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Dark Arc: Recap--Dark 5.7
All right, I'm all caught up!
Judging by past arcs, this arc is a little shy of under half-way complete. 5.7 definitely felt like a climax, though--we've been building to this for a long time.
I'm just going to jump into some overall thoughts. Maybe it's premature for these, since the arc's half done at best and the reading experience might change a lot once it's read all together. Right now, though, this arc feels like it's treading water a bit. Obviously not for Pixie--that character trajectory reaches what's been a long time coming.
But Kekoa, who already felt a little static last arc, feels even more static here. He's mostly just hanging around so far. The battle between him and Shirona felt particularly thrown in just to give him something to do. Shirona is the best (more on that later) but it's really making her the above and beyond bestest mentor if she's proactively coaching Kekoa when he's shown zero interest. It felt really weird to me that she approaches and proposes the battle to him. The only significant Kekoa moment was his visit to his old orphanage, and that felt a bit out of the blue. His conversation with Acerola felt like it retreaded ground we've already been over with him. It was cool to see him with an old friend, but while I'm sure we heard about this guy before, I'd forgotten about him, and so it didn't feel very significant. The most Kekoa development actually seemed to happen in the recap, and then almost to backslide a bit when the actual arc started. I see why Kekoa would want to stick around with his friends, but they have a fair amount of support now and he's able to see that, so I'm not sure why he doesn't go the way of Lyra and get out of there.
Lyra's stuff also felt a bit anti-climactic. Don't get me wrong--I'm glad healthy communication prevailed, and it's definitely the right choice for Lyra to get herself out of there. Sticking around and wallowing in the fact Gen doesn't remember her and glaring at Cuicatl wasn't helping anyone, and I'm glad she realized it. But it felt like a lot of the same with Lyra-Gen-Cuicatl before that. My favorite moment was when Lyra started talking about her passion for exploring--she's been so much in 'get Gen back' mode that that aspect of her personality had been pretty submerged. I'm curious what role she'll play in the story going forward. She seemed to recognize that Cuicatl isn't manipulating Gen, but she left before Cuicatl decided to date Gen.
Gen's chapters also dragged a bit for me. In a way, I think it speaks to your having done a good job changing her POV--she was my favorite character for most of BT, but I didn't find her POV chapters that interesting in Dark. She's dealing with her memory fall-out, which she seems to have kind of submerged under her crush with Cuicatl. It feels like a coping mechanism to me--clinging to the idea of that relationship as a way forward. The line about needing to place so much weight on her identity as lesbian now because she suffered so much for it makes sense, but I don't know how healthy an impulse it is. There are such looming questions before her--who she is without her family, memories, and religion, what she wants--that dating is not going to solve. It's interesting to me that she's committed to being Genesis Gage, but we don't see her really unpacking that. And she can't think of her family by name, despite keeping that name. A lot of her chapters end up devoted to the Ferny subplot. That subplot felt like a bit of a retread to me--we've had pretty much the same thing play out with Kekoa. I think it worked better in the Kekoa context because so much of Kekoa's identity was wrapped up around becoming a strong pokemon trainer--it really mattered to him that a pokemon would want to leave. But Gen's never been that interested in the battling aspect. Obviously there's the immediate betrayal of Ferny wanting to go back to the family that hurt her. But Gen's ultimate solution of 'figure out why Ferny wants to go back and see if there are ways to provide for those needs elsewhere' felt pretty intuitive, and like Cuicatl or Shirona or anyone could have proposed it almost as soon as the issue came up. The whole thing felt a bit dragged out to me to give Gen some plot other than the 'will Cuicatl date me' arc. The Gen chapter with Leo lasertag, and Leo lasertag in general, both felt longer than they needed to be. Once I got to the last Pixie chapter, I realized the Leo lasertag was meant to be a revelation for both Gen and Cuicatl, but I didn't know how to feel about it being a revelation for Cuicatl. I thought she already understood what she'd done wrong with Pixie.
