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Well, hello, it’s been a minute! Another fantastic chapter, as usual! This feels much like a “calm before the storm” kind of chapter, and the weather mentioned throughout seems symbolic of that, too. Haru is finally making a decision about something HE wants to do—yes! I’m so proud! Can’t wait...

Aaaand I’m back for more! No way was I staying away for very long after that chapter 4 cliffhanger! You do an excellent job with the parallels between Mark’s methods/beliefs and Natalie’s. It’s honestly fascinating to see the inner workings of both ORCA and MGMA from two very different...

Reviewed chapters 2-4 of Continental Divides, 1050 words. 3 points, plus 1 for the theme for 4 points! Edit: went back to review chapters 5-6 of CD, 690 words. 2 points!

*sits back in chair* *takes a deep breath* *cracks knuckles* Here. We. GO. Right off the bat, I’m in love with your scene-setting once again. The dialogue continues to remain top-notch, and the action scenes are just—WOW. Really stellar flow here, and I really enjoy the chapter lengths, too...

Got some meaty reviews here, love it!

Whew, got a couple reviews to respond to here! Let’s dig in:

HOENN SQUAD HOENN SQUAD All right, it’s time to pull this from the list and actually start READING the thing! Been meaning to check this one out for a long time, actually, when I first saw it get recommended on the Pokémon fan fiction subreddit. After reading the first chapter, it’s very easy...

Welp I’m finally here for the review swap! Review swap aside, I’ve been wanting to check this out for a while, partially because of the similarities between your title and mine, heh. ;) I must say, I’m pretty intrigued by this, as I’ve never read a PMD fic before. So this is all new territory...

Okay, I’m back!! I think I’m going to go through and review each chapter gradually, because I need a refresher on the earlier chapters anyways, but I’m jumping in here because this is one of the chapters that has really stood out to me so far, and I have lots of thoughts to share!

Here we go! I’m officially all caught up on your story — which sucks, because it’s on a heckin cliff hanger and now I have to wait! D: Nooooo

One chapter of The Suicune’s Choice, 608 words, 1 point. Three chapters of Heroes After All, 933 words, 3 points. One chapter of Envy of Eden, 813 words, 1 point. Three chapters of Eternal Shadows, 855 words, 3 points! One chapter of Continental Divides, 451 words, 1 point. Total: 9 points!

Another chapter, you say?!

Wow, hello again!! It’s a pleasant surprise to see you back again so soon! :D

So I think you reviews are becoming my new favorite thing, your commentary makes me snort hahaha xD

Thanks for another amazing review!! :D :D :D Oh boy, I just edited chapter 4 last night, and I keep forgetting that the line breaks between scenes don't transfer over when I copy/paste. Ughhh. So sorry about that, it probably made it rough to read. I assure you there were supposed to be line...

Pen, I'm really living for your JUICY reviews. You are very thorough and provide specific, actionable feedback, and I appreciate it so much!

AAAH Tetra your review just made me so HAPPY?? It's really nice to see what has been landing for readers, and you just brought ALL the feel-goods with you to this review. You're the MVP, friend.

Reviewed one chapter for The Suicune's Choice and two chapters for Heroes After All, 891 words total. 3 points, plus 2 for the new week's theme, so 5 points altogether! Total: 16 :D

Oh, hey. I'm back :D I skipped over your bonus chapter as I wasn't sure it was a part of the story, and...I'm not familiar with FE, sadly. :( I hope that's ok! Oh. Oh, dear. Lol I love Callie, she's probably my favorite of the kids, but oh man, this just screams BAD IDEA. xD OMG that's...