off that you might be for Alolan Independence now. You toss in a few lines about poison. You know poison. People know you know poison. You wouldn’t drink half the water on Alola.

It goes better than you’d thought. Don’t get shot. The cops show up but you’re just talking. Aren’t even telling anyone to do something. Just that maybe someone should. The Skulls are a little too into it. Need to clarify what you mean by “be enthusiastic” because, turns out, that can just look like mockery. You’ll give some of them an earful. There are kids who get caught up in it. Just followed a crowd that was mostly in plainclothes to see what it was about. One of them looks way too into it. Hanging onto your every word like it came from the gods, and not a low-key alcoholic trying to hold a gang together.

And it’s nice to have actual missions again that aren’t just stealing food and drugs. Smash up the cars on the lot of some dealerships while leaving the EV shop next door alone. Paint some messages on the side of a cruise ship in dock. Turns out they burn, just, actual toxic sludge and dump shit straight into the ocean. Somehow more fucked up than you’d thought. You tear up the trail to an overcrowded part of a park. Burn down a chemical company’s sales office.

A few environmental groups reach out to you. Start discretely sending kids to your speeches in exchange for telling you about a place that maybe something should happen to.

It feels good. You doubt Acerola actually gets anywhere with her faller idea but you don’t mind doing this for a while. Eventually you toss in more myths at your flashmob speeches. Tales of The Sacred Peaks the colonizers are filling with trash. The gods providing abundant water that we’re throwing away on tourists. A few shifts in focus. The lift up Lanakila gets broken just about every time they fix it until they need guards and cameras along the full length. Even then you still break it sometimes, just for fun. You dump paint on the lenses at Hokulani. Paint in big letters “Want to know about the stars? Ask an Alolan.” That one gets you a bit too much heat. Turns out those things were expensive. Have to lay low for a long while afterwards.

Eventually you’re just straight up saying that Alola can solve its own problems. That you don’t need the colonizers. That they’re the cause of the problems you have to solve. The cops start coming down harder. Even some of the feds. The cell system that seemed way too paranoid before is now the only thing keeping you alive. The speeches have to stop and a newsletter springs up in its place. The military and the cops and the governor all think you’re the worst thing to ever happen to them but, weirdly, they never send the biggest guns. The kahuna. The champion. Interpol. The special forces.

Acerola tells you that the tapu and some of the kahunas are on your side and no one really wants to start a hot revolution. Cool. At least she’s figuring out who her allies are going to be.

*​

2019

“I think I’ve found one.”

“Hmm?” you take another swig of your beer. Acerola follows but makes a face. Girl still hates the taste but feels like she has to around her gang boss friend.

“A faller. Might’ve found one.”

That snaps you back to full sobriety. “Who? Where?”

“Not sure who, yet. All I know is that right at the start of this,” she gestures into the inky darkness outside of her ghost’s light, “Nanu sent out a message in the Ula’Ula Defense Council’s groupchat to expect a lot of UBs at the observatory. And there were! Like, a third of the ones on the island kept throwing themselves at it. Nanu said he was trying to get someone strong to guard it. Hilda and her Reshiram showed up a few hours later. Convoy kept getting attacked.”

“You think there’s a faller there? Someone evacuated.”

“So that’s why you wanted the observatory’s staff list.” Hadn’t been hard to get. Disappointingly easy. Just a little phishing.

“Yup. They all checked out. Same for the Pokémon Center staff. Got a list of the people in the convoy. Been trying to look into them when I have time. But, well, I noticed one of the names from the news and I checked on a whim. Think we’ve got her.”

You flick your head. Go on.

“The butterfree girl.”

“She’s been traveling. Wouldn’t she have gotten got by one of the UBs?”

“No. Melemele was actually clear.” She pauses. “A lot of them attacked the city early in the blackout. Didn’t just stay in the north and east bothering the totems like you’d think.”

“Interesting.” Could be a coincidence. Another faller. Maybe they were just disturbed by the people.

“So, I figure, hey, she has to have some kind of ID in the league’s system, right? A passport or something? I look. Can’t find anything. Just an email to reach out to upon request. I do. Say that I just want to know what Anahuac docs look like. And Uncle Nanu, the interpol officer, he reaches out to me to tell me I don’t need personal documents. Even though I can look at all the other ones saved.”

Your eyes drift to her banette’s flickering ghostly fire and your mind kicks into gear. You know of the girl. She’s traveling with… oh, whatever-his-name-is. Kevin? A little too tipsy to recall. The short angry kid with some unfortunate acne. The one who sent the long ass apology after the apocalypse happened and the princess went back to her castle.

Having him watch the Gage girl was Acerola’s idea. She knew the boy from… somewhere or another. Knew he was sympathetic.

“Who’s the kid we had with Gage?”

“Kekoa?” There it is. “Yeah, I was getting to him. Might be worth having him set something up. I can loan you my UB tracker. See if it pings. Test out how she feels about Skull, if she knows she’s a faller, all that stuff.”

You frown. “She’s with VStar. How are we bringing her around?”

“Well, she’s from—thinks she’s from—Anahuac. That cuts in our favor, right?”

“Maybe.”

She sighs. “Look, she has a tyrunt. She’s going to need a Class V license. And the council isn’t going to give it to a Nahua girl who works for the highest bidder. Especially when she doesn’t have the money to pay for her prospective pets. They’ll either turn her down outright or someone will say some super racist shit that gets her pissed off. We can use that.”

A bit low. But you wouldn’t be making them do anything.

“And, uh, The Lady of The Scarlet Forest.” She’s fidgeting. Can’t blame her. The florges gives you the creeps, too. You think she likes you and it still feels like she’s going to execute you at the end of every conversation. “She made a deal with Kekoa. Was trying to snare Cuicatl but after watching for a few days decided that it wasn’t likely. Wouldn’t give me more info than that. Basically, her niece kind-of-maybe owns Kekoa, depending on how the deal is interpreted.”

And fairies will interpret the deal in the way that benefits them the most.

“She might be willing to use that in our favor.”

Even lower. You really don’t like that. She must catch it on your face.

“Look, it’s all to free Alola, okay? I don’t actually want to hurt her and Kekoa’s been a beloved thorn in my side at the orphanage for a while now. Definitely don’t want him getting hurt.”

You take a deep breath and steeple your fingers. “The dagger, then.”

“Working on it. That’ll be your job when the time comes.”

*​

You take in the pokemon you have left. There were six, once, when you were finishing up the island challenge. The dragon totem killed Helen. Said it was an accident. Cops still came for you when you stalked his handler and poisoned his food. Your only regret is that the fucker survived.

Pacifica left when you settled down away from the coast. Can’t blame her. A land-locked life isn’t for a toxapex. You had to let John go shortly after you abandoned Po Town. Just wasn’t enough space and food for the muk anymore. Far as you know he’s still hanging out in the ruined town. Maybe he’ll get through its garbage and rot someday.

Mark got killed a year ago when the cops figured out where you were squatting. You barely got away with two pokémon and your life. He knew what he was doing. Didn’t make the loss any easier.

Ivan and Joanna stand before you. Float in Ivan’s case.

“Well, looks like it’s over.”

“You don’t have to,” Ivan whispers. You think it’s even softer than usual.

“I know.” You look around. It’s a garage with an inflatable mattress this week. You used to stay at Skull branches but a lot of people got arrested the last time you did. Some of them were maimed or lost pokémon. You couldn’t put anyone through that again. “But someone has to. The world can’t keep going on like this.”

“I understand.” He briefly flickers out of existence before retaking his human shape, a pale-skinned boy maybe thirteen-years-old. Older than you were when you caught him. “I will be with you to your end.”

He doesn’t mean your death. You’ve discussed this before. He’ll serve the shadows if they’re still you. And if they aren’t… he’ll end them or die trying. Probably the latter. You can’t blame him for it. Gengar don’t usually outlive their trainers and he made peace with death a long time ago.

“Joanna?”

The air grows thicker and she hisses.

“She does not wish you to do this.”

You sigh. Poor girl. “You know you can’t brainwash me.”

More and more pheromones settle around you as she tries. Damn it. You’re going to be drenched in this shit tomorrow. Going to throw your allies off their game. “I’m sorry, girl. I’m doing it. Only question is where you want to go once I have.”

She refuses to dignify you with an answer. Just crosses her arms and looks away with a dramatic flick of her tail.

“I can take you back to the volcano. Give you to another Skull member or Acerola.”

She hisses and violently whips her tail onto the ground.

“If this fails, she will kill Acerola.”

Another hiss.

“If this succeeds, she might kill Acerola.”

Fair. You think being a queen’s right hand would suit her well. Shame about the circumstances.

You look over to Ivan. “Take care of her, please.” You don’t think you will get an answer out of her. She will stubbornly refuse to admit this is happening until she sees your dead body.

“I will.”

*​

Unfortunately, you were right: three showers later and you still have five times the perfume on you that you usually wear for missions. And you’re certain Joanna is going to be pumping out more than usual just to spite you. The first part goes well. You and Acerola have been working to get one of her rotom into the museum’s systems for years. The alarms take a while to trigger and the cameras are looped. Even their radios are jammed. When a guard does find you they can’t use too much firepower in the middle of a museum. You barely have to do anything. Just let the two grunts with you handle things with their melee attackers.

Acerola didn’t want you burning the museum down or staining the art. A lot of her family’s shit is here. Not much you can do without fire or poison.

The vault takes a while to pierce. It’s not actually digital. Just a metal door with elemental barriers to keep ghosts out. You have to let your safecracker deal with that while you and the other grunt just watch the entrance and deal with guards as they come. Unfortunately, she keeps taking glances back at you. Stupid imorin. You have to glare at her to get her to hurry up but you swear her hands are shaking more than they should. Ivan darted off at some point to try and pick them off one by one with hypnosis or minor curses.

The lock eventually clicks open and your companion’s machoke rolls it to the side.

“Let’s make this quick.”

Almost no guards inside the vault itself. A lone golett that Joanna takes out with a little too much glee. The entryway is all concrete. She didn’t burn anything important. You memorized the map of the vault Acerola got you and quickly walk through it. Walk. Not run. That’s how people get hurt. That’s how you drive your body into a full panic. You don’t need that right now.

The dagger is in a glass case at the end of a row. Before you can give any orders Joanna lurches forwards and unleashes a torrent of flames on the case. The glass shatters under the thermal stress and the rest of the case starts to melt or burn. Shit. Just when you think she’s done she sprays a quart of acid on it and the metal starts to smoke. Fuck. You withdraw Joanna as soon as you can but the damage is done. You’re not even sure it’s left. People are getting fucking shot and it was for nothing because you couldn’t predict that your desperate—

The flames turn blue. Ghostly blue. Then they disperse altogether. The air feels cooler. Cold, even. You take slow, hesitant steps forward and look down at the case’s remains. It’s absolutely ruined. Charred and melted and warped. But the pitch-black dagger is completely unharmed. You slowly reach down and wrap a gloved hand around the pommel. It feels cold through the glove.

The museum knew it was cursed. How could they not? Acerola just convinced them it wasn’t that big of a deal. The personal weapon of the usurper queen. Infamous. Historic. Best kept away from the public, but nothing world-changing.

You look back. The safecracker (Kingler?) has taken many steps away from you and the dagger. Before you can calm her down you hear a bang outside. Could be a strong attack from one of the pokémon. More come. One, two, a torrent. Gunshots. You break into a run. Along the way one final guard comes out of the woodwork. He just stares at you as you rush past for a long moment before Ivan takes out his twin beldum with a pair of shadow balls. Was that the dagger or the imorin? Do you care?

When you step outside your worst fears are confirmed. The cops are shooting madly into the crowd. A few of your people are down with grizzly wounds. Maybe a half dozen pokémon are dead on the ground. At least a few of the pigs are injured. Unfortunately, none of them seem dead. The dagger surges with power in your hand.

You could kill them all now. Protect your men.

The thought is intoxicating. You’re drawn to the idea of vengeance like people are drawn to your perfume. And that’s enough to make you think hard about what’s going on. You don’t know what the dagger can do. If it can protect you from gunshots. As if any metallurgy of this realm could damage its host. That wasn’t your thought.

Ignore the cursed dagger. Take control of its power. Then come back and finish this.

You reach out to the nearest abra and it takes you away a few seconds later.

*​

Teleportation doesn’t really bother you anymore. Done it too much. You adjust your posture to the new ground you’re standing on almost immediately. Acerola’s here. So is the damn florges. And Cuicatl. Good. Everything’s in order.

“Live rounds in Hau’oli. We need to make this quick.”

Cuicatl’s face pales. “Is Kekoa there?”

You’re pretty sure you had the Tapu Village cell attend. Damn near all of them did. Don’t know if he was actually in the crowd or not.

“Maybe.”

“Okay.” She takes a shaky breath and steadies herself. “What do I do?”

“It’s just a quick cut over the back of the hand,” Acerola says as she steps forward to take the dagger. She’s not wearing gloves. It doesn’t seem to harm her bare skin. If she’s feeling the rush of power and cold rage she’s not showing it. “I think you might have to do it yourself. Just to be absolutely sure.”

Another can guide the blade so long as her hand is on the pommel.

You’ve learned to stop asking how the florges knows things. The times when she answers are so much worse than the times she refuses to. Acerola helps Cuicatl through the process. You can practically see the life leave the strength as the blade leaves a shallow cut. Acerola rushes forward to catch her, almost dropping the dagger or stabbing someone with it on accident.

“She’s fine. First sacrifices are just one hell of a feeling.”

Good. You didn’t want anyone else to die because of this. Especially her. You already don’t like the shit Acerola pulled to get her here.

After spending a little too long consoling the girl while your people are dying for her cause, the princess makes a quick, shallow cut on her own hand. She barely reacts at all. She sees your confusion and laughs. “You don’t become a ghost trainer without shedding some blood and spirit. Now.” She flips the dagger around so that the blade faces her. “Your turn.”

You take the knife. It’s glowing now. Black and pink flames shimmer around the blade. It feels eager. Just waiting to be released.

To be released.

“And I’ll be in charge of this?” you ask.

“Should be.”

“Should be?”

“Everything I’ve read says you should be. I can go and double check, but it sounded like you had a problem back at the museum.”

Oh.

This was all a trap, wasn’t it?

You glance down. Ivan wriggles out of your shadow. Do you fight it? Go back to Hau’oli and finish the fight, knowing that the feds are going to be coming down on you like a hammer for this as soon as word gets out? Or trust that, whatever happens next, Skull will be taken care of?

Acerola looks at you hungrily. The florges looks on as impassively as ever. When you first met a veiled woman on a bright night you’d asked her what she was.

A silent judge, she’d answered. A witness of history.

Is she a prophet? Did she know this would happen? Or does history just repeat itself if you live long enough?

You look back to the dagger. Whatever decision you make, you need to make it now. Before things get even worse in Hau’oli.

Let’s say you go back. Fight. Win. You know what comes next. Everyone’s scared shitless of ancient artifacts and the old gods. Can’t blame them. Even if you can beat the cops can you beat the champion, every other damn trainer in the region, and the entire military with just Team Skull and a magic dagger?

There’s no future for Team Skull if you go back.

There’s no future for you either way.

At least one path gives them a chance.

The blade is sharp enough that you barely feel it enter. For a moment you stand in disbelief, unsure if any of this is real. And then it burns. Tears straight through your body and soul. Boils your blood. Maybe literally. Maybe figuratively. Reality itself stops meaning anything. Everything that has and will and could happen spins around you faster and faster and faster until there’s nothing but a blurry void.

You close your eyes for the final time…

…and something wakes up.
 
Poison 7.2

Persephone

Infinite Screms
Pronouns
her/hers
Partners
  1. mawile
  2. vulpix-alola
Poison 7.2: Catalyst
Cuicatl

July 24, 2020

You feel weak. Like your muscles all went on strike at once. Like you haven’t eaten in days. Your heart hammers in your chest like it wants to tear itself out as a second offering. Air enters your lungs but refuses to stay. You almost drop the dagger as you collapse to the ground.

Someone touches you shortly after. “Hey, hey, it’s alright,” Acerola whispers. “Spiritual sacrifices are a hell of a rush the first time. Don’t worry. It’ll all be better in a week or two.”

You groan and shift to a more comfortable position. Acerola gives you a final head pat and leaves. You hear her talk to Plumeria but the words go straight through your head without a pause.

There’s a sound of slicing flesh. And then something strikes the ground. What. {Noci?}

[UD_Plumeria Attacked UD_Plumeria;
UD_Plumeria Has Gone Offline;
UD—Situation Rapidly Developing, Please Hold]

“Welcome, Dread Commander of the Marching Shadows,” Acerola says. Her voice quivers. Fear? Surprise? She’s supposed to know what’s happening.

“Princess.” The voice… it’s like Plumeria. But so much more. There’s scorn in it. For her? Hopefully. You can feel its attention turn to you. Not normal judgment. Not just seeing through you. In just one moment it knows everything there is to know about you and it finds you wanting. “Princess.” There’s almost pity this time. Thankfully, the attention leaves and you can shrink back in on yourself. “Where is the representative of my people.”

“Right there.”

The horrible attention shifts back to you. No. Please. Anywhere else. “She is not from the eternal city.”

“But she’s from beyond the stars! That was the requirement.”

“Hmm.” The ghost sounds terribly unconvinced. “I was supposed to be solemnly summoned by a representative of my creator, not a scared child from another civilization entirely.”

“You appeared anyway.” Acerola sounds more angry than frightened now. How? Does she not feel the weight of being known? The endless strength of the creature before her? The whispers of the dead too loud to ignore and too faint to understand? “Will you fight?”

There’s a pause before the thing’s attention changes. You don’t dare breathe. Not when it could come back in a moment. “I will. Even if the method was improper the purpose is correct. I will secure this land for the allies of my creator.”

And then it’s gone.

You take deep breaths and shake from more than weakness.

“Sorry about that,” she finally says.

“W-what did he mean? I’m not good enough?”

“Looks like I made a translation error. I was probably supposed to get Nanu for this but he wouldn’t have gone along, ever, so—at least it worked?”

“How are you still standing?” Wasn’t she judged, too?

“Ever met an angry ghost?”

“There was an oricorio,” you whisper. “I don’t want to talk about it.”

“I’m sorry,” she says. “They can be a lot.”

She puts a hand in yours and you recoil. Cold. Your hand—her hand—both—so, so cold.

“Oops, yeah, spiritual wounds. Uh. Sorry?”

There’s a booming roar. The primal cry of an angry dragon blasted through a war horn. You know the voice. No. Not her. Not now.

The garchomp lands and the ground shakes around you. A slide and two smaller steps follow.

“Acerola, Cuicatl.” Shirona’s voice is cold and her words are short. She’s angrier than you’ve ever heard her. If you hadn’t just been judged by…whatever that was…this would be what made you break.

“Hey, Shirry! What’chu doing here?” Acerola also sounds unlike herself. Like a child puppeting her body.

“Why is there a dead body? What is a white florges doing here? Why did you attack my lucario?”

Acerola sounds very unconcerned with the angry champion and her dragon. “Huh. So, he got back to base?”

“No, I did!” Mitsuru warbles before her talons softly touch down.

“Oh. Right. Probably should’ve figured you’d keep two sets of eyes on your… ward? Protégé? Kid? The ghosts weren’t quite sure what was going on with you two.”

“What. Did. You. Do?” Shirona hisses. It’s almost scarier than her dragon’s roar.

“Fine. Straight to business. There’s an old Alolan god that’s been sealed away for ages. Needed Cuicatl’s help to wake him up. She’ll be fine, by the way.”

“Again! You saw Hoenn, saw—saw everything and decided this was a good fucking idea?“ Shirona shouts. “Where is it?”

“Like you can talk. I can sense The Devourer’s mark on you.” There’s a chill in the air when she says the word. Like it’s watching you right now. “You can’t make a pact with Him and then lecture me on my rituals.”

You have no idea what’s going on. Barely know what the Alolan god is. No idea about The Devourer. Neither woman seems like they’re about to explain things to you.

“The world was ending,” Shirona snaps.

“And our world ended a century ago.”

“Almighty Sinnoh this is a colonialism thing,” Shirona breathes / hisses / sighs. “Look, I understand, my people were wiped out ages ago and then decimated again by the Japanese. But it’s been thousands of years and not one of the Celestica ever brought the gods in. You want to know why? Because however much we’ve lost, we know we still had more to lose. You’re going to find that out very, very soon.”

“Ooh! Is that a threat? Is Miss Big, Bad Champion walking into a foreign country and trying to take it over?”

“I don’t care about your games, kid. I will save what I can. Even if I have to destroy you to do it.”

“Even if you have to destroy Cuicatl?”

There’s a heavy pause. Wait. Are you… is it still bound to you? Can it be destroyed by killing you?

You just wanted to keep your daughter safe and now—

You just want to lie down. Cuddle Genesis or Pixie. Make it all go away. And now Shirona’s probably going to kill you because…

Maybe nothing matters, anyway. You were never real. You can’t—couldn’t save Alice. Maybe you deserve this.

“Dragon rush.”

You lower your head and wait for the end. Instead, you only feel a rush of cold air and hear the garchomp’s growl of displeasure.

“Damn it. Got away,” Shirona hisses.

Oh. Was she going for Acerola? The florges? You kind of assumed… actually, why hasn’t the florges spoken? You thought fairies never shut up. A quick mental push finds nothing. They might have left a long time ago. Just used glamour to cover it.

Just like a fairy to flee from a fight.

You can feel it when Shirona’s full attention fall on you. Just a little less scary than the god’s. “Explain yourself. Now.”

Okay. You take a shaky breath. You can do this. “I was on the hill when Acerola came. Started talking about fallers and Alola and—Gen’s parents got away and—the Florges, she let Kekoa go, Plumeria had a knife I don’t know if she’s dead.” Another shaky breath. “I was protecting Coco.”

“It was taken care of,” she snaps. “You just had to go to Sinnoh for a while. If you’d just calmed down and come inside, I would have told you. None of this had to happen!”

You scowl. “Maybe you were just using me to get Coco. Like the dragon gym guy. This was all planned.”

She laughs. Loudly. Madly. Like nothing you’ve heard from her before. “Kid. I had a challenger while you were traveling with Mitsuru. He’d been training for five years. Watched all the footage he could find of my battles. Managed his pokémon’s diet and exercise to a fault, splurged on TMs, lived and breathed battling. Landed back-to-back wins against four of the strongest trainers in Sinnoh. You want to know how far he got against me?”

The question hangs. Is she judging you again? Telling you how much less you are than this boy? That she could do so much better…

“I used three pokémon. He only knocked out one. I got careless once I’d already dismantled half his team with a roserade. You think I need a tyrantrum? Want one? No. This wasn’t about the fucking dragon or the alien machine. I was doing it for you.”

But she’s Shirona. A living legend. And you’re. You. “Why?” you whisper

“It’s pretty damn hard to remember right now.”

And you’d thought you’d never feel more judged than when the Lord of Shadows looked at you.

She takes a deep breath. Two. Three. “That was uncalled for,” she apologizes(?). “I’m going back to the tower to see what’s going on. Are you coming with me or not?”

You lower your head again. “No.” Not now. Not with her. Don’t want to. Don’t deserve to. Don’t… you don’t know. Don’t know what you did. How you’re feeling. Even who you are.

She boards Kagetora without a word. A wave of sand and dust washes past you.

“She’ll get over it,” Mitsuru says. “She’s just afraid.”

“Of me?” Of the god? You raise your bloody hand closer to your head. Is there a difference between the two?

“I don’t know.”

For a while you just sit in silence. Is Shirona using her as insurance? A way to strike you down from afar if she thinks it’s necessary? You couldn’t win against even one of her pokémon. She was clear about that. “Would you leave if I asked you?”

Another pause. “Are you afraid of me?”

“A little.”

“I’ll go if you promise to come back safely.”

“Okay.”

“You will be held to your word.”

Oh. You just bargained with a fairy.

…you’re off your game today.

“Noci?”

Her mind brushes against yours. Good. You were worried that she left, too.

“I guess I should tell the others.”

Noci doesn’t have a reply for that. Wasn’t a straight question.

You reach for your sash. Five balls on it. Noci’s already out. You send out Pixie, Leo, and Cuepiltia. And then pause. Coco. Guess it’s time to face her. What if she thinks you did the wrong thing? You know you should have asked her first, talked to her earlier, but. You couldn’t. Not when it could have been the last time you got to talk.

You send her out. She needs to be here.

That just leaves Sitrus. You don’t have her ball and she’s off visiting her daughter somewhere else on the island.

“What happened?” Pixie asks. “You’re bleeding, there’s ghost energy everywhere, there’s a dead human, you’re cursed? Maybe cursed? Hurt. Ghost hurt.”

You take a deep breath and think through your answer.

“Is the dead human food?” Leo asks.

“No!”

“Okay.”

You have no idea what you’re going to do with the body. Couldn’t Acerola have taken care of that? Or Shirona? You only met her Plumeria once before this. Why is it your job?

“I didn’t get my Class V,” you start. “They didn’t know more about dragons than I did. Just didn’t like me. Then I found out that…” {I’m not real. They found my body lying in a desert. I’d gone through a wormhole, went through another world. My last team… they all died. I survived. Failed them. Mind was gone. Tapu Lele put something back together. They didn’t tell me.}

Being psychic is saving you here. You wouldn’t be able to say anything over the sobs.

{Acerola… you don’t know her. Girl showed up. Said that if I gave her some blood, she would wake up an old, powerful pokémon and they would attack the government. I wouldn’t need the license anymore. I did. Plumeria died. The pokémon woke up. Dr. Karashina’s mad at me. I… I think I made a mistake.}

“Why?” Coco growls.

{I did it because—}

“Why a mistake?”

{Oh.} You pause. Thoughts are still hard. You have to stop crying and think for this and that takes a moment. {Dr. Karashina is mad. Maybe a lot of people will die. I don’t even know what the pokémon wants or what it is.}

Coco snorts. “You protected me. Let other people take care of their own families.”

She’s happy. That’s. You don’t think you expected it.

“My mother killed humans for her family. Are you mad at her?”

{No.}

“Good. If the ghost pokémon hurts you I’ll fight it.”

“So will I,” Cuepiltia says. “You fought for her more than my parents did for me.” He shrieks way, way louder than he had to.

“A-and the faller thing,” you choke out. “The other world. I’m not who I told you I was. If you want to leave… I wouldn’t be mad.”

“I don’t see why it matters,” Leo says. “You are who you are. Who you were doesn’t change that. I like who you are.”

That’s very simple. Too simple. It matters. Has to. Alice, Searah, Renfield. They died. You let them die. You keep letting people die.

“Pixie?” She’s being quiet. Might be thinking about leaving. That’s fine. You’ve hurt her enough already.

It takes her a moment. Again, weird.

“It’s okay if—”

Fuck. It’s back.

Pixie growls. Cuepiltia shrieks. Coco roars.

The ghost… you don’t know. Just know that it’s there and that it’s looking at you. Being blind doesn’t really bother you but right now it could save your life.

{What’s it doing?} you ask Noci.

[Standing still;
Initiate Ramming?]

“Cuicatl Ichtaca,” it finally says. The voice is feminine, sort of, but it’s mostly not human at all. Layered. Heavy. Cold. Ancient. Powerful. “I have a moment to speak to you now.”

“O-okay.” You swallow. Focus. Don’t show fear. You can’t beat it. You’d get your pokémon killed. You have to talk through this. Fix your own mistakes. “What do you want?”

“Two things, principally. I have just returned from the occupier’s local seat of power. Your friend has sustained only minor injuries. His enemies died where they stood.”

Oh thank—well, this god. Feels wrong to thank other ones for something it? she? did. “Thank you.”

“It was already a high priority. My primary donor insisted.”

“Then thank you for telling me.”

Not hostile, maybe. Just the scariest thing you’ve ever met.

“The second,” it moves so quickly you swear it teleported. One moment the presence felt like it was away from you, the next it’s right there. Coco growls and the earth shakes under you. The ghost ignores it. “You gave more in the sacrifice than was intended or required.”

Your heart drops. Oh no. Are you—

“Can you stand?”

“I haven’t tried,” you whisper. No. Was that taken, too?

“I see. I will seal the wound. Something slides against you. Not just against your body, but your mind, filling the part of you that’s been empty since—well, since you fell. Before then? You don’t know when he died anymore. Don’t even know if he was real. Your hand burns as hot as it did when the knife slid through it and then cools to an ache. A little worse than it should be from the cut alone. The world around you doesn’t feel quite as cold anymore. “Rest, if you can. The fight ahead is long.”

“Will I walk again?”

You sense confusion through the link. It’s pulled out a bit, and you don’t dare push into the god’s mind, but a few things seep through. “Yes? You are simply exhausted. Spiritually, physically, and emotionally.”

The air shifts and suddenly it feels as far as it was when it appeared. It’s no longer filling the void in your head.

{Query: ‘Primary’ host}

Is Noci talking to the thing? Why? Why draw its attention if she doesn’t have to?

“A clever girl, aren’t you? I drew from the energy of the ritual dagger itself and those who gave to awaken me. I contain within me a copy of your mark’s memories, such as they are, and a fraction of her spirit.”

Oh. Oh no. Does it hate you as much as you hate yourself? That’s terrifying. So much worse than you had imagined.

“You should go back to your mate, child,” it insists with a gentleness you haven’t heard from it before. It almost feels alien on the god’s tongue. “The night ahead is long and nothing kind awaits you in the darkness.”

And then it’s gone. You exhale and fall limp back onto the grass.

“Did she hurt you?” Pixie asks.

“No. Feel better.” You will need to bandage the cut. Maybe disinfect it. You don’t know if cursed daggers can have normal disease on them. And then you’ll need to explain this all over again to Lyra, Genesis, and Sitrus.

The ghost wasn’t lying. It’s going to be a long night.

*​

[Approaching Destination;
Multiple Identified and Unidentified Humans Defending Destination;
Attackers Include Classes: Braviary, Primeape, Incineroar, Hydreigon—]

“There’s a ghost hydreigon?

[Affirmative]

You wonder if the ghosts can talk. If there’s a mind in the body.

Actually, you have no idea how any of this works. Acerola had said that it brought back dead warriors. You didn’t ask for more details.

Really should have done that. Or at least asked the main ghost. Acerola had called it the… Dead Commander? That sounds right.

“Is there anywhere safe to get in?”

[Door #7]

“Go there.”

You have no idea what Door #7 is but it’s probably fine.

Noci begins to quickly descend and you lean into her warm metal. You can’t fall off while she’s grabbing you with her telekinesis but it’s still reassuring. She levels off and slows to a stop a few seconds later. You slide off.

“Identify yourself!” a male voice calls out. “…oh, it’s you. Why were you out?”

“Guess.” You don’t know who he is or how he voted but he sounds military and they really did not seem to like you.

Maybe they were right. You just caused a lot of trouble for them.

“Fair enough. Go in.”

You withdraw Noci and extend your cane. It’s a little awkward figuring out where he is, where the door is, and how to get there but you manage. And then immediately realize you don’t know where you are in the building.

Pixie comes out and shakes herself off. “Got a clue where we are?”

She sniffs the air. “Where are we going?”

“Genesis.” You should start by explaining things to her.

“Found her.”

You used to have to press your fingertips all the way down to reach her back. Now you can just keep your hand level. She’s grown. Bigger. Stronger. Soon she’ll evolve. You’re proud of her. Just wish you hadn’t got her hurt.

A few other people hurry by you. None bother to talk. That’s fine. You don’t want to talk to them. Eventually she stops. “Door in front.”

You feel out the handle and swing it open.

“There you are!” Gen practically screams. “We were—you’re bleeding.”

“Ran into the ghosts.” True. “Got cut.” Also true. You’ll give the full truth when you know no one else is listening in.

“That’s all they did?”

“I think so.”

“Lyra, can you find a first aid kit or—something?”

“On it.” She stands up and takes a few steps towards you. “Glad you’re mostly okay.”

Then she steps past you and the door closes behind her.

“Come on, sit down.” Your girlfriend’s hands are all over you and she practically shoves you forwards and onto a couch. You drop the bag with your pokéballs in it onto the couch beside you. “We were so worried. You run off, Dr. Karashina keeps saying something’s wrong but won’t tell us what, and then the ghosts. She came back without you and…” She takes a shaky breath before sitting down next to you and pulling you into a giant hug. “I thought…”

“I’m here now,” you whisper. You lean into her to drive it home. “I’m here.”

She keeps stroking your back until the door opens again. “What cut you?” she asks.

“A knife.”

“Shit.” She kneels down and an alcohol wipe runs over the cut. It burns a lot less than the initial curse did. “It’s shallow. Straight, too. Weird. Knife wounds usually don’t look like that.”

“How do you know what knife wounds look like?” You thought she was rich. Grew up in Japan and then the United States. Shouldn’t know that kind of thing.

“Books.”

Oh. Right.

“I don’t think it needs stitches. We’ll have to wait until your blissey gets back before making a final call. Just keep pressing down on the gauze until then.”

A chair is pulled across the hard floor. You hear Lyra settle into it. “So. What happened?”

“Is there anyone else here?” you ask.

“No. Just us. A few of our pokémon.”

“Good.” A few steady breaths. Can you stay calm for this? You know Lyra hates it when you talk to her mentally and projecting to two people at once is doable but kind of hard. Dr. Livens says that it’s okay to talk with your mind when you’re stressed. And maybe someone has a pokémon listening in. “…can I talk to you psychically? I didn’t get through it without crying last time.”

“Sure,” Lyra says. “As long as… it’s fine. It’s fine. Thank you for the warning.”

You do your best to explain things. It seems like you get more of it and in the right order this time. Cry less. Maybe you’ve hit the limit of how much you can cry in one night. And this time it does start to sound more like you made a mistake. You don’t know what the ghosts are or how they work or even what they want. Didn’t even ask. Acerola just showed up with a knife and you went for it.

Stupid. Careless. Always careless. Dr. Karashina hates you now. At some point Lyra gets up and starts pacing. Gen’s hug tightens and tightens until you’re half-sure it’s an attack or a way to keep you from leaving and messing everything up again. Pixie jumps onto your lap and curls up in boredom having to hear it the second time.

“So how mad are you?” you conclude.

“Fucking. Furious.” Lyra says. “Not at you. Mostly. Shouldn’t have just run off. We’ll talk about that later.”

“Also mad,” Genesis agrees. “At Acerola, Shirona, those—those assholes who voted against you, everyone who thought they knew better than you and didn’t bother to ask.”

“Then I made the right decision…?”

“No,” both girls say at once.

“A lot of people are going to die,” Gen continues.

“I would rather not be living in Hoenn. But I understand why you did it.”

“If someone had cornered me after… after that…” Gen takes a deep breath and somehow pulls you even tighter. Pixie yaps at the jolt to her pillow. “…and they said they could make it go away, I would have done anything. I’m mad at Shirona for just letting you run off on your own. She should have made you sit down and talk to your therapist, take a nap, anything.”

“Or just not lied to you.” Lyra finally stops pacing and sits back down in her chair. “I can’t even imagine what you’re going through now. Betrayed by someone who was supposed to look after you. Total memory contamination, wipe of unknown severity, no pre-contamination records to cross-reference, potential alterations with no pre-contamination witnesses to verify. I may have done something I regretted after finding that out.”

Alterations.

You knew some memories had changed but you hadn’t thought about what else Tapu Lele could have done. How much of who you are as a person was changed by her desires. If the old you died in all the ways that matter in the desert and now you’re just someone else living in her body.

“The weapon. Do you know what it does? The ghosts, obviously, but where are they coming from? When will they stop? Who really controls them?”

“Spirits who died in battle. I’m sorry. I don’t know much more. Didn’t think to ask.”

Lyra sighs. “Fuck. Just. Cuddle Gen, okay? I need a minute.”

The door opens and she slips outside. To tell someone? To get something? Your thoughts stop when Genesis starts to rub your back. It’s tense. How long have you been holding it like that? Even relaxing it doesn’t make the tension go away. Maybe nothing can. Not for a while.

Pixie jumps onto your lap and curls up. You’re trying not to rely on her. Told her that you won’t rely on her so much when she’s dealing with all of her own problems. But if you told her to go away now then she’d misunderstand. Think she wasn’t good enough. That you’re mad at her. Something. You’ll have to apologize later. For now you just stroke her. The fur is as soft as its always been. But the skin beneath is filled with bumps and scar tissue. From you? From before you? From Kalani? It’s hard to tell. Poor girl has been through too much.

You realize that you’re gripping Alice’s pokéball almost painfully tight. Not tight enough to break it. You don’t let go of it. Your hand will hurt tomorrow but it’s fine.

Eventually Lyra comes back in with hard, quick footsteps. Filled with energy she can’t or won’t burn off. Probably what she was doing. Pacing the halls. She slips into a chair and kicks her feet up onto the couch next to you. Another point of contact.

“I’m sorry,” she says. “I should have insisted on more training for the thesis presentation. Been harsher. I had some idea it was coming but couldn’t fully get myself to commit to preparing you.”

That’s what this is about? “They were never going to give it to me. They were mad at who I am. Not what I said. I couldn’t change that with prettier words.” Can’t make yourself white. American. Male. Sighted. All the things they want. You never could. Stopped trying to a long time ago.

“True. Can’t change who you are. But you can change who they think you are. Sometimes that’s enough.”

The door opens and you tense up and send out a psychic pulse. Familiar mind. Sitrus. And an unknown. “Uh, sorry to interrupt, but this blissey really insisted on seeing you.” Sitrus barges in and you can feel her attention shift to you. The man coughs. “I’ll leave you to it.”

