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Chapter 147: Imperial March New

Ambyssin

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Chapter 147: Imperial March

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The ringing didn't leave Leo's ear frills for several seconds. It took even longer to get the stars out of his vision.

And why dirt brushing against his fur instead of gravel or concrete? Wasn't Leo supposed to be in Dazzels right now?

C'mon, think!

One moment, he and the others were staring down Paradox. And the next... the deoxys disappeared and a colossal zygarde rose up from the ruins of the Parliament building.

Now Leo was lying in the dirt. No doubt, he got flung through a rift. But to where?

"Uggggggggggggggh." Groaning, the cosmic arceus staggered to his feet. "Anyone get the number on that runaway charjabus?"

No response. In fact, Leo didn't sense any familiar auras near him.

Leo looked around. He was on a tiny dirt hill, far on the outskirts of the city. Fortunately he could see the zygarde robot, firing blue beams from four serpent-like ribbons protruding from its back.

Not good. Leo jumped into the air. He needed to get back into the city and help with—

His wheel flickered. Leo looked over shoulder. This feeling... were there Plates nearby? He'd already sensed the Mind Plate on Paradox, but now he sensed another.

... No. He sensed more than one.

"What the heck?" Leo turned around, only to gurgle in surprise when thick, metallic vines wrapped themselves around him. They got his legs. Latched onto his wheel. Even coiled their way up to his head.

Leo's heart rate spiked. Metal and grass meant fire. All he had to do was draw out the Flame Plate and this would be no problem.

"Have you enjoyed your return to form?"

Leo's eyes widened. That voice!

The vines tightened their grip. Pointed stones dug into Leo's hide. Their jagged edges threw off his concentration.

White light took a humanoid shape in front of him.

"Because your little adventure has run its course," Zodiark said. "I told you before... these plates are mine."

Leo thrashed about. But the more he moved, the tighter the vines gripped him. Why couldn't he call forth his Plates? Or the Red Chain fragments that he had?

Several playing cards drifted around Zodiark's silhouette. "All that's left to do is wait to grab the final piece. And then the Eternaverse shall take root."

Leo tried to yell. The vines blocked him. He had no telepathy to fall back on. And the Plates wouldn't respond. Were all of Zodiark's Paradigm fragments countering them? This was ridiculous!

The silhouette got closer. Leo's fur stood on end. His movements slowed. His mind grew fuzzy.

... No! That couldn't happen! He had to stop Paradox! He had to help his friends!

He had to... had to... had to serve his wielder.

A silvally with a gold-trimmed cape stood in front of him. "Don't forget," he whispered gently.

Leo squeezed his eyes shut. With the last of his strength, he shrank his aura as much as possible.

It didn't take long for the vines' suffocating grips to stop.

XxX​

"Get up, Iggy!" Shimmer pleaded. "We've gotta move!"

Chilly hooves shoved Igneous' side. The grovlazzle's eyes opened to a blurry cobblestone alley. Swathes of orange, purple, and blue flashed in front of him.

Eyes widening, Igneous pushed himself up. He put his claws on Shimmer's left shoulder, letting the ponytales help him back to his feet.

"What happened?" Igneous asked, rubbing the stars from his eyes. He nearly fell over again when the ground trembled beneath his feet.

"P-Paradox summoned a giant robot." Shimmer laughed nervously. "It roared so loud that it knocked us all off our feet."

Igneous finally settled enough for him to see Nikki running around ahead of him, swinging her lightning guitar wildly to deflect fireballs from the two Iron Moths hovering overhead. Igneous was about to ask how the toxtricity was holding her own like that, when he looked up to see a dragapult leading multiple dragonite and salamence in blasting the Iron Moths from above with Dragon Pulses.

"Remember the plan!" Yiazmat called. "We must press forward! Even with that infernal machine!" She turned around and blasted Dragon Darts behind her.

Igneous rubbed his eyes again. "Right." He looked at Shimmer. "You good?"

"A bit rattled." Shimmer shook himself out. "But I'll manage."

"Then let's move." Igneous' volcarona wings came to life. He conjured Honedge and flew forward, sticking close to the ground. "Heads up, Nikki!"

She glanced over her shoulder and nodded. "Yo, Bugbot! Catch!" Nikki shouted, hurling her lightning guitar up like a giant tomahawk. The Iron Moth directly above her was too busy contending with two salamence to react in time.

Seeing the lightning guitar get buried in Iron Moth's base, Igneous slashed the air with Honedge. Fiery crescents raced forward and struck the lightning guitar. It burst apart in a ball of white-hot plasma. Nikki dove onto her belly. Heat washed over her. Embers showered her leather jacket. The toxtricity rolled along the street to put them out.

Igneous saw a faint pink glow approaching the second Iron Moth. He pivoted right and tossed Honedge forward. "Shim!" he called.

"I got you!" the ponytales responded. His Psychic caught Honedge and propelled it forward. Honedge pierced through Iron Moth's metal torso and came out the other end. Iron Moth's electronic eyes went dark. It plummeted to the ground, landing beside its counterpart with a metallic THUD.

"Are they down?" Shimmer asked. He hesitantly approached the one with the hole in it and poked its base with an icy forehoof.

[Y... ou...] Static garbled Iron Moth's voice. [You won't... win.]

[You can't... defeat... Paradox,] the other Iron Moth added. Its voice was a static mess, too. [Just... give up.]

"Pfbt." Nikki ran her hands through her lightning mohawk. "Maybe that's what your dumb asses did when you got caught in Venish. But me? Not a chance."

She held her right arm out. Her lightning guitar appeared in swarms of purple and yellow sparks. "I— no, we have things we're fighting for. And we'll be damned if we let any of you get in the way."

Neither Iron Moth responded. Igneous walked past the toxtricity, scanning the air above them.

"Yiazmat and her forces are keeping the Eternatus Troopers off our tails," the grovlazzle said. "We've gotta keep moving." He pointed forward, where the head and shoulders of Paradox's giant zygarde robot peeked out from behind rows of tall buildings.

"T-Toward it?" Shimmer's tails frazzled.

"They really need us there, don't you think?" Igneous started forward, embers crackling along his back.

Sighing, Shimmer trotted after him. "I know! I just wish they didn't!"

From behind the two, Nikki said, "Yo, Boss Kitty! We've got a giant zygarde robot at the Parliament building! Just what's the situation?"

XxX​

Gene stood facing the monitor bank, gaze darting between the screens, the skorps furiously typing away at the keyboards, and Cid and Cyril hastily scribbling things down on strewn about sheets of paper.

"We're still trying to get a handle on that ourselves." The mega mewtwo glanced at Cid. "You getting anything?"

The orbeetle shook his head. "For once, I'm at a loss! Whatever this thing is, it must be so full of Malice— err, Eterna energy that it's completely blocking my Dynascan!"

Gene's tail twitched in irritation. It was now plain as day why the emperor hadn't put proper resources into protecting Citadark. He was putting everything behind this invasion force.

"They're afraid out there," Dark Matter growled. "They need direction. You're failing them."

If there was ever a time to butt out, it'd be now, Gene sneered. "Just how scattered about are people?"

Cyril turned around in his swivel chair. "Looks like Paradox jettisoned our heaviest hitters using rifts of his own. Leo got blown clear out of the city. Yuna's somewhere to the south. Noctum and Diamond are in the east with Valkyrie." He turned back to hunch over a laptop. "Igneous' team is about ten blocks south of the robot. They're hitting open roadways soon."

Claws tapped impatiently behind Gene. "How much longer are we going to stay in 'hiding,' Gene?" Widget asked. "If there was ever a time to spring into action, it'd be now."

"I'm aware." Gene turned to face the cosmic silvally. "But we only get one shot at catching Paradox off guard. If we charge out there without a hint of how to deal with that giant mech, then we're blowing our load early!"

Beside Widget, Bahamut crossed his arms. "And if we continue hesitating, our allies may wind up dead or captured. And just what sort of 'edge' will that give us, hmm?"

"I agree with them, for the record. This is a fool's errand."

Fool's errands have gotten us this far, Gene scoffed. But you can't trust me because 'trust is too painful' or whatever.

He turned back to the monitors. "Bird Team, head south and find Yuna!" Gene barked into the X-transceiver line. "Dog Team, go east! Get to Noctum! Heal Team, send some monk scouts to find Leo!"

"Aye," Zacian and Zamazenta said in unison.

"Grishi resent team name, but will follow."

"We're on it!"
Jade said, followed shortly by a, "Ack! Hey, who said you could shoot at a lady while her back is turned?"

Gene silenced his line and turned to the Bahamut and Widget. "See? It's still under control."

Neither of them looked convinced. Rolling his eyes, Gene returned to the monitor bank.

This would work. It had to work.

XxX​

"Haaa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!"

Paradox's booming laughter roused Yuna from her stupor. The dragapult took to the air, flying along the street between several shuttered bank buildings. She waved her arms around to dispel dust and stray embers.

Medicis and pirates ran along side streets to keep Eternatus Brawlers off her back.

She stopped the moment a purple rift opened right in front of her. Yuna suddenly stared down one of the zygarde mech's serpentine ribbons. She rolled away from a large Dragon Pulse that swept through the air, destroying chunks of a First National Bank of Isola sign. Concrete and glass plinked and plunked on burning asphalt behind her.

"How do you like my special suit, you worthless rebels?" Paradox projected his voice through some sort of loudspeaker system. Yuna bet the whole city could hear him. "I call it the Iron Conqueror, in honor of the many planets that will be crushed beneath its heels!"

Iron Conqueror extended its ribbon through the rift and tracked Yuna. Meeping, Yuna dove to the ground. She phased through the street. The concrete around her trembled. Chunks of it were torn up. But she dodged whatever strike the ribbon tried. And she popped her triangular head out to see Reverse Time taking hold.

An idea sprang to mind. If Paradox was attacking through rifts, then why couldn't she use that for herself?

Before Reverse Time faded, she shot two Dragon Darts into the rift. They hit the serpent ribbon's tip, but it didn't react at all. And its chassis was too dark for Yuna to tell if she'd even done any damage!

The rift then shut. Paradox's laughter filled the air again.

"Was that supposed to be an attack? Oh, how adorable!" he crooned.

Another rift opened. Yuna immediately fired two Dragon Darts, but an Iron Hands emerged and swatted them away. Eternatus Gunners streamed out of the rift and opened fire with Ice Shards and Ice Beams. Yuna flew left along the surface of the road. Frosty air nicked her right hip.

"There's nothing you miserable rodents can do to even so much as scratch Iron Conqueror!" Paradox declared. "How about a little deal? Surrender now, and I'll offer all of you last meals before I turn you into batteries for my army!"

[I've really got to hand it to you, rebel!] Iron Hands slammed the ground. [You've really outdone yourself in the stupidity department!]

An electric shockwave raced out. Yuna flew up to dodge, only for an Ice Beam to strike her waist. Hissing, she drifted back, undulating her tail and ectoplasm to get the sleet off before it could settle in.

Her eyes widened when she saw three more Ice Beams heading right for her. She braced herself, only for orange lightning to vaporize the strikes. An orange blur slammed into one of the Gunners from below. It ricocheted into three more Gunners. All exploded into scrap metal.

[What?] Iron Hands threw its large yellow hands up in an attempt at shielding itself, but instead ended up getting yoinked into the air by a telekinetic force.

"Now, Quetzal!" Shiva said, wings spread wide as a pink glow surrounded her.

"Right!" The orange zapdos leaped into the air and delivered a Thunderous Kick to Iron Hands, sending it careening off into the distance.

Another rift opened in front of them, revealing one of Iron Conqueror's serpent ribbons. A Dragon Pulse raced toward Quetzal, who was completely defenseless.

"Oh no you don't!"

Ifrit swooped in from behind the other two birds. Black flames snuffed out the Dragon Pulse.

Yuna saw an orange glow from the corner of her eye. She flew against the side of a brick building and watched an Aeroblast sweep across the air. The orange beam shattered Eternatus Gunners and part of it got through the rift. Iron Conqueror yanked the ribbon away and shut the rift.

"That did something!" Yuna said, peeling herself off the brick building and waving at Jade.

"Really? Great!" the salugia chirped. She flapped in place while Ifrit and Shiva flew over to her side and Quetzal sprinted up a half-wrecked building to join them. "What'd I do?"

"Paradox is trying to have his machine snipe us from afar using the rifts," Yuna explained. She could see the massive zygarde robot firing large green rockets into the air. They burst into Thousand Waves that washed against a space pirate ship's shield.

"Then we shouldn't stay here," Ifrit said. The black moltres flapped his wings to carry him forward. "Onward!"

They only made about twenty meters before a rift opened, revealing a green missile that exploded into waves of glowing green hexagons.

"Get back!" Yuna shouted, thrusting her arms forward. Diamond shards filled the air to intercept the Thousand Waves. The Diamond Storm broke enough of the glowing hexagons apart for everyone to fly through.

"This is Bird Team," Shiva said, sweeping a pink beam through the sky to blow apart two Eternatus Gunners. Behind her, a space pirate ship opened fire with bursts of water and lightning, distracting half a dozen Iron Jugulis from giving chase. "We've got Yuna. We're pressing forward to the north!"

