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When he first awoke in a body not of his own, he, like any normal person, freaked the hell out. He was very sure he was not supposed to have a tail, claws nor scales. Thankfully, he had the power of meta-knowledge on his side so he was surely gonna have a fun time trapped here, right?
Right?
Yeah, apparently not.
Now stuck in a body with few similarities to his human form, he and his brothers must now traverse through the cosmos, meeting friends and foes alike, all the while, being under the watchful eye of deities far beyond their comprehension.
He guessed he just had to wing it. How hard could it really be?
This story is rated T for teen, each chapter will have a warning of potential triggers at the top in case it contains things that might disturb someone.
Things to note:
This fic is, as the summary entails, will be of three brothers, Human-turned-Pokémon, being sent into the Pokémon world.
The main world, and yes, I mean main world, will be set in the anime-verse, there will be arcs and specials that will be set in a custom world, either one of my own creations or one of the various ones available in media.
That being said, this is my first fic being rewritten and revamped, a lot of time have been poured into this fic, nearly a year spent refining my characters and worlds.
This story is a massive one, one that will tie in and be referenced in other non-Pokémon stories of mine. (which I haven't actually written yet, but I already have general ideas for them)
You can read the first version of this fic in FFN by Shinigami Gojira. (Be warned, the first version is a clear example of how bad I was and how I've improved over the years, meaning that it is a horrible, inconsistency-filled story littered with plotholes)
Special thanks to Sindrella for beta-ing this Chapter!
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Life was pain.
His mind was in pure agony, like someone had tossed it into a blender, blended it into a nice mixed stew, and forcefully glued every piece back into the wrong place. His skin felt dry like laundry after three days of floundering in the flipping desert and taking a small dive into a volcano. And his body was too warm, too hot, too…
God, everything hurt.
…
…
And then it didn't. The pain subsided, and every ache, hurt and discomfort vanished, leaving him highly aware of everything.
His back lay on something soft, winds brushing against his skin and something was grazing his limbs, feeling as soft as the thing underneath him. Opening his eyes, he hissed in pain, shutting them and turning away from the light assaulting him. Slowly, he covered his eyes with an arm, getting on his hind quarters and looking around… where were his walls?
Weird. Was he on a grassy bed? Had he slept here? Wait, no that wasn't important! Where the hell was he? Screwing his eyes together, he surveyed his surroundings, eyes scanning the grass around him, the grass that absolutely towered over him. Jeez, how the hell could grass grow as tall as him, let alone taller? He was one of the tallest in his class so unless he'd woken up in a post-apocalyptic grassland or…
Something drew his attention, it was vibrant and orange, hovering slightly above his eyes. Squinting, he moved to swat the object away and stopped, eyes tailing the object as it moved.
He had felt it move… Like it was connected to him. His eyes lowered to his left and down to his arm. It was orange and scaly. His arm was orange and scaly. Like a lizard. And just like a lizard, it ended into a three-digit claw.
What the hell? What the hell? What was happening? What was going on? What was going on? His breaths came in quick and shallow, his chest – his cream-coloured belly and chest – heaving and his throat constricting. Where was he? Why was he a lizard? What was going on? Was that a tail? He had a tail? Why was it on fire? Why was it–
He gripped his head, ignoring the way his claws dug into his scalp (his very scaly and skinless scalp), and took a deep breath to calm himself, biting down the urge to scream until he croaked. He needed to calm down and figure out whatever the fish-sticks was going on.
Calming, deep breaths. Empty those thoughts. Empty your mind. Deep breaths, release the stress, relieve them, empty them… empty them… empty them–
"What the actual fuck is going on?" He leaned back, screaming into the heavens, his claws digging deeper into his scales. His scream pierced the heavens, though it didn't seem like many had noticed his little outburst. Panting and leaning down on his knees, the tension in his body felt lighter, no longer feeling like there was a submarine crushing his shoulders but instead like he was lifting an elephant over his head.
He flexed his claws, having something to focus on would help. Deep breaths, deep breaths. He couldn't very well begin a plan if he continued to panic. He needed to be calm… calm… calm…
Calm… He let out a breath, clapping his face and allowing his emotions to chill along with his too-warm breath. No more thoughts. No more screaming. He was in a new body, in a new place but he was fine. Fine fine fine fine…
With his heart partially calmed, he could finally start paying attention to the things around him and– urk! He couldn't hold back the urge to cringe as his mind played the last few seconds over and over.
… okay, he was so not gonna mention any of this to Ane or Quil. God knew how they'd react to him breaking his strict 'No swearing' rule.
He shook his head. Alright, now that he was no longer panicking — no, his fin-claws were not trembling, they weren't! — he could finally assess his situation and say that he had absolutely no idea what to do.
He was a lizard and if the theory bouncing off his head was anything, he was very likely a Charmander and probably in the Pokémon world, no matter how weird or impossible that sounded.
This was fine. Everything was fine. Why wouldn't it be?
He was fine.
… It wasn't like he had gone to bed and dozed off to sleep a few minutes ago.
Actually, now that he thought about it, he was probably still dreaming and none of this was happening. He wasn't a Charmander and he was definitely not standing in the middle of nowhere, in the Pokémon world as a Charmander. Because that'd be ridiculous.
It didn't matter whether he could feel the grass brushing against his scales or hear the sound of winds blowing against any nearby trees, and it didn't matter how good the sun's warmth felt or how crispy and fresh the air tasted. This was fake. None of this was real. Not even the little voice in the back of his mind could stop him from denying his situation.
This was all fake. Everything was a dream.
And he had a brilliant idea that could prove it once and for all.
Pain. Every creature could and had experienced pain in some form or capacity, and it was said that dreams could never quite replicate the same feeling. Which was usually correct, any deaths or pain he'd had in dreams were always muted or felt… distant. So he reasoned that if he inflicted pain onto this body, he could very well prove to himself that this was a dream and then do whatever lucid dreamers usually do.
Luckily, he already had a weapon in hand, or well claw (two claws to be exact… wait, did his feet count as claws or…), and considering that claws were supposed to be sharp, it was perfect. He just had to tear through his flesh and scales with these claws that on closer inspection, gleamed rather dangerously in the light. Yes, these sharp and vicious claws that were clearly meant for cutting through prey and killing…
On second thought, this was a really, really stupid idea. If this was real, he might–
"Ack! Son of a–" There was so much blood, so much… so much blood. His claws were sharp, much sharper than he thought they'd be. They tore through the soft scales on his underbelly cleanly, like he’d introduced a glowing cleaver through a dry chunk of meat.
And it hurt. It hurt. It hurt. It hurt.
His eyes teared up, blurry vision locked onto the warm liquid dripping from his claws. Dreading, he glanced down, paling at the sight, and feeling bile crawling its way into his throat. He pressed his untainted claw against the wound and panted, eyes closed and applying as much pressure as he could through the pain.
He was an idiot, a bloody moronic idiot! Gah, it burns it hurts… Why did he think this was a good idea? Oh god, what was wrong with him... Why didn't he come up with a better idea? “Irk…” How was this real?
How could any of this be real?
And with that final thought, he collapsed onto the ground, groaning from the fire swirling in his chest, a claw still pressing onto the wound as he took in breath after breath, employing something he learned a while ago. Disconnect himself from the pain, take deep breaths, and focus on something else. He'd done it multiple times on smaller wounds before and it worked with varying levels of success. With each breath, the pain lessened, dulling down to a quiet manageable sting.
Blinking, he stared into the sky above, mind swirling with thoughts. Now what? He had deduced that this wasn't a dream. What was the next step? Find a trainer? A professor?
Well, it was probably better if he looked for clues on his whereabouts as well as what version of the world he was in.
Was he in the anime? The games? Mystery Dungeon? Or the manga? Oh God, he hoped this wasn't the manga. The things he heard about… He shuddered. Okay, let's not focus on negative thoughts right now. If he was lucky, he would be in the anime world where cartoon physics and friendship reigned supreme. On the other hand, he could also be in the game world which would… be challenging since it depended on which iteration and interpretation, and anything could happen. Mystery Dungeon was maybe the next best choice as long as he wasn't chosen to save some world-ending shiz.
Getting up, he sighed, ignoring the pain that came with the slight motion. He better head out and explore, any clue of his location was better than nothing. God damn it, why did he have to turn into a Charmander of all things? Couldn't whatever deity that sent him here have kept him human? Walking with a new limb behind him was so weird. It was as if he had a dead unresponsive arm attached to him that could still feel every little thing he touched, whether it be the grass, the dirt, or even just the air, and that wasn't mentioning the crackling behind him. He had to resist the urge to look back after having done so five times already.
Left foot-claw thingy. Right foot-claw thingy. Left foot-claw thingy. Right-foot claw thingy.
If he had longer legs, navigating through the tall grass wouldn't be nearly as much of a hassle than it currently was and especially not when that hassle was only further perpetuated by the damn wound and blasted tail swinging behind him!
But before he could turn around and give his tail a piece of his mind, a familiar sound crept into his ears. It sounded like a groan, a groan that he was all too familiar with despite the higher pitch. Ane?He turned to where he heard the sound. A faint hope sparkled in him. Was his brother here with him too?
Although the logical side of him wanted to dismiss that, he couldn't say he wasn't curious to try even if it did result in him having his hopes dashed away and destroyed.
Welp, off to find out! Brushing apart the tall grass, he marched onward, with only a vague sense of direction leading the way. He had to move slowly to not further antagonise his injury and also because his short legs didn't give him much of a choice. After sweeping aside several blades in this grassy jungle, he stumbled onto a sight that left him puzzled.
A Pikachu lay there on the ground, face scrunched up in pain. Was this Pikachu his brother? He circled the unconscious Pokémon, eyes scrutinizing every inch of it. Was this really Ane? It looked… cute. Way too cute to be his brother.
The Pikachu stirred and groaned, and he backed up, just in case. He wasn't gonna get caught unprepared because he was too curious for his own good. If this wasn't his brother, then he'd run as fast as he could… which, now that he thought about it, wouldn't really mean much when considering just how fast a Pikachu could be.
Huh… crud. Maybe if he was lucky, he could scare it off with his tail. Fires scared animals, right? Ugh, why didn't he think things through before going along with his plans?
As if you had any plans, to begin with, a snarky side of his mind quipped which he muted and ignored. Well, it was too late to start thinking of a plan now, he had to hope that this Pikachu was who he thought it was.
The Pikachu gripped its head with a paw, moaning in pain as it stood up on two. Slowly, it looked around, and after a short bout of fluttering its eyes, it locked sight on him. Glancing into its eyes, he could see a million thoughts running through its mind before it finally settled on a word.
"What the fuc–"
Make that three words.
"Hey, hey, hey! Language!" Yup, there was no doubt in his mind now, this was Ane.
Ane's brows furrowed in disbelief. "June? Is that you?"
June grinned, giving him a victory sign with his claws. "Who do ya think it is?"
"Yo-you're a lizard…"
"A Charmander actually," he said, "and you're a Pikachu."
"A Charman–" Ane shook his head, fixing him with a glare. "What the hell do you mean you're a Pokémon? And what–" He finally took notice of the paw attached to him and with a deep breath, took a short glance at his brother and back to his paw, and back to his brother. "What did you do?"
June blinked. "Excuse me? Why do you think I have something to do with this?"
"As if you don't know." Ane pointed at him with an angry jab. "Whenever something like this happens, you're usually the one that caused it!"
"What? How the hell can I cause something like this? I'm not the one that–ack, frick," June hissed in pain, the wound on his chest opening slightly at his sudden movements with blood slowly seeping out. Crap, completely forgot about it.
Noticing his brother's injury, Ane halted his accusations, a softer look crossing his face. "Hey, are you okay? That–what the hell happened to you?"
Stupid mistakes, that's what… but at least it wasn't as bad as earlier. June shut an eye, forcing a grin onto his muzzle. "It's fine. Just overreacted earlier when I got here. These claws were sharper than I expected. It looks a lot worse than it is." And it was true! His wound was only bleeding a little bit, not as crazy as earlier! If It weren't for how fast his new body could heal, he’d probably be keeling over and crying by now.
"Overreacted?" Ane shot him a disbelieving look. "You cut yourself? Why on Earth would you do that?"
"Like I said, I overreacted and paid the price," June repeated. "God, this hurts a lot more than that time I tripped on an escalator." Blood had gone everywhere, not dissimilar from his current situation and he still had a scar on his leg because of the mistake of his youth… though he guessed he didn't have that scar now in his new body which… oh god, please don't tell him this was gonna be his body's version of that accident. No matter how cool he'd look with them, he did not want his body to be littered with literal scars of his mistakes.
"Paid the price… jeez, this actually makes me feel a little sorry for you."
"Frick off… fatty-chu."
"And now I'm feeling less sorry for you." Ane glowered before shaking his head with a sigh. "Come on, let's go and find someone that can help you."
June raised a claw, stopping the Pikachu in his tracks and quietly wincing at the pain. "As much as I like that idea. Why don't we check and see if Quil's with us here? I mean, with you and me here. Doesn't that mean there's a chance Quil could also be here?"
"I don't know. Maybe?" Ane shrugged. "You sure you'll be fine though?"
He nodded. "This body can heal fast… I think. It wasn't as bad as it was earlier." June waved him off. "I'll be fine." Catching his brother's hesitant nod, June spun around and pushed apart the nearby grass and… huh. Guess he could scratch 'See a Bulbasaur on two legs' out of his metaphorical bucket list.
"Quil?" he called out.
No response.
But what response did he need from a spaced-out Bulbasaur walking on two?
"Hey, Quil! Quil! Hello? You there, buddy?" He ran over to the walking frog-gasaur with Ane not far behind, a claw still pressed on his wound as he reached his brother. "Hey, Quil. Guess you woke up before us, huh?"
Still no reply. Weird.
June snapped his claws, waving them right in front of the Grass-type's eyes. That elicited a response as the Bulbasaur jumped back, nearly falling over before righting himself. "Sheesh, thought I was gonna have to pull out a gong for you to hear me."
The Bulbasaur blinked, looking at him with a bewildered stare and not so subtly looking at the wound on his chest. "June?"
"God, it was weird having Ane say my name earlier. Now, you too? Whatever happened with just 'brother'?"
"Ane's here too?" Quil glanced around.
"Yeah, he's the panting Pikachu in that bush over there," June said, facing the arriving Pikachu with a grin. "Man, you really need to exercise more."
"Frick you. You're lucky… you have a body that can run like a… person."
June shrugged before returning his attention to Quil. "You're taking this a lot better than I expected. Really makes me feel embarrassed for screaming earlier."
"That was you?" Quil said, still in that same slow, disbelieving tone. Just what was so unbelievable? Aside from the whole 'turning into fictional characters', of course.
"Yeah, not my proudest moment," said June, scratching his cheek. "Anywho, now that we're all here" – which I totally called it – "Why don't we try figuring out where we are?"
"And how do you suppose we do that?" Ane asked, arms crossed and brow raised.
"I don't know, maybe by following this path! Duh." He pointed at the path off to the side, ignoring his brother's miffed reaction.
June didn't know where it would lead them and for the average Joe, it was probably best to be a bit more wary. But he was never one to like dwelling on his thoughts, not when his brothers were around and needed him. This was the Pokémon world, a place where tons of kids dreamt of being in. There were so many things to see, so many things to experience. They could become trainers, be rich, famous, have an awesome bloody team full of friends and whatnot!
Ah! He could barely hold himself back, his face creasing as a large grin appeared.
"Come on, my brothers. Onward to adventure!"
And adventure they went.
… If you could call walking down a dirt path with nothing happening, an adventure that is. Seriously, you'd think getting transported to the Pokémon world would be somewhat interesting. But between this and his freakout of being turned, nothing bloody happened.
Well, that wasn't true. Dark clouds started forming a couple of minutes ago, but they were likely far enough to where they weren't an immediate threat.
Hiking up the small hill, he spotted a dark green signboard next to a tree and some bushes. Upon reaching the sign, surprise once again bore its way into his head. The words were in Japanese, a language that while he dabbled a bit into and could recognize a few kanji thanks to similar words in Chinese, he was very inept in. So he was shocked at how seamless and coherent it looked. Like something was pouring information into his mind as he read the text. He could understand the fricking thing. What the hell? Where was this thing when he needed it back home?
"Huh, weird," Ane commented.
Weird indeed. June raised a scaly brow, trying to comprehend how any of this worked. The words were definitely still in the Japanese but he could read it like it was English, he could understand the verb, the noun, the kanji like they were second nature. It was a bit jarring if he was honest.
If only I had this ability back home. He gave the sign a slightly annoyed stare before shrugging. It was likely working on some magic bullcrap and he wasn't going to get anywhere focusing on it.
"So, Pallet Town's just up ahead," Ane said, sounding less like he was making a statement and more like a complaint as he continued. "... three hundred meters ahead."
Rolling his eyes at his brother's whine about the unreasonable distance, June remarked with a grin. "Well, you could certainly use the exercise. You look almost as chonky as Ash's Pikachu back in season one."
Ane growled. "Says the one that slashed themselves like an idiot."
"Hey, that was a completely normal reaction and I feel one hundred percent justified by it," June harrumphed. "'sides you're one to talk. Seriously, who blames someone for something like this." He gestured to himself and their surroundings.
Scoffing, Ane shook his head and glared at him. "After all the things you've done, I wouldn't be surprised if you somehow got us roped into this mess!"
Excuse me?
"What's that supposed to mean?" June cried out.
"It–"
Quil got in between them, shoving them away and landing back on all fours as he glared at them. "Hey, cut it out, you two. Someone's coming and as much as I enjoy this stupid back-and-forth, I don't want to explain why two idiots were fighting!"
Taking a second to recover, June bit down a retort concerning Quil's sporadic moments of lucidity before turning to see what he meant. He squinted his eyes, and the all-too-clear image of a vaguely familiar red hat came to view, he also could hear a voice too. It sounded like the person was complaining to a–
His eyes widened as realization struck. Quickly, he grabbed the two and shoved them into a nearby bush, ignoring their protests and cries as he hopped in, grabbing his tail in a manner that sparked some discomfort in his chest.
"Hey, what's the big–"
"Shh!" He levelled the two with a glare that prevented any further complaints before peering through the leaves and spotting the treasure of the island.
Right there, in all his glory was a ten-year-old boy pulling a Pikachu with a rope. And it wasn't just any ordinary ten-year-old boy, no, it was the yet-to-be master himself, Ash Ketchum.
Although the boy pulled with no hesitance down the path, it took a lot more patience than he'd normally cared to commit, just watching the kid. But eventually the trainer and mon left the area and he sprung out of the bush, arm raised to the sky as he struck a pose. "Haha! Guess who just found out what world this is!" He pointed at himself with two claws, though his chest did hurt at that movement, he was too excited to care. "This guy right here, that's right!"
"Excuse me?" Ane asked.
"You're excused." June chuckled at his brother's deadpan glare. "We're in the anime-verse and we just had a close brush with Ash Ketchum himself."