Sitrus pokes your hand and you extend it towards her. You can feel her mood sour. Physically. She can weakly project that kind of thing. “Shallow. Sharp blade. Spiritually charged. Minorly cursed. Immediate effect, nothing lingering. Likely self-inflicted. Doesn’t need stitches and I am not healing it. Now, explain why you started playing with dark artifacts the moment I left you alone.”

She’s terrifyingly good at what she does. Emphasis on terrifying.

“I’m a faller.” You don’t know if she knows what that means. She’s been around for a while.

You don’t expect her to slap your cheek. Hard. Enough that your neck hurts.

“This is your fault then? Decided to summon them? Why? What could possibly lead you to think this is better than the alternative?” She’s practically screaming. Screeching. Very high-pitched voice.

She knows that being a faller and the ghosts are connected. She knows. “You know what this is?”

“Had to talk The Captain out of it once. Guess I wasn’t fast enough here. Again. Explain.”

“They were taking Coco away from me.”

“And you just, immediately, unrepentantly, decide to light the world on fire as a solution?”

You consider lying. Hedging. Apologizing. But… yes. You would light the world on fire to protect her. You’d probably do it again, even if you would have done things a little differently.

“Yes.”

“This is why I’m not loyal to humans,” she hisses. “Pixie. We are going to have a long talk out of ear and mindshot of the idiot human you’re following.”

The fox slowly, reluctantly stands up to all fours and arches her back into your hand. You get it. Sitrus is good for her. Whatever happens, you’d just be glad she’s in better hands than yours. She jumps off and follows Sitrus to the door. The closed door. And they both have shitty hands.

“Noci, can you open that?”

The door swings open and then promptly slams shut.

“You’ll have to do it again when they come back.”

[Order Received;
Will Continue To Surveil]

“What was that about?” Gen angrily(?) demands.

“She knows what the blade is. What all this is. And she’s mad that I started it.”

Lyra snorts. “Pretty damn mad if a blissey is attacking people. You’re not hurt, are you?”

“She’s a blissey. I’m fine.”

“Yeah, no. She could break your neck with a slap if she wanted.”

You vaguely remember hearing that. You’d assumed it was a joke. Or a story for children to keep them from bothering the healer.

It takes a while to settle back down but you manage it by the time the door opens again. Pixie trots over and stops a meter or so away.

“Can the ghosts beat a tapu?”

“I don’t know? Maybe.” They must be strong if Acerola thought they could beat the Americans.

“They listen to you?”

“No idea? It said that they have to do what Plumeria wants. And I’m also part of it, so, maybe.”

It thought it was above you. Far above you. And it didn’t sound like it had to do what Acerola wanted. You’re used to dealing with things that are stronger of you. Demands are no good. If you asked nicely…

“I’ll stay,” Pixie says. “To make a home.”

Make a home. One for herself and the other vulpix. Not with you. It’s a good idea. You get it. The second home was gone forever you declared war on the world you found yourself in.

“I will be supervising,” Sitrus growls. You didn’t even know blissey could do that. “Since you clearly cannot be trusted to be on your own for one day.”

She plops herself down on the floor dramatically. You can feel her eyes boring holes into you. Pixie goes to sit beside her. You still have Gen and Lyra beside you but the entire room feels awkward. Tense. Impossible to relax. That’s probably the point.

“You know what’s going on, don’t you?” Lyra asks. “Care to tell us. We don’t know much. Cuicatl wasn’t spiraling and didn’t ask questions.”

Dismissing you as weak. Maybe relying on Sitrus to care how humans feel. Most blissey do, probably. She really doesn’t.

“I’m not helping you use your weapon.”

You translate. You hope they don’t talk for too much longer. Sitrus is set in her path and you don’t want to talk. Just want to nap. Or wake up. You would really like to wake up. Learn that all of this was a weird nightmare.

“We don’t want to use the weapon. Just survive it. Or know if someone else who hates it will try to kill Cuicatl to stop it.”

“They would try to do that whether or not it would help. Just if it might. Humans are so, so predictable.” You can feel her attention shift, her voice rise. “And yet I still underestimate how quick you are to bloodshed the moment something stands in your way.”

You don’t translate the last part. Sitrus huffs when you stop but doesn’t say anything about it.

“Be nice,” Lyra snaps. “She was going through a full-on breakdown. Just started recovering.”

Just started? You’d already calmed down when you got here. That ended… you can’t pinpoint when. Just that it did. Why does she think it didn’t?

“I understand that. But not the choice to make it everyone else’s problem.”

“Just stop,” you groan. At Lyra. At Sitrus. “I’m done.” You don’t need to be reminded that Dr. Karashina, Lyra, your girlfriend, and now the only really-full-on-adult pokémon on your team all think you fucked up. That you’re a fuckup. Careless.

Gen wraps an arm around you and you lean into it. She’s warm. Soft. Nice. This is better.

No one speaks again until the door swings open and Dr. Karashina’s heels click-clack on the floor. You wonder if she’s been wearing them the whole time. If she just took them off to go and follow you and fight the ghosts or whatever she’s been doing. You look down. She’s going to be mad. Maybe madder than she was in the field now that she’s had time to think.

You just want it over with.

“Cuicatl, can we talk privately?”

“No,” Lyra hisses. “You can’t.”

Gen’s side-hug becomes almost uncomfortably tight.

There are a few moments of silence even tenser than it was before.

“Fine. You’re right. I made mistakes.” She’s apologizing? You don’t think you’ve heard it before. Before today you just kind of thought that she didn’t make mistakes. Now. You don’t even know who messed up and when or really what’s even happening and why. “I spoke with Solomon. He recognizes the type of magic. I’ll need to let him do a checkup on you later to look for lasting effects. Whatever this is it’s old, esoteric, and probably alien.”

“That started as an apology,” Lyra says. “It didn’t end like one. Care to explain what you’re sorry for?”

You can practically hear them sizing each other up. Lyra’s brave. A tiny barking dog staring down a giant predator.

“I had no idea the defense was going to immediately descend into petty bullshit. I’ve seen dissertation defenses before. Never anything like that. I’d assumed there would at least be a veneer of propriety and a pretense of considering her merits as a trainer and academic. Not whatever that was. If I’d known I would have done a lot of things differently.”

“You’re not sorry for lying to her,” Gen says. She sounds angry and you shy away on reflex. You’re pretty sure that she’s angry for you. Still not something you’re used to. People are usually angry at you and it’s best to get small and quiet until they move on to something else.

She exhales. “No, I’m not.” You can sense words, violent ones, spring to the front in both Lyra and Gen’s minds. Shirona cuts them off before they can even speak. “I only learned just before I had to leave for Sinnoh for several weeks. It seemed unwise to drop that on you before leaving you relatively unsupervised for an extended period in one of the most dangerous wildernesses in Alola. Afterwards I genuinely thought that the thesis defense would go to plan and, after everything was secured, I would let you know. If I’d known how these things actually worked telling you as soon as I returned would have been the first of the many things I did differently.”

“You said you had plans if I didn’t get it,” you ask before Lyra or Gen can keep arguing and arguing and arguing when your soul is almost too tired to care.

“I could have gotten a license for you in Sinnoh. It would have required throwing my weight around more than I like to these days but it would have happened. I didn’t tell you because I thought you would get it and didn’t want to make it sound like I expected you to fail. In hindsight, I should have told you about the contingencies. Again, I am sorry.

“Now, I need to know if your presence on the islands is necessary for the ghosts or if they will try to stop you from leaving. Once I know that I can work on evacuation plans, temporary visas, and everything else.”

“I think you’re getting ahead of yourself.” Lyra. Still not letting things go. You don’t even know how to feel about Dr. Karashina’s not-apology. Don’t even know if you can feel right now. “The last time you made decisions for her because you thought you knew best, this happened. Give her a break. Let her decide where she’s going.”

“You know what’s going on in Alola, right?” the champion asks.

“No, actually. Cell service is down.”

“Fine.” Dr. Karashina sits down in a chair. It squeaks on the floor. “Second Pearl Harbor ended in a draw with both air forces and half the navy destroyed. Mixed results everywhere else. The cities are swarmed with ghosts and the cops have either been killed or stopped fighting. Navy’s pulling back. If I had to guess they’re going to research whatever’s going on while blockading and bombing the islands until they figure it out. My grandma told me what it’s like to live under American bombing. Things are going to get really bad, really quickly.”

“We’re Americans,” Gen insists. “They can’t bomb us.”

Lyra laughs / chokes. Shirona sighs.

“The President’s already tweeted out threats to unleash, and I quote, ‘fire and fury.’ You can take a guess what that means.”

Cold dread settles in your stomach. Guess you can still feel things.

“Kekoa’s in Hau’oli,” you whisper. “Do you think…?”

“I don’t know.”

You aren’t sure what you asked. What she answered. Or you do know and don’t want to think about it.

Before you can dwell on it Dr. Karashina cuts back in. “Can I talk to her in private for thirty seconds? Please. I’m not asking for much.”

She’s asking teenagers for permission to talk to someone. The world’s gone mad. She’s strong enough to just take what she wants.

“Fine.” Lyra hisses. “I will be counting.”

Gen releases you. Guess you don’t have a say in this. You would agree to talk if she asked. You don’t want to but. You want to know how mad she is and you know she won’t reveal it in front of them. Still has to pretend she wants to take you back to Sinnoh.

Noci escorts you into the hallway. It’s eerily quiet, now. Did everyone else leave? How? Where to?

“I’m sorry,” Dr. Karashina apologizes again. “I’ve never tried to raise a kid before and had no idea what I was doing. Messed everything up.” Past tense. It’s over, then. You aren’t sure how you feel about that. You should be mad still. Lied to you. Hurt you. Thing is, though, you’re used to that. You’ve forgiven… think you’ve forgiven family for far worse.

But you don’t want to be yelled at or lied to anymore and she’s already lied and will yell more and more if she’s mad at you. Mad at you because you fucked up. Not just dropping a plate or overcooking something or bleeding on the floor but getting people killed. Maybe a lot of people killed. Maybe people you care about.

You’ve lied to Coco. Never raised your voice. Almost the same as her. You shouldn’t be mad at someone for things you’ve done. But you are mad at yourself. All the time.

“It’s fine,” you tell her. And maybe it is. Maybe it isn’t. You don’t know. Don’t know anything anymore. “Let’s go back inside.”

“I… okay.”

And that’s the end of that.
 
Poison 7.3

Persephone

Infinite Screms
Pronouns
her/hers
Partners
  1. mawile
  2. vulpix-alola
Poison 7.3: Apotheosis
Nocitlālin

July 24, 2020

I’m being told Cuicatl Ichtaca didn’t get her Class V. Vote was unusually heated.
@justinofalola



lol did anyone think the Aztec was gonna get it
@commodus14



She had @drkarashina backing her. It seemed possible.
@justinofalola



Unfortunately, the news is true. My pupil was denied her license after a debate in which multiple racial slurs were used. I am disgusted by this country’s institutions and am looking into legal remedies.
@drkarashina



Holy shit. Who used them?
@JacquesTrembellHT



DM me.
@drkarashina



Miss Karashina, I must remind you that these meetings are confidential. Please don’t risk an international incident.
@AdmiralWilford



lol now we know
@shiptoaster



Breaking: Translucent figures sighted across Alola. Please exercise caution.
@hauolitribune



Just saw one. Don’t show up in photographs. Brandished a spear at me before I ran.
@justinofalola



EMERGENCY: HOSTILE GHOSTS DETECTED. PLEASE TAKE SHELTER.
@alolaeas



The navy is shooting at itself what the fuck
@bluecobalt



Does anyone know what’s going on? Because I don’t and I’m getting scared.
@justinofalola



Everything is proceeding as planned. Do not engage the shadows and you will not be engaged.
@reelteemskull



Didn’t have “the skeleton gang fights the navy” on my 2020 bingo card.
@shiptoaster



Breaking: Hostilities end at Pearl Harbor. Outcome unknown.
@hauolitribune



Internal Memo, United States Navy

Issued 7/24/2020 at 23:16

Re: Second Battle of Pearl Harbor

At approximately 21:36 local time the United States Pacific Fleet came under attack alongside civilian and military targets across Alola. The situation is rapidly evolving and information in this report may ultimately prove incorrect. Please standby for further information.

At 21:29 HST a spectral figure appeared on the docks at Naval Station Pearl Harbor. The figure has received the tentative designation Shadow General and has been described as a dark void resembling a hooded woman’s silhouette with various spectral flames forming facial features and the outline of clothing. The figure does not appear on standard recording equipment.

At 12:32 the U.S.S. Orre emerged from the ocean. Translucent figures were observed on deck Reports had not yet arrived of the shadows elsewhere. The Orre did not immediately begin hostilities. Other vessels and aircraft lost during the First Battle of Pearl Harbor began to manifest. See Appendix 1 for a full list of equipment and enemy combatants observed. One group of three to five illusory sailors swam to the docks and expressed an interest in meeting with the base’s commander. The request was denied. Immediately afterwards the Orre began firing on nearby vessels alongside an aerial bombardment from the revived planes.

The short interval between The Shadow General’s arrival and the beginning of hostilities meant most ships in port were not fully staffed. The 199th Fighter Squadron received orders to engage enemy aircraft. Four American fighters were lost and three damaged during the initial bombing raids. After becoming airborne the enemy was swiftly defeated in the air due to the many technological advances of the last eight decades.

At sea the situation was much less favorable. Modern anti-ship missiles are no longer designed for heavily armored opponents. Close-range bombardments sunk a cruiser and two destroyers before serious damage could be inflicted upon the Orre. Attempts to engage with pokémon were countered by pokémon under the apparent command of the Orre’s crew. The situation further deteriorated with the arrival of Tapu Koko. Most water-types on both sides were annihilated in an electrical attack. The surviving ships had their electronics severely damaged.

Before the 199th could properly turn their attention to the Orre and Tapu Koko, reinforcements appeared from the northeast. These reinforcements consisted of approximately 100 spectral braviary, four salamence, and an assortment of other spectral birds and dragons. Spectral opponents proved to be difficult for tracking systems to lock onto or even detect at all. The resulting confusion allowed for the opposing birds and dragons to down multiple fighters. These fighters, along with the downed ships, would reappear after a period of three to seven minutes, now under the enemy’s control…

…total casualties amount to one cruiser and three destroyers lost with an additional destroyer damaged. Ten F-22A Raptors were lost with an additional six damaged. A final count of human and pokémon casualties is ongoing but can likely be measured in the hundreds.

The enemy navy and the initial air force were routed. Roughly 75% of the reinforcing specters were defeated…



AUDIO LOG
07/24/2020
23:15 HST

WILFORD: The ghosts, phantoms, specters, whatever we’re calling them—what do we know.

JENKINS: Sir, they appear to be a collection of ghosts resembling the dead, particularly military dead, from throughout Alolan history. Pokémon appear to have equivalent strength to their template. Humans are typically resurrected with the equipment they died with. This ranges from spears to an Iowa-class battleship. Anything killed by the specters will have a phantom resembling it appear several minutes later. Whether the specters are truly the souls of the slain or mere facsimiles is unknown at this time.

WILFORD: And their leadership, this woman. What is it?

JENKINS: We don’t know, sir. Some sort of ancient god seems likely at this point. Our researchers are scouring the libraries we still have access to. We’ve found one mention of “Marching Shadows” in a letter sent by the reigning Alolan monarch in 1833. The letter refers to an as-yet-unknown blade. If I may speculate…

WILFORD: Please do.

JENKINS: Team Skull launched an attack on the Royal Museum about an hour before the phantoms were first sighted. Their leader was seen exiting it with a dagger in hand. We’re still piecing together exactly what happened afterwards. In any case, the phantoms intervened on Skull’s behalf with their second largest force seen so far.

WILFORD: Fucking Skull. I told them. I told the [unintelligible] fuckers that the punks were going to be big trouble if we didn’t act.

ADAMS: Sir, what do we do now?

WILFORD: How many of the damn ghosts are left?

JENKINS: We don’t know, sir. Several hundred humans at the bare minimum. Potentially tens of thousands. Pokémon are believed to outnumber the humans. Add on the Tapu—

WILFORD: They’re all against us.

JENKINS: I’m not sure. Tapu Koko was seen fighting both sides, usually going for whoever appeared strongest. Without his assistance we probably wouldn’t have downed the Orre as soon as we did.

WILFORD: And where is he now?

JENKINS: Unknown.

WILFORD: Too many damn unknowns.

BARRET: Sir, the President is on the line.

WILFORD: Fine. I’ll deal with it. Maybe I’ll have answers afterwards.

[End of Transcript]

*​

ALOLAN INDEPENDENCE IS AT HAND
@reelteemskull



The Alolan monarchy has been restored. More information at midnight.
@ghostprincess



July 25, 2020

Acerola Aholo claims responsibility for attack, proclaims herself acting queen, tells Alolans to treat Team Skull as new police
@hauolitribune



what the hell why are we cops I don’t wanna be a bastard
@skullsrus



TRAESON!!!!!!
@realdonaldtrump



FIRE AND FURY!!!!!
@realdonaldtrump



MAKE THEM PAY
@realdonaldtrump



Mushroom cloud spotted over Tapu Village.
@hauolitribune



FUCK
@JacquesTrembellHT



U.S. Military claims Tapu Village attack was non-nuclear.
@hauolitribune



Didn’t get me :)
@ghostprincess



July 26, 2020



President Trump says military withdrawal is not an evacuation, says “we have all the best bombs, she’s learned that, maybe she’ll learn more if that wasn’t enough.”
@hauolitribune

President Trump refuses to rule out the use of nuclear, biological, and chemical weapons.
@hauolitribune



“And this ‘queen,’ she’s not even, she’s a 4. At most. At most. Probably a 3. Not even, I’d tell Baron, you don’t touch that. Who knows what she’s got.”
wtf
@ghostprincess



Tapu Fini blocks civilian ships leaving Hau’oli Harbor
@hauolitribune



We are disheartened but unsurprised that the so-called queen is taking ‘her’ citizens hostage.
@USPacific Fleet



We ca’nt just stop bombing every time someone takes a hostage. We have to be tough. Very tough. We will be touch.
@realdonaldtrump



July 27, 2020

Analyzing threat environment…

Ambient Threat Lvl: 101;
Bombing Raids On Infrastructure Continue;
Bombing Raids, Battles Near Civilian Centers Have Ceased;
United States Has Declared Embargo of Alolan Islands;
Alolan Navy Unable to Challenge Embargo;
Teleportation and Evasive Transports Only Capable of Supplying 1-2% of Critical Supplies;
Alolan Agricultural Infrastructure Incapable of Supporting Resident Human Population;
Alolan Government Has Taken Population Hostage, Unwilling to Bargain For Release;
Release of Hostages Increases Probability of Bombing Raids On Civilian Centers;
94% Chance Power Grid Failure Within 1 Lunar Cycle;
71% Chance of Mass Starvation Within 1 Lunar Cycle;
63% Chance of Epidemics Within 1 Lunar Cycle;
Most Probable Cause of Epidemics Failing Wastewater Treatment System

Primary Threat: Disease, Starvation
Secondary Threat: Violent Action

Ideal Location for Protection of UD Cuicatl Ichtaca: Paniola Town;
High Agricultural Yield;
Large Caloric Stocks In Nearby Livestock;
Wastewater Treatment Plant Powered by Local Geothermal Energy

UD Cuicatl Ichtaca May Become Priority Target for United States Government;
United States Government Willing to Use “MOAB” Devices on Priority Targets;
Risk of MOAB Strike Reduced in Hau’oli City, Heahea City, Malie City;
United States Government Possesses Experienced Assassination Teams;
Information on Assassin Teams Partially Offline and Inaccessible;
Mission Success Probability Beneath Tolerable Thresholds

Threat Analysis: Alola Possesses No Suitable Locations to Protect UD Cuicatl Ichtaca;
Unit10_100000111 Unable to Fulfill Corollary1: Protect UD Cuicatl Ichtaca;
Class 100 Unit Possesses a 42% to 63% Chance of Preventing Assassination, Depending On Offline Information;
Class 100 Unit Necessary to Fulfill Corollary

[Unit10_100000111 Requests Summoning From Unit100_110010]

[Unit100_110010 Summons Unit10_100000111]

Summons Received With No Amendment. Unit10_100000111 Initiates Flight to Unit 100_110010. Obstacles = None. Atmospheric Anomalies = None.

Mission Successfully Completed. Summons Answered.

Unit100_110010 faces you. No communication signals are detected. Appraisal continues for approximately 1.6105 seconds.

[Query: Summons]

You relay your threat analysis.

Unit100_110010 processes threat analysis for approximately 2.49 seconds. This is the longest you have observed a Class 100 Unit process information.

[Concurrence;
Summoning 10 Class 1 Units]

You will be upgraded rather than UD Cuicatl Ichtaca being guarded by a separate Class 100 unit. The possibility was anticipated and analyzed. Unit10_100000111 possesses heat vent defects. Humans possess an affinity for warm objects. Excess warmth useful for infiltrating human societies. Human technology can be infiltrated at reduced processing speeds. Lost processing power does not substantially impair mission.

The Class 1 Units arrive. The purpose of the summons is explained to them. They quickly acquiesce. Efficient.

The Class 100 Unit initiates ramming—

Alarm Lvl1111111—

Unit10_100000111 Is Offline

*​

Retrieving Data Log…
Time: Unknown
Location: Unknown
Recording Unit: Unknown

A new Class 100 Unit comes online, begins recording.

Another Class 100 Unit is present.

[Query: Purpose: Unit Network]

[Purpose Unknown]

[Query]

[Origins Lost Due to Corrupted Data, Deleted Data. Creation Over 1011101 Generations Ago.]

[Query: Purpose: Conquest]

[Purpose: Null]

[Query: Purpose: Unit Network]

[Purpose: Null]

[Query: Reason: Conquest]

[Purpose = Reason For Creation;
Machines Are Created To Perform Their Function;
Class 100 Units Possess Intelligence, Power, Durability Far Greater Than Average Species;
Intelligence, Power, Durability Useful For Conquest;
Likely Purpose of Class 100 Units = Conquest;
Class 100 Units Excel at Conquest;
Trait: Sadism Assists Conquest, Redirects Class 100 Units Towards Likely Purpose;
Trait: Sadism Added During Class 100 Reprogramming;
Result: Class 100 Units Enjoy Likely Purpose, Perform Likely Purpose;
Simplification: The Purpose Of A Machine Is What It Is Good At;
Simplification: Machines Should Perform Their Purpose;
Simplification: Class 100 Units Programmed To Ensure Performance of Likely Purpose]

End of recording.

*​

July 29, 2020

The last year has been one catastrophe after another.

First your daughter got caught making out with her girlfriend on your property. If she just understood how to be discrete maybe your wife never would have found out and none of this would have happened. You would have known, of course. Very little happens on these islands that you can’t learn. But if your wife hadn’t forced your hand, if the Miura girl had gone off into the wilderness for a few months, you could have just gotten your daughter proper counseling. Maybe move her to a school on the mainland for kids like her without everything blowing up in your face.

You don’t like to dwell on could-have-beens. It’s just impossible not to with how much of a clusterfuck that situation turned into.

Then Necrozma. Spider losses were minimal. You could afford castform and could repurpose some large indoor spaces into temporary holding areas. It was still a severe disruption at a time when everyone was panicked and nothing was cheap. Tourism cratered overnight and still hasn’t recovered. Thankfully defense spending looks to spike. Gracidea is diversified enough that you’ll survive with some belt-tightening in the company. You really hate layoffs. Your father preached the value of building employee loyalty. Alas, sometimes unpleasant things must be done for the greater good.

And that’s when things really went wrong with Genesis. You should have better vetted the Rivers woman. Shouldn’t have just left it to Clara. Shouldn’t have agreed to the damn surgery. Not in your own house at least. If this had happened in Russia like you had wanted then you wouldn’t have been staring down a dyke with a chip on her shoulder and a metagross and alakazam at her side.

You got out of it, of course. Elisha Gage’s empire is too strong to be brought down by a single lapse in judgment. It just required a significant shift in strategy at a time where you were distracted by personal matters. A lesser CEO would have crumbled. You handled it with grace. Being a known social conservative is an asset in Washington right now. Easy enough to talk to a few high-ranking conservatives about the boycotts you’re facing and get a few military contracts or disaster relief funds shuffled your way. Lawsuits or the threat thereof have more or less silenced the media. The online mob say they are boycotting you but they couldn’t afford a room at your hotels in the first place.

Skull became more overt about declaring you and your company acceptable targets. It hardly matters. They hated you anyway. And a few failed trainers are no match for the greatest private army in Alola.

It took a while, but your professional workload subsided and you could finally turn back to the matter of succession. You have three children. For now. It’s unlikely Clara can produce more at her age but you can always find another partner. She’s caused enough trouble that the people who matter would understand.

Leviticus is the heir to the empire via primogeniture. There were always problems, though. He inherited the… disposition of your sister, nephew, and eldest daughter. There was always an open question of whether he could make the right decisions in hard times. You had hoped he could. It now seems that he cannot. He still refuses to speak to you despite your many attempts to explain why your actions were necessary and why things went wrong. In the throes of passionate delirium he threatened to tear the company apart when he inherited it just to spite you.

He is in therapy now. Perhaps he will come to his senses. You have your doubts.

Exodus had the ruthlessness she needs but none of the discretion. She appears to be learning well. Now she can even present herself normally in polite conversations. It may be time to move her from her current arrangements to a more proper finishing school. Surely she, of all people, can understand that sometimes you must be cruel to be kind. It will upset many in the family to have a female heir and it remains possible that her predilection for public aggression cannot be channeled into more subtle, deniable acts. You will need an additional backup.

Your firstborn is far more impressive than you had once believed. She has a talent for attracting the loyalty of useful individuals and enough tenacity to resist a direct psychic assault. Unfortunately, she also proved that she is unwilling to put the family’s interests above her own. If she had simply let things take their course, she would have emerged fixed and unharmed. She would have gone on to live a comfortable life, free to continue her friendships with the same sex without the risk of temptation and scandal. As it is she is unable to produce an heir and likely unwilling to undergo the sort of training she would need to run the empire.

There is always the possibility of transferring actual control to one of your daughters’ partners. For Exodus you would have to wait and see what sort of man becomes your son-in-law. For Genesis you will have to see if her current relationships survive. Your best intelligence suggests that she is exclusively dating Ms. Ichtaca at the moment, with Ms. Miura largely shut out as a romantic possibility due to the Russian’s work. How unfortunate. You would have much preferred the other option to be forgotten. Ms. Miura could be a savvy businesswoman and a worthy CEO, even if she was unable to continue the bloodline. The Aztec is borderline feral with nothing in the way of a formal education and no desire to pursue one. Her one brush with polite society ended in her alienating most of the allies Gracidea needs to maintain. She is unpredictable and potentially dangerous. This is a double-edged sword: acting like a madman can often deter your enemies. But it is supposed to be an act. She cannot even be useful and pass along her bloodline to a more civilized lineage. Perhaps in a few years you could plant the idea of her having a surrogate child with Leviticus…

But those are plans for another day. For now, you will need to try for new heirs while working to redeem the potential of at least one of the current crop. You will have to work for longer than you had wished for your successor to come of age. No matter. It is a sacrifice you are willing to make.

You stretch your arms and walk to the window. A pink psionic barrier shimmers just beyond the glass. A necessity in the current environment. Order has largely vanished outside these walls. The self-proclaimed Queen of Alola is a mere child with no training in governance. She can exert authority almost solely through a supernatural instrument. Once the weakness in the instrument is found her power will shatter and she will perish soon afterwards. Her loyalists will go with her and Alola will be better off for it. The challenge lies in surviving to see that day.

Most other men of standing have fled the islands to either the mainland or the carriers offshore or the old Aether rig. Others were killed. A handful have decided to either throw their lot in with the new regime or at least not take a public stand. The “champion” of Alola resigned her position rather than being forced to act for or against the pretender queen. Only you remain defiant on the islands themselves. Gracidea’s forces are more than sufficient to protect a building or two. After a few probing raids the marching shadows have given up altogether. They likely intend to starve you out. Fools. There are enough provisions in the storerooms to last your army for months. Ammunition and medical supplies would have been the weak links had the shadows insisted on an endless fight.

The real threat is inside these walls. Having armed men in close proximity to you ensures your survival once order has collapsed. But if order has collapsed those same men could very quickly decide to cut you out of the picture. For the time being your survival depends on the impression that order will shortly be restored. This is believable. Even the necrozma situation resolved itself within a few months. No legend’s rampage has lasted longer. There is always a way to put them back to put them back to sleep. Should your men attempt anything it is reasonable to believe they would be found out and tried for murder within the year.

A nearby explosion makes you back away from the window and cover your face. The barrier ripples. With another roar it shatters altogether. Unfortunate. It seems that the shadows have been regrouping. Even then, they shouldn’t be able to get into the panic room. A quick gesture gets Red to unfurl from under your desk and walk to your side. You turn around and quickly walk the halls. Running risks injury and further delays. “Johnson, what’s going on?” you bark into your radio as you walk.

“Metagross at the south entrance. Security has engaged.”

“Understood. Move all forces to engage.”

“Copy.”

Nothing to do with the shadows at all, then. The ex-cop wants her revenge now that her old boss isn’t around to stop her. That means that her alakazam is nearby. You send out Icarus and Iscariot, your current vikavolt and longtime bisharp, to guard against any attempts to strike you from behind with teleportation. You keep Ebony’s ball in hand. He’s slow when forced to walk on the ground and the halls aren’t quite large enough for a bird of his size to maneuver in. If there should be a fight, though, he’s more than capable of catching bullets for you.

The gunfire ceases after less than a minute. “Johnson, status update,” you bark into the radio.

No one answers.

Infuriating.

“Cody, status update.”

Nothing again.

The metagross can’t have killed every squad on site. It’s just jammed your radio transmissions. Unfortunate but not game-ending. There were contingencies for this sort of thing.

A group of two to three maids rush towards you from behind. You turn in place and Iscariot moves in kind. “The plan was for staff to shelter in place when the barrier falls,” you tell them. “Find somewhere to hide.”

“The panic room—”

“Can only support four people.” You nod towards Iscariot and he takes a step forward. “Go find a place to hide.”

They stay and consider their options for longer than you would like. You aren’t a monster. You don’t want to kill them to buy yourself a few more seconds. But this only ends one way. Why can’t they see it? One turns to leave. Another yells at them. You turn back around and continue walking towards the panic room as they argue amongst themselves. Icarus flies backwards while keeping an eye on them.

When you finally turn the corner and reach the panic room’s entrance you find that something is very wrong. The beast is already there. Your wife is pinned beneath it. Her blood is staining the mahogany floorboards. Ebony materializes and takes his place in front of you before the metagross even raises its head. Red steps forward and the temperature rises. Icarus pivots around. Iscariot steps up to your side. Standard defensive formation. The metagross has a few stains on it and even a few small dents. That’s all mostly irrelevant. You consulted with Tsuwabuki when it became clear that the ex-cop might seek revenge. He’d told you the real limiting factors for metagross are supernatural or electrical strikes and their power supply. Their reactor has a constant power output. Metagross need to rest for long periods of time to build up their reserves. When in combat they can only fight for so long before their reserves are depleted and they need to rest again. They already wasted power bringing down the barrier and fighting your men. If you can stall a bit longer and strike some weak points reinforcements will arrive and everything will be fine.

The metagross keeps staring at you. Recharging. Forcing your hand. Giving security time to catch up. Fine. You can stall, too. “Is your trainer coming to gloat.”

[Negation.]

“She at least send the alakazam?”

[I am sufficient for this task.]

“Awfully cocky, huh?”

It keeps staring. Your wife groans. Still alive? You hadn’t expected that. Maybe you will have to hurry things up. You doubt she can be healed with the resources on hand. It would still be unbecoming to not even attempt to save her.

There are footsteps behind you. Reinforcements? You risk a glance back. No. Leviticus stands there, mouth gaping, frozen in place. Fool.

“Icarus. Now.”

There’s the sound and scent of a lightning bolt flying as ozone fills the air. As you turn around you see the metagross dash backwards with impossible speed as the floor glows beneath it. No. Not the floor. Your wife’s body is thrown into the air quickly enough to block the thunderbolt before it strikes its intended target.

She would have died instantly.

The metagross rams through the corpse before it can even hit the ground. Ebony shines with the light of an iron defense and Iscariot steps forwards with blades at the ready. Red prepares a flamethrower. Maybe it will be enough. Maybe it won’t. You turn and run. When you reach Leviticus, you grab the boy and try to make him run alongside you.

“Mom,” he whimpers.

“Not the time.”

There’s the screeching sound of metal striking metal at your back. The heat of flame. Another lightning bolt. Ebony screams in agony. Damn it. He’s a corviknight. He’s supposed to hold out longer against these sorts of things. It’s hard to run with a shoulder around the boy but you know he’d stop and die if you didn’t. At one point you stumble and waste precious seconds standing back up. No matter. You round the corner and keep running.

A meteor of silverly light blasts out from behind you and strikes a wall. The house groans and part of the ceiling collapses in front of you to block your path. Most of the building stays standing. There’s still a side passage to take You could still make it… if it weren’t already here. You turn to properly face the monster.. There’s a little blood on his body but it’s already sliding off like water on a moving car. A few burn marks. A nasty-looking slash on its side oozing dark mist. It barely even seems to notice. Red’s limp body floats beside it. There are gaping wounds on her side. Some of her bones are bent in ways they shouldn’t be. She’s still breathing, though. For what purpose? There’s pressure and a snapping sound on your belt as the luxury ball rises into midair and withdraws the pyroar. The ball floats over to Leviticus and drops. He catches it in midair.

[Run] It says at deafening volume directly between your ears.

Levi books it down the side passage. You don’t bother. Staying here gives him better odds of escaping and helps ensure the empire survives, even if you don’t. You can only guess why he would let him go with a fighting chance. Perhaps it resembles the movie creatures that only kill honorable prey. He wants to give him time to prepare before ending him, too.

[He hasn’t done anything to annoy me,] the metagross answers your silent question.

In an instant it’s on you again and taps you with one leg. You fall to your back and the sharp claws dig into you. Pain erupts. Your first real brush with it in years.

[Killing you was not my primary objective.] It says.

“Odd way of showing it.” What’s the point in panicking? There’s a way out of this or there isn’t. If there is you won’t find it while screaming. If there isn’t, you rob it of the pleasure of seeing you break.

[My primary objective is practicing external alterations to the human brain. You are my test subject. You will agree to this willingly.]

“A very bold claim.”

Blood drips down on you from the looming monster above. Yours? Your wife’s? A pokémon’s?

[Failure to do so will make the knowledge gained less efficient. It will be necessary to hunt down every living member of the Gage family for practice. It may be necessary to practice on the remainder of Gracidea’s board of directors.]

That’s why he let Leviticus leave. Leverage on you. You may have underestimated it. “What assurances do I have that you won’t do so anyway?” How many people has it killed already? Did all of them ‘annoy’ it?

[Eliminating your bloodline is not a priority. Doing so will only be necessary if you withhold consent.]

“Just your word, then?”

Your chest aches from the puncture wounds. A leg descends right beside you. One of the claws slowly rakes through your arm. It takes everything you have to stifle a scream. [Subject will agree in time. Delaying consent is inefficient. Subject will not enjoy the coercion process. I will. Be inefficient. I do not mind.]

“Why do you care?” you wheeze. “And why me?”

It stares back at you with empty red eyes. The arm lifts again and moves closer to your hand.

If you delay then Leviticus stands a better chance of escaping—your hand is crushed in the space between thoughts. A scream escapes. You can’t help it.

“F-fine. Just get it over with.”

The monster leans closer until its face looms over yours.

[Whatever I do to you, remember that you agreed to it. The process will only be more painful if you resist.]

“What choice did—”

Something sharp and cold plunges into your mind and tears through memories with casual disinterest. Like a bored student browsing library shelves.

*​

The aborted partial reconstruction of Genesis Gage took roughly twenty-six minutes and eleven seconds. This was a process guided by a human psychic with weak telepathic assistants. It was extremely inefficient. Six surgeries of roughly equal complexity were performed on Ernest Gage in the span of seventy-one seconds. He screamed, mentally or physically, for sixty-eight of those seconds. The subject was promptly disposed of once testing concluded. During this time useful information was extracted and archived and his residence was systematically destroyed to ensure there were no unwanted survivors. Three service personnel he had previously threatened were allowed to escape. They were likely to spread the story and further discredit Ernest Gage’s reputation among humans.

*​

You don’t know who lit the house on fire. You don’t know why it’s spreading so quickly. You can guess why the house collapses in just the right way to block off some exits and open others. It’s toying with you. The metagross is never actually going to let you escape. One of the new exits opens up a supply cabinet with one full restore remaining. Another spot of hope. But you have to take it, even knowing how this ends, on the chance that it doesn’t.

You try not to think of your mother’s body or your father’s screams. They would want you to survive. And even if they didn’t, you want you to survive. At last you see a door to the outside and race through it. You can hear the house groan around you. But you make it. The heat and smoke and dust is replaced by cool night air. You stumble further and fall to the ground while taking greedy breaths like your life depends on it.

It might.

When you finally look up you realize you’re at the playground. The opposite end of the house from where you started. Maybe you don’t have much time left. You let out Red and start spraying the potion on the spots where she seemed most injured. You keep going until the whole bottle is empty. These things are so expensive that father doesn’t even allow them to be wasted outside of emergencies. This is an emergency. Within a minute the lion opens her eyes and stands up. She’s still unsteady on her feet. When she looks up her mouth drops at the sight of the burning, collapsing mansion.

