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Yes, seconded. A thanks to everyone who participated, prize givers and writers both, it's been fun.

Title/Link: The Drawing Board chapter 4 Genre: Pokemon OT, genre analysis Rank: Teen, mainly for language and some not too horridly detailed 'mon abuse, Author: Against.The.Current. Status: One shot/ idea pile, complete Why I'm recing it/summary: A variant of "challenging the 'mon...

So she does a lot of topics, some light, some not, but here's her 'mon centrist work which I think would fit this site well. Enjoy! First Nuzlocke Best 'mon game never played Platinum nuzlocke The last nuzlock gets a bit dark/surreal at the end, and there's some flickering lights around the...

I did not expect this angle but I will go for it... Crisis evolution can and does happen in my tales. Persian evolved to shake off near death damage he'd sustained as a meowth and save Gio for example. Its not common though or always for so altristic a thing as Charizard evolved per rage at a...

And my last review (number twelve, cheers!) for the blitz is going to be.... Pen's "The Last Con" 2224 words It was a prize/reward review but still I think it counts. Also I think it qualifies for friendly fire bonus on week 4. Goes off to read score sheet/rules... Alright nevermind it...

Last con review/analysis I love how Midnight Silk’s first reaction once “oops” has passed is to whip out each and every “Game with Death” trope she could think of… Clearly she didn’t have any cards though; I was seriously expecting a wry “pick a card, any card, oh I can’t touch them… well I...

My goals, writing wise, are to finish a long fic (either "Traversal" or "Dodging") and edit at least three of my old fics and clean out their notes from my storage (Four by four, Two paths, and some other I haven't decided on).

I'm basically doing a revamp of some of my older stuff and using this forum as a means to tackle it. Ranking: Teen Trigger Warnings: Powerlessness strong horror elements gore/violence/combat injuries shoddy healing/medical child abduction/endangerment Without further a-due, my Twilight...

Reviewed luminary chapter 3, this is a revisit as I tackled chapter one previously. Clocked 1300 words, sorta cherry picked the text as the author wanted to see if certain issues I brought up on my previous review had improved and I focused on that rather than the story content of the...

Alright, I’m back to take another crack at this fic. The plan is to point out the errors we discussed with suggested fixes if I see them. I really don’t want to do a full line by line again and as others have done so I’m going to skip a bit on that... Here’s the issues I decided to talk about...

Like everything else I suspect.Under a pile of blitz reviews... Though seriously no clue as I haven't heard any news....

Death is Lonely, chapter 1 part e. only the part E! The rest is the previous sections all stapled together. 2500 words

Death is Lonely chapter 1 part e <><><> South, near the beach, -a(1) forest(2) that(3) hadn’t(4) seen(5) a(6) fire(7) in(8) at(9) least(10) a(11) generation(12). A(13) worrying amount of time, particularly when the rains were becoming less and less frequent.- Because it isn’t a beach...

This is a copy of the PMed review for chapter one of "Death is Lonley", it's a line by line done over several weeks and posted on the main site with permission from the author. Appologies with the formating Word hates me when I transfer things from it to here... Review chapter one, section A...

I did a review of "Touch my Tail" Here's the link, The LINK Word counter was at 300 words.

I.. am hearing this in my head in the fashion of Stupendium's "Crazy red" a la "rouge's gallery"and... Yeah I'm sharing the sound/song... Here's a link to the song, sorta pg 13 rating here. Crazy Redd song I'm not in a place here laughing out loud would be good/considerate, so I'm not...

Perhaps a poll would better answer than tossing it back and forth here? That way anyone writing/reading can voice their opinion. If it helps I wouldn't mind joining a non-PMD book club. It's rare I read one I like and am willing to go through to the end. I find the conflict of human/pokemon...

Since theres a strong divide between fandom interest in PMD and non-PMD fics why not just host two clubs? One for PMD and one for everything else? Then the participants can "jump" from club to club when they want a taste of something different or if a proposed read from the other camp catches...

This is one of two scenes I'm seeking help with. An action scene, non battle related, form the work "Two paths" that I'm editing the heck out of. I trimmed it a bit but it still clocks a 780 words... Sorry there wasn't much I felt safe to cull and hold all the trouble parts so it overshot a...

new review So I was busy and here we go, results! Review for room 813 by persephone word count 890