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Pokémon Will Somebody Stop These Kids?

Chapter 7

icomeanon6

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Chapter 7

June, 2017

Krissy rubbed her eyes. It was still early in the morning, and she had been walking for over three hours. This would have been trying enough if she’d been sticking to the trails, but she had opted for a more secluded route back to her house. She stopped and checked the topographical map she’d bought in town the day before. The mansion was only a quarter of a mile away.

She kept going. By the time she reached the top of the next hill, she was dragging her feet. She leaned against a tree, took some deep breaths, and decided it would be best to take a longer rest. Approaching the enemy stronghold while exhausted was always a poor decision.

She collapsed to the ground, closed her eyes, and wondered if the boys had woken up to find her letter yet. Even though she knew no good would come from it, she tried to picture how they would react upon reading it. Jason was easy enough: he would show more than a good deal of righteous indignation at how she’d acted unilaterally. And she imagined he’d be sad, even though he’d probably be too proud to show it. Then again, this could be nothing more than projection and wishful thinking. It wouldn’t be the first time she misunderstood how someone felt about her. Or second.

Travis’s reaction was even easier to guess. He was mad that saving Wyvern was out of his hands now, but he was hiding how glad he was to be rid of her. The thought churned her stomach more than a little, so she turned on her side and tried not to think about it. The important thing was that she was making process. This attempt at making friends had lasted a year and fifty-nine days longer than her first try, hadn’t it? All she had to do was wrap up a few loose ends at the mansion, and then she was free to find some new kids who might become her permanent comrades. So, there really wasn’t a good reason for her to feel as sick and miserable as she did.

She must have nodded off at some point, but it was still morning when she awoke. It would take a conscious effort, but she decided not to think about the boys for the rest of the day. Now that they were in checkmate and had no choice but to go to a Pokémon Center, there was no point in wasting any more of her mental stamina on them. She stood up, judged herself ready enough, and took a heading of west-south-west for the final stretch.

Before long, she was standing behind one of the last trees at the edge of the mansion’s front lawn. A good forty yards of open grass lay between her and the entrance. The building was comprised of two long stories covered with large windows where anyone might look out and see her approach. She could think of no way to eliminate that risk. The real decision was the vector of entry. The front door was a non-starter, but it was also the only entrance to which she had a key.

She clicked her tongue. Her best bet, then, would be to find Alessa somehow and get her to let her through the service entrance around back. Coming into contact with anyone was an obvious risk, but the chances of Alessa being unsympathetic seemed low. Krissy just hoped she wouldn’t ask too many questions. With no options remaining that involved the front of the mansion, she stuck to the trees and made her way around back.

The trees were somewhat closer on this side of the property. An added bonus was that there were also fewer windows, as the only people who came back here were ones her father didn’t care to impress with architecture. If Krissy remembered rightly, Alessa’s window was one above and two to the right of the steel service door. She grabbed a pebble from the ground, looked both ways, and ventured, heart pounding, into open space. She tossed the pebble at the window.

She missed by a mile. In a panic, she scrambled back for cover, then broke her own rule by wishing Jason were here to make a decent throw.

She shook off the stray thought and composed herself. But her composure was lost again almost immediately when the steel door opened with a loud scraping noise. She pressed her back to a tree and waited for whoever it was to pass by.

“…saw Slate earlier today. Dude looked like shit.”

“Well, can you blame him? You ever spent fifteen days in the brig?”

Unfortunately, neither speaker was Alessa, as Krissy might have hoped for. She continued to listen carefully, though, as she’d never heard of anyone receiving a sentence of that length. She could barely imagine spending even two days underground.

“Didn’t say I blamed him, just said he looked like shit, jeeze.”

“Never shoulda got sent down there in the first place, that’s what gets me.”

Krissy thought she heard one of them light a cigarette. Smoking was forbidden inside the building itself, including in the basement and sub-basement.

“Course not—wasn’t even close to his fault. I don’t think anyone would’ve gotten out of there without losing Pokémon. Like, you’re this close to moving on from Grunt and bam.”

“Yeah. But just try telling that to Rus—”

“Hey! Watch it, dumbass—the walls have ears.”

“Whatever. Oh, y’know what else I heard was…”

The Grunts went back and forth for a while on topics of no concern to Krissy. As they rambled on, she considered the matter of this “Slate” who’d just been released from the brig. It seemed likely he would hold a grudge against her father, which meant there was a tiny possibility she could use this to her advantage. Trying to find and deal with this person would have to be plan “D” or later, given the risk it carried, but it was still important to keep all options open.

Eventually, the two went back inside. Krissy waited several minutes until she felt safe enough to give the window another try. She picked up three more pebbles, took a deep breath, and walked out into the open again. She pulled her arm back, taking more care than usual to aim. But as before, the pebble bounced off brick instead of glass. She bit her lip, tried to adjust the motion she’d just gone through in her head, then convulsed as the steel door to her left slammed open again.

She jerked her head over. Standing there with a look of intense anger and incredulity on his face was the last Grunt she ever wanted to see again. It was the old one with the crooked eye, the Golbat, and the two Ursaring. The very same who’d kidnapped Wyvern and would no doubt like to see her and her friends dead. For a moment that felt far longer, Krissy froze.

The Grunt took a step forward and started to say something that would probably have been, “Hey, you!” In that instant, Krissy’s adrenaline took over. Her hand moved on its own to her belt. Before she knew what her plan was, a Poké Ball was on its way to the midpoint between her and the enemy. The right words came out of her mouth at the same time.

“Ice Punch!”

The Grunt only had time to stop in his tracks and lift his hands halfway to where they needed to be. As soon as Frostbite appeared, she leapt straight for his head and retracted her claws faster than a human can blink. Her knuckles glowed blue as they clipped the Grunt’s right eye.

Gaaaaaah!

The Grunt dropped to a knee. Even behind his hands, Krissy saw frost and blood on his face. Rather than wait to see any more and give him any chance to retaliate, she swiped Frostbite’s ball from the ground and sprinted for the woods. Soon, her Pokémon was running beside her, and no sooner did Krissy return her to the ball. That was when she heard the enemy shout something incoherent, or maybe she just couldn’t parse the words with how her head was just then. If he was calling for reinforcements, then they would be coming her way any second. She ran harder.

At some point, she tripped and had to catch herself to keep her head from colliding with a tree trunk. Her heart felt like it was about to pound out of her chest, which made it hard to hear the voices coming from different directions behind her. She forced herself to run farther away from them. The analytical functions that dominated her brain under normal circumstances were gone. The closest thing she had left was an overwhelming instinct to escape the danger.

“Away” and “escape” meant uphill, and her legs were dying from it. As the adrenaline wore off, her body gravitated toward the more level way. But this put her on a tangent from the optimal trajectory, which at any other time would have been obvious to her, and indeed to anyone who knew forwards from sideways. When she had to stop for air again, this dawned on her despite her spinning head.

She put a hand to her temple and tried to calm herself before she made any more mistakes. To her left was the base of a small bluff, to her right was downhill and therefore peril, and in front of her was a tall, dense clump of shrubs and bushes. The logical course would be to backtrack. But then, she heard the fast feet coming from behind.

Her hands shook. Running downhill was an unsustainable solution, so she had to fight here. She took Lucia’s ball from her belt. She hoped she could incapacitate the enemy before he could shout. When she turned around, the sight of the black outfit with the red “R” almost sprung her into action. But she stopped.

It was Alessa. She stood still, breathing hard, seeming at a loss for words, just like Krissy. Then, she advanced quickly but unthreateningly. Krissy didn’t move a muscle when she wrapped her arms around her.

“Holy shit, Lucy. The hell were you thinking?”

Krissy didn’t know what to say. It had never crossed her mind that she’d have to talk to Alessa immediately after she possibly maimed one of her fellow Grunts. For that matter, she’d never thought she’d maim anyone, which did just as much to rob her of words.

When she didn’t answer, Alessa said, “I thought you might leave and burn all your bridges someday, but picking a fight with Slate? Twice?

Did she say “Slate?” thought Krissy, and “twice?”

“…H…How did you—”

Alessa pulled back and held Krissy’s shoulders as she stared her right in the eye. “Wait. You thought we didn’t know about that?”

Why would they? Krissy had never seen him before the first fight, and he’d never seen her. She shook her head.

“You and your pals made him lose three top-notch Pokémon in one day! Your dad grilled him for hours! How many preteen girl-geniuses with a Bayleef do you think are out there? Slate just had to ID you in a photo and we knew it was you!”

Not a single step in this chain had occurred to Krissy even once. It felt like she had been traversing a minefield for hours without knowing it, where “hours” meant over two weeks. She felt her eyes grow wide.

Alessa continued. “Don’t tell me you’ve been this close to home the whole time! Guess that’d explain why they haven’t found you up north yet.” She then began to drag Krissy by the arm. “Well, come on! They sure as hell know where to look now. We’ve got to get you farther away from here.”

Exhausted as she was, she managed to move along with Alessa.

“You better appreciate how dead I am if they find me with you.”

“…I’m… sorry…”

“I don’t need you to be sorry. I need you to be smart. Now pick up the pace!”

Krissy tried, but it was immensely easier said than done. Somehow, she made it close to another mile through the woods before she slowed down so much that Alessa nearly had to lift her to get her to move at all. Her eyes had trouble focusing, and it hurt her throat to breathe.

Alessa sighed. “I guess we can take a break. Gotta be somewhere out of sight, though.”

Nearby, there was an ancient tree whose roots covered a wide dip in the earth. Alessa lead the way underneath. When they sat down, Krissy collapsed into her side.

“Still finding it hard to run, huh?”

Krissy was gasping too hard to answer in words, but she nodded. Alessa rubbed her back. She felt somewhat soothed.

“I suspected for a while, but if you’re still having trouble after a year of exercise, I think you might just have small lungs.”

Neither of them said anything for a while. At length, Krissy’s pulse slowed and her breathing came closer to normal. Only when she was ready to talk did Alessa ask, “So, three questions: Have you had any adventures yet, did you meet any cool people, and what the hell were you doing snooping around the mansion?”

The answers to these questions were inextricably tied together, so Krissy began her explanation with Jason and Travis. Though she tried, she remained disappointingly unable to fully describe the mechanics of Jason’s uncanny talent for catching wild Pokémon. She devoted so many words to this element of Jason’s character—as well as to Travis’s knack for teaching advanced Water-type abilities to young Pokémon—that, by comparison, the revelation of her crusade against Team Rocket was brief and blunt. If Alessa found anything peculiar about this—or offensive about the fact that they were ostensibly enemies now—she gave no sign. The sole major omission in Krissy’s version of the tale was the matter of her new name.

When she was finished, she emphasized the most critical point: although she and Travis were not friends as she formerly believed, Wyvern still needed rescuing.

Alessa nodded. “Yeeaaah… that’s not something I’d ask your dad for help with. Still think it’s pretty dumb to try stealing his PKI card.”

Krissy forgot everything else for the moment and jumped on this clue. “Card? Do you know what it looks like?”

“Forget it. And before you ask, I don’t know where he keeps it, either.”

“I think it either has to be in his office or on his person. And—”

“Look. Lucy.” Alessa sounded more serious than Krissy had heard her in years. “Don’t you think this is awfully far to go for someone who’s not even your friend?”

Krissy hadn’t thought about it this way yet, which she could hardly believe herself. “Well… he’s a friend of a friend, anyway. Or friend of maybe-a-friend.” She thought about it for another moment and felt ill. “…Friend of a former friend, maybe.”

Alessa said nothing. Krissy shook her head and brought herself back to the real reason. “It was my fault. He didn’t want any part of this, and I pushed—well, maybe Jason did most of the actual pushing, but I—”

“It’s not your responsibility what he does with his Pokémon. I’m sorry about what happened—you know I wish we’d only steal from assholes and banks—but his mistake ain’t worth risking your neck.”

Krissy had predicted that Alessa would react in roughly this way, but she had hoped otherwise. She’d learned about heroes and heroines from Alessa’s books in the first place, and heroes and heroines knew their necks existed for risking. She wanted to explain to Alessa how it wasn’t nearly enough to run away from home: She had to be her father’s antithesis. That meant saving Wyvern.

She was about to say something along these lines, but the sound of snapping twigs cut her off. Then there were footsteps, and more than one set of them.

Alessa put a finger to her lips, then crept forward without making a sound. Krissy stayed where she was, not daring to move a muscle, not even to reach for Lucia’s Poké Ball. She could only hope the other Grunts were only passing through, unaware of their presence. Alessa rose to her feet—it seemed she had a plan.

“Hey!” she called out to no one Krissy could see. “Anyone seen her yet?”

For a long second, there was nothing. Alessa turned to her left and looked over the edge of the depression, which is why she didn’t see the body flying in from the right. Jason yelled at the top of his lungs as he landed on Alessa’s back and hung on by her neck.

“Aggh! Who the fuck—

Krissy’s jaw dropped. She rushed forward to break them up, but as soon as she was out from under cover, a second flying body knocked her to the ground. This one, smaller and furrier, proceeded to lick her face. As she tried to remove herself from underneath Rabies, someone grabbed her hand and tried to pull her up, but this only threw her physical predicament into further confusion.

Meanwhile, Alessa continued to rave. “Get off me, you little shit!”

“Never!”

Bark! Bark!

“Come on, we’re getting you out of here!”

Krissy would have liked to explain to Travis that (besides her being stuck under a large puppy) she was in no need of extrication. As she was finding the concept difficult to articulate, she had to settle for yelling, “Guys! Guys! Knock it off!

*********

Krissy felt more acutely awkward than she ever had in her entire life. She was sitting on the ground with Alessa on one side and Jason and Travis on the other. She had meant for them to all sit in a circle, but it ended up being more of a squat triangle as the boys and Alessa mutually refrained from sitting as close to each other as to Krissy. At the moment, everyone was staring at her, while she was staring at the trees. She had just finished explaining the gist of her situation to Jason and Travis.

It hadn’t gone the way she’d imagined it would a year ago. There was no drama, no artfulness to how she’d explained it. It wasn’t nighttime or even raining. She’d said something to the effect of “Mariano Russo is my father. I want to defeat him and get Team Rocket out of Johto someday. I didn’t tell anyone because I didn’t think they’d want to be around me.” It was straightforward. On-the-nose. Boring. You were supposed to at least make poetic use of the third-person when revealing something of such significance.

She waited, and at great length, someone finally said something. It was Jason. “So… do you want us to call you ‘Lucy,’ then?”

Krissy shook her head.

“Actually,” said Alessa in an uncharacteristically small voice, “I think I’m the only one who calls her that. It was usually just ‘Lucia.’”

Krissy endured a moment of crushing anticipation before the boys broke into their slowly-building but inevitable laughter. It grew especially loud from Jason.

Alessa didn’t seem to get what was so funny. “Huh?”

Then, Jason finally said, “You named your starter after yourself!”

Alessa began laughing her head off immediately. “Omigod, you’re kidding!”

Travis tried to restrain himself, but he wasn’t doing a good job. “Knew it. I knew that name had to come from somewhere.”

Krissy wanted to find a hole to hide in.

“You don’t know the half of it!” said Alessa. This time, she actually addressed the boys directly, and while smiling, no less. “One time when she was younger, she was writing a story, like a little fantasy novel, and she named the main characters after me and her even though they were nothing like us! She just couldn’t think of any other names! And then she begged me to come up with the names for all the other characters, and oh my god, Chikorita’s ‘Lucia’ now! That is so her!”