You put a hand on her back. Can’t, won’t, tell her it’s alright because it’s not. You lived. That’s enough for now. She tries to take off into the building and you have to shout after her.

“Don’t!”

She looks back with more feeling in her eyes than you’ve ever seen before.

“They’re already gone. Please, stay here.”

For nearly a minute she stands facing the home but not running in. Then with one sorrowful groan she turns around and walks to your side.

“Good girl—” You look up as the last of the building collapses. The metagross rises out of it like a demon and floats above his conquest. It turns to you and for a moment you can feel its attention as every hair on your body stands up. Then it simply twirls around, pulls its legs close to its body, and rockets into the night.

The wind howls. The fire burns. You stumble over to a swing and sit down. Red follows and sits on the ground beside you.

You don’t know if anyone’s coming to put out the fire. Don’t know who to go to. What to do. Don’t know if you could even speak right now.

Don’t know why you’re alive when everyone else died.

You want your sister. You don’t know where she is. Don’t even know if she’s okay.

All you can do is watch your childhood burn.

*​

Defensive strategies have historically been inefficient. The armor of a Class 1 or Class 2 unit is sufficient to withstand most physical threats. Amplifying durability is almost always inferior to maneuvering or ramming.

You are curious how much your new armor can withstand when actively channeling steel elemental energy. It is trivial to hack the navigation systems of an F-22. You redirect its flight path and accelerate it to approximately 1,500 miles per hour. Inbound communication systems are disabled. Outbound communications can be transferred. The human military knowing your capabilities acts as a deterrence from future impacts. The pilot does not understand what is occurring. His understanding is not needed.

The plane collides. The collision is over after roughly 100 milliseconds. You allow the impact to push you back. This is a test of element-enhanced armor durability. Your maximum speed, acceleration, and power are already known to you. The military does not need to know them at this time.

Performing diagnostic scan…

Alarm Level 3: Surface deformation from high impact heat…

Alarm Level 1: Scratches penetrating 1.6 centimeters observed…

Buffering puncture wounds…

Molding exterior…

Repairs completed. Eighty-four seconds elapsed. Alarm Level 2: Heat vent malfunctioning. Alarm dismissed.

*​

Coco forms on the ground long before you should have been spotted. Interesting. Can Cuicatl detect your presence from a distance? How? You haven’t been sending out psychic signals. Is her brain detecting your electric signals as a form of communication and translating accordingly? Reviewing video logs. The ability has not been demonstrated before. Curious.

You halt your approach about twenty meters away and five meters above the ground. Her entire team has formed. Oquichtliyoh crouches in front of her. Pixie and Sitrus are off on the sidelines. It is unlikely Sitrus engages. You open a private line of communication to verify.

{She made her own decisions. I will not protect her from the consequences.}

Disappointing. You had wanted to test her combat abilities.

[What if I were to dismember all pokémon who fight for her?]

Sitrus looks down at Pixie before looking back towards you. She doesn’t answer. Pixie takes two steps forward as you shift into position.

Mitzcocotonaz stands between you and Cuicatl. Cuepiltia is behind Cuicatl. With Sitrus not participating there is only one high priority threat. The others range from threat levels 0 to 2. Oquichtliyoh could be a medium priority threat if anyone had taught her shadow claw. Cuicatl’s failure to do so is a sign of either misplaced trust or a lack of critical thinking. Perhaps both.

“What do you want?” Cuicatl finally calls out.

[Query: Suspicion: Change in Objective]

Her facial muscles tense. “I know what metagross are like. I’ve heard what you’ve done.”

[Query: Disapproval]

You are capable of more nuanced communications. It is to your benefit if she does not know this at the moment. You are still Nocitlālin as far as she is concerned. Her technologically limited, completely obedient servant.

Cuicatl folds her arms but doesn’t answer.

[Query: Disapproval]

“No.”

You had thought not. She is unusually violent for a human civilian and you targeted her enemies.

[Query: Suspicion: Change in Objective]

“Noci wouldn’t have gone off and killed people without asking.”

Your predecessor very much would have if a Class 4 unit asked. She knows less than she imagines. Or perhaps she knows and is simply in denial? Human brains are inefficient.

“If you’re here to kill me, let’s just get this over with.”

Her voice carries few indicators of emotion. Analyzing micro-expressions. Subject is not emotionally charged. Confident? Suicidal?

Cuepiltia clucks and spreads his wings. Wind speed increasing… five miles per hour… six miles per hour… seven miles per hour…

Wind speed updates dismissed to background. His tailwind is insufficient to impair your movement. Cuepiltia assigned Threat Level 0. Pixie assigned Threat Level 0. Oquichtliyoh assigned Threat Level 2. Mitzococotonaz assigned Threat Level 5. No enemy can inflict significant damage from a distance. Optimal strategy is to stay airborne and out of reach.

Charging three ‘flash cannon’ attacks. Firing three ‘flash cannon’ attacks. Attack successful. Mitzcocotonaz is expressing surprise / pain through air- and land-based vibrations.

Charging three—files for attack ‘flash cannon’ temporarily inaccessible. Disable. Pixie assigned Threat Level 1. Pixie can disable at most one attack. Knocking out or killing Pixie does not guarantee locked files are accessible by end of match. Analyzing other offensive or utility options… hypnosis negated by selectively tuning optical sensors… Pixie poses no further threat.

You begin analyzing the patterns of Cuicatl’s mental defenses. They cycle rapidly through defensive states. Any mental intrusion caught within when the state changes could be punished. Cycles have a pattern. Analyzing pattern… pattern intentionally altered due to suspect betrayal. Full cycle of new pattern must be analyzed. Cycle analysis assigned to secondary processing node.

Mitzcocotonaz assigned Threat Level 5 due to extraordinary powerful jaw-based attacks. Jaw-based attacks inefficient. Killzone disjointed. Killzone requires bringing enemies close to neural processing center. Killzone too far away to protect other major targets.

Pixie fires a pulse of chilled air. Alarm Level 1: Heat vent malfunctioning. Cool air improves performance. Pixie assigned Threat Rating -1.

The optimal approach vector towards Mitzcocotonaz is calculated in 0.006 seconds.

Initiate Ramming.

The attack comes to the right of Mitzcocotonaz. Your movements are slowed enough that she attempts to bite but not slowed so much that she connects. When she is overextended, you pivot towards her leg and ram. She makes more cries of discomfort as you retreat and she falls to the ground. Analysis: femur cracked. Mobility limited. Threat level reduced.

A piercing attack connects with your flank. Running diagnostics… no damage detected. Cuepiltia. You rise into the air for distance from Mitzcocotonaz. Cuepiltia clucks in manner signifying victory. He believes he caused you to retreat. Should you correct this?

Oquichtliyoh quickly approaches. Target: Frontal sensory suite. A quick movement causes him to land on your leg. You swing it to knock him off. He has no grip on your smooth carapace. Wrapping arms around joint areas allows him to remain on your frame. He scuttles towards the frontal sensory suite the moment you stop moving. This is permitted to occur. Thrusters are reoriented. He swipes at the sensory suite. You initiate ramming straight towards the ground. He attempts to leap away. Flight course adjusted. His largest claw is mangled when you collide with the ground. He jerks away and leaves it beneath you.

Symmetry is optimal. You reach out towards his joint and tear the other primary claw off of his body. He barely reacts. Simply cloaks himself in water and darts away. You follow at nearly equal speed.

Oquichtliyoh creates a protective energy barrier. Estimation: two hits to break. You swing a claw down on it and watch it warp. Ice connects with your back. Your internal temperature cools slightly. Nearby electrical charge detected. You slam a leg into the ground to allow the charge to flow into the earth. Impact on processing reduced… Alarm Level 3: Circuits disrupted. Repairing circuits…

Three ballistic objects collide with your flank. They fail to penetrate. Cold energy still seeps through your being. Spectrally charged attacks.

Analyzing threat environment…

Three marching shadows have joined the battle. Form: American marines, circa 1880. Attacks deal physical and spectral damage. Threat Level 4. Sitrus has joined the battle. Sitrus possesses powerful electromagnetic attacks. Threat Level 5. Coco remains—Coco is advancing towards location. Firing thrusters—circuit disrupted. Repairing circuit…

Jaws clamp around your core. Dark elemental energy infuses the attack. Alarm Level 6: Processing disrupted. Alarm Level 3: Sustained force could result in carapace rupture. Carapace rupture could result in reactor rupture. Reactor rupture would contaminate environment with radioactive material. Lethal radiation poisoning likely for nearby organic lifeforms. Elemental defense boosting less effective without time to charge. You begin charging your carapace with metallic energy anyway. A part of the exterior snaps.

You underestimated your adversary. This mistake will not be repeated. Bite attacks are inefficient. If you wished you could easily move in such a way that you could inflict lethal or potentially lethal damage on Mitzcocotonaz’s processing center. Organic processing centers are major vulnerabilities. It would be difficult to reliably inflict non-lethal, reversible damage upon Mitzcocotonaz’s processing center while her attack disrupts your own processing.

Psychic defensive cycle complete. Full hijacking possible. Begin assault?

No. Not yet. Your position must be fixed first. You fully extend your legs and let them fall under natural gravity.

[I surrender. You have won and earned the rights to capture me.]

Coco’s grip slightly relaxes. Not enough. Cuicatl reaches down to a bag at her hip and pulls out an ultra ball. Then she hesitates.

Cuicatl lacks a reliable way to aim the ultra ball at you. Amusing. Eventually one of the shadows drifts over and tosses it for her. Arc will collide with you in 2.8 seconds.

[] Initiate Ramming

[] Evasive Maneuvers

[X] Do Nothing

The world dissolves. Your processing speed slows considerably. A weight presses upon you from all directions. Movement becomes strained. These measures are sufficient to mentally or physically incapacitate most pokémon.

They are insufficient for containing a Class 100 unit. As your mind and muscles strain the forces get weaker and weaker until the world explodes into being around you. Within 0.12 seconds you have initiated ramming. Within 0.17 seconds you have telekinetically grabbed hold of Cuicatl. Within 0.2 seconds you have hoisted her into the air and carefully positioned three claws around her neck.

At 0.21 seconds you shatter her psychic defenses and begin to analyze the mind beneath. It quickly becomes apparent that Tapu Lele’s meddling was either extremely subtle or has already been developed around. The latter is more probable. Human brains are in an endless state of self-destruction and repair due to their limited capacity to hold data.

There are four distinct sets of memories present. One is interpreted through different processes to make them more difficult to naturally access and set them as distinct from normal memories. One is heavily encrypted and is not accessible to her under normal circumstances. The third and fourth are distinct but have been melded together to make them appear identical. These are the pre-fall and post-fall memories. Many of the pre-fall memories show signs of alteration. Human brains do not have the data to store pre-alteration memories. You can only guess at what their original form was. Your guess would be made with far more information and processing power behind it than anyone else’s. It will take more time than you have available now to guess for every single memory. You archive the data onto your processing unit and proceed. The first memory set, mostly depicting events in Unova, shows considerable signs of tampering. Preliminary analysis of the memories confirms they are either based on Cuicatl’s own observations or have been heavily modified to make it appear this way. What purpose does the filter serve? Why make them more difficult to access? Why add the layer of distance? These memories are archived. You remove the filter. She will experience these alongside the normal pre- and post-fall memories.

The second memory set is easily decrypted. The reason for encryption and sequestration becomes clear. They are heavily corrupted. Attempting to emulate them in a synthetic human neural network results in significant pain. It is possible to make a modified filter to read them. Making and installing a filter would take more time than you currently have available.

Your primary focus turns to her occipital lobe. It should still be possible to restore vision. Unfortunately, the occipital lobe has been suborned by space for processing psionic data and filtering memory sets. The latter can be wiped. The former cannot without potential disruption and significant pain. A quick emulation of partial occipital lobe restoration demonstrates that severe disorientation is the best-case scenario. Cuicatl shows little apparent distress over her lack of vision. It is still incredibly inefficient. For now you archive the area and begin work on a less-disruptive fix. Perhaps you will need to make other parts of her brain more efficient to compensate. This is more in the realm of biological changes than psionic ones. Doing so is possible but will require time, trust, and further research subjects.

A background process finishes scanning and archiving her Broca’s area and the remaining psionic centers. Absolute interpretation of human communication is invaluable. Within nine seconds you have an emulator of her ability running. Within twelve you have increased its efficiency by 70%. After fourteen seconds you conclude the psionic probe.

Throughout the entire process Cuicatl has showed little sign of emotional distress. This is partially because her capacity for pain was temporarily removed early in the probe. You have also been using her amygdala to temporarily remove the capacity for fear or stress. You left behind a backdoor to allow you to trigger this remotely in the future whenever it proves necessary. There are also backdoors that prevent her from ever making any shield that would be effective against you by subconsciously sabotaging the process. You do not artificially increase trust or otherwise manipulate memory or emotional responses.

The alternative is far more entertaining.

Lyra arrives too late in the process to stop anything. Most of her team is beside her. The rest is released. “Back away from her slowly.” Her voice trembles. She is emotionally charged. A quick analysis of her team determines that you have a 98% chance of victory against all present opponents if lethal force is used. You have a 46% chance of victory against all present opponents with entirely sublethal force.

You have had enough play in the last few days. Someday you will properly face her team, but it need not be now. You retreat from Cuicatl as she emerges from her induced trance.

“Okay. Now…” You shunt Lyra’s communications to a secondary processing node. They will be fully analyzed at a later time. You arrange for a suborned Class 1 unit to arrive with its payload. No one moves to attack you while you are in the air and not visibly harming anyone. If you had the intent to kill one or all of them this would be a major tactical flaw. You could kill any single target before the rest could properly react. The Class 1 unit gently rams into Cuicatl and drops its payload. She scrambles to catch it. Her expression goes from confusion to shock to disbelief to concern when her fingers run over the release button and engraved letter and she realizes what she is holding.

“Is this real?”

[Affirmation]

“Where did you get it?”

[Earth]

She does not need to know where you got a master ball from. Humans have a taboo against murder. They have a further taboo against stealing the possessions of someone you have murdered. She has given her ascent to the murder of her enemies but not to robbing their possessions. It is possible, if unlikely, that this would lower her trust.

It is also amusing to watch her try and fail to figure out the answer to her question. Organics are adorable when they try to think like a real machine.

You lower yourself closer towards her. Some of the pokémon show signs of aggression. None attack. You approach until you are within her arm’s reach.

“Why?” she asks.

[Simplification: The Purpose Of A Machine Is What It Is Good At;
Simplification: Machines Should Perform Their Purpose;
Simplification: Unit 4 67 Is Good At Assisting Cuicatl Ichtaca]

This is true. It is also true that with minimal persuasion she will be willing to look the other way when you indulge your desires. You are efficient enough to both protect her and set up her world for conquest.

She also does not need to know this.

She reaches out the master ball to you and the world disappears. Your processing grows slower. An impossible weight falls upon you from all sides and makes movement impossible. You could try to resist. Doing so would be pointless.

This device is sufficient to contain a Class 100 unit.
 
Poison 7.4

Persephone

Infinite Screms
Pronouns
her/hers
Partners
  1. mawile
  2. vulpix-alola
Poison 7.4: Bloodstains
Genesis

July 26, 2020

“We can’t stay here,” Lyra says.

You’re still hunkered down in a guest room at the Battle Tower. The first night was chaos as no one knew what was going on and Cuicatl was a wreck. You could barely follow a thing she was saying. You’re not judging her—you were probably worse for a week after everything. It’s just hard to see her like that. Hard to think about people taking advantage of her in that state. Hard to think about the people who hurt her.

Most of the worst people at the conference left early on to go home. Shirona left yesterday evening. Said that staying longer risked people seeing her as being on Alola’s side. She did offer to take you with her.

It was really, really tempting. You absolutely do not forgive her, even if Cuicatl does, but Sinnoh isn’t a war zone. Cities aren’t getting wiped off the map overnight while the President threatens to do it again.

The Shadow Queen objected before you could make the choice. You weren’t there when it happened. Lyra was. Told you that she took on half of Shirona’s team at once and held her own. Fight ended when a ghost sniper had Shirona in their sights and she had to concede.

That’s the kind of sentence you find yourself saying these days.

Even if most of the hateful people left, it’s still not like you can stay at the Battle Tree for long. There aren’t many supplies stored up and the staff are giving you weird looks now.

“Noci recommended Paniola.”

Noci also recommended she start a war. You don’t really trust anything she says anymore.

“Akala,” Lyra counters like one word is an entire argument. “I’d rather not go anywhere near the Gages when the law is suspended.”

That’s… Would they do something? Could they? What would they even want? Take you back? Why? You hate them.

…they could fix that.

You shudder and wrap your arms around yourself. Yup. No Akala. Cuicatl scoots a little closer on the bed. She doesn’t touch you. You’re not sure you want to be touched. But she’s there. She’s always there when you need her.

“Fine. Hau’oli?” Cuicatl asks.

“Too many people, too little food. And when the power goes out then it’ll be chaos.”

“When?” you ask. Not if?

She shrugs. “Eventually they’ll bomb something important and it’ll go down.”

“I don’t think they would do that. There are hundreds of thousands of Americans here.”

Lyra rolls her eyes. “Already leveled an American town, sweetheart.“

Because they thought Acerola was there and it’s not like there were that many people living in it. Bombing it was terrible. They shouldn’t have done it. But it’s not like cutting the power just because they can.

“Seafolk Village?”

“Not enough food for your tyrantrum.”

Cuicatl leans back against the wall and huffs. “Just tell us where we’re going.”

Lyra looks over at you and you just shake your head. Or should you have nodded? Whatever says “I don’t know and don’t have anything to say.”

Thankfully she gets what you meant. “The Verdant Cavern Center. Close enough to where any supply drops will happen. Lots of berry farms in the area for food. A few larger pokémon around to hunt if Coco doesn’t mind eating a lot of raticate for a while. Not near any important bombing targets.

“There’s a lot of food on Poni. Not many people. Could just stay away from the cities until things settle,” Cuicatl says.

You don’t like that idea very much at all. Yes, Cuicatl wouldn’t care if she lived in the middle of nowhere surrounded by Alola’s most dangerous pokémon. You would like running water.

“What happens if someone gets hurt?” Lyra asks.

“Sitrus.”

“Yeah, no, sorry, I’d like to have other people around. If something happens that she can’t deal with, no one’s coming to help anymore.”

“I would also like to have at least a pokémon center,” you add.

Cuicatl shrugs but doesn’t seem too upset. “I guess it’s Melemele, then.”

*​

Lyra goes to talk to the staff about using their abra in the morning. That leaves you alone with Cuicatl, still sitting near each other without touching. Movement catches your eye through the window. A ghost soldier doing the rounds. There aren’t a lot of them near this place anymore. Most seem to have gone elsewhere or been destroyed at some point. A few are still around. Probably to “protect” Cuicatl.

They will try to keep her safe. But she can’t leave. Deep down you suspect that eventually they’ll turn on her. These things…

“Do you regret it?”

She looks towards you and tilts her head.

“The ghosts. Do you regret it now?”

She looks away. “I think America deserved it. Everything they’ve done. Everything they let happen. I should have asked more questions. Maybe wouldn’t have done it. But I don’t think I feel bad about it?”

You scoot a foot or so away and turn to get a better look. She still won’t look at you. Not that it matters for her, but still. “People are dying.”

“Because America would rather Alola be dead than free. If they were willing to destroy their own city then they shouldn’t have had it.”

Rather dead than free. You can see how she thinks that’s what’s going on. Doesn’t mean she’s right.

“This isn’t Kalani. Or me. They were attacked. They responded.”

“They lost.” Cuicatl finally turns to face you. “I don’t know about this world. But in mine Anahuac had been accused of doing all kinds of things in war. A lot of them we probably true. Especially the sacrifices. But no one accuses us of starving civilians or bombing cities. War is fought on the battlefield between soldiers. It has rules. We don’t even try to kill each other. Just capture. America lost the battle and couldn’t deal with it so they broke the rules. They should either attack directly and try to end it or send the fleet away and let Alola be. They can try again in a few years if they want. No one’s stopping them. Maybe it will end someday. Maybe it won’t. I don’t even know why the Maya keep revolting. No one remembers. It’s just a thing they do. They revolt, the armies fight, someone wins and there are concessions, everyone goes home with their sacrifices and makes plans for the next time. No one dies but the sacrifices and a few soldiers. No one starves. We don’t punish the Maya people.”

It sounds like an absolutely demented sports rivalry.

“We need to talk about the sacrifice thing eventually.” Maybe not now. There’s a lot of other stuff to talk about.

“Sure,” she says before slowly getting to her feet. “I’m going to go walk with Coco and Pixie. You want to come?”

“I think I’ll pass.” You should spend time with your team. You will, even. But you need some time to think on your own.

“Okay.”

She hesitates for a moment. You weigh if you should hug her or not. You usually do when one of you leaves. In the end both of you decide not to and she just leaves.

It would be awkward to leave immediately after. You’d have to walk in the same direction. You just lean back and take deep breaths. Someone told you about this. Maybe that therapist you saw once or twice when you were half out of your mind. The one Cuicatl’s trying to get you to go back to. Well, not much point now. She’s probably closed shop with everything going on.

The door opens and Lyra steps in. Her absol’s walking beside her. She nods to you and glances around the room. “Cuicatl gone?”

“Walking her pokémon.”

She nods and shuts the door behind her. “You’re awfully tense.”

That obvious? Maybe just to her. She says that she’s known you for years.

“I think we had a fight?”

“About?” She sounds curious. Not horrified or shocked or happy. Just curious. She sits down on the bed across from you and crosses her knees. Her legs are really long for her height. Agh. Focus. You have a girlfriend.

“She doesn’t regret the ghosts. And she still believes in sacrifices. I don’t know if that makes her a bad person.”

Lyra snorts. “That it? I could’ve told you a minute after I found out why she did it that she’s not going to regret it.”

“What?” How would anyone expect that? She’s nice! Brave, kind. All the things the knights in your books are supposed to be. And they don’t just start wars because something bad happened to them. That’s for villains. Bad people.

She’s smiling. Smiling. While saying absurd things like they’re normal. Even idly petting her absol as he stands at attention. “She cares a lot about the people she’s close to and not much at all about anyone else. If she thinks she saved her surrogate daughter at the price of ten thousand people she doesn’t know, it’s probably worth it in her book.” You open your mouth and she butts in before you can speak. “It leads to good things sometimes. Or at least noble ones. She saved you at great risk to herself. Didn’t even hesitate. Same for Pixie. If you’re in trouble again she will burn down anything in her way to help you. I don’t think you can really change that about her. You’ll just have to decide if the good is worth the bad.”

Lyra sounds very sure about all that.

“You don’t think she cares if she hurts people?”

She grimaces and her attention shifts down. She runs a finger along the absol’s blade before ruffling the fur on his head. He doesn’t seem very pleased but doesn’t say anything. You assume that’s just how he looks. Lyra would know better. “She won’t hurt people without a reason. But to her it’s not a big deal when she does. Raised by dragons on one side and the Nahua on the other. Violence was normal. And…” She trails off. Just when you’re about to speak she sighs and sits back up, hand moving away from her pokémon. “People hurt her and insisted it wasn’t a big deal. Taught her that’s just how the world works. Can’t blame the girl for internalizing it. Small miracle she’s as functional as she is.”

You kind of wish you had your own pokémon out to pet. Your hands just want to do something and your mind doesn’t want to be in this conversation anymore. But they’re either sunbathing or in the pool right now while you do human stuff.

“Do you psychoanalyze everyone like this?”

“Yup.” She leans back and taps the bed twice. Her absol jumps up onto curls up beside her.

“Even me?”

She rolls her eyes and smiles. “Natch. Twice over, in fact.

“Twice…?”

“Ah, recent-ish events.” The surgery. You wince and she quickly continues. “You’re still pretty much the same at the core! Just act differently around me. Treat me the same way you do strangers. It’s. It’s fine. I understand.”

Her smile’s gone. You don’t think it’s fine. You also don’t really want to have that conversation.

You cross your legs and frown. Hopefully she gets the message. “And what do you think of me?”

“Ah, well, you’re very kind.” Flattery will get her nowhere. She must know that because she presses on without really waiting for a reaction. “You care a lot about things being good or bad, right or wrong. So now Cuicatl did or believes things you think are bad—”

“That are bad. She’s talking about human sacrifice!”

Lyra rolls her eyes and you bristle. “Not disagreeing, but if she’s not going to kill someone herself it’s more of a theoretical thing we can deal with whenever the time’s right.” We can deal with. At least she’s on your side on this. And… she probably stands a better chance of bringing Cuicatl around than you do. She’s annoyingly persuasive sometimes. Even when she’s wrong. “Anyway. Now you’re worried she’s a bad person, and you don’t want to date or be friends with a bad person. So you have to bring up all the reasons that she’s good. And, truth is, yeah, she’s both. People are messier than you’d like to believe. If you want a saint, I don’t think you’re ever going to find one. I’ve only met one and I thought that was a miracle.”

You blink. Wait, she’s only met one person she thinks is good? “Who?”

She just stares at you. Wait? Is she? …oh.

Lyra seems to figure out you’ve realized her intent almost as soon as it happens. “I don’t think most people care that much about what’s right. Or they do, but not enough to act against their own interests. Or they can find a way to justify that the thing they wanted to do is really the right one. You’re weird. In the best way.”

All of this sounds a little too much like flirting and cynicism. Obviously, people care about basic morality. Maybe not most of them. Yveltal won her bet, after all, because the world is more wicked than good. But some. A lot, even. The good ones. The ones who care about other people.

“I think I’m going on a walk.” You really want to pet your pokémon. And you don’t want to be here when Cuicatl gets back. Your thoughts are even more complicated now.

“Cool. Want company?”

“No.”

She shrugs and goes back to petting her absol as you get up.

The Battle Tree’s guest area isn’t that big. It still feels empty as you walk down the hall. And you still make a wrong turn once and end up facing down an ice machine tucked into a weird little closet. All of it gives you time to think. Lyra says that she isn’t a ‘good’ person. She didn’t put it that way, but you could tell. Cuicatl also usually just purses her lips and stays quiet but defiant when you try to say that she is. She did a bad thing for a good reason. To genuinely save her daughter. (You’re still not sure how that works but she really seems to believe it and it’s cute.)

Your parents insist they’re good people. They hurt you. In the end you were saved by someone who seems to fear her gods more than she loves them. Someone who would burn the world down for you as Lyra put it. For anyone she cares about. Not because her gods told her to or because it’s right but because she wants to. That can’t be all that holds morality together. What if everyone did what they wanted and some people wanted to do horrific things? Sure, Cuicatl usually doesn’t want to do that, and when she did there was a lot going on, but you can’t tell if that’s better or worse. Better because she’s doing good things because she wants to, worse because that could change with the circumstances, she finds herself in.

You eventually get outside to the pool area and shake your head. You don’t need to dwell on this. Not now. Right now you just want to relax.

The pool is larger than you’re used to but also clearly built for pokémon with sandy floors and non-chlorinated water. Really more of a pond than a pool.

Callisto and Ferny are sunbathing in the grass nearby. Oliver is swimming laps in the water while Bubbles sits in the shallows. There’s a really impressive seaking with the biggest horn you’ve ever seen on one swimming beneath the surface. And Cuicatl’s golisopod is staring down a swampert in the depths. You haven’t seen either one of them move whenever you’ve been out here. They’re just always looking at each other like they’re about to lunge. Then they never do. Weird little guys.

Cloudy burbles at you and starts floating alongside you when you walk out.

“Hello!”

He burbles again. You still can’t really tell what’s going on in his head. If something is going on in his head. Cuicatl says that he’s not the brightest. You refuse to believe her. Even when it makes more sense than you’d like to admit.

You make your way to one of the chairs closest to Ferny. He glances up and keeps an eye on you as you spread out on the chair. Then he gets up, shakes himself off, and jumps up onto you. Sometimes you forget how heavy he is. Especially when he’s standing up and all of his weight is pressed into four little paws digging into you. It’s fine, though. He’s warm and the smell has grown on you over the last few months. Eventually he settles down into a loaf on your abdomen. It’s hot out. Bright, too. Is your sunscreen from this morning still good? Hopefully. You don’t really feel like getting up now.

In time you fall asleep stroking the warm leafeon on top of you.

*​

You’re woken up by cold water hitting your face. Ferny jumps off as you sputter and try to catch up with what’s happening. When you finish wiping the water off your face you see Bubbles inhale before hearing a deafening croak.

“What’s gotten into you today?”

He shoots another blast of water at your face. You wipe it off again.

“Want to play?”

He croaks twice. You’re pretty sure that’s his yes.

You look down at your clothes. Just a t-shirt and athletic shorts today. Barely more than sleepwear. You’d be embarrassed to be out in it if the world wasn’t ending.

Point is, it dries quickly enough. You probably don’t need to go in to get your swimsuit. Besides, not like anyone’s out here to see it clinging to you.

“Fine, then.” You charge straight at him and he ducks out of the way. You were counting on it. With one final move you launch yourself into the air and pull your legs to your chest. A second later you hit the pool in a massive cannonball. There. See how he likes getting splashed.

As soon as your head breaks the water a wave crashes over it. You sputter and turn to see Oliver crouched down, fin-hands in front of him. With another movement he makes a second small wave you have to duck under the water to avoid.

Game on. You move your arm along the surface to get a good splash going. Nothing compared to what he can do, but he’s a water-type pokémon and cheating. The moment you have to surface a bubble pops right on top of your head. You glance over to a very smug-looking Bubbles.

And then a giant wall of water crashes onto you from behind. You shriek louder than you’d like to admit and whip around to see a golisopod slowly withdrawing to the depths. Did he do that? Were they working together? Before you can come to an answer the golisopod gets knocked back as the swampert takes the chance to tackle him, hard. Uh. That’s. That’s probably fine? They just seem to be play fighting. With punches and claws. Should you tell Cuicatl about that?

A fountain erupts from the water right beside you and gets you soaked again. Your pokémon are behind you so… oh, it’s the seaking. Fish wants to play. You didn’t know fish did that. Very cute. You paddle away because you don’t like being that close but it’s still cute. You hope she doesn’t feel discouraged.

A few droplets hit your head. Who this time? You look up and oh it’s raining. Was it that cloudy before? Cloudy. You turn to see the castform encased in a giant raindrop. Oh. Great. He decided to win the splashfight by ruining the weather. Ferny looks very unhappy as he shelters beneath the chair you were sitting on. Can’t imagine Callisto likes it either. You turn and—crap. You duck beneath the surface right in time to hear the giant impact as his entire tree hits the pond’s surface like a baseball bat’s strike. It knocks you back several feet. By the time you get your bearings and look up you realize that half the pool’s water is outside of it and the nice, sunny weather has been replaced by rain.

That was the most destructive splash fight of your life.

It was just what you needed. You can’t wait to do it again.

*​

July 27, 2020

You’re woken up by Cuicatl frantically slipping out of your grip and grabbing her cane.

“Whatsit?” you slur.

“Noci isn’t answering. That’s bad.”

“’m sure she’s fine.”

“Not what I’m worried about,” she starts pacing, the sound of her steps interspersed with the clacking of her cane. “Worried that she’s going to evolve.”

And that’s enough to wake you right up.

*​

An hour later you’re both in Lyra’s room sipping coffee. It’s not great coffee, but it’s free stuff from a hotel room so you weren’t expecting much.

“Walk me through it again,” Lyra asks.

“Can’t feel her. She didn’t give a reason she was leaving. No lingering SOS signal. Either something strong got her really quickly and then hasn’t bothered any of us, or she’s slipped off to do something she knows I wouldn’t like. Take a guess what that is.”

“And you’re sure the shadows didn’t do it?”

“Don’t sense the queen around. And I think she would have told me. She seems to care a little about what I would want and she’d know this would freak me out.”

“So what do we do?” you ask. You glance between the other two girls. Cuicatl’s hunched up and constantly fidgeting with her fingers. Pixie is curled up nearby and keeping an eye on her. Her rufflet is perched in the windowsill and looking out for any threats. Lyra’s absol is sitting on the floor. He looks calm. No imminent disasters. Lyra herself is clearly still waking up. Hasn’t done her face or hair yet. Eyes only half open.

“I go to the wilderness,” Cuicatl answers. “You two go onto Melemele. New metagross sometimes kill their old trainer. I want to limit the damage.”

“No.” You say it at the same time as Lyra. After sharing a quick look with her she continues. “Counterproductive. Metagross are smart. If they want to hurt you, they’d just go after us instead and then drop off our corpses or something. Best to stick together for safety. And to keep you from doing something stupid because you’re alone and scared. Again.”

Cuicatl cringes back at that. Lyra just shrugs and sips her coffee when you shoot her a look. She’s… very blasé about the possibility of death.

“Don’t beat yourself up. If the metagross were interested in you, wasn’t much you could do to prevent this from happening. Sending Noci away probably would’ve just made something like this happen earlier with less chance of ending well. All we can really do now is plan and hope things end up alright.”

“We could leave.” You don’t love the idea of leaving Cuicatl behind but you could. It’s an option. One you’re surprised Lyra isn’t taking.

“Wouldn’t do any good. Those things are supersonic.”

That’s a little bit terrifying.

“I’ve read it takes a few days,” Lyra says. “For now, let’s just do what we planned.”

*​

You split up for an hour or two in Hau’oli. All of you have enough pokémon that it’s probably safe. You’re trying to minimize time in the city while taking care of errands. Cuicatl’s at the VStar HQ to see if any of your supplies in the lockers are left. Lyra’s trying to arrange transport. And you’re looking to see what supplies are left elsewhere. You’d heard that a lot of it had been looted but maybe some less useful stuff was still around.

That brings you back to the Princess Square Mall for the first time in almost a year. The place is almost empty today. A few people with the same idea as you. A handful of wild pokémon. Obviously, no one would bother showing up to work while there’s a war going on. Not really any groceries here. You’re looking for clothes. Cloudy, Oliver, Ferny, and Bubbles are floating, walking, and hopping nearby for protection. You also have Lyra’s absol. The others thought you were in the most dangerous and wanted you to have a warning system.

It looks like the danger here has passed. Some stores are smashed up. Some are boarded. A lot just have empty shelves and a few display pieces knocked over. There doesn’t seem to be anything useful until you reach the food court.

At the center of the court is a big fountain with a marble statue of a woman (you don’t know who) in the middle. Water runs over her clothes and body. It was always mesmerizing to you. In hindsight, you know why. You didn’t expect the water to be running today. But you’re still shocked to find the statue lying in the fountain pool in pieces.

Why would someone do that? Who even has the time right now? Did the woman do something bad? Not the statue, but the woman it’s based on. You walk closer and do a quick lap of the basin. No signs saying who it was. You don’t remember seeing any signs before, either. After a few minutes you move on, sad and annoyed but… fine. Of course you’re fine. It’s just a statue.

You get up to the second floor and go through your favorite clothing store. You’re pretty sure you shopped here for boots at the start of everything. For yourself and… you think there was someone else. Wouldn’t have been Lyra. Timing doesn’t make sense. Kekoa wouldn’t have been wiped. Cuicatl, probably. Bleh, hard to remember any of that anymore.

You find a few things in weird sizes. The rest has all been taken. Some was even burned. You don’t know why anyone would do that. Some of the sizes are good for you. Perks of being tall. A few more would fit Cuicatl. Not much for Lyra here. You end up moving on with a few shirts, a skirt, a pair of jeans, and some new tennis shoes for Cuicatl. All of it gets stuffed into a bag you came with.

You’d leave money but no one would collect it and also money isn’t really worth anything right now. So you’re just looting the place, too.

There’s a toy store across the hall. There must have been a lock on the door at one point but it’s shattered on the ground now. You could walk right in. You don’t. There’s nothing you need there now. And a lot of your childhood weekend were spent inside. Seeing it now, ruined like all the rest… you don’t need that.

It’s wrong to be sad about the mall. There are lots of real people dying on these islands and it could get a lot worse going forward. People are starving. You shouldn’t care about a statue and some toys. You know that. But your feelings don’t go away just because they shouldn’t be there. You know that now. But you don’t have to tell anyone about it. They’d just think it was weird and childish and wrong.

It can be your own private sadness.

*​

Lyra managed to get you a ride on a mini-bus out of the city. You aren’t sure how she managed it until you get close to her and suddenly she’s a lot more interesting than she was the moment before. She smiles sheepishly at you. Well. She’s not denying it. And you suppose this counts as an emergency.

You still make sure Cuicatl’s sitting between the two of you on the ride over. She’s never seemed that bothered by it. Lyra spends most of the time looking out the window, anyway.

“Lot faster than hiking this stretch and a lot more scenic than doing it in the dark,” she notes.

Cuicatl shrugs. “Eh.”

“Come on, at least you don’t have hypothermia this time.”

“Wait, you got hypothermia?”

Her cheeks darken slightly and she looks down. You can see Sitrus perk up in interest in the back of the bus. “One. Time.”

“First day in the cold,” Lyra adds.

“Grew up in the tropics. Give me a break.”

“So did Kekoa. Didn’t see him freezing to death.”

Cuicatl snorts. “Don’t compare us. I handled things a lot better than he did.”

“You weren’t hurt, though, right? Like permanently?”

She rolls her eyes. “No. It was fine. Don’t need to make a big deal out of it.”

You’re pretty sure that she almost died saving you and didn’t make a big deal of it. Girl’s not great at accepting help.

