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"Well, this shouldn't be too hard. Just a hundred words..." Namo sighed, rubbing his forehead. Falling from the sky was pretty rough, but at least he landed on something soft. Even if the Snorlax wasn't too happy about it afterward. Thankfully, he still had his phone, even if it held no signal...

You know, all things considered, I don't think this was a particularly bad chapter as you had been worrying about on discord. Yeah, there was definitely a tonal shift, but I think whatever revisions or adjustments you may have done either now or prior helped to make that shift a bit more...

Alright, time to die. Here they all are. Sorry for the dump, but I procrastinated hard on this due to everything else I've been juggling~ I can't believe I did them all. Sure, I'm a half hour late (my time) but I'll take it. I should probably take a look at what some of you have put here next...

Chapter 9 – Lonely Waters Owen walked the rest of the way through the cold cave in silence, brooding over the morning’s events, dwelling on how his life—everything from his parents to his idols to his home—had been turned inside-out. How old were his parents? Why did they decide to adopt him...

Gotta catch 'em all, Poke Bombs! -- So, I don't have a lot of overall thoughts on this chapter -- we're approaching another tense action chapter that can more or less be quickly summarized with its action beats. But overall, I thought it was a clever combination of stealth and actual fighting...

Ahh, that's a fun one! Well, the thing about humans is that they're so far gone that the myths have become somewhat nebulous. Some just know that "humans" once existed, but what they looked like, what they did, or anything of the sort was completely lost to time. One myth is that humans were...

Whoops, must've missed you. I'll edit you in!

Hey all, it's well past the 21st, so I'm gonna start arranging for things on my end. I'll be sending all PMD corpse participants a DM shortly to make sure everyone is on board! To clarify, that will be: @Umbramatic @The Walrein @Keleri @Chibi Pika @Negrek, @DeliriousAbsol, and @Phoenixsong I'm...

I suppose your first half was on the slower side, but I think enough happened in this chapter to make up for it in the second half, all things considered. Overall, I see what you mean about this being more stealth-based than the plane arc. I'm not really sure where it's going to go or exactly...

Ohh why not. I'll step in, too! But only for one. - Anything goes (I'm running the PMD one, so I can't participate in it) - I'm pretty much always free - I'll gladly initiate if nobody else is eager!

Chapter 8 – A Thousand-Heart Secret “I’m a PLANT!” Owen screeched, grabbing his chest and tugging at the feather-like arrangement of leaves that covered his body. He yelped when he realized that it was a lot easier to pull them away than he expected. One of the leaves fell to the ground; a tiny...

Whoops I fell behind. Time to play some catchup...

Aaaa fine you guys tempted me too much, so I'll try to answer some of these as much as I can. I'm going to start off with Kilo, the world of Hands of Creation and maybe I'll talk about my original work afterward? No promises. I guess I'm more interested in doing something actually relevant to...

Including me! FINALLY! -- Real talk, I know that in the past apparently people hated when fics had an early breather chapter, but geez, I really needed this. I think this was the first chapter that I actually felt like I was able to actually ground myself and get to know everyone a little...

Chapter 7 – Not Quite Dead “You’re… you’re Mew.” He pointed an accusatory claw toward the pink god. “Mew!” “Yep!” “And—and you’re… you’re talking to me. You know my name.” “Uh-huh!” Owen’s throat sealed itself. He swallowed, but it didn’t help. It was like his face was stuffed with Oran...

Okay, it looks like we're finally getting a bit of a breather, maybe, after this chapter?? Some time to talk?! Gah! I'm not used to fics starting off with an explosion and I still barely know them! That being said, the main newcomer here feels like the biggest ace of them all, so I'm curious on...

Thanks for the feedback, Negrek! I, uh, I'll just quietly go and fix up all those careless typos... I've got slippery fingers, I think. I'll get around to pushing out the updates to all my platforms later. I really should make some kind of script for that... Ahaha, yeah... I think I'm going to...

Chapter 6 – The Orb “Ugh, what a weird dream,” Owen mumbled. He rubbed his eyes; he still ached. He must have jumped improperly to avoid that Psychic attack and bruised himself. Wait. If he ached, then that wasn’t a dream, was it? Owen chanted to himself, “Not crazy. Not crazy. Not crazy.”...

Well! These have certainly been short chapters, but if there's anything I wasn't quite expecting, it was a jump 15 years later. Looks like all that happened previously isn't quite the main story, just the backdrop, though I imagine we'll be seeing that guy later. I don't have very much to say...

And now, chapter 3! The pace just keeps going at full speed, doesn't it? Overall, I thought that this was a very exciting battle sequence sprinkled with (a bit odd at times) moments of levity and idle conversation. I wasn't really sure what sort of tone you were going for with some of those...