"Wait, wait. You mean the main character went past us and we didn't ask him for help? What the–why the hell didn't we ask for his help?"
"He was pulling Pikachu with a rope, meaning we're in episode one," June said, shrugging, "And I don't know about you but I don't wanna deal with any butterfly effects this early."
"Butterfly effect?"
"Y'know, small changes can make big boom boom? I don't wanna be the reason the world ended because I messed up the timeline." Though by following that logic, wouldn't that mean their presence alone already changed something? Hm… yeah, better pin that thought on the 'Care about it later' list.
Ane sighed. "I guess that makes sense."
"Glad we've come to an agreement then." June nodded. Moving on, he glanced back at the bush. Quil still hadn't come out… weird.
Oh, wait, never mind. There he was, still looking as spaced out as he did a little while ago. Strange how the only time he looked aware of things was when he and Ane were arguing. He didn't remember Quil always being this out of it.
… well, add another to the list then.
June blinked, the uncomfortable sensation of something wet mixing with his scales jolted him back to reality. Looking up to the sky, he spotted the dark clouds hovering above them ominously, and though it was barely enough to be called a drizzle, he soon realized what that meant.
"Crap, it's gonna be a storm! Quick! Run for your lives!"
Wiping the sweat off his brow, the man laid the device on the table. He leaned back, popping his back and joints with a relieved sigh. It had been a couple of hours since those trainers left his laboratory and he was glad to see that they all made it safely in Viridian City.
And as expected, his grandson, Gary, was the first to arrive, boasting about all the Pokémon he caught over the check-in call. It certainly was quite an accomplishment, ten catches in a day.
Ah, that took him back to when he caught his first Pokémon and the challenges he set for himself all those years ago. He recalled it was something ridiculous, fifty by the end of the week… He chuckled. Glad to see the apple didn't fall far from the tree.
Though the calls with the other trainers weren't as eventful, except for one or two of them catching a Pidgey, he was still happy to see that they were all safe and sound… well, all but one that is.
He glanced out the window, at the drizzle that slowly intensified. Ash Ketchum, his grandson's rival and someone he suspected of doing great things since the day he met the boy. The child was a cheerful and joyful lad, with a great tenacity for learning all things Pokémon. It was a little worrying when he took on that Pikachu but he had faith in the young boy, he was sure they'd do fine.
Thunder boomed in the background, as a small smile graced his cheeks. Sighing, Professor Oak closed the door behind him and made his way to his living room. On his way, he brewed up a nice warm cup of tea and took a book he'd last read halfway, off a shelf. He intended to use the calm silence provided to him and use it fully to relax and enjoy the weather. The tension in his muscles loosened as he listened in on the tapping sounds of rain, it was a gentle song that was once the bane of his youth but he'd grown to love and enjoy over his prime.
Memories of a time when he and his Pokémon had to hide under a makeshift tent came to his mind, he remembered the feeling of his friends huddling up together, keeping each other warm and dry to the best of their ability. Oh, where did the time go?
Though there was an incessant knocking, like knuckles rapping on a door that he couldn't quite fit in his memories. It was almost as if…
… oh wait, that was his door.
Someone was knocking on his door.
Why on earth was someone knocking on his door? In the middle of a storm? And not in their homes like a sensible person?
The knocking intensified and he sighed, placing his cup and book on the table. "Yes, yes, I'm coming. Hold your horses," he murmured, tugging on his lab coat and adjusting it.
Making his way over, he gripped the doorknob and twisted, opening it to reveal… rain. Nothing but the rain on his porch, and winds buffeting his used-to-be dry clothes. Seriously? Were kids so desperate for entertainment that they'd run out in the rain to pull pranks? Oak grumbled, looking over the empty field before him once more and turning to leave.
But before he could do so, a voice called out to him, sounding quite feminine in pitch. "Hey, wait! Don't leave us out here in the rain! You don't know how painful it is to have your flame constantly rained on!"
Excuse him if he was a little confused by what he was hearing but what did the voice mean by that?
Oak glanced back at his porch, brows furrowed as he looked from left to right. Where did that voice come from? There wasn't anything he could see that could've spoken like that but wait, the voice sounded like it came from below him so perhaps it was–
Oak stopped in his tracks, eyes fixated on the sight below him. Three Pokémon stood there: a Charmander, a Bulbasaur, and a Pikachu, not unlike the ones he'd given out hours earlier, all of them stood dripping wet. They gazed back at him and if not for the voice he'd heard earlier, he would've thought they were ordinary wild Pokémon seeking shelter.
Seeking to confirm a hypothesis, he offered the three a smile and said, "Hello there. How may I help you?"
The Charmander grinned and stared at him with their bizarre brown eyes (he'd never seen one with anything but blue eyes before. A birth defect maybe?), the feminine voice coming from their mouth. "Hi, uh… huh, never thought you could understand us… anyway, can you let us in, please? We wanna talk to you about a couple of things."
Seeing the Charmander's behaviour in action, he had little doubt in his mind. They were very likely a human and the other two too if the side-eye glares tossed at the oblivious Charmander was any indication, meaning… "Ah, right. Come in, come in, make yourselves at home."
"Thanks, Professor. Now, come on, you two. You heard the man."
The Pikachu rolled their eyes. "Yeah, yeah, I get it, but if he doesn't believe a single word you say–"
"Oh, don't worry about it. It'll be fine."
Yes, he did not doubt it now. It took all he had to not jump in sheer enthusiasm and overwhelm the trio with questions. And while they did track mud over his once clean and dry floor, he couldn't find it in his heart to care about because, after all, it wasn't every day he had the chance to meet with one, let alone three human-turned-Pokémon!
Darkness shrouded the hooded figure as they looked down on the world below. Rain poured from above and yet, the figure remained dry, as if their mere presence was making the rain afraid to touch them.
Sweeping their gaze over the town below, their eyes, golden and shining with dim light, followed the three Pokémon entering the professor's lab.
"Heh heh, guess it's my time to shine."
They had been waiting for this for so long and finally, their creator had entered the playing field. They were excited.
I finished reading the first chapter and this is something that caught my interest in a snap! It's unique and funny and the pacing of the story feels like it is well balanced! Though there are some rough edges on some of the sentences, some being too short, but that's something that can be easily fixed!
You could try a sentence structure like this one: "Uh, oh God... what in the hell hit me?" The orange Pokemon clutched his head, trying to dull the headache that screeched at his mind. The pain receded and he rubbed his eyes, noting the dry, scaly feeling of his fingers gracing his eyelids.
Standing in front of him were three Pokémon, a yellow rodent, Pikachu, an orange reptilian Fire-type, Charmander and a frog-like dinosaur, Bulbasaur, but those weren't what shocked him, you see.
It was the fact that they were talking! Like humans!
It was quite a rare sight to behold, one talking Pokémon was rare enough but three of them? That was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.
But then, the Charmander made a gesture that explained it all.
The Charmander snapped its claws, pointing at him with a smug look. "See? Told ya this was his lab."
"Yeah, yeah. I don't care," The Pikachu scoffed. "Just wait till he hears our story."
The Charmander winced. "Right, it's gonna sound crazy, crap."
Standing in front of him were three Pokemon. A yellow rodent, Pikachu, an orange reptilian Fire-type, Charmander and a frog-like Dinosaur, Bulbasur. But those weren't what shocked him, you see. It was the fact that they were talking! Like humans! It was quite a rare sight to behold, one talking Pokemon was rare enough but three of them? That was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.
Also, you can try adding and changing some words and things in a sentence to avoid repeating some words:
It was the fact that they were talking! Like humans! This was quite a rare sight to behold. One talking Pokemon was already rare enough for him, but witnessing not one, but three more talking Pokemon? That was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity!
It doesn't hurt to try and cobble up a few paragraphs or more, though this could just be your writing style? Regardless, I do hope that my samples help you with your future writings!
As for the self-insert dialogues, are they highlighted in Bold text? Or are they an entirely different set of characters? I was a bit confused when I got to that part, but not enough to throw me off my reading focus
As always, keep up the good work! I am excited for what comes next with the revised Chapter 2!
As for the self-insert dialogues, are they highlighted in Bold text? Or are they an entirely different set of characters? I was a bit confused when I got to that part, but not enough to throw me off my reading focus
The self-insert is actually June, sorry if that's not clear. I'm not very good at writing in first person, which is kinda why June was the focus for most of the chapter.
The bold text is a Celestial Being speaking (or a person/creature with godlike powers like Arceus or Satan), as the bold text without quotations represents their power in speaking almost like the narrator/narration.
Mild Language, Minor Eldritch Things (Creepy Crawly Hands)
Special thanks to Sindrella for beta-ing this!
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Honestly, June had no clue what he was expecting to see. If someone were to ask him what came to his mind when he thought of Professor Oak and his lab, he’d likely say the three Kanto starters, maybe some Sci-fi-esque tech or whatever sciency stuff that were bound to be around.
Well, believe him when he said that none of those fit what he was seeing (except for maybe the starters bit). The interior of the house left much to be desired. Sure it was homey and comfortable and gave off a safe vibe. But it was pretty boring and dry, what with the plain white wallpaper, the tiled floors, and generally how normal it felt. There was an ugly green couch in the middle of the room, along with a coffee table in front of it and a sofa to the side, there was also a flatscreen TV on the wall, some shelves lined up on one side, a potted plant at the corner and–God, it was so plain. Why couldn't there have been at least one futuristic machine sitting in the corner?
Whatever. He wasn't going to complain if it kept his flame from getting wet. Ah, wasn't that an experience he wished he could forget. The little bite-sized prickling that came with each droplet, the constant mind numbing sensation that spread across his whole body, it was like having a trillion cuts all over and then dipping himself in a bath of soy sauce. And it just… just… He shivered. Point was, he would rather not endure something like that again especially when he considered the fact that his tail flame had only gotten soaked a teeny bit. He couldn't imagine how painful it could be if he submerged the whole thing.
A nudge from a paw snapped him out of his trance and he noticed a towel being handed to him by a yellow furry arm. Muttering a "Thanks." to his brother and drying himself, he hopped onto the couch beside him.
June saw the two, likewise drying themselves, and Professor Oak eying them with a curious look. Clearing his throat, he pointed at the man with a claw, bowing and saying, "Thank you for your kind hospitality, Professor. We're sorry for the inconvenience our presence has caused."
Oak smiled, waving a dismissive hand. "Oh, it's no trouble at all. I couldn't just very well leave you three out there, now could I?"
June nodded. "The name's… June and these are my brothers, Ane and Quil. It's nice to officially meet you," he said, then added a few moments later. "Oh and by the way, I'm a guy." His name was rather feminine so a little clarification would help out a long way, in case this Oak was anything like the games.
"It's a pleasure meeting you three, June, Ane, and Quil." He greeted each of them with a nod before returning his full attention to the Charmander. "May I ask what brings you to my lab? You said you have something you want to discuss?"
Well, here comes the moment of truth. "Have you ever entertained the idea of the Multiverse Theory?" A brief spark of recognition appeared in the professor's eye and he nodded, gesturing for June to go on. "Well, hypothetically, what would you say or do if someone got transported here from another universe?” The professor’s brows furrowed and his lips creased into a neutral expression. “And how would you react if said person came from a universe with no Pokémon, and instead their knowledge of the Pokémon world comes from video games, shows, and comics." That garnered a bigger reaction from the old man, his mouth hung loosely, staring at June with a dumbfounded expression.
"Are you…"
"Yes." June nodded, a grin stretching across his face. "We are that someone! And we would love it if you could help us get back home!"
He could almost feel Ane rolling his eyes at his dramatic flair.
Taking a sip from his glass of water, June watched as the expression on Oak's face flowed from contemplating to intrigue. "That is… quite a peculiar situation."
After his little melodramatic statement, Oak had left, saying he needed a moment to process everything. After about a minute or two, he came back, with glasses full of water. Even though June didn't feel particularly parched, he still appreciated it.
Then the man sat down, hands rubbing his chin as he hummed out in thought. "Am I safe to assume that you three aren't trying to pull a silly prank on me?" he said, giving June am intense look that made him feel more than a little discomfort.
He wasn't sure why he was feeling like that — he had nothing to hide, after all — so he merely nodded. "Yeah, we woke up a few hours ago in Route 1 in these bodies and we kinda freaked out a bit–"
"You freaked out and by a lot," Ane unhelpfully provided.
"–I kinda freaked out a bit. " He threw a glare at the Pikachu before returning his attention to the professor. "Then we almost stumbled into Ash Ketchum before we had to run from the rain."
"I see," Professor Oak mumbled, brows furrowing as he played with the end of his coat. "Alright," he said, standing up. "While I don't fully trust you three based on your claims. Frankly, I can't imagine a world without Pokémon. But as a case like yours isn't truly unheard of–"
Wait, what? June blinked. This universe had other isekai-ees before? He… he hadn't expected that. What? "What… what do you mean by that?"
That got Professor Oak to pause, his eyes locking onto the Charmander who flinched slightly at the sudden attention. It took the combined effort of his will and the fact that Professor Oak didn't seem like he was looking directly at him, to not squirm under the man's gaze.
Thankfully though, before it got too uncomfortable, Oak broke away, hands resting on his sides. "While it isn't common, there have been cases where people and Pokémon from other worlds were stranded in ours."
"Really? So we're not just some one-off special?" He tried to hide the disappointment from his tone with a grin which, fortunately, Oak didn't notice.
The professor rubbed his chin. "Well I wouldn't say that," he said. "We never had any cases where the person who crossed over had subsequently turned into Pokémon. I might say you three are the very first recorded case we've had where all three of you were Poké-fied!"
Poké-fied? Were people turning into Pokemon really that commonplace where there was even a term for it? It would explain why Oak didn't freak out when they met him. He opened his mouth to question that exact topic but was beaten to the punch by his groaning brother.
"Hey, as much as I 'adore' this history lesson. Can we please get to the point?"
Damn it, Ane! He was getting invested in this world's lore! Why did you have to go and ruin everything?
With a hint of redness on his cheeks, Oak rubbed the back of his head, "Right, sorry." Clearing his throat, he faced them with a more serious look. "If I may ask, would you three be fine if I conduct some tests to verify your claims?"
Now it came down to this. This decision, his decision might change how things would look out for them. And all he had to do was say a word. Say the word that would forever change the future… hah, as if this whole bit was anything as dramatic as he was making it out to be. Besides, he had nothing to worry about. They weren't lying so the answer was obvious.
Locking in his answer, he opened his mouth, ready to give in and–
His body froze.
The world around him faded into a realm of dark and white. It was quiet, unnervingly so, he could hear the sound of his blood flowing in his veins, the sound of his scales clinking together as he moved and the sound of his heart beating erratically. Spots of black littered his vision as his eyes darted around. His body refused to obey him. His mind went through several scenarios, working overtime as he tried to come up with something.
What was going on? What was happening? Why couldn't he move? Where was everyone? Why was he in a void devoid of colors? What was going on? What was going on? What was going on?
Help him. Somebody help him. This wasn't fun anymore. He was scared. Frozen. He wanted to leave. Leave leave leave leave leave leave.
Get him out of this hellscape!
Help him!
Help–
The spots around him began to move. Like planets converging on a doomed path to their parent star's corpse.
They mixed. They merged. They reacted. Becoming one. Becoming a single orb that warped the very fabric of reality.
Dark and writhing. It shook him to his very core. He wanted to turn. He wanted to look away. He had to run.
But his body didn't obey, his body never obeyed.
He was stuck, rooted to the void like an added accessory.
And yet, despite his situation. Despite the orb of everlasting consumption. Despite the dread that threatened to consume his realm.
He wasn't afraid.
His mind was numb. His emotions muted. Silenced by an intense drive.
A drive that wanted to satisfy his curiosity.
Reaching an arm forward, he moved.
And the world obeyed.
His face distorted into a frantic grin. He needed to grab it! He needed to have it! That orb! That feeling of familiarity!
Of pain. Of pleasure. Of power. Of change. Of weakness. Of control.
He had to take it.
He had to spread it.
He had to–
Then his realm, his Sol's realm collapsed.
And he was back.
Back in the lab, back to answering the professor's question.
He gasped, ignoring the alerted looks from his brothers and the professor. His eyes darted around, taking in the world one step at a time. Nobody knew.
… nobody knew…
The professor held a concerned look, Ane a worried glance and Quil a look of surprise, they seemed to be saying something but June wasn't in the right state to listen.
What should he do? Should he tell someone? Would they even believe him? His brothers would likely think he was joking and the professor was an unknown. What could he do? What should–
He should hide it. It wasn't like anyone would believe him anyway. Yes, there wasn't anything wrong with not telling them right now. He could tell them later.
So for now, he put the experience to the back of his mind and forced a grin onto his face.
"We'll be fine."
"Age?"
"Fifteen. Turning sixteen in a few months," June said, watching as the professor jotted it down on his clipboard.
Next was Ane. "Fourteen," he said with a dull look in his eyes.
And another down for his report.
Quil stood still, eyes darting to the ground and to his brothers for a moment before saying, "I'm… ten."
After the… incident with that void of dark and white, the professor brought them to his actual lab. Filled with doohickeys and futuristic thingamabobs everywhere! There was an unknown machine there, an unknown machine here. Sure he had to stumble over or around random metal bits and devices on the floor but he was too awestruck by actual flipping solid holograms to even care about how messy Professor Oak's lab was.
June had imagined the test would use one of the machines around them and he was correct! Though when Professor Oak revealed the machine that would help them confirm their claims, it was — oh, how would he put it nicely? — disappointing. Its design was rather simple. And by simple, he meant it was literally just a remote. Sure it had a little screen, with an antenna sticking out, and far too few buttons but that didn't mean it was futuristically cool!
… okay maybe the body-wide beam of yellow light scanning them was pretty cool. But that only let it make it to the 'meh' scale of his coolness meter.
Anyway, where was he? Oh right, the test.
The test itself went by pretty quickly. Oak had the aforementioned laser beam scan them and that was it. When June asked exactly what he was scanning them for, Oak replied with ‘Ultra Residue'. It sounded a lot cooler than what it actually was. See, isekai-ed people, or Fallers as most people called them, had this ‘residue' on their bodies. Ultra Wormholes were rather unstable, they constantly leaked out energy that mixed into the very fabric of whatever universe they appeared in. So whenever something went in, this excess energy would cling onto them and since it had also mixed into the energies of the universe, it could also be used to track and enter wherever said person or object came from.
It was probably a lot more complex than that but that was the jist of it.
Anyway, after Oak did the scan of them, he plopped the remote into a computer and now, all they had to do was wait for the computer to finish its job, uploading and scanning the data. That was the part that was taking a while. June sighed. Figured that even with the Pokémon world being several decades ahead of them in technology, computer loading time still took ages to go through.
So in the meantime, the professor thought it'd be great to do a few body checks of them. 'cause apparently, that was the standard procedure for newly Poké-fied people. He took samples of their blood, scales/fur, and whatever examinations you’d usually find at a clinic.