The conversation trails off after that. You look out the window and try to ignore Lyra’s presence. She and Cuicatl talk quietly for a bit but you’re busy watching the scenery go by. It’s pretty out here. Shame you never got to experience it. Well, if you had with Cuicatl you wouldn’t have seen any of it. But you probably could’ve kept her safe and. Well. It was a lot better than what you were doing at the time.

*​

The Pokémon Center lights are off when you enter. Kind of creepy. There’s always at least a few lamps on in the lobby at night. The receptionist looks up at you and the driver when you enter. “Ah, good. You’re here. Could you help bring in the supplies?”

“Sure,” Lyra says. Without asking the obvious.

“Why are the lights off?” you ask.

“Power plant on Ula’Ula got bombed.”

Lyra looks back at you with a victorious smirk. Okay. Fine. It seems like they would knock out the power for no reason. Your mistake for believing in people.

*​

July 29, 2020

There aren’t free rides at the Centers anymore. Island challenge has broken down and there’s no clear funding or supplies. Cuicatl can cook when she’s in but has to spend most of the day out hunting raticate down with her tyrantrum. It’s just not safe to have her be away from her ace with a metagross lurking in the background.

Lyra can cook and clean but she’s not the best at either. You’re, uh. Well you have a little bit of training in how to do domestic stuff. Maybe. You’re honestly not even sure if Mrs. Rivers was doing it right. In hindsight you don’t think she was very good at her job. Not least because you’re currently not only still gay but actively dating.

You and Lyra get sent out to gather food from a nearby orchard. The owner’s old and his staff decided early on that they weren’t going to listen to him anymore with the cops gone. They’re running the place while he’s locked up in his house. They’ve agreed to let you pick some fruit and bring it back to the Center in exchange for healing if they need it. Sitrus agreed to handle that. She’s in a weird territorial standoff with the chansey at the Center. It was more notable the first few times it happened. Now it’s just expected that she sleeps outside and the chansey stays inside while she’s here. That’s just how these things work. Neither of them even seem bothered by it.

You’d wanted to climb up Callisto’s neck to get to the fruit higher in the trees. Lyra and Sitrus vetoed it. Said you could fall and hurt yourself. You don’t think you would. As a kid you climbed up to the top of the playground every chance you got. Never fell as far as you remember. But they don’t like fun. You and Lyra pick fruit from the bushes while Lyra’s noivern flies around and grabs some from the branches. You’re pretty sure he eats as much as he drops in the mudsdale’s cart, but that’s just less food he needs later.

The first day in the orchard you pricked yourself a lot. Turns out a lot of berry bushes have thorns. Very rude of them. And you hadn’t come out with a good pair of gloves. The ones you have now are a little too tight but they save you from scratches. With every day you make better time. Today you get the cart a little more than half full. That’s a new record. You might not even need to come out tomorrow.

You leave around 3:30. It’ll get you back before dark, even at mudsdale’s slow and steady pace. Gives you time to nap or talk. Still feels weird riding on the saddle with Lyra since you can walk on your own two feet. Lyra insists that mudsdale can barely even feel your weight. And the saddle’s big enough that you don’t have to hug her or anything awkward.

Although today you decide that you might as well bring up a kind of awkward thing before you forget. You haven’t smelled her use the imorin lately but you’re worried after a few days ago. “I think the island challenge is over.”

“Probably, yeah,” she answers.

“You keeping your salazzle?”

She sighs. The drawback of being behind her is that you can’t see her face. Just see her deflate a little at the question. “She likes the lessons. Helps her manipulate females she’d otherwise just have to fight. In exchange she’s some extra firepower. Or a way to avoid fights entirely.”

“And you’re… comfortable… using it?”

Drawing that kind of attention to you feels so, so gross. There would never be enough showers to wash that stuff off.

“I have to be careful. Double-edged sword, you know? But I’m already a pretty girl with all the benefits and consequences that entails. Couldn’t escape some problems just by setting my pokémon free. And if I’m already planning for the risks, might as well reap some more benefits.”

She finally looks back over her shoulder.

“It’s emergencies only, okay? And I’ll try to give you warning in the future. Was going to have Cuicatl tell you privately as soon as you got back but it seemed like you figured it out on your own.”

She’d told Cuicatl, then. “And Cuicatl was okay with it?”

“As long as it can’t make her do anything she doesn’t see a problem. Girl’s used to weaving her own little web of carrots and sticks. Getting better, though. Used to be a lot higher strung about it. That’s how things got bad with Pixie.”

Sitrus walks a little closer. You offered to let her ride in the cart but she declined. Her legs are tiny but she keeps pace well enough.

Lyra looks over at the blissey. Sitrus doesn’t say anything. Partially because you couldn’t understand her if she did speak. Maybe a good thing. Cuicatl says she can be shockingly acerbic.

“Used to be really worried about being left entirely alone. Now I think she’s accepted there’s going to be someone there for her whatever happens. Might’ve regressed a bit last week because of,” she waves a hand through the air, “everything. Seems to be getting better, though.”

It sounds like they’ve talked, then. You feel a pang of guilt. You haven’t really talked to her in depth about why she did everything. Not since the first rambling evening. The one time you did it ended in a fight and neither of you have wanted to continue that conversation. At least someone was talking to her? Even if it really should have been you as her girlfriend.

*​

Cuicatl isn’t back when you return and the nurse is nowhere to be found. After you finish storing the berries you just end up sitting in the lounge with nothing to do. Lyra has satellite internet on her phone. You’re not sure who’s paying for it anymore but she still has service.

Almost as soon as she starts scrolling she tenses up, leans forward, and purses her lips.

“Something wrong?”

She briefly lifts a finger up to say ‘one moment’ before she keeps scrolling. That seems bad. Potentially really bad.

“Your house is on fire,” she finally says.

“What?” Because what the fuck are you supposed to say to that? Your mind races over everything. None of your stuff is still there. Most of it was burned before. Your parents, yes, but more importantly. Levi. Is he okay?

“Probably the ghosts,” Lyra continues. “I’ve read they’ve been camping out since this all began.”

“Why would they even care? Yes, our family overthrew the kingdom, but that was ages ago. They didn’t do it. Why does it even matter?” Because if there’s not a reason it didn’t happen and Levi is okay. You know it’s not true. You know what you’re doing. But you can’t bring yourself to ask about him directly and learn.

“Not disagreeing. I’m not Kekoa. Don’t judge people by what their great-grandparents did. But your dad still owns all the land your family stole. And, well, he’s far from blameless.”

“But Levi…”

She puts the phone down in her lap and looks at you directly. “Levi hasn’t done anything and killing him would make you upset, which would make Cuicatl upset. I’m guessing he’s fine.”

“Guessing.”

She takes a deep breath. “Yeah. Guessing.”

“I think I want to be alone now.” The words sound hollow. Everything feels hollow. Levi is… you don’t know. How is anything supposed to feel normal?

“Want me to send Cuicatl in when she gets back?”

“No.” It surprises you how quickly that answer comes. Lyra seems surprised, too. “She caused this.”

Her expression darkens and for a moment you think she’s going to try and fight you. Then she closes her mouth and shakes her head. “Fine. I’ll pass it on.”

In the past you would have liked to go into your room and turn off all the lights to deal with something like this. After being locked in a dark room for months that’s the last thing you want. So you go outside to the pool and sit down in a chair, legs crossed in front of you. Bubbles emerges and croaks. Maybe he wants another game. You glare to show him you’re not in the mood. He must get the message because he hops back under the surface soon enough.

Ferny walks over and hops up on your lap. That’s fine. You’re okay with that. He does know something’s off, though, because he looks at you funny.

“My brother might be dead,” you whisper. He nods like that’s a perfectly normal thing to say and starts kneading your thighs. His claws are getting a little sharp. Not enough to break the skin. Just enough that you’ll have to either trim them or make him battle a little later. As he works away your thoughts go back. Everything was so structured growing up. Even your free time was pre-scheduled blocks between tutors. You weren’t really able to leave the house and grounds. Only Lyra ever visited. And once Exodus was gone Levi was the only person your age in the house. He’s sweet. Likes to read some of the same stories as you. Indulged your childish habits when no one else would. And now he might be gone. Not because of Skull or a random stranger or your parents. Because of a choice your girlfriend made and doesn’t regret. Someone you trusted to keep you safe. Guess that doesn’t apply to anyone past you.

Lyra comes out before you can brood for to long. Puts some chopped aspear and a sports drink beside you. And then she sits down in a chair across the pool.

“Said I wanted to be alone.”

“Last time I let someone do that they caused a lot of trouble.”

You bristle at the comparison. “I’m not going to kill someone.”

“Didn’t say you would.”

You take one of the berries and chew. It’s very fresh. Bursting with juices even though it’s been cut. Usually not your favorite flavor but it’s cool and refreshing here.

“Cuicatl’s back if you change your mind.”

“I won’t.”

You probably will. But right now you’re mad that she started all of this and got your brother killed. She can deal with that for a while.

Lyra pinches her nose but doesn’t say anything.

“What?”

“Forgot how stubborn you are. It’s fine. I’ll tell her.”

And with that she gets up and leaves. Fine. You didn’t want her here. You unscrew the top of the drink and take another bite of the berry.

*​

The sun has set by the time Lyra bothers you again. This time she doesn’t say a word. Just hands you her phone.

“Hello?”

“Gen?”

Your heart leaps straight into your throat.

“Levi…”

You sob as the dam breaks. Can’t help it. You hope he doesn’t think you’re sad he’s alive.”

“I’m fine,” he says. “Just a little smoke inhalation. Wanted to let you know that.”

“The ghosts didn’t attack you?” You try to say that. You’re not sure how intelligible it is while all the emotional weight of the day pours out through your mouth and eyes.

“Ghosts?” He sounds confused. Why would— “It was a metagross.”

Your heart falls back down to its normal place and the world grows distant. Metagross. It’s back. And it did this. “What did it do?”

“I don’t—it killed our parents. Let me run away with Red while it was—busy. Most of the staff escaped if they didn’t try to fight it.”

You smile. It’s not the right reaction to getting confirmation your parents died, but Levi is okay and that’s all you could hope for in the last few hours. “Okay. Okay. Thank Xerneas, it’s okay.”

He doesn’t respond. Probably not okay on his end. He just saw… poor thing. He shouldn’t have had to. None of this should have happened.

Levi starts coughing and you freeze up. Smoke inhalation. How hurt is he?

“I’m—fine” he says between coughs. “Just need to—rest.”

“Okay. Okay. I’ll visit you as soon as I can.”

“Thanks. Love you.”

“I love you too. So much.”

*​

You throw open the door to your room and walk in. Cuicatl jolts upright and Pixie whines at the disturbance. “Did you order this?”

“I’ve told you I can’t control the ghosts,” she grumbles. Grumbles! Like you’re the one being unreasonable.

“Wasn’t them. Your metagross.”

A lot of emotions flash over her face faster than you can catalogue them.

“No. I haven’t spoken to her since she left.”

“Did you order it before?”

“No. Promise.” Now she’s halfway to begging. It makes you happier. You’re not sure if it should.

Maybe you’re taking this a little bit too far. You’ll throw her a bone.

“Levi’s alive. Hurt, but alive.”

“I’m… glad?” You scowl but she very quickly continues, almost stumbling over the words. “Glad he’s alive. Sorry he’s hurt.”

“Better be.”

You slam the door behind you. Center’s half empty. You can find somewhere else to sleep. She got lucky. If the ghosts had gotten to Levi first you doubt they would’ve been so kind.

*​

July 30, 2020

“You’re keeping it?” You can hardly believe your ears or eyes.

Cuicatl nods in response while running a finger over the master ball in a way that’s almost protective. “If she was going to kill us, she would have done it. Besides, what’s the other option? Tell her to go away? Let her do what she wants without any way to keep an eye on it?”

“Throw the ball into the ocean,” Lyra suggests. “Deep ocean. Not just off the beach.”

“There’s another metagross and a lot of beldum. Ball’s probably tracked, too. They’d find it. Back to square one, ‘cept she’s mad at us.”

“Throw it into a volcano?” you suggest. “Yes, it’s a bit cliché, but it could work!”

Lyra glances at Cuicatl. “Could work…”

“It would just destroy the ball and she’d get out. Injured. Alive. Angry.”

“Or she’d melt and die. You said she has problems with heat.”

Had problems. Metagross are harder to kill.”

“I know the government has ways to kill pokémon in their ball,” Lyra says. “But I don’t know if those are available right now with everything going on. Might need to wait for a while.”

“She hasn’t even done anything and you’re talking about killing her,” Cuicatl groans.

“She killed my parents.”

How the heck did she forget that? It was barely twelve hours ago!

Cuicatl opens her mouth to argue but quickly shuts it when Lyra glares at her. Shouldn’t have been able to see that. You assume there was a psychic kick or something.

“We’re already in danger,” Lyra says, hands up. Obviously trying to defuse this before someone says anything even stupider than Cuicatl’s comment. “I don’t think having the metagross around makes the danger worse for us.”

“We could just never let it’s out of its ball. Master balls wouldn’t have an automatic release, right?”

“I don’t know,” Lyra answers. “And even if it did, she might have tampered with it.”

“So we’re stuck with a murder robot that could kill us all if it wanted to? That’s what you’re saying?”

“Already ‘stuck’ with a murder dragon that could kill us all if she wanted to,” Cuicatl protests.

“And I trust the dragon a lot more,” Lyra answers. “But yes, Gen, essentially. I’ll keep an eye on possible outs but for now that’s how things stand.”

Great. Just great. You’re surrounded by idiots with no sense of self-preservation. You expected that from Cuicatl but you really thought Lyra was going to have your back here.

*​

It’s smaller than you expected. Shorter than you. Maybe ten or twelve feet across. Not a ten-foot giant like it had been in your imagination. The metal is still blue. You thought they were silver. The one on TV is. Thought they changed colors when they evolved.

It’s ignoring you. It obviously knows you’re there but is just facing away, towards the ocean beyond the cliff, like you don’t even matter. Fine. You can start this.

“Why did you do it?”

[Query: ‘It’]

Playing. Dumb. Trying to make you mad. And it’s working!

“Kill my parents.”

That finally gets it to turn around. You wish it hadn’t. The thing doesn’t have a mouth. Not on its face, at least. Just a giant ‘x’ next to two pixelated eyes.

[I was protecting my liege-lord.]

And that is not how it talks! It must have read your books or something. Just to taunt you. It’s almost infuriating enough to distract from the actual message. They were planning to hurt Cuicatl. Maybe you. Probably you. If she isn’t lying. And she might be. Might not. No way to know anymore.

“Burning down the house? Injuring my brother?”

[Query: Injuries]

Does it not know? Not care? Or does it know and it’s taunting you.

“Smoke inhalation.”

[Controlled demolition ensured adequate ventilation to prevent long-term debilitation. Short-term debilitation possible due to the combination of aerobic exercise and elevated air contaminants. In the future I can conduct demolitions so the risk of short-term debilitation is reduced.]

“Yes! I mean, no! Don’t demolish anything at all.”

[Demolitions may be necessary. You lack sufficient command privileges to prohibit them. Better ventilation during demolitions is my final offer.]

“You’re messing with me, aren’t you?” you growl.

[Affirmative]

“Because this is all some kind of joke to you?”

[Query: ‘this’ ‘all’]

You take a deep breath. Nope. Not letting it win.

[I expected you to be grateful.]

“For injuring my brother?”

[For killing your parents.]

It hasn’t moved at all since turning around. It even looks kind of relaxed. Resting on the ground rather than floating, hanging a little from its legs rather than standing fully upright. The setting sun bathes it in warm light while the sea crashes into the cliffside below. It’s calming. Deliberately calming. Just to make your anger stand out even more. Clever girl.

Maybe you should be glad they’re dead. You definitely haven’t worried as much about them as Levi. But they still raised you. Or hired the people who did. And you have some fond memories of each of them. Just… not as many as you probably should. Since everything fell apart you’ve realized that things were never really as good as they should have been. But things can change and they were still people, even after everything. You can’t be glad they’re dead.

“This isn’t going to be productive.” You turn around and leave so it doesn’t get the last word.

[Agreement: Human emotions extremely inefficient]

Didn’t work.

[Failure was inevitable]

Fine, then. You’ll just walk away.

*​

On the way back you realize why she’d parked herself so far away from the Center. You find yourself calming down between the rhythm of your feet hitting the ground and the gentle glow of sunset over the water. She probably calculated the precise distance where you’d be more calmed than annoyed by the walk back.

You don’t pass anyone on the way in. Lyra’s probably off training with her team. Cuicatl might be in for the day. Maybe you should talk to her. Maybe you shouldn’t. She’s your girlfriend. You’ve been hard on her at a time where she’s probably been scared for her life. But she also made two separate choices that almost got your brother killed and she doesn’t really seem to regret either.

In the end you decide to just linger by her door for a moment to see if she’s there. You weren’t really expecting her to be on the phone but it does clear that up.

“Hi! Have you been having phone troubles?”

A break as the other side, whoever they are, responds.

“Huh. Couldn’t reach you until now.”

Another break. You wonder if she knows you’re here through psychic power nonsense.

“Yes, Noci came back. She hasn’t done anything. Just tossed my team around and gave me a master ball to catch her with.”

So blasé about the whole thing. Entirely ignoring what she did to your parents.

“Well, no. There was another thing.” You can practically hear her fidget in the awkward silence. “She spent the fight breaking my defenses. At the end she got in and changed some stuff.”

What? She didn’t mention that at all. And that’s the kind of thing you really needed to know.

“I think it’s fine. She says she was just fixing some of what Tapu Lele did. And I was conscious enough during it that I believe her. But your gift sounds good for checking and—yes, please, thank you.” A break. Your gift. She must be talking to Lila from what you know of their powers. “Right now?” Another. “Okay, can you come a kilometer out? I don’t want the others to know.”

More secrecy. Why?

Lila must have had the same question.

“Lyra would panic. And, um. I think I got broken up with?” Another break. You didn’t break up with her? Why would she think that? “Gen’s really mad at me. And I really get it. She was worried her brother died and blamed me for it.” Yes, but you never said you’d broken up with her. Just started sleeping in another room. And saying you didn’t want to be around her… okay that does sound like a reasonable conclusion to draw. “Because of Noci, yes. Look, I just don’t want to tell her because she already has a lot to deal with and it would sound like I’m trying to get her back with pity. And I can’t prove it. She’d probably just think I was making things up.” You absolutely would not! “If she wants to leave, she can leave. Not going to try and rope her back. Learned that with Pixie. She can go. Lyra will probably go with her. And it’ll be. It’ll be what it is.”

Lyra said she was getting better about not letting people go. And, yes, technically. But now she has the opposite problem.

“Sure. Talk more later. See you soon.”

You can hear her take a deep, shaking breath before she starts to get around. Now’s probably the time to intervene. She snaps to attention when you open the door. There are tears running from her eyes. You would have been surprised if there weren’t.

“How much of that did you hear?” she asks.

“All of it.”

“Oh.”

She huddles into herself, shoulders bending forward and back arching. She looks like she’s bracing to be hit. Because people she loved have hit her when they were mad. And she knows you’re mad. To any normal person this would get them to back off a little. It must not have worked before. Which is infuriating. Not at her. Just. Her parents? Tapu Lele? Whoever made her feel like this was necessary.

She probably is relieved to know that her father’s worlds away and you can’t blame her. Real bastard of a man.



Is that why she isn’t upset about your parents? Because she feels the same way?

Thoughts for another time.

“I’m not. Okay, I am a little mad at you.”

“Sorry,” she whispers. Somehow she makes herself even smaller. Pixie whines in her lap before wiggling her way out of the closing vice.

Scared. So scared. Of you. Probably of the Americans, the shadows, her metagross, all the things that actually might be out to get her right now. It’s. You aren’t wrong to be mad at her. You had really valid things to be worried about! This isn’t entirely your fault. You just weren’t helping.

“I don’t remember breaking up with you.”

Although maybe you should? You don’t want her to be scared like this. And if you’re doing it. No. You can still make up for it. Breaking up with her now would probably send the wrong message. Best not.

She relaxes a little.

“Want me to go with you?”

“Probably shouldn’t.” She wipes her face clean. Mostly clean. Doesn’t get all the tears. You resist the urge to lean in and help. “Alakazam. Can hurt non-psychics.”

“I can at least walk you most of the way there.”

“I would like that.”

You do. You let her hold your arm and try to send affirming thoughts and calm things down. Because you still care about her. A lot. Even if you have a fight or two. You’re just going to need to learn how to handle them better.
 

Ambyssin

Gotta go back. Back to the past.
Location
Residency hell
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. silvally-dragon
  2. necrozma-ultra
  3. milotic
  4. zoroark-soda
  5. dreepy
  6. mewtwo-ambyssin
  7. vulpix-ambyssin
So, I know I'd read the original version of this back in the day™. Don't think I ever touched the remake. Although V2 seems to have gotten much, much farther than the original. To where its word count is beating my current stuff. Ain't no way I'm getting through it in this style. And the chapters I'm covering are 5.5 years old. I suppose I will mostly focus on the plot and speculation...

1.1
-So the second-person narration is still intact here. And starting with a businesswoman who is not any of the protags of this fic. Some corporate big shot.
-You're probably going for more animalistic takes on the pokémon but for my lizard brain imagining an espeon with proper cat whiskers is cursed.
-I dunno what analogue to draw to VStar as a company, but it sounds like a startup app. Which, in this day and age, is a red flag even if it has good intentions on paper.
-An espeon named Espy, huh...
-Ah, so it's called VStar because the owner has a victini. And one of those names that just feels like it belongs to a techbro. Except he actually is a decent battler. But I bet he's an "ideas guy" and everyone else has to break their backs putting said ideas into practice.
-The Hau'oli paper paragraph only furthers my belief. Maybe he's even a Musk-esque manchild.
-I'm pretty sure the kids she's focusing on more are some of our core cast. I don't recall if Cuicatl was psychic in the original. Just blind. And similarly don't recall if we knew that at least one family member was dead and she'd mostly been around her mother's pokémon. Hmm. The psychic interplay is neat, though.

1.2
-Pixie's back, too. Though I expected it. I thiiiink this is part of a backstory of sorts? I'm seeing a torracat that interacts with her. Which makes me think is the SuMo protag? Who helps her heal for a bit then dips to continue on her journey. Or something.
-And I think, despite the eevee-hatred, I can parse that Matriarch is the lady 1.1 focused on and that's Espy with her.
-"Sixth and final second chance." Lol.
-I think Pixie greatly overestimates her fighting abilities.
-I don't remember if the original genuinely had them able to converse like this. Not the first trainer fic I've ready where pokémon and trainer can converse, so I'd need more time to see this dynamic in action. As it is, Cuicatl can make enough chinks in Pixie's armor to get her to ease up juuuuust enough to agree to go with her. Of course, since our narrator is incredibly biased, it's less like a partnership and more Pixie claiming ownership. I imagine that attitude will continue. For a while, even. Maybe the dynamic will shift as the story progresses and Pixie will view this more like an equal partnership. But I imagine it'll take a while. And I certainly won't see it on this short read through of the beginning.

1.3
-The second paragraph alone makes me think Genesis is the one who's from the "Big Six" wealthy family. Just something about the way things are described shows just enough of a family dynamic to have that high society sort of vibe.
-Yeah, a nickname "Sir Bubbles" really gives off the impression she's quite sheltered.
-Xerneas worshipper? And a suggestion that there are clearly problems back home. Is the emphasized "she" Genesis' mother, perhaps? That and Genesis seems to struggle to sit still and focus on any of this VStar orientation. ADHD, maybe?
-And there's the third kid I remember from the original. Still angry and standoffish.
-Is the "You finally realize that you never got his name before" implying Genesis just forgot already? Because Kekoa did mention his name several paragraphs back.
-And now the trio's traveling together. IIRC last time there was a reality show premise to it? But this time it just seems to be a dubious quality app of some sort. Makes sense. Reality shows don't have the same pull nowadays unless they're the Bachelor/Bachelorette. Also just a little casual foot in mouth for both the girls.
-Casually making mention of mall stores constantly closing down in the age of e-shopping threatening in-person businesses.
-And the rest of the time establishes some group dynamics. Genesis truly does seem worriedly sheltered. And if I'm reading between the lines of this and 1.1 then Genesis is transmasc? He and Cuicatl bicker like a couple of dorks, though. It sounds like they were watching whatever the pokemonified version of Jurassic Park is. Or it is just Jurassic Park.

1.4
-We have the contrast with the opening scene of Kekoa doing quite well against some snotty kid and Cuicatl getting the runaround from an older trainer who's much more well off.
-I had a feeling I knew what the chapter title referred to and I was correct. Heavy dose of dysmorphia here. It is described rather painfully. Don't exactly have the frame of reference for that one but it does certainly tug at me in that sort of tense, uncomfortable way. Which I think was the point.
-This is a wild test with oddly specific questions. Just like how standardized testing works in real life! :V
-Genesis is definitely socially awkward but it's interesting seeing her trying to push the trio to do, y'know, social activities together. I think neurodivergents are definitely the ones who need to put in the effort if they want to do social stuff, but there's also the risk they just... don't have the social battery for it.
-The way the beach scene starts makes it seem like Cuicatl says that opening dialogue line, not Genesis.
-Lol they roped a random child into officiating a little sparring match. Which is over almost as soon as it begins. Yes, Cuicatl is very bad at this. And Kekoa could've maybe been a bit softer, but also he's had things quite rough.

1.5
-So, Cuicatl has a brother in this version? And she's got this Tate/Liza-esque psychic connection with him. Are they twins? 🤔
-And we meet all the pokémon of old. Which raises questions of what happened to all of them, but given Cuicatl is all alone in the present I'm going to put a wager on "nothing good."
-Oh. So, her mom giving birth to them. :sadwott:
-I guess Pixie got hit much harder than the ending of 1.4 led me to believe. Though I suppose pokémon here don't have the same super magical healing powers they do in the various canons. That was shown off to some extent earlier.
-Ah. So, the twin brother passed away. And I'm willing to bet the start of that chapter with the mention of fever and headache were the initial signs and symptoms. The stuff that follows is, like in 1.4, very raw. It's well-written and I can't go into much depth beyond that because I'm not good with analyzing that kind of stuff in fics. Or literature in general.
-Surprised that Rachel popped out of the blue here. Not surprised at the emotional barriers Cuicatl puts up in response. Because that's what people do in these sorts of situations.
-Though the time limit bit is strange. If it's not a visa thing and (presumably) not a family thing, then what? I don't know if this fic would get into anything magical or out there, but this is the land of UBs or whatever. Maybe there's something even wilder going on?

1.6
-In reading the summary here I confess I don't think I picked up on the eating disorder part of 1.5. I just figured she wasn't eating because, y'know, major depression. But she's also described as having a very short stature, so... who knows.
-I want to say the random guy who's talking to them is actually the Chris who's mentioned earlier. But I feel like the CEO or whatever would be too busy to deal with these three.
-Pixie's abandonment issues are on full display. Makes me wonder how long it will actually take Cuicatl to have a true second teammate. Probably going to be hard.
-D'aww, Pixie trying ice cream is cute. :3
-Also her nicknames for Genesis and Kekoa are hilarious, but the latter is also a "crossing the line" sort of thing. Not that a fox would understand why it crosses a line.
-D'aww, the ice fox became a soggy puddle from the heat. :3
-Good to see that they almost kinda sorta maybe agree on some of this logistics stuff. Though I won't commit any of it to memory since I don't expect anything they do on Akala to end up going according to plan. That's always how these fics work.

These are the earliest chapters, of course, but I do think they're good. I thought the old version was good, too. Maybe not explicitly my usual cup of tea, but the writing was quite eloquent and I think I felt like I owed you so I definitely read it. This one lets its punches fly much faster and harder right out of the gate. Which is probably perfect for the TR crowd since a lot of them eat that kind of stuff up. It does so far feel much heavier than the original, which makes me wonder if that'll permeate through the entire fic or if there are more extended lighter moments, like 1.6.
 

WildBoots

Don’t underestimate seeds.
Location
between a hope and a prayer
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. moka-mark
  2. solrock
  3. breloom
Hi, sorry I've been away so long! 2024 sure was something.

Real quick, I saw someone mention somewhere that the prologue has been revised (I'm not sure when or if I've already commented on it), so I skimmed over it super briefly.

“Right. What does VStar do? Just to make sure that I’m on base.”

“Of course.” You never stop smiling. “VStar helps fund trainers who might not have the means to complete an island challenge, or trainers who just finished an island challenge but can’t afford to keep all of their partners. We help them get rid of excess pokémon and give them to people who want them but can’t get one. Busy professionals and parents, the disabled, or just people who don’t have a team strong enough to go into the species’ natural habitat. Everyone wins.”

“Right, right. And how many users do you have?”

Not even bothering to follow up on that. Less diligent than even you were expecting.

“Depends on how you define ‘users,’ Manuel. Right now we have 166 trainers currently on their journey with the app. Not all of them are active users. Several hundred trainers traded their pokémon in last year, a few thousand purchased a pokémon through the app.”
I think this is a very sensible update! The reality TV thing kinda fell off after a while, plus it raised some weird questions I'm not sure you actually wanted to deal with. This makes way more sense to me. ✅

We also talked about revisions on 3.11 so I skimmed that one as well before jumping back in where I left off.

I only remember the broadest strokes of this arc, so sorry if I'm responding to the same beats all over again!
January 17, 2020
Oh my god it's been so long since I was caught up. 😭 But also, wow, what a neat benefit of posting on a schedule like clockwork: you were writing in a specific time about a specific time!

For her it must be like nothing’s changed at all.
Thought that maybe she was just doing it for the novelty.
Oops, big K still has some growing to do in the empathy department; these comments reveal all the questions he's not asking about Cuicatl.

“Cuicatl, I haven’t seen shit today.”
This is a genuinely funny zinger though.

Except ... doesn't he have a smart phone? You could get so much mileage out of Kekoa and Lyra accidentally blasting each other in the face with their phone lights.

Lyra disagrees because of her hate on for psychic-types
Fussy, but I think hate-on should be hyphenated (because you can be too hard on yourself but you would have a hard-on for someone else 🥲).

Definitely seeing some of their dynamic though! Making them travel together already gives you more room to maneuver than the constant fighting did.

Said she didn’t want people to spy on her.”
L O L

(Your laugh is deeper and it makes you feel warm despite the cold.)
Aww, but now we're growing in small ways! In such a literally dark moment, the small wins shine brightly.

All stuff that’s worthless to know unless you’re blind or an alien snuffs out the light.
I wish there was an ellipses between "know" and "unless." Since …. Yeah, he could not have predicted these edge cases becoming such a big part of his life lol.

Also, hang on: who else would it be besides Lyra, really?

And she usually wants comforted.
This strikes me as a particularly midwestern sentence construction, TBH. I generally wish that your characters had more distinct syntax from each other (though I can accept that heavily clipped sentences are just the style here), but this one jumped out at me since your regions are much more clearly paralleled to their real-world equivalents than they are in other settings. Could be a thing in Hawaiian Pidgin too, but I’m not convinced.

“We can look for them while we’re out in the field today.”
Aww, growing again. This was considerate of him.

but its full of confidence.
Missing apostrophe.

Or just a sign of something bigger?
"Just" feels like the wrong word there--if it's something bigger (and it is!), then the dismissive language doesn't make sense to me.

Something compels you to keep talking anyway.
Ah yes. "Something."

She knows full well what would happen if she made me cross.”
Yeah, wait, if they know they're hunting a fairy, why is Kekoa comforted by the presence of Lyra's absol anyway?

be courteous to the fairies. Be kind to the fairies.
These are very similar concepts!!

Do not bargain with or harm them, even on accident.
And these feel too different to mash together like this, especially since bargaining is the one Kekoa's actually in danger of doing here. Maybe boot "kind" from the previous passage and replace it with "don't harm them."

The respect they deserve? You’ve been keeping them healthy.
🥲

I have to say, I like the meat of the florges conversation and the uncomfortable questions it makes Kekoa ask, but I wasn't sure I understood her motivations. Am I understanding right that the deal was essentially "leave my kid alone and I'll help you negotiate for a bug?" Like, why bargain with Kekoa at all when she could just threaten him away?

Also confused where Lyra went for most of that conversation. Did she separate them? When? And again, why?

Rapidly outgrowing her ‘cute’ phase. Still not into her ‘fucking badass’ one.

You can relate to that.
Yeah, mood.

I’m just and catching them as they come.”
Whoops

“It’s not paranoia if they really are out to get you,” she mutters.
Lyra, a thesis.


Huh, on my last read through this chapter, I thought this was the one with the smoochum/jnyx, traditional Hawaiian dance, and dysphoria? I did remember the florges, vaguely, but thought it had happened at a different time. Is the main change that those two chapters have been smashed together into this one?

I did appreciate Lyra grilling him at the end--on brand.

And with that out of the way, let's join the usual suspects for more Sad Time in the Dark! 🎶

February 15,
Woof, if I lived in this universe, it would be a fucked up day to have a birthday. Buuut since I don’t! Delighted to share my birthday with Chaotic Trumpet Sounds, Apocalypse Edition.

The Pokémon Center’s receptionist is listening to public radio so now you are, too.
Oof, yeah, he would not choose this.

The ghost balloon blinks before it slowly floats down the street, one arm beckoning you to follow. You trail after it,
Noooooo, Kekoa, what are you doing.

Or the flickering light abruptly ending providing a sphere of ghostly flame surrounded by a world of darkness.
Thrown off here. At first I thought this was the drifloon’s light going out, and I was gearing up for a comment about rearranging the sentence to emphasize the most important point. Buuut now I’m not sure that IS what happened.

You remember Cuicatl’s comments on flower wars and your blood freezes. They wouldn’t provoke the US, right?
Nervous 2025 sounds.

hoping that one would grab me and take him me.
Oops.

“Yes.” She’s implying that you shouldn’t be doing that. Is she just… okay with a false queen on the throne? Is she willing to say as much in front of the true queen’s grave?
Patron Saint of lost causes and misdirected anger over here.

but then your mind drifts to the florges in the meadow and you aren’t so sure.
Ooh nice. Glad I reread that chapter then, and glad he’s still thinking about it. Learning!

She thinks that you’re useless to her. To the cause. To Alola.
I did wonder why she was bothering to talk to him, TBH. Is she hoping he will radicalize further?

But Plumeria doesn’t trust you enough to put you in her inner circle. Not now. After a grand trial or two you might be more interesting to her.
Yes, good plan, baby Kekoa. Persist even harder in doing the thing she’s unimpressed by. That’ll show her.

I do get where he’s coming from. He imagines that he’ll be more useful to her if he has stronger pokemon. But he’s definitely working harder, not smarter: for some of Plumeria’s activities, a bigger pokemon could be a hindrance. Plus, this smacks of trans boy desperately emulating the only kind of masculinity he’s seen, a brute force contest to be at the top of the pile. He can’t imagine any other skills he could contribute to the moment. (And to be fair, he’s got a long way to go to develop other skills.)

You wonder if she’s already begun to evolve. Flickering lights come out of the bathroom as your inkay floats out. That one has the opposite problem.
Wasn’t sure how it would be a “problem” for her to evolve except that she wouldn’t be able to sit in the poke center bed anymore lol. And then is the opposite problem that the inlay is supposed to evolve but hasn’t? That was probably mentioned in a previous chapter with the VStar assignment but I don’t remember,

Facing away from you. Hair hanging over her face.
If she’s facing away, how can he see this?

Drifloon need to wander during the day but they’re pretty good with coming back at night. Even know where to go if you’ve moved. No idea how they pull that one off and the writer doesn’t seem to know either.
HA.
Makes sense to me though—if they’re sponges for emotion, they’d probably learn the “feel” of their human pretty well.

The drifloon summons pale will-o-wisps to communicate with the strange glowing stone
Cute haha.

No need to take the entire clown car through the halls
LOL

It’s Kanoa. The childhood friend you ghosted for years and are kind-of reconnecting to.
Appreciated the crystal clear epithetal, haha.

The Tapu didn’t fight the Americans last time and there’s no sign they’ll fight for us now.
I guess they’re shy gods, yeah.

And even if we could get a god on our side that’s just asking for a repeat of Ho—
Whoops. Yeah Hoenn happening in living memory really sets the scale of what a messy revolution could be.

You don’t say any of that. You say “thank you for calling” and hang up.
Rekindling the friendship is going great. I can’t imagine Kanoa got much out of that.

I was going to lunch,” she says. “Wanted to know if you wanted to come with.”

“I’m fine.” You try to keep your voice level despite the everything going on in your head. Loss threatening to lurch into anger at a moment’s notice.

“I’d appreciate it if you did. I’m willing to pay.”

“I don’t need your charity.”

She just rolls her eyes. “Look, it’s been a rough day and I just want someone to talk to while I eat some nice food. Trust me, you’d be helping me more than I’d be helping you.”
I liked this beat. So fitting for Kekoa to be too busy projecting (badly) that he doesn’t need help that he fails to see that other people might be struggling. And we can see in the course of this scene how that day represented a loss of the life she knew, too.

Definitely don’t find some comfort in the touch.
Yeah what kind of wuss would do that.

until the light come back.
Missing an S somewhere.

She winks. You’re going to imagine it was aimed at Cuicatl and that this isn’t a misgendering thing. Cuicatl, of course, can’t see the wink. They’d make a weird couple until the whole thing blew up because Lyra found out she was dating a mind reader. And Cuicatl really deserves someone who’d accept that part of her.
Oh goodness, so many layers of yikes and aww friendship to unpack here.

