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TY so much for the reviews, it means everything to me!! :veelove: Some answers.. Thank you SO MUCH for the review it delighted me immensely and made my morning, hopefully this cleared up any confusion

Deep Breath Marcel clung to his father's hand. It felt so small. Frail. "I'm scared," he whispered, choking out the words through the lump in his throat. His chest heaved and he blinked fruitlessly through tears. Despite the tremor in his tone, his father spoke with conviction, his eyes...

Congrats everyone!!!!!! I'd like to say that WOW Miraidon group had some incredibly good entries and it was SO HARD to choose and everyone should be so proud, you guys wrote some amazing stories, and only in a month!! Big kudos I'll give an extensive, full write up of thoughts at a later date...

From the Ashes Sun and rain. Light and dark. Life and death. Everything moves in cycles. Orre was not always a barren desert, and Johto was not always Ho-oh and Lugia's home. A tale of rebirth. Of the past, present and one day, the future. Life Endless desert dunes sprawled before us...

Hey there! I've been meaning to catchup on my reviews, and now is as good a time as any. I wanted to review arc by arc, but for now I'll just have to try and hit these next few chapters, starting with 3. I'm glad I had a chance to start finally doing my massive review, here's to...

Athos only half listened as Florent and Kohath exchanged pleasantries of their gods, a discussion he couldn't find much relatability in. To serve something was to concede control, a fools move in his opinion. Though he did find himself fascinated by the tale of 'Helix', saving Kohath from a life...

What was that? Clearly it had to do with blood somehow. But beyond that it was an utter mystery. He wanted to know more. "I have told you of my kingdom so it seems fair you tell more about yours. Clearly we are not among our usual enemies in a place like this." Athos gaze shifted back to...

"I am. Some try to copy my power and reach but they cannot oppose me. Of course, I operate in the shadows as necessary. Only fools draw unneeded or unnecessary attention." His gaze shifted as the newcomer confronted Florent again. helixian was not a term he recognized. And he had no interest in...

Athos considered his reply for a moment. A moment too long apparently, as they were first interrupted by a demented looking blonde he could almost swear was vaguely familiar, as if he'd seen her in some news broadcast. Then a man that he'd never seen before but rather reminded him oddly of an...

Deathly, Mary Sue and Grunt! In theory I don't mind starting but the weekend of Aug 18th is my birthday so it'll have to be after that preferably?

I have been meaning to check this out so I hit up the first chapter on a whim and WOW I am in love. I adore this metaphor, 'washing' himself in the sunlight sparked such vivid imagery for me Oh shoot, Hake is a smart cookie!!! This was a really cool scene that shows really well that hake is...

"Uneducated minds have their ups and downs," he replied wryly. “More ups, for me, in the end. Small price to pay I suppose, to be surrounded by unintelligence.” His talent had been squandered under that idiot Ghetsis, who didn’t know how to keep his associates in line. Orre might have been full...

The crimson Lunala tipped her head to regard the human curiously. "Mooncaller? It seems you must mistake me for another. As fitting as a title that is, it is not one I go by." What an odd little human... She narrowed her gaze, examining him more closely. "Are you an associate of a lesser...

Lonk reply for seren to roundup reviews (shoot I have so many to do).... Thank you again for reading, so delighted you've enjoyed yourself!!

:love::giggle: Glad u enjoyed! quick replies bc wynaut Glad you enjoyed and yeah basically every chapter gonna be some kind of whump so. have fun, kek

Replies, even though I should be working 😛 The reason I'd find him sus is because he's skittish. If you're very legally selling something, you have nothing to be skittish about. Like if I went to adopt a fancy show dog but the breeder/seller kept getting all jumpy I'd start to question...

I kept literally forgetting constantly to just finish the last chapter lol. Anyways here we go... Chapter 21 Also I figured I'd leave a few more general fic impressions... nothing too heavy on crit, since I know thats not your vibe. I figure since I am caught up and legally allowed to...

Athos gave a mirthless chuckle. "You might say that." Nobody in Orre was educated well, much less cared about classics. "Never been much of a wine person myself, admittedly." In truth he couldn't stand the fancy garbage, but he'd always made a point not to insult anyone he might still be able...

"Clearly the tea affinity is as strong as they say," he said wryly. Athos quirked an eyebrow. Galarian. That certainly explained it. How interesting. "And you know of the musketeer legends. That is surprising." He couldn't help but be impressed, at least by that much. Nobody in Orre was...

Such a strange place, yet Athos couldn't resist the allure. He needed to investigate it, understand it, and know if he had any enemies or allies. Or see what more knowledge could be gained. Once he got over the surprise and weirdness of it all (the bartender was some kind of bizare psychic bat...