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Oh, good point - truth be told, I kind of forgot about moves as a non-lethal takedown method for the beginning of the story. I think I could edit it so that they don't pull out their guns and Florence just manages to nab it from Luna's holster and Colter... somehow... is faster. But they are...

hello! it's wednesday again and you know what that means - new bringer chapter! and this time red meets andre! hooray! however, this time we also have a special warning for transphobia, homophobia (including a slur) and misogyny. we regret to inform you that the cultist serial killer has bad...

Hey there! I'm here to look at Chapter 1 after your recommendation I check this out. Here are my thoughts. sorry, your repressed queer feelings broke the soul machine Mmmmm, this is a pet peeve of mine, characters speaking aloud things people really wouldn't in real life. Especially here it...

hello everyone! we're finally here, at the last part! thanks to everyone who's read any part of this story during these little-less-than-two years or given me feedback. my motivation wavered a bit in the middle, but i managed to take this story to the end and finish it, making it my third...

Hey there! I'm here to review Chapters 1-4 for a Heartache challenge and get to know Koa a little better while I'm at it. Why Chapter One again? Well, it's been two and a half years since I reviewed Chapter One, and I feel like I did a terrible job at it and wrote an unnecessarily mean review...

hello! this is that "pmd cop fic" i have been talking about on the discord. i'd been thinking about zoroark and watching a lot of rookie and this was kind of born from those. big thanks to @Ambyssin for betareading this one! your input was very valuable. this story is kind of teetering on the...

Heya! Here for Catnip, unloading some more of my reading notes. Here's my thoughts on chapters 5 and 6. Chapter 5 Missing capital. *pulls on collar comically* Missing capital. Period to comma. Remove capitals. Huh, didn't expect an Alolan mon. Also, Alolan should be capitalized, right...

hello! i'm back again with another chapter. i'm actually getting pretty good at having a backlog - i'm in the middle of writing chapter 8 right now. i could say that i'm not sure if i'll be able to keep up the weekly schedule once i get to posting that since the outline becomes less fleshed out...

August 28th Game Sign-ups open until Thursday, August 31st 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once your...

hey again! it's kind of a spur-of-the-moment decision to post this now, but here is the interlude between act 1 and act 2. it's the first mainline hhverse story appearance of andre! hooray for the murdertwink. rated teen for sexually suggestive dialogue. enjoy. --- INTERLUDE Andre --- “And...

hey all! canis here with chapter five, the last chapter of act 1. i wouldn't go assuming anything about the length of the story yet, though, since i have a lot of stuff planned for act 2. i might even split it in two and have 4 acts in total in the end. anyway, this chapter is rated mature for...

Thank you for the kind words! So initially I was all "...FUCK" here, but thinking about it more, it actually makes sense in this universe that he didn't try anything with pokéballs because in HHverse pokémon can self-release depending on the ball and their sapience level. Since Joanna is...

Hey there! Here for Catnip. I read chapters 1-5 and here are my reactions. Advanced? Wait, so items canonically glow in this world? Seems kinda game-y. Italics missing on "human". Markdown doesn't work on the forums. This initially confused me a bit because I thought there was still...

Hey there! Here's the review for chapters 3 and 4, bringing the exchange to a close. Quote Comments oh no is he a yakuza this grovyle is so smooth i can hear his background music one more alliteration and you're grounded Speakers? Huh. It's curious how the kingdom called Radiance is...

so i went ahead and finished chapter four and five well ahead of schedule, lol. i wrote like 1-2k per day, and the other day i wrote 4k. after chapter five i am writing an interlude, but i haven't decided if i'll use up a weekly update on that entirely. i guess we'll see how writing chapter six...

Hey there! I read chapters 1 and 2 for our exchange. I'll return a bit later for 3 and 4. And apologies again for the cold review on the prologue. I reread it to recap and I would have given it a much warmer review now. Quote Comments Fantastic line! Love it. oi oi oi wots all dis den oh my...

August 16th Game Sign-ups open until Saturday, August 19th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review window opens: once your...

Kohath scratched his beard. Removing a god from their world? Could that be done to HELIX? No, HELIX was bound to HIS world on a fundamental level, wasn't HE? He should ask HIM when he returned to the palace. That is, if he would remember any of this - he had a faint feeling he wouldn't. At least...

Kohath huffed. "Don't be surprised to find my world hard to conquer. You'll know the power of a true god, then."

Kohath shrugged. "It is true. We are machines made of lifelets. Anyone with enough knowledge could predict exactly what we are about to say and do." He took a sip of his drink. "But we do not have that knowledge, and we may never have that knowledge unless we become gods. Thus, the illusion of...