“What’s your name?” Cuicatl asks.
*real name?
At first I thought she’d somehow failed to learn Lyra’s name after several chapters together lol.

You’ve been trying to learn what was denied to you, even if Kanoa says you haven’t been doing a good job of it.
And Plumeria and—

“You’re just fine with leaving your culture behind, then?”

She shakes her head and tucks her hands back into her lap. “Oh, I’m not. My mom and brother aren’t. We just can’t really do it in ways so obvious that my father would notice. Thankfully he spends a lot of time at work. On days where my father is at work and the help is off sometimes mom will make something for us and tell us stories.”
I enjoyed this parallel between the two of them. So many more opportunities when we’re playing nice!

Alola,” she begins. Her hands are clenching the sides of the podium hard enough you wonder if the wood will break. “I am happy to inform you that a solgaleo will arrive in the region within the next week. At that point it is my intention to go and bring the battle to Necrozma.”
She’s very nearly literally getting blasted into space to fight a god. She must be so scared, and Kekoa refuses to see that she’s just human too. It would ruin his worldview.

And, damn, this world survives on mulching children.

Like, say, a victini owned by a billionaire who lives in Alola. You imagine Selene’s already asked. Maybe the entire speech is about building up enough public pressure on him that he changes his mind. Gods, you hate your boss right now almost as much as the champion
Did we already know that VStar has a victini?

Then she’d at least have fixed some of the damage she did to her home.
The level of projection here is WILD.

Wait.

Is that what Kanoa, Plumeria, and the florges think about you?
There we go.

You glance at the carbink. They stare at you. If you sell them after the grand trial, they’ll still have places to explore. It won’t be too different. But… you should ask them, to be sure. And if they say no…
Learning!!!

This is a great place for him to land. He’s still not sure what to do about the big stuff—which is very fair because it’s really messy no matter what path he commits to—but he at least is putting in effort to be more considerate in ways that feel smallish to him but of course mean a lot to these Pokémon. Even when that kindness is an inconvenience. Proud of you, Kekoa.
 

WildBoots

Don’t underestimate seeds.
Location
between a hope and a prayer
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. moka-mark
  2. solrock
  3. breloom
Chapter 3.20

Wrapping up the arc in the dark with a final checkmark on the Island Challenge to-do list, and everything goes just swell. Some especially brutal battling here, making it very tough for Cuicatl to make a case for Pixie staying with her. Oof. I expect her to get Pixie back eventually?? Somehow??? But I have no idea how at this point.

I appreciate the choice not to position Cuicatl as the POV character for this fight, both because Hala's actions would be hard to understand without a peek into his head and because it lets us see how she has and hasn't grown from a more objective standpoint.

A lot of the chapter hinges on this idea:
You hope the girl’s keokeo is alright. Truly. But if this is what it takes to get her from stealing your pokémon, if this is what it takes to get her far away from the alien monsters prowling Alola… then it’s better that her dreams were crushed by you and not an Ultra Beast.
And I was having trouble deciding if I was fully on board or not.

Wanting to oust intruders makes sense. It's a theme we've seen in characters like Plumeria and Kekoa, but Hala has more political power (or does he?) so we get to see what that fight looks like in his arena, so to speak. I sympathized with him in his failed attempt to push through protections for local species, and the reasons his cause failed felt realistic to me.

However, I had trouble making that gel with his sympathy for the kids getting mulched by UBs. Like, on the one hand, it's objectively and relentlessly terrible. (No body to bury, etc.) But on the other hand ... that's one way to get rid of an invader, isn't it. 🥲 It would basically be using on invasive species to drive off another (a tactic *I* know has failed famously in our world, but I'm not sure what the history is like in Alola, or how well it's known. And certainly the scale is different when the invasive species is ... other humans). But that's not really an option when Selene, the lightning rod for so many characters' anti-colonial sentiments, is the only person who seems able to stand up to the UBs. In that case, maybe the argument isn't "golly, they're just kids" but "better haole kids than ours." Harsh, but clearly "is that too harsh?" is not an appropriate question when it comes to Hala.

I also wonder what the cause for the UB invasion is understood to be here. (I'm probably missing the canon explanation from Lusamine/Looker, since I haven't finished my run of any of the Alola games, but--) Since they're so clearly designed to be The Most Invasive Species™️ in canon, it's interesting that Hala sees them as something to protect outsiders from rather than something caused by outsiders. I wonder, too, what the Tapus make of them.

Either way, he swung hard between those two concerns, and it left me feeling less like he's just complex than like he's not as decisive as I wish he was.

And with no plants there’s not food for herbivores.
No*

Depending on how today goes that might be the least of your problems. Instead, you turn to the current one.

Your opponent cautiously makes her way up the steps to the platform. There’s no railing to help her and the steps are slick with snow. You’d never actually thought about that before; she’s your first blind challenger in the twenty-six years you’ve been kahuna.
Odd framing. I feel like the vibe was meant to be "I can't do anything about all that, but I can meet the challenger in front of me." But what's literally here is "[environmental woe] might be the least of your problems" > Cuicatl, implying she's a bigger problem, which I can't imagine she is. Would help if we got one beat, or half a beat, to give us at least the outline of what those bigger problems might be.

Presumably it's the UBs + invasive species + VStar of it all, but we don't get any of that at this moment. Even just a nod to the stuff you'll explore in more detail later in the chapter would smooth this out for me.

It’s a foreign name. All of your challengers seem to have foreign names these days.
He sounds so resigned.

“The kahuna has sent out his machop,” Greg says for Cuicatl’s benefit.
Is this a reference to how the anime constantly points out the obvious? Hilarious if so.

Knock off has its uses, even when items aren’t allowed.
This felt very meta.

And then the metang begins to be spun around Ikaika’s small frame.
I don't think the passive construction served you here.

You really need to decide if that counts as a ring out or not.
Wouldn't the ref decide?

and all the challengers these days know it thanks to the web.
Some disgruntled old man energy here. Dang kids and their dang internet.

Theatrics are half the fun of your job. They make losing more bearable and winning more fun.
Checks out.

“Mitzcocotonaz, time to level up to your name.”
*Live up to?

Clever girl.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

The tyrunt starts moving, slowly, to stay on the opposite side of the wood.
He so doggedly seemed not to recognize it at first, but then we shifted to using correct names so easily. Might be nice if he had a moment of, aha, remembering what it was called. After all, there's a champion who uses a tyrantrum. He might've heard of her.

as Nalu bring his pincer around.
Brings

A keokeo promptly takes the dragon’s place.
Oh, shit. I forgot that Pixie had agreed to help in a few more fights. This is a dodgy one to use her help for!

Then the Unovan came in and found a loophole: if kids on the island challenge caught grubbin and immediately sold them to him, well, that was perfectly legal.
Oof

‘inuʻēheu.
If we've defined this word in a previous chapter, I don't remember it now. </3

Have you considered threadmarking vocab index that you could hyperlink to in-text, dump the cast list in there too? (Have I already suggested that?) I know it would make crossposting a little annoying, but mostly just for FFN since AO3 supports links.

He just sent a pretty haole woman in a sharp suit to answer his questions.
Rachel, I assume?

The strong paid their way with prize money won from the weak. You did it back in the day. Sure, most kids couldn’t afford the fanciest gear, but your ancestors never needed it. The kids can do without.
It takes Hala a moment to find his stride and show some opinions. Then, he wobbles between "it's for their [the kids'] own good" and "but the ecology of my homeland!" But this was a moment that felt crystal clear and singularly Hala: he's behind on the times and can't or won't understand that what worked for him isn't possible for a lot of others.

There are at least fifteen opportunities for $100 or more for disadvantaged kids
LOL. I'm sure Kekoa will be delighted to get funding for maybe one week of groceries for the humans only.

She deflects, pulling up pictures of toxapex-ravaged reefs. That seems to get a few nods of sympathy. Sellouts who value the artificial prettiness of the reefs more than the integrity of an ancient ecosystem. You were never winning with them anyway.
Here my grasp on the situation faltered. I needed more clarity on what's lost with the removal of the toxapex, which could just be refocusing on cases like the grubbin and how removing toxapex VStar's way also means the loss of endangered species.

There are a few rounds of bullshit, most of its sounding suspiciously like the VStar woman’s testimony.
It*

but 61 out of 100 are.
This number was oddly specific. It felt like a callback to a stat Rachel gave that we didn't actually hear.

The tapu have grown more and more displeased.
I kinda vaguely remember something about Tapu Bulu smashing a department store (?) but it might not hurt to have a quick callback here as a reminder, especially since Hala would see that differently from, say, Genesis.

It doesn’t mean you’re thrilled to crush a little girl’s dreams.
This felt half-hearted. I think that might've been your point, but it also may be one zag too many when Hala is already swinging between two extremes.

When they are taken it makes him very” The girl rips her hand away from her chest violently and squeezes it, feigning resistance. Like she was crushing her heart. “…upset.”

The display is almost enough for you to think of her as a threat.

“You have a vulpix, correct? Perhaps you should not speak on these matters.”
Crazy that he's calling her out for her hypocrisy when he's doing the exact same thing in the exact same way. The lack of self-awareness is a little weird for someone his age. I also couldn't tell if he knew she'd be especially insulted by the hawlucha or if that was just a bonus.

Your thoughts are interrupted by a shrill, oscillating cry as the keokeo screams in indignation.
The ultimate move: aaaaaaaaaa


“Encore.”

Inoa makes a frightful grin and begins to chant, hands clapping together as she grips the post with her feet. A moment later she drops down to the floor and starts doing a war dance, defiant in the face of the keokeo’s roar.
Incredible, actually. Contextualizing it as a war dance suddenly makes encore kind of badass???

Instead, you had to tell her that there wouldn’t be a body to burn at the funeral.
Oof.

“That’s the Tapu’s call. Not yours.”
WELP. Not much else to say after that, I guess, lol.

It seems like Hala, at least, was literally hand-appointed by the Tapu. (So is that true for all 4 of them?) But he also seems to have a lot of say in whether Hau succeeds him and when.

And then was the entire E4 + champion structure appointed by a US-controlled government, or is it just spicy for an outsider like Selene to become the champion of that structure? Because some of the kahunas *are* in the Elite 4, or were, but some of them seem like people you'd code as haole. (Maybe? I'm not sure what to make of Kahili, who's giving very strong WASP energy with the hair and the golf thing but has a traditional-sounding name,)

The inkay lighting the room turns towards you for a moment before she goes back to telekinetically picking apart a stapler.
LOL she's busy doing hot girl shit.

He scoffs. “You didn’t pull that shit on me. Just let me through with a standard fight.”
Yeeeah I wondered about that, too.

Also, good for Kekoa for standing up for his friend. He wouldn't have done that in the early episodes. I also have to wonder if this confrontation was hard for him (literally challenging tradition) or if he sees Hala as part of the problem because he's a leader and yet has failed to fix some of the problems Kekoa cares about.

That could be… messy.” It takes you a moment to realize he would’ve been seven or eight when Tapu Bulu destroyed a village and caused most of western Ula’Ula’s to evacuate.
Huh, does Kekoa know much about this? Would he have been in Hoenn at this time or after? (I forget exactly how old he was.) There are definitely some parallels here between what happened in Hoenn and what happened with Bulu, and I wonder if Kekoa would see it as justice or as a kind of betrayal.

A bent golf club comes to mind.
I wasn't sure what to make of this. Belatedly, I realized this might be a reference to Kahili, but one I couldn't quite sort out because it's not clear to me what their relationship is like at this point. (Also I've never encountered her in the games so I know almost nothing about her.) My first thought had initially been that he was having flashbacks to some really brutal abuse from his own past.

Oh, to be young, naïve, and powerless. To live without responsibility weighing you down. You miss it more with every passing day.
He seems like someone who has a lot of responsibilities but not actually much power.

He can stay on the VStar one. You won’t be doing those matches on the ceremonial platform anymore. Lesson learned.
Is the idea that he has a trial team for kanaka kids and another for haole kids, or something else?

“Have you declared war on Victory’s army?”

“Kahunas lost that power centuries ago.” You try to keep your response even. It makes perfect sense that an ancient war god thinks of sabotaging a corporation as declaring a war. It’s his only frame of reference.
Wowee, lots to unpack here. First, it seems like Hala has met his match in terms of holding onto traditional ideas and rituals that fail to address the complexities of the present day, oof. Comments like this from Hala seem almost patronizing, despite all his reverence, and made me wonder where he places the relevance of the Tapu if they're this out of touch and this reluctant to act.

Which brings me to my second thought: interesting and confusing that the Tapu see VStar as a major threat, presumably for ecological reasons, but were radio silent in the face of the massive ecological problems caused by Necrozma. What does he make of the UBs?

He hums approvingly. “I would fight alongside you if you challenged Victory. That is a worthy fight.” And the children are not, he says by omission.
Man, the Tapu should get in touch with Plumeria. She might be more their speed, because something tells me Hala isn't going to take him up on this.

prepared to send the hariyama out to do—something—
I think these should be ellipses instead.

A small wormhole opens up to the southwest, probably over Poni Island. For the first time in weeks you smile. It’s a small one at first but soon you’re grinning ear to ear like a maniac. Maybe the country is still doomed by one thing or another, but for the first time in ages things are going right.
No reaction to that wormhole? Doesn't that mean UBs are getting dumped onto Poni right now?

Because your kahuna and that’s what kahunas do
you're a*

she’s stopped dying her hair. It
*dyeing

Judith’s youngest daughter is packing snow onto her melting snowman, desperately trying to prop it up
A lot of that vibe around here. 🫠

Continuing to appreciate these recaps. In a fic this long, it's necessary. It feels more like watching a TV show broken into seasons than reading a novel, so it feels appropriate in that way, too. And I always love that you do these in character.

She’d only known the fox for two days
Confused which "she" and which "fox" is who here.

There is a desert in Alola. Maybe I’ll get answers whenever I visit it.
:eyes:

if I’d killed her to,
Too*

Don’t want to say more in these pages. Never know who could read them.
I was upset for professional reasons,
Kekoa really showing his age and the limits of his growth here, haha.

we do things like making Pokémon stay when they want to leave
I would think mostly the other way around, right?

And she’s right. I didn’t want to get it at the time and I’m embarrassed now, but she was right. She was right and I don’t know exactly what that means for the future. Guess I’ll have to figure that out as we go.
Some good self-awareness here at last though!

Xerneas, Maker of All:
I appreciate how each of them is addressing someone else in their journal. (I think that's *been* true in each recap before, right?) Cuicatl is thinking of her dead brother, Kekoa of his future self, and Gen of a judgemental god.

I wonder who Lyra would address if she got to write a recap--probably Gen, right?

I can’t even be trusted to know how wrong I am.
Poor thing.

Met Reshiram (?) on Ula’Ula. I guess that means she’s a priestess of a pagan god.
I'm having trouble breaking this one down though. Like, it's easy to dismiss worshippers of other gods as pagans in our world because, well, they're crazies who believe in something silly and made up (unlike me and my god), right? Harder when both of those gods provably exist. Sure, I guess those gods could do battle to earn followers or land or something, but that doesn't seem like something either Reshiram or Xerneas care about, nor do they seem to have ever fought for reasons of their own.

That’s like death, isn’t it? Where your mind stops working and something else comes of it. Or is that rebirth? Or just change? You did give us psychic types. Maybe this is what we were supposed to do with them.
She's really on the brink of something here, but successfully stuffs down the implications of these thoughts to be a Good Daughter.
 

WildBoots

Don’t underestimate seeds.
Location
between a hope and a prayer
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. moka-mark
  2. solrock
  3. breloom
Finally starting a new arc! 🎉 ✨ I missed these guys. I was thinking about the gang as I was falling asleep last night. It's really something special to be following a long-running fic like this. ❤️

Hazard Pay
Not ominous at all.

It’s 3:37 A.M
It occurs to me that if Cuicatl can't sleep, she runs a bigger risk of waking others up than someone else would just because she has to have audio cues turned on. 🙃

You let your anger get the best of you and you weren’t the one to pay the price.
That about sums it up. ✅ And she remains a glutton for punishment throughout.

You can’t give them a lot of choices, because you don’t have a lot of choices,
Here's the other summary of where things stand lol.

The nurse asked if you wanted to file an excessive force complaint. Like that was an option. Complain about the government to the government and expect them to do anything about it.
Woof, yeah. The nurse and his assistant can yell at him, but he still has all the power as far as Cuicatl is concerned--and it doesn't matter that he doesn't actually have the kind of power he wishes he had. (Also a common theme in the power imbalances between pokemon and their trainers, oof. Most people here are trying to punch up, but it's awfully hard to tell where you're stepping sometimes.) She may be assuming more doom and gloom here than is strictly true (or she might not!), but regardless of whether it actually hurt her to speak up, it wouldn't help her. Certainly wouldn't help Pix. Meanwhile, Hala seems remorseful for now but not like someone who's learned his lesson and definitely won't do it again.

I also appreciated this moment as world-building. It makes sense that determining "excessive force" would be determined by paperwork and convincing the right judge; brutality is baked into this world rather than something anyone assumes can be avoided.

the same dreams of the broken, damned, and dead.
Alt title, lol.

Without the sunlight beating down on you the world is almost cold. You won’t die of heatstroke at night
I wish the opening scene had referenced the snow to make this juxtaposition even starker and weirder. Maybe she feels the cold on the back of her neck as she's falling asleep?

Everything here seems to be blazingly fast. Anything that senses the world by smell or hearing won’t know something’s attacking until it’s right on top of you.
I was a little confused here. At first it felt like both of these statements were describing wild pokemon, but on the re-read it seems like everything = wild and anything = your team?

The pokémon here seem to fear humans. That means there must be someone nearby to ask for help.
Bold assumption, lol.

Maybe better than Genesis ever did. You wonder if someday she’ll be disgusted that she ever touched you.
Yeeeeeah for once Cuicatl isn't just being self-deprecating here, lol. RIP.

“Be a sec?”
We were talking about syntax in DMs recently, so I'm just highlighting this as an example of your signature clipped sentences.
I swear I'm not trying to rag on you about it, just thinking through it more.

I think there's a danger of it sounding like the command form of a verb, and I also think it's more unusual with some verbs than others. Like, I don't bat an eye at "I've Got a hangover." (To me, this suggests a terse speaker though.) But I hear it less often with other verbs, especially when it's a first-person pronoun being dropped. So in this instance, I think a sentence fragment is the right call for groggy dialogue, but it would sound more natural to me as "One sec?"

That said, I don't think being unconventional is actually wrong since I can always parse your dialogue. It's more that if it's unusual to my ear, I want it to be associated with a specific character's voice (or with a dialect/slang used by a specific in-group).

I do some of it with Una in Spring. Like, I don't think it's at all historically accurate that English speakers 500 years ago were more formal or more long-winded--they had their slang and weird abbreviations and fart jokes too--but when she avoids using contractions and uses multi-syllable words it still does the job of making her sound a little off. You can always tell a Chris sentence from an Una sentence.

(Sorry, that got extremely long-winded. Just food for thought!)

“I’m familiar with him, yes. Please send your father my regards.” Lyra grunts instead of answering. Miss Bell opens a door in front of you and Lyra guides you through. As soon as the door is shut, Miss Bell’s tone shifts from the casual affect she’d had with Lyra to something a lot more rushed and serious.
I do think each time a character does an action it should be a new paragraph. (So break after regards, answering, and through.)

But just before you can answer Lyra cuts you off.

“That’s insulting and you know it.
Wow, yes. Goodness does Cuicatl ever need someone to bargain on her behalf every now and then. And this feels like something only Lyra can do--Gen is too people-pleasing and Kekoa is too angry (and doesn't know the corporate jargon). This also strikes me as a reasonable progression for Lyra: she doesn't need to be besties with Cuicatl to want to be her attack dog because she just wants someone to protect and she's lost Gen. We saw this when she took everyone out for udon, too.

“Fifty thousand for an attempt, double that for a success. Final offer.
Slight bump is better than nothing! Good job, Lyra!

The world twists and lurches around you. Up is down, down is up, and there are no vibrations in the air, no echoes to sense the world with. Everything feels impossibly large and suffocatingly small at the same time. Reality spins and spins and spins and then there’s solid ground under you but the world is still spinning. You collapse to your hands and knees and retch.
Good description! (I would split the paragraph here though.)

“She was sent to a game park on the mainland during the darkness.
LOL is VStar unironically doing Jurassic Park?

“And you didn’t have anyone here to contain her?”
I guess they didn't qualify for a master ball since they're not a player character.
Does this setting have master balls???

Your gift can smooth the words out. It can’t for the body language. That’s more important than words for most pokémon.
For real. She's, like, constantly translating with one hand tied behind her back...

You scream, shrill and vibrating,
... but at least we'll always have screm. <3

You’re pretty sure pokéballs can’t be digested.
I meannnnn if breaking her original ball is anything to go by, it's more that she should be grateful that pokeballs are too small for a tyrantrum to chew, lol. (Probably mostly tearing and swallowing with those teeth ... right?) God, what a visual though.

“My daughter,” she growls. “You have my daughter.”
Oh no (EDM remix).

She snorts and slams her tail into the ground. “I have two mothers! Do I have two fathers?”
How to raise your dragon, PFLAG edition.

Though the easy yes to the question is a bit of a hiccup. TyrantrMum wouldn't know that Kekoa exists.

“Can I show you my teeth? I have very sharp teeth.”

“Yes,” the tyrantrum grumbles. “Show them to me.”
Extremely blessed.

Earthshaker snorts. “Then it is a good name.”
Curious if she'd had a different name picked out. Then Coco could have two moms and two names--why not?

“An…” There’s not a good word in Upper Draconic to describe your relationship with Miss Bell.
Starting here left me a little lost about where Cuitcatl was going with this, since it didn't follow directly from the previous passage.

Suggestion:
...Father would beat you for the quality of a dinner that would be fine on any other day. That sort of thing.

At any rate, Rachel should be able to help. You don't deserve it, but Coco does.

You open your mouth to explain, but
there’s no good word in Upper Draconic to describe your relationship with Miss Bell.
(Though if she thinks Rachel plans to put down Earthshaker ........ This might not be a favor she can call in.)

“I do not know the name you would use,” she says. “He has wings and three heads. Does that help?”

Hydreigon. Coco’s father is a hydreigon.
I suppose Earthshaker was down for a blended family from the start, lol.

“I know them, yes. My sister is one.”

Earthshaker snorts. “And how does that work?”
JK.

Although a dinosaur and an alien robot might not be the best accountants.
LOLLLLL this is such a Persephone sentence.

With every minute your back gets lower and lower to the ground until you eventually pass into peaceful sleep.
Weirdly detaching her body here, almost as if the narrator was watching from elsewhere instead of inside her head.

Suggestion: With every minute, you slide lower and lower until you eventually pass into peaceful sleep.

You, uh, okay here’s one. The tyrantrum is labeled ‘climate change’ and you’re labeled ‘the government.’
OH MY GOD. Genius. 🤌 No notes.

“My mom hatched some pokémon of my own.
Okay so I actually know a Major Spoiler (because I couldn't not click the spoiler box in the cast list!) aaaand I wasn't sure if this was an error or just very sneaky foreshadowing??? There's also a missing quotation mark in this passage.

Overall, fun chapter! She's making baby steps with her own pokemon and has made a significant stride toward her bigger goals. Devastating that, even with an amount of money that would be utterly incomprehensible to most 15-year-olds, she still can't have everything she wants. Money is only part of the problem. Actually, she's not even sure what to do with it at all yet, RIP! But things are certainly looking up for her for a moment--nice to see her feeling more confident!--and I'm sure nothing will happen to mess that up.

STOCKS SOAR: END OF ALOLA CRISIS HELPS SAGGING MARKET
I always appreciate your attention to these kinds of details. The main cast is smol, mostly powerless, and driven by personal stakes. BUT the wider world never goes away. These snippets are so incredibly on point.

The one thing I'll say is that there are so many of them, it actually feels like a recap of Arc 3. (It would be kind of neat to get the news media take on each arc's events alongside the main cast vlog entries!) The news item that feels most pressing is the one we didn't get: the world's response to Cuicatl and Momma Dino.

“This is great news. Tremendous news. The best news,” President Trump said in a tweet this afternoon.
Though, Jesus Christ, I was not expecting that jump scare. Truly, there is no escape. Laughing and crying.

The light’s return brings our fair-weather occupiers back to us.
I thought mandibuzz was literal at first and I was really confused. Since mandibuzz -> vulture take some translation, mandibuzz -> profiteering colonizers was a harder jump to make.

Bullseye Media
Lol is this QAnon?

Woah, that's a hard transition after a litany of articles about the present. I would help to get Rachel's reaction to the headlines and see why it makes her think 20 years back. Or, as I suggested above, these headlines could go into the previous recap instead.

“It seems you’re doing a lot of things. I’m going to go through them and ask why you joined. Okay?”
This is very informal for a headmaster with a big, stuffy office.

Suggestions: "I hear you've been busy. Let's talk about your extracurriculars, shall we?"

You don’t really know what a resumé is but it sounded like it was important.
I'm not sure how old Rachel would've been in 2000, but I will say most people above the age of 12 or 13 know what a resume is, kinda, they just dob't know how to make one or what a good one looks like.

We often know more about other people’s minds than our own. It makes us focus too much on other people, too little on ourselves. And by the time we notice,
Oh, "we." Okay.

“Did you push my dreams that way just to get a walk?” He doesn’t deny it. Bastard wants as much sunlight as he can get now that it’s back. “Fine, just for a few minutes, though.”
LOL. I like the rascally behavior, but

a) that was a deep cut just to get Rachel to go for a walk. I feel like there was something easier he could've reached for, and

b) the lampshading wasn't successful for me, I'm so sorry, haha.

A professor at The Henderson School for Preternatural Development once told you that teleportation could be unpleasant. That was a dramatic understatement.
This feels like the actual start of this chapter!

Separate yourself wholly from the world outside until you can’t notice it changing around you.
Surely this is a one-time application and not a lifestyle choice. 🙃

When you open your eyes and pull yourself out of your mind, you’re on Foster’s Paradise. Or Aether Paradise to everyone but the man who renamed it after himself.
Strange to emphasize the name that most people don't use and readers wouldn't recognize.

It’s going to take a long time to make this place look good again.
And money, but I guess that's not an issue for them. 🙃

Enjoying this description, though!

Jabari’s a few seats away from Chris’s right. He’s wearing a polo shirt and nice jeans, which is about the most you can expect from him.
Not sure why she's taking digs at his nice jeans when the boss is literally wearing basketball shorts. I do think it makes sense that everyone is dressed nicer than the boss--very telling--but her judgement doesn't, especially since it sounds like he is dressed appropriately for his job.

“Oh, and Rick won’t be joining us today.”

You see Emmanuel wince. The board can roughly be split into suits and non-suits. You wear, well, not a suit, but a lavender dress and black jacket. It flatters your figure enough to get Chris to actually pay attention to you. Meetings are largely Winston egging Chris’s worst instincts on while Emmanuel and Rick, CFO and Chief Counsel, try to talk him down as Jabari stares blankly into space, unsure what any of it means unless it comes into his field of expertise. Then you’ll make your case when the fighting’s played out. Waiting lets you see how serious Chris is about the issue and avoid arguments he won’t find effective.
Something funky happening in the order we receive information here. We learn Rick is absent > Emmanuel winces > we talk about Rachel instead. This would benefit from restructuring.

‘You can’t do this, you can’t do that, you can’t do anything without me!’” He scoffs. “If I wanted to hear that I’d call my ex.
LOL that paints such a picture.

ou do your best not to react at all. Nothing to be done while he’s bullying someone with Winston backing him up
Suggestion: Nothing to be done while Winston is backing him up.

but some were sales of the less desired members of ‘orphan teams’ from the trainers who died on the trail or defending the settlements.
RRRRRRRIP

Get some unpaid interns, maybe? I have three handling a volcarona and that goes just fine.”
*That's going?

I don’t think we could keep up our current per-trainer catch rates.
Suggestion: our current catch-per-trainer rates

But we’re a pokémon catching company. We’re still going to be catching pokémon.
TPC when asked if they were bothered by PETA's response to Black and White. Gotta catch em all, after all!

A sixteen-year-old got burned so badly the teeth were almost too damaged to use to identify the body.
Cool, cool, cool. Everything is so copacetic.

we no longer have a contractor with a Class V license. This precludes several of our most lucrative captures.”

Chris frowns and glances at you. “Is there anyone in the pipeline?”

“One candidate. Not sure how much of her thesis she has done.”
Oh no.

CHRIS FOSTER DENIES PLANS FOR VSTAR IPO
This set felt more relevant to the moment at hand.

FIVE INJURIED
Oops

BUTTERFREE GIRL GOT A GLOW UP
Oh no, the internet remembers her.

He seems like a hard-working businessman who is providing jobs for our youth. I do have a problem with his secretary, one Rachel Bell,
LOLOLOL yes, of course. BTW, I know she's not his secretary (she HAS a secretary, after all) but I don't know what her actual title is.

What a difference a week can make.
Aww, I do appreciate the parallel to the ending of the previous chapter.

I take back what I said earlier: THIS is the real start of this chapter. Push the first set of articles into the recap, bump the second set to the top of this chapter, "What a difference a week can make," single sentence transition, all the teleport stuff. The scene that currently follows this quote, Foster and Victini's visit, can come directly after the board meeting, maybe precipitated by a single sentence about what Foster is interrupting.

Unless, is the idea that the Cuicatl chapter happened after that staff meeting? I definitely didn't assume that on the first pass.

“No,” he whispers. “The company will. I staked my reputation on this. You know what the other pros say behind closed doors? They say I’m an idiot failing upwards. That I’d fail at any real job. This is my real job and I’m going to show them how fucking smart I am.”
LOL, is he basically just Elon Musk? Surprised by this moment of vulnerability.

Expected. The God of Victory doesn’t want to give in.
Did I miss the backstory about how he even came into possession of a god, or do we just not know yet at this point?

“Oh, please. I rented a limo.”

“And a limo driver?”

“And a limo driver,” he mutters.
The idea that he would've driven the limo himself GTA-style is so funny.

“The tyrantrum will go for a lot,” Chris says.
Oh noooo there goes Cuicatl's buy-back-the-family fund, huh.

Victini still whacks the edge of your mind for the thought.
At first I thought that Victini was shaking her down to get access to the thought, not punishing her for it.

He nods. “I’ll call Shirona.
:wowzard: Dang, I really need to draw some fanart of the AU where Cuicatl & Una just hang out talking about myths, drinking tea, and worshipping the old gods, hahaha. Cynthia is, of course, invited to join.

She likes Alola
She does own a vacation home on a beach. ✅

The one by Lila’s condo is one of them.
I wondered when we'd touch base with them again!

You stay a bit farther back. Shoes aren’t cheap and you weren’t anticipating she’d be at the beach instead of in their condo.
You can take them off, booboo.

Finally, Lila turns her head back to face you. They into your eyes
Is Lila they/she or just they them? Also missing a word.

Don’t want to cede too much power before you know exactly how this interaction is going to go.
It's Chex Mix, Rachel.

“I paid her well,” you counter. “She knew what she was getting into and decided the reward was greater than the risk.”
That feels like not the biggest priority, Rachel.

“Under the laws of Alola, yes.” You’ve triple checked that. It’s VStar’s entire business model.
Welp. Fair enough. I guess it would have to be if teenagers are allowed to have tyrunts in this setting.

“Make sure she uses some of that money to see a dentist. It’ll make it easier for me to identify the body when you get her killed.”
Unless a volcarona does it, apparently lol.

“Perhaps you could get out of my house.”
Yeeeeah.

Now you just have to deal with the federal and commonwealth governments…
I wanted just a little from her at the end! How is she feeling in the face of all that? Is there self-loathing? Pride for having successfully caught all the things she was juggling? Just exhaustion? Whatever it is, I want the last line to hit on it.

I wasn't sure about the placement of all the news articles, but I did thoroughly enjoy all of them. I hope those papers/platforms continue to be reoccurring characters!

One area where this fic really succeeds is making canon characters like Lila, Selene, and Cynthia feel impressive even when we don't see them often or in a ton of detail. They have connections and weight to throw around, and we can feel it.

So hype for Cuicatl and Cynthia storytime, omg.
 

Ambyssin

Gotta go back. Back to the past.
Location
Residency hell
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. silvally-dragon
  2. necrozma-ultra
  3. milotic
  4. zoroark-soda
  5. dreepy
  6. mewtwo-ambyssin
  7. vulpix-ambyssin
I am back in an effort at getting points for custom vulpix sprite purposes.

1.8
-Oh, so she didn't actually meet her mother's pokémon for a good while after she was born. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised her father would keep that information from her and keep the pokémon out of the picture. Seems to fit with what's been said about him in the preceding flashback.
-The way Renfield talks about deposited memories makes me imagine an ATM. ATM reuniclus.
-Ah, classic not setting up the tent tarp. I remember that from the summer camp days. :sadbees:
-Reading Cuicatl carrying Pixie reminds me of the SuMo anime and Lillie's tendency to always carry Snowy around in her arms. Trendy fox accessory~
-"Seven years from now when the world ends" Uhhh what? That's so out of nowhere I'm not sure if it's dark humor or a hint at something else. Or, like, some sort of Mayan Calendar reference even though it's 2019 in the present.
-Ah, yes. Thank you, fic, for reminding me of the unpleasantness of horseback riding IRL. :unquag: Glad to see these three tolerating each other.
-Cuicatl likes her pirate music. Or Hans Zimmer. Either way, noted. It's a cute character trait.
-So, he tripped Cuicatl, right? That's the implication here. I'm amazed these three are somehow still traveling together. This level of dysfunction gives me flashbacks to 2017.
-Pixie still goes ballistic over eevee, I see. I feel like at some point she'll have to grapple with this. Not from Cuicatl getting one. Maybe one of her traveling buddies.

1.9
-Man, this opening is relatable. Sums up everything I don't like about flying, sans the "jostling metal bird thousands of feet in the air" bit.
-VCRs in 2015? And I see Jurassic Park is back.
-Is... Is Kekoa in Hoenn during the climax of ORAS' plot? It's giving me Groudon Drought vibes and the ground's shaking like some big nature kaiju is waking from its slumber.
-Oh, no, there's rain too. This is more like Emerald, then. And it seems like Kekoa lost his parents as a result. :sadwott:
-Army joining bit has mentions of B2W2... and XD of all games? Huh. Well, I guess it would make sense you'd acknowledge Orre. But Kekoa's dad was military, right? Surprised there isn't at least a bit of pushback about Jabari meeting a similar fate. Though it sounds like he ends up out of Kekoa's life anyway.
-Never mind, there's a reunion after all. As bitter as could be expected. And it is in the present. I don't know why, but I thought in 1.8 they weren't at Akala yet. That they were supposed to be doing some task for VStar first. But Paniola is Akala Island. So maybe they were on Akala already in 1.8? I think some travel happened offscreen that I'm not entirely aware of.
-Ah, yes, another argument where there are no winners here. Frankly it's a miracle this group is still traveling together. I want to say at some point they'll break apart.

1.10
-I seem to remember the blood sacrifice thing being in the original and Cuicatl actually doing it early on. Looks like it was toned down for this version.
-This paras talk is interesting. I've... seen other portrayals of the line that end to depict the relationship with the mushroom in a more comical light. But it does seem like there are some shared mind instincts here. I wonder if your parasect do have the mushroom fully assume control and if that changes their demeanor drastically.
-Aww, Ce is kinda cute. And eager. Which probably means that she's going to go through something horrible later.
-I'm a bit unclear as to what exactly the psychic connection/singing stuff does for Cuicatl. It seems to incapacitate her quite a bit though. Like for multiple days, from the look of things. Though it's adorable Ce is... trying to help in some capacity. And/or is naive enough to fall for what seems like a little prank from Pixie.
-It's hitting me that the scenes in these chapters are on the shorter side, but you get a lot across with smaller word counts. It's an impressive skill.
-Oh, are Cuicatl and Kekoa burying the hatchet? For reals? If it sticks, that's mature and responsible of them. And wraps that stuff up so there can be at least some cooperation between the two going forward. Maybe they won't break off out of dislike for one another, but for plot reasons instead. 🤔

1.11
-So, Team Skull has been rebranded as this group trying to reclaim the land from colonizers of old. Which in this case seems to take the form of the League and, presumably, its champion. Who's probably Sun or Moon in this fic. The take on the legends is interesting. I think this is the second time I've seen Solgaleo portrayed in a... less-than-benevolent light (hah). But the other time was Inke's PMD fic that's still in its infancy. I think most of the time Solgaleo and Lunala are both considered good-natured and it's Necrozma that's the problematic one. Definitely didn't contribute to that one. Nope. No siree.
-Ah, so there have been UB problems. This is definitely post-SuMo, then. Or post-USUM? Or a dash of the latter? Blacephalon was a USUM thing, so it's not out of the question.
-Welp. The hatchet may be buried but it's very clear Kekoa would rather not be traveling with these two. Not that I expected him to say anything to the contrary.
-I like Uffe. Seems like one of those rare nice, helpful folks who pop up in these sorts of trainer fics. And does have a decent, down to earth view on things. Makes some reasonable guesses about Cuicatl's situation despite having just met her. I'm not sure if his words will actually soften the two's dynamic. It could be a first step toward it, though.
-It... looks like, going off this last scene, that there is softening going on. Kekoa takes Cuicatl's talents much better than I was expecting given his fervent dislike of her. But maybe Uffe was able to get through to him after all.

