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Chapter 16 – Known Secrets “Looks like that’s everyone,” Star said, flicking her tail. A few of Amia’s spirits swept away little pebbles that littered the ground of Hot Spot—much to Valle’s irritation—while Amia herself channeled extra Mystic energy into the mushrooms to brighten the brown...

Hey, that's great to hear! Glad I was able to have you give it a chance and I got you interested a little~ You are correct, he's simply adopted. That's his relation to the two, since, despite everything, I'm keeping the way egg groups work largely canon. That's an interesting interpretation...

(This is a review of the first part) Oh! ...Second person! That's... Huh. Well, it goes without saying that it's uncommon, and it's certainly a bit weird for me in particular since I'm pretty sure it fit zero of the actual character's demographics, but hey, let's keep going forward regardless...

Continuing along... November 7th event: Words written: 100 200 157 in five minutes 100 237 in five minutes, grabbing Caterpie 343 in ten minutes 150 207 in five minutes Total: 1501 words! November 10 event: 100 100 183 in five minutes 150 259 words in ten minutes 100 250 words, and let's...

Hello, everyone! After much delay, the PMD Exquisite Corpse is finally put together and ready for publication! I don't want to give away too much for what's going on, but like any Corpse, you can expect nothing to be coherent from start to finish! Except for a few surprising exceptions. If you...

Alright alright, joining a little late here, but let's see how it goes... First challenge (old) Wrote 100 words, picked Rowlet 200, 150 words Got up to the next multiple of 200 words, +100 flat! Five minute sprint: +157, gimme that Slowpoke. Wrote 150, 200 words 10 minute sprint: +302 Total...

Just throwing this in: I'll be doing the word crawl as well, and basically doing it in conjunction with my NaNo work. I'm sure I'll be blowing that along with ease since I'm doing the full 50k...

Not a problem, Chibi! Just make sure you tell me what those tweaks/new values are. Now, as for you, NonAnalogue... It looks like this team is pretty weak in terms of pure offense, but that's a bit difficult to judge considering you have a Ditto on your team! I wonder if it might be wise to...

Fun facts about Lugia: His overall score would've been a whopping 548, topping every other character logged down on the sheet as of this post! Second place is Amaranth the Shaymin of Soniclink's fanfic of the same name, Amaranth. However, Lugia's team contribution score is actually quite low...

Chapter 15 – Reset “Where in the world is…?” Rhys felt around for his Badge, but it was missing. “Rhys? What’s taking so long?” Demitri asked. He stopped walking; his natural density made his feet sink slightly into the salt, which floated like clouds in the crystal-clear water. Distracted, he...

Ahh, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Yes, it's a little close-to-canon, but I want to at least assure you, or try to assure you, that a lot of these mechanics will have some plot impact down the line, even for why they're like that in the first place. Hopefully you can bear with it until then~ It...

Oh, oh! I have a big worldbuilding fail that I see a lot of novice writers (and even some experienced ones) do! But first, I want to respond to teleporting. I think teleporting is something that I work with a lot in my work. Hands of Creation pretty much relies on teleportation so the story...

Oh, okay! So that's what we're doing tonight. -- All things considered, this chapter was definitely a sudden change of pace. I think one thing that's kind of interesting about it is, from a narrative perspective and from a blind reader's perspective, this theoretically could have happened...

Opening with Firestorm being shot down. What a shame, though hey, at least he’s getting a lot stronger. It’s interesting to see Swift being the most level-headed one of the bunch. Considering what I know about him, with how he’s generally the most academic and upstanding in terms of doing more...

Cell, cell, cells, room, room... -- Now this was an intense chapter, but in a quieter way than they usually go. This is another instance where first person plays in your favor, because for things that are more difficult to accurately describe, or for things that are more descriptive the less...

Chapter 14 – Too Late Owen had barely slept last night—nobody had answered his questions when he asked. They had said, what are you talking about? Maybe it was a lapse in memory. Sometimes evolution can change the mind slightly. Gahi is just confused. He’ll sort it out. Don’t worry, Owen. You...

Ah, this is an interesting take on Mew. A far cry from the cheerful, playful depiction of most iterations of the species. -- This was a very exciting chapter! All action, with a lot of introspection in the middle for what to do next. Jade was definitely thinking in bullet-time for a lot of...

This was an exciting chapter that didn't take time to dillydally with any training shenanigans this time. Great! And it in general hit a lot of good beats, showed that the team was getting more and more competent with taking and disrupting the Rockets... Yeah. I like where this is all going, and...

Hello, everyone! This is my entry for a 2019 one-shot competition over in bulba, but now that it's been a week, I'm publishing it here, too! I hope you enjoy. It's a bit more on the experimental side in terms of the premise, at least compared to the usual thing that I write. Though it might...

Nah it’s a Battle Royale before that was actually invented. -- So, despite this being the chapter with ‘ALL THE PLOT’ I’d argue it was more focused near the end than anything, since, once again, we have more training/battling going on. Now, I’ll admit that we’ve got a small milestone ahead...