At the very least, it seemed like this might make the three of them friendlier with each other. Krissy supposed she might survive the embarrassment after all, in that case.

But then, Jason asked her, “So wait, what about your name? Who’s ‘Krissy,’ then?”

No one had said ‘Krissy’ the entire conversation so far. Alessa covered her mouth with both hands and looked like she might explode from holding in the obvious truth. Krissy shot her a look that said, Please, please don’t say anything, or I might literally die.

In what appeared to take a herculean effort, Alessa removed her hands and said, “No idea.”

“And none of your business,” added Krissy. She hoped that would be the end of it. The laughter did in fact die down, but what followed, in retrospect, was worse.

Travis stared Alessa down. “So. Are you gonna help us or not?” From the look on his face, you wouldn’t know he’d been in such a good mood only moments ago.

Just like that, the smile was gone from Alessa’s face as well. “Cool it, pipsqueak. I’m thinking about it.”

Krissy could see from Jason’s and Travis’s eyes that they didn’t believe there was anything to think about. She wanted to say this was more than Alessa’s livelihood at stake: that the Rockets treated snitches and traitors worse than they treated cops. She almost remembered what happened to the last police officer they caught trying to break into a hideout, but something in her brain mercifully stopped her.

This was all far easier for Krissy than it could ever be for Alessa. Krissy had any number of mitigating factors protecting her from fierce retaliation: nepotism, age, perceived level of threat, et cetera. But Alessa was an adult of no relation to anyone important, and she had taken an oath of loyalty. Whatever Krissy had in store if her father caught her was certainly dreadful, but it wouldn’t entail permanent harm. She couldn’t say the same thing with confidence for Alessa. There was no escaping that uniform.

Even so, she didn’t know how to say any of this without sounding like an apologist. She couldn’t think of anything worse than Jason and Travis seeing her as a defender of Rockets.

While she was thinking, another tense silence had settled in. This time, Alessa was the one to break it. “Anyway, we still have to get all of you farther north, for now. They might send out another wave of searchers.” She stood up. This didn’t resolve the situation by any means, but Krissy would settle for a continuing, pragmatic ceasefire.

Jason stood up as well, and Travis followed suit. “We passed some on the way here,” said Jason. “They just asked if we’d seen anyone and kept moving. They weren’t going the right direction.”

“Good. Better safe than sorry, though, right? I’ll cook for you guys tonight.”

With that, the three of them followed her in silence. Everything that could lie in store for Alessa dragged on Krissy’s mind, which made her realize she hadn’t thought enough about what might happen to Jason and Travis. Things were never supposed to have escalated to this point until they were at least fifteen and could better protect themselves.

All this meant nothing had really changed since the night before. Krissy was still the only one who was anywhere close to safe.

*********

Krissy was tired, but she wasn’t asleep. The clouds were too thick for stars, and the fire was already out: it was as dark as possible. It gave her some measure of confidence she could sneak away again. It was the right thing to do, especially now that one more person was involved. If she was quick enough, she might just bring everything to a happy end before the others could even follow her to the mansion. This plan had seemed like a longshot when she was more awake, but now, it was clearly doable.

She sat up without making a sound. There was another critical difference between this night and the one prior: Alessa’s keys. They were only a few feet to Krissy’s right, and if she could find them, it would all go so much more smoothly. She could get inside the house without anyone’s help. There was still the matter of getting into her father’s office, but she wasn’t the worst lock-picker in the world. This was too good a chance to pass up, and she could save Alessa and the boys so much grief this way.

Alessa was lying on her side. Krissy crept up to her. She listened to her breathing pattern: regular, meaning asleep. If the keys were in her right pocket, like Krissy thought, she could get them without disturbing her. It was going to be simple, she told herself, and it would let her keep everyone safe.

Krissy wiped some sweat from her forehead and dried her hands on her shirt. Then, she slowly reached out to where the top of Alessa’s leg was supposed to be. Her fingertips touched her hip. Then, before she could move them any farther, a hand grabbed her wrist so fast and so hard she thought it would snap off. Alessa bolted upright and yanked her closer to her.

Krissy almost cried out, but she just stopped herself. She couldn’t see a thing, but the way Alessa refused to loosen her grip painted a distinct picture. Krissy imagined a pair of burning eyes, beyond furious. The way Alessa’s hand twitched and continued to squeeze the life out of Krissy’s wrist said something to the effect of, “I told you what would happen if you ever tried this again.” But Krissy didn’t know whom Alessa was talking to and didn’t want to know. She was just trying to help.

Alessa pulled her in until her mouth was right next to Krissy’s ear. She whispered, “Don’t mess with sleeping people. Not everyone likes that.” There was acid in her voice that she was clearly trying but failing to keep down. Krissy wanted to say she was one of those people, too, but now she wasn’t sure she knew what that even meant.

“Were you after my keys?”

Krissy barely managed to squeak the word, “Yes…”

“You realize if I was a little less sharp, I would’ve clocked you? Busted your head right in?”

She did now. “…Yes…”

“Is this how it’s going to be if I don’t help you or drag you away? You’ll keep pulling stupid, suicidal shit until you get that kid’s Seadra back? The one you said ain’t even your friend?”

“…Yes.”

Alessa’s hand kept twitching for several seconds, but then it calmed down. “Fine. Go to sleep. We’ll all rest up, then tomorrow night, I’ll sneak you and your friends into the mansion. I’m keeping my keys with me, you’re on your own from there, and you never saw me.”

Krissy was a little relieved, but she still swallowed. “Jason and Travis too?”

“You want them to track you down again and ruin everything? Unless you can tie ’em up and leave ’em here, they’re coming too. If you don’t like it, pick some better friends next time.”

Alessa finally let go. The conversation was over. Krissy crawled back to her sleeping bag and rubbed her wrist. She hoped against hope the boys wouldn’t agree to the plan.
 
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Chapter 8

icomeanon6

That's "I come anon 6"
Premium
Location
northern Virginia
Pronouns
masculine
Partners
  1. alakazam
  2. arcanine

Chapter 8

It was almost noon when Jason, Travis, and Rabies were closing in on Krissy and a Rocket Grunt. Not so far from there, Jen stood outside the Violet City Pokémon Center, handing out fliers to anyone who walked by.

“Excuse me, sir, have you seen these children? Please call this number if you do. Thank you.”

“…No, ma’am, I’m afraid we don’t have a picture of the girl. She should be with the boys, though.”

“You guys seen these trainers before? Well, if you could keep an eye out, that’d be real great.”

This was turning into the same routine she’d gone through in Cerulean City. She must have talked to hundreds of people by now and handed out twice as many fliers, but no one had seen the kids. It felt like all she was accomplishing was bolstering the copier store’s bottom line. Even though she had some small reason to be more optimistic about their chances in Violet City, it was hard to shake off that sense of futility.

Hanna and Derek said they were here, and that’s that. We’ll find ’em for sure this time. Her main partners in the search were not in town at the moment. It had only been a few hours ago when she got the call from them with the news, after which she hopped on the first bus, while they presumably passed out to recover from the all-nighter. The plan was to meet up sometime that evening.

Jen noticed her stack of fliers was growing thin, which meant it was back to the copy machines, and probably the ATM before that. She looked around as she walked and saw that the number of people out and about for their lunch break was starting to pick up. She hoped to be ready to hand out more fliers before the streets turned quiet again. She was thinking it might be a good idea to try around the Tower District, too, when something else caught her eye.

A young woman had just dropped her own sheet of paper on the cobblestones and was bent over to pick it up. She was wearing all black, including a cap she kept pulled low over her forehead, and her boots were nearly combat-grade. As Jen hadn’t been born yesterday, the fact that her jacket was zipped closed to hide the “R” didn’t fool her for a second. The best thing to do at a time like this was to pretend she was an idiot and walk right past the obvious Grunt as if she were invisible.

Not that this was easy. Jen stuck her right hand in her pocket to keep herself from making a fist. How she wished she could get Jason and his friends back simply by giving one Rocket a black eye. She began to indulge in a few thoughts of intense (but still restrained and justifiable) violence, which gave her a small case of whiplash when the Grunt stepped in front of her path and said, “’Scuse me.”

Act normal. Act normal. “Yeah?”

The Grunt held up a flier which bore a single portrait with no description. “You seen this girl?”

Jen’s eyes nearly bugged out, but she caught herself. It was Krissy’s picture. At least, Jen thought it was. It had to be, right? Then again, she’d only ever seen her for a little while a few weeks ago.

No, it’s definitely Krissy. Worse yet, Team Rocket was specifically looking for her. Things were even worse than she’d thought.

“’Fraid not.”

“Hmph.”

The Grunt was about to leave, when it struck Jen that they really needed a photo of Krissy. She quickly reached for her phone and asked, “Hey, want me to take a picture of that? My friend knows everyone around here.”

The young woman opened her mouth half-way, but she didn’t say anything.

Come on, thought Jen. You don’t want to act suspicious either, do you, you evil little bitch?

Whether for this reason or because she simply couldn’t find any harm in it, the Grunt did hold up the flier again. Jen snapped a picture of it quickly but casually. Then, she put on a look of concern that wasn’t exactly fake, but was perhaps deliberately misdirected.

“Don’t worry—I’m sure you’ll find her soon.”

The Grunt nodded, then walked off at a hurried pace. Jen turned the other direction and did likewise. She wanted to focus on the positive development in that she could change the flier to have all three pictures now, but even she couldn’t pretend this was anything compared to how much more dire the situation had become. She prayed that Team Rocket didn’t know the kids were probably in the area, because if she had to bet money on who would find them first, it wouldn’t be on herself.

It was when she walked straight past the sign that read “Copy, Photo, Print” that Jen realized her eyes were fixed into a nervous glare. She tried to shake it off. Was it still too early to call Hanna and Derek?

Of course not. Sleep be damned—this is an emergency.

As Jen took out her phone again to try Hanna first, she went over in her head who was supposed to know what: Hanna presumably knew a little something about Derek’s job, as she had probably applied her hacker skills to some of Derek’s work data in order to get the information from earlier this morning. Depending on how carefully Derek had selected and redacted his data, he probably still thought Hanna knew little and Jen knew nothing. Either way, Jen still had to act like she was totally in the dark when she talked to either of them.

It was growing more difficult by the day to pretend she hadn’t “accidentally” learned about Derek’s job as an undercover cop when she was seventeen.

*********

A few hours later, Jen sat waiting on the curb by a hotel on the outskirts of town. Two cars drove by, and she found herself growing anxious. She thought about calling Hanna again when Derek’s structurally dubious pickup truck pulled into the parking lot. Hanna stepped out of the passenger side, rubbed her eyes, and gave a small wave. “I called ahead. You and me are sharing a room.”

“’Kay.” It worried Jen a little that Hanna still looked this tired. They didn’t exactly have time for rest.

Derek got out as well and cut to the chase. “If the Rockets are on their trail and they’re in the right city, that means we can’t just go around talking to people or camp at the Pokécenter. That’s too slow, and it’s a race now. We need to head into the woods—that’s where they’ll have to spend most of their time. And we can’t split up, cause we might need numbers against Rockets. Think you can track them with Summer?”

Jen had to think about it. “I know she’d recognize Rabies’s scent if she found it, but probably not any of the kids’. We’d have to find something that belongs to them, and I didn’t think to get anything last time I was in Cherrygrove.”

“That’ll have to do. If we’re lucky, Jason’s been using him a bunch. I’m gonna go check in, so let’s meet back here in ten.” With that, Derek darted off for the entrance.

“He knows we’re checking in, too, right?” asked Jen.

Hanna shrugged. “Long drive. Don’t think he’s all there. I offered to take a turn at the wheel, but he wouldn’t listen. Shall we?”

Jen was looking forward to having somewhere to drop her bag. When they entered the lobby, she just saw Derek rounding a corner and heading to the rooms. It was nice they were on the same page in terms of the necessity of haste.

“Honestly,” said Hanna, “I think we need him to slow down for a minute. You can only go so far on fumes.” She yawned before going to the front desk to take care of the typical hotel formalities. Jen found herself shifting from foot to foot in impatience. After what seemed like forever, Hanna tossed her a key.

“So, what do—” Jen faltered as Hanna began shambling her way to their room without stopping to listen. “So, what do I owe you?”

“You don’t.”

Jen would be lying if she said she hadn’t expected this answer, but that didn’t mean she was going to take it sitting down. “C’mon, don’t do this. Tell me what the bill was.”

“No, you don’t do this.”

“Nice comeback.”

“Whatever.” Hanna struggled with the lock. “I know you don’t like talking money, but I’ve got some and you don’t, so I’m paying. That’s that. Also, I’m bigger than you.”

Hanna’s facts were all correct, but Jen still didn’t agree with the conclusion. “Okay, so my finances aren’t exactly solid, but I can at least pay myself to be here cause I’m the boss. You said you ran out of vacation a few days ago, right?”

The door finally opened, and Hanna promptly entered the room and fell face-first onto the bed nearest the door. “Bill’s been more than accommodating.”

Jen suddenly felt silly for equating Bill to an ordinary employer and simultaneously realized her latest argument wasn’t much of an argument. If anything, Jen’s extended absence was more detrimental to her future financial prospects than Hanna’s was to hers. “Guess neither of us are really doing ourselves favors at work right now.”

“That’s ‘none’ of us. Three.”

It took Jen a moment to realize what Hanna meant. She had been taking it as a matter of course that Derek was on the clock. To her knowledge, their efforts were all perfectly within his normal work duties, but Hanna wouldn’t know that. To an uninformed observer, the natural assumption would be that “at work” for Derek meant a government building in Goldenrod. Jen wearied of tracking what everyone was supposed to know and not know. “Right, duh.”

In any case, Hanna didn’t seem to think it was a big deal. She turned over and held up a limp arm as a signal for Jen to help pull her upright. She obliged, bringing Hanna to her feet with a grunt.

“You need more exercise. Getting pretty heavy, there.”

Hanna acted like she hadn’t heard that. “It’s supposed to rain tomorrow morning. It’ll be tough if we can’t find them today.”

“Hey, we will. I’ve got a good feeling.”

*********

It was pouring. The leaves were catching a lot of it, but it was more than enough to put Jen’s spirits in the cellar. She rubbed some of the water off Summer’s nose. No Arcanine was happy in even a drizzle, and Jen was now deeply regretting that she’d never taught her to use Sunny Day. It probably wouldn’t have been enough to dispel the rain entirely, but it still would have been a huge improvement, and they needed a huge improvement the way things were going. Yesterday afternoon’s search in the forest southwest of Violet City had turned up nothing, and the northeast was proving no better.

“Hey,” said Hanna to Derek, “you’re sure we don’t want to bring this back to town for now?”

Yes. In-town’s still a dead end. I don’t care if we’re out here all day.”

The two of them didn’t seem much better even after a full night of sleep. Jen couldn’t understand why Derek was so hell-bent on searching for them this way, either. It felt like looking for a needle in a haystack to her. “Look, Derek. Summer’s good, but I don’t know if anyone’s good enough to find them with nothing to go on. What are the odds we just stumble on somewhere Jason had Rabies out?”

“We won’t have better luck in town. All we’d get are some old leads, if that. Hanna, bring Marie out again; it’s been long enough.”

His tone was really starting to get under Jen’s skin. As for Hanna, she shook her head, but tossed Marie’s ball anyway. The Alakazam stood in a slouch and with arms heavy. She let out a low, discouraging hum, and Jen noticed Hanna’s eyes widen in a familiar way.