The results came back to them being the prime example of health. No, he was not exaggerating. Those were the exact words Professor Oak used to describe their health. He would say he was surprised but between the whole turning into Pokémon bit, gaining the ability to speak and read previously unlearned languages, and discovering that there were others like him, having perfect health was nowhere near as shocking when you compared them.
Plus, they even received a snazzy bracelet for all their troubles. Oak said it was supposed to be their 'ID' for Poké-fied people. So, naturally, he picked orange since it blended in nicely with his scales. He mentally snickered to himself. It'd be so fun messing with people who thought he was a wild Pokémon, doubly so when he had nothing to worry about since Poké-fied people couldn't be caught. Orange was also his favorite color so he would've picked it regardless of whether or not he could trick someone with it.
"Full name?"
"June…"
And with that, the rest of the hour went by rather fast and by the end of it, they had their personal information recorded and ready to be used. According to Professor Oak, they would be needed as the FHS, short for Fallers Helpers Society, would need a few months before they could begin the search for their home.
So they were staying here for a while. Ane didn't take it well and Quil was as silent as ever, still staring at empty space like it had all the answers to the universe. It was a bit unnerving...
He, on the other hand, was fricking ecstatic. Like, they were going to be in the Pokémon world for an unquantifiable amount of time! If he played his cards right, he could potentially find a way to become a trainer and live every child's dream of becoming a Pokémon champion!
… although he didn't know outright whether Poké-fied people could become trainers, he was willing to put his pessimistic thoughts aside to think of a few plans that could convince the professor.
A nagging beeping noise rammed its way into his mind, knocking away his thoughts and snatching him back into reality. He blinked, wincing at the constant ringing in his head. Thankfully, Oak helped alleviate the pain by hopping onto the computer and silencing the notification.
"Alright, let's see what we have…" Oak muttered and not for the first time did June hate how short his new body was. He really wanted to see the whole process, but unless he was willing to jump onto the table, he was not going to get a good look at the data otherwise.
Sighing, he turned to his brothers who each held a bored look on their faces. "Pretty sweet bracelet, eh?" June said, flashing and shaking the accessory.
"I guess..." Ane rolled his eyes. "Ugh, this is gonna take forever! "
"Hey, look on the bright side. We're living every Pokémon fan's dream here! I mean, sure we're not humans but at least we're in a world we know instead of a random fantasy place."
Ane merely groaned and slumped onto the armrest.
Welp, that didn't do anything. And he doubted he needed to cheer up Quil since… he was still staring off into the distance. Just what was he thinking about?
June shook his head, shrugging off the mystery and returning… huh, was it him or did Oak look a bit worried?
Oak sat there, staring at the screen and chewing on his lips. Then as if feeling June's gaze on him, he turned and straightened his face. "There appears to be a problem…"
A problem? June raised a brow. "What's up?"
Oak sighed at the puzzled look on June's face. "Please take a step back." He pressed a few keys on his computer before a flat, translucent, blue screen appeared above their heads, flashing white for a moment before revealing a picture of them.
Hm. He didn't see what the problem was. The pictures looked perfectly fine.
Then another picture took their place, this time depicting a young boy enshrouded in a cloud of blue dust and sparkles. Then another took its place, this time showing a Pokémon with a similar aura of blue dust and sparkles. Then another and another and…
Oh, he saw the problem now.
"We don't have Ultra Residue…" June trailed off, eyes widening as his mouth hung open loosely.
"What? What the hell do you mean we don't have Ultra Resi-what's it!" Ane exclaimed, jumping off the chair and pointing an accusatory paw at the screen. "This has to be a mistake! We–it can't–"
Ane's words faded into obscurity. His mind flooding with questions. What did this mean? Why didn't they have Ultra Residue? Professor Oak said that anything that had passed through Ultra Space would have it; objects, people, Pokémon. So why didn't they? Why didn't they have it? Why were they different? Did it have something to do with that white void he found himself in earlier?
Amidst the sea of questions, one constant question resurfaced and dwarfed them all.
Could they not go home?
A mixed torrent of emotions followed through, seeping into his systems and threatening to tear his mind apart at the constant back-and-forth. Unsettling questions crept into his mind, rocking him to his very core.
Did he want to go home? Of course, he did, what kind of silly question was that? Uncertainty filled his answer.
Did he want to stay? Of course not, that'd be silly no matter how fun it would be. Only a hint of truth covered his answer.
Why did he want to stay? He had no answer.
Why did he want to leave? He had no answer.
His brothers were here, he didn't have much, other than an obligation, to return home to. He had no friends – not anymore – and no other bonds with anyone else.
But was it right of him to rob his brothers of their rightful futures because he wanted to have fun? What about their dad? Would he be distressed at their sudden disappearance? And was he currently drowning in despair?
June swallowed thickly, gagging at the bitter taste in his mouth. He hated those thoughts. He needed to say something. Think of a plan. Force something to come out.
He bit his lip, the slight pain jolting him back and feeding him the confidence he needed. "Professor, is it really that strange for a Faller to not have Ultra Residue? Isn't there some other method that could've brought us here? A Legendary? An unknown deity? Someone failing a magic spell? Please, Oak! We're not lying when we say we're from another world! We're not! I promise you! We're not…"
Please let this work. Please let his pitiful tone worm its way through the professor's old heart. He needed to give them hope. He couldn't let them down. He couldn't. He couldn't.
"I believe you."
June blinked and he faced the professor with a puzzled stare. "Yo-you do?"
Ane kept quiet, stepping back and letting his brother take the lead.
Professor Oak nodded with a careful smile. "Only a heartless monster wouldn't believe you after that display," he said, shrugging. "This case has been getting weirder and weirder the longer I observed it, so it wouldn't be too out of the realm to believe a Legendary could be behind this."
Professor Oak was agreeing with him? The Professor Oak agreed with him?
But… but that didn't… why would he… why? Didn't he say he wouldn't believe them until they had the evidence to back them up? Did their desperation play that much of a role in convincing him?
He didn't understand. He didn't really. But he was willing to let go and accept. They'd already convinced him. Now what? The FHS couldn't help them search for a way home without Ultra Residue, they were pretty much useless now… which meant the only option left was…
His eyes widened and he covered his mouth, muffling the sharp gasp escaping him. "Say, professor. Would it be too crazy to ask if we could look for a way home?" June said before quickly elaborating upon noticing the professor's questioning gaze. "Without the Ultra Residue to trace back, the FHS can't really help us much in sending us home. So I was wondering if we could become trainers and look for the Legendary that sent us here ourselves."
"Trainers? Hm… I'm not so sure–"
“If you're worried about us, we have knowledge that can give us a headstart to any exams you throw at us," June pointed out.
"Hey, what are you–" Quil in all his glory cut off Ane's protest before it could begin, once again showing his presence to the audience.
"Yeah, I can cook and if there’s anything else we need to know, we can just learn it from whatever’s available,” Quil said.
"Yeah! We can–wait… what do you mean you can–" June started, turning to Quil but his brother ignored him to continue talking.
"If you guys can send ten-year-olds out in the wilderness with nothing but a Pokémon and some survival equipment, then I'm sure… no I'm very sure that we can do it too, especially considering that we could potentially talk to other Pokémon.”
The silence was suffocating and he couldn't believe what he was hearing. Was this really Quil? Were all those empty gazes secretly some form of thinking-increasing magic? And the craziest part was that Professor Oak was considering it! Quil had managed to convince him with fewer words than June ever could. What on Earth was going on here?
June took in a breath. He could feel the headache brewing…
Y'know what. Nope, he was not gonna question things anymore. It was obvious he wouldn't be getting any answers anytime soon. So from now on until further notice, he was not gonna question anything until something drastic happened.
With that mental promise set up, he tuned back just in time to hear the professor sigh. "If that is what you three really want then–"
"H-hey! I didn't agree to this!" Ane shouted, fed up with being ignored and interrupted. "Why the hell are we doing this? We–”
And June was going to put a stop to this before Ane ruined everything. He covered the Pikachu's mouth with a claw, glaring at him. "Shut up. This is our best chance at getting home. If you want to go back home, we have to do this. We have to look for the Legendary that sent us here!" he whispered harshly, neglecting to mention that this supposed ‘Legendary’ wasn't even a guarantee either, what with the multiverse theory and all.
The Pikachu glared back, not backing down without a fight.
Sighing, his face softened. "Look, I don't like this either." That was a lie. "But it's either this or stay in this world forever. You have friends and whatnot back home, don't you?" Ane nodded. "And so do I and–hey don't look at me like that. I have friends." Slightly miffed, he turned away with a huff before remembering the audience in front of him. He let out a sheepish chuckle, scratching his cheek. "Uh, you were saying?"
The professor's face creased up with a worried look. "You know, it's fine if you don't want–"
"No, no. We can do this. We can do this! We can… no need to worry about us. We'll be fine."
Happy grin. June. Happy grin. Give him your best smile.
The professor didn't look entirely convinced but he didn't push any further. "If you're sure then… alright. Let's get you three ready for adventuring. Fortunately, we already have most of the paperwork done so this will be quick."
And with that, June did a mental victory dance.
"Remember to call me when you reach Viridian City," Oak said, watching as they leave with a smile.
When he first met the three, he was ecstatic of course. It wasn't everyday he'd met a Poké-fied person, and having three of them in his lab had him barely holding down his enthusiasm. He wanted to ask them so many questions: What was it like? How did it feel? Was their transition smooth? How did it even happen? And so much more.
But that excited curiosity was curbed when he heard their story. It brought him back to reality, reminding him of where he was. After hearing that story, he was skeptical of them. Even after excusing himself and retrieving a pokéball with a Pokémon linked to his mind and checking them for lies, he was still unsure despite their full honesty. A world without Pokémon? Such a thing was inconceivable. The Pokémon Professor could hardly comprehend the idea let alone, believe in a world where humans and animals were the only beings on the planet.
But when he gathered their data with the energy detector, he decided to scan more than necessary, he wasn't sure why he did it but he was glad he had as the results were… concerning.
Ultra Residue. Inconclusive. As seen by the normal picture of the three.
Infinity Energy. Inconclusive. As noted from the lack of distinct energy inside them.
Type Energy. Inconclusive. As observed when he compared them to other Poké-fied people, they held barely any difference from other victims.
It was only the final data he'd received that forced him to a halt.
Aura. Inconclusive.
He couldn't get those words out of his mind the moment he saw them.
He had checked the systems, redoubled his findings, and tried everything he could think of. But it all came back to…
Inconclusive.
Everything, whether living or not, had Aura. The trees, the rocks, Pokémon, people, Poké-fied people, even the very clothes he wore had Aura.
… and yet, those three… those three children had thrown everything he knew, everything he studied about back into his face.
A loud voice had screamed in his mind then. He wanted to understand them, their culture, their world's history. He wanted to learn more. He wanted to learn everything about them!
But he didn't…
He made a lot of mistakes in his time alive and he liked to think he'd learned a thing or two from his mistakes. He wouldn't push another person away because of his impulsive drive to learn, not again. These children needed someone to support them in a world where they weren't supposed to exist. And he was willing to put his researcher side away in order to help someone in need.
Once the three were out of his house, he smiled as he pulled out a pokéball. "Alright, Tutor. Keep an eye on them."
With that command, his Pokémon blinked away.
"And we're off! To see a land unknown~" With a bounce in his steps and the pokéballs jiggling in his belt, the Charmander snapped his claws and raised his arms to the sky. "This is it! We're actual freaking Pokémon trainers! This is so cool! I mean, technically, we still gotta get to Viridian City first to register but this is close enough!" Nothing could ruin his day.
"Ugh, why do we have to be trainers?"
Yup, nothing could ruin his day.
"Hey, since it's gonna take a while before we can register. What kind of Pokémon do you think we should catch in the meantime? I'm thinking of Pidgey. Pidgeot, I've read, can move faster than the speed of sound. Super speed and flight are so cool, and considering that we're operating on anime rules instead of game rules, there's so much we can work with!"
Silence took hold of their surroundings the moment he finished his sentence. Empty. Quiet. Peaceful. Calm. Only the sounds of their feet walking and the grass swaying in the wind could be heard.
…
God, just what the hell was that white void? Why are we even here for? Ugh, try not to think about the possibility of reincarnation and how that meant my brothers and I died in our sleep…
…
Aah! Bad thoughts! Baaaad thoughts! Leave him alone! He winced, looking for a distraction before taking note of his brothers' gloomy expressions.
Fine. Guess he shouldn't ignore the situation any further.
"Come on, guys. Stop acting like thaaat~'' He nudged them with a grin on his face. "We're in a world where children can catch and beat up gods so stop acting like what we're doing is impossible~"
"I'll feel better if you yourself would stop acting like that," Ane muttered, not looking his brother in the eye.
"Hm… how about you, Quil? What Pokémon do you wanna catch?" He moved on to the Bulbasaur, not at all discouraged by his brothers' lack of a reaction. "Come on, you were so talkative earlier."
Quil sighed. "Fine. If you want my thoughts then I say we wait till Route 22. If we're going to beat Brock then a Mankey would be good against him."
"Do you think Brock's even gonna be the gym leader? 'cause I'm pretty sure his dad takes his place after Ash fights him."
"Oh… oh huh, you're right."
"I know! And I just realized that!" June groaned. "Now we won't know what his strategy will be. I mean, yeah he's probably gonna still use Rock-types but Brock's like all rock hard so how would his dad be? Stone cold?"
And most damning of all, what should his one-liner be after beating the gym?
Ah, so much to consider!
"Come on! We gotta catch that Pidgey now if we're gonna figure out a strategy!"
"Wait, let's do that after I catch a Rattata," Quil said.
"Huh? Why Rattata? I thought you said you wanted a Mankey?" June raised a brow.
"Yeah, but a Rattata could help in–"
"Hah! Help in what? Being fodder? They're like the most useless Pokémon you could ever catch," June said, dismissively waving a claw. "I mean, there was a reason why Youngster Joey was a meme, y'know. Rattata sucks, period. They're dumb, they're disgusting ugly pests and I don't think I'd ever… Why the hell are you guys scooching away from me? Is there something behind… Oh… oh frick… I see where this is going…"
Did he dare look back?
He turned around and immediately turned back, face paler than a sheet of paper.
Nope nope nope nope. He was getting out of here. He was not going to fight off an entire pack of rats.
But then again, this was the animeverse, maybe if he… "Hey, idiots! Everything I said was one hundred percent true and you know it! Try catching me if you can, suckers!" And to add to his taunting words, he stuck out his tongue.
Ignoring his brothers' shocked gasps, he ran as fast as he could, knowing that his brothers were more than capable of escaping before things went bad.
Things went bad.
No, scratch that. Things went terrible.
It was the worst, the absolute fricking worst. He groaned, nursing a bite mark on his side as he leaned against a stump. Why did he think that was going to go well? Ow. He could barely think over the pain radiating from the bruises and cuts on his body.
He glanced off to his side, Ane sat against a tree. He didn't look as bad as June did but he knew Ane had taken some damage judging by the way he winced and cringed, and Quil lay spread across the grass, exhaustion marring his bruised figure.
He messed up.
"Well, that didn't go as planned." June shrugged, resisting the urge to wince.
"Didn't go as planned?" Ane muttered, his voice holding a dangerous tone that threatened to stab him. "You call pissing off an entire colony of Pokémon a plan?"
"Langua–"
"No! This is the reason why I didn't want to be a trainer! I knew something like this would happen! This is all your fault!" Ane shouted, getting up with his paws balled into fists as he stalked his way to his injured brother. "You made them–"
"Hey, hey calm down. I'm… I'm still hurt…"
"You think I give a damn if you're hurt!" he spat out, raising his fist menacingly.
"Quil… little help here… buddy?"
The Bulbasaur turned his head to give him a deadpan stare. "Long live the king."
Well… he was doomed.
"Wait wait wait, don't–"
Ane brought his fist down.
But it never connected.
Instead, a hand grabbed hold of the paw, stopping its collision with his face. June blinked as Ane let out a startled noise and he stared at the hand with morbid interest. The hand wasn't attached to an arm instead it was coming out of a hole in reality.
"What the fu–"
"Now now now, little Ane. We can't have any of that dirty language here, can we?" A voice giggled from behind June and he jumped, all the aches and pain vanishing from his body as he turned to face the source of the voice.
Staring back at him was a man wearing a hood that covered his entire being. In the void where the person's head should be were two brightly glowing eyes made of gold scanning his very soul.
June glanced back at Ane, watching as the hand let go of Ane and scampered its way to the hooded man.
What the hell was going on?
The hooded person floated down — They were floating! — and accepted the hand's request to rejoin its master. Once reattached, the hooded man tossed their hood aside, and with their being now fully exposed to the sun's rays, June's heart hammered in his chest as he stepped back.
"Who… who are you?" June asked. He needed to know. He needed to know who this was and why… Why did this person have his human face?
With a grin etched onto the being's stolen face, he snapped his fingers and flaming letters appeared above his crimson-glazed hair, blitzing through several letters as he said, "I'm known by many names throughout the Infini-verse. Dark Lord, monster, demon, and other dark and grimy curses but my friends call me Crude. It's a pleasure to meet you, Creator." The flames above his head changed to copy those words, their heat providing warmth that left him uncomfortable.
Creator? What did he mean by that?
"Exactly what it says on the tin, Creator."
Did he just–
'Read your mind? Yes, I did~'
June screamed, clutching his head. "Get out of my head!"
"If you say so," Crude said, switching his attention to the other two, his golden eyes twinkling in mischief. "So you two are Quil and Ane. I've been dying to meet the ones he calls his brothers. What do you think of your sweet little ol' nephew?" He chuckled, swaying to the side and dodging Ane's failed pathetic punch.
"Stay away from us, you stupid impostor!" Ane shouted with disgust marring his face.
"Oh, there's a joke in there that you three wouldn't know for a lo~ong while." His grin reached his eyes as he dodged another punch, making his way over to Quil. "Hey–"
“Stay away from me." Quil glared at the hovering man who merely shrugged and floated away.
"Oof, tough crowd. Am I right?"
June held his head with a shut eye, arms blocking the overly aggressive Pikachu from making a mistake. "What are you?" He addressed his flying doppelganger with a bit of difficulty.
"Somebody that you used to know~" He cleared his throat, snapping a top hat into existence and pulling a clipboard out of said hat. "Alright, I've had my fun. Let's get down to business." He gave them a grin that held teeth that fit better if they were on a shark. "'How do you know whether your life is a lie?' Oh wait, that's the wrong question. No need for any existential crises at the moment." He tore the clipboard in half, crumpled it up into a ball, and chucked it back into the top hat which subsequently shattered into a million pieces and bled into the ground.
"Anyway." He snapped a piece of paper into reality. "I'd like you to sign here and here, please."
Please stop… His head hurt from trying to comprehend the last thirty seconds. "What?"
