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August 1st Game Sign-ups open until Friday, August 4th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once your assignment is...

Hey all! This is that mystery dungeon -centric PMD oneshot I've been talking about. It's my first time writing an actual mystery dungeon, and I hope I did the concept justice. Special thanks to @GumPlum for betareading this! His insights were really valuable. A note on content - this story...

hi there! here we are with chapter two. it should be noted that the next one may take longer than a week to upload as i have not yet finished it. here's to hoping it isn't months. as a shock to everyone, this chapter has no specific content warnings. still going to rate it as teen, though, due...

hey everyone! just popping in to say the first chapter of the sequel story has been posted. have a good day!

EDIT (22 May 2025): This thread has been retired. Find the newer version of this story in this thread. Thanks! --- Hey everyone! Here we finally are. This story's been in the works for a good five years, but I just haven't been able to plan it out... until now. For those unaware, this is the...

Here for chapter 5! Since it's past of the past, you'd want "hadn't been a dream, none of that had been". Introducing him as hyperactive is kind of telling rather than showing, and since you do show it well later that he is hyperactive, this addendum could be omitted. I think it's unnecessary...

hi all! here i am with the extra i promised. this is the first thing i wrote from samson's perspective, so i had to go back and tweak it a little according to how i wrote samson in judgment. anyway, rated teen for some violent imagery. see you next week for the upload of the first chapter of...

Hey there! I've been reading more of this fic at work when it's slow. Here are my thoughts on chapters 3 and 4 for our exchange. This "it" is pretty far from the word it's referring to ("door"). It could be replaced with "the door" to read better. As a demonym, Unovan ought to be capitalized...

Hey! I read everything that's up so far for our exchange. Here are my thoughts. Shiny! Cool. I like this line. The "and yet" makes it seem like the thought that's to come is something motivating Chappie to go instead of stay, but then it's said that the thought terrified her. I was expecting...

ladies, gents, enbies, here we are. after two years, we have reached the end of the story. this is the final chapter of hunter, haunted. i will still be back next week to upload the extra chapter that's from samson's POV, but the main story ends here. though red's story will continue in the...

Red recoiled at the giant black sky-serpent arriving. "Fuck," left his mouth. He wondered why Rayquaza was black instead of green, but the human boy beat him to asking about it. The serpent didn't seem to pick up on the question being about color, so it must have been ordinary for her. Then...

"Boy, you're slow. Yes, you're not home anymore. If you're wondering how to get back, we're in the middle of figuring that out. Word is that the trick is somewhere in a storehouse, and we're on our way there."

Red rolled his eyes. "You're in a place called Obleta. We're all visitors from different universes. Is that clear enough for you?"

Red turned to the lucario. "You're a long way from home, bluepaw."

Hello everybody! It sure has been a while. July 4th Game Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Friday, July 7th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or...

Hey there! I'm back for more for our exchange. I've read chapters 5-10. Here we go. You'll want "if I was" instead of "if I'm" due to the tenses. I don't think either of these commas should be there according to grammar rules. Ooh, a radio. I wonder if it works through some kind of magic or...

NOTE: this post is in the wrong spot. this post should be after chapter 14, but i misremembered that it should be between 13 and 14 and posted it here. come back to this post once you're done with chapter 14. posting here to say that the midquel oneshot vivarium has been uploaded in another...

hello everyone! this is vivarium, a oneshot midquel of hunter, haunted that takes place in the middle of chapter 14. i'm putting it in its own thread to keep things more organized. if you're wondering whether you can read this if you haven't read hh, the answer is "sure, but don't expect...

"What can I say," Red said. "Word gets around."

Red held a stare. "Everyone's a critic," he muttered.