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Reviewed... 8-14... of OSAS... phew. 2919 words... https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-19741

Alright time to BEEG review and catch up for fun. I'm not huge on grammar nitpicks, so when a story is solid in that department, I prefer to focus on themes, prose and plot beats. My big review here will cover everything from 8-14, and give some commentary, broad strokes, and reactionary stuff...

Reviewed 1 chap of WSBS, https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-19702 327 words, +1 theme?

Alright, its time to give thoughts on chapter 1, hooray! First, loved the opening big with Castform and weird weather. I won't go into line by lines much this time, since I didn't see any glaring errors and/or they were already touched on. First up, our MC, Odette! I was very intrigued by her...

Nearly forgot the best bit!

Reviewed chaps 4-7 of Of Sand and Bacon, 1713 words + 1 for theme https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-19358

Gah, I'm really liking this story. Stopping at 4 was hard. I'll probably read more later. Anyway, I'll start with a broad overview of the whole story up until now, chapter 7. Very interesting. It's been forever and a day since I played colosseum, so this is all fairly new to me. I absolutely...

Left a review of 1-3 of Eternal Shadows! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-eternal-shadows.509/post-19091 984 words I think, +1 for theme (and a meme!)

Blitz exchange time! I really had a lot of fun with this story. PMD has so many delightfully fun ways to twist the mold. You've decided to go with this little bean Gen, who can't help but lie about where he comes from. I can see this causing him a mighty big deal of trouble later down the...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroica-legends-an-undesired-hope.519/post-19081 Reviewed Heroica Legends. Chap 1 946 words, +1 for theme

Blitz review time! I thought this was a very cool opening. We see little Lucca fighting or hunting this Kartana. Based on your choice of words and his behavior, I could tell that coming to fight a Kartana wasn't new to him, this was something he'd attempted before. Opening on action can...

Home is Where the Hoenn is Summary: There's no such thing as a Flygonite. Or so they say. Hana has never been interested in pursuing impossible things. But when her Flygon, Raga, sets her sights on mega evolution, Hana is forced to find out—how far is she willing to go for something she...

Alrighty, White Swan Black Swan Prologue, 644 words, +1 theme https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-18925

Alrighty, I decided to review the prologue cause this story caught my attention! First up, very intriguing prologue. I thought you did a very good job setting the stage for a lot of really interesting elements. Team Enigma, their big bad leader, and his one and only heir, Armel. You've also...

I'm no expert but I feel comfortable enough offering help anyway. Name: Tetra/Flyg0n Interests: trainer fic, journey fic, some PMD, pokecentric is acceptable. I have a soft spot for trainer journey fics (especially with trainers that don't have it all). And a sprinkle of anime logic. I have...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-suicunes-choice.265/post-18420 Reviewed latest chap of Suicune's Choice, 409 words +1 for theme

Well well well, I think this may be my favorite chapter yet! Well, favorite is hard to pick. But this chapter was really moving. It found very drive, t had this particularly good slow burn feeling. All these discordant little details were coming together into one bold moment. Haru is finally...

Reviewed Chap 9 of Fighting Nature https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/fighting-nature.410/post-18361 568 words + 1 or theme

The blitz beast within me is fed by this new chapter. Good stuff, Really loving this fic. Did you know I shill it on other servers? This chapter really moved the plot along. Things are heating up for our trio. I like the pacing of this fic, between the length and everything else, it feels like...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/dragony.405/post-18305 Reviewed Dragony parts 1-6 with 1674 words +1 for theme