"You three are looking for Pokémon, no? Well, I'm giving you the sweetest package deal of not one, not three, heck not even five, but two, TWO, awesome and rare Pokémon completely free… provided you do the manual work."
"I'd… huh?"
Crude groaned. "Right, I just remembered how slow you can be sometimes." He snapped away the paper, his eyes dimming slightly. "Look, it's simple. You complete some tasks for me and I'll give you two Pokémon as a reward," he said, all the while dodging Ane's futile attempts at hitting him.
"I…" What… what was this thing talking about? Two Pokémon for tasks? The hell was this? Some sort of main quest-type bullcrap? An-and was his doppelganger's hand covered in a wreath of green flames? What the? Did this 'Crude' guy think he'd be desperate enough to get into some kind of deal with a person who literally called himself a demon lord? This had 'Trap!' written all over it.
June growled, swatting away the hand in front of him. "We don't need your help, you… you… faker."
But instead of looking mad or laughing at his rejection, Crude merely gave a dangerous quiet smile that sent chills down his very soul. "Oh… that's just perfect~ Too bad~ that wasn't a real request."
He showed a wider grin that kept widening and widening and–
The image burned into his retina. Its grin threatened to split the being's face in half as the world around them faded into a crimson abyss.
His muscles locked, an invisible force holding him down, compelling him to look, to watch as portals opened up beneath his brothers, sucking them in as he hung in the air, helplessly.
Ane! Quil! He wanted to scream but he couldn't get his body to obey as a single golden eye floated in front of him, mumbling words that hurt to hear as a snap reverberated in the world and his vision turned blank.
"Have fun, Champion." The stolen voice spoke.
Children's laughter filled the calm night. A group of Pokémon sat around a campfire, smiles dancing on their faces as they told stories and cracked jokes, relishing by the warm fire.
The Purrloin, the daughter of the local guards and the eldest of the group stood on her hind legs, forelegs spread wide as she spoke in a low tone. "... it was then the Shinx turned around and saw the monster… a tall creature made entirely of shadows stood there with an orb in hand. The Shinx screamed as the ball connected with his head, dematerializing him and trapping him in to do the monster's every bidding."
Shocked gasps filled the audience as they looked at each other in worry. The adult sitting by, a Luxio, shook her head in amusement, a small grin on her muzzle as she watched the children have their fun. To think she could bear witness to a sight like this after all those years of constantly living in fear.
There were times when she still believed everything was a dream, imagining that she would one day wake up in the cave she'd spent most of her life in as she hid from The Tyrant, hoping so dearly in her heart that they wouldn't end up like her late partner.
She blinked away the tears, shaking her head and banishing those thoughts. She needed to stay in the present. All of her worries and fears wouldn't help her one bit in assuring little Shez's future.
"Hey, Shez's mom!" the Purrloin called out, getting her attention. "Can you tell us the story of how Evie defeated The Tyrant? Shez said he wants to hear it even though he's a big baby."
Shez, her cute little kitten, protested with a small flush on his cheeks. "I'm not a baby, Gild! I can use Spark! Mom says only babies can't do that and I can!"
"You'll always be my baby, Shez." She patted him on the head, ignoring his embarrassed "Mom!" as she ruffled his fur before facing the group. "Are you sure you want that story coming from silly old me? I'm not sure I could do her story justice."
As expected, cries of outrage erupted from the group.
"But you're the best storyteller, Shez's mom!" a Gligar exclaimed.
"Yeah, Miss Luxio. My dad isn't anywhere near as good at telling stories like you can," said the bright Emolga.
As more and more protests piled on, she relented with a sigh, smiling at the group. "If you really wanna hear it then who am I to turn down such lovely faces?" She giggled. "What about you, sweetie? You're sure you can handle it?"
Shez nodded vigorously, having already chosen a seat closest to her.
"Alright, alright," she said. "Gather around, children, and listen to the tale of The Tyrant's End, a true story of our brave hero, Evie..."
Her voice enraptured the kids as the moon cast its light onto the small village below.
Somewhere deep within the forests of Troublewood and an hour away from the nearest village stood a lone building. It was a cosy little thing with a roof of thatch and walls made of the finest wood around, it stood in a small clearing where the moon freely shone its calm brilliance below.
Peering into the small house, a small black fox, a Zorua could be seen sleeping on a straw bed, her ears twitching every so often, blissfully unaware of her surroundings.
Lying her head on a bed bigger than her younger sister, Evie, with her eyes dull and wrinkled from the nightmares haunting her, stared into the ceiling with a glossy look. Stifling back a yawn, her mind was fuzzy and tired yet she couldn't find the strength needed to sleep.
A minute passed, then another and another and another. The moonlight outside was muffled by passing clouds, the light dimming as she let out a heavy sigh.
Life was pain.
Her ear flicked, twitching as she moved her head, barely taking in the world around her. She was tired. No – she muffled another yawn – she was exhausted. Yet, no matter how hard she tried, she couldn't fall asleep. Too many nightmares. Too many voices calling out her mistakes, her failures, her–
She caught herself with a rough shake of her head, accidentally biting her tongue in the process, the pain and warmth that spread further stimulated her mind, jolting her even more awake. Groaning, Evie groggily got onto her paws, eyelids heavy as she made her way outside. A nice walk in the woods should help clear her mind.
Taking in a breath of fresh air, the soft breeze of the night brushed against her fur and her mane swayed under the moonlight. There was a fruity scent waning around her, greeting her as she trudged past a particularly overgrown bush and down a path only known to her.
Feeling the grass beneath her paws and the glimmer of light peeking from the leaves above, memories of a past long ago guided her movements and led her down a path. The path held no discernible differences from many others. No particular groves of trees, no particular landmark. Hell, it wasn't even paved, it was simply there, hidden in plain sight.
Only she knew where the path led, a path that brought memories both bitter and sweet. It opened up to a large field where a river split the land in half, pooling into a lake that sparkled in the moonlight. Stars twinkled high above as the gorgeous moon bathed the land in its pale glow. It looked just as beautiful as it did all those years ago.
Something pricked her eyes and she glanced around, fighting back the memories that threatened to spill into her vision. On the other side of the land, she spied a small crater, now overgrown with grass. That was where she'd first failed her attempts at conjuring a Shadow Ball. The resulting explosion was painful but nowhere near as painful as the memory of her mother’s praises. How her praises never failed to cheer Evie up, how her failures never hurt more than a couple minutes, how everything had felt so simple back then.
A cold sensation gripped her paws and she wiped the tears that blurred her vision. She found herself standing ankle-deep in the lake with no memory of when she’d done so. A glint in the lake caught her eyes and she stared, the amber eyes of her reflection stared back, full of contempt and anger at the pitiful and disgraceful being standing before them.
Cracks rippled through the lake as she brought her paw down, breaking the stoic and quiet facade that masked the truth.
It had been months since she'd dealt the decisive blow against him. It… was nothing short of euphoric. The chains that had shackled her shattered, bringing forth a new wave of peace and joy into her broken state. Everyone was happy.
Perry, Rower, the citizens of Troublewood, her sister… they were overjoyed when she delivered the news. A new era had arrived, one no longer bound by fear and pain.
Yet, despite their happy faces, despite how thankful they were, despite the love and praise they threw at her, she didn't feel anything. In the following weeks, she helped them adjust, helped them learn, helped everyone who needed her. Everyday, she went through the motions with a false smile on her face, each action feeling heavier than the last, the nightmares that lingered definitely didn't help with that regard. Sometimes she didn't feel like leaving her bed, sometimes she didn't feel like moving, sometimes she didn't feel like doing anything.
Days had passed by like a blur and she would often find herself staring into the sky, hours having gone by without her realising. Why did she feel so numb? That was a question that had plagued her for the two months of peace that came.
And it was only during a calm night, sitting by a campfire when she found the answer.
She was bored.
The reason why everything felt repetitive, why it was so dull, was because she was bored. She was bored of the peace. The peace that she and many other had fought over a decade for.
She was bored with it.
Blood, sweat and tears. Countless of lives and deaths. The neverending pressures and pain of everyone, of everything bearing down on her shoulders. She had missed it.
She'd missed the pain that followed her everywhere.
At first, Evie was disgusted at herself, at the thought that had come. She wanted everyone to suffer once more just because she was bored! Why couldn't she have just been satisfied with the peace and be happy with it? Why couldn't she just be happy? Why?
Why did she have to be such a freak?
Water splashed all over her figure but she didn't care enough to notice. Her eyes narrowed and she glared, baring her fangs at the creature in the lake.
Why couldn't she have just been happy with the results? Why was she so fucking selfish? She should be happy! She should be! So why wasn't she? Why was she hiding herself from everyone else? Why did she have to be such a greedy and disgusting twat?
Why?
Why did everyone continue to look up to her as if she was perfect? Why did they love her so much? Why did everyone have to look so happy when they saw her?
Why couldn't they see the weak fool she really was?
She didn't deserve it. She didn't deserve any of it. Not when she couldn't–not when she had failed him.
Why couldn't she have been strong enough to protect the ones she loved? Why was she only strong enough after she’d failed? Why was she so useless?
Tears trickled down her cheeks, rippling the lake as they fell.
Nobody knew the pain and anguish she felt all those years ago. They wouldn't understand. None of them would. Not even her sister.
And in the end, none of it mattered, not anymore. She was strong now. Stronger than anything in this forest. Not even the ancient dragons that hid here could dare hope to challenge her now. She would bear the pain like she always did.
All she needed was for her sister to be happy. Her sister’s happiness was everything to her. All her problems didn't matter as long as her sister was fine and happy.
Cleaning her sorry self off, she cast one final glance over the land, disgust muddying her expression. What used to be a beautiful place was now tainted by her pathetic weakness. Tch, she was such a disgrace.
She turned to leave, ready to try and get some rest before the day began and–
A flicker of light.
There, far off in the distance, she could see yellow light, dancing, wavering. She blinked, rubbing her eyes with a paw to make sure she wasn't seeing things. No, it was still there. What was that? A flame? Was someone out there? That couldn't be right. There shouldn't be anyone living there, not at the moment, she had requested it as such. Plus, she couldn't make out any smoke so it wasn't from any open fires.
A Ghost-type maybe? Again, not likely, their flames were usually purple, blue or pink, never the standard flame. So it couldn't be that.
But then what could it–
Her blood ran cold.
A human.
It could be a human.
She shook her head. No, that couldn't be right. None of them would ever dare venture into Troublewood when he showed up. He–The Tyrant had succeeded at blocking any humans from entering the forest, even the elites and aces stood zero chances against him. They wouldn't come in. They wouldn't…
But what if they did? What if they knew The Tyrant had died and were hoping to expand their hold onto the forest? Her heart stammered a beat and she squished the ugly thoughts that breached her mind, the ones that felt pleasure at the thought of them knowing, the actions that would be taken when they reported their fin
dings, the fights that would ensue, the–No, stop it!
She would never want something like that! She’d never forgive herself if she let innocent Pokémon suffer because of her wants, and her sister…
Okay, she made her decision. Whatever that light was, she would discover the source of it. If it was what she thought it was then she’d take proper actions against them and if needed, kill them. Hopefully, it would never come to that but she wouldn't freeze up if she had to.
“Alright, head in, check it out and see if it needs immediate attention. If not, then scold whoever the fuck is out so late,” she muttered under her breath, her legs tensing up before she cleared the field in the blink of an eye. She glanced around, zipping from tree to tree as she honed in on the brightening light. The woods grew thicker the deeper she went, bushes and overgrown roots obscured the land, forcing her to slow down lest she had to waste more energy healing herself.
Thankfully, there were a couple less cluttered paths available and she stalked them down, leaping over anything she couldn't walk over until finally she rounded a line of oran berry trees and reached the light where it was the brightest. It came from a small field, a little opening with nothing too special.
Her eyes scanned the opening and immediately, she found the source of the light. The sight made her heart leapt to her throat and she found it hard to breathe.
There was a Charmander on the ground, lying dead to the world with their soft breathing being the only indication of life. She couldn't believe her eyes. A Charmander. Here? That made it all the more credible that a human was nearby! But how? How could a human have come here? That shouldn't be possible. Perry had said they were still in an ongoing war. So they couldn't be. They couldn't!
Then perhaps they were abandoned? She almost scoffed at the thought. Charmanders were incredibly popular and sought out back when… She shook her head. It just wasn't possible.
But then how could a Charmander be here if not for a human setting camp nearby? She looked around, eyes scrutinizing every inch of the place for… nothing she could see, no tracks, no footprints, not even a whiff of a human’s salty odour. However, she didn't dare let her guard down. Just because she couldn't see them didn't erase the possibility of a human hiding somewhere.
Her ears flicked forward and her eyes lingered on the yellow flame at the tip of the Fire-type’s tail. Casting one final glance at her surroundings, she crept forward, muscles tensed, ready to bolt or fight if what she was about to do was incredibly stupid.
As she got closer and closer, a new feeling crawled into her range, pressing against her with its weight. A shiver ran down her spine and she froze, eyes locked onto the Charmander that felt like the void.
Pain pounded his head the moment he returned to consciousness. He clutched his head with a claw, groaning as prior memories flashed through his mind. Opening his eyes, he stood up, looked around, and promptly screamed like a little girl.
June scrambled back, arms, legs and tail flailing. His eyes wide, full of panic as his back pressed against the bark of a nearby tree, the sensation of the wood sticking was nothing compared to the fricking heart attack assaulting him. Crap crap craap! “Don't eat me!” he squeaked out, arms covering his face for the inevitable attack. “My flesh is squishy and tainted! It wouldn't be–be…”
He heard laughing. No bites, teeth or claws, just…
Laughter? He lowered his arms, seeing the Pokémon that had previously loomed over him, chuckling, giggling like a little schoolgirl after being told a joke from her crush. Momentarily dumbfounded, he stared in silence at how human it–she? looked.
The Pokémon before him was massive, easily over twice his size and probably near the height of his human self. She resembled a fox, albeit a massive one and she had a light cream mane that was splayed over and yet didn't look as messy as it should look. Her mane trailed down her neck, reaching her withers and meshing well with the fur around her neck, much like an Eevee’s. Though, unlike an Eevee, there was an odd gash of red fur that streaked down from top to bottom and was the same shade as blood.
Huh, was she one of the Pokémon Crude said he was going to catch? If so, then she definitely ticked all the boxes of an interesting mon for an isekai.
Snapping himself out of his stupor, June jumped onto his feet, his cheeks flaring red as he pointed at the Pokémon. “He-hey, stop laughing at me!” he shouted, yet much to his dismay it only made the vixen laugh harder.
“S-sorry,” the fox said between giggles, her fluffy tail swaying slowly behind her. “I just wasn't expecting a reaction like that.” She chuckled, muffling her muzzle with a paw. “Heh, Arceus, I needed that.”
“We-well,” he began, trying desperately to remove the flush on his face, “it isn't like my panic wasn't justified! Any normal person would react like that when they see a giant hungry fox standing over them.”
She raised a brow at him before shaking her head, a toothy grin on her face. “Well, luckily for you, practically no Pokémon can eat each other no matter how hard they try.”
June blinked. “Really?”
She nodded.
How the hell did that work?
Questions for later. He shook his head. He needed to figure out where he was first. With a grin, he struck a pose. “The name’s June and it rhymes with dune! Nice to meet you, lady...”
“Evie, though I’d ditch the lady part. I'm sure I'm not that much older than you are,” she said with a cheery tone that sounded… odd to his ears.
“So mind if I ask where we are or what you ar–”
“Troublewood. You're in Troublewood,” she said, her eyes narrowing the slightest bit, “and I'm an Eevee.”
“An Eevee?” he repeated with a dry look. “You don't look like one.”
“I know what I am, June.” His mind went alert at the danger laced in her tone. The smile on her face thinned and her eyes narrowed in a subtle glare.
“Right,” he said the word in the most sarcastic tone he could make, making a show to roll his eyes. “Evie the ‘Eevee’. Way to hit the nose with that name,” he muttered, missing the way her teeth bared into a growl as he clapped his claws. “Since we're trading secrets! Why don't I share some of mine with ya, Eves?”
“Don't call me that.” She snarled.
Undeterred, he raised a claw. “How would you react if I told ya that I'm actually a human who got turned into a Pokémon and sent to another universe?”
The smile on her face was fully gone now. Hm, that wasn't the reaction he was fishing for. Whatever, too late to back out now.
“Because I actually am a human that got–blah blah blah and not only that but I also, for some dumb reason, have a doppelganger that has godly powers and am now forced into being his–their–my? pawn for some unknown task!” He finished up with a claw pointed to the sky, his legs spread as he struck a pose.
She muttered something he could barely make out, sounding like she was talking about… mind control? The hell? What did that have to do with–
There was a sudden burst of wind blowing against him, dust and grass flying and when he blinked, his vision was obstructed by a round blue object. He took a step back but the orb only pushed itself forward and into his mouth.
“Here, eat this,” Evie said, having closed the distance in the blink of an eye and currently shoving said round object into his mouth. “It's not much but it'll help that wound of yours heal up better.”
His wound? Oh right, he had forgotten about that. He glanced down, it was mostly healed up and was barely even noticeable, how good was her eyesight if she could spot it? Hell, he could barely see it.
And like with anything else that was given to him, June took the fruit with a silent nod, not quite sure how to respond and wishing his voice would come back before awkwardness took hold of their silence. He bit into the oran berry, the juices of the fruit invigorating his mind and body despite its lacklustre taste.
Evie wiped something off her muzzle, probably having already eaten her own berry as she mumbled about the lack of chesto berries nearby. She turned to him, the previous cheer in her tone all but vanished when she said, “Alright, follow me.”
Swallowing the fruit with an audible gulp, June raised a scaly brow. “Follow you? To where?”
“My home,” she answered. “After what happened the last time one of your kind arrived here, not many Pokémon are keen on seeing another Fire-type so soon.”
There was something quite ominous with the way she said it but he didn't dwell on it for too long. With a cheeky grin and an exaggerated gasp, he said, “Oh, I wouldn't worry about that, Eves.” He ignored her growl. “I'm sure I'll grow on them just like I've grown on you. I mean, there must be some sort of isekai charm on me if I'm already being invited by a girl to her home.”
She gave him a blank stare, turned around and promptly began walking away.
“Hey, wait! I haven't started my two hundred questions in this new world yet! Don't leave!”
hi! I noticed you were new to the forums, and I was hoping to give you a read/review a bit earlier, but I ended up getting caught up in things. welcome, though, and I hope you're having a good time!
Overall the premise strikes me as a really interesting one: the trainers are usually the protagonists of a Pokemon story, and usually people get isekai'd into the shoes of a protagonist--but what happens when they end up in the bodies of someone who's not traditionally the main character? I admit I'm curious that their first goal here is to be trainers, since that begs a lot of questions about what it means for a pokemon to be a pokemon trainer, you know? Can they talk to pokemon since they themselves are pokemon? Will their relationship with their pokemon be different as a result, or will they take conscious measures to distance themselves from their pokemon so that the trainer/pokemon dynamic still seems distinct? I think in general isekai stories have a lot of allure as far as blank slates go, since you get to play with the idea of what a set of characters would do in a world where they don't really have any personal investment/stakes, so I'm really curious how this will play off the idea of Charmander, Bulbasaur, and Pikachu trying to become trainers in their own right.
