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Odette scoffed. “Well sure, if you’re gonna snap at me for my existential crisis, I’m gonna snap at you for your self loathing. That’s how that works,” she said flatly. A curt apology was still an apology. She supposed it would do. She sucked in a deep breath of Nero’s calming aroma, and...

She stopped in her step, turning on her heel to face the Mimikyu. Her eyes had narrowed again. All of her self-coaxing had been wasted, just at the anger that resonated in Lillie's voice. "I understand you might be upset, but maybe watch your mouth," she said evenly. "Gatekeeping like that is...

Despite herself, Odette started laughing. "Yeah, did Mr. Sandman tell you to tell me that?" she asked. "No shot I got swept up into a talking Pokemon world and woke up as an Indeedee." She abruptly stopped laughing and gestured wildly to herself. "I'm a human. I'm a Kalosian Born Human. I have...

Odette stood by, eyes wide, taking in her surroundings. So much had happen in a span of a few minutes. Her dreamscape expanded. Apparently the world she was in was a talking Pokemon, and it seemed just as big as the regular world--at least, going off of what Ayueg said. She discovered what a...

Odette looked over Lillie. The presence of a more familiar looking Pokemon somehow...grounded her a little more in this dreamscape. Although, hearing her speak of Manaphy, and swapping bodies kind of threw her for a loop. She placed her hands on her widened hips and patted them. She decided it...

"Mmm, funny, this looks like typical crush-level denial," Odette commented in a low voice as she rubbed her nails on her...Indeedee fur. She frowned as she caught sight of her hand again. "I can't get over how weird this is."

Odette's gaze cut from her hands to Nero, and her eyes narrowed. "Not with that attitude," she said.

Odette's eyes didn't leave her stubby little hands as she numbly followed along with the group of Pokemon. Talks of who was, and wasn't human swirled around her, but all she could do was try to think long and hard about how in the hell she got into this predicament. A dream. That was the only...

The last thing Odette remembered was leaving the Lumiose Center for Performing Arts and walking toward her motorcycle. She'd set her bag down, then suddenly...flash. Everything went black. She didn't have any time to react...but how was she supposed to react? What had even happened? The sound...

Chapter 2: The Audacity... Special thanks to Pen and Flyg0n for beta reading this for me! Odette had never wanted to trade her motorcycle in for a flying-type pokemon. Noel, when he wasn’t going on and on about how his braviary partner Elton didn’t listen to him, always claimed flying was a...

Alright alright alright! Got around to chapter 2, and I can say with full certainty I know what Colress' plan was now! I will say, I'm a huge "show, don't tell" fiend, so I'm not normally a huge fan of prose that doesn't have a lot or even any dialogue at all. However, I really really really...

782 Words for Chapter 1 of Home is Where the Hoenn is. +1 for Chapter, +1 for theme. I think that has me at 9 points? Edit: Also did a review for Chapter 2 of Only the Truth. 436 words, 1 chapter, so 1 point. That should bring me to 10, I think?

Hey hey! I'm finally getting around to reading this and returning the favor for your kind review! I really love how this story is starting. My hopeless romantic butt is always reading romantic relationship fics, so I don't normally get around to reading trainer/pokemon bond fics. That being...

Name: Sinderella/Sind/Sin Interests: OC-Centric, OC x Canon, fakemon, neat lore and world-building, angst/comfort, fluff, pokecentric, realism, journeys, crack/humor...I'll consider reading most things, if I'm honest! Restrictions: None. I will literally intake anything that's legal. However...

Hey canisaries. Thanks for your honest review of the prologue. I'm really sorry you didn't enjoy it, but I appreciate you taking time to review anyway. I wanted to get back to you on some of your points, though, as I had a couple of points of my own. I will be putting Spoilers on some of them...

Reviewed Chapters 1 and 2 of Of Sand and Shadows! 700+ words, 2 chapters, and theme...so +3!

Hey HelloYellow17! After seeing all the banter about OSAS on Discord, I finally was able to get to starting it...and now I understand why everyone calls it "Of Sand and Bacon" :ROFLMAO: I read through Chapters 1 and 2, and got halfway through 3 before my eyes started to hurt from staring at my...

Hey there Flaze! I really appreciate your review, and some of the things you pointed out to me that I didn't think of before. So right now, that was my intention. My goal was for you to be more scared of Venira and Gulattive than you are of Team Enigma, because my aim is for the threat of Team...

Hi Umbramatic! I appreciate you giving mine a read, even if you're not that much into darkfics. That makes your compliments all the more sweeter! :veelove: I'm excited to read this, and I can't wait for you to see how truly awful he is 😂 Thank you so much! I went back and forth for two days on...

Hi Flyg0n! Thank you so much for your review and the line-by-lines! I'm glad I was able to get you to read something you wouldn't normally, and hope you end up enjoying what is to come! Sorry I'm responding so late, but I wanted to get back to you on some of your thoughts! I agree with the...