"Understood," Cyril said. "Dog Team, what's your status?"

XxX​

"Grishi still not like name," the zorotwo said, shooting dark pulses from his claws like a kid playing pretend with finger guns. They struck an Iron Thorns blocking the center of the road, toppling it over. "But team find friends."

From his vantage point in the air a few meters over the street, Noctum watched Zacian slice apart an Iron Valiant into ribbons. Zamazenta charged ahead of her, forming a large shield that blocked a Thousand Waves racing out from a nearby rift.

"Quite the monstrosity!" Zamazenta shouted, dispelling the shield and charging forward. "What'd'ya suppose the odds are he's using that Red Chain fragment of his to empower it?"

"High!" Diamond called, galloping after Zamazenta. The keldeo slashed at the air repeatedly with his glowing horn. Secret Swords raced out, striking Eternatus Gunners along with a few robot delibird — Iron Bundles, according to their earlier briefing — taking aim from afar.

"What do we do about them?" Noctum wondered, flying after them. Valkyrie tried to keep pace along the right sidewalk. "The rifts open and shut too fast for me to try anything!"

"Maybe that's where I come in," Diamond called. "I just need the right moment."

"Iron Treads, dead ahead!" Zamazenta shouted, gesturing to a large red ball zooming toward them. Dozens of Eternatus Brawlers ran after it, maces brimming with flames or dragonfire.

Zacian leaped in front of her brother. Her sword exploded in size, brimming with blue energy. She slashed at Iron Treads, halting its momentum and knocking it backwards.

"Scatter!" one of the Brawlers shouted, but it was too late. Iron Treads barreled through the Brawlers like they were glorified bowling pins.

Grishi blipped in over the two dogs and held up his right hand. His psychic grasp caught three Eternatus Bombardiers readying Focus Blasts and flung them higher into the air, where they got caught in an exchange of Hyper Beam fire and blown apart. Napalm and broken glass rained down on a destroyed building to their right.

"You're a tenacious bunch of insects," Paradox said. "But your world will be the first in my soon to be sprawling trophy case!"

Two rifts opened ahead of the group, at a Y-shaped intersection.

"There!" Diamond cried. He pointed his horn and unleashed a beam of tachyons. The Roar of Time struck the rifts and froze Iron Conqueror's serpentine ribbons in place.

"Now, Noctum!" The cosmic keldeo pointed his foreleg forward.

Noctum understood immediately. He beat his wings faster. Blue purple energy raced down his arms. Noctum swiped them both forward.

Two Spacial Rend crescents zoomed toward the rift. They broke through and struck the serpentine ribbons. Blue violent energy exploded out from the rifts, which forcibly shut.

Iron Conqueror's mechanical roar echoed across the city. Glass shattered in the distance. A startled Noctum nearly fell from the air.

"Grrr... insolent little worms!" Paradox shouted. "I tire of these foolish tricks of yours!"

Another rift opened, but Diamond couldn't get off another Roar of Time.

"Get rid of them!" Paradox ordered. "Do what you were built for and cut them all down to size!"

A purple and red blur shot out from the portal, which promptly shut. It slammed into a yelping Zamazenta, sending him skipping across the street like a stone. He came to a stop near Noctum, who looked up and saw a robotic Widget shooting strange purple energy blasts into Zacian and Grishi, pushing them back toward the street coming from the left.

"It's that thing!" Valkyrie charged forward. Concrete split apart and dust filled the air as her Earthquake tried to swallow the robotic silvally. But it jumped over the Earthquake, hovering in midair and unleashing a purple and red beam.

"Val!" Noctum shouted. He opened a rift of his own and pulled the garchomp through. The cosmic charizard dropped from the air because of Valkyrie's larger size.

[Targets acquired,] the robot silvally said, before speeding down the street toward Noctum and Valkyrie.

XxX​

Widget nearly tackled Gene when he jumped onto the mega mewtwo from behind. "Rift me over there now!" the cosmic silvally said, jostling Gene's shoulder crystals.

"Ow, get off!" Gene's tail shoved Widget off.

He dropped back to all fours. Widget's starcloud neck ruff puff out. "It's Iron Enforcer!" he said. "I can't stick around here!"

"We have a plan," Gene growled.

The two stared silently at one another. Widget wouldn't back down here. He'd been thinking about this moment for a while now.

He refused to believe Iron Enforcer was like the other silvally. There had to be something inside it. And maybe, with a better grasp on his Voice powers, Widget could get through!

Sighing, Gene's shoulders sagged. "You really think there's something there for you if you fight this thing?"

Widget nodded.

"Fine." Gene held his right arm out. "Don't screw it up, then."

A rift opened beside him. Widget dashed into it without another word, immediately soaking in nauseating aromas of motor oil and burning asphalt.

On the other side, Noctum struggled to fly away from purple energy blasts homing in on him. And Iron Enforcer stood in the middle of the street, dodging furious swipes from Valkyrie's Dragon Claws.

Widget shifted to miraivally and surged forward, slamming into Iron Enforcer and sending it tumbling away from the garchomp.

"What are you doing here?" Valkyrie said. "What about Gene's plan?"

"Plan changed." Widget shifted back to cosmic silvally. He crouched down, watching Iron Enforcer stagger back to its feet. "Go on ahead. I've got this."

Valkyrie frowned. "Don't be an idiot. We have numbers."

"And those numbers need to deal with the giant robot." Widget sprang forward, firing bursts of Psychic to snuff out the purple energy balls Iron Enforcer shot at him and Valkyrie.

"Go! Now!" he barked. Widget heard footsteps growing more distant.

Iron Enforcer stared Widget down, its face expressionless.

"We don't have to do this, you know," Widget said, claws curling as he failed to detect any spiritual signal directly ahead of him.

Iron Enforcer's red eyes glowed. [All threats to the emperor will be neutralized.]

Its entire body glowed, then it let loose a red and purple beam. Widget raced to his left. The beam instead vaporized a bank, leaving only stray bricks and glass shards.

His starcloud ruff tightened. That was some serious firepower!

[Your appearance does not compute,] Iron Enforcer said. It pivoted, body glowing again. [You are a threat. I will dispose of you.]

"I'm not a threat!" Widget said. He couldn't concentrate enough to focus his spiritual senses while under fire. "I want to help you!"

Iron Enforcer let loose another giant beam. It singed Widget's tail. Smoke trailed off it as he skidded to a halt.

[If you wish to assist, then allow me to neutralize you.]

"That's not how it works!" Widget squawked. He shifted into miraivally mode and took to the air. Lightning crackled around his crest. "I mean that you can be more than just a tool for the emperor!"

Iron Enforcer opened its beak and spat out purple and red energy balls. Widget blasted them all apart with a single Thunderbolt. He hovered to his right, not putting any extra distance between himself and his robot counterpart.

[My purpose is to destroy all threats to the emperor,] Iron Enforcer said. [Your words are meaningless attempts at subterfuge.]

Widget flinched. Was he wasting his time? Was Iron Enforcer really nothing more than a machine?

... No, he could still salvage this! He had to try! He was the Voice of Life!

Iron Enforcer fired another purple and red beam skyward. Widget zipped to his left. The attack caught a few Eternatus Gunners in the distance.

"There's no subterfuge!" Widget said. "Even as a machine, you can do better than this!"

A part of Widget wondered if he should try the same thing that Leo did to him. To offer a "blessing" to Iron Enforcer and see what would happen.

Except when Leo did that, it left Widget conflicted. And things were a lot more dire now. If he could just find a way to directly access Iron Enforcer's programming...

Widget shot a Thunderbolt from his crest toward the ground. Iron Enforcer easily dodged, then retaliated with two red bursts. Widget swooped down to avoid them, only to find they were homing on him. The miraivally spun around and arced electricity across them, blowing them apart in bright red flashes.

However, that left his back exposed. Sudden weight grabbed him. A sharp pain pierced his somewhat metallic hide.

Squawking in surprise, Widget thrashed around in midair. He shook Iron Enforcer loose. The robot silvally landed on the ground and immediately fired a large purple beam at Widget.

He barely got a Protect up in time. The beam raced around him. Widget tasted static and plasma.

[I am successfully outmaneuvering you,] Iron Enforcer taunted. [This counts as 'better.']

"This isn't about battling!" Widget dropped the Protect. He shifted back to cosmic silvally and dropped to the ground. "There's more out there in the world. Your programming can expand! Your knowledge can expand! Those are good things!"

[I am perfectly functional.] Iron Enforcer kept its beak open and shot more red bursts at Widget. This time he sent Psychic ripples out from his head crest. The blasts fizzled away.

"Widget!" Gene barked through the X-transceiver. "Look, A for effort, but you're clearly not going to get through to it!"

Widget's crest tightened. "But—"

[Your persistence is bothersome.] Iron Enforcer squared up its stance. Red and black energy crackled around. [Initializing overdrive.]

Within seconds, the robot silvally had closed the gap with Widget. It raked its talons across Widget's left flank. The cosmic silvally skidded across the road. Then Iron Enforcer closed the gap and struck Widget again. And a third time.

Widget crashed into a stoplight at the intersection. The metal bent around his head crest, then the light itself fell off the pole and shattered. Red, yellow, and green glass scattered around him.

[Neutralizing target.] Iron Enforcer charged its beam attack far faster now. Yelping, Widget shifted to miraivally and turned his thrusters on. He shot off the sidewalk and onto the street. A red and purple beam vaporized what was left of the light, then blew apart a post office behind it. Burnt paper and cardboard rained down behind Widget. Smoke filled his lungs.

"Troopers! Get back here and protect your emperor! Get these ingrates away from me!"

Shifting back to cosmic silvally, Widget got to his feet. But Iron Enforcer was right near him! Widget blasted pink energy from his crest. It managed to hit the robot silvally and knock him over.

Instinct took hold. Widget used another Psychic. The energy flung Iron Enforcer back. It struck the door of another bank, breaking the glass. There were dents in its metallic hide.

Widget tilted his head. He didn't think his Psychic was that good. "What just happened?" he said.

"It looks like going into overdrive shifted all its energy into attacking," Cid exclaimed. "It must not have much in the way of defenses like this."

"There's your opening,"
Gene said. "I know you don't want to to do this, but you've gotta seize this moment. I'm about to help the others. You asked for this, so it's on you."

The X-transceiver line clicked off.

"Nnnggggrrrr! I've had enough of your foolish games!"

Iron Enforcer was back on its feet, gathering red and purple energy. Widget didn't give it the opening, instead shooting another Psychic beneath Iron Enforcer's feet. The pink blast shot Iron Enforcer into the air, denting its underbelly.

Widget turned to reshivally mode, conjured a Fusion Flare, and hurled the large fireball forward. He flapped his fluffy wings to climb into the air and followed the attack as it exploded before Iron Enforcer could deflect it. The robot silvally crashed into the roof of the same bank whose door it had just broken.

Sparking crackles and pops filled the air. Widget winced as he approached.

Iron Enforcer struggled to get back to its feet. The Fusion Flare had blown its right foreleg off. And its crest was dented at a ninety-degree angle.

"Enough of this!" Widget shouted, desperately trying to probe the energy he sensed from the bank roof. "You're losing! Surrender! Don't you want to save yourself?"

In response, Iron Enforcer gathered up red and purple energy.

[Target... rebel. Priority one.]

It fired another giant laser, blowing off its other foreleg in the process. Widget rolled right in midair to dodge it.

"Damn it! It doesn't have to end like this!" he squawked. Widget probed again... and came up empty.

More red and purple energy crackled around Iron Enforcer's torso. [Target rebel. Priority one.]

Clamping his metal beak tightly shut, Widget conjured a Fusion Flare and hurled it toward the roof. The concrete somehow held tough, even as the giant fireball drove Iron Enforcer into it.

When the flames and smoke cleared, all of its forelegs were missing. Gaps in its belly exposed wires. Strange purple fluid leaked out of its cracked right eye. The scent of burnt alloys and plastics overpowered the ash and dust from all the surrounding fights.

"It's over." Widget flapped his wings to remain in place. "You can't beat me like that. But we can fix you. And get rid of the emperor's awful programming."

[Tar... get... reb... el...]

Widget tensed up. But then an idea struck him! Maybe if he shifted to eternavally mode he would finally get the results he wanted!

... Except Iron Enforcer tried gathering energy for an attack, only for its entire body to glow red and purple. Was it short-circuiting?

"Wait, stop!"

Widget dove down. But even with flames shooting from his tail turbine, the reshivally wasn't fast enough. Iron Enforcer exploded in a blaze of red and purple energy.

Widget conjured a Protect. Black and purple sludge struck the shield, forcing Widget to drop it and climb higher into the air.

Multiple Hyper Beams whizzed above him, filling the air with loud hums and whines. Widget looked back down and found a giant hole in the bank's roof. Concrete chunks fell into it when Widget landed. He reared up and slowly flapped his wings to clear the smoke and dust.

Peering inside the hole, Widget found nothing but scorch marks on a tile floor. Charred metal fragments and debris lay strew about.

