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Koa sighed, contemplating it for a moment. A smirk slowly stretched across his face. "Imitate the pewson i diswike the mwost?? chu shouwd have picked something hawd."

Koa stared at Kora, taking a moment to try and process his words then he tilted his head in confusion. He took a long look around the room again. "But no one here is cute."

Koa snickered wildly at Kora's anger. Coming here was a good idea after all. Koa stifled more laughter as he spoke. He contemplated for only a moment - truth was far more dangerous in his opinion - and picked. "Dare," he growled.

Time to address the finality! The turning point if you will, chapter 36. I've got to say, this was thoroughly enjoyable to finally have answers revealed. Interestingly enough though, nothing here really surprised me. But this isn't bad. I feel like the details revealed here feel like a natural...

Koa scarfed down the rest of his food and trotted eagerly after Rocky. As he stepped outside, his senses were flooded by all the new sights, sounds, and smells. New pokemon, everywhere, and he could actually detect so much just by nose alone, which was weird. He looked towards where Rocky...

Koa just stared at Rocky for a solid five seconds, trying to wrap his mind around Rocky's statement. Arceus-Creator deity of Sinnoh and perhaps the whole world-lived on a house on the hill? How? Why? He stared for even longer upon the revelation that somehow there was a baby Arceus. How? Sure...

"It's actually a color." He tilted his head and frowned. "But I don't know if I was named for the color if it was just a cool name." Huh. That was one reason to name someone. He'd wondered why a fire-type would be named Rocky. Or was Rocky even a real fire-type, if he was a familiar? It almost...

Truth or dare? Oh no... He could back out now, go home. But there was no real home. Might as well stick around. Besides, a game might take his mind off the existential crises he was trying to avoid. Koa scooted closer, to hear what the strange ghost-lloking being would say.

A familiar? He eyed the stone on the Infernape curiously. It looked like nothing he'd seen before. What a strange concept. The last thing he could picture himself wanting was anyone who could read his mind. The thought was horrid, anyone being able to see his thoughts or know who he was. Better...

Koa had wandered through the guild until he found himself in what appeared to be a cafeteria. As a pokemon, particularly an Elecktrike, he realized his sense of smell was much stronger... which was sick. He gathered himself a plate with some awkwardness (trying to carry a plate in his mouth was...

Koa had spent the last two days holed away in his house with a headache, coming to terms with the wild situation he was in. He'd watched a bit from outside his window in the strange house, but otherwise kept to himself, not even speaking with his roommates. Eventually, he resigned himself to his...

Logging 4 reviews of 4 chapters of Legendarian Chronicles (Five if you count that wildin april fools chapter) https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-26456 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-26569

Alright, gonna review 33, 34, 35! You're fairly far in the story and your writing and everything is honestly solid, so I probably won't give any hardcore critique, but rather my thoughts on the events of each chapter and how they were compiled. 33: I really enjoy the way you write your fight...

Logging my first log! Wrote for a total of 120 minutes/ 2 hours this morning!

Koa withheld another grimace. He couldn't fathom what it must have been like to lose a friend. There was nothing he could do... This Bahamut was right. Might as well try to take a look around, get acclimated. Not like there was much else he could do. Maybe he could even meet what was left of...

Koa stared in open mouthed surprise at Bahamut for several seconds. Eternatus, Giovanni, and the team he was supposed to help was dead? Stuck inside that Charmander somehow. And somehow he'd arrived late too. It was mind-boggling. Especially hearing the name Giovanni. He was never great at...

For a moment, Koa sat in silence, absorbing all the new information, as well as staring at the bright dragon-like figure before him. It all added up, from his hazy memories of the other place. He'd signed up for this, asked for this. Under the assumption he'd be safe should anything happen...

Strange dreamless darkness was all Koa knew, followed quite suddenly by a strange crushing sensation followed by feeling like his stomach turned inside out. Next thing he was aware of he was lying somewhere. He opened his eyes, then blinked, taking in his surroundings. White walls, a pleasant...

🌩️Manectric Koamaru Averon🌩️ Art: Koa when he meets Brisa: Also Koa and Brisa, at their training scene Shadowed Koa Brisa vs Shadow Koa Koa @ Miracle Matters Owen Unleashed: [/SPOILER] Relevant scenes: R11 R12 R13 R14 R15 R16 R17 Epilogue [/SPOILER]...

Alrighty, review time! I read all of arc 1 & 2, and reread a bit of the beginning, just to refresh myself. I'll admit, third omniscient is not my usual reading type, nor is slice of life PMD. However, I think you did a good job in those aspects. You definitely are right, I can clearly see that...