I also like how they're three brothers here--each of them feels like a distinct character in how they react to the world, but you get the benefit of some familiarity with one another, which is useful in a story where literally nothing else is known or familiar.
The tone is nicely snappy, and I think the scene-setting is pretty interesting here, with jumps between a sort of undisclosed meta-universe-beyond-our-heroes and then back to regular narration. I'm reminded a little of Douglas Adams, where there's scene cuts to things beyond our protagonist's understanding that, while completely unknown to the protagonist, provide a little insight/humor for what's actually happening to the protagonists in the "main" story, who are lamenting their fate with meta knowledge like the butterfly affect or that they've never done drugs, lol. I admit it's a little hard to keep track of these two storylines, to know to what extent it's important who/how Sarah is, or why the number 679 is important (honedge?), but first chapters aren't really for answering questions 100%, so I get that! I also liked the main "intro" to the anime world as it's told in terms of what the story isn't; it's a fun stylistic choice that makes things really intriguing without necessarily tipping your hand about what the story is, but it doesn't last long enough so as to be confusing or anything.
It's a bit personal preference here (alongside with the pacing note above), so feel free to take with a grain of salt, but I think sometimes there's a bit too much drawing from visual medium--"Location: Unknown/World: Unknown" doesn't really feel necessary when the resulting scene makes it pretty clear that it's happening in an unknown, almost meta location within a very vast multiverse. But that's just me!
A bit of deja vu for me tonight, so some recs if you're interested in browsing around the forums--if you like the idea of siblings being yeeted into another world and trying to find their way around (one of them is even a charmander!), you might enjoy ArielDiancie's Rescuer's of Light. Overall, the more comedic tone and jumping in with meta fics reminded me of a lot of fics by The Walrein--you might enjoy Sword n' Shield Shorts (a collection of short stories about people poking holes in the logic of Sword and Shield), The Butterfree Effect (which is, shockingly, about the butterfly effect), or Professor Birch's Last Day on Earth (featuring a professor getting trolled by talking pokemon).
Thanks for sharing, and I hope you enjoy your time on the forums!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, kint and a kind hello to you too! I'm definitely enjoying my time here though I'm still trying to overcome my social anxiety in talking with the community. (which I think I'm making decent progress with)
And yes, I understand there's a ton of things to be answered but rest assured, most of them will probably be answered. (That and me trying to answer them now will result in some spoilers)
But there are some questions here that I can answer.
I admit it's a little hard to keep track of these two storylines, to know to what extent it's important who/how Sarah is, or why the number 679 is important (honedge?), but first chapters aren't really for answering questions 100%, so I get that! I also liked the main "intro" to the anime world as it's told in terms of what the story isn't; it's a fun stylistic choice that makes things really intriguing without necessarily tipping your hand about what the story is, but it doesn't last long enough so as to be confusing or anything.
The number 679 is referring to 'The Champion's Sol', as in Briggs was the 679th Champion.
These two characters aren't going to be super involved in this story's plot, they're mostly here to provide insight on the larger multiverses/my other stories (that I haven't really gotten to creating yet). You may see them from time to time but they won't interact with the MCs for a long (and I mean long) while.
They're not in the Pokémon world and they were never born or brought into the Pokémon world, so take that into your consideration.
They're part of a much wider... for the lack of a better term, world.
Hi Shini! I really enjoyed playing Mafia with you on the forums, so I figured I'd stop by and see what sort of fics you were writing. Seems like a really interesting project for sure! It's got the trappings of an isekai-style fic, with our protagonists being taken out of their own world and tossed into the Poke-verse, but with a twist or three. First off, there's some body-swapping going on; it's not just a simple "take human from one location and plop 'em in another". But then, things aren't as straightforward as they seem either, with overseeing deities and coffee-drinking observers from another 'verse. I can't say I have any kind of experience with this style of fic, so I honestly have no idea what to expect going forward.
What I can expect is a lot of tongue-in-cheek humor both from our three protagonists, as well as the narrator/internal monologue. Lots of meta knowledge going on here, like June's knowledge of all 'verses pokemon. (I got a good chuckle out of the "I hope this isn't the manga" line) Some really interesting commentary, too, on real-world knowledge of fanfic protagonists meddling in the affairs of canon characters. I cracked up again at the three of them diving into a bush to stay out of Ash's early-anime path of destruction (watch out for angry spearows!) What starts out as any good Kanto journey does quickly turns on its head as it's shown the brothers-turned-pokemon can talk to humans, and the humans understand them! Poor Prof Oak just wanted a peaceful afternoon after shoveling his jerkwad grandson (what was his name again??) out the door, but now he's got a whole other crazy set of events dumped on his lap.
I appreciate how the brothers all have wildly different reactions to discovering their predicament. June seems to be the "leader" of the bunch, first to wake, most bothered and self-aware of the bunch (at least for now). Ane and Quil taking things a lot better than their other brother, with varying levels of wtf going on.
Lots of little "easter eggs" in terms of meta knowledge being brought into this world via the three brothers. Jokes about first season anime fat pikachu style, Ash running into legendaries all the time (though I hope the brothers realize they've got less than an episode left to run into Ho-oh!), it's all really cheeky and fun.
There's a lot of vagueness going on with all things not-poke centric, like Briggs and his monitor viewing friend, and the cloaked figure and his bold-talking deity buddy. I'd expect some of that to be explained in due time, but as it stands now so early in the fic, there's not a lot I can say to that other than general curiosity as to what it all means.
Looks like you've got quite an adventure shaping up on your plate! Welcome to the forums and I look forward to where the adventure is heading!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Pano! And I enjoyed our time in Mafia too.
There are definitely gonna be a lot of surprises and many things I'm excited for. And I hope you'll be as excited as I am for them.
I love to see how all of you will react to the crazy things I've planned for this series. I hope you all have a splendid day and take care of yourselves!
Merry Blitzmas
Disclaimer: This is mostly stream-of-consciousness thoughts. Take it as you will.
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-Not going to lie, while I also used to label locations at the start of scenes, I’ve soured on the practice. You should establish the setting and time within the narration itself.
-Similarly, stopping the fic to just tell me Sarah’s backstory then spend a couple of sentences describing what she’s wearing does suck me out of things. I believe it’s usually better to try and weave this sort of stuff in more organically? Like, show her strong headed demeanor through her actions. And her dialogue alone suggests she’s chummy with Briggs, pointing toward the friendship piece.
-Already we have a multiverse that I guess these two can just monitor from… wherever? Intriguing. Makes me wish I could’ve seen more of the technology, but I guess that’s part of the mystery of this? My guess is they’ve “played” Pokemon (the game) and that’s where they have their knowledge from.
-June and Ane are… unusual choices for male protagonist names. I honestly thought they were ladies or nonbinary at first. Kinda continued to do so, actually, unless the narration pointed out otherwise.
-There are a lot of cheeky meta nods to the various canon, particularly the anime, and I see June’s even calling out pokemon fan fics. It’s cute, though speaking from experience I caution going too heavily on the meta angle because it can get stale.
-So, is there a time travel component to this, too? We have the isekai, but the Butterfly Effect typically is a time travel thing.
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-Oooh I’d love it if Ultra Wormholes played a role and, theoretically, Solgaleo, Lunala, and/or Necrozma could show up in some capacity.
-Also personal preference, but not a fan of making aura a proper noun here. Feels like it’s trying to give it unneeded emphasis, like game dialogue highlighting particularly important words.
-So, as pokemon, they’re gonna be trainers? Does this mean they can’t use moves? Is their level of sapience different from the normal pokemon of the world? Lot of disturbing implications this could bring up and I’m not sure if that’s intentional. [nervous laugh]
-It’s funny how casual they are about finding Arceus but, like, with all of June’s meta knowledge, why hasn’t she brought up the fact they’re in the complete wrong region to search for them? You would think they’d need to make plans to get to Sinnoh. That would also help with avoiding important characters and causing any paradoxes.
-... oh, I guess they’re saying screw canon. Aaaaand it looks like the pokemon have the same level of sapience. So, like, they’re as smart and perceptive as humans? Again, for me, personally, that brings up some potentially disturbing implications for the whole trainer-pokemon relationship.
-Crude is so “Mwa ha ha, I’m so eviiiiil” it physically hurts. I’m… not sure if that was intentional.
-Like before, I’m… not really sure why we’re getting this infodump about the new place. It brings the story pace crashing to a halt, in my opinion.
Overall, the world-hopping stuff is interesting. But there are a lot of mechanistic things holding it back for me, personally. On the narration front, you can’t seem to decide if you want a third-person limited, with June as the primary POV character, or third-person omniscient where the narrator is a separate character who knows everything about the setting and characters. You flip flop between them, like when you go into Troublewood’s backstory, and it messes with the pacing and perception for me. What adds to this confusion is that you frequently treat characters’ thoughts as internal dialogue. It can be cute, but I personally tend to think it’s more effective when used less often.
Similarly, there aren't a lot of actual setting descriptions to go off of. I have no real idea what Troublewood actually looks like, for example. And I noticed a lot of comma splices, too, especially in your dialogue. Essentially, you’re creating run-on sentences by using lots of commas instead of separating them out with periods.
My biggest suggestion is to find a willing beta reader to help with some of this stuff. Otherwise, if you want a glimpse at another TR author whose fic draws inspiration from the tones of the anime, I’d check out Tetra’s Legendary Adventures.
Hi Ambyssin, and thanks for the feedback! Now this is something that I'll take into consideration. (I was hoping for someone to take my story apart and tell me what I can do better)
Not going to lie, while I also used to label locations at the start of scenes, I’ve soured on the practice. You should establish the setting and time within the narration itself
The labelling thing, if I had to be honest, I sorta came up with at the last moment. It wasn't necessary but I just wanted to get my point across for the readers. It's tacky and I don't really use it for much except for what's given above, and mostly for my benefit in remembering where and what the world is.
Similarly, stopping the fic to just tell me Sarah’s backstory then spend a couple of sentences describing what she’s wearing does suck me out of things. I believe it’s usually better to try and weave this sort of stuff in more organically? Like, show her strong headed demeanor through her actions. And her dialogue alone suggests she’s chummy with Briggs, pointing toward the friendship piece.
I agree with your assessment but I wanted to delve a bit into their back story without infringing on the main plot. Because any scenes containing them (in this story at least) will be very vague and they won't really do much. They'll play a bigger role in my other fics or whenever I can get over my laziness to write their own stories.
Already we have a multiverse that I guess these two can just monitor from… wherever? Intriguing. Makes me wish I could’ve seen more of the technology, but I guess that’s part of the mystery of this? My guess is they’ve “played” Pokemon (the game) and that’s where they have their knowledge from.
June and Ane are… unusual choices for male protagonist names. I honestly thought they were ladies or nonbinary at first. Kinda continued to do so, actually, unless the narration pointed out otherwise.
There are a lot of cheeky meta nods to the various canon, particularly the anime, and I see June’s even calling out pokemon fan fics. It’s cute, though speaking from experience I caution going too heavily on the meta angle because it can get stale
Also personal preference, but not a fan of making aura a proper noun here. Feels like it’s trying to give it unneeded emphasis, like game dialogue highlighting particularly important words.
So, as pokemon, they’re gonna be trainers? Does this mean they can’t use moves? Is their level of sapience different from the normal pokemon of the world? Lot of disturbing implications this could bring up and I’m not sure if that's intentional. [nervous laughter]
(In all seriousness though, I'll delve more into the relationship of the anime world later on, and the level of sapience will come into factor in the other worlds I've made)
It’s funny how casual they are about finding Arceus but, like, with all of June’s meta knowledge, why hasn’t she brought up the fact they’re in the complete wrong region to search for them? You would think they’d need to make plans to get to Sinnoh. That would also help with avoiding important characters and causing any paradoxes.
Casual is how I act, most of the time. And with how I think of things, I'd probably forget that little detail and just want to chalk it upto a... 'Maybe we can find Arceus anywhere rather than just Sinnoh'
oh, I guess they’re saying screw canon. Aaaaand it looks like the pokemon have the same level of sapience. So, like, they’re as smart and perceptive as humans? Again, for me, personally, that brings up some potentially disturbing implications for the whole trainer-pokemon relationship.
Yeah sorry, I wasn't quite sure whether dumping that info would've be a good thing. And I was questioning myself during that whole ordeal.
But then I was like 'Eh, screw this. Let's just effing do it.' I'll try to dial down on the infodump and make the future dumps a bit more palatable and natural.
Overall, the world-hopping stuff is interesting. But there are a lot of mechanistic things holding it back for me, personally. On the narration front, you can’t seem to decide if you want a third-person limited, with June as the primary POV character, or third-person omniscient where the narrator is a separate character who knows everything about the setting and characters. You flip flop between them, like when you go into Troublewood’s backstory, and it messes with the pacing and perception for me. What adds to this confusion is that you frequently treat characters’ thoughts as internal dialogue. It can be cute, but I personally tend to think it’s more effective when used less often
I'm glad you like the world-hopping aspect. I always wanted to try something like this after reading and watching various things similar to it.
The narration is something I'll look into, I was worried about the switches in Chapter 2 but after like almost ten different revisions and rewrites, I just wanted it to be done with and get to the juicy bits of the arc.
Similarly, there aren't a lot of actual setting descriptions to go off of. I have no real idea what Troublewood actually looks like, for example. And I noticed a lot of comma splices, too, especially in your dialogue. Essentially, you’re creating run-on sentences by using lots of commas instead of separating them out with periods.
My biggest suggestion is to find a willing beta reader to help with some of this stuff. Otherwise, if you want a glimpse at another TR author whose fic draws inspiration from the tones of the anime, I’d check out Tetra’s Legendary Adventures.
I always wanted to find a beta reader to help me but talking to someone and doing so, is so damn hard. I'll try to overcome my anxiety and hopefully work up the courage to ask someone.
Sure. I'm always yearning to read more and learn from others.
Anyway, I appreciate you taking the time to write this. Especially since most of my knowledge from all things Ultra stem from your fic (considering that they play a pretty a big role in Guiding Light), the internet and my own interpretation.
I've read through both chapters, simply because I can. That is an interesting concept you have here, characters switching between universes multiple times.
Right out the gate, I have to admit I feel a bit disheartened by the main cast, and if that tints the tone of my review, I'm sorry. I don't know if you know how awful they come off as. I have not seen a single positive trait in either June, Quil or Ane. I hate them. At first I was hesitant to go so hard on them, because you might not be aware of it, but the way you wrote Evie (when she was alone) and the Luxio and her cub was waaay beyond what I got with these three entitled jerks.
Seeing how the Ratattas kicked their asses right after they made an incredibly xenophobic remark shows me that you are at least partially aware and plan for some character development down the line, which is good. But then some of their behavior is played off as funny and anime-y, which is worrying.
The scene between Evie and June was so uncomfy. Not only was the sex-joke creepy af and pretty unwarranted (Also, Evie, a battle-hardened badass getting flustered and putting up with June's shit seems to break character a bit), he also outright saw her as an object in multiple ways (questmarker and loot at the same time) and dismissed her statements about her identity twice (she said she's an eevee, he doesn't believe it and later acts like she's an abomination). It was at this point that my cringe at a preteen's stupidity turned into sadness. Because that was just one sting after the next. (Yeah, he claim's that he's 16 but he acts like an 8 year old)
Then the concept of them becoming trainers... well, Amby already remarked on how bad of an implication that is. And honestly, by the time they left Oak's lab, I found myself wishing they'd just get caught and have to grind in cockfights they don't want to participate in to get a bit of a reality check.
As much as I like a good meta joke (and I laughed at plenty of them here), I always come to hate characters with meta-knowledge because they are just so incredibly arrogant. So I would veer very much on the side of caution on how you want to use those going further. It's not that June wasn't unlikeable enough already.
The writing in chapter 1 was still a bit wonky, but I think I caught most of the things and pointed them out in the linequotes. Chapter 2 shows significant improvement in this regard.
I liked the character of Evie a lot. She seems miles more mature, and her conflict about wanting action after her revolt was successful is an interesting one. She is right that it is selfish and cruel, but if those are her feelings, they have to be addressed.
I also liked Crude. He is so over the top evil and fruity, it just hurts. He's Bloodsteel the Hedgehog levels of cringe, and I love seeing these concepts taken seriously. It makes for some good comedy while also reminding me of... well, being young and dumb.
I've read that this is your second version of this story. Like, wow, kudos for tackling a rewriting! That shows some real dedication to the course. Thanks for the read and keep it up :)
No, no, June. There's gotta be a perfectly reasonable answer for this, you're not actually a Charmander, you're probably just hallucinating, maybe you're on a massive acid trip, right now and-
Of course, that wasn't true, the last thing he remembered was falling asleep on his bed, and he was certain he had never done drugs before.
First sentence is missing a verb. It should be "The local professor of Pallet Town was a man past his prime"
Second sentence slips into present simple.
How can the walls be plain and then stuffed with shelves at the same time? I get that the walls behind the shelves are plain, but those wouldn't be the first things they'd notice, no?
"Do you three want any drinks?" asked the professor, getting their attention. "I've purchased some chamomile tea for a friend of mine but I wouldn't mind sharing some with you three. I do have other types of tea if chamomile isn't something you prefer."
Would Prof Oak offer any random pokemon that waddled into his lab a tea? Wouldn't a bowl of water or some pokefood be more appropriate? Going by anime-logic, what Oak does here is kinda if I offered a talking parrot a mug of tea?
June raised a scaly brow at the dark spot. It wasn't as if the spot was dark because it wasn't well-lit, hell, it was the complete opposite. The space around the dark spot was bright and illuminated by a nearby lamp, so it was strange to see that specific spot devoid of light.
Dude. It's a drill-hole in the wall. It ain't that mystifying.
Jokes aside, it would maybe help to specify how large this spot was. Because I totally read it as a drill-hole.
"Take a look at this Pokémon here, a Lucario, you can see how there's a blue substance around its abdomen, arms, legs, and head. This is what we call, Aura. Aura is an energy source that is present in all living things: Pokémon, human beings, plants and the like all contain Aura. From the results I've gathered on your bodies, you three have no Aura whatsoever, and what's even weirder is that your bodies were absorbing the Aura around you. This is a strange phenomenon, as that's something only Pokémon with life-draining moves can do, for example, Leech Seed, Giga Drain can absorb other Auras. Though yours is still strange as you seem to be absorbing the Aura in the air."
They are antimatter. They slowly kill everything they come into contact with. A renowned Professor, who, yk, STUDIES pokemon, shouldn't let them walk free.
