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Hey yo I am gonna sign up after all. I'll edit a character profile here during my lunch so give me like a half hour or something. Name: Anti-Bravoman. He will also also answer to: -The edgier bravoman -Ebony Imposter of Dark Reflection -xxDarklord99xx -Anti Species: Human...? Humanish...

Final blec reviews (besides any forthcoming bonus points for volunteer stuff): Equital's Flash Fics (4 parts, ~450 words) Splash of Sinnoh (3 parts, ~320 words) A Glimpse Across the Threshold (3 parts, ~400 words) You are a Leafeon (1 part, ~ 120 words)

Two thoughts on specific quotes then I'll get to the review proper. Since you started a new sentence here, I think this should be caresses, not caressing. It's like when your cat brings you something dead as a gift, but better. This was a very charming, atmospheric piece. It had a very...

As a disclaimer, I'm reading these in a complete vaccum and do not know if there's any context beyond what's presented, so please take all critique with that in mind and with a grain of salt. Otherworldly(-Accessible) Architecture There are some things about this snippet that I really like, and...

Hi! Just dropping some quick first-impression reviews here! Ghost in the Box I don't have a whole lot to say on this one, but I did like it. I feel really bad for rotom. Someone let them out! Anyways, the one thing I wanted to note I liked is that, despite how short this is, it feels complete...

Hey Equital! Thought I'd stop by and give a few thoughts over these! Wailord I absolutely love the concept of this snippet. Of the idea of a wailord that grows out of her old home when she evolves and striking out to swim the ocean, only to return back and visit. And I adore that the humans -...

Nip had every reason to assume he couldn't survive that shot. And his instincts were screaming at him to run. But he couldn't just do nothing either. Focusing, he drew upon the energy needed for Moonlight, aiming it in the general direction of Diyem, Owen, and Eien. He opened his mouth to call...

Here's a 13 chapter review for The Alola Pokedex. >1300 words, so should be good for 13 Blecs

It's been a while. So it's about time I do another round of thoughts for this, I think. Gonna knock out as many as I feel like doing, so here we go! Malamar -I find the concept of "a true malamar has never been seen" as very interesting. The size difference between captive and wild malamar is...

And Nip was there too I guess.

Nip waited, heart fluttering as he watched Tempest emerge from the husk that was the fake Umbra. His core was dissolving, but... The ninetales stretched, fanning his tails out behind him. They shimmered as bits of frost and snow fell away before he sat down, curling them around his sides. "Do...

Even if it was Umbra, watching Tempest begin to tear his way out like some kind of parasite was honestly kind of horrifying to watch. It almost made him feel bad for her. And yet, Nip couldn't look away. She did this to herself. And what really mattered was getting Tempest back again. He had to...

"No, you're not weak... physically." Nip let out a frosty puff of air, forcing himself to remain calm and defiant as she approached him. "You'd beat almost anyone in a fair fight. "You're weak in spirit. You can't stand anyone being better than you. And if you think you're being treated as an...

For just a second, Nip allowed himself to feel hope. He was actually doing damage to Umbra. Umbra who had always came out on top. Maybe this wasn't such a hopeless fight after all- Pain shot along his side as umbra countered with a painful metal strike. He stumbled back, clutching a paw where...

As much as he hated to admit it, she was right, he probably wouldn't be able to pull that off again. Not in his current state, at least. But what was he supposed to do? His techniques had never been good against Umbra. That attack seemed like it did some damage, but there was no way he'd be able...

Recoiling at the sight of the severed tail, Nip stumbled and nearly fell. But he kept his footing, only to freeze in place as the shadowy being emerged. No. No! This couldn't be real, right? Tempest had to be fine. Tempest had to be back with the tribe. He'd specifically avoided telling him...

Nip was fairly certain this wasn't what he had been doing before. He hadn't been on the run in some time now. And he was a sneasel then, not a weavile. But he was so winded. So tired. Surely, that meant he was on the run, like he always had been. He sniffed at the air before cautiously...

Picking up Vivify

6 Chapter review of Instruments of Creation for 6 Blecs (~1500 words) -Buying Second Wind (replacing determined) -Buying Spite (replacing Lash Out) -6 points to stamina, 4 each to hp, def, and res -sell invisify orb -sell reviver seed buying: -Pop's Grand Reviver Seed -Shield's Aegis Orb...

Hey Desert. It's been a while but I recently decided to get caught up on your fic. Or mostly caught up, at least. I read up through the end of book one, and I'll be reviewing the remainder of this book before covering a few points on book one overall. 14 I can't remember if they were in the...