Before Cuicatl and Pixie, I'm going to circle back to Shirona. She is the best and I love her. I really liked how much we got to know her team. I did find it difficult to keep track of them in the first chapter they were all introduced, but by the mid-point I was starting to get a sense of their different personalities. The spiritomb conversation hasn't happened yet, though--putting a pin in that. Shirona's exactly as cool as she should be. her internal commentary on teenagers was pretty funny, though she seems to have greater tolerance for and liking for them than I expected. It goes from 'host Cuicatl to improve her thesis' to 'bird-mom these poor messed up children' pretty quickly. Despite how much I love Shirona, I do wonder if she's the reason why it felt like there was less tension and forward-movement. The gang has actually landed somewhere safe. There are multiple competent adults running around who care about their safety more than their profits (Shirona, Liv, Lila vs Rachel). Which is awesome and I get why no one wants to leave! But it's a big change from the momentum of last arc, which built towards Gen rescue.
The one character who's really not safe in these chapters is Pixie, or excuse me, the Firstborn of Kalani. When the second vulpix showed up I know the honeymoon was over. It totally checked out. Currently stolen vulpix giving you problems? Steal a better one. I talked a lot about parallels last review but the big screaming parallel in the Pixie chapters this time was between Pixie now and Gen last arc. Pixie agreed to this, she tries to do what her mom says will make her better even if it hurts her, she tries not to think the wrong thoughts, about Skysong and whether her mom really loves her for her, but like Gen, she can't stop picking at them, and so before she knows it she's crossed into a space where she's in danger. The escalation into the escape came quickly but once it started, felt inevitable. Pixie knows that Kalani won't hesitate to kill unworthy vulpix pups. And she's just become one. The revelation that Kalani killed her birth mom caught me off-guard, but felt right the moment I heard it. Of course she would and of course it would solve nothing. It just made everything worse. I think that was so important for Pixie to hear, since her big plan was get Strong --> Confront Mom --> ??? --> Emotional Closure. Turns out, no. I'll repeat what I said last time: Kalani is terrible, but my heart does go out to her. She's grown in every way except the way that matters. She's more scared than even Pixie is, because Pixie knows now that not everyone who cared about her abandoned her. I understand why Pixie thought death was mercy here.
Things seem to be looking up for Cuicatl in a lot of ways: she's got Shirona on her side, she'd got Pixie back, she's able to say that she didn't kill her brother, and . . . she has a girlfriend. But there's a lot that makes this seem precarious. We've got the revelation from the Shirona chapter that her hydreigon trainer mom didn't exist. But the hydreigon was real at least, and the other pokemon that appear in her memories seem pretty real. Then again, we've seen how false memories can be created. A lot of psychic pokemon have been deeply interested in Cuicatl, from the metagross to Tapu Lele, both of whom probably have the power to do something on that scale and seem to be following her progress. What happened with Earthshaker being sold really underscores the problems with Cuicatl's approach--she's never going to get enough money in the world to do everything she wants. The idea that she can solve these problems with money is what ultimately makes her compliant. Even after her big fight with Rachel, she's prepared to take a Vstar mission. You've done a nice job of showing how humble Cuical's aspirations and worldview are despite how it looks from the outside. Kekoa and Lyra see power as something to be used--Cuicatl just wants to gather her family, and chill with them. I don't think she's going to get that option. Too many people are interested in her right now.
On the dating thing. I think it's a bad idea. I can see why it's happening anyway. Cuicatl is finally accepting that she could be worth loving and here's someone begging for the chance. Gen feels like her whole identity revolves around what her family tried to take from her, and Cuicatl's her anchor. But Gen's just felt so empty in these chapters. She has no idea who or what she is right now. Cuicatl's not trying to take advantage, but the imbalance is inherent in the situation. Gen's dependent on Cuicatl right now. If the relationship doesn't work out, what then?
I'd definitely like to reread these when the whole arc is finished. It may be that the flow would work better for me then.
I am forced to point out the irony in your Dark arc not taking place while it is dark out.
Love that Gen tact.
All right, I'm all caught up!
Judging by past arcs, this arc is a little shy of under half-way complete. 5.7 definitely felt like a climax, though--we've been building to this for a long time.
I'm just going to jump into some overall thoughts. Maybe it's premature for these, since the arc's half done at best and the reading experience might change a lot once it's read all together. Right now, though, this arc feels like it's treading water a bit. Obviously not for Pixie--that character trajectory reaches what's been a long time coming.