1.12
-Okay, it looks like we've jumped back to the same Pixie :screm: ing at an eevee from a couple of chapters back. The dates help with that, but I'd be lying if I said those are things I remember about these chapters. I was briefly wondering if this was just a second instance of Genesis trying to find an eevee and Pixie screeching it away.
-Genesis is... The Spider Whisperer. [Insert Madame Web joke here.] But also wow going for big spider eating eevee. I still feel like Genesis is going to get one somehow. I doubt you'd make such a big point about Pixie's hatred of them if she wasn't going to have to contend with one for an extended period of time.
-It took me a second to realize Genesis' narration is misgendering Kekoa :unquag: . That's where the second-person can throw me off. Though it looks like there was a slip up in the egg scene where Kekoa's correctly gendered after he asks "What's the judgment, doc?" (Boy, it feels weird to call correctly gendered a slip up.)
-Finally introducing trial captains. And it looks like the first one's original for the fic. And a buddy of Kekoa's.
-Oh, hey, look. I was right! But we skipped a step and ended up with a leafeon. In that "Became the wrong eeveelution" situation. Which is heartbreaking.
-Lmao Pixie got wrecked. She (and Cuicatl) are not very good at this. Which is... different for trainer fics. I mean, yeah, plenty have a protag that isn't perfect. But so far she's pretty much had zero success.
-Never mind, I guess Cuicatl got her Z-Crystal? Interesting that the trials are happening offscreen. Will we experience it through Genesis, then? I wonder if Cuicatl genuinely beat the trial or if it's more like Ash Ketchum in the Indigo League where he got a bunch of pity badges for doing nice things that didn't involve winning a gym battle.

1.13
-Time for fox POV again. Which means incoming sadness. :screm:
-RIP absol. And one— no, two of Pixie's siblings, apparently. :sadwott:
-Are those cryogonal that have been put into Lanakila as an "invasive species" of sorts?
-Being a wild pokémon in this sending sounds like a wonderful experience. And by wonderful, I mean horrifying. Especially since they all have a level of sapience you don't tend to see in most trainer fics.
-Ah, yep. With the flashbacks, I had a feeling we'd be seeing when Pixie's mother left her. The human that shows up is described in such an alien way also adds to the mystery of it all.
-And back to the present where we are actually seeing a trial. Cuicatl's, from the look of it. Ooooor not, because it cuts away. No, wait, we do get snippets of some sort of battle but things are, uh, interrupted. In a manner of speaking. I'm... not really sure what Fluffman is supposed to be in this context. Some sort of pokémon with vague psychic powers? But unlike redcrest (sneasel or weavile), I can't really pin it beyond that.
-Aww. I'll miss Ce. I did like her. Shame Pixie couldn't handle it.
-Oh, I guess this is where the ankle sprain thing that was mentioned before happens? Gotcha. We're getting a bit timey-wimey with jumping around here, but I see the reasoning.

1.14
-How nice of you to offer readers an egg in these trying times.
-This is where the second person works against me again as the reader. This newborn perspective is unique, yes, though it's also got a good deal of intelligence already. Magical critter and all that. But I can't picture a species of any sort, even with the "we're both white" thing she notes about herself and Pixie.
-A tyrunt, huh? Yeah, that is a wild card to throw into it. And obviously made for Kekoa with his love of Jurassic Park. Which makes the fact she's imprinted on Cuicatl all the more heart-wrenching because you're setting things up for Tyrunt to not to cooperate with Kekoa. Either she'll need an obedience arc of sorts... or maybe she'll end up with Cuicatl.
-Oooooooooooor Cuicatl gets Tyrunt with no conflict whatsoever because of the whole brother stuff. Y'know what? That's fair. And nothing saying she can't loan him Tyrunt for battling purposes. Since he's clearly better at it. And also there's the whole Pixie thing.
-Tyrunt being referred to as a proto-bird has to be a cut toward the stuff about T-rex having feathers or avian traits. Cuz Kekoa was ranting about that in previous Jurassic Park scenes.
-Still, Tyrunt's a neat addition. I hope she actually gets to stay and Pixie doesn't force her to be kicked to the curb.
 

Shiny Phantump

Through Dream, I Travel
Location
Hallownest
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. sylveon
  2. absol-mega
  3. silvally-psychic
  4. ninetales-phantump
  5. cosmog
  6. gallade-phantump
  7. ceruledge-phantump
Hello, I'm here for Blitz again! Gonna hit the Poison arc, there's a lot going on in there so far!

It's interesting to see how Plumeria and Guzma bounce off each other here. Not surprising, I suppose, it's been very well established by now that Plumeria's... dedicated to the cause. And it makes sense that Guzma would be shaken by what happens to him in the game itself. Even if it's extremely Broken Things, it's still melancholy to watch her refuse a way out, given what's about to happen to her.

The first time I read over it, I found the sleepover very sweet. Now it feels like a "last meal of the condemned" kinda thing— I know this one's a 4 year jump back, but from our perspective it's probably gonna be about the last we see of her as she exists before the whole Apotheosis thing. I like Plumeria in any incarnation, but there really only was one way things could realistically go for her. Probably shouldn't feel sorry for her, she signed up for this, but hell I can't help it. Even if she's not really making the best decisions she's making sympathetic ones.

Acerola's not a character I'd felt strongly about from the prior arcs but the nonchalance of the "country's fucked" delivery started to warm me up to her. Part of me wants to say it feels like she picked up some of the Nanu deadpan by proximity, but it doesn't seem like they get along so well here.

The safecracking is fun and all but the dagger is really the star of that scene to me. The fact it can so readily tamper with Plumeria's mind is delightfully ominous.

You close your eyes for the final time…

…and something wakes up.
...and this has to be my favourite endline of the fic so far. Hands down, don't have to check the other chapters.

And 7.2 picks up right where we left off. The Dread Commander sure is something. Haven't actually gotten a read on her yet, aside from the fact that the whole "dread commander to shadow army of the dead" thing has some pretty inherently inbuilt red flags. I really wonder who the people who made her were? Very notable dangling future thread. A civilization from beyond the stars sends my head to Ultra Megalopolis but that just feels wrong, too much of a techy vibe and not a dark magic vibe.

In the previous chapter I assumed the cop-faller being referenced was Anabel but here Acerola's insinuating it could be Nanu instead... I don't have anything to make of that right yet, but very much tucking that away in my thought cabinet for later. I'll file Shirona making a pact with Giratina away beside it, too. I wouldn't have expected she was there for...
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oh. well yeah. in that case it checks out.

Damn, how many arcs has this been going straight over my head for now??? She has the Cynthia team, I really should have noticed this sooner. This isn't even my first read of the chapter! Apparently they can use me as radiation shielding on account of the fact I'm apparently a bit dense. (In my defence I thought Togekiss was exclusively a Volo thing, forgot Cynthia had one too. Completely forgot about the Spiritomb on Shirona's team, too.)

Plumeria sounds like she's still in there in some capacity, which sounds... unpleasant, given she's just the "primary host" and doesn't have the actual control she was promised.

Pleasantly surprised by how well Lyra and Genesis are taking this whole thing. I was really expecting that to go worse for Cuicatl.
You knew some memories had changed but you hadn’t thought about what else Tapu Lele could have done. How much of who you are as a person was changed by her desires. If the old you died in all the ways that matter in the desert and now you’re just someone else living in her body.
I know it's a side note given for this beat given all the everything happening but I do love this kind of existential question. Curious to see how this train of thought affects her down the line, if at all.

I'm here for how sweet everyone's being to Cuicatl in the aftermath of this. Not brushing off what happened, but... As I said, could've gone a lot worse.

7.3's twitter segments are amusing. Seeing Wilford take a well-deserved blow made me laugh, he really does just tell on himself like that. The mixed media format works well as a palette cleanser after the last few very character-dense chapters before we move on to Noci.

what the hell why are we cops I don’t wanna be a bastard
@skullsrus
favourite tweet of the chapter.

Another side note, I take psychic damage every time I am reminded that President Donald Trump is an existing canon character to Broken Things.

Gage is a piece of shit. Glad he's dead. Not to say good work Noci(?), but good work Noci(?). Sorry about the extra dose of shit to be traumatized about, Levi. Of course, that doesn't mean my approval of Noci(?) has gone up, Metagross are indeed terrifying.

And that's before factoring in the fight with Cuicatl's team and subsequent psychic fucker. Holy fucking shit.

So. Uh. Mentally moving on for that massive pile of implications I can't untangle: Time for 7.4.

I remember seeing the fic updates post for this one and expecting it to go worse for Genesis and Cuicatl's relationship. I suppose it makes a lot of sense that she tries to think of things in a moral binary. Cuicatl sure is calling that into question. Lyra's got a verty good read on Cuicatl's behaviour, though, which isn't a total surprise for me but is more than I expected— though given 7.2 I suppose I shouldn't be surprised at all. She's gone from psychic tampering hazard to psychic tampering victim in Lyra's eyes.

The pool and the splashfight and whatnot are very cute. No particular notes. I hope she gets to do it again like she wanted.

...Of course Cuicatl's plan for dealing with the Noci(?) situation is to martyr herself. Hardly even a blip on the "medically concerning things about Cuicatl" radar at this point, but good thing Gen and Lyra are there to stop it. Not that Noci(?) was actually gonna kill her, but... Glad to have some other witnesses on that whole thing.

Also glad that Gen gets confirmation Levi's alright. Really, everything shook out here alright. Our bunch really do seem to be getting better at handling things with emotional maturity.

Except maybe Kekoa. Wonder how on earth he's doing, given his last known location. Guess that answer's probably not too far off.
 

Negrek

The One Star
Staff
Hey, Perse! Back for my arc-ly catchup on this fic. This was a chunky one, with a whole lot happening; nevertheless, an easy read and very engaging.

I'll be honest, I didn't expect the Genesis x Cuicatl relationship to last this long or be this... genuinely fairly healthy. I was in full on "oh noooooo" mode about it in the last arc, like, surely there is no way that this first relationship between two deeply fucked-up and inexperienced teenagers can end well, but they seem to be muddling through surprisingly well? Even master manipulator Lyra didn't manage to break them up (isn't sure she wants to break them up?). I just can't see this one lasting long-term, though; there's definitely some indication at the end of the last chapter that Cuicatl may start pushing Gen away again out of the conviction that everyone's going to betray her anyway and/or she's going to die alone and being in a relationship with someone will just end up hurting her anyway. One way or another, it's hard for me to see these two working out in the end.

And speaking of that last chapter... What an immense oof. :( The truth had to come out sometime, and maybe it was even better that it be right on the heels of the awful Class V defense so that Cuicatl can kinda just. Get all that nastiness behind her all at once, but still. Heartbreaking. And Cynthia super fucked up not just in hiding everything from Cuicatl in the first place (though understandably so) but having that, in turn, mean that Cuicatl has to hear the truth from Nanu of all people, guy with possibly the worst bedside manner in the entire region. I am watching with interest and trepidation to see where Cuicatl goes from here, with the goal of finding her "mother's" pokémon well and truly shot. I think things are about to get awful scary with her. She has some insanely strong pokémon now, a violent temperament, and nothing left to live for. She might possibly end up aiming at people who to some extent "deserve it" (MASSIVE side-eye to Acerola for showing up to ask for Cuicatl's blood just when she was at her most vulnerable and despairing), but I think things are going to get ugly one way or another. With Alice no longer in the picture, it seems like the all the guardrails around Cuicatl are gone.

That if anything is what I think might end up driving Gen and Cuicatl apart. Gen absolutely does not have the stomach for a lot of the things Cuicatl is both willing and in some cases maybe even eager to do, and having that all shown to her very starkly may be enough to force them apart. They both made a lot of progress in this arc, and if anyone Gen would probably be the person to stop Cuicatl from going on a suicidal rampage, but it's hard for me to imagine Cuicatl letting her in with the magnitude of hurt she's suffering from right now. Even if Gen wants to stay in a relationship, it's hard for me to imagine Cuicatl letting her.

The themes of family and, especially, parenthood, really ramped up in this section. Lots of musings about what makes a good parent, how different species handle parenting and caring for others, Cuicatl inexplicably being a good mom for her pokémon (or at least as good a mom as they're likely to find--sorry, Pixie). Themes of power and control, human-pokémon relationships and relationships between the colonizers and the colonized. Themes of home and the desire to build a home for those whose own is lacking--or destroyed, or has never been known. Lots of juicy stuff! It's going to be interesting to see how it all comes together in the end, too. I know I've asked you a million times how long you expect this story to be and where we are in the progression and then immediately forget the answer, but it definitely feels like we're working towards the climax here, moving towards two thirds to three quarters done with the story. There's a lot to untangle yet, and several competing plotlines, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you ultimately go with all these different ideas.

One thing I found particularly interesting in this section is the ambivalence towards humans. Humans are often the villains in this story, since they have pretty objectively fucked Alola up and developed systems that are hurtful towards both the islands and their pokémon and other humans. But, on the flip side, you have pokémon societies that manage to be EVEN MORE FUCKED UP than the human one, or which are at least equally shitty but in different ways. Sometimes pokémon raised around humans are kinder than they might be otherwise, more inclined towards cooperation and less obsessed with strength. Lyra's conversation with the salazzle and trying to explain how humans will cooperate and punish people who go against them was pretty fascinating in that regard. Humans really are objectively weaker than the majority of pokémon, but nevertheless they've conquered the world. Humans suck but also no pokémon seems to have figured out how to do things better. It's sort of a bleak statement, but at the same time there's the sense of potential--that it doesn't have to be this way, that there is potential for humanity (and pokémonity, presumably) to do better.

As far as characters go, this arc did feel a bit like it was The Cuicatl Show--one way or another, all the characters' storylines revolved around her, even Kekoa's, despite the fact that he's now far away and working for Skull. To me, it felt a little bit like you weren't entirely sure what to do with some of the characters; Genesis was mostly lurking around and clinging to Cuicatl, which makes sense given her situation, but did make her feel a bit static to me throughout all this. Likewise Lyra; I think she's kind of coming along since she's trying to complete her island challenge anyway and wants to supervise/possibly still has some hope of getting with Genesis again but mostly doesn't really know what she wants? I think it's hard to write characters who don't really know what they want and are casting around trying to figure it out, and I think some of the characters felt like they were suffering from that in this arc, Genesis probably most of all. I was glad to see her start looking for jobs in her last chapter--nice to see her starting to choose a direction for herself, and one that was unrelated to Cuicatl, although who knows how subsequent events might have thrown a wrench into that idea. I don't by any means dislike Cuicatl, and there were a lot of interesting developments for her in this arc, but I think some of the other characters may have suffered a little as a result. As a certified Kekoa enjoyer in particular I was sad to see so little of him, after feeling like he wasn't super present in the last arc, either.

As far as Kekoa's storyline goes, though, I do have to give a shout-out to Armoranth. Pretty much immediately after Kekoa's situation was explained to him I was like, "Uh oh, guess we get to see how much he enjoys being someone else's pokémon," and yeah, that was pretty much what the whole arrangement was built on, heh. He did have some nice growth in at least better understanding and respecting his pokémon this arc, and it seems like he's maybe starting to properly interrogate his goals and whether what he's doing actually has any chance at accomplishing them. Learning?? For Kekoa???? Only time will tell, I suppose. With the next arc being "poison," I hope we do end up seeing a lot more of him!

One character who I really enjoyed this arc was Pixie. I thought she had some very clear movement, and it's refreshing to see her finally breaking out of her self-hating shell and beginning to incorporate some new perspectives on life. She and Sitrus bounce off each other really well--Sitrus probably being my favorite character introduced in this arc. I feel like this fox might actually be okay! As okay as it's possible for a fox to be! Eventually! The idea of a sanctuary for expelled vulpix is a lovely one, and while it clearly comes from a selfish place, there are glimmers of hope there for sure. If nothing else, sometimes selfishness can be weaponized to make things better for a lot of people.

In general this arc felt a little scattered to me, like you weren't totally sure where you wanted to go with it, or the story as a whole. Lots of new POVs popping up, and many of them were fascinating--Sitrus in particular is great, and it was a treat to read from the point of view of an ancient, likely-immortal pokémon who exists only to spread happiness. (I especially love the idea that if a chansey/blissey wants you to fuck off they will just puff up real big and refuse to talk to you, omg, that's adorable.) But it did feel a bit like you were kind of trying a bunch of things to see what stuck, adding complications to what's already a pretty dense story. Towards the end of the arc I felt like you'd got some momentum back and we're moving towards a climax of some sort, although complications continue to introduce themselves. Now Zygarde's getting involved? Yikes. Like I said, though, it feels like we're picking up momentum again, and I'm feeling optimistic about where the next arc's going! Not that I'm, like, expecting it to go well, but I'm certainly expecting it to go somewhere, and probably pretty quickly!

I get the sense that this is the arc where the journeyfic aspect of the fic finally died; maybe you'll come up with some reason for Cuicatl to do the last (two??? my memories of the whole trial thing from Alola are so blurry) grand trial thing... maybe as a way to legitimately claim a battle with Selene? But with the whole licensing thing going on and apparently GHOST ARMY on the way, it seems like we're probably going to be moving on to some, uh, different sort of events? Feeling a little wistful about it, tbh; I'm a weirdo who enjoys all the horrors of camping and low-stakes drama of being out on the trail.

Nevertheless, I'm definitely excited to see what's to come! This was always a story about more than just beating the league, and I honestly have no idea how it's all going to shake out at this point. Pixie and Cuicatl have committed to a beautiful dream in creating a place for unwanted vulpix (or all pokémon? or unwanted people of all kinds?), but do they even have a prayer of getting there? With how fucked everything is? With how fucked they all are? Even if they succeed, it can't possibly be that simple... but even so, there's still that little sliver of hope, isn't there? I look forward to seeing how far they go, one way or another.

I had a great time catching up with this fic! I'll be back again for sure. Maybe before the end of the next arc? It's kind of fun to binge, but since your posting schedule has slowed down a bit, maybe I'll be able to stay in the loop a bit better. We'll see.
 

Persephone

Infinite Screms
Pronouns
her/hers
Partners
  1. mawile
  2. vulpix-alola
Holy crap it's that time of year where the fic comes to life.
So, I know I'd read the original version of this back in the day™. Don't think I ever touched the remake. Although V2 seems to have gotten much, much farther than the original. To where its word count is beating my current stuff. Ain't no way I'm getting through it in this style. And the chapters I'm covering are 5.5 years old. I suppose I will mostly focus on the plot and speculation...

1.1
-So the second-person narration is still intact here. And starting with a businesswoman who is not any of the protags of this fic. Some corporate big shot.
NOW THAT IS A REAL [Big Shot]!!!!!
-You're probably going for more animalistic takes on the pokémon but for my lizard brain imagining an espeon with proper cat whiskers is cursed.
-I dunno what analogue to draw to VStar as a company, but it sounds like a startup app. Which, in this day and age, is a red flag even if it has good intentions on paper.
Trust the tech bros, man. They have this all figured out.
-An espeon named Espy, huh...
-Ah, so it's called VStar because the owner has a victini. And one of those names that just feels like it belongs to a techbro. Except he actually is a decent battler. But I bet he's an "ideas guy" and everyone else has to break their backs putting said ideas into practice.
-The Hau'oli paper paragraph only furthers my belief. Maybe he's even a Musk-esque manchild.
Listen I started this fic before Elon went crazy in public.
-I'm pretty sure the kids she's focusing on more are some of our core cast. I don't recall if Cuicatl was psychic in the original. Just blind. And similarly don't recall if we knew that at least one family member was dead and she'd mostly been around her mother's pokémon. Hmm. The psychic interplay is neat, though.
I changed up her abilities because this mess of a fic is somehow lower concept than the original.
1.2
-Pixie's back, too. Though I expected it. I thiiiink this is part of a backstory of sorts? I'm seeing a torracat that interacts with her. Which makes me think is the SuMo protag? Who helps her heal for a bit then dips to continue on her journey. Or something.
Yup!
-And I think, despite the eevee-hatred, I can parse that Matriarch is the lady 1.1 focused on and that's Espy with her.
Correct again!
-"Sixth and final second chance." Lol.
-I think Pixie greatly overestimates her fighting abilities.
Three for three!
-I don't remember if the original genuinely had them able to converse like this. Not the first trainer fic I've ready where pokémon and trainer can converse, so I'd need more time to see this dynamic in action. As it is, Cuicatl can make enough chinks in Pixie's armor to get her to ease up juuuuust enough to agree to go with her. Of course, since our narrator is incredibly biased, it's less like a partnership and more Pixie claiming ownership. I imagine that attitude will continue. For a while, even. Maybe the dynamic will shift as the story progresses and Pixie will view this more like an equal partnership. But I imagine it'll take a while. And I certainly won't see it on this short read through of the beginning.
I'm sure everything will be just fine!
1.3
-The second paragraph alone makes me think Genesis is the one who's from the "Big Six" wealthy family. Just something about the way things are described shows just enough of a family dynamic to have that high society sort of vibe.
A good guess.
-Yeah, a nickname "Sir Bubbles" really gives off the impression she's quite sheltered.
-Xerneas worshipper? And a suggestion that there are clearly problems back home. Is the emphasized "she" Genesis' mother, perhaps? That and Genesis seems to struggle to sit still and focus on any of this VStar orientation. ADHD, maybe?
She isn't ever really diagnosed in story but I consider her some flavor of neurodivergent.
-And there's the third kid I remember from the original. Still angry and standoffish.
Kekoa gets very angry at being "the third kid I remember." Should be first.
-Is the "You finally realize that you never got his name before" implying Genesis just forgot already? Because Kekoa did mention his name several paragraphs back.
-And now the trio's traveling together. IIRC last time there was a reality show premise to it? But this time it just seems to be a dubious quality app of some sort. Makes sense. Reality shows don't have the same pull nowadays unless they're the Bachelor/Bachelorette. Also just a little casual foot in mouth for both the girls.
-Casually making mention of mall stores constantly closing down in the age of e-shopping threatening in-person businesses.
Listen do you know how quickly I can forget a name? Also I'm sure the casual hint of e-commerce destroying a previous institution has no bearing on potential themes or plot points of this story.
-And the rest of the time establishes some group dynamics. Genesis truly does seem worriedly sheltered. And if I'm reading between the lines of this and 1.1 then Genesis is transmasc? He and Cuicatl bicker like a couple of dorks, though. It sounds like they were watching whatever the pokemonified version of Jurassic Park is. Or it is just Jurassic Park.
Kekoa is trans, yes.
1.4
-We have the contrast with the opening scene of Kekoa doing quite well against some snotty kid and Cuicatl getting the runaround from an older trainer who's much more well off.
-I had a feeling I knew what the chapter title referred to and I was correct. Heavy dose of dysmorphia here. It is described rather painfully. Don't exactly have the frame of reference for that one but it does certainly tug at me in that sort of tense, uncomfortable way. Which I think was the point.
-This is a wild test with oddly specific questions. Just like how standardized testing works in real life! :V
-Genesis is definitely socially awkward but it's interesting seeing her trying to push the trio to do, y'know, social activities together. I think neurodivergents are definitely the ones who need to put in the effort if they want to do social stuff, but there's also the risk they just... don't have the social battery for it.
-The way the beach scene starts makes it seem like Cuicatl says that opening dialogue line, not Genesis.
-Lol they roped a random child into officiating a little sparring match. Which is over almost as soon as it begins. Yes, Cuicatl is very bad at this. And Kekoa could've maybe been a bit softer, but also he's had things quite rough.
"Kekoa could've maybe been a bit softer, but also he's had things quite rough" is basically just him in a nutshell. How people feel about him, from love to hate, largely depends on how much sympathy he gets.
1.5
-So, Cuicatl has a brother in this version? And she's got this Tate/Liza-esque psychic connection with him. Are they twins? 🤔
-And we meet all the pokémon of old. Which raises questions of what happened to all of them, but given Cuicatl is all alone in the present I'm going to put a wager on "nothing good."
-Oh. So, her mom giving birth to them. :sadwott:
-I guess Pixie got hit much harder than the ending of 1.4 led me to believe. Though I suppose pokémon here don't have the same super magical healing powers they do in the various canons. That was shown off to some extent earlier.
They can heal a lot more than a human can. Just not instant regeneration of all wounds.
-Ah. So, the twin brother passed away. And I'm willing to bet the start of that chapter with the mention of fever and headache were the initial signs and symptoms. The stuff that follows is, like in 1.4, very raw. It's well-written and I can't go into much depth beyond that because I'm not good with analyzing that kind of stuff in fics. Or literature in general.
-Surprised that Rachel popped out of the blue here. Not surprised at the emotional barriers Cuicatl puts up in response. Because that's what people do in these sorts of situations.
-Though the time limit bit is strange. If it's not a visa thing and (presumably) not a family thing, then what? I don't know if this fic would get into anything magical or out there, but this is the land of UBs or whatever. Maybe there's something even wilder going on?
The time limit is more or less self-imposed. As for why, we'll get to that next arc.
1.6
-In reading the summary here I confess I don't think I picked up on the eating disorder part of 1.5. I just figured she wasn't eating because, y'know, major depression. But she's also described as having a very short stature, so... who knows.
Yeah I had to maybe change some language across versions. Cuicatl's problems are all linked, too. So I could see how that didn't come through as clearly.
-I want to say the random guy who's talking to them is actually the Chris who's mentioned earlier. But I feel like the CEO or whatever would be too busy to deal with these three.
He isn't.
-Pixie's abandonment issues are on full display. Makes me wonder how long it will actually take Cuicatl to have a true second teammate. Probably going to be hard.
-D'aww, Pixie trying ice cream is cute. :3
If I want to write suicidal ideation there must be a fox trying ice cream shortly after.
-Also her nicknames for Genesis and Kekoa are hilarious, but the latter is also a "crossing the line" sort of thing. Not that a fox would understand why it crosses a line.
Nor would she care.
-D'aww, the ice fox became a soggy puddle from the heat. :3
-Good to see that they almost kinda sorta maybe agree on some of this logistics stuff. Though I won't commit any of it to memory since I don't expect anything they do on Akala to end up going according to plan. That's always how these fics work.

These are the earliest chapters, of course, but I do think they're good. I thought the old version was good, too. Maybe not explicitly my usual cup of tea, but the writing was quite eloquent and I think I felt like I owed you so I definitely read it. This one lets its punches fly much faster and harder right out of the gate. Which is probably perfect for the TR crowd since a lot of them eat that kind of stuff up. It does so far feel much heavier than the original, which makes me wonder if that'll permeate through the entire fic or if there are more extended lighter moments, like 1.6.
I try to balance very dark subject matter and themes with lighter moments. I have lived with some crushingly dark stuff and it would be extremely unfun if it was just that constantly.

I think this is a very sensible update! The reality TV thing kinda fell off after a while, plus it raised some weird questions I'm not sure you actually wanted to deal with. This makes way more sense to me. ✅
Like I told Amby, this is somehow lower concept than Guidance.
We also talked about revisions on 3.11 so I skimmed that one as well before jumping back in where I left off.

Oh my god it's been so long since I was caught up. 😭 But also, wow, what a neat benefit of posting on a schedule like clockwork: you were writing in a specific time about a specific time!
It's really interesting because 2019-2020 ended up being a lot more culturally isolated from 2025 than I had anticipated. Turns out a lot of stuff changed IRL in a comparatively short period of time. Sometimes I have to step back and think about what they would / wouldn't have, and what memes did or didn't exist, in this setting.
Oops, big K still has some growing to do in the empathy department; these comments reveal all the questions he's not asking about Cuicatl.
He will always have room lol.
Except ... doesn't he have a smart phone? You could get so much mileage out of Kekoa and Lyra accidentally blasting each other in the face with their phone lights.
Electronic lights are pretty dim at the moment for the same reason sunlight is. Should maybe re-emphasize this in story.
Fussy, but I think hate-on should be hyphenated (because you can be too hard on yourself but you would have a hard-on for someone else 🥲).
Fair.
Definitely seeing some of their dynamic though! Making them travel together already gives you more room to maneuver than the constant fighting did.
Lyra was such a waste of a character when she was outside the group.
This strikes me as a particularly midwestern sentence construction, TBH. I generally wish that your characters had more distinct syntax from each other (though I can accept that heavily clipped sentences are just the style here), but this one jumped out at me since your regions are much more clearly paralleled to their real-world equivalents than they are in other settings. Could be a thing in Hawaiian Pidgin too, but I’m not convinced.
I am very midwestern. We've discussed this on discord and I think I will try to pay more attention to how I use fragments in each character's narration.
Yeah, wait, if they know they're hunting a fairy, why is Kekoa comforted by the presence of Lyra's absol anyway?
Alarm system!
These are very similar concepts!!
Subtle differences. Courteous is polite, kind is more about acting in ways that subtly benefit them or at least don't harm them.
And these feel too different to mash together like this, especially since bargaining is the one Kekoa's actually in danger of doing here. Maybe boot "kind" from the previous passage and replace it with "don't harm them."
Fair.
I have to say, I like the meat of the florges conversation and the uncomfortable questions it makes Kekoa ask, but I wasn't sure I understood her motivations. Am I understanding right that the deal was essentially "leave my kid alone and I'll help you negotiate for a bug?" Like, why bargain with Kekoa at all when she could just threaten him away?
That is how Kekoa understands the deal. Weird that she would do all of this for that one thing, huh?
Also confused where Lyra went for most of that conversation. Did she separate them? When? And again, why?
Lyra ran away.
Huh, on my last read through this chapter, I thought this was the one with the smoochum/jnyx, traditional Hawaiian dance, and dysphoria? I did remember the florges, vaguely, but thought it had happened at a different time. Is the main change that those two chapters have been smashed together into this one?
I cut the flying trial out so the jynx wasn't really needed anymore.
And with that out of the way, let's join the usual suspects for more Sad Time in the Dark! 🎶
And now we return to our regular programming.
Woof, if I lived in this universe, it would be a fucked up day to have a birthday. Buuut since I don’t! Delighted to share my birthday with Chaotic Trumpet Sounds, Apocalypse Edition.
I did not do this intentionally but uh. You're welcome?
Noooooo, Kekoa, what are you doing.
A Mood.
Thrown off here. At first I thought this was the drifloon’s light going out, and I was gearing up for a comment about rearranging the sentence to emphasize the most important point. Buuut now I’m not sure that IS what happened.
I'm not sure what's happening either.
Nervous 2025 sounds.
At least our America would never invade a neighbor for no real reason.
Patron Saint of lost causes and misdirected anger over here.
Bigger fan of lost causes than a confederate historian.
I did wonder why she was bothering to talk to him, TBH. Is she hoping he will radicalize further?
She was brooding in a graveyard and someone else showed up. It's only polite, really.
Yes, good plan, baby Kekoa. Persist even harder in doing the thing she’s unimpressed by. That’ll show her.
Kekoa has 10/10 planning abilities.
I do get where he’s coming from. He imagines that he’ll be more useful to her if he has stronger pokemon. But he’s definitely working harder, not smarter: for some of Plumeria’s activities, a bigger pokemon could be a hindrance. Plus, this smacks of trans boy desperately emulating the only kind of masculinity he’s seen, a brute force contest to be at the top of the pile. He can’t imagine any other skills he could contribute to the moment. (And to be fair, he’s got a long way to go to develop other skills.)
Kekoa's warped sense of masculinity is secretly behind like 80% of his problems.
Wasn’t sure how it would be a “problem” for her to evolve except that she wouldn’t be able to sit in the poke center bed anymore lol. And then is the opposite problem that the inlay is supposed to evolve but hasn’t? That was probably mentioned in a previous chapter with the VStar assignment but I don’t remember,
Malamar, in this universe, are nightmare fuel lol.
If she’s facing away, how can he see this?
Don't you remember his x-ray vision?
HA.
Makes sense to me though—if they’re sponges for emotion, they’d probably learn the “feel” of their human pretty well.
Ghosts are weird. Why navigate the world by vision and distance when you can navigate it by emotional imprints?
I guess they’re shy gods, yeah.
The Americans took over in a way that didn't register as 'war' to most of them until the process was already complete.
Whoops. Yeah Hoenn happening in living memory really sets the scale of what a messy revolution could be.
Hoenn happening in living memory is, like, half the reason for the macro-scale reactions in this fic.
Rekindling the friendship is going great. I can’t imagine Kanoa got much out of that.
Kanoa has the patience of a saint and a great desire to rekindle the relationship and she's like 80% done at this point.
I liked this beat. So fitting for Kekoa to be too busy projecting (badly) that he doesn’t need help that he fails to see that other people might be struggling. And we can see in the course of this scene how that day represented a loss of the life she knew, too.
There is only one person who is suffering The Most and everyone else needs to acknowledge that. Clearly Kekoa is suffering The Most so it's weird that other people are wrapped up in their own words.
Oh goodness, so many layers of yikes and aww friendship to unpack here.
This is a good tagline for the fic.
*real name?
At first I thought she’d somehow failed to learn Lyra’s name after several chapters together lol.
Cuicatl thought that was implied.
I enjoyed this parallel between the two of them. So many more opportunities when we’re playing nice!
Kekoa-Lyra is the link of the core four humans explored the least which is a shame because they have a lot of room to play off of each other.
She’s very nearly literally getting blasted into space to fight a god. She must be so scared, and Kekoa refuses to see that she’s just human too. It would ruin his worldview.
Selene is just quietly being one of my favorite characters in the story while showing up maybe four times, total.
And, damn, this world survives on mulching children.
That's a big theme, yeah.
Did we already know that VStar has a victini?
Kind of in the name.
The level of projection here is WILD.
Truly Kekoa's greatest ability.
This is a great place for him to land. He’s still not sure what to do about the big stuff—which is very fair because it’s really messy no matter what path he commits to—but he at least is putting in effort to be more considerate in ways that feel smallish to him but of course mean a lot to these Pokémon. Even when that kindness is an inconvenience. Proud of you, Kekoa.
This is about the vibe I was going for.

Chapter 3.20

Wrapping up the arc in the dark with a final checkmark on the Island Challenge to-do list, and everything goes just swell. Some especially brutal battling here, making it very tough for Cuicatl to make a case for Pixie staying with her. Oof. I expect her to get Pixie back eventually?? Somehow??? But I have no idea how at this point.
I almost wrote myself into a corner here and I'm still not sure if it landed right. Per a conversation with sugi I think I'm going to tone down her injuries a little. I keep implying that pokemon are more durable than humans and should probably lean into that a little. Like, still some broken ribs or something, but not as bad as it could have been.
I appreciate the choice not to position Cuicatl as the POV character for this fight, both because Hala's actions would be hard to understand without a peek into his head and because it lets us see how she has and hasn't grown from a more objective standpoint.
She ends up narrating none of the kahuna battles because I think having them from her POV doesn't work great. She can't really see what's going on so she's mostly just trying to figure that out while occasionally chiming in.
A lot of the chapter hinges on this idea:

And I was having trouble deciding if I was fully on board or not.

Wanting to oust intruders makes sense. It's a theme we've seen in characters like Plumeria and Kekoa, but Hala has more political power (or does he?) so we get to see what that fight looks like in his arena, so to speak. I sympathized with him in his failed attempt to push through protections for local species, and the reasons his cause failed felt realistic to me.

However, I had trouble making that gel with his sympathy for the kids getting mulched by UBs. Like, on the one hand, it's objectively and relentlessly terrible. (No body to bury, etc.) But on the other hand ... that's one way to get rid of an invader, isn't it. 🥲 It would basically be using on invasive species to drive off another (a tactic *I* know has failed famously in our world, but I'm not sure what the history is like in Alola, or how well it's known. And certainly the scale is different when the invasive species is ... other humans). But that's not really an option when Selene, the lightning rod for so many characters' anti-colonial sentiments, is the only person who seems able to stand up to the UBs. In that case, maybe the argument isn't "golly, they're just kids" but "better haole kids than ours." Harsh, but clearly "is that too harsh?" is not an appropriate question when it comes to Hala.

I also wonder what the cause for the UB invasion is understood to be here. (I'm probably missing the canon explanation from Lusamine/Looker, since I haven't finished my run of any of the Alola games, but--) Since they're so clearly designed to be The Most Invasive Species™️ in canon, it's interesting that Hala sees them as something to protect outsiders from rather than something caused by outsiders. I wonder, too, what the Tapus make of them.

