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Chapter 5 Blitz review Honestly, considering how many adverse side effects and fussy fenanglings i would like to add that the chefs in this verse probably have it as tough as the medics, farmers, and hortologists in this world. Thank goodness there isnt a mushroom subcatagory. Laughs at the...

Chapter 4 Blitz review Love how the odd berries, the more malicious ones are round about blamed on humans. Because of data lost in human times and all that. Were humans evil agricultural gians back in the day? The multifaceted nature of the "legendary humans" must of been mind numbing. I...

Chapter 3 Blitz review Persim... The other less contraversy anti nausia berry... Wonder if it works on non confusion nearsightedness and bluriness. Like could a mon that needs glasses get around it with daily persim consumption? So are persims consumed before or after getting confused...

Review blitz Chapter 2 Back for more berries it seems. And it looks like were starting with the monster endorced, sleep killer, student aide, chesto berry. Seriously if there was a mon university thered be a shortage of the things. The growth cycles look like theyre a pain to manage. For...

Ah so things are for them going to go from the fire into the lava pit... I mean canon strongly hints very few of these people are going to make it out of this ok so its not too much a shocker... Still its interesting to see where the blade comes down and how.

Chapter 34 Review I can't believe i missed this one. Lets fix that. You kmow its a shame jir' finds his fathers work boring because honestly i find it pretty interesting but then regularly wikiwalk stuff from basic utilities to airplanes to bridges. On the other hand i wonder what kind of...

Blitz review Chapter 18 Very spiderverse tribite opening. It fits Shanks humor and ego very well. So they're a plumber... I suspect theres a story here and am feeling cheated for not getting it in full. Calm? You were screaming like loons i expect. And i called it, well shanks screaming...

Chapter 17 Blitz review Yeah because "noping" always works. Winning stratagy erik. Also didnt he see the dumb dumber and dumbest trio's talking meowth back at Base? You'd think he'd realize... Ah well. At least the blue screen is mutual. I'm surprised no one investigated the sound of two...

You have a perfect day. Being nice i'll give you a perfect week. Come day eight though everyone around you starts having scalds of bad luck and somehow know you are responsible. I wish for the ability to be organized.

Chapter 16 Blitz review Yeah one nap closer to dying. Lets be blase about the tramsition. I vote Dark has changed the colors to red and black to comemorate eriks capture amd is prepped to troll. Dark: and why do i have a dustbumny stowaway? EveeRocket: we're mim maxing the friendship stat...

Chapter 15 Blitz review I imagine after a bat to the head any ligjt is going to be too much light. Eriks profamity is food ingrediants... Why am i not surprised? Wait so by aquiring a food named mon does he lose swears? Like mild ones, like if he used to swear on salt he cant necause he owns...

Chapter 3 blitz review We got a scyther verses a zapchu. I suspect this is going to go bad. For tje scyther. And i hope one of these rescues is is going to be a parachute type that knows protect. If the mon had gone after the kids this would have gone so different. As it is i suspect were...

And done, reviewed chapter three to unglue the tag. Your review spiteful! I'm greedy and want attenion. I've got two options Transversal headcanons Or Couch's gift fic, a new path drabble

Chapter three Review tag and blitz. (Why not multitask) Thats one doozy of a fall i suspect one of the trio are going to be inventing a parachute pack at the end of this. Tail over nose tumbling ball of agony, thats nidas world right now. That and the scattered dungeon equipment all around...

Blitz review Chapter 3 And in which kanon throws in the towel. On one hand shes making so many bad choices in her pain on the other the hand her encounter with the poor kid feels a bit like a wake uo call. A sign pointing at her fixating on shoveling her world into how it was wasn't going to...

Blitz review Chapter 2 Lovely how some fics are like "thought i was a one shot did you, nope i'm a threefer" isnt it? and we are back for another dose of pain. Poor kanon is just in the ringer and probably should not be handling delicate artifacts in that state. If she handles it too long...

Review blitz Chapter 1 I've always liked these little guilds and honestly am surprised when the mystery dungeon games came out nintendo didnt write something in this style as a players guide. Missed oportunites insuppose give the fanwritters a field to play in. Welcome berry 101. Amd i feal...

Blitz review chapter 2 So we're starting in the middle of a chase. During a fire no less, that adds a load of desperation on the p.o.v. as well as the persuers. And theyre being persued by a jeep? Yeah that bike is not going to save them but its giving them hope i guess? And with the cut...

Blitz review Chapter 1 Well two guesses as to which slot the narriator views themself as in the circle of life amd the second doesn't count. Love how absol is quite the master of his chosen terrain. Roads and streets arent his main source of access... But the less thought of avenues like a...

Review blitz Chapter 1 I realized despite working with you a few times i've never actually read something unrelated to the events you run. So lets fix that. Looks like cleo's got a nice scenec march going on. Pretty, quiet, with a flavor of maze like. Are in a dungeon or out of one? The...