Widget hung his head. Deep in his heart, he knew this was the most likely outcome. But it still hurt. He'd witnessed Paradox's intended ending for him. And it made his blood boil.

"You gonna be okay?" Cid asked.

"I will be once Paradox is done for," Widget said. "Where do you guys need me? If Gene wants to rift me back to the base, then I'll—"

"Boss Kitty went out in the field," Cyril said.

Widget's crest fanned out. "Wait, what? Where did he—"

A massive explosion swallowed up the giant zygarde robot in the distance. It was so intense that the tremors even reached the bank roof, knocking Widget over. He flailed his hind legs around.

Widget scrambled to his feet, then shifted to miraivally mode. His thrusters kicked in and he zoomed into the air.

Perhaps he'd have more time to chew on what happened with his robot counterpart later. For now, there was still a battle to be had.

 

BlizzardBricks

Starry-Eyed Replier
Pronouns
He/Him

Chapter 147

... No. He sensed more than one.
Go away Zodiark! One villain at a time!
He had to... had to... had to serve his wielder.
Just being in the presence of Zodiark starts to warp Leo's mind? And everyone expects him to deal with them? I don't see this ending well :sadwott:
A silvally with a gold-trimmed cape stood in front of him. "Don't forget," he whispered gently.

Leo squeezed his eyes shut. With the last of his strength, he shrank his aura as much as possible.

It didn't take long for the vines' suffocating grips to stop.
:screm:
LEO! WHAT IS YOUR PLAN!
So does Zodiark now possess all the plates (minus the Psychic plate) and all the Red Chain fragments? And no one knows where Leo went!?

This is fine
This would work. It had to work.
And what if it doesn't Gene? I know you've gotten better at controlling your emotions, but what if things go south?
Two rifts opened ahead of the group, at a Y-shaped intersection.
Possible reference to Pokemon Y? I'm all for more references to Gen 6 lol (Totally not biased :quag:)
He refused to believe Iron Enforcer was like the other silvally. There had to be something inside it. And maybe, with a better grasp on his Voice powers, Widget could get through!
Widget, he's just a machine. While it'd be cool to have a robot Silvally on the team, I think this is just you and the issues towards Paradox you refuse to deal with
... Except Iron Enforcer tried gathering energy for an attack, only for its entire body to glow red and purple. Was it short-circuiting?
Widget dove down. But even with flames shooting from his tail turbine, the reshivally wasn't fast enough. Iron Enforcer exploded in a blaze of red and purple energy.
Is it just Silvally instinct to blow themselves up if they reach the end of their ropes? :sadwott:
Perhaps he'd have more time to chew on what happened with his robot counterpart later. For now, there was still a battle to be had.
This is gonna blow up in Widget's face, isn't it?\

Really enjoyed reading this chapter, especially the action. The way it was written really helped paint a picture of what was happening as I read along. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Kudos 💙
 
Chapter 148: Another Paradox to Unravel New

Ambyssin

Gotta go back. Back to the past.
Premium
Location
Residency hell
Pronouns
he/him
Partners
  1. silvally-dragon
  2. necrozma-ultra
  3. milotic
  4. zoroark-soda
  5. dreepy
  6. mewtwo-ambyssin
  7. vulpix-ambyssin
Chapter 148: Another Paradox to Unravel
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Cell missiles filled the air over Dazzels' wrecked buildings. Yuna blasted Dragon Darts at some of them, while black flames and a pink laser came in from Ifrit and Shiva on her right. Green explosions littered the air.

Iron Conqueror lay directly ahead of them. Its mechanical roar filled the air.

"I will cut you down like the pathetic weeds you are!" Paradox said. Iron Conqueror's serpentine ribbons fired blue-purple beams behind it. They went directly through rifts that then opened in front of Yuna and the birds.

But Jade had an Aeroblast at the ready. She swept the orange beam through the air, snuffing out each of the Dragon Pulses.

Yuna kicked the air with her legs as she flew forward. Giant Giratina legs struck Iron Conqueror from behind. It took a stumbling step forward, destroying the Parliament building's front gates.

"Why you—" Paradox growled. Iron Conqueror swiped its right hand. Glowing green lances raced toward Yuna. But a Hyper Beam came in from Yuna's left. Then a second. And a third. They snuffed out the Thousand Waves.

Bells rang through the sky, followed by slightly slurred slinging.

"The dragons be ferocious! Against the emperor who's atrocious!"

A couple of space pirate ships sailed into view, blasters and cannons trained on Iron Conqueror. Miraidon hovered behind the wheel of one of them, donning a black hat with a cubone skull and crossbones.

"This is the end for you, Paradox!" Miraidon shouted. "Give up now! It'll save everyone a lot of trouble!"

"Ridiculous!"

Iron Conqueror fired larger purple beams into rifts. Two opened by the pirate ships, which buckled in midair as their shields could barely block the strikes.

But two others opened right in front of Yuna. The dragapult whipped her arms forward. Two Giratina legs struck Iron Conqueror from behind again, while the birds broke formation to dodge the beams.

Yuna skirted by one herself. Reverse Time kicked in, so Yuna punched the air a few more times. Four more Giratina legs hit Iron Conqueror in succession from behind.

Again, the giant zygarde mech staggered forward. What was left of the brick wall in front of the Parliament building crumbled. Bricks and asphalt struck the marble fountain, denting the zacian statue sitting atop it.

"I don't know where you're getting these stupid powers of yours from, but it doesn't matter!" Paradox exclaimed. "You can't do anything more than displace Iron Conqueror! You're nothing but bugs splattering against the windshield of my greatness!"

"He's got a point," Cyril said through the X-transceiver. "From what I'm looking at, it doesn't seem like the armor's taken much damage. And that's with all the numbers we have on him!"

"Well, I'm open to suggestions!" Yuna was trying to stay positive. But if Giratina couldn't slow this thing down, then what else was she supposed to do? "Leo, now would be a great time to use that Judgment thingy of yours!"

Some static came through the X-transceiver line in response. Yuna frowned. Just how far away had Paradox sent Leo compared to the others? He must've seen the footage from Citidark and prepared accordingly.

Yuna's chest ectoplasm tightened around her core. She had to trust Leo could handle himself. Focus on this guy first.

"Ah!"
Noctum shouted. "I think I've got it!"

XxX​

The cosmic charizard rolled right, past an Ice Beam volley from a few Eternatus Gunners. From Noctum's right, Secret Sword beams whizzed past, destroying the bots and catapulting their unown pilots into the distance.

"Hurry up and say it!" Diamond galloped along an uneven concrete roof. The cosmic keldeo leaped onto the next building, slinging an Aura Sphere right and blowing off an Iron Jugulis' main head. The rest of the machine plummeted from the air, smokes and sparks trailing off its body.

"Calorimetry!" Noctum said, climbing higher into the air. Iron Conqueror wasn't too far now. Below him, Zacian, Zamazenta, and Valkyrie had stopped running ahead. They stood their ground, likely because they lacked effective attacks from this distance.

"We do the biggest calorimetry we can muster," Noctum continued. "Everyone sends Gene their best attacks! With all of us here, it's bound to pack an explosive punch!"

Zacian suddenly dashed forward, swinging her giant sword to cut down five Eternatus Brawlers.

"You won't hear any complaints from me!" she barked.

"Aye!" Zamazenta jumped onto her back, then leaped up and crashed into an Eternatus Bombardier. "What've we got to lose?" he added as he fell back to the ground.

"Well, Gene would need to agree to it." Cid tittered. "Is that— o-oh, he's gone already."

Noctum looked around for signs of a rift, only to nearly fall out of the air when a finger tapped his right shoulder. The cosmic charizard turned, tail flame sparking.

Gene pointed to Iron Conqueror. "We'll need to distract that thing."

Diamond skidded to a stop on a nearby building roof. "With what?"

Zacian and Zamazenta stepped forward.

"We can do it," Zacian said.

Zamazenta nodded. "This is the kind of thing we were made for."

Grishi blipped into the middle of them. "Grishi help close gap, then."

The zorotwo put a paw on each canine's shoulder and teleported them away. Noctum immediately spotted blurs slamming into Iron Conqueror's right knee.

"All right, then." Gene drifted away from Noctum and held his arms up. "Lend me your energy!"

"Duuuuude, you totally stole that one from Dragonite Ball!" Cyril scoffed.

Gene rolled his eyes. "Let me have this."

Noctum wasn't about to question it. He quickly gathered dragon energy along his arms then slung Spacial Rends toward Gene. Diamond followed with a Roar of Time right from his horn.

The mega mewtwo buckled in midair, but managed to catch the attacks in his psychic grip.

"A... all r... right! Now... the rest of you!"

XxX​

"Does he mean us?" Shimmer wondered, galloping across a road full of craters and scorch marks from all the fighting.

"Ha! I can't freaking hit that from down here!" Nikki said. "Let's just keep these assholes occupied!"

The toxtricity turned right and pinwheeled her right arm to strum her lightning guitar. An Overdrive zapped an Iron Jugulus swooping down to get the jump on them.

Igneous flew into the air, watching the ruins of Parliament to see if other robots would try to head toward them. But the coast was clear.

"Yeah, I can't hit it either," the grovlazzle conceded. "But you might, Shim. With that, uh, big ice spike attack."

"Glacial Lance?" Shimmer looked up. Gene was high in the air. "Worth a shot, I suppose."

The ponytales leveled his horn and unleashed the giant icicle. Igneous held his breath, only to exhale in relief when Gene's growing energy sphere sucked it up like some sort of black hole.

And then a Hyper Beam came in from a space pirate ship behind Gene. Followed by a second. And a third. The large energy cluster grew in size.

Igneous couldn't make out Gene's face at this distance, but he had to imagine maintaining it was a struggle.

XxX​

Yuna easily spotted a familiar mega mewtwo holding a giant, expanding ball of blue-purple energy off to her right. Which had to mean Iron Conqueror could spot it.

Yet there were blue and red blurs slamming into the giant zygarde robot. They didn't seem to be hurting it that much, but it was swinging its ribbons around wildly.

"Troopers! Get back here and protect your emperor! Get these ingrates away from me!"

Flashes of pink and orange came from Yuna's right. Shiva's Freezing Glare and Jade's Aeroblast joined with the other attacks. The ball of energy grew even larger. It trembled and shuddered in the air.

Yuna drew power out of her griseous core. Red and black energy swirled around her. It took the shape of a Giratina phantasm. Yuna thrust it forward, sending it toward the large energy bomb. She even spotted her mother and some Aeon troops adding blue-purple blasts to the mix. Even Vince contributed some dragon energy from a safe distance on a nearby building roof.

Dragon Pulses filled the air around Iron Conqueror. But the blue and red blurs kept blipping around Iron Conqueror, and the blasts sailed wide.

"Get... clear!" Gene shouted through the X-transceiver line.

Yuna took one look at the giant energy ball and heeded Gene's orders. She flew left, along with Ifrit, Jade, and Shiva. Quetzal zigzagged down a city street, orange sparks trailing behind him. She chose to focus on intercepting Eternatus Gunners and Bombardiers flying toward Iron Conqueror.

Dragon Darts filled the air, destroying several Gunners. Ifrit and Shiva added black flames and pink beams. Then an Aeroblast swept across the sky, downing a dozen Gunners.

The dragapult kept stealing glances at Gene. She really hoped this calorimetry bomb would work.

XxX​

Gene's arms trembled. His shoulder crystals rattled in place. He thought they might even dislodge.

The energy was overwhelming! Every muscle in Gene's body ached. The back of his head burned.

Dark Matter wasn't interjecting. Instead, it funneled every bit of energy it shared with Gene to keep the energy ball stable.

Fortunately, Zacian and Zamazenta remained a perfect distraction. Iron Conqueror hadn't tried attacking him. And no Eternatus Troopers interfered, either.

"Nnnggggrrrr! I've had enough of your foolish games!"

Iron Conqueror raised its arms up. Gene didn't know what it was preparing. Which meant now was the time.

Gritting his teeth, the mega mewtwo shoved the massive energy ball forward with a pulse of ESP. He floated in place, arms outstretched to keep pushing whatever psionics he could. Even though his arms wanted to pop out of his shoulders and wither away.

"What?! What is this! No... nooooooo!"

To Gene's delight and relief, the energy ball slammed into Iron Conqueror. A massive blue purple explosion erupted around the Parliament building. The shockwave created a torrent of dust and debris chunks that rippled in all directions. Its force catapulted Gene backwards. The dust storm raced to meet him.

Breathing heavily, Gene's face scrunched up. He barely managed to get a rift open, sending him crashing onto a bed in the middle of the arena platform. Startled cries and gasps came from all around him.

He was vaguely aware of auras scurrying about, with others lying in place. Gene lifted his head. Various monk healers tended to a handful of dragons and space pirates. Some lucario and mienshao here. A couple of gothitelle there. That gardevoir they'd taken from Citadark was even healing a dragonite a few beds over.

"Gene?" Artemis called. The cosmic milotic slithered over, starcloud ribbons curling up. "What happened? Are you hurt?" He looked over his shoulder. "Scarlett, get over here! Gene—"

"Elixirs," Gene rasped. "Not hurt. Just... spent. From a crazy big attack."