But Kekoa, who already felt a little static last arc, feels even more static here. He's mostly just hanging around so far. The battle between him and Shirona felt particularly thrown in just to give him something to do. Shirona is the best (more on that later) but it's really making her the above and beyond bestest mentor if she's proactively coaching Kekoa when he's shown zero interest. It felt really weird to me that she approaches and proposes the battle to him. The only significant Kekoa moment was his visit to his old orphanage, and that felt a bit out of the blue. His conversation with Acerola felt like it retreaded ground we've already been over with him. It was cool to see him with an old friend, but while I'm sure we heard about this guy before, I'd forgotten about him, and so it didn't feel very significant. The most Kekoa development actually seemed to happen in the recap, and then almost to backslide a bit when the actual arc started. I see why Kekoa would want to stick around with his friends, but they have a fair amount of support now and he's able to see that, so I'm not sure why he doesn't go the way of Lyra and get out of there.
Lyra's stuff also felt a bit anti-climactic. Don't get me wrong--I'm glad healthy communication prevailed, and it's definitely the right choice for Lyra to get herself out of there. Sticking around and wallowing in the fact Gen doesn't remember her and glaring at Cuicatl wasn't helping anyone, and I'm glad she realized it. But it felt like a lot of the same with Lyra-Gen-Cuicatl before that. My favorite moment was when Lyra started talking about her passion for exploring--she's been so much in 'get Gen back' mode that that aspect of her personality had been pretty submerged. I'm curious what role she'll play in the story going forward. She seemed to recognize that Cuicatl isn't manipulating Gen, but she left before Cuicatl decided to date Gen.
Gen's chapters also dragged a bit for me. In a way, I think it speaks to your having done a good job changing her POV--she was my favorite character for most of BT, but I didn't find her POV chapters that interesting in Dark. She's dealing with her memory fall-out, which she seems to have kind of submerged under her crush with Cuicatl. It feels like a coping mechanism to me--clinging to the idea of that relationship as a way forward. The line about needing to place so much weight on her identity as lesbian now because she suffered so much for it makes sense, but I don't know how healthy an impulse it is. There are such looming questions before her--who she is without her family, memories, and religion, what she wants--that dating is not going to solve. It's interesting to me that she's committed to being Genesis Gage, but we don't see her really unpacking that. And she can't think of her family by name, despite keeping that name. A lot of her chapters end up devoted to the Ferny subplot. That subplot felt like a bit of a retread to me--we've had pretty much the same thing play out with Kekoa. I think it worked better in the Kekoa context because so much of Kekoa's identity was wrapped up around becoming a strong pokemon trainer--it really mattered to him that a pokemon would want to leave. But Gen's never been that interested in the battling aspect. Obviously there's the immediate betrayal of Ferny wanting to go back to the family that hurt her. But Gen's ultimate solution of 'figure out why Ferny wants to go back and see if there are ways to provide for those needs elsewhere' felt pretty intuitive, and like Cuicatl or Shirona or anyone could have proposed it almost as soon as the issue came up. The whole thing felt a bit dragged out to me to give Gen some plot other than the 'will Cuicatl date me' arc. The Gen chapter with Leo lasertag, and Leo lasertag in general, both felt longer than they needed to be. Once I got to the last Pixie chapter, I realized the Leo lasertag was meant to be a revelation for both Gen and Cuicatl, but I didn't know how to feel about it being a revelation for Cuicatl. I thought she already understood what she'd done wrong with Pixie.
Before Cuicatl and Pixie, I'm going to circle back to Shirona. She is the best and I love her. I really liked how much we got to know her team. I did find it difficult to keep track of them in the first chapter they were all introduced, but by the mid-point I was starting to get a sense of their different personalities. The spiritomb conversation hasn't happened yet, though--putting a pin in that. Shirona's exactly as cool as she should be. her internal commentary on teenagers was pretty funny, though she seems to have greater tolerance for and liking for them than I expected. It goes from 'host Cuicatl to improve her thesis' to 'bird-mom these poor messed up children' pretty quickly. Despite how much I love Shirona, I do wonder if she's the reason why it felt like there was less tension and forward-movement. The gang has actually landed somewhere safe. There are multiple competent adults running around who care about their safety more than their profits (Shirona, Liv, Lila vs Rachel). Which is awesome and I get why no one wants to leave! But it's a big change from the momentum of last arc, which built towards Gen rescue.