"As you three have stated, your home has no Pokémon so I'm going to assume that means your world's inhabitants do not have Auras. Theory number one details that your bodies are slowly getting accustomed to the Aura in our world, hence your bodies absorbing the Aura in the air. This could mean that over time you could gain the ability to use Aura like a Pokémon despite having the mind of a human. Other humans that have turned to Pokémon have weaker signatures than even baby Pokémon so most of them cannot use any moves aside from weak, basic attacks like Ember, Water Gun, Confusion and etcetera.
"Theory two, overexposure to something your bodies aren't used to. This one is much more lethal because if your bodies absorb Aura too quickly and your bodies can't adapt in time, you will wither away and die. Symptoms similar to overexposure to ammonia and mercury could transpire before you expire."
None of those make sense. They are in a body native to this plane, their consciousness has been transferred. And since they state that they were humans before, it's also not like they are pokemon that come from a pokemon-world without aura.
"Oh right, Arceus exists." June face-palmed. How could he have forgotten about the god of Pokémon? "Professor, how long do you think it'll take us to find Arceus?"
"There is a test, but I'm sure you three could pass them," Oak leaned in and whispered. "Between the four of us, I could probably convince the higher-ups to let you experience being trainers for a few weeks before the test. Unless something comes up and we can safely secure what will happen, I can pull some strings and get one of my Pokémon to keep an eye on you during your pre-test journey."
This is not how you guarantee safety! Why would Oak let these three aliens go around without testing their knowledge, but kids who grew up all their life around pokemon have to???
I would love for once to have the ability to be something akin to God, could you imagine the things I could do now that I'm a Pokémon? All the chaos that could be had if I became that strong?"
Now, why were they so mad? You may ask yourself this question.
And indeed it seemed pretty petty for them to be angry and hateful at their results but keep in mind that June, Ane and Quil had spent hours searching, they had looked into every nook and cranny of the route, but for whatever reason, they couldn't find the Pokémon they were looking for.
Not in the sky, trees or even little dens and holes in the ground.
It was only natural that they'd be a bit frustrated at their fortune.
Okay, now this sounds kinda patronising? The narrator is established as 3rd omniscient, but so far they haven't turned to the audience directly. And this feels like the narrator breaks the narration just to tell me to shut up about any inconsistencies or questions I might have regarding the characters' behaviour.
It was strange. She never thought that the night could be so relaxing. She never thought that she no longer had to hide. That she could watch her child grow without fear, without the stress and dangers.
The strange fox pokémon shook its head. "Of course not. I'm not sure what the humans had been teaching you but Pokémon cannibalism is very rare even amongst desperate Pokémon. Though it does give another reason on why Perry hates humans, well other than…" June couldn't quite hear the last words as it'd murmured them quieter than a talking ant.
June chuckled nervously. "Oh, hoh… really? That's um, interesting…" he coughed to get her attention, his eyes trailing down the fox's body, a small grin cracked his nervous expression. "Would you mind getting off me, please? It's, uh, rather uncomfortable and I don't want strangers to stumble onto us and think we're about to… get down and dirty…"
Its cheeks flared up and its head slowly moved down, its irises shrunk to pinpricks as it took in the position they were in.
It stood above him, pinning him down with its powerful paws, and if its voice was a hint, it was probably female too. Thus, making their position look even more uncomfortable and awkward.
This feels extremely awkward and uncomfortable to read. It's one of the oldest anime tropes in existence and not a single living creature would actually act this way.
"Hey, um, what exactly are you, Evie? I haven't seen a Pokémon like you before."
"Like I haven't heard of that before," she muttered with an eye roll. "I'm an Eevee. Got that? Other Pokémon had asked me that before and it's very frustrating when none of them believes me... Tch, just because I look different doesn't mean I'm not an Eevee."
A small scowl graced her vulpine features.
So it's not only me that thinks she isn't an Eevee.
He gave her a narrowed glance, wondering whether it'd be a good idea to try and get more information out of her.
He shrugged and proceeded without a second thought. "Sorry Evie, but I gotta agree with whoever said that, you don't look like an Eevee especially since you're… a bit bigger than normal."
He paled. She's only a year older than me? Crapcrapcrap… I'm dead. Quick! Think of something!
His eyes fell onto hers as he felt his body move forward. He was an inch away from her face, his breath touching her cheeks. Evie blinked in surprise, jerking back from the sudden closeness.
"You're the most beautiful thing I've ever laid my eyes on."
That was beyond terrifying if it was true, and he didn't think it was, he hoped it wasn't true. He knew he wasn't strong enough to deal with any worldwide messes, so it must be about Evie, right?
He remembered that the man had promised him an adventure and tasks completion, not any world-saving shenanigans.
Hi there! Glad you enjoyed the read and I loved how you feel about three main brothers' characters. I mainly threw some of my and my own brothers' personalities, mix them in a cup and removed the filter which is why they can seem likable to some and downright annoying to others.
Loving the way you expressed what you liked and disliked about this fic, and I can understand the corcern.
Right out the gate, I have to admit I feel a bit disheartened by the main cast, and if that tints the tone of my review, I'm sorry. I don't know if you know how awful they come off as. I have not seen a single positive trait in either June, Quil or Ane. I hate them. At first I was hesitant to go so hard on them, because you might not be aware of it, but the way you wrote Evie (when she was alone) and the Luxio and her cub was waaay beyond what I got with these three entitled jerks.
Sorry you have to feel like that, but it's fine. I'm not looking to please everyone with the trio's early personalities anyway. I wanted June to be like me when I was 15 but without any filters which is kinda why he's so gosh darn arrogant and annoying.
The other characters have a ton of characterisation done since I like to think of them as having completed their own journey while these three haven't yet, so they have a lot of incoming things to deal with.
Seeing how the Ratattas kicked their asses right after they made an incredibly xenophobic remark shows me that you are at least partially aware and plan for some character development down the line, which is good. But then some of their behavior is played off as funny and anime-y, which is worrying.
Planning for a lot of things that can break their perspectives on the world. They're still learning about how they fit in the world and sibling talk can be the worst thing you'd see from them ('cause there's a lot of messed up things I joke about with my brothers that I don't talk about in public).
The scene between Evie and June was so uncomfy. Not only was the sex-joke creepy af and pretty unwarranted (Also, Evie, a battle-hardened badass getting flustered and putting up with June's shit seems to break character a bit), he also outright saw her as an object in multiple ways (questmarker and loot at the same time) and dismissed her statements about her identity twice (she said she's an eevee, he doesn't believe it and later acts like she's an abomination). It was at this point that my cringe at a preteen's stupidity turned into sadness. Because that was just one sting after the next. (Yeah, he claim's that he's 16 but he acts like an 8 year old)
Then the concept of them becoming trainers... well, Amby already remarked on how bad of an implication that is. And honestly, by the time they left Oak's lab, I found myself wishing they'd just get caught and have to grind in cockfights they don't want to participate in to get a bit of a reality check.
Definitely understand how this can make you feel. I've seen some comments on how this'll work, and I intend to explain it once they come back to the anime world.
As much as I like a good meta joke (and I laughed at plenty of them here), I always come to hate characters with meta-knowledge because they are just so incredibly arrogant. So I would veer very much on the side of caution on how you want to use those going further. It's not that June wasn't unlikeable enough already.
Meta-knowledge won't really come into effect too much, since this June was from a time where he'd only played two main-series game and watched the Black&White anime.
And I'm definitely trying to lace his arrogance pretty early, just to shatter them later on. (especially with the kind of crazy things that'll happen in the second arc/and an interesting antagonist being mentioned later on)
The writing in chapter 1 was still a bit wonky, but I think I caught most of the things and pointed them out in the linequotes. Chapter 2 shows significant improvement in this regard.
I know that chapter 1 wasn't the greatest but I was trying to see what sort of feedback I'd get. Chapter 2 was improved with the advice from these reviews.
liked the character of Evie a lot. She seems miles more mature, and her conflict about wanting action after her revolt was successful is an interesting one. She is right that it is selfish and cruel, but if those are her feelings, they have to be addressed.
I'm glad you like her as much as I do. She has a ton of character development that'd happened offscreen due to the fact that she could literally have her own spin-off. (if I ever get the time to write said spin-off, of course.)
I also liked Crude. He is so over the top evil and fruity, it just hurts. He's Bloodsteel the Hedgehog levels of cringe, and I love seeing these concepts taken seriously. It makes for some good comedy while also reminding me of... well, being young and dumb.
Glad you like his cringy persona, I plan to go pretty far in showing off how he annoys everyone and there's a lot to talk about when it comes to this guy, I've planned for a ton of layers of things for him
First sentence is missing a verb. It should be "The local professor of Pallet Town was a man past his prime"
Second sentence slips into present simple.
Would Prof Oak offer any random pokemon that waddled into his lab a tea? Wouldn't a bowl of water or some pokefood be more appropriate? Going by anime-logic, what Oak does here is kinda if I offered a talking parrot a mug of tea?
Dude. It's a drill-hole in the wall. It ain't that mystifying.
Jokes aside, it would maybe help to specify how large this spot was. Because I totally read it as a drill-hole
They are antimatter. They slowly kill everything they come into contact with. A renowned Professor, who, yk, STUDIES pokemon, shouldn't let them walk free.
Well, considering that they haven't exploded the earth yet, I think they're fine... (also that's not how antimatter works. Things become nukes when anti meets normal)
None of those make sense. They are in a body native to this plane, their consciousness has been transferred. And since they state that they were humans before, it's also not like they are pokemon that come from a pokemon-world without aura.
This is not how you guarantee safety! Why would Oak let these three aliens go around without testing their knowledge, but kids who grew up all their life around pokemon have to???
Okay, now this sounds kinda patronising? The narrator is established as 3rd omniscient, but so far they haven't turned to the audience directly. And this feels like the narrator breaks the narration just to tell me to shut up about any inconsistencies or questions I might have regarding the characters' behaviour.
This feels extremely awkward and uncomfortable to read. It's one of the oldest anime tropes in existence and not a single living creature would actually act this way.
If you think of a Pokémon wanting and thinking like someone that's LGBT+, then I guess you could see it like that. I didn't think this could be read like that.
Yup, good to know this sentence made you feel that. I tried to hammer in the arrogance of his character pretty early just so I could break it into pieces in the next chapter.
Also since I'm a doofus and forgot to answer one more reply: The food issue here will probably be explored later, maybe not. But I can say that the Pokémon IN Troublewood don't eat each other. They have, I guess you could say 'Protein Berries' for that
I've read that this is your second version of this story. Like, wow, kudos for tackling a rewriting! That shows some real dedication to the course. Thanks for the read and keep it up :)
This is absolutely not going to be a normal day, is it.
I wonder what the significance of the number 679 is. And who is the Champion, and what is their Sol?
I'm having a very hard time visualizing this place, maybe you could describe it in more detail? Unless that was intentional.
Ooooooooh, looks like this is going to be a multiverse story!
Also having trouble visualizing Route 1. Maybe you could describe the landscape a bit more, like maybe there's a tree casting a shadow on the group?
And here we have our first protagonist, in reasonable surprise and shock. And oh boy, he doesn't have any amnesia. That's going to be interesting.
I really like how you include his thoughts in the narration!
I like the nod to the manga, it's always nice to see it referenced.
Looks like we have three protagonists! And the other two are much less shocked at being Pokemon than the Charmander. I wonder if a Squirtle is going to join the group at some point to complete the starter quartet?
Oh boy, so one of them is this "Champion". I wonder what this hooded figure wants with them, and how the "Champion" created him?
Ooooh, so they're in the anime world. I'm interested to see how that'll impact things.
Heh, yeah, things would probably massively change if they interacted with Ash.
And these three are able to be understood by humans. Oak is almost definitely going to be very intrigued by that.
I love Oak's shock at meeting talking Pokemon.
Heh, nice title drop.
That was great! I'm really intrigued by the setup you have here, and the character dynamic between the three Pokemon is fun. My favorite part is them meeting Professor Oak.
I look forward to reading more! Thank you for writing this!
G'day, Bench! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Things are gonna get pretty hectic in the future and I'm happy to see that you're joining me on this crazy adventure.
Looks like we have three protagonists! And the other two are much less shocked at being Pokemon than the Charmander. I wonder if a Squirtle is going to join the group at some point to complete the starter quartet?
I'm pretty sure they're all their own starters. /hj
Yeah, Oak meeting some Pokemon who used to be humans from another world where Pokemon is a franchise of fiction, and then those Pokemon becoming trainers, definitely sounds like it's going to change the anime canon quite a bit.
I wonder what other trainers will think when they run into these three?
I am immensely intrigued by Crude.
Oooooh, Troublewood seems really interesting! Looks like Pokemon have their own societies in this world!
Huh, looks like this Pokemon doesn't like humans, and there's apparently a human war happening.
Oh boy, looks like this Pokemon doesn't believe June. That's going to be interesting.
Overall, I really enjoyed this chapter! Lots of worldbuilding happening, and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Hello! I'm here for catnip, and currently looking at the first two chapters of the story. I did read this a while back when catching up the first time, but I took a quick skim to refresh myself here.
It seems like right off the bat the story throws a premise with a huge scope at us, from people talking about a "champion" returning (and I assume not the kind you get by winning the League) to a full-blown isekai to disembodied voices talking about lofty decisions. It's the kind of thing I'd expect from say, a large PMD fantasy, except this is set in the trainer world instead. And the possibilities from that, especially the unique situation you've set up here, are very intriguing. I'm not entirely sure what story this is going to pan out into yet, but I'm definitely interested to see how pokemon traveling all on their own in this world work, and what kind of adventures these three (four, with Evie in the picture? Or just two groups for the next while?) are going to have.
In practice, I do think there are a couple of things that could be tidied up. One example is the prose's tendency to kind of just.... tell us things, instead of properly showing us; this is to say that there's a lot of one-liners in your prose that just tell us something's happening rather than describing it. This leaves a lot up to the imagination, and this means that your readers will get less of a vivid picture of what's going on in your story. Now, this isn't always bad! There should absolutely be a balance, and you might just be geared to write leaner prose. But I think it's worth looking at points where you can ease in some more description. A line like the one I've plucked below is a good example of a place where you could stand to describe more, because there's a lot happening here.
I think the characterization and dialogue here could also use a bit of work; one of my thoughts when reading was that Oak seemed to be rather out of character here. And in general, I notice points where the characters sometimes just seem to spout things, but those things don't really sound natural; they sound like exposition. see: a lot of Oak's lecture about UB's, Aura, etc. In general I feel like the characterization is a bit one-note and rigid here--characters have traits to discern each other on a surface level, but it should go deeper than that. It should feel like they have personas that influence what they say from the ground up, and the only characters I would say really have that at the moment are Evie and Crude. I think this is something to think on for future chapters; envisioning yourself as this character and then trying to flesh their past, internal monologue, temperament out, and so on might give them a lot of unspoken depth here.
Plot hopes....
It seems like these three got snatched off the path before their journey could even begin, which is disappointing. I think seeing a journeyfic-type structure with this new setup added to the picture would be a really interesting idea, and I also want to see more of the broad worldbuilding you have set up here. Any world where sponsors are willing to sponsor pokemon as their own trainers has to have some juicy stuff lying about. Of course, the story has pivoted into introducting people such as Evie and Crude, which I also think are interesting in their own right. It looks like we'll be hanging out with Evie for the near future, at least since June has been the POV character thus far, but I'm interested to learn more about what Crude is. The current theory I'm sticking with, especially given that he calls June his "creator" is that he was some kind of fictional character that gained sentience and decided he was going to wreak havoc on his creators for a change. He certainly seems to be the one who pulled them in here, and he obviously has Terrible Power at that. Can't wait to see more of him.
Overall, I'd say this is.... unique, if nothing else. It's a mishmash of well... everything, with a lot of potential to turn out in several interesting ways. It's too early to tell just where it'll go yet, but I'll be interested to see the result!
Technically USUM are the most recent ones, their time-lines are around late 2018 and early 2019. (That doesn't mean I'll stray away from Gen 8, LA and 9 though. It'll be fun to see how Gen 9 messes with my worldbuilding)
I'm not entirely sure what story this is going to pan out into yet, but I'm definitely interested to see how pokemon traveling all on their own in this world work, and what kind of adventures these three (four, with Evie in the picture? Or just two groups for the next while?) are going to have.
In practice, I do think there are a couple of things that could be tidied up. One example is the prose's tendency to kind of just.... tell us things, instead of properly showing us; this is to say that there's a lot of one-liners in your prose that just tell us something's happening rather than describing it. This leaves a lot up to the imagination, and this means that your readers will get less of a vivid picture of what's going on in your story. Now, this isn't always bad! There should absolutely be a balance, and you might just be geared to write leaner prose. But I think it's worth looking at points where you can ease in some more description. A line like the one I've plucked below is a good example of a place where you could stand to describe more, because there's a lot happening here.
Heh heh, oh yeah, I can definitely see the problems in the first 2 chapters. I'll get around to re-editing them either when I'm done with the first arc or whenever I feel like it.
think the characterization and dialogue here could also use a bit of work; one of my thoughts when reading was that Oak seemed to be rather out of character here. And in general, I notice points where the characters sometimes just seem to spout things, but those things don't really sound natural; they sound like exposition. see: a lot of Oak's lecture about UB's, Aura, etc. In general I feel like the characterization is a bit one-note and rigid here--characters have traits to discern each other on a surface level, but it should go deeper than that. It should feel like they have personas that influence what they say from the ground up, and the only characters I would say really have that at the moment are Evie and Crude. I think this is something to think on for future chapters; envisioning yourself as this character and then trying to flesh their past, internal monologue, temperament out, and so on might give them a lot of unspoken depth here
Overall, I'd say this is.... unique, if nothing else. It's a mishmash of well... everything, with a lot of potential to turn out in several interesting ways. It's too early to tell just where it'll go yet, but I'll be interested to see the result!
Sometimes, I think to myself that there just may be too many things going on. But then again, it's extremely fun to write something this large scale and I love a good challenge.
Nice to see that this peaked your interest and I'm glad to have you join me on this crazy adventure.
Take care, you two. Have a great rest of your day!
Major thanks to SparklingEspeon and The Silver Tux for beta-ing this chapter
In the dead of the night, the full moon shone brilliantly on the lush forest below. Trees towered over the young and fine saplings beneath them. Their leaves rustled in the midnight breeze, producing a gentle song throughout the woods. Bushes and flowers grew among the ginormous roots, and the fruits on the trees gleamed under the light of the moon.
A big shadow soared through the night sky, momentarily blocking the moon from view. The shadow was on closer inspection, a big flock of bird Pokémon flying in a certain direction. Two Pokémon were stationed in the front, guiding the flock towards their objective.
The front left Pokémon was a small bird with brown feathers on its back, head and tail. Cream-yellow feathers covered its underbelly and the lower parts of its wings. It had powerful eyes that allowed it to see for miles. The Pokémon had small talons and a peach beak for self-defence. This particular specimen, however, had a head crest of red feathers similar to its evolved form, and was thus easily distinguishable from its peers.