Artemis blinked slowly. Then he waved Scarlett over with a ribbon. The dragonair pushed over a basket with several elixirs in it. Gene grabbed two bottles. He quickly chugged the first one.

"Cyril, what's the situation?" Gene said.

"There's too much smoke to make anything out," Cyril said. "But I'm not seeing Paradox's robot attacking."

"Great." Gene chugged the other elixir, then dropped both empty bottles to the ground. "Then I'm heading back out."

"Are the others okay?" Scarlett fluttered her wings nervously. "Do we need to get Starlene in there?"

"Not yet." Gene sprang to his feet. He opened a rift and floated through, reappearing in the exact same midair spot overlooking the Parliament building.

... Or, rather, the crater that was left of it. A crater filled with broken remnants of Iron Conqueror. Giant chunks of black and green metal lay strewn about. Motor oil and strange purple fluids dribbled onto the ground.

"Don't get cocky," Dark Matter said. "Can you feel that nearby anger?"

The lingering smoke vanished in an intense psychic wind. Gene drifted back, throwing up his right arm.

Paradox floated above the wreckage of his machine. His right tentacles coiled tightly around the Rift Ripper. In fact, his tentacles melted into the device and wormed their way toward the Mind Plate powering it.

"Mewtwo," Paradox said. "You have... escaped your exile. Aha ha. Ha. Ha."

Red energy flickered in the deoxys' chest. Undoubtedly from his Red Chain fragment.

And it caused a reaction with the Rift Ripper! The device fused to Paradox's tentacles. Then Paradox began absorbing it. Bit by bit, the Rift Ripper dissolved into Paradox's body.

"The hell?" Gene conjured his giant spoon. He whispered into his X-transceiver, "Everyone get over to the Parliament building! Paradox isn't out of tricks yet. And where the hell is Leo?"

"Do you think you've won here?" Paradox said.

Smirking, Gene shrugged. "I mean... we're thinning your troops and we beat your big bad bot. So, we're making progress."

"You stupid, naive rebel." Paradox drifted back. A pink glow overtook his body. "You haven't won anything."

His right tentacles coiled into an arm that he held up. "I will send you to the darkest, most remote depths of reality and have you suffer in ways so unimaginable, I cannot even speak them!"

Gene responded by tossing his spoon forward like a tomahawk. Paradox whipped his left tentacles. Psychic blades effortlessly cleaved through the spoon.

Pink energy collected around Paradox's right hand. "Begone, Mewtwo!"

Just when it looked like a rift was going to open, a blue-purple laser twice Paradox's size fired from the ground, forcing him to dive down and land atop the tallest piece of rubble.

Gene looked down and spotted Widget in his original eternavally form skidding to a stop at the edge of the crater.

"You won't be doing anything like that!" he bellowed.

"What? What is this?"

Gene's starcloud tail twitched. He felt it too. It was like someone draped a warm towel over him.

"I've anchored my friends' souls!" Widget declared. "Your dirty tricks won't work this time!"

"You?" Paradox's eyes widened. "This is impossible! I destroyed you for your incompetence! How are you working with the rebels?!"

"Heh." Gene rubbed the bridge of his snout. "Guess you weren't as 'in control' of things as you thought."

"Enough!" Paradox shot into the air. Pink and purple energy gathered around his hands. "I will call in all of my Troopers! All of my Terraformers!" His eyes twitched. "You. Will. BOW BEFORE PARADOX!"

The deoxys surged into the air, opening rifts at a breakneck pace. First ten. Then twenty. Then fifty.

Eternatus Troopers poured out by the hundreds. A couple dozen more Eternatus Terraformers filled the sky. Cracks spread through the air. The ground trembled. Widget looked around in a panic.

Paradox was putting the world under even more strain!

All the machines took aim at Gene from a distance. Paradox pointed to him.

"Annihilate this filthy rebel!" he shouted.

Gene braced himself to flee into a rift, when suddenly beams of golden light filled the sky, blasting apart Eternatus Troopers by the dozens. Even one of the Terraformers taking aim blew up in an expanding blue-purple fireball, forcing others around it to break off.

"What?" Paradox looked up. "No! Impossible! What is the meaning of this?!"

Giant giratina limbs then appeared overhead, knocking away more troopers. A cosmic charizard weaved between them, sweeping blue flames through several Eternatus Gunners.

"Leo's back!" Yuna said.

"He seems a bit dazed," Noctum added. "And he's not saying anything. But I bet it's because he's trying to focus!"

"Ah, he's going off on his own."
Yuna sighed. "I'm worried about him, but there are too many troops to stay together. Leave them to us!"

"Yeah, you focus on Paradox,"
Noctum exclaimed. "Let's end this!"

Gene looked back at Paradox, smirking. Despite the ground still shaking, Widget had firm footing.

"Game over, bud." The mega mewtwo pointed at him. "You could save everyone a lot of trouble if you give up and hand over your little toys."

Paradox's right eye twitched again. "Me? Surrender? Aha ha ha ha ha ha!" Pink energy swirled around him. "Never! This is my universe to rule!"

"Scarlett, gimme a beat," Gene whispered.

Triumphant orchestral music blared through his X-transceiver as Paradox flew into the air and unleashed a pink beam half the size of the crater. Widget ran right to dodge, while Gene Phantom Warped to the left.

But Paradox teleported right next to Gene and struck him with pink blades jutting out of his right tentacles. Gene fell from the air, barely stopping himself from crashing into what was left of the road.

"Aha ha! Aha ha ha ha!" Paradox flew back over Iron Conqueror's remains. "This... this is no defeat! This is a glorious welcoming committee!"

The air filled with pink psychic lances. Paradox hurled them at Gene. He floated forward, weaving through the lances as they slammed into the concrete.

"You love me!" Paradox blurted out between his unhinged laughter. "You all love me!"

Gene slung two Shadow Balls toward Paradox, but the deoxys teleported a few meters above them. He opened another rift over his head. The ruins grew tremendously hot.

"The hell?" Gene fanned himself with his hand. He noticed Widget scrambling back toward the remains of the complex's outer wall.

"I am the destined emperor of this dimension!" Paradox's tentacles glowed pink. "No, of every dimension!"

Gene's eyes widened. Fiery meteors surrounded by psionics cascaded from the rift.

"Knock it off!" Gene shouted, soaring higher in the air to avoid the meteors. They rained upon the ruins, leaving fiery explosions in their wake. Strong enough for Gene to completely lose sight of Widget.

"Don't you see what's happened?" he continued, gesturing around him. "Your rifts are collapsing the dimension you want to rule so badly! Hell, at this rate you could collapse countless dimensions!"

"Oh no!" Paradox rested his left hand against his forehead as if he was about to faint in dramatic fashion. "Countless boring dimensions collapsing upon each other?" He fired another augmented Psycho Boost at Gene. "GOOD! That will make them even easier to conquer!"

Gene Phantom Warped down. He rifled off a Shadow Ball that struck Paradox's left leg. Paradox buckled in midair.

A thin, blue-purple beam pierced through the smoke underneath Gene and Paradox. The deoxys plummeted from the air, screaming. He crashed into one of Iron Conqueror's flaming chunks of rubble.

"You're not conquering anything!" Widget shouted. The eternavally stood atop a fragment of brick wall that wasn't ablaze. He shifted to miraivally mode and took to the air to join Gene.

"Rrrrrrrrgggh." Paradox got up. His left leg and left tentacles were missing. But his core glowed red and the limbs regenerated in streams of pink light.

"Imbecile. Did you forget his regenerating abilities?" Dark Matter said.

No, Gene mentally scoffed. We just have to get at his core and make sure that won't work.

"How dare you talk down to me, W1-DG3T!" Paradox snarled. He unleashed another giant pink beam, focused on Widget. "I am your emperor! Your creator!"

Widget shifted to reshivally and met the pink beam with a stream of Blue Flare. It dulled the attack enough for Widget to fly above what was left.

"My name is Widget!" he barked. "And you are not my emperor!"

"Ridiculous!" Paradox blipped a few meters back. He opened another rift. A tidal wave rolled out from the rift, forcing Widget and Gene to break off in opposite directions.

"I am Illustrious Ultimate Supreme Grand Emperor Paradox... the Great!" the deoxys bellowed as the wave crashed over the Parliament building's ruins, snuffing out the flames and leaving a wall of steam behind. "Y-Yes! The Great! I am doing such a good job with you pathetic whelps that I've given myself another promotion!"

Gene channeled Dark Matter's power from his core. Black and red energy shrouded his body. He thrust his hands down.

From the opposite side of Paradox, Widget spewed a Fusion Flare. Paradox pivoted right to snuff the massive fireball out with an intense Psychic burst.

That gave Gene the opening he needed. He spread his hands apart. Dark spikes skewered Paradox from below. They sliced through his legs and tentacles. And some struck the deoxys' red core.

Paradox's screams filled the air. Widget capitalized on the opening and shot another Fusion Flare forward. The large fireball struck Paradox, knocking him out of the sky. Gene shot after the smoky trail Paradox left behind.

But by the time he got close to the far edge of the crater, Paradox had blipped to the opposite end.

"T-Troopers!" he cried, his body slowly regenerating. "Come! Protect your emperor!"

Gene desperately tossed two Shadow Balls across the crater, only for Paradox to blip away again. Somewhere behind a large chunk of rubble to the left of where he'd been.

Multiple Iron Moth and Iron Jugulis filled the sky. They took aim at Gene and Widget with toxins and fierce winds.

But a Glacial Lance came in from below, upending an Iron Jugulis. Then Fiery Dance fireballs struck another Jugulis, followed by a beam of tachyons blowing apart the remaining robots.

"Keep it up!" Shimmer called over the X-transceiver.

"With pleasure." Smirking, Gene held up his right arm. He levitated the piece of rubble Paradox was hiding behind and tried to squish him with it. But Paradox, now fully restored, countered with his own ESP.

The stalemate blew the rubble apart into dust and debris. Thankfully, Widget had closed the gap with Paradox and punished the deoxys with a Blue Flare from above.

Snarling, Paradox teleported high into the air. "How dare you attack me!" He opened another rift overhead. A large metal thorn jabbed Widget from below, knocking the reshivally from the air.

Gene seized the opening. He thrust his arms down again. More dark spikes skewered a screaming Paradox. This time, Gene held the spikes in place. Paradox gathered pink energy around what was left of his body. A psychic explosion spread out from where he was. Pink light chewed through the dark spikes. Gene raised his arms and wrung them out.

Another Fusion Flare came in from the right, blowing Paradox back and into a tangle of mental wires that was once some sort of fence. Widget climbed onto a chunk of Iron Conqueror debris and shifted back to eternavally.

"I think another big beam can get him down to his core!" he shouted. "Don't stop pressuring him!"

Saluting, Gene shot forward. But Paradox was already regenerating.

"Get away from me!" the deoxys cried, flinging pink energy balls around willy nilly. Gene Phantom Warped through several, then swatted two more aside with his giant spoon. Dark energy sheathed the spoon. Gene tried to slash Paradox with it, only to whiff when Paradox teleported several meters back.

"Finally showing your true colors, huh?" Gene taunted. "Deep down, you're nothing more than an illustrious ultimate supreme grand emperor of cowardice!"

"I am not!" Paradox snarled. Most of his body had regenerated. "Troopers! Troopers, get over here and help me show these brutes my real true colors!"

But the sky was full of golden and blue-purple explosions. Gene couldn't make out a single Eternatus Trooper or Terraformer nearby. The others clearly had a handle on this.

Paradox's eyes twitched. "You cannot defeat me!" he bellowed, opening two rifts on either side of him.

Big, ethereal tentacles appeared and swatted indiscriminately at the air. Eyes wide, Gene flew back. He pulled up, Phantom Warping to avoid one of the tentacles.

"I am the essence of evolution!" Paradox continued ranting. "The essence of life itself! I'm not some failed prototype! I'm the emperor! I conquered the entire Qliphoth! I subdued everyone! It was me! Me! ME!"

"Nobody cares!" Gene shouted. He Phantom Warped forward, then fired two black spears in the direction of Paradox's shouting. The deoxys blipped left of one, but the second struck him in the torso.

"Get away from me!" Paradox screeched as his rifts shut and the tentacles went away.

Gene refused to let him regenerate or retaliate. He thrashed his arms around, using the black thread attached to the spear to fling Paradox around. Gene slammed him into part of a mangled fence. Then the ground. Then a chunk of building rubble. Paradox grunted with every strike.

The mega mewtwo caught a blue-purple gleam to his right. Widget's giant beam was charged.

"I... nrrrrgggh... you can't stop me!" Paradox managed to wriggle free.

"Damn it," Gene muttered, watching black mist evaporate. Paradox glared at him, then surged up into the air. High enough to where Widget's beam wouldn't do much.

"Aha ha... aha ha ha ha!" Paradox's body glowed bright. "If... if I can't have this dimension, then nobody can! I will collapse it into nothingness! Then go on to conquer the rest of the universes on my own!"

