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So I decided to review this delightful little fic for blitz! Man am I glad I did. I really scratches that itch for something nice and lighthearted and not so heavy. Just a simple, goofy sort of adventure. I really fell in love with Keith. He's such a dopey, loveable little Eevee, dead set on...

Reviewed EoE again cause I can't help myself - two chapters, 1409 words https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-18281

Can't help myself, I keep coming back to this story. I think Noted really solidified the intent of this story for me? Even though its present in the earlier chapters, the shift to a pokemon that finally doesn't feel like a prisoner/has a different perspective cements what direction I think this...

Thank you very much for the review, it always great to hear the thoughts of readers. I'm particularly glad to hear you enjoy how I wrote my battles, as I very specifically attempt to mimic the anime in a lot of aspects for this story. You make a really good point about the lack of outside...

Envy of Eden 5 - 1128 I believe (unless you cut out the reply to the reviews. Then it'll be a little less) https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-17990 Dragons Dance 3 - 538 words +1 theme...

Back to review this story again, on a new chapter! I can see that you are improving in your writing. Very good! Keep studying and keep growing. I enjoyed chapter 3. I felt like I got a good sense of the brother's personalities shining through, and got to see how they operated on their first...

I swear I reviewed part 1, but apparently not. So I'll review 1&2. Anyways! First time review! I really enjoyed this tale. Very lighthearted and kind of 'silly', but not actually silly. A Dwebble as an MC is unusual, and interesting. Using a bug-like pokemon to strike this balance between...

Very much good, definitely enjoyed. Happy to be reading this again. You're probably one of my fav authors, just because our styles tend to line up good I think. Your story and world choices are very appealing. This chapter was good. It felt a bit summary-ish, but its not so bad, considering...

Ahh, another chapter. This time from a Bisharp's point of view. I'm really loving all these different POVs. Narsil. Great chapter name too, I get that reference. Totally digging it. I enjoyed reading the details and understanding what kind of pokemon I was following this time. It's almost like...

Reviewed Suicune's choice, chapters 2-5 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-suicunes-choice.265/post-17518 1670 words. *phew* +1 for theme cause I reviewed chap 1 last week

Alright, beeg review time! Finally got caught up on this!!! Alright so you already know I love your prose. The way you weave worldbuilding and character and detail into sentences is awesome. Let's go into my chapter breakdowns. Chapter 2 Alrighty so this was such a sad but tense chapter. Haru...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-17368 Reviewed that weird fanfic about N again. Seems right up your alley ;) 917 words, +1 for theme cause its something I'm catching up on

So after yesterday's review I had to come back for more. If anything, I was curious to see what direction this unusual story would tell. I'll be reviewing uh... the next two parts? So... Three and Four. I don't actually have much in the way of 'critique' as much as observations and reactions and...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-17252 reviewed some fic called Envy of Eden.... definitely never heard of it before. Was pretty dang interesting. Qualifies for this weeks theme too! 910 words!

ALrighty, gonna try and squeak in a review right before blitz for this week ends. Read 'chapters' 1 and 2. Let's begin. The prose was fascinating. You chose to write in a sort of semi-second person, which is an interesting choice. It works very well for a story told in an unusual way. The...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-17160 Reviewed chapters 1-3 of Of Sand and Shadows 578 words, +1 for theme

Alrighty! This is probably my first Orre fic I can think of. From what I gather, it seems to be a rewrite of Pokemon Colosseum, which is great. It's been years and years since I played those games, so this is practically fresh to me. I read chapters 1-3, so I'll give my thoughts on those...

Reviewed The Meaning of Power https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-meaning-of-power.515/post-16902 Never reviewed before either so I also get +1 for theme 582 words

Time for my review blitz! Gonna have a shot at this with my new rating system. I'll discuss 7 key points I think are critical in any story. [Main Character, Side Character, Plot, Subplot, Antagonist, Theme, Prose] MC: Silver here seems very well written. You've given solid insight into his...

Now, this is interesting. The "rebuke" coupled with the line before it about Koa not wanting to see Zubat hurt is supposed to read more like he's snapping at Zubat cause he got scared that Zubat nearly got himself hurt. A bit like how a parent might snap at a kid who almost ran into a busy...