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Look at you, being so sneaky and casually dropping another new chapter so soon after the last one?? I wasn’t prepared for this—but I’m not complaining! ;)

Here to drop some thoughts on Chapter 14! And BOY was this a fun chapter to read, ahhh I love your writing so much Man, I’m really loving the way you’re tying this all together. Archie and Maxie in canon look like total buffoons with their plans, but you’re writing them in a way that makes it...

Did I drop everything when I got the notification that a new chapter was posted? Uh. Maybe. Y-you can’t prove anything! *sweats* Anyway, here we go:

hahaha am I trying to review 6 chapters in one fell swoop? Yep. Am I going to regret it? Maybe. Anyways—may I just say, I am SO invested in this story. The many different perspectives, the way you make us feel for and sympathize with each perspective even when they’re on total opposite sides of...

Aaaand I’m back for more! No way was I staying away for very long after that chapter 4 cliffhanger! You do an excellent job with the parallels between Mark’s methods/beliefs and Natalie’s. It’s honestly fascinating to see the inner workings of both ORCA and MGMA from two very different...

*sits back in chair* *takes a deep breath* *cracks knuckles* Here. We. GO. Right off the bat, I’m in love with your scene-setting once again. The dialogue continues to remain top-notch, and the action scenes are just—WOW. Really stellar flow here, and I really enjoy the chapter lengths, too...

HOENN SQUAD HOENN SQUAD All right, it’s time to pull this from the list and actually start READING the thing! Been meaning to check this one out for a long time, actually, when I first saw it get recommended on the Pokémon fan fiction subreddit. After reading the first chapter, it’s very easy...