“No. They’re nowhere close.” Hanna bent down and rubbed Marie’s back. Apparently, her Pokémon had been awfully tired lately, and she wasn’t getting better. While Derek looked around, probably to decide where to go next, Hanna’s eyes suddenly grew wide again. “Wait.”

“What is it?” asked Jen and Derek at once.

“There’s somebody close by. Strangers. She thinks three.”

Derek’s brow grew tighter. “How close?”

Hanna paused, and when she spoke again, it was in a smaller voice. “Fifty feet west. They’re coming this way.”

Fifty feet?” Derek was almost whispering now, but it still sounded like he was shouting. “We needed to know that right away! Get them back in their balls! They might be Rockets!”

He didn’t have to tell Jen. She just felt lucky to have the cover from the trees and inclines around them, otherwise they might have been spotted already.

When Summer and Marie were safe in their Poké Balls, Hanna turned on Derek. “Listen, you. This ain’t as easy for her as just looking. It’s not like—”

“Later! Just follow my lead!”

Derek began to walk north and gestured for Jen and Hanna to follow. He wasn’t moving in any particular hurry, which Jen assumed was so that if they were seen, it would look like they were simply passing through. She didn’t have time to think about whether it would have been smarter to run off, as she heard from behind, “Hey! You down there!”

They turned around. Uphill from them were three Grunts who didn’t even bother to hide the letters on their shirts. As the Rockets began to approach, Jen started to consider, despite herself, how she would handle a battle with them. It was “despite herself” because everyone with a brain knew the risk of fighting Rockets didn’t go away if you beat some of them once.

The clear leader of the trio walked right up to Derek with an insufferable swagger about him. “Hey, pal, you seen a kid around here? Girl, ’bout eleven?”

Jen took some offense at how this pig acted like Derek was the only one here. It almost made her want to point out that Derek didn’t have any Pokémon left, and had always been a crappy battler anyway.

“No.”

The two Grunts behind the leader—who was perhaps self-appointed—let their heads drop. They certainly weren’t trying to fake any gusto for their job. Mostly, they seemed just as tired as Jen was with how the rain kept pelting their heads.

“That really sucks,” said the leader. “Makes me wish there was something besides information you could contribute to the effort. Get my drift?”

Jen looked at Derek’s face. Immediately, she felt a knot form in her stomach. He had looked angry a moment ago—as he often did—but there was a tension in his jaw and something in the lines on his face that she was positive she had never seen before. She looked down and saw his fist shake at his side, and then the image filled her head of him beating the Grunt to a pulp. She was this close to moving forward to intervene, but then Derek loosened his fist and reached for his back pocket instead. He pulled out a few large, loose bills.

Jen supposed it had just been her imagination—hers had always been a little overactive. The Grunt at least didn’t seem to have noticed a thing and took the money while wearing the same shit-eating grin as before. “Hey, you’re a smart guy, y’know that?”

Not a muscle in Derek’s face moved. One of the other two Rockets, however, looked up and said, “Come on. Let’s just keep moving.”

With an obnoxious chuckle, but without another word, the first Grunt acquiesced. Soon enough, all three were out of sight. Jen and company stayed still for a good while afterward, until at length Derek let out a deep breath.

“I nearly fucked that up.”

Jen hadn’t imagined the whole thing. It wasn’t that she would have felt differently had she been in his shoes. Who didn’t ever feel like correcting the shape of a Rocket’s nose? The difference was that she never saw herself or Derek being so close to actually following through with it. He’d always been strong—so had the whole family, for that matter—but he’d never been any kind of fighter.

“Don’t worry about it,” said Jen. “We didn’t get in a fight, and that’s all that matters. Went about as well as it could’ve.”

Hanna nodded her agreement, but Derek didn’t say anything else. They then walked on, and Derek didn’t seem nearly as driven as he had all morning, rather his feet dragged. When it felt like the right time, Jen brought out Summer again, who growled at the ongoing rain, but dutifully put her nose to the ground. They continued in no particular direction at a trudge for what felt like an eternity.

Then, Summer barked, and they all jumped at the sound. The Arcanine dropped her shoulders and sniffed with more intent than Jen had seen from her in years.

“Summer? Is it Rabies? Is it your baby boy?”

After a little more sniffing, Summer barked again and sprung back up. Jen could have cried, and her face broke out into a tremendous smile. Summer took off at a trot in a new direction. They finally had a trail.

“Slow down, girl!”

Jen turned to the other two. They didn’t quite seem to believe it yet. “We’d better move in slow. We don’t know how they’ll react.”

“If they’re at the end of the trail, you mean,” said Hanna.

“Hey, they’re gonna be there! Let’s go!”

Now Jen took point with Summer. Even though the wind came from the front, she could have sworn it was at her back. After all the agonizing and hopeless searching, she was finally going to bring Jason and friends home. She wouldn’t have to bring any unspeakable news back to Aunt Meg because this was it. Today was the day, she kept telling herself over and over. She repeated the thought as long as she could. Then Summer came to a sudden stop by a huge tree. There was a kind of hollow under its roots. Jen looked.

There were no kids. There was nobody around at all, nor was there any sign of a camp, abandoned or otherwise.

Jen could only stare as Summer sat at attention. The Arcanine didn’t look exactly happy, but she had clearly followed the scent as far as it went.

“He must have put Rabies back in his ball here,” said Hanna.

Derek examined the earth all around. “I don’t see any footprints. That’ll be the rain.”

Jen felt like an idiot. She thought she’d stopped overreacting to small signs like that a long time ago.

“Can Summer pick up any other scents?” asked Hanna. “Just anyone who’s been here?”

Jen looked over at Summer. She knew her Pokémon could understand Hanna at least that well. As for Summer, she put her nose to the ground again, but pulled her head back up quickly and with finality. “That might be the rain, too,” said Jen.

Hanna sent out Marie, found nothing, and recalled her after barely any time at all. Then, she came near and put her hand on Jen’s shoulder. “Let’s take a break. There’s space under those roots.”

There was just enough space, she might have said. The ground was muddy, and they had to bend their heads down, but the three of them were able to sit out of the rain.

Less than an hour ago, Derek probably would have shot down the idea of taking a break. Now, he just stared into space. The look reminded Jen of when he was a teenager, which wasn’t encouraging. Several times, it looked like he was about to say something, and eventually he did.

“I think we need to let the police take it from here.”

Jen could barely register what she’d just heard. When she didn’t say anything, Derek kept going in an attempt to explain himself.

“I mean, we know they were here now. And if we tell the Violet police about how the Rockets are looking for Krissy, they’ll put good people on it.”

Jen didn’t see how there weren’t already “good people” on it. Of course, it was the right idea to tell the police what they’d just learned, but why should they drop their own search? She had to wonder if this was just him trying to get her and Hanna out of the picture while he continued to work on it alone. Maybe there were things he couldn’t do as a cop if they were in the way.

“…I’m sorry. I also have to get back to Goldenrod. I’ve been away from work for too long.”

No, he was serious. Derek wasn’t that good of an actor, and Jen knew it. He really intended to go back to whatever his normal duties as an officer were and leave everything to the local police. She felt like there was a boiling kettle in her stomach, and it was getting hard to hold in the steam. How could he seriously consider abandoning Jason to fate?

“But…” she said, “…But we’re so close. We’re so much closer than the police have been able to get!”

Derek put his hand to his forehead. “No, we’re not. Trust me: We’re not prepared for this. I meet cops through work sometimes, and they know a hell of a lot more what they’re doing than we do. We need to let the professionals handle this.”

Jen exploded. A decade of careful discretion did nothing to keep her from shouting, “That’s you, you bullshitting coward!”

Derek stared at her. He looked almost like she was holding him at gunpoint. Then, the quivering, pathetic fear suddenly gave way to something closer to rage, and he glared at Hanna for some reason. Hanna had been stuck in awkward silence to this point, but now she spoke.

“Derek, I didn’t tell her. I swear.”

Jen twitched. For a reason she could barely grasp, this was nearly as infuriating. “You told her but not me?”

Derek twisted his head back to Jen and jabbed a finger in her direction. “I didn’t ‘tell’ anyone! And she’s fucking blackmailing me!”

The corner where Hanna sat wasn’t large enough for her to actually disappear into. She didn’t deny the charge.

Derek took on a deadly serious tone. “Tell me when you found out and everyone you’ve ever told.”

There was no “if” in that question, only an “ever.” Jen almost slapped him.

“It was Christmas of ’06. I haven’t told a single goddamn person, and I never heard anyone guess.”

It looked almost as if Derek had come down with a sudden case of stomach flu. Apparently, his guess had been far more recent. “Well,” said Jen, “it’s all out in the open now, so what the hell do you mean ‘let the professionals handle this?’”

Just like that, Derek’s anger was back. “Look, do you want me to say it out loud? This isn’t my assignment, and I’m not allowed to call my own shots. I’m sorry, but this is bigger than just three kids, and there’s too much at stake for me to keep ignoring orders. Every day I waste here is putting a much bigger plan at risk.”

“Let me see if I follow this stupid shit: for years and years, the only thing you ever said about your job was how fucking dumb your bosses are and how they don’t know what the hell they’re doing. So now they are worth listening to when that means leaving Jason in a ditch.”

“Oh, shut up! If he’s in a ditch, it’s cause you shoved him in!”

She hadn’t seen that coming, and she thought for his sake he’d better have a good explanation for it. “Excuse me?”

“Why do you think I brought you into this in the first place? It’s because he used to trust you. Used to. But no, you had to throw that out the window as fast as possible. ‘I know! I’ll get my psychic friend to scare the shit out of them!’ Great fucking plan! That’s why we’ll never find them again!”

Jen almost started screaming about how he wasn’t there and had no idea how that plan actually went down, but she thought of something worse. She had realized what was actually behind Derek’s twisted idea, and it was so much more banal than he was trying to spin it. “So sue me, I tried! And I’m still trying, unlike you! You know what, fuck it, the kids are trying, even if they’re stupid about it. You know why they’ve done more to hurt Team Rocket than you ever will? It’s cause to get anything done, you’d have to stand up to your idiot bosses, which you won’t cause they might fire you, and you’re scared to death of fucking job interviews!

This left Derek frozen, not that Jen gave him much of an opening to respond. “How are you not over this yet? That’s a problem for teens and new grads, not guys in their thirties! I can’t believe I was ever proud of you for what you do. You make me sick.”

Derek’s face was utterly blank. He was staring a thousand miles away again. Then, where there had been blankness, it looked closer to sadness.

“…You’re right.”

He ducked his head, rose to squat, and left the roots to return to the open and the rain. He walked a few paces, then stood still. Slowly, it sunk into Jen that she may have just said something which would haunt her for the rest of her life. She looked over at Hanna and saw her head was buried in her hands.

Minutes passed. Nobody moved, and the only change was that Derek was getting wet again. Eventually, Jen realized she had to say something, and probably something which at least resembled an apology. Before she knew what it was, she got up to join Derek. As soon as she was able to stand up straight, though, he spoke again. He sounded calm.

“New plan. We’re going to save Wyvern.”

Not in a million years did Jen expect him to say that. The idea had never even crossed her mind. “What?”

Derek turned around to face her again. “That’s the only thing that’ll make them come back. They don’t have a shot of getting that key, but I do. We do. Hanna, I’m going to need your help.”

Hanna got up as well, but she didn’t look remotely convinced. “Even if we get the key, will that work? We can text Travis that we’ve got it, but are they going to believe us?”

“They will if Bill tells the press that his team’s cracked the Rockets’ new Poké Balls. Then, we just have to tell the kids to read the news. It’s what they want to hear, and they’ll believe it. And we’re not going to trick them. We can do this the right way.”

Hanna bit her lip for a moment. “And you’re sure you can do it?”

“Yes.”

Jen found it hard to believe, but it wasn’t like Derek to overstate his confidence about anything, much less something this dire.

He continued. “There’s a Grunt who works directly for Russo who owes me. It’ll only work once, but he’ll get me inside the facility under Russo’s mansion. Their network isn’t connected to the public internet, but everything I’ve heard suggests that once you have physical access to it, their security sucks.”

Hanna lifted her eyes up. The gears inside her head seemed to be turning.

“If you can handle it,” said Derek, “I can call you when I get alone with one of the machines. Then, you and Marie track my phone, teleport in, do your thing, and we’re out with the key and all the other data you can pull.”

Jen wasn’t happy with one of the conditions of that plan. “And you’re sure you can find an unsupervised computer?”

“Almost sure. I’ve been getting ready to carry out this kind of operation for years. But like I said, it’ll only work once. Soon as they know I’m not actually selling out the police, then that’s the rest of my assignment out the window. This plan means cashing in for me, and if I’m lucky, the department will think it was worth it. Are you and Marie up for it, Hanna?”

“…Yeah. Should be no problem.”

Jen swallowed. “I’m coming too.”

Derek answered almost before she finished speaking. “No way in hell.”

“What if things go south? Marie’s in no shape to fight, but Summer is.”

“I have a Pokémon. We’ll be fine.”

Somehow, Jen hadn’t seriously considered this possibility, but she played it off. “One Pokémon’s never enough. Everyone knows that.”

Derek shook his head, but to Jen’s surprise, he said, “Fine. You’re right. But if you and Hanna get in serious trouble, Marie’s taking you out of there right away. And the plan is that nobody needs to fight at all.”

You mean she’ll be taking all of us out of there right away, Jen thought to say, but she didn’t push it. Derek was the professional, after all. “How soon can you make this happen?”

“Tomorrow morning. I do need a little time to get ready, and we could use a good night’s sleep first.”

Jen looked at Derek and Hanna. Hanna especially seemed almost as confident as Jen had been when Summer found the trail. She had to wonder, though, if this was how Jason and company had felt when they first decided to pick a fight with Team Rocket. But then, they were just kids, while Derek and Hanna were bona fide experts.

This was going to work.

*********

It was past midnight. Travis had his back to a tree. A short way behind him stood the biggest house he had ever seen. To his left was Jason, to his right was Krissy, and standing by another tree was the Grunt, Alessa.

Nobody made a sound. The stillness lasted at least ten minutes, and then he heard a heavy door open and shut. With that, Alessa crept over to the three of them and whispered, “That’s the guard’s nightly bathroom break. There won’t be anyone watching for about five minutes. I’m going to open the door, and then I’ll signal each of you over one at a time.” She switched her small flashlight on and off. The beam was narrow. “You first, then you, then you.” She pointed at Travis, Jason, and Krissy in that order.

There was no debate. This part of the mission was entirely in the Grunt’s hands, as much as Travis hated to admit it. He didn’t understand why they had to go one at a time, though. In any case, Alessa moved quickly and quietly across the lit clearing, unlocked the door, and disappeared. Several long seconds passed. Then Travis saw the signal.

He had to move. It took a moment of hesitation, but he willed himself to cross the gap. He could only hope nobody who was still awake was watching from one of the windows.

As soon as he was through the door, someone grabbed his shoulder and he nearly cried out. It was just Alessa, of course, but that didn’t keep his heartrate from spiking. He was about to move away from the entrance, but she held him in place. Then, she made him face her and whispered, “Do you know what you’re getting into, here?”

It didn’t seem like the perfect time to ask that question. Travis’s eyes strayed up and down the long hallway they stood in. There was a dim light coming in from outside, but at the edge of his vision, it was pitch black.

“Answer me.”

He did. “Yes.”

“Are you willing to do anything to get your Pokémon back? And I mean anything.”