The air warped around him. A strange buzz filled the air. Gene's eyes widened in alarm.

"Prepare yourself, Mewtwo!" Paradox said through his unhinged laughter. "This is the end for all of you! Ś̵̨̅̏Ả̶͉͈Ȳ̵̧̪͑ ̴̮͙͑͘Ğ̵̦͙̀O̴̟͂O̷̳̠̐̌D̶̝̤͛B̶̲̞̫̔̈́Y̷̫̜͉̐̇̅E̸̫͙͒̊̊!̵͉̤̊͑̈́"

Gene had to act. He surged higher into the air, conjuring his spoon. Gene funneled as much dark energy from his core into it as he could manage. He flew past Paradox. Gene wound up with the spoon.

The distorted energy buzzing around Paradox sliced into Gene's skin. Tore gashes along his arms and legs. But Gene held tough. With a strained growl, he swung the spoon with all his might. It broke through Paradox's psychic field, smushing the deoxys' face.

"Now, Widget!" Gene cried.

With one last push, Gene used his spoon to spike Paradox out of the air. He tumbled toward the crater. And toward Widget, who stood atop a chunk of Iron Conqueror's remains.

"The only end here is yours!" Widget declared.

An Eternabeam filled the air. Gene had forced Paradox into the perfect position. He held Paradox in place as the laser washed over him, muffling his screams. Bits of blue and orange drifted past Gene. He felt his black thread slacken and dispelled it.

As the beam died down, Gene quickly dove toward the ground. He couldn't give Paradox any opening to wriggle out of this. Gene stretched his right hand out and focused as much psychic energy as he could.

There!

Gene found a psychic aura to grab onto. Sure enough, he pulled Paradox's core up through the smoke left over from Widget's attack. The eternavally hopped across more pieces of rubble until he was over on Gene's left.

"̸͙̰͑N̵̪͔͔̆õ̶̬̞!̴͇̱̈́̓̃ ̷̦̘̳͐͝T̴̥̉̋̄h̵͙̪͈̏i̵̙͌̎̿s̶̡̲̭̽ ̷͕̘̈́î̵̥̥̫͋ŝ̷̨̤ ̷̨͓̱͆̒̀ì̵͙̓m̶͇̆͂p̵̡̠̌o̸̰̝͊̍̍s̴͚̻͛̓͒š̴̗i̵͕̳̞͋̄b̶̹̚͝ḽ̶́͒̄e̶͙͚͊̆̒!̴͈͔̇̋͑"̴͙̓ Paradox's core twitched in Gene's psychic grasp. "̷͈͛I̴̠̎͠ ̸̤̤̅c̴͖̘̯̓̿́a̴͖͙͍̒͘n̷͔̚n̷̰͍͗̏ô̶͔t̵̳̮̼͒̽ ̸̟̎l̴̢̻͚͂o̸̬͘ș̸̡̾e̴͔̬͂ͅ ̴̢͙͇̾͗t̷̮͕̓͊̂ŏ̸̥̑͠ ̶̣̺̑̾y̵̤͇͇̍́o̵̰̚ȕ̸͇̙̪̌͝!̵͓̗̏̈́͌ ̶̩̹͗Ȋ̷̹̬ ̷̰̪̜̉͌́ñ̷͉̮͖̎e̵̫͂̄v̶̙͎̖̒é̶̡̡̛̲r̵̨͙͓̄ ̵̛̣͉͜͠l̸̫̹̔̃͜o̸͚̻̯̔̚s̵͖̻̕͜e̵̩̣͍̽͌͘!̷̹̄̿ ̵̪͊͌̋Î̵̫͉ ̴̺͆ͅa̴͙͍̿m̵̧̗͚̀ ̵͖͘i̵̠͈̹͑̏̈́ṇ̴̳͓͆v̶̯̋i̸͔̒̀̕n̸̥͓̋̊̈c̷̥͚̰̾̈́i̶̐͌̌ͅb̵̫̰̼̏l̴̟̪̯̽̅̉e̶̞̭͆!̸̬͔͖̏̽̊ ̵͉̿͒Ī̵̮̘̀ ̴͉͎̌̇̉a̷̘̥͊ͅm̸͓͔̼̾͝ ̸̧̳̌á̴͍l̶̳̹͗͝l̷̝͉̺͂͐́-̴͖̉̈́̎p̷̹̾o̸̼͉̱̐̕̕w̵͎͗̚͠ę̶̧̜͒̃̚r̴̻͎̱̽f̷͚̬̬̊̿͠ũ̸̺̕l̸̘͓̓!̸̧̼́̕"̴̨̽͊̍

"You keep telling yourself that," Gene scoffed. "We'll just consider these your last words. Annoying as always."

"̶̳̌T̸̞̊h̵́͜i̴͈͌s̷̬̋ ̵̲̈́i̴̠͠s̷̼͗n̸̙̑'̶̨͂t̵̞͑ ̴͓̅t̴̛̘h̷̟̀e̵̻̊ ̷̨̾e̷̪̍n̶̜̽d̶͕̿!̴̭̆"̷̇͜ Paradox's core sparked with energy. "I̸̱̊t̸͇́'̸̠̚l̸̞̇ļ̵͂ never b̴̡̃ě̶̘ť̶̪ ̴͓̃t̴͖̚h̵̜͐e̵̮͋ ̷̗͑e̶̜̐n̶̬͝ḏ̸͐!̸̗͝ ̵̻͝M̵̢̾y̷̼͝ ̶͒͜E̴̖͌t̷͈̀e̸̝̓ř̵̝ṋ̸͘a̵̳͘ ̵̱̎E̷͉̎ḿ̴̝p̸̖̍ȉ̷͓r̶̦̂e̸͗͜ ̷͍̕w̸̫͘i̵̬̍l̴̰̊l̷̻̏ ̶͙̇p̵̝̈́e̵͓͠r̴̳̀s̵̥͝i̵͕͐ș̶͛t̵̛̗ ̷̩̀f̶͍͛o̴̺̍r̴̉ͅ ̷̪̔â̵͖l̴̤̔l̸̰͒ ̴͕͝ť̵͇i̵̯̎m̸̨̍ë̵̹́!̷͍̋ It will—"

Gene's starcloud tail twitched. He Phantom Warped backwards seconds before a steel blade cleaved Paradox's core in two, stopping the deoxys mid-sentence.

"What the hell?!" Gene looked around in confusion, only to watch the freed Mind Plate and Red Chain fragment rocket into the air.

"Hey!" he shouted. The mega mewtwo was about to fly after them, when he noticed a golden sheen overhead. Both the Mind Plane and Red Chain fragment disappeared into the sheen, which soon faded to reveal a cosmic arceus standing in midair.

"It's just Leo," Widget said, craning his neck. "Guess he really wanted those back?" Shifting back into his cosmic form, he waved a foreleg. "Heeeeeey, Leo! Nice work up there!"

But Leo didn't respond. In fact, when Gene looked closer, he noticed Leo's eyes were hollow. And there was a strange, static thrum around his wheel.

Yuna had said Leo seemed dazed. And he wasn't talking, either.

Gene's eyes widened. His core burned in his chest. "No way..."

"He kept fighting to ensure he got the plate and fragment," Dark Matter said. "But in truth, Zodiark already claimed him. We've failed."

Not yet!

Gritting his teeth, Gene shot into the air. However, he only got a few meters higher before smacking into a static barrier.

"Leo!" Gene conjured his spoon and swung wildly at the air. Each time, it bounced off static and an off-pitch hum filled the air. "Leo, knock it off!"

"What's going on?"

Noctum flew toward Gene, with Diamond on his back. Yuna caught up to them. Horror spread across the dragapult's face.

"LEO!" she shouted, punching and kicking furiously at the air. Giratina limbs did nothing but strike static. More off-key hums rang out.

That was when Gene spotted a familiar figure floating behind Leo. Zodiark gazed at them with an empty expression.

"Was I not clear before?" Zodiark raised his right arm. Eighteen plates appeared around him and Leo. "Your claim to these was only temporary."

Yuna snarled. Black tendrils emerged from her back and slashed furiously in Zodiark's direction, only to clang off the static barrier each time.

"Now begins the new age of prosperity," Zodiark declared. He held up both arms. Dreamweaver appeared behind him via a rift, alongside twenty different ethereal cards.

The cards stacked atop one another, then merged into a single card. Intense pressure knocked the wind out of Gene.

"Now begins the Eternaverse."

Zodiark absorbed the card. He thrust his arms down. Blue light funneled out from Dreamweaver, washing across Leo.

"Leo, no!" Yuna flew forward, only to run into the barrier. "Fight back! You have to fight back! Remember what you said before!" She slammed the barrier repeatedly to no avail. "C'mon Leo! Please!"

"Your words cannot reach him," Zodiark said as Dreamweaver completely absorbed the cosmic arceus. With that, crystals encased its head. A full crystal arceus stood before them.

"It is over, Yaldabaoth." Zodiark briefly smirked at her. "At long last, you have lost."

Then, over Yuna's roars, Zodiark and Dreamweaver vanished in a blinding flash of white light. When Gene's vision returned, he could only watch a Spacial Rend crescent sail through the empty air.

And it was empty. Gone were all the Eternatus Troopers and remaining Terraformers. There were still space pirate ships back over the city, but they remained stationary. Some pokémon on the decks pointed up, where a strange turquoise green spread across the sky, even blotting out Eternatus.

"What... what just happened?" Noctum looked around in a panic. "I don't understand. We were doing so great!" His tail flame sparked erratically. "How did Zodiark get here? How did he get to Leo?"

"The robot," Diamond muttered. His starry mane and tail had dimmed. "It scattered many of us. I bet that's when it happened."

They both looked at Yuna, who stared into space. Her arms trembled. Chaos energy sparked around her core.

"It can't be over," she whispered. "It can't." Yuna shot Gene a desperate look. "What do we do?"

Snout scrunching up, Diamond watched the turquoise spreading across the sky. "What can we do?"

The three looked at Gene. Because, like it or not, the mega mewtwo was still in charge.

"I, uh..." Gene's starcloud tail twitched up.

"There's nothing we can do," Dark Matter said. "Nothing except wait for our collective demise at Zodiark's hands. We got too complacent. Expected another mystery dungeon to appear to lead us to him. And now we're out of options. We—"

Gene squeezes his eyes shut. He sucked in a breath. The shadows receded into his core. He met the others' gazes.

"Let's gather everyone else by what's left of the fountain." Gene pointed toward the ruined courtyard. "We'll heal up, then try to make a plan."

The others stayed silent, until they slowly nodded one by one. Noctum and Yuna turned and flew away, focusing mostly on the sky.

Gene took another breath and looked up.

It can't be too late. There's gotta be something left.

XxX

~Il Paradigma, No. IV: Paradox, the Emperor~
A flawed prototype for a deoxys army that Matriarch designed to replace the type: fulls after N0-V4's disappearance. The prototype was placed into stasis after failing to display the proper form changes that Matriarch intended it to utilize. With Matriarch's destruction, the prototype escaped confinement and wrestled control of this Paradigm fragment from its previous holder. He proceeded to bring the entirety of Eternatus under his control, beginning a reign that would span generations.

XxX​

Path of Valor Almanac
The Emperor is the fourth tarot card in the Major Arcana. In the upright position it represents leadership, responsibility, structure, stability, and protection. In the reverse position it represents tyranny, rigidity, abuse of power, authority struggles, or difficulties establishing order.

The chapter title is a direct callback to Guiding Light, which contained a sort of "rival" exploration team to the main group going by the name Team Paradox. When the main characters fought against them, the chapter title was "A Paradox to Unravel."

 

BlizzardBricks

Starry-Eyed Replier
Pronouns
He/Him

Chapter 148

A couple of space pirate ships sailed into view, blasters and cannons trained on Iron Conqueror. Miraidon hovered behind the wheel of one of them, donning a black hat with a cubone skull and crossbones.
Part of me wants to believe that's the same pirate hat Yuna wore back in the Chapter 136 artwork :mewlulz:
Some static came through the X-transceiver line in response. Yuna frowned. Just how far away had Paradox sent Leo compared to the others? He must've seen the footage from Citidark and prepared accordingly.

Yuna's chest ectoplasm tightened around her core. She had to trust Leo could handle himself. Focus on this guy first.
Yuna! C'mon girl, you know something wrong. Wouldn't Leo have some witty zoomer phrase to say to Paradox?
"We do the biggest calorimetry we can muster," Noctum continued. "Everyone sends Gene their best attacks! With all of us here, it's bound to pack an explosive punch!"
"Duuuuude, you totally stole that one from Dragonite Ball!" Cyril scoffed.
Lmao, I was totally visualizing this as the scene in the Broly movie, where Goku takes everyone's energy (Also, is calorimetry a word? First time I can recall reading it)
Dark Matter wasn't interjecting. Instead, it funneled every bit of energy it shared with Gene to keep the energy ball stable.
:quag:
And it caused a reaction with the Rift Ripper! The device fused to Paradox's tentacles. Then Paradox began absorbing it. Bit by bit, the Rift Ripper dissolved into Paradox's body.
:screm:
"Leo's back!" Yuna said.

