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And done, here are chapters 1-5. If no one replies to the review tag in a week or so I'll post up 6-10 to get it moving along but until then just think of this as the start of a whole story thank-you review. It's just going to come along in bits and bobs. The analysis: I actually bumped into...

Hmm, while I have some stuff in my old for my most recent I'd say I have a tie for my work "Two paths" In the first scene, Pallet's under the effects of a mysterious psychic attack and Ash managed to get home and he's ripping it apart looking for his mother... the results are not what he...

Meh, the game's been in lock-mode for a while so it's an understandable mistake to make. I actually PMed Bosscar to make sure they were still present on the site and asked if it was OK to read/review their work. I got a green light to tackle a later chapter on the ao3 site. So here is its...

Am presently running everything through Grammarly and trying to do some by-hand editing for clarity with Transversal (chapters 1-3 done with Grammarly, the other restructuring/sentence work is taking more time) the other chapters and works are of course pending. As for new content, I've got...

Hi, courtesy of catnip I come baring a review. (or 2) I've done the uncensored prologue (as a horror fan I found the reading quite fun, and while I understand the necessity of offering a softer version for those curious but sensitive I liked the more detailed one more) and chapter one. the...

Hmm, how about a once-a-month thing, over 12 months, to spread it out a bit? Where everyone who wants their characters to participate tosses their suggestion down, volunteer authors get together, hammer out a rough outline and a do and don'ts list, then the participating writers get paired and...

Ah, so a "life moves on opening" . Alright, maybe I'm a bit... hyper-aware since I got a bit of a chat about his trait in my own writing... But there's a lot of really long sentences back to back in the first two paragraphs. While it works with the tone... an informative monologue with asides...

I liked the opening as it was an interesting mix of misdirection with a touch of vanity, as the scene swings from what one would think of as a person ogling a pretty lady to having the protagonist preening in front of a mirror admiring themselves. That line, where it's shown to be a fake...

Seriously considering JRPGs like making their protags 10 my guess was that Will was 10 at that time... Which makes that scene and the Jackle scene so much worse.

I found more fics... sharing one though since rules and all that... Made for Team Rocket by JFSindel Link: MfTR > Seems to be settled in Teen for the moment, as there's some alluded gore and evil but nothing much showed thus far. > Pokemon Manga centric, a spin-off of the Yellow/SPECIAL...

I'll see you one evil transaction for 100 percent completion and raise you this... .

.. not to butt in but you are doing the red gem collection quest, right? Because the reward... Well I enjoyed it but then I like steel soul in hollow knight so there is that, but you have to do something very specific at the beginning of the game that's very easy to overlook and can scupper a...

Fic information: Title: Transversal crossing the back of legends Summary: Special notes: set in the manga verse, does move to the game verse eventually though. In seeking healing for a Legend wrought curse the Boss of Team Rocket tries to strike a deal with a different Legend for clemency...

Here's your review per the catnip event, I'd hoped to do five chapters but circumstances have curtailed my computer time drastically so here we are. Review of the Prologue and Chapter one The idea of having the Legend tales introduced alongside some of the cast to emphasis mindset and culture...

Clearly the fic' mob was pulling a sloppy job today and missed a few lines, and the title header, sloppy sloppy.

Overall the piece was a short and bitter sweet work. You can feel Sycamore's warmth twist to confusion in the first few messages, and it's utterly understandable. It's hard to deal with a bad trait in a friend/family member, but someone acting out on their worst impulses and making the world...

As my phone will not allow me to post pics on this site this will be sadly picture-less. I've two cats I got from the local shelter. A chunky grey and tan short hair that's plush enough to give plusheen a run for it's money and nearly as round too. The grey cat, Coyote, is and affectionate...

Agreed. I like tales where the character is just doing their own thing character for happiness' sake, meting life goals, ecetera. My reading leans towards slice of life inter-spaced with those fun epic adventure bits. I'm curious how this one's going to progress as it goes. canon compliant...

I'm not a hard core Hoenn fan but was intrigued to read a Steven piece that wasn't romance, so that was the premises that drew me in, your attention to detail and realism is what kept me reading as it went. The whole scenario feels so true to character. "Just one minute/15 min/ hour or so"...

While not my favorite ff, six does have a place in my heart and has my favorite female protagonist from the series and my favorite ending twist/villain of the series. It's nice to meet another fan of the series.