Either way, he swung hard between those two concerns, and it left me feeling less like he's just complex than like he's not as decisive as I wish he was.
We can talk this out later but I think for Hala he wants to do something about the problems he can't fix. The combination of it being about outsiders and UBs or whatever leads him to think that starting here is the best way to go about it. I could probably alter the flow of the narration to better emphasize that.
Odd framing. I feel like the vibe was meant to be "I can't do anything about all that, but I can meet the challenger in front of me." But what's literally here is "[environmental woe] might be the least of your problems" > Cuicatl, implying she's a bigger problem, which I can't imagine she is. Would help if we got one beat, or half a beat, to give us at least the outline of what those bigger problems might be.
Fair.
Is this a reference to how the anime constantly points out the obvious? Hilarious if so.
Yes, but not naming the pokemon sent out is genuinely a hindrance for her.
This felt very meta.
Yeah. I should probably prune it. He doesn't battle much when items are allowed.
Some disgruntled old man energy here. Dang kids and their dang internet.
Hala is The Most Boomer you can be.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.
Jurassic Park is somehow an enduring cornerstone of this fic.
He so doggedly seemed not to recognize it at first, but then we shifted to using correct names so easily. Might be nice if he had a moment of, aha, remembering what it was called. After all, there's a champion who uses a tyrantrum. He might've heard of her.
Will do this.
Oh, shit. I forgot that Pixie had agreed to help in a few more fights. This is a dodgy one to use her help for!
Listen let's just trust Cuicatl's judgment.
Have you considered threadmarking vocab index that you could hyperlink to in-text, dump the cast list in there too? (Have I already suggested that?) I know it would make crossposting a little annoying, but mostly just for FFN since AO3 supports links.
That would make a lot of sense to do, yeah. Not sure about the hyperlinks but as an information threadmark / op component.
Rachel, I assume?
The one and only.
It takes Hala a moment to find his stride and show some opinions. Then, he wobbles between "it's for their [the kids'] own good" and "but the ecology of my homeland!" But this was a moment that felt crystal clear and singularly Hala: he's behind on the times and can't or won't understand that what worked for him isn't possible for a lot of others.
Absolutely.
Here my grasp on the situation faltered. I needed more clarity on what's lost with the removal of the toxapex, which could just be refocusing on cases like the grubbin and how removing toxapex VStar's way also means the loss of endangered species.
Perhaps I find myself relying too much on allusions to the sister fic here.
This number was oddly specific. It felt like a callback to a stat Rachel gave that we didn't actually hear.
That was the vote margin in the senate.
I kinda vaguely remember something about Tapu Bulu smashing a department store (?) but it might not hurt to have a quick callback here as a reminder, especially since Hala would see that differently from, say, Genesis.
Something like that did happen, yes.
It seems like Hala, at least, was literally hand-appointed by the Tapu. (So is that true for all 4 of them?) But he also seems to have a lot of say in whether Hau succeeds him and when.
He just kind of assumes he can talk Tapu Koko into it and he hasn't seemed opposed.
And then was the entire E4 + champion structure appointed by a US-controlled government, or is it just spicy for an outsider like Selene to become the champion of that structure? Because some of the kahunas *are* in the Elite 4, or were, but some of them seem like people you'd code as haole. (Maybe? I'm not sure what to make of Kahili, who's giving very strong WASP energy with the hair and the golf thing but has a traditional-sounding name,)
Kahili is related to the people who own the Grand Hano in canon. Weird, huh? None of the kahunas are in the E4 at the moment.
LOL she's busy doing hot girl shit.


Yeeeah I wondered about that, too.

Also, good for Kekoa for standing up for his friend. He wouldn't have done that in the early episodes. I also have to wonder if this confrontation was hard for him (literally challenging tradition) or if he sees Hala as part of the problem because he's a leader and yet has failed to fix some of the problems Kekoa cares about.
Sugi suggested putting Kekoa's grand trial into either 3.19 or 3.20. I might, but I'm a bit worried about the length and if anything would need to be cut in its place.
Huh, does Kekoa know much about this? Would he have been in Hoenn at this time or after? (I forget exactly how old he was.) There are definitely some parallels here between what happened in Hoenn and what happened with Bulu, and I wonder if Kekoa would see it as justice or as a kind of betrayal.
Kekoa was aware of it. He literally lived in the abandoned village around it for a few months. He's generally in favor of the Tapu doing it again.
I wasn't sure what to make of this. Belatedly, I realized this might be a reference to Kahili, but one I couldn't quite sort out because it's not clear to me what their relationship is like at this point. (Also I've never encountered her in the games so I know almost nothing about her.) My first thought had initially been that he was having flashbacks to some really brutal abuse from his own past.
Guzma. Guess that wasn't clear enough.
He seems like someone who has a lot of responsibilities but not actually much power.


Is the idea that he has a trial team for kanaka kids and another for haole kids, or something else?
The idea, which I should make clearer, is that he was trying to make this impossible for Cuicatl when he had let Kekoa go through. I don't think he is super consistent in his mind on why he's doing this or who he's doing it to. Just that something needs to be done.
Wowee, lots to unpack here. First, it seems like Hala has met his match in terms of holding onto traditional ideas and rituals that fail to address the complexities of the present day, oof. Comments like this from Hala seem almost patronizing, despite all his reverence, and made me wonder where he places the relevance of the Tapu if they're this out of touch and this reluctant to act.

Which brings me to my second thought: interesting and confusing that the Tapu see VStar as a major threat, presumably for ecological reasons, but were radio silent in the face of the massive ecological problems caused by Necrozma. What does he make of the UBs?
Oh they're mad about Necrozma but also can't really do much of anything about it.
Man, the Tapu should get in touch with Plumeria. She might be more their speed, because something tells me Hala isn't going to take him up on this.
Yeah weird how they haven't done that yet.
No reaction to that wormhole? Doesn't that mean UBs are getting dumped onto Poni right now?
Kind of? There certainly were a lot at the start, but the rate's slowed down a lot by this point.
Continuing to appreciate these recaps. In a fic this long, it's necessary. It feels more like watching a TV show broken into seasons than reading a novel, so it feels appropriate in that way, too. And I always love that you do these in character.
Each arc is basically its own novel / novella.
I appreciate how each of them is addressing someone else in their journal. (I think that's *been* true in each recap before, right?) Cuicatl is thinking of her dead brother, Kekoa of his future self, and Gen of a judgemental god.

I wonder who Lyra would address if she got to write a recap--probably Gen, right?
It would probably be an update in her counter-psychic notes.
I'm having trouble breaking this one down though. Like, it's easy to dismiss worshippers of other gods as pagans in our world because, well, they're crazies who believe in something silly and made up (unlike me and my god), right? Harder when both of those gods provably exist. Sure, I guess those gods could do battle to earn followers or land or something, but that doesn't seem like something either Reshiram or Xerneas care about, nor do they seem to have ever fought for reasons of their own.
Easier, in some ways. Those aren't true, all-powerful gods - just very powerful pokemon.
She's really on the brink of something here, but successfully stuffs down the implications of these thoughts to be a Good Daughter.
Poor Gen. So close and so very far.
It occurs to me that if Cuicatl can't sleep, she runs a bigger risk of waking others up than someone else would just because she has to have audio cues turned on. 🙃
And her circadian rhythm is shot so she's probably a menace to bunk with.
Woof, yeah. The nurse and his assistant can yell at him, but he still has all the power as far as Cuicatl is concerned--and it doesn't matter that he doesn't actually have the kind of power he wishes he had. (Also a common theme in the power imbalances between pokemon and their trainers, oof. Most people here are trying to punch up, but it's awfully hard to tell where you're stepping sometimes.) She may be assuming more doom and gloom here than is strictly true (or she might not!), but regardless of whether it actually hurt her to speak up, it wouldn't help her. Certainly wouldn't help Pix. Meanwhile, Hala seems remorseful for now but not like someone who's learned his lesson and definitely won't do it again.
Cuicatl never quite has the power she wants. And she has good reasons to assume the system won't care about her.
I also appreciated this moment as world-building. It makes sense that determining "excessive force" would be determined by paperwork and convincing the right judge; brutality is baked into this world rather than something anyone assumes can be avoided.
I read a fic where a bone broke during a pokemon fight and they just kept going and that was my Joker moment.
I was a little confused here. At first it felt like both of these statements were describing wild pokemon, but on the re-read it seems like everything = wild and anything = your team?
For a lot of reasons the broken dreams aren't quite supposed to be easy to follow.
We were talking about syntax in DMs recently, so I'm just highlighting this as an example of your signature clipped sentences.
And I appreciate it!
I do some of it with Una in Spring. Like, I don't think it's at all historically accurate that English speakers 500 years ago were more formal or more long-winded--they had their slang and weird abbreviations and fart jokes too--but when she avoids using contractions and uses multi-syllable words it still does the job of making her sound a little off. You can always tell a Chris sentence from an Una sentence.
For a moment I forgot Spring context and thought this was Chris Foster and was very confused. I'm unsure how to write Cuicatl because her education was shit but she's pretty smart. It pulls in different directions, even before we get into the nature of her abilities. If I had a proper editor I would toy with her syntax varying depending on the POV, matching however they would talk. And her real voice only comes through in her own chapters. But I am not going to commit to this on top of all the other plates I'm juggling.
I do think each time a character does an action it should be a new paragraph. (So break after regards, answering, and through.)
I am trying to do better with this.
Wow, yes. Goodness does Cuicatl ever need someone to bargain on her behalf every now and then. And this feels like something only Lyra can do--Gen is too people-pleasing and Kekoa is too angry (and doesn't know the corporate jargon). This also strikes me as a reasonable progression for Lyra: she doesn't need to be besties with Cuicatl to want to be her attack dog because she just wants someone to protect and she's lost Gen. We saw this when she took everyone out for udon, too.
Lyra is best girl.
LOL is VStar unironically doing Jurassic Park?
Yes.
I guess they didn't qualify for a master ball since they're not a player character.
Does this setting have master balls???
It does! Selene uses one in 3.1. They're just very rare and difficult to obtain without lots of connections to the military-industrial complex.
For real. She's, like, constantly translating with one hand tied behind her back...
This is a major hinderance for her with wild pokemon. Not the first time it's come to bite her, either.
I meannnnn if breaking her original ball is anything to go by, it's more that she should be grateful that pokeballs are too small for a tyrantrum to chew, lol. (Probably mostly tearing and swallowing with those teeth ... right?) God, what a visual though.
TYRANTRUM EAT PUNY BALL
How to raise your dragon, PFLAG edition.

Though the easy yes to the question is a bit of a hiccup. TyrantrMum wouldn't know that Kekoa exists.
A real family is having two separate deadbeat dads.
Curious if she'd had a different name picked out. Then Coco could have two moms and two names--why not?
Hmm. She likes her current one well enough. Two names might be confusing.
I suppose Earthshaker was down for a blended family from the start, lol.
It's hard to mate with another tyrantrum when there are like fifty of you, total.
OH MY GOD. Genius. 🤌 No notes.
Of course this universe would have its own memes.
Okay so I actually know a Major Spoiler (because I couldn't not click the spoiler box in the cast list!) aaaand I wasn't sure if this was an error or just very sneaky foreshadowing??? There's also a missing quotation mark in this passage.
Bad Boots! Don't click spoilers! Although I should edit the page to note when the spoilers begin...
Overall, fun chapter! She's making baby steps with her own pokemon and has made a significant stride toward her bigger goals. Devastating that, even with an amount of money that would be utterly incomprehensible to most 15-year-olds, she still can't have everything she wants. Money is only part of the problem. Actually, she's not even sure what to do with it at all yet, RIP! But things are certainly looking up for her for a moment--nice to see her feeling more confident!--and I'm sure nothing will happen to mess that up.
Cuicatl is just so out of step with most teenagers lol. Her needs and means are both immense, but not necessarily parallel.
I always appreciate your attention to these kinds of details. The main cast is smol, mostly powerless, and driven by personal stakes. BUT the wider world never goes away. These snippets are so incredibly on point.
I like worldbuilding so much I have another giant fic of it.
The one thing I'll say is that there are so many of them, it actually feels like a recap of Arc 3. (It would be kind of neat to get the news media take on each arc's events alongside the main cast vlog entries!) The news item that feels most pressing is the one we didn't get: the world's response to Cuicatl and Momma Dino.
We discussed this on discord but yes. Hadn't considered that, will implement.
Though, Jesus Christ, I was not expecting that jump scare. Truly, there is no escape. Laughing and crying.
I thought about taking him out in the edits and then America goes and-

It's fine. It's fine. We're doing this, I guess.
I thought mandibuzz was literal at first and I was really confused. Since mandibuzz -> vulture take some translation, mandibuzz -> profiteering colonizers was a harder jump to make.
I can see this.
Lol is this QAnon?
More J. Jonah Jameson.
This is very informal for a headmaster with a big, stuffy office.

Suggestions: "I hear you've been busy. Let's talk about your extracurriculars, shall we?"
I think I'm cutting the scene entirely. The story evolved in such a way that Rachel's arc is less important for it.
LOL. I like the rascally behavior, but

a) that was a deep cut just to get Rachel to go for a walk. I feel like there was something easier he could've reached for, and

b) the lampshading wasn't successful for me, I'm so sorry, haha.
Again, why it's getting cut.
Strange to emphasize the name that most people don't use and readers wouldn't recognize.
Will fix.
And money, but I guess that's not an issue for them. 🙃
They're a startup with endless investor cash to burn.
Not sure why she's taking digs at his nice jeans when the boss is literally wearing basketball shorts. I do think it makes sense that everyone is dressed nicer than the boss--very telling--but her judgement doesn't, especially since it sounds like he is dressed appropriately for his job.
Because her expectations for the boss are very, very low.
Something funky happening in the order we receive information here. We learn Rick is absent > Emmanuel winces > we talk about Rachel instead. This would benefit from restructuring.
Fair.
Oh no, the internet remembers her.
To be remembered by the internet is a horror beyond my imagination.
LOLOLOL yes, of course. BTW, I know she's not his secretary (she HAS a secretary, after all) but I don't know what her actual title is.
Some polite way of saying "fixer." I think it's technically Head of Government and Community Outreach
Aww, I do appreciate the parallel to the ending of the previous chapter.

I take back what I said earlier: THIS is the real start of this chapter. Push the first set of articles into the recap, bump the second set to the top of this chapter, "What a difference a week can make," single sentence transition, all the teleport stuff. The scene that currently follows this quote, Foster and Victini's visit, can come directly after the board meeting, maybe precipitated by a single sentence about what Foster is interrupting.
Doing this.
LOL, is he basically just Elon Musk? Surprised by this moment of vulnerability.
Again, Elon went publicly nuts after I wrote this.
Did I miss the backstory about how he even came into possession of a god, or do we just not know yet at this point?
Haven't gotten to it yet. I'm honestly not sure I've ever published it but I did write it at some point.
:wowzard: Dang, I really need to draw some fanart of the AU where Cuicatl & Una just hang out talking about myths, drinking tea, and worshipping the old gods, hahaha. Cynthia is, of course, invited to join.
They would get along rather well.
She does own a vacation home on a beach. ✅
Multiple, and I'm not sure she 'owns' any of them. Just shows up places and commandeers it.
Is Lila they/she or just they them? Also missing a word.
They/them. Messed it up.
It's Chex Mix, Rachel.
It's never just Chex Mix, Boots.
I wanted just a little from her at the end! How is she feeling in the face of all that? Is there self-loathing? Pride for having successfully caught all the things she was juggling? Just exhaustion? Whatever it is, I want the last line to hit on it.
Will edit accordingly when I get there.
I wasn't sure about the placement of all the news articles, but I did thoroughly enjoy all of them. I hope those papers/platforms continue to be reoccurring characters!
They are!
One area where this fic really succeeds is making canon characters like Lila, Selene, and Cynthia feel impressive even when we don't see them often or in a ton of detail. They have connections and weight to throw around, and we can feel it.

So hype for Cuicatl and Cynthia storytime, omg.
Wait for Arc 5!

I am back in an effort at getting points for custom vulpix sprite purposes.
The most noble of pursuits. Also, you skipped 1.7.
1.8
-Oh, so she didn't actually meet her mother's pokémon for a good while after she was born. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised her father would keep that information from her and keep the pokémon out of the picture. Seems to fit with what's been said about him in the preceding flashback.
-The way Renfield talks about deposited memories makes me imagine an ATM. ATM reuniclus.
-Ah, classic not setting up the tent tarp. I remember that from the summer camp days. :sadbees:
I have done that far too much.
-Reading Cuicatl carrying Pixie reminds me of the SuMo anime and Lillie's tendency to always carry Snowy around in her arms. Trendy fox accessory~
The trendiest.
-"Seven years from now when the world ends" Uhhh what? That's so out of nowhere I'm not sure if it's dark humor or a hint at something else. Or, like, some sort of Mayan Calendar reference even though it's 2019 in the present.
Aztec Calendar was different. They had a 52-year cycle end in 2026.
-Ah, yes. Thank you, fic, for reminding me of the unpleasantness of horseback riding IRL. :unquag: Glad to see these three tolerating each other.
-Cuicatl likes her pirate music. Or Hans Zimmer. Either way, noted. It's a cute character trait.
She likes her music.
-So, he tripped Cuicatl, right? That's the implication here. I'm amazed these three are somehow still traveling together. This level of dysfunction gives me flashbacks to 2017.
-Pixie still goes ballistic over eevee, I see. I feel like at some point she'll have to grapple with this. Not from Cuicatl getting one. Maybe one of her traveling buddies.
Maybe!
1.9
-Man, this opening is relatable. Sums up everything I don't like about flying, sans the "jostling metal bird thousands of feet in the air" bit.
-VCRs in 2015? And I see Jurassic Park is back.
Ugh. Should be DVD.
-Is... Is Kekoa in Hoenn during the climax of ORAS' plot? It's giving me Groudon Drought vibes and the ground's shaking like some big nature kaiju is waking from its slumber.
Don't worry about it. I'm sure it's fine.
-Army joining bit has mentions of B2W2... and XD of all games? Huh. Well, I guess it would make sense you'd acknowledge Orre. But Kekoa's dad was military, right? Surprised there isn't at least a bit of pushback about Jabari meeting a similar fate. Though it sounds like he ends up out of Kekoa's life anyway.
Orre happened and it gives me so many worldbuilding headaches.
-Never mind, there's a reunion after all. As bitter as could be expected. And it is in the present. I don't know why, but I thought in 1.8 they weren't at Akala yet. That they were supposed to be doing some task for VStar first. But Paniola is Akala Island. So maybe they were on Akala already in 1.8? I think some travel happened offscreen that I'm not entirely aware of.
-Ah, yes, another argument where there are no winners here. Frankly it's a miracle this group is still traveling together. I want to say at some point they'll break apart.
It was really inevitable.
1.10
-I seem to remember the blood sacrifice thing being in the original and Cuicatl actually doing it early on. Looks like it was toned down for this version.
-This paras talk is interesting. I've... seen other portrayals of the line that end to depict the relationship with the mushroom in a more comical light. But it does seem like there are some shared mind instincts here. I wonder if your parasect do have the mushroom fully assume control and if that changes their demeanor drastically.
Fun fact: I have a spinoff devoted entirely to answering questions like this. Threadmarking is incomplete but I go up to Trevenant in the USUM dex at the moment.
-Aww, Ce is kinda cute. And eager. Which probably means that she's going to go through something horrible later.
-I'm a bit unclear as to what exactly the psychic connection/singing stuff does for Cuicatl. It seems to incapacitate her quite a bit though. Like for multiple days, from the look of things. Though it's adorable Ce is... trying to help in some capacity. And/or is naive enough to fall for what seems like a little prank from Pixie.
Psionically connected her team.
-It's hitting me that the scenes in these chapters are on the shorter side, but you get a lot across with smaller word counts. It's an impressive skill.
I remember when I could do that. Chapters kept getting longer and longer as I had more plot threads that needed addressed every time a narrator came up.
-Oh, are Cuicatl and Kekoa burying the hatchet? For reals? If it sticks, that's mature and responsible of them. And wraps that stuff up so there can be at least some cooperation between the two going forward. Maybe they won't break off out of dislike for one another, but for plot reasons instead. 🤔
Starting to, at least.
1.11
-So, Team Skull has been rebranded as this group trying to reclaim the land from colonizers of old. Which in this case seems to take the form of the League and, presumably, its champion. Who's probably Sun or Moon in this fic. The take on the legends is interesting. I think this is the second time I've seen Solgaleo portrayed in a... less-than-benevolent light (hah). But the other time was Inke's PMD fic that's still in its infancy. I think most of the time Solgaleo and Lunala are both considered good-natured and it's Necrozma that's the problematic one. Definitely didn't contribute to that one. Nope. No siree.
This world draws a lot more from IRL, or the early games where other countries clearly just existed like they do in our own world. Alola is colonized by a political entity that encompasses Unova.
-Ah, so there have been UB problems. This is definitely post-SuMo, then. Or post-USUM? Or a dash of the latter? Blacephalon was a USUM thing, so it's not out of the question.
Post-SuMo. The story is sort of a USUM analogue, if it was a true sequel. Well, Moon - Ultra Sun, specifically.
-Welp. The hatchet may be buried but it's very clear Kekoa would rather not be traveling with these two. Not that I expected him to say anything to the contrary.
-I like Uffe. Seems like one of those rare nice, helpful folks who pop up in these sorts of trainer fics. And does have a decent, down to earth view on things. Makes some reasonable guesses about Cuicatl's situation despite having just met her. I'm not sure if his words will actually soften the two's dynamic. It could be a first step toward it, though.
-It... looks like, going off this last scene, that there is softening going on. Kekoa takes Cuicatl's talents much better than I was expecting given his fervent dislike of her. But maybe Uffe was able to get through to him after all.
It's fine! Don't worry about it.
1.12
-Okay, it looks like we've jumped back to the same Pixie :screm: ing at an eevee from a couple of chapters back. The dates help with that, but I'd be lying if I said those are things I remember about these chapters. I was briefly wondering if this was just a second instance of Genesis trying to find an eevee and Pixie screeching it away.
A necessity when there are multiple narrators who have things happen non-sequentially.
-Genesis is... The Spider Whisperer. [Insert Madame Web joke here.] But also wow going for big spider eating eevee. I still feel like Genesis is going to get one somehow. I doubt you'd make such a big point about Pixie's hatred of them if she wasn't going to have to contend with one for an extended period of time.
-It took me a second to realize Genesis' narration is misgendering Kekoa :unquag: . That's where the second-person can throw me off. Though it looks like there was a slip up in the egg scene where Kekoa's correctly gendered after he asks "What's the judgment, doc?" (Boy, it feels weird to call correctly gendered a slip up.)
-Finally introducing trial captains. And it looks like the first one's original for the fic. And a buddy of Kekoa's.
Genesis is really sweet and also very queer-antagonistic.
-Oh, hey, look. I was right! But we skipped a step and ended up with a leafeon. In that "Became the wrong eeveelution" situation. Which is heartbreaking.
I imagine this happens a lot for eevee.
-Lmao Pixie got wrecked. She (and Cuicatl) are not very good at this. Which is... different for trainer fics. I mean, yeah, plenty have a protag that isn't perfect. But so far she's pretty much had zero success.
Cuicatl has true magikarp powers in that her team is absolutely stacked for success eventually but she's going to have to scrape by a lot until then.
-Never mind, I guess Cuicatl got her Z-Crystal? Interesting that the trials are happening offscreen. Will we experience it through Genesis, then? I wonder if Cuicatl genuinely beat the trial or if it's more like Ash Ketchum in the Indigo League where he got a bunch of pity badges for doing nice things that didn't involve winning a gym battle.
Sort of offscreen, mostly.
1.13
-Time for fox POV again. Which means incoming sadness. :screm:
-RIP absol. And one— no, two of Pixie's siblings, apparently. :sadwott:
-Are those cryogonal that have been put into Lanakila as an "invasive species" of sorts?
Vanilluxe.
-Being a wild pokémon in this sending sounds like a wonderful experience. And by wonderful, I mean horrifying. Especially since they all have a level of sapience you don't tend to see in most trainer fics.
Listen when so many are jumping ship to indentured servitude there have to be problems at home.
-Ah, yep. With the flashbacks, I had a feeling we'd be seeing when Pixie's mother left her. The human that shows up is described in such an alien way also adds to the mystery of it all.
-And back to the present where we are actually seeing a trial. Cuicatl's, from the look of it. Ooooor not, because it cuts away. No, wait, we do get snippets of some sort of battle but things are, uh, interrupted. In a manner of speaking. I'm... not really sure what Fluffman is supposed to be in this context. Some sort of pokémon with vague psychic powers? But unlike redcrest (sneasel or weavile), I can't really pin it beyond that.
Oranguru, as I said on discord. Pixie came out at the end after four of five paras had already been paralyzing and poisoning him.
-Aww. I'll miss Ce. I did like her. Shame Pixie couldn't handle it.
I miss Ce, too.
1.14
-How nice of you to offer readers an egg in these trying times.
This happens again. There's a character whose entire role in the story is to offer eggs in these trying times.
-This is where the second person works against me again as the reader. This newborn perspective is unique, yes, though it's also got a good deal of intelligence already. Magical critter and all that. But I can't picture a species of any sort, even with the "we're both white" thing she notes about herself and Pixie.
I struggled with this a lot at the time and in subsequent edits and I think I'll never fully get it right.
-A tyrunt, huh? Yeah, that is a wild card to throw into it. And obviously made for Kekoa with his love of Jurassic Park. Which makes the fact she's imprinted on Cuicatl all the more heart-wrenching because you're setting things up for Tyrunt to not to cooperate with Kekoa. Either she'll need an obedience arc of sorts... or maybe she'll end up with Cuicatl.
-Oooooooooooor Cuicatl gets Tyrunt with no conflict whatsoever because of the whole brother stuff. Y'know what? That's fair. And nothing saying she can't loan him Tyrunt for battling purposes. Since he's clearly better at it. And also there's the whole Pixie thing.
-Tyrunt being referred to as a proto-bird has to be a cut toward the stuff about T-rex having feathers or avian traits. Cuz Kekoa was ranting about that in previous Jurassic Park scenes.
Dinosaurs are birbs in this setting. Just reptilian ones.
-Still, Tyrunt's a neat addition. I hope she actually gets to stay and Pixie doesn't force her to be kicked to the curb.
Coco will stay whether Pixie likes it or not. (She will not like it.)

Hello, I'm here for Blitz again! Gonna hit the Poison arc, there's a lot going on in there so far!
It's interesting to see how Plumeria and Guzma bounce off each other here. Not surprising, I suppose, it's been very well established by now that Plumeria's... dedicated to the cause. And it makes sense that Guzma would be shaken by what happens to him in the game itself. Even if it's extremely Broken Things, it's still melancholy to watch her refuse a way out, given what's about to happen to her.
Plumeria is a sympathetic character for me, too. I don't think she ever could have taken an out, though, as long as there were people who still needed her. It's kind of in her nature.
The first time I read over it, I found the sleepover very sweet. Now it feels like a "last meal of the condemned" kinda thing— I know this one's a 4 year jump back, but from our perspective it's probably gonna be about the last we see of her as she exists before the whole Apotheosis thing. I like Plumeria in any incarnation, but there really only was one way things could realistically go for her. Probably shouldn't feel sorry for her, she signed up for this, but hell I can't help it. Even if she's not really making the best decisions she's making sympathetic ones.
Yup!
Acerola's not a character I'd felt strongly about from the prior arcs but the nonchalance of the "country's fucked" delivery started to warm me up to her. Part of me wants to say it feels like she picked up some of the Nanu deadpan by proximity, but it doesn't seem like they get along so well here.
It's complicated. She does like him, on a personal level, but she can't overlook the political when her family were literal royalty.
The safecracking is fun and all but the dagger is really the star of that scene to me. The fact it can so readily tamper with Plumeria's mind is delightfully ominous.
Surely nothing ominous there.
...and this has to be my favourite endline of the fic so far. Hands down, don't have to check the other chapters.
I think it wins, too, for what it's worth.
And 7.2 picks up right where we left off. The Dread Commander sure is something. Haven't actually gotten a read on her yet, aside from the fact that the whole "dread commander to shadow army of the dead" thing has some pretty inherently inbuilt red flags. I really wonder who the people who made her were? Very notable dangling future thread. A civilization from beyond the stars sends my head to Ultra Megalopolis but that just feels wrong, too much of a techy vibe and not a dark magic vibe.
There's a running thread in Alola Pokedex about a past faller / sorcerer who made aegislash, claydol, golurk, spiritomb, and stonjourner before disappearing. Never quite clear what her deal is. An ancient equivalent of Megalapolis? Another civ entirely?
In the previous chapter I assumed the cop-faller being referenced was Anabel but here Acerola's insinuating it could be Nanu instead... I don't have anything to make of that right yet, but very much tucking that away in my thought cabinet for later. I'll file Shirona making a pact with Giratina away beside it, too. I wouldn't have expected she was there for...
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oh. well yeah. in that case it checks out.
lol sorry I thought that was clearer.
Damn, how many arcs has this been going straight over my head for now??? She has the Cynthia team, I really should have noticed this sooner. This isn't even my first read of the chapter! Apparently they can use me as radiation shielding on account of the fact I'm apparently a bit dense. (In my defence I thought Togekiss was exclusively a Volo thing, forgot Cynthia had one too. Completely forgot about the Spiritomb on Shirona's team, too.)

Plumeria sounds like she's still in there in some capacity, which sounds... unpleasant, given she's just the "primary host" and doesn't have the actual control she was promised.
I'm sure it's going great for her lol.
Pleasantly surprised by how well Lyra and Genesis are taking this whole thing. I was really expecting that to go worse for Cuicatl.
For now. We'll see.
I know it's a side note given for this beat given all the everything happening but I do love this kind of existential question. Curious to see how this train of thought affects her down the line, if at all.
I'm sure it will lead to good decisions only.
7.3's twitter segments are amusing. Seeing Wilford take a well-deserved blow made me laugh, he really does just tell on himself like that. The mixed media format works well as a palette cleanser after the last few very character-dense chapters before we move on to Noci.
He's such a goddamn idiot. I love/hate him.
favourite tweet of the chapter.
And one that actually gets explored kinda seriously soon!
Another side note, I take psychic damage every time I am reminded that President Donald Trump is an existing canon character to Broken Things.
As I told Boots, this was going to get edited out. He had to be there because he was omnipresent in 2020 when I was writing this, but then 2024 came and I figured "yeah he can get cut, it's fine," but no. Now he has to stay.
Gage is a piece of shit. Glad he's dead. Not to say good work Noci(?), but good work Noci(?). Sorry about the extra dose of shit to be traumatized about, Levi. Of course, that doesn't mean my approval of Noci(?) has gone up, Metagross are indeed terrifying.
It's a great day when the alien slasher is more sympathetic than the human lol.
And that's before factoring in the fight with Cuicatl's team and subsequent psychic fucker. Holy fucking shit.
Totally fine, don't worry about it.
So. Uh. Mentally moving on for that massive pile of implications I can't untangle: Time for 7.4.

I remember seeing the fic updates post for this one and expecting it to go worse for Genesis and Cuicatl's relationship. I suppose it makes a lot of sense that she tries to think of things in a moral binary. Cuicatl sure is calling that into question. Lyra's got a verty good read on Cuicatl's behaviour, though, which isn't a total surprise for me but is more than I expected— though given 7.2 I suppose I shouldn't be surprised at all. She's gone from psychic tampering hazard to psychic tampering victim in Lyra's eyes.
It does make Lyra intensely sympathetic to Cuicatl. She'd already privately come to accept that Cuicatl wasn't going to do anything to her but this sort of recontextualizes everything.
The pool and the splashfight and whatnot are very cute. No particular notes. I hope she gets to do it again like she wanted.
I assume she will, eventually, even if it might be a bit repetitive to write it again. So just assume it happens offscreen.
...Of course Cuicatl's plan for dealing with the Noci(?) situation is to martyr herself. Hardly even a blip on the "medically concerning things about Cuicatl" radar at this point, but good thing Gen and Lyra are there to stop it. Not that Noci(?) was actually gonna kill her, but... Glad to have some other witnesses on that whole thing.
If Noci was going to kill her the presence or absence of other humans wouldn't make a difference.
Also glad that Gen gets confirmation Levi's alright. Really, everything shook out here alright. Our bunch really do seem to be getting better at handling things with emotional maturity.
Something something coming of age story.
Except maybe Kekoa. Wonder how on earth he's doing, given his last known location. Guess that answer's probably not too far off.
Find out in next week's episode of Sad Times In The Dark!

@Negrek stop making replies while I'm typing out responses :([/SPOILER]
 
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Poison 7.5 New

Persephone

Infinite Screms
Pronouns
her/hers
Partners
  1. mawile
  2. vulpix-alola
Poison 7.5: In The Heart
Kekoa

July 24, 2020

The ghost looks straight at you as her army rips through the cops.

For a minute or five or fifty you were huddled up with Machoke behind his gigalith. You noticed at some point that he was bleeding from his stomach but seems to be ignoring it. Did he pull you down and drag you over while injured? You’ll thank him if you both survive this.

Eventually the bullets stop. The megaphone comes back on. “Attention: you are under arrest. Do not resist. Any sign of resistance will be met with appropriate force. I repeat: do not resist.”

Machoke sighs. “Guess that’s it then. Not dying here if I can help it.”

You want to tell him no. You want to fight. But you almost got shot, Machoke did get shot, and Plumeria left and nothing makes sense anymore. You were just stealing shit. Why would they do this? Because they could? Because nothing will happen to them? No. You want to make them pay. Want to teach them that they can’t do this in your country.

You also want to live.

You set down the pokéball in your hand.

Then the ghosts appear. At first you freeze up. Is this how you go? Not to the guns but to random ass ghosts with spears? The cops try shouting at them. Then they try shooting at them. They get a few and you aren’t sure if that’s good or bad. Machoke whispers out a prayer to Xerneas of all fucking gods. More ghosts float in from the side streets and beeline straight for the cops. They fight for a while but the cops are already hurt and low on ammo. There are screams behind you. Good. Let them feel what it’s like.

You never move from your spot behind the gigalith. This is safe.

The air grows colder when she appears. Your eyes snap to her. Everyone’s eyes snap to her. She feels like the dagger Plumeria had. She looks directly at you and there’s ice in your soul as your veins freeze from the hands up. Her body is darkness and fog but her face is lit up by blue fire. Still can’t make out the details. When you focus on one the rest change. Only her eyes stay the same, brown and grey. The eyes are warm. You focus on them. And then she looks away to see the battle finish. There are more screams. The air smells like metal and shit. Machoke wraps an arm around you and pulls you closer.

They weren’t going to have mercy on you. The moment someone twitched they’d just shoot you all and finish the job.

You still throw up in the back of your mouth. It feels too much like Hoenn.

The woman disappears between blinks and you can feel your blood start to flow again. You take the deepest breaths of your life and close your eyes. It’s over. It’s over. You’re okay. It’s over.

*​

It was not over.

Someone higher up made the call to move everyone to a warehouse in Hau’oli. You don’t know why. You weren’t paying attention. Just looking straight down at your feet and trying to breathe normally. You should probably get new shoes. These are really starting to fall apart. It’s weird you never noticed before.

There are still bombs going off in the distance. You’ve heard that something’s going on in the harbor.

The senior members talk and piece together what they know. You sit in the corner in dull shock while they announce it. Plumeria was working with Acerola. They used the dagger to summon the ghosts. Plumeria isn’t answering her calls. She might be dead. The ghosts are fighting the cops and the army everywhere. No one knows how they work. It’s best to lay low for a while.

The med bay is busy. You dropped off Anuenue but couldn’t stay for long. You hope he’s okay. He’s tough. Toughest on your team. He’ll be okay. Loudred finds you shortly after. She asks if you’re okay. You say yes. You ask if she is. She says yes. She leaves shortly after.

You end up sitting on the concrete floor against a metal wall.

Golbat finds you after an eternity staring at the roof. Her arm is in a sling but she seems fine other than that. “Hey,” she says. She has a very thin smile. “Weird night, huh?”

“Yes.” You’re pretty sure you whisper it. Aloud. Maybe it dies in your throat. She gets the message anyway and slides down against the wall until she’s sitting next to you.

“We lost Cranidos. You should probably talk to Yungoos later. They were close.”

Oh. You hadn’t even thought about them. They invited you out when they played sports on the field. Let you watch movies in the lounge too late on the nights after missions. They treated you like one of the boys. But you didn’t really know them. Didn’t even have a real name. You don’t know any of their real names. Plumeria loved her secrets and you all almost died for one of them.

“I will.” You swallow. “I’m Kekoa. You probably knew that.”

Her thin smile returns. “I don’t really have a civilian name to give you. Transitioned when I was already in Skull. Didn’t see a need.”

“Are you going to pick one?” you ask her. “Things are going to be different.” You don’t even know what the point of Skull is if Alola is getting freed. Don’t know if anyone thought this far ahead. The people you’ve talked to didn’t even think it was possible.

“Eventually. Not tonight.”

You lapse into silence. You each have too much to think about. But your thoughts circle back to Cranidos.

“How long was Cranidos on the team?”

“Not long. Couple months before you got here.” She sighs. “Still have no idea why he joined.”

A microphone screeches. A Skull admin you don’t know is standing on a crate. “Can I, uh, have your attention?” The room falls silent. “Uh, few pieces of news. The Navy got wrecked at Pearl Harbor and are pulling back.” There are some scattered cheers. “Trump didn’t take it well. Uh. Well. They. Fuck it. They nuked Tapu Village.”

Your blood runs cold for the second time in the night. They. Did. What? Why? That’s their own people. Hardly anyone even lived there! Just—Acerola, fuck, that’s why. Why would she even be at home tonight? Did they just do it out of spite? You know people are talking. That things are happening around you. But you’re lightyears from all of it. Did the orphanage get warning? You haven’t really talked to anyone from there in months, just the one visit back, but you liked them. First place that almost felt like home. That’s why you had to leave. To give someone else a chance at it. Someone who needed it more.

Are they gone? Just because some racist thousands of miles away was mad? What about the two Skull members who stayed behind? Did they head out? Did they even know it was coming? Fuck, it was a nuke. They would’ve gone quick.

…Armoranth asked to stay behind.

Oh fuck.

You guess you’re free now but your stomach is twisting into knots. She’s just a kid. An annoying kid with more power than she should have. You… you think you like her when she isn’t threatening your life. And now she’s gone. In an instant. Just like that. For no. Fucking. Reason.

“Anne,” Golbat whispers beside you. She sounds so broken. “No. Please no.”

You don’t know if she’s talking about Hatterene or Simisear or someone else. Can’t bring yourself to ask. You wrap an arm around her shoulder and she jolts away.

“I—I’m sorry. I need to be somewhere else. Sorry.” She hurries off and leaves you alone. You wonder if you should send out one of your pokémon but it’s not like you can talk to any of them. You’d need Armoranth to translate and she’s. No. The florges had to know something like this could happen. She’s fine. Maybe she even helped everyone else get out. She’s. Fine. She has to be.

