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I have some thoughts about chapter 1. I'll do my best to compile them. I'll probably keep these reviews short and sweet because otherwise paralysis will make me take for EVER so. First up! I like the opening. You communicate a solid sense of disjointed chaos and confusion. There's a good amount...

Logging another review for the ever fun HAA! Chapter 2 https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroes-after-all.46/post-28760

Chapter 2 is read! I have to say, I personally enjoy a fic every now and then with short chapters. Given your preferred style I think the length works really well for you! I feel like you have a good handle on only including bits that feel necessary to the story you want to tell. I'm genuinely...

Logging a review for HAA: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroes-after-all.46/post-28646

Chap 1 was honestly really fun! I think you did a good job capturing Aaron's character. You keep the child-like eagerness but I can already see that he also wants to do good and make a difference in the world. The start itself was very simple plotwise, but does exactly what it needs to imo...

Koa shifted from paw to paw, eyes nearly bulging. Red was here? Former Champion of Kanto? His thoughts spiraled. How was this even possible? In his world, Red had been Champion for short time, before leaving. Had he come here? Could there be other, parallel humans worlds out there? Or- Oh, who...

Yes. This felt so good. He hated it, hated how Brisa was faster than him, stronger than him, more experienced. But he also felt like he was finally learning. Finally making progress, and improving. Every time he got hit, he got back up, determined and ready for more. Was this how it felt...

These pokemon all spoke so strangely compared to where he was from... Dismissing the thought, he focused on what lay before him. Koa tensed, evaluating Brisa like he would if it were a pokemon battle. Luxray were usually physical fighters. But he also didn't really know any ways to attack from...

Bellyachin? He almost might have been annoyed by her comment, save for how she reminded him of Kitto's admonishments, just a bit. Besides, he kinda liked her direct attitude. "You can show me how to fight?" His tail started to wag slightly at the idea of real training, not just bumbling...

He shook the offered paw, the movement still a bit awkward with his quadruped body. Koa tensed, stifling a growl of annoyance. Not at Brisa, but at everything. Showing up late, not being able to fit in with the team, not knowing who anyone was. He huffed, then nodded. "Yeah," he grumbled. "I...

Brisa. That's what her name was. He felt a little stupid now for not remembering. He also couldn't help but notice her accent was awfully similar to Luz. He wondered if every pokemon spoke like that where she was from... "Yeah, I am a human. Or was, I guess. Name's Koamaru, I come from a place...

Koa growled. That settled it. He had been hoping to avoid using this, but his hand, no, his paw, was forced. He took out the super secret pokeball he kept hidden on him. During the transfer, he'd managed to hide it with his special power. Grasping it in his jaws, he flung it forward...

In high spirits, Koa pranced through Destiny Village, leaving the library behind and making his way towards the colosseum. Now that'd he'd managed to get some reading done, he felt ready to do some *training*. He made his way into the training, room, prepared for some good time alone, working...

Koa left the library in good spirits. It felt good to know that whatever happened, some pokemon truly believed in him. That his dreams weren't foolish. And that perhaps, he had a friend in this confusing world. With those thoughts, he returned the books he'd taken and set his mind on his next...

Purchasing Soothe III i guess? I'm p sure I have points for that?

Koa tensed ever so slightly as Icetales started to speak. This was usually around the time people would give him a pitying smile and say 'oh.... thats nice'. A word he hated. Instead, Icetales commended him. For a brief moment, he was too stunned to speak. Icetales had spoken with such...

Koa blinked in surprise as Icetales produced tea and cups. As weird as it was for Icetales to produce some tea, he suddenly realized he was also quite thirsty. He gratefully accepted one of the cups, sliding it towards himself with one paw before putting his muzzle into it and lapping it up...

Icetales world sounded so interesting. He was vaguely reminded of the history of Kalos, with castles and lords and their hierarchy, though his world history lessons were foggy at best. "Yeah no magic, although..." He pondered on how the ancient history books described Pokemon. "I guess a long...

Koa wagged his tail and nodded. "Yep! Back home I was a trainer from somewhere called the Sinnoh region." It was so strange to think whole worlds existed without humans or trainers. Without 'two forces working together for a common goal, growing together,' like Rowan would have said. He wondered...

Koa froze up for a full second at Icetales words. He saw the Shadow's mane flared red for a moment before Icetales continued. The way he spoke made Koa uneasy, not for fear of Icetales. What would it be like, having a shadow like that follow oneself? The thought was... frightening, to say the...