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Boxes are piling on the beach. Boxes atop boxes, right in the middle of… well it’s not secluded, but it’s a not popular spn of the beach. More rock than sand, enough so Green wore boots. Someone has smoothed the sands, crunched the rocks together, and on these platforms started what looks...

4. What’s its history? (How did it come to be?) Let me tell you a story of something I call the "total grimer colapse" or a TGC.

There was a snowman on Giovanni’s desk in his Viridian office. Clearly crafted by pre-adult hands, the tells were in the size and shape. It’d been set on the center of his desk, one twig thrust through it, to give it arms, some leaves pressed against it to give it “clothes”. It looked a bit...

It’d taken three days, three of battling every “walk” with Nido. She’d had to cut through elementary schoolyards, because she needed to win the fights without Nido getting scraped up. And she had. At the expense of a few little kid’s lunch money. Still, to make things sorta right she made sure...

Green sort of wished she was like Karen some days. Karen could swear without flinching from her own words, without stuttering over vileness, profanities, or… anything. She was fearless like that, and Green wished she’d had enough of that in her to actually say what she was thinking. Or just...

Via forum would be the only way I could participate. It looks like fun. Will the group be drawing from the new graphic novel as well or just using the free-to-download books?

AN: RD. Obviously. Written because Gio can be an utter jerk when he wants to be. And right now he wants to be. I'm probably going to change Green's parent's names but for now, think of the preset names as placeholders until I can think of something to put in. Frank Azule hated it when...

Thanks for sharing this cute one shot. The view from the Leaf' perspective was interesting. The back and forth made a nice rhythm to the whole that reminded me of the near lyrical slant of certian books. I'd say word wise theres one conflict in meaning. When you use " comfort" for how the...

She’d found out about Giovanni’s next power play by accident. Flipping through the newspaper she was skimming the articles at random. Because she was bored, being grounded was boring, and she was only able to read her school books and newspapers for three weeks. So she’d found a way to twist...

Reviewed chapters one and two of "envy of Eden". Hopefully, it's alright. the review I've no stipulations or particularities on what I want looked at in my fic. So whoever takes it, go wild on whatever tangent you want I guess. I have a new fic to offer to the chopping block, it's RD, so...

Alright here per review tag, handling chapters one and two. I'm sorry I didn't see any review preferences so I'm just jumping in and did a line-by-line reaction review. Hopefully, you prefer this style. Chapter 1 So the world ends in an earthquake? And curious how architecture can be a...

CHAPTER 3: The Visit part 2 Her parents tolerated Green’s revelations in silence, not saying a word until Green, tired of saying all the words, had slipped off to get a drink. Something warm, to counter the chill of remembering. Something sweet to spite Mask who’d only offered them the...

Chapter 2, the visit Final draft 1/4/25 It was a regular night, in that fuzzy time that was not quite sundown but a bit after dinner. And because dinner wasn’t takeout there were things to do after dinner. Mum was cleaning the dishes, Green drying them beside her, perched on a step stool...

If there was any mercy in this abomination pseudo world it was that the childbearing his wife’s voice looked very little (precious little) like Grace. Age distanced them, though at this moment he seemed younger, time-reversed, and all that was his curse for the moment. But at that moment his...

Roost: a gift fic The Roombas had been the start of the madness. And much to his displeasure, it'd taken a full day to sort out. There'd been a small fleet of Roombas released into the Rocket compound. Some were set up with paintbrushes to spread stripes of color down halls, the more...

Some more chapters, sorry for the brevity but I'm doing this in bits and bobs as my times a bit scattered at the moment. Chapter 8 It’s curious to see Jir engaged in anything considering how passive he’s been thus far. It’s an interesting contrast…. I think autocorrect swapped some words here...

As promised, though a bit late (life's been exciting, let's leave it at that) Here's another offering to Obsession... Chapter 7: I found this an odd turn of phrase. “ I still had much to happen in my life.” Having something happen versus striving to make it happen, to do, even, really...

I'm not too sure what the formal term of this is called. But when a scene contrasts with the base genre of a piece... For example, a gag/laugh before the monster comes out in a horror piece, the peaceful moment before the action scenes kick in. It's that contrasting scene, where the moment...

I think the "she went out the window" line made me think of a cat/mon going out the window. At least that's how my tired brain interpreted the opening dialogue without context, once context was realized I realized my mistake but since I was rattling off a stream of consciousness sort of review...

looks like there are 4 to go. Congrats on your progress in the bingo and thanks for the timeline clarification! And are we opening up with a "slipped out the window kitty opening"? It feels like it? Continues reading. Ah, never mind a spell tag giver disappearance scene I guess? Anyway...