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Thanks for sharing this cute one shot. The view from the Leaf' perspective was interesting. The back and forth made a nice rhythm to the whole that reminded me of the near lyrical slant of certian books. I'd say word wise theres one conflict in meaning. When you use " comfort" for how the...

She’d found out about Giovanni’s next power play by accident. Flipping through the newspaper she was skimming the articles at random. Because she was bored, being grounded was boring, and she was only able to read her school books and newspapers for three weeks. So she’d found a way to twist...

Reviewed chapters one and two of "envy of Eden". Hopefully, it's alright. the review I've no stipulations or particularities on what I want looked at in my fic. So whoever takes it, go wild on whatever tangent you want I guess. I have a new fic to offer to the chopping block, it's RD, so...

Alright here per review tag, handling chapters one and two. I'm sorry I didn't see any review preferences so I'm just jumping in and did a line-by-line reaction review. Hopefully, you prefer this style. Chapter 1 So the world ends in an earthquake? And curious how architecture can be a...

TW for discussed abuse and Italian-specific slurs. Talk of child abuse, and potential for violence. AN: Edited over the course of late Jan. Smoothed out some clarity issues. Got rid of a lot of the monologuing and tried to break down a rather data-heavy chapter to a more realistic back and...

Chapter 2, the visit Edited 6.18.2021 TW: for discussed child abuse and torture and an unsupportive environment. Green's parents have issues and denail was their maladaptive solution and there's fall out from that. While not graphic the child death/abuse is very candid so if you're easily...

If there was any mercy in this abomination pseudo world it was that the childbearing his wife’s voice looked very little (precious little) like Grace. Age distanced them, though at this moment he seemed younger, time-reversed, and all that was his curse for the moment. But at that moment his...

Roost: a gift fic The Roombas had been the start of the madness. And much to his displeasure it'd taken a full day to sort out . Though the Roomba with a ceiling fan, with knives atop the spinning fan blades, had been moderately exciting. Still, they were easily dispatched. Rhyhorn had...

Some more chapters, sorry for the brevity but I'm doing this in bits and bobs as my times a bit scattered at the moment. Chapter 8 It’s curious to see Jir engaged in anything considering how passive he’s been thus far. It’s an interesting contrast…. I think autocorrect swapped some words here...

As promised, though a bit late (life's been exciting, let's leave it at that) Here's another offering to Obsession... Chapter 7: I found this an odd turn of phrase. “ I still had much to happen in my life.” Having something happen versus striving to make it happen, to do, even, really...

I'm not too sure what the formal term of this is called. But when a scene contrasts with the base genre of a piece... For example, a gag/laugh before the monster comes out in a horror piece, the peaceful moment before the action scenes kick in. It's that contrasting scene, where the moment...

I think the "she went out the window" line made me think of a cat/mon going out the window. At least that's how my tired brain interpreted the opening dialogue without context, once context was realized I realized my mistake but since I was rattling off a stream of consciousness sort of review...

looks like there are 4 to go. Congrats on your progress in the bingo and thanks for the timeline clarification! And are we opening up with a "slipped out the window kitty opening"? It feels like it? Continues reading. Ah, never mind a spell tag giver disappearance scene I guess? Anyway...

I'm here for the catnip, (rewinds that statement in my head a few times... meh, still works irony non-withstanding) I've read up to chapter three but decided to dig into part one for getting done on time's sake. Chapter one: At first, I expected the main human character to be a generic...

In response to your second story centering on Cyrus... It's an interesting nightmare opening, isn't it? He got everything he'd think he wanted but the reality of perfection aka perfect state being zero isn't something he was expecting or prepared to cope with. Even in dream forum... I'm...

As I am only familiar with game canon and Special canon I might ask some redundant things and make some redundant points. Regardless I wanted to be supportive so here I am. Initial response to summary/notes/comments: a redemptive non-au Cyrus? this I'm curious to see... And here we go, into...

Ran through Grammarly 5.10.2021 sentence smoothing 5.14.2021 Giovanni was of the mentality that it was better to leave idiots to be idiots. Hau babbling on about looking for a yard had proved beyond a shadow of a doubt that the boy had no sense in his head. Having scouted out the place via a...

AN: Ran through Grammarly on 5.8.21 Sentence rehaul 5.9.2021 TW: HUNTING GORE POACHING They’d hiked a path, from the killing box to the campsite. Binding what ‘mon they encountered on the way. Even without the shrine, and legends, the pool was an obvious echo of Celebi’s clearing, and...

You have my condolances for having that level of idioc to work under, even temperarily. This did feel like a sharing peice and I wondered. Knowing that for sure well I'll keep that in mind as I continue to read and review. Thanks for clearing that line up. I did a few rereads and was still...

I look forward to it!