Travis didn’t like that she was willing to burn so much time on this. “Why?”

“Because you might have to.”

Something was crawling up Travis’s throat—a caveat, a dodge, some kind of hedging. Despite that, the answer was obvious. Wyvern came first.

“Yes.”

Alessa stared him in the face with a deep crease in her brow. He got the feeling she didn’t believe him.

“One piece of advice, cause I feel sorry for you. If you end up facing Russo, don’t look him in the eye.”

Travis didn’t know what to make of this. “Why not?”

“Cause that’s what he wants you to do.”

Alessa nudged him over to the side, then signaled Jason. He came in a flash, but he got no words from Alessa before it was Krissy’s turn.

With all of them huddled up just inside the house, Alessa looked them over one last time and said, “Remember: you never saw me. Good luck.” She bent down and gave Krissy a quick one-armed hug. Travis wondered how Krissy could stand to let a Rocket touch her that closely, friend or no. Just how badly had they messed her up?

Alessa hustled out the door and closed it with barely a noise, but still more than Travis was comfortable with. He felt the clock ticking as Krissy hurried them down the hallway.
 
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bestgaragedoors

Bug Catcher
(Up to Dumb Luck!) I don't have any line by line reviews/comments, so I'll post something quite broad. I really like the tone that you've set up here! From the opening lines, you make it clear to the audience what kind of world this is going to be. The prose in chapter one was very fluid and felt really appropriate for each POV character. The main conceit is also really fun - a twist where you see the adults before the kids, which helps you realize just how stupid the idea of kids going after a criminal organization is.

I like that it's realism-leaning without descending into cynical or gritty territory. This is a world where a Growlithe can scratch or bruise a kid and an Alakazam can easily kidnap one. The danger is real, which heightens the tension of the kids going after Team Rocket!

If there's one note I have so far, it's based on the ages of the kids. If I'm reading correctly, then the kid characters are all ten. However, Krissy's speech doesn't feel quite right for a ten-year-old. From what I can tell, her deal is that she's sort of the know-it-all book-smart character who reads the Pokedex religiously. But her speech style feels more appropriate for a child older than ten. Example:

“The odds are closer to point-five percent, or one in two hundred, by the way, and most experts say your chances improve the longer you’ve been training. Regardless, the probability’s low enough that if you can call it in advance and succeed, then you most likely have some skill at it.”

I could maybe imagine a ten year old with high verbal intelligence writing this as a way of mimicking adults. But it doesn't read like something conversational, even if you take into account that she's an advanced ten year old with high verbal intelligence. I don't think it needs to be overhauled and the concept (she knows about decimals, probabilities, and reads a lot of Pokemon battling theory) is fine. Just the style of her speech seems too literary in a way that doesn't make her read as ten.

Other than that, I like how much the kids feel like kids - confident, idealistic, and entirely unaware of the true scope of the danger they're getting themselves into. The idea that they have to get that kid's Girafarig back because the police certainly won't reads like very child-with-high-ideals. And that idealism also intersects with their brashness and ignorance of the stakes. Which makes the adult characters feel very necessary! I was a little worried about how having these two trios work would work, but it's totally working.

Looking forward to reading the rest.
 

Astinus

Bug Catcher
Posting this before I fall too far behind!

So the fun thing about this review is that it's my second attempt. I read both of these chapters before, and had some comments ready to go, but when it came time to organize them, my mind went blank. (A sudden increase of physical activity will do that!) By the time I was ready to review, I decided to go back and re-read these two chapters.

Chapter 7

She leaned against a tree, took some deep breaths, and decided it would be best to take a longer rest.
Which is why this stuck out to me on my second read through. Because I remembered Alessa saying something about Krissy having small lungs, and by going back, I see that you dropped a hint to it here. Again, I say that I want to read this all over again when it's done, to see if any more hints like this are around.

I will also be paying attention for when Krissy's small lungs possibly come up in the future.

For that matter, she’d never thought she’d maim anyone, which did just as much to rob her of words.
This ties in to the end of chapter eight for me. In a way, it shows just how "easily" it is to do something that one never expects to do, especially in an adrenaline-fueled state. Sure, Krissy might not want to follow in the steps of being a Rocket, but she hurt Slate really badly just to protect herself. And it makes not only Alessa but also the reader wonder just what decision Travis will have to make for Wyvern.

The image of Jason flying out of the bushes to tackle Alessa amused me immensely.

Despite the surrounding scenes, the part where both sides of Krissy's life came together was warm. It's always great when that happens in stories, especially when the hinge between the two sides has to fear being embarrassed! At least the secret of where she got the name of "Krissy" is safe...for now. And I'm looking forward to when this slows down enough where the boys can think more about how they feel about Krissy, knowing that she's related to a Rocket.

She almost remembered what happened to the last police officer they caught trying to break into a hideout, but something in her brain mercifully stopped her.
I am always a fan of when details are left to the reader's imagination. Sure, you could have had Krissy remember more about that event, but letting the reader wonder and imagine things make the Rockets more of a threat.

Chapter 8

“C’mon, don’t do this. Tell me what the bill was.”

“No, you don’t do this.”

“Nice comeback.”

“Whatever.”
Little bits of conversations like this show the friendship that Jen and Hanna have with one another. Really get the sense that the two have spent a lot of time together, and that in some ways, they haven't grown out of a childhood friendship!

“Hey,” said Hanna to Derek, “You’re sure we don’t want to bring this back to town for now?”
Little typo: the comma after "Derek" should be a full stop.

Apparently, her Pokémon had been awfully tired lately, and she wasn’t getting better.
I'm guessing that this is something else to keep a watch for hints about! It does make me wonder what the lifespan is for Pokemon in this fic's universe. I would think that Marie isn't too old, so maybe there's something else going on.

It’s cause to get anything done, you’d have to stand up to your idiot bosses, which you won’t cause they might fire you, and you’re scared to death of fucking job interviews!”
I mean, in this economy!?

There has to be something to Derek's...anxiety? Like, Jen's comment hit him deep, and it also put a fire in him to put them all at risk to help the kids. Derek's becoming my favorite of the adult characters, because he has a lot going on with him. Looking forward to learning more about him, and how he handles everything as this situation grows.
 

icomeanon6

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(Up to Dumb Luck!) I don't have any line by line reviews/comments, so I'll post something quite broad.
All good! Gotta get the bird's-eye view as well.

I really like the tone that you've set up here! From the opening lines, you make it clear to the audience what kind of world this is going to be. The prose in chapter one was very fluid and felt really appropriate for each POV character. The main conceit is also really fun - a twist where you see the adults before the kids, which helps you realize just how stupid the idea of kids going after a criminal organization is.
Nice! I think I lucked out on deciding to open with Derek instead of Jason, since I don't remember my exact thought process, and I don't think I ever considered how much it could change the reader's perspective on the situation if I'd switched that up at the beginning until you brought it to my attention. As they say in sports, it's better to be lucky than good.

I like that it's realism-leaning without descending into cynical or gritty territory. This is a world where a Growlithe can scratch or bruise a kid and an Alakazam can easily kidnap one. The danger is real, which heightens the tension of the kids going after Team Rocket!
Really glad to hear that. It was definitely a goal not to push things too far in that regard.

If there's one note I have so far, it's based on the ages of the kids. If I'm reading correctly, then the kid characters are all ten. However, Krissy's speech doesn't feel quite right for a ten-year-old. From what I can tell, her deal is that she's sort of the know-it-all book-smart character who reads the Pokedex religiously. But her speech style feels more appropriate for a child older than ten.
Eleven in the "present-day" chapters, but yes, this is something I've thought about a lot, going back to when I first posted this. The conclusion I came to is that Krissy sounds the way she's supposed to, even if her mental and verbal aptitude can be distracting in the early chapters. I probably could and should add some sentences in the narration to telegraph to the reader that this is intentional, but I've long since decided against making her sound closer to her age. You're not wrong to point it out; I just hope it makes more sense by the end of the story.

Other than that, I like how much the kids feel like kids - confident, idealistic, and entirely unaware of the true scope of the danger they're getting themselves into. The idea that they have to get that kid's Girafarig back because the police certainly won't reads like very child-with-high-ideals. And that idealism also intersects with their brashness and ignorance of the stakes. Which makes the adult characters feel very necessary! I was a little worried about how having these two trios work would work, but it's totally working.
Very good to hear. I'll admit that it takes a conscious effort for me to avoid writing kids as "small adults" (and I'm often at a difference of opinion with readers when I think I've gotten it right), and shoring up the kids' kid-ness was among my revision goals.

Looking forward to reading the rest.
Thanks! Hope you enjoy it if you find the time.

Posting this before I fall too far behind!

So the fun thing about this review is that it's my second attempt. I read both of these chapters before, and had some comments ready to go, but when it came time to organize them, my mind went blank. (A sudden increase of physical activity will do that!) By the time I was ready to review, I decided to go back and re-read these two chapters.
Ooh, interesting. I see it as a rare treat to hear thoughts on re-read sections.

Which is why this stuck out to me on my second read through.
(I hope it was a welcome kind of physical activity and that you're doing good.)

Because I remembered Alessa saying something about Krissy having small lungs, and by going back, I see that you dropped a hint to it here. Again, I say that I want to read this all over again when it's done, to see if any more hints like this are around.

I will also be paying attention for when Krissy's small lungs possibly come up in the future.
I'm undecided as to exactly how accurate Alessa's diagnosis of Krissy's lung capacity is. I want to say it's lower than the average Pokemon trainer's, but I'm not sure whether it's seriously lower. She wears out much more easily than Jason and Travis, but she's still capable of going on a Pokemon journey. Anyway, I wouldn't say it's an important-important detail, but it's definitely one I consciously kept in mind while writing as a little way to make her depiction feel more consistent and therefore (hopefully) more convincing. I took a similar approach with the basic thought, "Strong arms run in Jason's/Jen's/Derek's family," which turned out to be more essential to the plot.

This ties in to the end of chapter eight for me. In a way, it shows just how "easily" it is to do something that one never expects to do, especially in an adrenaline-fueled state. Sure, Krissy might not want to follow in the steps of being a Rocket, but she hurt Slate really badly just to protect herself. And it makes not only Alessa but also the reader wonder just what decision Travis will have to make for Wyvern.
I hope you like where I take that dangling question. You'll have to wait a bit, though, since up next are the last two of the standalone chapters.

The image of Jason flying out of the bushes to tackle Alessa amused me immensely.
One of my favorite bits, lol.

Despite the surrounding scenes, the part where both sides of Krissy's life came together was warm. It's always great when that happens in stories, especially when the hinge between the two sides has to fear being embarrassed! At least the secret of where she got the name of "Krissy" is safe...for now. And I'm looking forward to when this slows down enough where the boys can think more about how they feel about Krissy, knowing that she's related to a Rocket.
I was very over-conscious of the distance between social circles as a kid, to the point where it took me years to grasp the reality that not only did my two sets of grandparents know each other, they actually got along quite well. Very different situation with the Krissy's two main circles, but I think I drew on some of that for this scene. I really like it.

I am always a fan of when details are left to the reader's imagination. Sure, you could have had Krissy remember more about that event, but letting the reader wonder and imagine things make the Rockets more of a threat.
I'm glad this particular sentence stuck out; it wasn't there in the original thread.

Little bits of conversations like this show the friendship that Jen and Hanna have with one another. Really get the sense that the two have spent a lot of time together, and that in some ways, they haven't grown out of a childhood friendship!
I think the real trick to making this story work was giving the impression that this is all following a bunch of adventures and bonding that never actually got written. To me that comes down to getting bits like this one right, and putting just enough of them in there.

Little typo: the comma after "Derek" should be a full stop.
Fixed, thanks.

I'm guessing that this is something else to keep a watch for hints about! It does make me wonder what the lifespan is for Pokemon in this fic's universe. I would think that Marie isn't too old, so maybe there's something else going on.
I won't say whether there's something else going on, but do hold that thought.

I mean, in this economy!?
Derek's fear of job interviews becomes more topical every year, sadly.

There has to be something to Derek's...anxiety? Like, Jen's comment hit him deep, and it also put a fire in him to put them all at risk to help the kids. Derek's becoming my favorite of the adult characters, because he has a lot going on with him. Looking forward to learning more about him, and how he handles everything as this situation grows.
Honestly, I've never really thought about whether there's anything to Derek's anxiety other than that he's had it real bad since childhood and therapy didn't cure it, even if he copes better as an adult. But even if there isn't much or anything left to learn about it per se, I do believe it's safe to say it will go somewhere it hasn't gone yet by the end of the story.

Thanks as always for reading!
 
Hubris Island

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Hubris Island

August, 2002

Hanna had hoped she wouldn’t be fifteen years old yet, but as of a month ago, she was. She had also hoped she’d be able to enjoy this excursion to the Whirl Islands without worrying about her age, but there was little hope of that now. She tried to distract herself with the wide, cloudless sky and the salt breeze coming off the water, but it was no good. Then, their little sailboat hit a small wave that sent some thick spray into her face, and she spat over the side.

“Hey, Derek,” said Jen, “what’s with all the turbulence? I thought you were supposed to be good at this.”

“Keep it up, and the ride isn’t going to be free anymore.”

Jen just laughed. She tended to give her big brother a hard time, and Hanna thought it was to his credit that he let her get away with it as much as he did. At the moment, Derek was leaning off the side of the boat to balance the sail. Hanna was pretty sure he was nineteen, and today, she saw a whole new side of him. Specifically, that he looked pretty good in a t-shirt that was a size too small. It drew the eyes away from his face, which always bore a dull expression that stood somewhere in the range between vacant and irked.

“Don’t worry, Hanna. Jen’s paying for your ticket, too,” he said, which snapped her attention away from his abs and back to his boring face. “By the way—”

Then he paused. Hanna had noticed that where most people might go “uhh…” or “so, like…” Derek just said nothing and took on a thousand-mile stare before he found whatever it was he wanted to say. Finally, he continued. “You’re almost done, right?”

Jen answered for her. “Yeah. She got accepted to Nerd School, Goldenrod Campus.”

Hanna sighed. “Nobody keeps journeying forever.”

“We’ll see about that.”

Hanna could believe Jen intended to stay on her Pokémon journey indefinitely, if only because she was still thirteen, so nobody had confronted her about the future yet. One day, of course, she’d have to move on, whether that meant going to school like Hanna or starting a career like her brother—whatever it was he did for a living. He never gave a clear answer when they asked about that.

“The real question,” said the said brother, “is who we’re going to find to babysit you next.”

Jen stuck her tongue out at him as she took off her glasses to wipe away some of the spray. Then, the boat hit another wave, and she had to juggle to keep from dropping them.

“Isn’t that your fifth pair since you left home?” asked Derek.

“As if. I haven’t lost any since we went to Cinnabar, and that was like, last year.”

“I remember that,” said Hanna. “You tried to find them in some volcanic mud, then I had to pull you out of the mud.”

“Hey! That was a secret!”

Jen pouted, but Hanna could tell she was still having fun. After spending over three years in close proximity, it was never a mystery to her when Jen was actually upset. And sure enough, moments later Jen was pointing at the sea and practically jumping out of her skin in excitement. “Hey! It’s a Mantine!”

“Don’t rock the boat!” barked Derek.

Hanna leaned forward to see the Mantine, taking care not to agitate Derek any further. She had never seen one in person, but its huge fins, stretched out like a kite, were unmistakable. It surfed alongside them for a few seconds, but then it sped ahead and suddenly there was air beneath it. It rose a solid two feet above the water and stayed at that level for at least twenty yards before it dove back under the surface.