To its right was another bird Pokémon, but its physique was noticeably different from the Pidgey. Its feathers were a darker shade of brown and only covered its head and tail. Similar to the Pidgey, its underside was also covered in cream-yellow feathers. Black feathers covered its back, and its wings were pinkish-red and ended in lighter tips. Its beak was a bit jagged, and with this particular Spearow, on its right eye and down its cheek was a small straight scar.
The Spearow poked her partner's wing, gesturing behind her with a head tilt. "Check on the flock, Feath. They're getting a bit too rowdy for my taste."
Feath nodded. "Sure thin', Spar."
Spar flew a few metres forward, allowing Feath to take her place. He flew high into the sky before clearing his throat and gathering the flock's attention.
"Alright, everybody. I understand that some of y'all are getting restless." Feath swept his eyes over the flock, taking in the reactions of his subordinates.
"Understatement of my life," someone muttered.
Ignoring that comment, Feath continued to speak. "But rest assured, we're all doing this for a good cause. Perry has never misled us before and we have to have faith in him."
A gale of wind blew by them and Feath paused, allowing them a moment to take in his words.
"Then, why aren't we told about the objective of the mission? And why are we up so late?"
Feath's gaze landed on the one who spoke, it was the same voice as before, but it had grown increasingly irritated and louder. A larger bird, about twice Feath's height hovered in the middle. His red head crest flowed in the wind, and his red-yellow tail feathers helped in stabilizing his flight. The expression on Feath remained the same and he said, "That'll be explained in due time, Gray. Be patient."
"Patient?" Gray cried out, nearly smacking a nearby Pidgey with his wing. "We're going to an unknown location with unknown goals! What sort of leader would be keeping the objective of the mission secret?"
He heaved a breath, looking at everyone around him. The various Spearows and Pidgeys were all staring at him in surprise. "What? You can't tell me you don't think this isn't suspicious, can you?"
The flock murmured amongst themselves. Feath glanced at Spar who merely shrugged and muttered some words to him.
Feath quirked a brow at the given orders before shaking his head, shrugging. "If you say so, hon."
He interrupted the flock's murmuring with a powerful gust of wind, turning their attention towards him. He cleared his throat. "Alright, in response to the… questions of the flock. Spar has given me permission to speak of the mission's details, but she will have a talk with Gray about his loyalty to our leaders."
Gray's face reddened and he turned to retreat from the stares but in doing so, he had forgotten about his body's size and a couple of Pidgeys had gotten caught in the crossfire.
The Pidgeys cried out in shock, and Gray was left tangled in a pile of feathers.
"Ah, I see now so that's why you were actin' all weird and like," Feath mused, a spark of recognition flashed through his eyes. "You're still sufferin' from the aftereffects of evolution, aren't 'cha?"
Gray untangled himself and let his head drop, blocking the rest from seeing his blushing face. "Yeah… this body is… um, still taking a toll on me."
Feath chuckled, flying over to him and putting a wing on his back. "It's alright then, everybody reacts to evolution differently. I know some folks haven't taken it as well as others. Change can certainly be a strange thing, but the power of evolution will be worth the troubles."
"I sure hope so," Gray mumbled, although still not entirely convinced by the words, he still felt a bit better after some reassurance.
Feath chuckled, patting his back before cocking his head forward, showing off his head crest. "As y'all can see, I'm pretty close to evolving myself. So know that I'll have to join ya sometime in the future."
Feath flew in front of the Pidgeotto, spreading his wings and bowing. "Now, I'm sorry that we have to bring you out when you haven't adjusted to your new body, Gray. Spar and I needed the extra firepower for this mission and you were a clear choice."
Gray blinked and he lifted his head, his eyes gazing into the smaller bird with curiosity. "Extra firepower?"
Feath smiled, his wings beating as he flew back to his previous spot. "Of course, why else do you think we have such a big flock for the mission?"
Spar made her way beside him, a crude smirk making its way on her face. "There's a reason why we didn't tell you the objective, soldiers. After all, none of you would have volunteered for this mission if we did so."
A murmur broke out in the flock and everyone whispered amongst each other, wondering what she'd meant.
Spar's voice cut through the murmuring. "Does the name 'Zeal' ring any bells? I bet some of you already know who she is, but for the rest that doesn't. Then I'm pretty sure you've at least heard of her sister."
Her eyes glinted in the moonlight as she flew upwards, her wings beating slowly and menacingly. "After all, she was the one that freed us from The Tyrant in the first place."
Gray's breath got caught in his throat, the effects of the shocking revelation hitting him. The others weren't looking so well either as looks of realisation dawned on them and their faces turned to horrified shock.
"Now don't you all run away! There's a reason why we didn't tell you the mission," Spar shouted, stopping them in their tracks. "A potential threat has been discovered and with it, a path of destruction is inevitable. The capture of Zeal the Zorua is vital in ensuring the safety of our citizens. Now, I know we all heard of the stories and rumours of how Evie took The Tyrant and I don't blame you for wanting to run away. But the safety of Troublewood resides on your decision, so choose wisely."
Spar gave the group a short glance, seeing the resolve returning in their eyes. She nodded, giving them an approving smile. "Alright then! If none of you wants to leave then let's get to it!"
"Let's do it! For Perry! For Rower! And for the safety of Troublewood!" Feath exclaimed.
"For the safety of Troublewood!"
The grass swished under the moving bodies of the two. Walking through a game trail, they arrived at an open field. The sounds of flowing water greeted them on their left and the stars above twinkled in delight.
Evie's ears were pressed against her skull as she trotted towards the river, her teeth gritting and movements heavy.
June trailed behind her, a toothy grin on his face. "So-"
"Shut it." She sneered, her tail flicking against the dirt.
Ignoring the teen, she crouched and gulped down mouthfuls of water. The water gushed down her throat, its cool, refreshing sensation doing nothing to calm her ire. She growled and wiped her mouth, splashing some water at the Fire-type in another attempt to silence him.
June ignored the water dripping off of him and spoke once more, his voice still containing the same high-pitched enthusiasm as before.
"But-"
She cut him off with a snarl, stomping her paws into the dirt. "Whatever you have to say will not and won't ever be anything worthwhile. If you have nothing but stupid jokes, asinine comments and delusional claims then I want you to shut the fuck up! You got that?" The words came out sounding like a growl, her eyes narrowed and burned with rage. "Arceus, you're the most obnoxious Pokémon I've ever met. Do you even know how you sound when you speak?"
She was clearly at her limits and June knew it. His constant pestering was finally showing progress. He smirked and moved in for the kill, his flame lighting up and his tail swaying in the grass. He stepped forward, arms raised in a shrugging motion. "Well, of course, I know how I sound like. Have you seen the things I've been through? Besides, I just wanted to ask a question. It's the least you could do for me."
"The least I could do?" she said, her voice low and her teeth bared. Her fur puffed up in anger and her tail swung low and slow. "The least I could do is nothing. I have nothing to gain for housing you. I could've left you there to rot. If you weren't so pathetic, I would've thought you'd be a danger. The locals certainly would, they wouldn't have cared even if you weren't anything like him."
His breath hitched and he silently pondered over his actions. He hadn't planned for her to snap at him like this. He wondered whether he should stop before things got too hot for him. But on the other hand, this was the opportunity he had been waiting for. If he wanted to get any clues on how this place worked, this was the best moment to do so. An opportunity like this probably wouldn't come any sooner either.
He shrugged lazily, letting his eyes wander over her body as the cool night breeze rushed at him from the east. "Look, Evie. I don't know who this guy is and why you hate him so much, he's probably not as bad as you make him out to be, but whatever. I just wanna know why this place is so dark and gritty–"
Her eyes hardened into a glare and his breaths became laboured. His eyes were forcibly locked onto hers and he found it hard to divert his gaze.
She prowled towards him, a low rumble escaping her throat. June shrank under the glare, his breath caught in his throat.
"You have no idea," she muttered, her voice coming out in growls. Although she was quiet, her voice sounded much clearer than before. "No idea how much he ruined this place. The Pokémon here, my sister, my friends. They all suffered in fear. Every day, every night. I-we had to break our bodies… ration our food… hide for hours...days...months even... That life killed dozens of innocent Pokémon. For years, I had to hear so many children cry for their deceased parents, parents who could no longer comfort them, embrace them and tell them they're loved. Do you… do you know how that felt? To have your loved ones suddenly snatched away because you couldn't do anything… because you were too weak? Do you spend days dreaming for their warmth, only to meet the cold, harsh reality of the truth? Do you wake up every day crying but you wouldn't allow yourself to grieve because everyone was depending on you… be-because they expected you… expected you to win…" She croaked, her voice low and sounding broken. Her teary eyes no longer met him as her head drooped in an attempt to hide her tears.
Evie shuddered violently and shook her head, forcing herself to glare at the Fire-type despite her blurred vision. "Do you… Do you understand how that felt… to always live in constant fear? Do you understand what it was like to… to think that at any time… your loved ones could die? That you're afraid you couldn't save them?" she said between sniffles, her tears flowing down her cheeks and dampening her fur.
"Well, do you?" She snarled, her eyes a mix of despair and rage, she sounded like she was on the verge of breaking down but refrained from doing so.
His eyes lingered on her teary ones, and he found it hard to keep eye contact. His eyes fell to the ground and he fidgeted, his left claw grasping his right arm.
A blanket of guilt and repressed thoughts overwhelmed him and his words came out slow and quiet. "I… I… no… I… I don't..."
Evie scoffed, bringing up a paw to rub her bloodshot eyes. "Figures," she mumbled. "What was I thinking? Talking to a fool, an insane Arceus-damned Pokémon? Some hero you turned out to be."
She laughed a sour and bitter sound, and it made him wince. She turned around and said with a low growl, "Come on, let's just go."
Her footsteps were quiet and soft, barely noticeable in the nighttime breeze but to him, it was all he could hear.
The false joy he created, the fake brightness, the empty indifference, they all crumbled away. The facade he built up, the guilt, the pain, they bored down into him, crushing the mask into dust.
He grimaced and kept his eyes to the ground. The glisten of the river caught his eye, and he found himself lost in the sea of stars. The stars were always something he'd enjoy watching. There was something above their sparkle and mystery that made him yearn for them, yearn for the secrets they held.
But as he stared at the unfamiliar sky, his mind was brought back to the cold harsh reality of his situation.
He glanced back at the retreating figure of the vixen, his mouth working before his brain.
"No. Evie… I do know what it's like to lose someone because of my inaction… if I had helped her, then maybe… maybe she would still be here instead of…”
She paused in her steps, ears lowering momentarily before she shook her head. "Then… then you should know what it's like to hate yourself."
Hate myself… Her words struck a chord and he found it hard to deny them. Why had it sounded so true?
June grimaced and walked towards her, a claw gripping an arm as he trailed behind her in silence.
A doleful ambience followed their tracks, their soft and quiet steps accompanying them as they passed a line of apple trees. The trunks of the trees were firm and thick, and along the branches were small flowers, red apples and abundant leaves. More trees stretched to the end of his vision, there were maybe a few bushes and overgrown roots here and there but for the most part, it looked like any other plain and normal forest.
It was scary how normal it looked, it was terrifying how it reminded him of the one near his home, how it made him imagine the sounds of birds chirping, the roosters cackling in the dawn. He couldn't believe he was missing his home. The thoughts… they made him long for home, he didn't like them. He didn't like how they made him question everything he did, they made him wonder if he could even survive out here without Evie, it made him question whether she'd forgive him after what he did.
Why? Why did he act like that? Why was he so… so annoying… and so childish?
Of course, he knew the answer why.
He kicked a pebble in his path, sighing as it collided with a nearby tree. He was an idiot. He knew that. He thought he had a chance to be something, something important in a world that was so different from his. He thought he could emulate those happy-go-lucky characters in the shows he'd watched.
He thought he could make friends like them. He thought he could ignore everyone's feelings about him because they weren't real. He didn't want to think they were real. But as his mind pondered over Evie's words, the image of her teary face flashed into his mind, reminding him that they were real.
Those Rattatas he insulted.
Professor Oak who helped them even when it didn't make sense for him to do so.
They were all real living beings with their own lives, they had experiences like real people… and he thought he was better than them because of what? Because he was real and they were supposed to be fictional?
His actions had consequences but he chose to ignore them because he thought he was supposed to be someone important. Someone that was supposed to do something in this– in these two worlds.
Was he just an accident? Why did Crude attack him if he was? God, he didn't know…
Evie was correct, he didn't know anything… he didn't know if he could accept his new life… there were too many… too many things that had happened… he didn't want to think about them… he didn't want to think about how his words could have affected the people around him…
They weren't real…
But they were… they were as real as him… and… and…
He didn't think it would all blow up in his face. He didn't think his words could harm someone like Evie. He didn't think a couple of words could hurt her.
He let out a long and slow breath, his mind being clouded and weighted down by more of his thoughts and regrets.
He should apologise to her. She… didn't need someone like him to disturb her… if she wasn't enjoying his presence then he should leave.
He could find his brothers himself and not be a bother to anyone–
His thoughts were cut off by a crunch below his feet. He glanced down and lifted his left foot before shaking the broken twig away.
Sighing, he shook his head, trying to rid those thoughts as he glanced around. Strangely enough, Evie was nowhere near him.
June paused, eyes wandering around the forest, thinking she'd already left him. He felt a strange sense of relief when he found her standing still, a few metres behind him.
Her eyes were fixated on something to his left and he noticed them widening in shock and disbelief before she staggered to the left in visible hesitation.
Quirking a curious brow, he wondered what had gotten into her and decided to see for himself what got her so shocked.
June blinked, stopping himself from going further as he thought to himself. No, I shouldn't. She… I'll just be a bother.
His eyes hesitantly trailed over to her and the sight before her let him know why she looked so despaired.
A destructive display of burnt and shredded thatch smeared across the field. Several pieces of shredded planks of wood were scattered all over the place. Signs of a struggle were present in the grooves in the dirt, and the displaced grass and leaves. The smell of copper was also present in the air and as he glanced around the destruction he could see small patches of blood pooling around sliced and shredded wood.
Evie stumbled forward, her movements slow and unfocused. He could see her gaze falling onto a small wooden carving.
June's eyes fell to his feet, not wanting to see the reactions of the Pokémon. He held his breath. No. I should just leave… I'll only make things worse. I don't have to be here. She can handle things herself. I'll… I'll only get in her way.
But as he turned his body, his gaze lingered on the crying fox. She looked so small… so vulnerable…
He couldn't… he didn't want to leave her alone… it wasn't right to leave someone in despair alone.
Not when he could help.
He made his decision with a heavy breath.
He hesitantly put a foot forward, and then another and before he knew it, he was standing beside her.
He moved a claw, his movement freezing for a second before the sniffles from the vixen tore him away from his fear. He shook his head and placed a claw on her, rubbing her back in an uncertain pattern. He wasn't quite sure what he was supposed to do to calm a person on the verge of a breakdown but he knew that having someone to at least listen to them or keep them company was a good start.
But when his claw grazed her soft fur, his mind screamed at him.
The vixen flinched under his touch, something fell out of her grasp but June couldn't see what it was as his vision was quickly covered by a sea of brown.
She turned around, faster than he could blink and pinned him down. He winced at the sudden pressure on his shoulders as he fell onto the ground, his back hurting from the harsh impact.
With her teeth bared and eyes turning into slits, she glared at him, her voice coming out with a scary rumble. "You! You did this, didn't you? You- your humans set you up to this! You thought you could sneak away and leave me crying! You-you took her away!"
The force on his shoulders intensified and he felt his body being pushed into the dirt. He tried to open his mouth to say it wasn't him, to say that he didn't know who this 'her' was but he was cut off by a powerful stomp, leaving his chest screeching in pain.
"Where is she!" With each word, she pushed him deeper into the ground, eliciting more pained groans from the downed Charmander.
Evie growled, noticing the flame on his tail flickering. She channelled some of her energy into him, healing him in a matter of seconds.
She grabbed him with her tail, a scowl making its way on her face as she lifted him by the neck. A small blue wavy orb came to existence in front of her mouth, its size and luminosity growing slowly as she shouted, "Tell me where Zeal is! Or I'll show you how I took down that monster!"
June fell limply in her grasp, his mind struggling to comprehend the pain, the relief and her words all at the same time.
"Last chance!" The blue orb shone dangerously, almost reaching its maximum size before–
"I'm… I'm sorry!" June cried out, his claws clutching hard on the fur of her tail. "I'm sorry for being such a jerk! I'm sorry for what I said! I'm sorry for everything I did! Please… I'm sorry…"
She stared at the Charmander for a moment, her tail tensing around his neck and the orb wavering.
Shaking her head with a scoff, she unwrapped her tail from him, leaving him in favour of returning to the fallen item.
His body plummeted onto the ground with a 'Thud'. June took a moment to breathe as he tried to remove his near-death experience from his mind.
It wasn't working.
He tried a different approach.
Standing up straight, he closed his eyes and breathed evenly, making sure to keep his mind empty before he thought of– Screaming Pain!
He shook his head, his breaths becoming erratic as images of those– Teeth Bari–
No, he didn't want to think of them. It was okay, he was fine… he was not fine… he was fine… he was fine…
Ignore those thoughts… you're fine. You're okay… you're great… His breaths steadied and he looked back towards the vixen, her body was crouched down and she was fiddling with something he couldn't see.
He winced, his mind still screaming at him, and he grasped his left arm with a claw, stuttering out, "H-hey… Evie–"
"Go away," she said, her gaze still hanging on the item in her paws.
June tried again, his voice wavering a bit. "B-but–"
"But what? You're gonna say that everything I worked for was for nought? That I'm next in the line of Pokémon you're gonna enslave?"
"No." He walked towards her, stopping when she turned to glare at him. The glare lasted longer than he liked but he didn't dare lose eye contact.
She shook her head, releasing a sigh with her eyes half-lidded. "Then leave," she said, leaving no room for arguments.
Leave, huh? No, I'll have to help you. You need this… "You need this," he muttered.
She needed help.
He shook his head and treaded forward, rubbing an arm and speaking with a soft wince, "Look, I know we got off the wrong foot… and I said some things that I shouldn't have. I didn't… I didn't think you'd react like that." His right claw scratched against his scales, creating a sizzling sound as he chewed on his words. "Look… I… I wasn't sure what to think when I saw you. You– Pokémon were fictional to me, and the shock wasn't something I wanted to deal with… I didn't… I thought… l-look, I thought that I could be someone special… I thought if I acted like those heroes on the shows I've watched, I could get friends like them. I wanted to make people smile like they've always done for me."
June bit the bottom of his lips, his feet shuffling on the dirt. "When my brothers and I got here… I didn't know what to think when I wasn't human anymore. It was… I was scared… I thought I was going insane… but then… then I realised that this was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity, I realised I could use this chance to live a cool life before going home. I-I thought this was a chance for me to show my stuff, to show how great I could be if I put my mind to it… but I… I only used it as an excuse to act selfishly. I treated others like toys for my amusement and… and I wanted to see what reactions I could get if I acted like a total douche."