The one character who's really not safe in these chapters is Pixie, or excuse me, the Firstborn of Kalani. When the second vulpix showed up I know the honeymoon was over. It totally checked out. Currently stolen vulpix giving you problems? Steal a better one. I talked a lot about parallels last review but the big screaming parallel in the Pixie chapters this time was between Pixie now and Gen last arc. Pixie agreed to this, she tries to do what her mom says will make her better even if it hurts her, she tries not to think the wrong thoughts, about Skysong and whether her mom really loves her for her, but like Gen, she can't stop picking at them, and so before she knows it she's crossed into a space where she's in danger. The escalation into the escape came quickly but once it started, felt inevitable. Pixie knows that Kalani won't hesitate to kill unworthy vulpix pups. And she's just become one. The revelation that Kalani killed her birth mom caught me off-guard, but felt right the moment I heard it. Of course she would and of course it would solve nothing. It just made everything worse. I think that was so important for Pixie to hear, since her big plan was get Strong --> Confront Mom --> ??? --> Emotional Closure. Turns out, no. I'll repeat what I said last time: Kalani is terrible, but my heart does go out to her. She's grown in every way except the way that matters. She's more scared than even Pixie is, because Pixie knows now that not everyone who cared about her abandoned her. I understand why Pixie thought death was mercy here.
Things seem to be looking up for Cuicatl in a lot of ways: she's got Shirona on her side, she'd got Pixie back, she's able to say that she didn't kill her brother, and . . . she has a girlfriend. But there's a lot that makes this seem precarious. We've got the revelation from the Shirona chapter that her hydreigon trainer mom didn't exist. But the hydreigon was real at least, and the other pokemon that appear in her memories seem pretty real. Then again, we've seen how false memories can be created. A lot of psychic pokemon have been deeply interested in Cuicatl, from the metagross to Tapu Lele, both of whom probably have the power to do something on that scale and seem to be following her progress. What happened with Earthshaker being sold really underscores the problems with Cuicatl's approach--she's never going to get enough money in the world to do everything she wants. The idea that she can solve these problems with money is what ultimately makes her compliant. Even after her big fight with Rachel, she's prepared to take a Vstar mission. You've done a nice job of showing how humble Cuical's aspirations and worldview are despite how it looks from the outside. Kekoa and Lyra see power as something to be used--Cuicatl just wants to gather her family, and chill with them. I don't think she's going to get that option. Too many people are interested in her right now.
On the dating thing. I think it's a bad idea. I can see why it's happening anyway. Cuicatl is finally accepting that she could be worth loving and here's someone begging for the chance. Gen feels like her whole identity revolves around what her family tried to take from her, and Cuicatl's her anchor. But Gen's just felt so empty in these chapters. She has no idea who or what she is right now. Cuicatl's not trying to take advantage, but the imbalance is inherent in the situation. Gen's dependent on Cuicatl right now. If the relationship doesn't work out, what then?
I'd definitely like to reread these when the whole arc is finished. It may be that the flow would work better for me then.
Such a minor nitpick, but for parallelism I really wanted "the cooking."Mother agreed about the books but not cooking.
Oof, that feels real.I just lost so much for this, I feel like I kind of have to embrace it. Even if this maybe isn’t a good idea.
*to be dealt withI just hope Cuicatl stops before someone decides she needs dealt with. She doesn’t need dealt with.
BT in a nut-shell.I still kind of want to hate her, but she’s been shit on by her family almost as hard as Alola was.
Really interesting Kekoa stuff in this recap.He should have chosen Poni. Chosen justice. Even if he lost. Even if it cost him his family and friends. He would’ve been right at the end.
Oh wow, he's echoing the Plumeria speech. So Kekoa is full join Team Skull for real.Maybe the path I’m going down gets me arrested or killed. Maybe the others won’t talk to me again. Maybe we won’t even win. I don’t care. No more half measures. No more playing the champion’s own game.