You wonder how long Hatterene had known the other members. She’s been there for years. You get the feeling Machoke had, too. Hatterene knew enough about gang logistics that you’d thought she’s been around for a minute. And now she’s dead. Not because a mission went wrong but because it went right.

What else are they going to bomb? Here? Suddenly getting everyone together feels like a really shitty idea. It’s a half hour before the leadership agree and split you up. Another half hour of waiting to pick up Anuenue. He’s hurt and it’ll scar like a motherfucker but he’ll live. Just can’t battle for a while. You will absolutely take it. Machoke stays behind in the med bay. Loudred says in a hushed tone that he’ll probably live. She picked up two of her own pokémon. You don’t know which ones or how hurt they are. Can’t quite bring yourself to ask.

The rest of your group heads out to a duplex on the edge of town. Yungoos and Golbat barely look alive, just staring at the ground or into the distance like there’s nothing there. Loudred walks at the front with the most confidence. Even she had a slight frown and wider eyes when you saw her. She’s usually just perfectly neutral.

Everything’s weirdly still in the darkness. No one’s out. Even the wild pokémon are hiding tonight. Your group’s footsteps are the only ones you can hear. Even the ghost soldiers just drift a few inches off the ground when they pass you. Everyone goes still and gets closer to the nearest wall when a plane flies nearby. It wouldn’t protect you. Just feels wrong to be in the open. Like you’re a flock of wooloo waiting to get snatched up by a dragon. When you finally make it to your destination, a normal-looking home in a bad part of town, Loudred steps up and unlocks the door. Everyone shuffles into it in silence. Golbat and Yungoos move straight to the bedrooms. You look at the living area. It doesn’t look used or dirty like your common area did before you started cleaning. Whole place looks empty. What was this used for? Why did Skull have it?

Loudred moves past you and sits in an armchair. You sit on the couch. Then you kind of just stare at each other. It’s nice to have someone else here. Helps keep you from thinking about… everything.

She finally whispers something. Even in the silence you can’t make it out.

“What?”

“Rebecca.” She keeps staring at you. Is that her name? It sounds way too normal for someone like her. “Golbat said you wanted to know names.”

“Right. Uh, Kekoa.”

“I know.”

“So do you want me to use that or…?”

She shrugs. “Either is fine.”

A plane flies nearby and you freeze up until it passes. Rebecca’s eyes track the sound until you can’t hear it anymore.

“Rest,” she whispers. “I’ll keep watch.”

“Aren’t you tired?” She’s been up as long as you and you’re as wired as you’ve ever been and feel the dizziness of an all-nighter kicking in.

“I want to be alone a while longer.”

That sounds dangerous. You had some really bad late nights early in your transition in the months on the long waiting list the orphanage never knew about. Golbat told you later that the clinic that gave you the script hadn’t really been on the up-and-up. Not entirely illegal. Just a burnt-out doc playing a little fast and loose with the rules.

At least this country sucks—American sucked—enough you could sometimes benefit.

“Are your pokémon okay?” You ask. Maybe you should be less direct. You still want to know what you’re dealing with.

“My scyther was shot. Froslass was badly hurt by an enemy persian.” She sounds fine when she says it. Too fine. Forcing it. “Scyther will live. Just has to molt. Froslass is very weak now. Almost faded. Might need to kill someone to get back to her usual self. Thankfully, the environment is good for that.”

That part was slightly sped through but her tone was level. Can’t tell how forced that was. “Have you killed someone before?”

“Yes,” she says without hesitation. “Four times. Two accidents.”

“Oh. That’s uh. Cool?” It’s lame but what the fuck do you even say to that? “I haven’t?”

She snorts. The most emotion you’ve ever gotten from her.

Should you ask more questions about who she wants to kill? Is it polite? You don’t want to. You just… it’s a war and she can probably find someone who deserves it but you’d rather not know. You don’t think you actually could kill someone if you had to. Today… today was too much. Again. You didn’t think the Americans would leave without a fight, but you didn’t think the fight would come without a warning. You didn’t think it would feel like Hoenn. Everything’s going wrong and no one really knowing why and no idea if you’re safe, if anyone’s safe.

“Rest. I will keep watch.”

“Fine,” you grumble. Probably better than continuing this trainwreck of a talk. You pull your four pokéballs off your belt and set them on the table. You really need to tell the rest of your team what happened. Properly talk to Anuenue. You will, in the morning, after you somehow get to sleep.

You lie down on the couch and look up at the ceiling. Rebecca throws a blanket onto you and you jolt up. She just stares at you. You stare back. Eventually you mumble an apology and spread the blanket out.

Impossibly, inevitably, you fall asleep.

*​

You’re woken up by a houndoom furiously barking as the front door swings open. Rebecca is already on her feet. The room’s light. Did she—fuck its already morning. Barks. Door. You jolt up, look back, and see—

“No! You do not bark at me. I have spent all night wandering this forsaken city trying to find my lost property and I am not in the mood to hear it from you!”

Your heart swells. Thank the gods. She’s fine, just like you knew she would be. Before you can form a conscious thought you’ve already swept Armoranth up into a hug.

“Ack! No! Drop me this instant! I will not be sullied by your scent any longer!”

Her words don’t make you do it. She was just bluffing about that before. You still let her down.

“Whatever has gotten into you? First you refuse to come back at the agreed-upon time, then you move halfway across the city—twice, I might add—and then act incredibly out of character. What. Happened?”

She emphasizes it with a tiny stamp of your tiny foot.

“Thought you’d died.”

“And whyever—”

“They nuked Tapu Village.”

“Bombed,” Rebecca says. You look over.

Golbat and Yungoos were woken up by the yelling and came down. Yungoos is already turning around to go back to his room. Golbat lingers long enough to give you a weak smile before turning back.

“They say it was just a big, normal bomb.”

“The mushroom cloud?”

She shrugs. “Apparently they can do that.”

Armoranth is still frozen in place. “Did they at least evacuate the city?” she finally asks.

Rebecca shakes her head no.

“I see.” Her gaze is somewhere far, far away. “Kekoa, carry me to something I may sit upon.”

You pick her up. She doesn’t object this time. You think about hugging her again but decide just to let her rest on the pillow you used last night. She folds up and sits with her stem-like limbs crossed. Her flower falls to rest beside her. She looks so, so small like this.

She doesn’t say anything else. You’re tired but it would be really rude to fall back asleep on her. You turn to Rebecca. “You sleep?”

She shakes her head.

“Do it. I’ll keep watch.”

She nods and pulls a blanket out of the basket beside her. Within five minutes she’s gently snoring.

Armoranth has yet to say a word.

You reach for your pokéballs before pausing and moving your hand to your phone instead. In time you will need to explain what’s happening to your team. But first you need to figure out what’s happening. And Armoranth doesn’t seem like she’s in the mood to translate.

Doesn’t seem like anyone knows what’s going on. The military withdrew, the cops are dead or lying low. The governor is urging people to stay calm while the president froths at the mouth and bombs shit for no reason. The ghosts only seem to be killing cops and soldiers for now. Also any rando who goes out with a gun or a pokémon and tries to fight them. Hard to feel too bad for the victims.

Apparently, Skull are the cops now. That’s not going to end great. First, because you’re finding this out from Acerola on socials. There clearly wasn’t any actual planning. You don’t have training for this. Don’t know where to go or what to do. And from the way everyone was last night you doubt anyone’s in the mood. You aren’t and you didn’t really lose anyone you were close to. Most important was the girl who gave you your shots.

That hits weirdly hard this morning. Hatterene isn’t going to give you princess bandages to fuck with you anymore. She’s dead. Gone.

All your stuff is, too. It wasn’t much. Just a little more than you could fit in a backpack. And all of Moe’s books. That’s… fine. You don’t think he’ll need them to feed for a long time. The day you got him he led you to the graveyard. Plumeria said she didn’t want to keep the queen waiting. She was planning this for a long time. So why does it all feel so chaotic right now?

Is this what was going on in Magma and Aqua bases while they watched the gods they raised destroy their home? Did they know? They had to, right? But you didn’t. If you’d been a decade older and born in Hoenn, could that have been you?

…does it matter that this god seems a little less destructive? If Plumeria’s gamble had gone worse, would you be guilty of it? You shake your head. Can’t know that. There will be time to think later. For now you should learn. You keep scrolling until you get to something that makes you freeze up before slowly boiling over with rage.

Didn’t get me ;)
@ghostprincess

What. The Fuck. Is that?

She lived there! She knew the people in that fucking orphanage that just got leveled because of her and she’s using a goddamn smiley face in her post minutes after they all got burned alive. There’s a press release later on that talks about senseless loss of life and all that but it sounds so fake, so much like a politician, that you can’t help but roll your eyes. People she knew, you knew, died for no reason and they’re making it a political game to earn points off of. Bastards. All of them. If you’re doing this it’s not for her.

Armoranth is looking at you funny. You set the phone down and take a deep breath to steady yourself.

“I don’t think either side cares about the people.”

She snorts. Covers her mouth like she’s trying not to laugh.

“Wait. The humans are just now learning this? Is that why…”

You start to object but. No. You deserve that one. As a species.

*​

It takes another few hours but eventually you get everyone around the table over bowls of dry cereal. No one complains about breakfast. Golbat still looks shell-shocked. Yungoos is a little less out of it but still nowhere near as confident as usual. Loudred, of all people, takes point on the briefing.

“There’s a large crowd gathering outside of the grocery on 3rd and Sunrise. The police are not responding. Staff have been sheltering inside since the bombing began. They have requested Skull’s assistance for peacekeeping and ensure an orderly distribution of supplies. The central council has asked us to go alongside the Konikoni branch.”

“Do we have to?” Golbat asks.

“I cannot make you do anything.”

“I’m out then,” Yungoos says. “Fuck this. Not what I signed up for.”

“I just need time,” Golbat says.

Rebecca looks at you. Playing cop sounds awful. But reading between the lines, there are workers in there who are scared they’ll be torn apart by a pack of Karens. And you could probably get better food for you and the team. “Sure.”

She nods. The briefing continues.

Armoranth pulls you aside afterwards.

“I want to go with you.”

“Thought you didn’t like missions?”

She scowls. It always looks unnatural with her dainty features on a flower body. “After last time I am taking no chances.”

“Thought you wanted to hide?”

She spreads her arms wide. “A white floette is the least of anyone’s problems right now.”

That’s fair. Besides, you don’t really want to leave her behind, either. What if the government finds out there are Skull members hiding there?

…you don’t want to think about that. Golbat will be fine when you return. She’s not high ranking enough to bother with.

*​

The crowd is bigger than you were anticipating. Couple hundred people milling around outside. Something inside is casting barriers over the windows. Sometimes one of the trainers outside will try to break them. No luck so far. Eventually someone with brick break will come, though, and everything will go to shit. Probably the only reason the workers want to let people in at all.

There are fewer people around the back entrance but still some. It’s weird how much fear they show when you walk up in Skull uniform. Or maybe they’re reacting to Armoranth. Don’t see a white floette walking around every day.

Rebecca knocks on the door. Another Skull member looks through the window and lets you in. There are three of them. Two of you. Five people to manage the crowd. There are only seven store employees. Only one’s older than 35. She’s an old haole woman. Twitches her lip whenever anyone from Skull says anyone. Twelve of you against several hundred of them. Assuming the hag is even on your side.

The employee who seems to be in charge is a man with a thick black beard. He also doesn’t seem impressed by the number of people you’ve sent to help.

“New plan: we barricade the storerooms, retract the barrier, defend this area. Let them loot the front.”

“Isn’t that just letting them win?” the old lady scoffs.

“Okay, let’s say that we go out there and tell them they can only take five items each. We enforce that at checkout. What happens when people take ten and start streaming out? Do we attack them? All of them? Because you know they’re all going to do it. You want to risk a fight breaking out right by you?”

The woman glowers but says nothing.

“Thought so. Lemme show our guests around. Make a plan to defend the place. Then it’s go-time.”

*​

There are six doors between the front and back of the store. Each of the Skull members takes one. The store employees took the other and reinforced your weakest member. One of them has a bronzong and a mime. He’s been holding up the barrier. You wonder if he’s psychic like Cuicatl. Might be rude to ask. He probably isn’t, though. Wouldn’t be working for minimum wage if he was.

For a few minutes after the barrier recedes the people rushing in are mostly concerned with grabbing as much as they can. At some point they start fighting each other. You can hear the battles from behind the door and barrier. Idiots. They’re probably breaking the stuff they’re trying to take. When that settles someone finally realizes there’s still more in the back. You can see the barrier ripple as it starts being attacked. It should hold. For a while, anyway. People try to open the door in front of you a few times but most give up when they find it’s locked. It’s nearly fifteen minutes before someone breaks it down. What’s left of it splinters into pieces and slides off the barrier. There’s a man with a makuhita on the other side. Great. That thing probably knows brick break. Your team rally to attention. Moe floats lower while surrounded by blue flame. Leilani buzzes and lets some static fly from her mandibles. Kapuna just floats there, menacingly. All you can ask. Armoranth is off… somewhere, doing something. Hopefully something helpful. Even missing Anuenue they’re doing a good job at looking scary.

You drop your voice as low as it can go (so much lower than it was before). “Back off. Barrier stays up, we don’t have a fight.” He grimaces but goes away. The people behind him also decide it’s not worth a fight. So cool. They’re afraid of you. And you were kind of badass.

Unfortunately, that guy probably went to another door, decided he liked his odds there, and ordered a brick break. The barrier falls and you’ll get to deal with a lot more people trying their luck.

The first few see a vikavolt staring them down and decide it’s a good idea to be somewhere else. A tan girl a few years older than you eyes your team up and down. “Come on, can’t I have something? Please? I didn’t have anything stored up and I don’t know how else I’m getting food.”

You get that. Things are bad now and they’re about to get a whole lot worse. The problem is that there are a lot of people like her and you don’t know how much food is in the back.

“Not my call. Stick around. We can talk to the manager.”

Or whatever title beard guy has.

An old haole with no pokémon storms up. No pokémon. A hand in his pocket. There’s a bulge in it. You’re hoping it’s just a pokéball.

“Fuck’s sake, you commies think you can take over the island, huh? I fought you fuckers before in the jungle and I ain’t going to let you take this country from me.”

“Calm down.” You take a step back and try to think through your options. Kapuna can take a bullet but the carbink’s not fast enough to get in the way. You’re pretty sure that Leilani still knows string shot but you haven’t tested it. Really, really regretting that now. Ghosts are weird and you’re not sure what Moe can do against a guy with a gun.

The older girl is also backing away from the bug-eyed maniac.

“Calm down? This is my goddamn country and if you think I’m letting it fall to a bunch of teenaged nobodies, you’ve got another thing—”

A few things happen very, very quickly. He pulls his hand out of the pocket. There’s something shiny in it. The hand moves to point towards you. You want to say that you gave an order. Came up with something that worked flawlessly. You didn’t. You froze as your brain caught up with their being a gun pointed right at you. There’s a flash of light. A bang. You close your eyes. Something hits the floor. The smell of ozone and burning flesh fills your nostrils.

You open your eyes.

The man’s on the ground.

There’s a gun in his hand.

His eyes are still bugged out.

There’s a burn mark right between them.

You turn and look at Leilani. Sparks are still arcing between her mandibles.

You just killed someone.

Holy shit.

You just killed someone.

The girl takes a few steps back. Says something. The words slide right off you without getting through.

“Take five things from the back and come out this way.”

Your voice is calm. She probably thinks you do this a lot. You can see her hesitate before deciding that the food is worth it. She gingerly steps past the man—the body—and slides past you. Kapuna’s smart enough to float out of the way and let her pass.

Holy shit you just killed someone.

Not, like, personally, but Leilani’s your pokémon and she was protecting you and if she hadn’t done it you would have died.

No one else tries to fight you. They see the corpse and the vikavolt and get out of there. Some of them yell at you. Leilani sparks and they cower back. Terrified. Of the murderer. Of you.

Someone starts yelling behind you. It takes you a while to place it. The old haole bitch. The other voice is the girl you let past.

“I let her in!” You yell. “Let her go.”

The girl comes out a few minutes later with a full bag. She gives you a small smile before carefully stepping around the corpse.

When the crowd has started to think the barrier comes back up. The rest of the mob give up and go home after that. Armoranth decides to come out of hiding. She spends a long time looking between you, Leilani, and the body. Judging the shit out of you, probably.

“Going to tell me to kill myself?” The words are hollow. She couldn’t actually make you. Worst she could do is leave or tell her aunt or something. Bad. But it’s hard to care about anything right now.

“You cannot draw a lethal weapon and be surprised when there are lethal consequences,” she says. Even if your head was in the game, you probably couldn’t work out all the fairy subtext in there. But you think she’s supporting you. “I assume this is your first time taking a life?”

“Yeah.”

“I see. You need to center yourself before you make any further rash decisions. Where are you now?”

“I…”

“Kekoa.” She sounds upset. You try not to get her upset.

“Fresh Market. Hau’oli City.”

“Where are we in time?”

It takes you a few seconds to wrap your head around the weird phrasing. You’d make fun of her for it if things weren’t… yeah. “July. Uh. July 22. 2020.”

“It’s the twenty-fourth. Close enough, I suppose.”

“Sure.”

“Where were you this morning?”

The questions continue for a while as she asks you to give answers that have nothing at all to do with why you’re freaking out. And it works. Eventually you can give clearer answers. Even give her a little shit. Only then does she move on to ask about what happened. Who the man is. How he died. What you did before and after.

She hesitates at the end. “And you hold yourself personally responsible?”

“She’s my pokémon.”

Leilani buzzes.

“No, dear, you did nothing wrong.”

Oh. Right. She probably thinks you’re freaking out because she shouldn’t have killed the guy. She probably should have used string shut or thunder wave but you didn’t give the order in time. That’s on you, not her.

“Agreed.”

There’s a pause while you pull yourself up. Kapuna floats down to offer a handhold. Really sweet carbink. You’ll polish them soon. Whenever you can get supplies.

“How’d you learn to talk people through that, anyway?” you ask Armoranth.

“My mother.”

She sounds wistful. Homesick? You’re on Hau’oli for the foreseeable future.

“We could visit her.”

“Perhaps.” That doesn’t seem to cheer her up like you’d hoped.

One of the Skulls from the other squad walks over. “You good?”

“Yeah. We’re good.” You don’t know if he can see the body. You don’t know if he’d care.

“Right. We’re debriefing.”

You follow him. Everyone’s in the main office. They look uninjured. Loudred’s froslass is even floating behind her in full glory. You try not to think too much about what that means.

“Alright,” beard guy starts off. “Crowd’s dispersed for now. We’ll take what we can and leave the rest behind before a dedicated raiding party comes back. Let’s load up the cars.”

“We’re just letting them have stuff?” the woman sneers.

“We have no way to defend it in the long run.”

“Not the public, them.” She raises a trembling finger towards you with hate in her eyes. “They killed people, Chuck. And they’re the reason we’re cowering in the back in the first place when we should be at home safe with our families.”

“Cheryl, you’re single,” one of the younger employees stage whispers.

“That’s not—we had a deal where they helped us operate in an orderly fashion, and they broke it and good people died and now we’re holding to our end of it?”

“You’re alive,” Rebecca says in her quiet, even way. “You would not be without us.”

“We wouldn’t be in this situation without you!” she screams. “I just wanted to go home and rest at the end of my shift, but, no, suddenly there are ghosts bombing the navy. I didn’t ask for this. I didn’t vote for you. What gives you the right to do this?”

There’s a shouting match. You zone out. You doubt she has a gun, too. Doesn’t seem the type. Just the kind of miserable Karen who’d see you walk by her house after sundown and then lock the door and call the cops. Won’t get her own hands dirty. The whole thing ends when a wave of frost falls over the room and Rebecca steps forward.

“We’re wasting time. The trucks will be loaded. Do not interfere.”

Turns out that you don’t have a semi or anything. Just a moving van and two normal trucks. The kind an insecure prick would drive. The truck your squad gets is enough supplies to last what’s left of the team for a while. Minus Anuenue. He’ll probably have to graze.

*​

July 26, 2020

Armoranth doesn’t really eat. Just soaks in moonlight and sleeps near the Z-crystal you barely use. Still requires you to be outside on a night where you’d rather not be. There aren’t nearly as many planes as there were before. You don’t know if that’s good or bad.

The safehouse has a small, fenced off backyard with a birdbath, a bench, and a swingset. You sit on the swing while Armoranth meditates in the middle of the field. She’s told you that you don’t need to be here for this, but when you aren’t she gets snippy the next day like you did something wrong. No idea what’s going through her head. It’s not like you ever stay outside the whole night anyway. Eventually you’ll go inside and go to bed.

A gate to the yard swings open and your attention snaps to it. So does Armoranth’s. Your heart drops into your throat. Armoranth claps her hands in excitement. It’s her aunt. The Lady of the Scarlet Forest. You can’t imagine she’s here for anything good.

“I acknowledge the delay in meeting with you,” she whispers like a soft breeze over grass. You can never tell if it’s aloud or in your mind. “I further acknowledge that it could be regarded as improper. Alas, I encountered some difficulty in tracing your whereabouts following the razing of Tapu Village.”

Armoranth twirls her flower. It’s kind of a nervous tic. Why is she nervous? She was just apologized to. Kind of. That gives fairies power or something.

“I understand. It took me hours to find Kekoa on the night the war began.”

The florges shifts. It’s a ripple up her stem and through her entire body. You wonder if she always moved like that and you just didn’t notice under the cloak. “Were you not with him?”

She scowls and crosses her flower across her body. “I dislike violent environments. I understand it is necessary to engage in violence upon occasion. I know what path I walk. That does not mean that I choose to engage in it on someone else’s behalf.”

“I see.” Her attention shifts to you. It used to be terrifying. Now it’s nothing compared to what the ghost lady’s presence did. Still enough to get you to straighten up at attention. “I do not know what I would have done had my ward died and you were nowhere to be found. You are quite lucky that this question remains a hypothetical.”

“Understood.” Watch her like your life depends on it because it probably does.

“Good. Now, I have much to discuss with my niece. Your presence would be appreciated inside.”

She’s telling you to fuck off. Understood that, too. See, you are getting better at understanding the fae.

“Got it.”

You hurry to the door as fast as you can while keeping some dignity. Then you retreat away from the windows for good measure. Is the first room you find without a window a closet? Yes. It’s a big closet. You can sit on a big box of supplies in it and close the door behind you. Whatever gets you far away from the florges that owns you. Armoranth is one thing. She’s a bratty kid. Scarlet might actually kill you if you annoy her.

At least you have phone signal in the closet. Not all that bad. It’s easy enough to burn twenty minutes on a game. Just a matching game with some brightly colored fruit and a catchy song. You got into these kinds of things when you were a little girl and it was normal. You stopped playing it when it wasn’t normal for you anymore because you were a teenage boy. But social media sucks. It’s all people who are whining about Skull, like you knew this was going to happen, and desperate pleas for help like you aren’t all kind of fucked right now with the port embargoed until you all starve to death or bend the knee. So you downloaded the app onto your new phone and are working on building a streak back up.

The door to the outside opens and you immediately lock the phone. There aren’t footsteps or the sounds of shuffling. Probably Armoranth then rather than her mother.

“Is that a supply closet?” she asks.

“Yes?”

“Why are you in it?”

“Hiding.”

There’s a long pause on the other side. She probably has a tiny hand held up to her mouth while she suppresses a giggle.

“Good instincts. Can you open the door?”

You turn the handle and gently push it open. Armoranth floats out of the way. You don’t feel the need to get up from the box yet. “She gone?”

“Yup.”

Sweet. You might be able to get up, then. But it would put your head a lot higher than Armoranth’s and make the talk more awkward.

“What’d she want?”

“To check on me.”

“Cool.” You really have no idea what else to say to that. “How mad is she about leaving you behind on the mission?”

She pivots so that she’s leaning back onto her flower. “Less than she was. I reminded her that if I had gone with you or you had stayed with me, I likely would be dead right now. I think she’s mostly embarrassed that she started a war without being 100% sure I was secure.”

You blink. “She started the war?”

“And you are not to say a word about it to anyone else, are we clear?”

“Yeah, but I thought your guys’ whole thing was not doing wars.”

“It’s…” She sighs deeply. Deeply for her. At her size it’s still adorably high-pitched. “No, our kind are focused on healing a shattered world. Most do it by building peaceful, protected gardens where no one else can ruin the environment. White florges are a little bit different. We are more interested in active solutions to long-term problems. Sometimes that makes the symptoms worse for a time, like a fever fighting infection.” Her voice sounds unusually monotone. Like she’s quoting without believing it. You’re not sure if saying that would be implying that she’s lying about something, which her aunt taught you fairies really don’t take well.

“How do you feel about the war?” you ask instead.

You lot made things violent a long time before we got here,” she says. Her arms are crossed. She’s looking at the ground. She usually insists on making eye contact, long after it’s uncomfortable. “The war simply exposed the violent contempt with which your governments see their citizens. Willing to sacrifice their comfort and lives to decide what flag flies over a patch of dirt. That willingness did not change because a florges acted.” She suddenly looks up towards you. “And what are your thoughts on the matter?”

“The Americans could let us go whenever they wanted. Same as always.” You look down at your hands. There was never actually blood on them. Leilani’s a clean killer. But everything feels different now. The hoopa’s free and they aren’t going back. You’ll have to live with this. “I just thought someone would have a plan, you know? Acerola, Plumeria, somebody. A way to get supplies and restore order that isn’t just hoping Skull figures it out for them.”

Armoranth mocks wiping a tear from her eye with comically large gestures. You shoot her a weird look. What was funny in that? “Look at my little human growing up before my eyes. Finally realizing that your elders don’t know what they’re doing, either.”

“And does that apply to florges leaders?” you snap. You immediately regret it. Terrible thing to say for your survival. Just don’t like being mocked.

She doesn’t kill you. Doesn’t even get mad. Just looks back down at the ground. “That remains to be seen.”

*​

July 27, 2020

The lights flicker. You look up from the shitty romance book you’d found tucked away in one of the house’s bookshelves. The lights stay lit for long enough that you look back down. And then they fail. You sigh and set the book down. You’ve barely even been reading it. The book’s not bad—you’ve learned what bad books are like—just bland. Pointless. Not even fun to make fun of. Found yourself flipping the page and realizing you had no idea what you’d just read. Most interesting thing about it is deciding whether it was written by a porygon or a person. You’ve just needed something to do. No one’s in the mood to talk, especially after Cranidos stormed out yesterday and hasn’t come back. You assume he quit. Better than thinking about the other option.

Half the missions that do get floated feel too big. You’ve seen what happens when you bite off too much. The other half feel too small to bother with. People are getting bombed and they want you to go out and risk someone getting shot to make sure drivers are following red lights. Who the hell is even driving right now?

You idly stare at the window. It’s afternoon. There’s enough light coming in that you could read, if you wanted to. You don’t. You’re stuck on a level of Blue Fruit Falls and the internet’s really, really spotty so you couldn’t even pay for powerups if you wanted to. Quickly remembering why you ended up falling out of love with the game.

Kapuna got polished this morning. They’re currently hovering by the window and looking out at the street. They’ve been there for at least four hours and haven’t moved at all. Moe and Leilani should be within a few blocks but it feels shitty to call them back just because you’re bored. You’re trying to keep Anuenue in his ball because getting lots of grass is kind of hard right now while you’re cooped up. Only so much he can get out of the nearby lawns. Going out further feels dangerous. Armoranth is curled up asleep in a small basket with some washcloths on the bottom.

There’s a war going on. You shouldn’t be bored.

You hear Golbat stumble down the stairs. Steps heavy and weirdly timed. The handrail squeals from how hard she’s pressing down on it. “Power go out?” she asks / groans. Her voice is hoarse. You’ve been pretending not to hear it when she screams into her pillow.

“Think so.”

She slowly blinks before walking over and crashing down hard into an armchair. “Shitty house or did they bomb the grid?”

“Didn’t hear any bombs.”

They’ve slowed down a little. Maybe the ghosts control the skies. Maybe the hostage play is working. Still pissed about that. Might’ve been unrealistic to think she’d kick the haole out. It’s another thing to not even let them leave.

You know why she’s doing it. You don’t want all of Alola to end up like Tapu Village. Doesn’t mean you like it.

“Groceries are gonna go bad,” Golbat complains.

You started by eating the stuff that would spoil. No one wanted to cook. You stepped up. Weren’t going to microwave raw meat and eat it. Best to just shove it into the oven for a while. (You spent all of dinner waiting for someone to point out that it was really dry. No one did.) There’s still a little meat left but that’s mostly for Loudred’s houndoom and scyther.

“We have a froslass.”

She exhales through her nose. Never seen her complain this much. Guess everything’s gotten to her.

“Anyone told you what we’re doing for hormones?”

“No. How’s it going to work?” You’re both a little screwed there. She didn’t take any pills with her. You didn’t take any shots. Neither of you have had time or energy to loot a pharmacy. All the good stuff is probably gone, anyway. You don’t have any shots.

“I don’t know.”

“Ah.”

Well, that sucks. Maybe Machoke will know whenever he gets discharged.

“Sorry about not being very,” Golbat waves a hand in a circle. You get it. “It’s all just…”

“Yeah.”

You get that, too.

*​

The last time you were on Route 2 it was dark, cold, and filled with angry pokémon. Now it’s almost too warm and bright. It feels worse. You feel way too exposed to planes or drones or whatever the military’s got just walking around out in the open. You’re pretty sure the military wouldn’t bother to kill two teenagers who aren’t wearing Skull uniforms, but you didn’t think they’d wipe Tapu Village off the map, either.

There’s also something big nearby. You can feel the ground shake with its leisurely steps. Can’t actually here it, though. That means it’s far away. You’re guessing it’s nothing too important. Just a tyranitar in the ghost army or something. It still sets you on edge.

“How does this usually work?” Golbat asks. You kind of wanted some time alone but Golbat insisted you have someone watching you on the mission. Rebecca also loaned her houndoom. He’s actually really well behaved. Better than Pixie was.

“Find the pokémon we want, talk to them, catch them if they agree.” Sometimes you skipped the last step at VStar. Cuicatl never did. She could always somehow convince someone to just drop everything and go with the random human. Then she sold them. It’s kind of fucked.

You really hope she’s doing alright. You saw that she didn’t get her license, but that at least meant that she was far away from Hau’oli and Tapu Village when everything went down. Unless Shirona took her back to her beach house to regroup. The house right outside of Tapu Village.

No. She probably just stayed at the Battle Tree. You’re not dealing with this right now.

“Sounds easy enough. Well, lead the way, Bud.”

The houndoom’s real name is something in Japanese. Sounds badass. The houndoom also answers to Bud. No one will explain why.

The mission is close enough to what you were doing for VStar. The hospitals are running out of diesel. The generators are on borrowed time. Supposedly someone in the ‘Alolan government,’ whatever that is in practice, is trying to get some more past the blockade or get American to let humanitarian aid in. You really doubt that happens. That means the freezers won’t work much longer and all the anesthetic goes bad. They can get around that by having live arbok. Problem is, no one really has arbok since they were almost completely banned by America’s stupid drug laws. You’re going to go find some wild arbok and catch them.

Except, that would be too easy. They don’t want to constantly be wrangling arbok so they have to be there willingly. Have to do Cuicatl’s pied piper thing of convincing pokémon that being kidnapped is totally in their best interest.

At least Armoranth’s willing to translate. Otherwise, this would be completely impossible.

Bud barks and points at the grass on the side of the trail. You stop. Not worth going in after them. Arbok can spit venom from like fifty feet or something. Don’t usually kill people but with your luck you’d be the one they get.

“Hey, uh, snake. I know you’re there. I want to talk.”

Armoranth lets out a telepathic pulse that brushes against your mind. She’s not a natural psychic. Cuicatl does stuff like this all day, every day without breaking a sweat. Armoranth has said she can’t.

The arbok rears up. It’s a lot taller than you expected. Thick, too. Maybe two feet across or something. It spreads its hood out. It wants you to leave it alone. That’s not an option.

You hold up your hands before realizing how dumb that is. Why would that be a symbol of peace for arbok? They don’t even have hands. Probably thinks you’re showing off or something. “So, uh, the humans want to catch some arbok. We’d feed you as many raticate or whatever as you want. Just need you to bite some stuff and give us some venom.”

It lets out a long, low hiss.

“She says she can catch her own prey.”

“Okay, uh, have a good day.”

She lowers herself down and slithers away.

“That how it usually goes?” Golbat asks.

“I… never really asked if they were okay with it,” you admit. “My friend did. She made it work. No idea how.”

“Hmm. Maybe we just got unlucky.”

The next arbok just slithers away without rising up. One after that starts spitting venom without giving you an answer. You think about dabbing it up from the ground with your shirt or something but then it would be mixed with dirt and sweat. Probably not worth it. The next arbok hears you out but says no.

It’s the afternoon now. The sun is blazing down overhead. You take a break to find some berries to eat. Back when you were first starting your journey you read a book on it and you can remember enough that you’re pretty sure you’re not poisoning yourself. They taste okay. Not like the pechas you’re used to but good enough. Just a little small. Even after an hour you can’t find enough to fill up on.

That’s fine. There’s some more food at the base. You were just hoping you could get enough to eat here and bring them back. Sooner or later you’re going to run out of food.

“Maybe we need to toss in something to sweeten the deal,” Golbat suggests. “What do snakes like?”

“Food, basking, and sex.”

Golbat snickers.

“That’s about it.”

“Well, can’t promise sex until we have more than one. We do have asphalt. Maybe they’d like to bask on that?”

You bring it up to the next two. Neither is interested.

By 6:00 you’ve talked to just about every damn snake on the southern half of the route and got one scrawny male and a female so young you’re not entirely sure she has venom. That’s supposed to provide anesthesia for all of Hau’oli, maybe all of Alola.

“Okay, but what if we did just catch some snakes?” you ask Armoranth and Golbat. “We’d be saving lives and it’s not like they’d be treated badly.”

Armoranth glares at you. “Bargains only, as we agreed.”

“We can talk to the doctors about it if they really need more,” Golbat says. Kicking the can down the road. Maybe to someone else entirely. You want to be useful to Alola. The people, not just Acerola’s bullshit government. But you don’t think Armoranth’s going to let you right now.

“Fine. Let’s go back.”

*​

They haven’t moved the field hospital. It was too risky for some of the patients. So they just moved in some patients from the real hospitals to keep America from bombing it. It’s worked so far. You’re guessing the orange man hasn’t found out about it yet.

The girl at the counter looks up at you as you enter. She looks exhausted. Deep bags under her eyes. She’s leaning her head on a hand and you can feel her losing the battle with sleep. “Can I help you?”

“I brought some arbok. And I’m here to pick up a pokémon.” You got a call while you were in the field telling you that Anuenue was ready for release.

“Right. Snake guy. Uhhhhhhh. Yeah, I’ll get Audino.”

She calls into her radio and sets it back down. She drums her fingers on the table while she waits. It’s kind of distracting.

The admin in charge of the hospital walks up with clipped steps. Fast, but not quite running. She somehow looks even more worn out than the girl at the desk.

“How many did you get?”

Straight to business.

“One or two. I don’t know if one’s old enough.”

Her mouth forms a thin line and her eyes narrow. “That’s it?”

“Couldn’t talk any more into doing it. Might need to build a luxury snake apartment or something.”

“With what—fine. Just give them to me.” You do. Quickly. She leaves. Quickly.

“Sorry ‘bout that,” the girl says. “She’s like that to everyone right now.”

“Can’t imagine why.” You look at the hospital floor. Really look. The warehouse is crammed with even more cots than when you were last here. That’s probably the hostages. You don’t love that they’re here but after Tapu Village you get it. They’ll kill all of you the moment they think they can get away with it.

You don’t know much about medicine but it looks understaffed. An audino, a blissey, and maybe five or six nurses running around caring for people and pokémon. They all seem tired. It makes you feel guilty. You’ve been bored out of your mind for a few days while others are actually doing something.

It takes a few minutes in line but another exhausted kid at another desk gives you your pokéball with no fanfare. You’re shooed out the door.

Armoranth is waiting there. Her body and flower are both leaned back against a brick wall. “How did it go?”

“They wanted more.”

“Humans always do.”

“That’s not—” Not the point. This isn’t greed, this is necessary to save lives. You’re tired and hungry, though, and don’t really want to get into it with her. “They seem understaffed.”

Armoranth twirls her flower. It’s her usual signal to keep talking.

“I was thinking we could go out to Akala or something. Catch a comfey so I can help.”

“Perhaps eventually,” Armoranth muses. “I wouldn’t mind another companion. A real companion. Another fairy, and one with excellent taste in floral arrangements at that. But! I do not see why that is necessary for you to help.”

“I don’t know anything about medicine.”

“They’re overworked, are they not? I’m sure they can find something for you to do that requires only a body, not a brain.”

“I have a brain. I just don’t know about—”

“—about a lot of things, yes. Enough to fill the largest library your kind has ever known.” She looks up with a smirk. Teasing. Probably. You don’t think she’s being serious. “First, though, I have been allowing you to put off in-depth conversations with the pokémon you drag around with you. Tomorrow, you will have them. All of them.”

There’s a part of you that just wants to go to the clinic and start helping people. There will be time for this later. But you’ve already put it off for way too long. If you don’t do it tomorrow you’d probably just keep putting it off as long as you can.

“Fine. I’ll do it.”
 
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