He took in a breath as he played with his claws. "Look, I just want to say I'm sorry. I'm sorry for treating you like you're an object. I'm sorry for disregarding your feelings. I'm sorry for everything I said."
Evie stared at him for a moment before sighing. Her eyes trailed down to the ground and her paws fiddled with a small wooden carving that held vague similarities to a fox.
She didn't respond and June crossed his arms, left claw tapping against his right elbow. His eyes darted around the destructive scene, looking at it and back at the fox with a nervous shameful stare.
I'm gonna make this right.
He let his arms fall to his side and clenched a claw. The cool breeze blew by him as his eyes glossed over the ruined building.
He didn't care if he had nothing to do with this. He will make this right, he will stand by her side, no matter what.
Gray panted, his wings flapping slowly and taking an ample amount of effort to move.
He placed the fox down and flew a bit forward, almost stumbling over his talons when he landed, his chest was hurting and covered in cuts and bruises.
Feath landed behind him, taking in the cavernous walls of their home with a deep breath. "Alright, everybody. Take some time to recuperate, Spar and I'll bring her to Perry and Rower."
Gray limped away with the rest of the flock. Some of them had injured wings or broken talons and only a few had left the fight unscathed.
While the flock made their way back, Spar and Feath lifted the downed kit by her scruff, their injuries were minimal compared to the others.
The Zorua was much heavier than they expected and it took some effort to take off.
They flew deeper into the cave, primitive torches lined the walls, lighting up their dark homes.
Arriving at a section of five tunnels, they went to the rightmost tunnel, making their way towards their leaders' base of operations. The tunnel was much shorter than the main entrance, about a quarter of its height and a third of its width. But the tunnel was rather massive regardless as it could just about fit in two Onixes at once. The tunnel shared the same walls as the main entrance, they were a rough composite of granite and diorite, creating a weird mix of white and grey.
Halfway through the tunnel, the two's speed had slowed down considerably and eventually one of them needed a break.
Feath leaned against the rocky wall, his feathery body drenched in sweat.
Spar landed beside him, poking the Pidgey with a wing. "Losing your touch, Feath? You must be getting old," Spar teased with a sly smirk.
Feath took in a breath, retaliating with a tired grin. "If I'm old, then you must be ancient, sugar cube."
Spar flushed, jabbing a wing at him. "I'm only a year older than you. You prick."
Feath took the hit with a chuckle. "Definitely feelin' the love here, hon."
"Tch." She crossed her wings and turned away from the Pidgey.
"Heh." He chuckled, nuzzling up to her and plucking off a couple of damaged feathers. Spar's face reddened at the contact but she didn't do anything to stop him.
When he was done, she let out a breath and said, "You're done now? Ready to see them?"
Feath nodded and chuckled at her expression. "Of course, sweetie."
A small smile wormed its way onto her beak as they flew silently deeper into the tunnel.
They arrived at an open area with two-metre-long stalactites that could pierce through even the hardest Golem, covering the ceiling. However, before they could go more than a metre in, they were stopped by two large figures.
Recognising the two, they stopped to place Zeal gently onto the basalt floor and landed beside each other. They dipped their heads low and bowed.
The bigger of the two landed before them, his head crest trailing onto the floor. "Rise," the Pidgeot commanded with a voice that reeked of power.
Feath and Spar rose from their positions and glanced at one another before looking at their leaders.
"We have completed your mission, Perry and Rower." Spar spoke with a respectful tone.
Feath nodded firmly, staring at the two with admiration.
Perry nodded, his strong gaze looking over the two, scanning them with a keen eye. "You're dismissed."
Feath and Spar bowed once more, both chorusing, "We are thankful for your love."
Perry lowered his head, watching them closely before releasing a sigh when they were out of sight. He glanced at the unconscious Zorua, grimacing at the visible wounds on the Pokémon.
"Perry, let's go. We can't keep him waiting," Rower said, nudging him with his beak. The Fearow briefly glanced at the downed vixen, guilt flashing onto his face for a split second.
Perry nodded, casting an apologetic glance at the fox. "Okay, let's… let's go."
Rower lifted the Zorua gently in his talons and took off with Perry beside him.
They arrived at a smaller section of the cave, it was like a small room in size alone, barely enough to fit four human adults at once. Two grassy beds were on their right with all sorts of berries littered everywhere on the ground.
This was their bedroom, it was rather simple and barren but they liked it, it brought them peace and comfort whenever they needed time to relax and cool off.
But a sudden addition had ruined that notion.
A human with blindingly red hair laid on the ceiling, acting as if defying gravity was a casual trick.
The man had a leg over another, and wore a red T-shirt with the picture of a white-haired female face smiling on it, he also wore a pair of blue shorts. He silently flipped a page in his book, seemingly unaware of Perry's wrathful glare.
Rower draped a wing over Perry, advising him to think before lashing out.
Although still shaking with rage, Perry took in a breath to calm himself and shouted, "Alright, human. We've done your dirty deed, let them go!"
Crude closed his book and snapped his fingers, causing the book to disappear.
He directed a disinterested eye at them, sighing as he fell onto the ground.
"Seems like you did it, bravo," he said, his voice flat and boring as he picked himself up with a gentle nudge of his magic. "Well, take a pick then."
He waved a hand, a spiral of warped space opened up in front of them, showing a small group of Pokémon sitting in a circle. They didn't seem to notice the onlookers as they chattered amongst one another, terror and worry clear on their faces.
"Take a pick?" Rower mumbled in confusion, his eyes narrowing at the human.
Perry quickly realised Crude’s ploy. He growled. "You… you tricked us."
Crude shrugged, his irises glowing a dull light. "Not really. I've blatantly stated the terms of the deal, and even told you to ask questions. So really, it's your fault."
Perry bristled with fury and glared daggers at the man. "Our fault? You kidnapped our friends, and you say this is our fault?"
Crude let out an annoyed breath, rubbing his temples with another sigh. "Look, I don't care about you, your feelings or what you think of me. So can you please stop shouting profanities at me, they're so bland and unoriginal."
"Profanities?" Perry gasped.
"Yeah, mind reading isn't as hard as you think it is." Crude shrugged. "If you want the others to be free then you'll have to do another little quest for me."
Rower frowned, glancing at his glowering friend while keeping his wing on Perry to prevent him from doing anything reckless.
"You'll pay for this, human." Perry seethed, his talons digging into the basalt floor.
"Yeah, yeah. I heard it all before." The human waved and curled up his right hand, wrapping the Zorua in a purple glow before snapping her away in a thin cloud of smoke.
"Make your choice and I'll give you your next assignment." He pointed back at the portal in front of them.
The pale glow of the moon shone through the heavy clouds above, coating the field below in a soft white. Evie stared at the carving in her paws, a lone tear slipping down her face before an orange body got into her sight.
"Come on, Eves. There's no time to cry, we can do this!" he said, claws gesturing to her right. "There are clues around here that can help us track her down. Don't lose hope!"
"Don't call me that," she muttered, her eyes still focused on the carving as she sighed. "What's the point? I couldn't even protect her… if I didn't leave her alone, she'd still be here, safe and sound instead of Arceus knows where."
It was her fault.
June slammed a fist into an opened claw, exclaiming, "Come on! She's still somewhere in this forest! You can't give up!"
Her selfishness caused this.
"Evie! Come on, we can do this together! We can find her!"
I did this.
"Eves-"
"Just shut up!" she roared, cutting him off. "I'm sick of..." She closed her eyes, not noticing him jumping back with widened eyes. "... of hearing your voice… just… just leave me alone… please… "
He didn't say another word and left her.
Evie shrank deeper into the ground, her ears drooping as she poked the statue below her. I killed her. I got her killed because of my selfish thoughts… because I couldn't stay happy… she's gone because I wasn't happy…
The sounds of feet shuffling and thatch tearing rang behind her but she ignored them.
Mom… I'm sorry for failing you… I couldn't keep her safe…
Huffs and grunts accompanied her thoughts, but her mind was too preoccupied to take note of them.
Zeal… "I'm… I'm sorry…" Her tears fell onto the carving, staining it as a memory flashed into her mind.
"Evie."
The gushing wind had caressed the looming trees, the winds playing an ominous tune as a Zoroark, her mother had gazed into her eyes.
Her mother caressed Evie's cheek slowly as her lips fell into a frown. She shook her head before putting her claws on the small Eevee's shoulders.
Evie blinked, her shoulders aching a bit from the strong grip and her breathing hitched at hearing her mother's quiet voice. "Is-is something wrong?"
Her mother nodded, the light of the moon illuminating the grimace on her face. "I need you to take her egg and run away. Run as far as you can, please."
"Run?" Evie muttered, shaking her head and staring at her mother in disbelief. "No, mo-mom. I can help you! Please! I'm strong! You know I can help!"
Evie didn't want to run. Not again. Never again.
She learned so much from her mother, she wanted to help, she needed to help. She didn't want to run.
She couldn't run!
Her mother shook her head, her eyes tearing up as she choked out, "Please, Evie. Take care… take care of her. He's coming. There's no time to argue, I won't be able to protect you if he arrives. Please run…"
Evie jerked back in shock, the sight of her crying mother was something that'd be etched in her mind forever.
Gulping down her reluctance, she nodded with bleary eyes, head turning slightly to see the cave behind her." O-okay, mom. I'll–"
Her body was pulled forward, her vision clouding up with black fur and the warmth of her mother piercing through the cold night air.
Evie melted into the hug, paws holding onto her mother's arms like she was going to vanish the moment Evie let go.
There were faint sounds of gushing winds and wingbeats drawing near before her mother pulled away from the hug.
The world around them darkened as the sounds grew closer, her mother turned her head away, her voice firm and laced with conviction.
"Leave, Evie." Her mother glared at the sky, shadows loomed in the night sky. "Take care of her and run! Run as far as you can!"
Evie gave her mother one last glance before she closed her eyes and ran. Tears dripped down her face with each step she took.
"Stay safe, Evie," her mother had said and it was the last thing Evie had heard of her before she had vanished deeper into the cave.
"Stay safe."
She lost her grip on the carving and she slumped into the dirt, her miserable cries echoing through the quiet night.
"Why? Why was I so selfish," she stuttered out, burying herself deeper into her neck fur, sogging her cream-white fur with her regrets. "Why couldn't I have just stayed happy! Why couldn't I have just enjoyed the happy ending when I could!" She launched a ball of green energy into the air, her head dropping down just before she could see the explosion.
The shock wave boomed through the area, blowing and swaying the grass and trees in a mile-wide radius.
Her eyes were shut and she didn't face the carving on the ground. It didn't feel right to have that when she couldn't even save its owner. When she couldn't save Be–
"Hey, um Evie?" June's voice snapped her back to reality and she was reminded of the fact that he existed.
She groaned. "What?"
"I, uh found something that could help you find your sister," he said and Evie could practically hear him fidgeting behind her.
She sighed and turned around, deciding to humour him so she could get him to shut up and leave. "Fine. What is i–"
Evie blinked, staring at the Charmander covered in soot and broken pieces of thatch. In his right claw was something that made Evie rub her eyes to ensure that she wasn't seeing things.
It was a feather, a vibrant red feather longer than his arm.
But more importantly, it was– "A Pidgeotto feather."
June raised a brow, glancing at the feather with thinly-concealed interest.
Evie took a step back. There was no way it was a Pidgeotto's feather. The only Pidgey flock around here was Perry's, there was no way he'd take her.
Or was there?
Evie chewed on the bottom part of her lips. "There must be a reason for this," she murmured.
Turning towards the east, she disappeared in a blur of speed, completely missing the former human's surprised yelp and cry of "What the?"
The wind ruffled her fur, blowing and whipping her mane back onto her face as her long and swift strides brought her closer to her destination. She leapt from tree branch to tree branch, knowing the most optimal route to Perry's cave. The path below was overgrown and barricaded by thickets of bushes and roots so it wasn't like she had many options.
Her eyes narrowed and her mind was fixated on the image of the Pidgeotto feather. Evie couldn't believe it. She didn't want to believe it.
A Pidgeotto feather near her now-ruined home? That couldn't have just been a coincidence. It just couldn't have.
Perry. He had something to do with this. There was little doubt in her mind that Zeal was taken by him.
But why? Why would he take her? Did he need Zeal for something?
If he did, then why didn't he tell her? Why go through all the trouble to destroy her home if all he needed was Zeal? It didn't make sense to her.
Was Perry afraid that Evie would reject him if she knew that he'd be putting Zeal in danger? That was a possibility, albeit illogical.
… but that still didn't explain the blood. When she ran off and over the pool of blood, she smelled and sensed multiple bits of different Auras. It was fresh and held a crude mixture of multiple Pidgeys, Spearows and her sister's.
Why? Why would they hurt Zeal if they just needed to bring her to Perry? Why would they destroy her home? It didn't make sense for them to hurt Zeal unless they had to…
Evie froze, her claws digging into a thick branch. She turned around, her ears twitching at a faint sound.
The Charmander! That 'human'!
Shit, she couldn't believe she had left him alone.
Fuuucckkk.
He was her responsibility and she had completely forgotten about him. Arceus damn it. Hopefully, he hadn't burnt anything down.
Crouching down, she leapt back to her previous direction, hurriedly making her way to where she left him.
She dashed from branch to branch, her eyes quickly taking in her surroundings. Nothing but the same trees, bushes and grass, nothing too out of the ordinary.
A minute in and she saw a speck of light, waving and burning brightly. Her heart sank when she spotted another light close to the speck.
Conjuring a weak Water Gun, she jumped off the branch and landed without any grace, blasting the burning bush with a beam of water.
She growled, turning towards the Charmander sprawled on the ground. "What the fuck were you doing?"
June groaned, a claw clutching his head. "Head… spinning… fire… too hot.. ugh… need to help… "
She raised a brow. What was wrong with him? What in Arceus' mane happened when she left?
She narrowed her eyes at the dazed Charmander, her Aura sensing flaring to life when she stepped forward.
By the gods, she had never felt something so strange and distraught in her life. While his Aura had caught her eye when she'd first sensed it, she had ignored it and figured it was only her lack of experience at play as she could never seem to get her range to more than a meter far.
But now that she was standing in front of him again and could think clearly, she remembered why she had dismissed it in the first place.
What was once an empty and cold vacuum, was now a weird and broken mix of lukewarm and half-full liquid-like substance. That wasn't mentioning the fact that his body was absorbing the Aura around him; although it was much slower and less intensive than before.
… hmm, strange Aura. Claims of being human and from another universe… had he been telling the truth?
If he truly was a human, it'd explain why he didn't seem used to his body and why he wasn't as insane as The Tyrant.
She shook her head. No. There was no way it was true.
Being human? She scoffed, walking her way towards the downed Charmander.
Although… it wouldn't be the strangest thing that had happened in her life.
She sighed, trotting closer to the downed lizard. "You're lucky I came back for you," she muttered, pouring some energy into her ears and hardening them. She clanged her ears together, creating a sound akin to bells ringing and directed it at the Pokémon.
The effects were near-instant and he looked way better than she'd first seen him.
She held the Heal Bell a little longer before releasing the move. She swivelled her ears a bit, she could never get over how it felt whenever she had to use that move.
June slowly got onto his feet, blinking as he faced her. "Evie? What are yo– oh. Oh crap, I didn't just…" He paled at seeing the burnt bush behind her. "Oh no, I did… Evie, I- I did not do that on purpose."
Really? That was what he was going with? An accident? She mentally scoffed.
If only using Heal Bell didn't require her to cleanse herself from negative emotions, she really wanted to give him a tongue lashing for what he did.
Evie sighed, facing him with a quirked brow. "Why did you burn down that bush, June?"
She barely caught him flinching at her inquiry as he chuckled nervously and scratched his cheek. "I, uh… don't know?" he hissed and bit his tongue, releasing another sharp hiss as one of his eyes closed in pain. "Ow… I uh, I don't know how I even did that. I was just running after you and I think I got dizzy, and then there was something building under my throat. I opened my mouth and fell to the ground. I don't know what happened, honest!"
Did she hear that right? He spat flames because he was overexerting himself? How did that work? Fuck, she wished she knew more about Fire-types.
She shook her head. Whatever, she didn't need to know much about him to know that he shouldn't be left alone.
Evie turned her attention to him, her eyes glaring into the Charmander. "Come along now, June. We–"
"Wait wait, you're giving me a second chance?" he said, perking up slightly with a sliver of hope in his eyes. He then took a step back and rubbed the nape of his neck with a nervous chuckle. "Well, I mean, if that's fine with you. Then sure, I'll come and help you."
Evie took a step forward, using her height to loom over the Charmander. Her eyes bored into him and she said, "I'm not asking for your help, June. I'm asking for you to not burn down the forest while I'm gone, and it's clear to me that won't be happening."
She didn't say more and he didn't need more words to understand. He flinched and deflated, his eyes losing their brightness as he muttered, "Right… I'm sorry…" His eyes were suddenly more interested in the ground than her.
He stood for a quiet second before shaking his head and facing her, a forced grin coming onto his face. "Okay, so where do we go?"
She tried to ignore the sudden change of behaviour but he must've noticed something as he chewed on his bottom lip and opened his mouth to speak.
She didn't let him though and instead she bent down, beckoning him with a cold look. "Get on. I don't want you burning down the forest while we're walking."
"Huh? What? G-get on? You mean riding you?" His grin fell and he scratched his cheek. "That doesn't seem safe."
"It's either that or I'll drag you with my tail."
June gulped, taking in a breath as he stepped forward. "O-okay, ju-just don't go too fast. I-I don't think I can, um handle your speed, Evie."
He made his way towards her and she allowed him to get on her. When she felt that he was secured, she stood to her full height.
Two scaly arms wrapped around her neck a bit too tight but it wasn't strong enough to hurt her so she didn't mind.
"Oh jeez, this is a little scary," he said, chuckling to himself. "Let me just… okay, wow she's softer than I thought. Okay, alright I think I got it."
She glanced at him for a moment before shaking her head. She burst into a blinding speed, eliciting a shocked cry from the former human.
She slowed down a bit when she felt his claws slipping off her neck fur and allowed him a breather before disappearing once again into another speedy dash.
It didn't take long before they'd arrived in front of a ginormous cave, the familiarity of the sight reminding Evie of her mission.
The weight on her back disappeared and she heard a 'Thud' beside her. She turned around, raising a brow.
The Charmander was on the ground and was slowly making his way onto his knees with a queasy look on his face. "Ugh… I think I'm gonna barf." He gripped his head, taking in breaths to quell his apparent nausea.
Evie silently stared at him for a solid second before deciding to ease his nausea with a quick Heal Bell.
A strange sense of relief flowed into him, June blinked, a confused but thankful look on his face.
Evie bobbed her head, gesturing to the cave behind her.
He stared at her for a moment before nodding hesitantly, following her as she turned and trotted into the cave.