"He seems a bit dazed," Noctum added. "And he's not saying anything. But I bet it's because he's trying to focus!"
If I had a nickel for every time the villain corrupts one of the main characters and uses them before revealing themselves, I'd have two nickels

I've fallen for this trick once already! I see through your lies Zodiark! (/j)
"My name is Widget!" he barked. "And you are not my emperor!"
Hell yeah! Let's go Widget! :wowzard:
"I am the essence of evolution!" Paradox continued ranting. "The essence of life itself! I'm not some failed prototype! I'm the emperor! I conquered the entire Qliphoth! I subdued everyone! It was me! Me! ME!"
Sure buddy. Deep down, you know you are wrong. Why else do you keep padding your title in a desperate need to prove yourself superior?
Gene's starcloud tail twitched. He Phantom Warped backwards seconds before a steel blade cleaved Paradox's core in two, stopping the deoxys mid-sentence.
Insert Undertale hit sound effect here
"Your words cannot reach him," Zodiark said as Dreamweaver completely absorbed the cosmic arceus. With that, crystals encased its head. A full crystal arceus stood before them.
Insert every scared emote here
:sadwott:
How are they supposed to stop Zodiark now? What plan could Gene come up with, since it seems Zodiark has all they need to kick off their plan. Unless it requires time to gather energy? Really curious to see how everyone will react to what just happened. Also, I love Yuna's reaction. I've missed her interactions as Leo's mother, so this was a treat, seeing her go beserk.

Loved reading this chapter and imagining the action throughout it. It was so well written and fun to read! Listening to Heart Chamber while reading Gene gathering up energy was so much fun. In my opinon, it helped build up the stakes and emphasize just how powerful Paradox was, especially as the song reached the creshendo as Gene unleashed the attack. Amazing stuff. (I guess I lucked out by the song reaching that moment as I read those paragraphs lol)

But that ending man... I hope everyone comes out of this last arc okay. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Kudos! 💙
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. growlithe
  6. quilava-fobbie
  7. sneasel-kate
  8. heliolisk-fobbie
  9. axew-irune
Alright, I've fallen off the wagon for this story long enough. It's the season to be reviewing and I've got a bit of time tonight, so let's try and fix things with a readthrough of:

Chapter 122

The mountain was utter bedlam. A cacophony of frantic shouts. Black blurs zipped across the ground, while large beams or energy blasts split the air open. The summoned silvally greatly outnumbered the resistance members, but Yuna's teammates had bigger attacks. Flashier, too.

Yuna couldn't pay it any mind, however. Because Dreamweaver's attention remained firmly fixed on her. The dragapult spun away from two Ice Beams. She tucked her head into her chest, giving her just the right angle to shoot two Dragon Darts at the crystal arceus.

Wouldn't have expected that music track from a fantasy-based FF game, but it certainly fits the moment here.

A crystal shield materialized and blocked the Darts. Then a clang rang out. The crystal shield flew toward Yuna. With a startled meep, she zipped to her right. Reverse time kicked in as she passed by the shield. She launched two pairs of Dragon Darts, but kept flying to try and get behind Dreamweaver.

So wait, not that this isn't incredibly fitting for something meant to mainline Bayonetta vibes, but does Giratina in this setting have some degree of control over time and space itself? Since I'm just realizing that Yuna's Bayo-style attacks lean on some combination of both to wield them.

When time returned to normal, it stood in midair and took the Dragon Darts. Its right foreleg buckled slightly. But any satisfaction Yuna could get from doing damage dissolved away when Dreamweaver's hind legs turned blue. A furious snowstorm blew through the air behind Dreamweaver.

Yuna couldn't get out of the way. The frosty air knocked her back toward the altar while slowing the rippling in her ectoplasm. As if in response, blue flames crackled around her griseous core, immediately warming Yuna up. She quickly righted herself and funneled those flames toward her horns. She shot Blue Flares at Dreamweaver, who countered with another Blizzard. The ice turned the flames aside, filling the air with fog that even obscured the fighting down below.

Cecil: "Thank you, thank you. I'll be here all day."
:blepshiram:
Yuna: "Reshiram, save the commentary for sometime when I'm not fighting for my life right now, would you?" >_>;

"Yours is a futile struggle," Dreamweaver said. "Your fate is sealed, Yaldabaoth."

Have you ever considered that you're just a defeatist, Crystal Volo? Since there wouldn't be almost 30 chapters after this moment in the story if things were just genuinely that hopeless.

Growling, Yuna focused on her griseous core. She swiped the air. Two of Giratina's legs appeared beside Dreamweaver. Yuna tried to crush it, but two crystal hexagons appeared and pushed back against her legs. Grunting, she pushed her hands together. Dreamweaver's barriers held firm.

"R... Ray..."

Emerald light crackled in her core. Rayquaza shot out like a brilliant green arrow. His Dragon Ascent struck Dreamweaver's wispy head. Yet its shields held up. The Giratina legs vanished. Yuna switched tactics, shooting four Dragon Darts from her horns. Behind Dreamweaver, Rayquaza whipped up a furious wind tunnel.

Dreamweaver stood there. A salmon sheen rippled over its crystal body. Yuna's Dragon Darts harmlessly splattered against Dreamweaver's torso.

Bruh. Just how on earth are they supposed to land a hit on that thing? Talking about their life aspirations?

"Wait, what?" Reshiram's tail flickered orange. "But those worked before! What gives?"

"I think they're changing types," Diancie muttered. "Like Leo does."

Ah yes, side effects of yoinking the power of heaven-knows-how-many cosmic llamas, I presume.

Yuna swallowed hard. How was she supposed to fight against that?

Cecil: "Well, we could take our author's recommendation to start talking about our life aspirations-"
:reshipensive:

Yuna: "Reshiram, I am not desperate enough to try and take a desperation gambit from Digimon! People didn't even like that season's climax!" >_>;

"I told you this struggle is futile," Dreamweaver said. It fired Ice Beams from its hind legs to force Rayquaza away. Then light blue washed over its crystal legs.

Fearing another ice attack, Yuna recalled Rayquaza and summoned Diancie. Dreamweaver was faster, however. In the blink of an eye it appeared right in front of Yuna. She tried conjuring a Giratina wing to parry Dreamweaver, only for a point-blank Blizzard to blow her away. Ectoplasm stinging from the cold, Yuna tumbled through the air. Her screams echoed across the mountaintop.

:bidoof~2:


Well, that sounded painful.

She thought she heard someone calling out to her, but couldn't quite make it out. Her body jolted from a hard strike from behind. Then bright sunlight surrounded her... from the village outside Mount Coronet.

Yuna: "... Ow."
:riplup:


Dreamweaver had hit her so hard she'd broken through the mountaintop's crystal dome. And Dreamweaver floated inside the hole, blocking her path back.

Yuna finally caught herself in midair. She clutched her stinging right shoulder.

"Submit," Dreamweaver said.

"Never!" Yuna spat. She slammed her arms down. Two Giratina legs struck Dreamweaver from above.

I have to wonder how much of that is Yuna vs. Yaldabaoth since boy is that different from the way she started this story out as. I do wonder if it would've been worth showing a bit more of Yuna's thought process before she digs in there in spite of bad-looking odds, though.

"Shit!"

Nikki's cry almost got Igneous to stop and look over his shoulder. But he kept his attention in front of him, conjuring fireballs from his wings to deflect Air Slash crescents two silvally tried to slice him up with.

A third silvally ran in from his left. Igneous' wings carried him over a swipe of Silvally's talons.

Huh. Does FF16 have something along the lines of FF9's Crystal World or something like that? Since I was not expecting songs with more electronic riffs like that.

"What is it?" the grovlazzle shouted. Nikki was over to his right, running from a couple more silvally with brown glowing parts. Scarlett flew overhead in a panic, peppering them with bits of dragonfire.

"Didn't you see it?" The toxtricity pivoted, waving her arms around. She slammed her chest gills. A Boomburst rippled out in all directions, knocking the silvally away. Igneous tried to shoot Bullet Seeds at them from above, but the flying-type silvally he'd been grappling with blew his seeds apart with an Air Slash volley.

"See what?" Igneous spun around, launching fireballs from his volcarona wings. His Fiery Dance scattered the flying-type silvally. Any relief turned to annoyance when two of them began flying after him. Somehow, they'd conjured wind underneath their legs to... run through the air.

Wait, wait, wait. He can do that?

Nikki: "Great situational awareness there, Twiggy. But since I have to spell things out for you..."
:gardexhausted:


"Princess!" Nikki shouted. She was getting farther as Igneous climbed higher. He showered fireballs on the silvally. It was enough to force them back.

"You struggle in vain," they said in unison.

Igneous ignored them. "What about Yuna?" he called, diving back down. Nikki was back to running away. She jumped toward one of the broken pillars and managed to cling on for dear life. Three ground silvally charged toward her, dirt swirling around their chitinous forelegs. Igneous spat Bullet Seeds at them. This time, the flying-type silvally couldn't catch him.

Nikki:
Image

Igneous: "Look, I'm sorry, everyone's busy trying not to die here!" >_>;

"She got blown off the mountain!" Having managed to climb atop the broken pillar, Nikki pointed to the dome on the opposite side. A quick glance revealed a massive hole. Sunlight spilled in through it.

"Shit!" Igneous's head leaf crackled. Then he caught a flurry of motion out of the corner of his eye and threw up a Protect. One silvally's talons clanged against it. His shield went down and it looked as though the other flying silvally would get him from his right side.

Nikki's going to come in for the save here, isn't she? Though I'm kinda of two minds about this battle choreography. Like on the one hand, I get that extended battle sequences aren't really your thing anymore as a writer, but I do wonder if getting a bit more detailed with the battle from Igneous' perspective up to this point would've leaned in harder with the idea that he was distracted to the point that he literally didn't see Yuna get blasted out of Mount Coronet.

But instead, it bounced off a pink barrier. Then an Ice Beam struck it from below and froze it. It dropped from the air. Beneath Igneous, Shimmer bucked the frozen silvally away with his hind legs.

Igneous zipped toward the ground, spewing a Flamethrower in conjunction with a second Ice Beam from Shimmer to force the ground and flying silvally back.

I did a double-take and was going to ask "Silvally can fly?" when I realized that that was almost certainly shorthand for "Flying-type Silvally".

"It's gotta be that fake arceus thingy!" the ponytales said. He spotted a ground silvally readying a Tri-Attack and, with a flick of his horn, sent a Glacial Lance rippling through the air.

"Then we should help her!" Nikki was fixated on the hole. Igneous glanced over his shoulder and saw a psychic silvally lunging for the toxtricity from behind.

I'm... not sure if Shimmer's line fully follows from Igneous and Nikki's lines beforehand? Like is he talking about what's causing their present situation? What yeeted Yuna out of Mt. Coronet, or...?

"Nikki, look out!" the grovlazzle cried. He took to the air as the silvally readied to bite down on Nikki's neck with Psychic Fangs. But black and red energy struck it from its left, sending it pinwheeling away.

Grishi blipped in front of Nikki. "Sorry. Bad mutt got away from Grishi." And the zorotwo zipped off.

Widget: "... I feel attacked right now." >v<
Grishi: "Ally mutt should really keep priorities straight now."
:mewtwofacepalm:


[ ]

"You okay?" Igneous asked.

Instead of a response, Nikki turned and strummed her gills. Electricity arced over Igneous' shoulder and zapped a flying silvally, stunning it enough for Shimmer to hurl it away with telekinesis.

"Are you?" Nikki pointed to the hole. "We've gotta go after Princess!"

Kinda feel like this transition is a little too abrupt. Like it might have been worth shoving in some sort of brief acknowledgement of Igneous checking up on Nikki or something.

Igneous flinched. "How? We're outnumbered, and that's not even considering that Xeromus has Gene, Leo, and Widget occupied." He gestured toward the altar, where Zamazenta's phantom zipped back and forth, forcing Gene and Leo up into the air to dodge.

"You can fly, dumbass!" Nikki growled, mohawk sparking. "So, carry me over there!"

Boy, I sure hope that none of those Silvally have any good ranged attacks there if you're about to try what I think you are, Nikki. ^^;

The grovlazzle saw the ground silvally charging toward the pillar. He waved Scarlett over while laying down a trail of Bullet Seeds to keep them away. "We can't ditch Shim and Scarlett!"

Also, that.

Nikki gave him an incredulous look. "Shim? You're going for a pet name now of all times?!" She fired lightning from the tip of her mohawk past Igneous, scattering three flying silvally.

Igneous: "Look, it's endearing, okay?!" >///<

"Not the time!" Igneous hissed. He spun around in another Fiery Dance. When he was sure the silvally had doubled back to regroup, he looked left at Scarlett. "Will you be okay if we go after Yuna?"

"Umm... maybe?" The dragonair flapped her wings nervously. "I can't summon Starlene again. Xeromus' powers seem to block her."

Just saying, that sounds a lot closer to 'no' than 'maybe' there, Igneous.