I’ll stay with them for a little bit. Help Cuicatl out, at least, because she’s been looking rough. Swear she almost got herself killed. But once they’re better, I’m out.
There’s only one choice. If society lets people like the Gages get away with that, there’s no reforming it. No conquering it. No taming it. The only thing to do is burn it down to the roots and hope something better grows in the ashes.
Am I hallucinating? I thought we found out that the metagross is owned by Lila and she wanted to keep an eye on Cuicatl. Or is the mystery why the spying was happening pre-Lila capture?Nocitlālin, the metang, is spying on me for a metagross. I don’t know why and I kind of don’t care anymore.
* win withIf I could somehow win win only three pokémon I would really like that.
Important development.I could have died and I was scared. I thought I was at peace with death. Maybe even wanted it. But I kept wondering what would happen to your pokémon and Coco and I didn’t want to go.
I'll return to this one at the conclusion of the arc, I suppose.(In my sleep I dreamed this poem)
Someone I loved once gave me
a box full of darkness.
It took me years to understand
that this, too, was a gift.”
-Mary Oliver, Thirst
I am forced to point out the irony in your Dark arc not taking place while it is dark out.
HYPE HYPE HYPE.Dark 5.1: Lorekeeper
Shirona
Check.It reads like it was written by a semi-literate secondary school dropout. Which, in fairness, it was.
Ooh, very interesting. A level up from Cuicatl's problems of procuring enough food for her dragons; dragon ethics debates.It's still a bit of a pain that your biggest eaters are so opposed. Kagetora won’t eat anything fake; it’s an insult to her pride as a dragon. Wakumi takes a different view as a peacekeeper of the seas. Every week you have to get separate meals for both of them. It would be fine if the milotic wasn’t so picky: artificial alomomola steaks are expensive and hard to source while you’re traveling.
Of course she has that sign.You step past the ‘Warning: Dangerous Pokémon. Do Not Enter.’ sign and enter the garage.
So creepy. I love every one of your ghost portrayals.Solomon won’t talk about the child beyond acknowledging she exists. He almost sounded afraid of her when you asked.
Ooh, earth-bender Shirona. Your universe definitely gives humans more power than is typical in canon.You wish you were one of the elementals who can talk to pokémon. Instead, you can just sense the earth around you. Really useful for archaeology and bonding with ground-types. Only okay for everything else.
What a Shirona line.There’s very little on the island she couldn’t kill if it came down to it.
As one does.She smirks and for a moment you’re both twenty-two and high off of oddish weeds in her attic while you talk about rocks.
Shirona here with the DEADLY WIT.It all looks a bit unfortunate on him.
In other words, he’s a teenage boy.
Lmao.“Hey.” And then he walks past you into the house.
A linguist for the ages.
We stan.It takes you a solid five minutes of meditation with Genkei to accept that you shouldn’t kill a billionaire American national on his own soil while acting as an official of Japan.
It takes another twenty to decide that you won’t actually do it.
You fantasize about how you would do it for another fifteen.
???Lfie9
I really like this. Pokemon don't tell trainers everything, even when that trainer is Shirona.“I see. Any reason you didn’t tell me during the Hoenn crisis, Kagetora.”
She looks away. It’s what she does when she’s embarrassed or ashamed. She answers in a series of slow, rumbling sounds.
{I did not want to take sides between the three lords,} Genkei translates.
Woah. This is so metal. I want this oneshot so much.What happened at the Celestica Temple isn’t classified. That would require the government to know about it. It’s something even higher. On the mountain she tried to fight off Dialga. She managed to draw blood before things went wrong. ‘Atoms scattered across a thousand years’ wrong. That was when you called on the dark god of the Celestica, just as your distant ancestors had when invaders arrived from across the sea.
Dialga was kind enough to undo the kill when he wiped all memory of the Celestica gods from the timeline. Kagetora remembers what happened. She has never wished to speak of it.
But Shirona said no one has successfully partnered with a hydreigon --Had a hydreigon.”
You were just starting to climb the ranks then. It would have been easy to miss her. Still, hyreigon are rare enough that you might have heard her discussed in passing. You’ll have to jog your memory.
“I take it she owned the hydreigon in your thesis?”
