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EDIT: so since i posted this i have done more research on how the police and the justice system works, and i am aware that there are weird things here. however, i am quite tired of editing this story (the fanfic version specifically) by now, so i'm gonna let it be like it is. you are allowed to...

Red humphed. "Well, I'll be. A universe not tainted by the existence of Arceus. I guess you must have some other creator god. Or phony creator, but all the same." He sat down. "Arceus is the apprentice and lapmon of the Third Being, the creator of reality. He was a diligent student and thus...

Red turned to the new... Giratina. Hm. "Hello, Violent One," Red greeted. "Heard about you and Arceus. Respect. Us psychos gotta stick together."

Back for an exchange! Here are my thoughts on chapter 2. Ooh, a teleport service. It makes sense to be scared of fearow. A bird of that size wouldn't be a threat to a human in real life, but Pokemon are superpowered. Sentence ends abruptly. Graveler, with one L. This spelling kept consistent...

Red's eyes widened, then narrowed. "Oh, you would go there, wouldn't you."

Red grit his teeth. "Don't you talk about my god. Mareep like you have no right."

"Damn," Red said, smiling. "There go my plans for tonight."

Hi! Here to review this, as per our review exchange. It took me a bit to figure out who Leviene was since they were the only one not introduced with their species Missing period at the end. Wrong fi- aw, Ambyssin already made this joke. Missing periods at the end. You want "she" in...

Thanks for the review exchange! Yep, you're correct. Red has trauma in regards to PCs since those were the site of many deaths and stressful situations. Real! This is actually based on a real building I visited at the start of my mental health journey. Correct! Joe's a character from the...

Hi! Here to review two chapters as per our exchange. Looks like I've already reviewed chapters 1-2 ages ago, so I'll read and review 3 and 4. Missing closing quote. Comma instead of period. It's odd that the berry is described like something Gen has never seen before (to the point where he...

"Come on, I was just trying to eat you a little. You're overreacting."

Red turned to the electabuzz, slowly. "You must be new here," he said condescendingly. "The way this works is that we mingle here and then, after some time, we leave. So you can be the one that 'chills'." Red quieted. It was actually true that this might be different - none of the other places...

"You're one to talk about being small," Red grumbled.

"My, we're starting off vulgar," Red said. "But no, I haven't had the pleasure of finding a corpse yet. But if you keep up that attitude, I'm sure we can find one in our presence soon enough." "What brings me here is the good word of HELIX and my mission to spread it," Red said. "Everyone has...

A harsh, grating voice made Red's ears perk. He turned his head to see a mawile that resembled someone he knew. His smirk widened, and he walked up to the girl. "Well, well, well," he said, "if it isn't Shorty and the Matchstick Dragon. What brings you here?"

The first thing Red noticed was that he was a quadruped. Oh, please not a mareep again, he hoped. He sighed in relief as he looked down to see the paws of a houndour. A houndoom would have been better, but good enough, he thought. He looked around at his whirring and wheezing surroundings. On...

hello everybody! it's been a while, almost a year. but this time the wait was at least partially intentional so it doesn't count. i've been recovering from my terrible mental health episode and a few days ago i finally found myself ready to pick this story up again - yep, a few days! it's record...

Name: Red Akai Age: 18 Gender: Male Species: Houndour Misc: Narcissistic psychopath and devout Helixian. Looks like this:

just recently i rolled maractus in a random pokemon generator i use as a drawing prompt and i realized how good the design is

Andre turned to the typhlosion. "Ah, I see. Thank you for hosting us, Mr. Typhlosion. It has been a pleasure."