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I'm here for the catnip, (rewinds that statement in my head a few times... meh, still works irony non-withstanding) I've read up to chapter three but decided to dig into part one for getting done on time's sake. Chapter one: At first, I expected the main human character to be a generic...

In response to your second story centering on Cyrus... It's an interesting nightmare opening, isn't it? He got everything he'd think he wanted but the reality of perfection aka perfect state being zero isn't something he was expecting or prepared to cope with. Even in dream forum... I'm...

As I am only familiar with game canon and Special canon I might ask some redundant things and make some redundant points. Regardless I wanted to be supportive so here I am. Initial response to summary/notes/comments: a redemptive non-au Cyrus? this I'm curious to see... And here we go, into...

Ran through Grammarly 5.10.2021 sentence smoothing 5.14.2021 Giovanni was of the mentality that it was better to leave idiots to be idiots. Hau babbling on about looking for a yard had proved beyond a shadow of a doubt that the boy had no sense in his head. Having scouted out the place via a...

AN: Ran through Grammarly on 5.8.21 Sentence rehaul 5.9.2021 TW: HUNTING GORE POACHING They’d hiked a path, from the killing box to the campsite. Binding what ‘mon they encountered on the way. Even without the shrine, and legends, the pool was an obvious echo of Celebi’s clearing, and...

You have my condolances for having that level of idioc to work under, even temperarily. This did feel like a sharing peice and I wondered. Knowing that for sure well I'll keep that in mind as I continue to read and review. Thanks for clearing that line up. I did a few rereads and was still...

I look forward to it!

And done, here are chapters 1-5. If no one replies to the review tag in a week or so I'll post up 6-10 to get it moving along but until then just think of this as the start of a whole story thank-you review. It's just going to come along in bits and bobs. The analysis: I actually bumped into...

Hmm, while I have some stuff in my old for my most recent I'd say I have a tie for my work "Two paths" In the first scene, Pallet's under the effects of a mysterious psychic attack and Ash managed to get home and he's ripping it apart looking for his mother... the results are not what he...

Meh, the game's been in lock-mode for a while so it's an understandable mistake to make. I actually PMed Bosscar to make sure they were still present on the site and asked if it was OK to read/review their work. I got a green light to tackle a later chapter on the ao3 site. So here is its...

Am presently running everything through Grammarly and trying to do some by-hand editing for clarity with Transversal (chapters 1-3 done with Grammarly, the other restructuring/sentence work is taking more time) the other chapters and works are of course pending. As for new content, I've got...

Hi, courtesy of catnip I come baring a review. (or 2) I've done the uncensored prologue (as a horror fan I found the reading quite fun, and while I understand the necessity of offering a softer version for those curious but sensitive I liked the more detailed one more) and chapter one. the...

Hmm, how about a once-a-month thing, over 12 months, to spread it out a bit? Where everyone who wants their characters to participate tosses their suggestion down, volunteer authors get together, hammer out a rough outline and a do and don'ts list, then the participating writers get paired and...

Ah, so a "life moves on opening" . Alright, maybe I'm a bit... hyper-aware since I got a bit of a chat about his trait in my own writing... But there's a lot of really long sentences back to back in the first two paragraphs. While it works with the tone... an informative monologue with asides...

I liked the opening as it was an interesting mix of misdirection with a touch of vanity, as the scene swings from what one would think of as a person ogling a pretty lady to having the protagonist preening in front of a mirror admiring themselves. That line, where it's shown to be a fake...

Seriously considering JRPGs like making their protags 10 my guess was that Will was 10 at that time... Which makes that scene and the Jackle scene so much worse.

I found more fics... sharing one though since rules and all that... Made for Team Rocket by JFSindel Link: MfTR > Seems to be settled in Teen for the moment, as there's some alluded gore and evil but nothing much showed thus far. > Pokemon Manga centric, a spin-off of the Yellow/SPECIAL...

I'll see you one evil transaction for 100 percent completion and raise you this... .

.. not to butt in but you are doing the red gem collection quest, right? Because the reward... Well I enjoyed it but then I like steel soul in hollow knight so there is that, but you have to do something very specific at the beginning of the game that's very easy to overlook and can scupper a...

Fic information: Title: Transversal crossing the back of legends Summary: Special notes: set in the manga verse, does move to the game verse eventually though. In seeking healing for a Legend wrought curse the Boss of Team Rocket tries to strike a deal with a different Legend for clemency...