Igneous's head leaf simmered. He looked around until his eyes settled on a garchomp and cosmic charizard two pillars behind them.

"Noctum! Val! Heads up!"

Small typo there that slipped your notice, or at least on TR.

Before Scarlett could ask what he was doing, Igneous dove down and, grunting, hoisted a whinnying Shimmer into the air.

"H-Hey!" The ponytales flailed his legs. "What's the big idea?!"

Straining from the effort, Igneous carried Shimmer toward Noctum and Valkyrie.

"Strength... in numbers!"

This is either going to be a brilliant or a really, really terrible idea. Potentially both at the same time.

Diamond hadn't been a keldeo long enough for this much strenuous activity. When Noctum's flames scattered four fairy silvally, he thought it safe to hunch over and catch his breath. But a flicker of yellow to his right told him that was wrong.

He jumped left, barely avoiding a Thunderbolt. He pointed his horn in the direction of the lightning. An Aura Sphere whizzed through the air, clipping the electric silvally who almost zapped him.

Diamond: "They just keep coming! Just how many of these things did Matriarch even make?!"
:grohno~2:


"This is, nnggrh, frustrating!" Diamond galloped around the pillar to rejoin Noctum and Valkyrie. "If I had the full splendor of my powers, I could mow these cretins down!"

But is it a radiant splendor? Since you could pull off some really fun reality-warping shenanigans depending on how hard your author huffed the Xeno vibes.

"Jump!" Valkyrie ordered.

Diamond shot water jets from his hooves. An Earthquake rattled around the pillar. Four fairy and two electric silvally toppled onto their sides. Noctum flew past Diamond and struck the electric silvally with large violet crescents. The air twisted around the silvally and slammed them into one another. When they struck the ground, they both lay still.

I'm beginning to understand why Iggy and Nikki are trying to dump Scarlett and Shimmer onto these three, since they're definitely safer here than trying to hold out on their own.

"Ah!" Diamond drifted back, landing awkwardly on the sloped top of a broken pillar. "Spacial Rend! You can use Spacial Rend in that form?"

"Yeah?" Noctum shot a confused look at Diamond. "Look, we're a little busy right now!"

Is that a hint of jealousy that I detect there, Diamond?

"Hey, dork, gimme a hand!" Valkyrie hollered, ducking bursts of bright pink energy the fairy silvally shot at her. [ ]

"How are you using it?" Diamond asked, but Noctum dove down and spread blue flames in front of Valkyrie. The silvally scattered with frustrated growls.

"I don't know!" Noctum growled, starry tail flame rippling.

Diamond:
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Noctum: "Look, can we figure this out when we're not in a life and limb battle right now?!" >.<

"Then try to know!" Diamond turned and shot dual Hydro Pumps from his forehooves, striking an electric silvally that then got swept up by an Aeroblast that came in from Diamond's left. "It's of utmost importance! My Roar of Time could help us turn the tides here!"

I mean, he's not wrong there.

"Noctum! Val! Heads up!"

Diamond turned around to see a grovlazzle flying toward Noctum and Valkyrie, struggling to carry a ponytales. Igneous dropped Shimmer next to the dragons, before turning and joining Noctum to send the fairy silvally away with dual Flamethrowers.

Another spot where that typo you had needs to be addressed as well.

"Yuna got blown out of the mountain!" Igneous pointed behind him. Diamond spotted a giant hole in the crystal dome. Warm light filtered through it.

So that was the strange crunch he'd heard earlier. And Arceus was nowhere to be found either. Which meant...

"Arceus is after her." The cosmic keldeo narrowed his eyes at the hole. "Or, rather, Arceus is after Giratina. For Zodiark."

Diamond: "Which... uh... now that we're actually talking about it. Shouldn't we be trying to bail on the rest of this fight and go after her?" ^^;

Noctum's starry tail flame shrank. "Then we have to help her!"

"Look alive!" Valkyrie growled. She slammed her claws into the ground. Stone Edge spires shot out in front of her, knocking a couple of fairy silvally skyward. Diamond was going to blast them away with Hydro Pumps, but Shimmer caught them in his telekinesis and flung them into a couple more fairy silvally trying to get Valkyrie first. The garchomp ran behind her Stone Edge spires.

"Whatever you're planning, plan it quick," she said. "They've got numbers on us. We can't divert all our attention to Yuna."

Ah, yeah. I suppose that would explain a thing or two about why everyone can't just up and bail to go and try and bail out Yuna.

Noctum fidgeted nervously. Igneous glanced over his shoulder, where Nikki stood atop a broken pillar. Grishi had appeared by her side, rifling Dark Pulses around the pillar to drive away ground-type silvally.

"You go, then." Igneous jerked his head in Nikki's direction.

"What?" Diamond starry tail scrunched up. "But we need Palkia's power here. Helping us cull the herd. You can't—"

Oh, so they're just straight-up killing those Silvally. I mean, they're almost literally Pokémon video game NPCs in tier, but still quite a bit more morbid than I was expecting unless 'cull' was intended to be something more neutral in vibe like 'thin' there.

"Igneous pointed a claw at the hole. "Take Nikki and get after Dreamweaver. Yuna needs help. And you've got enough strength for that while Nikki's got moral support."

"But what about us?" Diamond looked around nervously. The fairy silvally were trying to surround them. He shot one Hydro Pump at a silvally to his left, but it easily ran around the attack.

"We'll regroup with the others." Igneous pointed somewhere behind Diamond. "C'mon, think! If Dreamweaver gets to Yuna, then it's game over anyway, isn't it?"

Well, you'd better hope not since the last we saw of her, she looked pretty cornered there. ^^;

Diamond's mane dimmed. "I... suppose so."

Noctum nodded his approval at Igneous, ready to take off. Diamond couldn't let that happen yet.

"Wait!" the keldeo galloped forward. "Palkia, please. I... I must know how I can draw on my powers!"

Noctum: "Trust me, I want you to know as much as you do, but I legit don't know!"
:dizzyzard:


Noctum flinched in midair. "We've been over this. My power sort of—"

"I'm sorry for how I treated you," Diamond continued. He didn't care if this wasn't the time to rant. Crunching and fwooshing around him suggested Igneous, Shimmer, and Valkyrie were picking up the slack. "Both back home and as Seifer. You have every right to be upset. I want to bury the hatchet! But we need to get through this. So, I'm begging you... help me out!"

Noctum initially gave Diamond a confused look. But then his eyes slowly widened and his starry tail flame rippled faster.

Wow. Seifer/Diamond really has changed since the beginning of the story. Though I wonder if that's a sign that Noctum just had an epiphany about how this whole wielding your Timespace Dragon powers thing actually works.

"The past!" the cosmic charizard punched his right hand with his left. "I was remembering the past when Spacial Rend came back to me. So, try concentrating on your past. You remember it better than me, so maybe it'll be easier."

Noctum: "Which I realize is going to be a lot easier said than done right now, but that's my best guess as to how it works!" O_O;

While Diamond silently mulled that over, Noctum took off and grabbed Nikki from atop her broken pillar. He said something to Grishi, then banked left to head for the hole. He weaved through Thunderbolts and Ice Beams trying to down him.

A sharp claw jabbed Diamond's left flank, jolting him to attention.

"Gah!" He turned left, suspecting Valkyrie. "What was that—"

"Kelkel paying attention now?" Grishi asked, retracting his claws. Behind him, Scarlett took to the air, spitting dragonfire at a couple of electric silvally. "Work to do."

I was honestly surprised that Diamond didn't get summarily attacked by a Silvally while spacing out like that, but I suppose that the others were covering for him in the background.

The zorotwo spun around and levitated the electric silvally up before they could zap Scarlett. He banged them together repeatedly, but they continued to struggle in his grip.

Ah yes, getting in some grievous harm with a body, I see.

Concentrate. Diamond had to concentrate. And focus on the past.

He could do that. Diamond was the Essence of Time. The past was nothing to him.

Diamond breathed in. Then out. Then in again.

Focus. Focus.

Grishi:

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"Is mystical pony serious right now-?"
Diamond: "Yes! Just cover me for a moment!"

A large explosion shattered Valkyrie's rock spires. The garchomp skidded along the ground, roaring in pain.

Diamond jolted. Smoke billowed up from where the Stone Edge slabs had been. Beside the smoke, another silvally glowed bright white.

Oh yeah, that's a positive sign there. /s

Might want to hurry things up a bit with that whole 'thinking about your past' thing, Diamond.

"They're Exploding!" Shimmer whinnied in fright. He tried to conjure a shield, but the silvally Exploded first. The blast threw Shimmer back, right into a startled Igneous. The two hit the ground hard and lay there, groaning in pain.

"No..." Diamond's starry mane dimmed. He had to focus. Quickly.

Well damn, that sure escalated quickly.

Three flying silvally raced toward Igneous and Shimmer. Wind gathered around their forelegs.

"Get back!" Diamond slung an Aura Sphere. One silvally batted it away with a swipe of its right foreleg. [ ]

"Nnngh." He shifted his weight around nervously. "I need some help over here!"

I think this would've worked with a bit more reaction / internal panic from Diamond's end there. Since I gathered that that was the intent, but it didn't fully come through.

Diamond shot a second Aura Sphere. Then a third. Again, the silvally batted them aside. No one else came to help. Loud blasts sounded behind Diamond.

The silvally reared up to strike Igneous and Shimmer while they were down. [ ]

"Stop!" Diamond leveled his horn at them. "Stop!"

Okay, this part, I definitely think would've benefitted from getting into Diamond's head more given how sideways things are going by the second and you'd think that it'd be getting to him.

With a somber smile, Akari put her hand between two of Dialga's metallic foreclaws. "I know it's tough," she said. "I can't imagine what goes on in any legend's head. It's hard to relate as a human, y'know." She laughed nervously.

Dialga craned his head down to look at her. He tilted it ever so slightly.

"You and Palkia are a team." Akari lightly thumped his foreleg with the palm of her hand. "There's, like, no time without space. And no space without time. Maybe if you try and think of it that way, you and Palkia can get along better?"

Oh hey, looks like we are going to get Roar of Time pony in this chapter after all.

Diamond: "Oh my god. Can't this thing go any faster?"
:grohno~2:


"STOP!"

A beam of blue hexagons emerged from Diamond's horn. It swept away the flying silvally before any of them could strike Diamond's allies. When the blue light faded, the silvally lay crumpled against a broken pillar several meters away. Unmoving— no, frozen in place.

Igneous and Shimmer managed to sit up. Both stared at Diamond, eyes wide.

Two ground silvally tried to charge them down from behind. Diamond leaped into the air and shot another blue hexagon beam. It pummeled the silvally into the ground where they, too, remained frozen.

Oh, well. There it is. A bit attenuated relative to the past flashback sequences but... uh... yeah, I think multiple major characters would've died if we had a more full-length flashback sequence, so good enough. ^^;

Diamond landed, breathing heavily. Igneous spun around, saw the unmoving silvally, then conjured his honedge to smack them until their glowing parts went dark.

Shimmer stood up, blinking slowly. "What was that?"

"My power," Diamond said between ragged breaths. "My Roar... of Time."

Cue the theme music:
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u47LHF5fH3s


(Also wow at that embedded art. I don't know how much you plunked down for that, but it looks like it was worth every penny there.)

The upside to getting blown out of the mountain was that Yuna had more space to fly around. However, none of that stopped Dreamweaver's relentless onslaught from continuing. It filled the air with silver crystals that quickly shattered, raining pink fairy dust spears down on Yuna.

She weaved left. The right. Yuna then dove into distortion. She used Shadow Force to fly toward the village, putting distance between herself and Dreamweaver.

Yuna: "I. Call. Hax." >.<
Dreamweaver: "You're welcome to submit to the inevitable instead of dragging this futile exercise out, Yaldabaoth."

"All you can do is run, puppet," Dreamweaver declared. "Just as Yaldabaoth runs from the truth. From a perfect world."

"Go," Yuna whispered. With a flick of her wrist, she conjured Shaymin in a blur of green and white. He flung large explosive seeds toward Dreamweaver, who floated near the hole it made in the mountain.

Dreamweaver's body turned orange. It charged through the Seed Flare. Flames swept down from the side of the mountain. Shaymin was quick, though. Nimble enough to dodge by flying to his right. He unleashed a flurry of Air Slash crescents.

Yuna: "Um... author? If you could give some hints as to how I'm supposed to not die here, that'd be really appreciated right now!"
:eltyscared:


I don't get it. Yuna's tail nervously lashed the air. She threw a punch, conjuring a Giratina leg that smacked Dreamweaver's chest while it was preoccupied deflecting Shaymin's Air Slashes. The way Igneous described this thing... its attacks were slow and lumbering. What gives?

Almost as if it's gotten powered up since its last appearance. Which... uh... considering that whole sequence we saw of Leo getting strings of ominousness attached to him...
:copyka2:


"Stubborn, ignorant puppet." With a burst of Extreme Speed, Dreamweaver rammed into Shaymin. He crashed into the eastern valley face, kicking up chunks of dirt. Yuna recalled him only to find lances of black energy streaming toward her.

