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Back for chapter 5! I'm surprised to see that only 5 chapters are up, as I recall seeing 8 or 9 on FFN? Eh, it's no big deal, I'm sure you'll get around to cross-posting eventually :) This is a rather depressing tidbit, honestly. Haru doesn't really strike me as an outgoing or social type to...

Chapter 14: Perspective "This is where y'all live?" Lon's face was a picture of shock as he took in the sight of the sizable house. Compared to the sprawling, luxurious buildings in Phenac, Duking's home wasn't extraordinary by any means; it was a simple cabin-style home that might have once...

(Art by Pen) Chapter 13: Evolution Origin Ten Years Earlier Neo loved the outdoors. There was just something about the way the sun warmed his brown and tan pelt and gleamed off every surface. There was something about the way the desert winds tickled his ears pleasantly and carried with it...

OMG hi!! So happy to see you here! this might be my favorite intro to any review I’ve received, ever. XD Both...both is good. ;) Such a drama queen, I LOVE HIM Hey same! Novo’s a cutie, too, just a little more...tightly wound. XD

Fancy meeting you here!! Thanks for stopping by! Ah yes, the more feedback I get, the more I’m convinced that I need to eventually come back and rewrite this first chapter...or at least this first scene! There’s a lot of potential here that I just haven’t reached yet, but thanks to all the...

aaaah thank you for stopping by and reviewing! I was not expecting this, so it was a very pleasant surprise! It makes me happy to hear that the title grabbed your attention! ;) I’m going to try to keep my responses under the spoiler tag, but I’ve never tried this before so...we’ll see how this...

Aaand another! Reviewed two chapters of Heroes After All, 552 words, 2 points. 11 points total!

Back for more, let's get started! Kind of a side note, but maaaan, telepathy would be SO convenient. But also a pain in some ways, I imagine. Imagine having a friend who can speak telepathy but you can't. Oh boy. That would be frustrating. I know this is introduced in the movie, but I love...

Reviewed two more chapters of The Suicune's Choice, 851 words. 2 points, leaving me at 9 points total.

Back for more! And oh, boy, things REALLY went downhill quickly, didn't they? Luck has not been on Haru's side for these next couple chapters. What an interesting detail! I take it you don't adopt the "pokemon are kept in stasis in their pokeballs" theory, then? To be honest, I don't either -...

Reviewed three chapters of Heroes After All. 785 words total, plus it's a new fic to me which counts for this week's theme, so...4 points? Which would leave me at 7 points total! :) Will do a few more reviews later today. (Gonna get that companion Pokemon, yo!)

Haha, I appreciate your intro line for Chapter 2. How DOES Aura work, anyway? Again, I haven't read any Aura Guardian fics, so this is all new information to me. Lol! Poor innocent Aaron. He's such a cinnamon roll. Also, Polly may be gruff, and I don't love her decision to humiliate Aaron in...

All right, here we go! I've actually never read a fic about Aura Guardians before, but I loved the movie that this story draws inspiration from, and I've always found the lore really fascinating. I'm excited for this story, so here we go!! A Dunsparce! I don't know how much we'll actually be...

Oh, quick question - how do I fix the order of my threadmarks? No idea how they got out of order in the first place, haha

Um, HELLO?? I was so not expecting to see you here so this totally made my whole week! :D Was going to respond to this sooner, but trying to get around on this site on mobile is a NIGHTMARE so I waited until I could get on a desktop lol. Yes indeed, this is my first real attempt at...writing in...

Okay, first time diving in, so I hope I’m doing this right xD reviewed two chapters for The Suicune’s Choice 573 words. I haven’t reviewed this before so it fits with this week’s theme, too, I believe. So...3 points total? I think? I’m so sorry idk what I’m doing xD

A very valid question, one that ought to be addressed at least somewhat in every Pokémon story, in my opinion. How much do they understand? Again, I have to applaud you for so clearly outlining the laws that exist in this world, even though it’s just the start of the second chapter. I’m amazed...

Okay I actually stumbled across this fic on FFN a few weeks ago, but it’s HIGH time I leave a review on this beautiful, beautiful story. To start: your prose. Is. Gorgeous. It’s so smooth and vivid, and I can clearly imagine each scene as though I’m actually immersed in it. I love that, while...

TW: This chapter contains depictions of child abuse that may be upsetting for some readers. Reader discretion is advised. Chapter 12: Belonging It hurt to breathe. Not that Leo wasn't used to it; ugly bruises, bloody scrapes, and deep cuts had become a regular part of his daily life since...

I know I’ve reviewed a newer chapter than this one but I somehow missed this one! oooh this is SO. GOOD. And heartbreakingly accurate. I love it and I hate it at the same time. Another good one. But I can’t help but wonder what Inari’s actual stance is toward humans throughout this chapter...