“Wow,” said Jen. “I’m so catching one of those today. It’ll be a great chance to use my new Ampharos, too.”

“No, it won’t,” said Hanna and Derek together.

“Huh?”

“You tell her, Hanna. I’m trying to concentrate.”

Jen looked at Hanna like there was no way she’d be able to explain why using an Electric-type was a poor decision in this case. So, Hanna leaned back again and began to deliver the lesson.

“When it comes to matchups against Electric-types, Mantine’s more similar to Gyarados than to other Water Pokémon. Those fins act like wings, so Electric moves don’t just take advantage of conductivity: they also lock up the ‘wings.’ Any fully-evolved Electric-type will probably knock out a wild Mantine in one hit, which is great if it’s trying to kill you, but not so much if you want a new Poké Ball to register it.”

Jen stared at her older companion in amazement. Hanna wasn’t finished, however. “On top of that, I’ve seen your new Ampharos, and the guy who traded her to you was a terrible disciplinarian. If you try telling her to use an Electric attack around the ocean—salt water is more conductive, by the way—she’s going to spray electricity everywhere, and then I’ll have to take you to the hospital.”

Now Jen was turning a little red, but she tried to play it off. “Yeah, good point. That’ll make it tough, though. Other than Ampharos, all I’ve got is Fire-types and that new Staryu for Surf. I guess Summer’s strong enough that she could deal, but… hmm…”

“Duck,” said Derek.

Hanna and Jen both ducked as Derek adjusted their course and let the sail’s boom swing over their heads. “About that Staryu,” he said, “You’re drawing attention to the fact you didn’t really need my help to get out here.”

“Why wouldn’t we want your help when boats are fun and you’re so nice?” asked Jen with a mischievous sneer.

“Correction: Boats are fun when you don’t have to pilot them and worry about how to get around rocks and whirlpools. This isn’t a joyride—I’m here for work.”

“What’s a boat ride got to do with your so-called ‘work?’”

“You don’t need to know that.”

While the siblings went back and forth, Hanna looked to the horizon and zoned out. Spotting a Mantine may have been captivating enough for Jen, but not for Hanna—not anymore. She’d seen countless new Pokémon after five years on the trail, and she was running out of time to encounter any that were truly special. The fact was, only Jen was here for fun. Hanna wanted to find a Pokémon nobody had seen for generations, if ever, and which was rumored to reside nearby. She wanted to fill one of the obvious gaps in the Pokédex before she had to leave the world of nature and Pokémon behind for who knew how long.

She wanted to see Lugia just one time.

*********

Hanna, Jen, and Jen’s Arcanine were standing on a shallow beach belonging to a rocky island dominated by a small mountain. It was almost noon, and Hanna could just see Derek’s sailboat receding into the distance. She still wondered where exactly he was going and what he was going to do there, but she wasn’t going to lose sleep over it.

Jen stretched, smiled, and soaked in the sun before asking Hanna, “You sure you want to split up?”

Hanna nodded. “I don’t want to get in the way of your fun.”

“Fine, so long as you’re still having fun, yourself.”

“Hmm.” Hanna didn’t want to say outright she only cared about finding Lugia—not about whether it was a good time, or even that it wasn’t boring.

“Cause, you know you got, like, a one in a million chance of seeing Lugia—if there’s a Lugia. And I’d say that’s fifty-fifty, so we’ll call it one in two million?”

Hanna rolled her eyes and tried to signal with her posture that she was about to walk off. “Don’t make Summer go too deep in the water.”

“Jeeze, I know that much. Don’t I, Summer?”

Summer barked in an expression of total confidence in her trainer. Hanna wished she could share the sentiment. She started to stroll down the beach. “Let’s meet back here before sunset.”

“’Kay! Gimme a shout if you find him!”

Hanna kept walking until she could no longer hear the splashing and barking. She shook her head. How was she ever going to leave Jen to continue her journey by herself when she worried about leaving her alone for one afternoon? It seemed like every day she had to stop her from doing something stupid, and every week she had to fix the mess resulting from some stupid thing she ended up doing anyway. Jen was such an impulsive little kid.

Of course, all this reminded Hanna of the only thought worse than that of leaving Jen unsupervised: In a few weeks, she wouldn’t have Jen around to remind her to smile now and then. So, she shook her head again and thought about how she might track down this legendary Pokémon.

On the other side of the island was a cave which connected underground to several other islands, according to Hanna’s prior research. If Lugia was down there, it would take Hanna way too long to find it. She needed a less-obvious but more-precise lead than that, and she was thinking it had to do with the sea and the sky. For that reason, she wanted a better view, so she decided to leave the beach and start climbing. The island’s mountain was far too steep for her to reach the summit, but there were conspicuous outcroppings that would suffice.

It was easy going at first, since the base of the mountain consisted mostly of smooth boulders that rose only gradually. Hanna wondered if the tide sometimes reached this far up. Past the boulders, the rise in elevation became much sharper, and she had to keep a hand on the mountainside to navigate the narrow way that wasn’t quite a trail. She decided she was right to leave her Pokémon in their balls today. Her Kadabra, Marie, in particular hated high places with poor footing.

When she reached a relatively broad shelf, she took a break and looked out to the horizon. The sun was still bright overhead, but there were a good number of clouds in the distance near one of the other islands. She could see a few whirlpools between shelves of rock. Nothing was out of the ordinary. It was about as good a day as you could ask from the Whirl Islands.

In a bit of absent-mindedness, Hanna found herself taking out her Pokédex. She had read everything it had to say about Lugia a thousand times, but she figured a thousand and one times wouldn’t hurt. When she pulled up the page, Dexter began to narrate automatically.

Lugia is said to be the guardian of—”

Hanna hit the skip button to shut him up so she could read in peace. There was little to read, though, besides vague conjecture and myth. The one solid fact it cited was that it was a Flying-type, but there was disagreement as to whether it also had Water or Psychic qualities. The only image in the database was a crude illustration. Hanna guessed the hand-like wings depicted therein were probably ancient artistic license.

The primary takeaway from all the conjecture and myth was that every source agreed on the relevance of one key element: the weather. It was possible the alleged sightings in the Whirl Islands were baseless rumors which only seemed plausible because of the area’s unpredictable winds and currents, but at the same time, any other place in Johto seemed like even more of a stretch. If Lugia was anywhere to be found, it was here.

With that in mind, Hanna decided she would spend at least an hour watching the air and the water for anything unnatural. If she was lucky, she might catch Lugia on the move, which seemed a better bet than stumbling in the dark caves to find it sleeping. In this sense, it was a shame the weather was so nice. So, Hanna fixed her eyes on distant clouds and whirlpools for some time.

Thirty-odd minutes passed, and she saw nothing out of the ordinary. But then, something caught her in the corner of her eye. It was mostly hidden by the mountain behind her, but there was some new, tall cloud formation that wasn’t so far away from the island. It took her a while to figure out what was off about it: It seemed to be rolling more vertically than horizontally.

She felt a small burst of optimism and knew she had to get a better look. There was a terribly thin path leading away from the shelf and further up the mountain in that direction, so she took it. Around a bend, she came across an even shallower shelf than the first one, but which provided a perfect view of these new clouds.

Hanna sat down with her back to the wall and her legs dangling over the edge to observe the anomaly. She had never seen anything like it. It was almost as if she were looking at clouds from above—as if someone had turned them ninety degrees vertically. The shadows didn’t make any sense, either. They seemed to move independently of any clouds or anything else. It all spun much like the whirlpools all around the sea, only much slower. The sight of it mesmerized her.

She thought about pulling out her notebook to take a sketch, but she wasn’t comfortable with managing her backpack in this position. Instead, she continued to look at the clouds with a measure of hope that Lugia, or something like Lugia, might have something to do with this. Then, she thought about pulling out her notebook to take a sketch, but stopped when she realized she’d just thought about that, which was weird. She was probably thinking in strange ways because of how the horizon would spin along with the clouds until she realized that was impossible and blinked, only for it to start again every time. On top of that, it was tiring the way the shades of gray shifted and spun and made her vision slip out of focus.

All of this lead Hanna to decide she could probably continue to monitor the peculiarities with her eyes closed.

*********

Hanna didn’t want to be asleep anymore. It may have been dark enough for sleep, but it was also terribly loud and oddly wet. A small part of her worried she’d wet the bed, but that hadn’t happened in years, the exact number of which was absolutely nobody’s business. Besides, the wetness was all over, and it was cold rather than warm, so that couldn’t be it. Since her mind was still hazy, this provided a small amount of comfort. But then, she opened her eyes, the relief vanished, and she screamed at the top of her lungs.

It was a typhoon. The sun was gone, the rain came down in pounding sheets, and the wind buffeted her face at what felt like seventy miles per hour. She was stuck in the same spot, holding on for dear life.

She tried not to panic. She tried not to think about how the beach was now completely covered by the tide, or how it would be suicide to try the path down while it was wet, or how jumping would also kill her, whether from the rocks or the water. She was stuck. And even if she weren’t stuck, she was far too terrified to move.

All she could do was sit there and grip the edge beneath her, white-knuckled. It was five minutes or five hours later when she thought she heard something besides the wind and the hammering raindrops.

It was her name. She brought herself to look down, where she could just spot Jen riding on a Pokémon beneath her.

“…ump!…Jum…!

Hanna couldn’t believe what she was hearing. How on earth was she supposed to jump?

No!” she yelled back. “You’re crazy!

Jen kept trying to coax her, but Hanna knew that even her own survival instinct was smarter than Jen. There was no way she could move now.

“…old on!…ust……econd!

Jen was up to something. Hanna saw her get her Pokémon to swim in an oval, gradually picking up speed. The water was rising. If Jen was trying to use Surf to raise the tide enough for her to jump in, that was insane. The Mantine would never get the water high enough for her to survive. Hanna closed her eyes and wished it would all go away. There were some warm drops on her face now among the cold ones, which must have been tears.

When Hanna opened her eyes, something had indeed gone away: Jen. She wasn’t in the water anymore. Hanna thought she must be drowning, but then, in the upper-right corner of her eye, she spotted her.

Jen was flying. The Mantine had grabbed the wind and was leaning into it to climb fast. It was almost as high up as Hanna was, but its trajectory looked like it would hit the mountain well below and away from her. Jen leaned as far as she could in one direction without falling, and shouted something. The Mantine pulled off to fly nearly parallel to the cliff face, and it kept on climbing.

Then, Hanna was looking slightly up at Jen. She couldn’t see her face clearly, but her posture was hard and steady like steel. Her friend pulled slightly at Mantine’s face so that, just for a moment, it stalled. The Pokémon hung nearly still in midair seven feet away from Hanna.

Jen wasted no time. She rose to her feet, then jumped into space. With a grunt, she somehow managed to hug the wall of the mountain instead of bouncing off it. She immediately found her footing, and now the two of them were on the shelf together.

Hanna looked up at Jen in utter astonishment. Jen’s breathing was rough, but she didn’t seem rattled in the least. She stuck out her hand.

“Come on, get up!”

Hanna didn’t want to let go of the rock, and her right hand felt weak, but she managed to reach it out to Jen’s. Jen left nothing to chance and grabbed her forearm. Feeling the traction, Hanna was suddenly thankful Jen wore those fingerless gloves everywhere. It now felt like it might be possible to get out of there. Hanna slowly raised one of her legs and tried to keep her balance toward the wall. She had one foot on the shelf.

It gave way. Hanna’s foot slipped, and everything immediately slowed down as her brain processed the beginning of a freefall. There was nothing beneath her but air.

Then, with a jerk, she stopped. Her arm nearly fell out of its socket, but Hanna was not falling. Jen was still holding on. Somehow, even with Hanna all spun around with neither grip nor foothold, Jen handled the whole thing. When Hanna finally looked up, she saw Jen on one knee—eyes closed, teeth clenched, her other hand with a death grip on the mountain wall.

As Hanna’s arm began to rise again and the rest of her body with it, only one thought passed through her mind: When? When did she get this strong?

Her wits returned to her, and Hanna found the wall and helped pull herself up the rest of the way. They both stood on the shelf now. The rain and the wind continued to belt them without mercy, and they were out of breath, but they were okay for the moment.

Jen turned them around to face the sea, then shouted down to the Mantine, who had since glided back to the water.

“Surf! As hard as you can! Surf!

Hanna watched as the Mantine obeyed. To the naked eye, it looked like it was just swimming around, but any experienced trainer could tell it was powering the stronger waves which now slammed the mountain, each one starting and ending taller than the last.

“We need good timing, but it’ll work!” yelled Jen over the gale. “Link arms! Here we go!”

At this point, Hanna would believe anything Jen told her. They locked elbows. When she looked down again, Hanna’s gut told her there was no way the waves were tall enough to catch them right, but she was committed now.

“On three! Ready?” Jen didn’t wait for an answer. Hanna braced herself.

“One! Two!”

Jen was interrupted. From twenty feet to their right and ten feet above them came a crack that blew out Hanna’s ears and a flash that struck her blind. Something pinched her from her toes to her chest, and it felt like every hair on her head stood erect. As her sight came back in a haze, she looked over and saw a small tree, now on fire, sticking out of the mountain. Her heart was in her throat along with her tongue.

Hanna vaguely heard a voice that sounded like counting, and on “three,” her body moved on its own. She was falling. Someone’s arm was in hers though, so it almost didn’t register as falling. Then, something shocked her feet, and she was underwater. The water moved fast, and it pulled her forward and away from the mountain. For a moment, something shined in front of her face. It looked like a pair of glasses sinking away, never to be worn again.

At last, something smooth came from beneath her. It pushed her up and over the surface again. It was only now apparent to her that the arm was Jen’s and that the smooth thing was the Mantine. The storm showed no signs of stopping, but they were riding away from the island.

*********

It was around midnight when Hanna and Jen staggered up to the Cianwood City Pokémon Center. They were soaked to the bone and still speechless after hours of trying to keep balance on Jen’s new Mantine, to say nothing of the preceding ordeal. Jen tried to take off her glasses which weren’t there, then just rubbed her eyes and yawned.

Hanna was immediately relieved when they passed through the automatic doors and into the bright, warm building. She was so relieved, she almost walked right into the man trying to leave at the same time.

“Oops, uh…”

Hanna looked up. It was Derek. Suddenly, she woke up a bit and found herself acutely aware that her shirt was both light-colored and drenched. He could definitely, definitely see her bra. She resisted the urge to look down and check, instead crossing her arms over her chest as quickly-but-casually as she could.

Then, she looked more closely at Jen’s older brother, and noticed what she had missed in her momentary panic: Derek looked beyond awful. He had a black eye, a swollen cheek, a cut around the corner of his mouth, claw-shaped holes in his shirt, a bandaged hand, more claw-shaped holes near the crotch of his pants that afforded a glimpse at his boxers, and last but not least, a missing shoe.

Hanna, Jen, and Derek stood still for a while. Between all the overly visible underwear, Derek’s numerous injuries, and Jen’s conspicuously absent glasses, it felt inevitable that somebody would lead things off with a question.

At length, Derek did so. “Anything happen?”

Jen shook her head. “Uh… no, not really. You?”

“Nah.”

Jen waited a beat. “’Kay.”

“Yeah.”

Derek trudged past them and out the door without another word. Likewise, the two girls walked to the front desk in silence so Jen could drop off her Pokémon—and so they could ask for some towels. Then, they stopped by the vending machines, bought some hot chocolate, and found two comfortable chairs to collapse in.

