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Chapter 3 (1/9?) Blitz review The color text helps so much with distinguishing whose who.. Thanks for thinking of it. These two are going to kill each other. Love how one member of unova is suddenly responsible for the 'mon attacking them. Yep being born on that patch of dirt made me...

I have to admit i wondered if Patron was going to have a two way mirror.loke illusion rigged after getting his snout smacked. One where mon from the village looking at it saw what they expected and humans see neon letters and signs leading in reading "good catches here!"

weekly fic rec! As i am having insomnia and a free moment all at once may i present a new rec... And its a New Face for everyone because i read and reviewed first! (ok probably only reviewed, still, the bandwagon is open to jump on) From the vast By redspah Why am i recomending: Bias: -aka...

Blitz review chapter 3 I'm wondering if were going to meet annies persuers and arias brother at this point. Because search and rescues dor a kid tend to be huge. Not two persons. Really its lovely the side people show when forced to deal with a complicated outsider situation. Arias...

Chapter 2 Blitz review Hello disjointed... I mean it makes sense considering where aria is at but sheesh i'm thinking shes going to get one heck of an education. I suppose someone hurt and hauling thier tail would have little issues like blurring and lack of focus. Toss in auditory...

Also i was going to review chapter 3 but i cant load it on my phone so i'll pass until a forim chapter becomes available.

Chapter 2 Blitz review I suspect sals wanting ear plugs at this point or at least noise mufflers. Splashy reads loud. And possibly ineberated... Off water? I'm confused but they are obscenly interested in that water to the point i have some suspicions (most of them wrong i'm sure). Still...

Hi bluwiikoon saw your request for a revoew and swung in blitz review Chapter 1 I swear its a miricle kingdom hearts hasnt sued all of us mystery dungeon writers since i think we all have that one fic or scene were the inserts plow in thinking its a dream. And then the dreaded "i am snug and...

Blitz review Chapter 1 You know i wonder if everyone else hears these mysterous wake up in a void voices as james earl jones' mufasa? Candidly i do. Well thats one way to fill in a featureless void. Faceplant into the features. At least he knows what he is... A lot of mon protags get...

This reminds me a bit of the old genescect villians piece from way back when. Interesting to see a mon reared in a world that seems benign but drops hints that it isn't.. The constant resets, the sheer trauma of the p.o.v. 'mon, all are wonderful little tells. The interspacing of download and...

The dancing lilly pad mon lilcolo?

Blitz review Prologue (1/3) Hi chibi here for the blitz review, figure i'd poke at a long fic and may i say kudos with staying with this tale twenty years i wager its going to be a ride heck of a ride. Laughs. I'm imagining lugia in a nest of coral arranged like a blanket, a crude do not...

Review blitz Fic leaf boat An: hi very belated welcome to the forum thought i'd poke in and give you a review. A Latios xeno fic, nice i've come from another jetdragon piece recently lets see how yours pans out. The opening blurb it seems like Lat is remembering to create... That he's over a...

chapter 12 Corinthians 15:10 part 6 Readers note: set pre-Transversal, pre-Manga. Giovanni centric, focusing on being Rocket. What's the difference between a cornered rat and a mad man? One has access to munitions but both are equally rabid. Don Marchetti was no strategic genius. What he was...

the pig fire type starter... tepig?

Chapter 1 Blitz review Someone released our prospective protagonist on smogen. And we are at the dreaded hm tm make and break build up of a team. Dismay feels like a legit reaction. Especially when finding our trainer p.o.v. is a working class soul. Though Gemma seems nice enough to supply...

Hi spiteful figure I'd review your newest piece for the blitz before I tackled fledglings to unclog the tag so here we are. Aw our p.o.v. was a test subject kiddo. Man thats a rough set of nightmares to be facing down. Seems like they have someone to wake them up. Assuming the call of the...

Blitz chapter 2 review So we got another p.o.v we're exploring? Alright lets go. Someone sounds hungry. And in less then five lines we kmkw, hungry, sweet tooth, and klepto. Nice. From the floating line i suspect we got a ghost type lets see. Called it. Hello shippet cliff hamger from...

as you post more i'll keep an eye out. Its an interesting premiss amd the fact the protag kinda did it to himself is fitting and adds to its alure.

chapter 1 review for the blitz. Ohf precog is a blessing. Many societies would argue but it'll be interesting to see how mon tackle it. Definitly the sight beyond thier egg is a case of alien sky. Still its a pretty one... But if this sight also forshadows the mons death it sounds like...