There we go. Hm. The plot seriously thickens. We've seen her Mom's journey memories before, so what exactly is going on? False memories? Planted by whom?“Or she never existed.”
“Or that.” She pauses. “Probably that.”
extremely.No. They’re probably just there to stop her prey from escaping. Very considerate.
*it'sAt least its weak.
😂Kalani eyes the bird quizzically, probably also realizing the need to murder it.
Counterpoint: Avanlanche abandoned you somewhere you'd be cared for, as opposed to outright murder. It's a low bar, but. Kalani went under it.You have a better mother than Avalanche now.
WELL this line sure hits different after 5.7.Talking to each other, pointing at the field, finally saying in a big voice something about excessive force. Which it wasn’t. It’s good to be sure something is dead when you’re putting it out of its misery.
Oof. Listen harder, baby.“I will have to punish him. He does not interfere with my child.”
Your heart swells. She does love you!
*here“I am the one who knows how to fight. You are hear to listen.”
Shirona Rocks part 90989853 . . .“Oh. I will use that in the future, then.”
Very respectful. If only all humans were like that.
Oh shit. Here we go.“Firstborn, meet Secondborn. She isn’t going to see humans while I’m not looking.”
She's pretty besotted, huh. But it's also kind of a way to anchor herself.You’ve been trying to think about how Cuicatl must see the world.
* room'sYou still blurt out, “Your rooms cleaner than I was expecting.”
Love that Gen tact.
This gag continues to be fun. Noci is 100% messing with him.Kekoa makes a weird face. A grimace? Disgust? “They’re way too into watching people pee.”
[Unit010_10000111 Has Obtained Sufficient Data On Fluid Release;
No Further Observations Required]
Random capital?She mentioned a few people she doesn’t talk about much If ever.
* jog“Did that job your memory?” There’s so much hope in her expression.
Missing end quote.“And are you wearing sunscreen? Your skin tone won’t protect you from melanoma.
* to be disciplinedIf you got hurt by your own actions you wouldn’t need disciplined further for it.
* comes overSometimes you keep talking to no one until someone covers over and asks what you’re doing.
*it'sIts hard to say that about hydreigon.
This was such a parent moment.“Are either of you mad at me?” You’ve played your share of social games but now you just really want to know.
“No,” they both say in unison. Neither provides any more information.
This routine never gets old.“Hi! I disembowel things. You’re my second father?”
“Second—”
“Can I show you how sharp my teeth are?”
Lmao.Murdering him in his sleep is both ‘an idea’ and very likely from an embarrassed hydreigon. The dead can’t mock you.
Welp. Fall-out from this should be interesting.“Do you care about anyone but yourself?” you hiss.
“Only after I’ve taken care of my needs.”
You reach for your belt. If she’s putting you in this position, then—
—the world falls away into endless crushing spins. When it stops you feel Miss Bell’s alakazam’s crushing presence against your mind.
{Do not attempt to harm my trainer.}
Then he’s gone and you’re completely alone.
*it'sIts more than you were expecting from her given everything.
This confused me, because Lyra isn't mentioned before this sentence.“I know the rules,” you tell Lyra.
Tilt?“I wasn’t even trying to tilt you,” Shirona finally says. “You just make it very easy.”
Glad Kekoa's getting a talking to about this. Because yeah, come on.“Did you see how strong that barrier was? You can fight that roserade yourself, but she won’t.”
Really liked this touch.You lock up your bike because you know the kind of people who live here and don’t want to know what Shirona would do to thieves.
Ding, ding, ding!Even the champion doesn’t have power? You remember Kanoa laughing at you when you accused Selene of not doing more. Is that why?
100%.“I don’t think she’d play their games.” You reflexively defend her before realizing that, no, she absolutely would. As long as someone gave her enough money she would probably do anything for them. She can go on about hating merchants and the States and whatever, but when push comes to shove she’d let herself be shoved.
Yeah, that's really the core of it. I think the Liv vs Hala chapters explored that nicely.We have layers of duties, Kekoa.
Ooh, what an excellent hypothetical. Proud of Kekoa for facing it.If Jabari had joined Team Skull instead of the military… you don’t know if you would still hate him or not. If that would justify things. You like to think it would, but. It’s easy to say that now when that isn’t what happened.