It was fifteen minutes later when they finished their drinks and looked each other in the eye. Jen broke out laughing.

“Hey,” she said, “I think there’s, like, a lesson here about hub-reese.”

“It’s ‘hue-briss,’” said Hanna. She stared at the floor and rubbed her forehead. Pronunciation aside, she wasn’t sure Jen had the right word. “Hubris” referred specifically to a misplaced confidence in oneself in the face of fate or the divine. It didn’t describe an unmerited lack of confidence in a peer, especially a peer you mistook for a dependent. In any case, Hanna was about to admit that some credit was long overdue, and that much talk about “babysitting” had to be taken back, but Jen kept talking before she had a chance.

“That’s legendary Pokémon for you. I bet that’s how they get their kicks—you know, trying to scare the crap out of anyone who thinks they got what it takes to find them.”

Hanna jerked her head up again. She didn’t know what to say. Jen had been using the word correctly, but either way, that couldn’t be her only takeaway from all this. That wasn’t right at all.

“Yeah,” said Hanna, regardless. “They don’t mess around.”

They fell back into silence. It was a silence that was uneasy for Hanna, even though it seemed perfectly easy for Jen. Hanna knew she had to make it right, even if Jen was letting her off the hook. Rather, especially if Jen was letting her off the hook.

“I was thinking,” said Hanna. “After… When I head off to school, you ought to team up with someone younger. Maybe some new trainers you can show the ropes to.”

Jen stared at her wide-eyed, as if the thought had never crossed her mind. “You really think so?”

Hanna did think so. Maybe she thought Jen would have to slow down and think a little more often if she took that road, but there could be no more doubt she’d make the adjustment.

“Mull it over. I think it’ll be a good change of pace for you.”

Jen was blank for a moment. Then, she sat back, stared at the ceiling, and smiled.

Hanna decided she would leave it at that for now. School was still a few weeks away, and it wasn’t like she wanted to start saying goodbye.
 
Wyvern New

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February, 2017

A bead of sweat rolled down Travis’s forehead. He wanted to believe it was only there because the room was too warm. Outside, there was a dusting of snow, but it was always summer inside Azalea Gym. Balanced upright on the grass in front of him was Wyvern, his Horsea, who let his coiled tail wind and unwind as if standing his “tip-toes.” Past Wyvern was a Scyther, and past the Scyther was the smiling Gym Leader, Bugsy, who did not appear close to sweating.

And Bugsy’s was a friendly smile, not even a competitive one. Travis had to envy how relaxed Bugsy could afford to be about this fight. Everyone expected a Gym Leader to put out their C-team (or F-team, as Travis expected was the case with Bugsy) and lose just often enough for the whole stupid system to work. And the leaders never had two amateur commentators behind them scrutinizing their every move, either.

“Come on, Wyvern, you can do it!”

“Hey, Travis, try to suck less!”

Jason had a point. The only reason Travis’s Wooper, Leviathan, was already out of the fight was because Travis had assumed a Metapod wouldn’t be able to do jack in a real battle. In his defense, how was he supposed to guess Bugsy would put in the time to train a chrysalis to use attacks that involved movement? What was the point when it was just going to evolve to Butterfree in a month, anyway?

In any case, Travis now realized he had just spent a lot of time thinking about nonsense when he should have been strategizing, and now the standoff between their final Pokémon was over.

“Scyther, use Fury Cutter!”

The Scyther spread the blades that comprised its forearms wide and dashed forward. Travis’s lip quivered as he tried to remember what made a Fury Cutter different from a Slash. The gap was closing fast, and Wyvern still didn’t have any orders. Before it was too late, Travis blurted out the last thing they had worked on.

“Scald!”

As his opponent closed in, Wyvern hopped backward and shot a quick, steaming spray of water from his snout. It hit the Scyther square in the face, and the mantis Pokémon immediately retracted its arms from attack-position to cover itself. Travis could tell from the sound alone that a burn must have set in. That was good luck.

On the other end of the battlefield, Bugsy nodded. “Hm.”

Before Travis realized it, the Scyther found its nerve again and jumped forward. Wyvern tried to jump again to dodge, but the right blade gave him a small cut on his abdomen and sent him sliding backward. Travis cursed himself for not calling another attack by now. “Scald him again! He doesn’t like it!”

By the time Travis finished speaking, Wyvern was upright again, and the Scyther was in pursuit. Wyvern’s chest expanded and contracted as he blasted his opponent, this time in the thorax. As before, the Scyther pulled off from its attack and tended to itself, but there was no burn this time. Travis frantically tried to decide whether this was bad luck, or if the attack wasn’t as effective from that distance, while Bugsy took everything in stride and seemed unconcerned that his Pokémon wasn’t pressing as hard as a Scyther should.

The Scyther screamed at Wyvern, but aside from that, everything slowed to a halt. Travis was drawing a complete blank, and the Gym Leader wasn’t saying anything either. Was he going easy on him? Travis would never live it down if Jason got that impression. Bugsy’s eyes went back and forth between the two Pokémon, and Travis found his own doing the same. Then, his eyes settled on Wyvern, and he noticed something that sent a chill up his spine.

The veins in Wyvern’s back were popping out. They weren’t supposed to be visible from where he was standing; they were too small. Something was wrong. Now that he looked closer, there was something off in his Horsea’s posture, too. He wasn’t hurt that badly yet, so what was it? Travis’s eyes darted to the Scyther’s blades again, and it occurred to him that Wyvern might be terrified. The thought made his stomach hurt.

“Scyther,” said Bugsy. “I know it’s hot, but it won’t hurt you like fire. Tough it out!”

The Bug-type seemed to understand. It took a moment to psyche itself up, then burst forward. Travis could barely think straight, and he suddenly wanted nothing more than to get his Pokémon out of there. “Smokescreen!”

Wyvern’s veins popped out even more as the black cloud burst from his snout. The Scyther wailed as it barreled through, but the smoke in its eyes didn’t stop it from landing another hit, this time deeper than the first. Wyvern toppled backward.

Without any prompting from Travis, he shot a Bubble Beam at the Scyther as it moved in for the third time. The jet of bubbles made a roll of deafening sounds on impact, and this slowed his opponent enough for Wyvern to roll out of the way. The tip of Scyther’s blade struck dirt.

Travis heard Krissy behind him. “All right! If he can keep forcing misses, that’ll keep the Fury Cutter weak!”

So that was the deal with Fury Cutter. In his head, Travis kicked himself for not knowing. They’d dodged a bullet.

“Give him a freaking order, man!”

I know. I know. Shut up.

Wyvern pulled himself up and fired another volley of bubbles. It sounded like they hit their mark, but all Travis could look at were those over-visible veins. He still didn’t know what the matter was—only that the battle had to stop so he could check on him. Since winning would take too long and could hurt Wyvern even further, that meant it was time to forfeit. It wasn’t a hard conclusion to reach.

But he couldn’t do it. Another fear—one at constant war with concern for his Pokémon—grabbed his throat from the inside and kept him from speaking. The fear was this: If he gave up when the outcome of a fight was still in question, Jason would think he was a wuss.

And he would be right to think so. Travis didn’t even want to imagine it. If you couldn’t handle the Gyms, maybe you couldn’t keep up at all, and Jason had a new friend who could more than keep up now.

Despite the burn and oncoming bubbles, the Scyther endured and cut Wyvern again. And again. Travis’s Horsea hit the dirt for the third time, and now the injuries were too many and the veins were too prominent to ignore. The battle looked hopeless enough that Travis’s fears wouldn’t keep him from calling it. He moved forward and held up his hand. “Wait! We give!”

Bugsy’s eyebrows shot up, but he complied without hesitation. “Pull back, Scyther! It’s over!”

Travis hurried over to Wyvern. He hated that he hadn’t thrown in the towel just a few seconds earlier. Why should his stupid anxieties and phony pride be more important than keeping Wyvern from getting hurt? Who did he think he was, putting his Pokémon in harm’s way for a worthless piece of painted tin? He dropped to his knees, picked up the poor Horsea, and was immediately surprised by the look of confusion in his eyes.

It seemed Wyvern wanted to keep fighting. That ruled out the fear-and-anxiety explanation for the problem with his veins, which meant Travis still had some inspecting to do. As he ran his hands over Wyvern’s chest and spine, Bugsy started to give an obviously practiced speech of generic advice and encouragement. The leader might as well have been miles away; Travis didn’t listen to a word he said, reserving every bit of his attention for his Pokémon. Despite this, he came no closer to figuring out what was the matter. Pulse and breathing both seemed normal. He frowned, decided it wasn’t something he could diagnose while Wyvern was at rest, and returned him to his Poké Ball.

*********

It was almost evening when Travis was leading the way through the woods south of Azalea Town. It wasn’t a marked trail, and if you weren’t looking for it, you might not guess there was a path at all. They had already passed the hills that kept the sea air away from Azalea, and before long, Travis expected they would find the beach he had heard about at the Pokémon Center.

Oddly, Jason had yet to say anything about Travis’s loss that morning. Travis had to wonder if his friend was letting him stew in miserable anticipation on purpose, which would be bad form.

“Hey, Travis.”

Ah, there it is. Jason’s voice was full of obvious tells. He must have finally thought of something good.

“Yeah?”

“What’s the difference between you and a sheriff?”

Travis groaned. This was so painfully easy. How embarrassing that Jason had taken so long to think of it. He muttered the answer as Jason shouted it: “…no Badge.” “No Badge!

With that was out of the way, Travis could say something he’d been saving for a few hours. “Better laugh now, cause they ain’t all Bug-type Gyms. They shoulda disqualified you for letting it get that close when you have a freaking Fire-type.”

Jason laughed this off. “Just wanted to be sure Rabies didn’t burn the whole place down.” If he felt any shame about how Krissy had made Bugsy look easy with Lucia—a Grass-type—he wasn’t showing it.

On the subject of Krissy, she was looking increasingly (but predictably) uncomfortable. “You know,” she said, “you guys really don’t have to be all over each other like this when one of you loses.”

“Yeah, we do,” they said at the same time and with the exact same intonation. Jason added, “It’s practice.”

“For what?”

Travis answered her. “For when one of us finally beats you.”

“Oh man,” said Jason with a look of intense longing in his eyes. “We’re gonna be insufferable when that happens.”

“Nothing but sick burns left and right.”

“They’ll have to quarantine those burns, they’ll be so sick.”

For the duration of this, Krissy did nothing but roll her eyes. Then, she made the mistake of saying, “Boys will be boys.”

Jason and Travis jumped on the opportunity. “That’s it!”

“Huh?”

Jason beamed and pointed in her direction. “Sarcasm!”

Travis smiled too, though not as loudly. “She’s finally learning. Next we might hear actual insults.”

“Thought this day would never come! I’m so proud of you.”

Krissy bit her lip, and Travis was unsure whether she was suppressing a smile or a glare. It also made him suspect this would be the last remotely sarcastic thing they’d hear from her for a good while, but it was worth it. For her part, she exhaled slowly and tried to steer the conversation in a new direction. “Odd time of year to camp at a beach.”

“Can’t help it with Travis. If he’s away from a large body of water too long, he starts to shrivel up.”

Travis actually didn’t mind Jason’s explanation, even if he wasn’t taking them to the ocean for his own health. He hadn’t decided when, how, or if he was going to explain this to Jason and Krissy, but the real reason they were going to the beach was because he wanted to check on Wyvern’s circulation in his natural habitat of saltwater. He also wanted to avoid any debate on whether the nurses back at the Pokémon Center were more qualified to make the diagnosis. Travis didn’t think they were—otherwise, they would have noticed something was wrong by themselves a few hours ago.

In any case, the trees soon began to thin out, and the land fell away even sharper than before. The ocean came into view in disappointingly hazy and undramatic fashion for Travis’s taste. They still had to walk a good quarter-mile down a slope that grew rockier and more barren as they went along. The wind picked up in a hurry from ahead of them to noises of disapproval from Jason and Krissy, who zipped up their coats. Travis was just glad to taste the salt.

Finally, they reached the beach proper, even if it was half-covered in rocks. One had to walk nearly to where it was damp to get uninterrupted sand. Worse yet, the ocean didn’t seem as vast as it should have because of the low, heavy clouds in the distance that obscured the horizon. It was the grayest beach Travis had ever seen, but to tell the truth, he thought the world needed gray beaches, too.

Jason shivered a little in the stiff breeze. “I get the feeling this place ain’t exactly crowded in the summer, either.”

“Somebody comes here, at least,” said Krissy, “or used to.” She pointed at a long, low fisherman’s pier a ways down the coast to their right. Even at this distance, they could see it was in terrible disrepair. “We’ll have to clear a spot to pitch the tent,” she said next. “Are we sure we don’t want to head back to the woods?”

“Real sure,” said Jason. “It’s here or nothing. Wouldn’t be fair to rob Travis of his precious, intolerable, mid-February ocean breeze right before his birthday.”

Travis clapped a hand to his forehead. He thought they’d been over this.

“Oh!” said Krissy. “I didn’t know it was coming up.”

That was by design, Travis didn’t say out loud. He wasn’t a fan of when his birthday fell. By his reckoning, the day before Valentine’s Day was the second-worst possible birthday. He thanked his lucky stars every year that it didn’t fall on Valentine’s Day proper.

“Yeah,” said Jason. “Thought I’d talked about it before, but—Oh man!” He suddenly pointed at a nearby cluster of stones. “A Shuckle!

Sure enough, near the rocks was a small, porous red shell with a long, soft head sticking out. Jason wasted no time in running towards it and sending out a Pokémon. “Go, Ali!”

As Jason’s Ledian appeared, the Shuckle withdrew completely into its shell, and the long, boring fight commenced. “Mach Punch!” Ali began to pound away at the Shuckle’s shell with rapid jabs to no visible effect. Travis decided to take the opportunity to sit on a rock and stare at the water.

“Hey, Krissy!” shouted Jason. “We’ll see how your Pokémon do against this kind of defense when I catch him!”

Krissy walked over and sat down next to Travis. “Leech Seed,” she said under her breath.

Travis had to roll his eyes at the unpleasant surprise that probably awaited Jason tomorrow.

“So,” said Krissy, “You’re coming up on one year soon, then?”

Travis wasn’t sure what she was talking about for a moment, but he figured it out. “No. I started in April with Jason.”

Krissy’s eyes widened for a moment, and then she smiled. Travis thought it was weird. Why did she have to be so weird and annoying?

“By the way,” she said, “I think Wyvern still had a shot in that fight. I wouldn’t have pulled him just yet.”

She was right, of course. But even putting aside Wyvern’s vein trouble, which she couldn’t have noticed, Travis couldn’t agree with her less about keeping him in. Supposing Wyvern had gone on to win, it undoubtedly would have brought him close to passing out. He didn’t care what everyone else thought; a stupid Badge wasn’t worth that. Everyone could go on about how much they mean and how they’re the only way your Pokémon will respect you, to which Travis called BS. And that so-called “rule” about needing four Badges to ride a Pokémon over deep water wasn’t one Travis would follow even if it were enforceable.

He had practiced a spiel on the topic of the unimportance of Gym Badges over and over, but no one had ever heard it. Instead, he said something he didn’t remotely believe, but which sounded safer. “We were done. Bugsy had that fight cold. I was looking something like eight moves ahead, and Scyther had a ninety-two point five and a third chance of winning.” A perfect bluff, thought Travis.