Squeaking in surprise, Yuna summoned Diancie. Her Diamond Storm filled the air with glimmering rocks that blocked the black spears. Brown dust showered Diancie and Yuna.

"Oh no." Reshiram tittered in Yuna's head. "Oh no, no, no, no, no."

Yuna: "Reshiram? What's going on? Why are you freaking out like this?" ._.

What? Yuna backed up Diancie's Diamond Storm with a volley of Dragon Darts. Dreamweaver's crystal body turned salmon and the Darts bounced off it. It closed the gap with another Extreme Speed charge. Diancie managed to conjure a giant diamond just in charge to stop Dreamweaver from knocking her out of the sky as it did with Shaymin.

The dragapult again dove into distortion. This time Yuna charged toward Dreamweaver, raking it with ectoplasmic claws, before letting her Shadow Force carry her behind the crystal arceus.

Proooobably wasn't the smartest decision in the world, but you can't say that this sequence isn't absolute kino right now.

"What if gathering together the plates has made this thing stronger, too?" Reshiram said, fur frazzled and tail buzzing in a panic.

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"Pray tell, how doth such a thing transpire, Sir Reshiram?" Rayquaza asked.

I kinda feel like this is something that logically should've drawn a reaction from Yuna here, since you'd think that this would be quite startling for her since she'd have never considered this prior to Cecil hypothesizing it.

Another Diamond Storm hit Dreamweaver's flank as it turned to focus on Yuna. The dragapult shot fireballs from her horns. A crystal shield surrounded Dreamweaver, deflecting the flames and rocks.

"All you are doing is delaying the inevitable." Dreamweaver's cold voice carried across the valley. "Do not deny the world its perfect future. Submit to your fate."

Yuna:
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The shield shattered. Brown beams filled the air. One struck Diancie and the ensuing blast rocketed her into roughly the same spot on the east valley slope Shaymin had crashed into. Yuna barely managed to pull Diancie back into her griseous core while skirting around the strikes.

"It's their attacks!" Reshiram squawked. "They're using the same types as the plates Leo already has!"

Is... Is the Crystal Arceus actually Leo? Since I distinctly remember that you had a chapter art with him having a Paradigm tarot card. And we do still need to get from here to there, so...
:Copyka2:


Yuna clapped her hands together. Two giant Giratina legs smashed into Dreamweaver as it attempted another Extreme Speed charge. Yuna swatted the Dreamweaver down toward the abandoned town. There wasn't a single silvally left. Zodiark must've summoned all of them to the Eternatus Core.

I should get back to them, the dragapult thought. Xeromus was still in there and undoubtedly had several people's attention. What if he overwhelmed them?

Don't worry, he's busy dealing with My Little Pony with a healthy side helping of cosmic power. If anything, you should be trying to get back to them.

... Could Nikki even hold up against the silvally?

Good thing that she's not having to fight alone, huh? Though yeah, prooobably want to make this not a solo fight in short order since I'm pretty sure that if there is an avenue to outright winning, it's through your friends.

Yuna caught a flash of white from the town. She darted to her left before multiple Moonblasts sailed through the air.

"What aaaaaawmbout the lightning?" Cresselia was addressing Reshiram. "Seifer gaaaaawt zapped. But Leo just gaaaaaawt the zap plate."

:copykin:

Oh boy, so Dreamweaver gets souped up at the literal moment that Leo does. Fantastic.

"Guys, can we not do this right now?" Yuna begged. She swiped the air. Giant, shadowy Giratina wings tried to swat Dreamweaver like a tiny bug. It dodged the first wing, which took the roofs off a couple of buildings, then blew apart the second with a dome of black energy. Probably a Night Daze.

"You cannot strike me down, Yaldabaoth," Dreamweaver chided. In the blink of an eye, it returned to the air, high over the town. The crystal arceus' hooves darkened. Another black dome raced out around it. Yuna flew away, but misjudged the Night Daze's speed. The dark energy swept her up. Battered her ectoplasm.

Correction. Former town. Since let's get real, it's going to be a small miracle if anything of it is left standing considering how much damage those stray attacks are doing.

Next thing the dragapult knew, the base of Mount Coronet was rushing up to meet her. Yuna twisted herself right and managed to crater into a grassy field right by the edge of the mountain.

Yuna: "OW."
:LiamDed:


The sky overhead filled with black orbs.

"Desist, vessel."

Dreamweaver's crystal wheel went pitch black. Still dazed, Yuna prepared herself for an onslaught of black beams.

Wow. She's still not giving up there. I honestly expected her to at minimum waver considering how grim things were getting.

Through the blue sheen of her Protect, she caught a brilliant violet crescent slicing through Dreamweaver's torso, before exploding in a burst of blue and purple energy. Gasping, Yuna dropped the Protect and tilted her head right.

A cosmic charizard flew through the air, blue-violet energy streaming from his starry belly to his arms. And a toxtricity sat on his back, Sludge Bombs pooling in her hands. Nikki tossed them into the smoke as Noctum caught sight of Yuna and dipped down.

Oh, hello Noctum. Though your video link for this section is dead. What was intended to be linked there originally?

"Princess!" he called, stealing glances back at the smoke.

"Did... did he just slice Arceus in half?!" Reshiram gawked.

Benefits of him not having all his powers back, I take it.
:gardeshrug~1:


No. Yuna pushed herself off the ground the moment she saw the smoke swirling. She flew up toward Noctum. Emerald energy pooled around her core.

"Fly like the wind, Ray!" she cried. Rayquaza burst forth from the griseous core, his Dragon Ascent turning him into an emerald arrow that tore through the giant globs of dirt falling toward the trio.

"Heads up!" Nikki thumped Noctum's back. "Bitch survived that somehow!"

Not really sure what the deal is with this chapter having "Heads up" as "Head's up", but you have another of those typos here again.

Rayquaza's Dragon Ascent blew away the smoke, revealing brown wispy clouds pulling Dreamweaver's broken crystal body back together.

"No way!" Noctum's tail flame shrank. "They can do that?!"

Nikki's mohawk sparked. "It's freaking cheating!"

Yuna: "Welcome to my life for the last five minutes." >_>;

"It is as I said." Dreamweaver's crystal wheel cracked back into place around their torso. "You merely delay your inevitable ends."

"Says you, loser!" Nikki spat.

[ ] Dreamweaver kept its attention down below. And Rayquaza hung overhead.

Another spot where IMO things would be a bit more expressive stopping and showing off some character reactions a bit more than you presently do here.

Yuna's ectoplasm tightened around her core. With a furious roar to remind Dreamweaver of his presence, Rayquaza divebombed the crystal arceus. Its body turned yellow to meet Rayquaza's Dragon Ascent.

Yuna silently pointed at Dreamweaver, then fired two large Dragon Darts at it. Noctum fortunately caught her cue. The air itself crackled around his claws. Instead of a giant crescent, he hurled that crackling air forward.

Dreamweaver was too busy stalling out Rayquaza's Dragon Ascent. Lighting sparks danced around a giant emerald spear trying to drive Dreamweaver toward the ground.

Yuna: "I swear to god, if he also tanks through this, so help me..." >_>;

The Darts hit Dreamweaver's flank. It buckled. The lapse was enough for Rayquaza's Dragon Ascent to push them straight into the path of Noctum's distorted air. Yuna pulled Rayquaza back to her griseous core just as transparent lines crisscrossed all around Dreamweaver.

"What?" was all Dreamweaver could manage before Noctum's Spacial Rend shattered the air around them. Its body broke apart into crystal chunks, exposing yellow-brown wispy clouds underneath that matched Dreamweaver's head.

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Really getting a lot of mileage out of that high level power scaling with this fight.

Yuna couldn't hold back now. She kicked and punched at the air. Four Giratina limbs pummeled Dreamweaver's wispy body. She drove the clouds and crystal chunks closer and closer and closer to the empty town.

"You're not our fate!" the dragapult shouted. "Not now... and not ever!"

Okay, yeah, that's absolutely Yaldabaoth speaking through her. I can already tell.

With one final thrust of her limbs, the Giratina legs melted together. The giant leg stomped Dreamweaver's remains into the center of Jubilife Village. The shockwave leveled the fountain in the middle of town, as well as most of the nearby buildings. Houses on the outside of the village toppled over. Trees uprooted. Wooden benches careened into the sides of the valley, blowing apart into showers of splinters.

When the Giratina leg vanished, there wasn't a trace of Dreamweaver's body in the ensuing crater. No crystal chunks. No brown clouds. It seemed... Yuna ground them to literal dust.

I'm going to take the under on that being the last we've heard of him, but man did that get cinematic there. Sucks for anyone who owned real estate within a few miles of Jubilife Village, though.
:Copyka:


Limbs trembling, Yuna clumsily drifted toward the ground. Her ectoplasm bubbled and boiled around her griseous core.

"Aggh... aagggggggggh." She wanted to throw her arms over it so badly, but it hurt to even try and lift her arms from her sides.

Oh. Well. Speaking about Yaldabaoth, looks like we're about to see a lot more of her in the not-too-distant future.
:worriedgoo~1:


"Easy, Princess," Noctum said, gliding toward her side. Despite her larger size, the cosmic charizard managed to help her to the ground. Even once he lay her down, the worried look didn't disappear from his face.

"Are you okay?" he asked. "How badly did that thing hurt you?"

"It's not— nnnggggh." Yuna dug her claws into the dirt.

Getting flashbacks of that sequence in XB1 where Shulk gets lit up by lightning as Zanza starts getting close to surfacing, just saying. Guess I'll find out pretty soon whether that read 60 chapters ago as to where things were going between Yuna and Yaldabaoth were right or not.

Nikki slid off Noctum's back. "I saw what happened." The toxtricity knelt down beside her. "Y'need healing or something?" She looked around. "Maybe there are some berries scattered in the rubble?" Her mohawk shrank with every word. "What the heck's a tiny village even doing here anyway?"

"That's, ugggh, a long story..." Yuna tried taking deep breaths. The griseous core tugged on her ectoplasm. Giratina clearly wanted her attention. Problem was... they weren't free from danger yet.

Um... that village was abandoned and uninhabited, right? Or did Yuna just kill off an entire Jubilife Village on the eve of PLA's events in some universe?
:uhhh:


"We should... we should..."

The ground trembled. Mount Coronet shook. The artificial sunlight over the village went dim for several seconds. Then brilliant gold energy erupted from the hole in the mountaintop. Hell, it widened the hole. Cracks spread down the mountainside.

Despite her pain, Yuna sat up in an instant. "What was that?!"

A sign that your victory celebrations were highly premature.

Nikki's mohawk was completely gone. "I, uh—" She tightly gripped the sides of her leather jacket. "I think that was an explosion?"

"Then we have to go!" Wincing, Yuna shakily floated into the air. "We have to get to the others!"

Noctum and Nikki exchanged nervous looks, only to nod at Yuna. The toxtricity climbed on Noctum's back again.

"We'll go first," Noctum said. "You make sure you can fly up there in one piece."

Well then. I suppose we'll find out what on earth happened back there next time since there's not much chapter left from this point on.

"I'll be fine." Yuna hovered through the air. Her griseous core continued tugging on her chest. Yuna ignored it, instead watching Noctum pass her by.

She couldn't think about Giratina right now. Yuna had to focus on the others. She needed to know they were okay.

That gold light... what did Xeromus do?!

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~Unshakeable Fate: Dreamweaver Prime~
When the Renegade first shattered the Affirmer's Red Chain, the world collapsed upon itself. The collective souls and divine energy of that world became a singularity: the Space Globe. Within that singularity, the Affirmer and Creator were frozen in opposition. Perhaps they would have remained that way, had a human scientist from the Affirmer's old home not found the Space Globe and began to experiment with it.

Or, perhaps predicting the Renegade's interference, the Affirmer arranged for the singularity to fall into that scientist's hands. Thus ensuring fate stayed the course that He devised.

And you see, that's why I'm convinced we haven't heard the last of Dreamweaver in this story. Since if he was that effective at pulling off Xanatos Gambits in the past…

And made it to the end, I'm admittedly still trying to parse the full implications what on earth just happened there, but if nothing else, you can't say that it wasn't climactic and a very fitting end to like half a dozen chapters of things steadily crescendoing in this story. Possibly. Maybe. I remain open to the possibility that there will be another curveball back inside Mount Coronet. Like I know that you say that you've kinda burned yourself out on battles, but you honestly could've fooled me there with that setpiece sequence since you were clearly having a lot of fun towards the end. The implications that were woven in about Leo and Dreamweaver being connected, and the hints that all is not well with Yuna and Yaldabaoth cohabitating a body were also tantalizing, and I'll be looking forward to seeing how things play out.

On the more critical end of things, I noticed a couple typos that it probably makes sense to smooth out. I also thought that there were some parts of the story that felt a bit choppy or else where characters' perspectives weren't delved into as much as they could've been, but I realize that you have a specific style for this story, and I won't really begrudge you for sticking to it since I feel that things still held up really well.

Though glad to be back diving into the thick of things again, @Ambyssin . Hope the feedback was helpful, and with any luck, this won't be the last time that I'm back during Diner's Review Event.
 
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