Cute to see Kekoa just vibing.“Because I met Plumeria a few times on the trail. She invited me to join Skull for real. Now that they’re burning hotels and fucking with the colonizers, I dunno, feels like a better use of my time.”
He smiles. Genuinely. It’s always so rare. “Fuck yeah. You mind if I join you? I’ve been thinking about fighting the good fight, too.”
“I’ll ask the boss lady. We still friends, then?”
I didn't follow the connection between these sentences. Why does there only being one trial mean she needs an eye kept on her?“Mount Hokulani. With Acerola retiring it’ll be the only trial for the island.” She must see your concern. “Shirona said she’d have one of her pokémon keep an eye on me to make sure nothing happens.”
Aww, Lyra. Such a hard situation to be in, though.She’s smiling. You haven’t seen her smile much, smile genuinely, anyway, in the weeks that you’ve known her. She’s also more relaxed and speaking with less caution than usual. It often sounds like she has to carefully weigh every syllable before she speaks. You like this. If she was always like this before you can understand why you were friends.
*it's“No. Its hers.” She gestures towards Cuicatl’s.
This felt like a retread.Is this going to be a hobby of his? Can pokémon have those? Do your pokémon want them? Oliver likes his stuffed animals. Sir Bubbles seems to like screaming after his evolution. Those are just likes. Little treats or quirks. Do they want things? Have life goals? Is that why Ferny wants to leave? If they’re your friends with your pokémon you should ask and try to help them out. It only makes sense.
Shirona's a pretty concrete way to hammer that in.“Cuicatl. You know that you left your country, got on tv, earned a shit ton of money, and are being personally mentored by the second-best trainer in the world within a year, right? Do I have to explain that to you?”
Oh. Huh. You… hadn’t put that together. From the look of shock on Cuicatl’s face, neither had she.
hmm, I don't know about that Cuicatl.In the morning, she says yes.
Love how the title hits different after Kalani's explanation of what the ninetale's curse really is.Dark 5.7: The Ninetales’ Curse
Pixie
Excuse me, I thought this was the fic where ice-foxes aren't allowed to have depression.Your hunt ends when a feeling of tiredness creeps through you from muzzle to tails. Not like Mother’s attack. More like the all-consuming tiredness you felt in the white room where the humans took you after you left the mountain. After the smiling humans in black hurt you. Because they could. Because you didn’t stop them. Because nothing mattered anymore.
Yuup.How do you punish someone without punishing them? You can’t. There’s no way to do what Mother wants while also doing what you want.
She's starting to realize her mountain wasn't everything she thought it was, though!Skysong will understand. She wants to go back to her own mountain.
Checkmate, ice-foxes!“Then why doesn’t your new Mother go back?”
Oh hi Lance, didn't expect to see you here.Is it… is there no going back? No matter how strong you are?
And a nice illustration of Cuicatl and Pixie's parallels.“She wants to go home and see her family again.”
Mother stops moving and locks in place. Then she slowly moves, lowering one tail after another before she finally sits down. “The nine-tails’ curse,” she finally whispers. “Knowing home and losing it forever.”
Not when you've cursed yourself.“Who cursed us?” you ask. “Can’t we fight them?”
Oh no. Kalani. Baby.{I killed my own mother when I returned to The Mountain. Made her pay for taking the world away from me. Imagine what I will do to you, thief.}
!! Big admission there for Cuicatl.I’ve done bad things. I’ve never killed someone I loved over it.
And there it is.You don’t like thinking that an eevee is right. But maybe the vulpix never leave the base of the mountain, begging to go back. Begging not to be left. Kalani… Kalani never moved on.
She still sounds like a three-tails.
Is that what you sound like?
Will anyone ever answer when you beg?
Should you turn around and… walk away? Find out what is off the mountain?
I probably shouldn't have gotten heart-eyes over Shirona here. Just, you so nicely capture how hard-core she is without even trying. Zero posing, just the willingness to say things like this.“Medics will be here in five. Now, we have one final decision to make.” She kneels down and looks directly at you. “Will they heal Kalani back up or will she be dead when they arrive?”