“I wouldn’t sell Wyvern short,” said Krissy. “You’ve taught him some incredible water moves really well for his age, and if you taught him some moves from other types for coverage, you’d be surprised what kind of situations he could get out of.”

Travis was wondering how or if he should say that he hadn’t the slightest interest in wasting Wyvern’s time and energy on mastering anything but water moves. Then, he heard the sound of a Poké Ball breaking open and Jason yelling, “Shoot!”

They looked over. Ali was back to agitating the shell. Jason rubbed his chin, and Travis could almost see the smoke coming out of his ears as he contemplated how to outmaneuver a Pokémon that apparently didn’t need to do anything more than imitate a rock to force a stalemate. Then, Jason took off his coat, loosened his arms, grabbed a small stone, and walked over to the ocean to skip it. Despite how rough the water was from all the wind, Jason swung his arm and flicked his wrist with such torque that he still got four skips.

Travis, however, noticed how Jason had to shake his elbow and rub his shoulder afterward. “Your arm’s gonna fall right off if you keep treating it like that.”

“You’re just jealous you can’t get more than two skips on a still pond!”

Travis was about to retort that Jason would probably drown in that same pond if he tried to swim, but then Krissy asked, “Jason, do you think you can help us clear a spot for the tent while Ali works on the Shuckle?”

Jason assessed the so-called battle. “…Yeah, probably.”

While they moved rocks around, Travis thought about when would be the best time to let Wyvern into the water. It was tough to decide whether getting some privacy would be harder than explaining what he was up to.

*********

It was midnight. Travis, now eleven, walked to the edge of the half-rotted pier. There were no clouds, and the reflections from the still-almost-full Moon saved him from falling off the edge. He gave the ladder the shake test for stability, which it passed—barely. That meant it was time for the easy part: he unclipped Wyvern’s ball and opened it over the water. There was a small splash, and looking down, he could just see the silhouette of his Horsea staring back at him. The breeze picked up, and Travis rubbed his hands together for warmth. So far, so good.

“Wyvern, use Surf. Gentle. Real gentle.”

The waves picked up momentarily, but they subsided to normal levels just as quickly. The moonlight then showed that all around Wyvern was a circle of almost perfectly still water. Outside the circle, the waves moved past as usual, which confirmed the gentle Surf was working. A “gentle Surf” meant Wyvern (or someday Leviathan, when he got the hang of it) would take control of the surrounding water as usual, but keeping it in place instead of forcing it along. This water was now trapped. It was as separate from the rest of the ocean as if it were oil.

Travis hated how most trainers treated Surf like it was this lame “extra” move to make travel easier. It was the direct manipulation of water outside the body. No move was more powerful or more versatile.

He took a deep breath. The hard part was next.

Carefully, he knelt down to drop his towel on the pier. Then, he took off his coat. Next, his shirt. The wind felt like ice, so he rubbed his chest until it burned. He continued to disrobe until he had nothing on but his swim trunks, and then he had to think for a minute. It seemed silly to wear your trunks under your jeans all through the winter if you were never going to use them, but in the end, he decided he didn’t want to go back with any wet clothes at all. He took the trunks off as well, and now he stood naked a few feet over the ocean with the temperature near freezing.

His teeth chattered as he spoke the one word which kept this from being suicide: “S…Scald.” Travis heard a multitude of bubbles in the water before him. Then, he closed his eyes and psyched himself up until he was ready.

He jumped.

The fall was over too soon, and the initial shock alone almost made him scream. It felt like every inch of his body was covered in liquid snow. He swore some of his extremities were shrinking. But he could still move and still think, which meant the Scald had worked. Then, his left heel strayed too far in one direction. In a flash, he felt what the water was like without Wyvern keeping it this warm. He pulled his leg close and rubbed his now-numb foot.

He needed air. While sensation was still returning to his foot, he used his arms to rise to the surface. It took only two gasps for him to decide he liked the water better than the air. He gritted his teeth and tried to slow his breathing with his nose. Then, he felt something swim behind him, and Wyvern shoved him forward closer to the center of the hemisphere, where it was safer. Travis turned around, and when Wyvern’s head popped up again, he said, “G…good job. Perfect. Thanks.”

This wasn’t the first time they’d practiced using these techniques together, but he hadn’t dared an attempt since November, which had seemed dangerous enough at the time. But someday, they were going to have to do this much and more.

He thought about that. “Wyvern,” he said. “Think you can keep this up for a long time?”

Travis heard movement in response. It sounded positive.

“And how far do you think you can swim? All the way to Kanto?”

More movement. Highly positive.

“All the way to Unova?”

Movement, but there was some hesitation too. Did Wyvern know where Unova was?

“Past Unova, past Kalos, and then back here?”

Little movement. This time inquisitive, Travis was pretty sure. He supposed it was a hard thing for a Horsea to grasp, but that was the plan. Travis hated wasting any time on Gym battles when the real battles they had to prepare for were going to be at sea. He wondered if Wyvern would be excited or nervous to know he was going to be on the first Pokémon team to circle the globe without flying or touching land.

He hadn’t told Jason about this, either. Not yet. Something felt wrong about planning an adventure they couldn’t go on together, even if it was probably a decade off. But as tempting as it was to keep thinking about the future, something more important demanded Travis’s attention now. He took a deep breath and went back underwater to get to work.

He stuck his arms out, and Wyvern found them even with nothing to see. As lightly as he possibly could, Travis traced his fingers around Wyvern’s vital features. The gills in front of the spikes on his head were opening and closing normally. Dorsal fin was responsive. Pulse, as felt from the chest, was normal. Then, Travis placed one finger on a patch of thin exoskeleton at the top of the neck, and the vein there showed what he was looking for. Wyvern’s heart was beating at a normal pace, but the blood was pumping much harder than Travis had ever felt.

He needed air again, so it was back to the surface. Wyvern followed. Travis tried to think of anything he’d read which could fit this one isolated symptom. Maybe it was because he was too cold to think clearly, but he had no idea. So, he tried the stupid, obvious approach.

“Wyvern, how do you feel?”

Nothing. The question was too abstract; he had to refer to specific feelings.

“Is something scaring you?”

There was a little movement. It was either hesitation or confusion. Travis couldn’t tell, which frustrated him to his core. Still, if nothing else, he could try to alleviate the effects of whatever was wrong. He took another deep breath.

Wyvern found him underwater again, and Travis placed one hand on his chest and another on his back. He kept one finger on the soft spot where it was easiest to feel the blood flowing. The best thing he could think of was to try to calming him down. He began to rub Wyvern’s chest. Slow down, he said in his head and tried to convey through his fingers. Breathe slower. Breathe deeper.

Wyvern must have been listening, as his water intake felt less shallow now, but the blood was pumping as hard as before. It wasn’t working, so maybe it really wasn’t a mental or nervous issue. Travis kept at it anyway.

Then, something changed in a way he hadn’t expected: The pulses came just as frequently and just as hard, but they felt longer, somehow. It was like more blood was coming through with each cycle. None of it made any sense to him, but he had to stop thinking for a moment because he was out of air. He tapped Wyvern on the snout to tell him to stay put, and rose to take care of his own oxygen before coming right down.

It was back to rubbing and wondering what on earth was going on with his Pokémon. He tried being even more gentle, as if to say, No, really, calm down. But Wyvern’s blood pressure stayed high, and the total flow continued to increase. Travis was getting close to his lungs’ limit again when all of a sudden, it was no longer pitch black. The rest of his air escaped through his mouth. Wyvern was glowing.

Travis’s hands fell away on their own, and for a moment, his indecision left him paralyzed. It was only to avoid drowning that he kicked his way back up. One long gasp and he was down again. He stared at his Pokémon. Wyvern’s eyes were closed, and he was twitching. This wasn’t supposed to be happening yet. Wyvern was too young; his body was still growing at this stage.

Now Travis finally realized what the problem was. Wyvern’s energy output as a whole was too high for his frame—he was coming close to having a Seadra’s heart in a young Horsea’s body. Had Travis pushed him too hard in training? What if his veins ruptured?

Travis could only try to think of whether evolving would help the situation or make it worse. Would the body grow to match the heart, or would the heart just outgrow the body even more? He had no idea, and anything he did now could be disastrous for all he knew. He panicked for a moment. Since he was out of time, there was no choice but to try the stupid, obvious thing again. All he could do was defer to Wyvern.

Travis put both hands on his Pokémon’s back, and since he didn’t know how to say it without words, he simply spoke them through the water. “You don’t… have to… if you don’t… want to.”

Wyvern stopped twitching. But he was still glowing. He drew in one deep draft of water, and Travis could feel the blood pump in response. It was still heavy. And yet, it was calm and controlled. Wyvern wasn’t nearly as scared as Travis was.

Then, the tips of Travis’s fingers began to spread with the exoskeleton beneath them. The spikes on Wyvern’s head grew longer, and they were joined by others. Travis could scarcely believe what he was seeing, but the dorsal fin split in two with each half coming out larger. The halves pushed their way to the sides of Wyvern’s back, and they each grew into three prongs, where before they had been simple and round. Travis knew there would be poison in the tips; he kept his hands close to Wyvern’s neck. He wanted to see every last change. But finally, the light subsided.

Now that it was over, Travis became keenly aware of two things: that his lungs were empty again, and that without his noticing, the water had lost most of its heat. His body tried to pull his arms and legs to his chest to address the second need, but this left it at a loss for how to address the first. He froze with his back turned upward. A fear and a pain gripped him worse than anything he had ever imagined.

But then, he heard something almost like a jet engine, and he was surrounded by bubbles. He was no longer frozen, and before he knew it, something rammed into his chest and drove him straight up and over the surface. Travis choked, coughed, but managed to breathe again.

When he regained control of himself, he found all he could do was relax. It seemed impossible, but their little hemisphere of ocean was as warm as bathwater now. He looked at the outline of his Seadra’s head, and felt sorry for any Pokémon that had to go up against that Scald in battle. It had gotten so much more potent just from the evolution. Without a doubt, it was going to prove invaluable when it came time to go on their real journey.

Just to be safe, Travis reached out and felt Wyvern’s pulse again. He couldn’t be sure now that his body had changed so much, but everything felt normal. Then, on a whim, he asked again, “Hey, Wyvern. Think you can swim to Unova and Kalos and then back here?”

Wyvern fanned his fins and swam in a blisteringly fast circle around Travis, which could only mean an overwhelmingly, enthusiastically positive response. Travis grinned like an idiot. The moonlight showed the creases in Wyvern’s new, probably scary expression, but it was plain from his answer and way of answering that Wyvern was still Wyvern.

This was already one of the happiest days of Travis’s life, and it wasn’t even an hour old. Now, he just had to figure out how he was going to get out of the water and dry off without catching hypothermia, but he was pretty sure he could manage it.
 
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Chapter 9

June, 2017

Krissy tried to work up the nerve to peek around a corner. They had come as far as they could without stepping foot in any of the main hallways, but their destination was right in the middle of one. She looked over her shoulder first. Jason and Travis were still there, and they looked as nervous she felt. The only one who seemed unbothered was Frostbite, which was a good thing, because this might not be possible without a Pokémon who could move in silence.

Krissy still had to look around the corner. She swallowed, then leaned forward.

The door to her father’s office was directly underneath a lamp. A guard stood at attention in front of it. Krissy pulled her head back again. She held up one finger to Jason and Travis: There was a plan for this. She got as close as she could to Frostbite’s ear and whispered, “Feint Attack. Temple. Blunt. Go.”

The Sneasel steeled herself, lowering the one feather on her left ear, and retracted her claws. Then, she dashed around the corner without making a sound, and Krissy swore she turned into a living shadow on the way. Half a second passed. There was a clump, a thud, and then nothing. Krissy waited another few seconds, then decided it was safe. She motioned the other two, and they entered the hallway. Frostbite was sitting on the Grunt’s back where he lay prone and still. When they came close, Krissy saw the bruise on the side of his head. So far, so good.

She pulled the lockpick from her shirt pocket and got to work on the knob. Her hands shook when she tried the initial insertion, but practice soon took over. When she heard the click, she pushed the door open as slowly as she could. Jason and Travis didn’t have to be told to drag the Grunt inside with them. Frostbite crept in last, and when Krissy eased the door shut and locked it again, everything was pitch black.

Finally, she exhaled. The outside would look like any other sentry post abandoned for the restroom or the kitchen, and no Grunt would dare enter here without permission.

“What now?” whispered Jason.

“One second.” Krissy walked to where she knew the desk was, then waved her hands around for the lamp’s chain. After she found it, they had enough light to see, but the corners of the room were still dark, as were the tops of the bookshelves that lined the walls. She recalled Frostbite and said to the boys, “Don’t touch any of the other lights. If it’s too bright, someone might see it under the door.”

Travis stared at the limp body in the middle of the floor. “What do we do about him?”

“Just put him out of the way for now. And keep your ears open in case he starts to wake up. Jason, we’ll need Specs’s Hypnosis if that happens.”

The boys grabbed the Grunt’s arms again, and to the nearest corner he went. Krissy noticed they were more careful with his head than she thought they’d be. When they were done, Jason slowly scanned the rest of the room. “So… do you have any idea what this thing’s going to look like?”

“Not really. Look for anything that’s even a little electronic. Could be an ID card, too. I’m going to start on his computer in case there’s a digital version.”

Travis looked at the towering shelves. “Guess you could fit a card between book pages. That’s where I’d hide something important.”

“So, me and Travis got the books, and you’ve got the computer,” said Jason. “Sounds like a plan.”

Krissy nodded. She didn’t have the heart to say she no longer thought the key would be anywhere but on her father’s person. It had been too easy for them to break in, and he’d never keep anything of such importance under such scant guard. For that matter, she wouldn’t be surprised if he only kept all these books here to make it take longer for would-be spies or traitors to hunt for things that weren’t even there.

Jason and Travis were already opening books and flipping through the pages. She owed it to Travis at least to search just as hard as they did—before it came time to face the inevitable, anyway. So, she walked behind the desk, pulled up the chair that was still too large for her, and got to it. Rather, she turned on the bulky, antique monitor that took up a whole corner of the table and waited for it to warm up. She tried to convince herself it didn’t matter how long it was taking when nothing was going to be there anyway, but it still made her anxious.

Finally, she saw a login screen. A long ID number was already filled in for the username, which meant she only had to guess the password. She placed her fingers on the keyboard as if something would just come to her. When nothing did, she tried the passwords that would get you into one out of every ten computer systems.

password, no.

123456, no.

password1, no.

Krissy decided she would have better odds with weak passwords that were at least specific to the user.

mariano, no.

110970, no.

1970-11-09, no.

The next idea gave her pause. It was one she had to try, and she wasn’t sure what she would think if it was right: lucia.

You have exceeded the limit for failed password attempts. Your account will be unlocked in six hours.”

Krissy’s jaw seized up. Why didn’t she anticipate this happening? She could have searched the desk to see if the password was written down first. Now they had no shot of finding anything on the computer before morning. Worse yet, this absolutely screamed, “Somebody tried to break in here.”

She almost panicked, but then she remembered the restart button. She leaned under the desk to press it, then covered her face for the next thirty seconds as the machine booted up again. Now, the login page was back, and the username field was still auto-populated. Krissy took a deep breath and tried again with random letters just to test.

You have exceeded the limit for failed password attempts. Your account will be unlocked in six hours.”

Disaster. The login system was tied to the network, not to the computer itself. Krissy had to bite her tongue. If someone on security was still awake, they might have gotten an alert. There could be guards coming their way that very second.

No, she told herself, we’re still fine. None of the technical staff stay here overnight. We’re fine. We are fine.

Krissy kept trying to convince herself of this. She put her forehead to the desk, closed her eyes, and tried breathing for a minute. When she was ready, she took out her lock pick again and decided to try her luck with the desk drawers. Maybe there’d be something.

*********

The two-hundredth book Krissy tried didn’t have anything hidden in its pages, just like the one hundred and ninety-nine before it. She rubbed her eyes and looked at her watch. Six o’clock. Her hands shook. Unless her watch was fast, her father was not only up, but he had showered and was currently eating breakfast. He was going to be here in five minutes. Krissy had expected it to turn out this way, but this was no consolation. They were trapped.

She surveyed the rest of the room. The Grunt hadn’t moved an inch, much less woken up. It was probably safe to treat him as a non-factor. Travis was scouring the floorboards on his hands and knees, as if he was going to find a hidden compartment or a trapdoor. Krissy couldn’t blame him for trying, even if it was more hopeless and naïve than searching the books was. As for Jason, he had just finished quadruple-checking the desk drawers. He stood up and faced Krissy. His face was laden with fatigue and worry, which gave Krissy an idea of how awful her own face must look.

“Look under the door,” he said. “There’s more light coming in now. You got a plan?”

Krissy did have a plan, of course. Problem was, it was the worst plan ever. She did her best to put some confidence and authority in her voice, but fell far short.

“We’re going to get the jump on him. He can’t beat us if he doesn’t have a chance to send out any Pokémon.”

Jason sucked in some air and nodded. Travis stopped where he was on the floor, but didn’t look up.

“You two get in the corners closest to the door. Bring out Rabies and Leviathan, and get them ready, but keep them quiet.”

Jason nodded and went straight to the left corner, but Travis was slow to pick himself up. He dragged his feet to the other corner, where the Grunt was. Krissy didn’t tell him to do anything like “snap out of it” or “get your head in the game,” though maybe she should have. She didn’t know. There were too many unknown variables, and everything else she’d done so far had gone for the worst, anyway.

Two flashes, two noises, and no sign anyone beyond the door had noticed. Jason and Travis whispered some instructions to their Pokémon. The Growlithe and the Quagsire set their feet for the ambush. Then, Krissy thought about lines of sight and realized she’d nearly blown the whole thing with her plan. She tore into herself under her breath, then said, “Jason, move behind that reading chair, instead. The way the door opens, you’d be the first thing he sees right now.”

Jason nodded and repositioned himself and Rabies behind the large chair, which put them closer to the center of the room than Krissy had wanted. “Try to get back to the corner as soon as you can. We want him caught in a triangle.”

She checked her watch again: four minutes to go. Then, she looked over at Travis. He was crouched down and staring at the floor again. Nothing about him screamed confidence, and maybe it was for the best that Krissy couldn’t make eye contact with him. She didn’t want to make him any worse—he didn’t like her, after all. Leviathan, in any case, looked ready.

Now that all else was set, it was her turn. She let out Lucia and led her to the right-front corner of the desk. That put them on the far side of the door’s arc. She checked her watch one last time: three minutes and twenty-seven seconds. She double-checked by the hinges how the door was going to open. There were no trainers, no Pokémon, and no Grunt positioned where her father’s field of vision was going to be. She took a deep breath, said “Ready,” then reached over to pull the lamp’s chain.

The room was dark again. A little light peeked in from the under the door, but that was it. Krissy leaned in and put her hand on the back of Lucia’s smooth head. “The enemy’s coming in through that door. Don’t attack until I say so.”

The Bayleef shook the buds growing from her neck. Krissy couldn’t be sure when she couldn’t see her face, but it seemed like Lucia was eager. Krissy wished she could feel even remotely the same. Instead, she stared at the door, feeling each passing second. She was sweating, and she worried she might be breathing too loudly. More seconds crawled by. This was torture.

Then, footsteps. Krissy suddenly wished she was still just waiting. She put her hand by the lamp chain. A shadow came from under the door. Krissy took a deep breath now because she wouldn’t have a chance to breathe again once the door opened. She heard the rattle from the key, then the click.

The knob turned. The door came half-way open as she had expected in the average case. She saw her father, but she herself was still completely in shadow. The light hit the chair, but neither Jason nor Rabies behind it. Now her father was supposed to close the door behind him because he always wanted privacy right away, even if that meant finding a switch in the dark. He did so, and she could no longer see him.

A bead of sweat was rolling onto Krissy’s nose, but she let it stay there. She was going to wait until he took four steps. He took one. It was in the right direction. He took another. A third. A fourth. This was it. She turned on the light.

“Don’t move.”

Her father didn’t move. He only watched as Jason came out from his hiding place and hustled with Rabies over to their corner. At the same time, Krissy and Lucia moved a few feet to make their formation symmetrical. Her father turned his head over his other shoulder to take brief notice of Travis, Leviathan, and the Grunt before turning back to meet her eye. If any of them or their Pokémon were causing him even slight discomfort, he didn’t show it.

“Lucia, I’ve been meaning to have a word with you.”

“Shut up.” She couldn’t let him dictate the course of the conversation. That would be begging for defeat. “We want the encryption key to the new Poké Balls. Hand it over.”

He rubbed his chin, but looked otherwise unaffected. “That’s an odd thing for you to know or care about.”

Now Jason joined in, but he tried too hard. “Cut the crap! One of your goons tried to steal one of our Pokémon, and now he’s trapped! You’re not going anywhere until we have him back!”

“Ah.” Krissy’s father kept his feet still but looked over his shoulder at Jason. “You must be the other two that 301 mentioned. Just out of professional curiosity, whom did you steal it from?”

“I didn’t,” said Travis. He was still looking more at the floor than at their opponent. “I got him from the ocean.”

“That only narrows it down. Did you steal it from its mother, or from its children? Judging by your age, I’d say its mother is more likely.”

Krissy saw Travis’s fists shake. Her father continued. “I can understand your frustration at losing it, considering all the time and resources you must have put into its training. But the moral posturing and hypocrisy sit ill with me, all the same.”

He was stalling. Worse yet, he was trying to slip them poison. Krissy had to put a stop to this at once. “Don’t listen to a word he says!”

He faced her again. “And why shouldn’t they do that?”

“Because you should never listen to a smart liar. That’s the worst thing you can do.”

This made her father raise an eyebrow. “Oh?”

Krissy had learned this lesson from Alessa not long before she left home. Just for kicks, she had managed to out-debate Krissy into believing that monarchy was the best way to run a country. Then, when Krissy admitted defeat, her friend and keeper turned the tables and debated her back onto the side of democracy, laughing all the while. Alessa had only been playing a game, but she had taught Krissy volumes about people like her father in the process.

“A smart liar can take any disgusting thing and make it sound like logic. That’s why you have a conscience—so you know not to believe them.”

Her father smiled. “It’s funny you should use the phrase ‘smart liars.’ I believe you know the saying about the pot and the kettle? Or about glass houses and stones?”

Krissy felt more than a little sick, but then Jason said, “Nice try, asshole. Don’t think we can’t tell the difference. Now where’s that key?”

Krissy couldn’t believe it, but she had almost let her father seize control of the situation again. She had to be more careful if they were going to stay focused.

Her father put his hands in his pockets. “I have a busy schedule today, so I appreciate you trying to hurry this along. Giving you the key is out of the question, of course, but there shouldn’t be a problem with extracting your friend’s Pokémon and returning it to its original ball, nor with having you escorted off the premises afterward. I’m not interested in having a battle in here and ruining my books.”

Krissy looked at Jason, then at Travis. They didn’t buy this any more than she did.

“There would be one condition for my trouble, of course.”

He faced Krissy again. She tried to appear strong and determined, but that became ten times harder to do when she accidentally gazed in his eyes—his Arbok eyes.

“Lucia, as compensation for this, and for the damage you’ve done to 301’s team and face, you will begin your assignment early.”

Any strength left in Krissy’s expression evaporated.

“Due to your age, you will have to operate under the direct supervision of a Class-C Grunt. If you object to the exact placement, we can discuss other ways to settle the matter between you and 301, but this is the minimum I can offer if your friend wants his Pokémon back.”

Krissy’s knees nearly failed her. She was supposed to have almost five more years before facing this situation. This shattered every contingency she had considered short-term, mid-term, long-term, and lifetime. It was bad enough her father had identified her as a hostile long before he was supposed to, but there was no way she could carry out her plan from the inside. There would be too many eyes watching. Gathering allies would be impossible. Even that paled in comparison to the thought of the things she’d have to do as an actual member of Team Rocket.

But she couldn’t say no, either. It would be one thing if Wyvern were her Pokémon, but he wasn’t. And it would be one thing if this weren’t all her fault, but it was. She had started the boys down this path before she or either of them were remotely ready, and Wyvern and Travis were the ones paying for it. It was her impatience, her arrogance, and her deceptions that had brought them here. She couldn’t turn her father down in good conscience.

“No.”

All eyes turned to the speaker, Travis. He kept his eyes down and said, “We’re not trading. You don’t get any of us. And none of our Pokémon either. Give us the key.”

Now that her father was looking somewhere else, Krissy found her sense and resolve returning. “You’re in no position to ask for terms! If you don’t want to look like Slate, you’ll do what we say. It doesn’t matter how many pieces you have on the rest of the board—you’re still in checkmate!”

Krissy’s father closed his eyes and sighed. “I’m disappointed. I would have expected a better appraisal of the situation from you.” He faced her again. “I suppose you think you have me pinned with a queen and two bishops; but the fact is, your bishops are pawns, and they’re facing the wrong direction.”

Krissy was done with his tricks. “You wanna bet?”

“Yes. I hope it hasn’t escaped your notice, but your friends’ Pokémon are not going to attack me.”

Krissy’s mouth opened, but no words came out.

“Haven’t you looked at their posture? Can’t you tell a safe Pokémon from a useful one? You’d have enough trouble getting that Growlithe to set an abandoned shed on fire, much less attack a man. I won’t get anything worse from him than playful roughhousing; same with that Quagsire. I’d have to pull a knife on your friends to get them to attack me in earnest.”

All three of them were struck dead silent. It had never occurred to Krissy that the boys might be bluffing, but now it was obvious. Even if Rabies and Leviathan looked just as eager as ever, they were still waiting for an opponent that hadn’t arrived yet. If Jason and Travis told them to attack now, they would hesitate more than enough for her father to act.

“That leaves your Bayleef as the only Pokémon here that wasn’t raised to be worthless. Obviously, you haven’t forgotten everything I’ve taught you, as further evidenced by 301’s injuries and that individual in the corner.”

You can smell blood in the water.” The words crept up again from under the surface. The poison had never been purged from her system. She heard new words, too, even though no one was speaking:

Your friends have lost because they are decent, and you are still in it because you are a Rocket.”

There was no winning for her against him. Not then, not now, not ever.

“Finally,” said her father, “you’ve made one more mistake: You sent out a Pokémon that was mine to begin with.”

Oh no. Krissy wasn’t Lucia’s original trainer. Oh god, no. She had no idea what he had done to her before they met.

“Bayleef, come.”

Krissy was utterly convinced her Pokémon would obey. She had so many times before.

But nothing happened. Now, for the first time, her father’s expression took on some measure of doubt, even consternation. He snapped his fingers. “Bayleef. Come.” Then, “Chikorita, come.”

Still nothing. Lucia might have tensed up slightly, but even that was a maybe. Then, all at once, it became plain and simple to Krissy why nothing was happening. The explanation slipped out of her mouth on its own: “That’s not her name.”

“Excuse me?”

“…I said, that’s not her name. That’s just her species.” Krissy should never have worried. Lucia could stare down a Taunt from the most experienced Pokémon and barely break a sweat. She knew not to listen to anyone who wasn’t her trainer. And there was no easier way to tell that someone wasn’t her trainer than if they didn’t so much as know her name.

Krissy’s voice grew stronger. “She’s mine now, not yours.”

Lucia stamped her feet, as if strength in Krissy’s words was strength of her own. Her father couldn’t cheat his way out of this. If he wanted to beat Lucia, he’d have to send out a Pokémon. She was this close to telling Lucia to attack him.

Her father frowned. “I see. I hoped this would be easier.”

Without warning, the lamp dimmed. Her father’s eyes opened wide, wider than she knew they could open, and out of them burst a red, piercing glow. Every last joint in Krissy’s body locked up. She tried to close her eyes, but couldn’t. She had to keep staring into that red gaze. Everything in her peripherals bent and swirled. This wasn’t natural, not for a human. This was Arbok, Persian, something. This wasn’t her father, but at the same time it was more her father than before. This was how he looked in her nightmares.

Lucia fell on her side with a thud—leaf and buds stiff. Krissy tried to keep her balance, to do anything to stay upright, but it was probably mere luck that kept her from toppling over.

“Krissy!” That was one of the boys. Jason. Someone was barking from that direction, too. She heard quick footsteps, and then the red eyes looked away. She was still stuck, though. Two bodies hit the floor. The eyes turned in the other direction, and another body fell down. But only one, not two.

Look at me.”

The other body crumpled. That was five, which left only her. The eyes faced her again, and now the distortion at the edge of her vision began to invade the center. Her father took two steps forward.

But then, he stopped, doubled over, and put his hand to his mouth. Nausea? He made a violent cough, and Krissy barely saw something dark purple, almost black, dripping between his fingers.

Come out.” The voice was pained and raspy.

Her father’s head was then engulfed in a shadow that extended down to his chest. It rose out of him as a mass of spikes, and the red eyes went with it. Then, it came into its own shape and flashed a sharp, manic grin. Gengar. Her father had been housing a toxic ghost in his own body. That was something they would put you away for. How was he still alive, much less standing?

Something finally gave way, and she collapsed. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head. Was this Glare, Hypnosis, or something else entirely? Both? It didn’t matter. Nothing mattered except that she had never miscalculated so badly in her life. What on earth had compelled her to take an apparent checkmate at face value against her father? You can’t beat a grandmaster while you’re still learning the rules.

It was vague, but at some point, Krissy heard other people come into the room. Someone hoisted her up. She still couldn’t move.

“Put the Pokémon back in their balls, but don’t send them to Acquisitions yet. That will depend on what I decide to do with their trainers, and whether I decide the Pokémon get the same. I’ll be downstairs in a few hours.”

“Yes, sir.”

At one point, Krissy was in an elevator, or at least she thought so by the sound and the faint sensation of falling. Then, the echo of boots said they were in a metal hallway. A door opened, and she was shoved onto a hard floor.

“Holy shit, man, watch it! Don’t you know who that is?”

“Huh? Whaddya talkin’ about?”

The door shut again. The voices continued on the other side of it, but Krissy couldn’t make out what they were saying. Instead, her mind was filled with the sight of the Gengar’s eyes. If it took such a powerful attack to upset her father’s immunity, he must have started building it up decades ago. He had been using that Gengar to haunt her since birth: paralyzing her in subtle ways her entire life. She’d always known looking her father in the eye was dangerous, but she never suspected how right she was. These thoughts repeated themselves over and over in Krissy’s head as everything slipped away.

*********

Very slowly, things started to return to Krissy, though she couldn’t tell how long it took. Sight came first, then sensation in her extremities, which spread until she was just lying on the floor as she normally would. She pushed herself up and looked around. Travis was sitting on a metal bench and staring at nothing. Jason was walking in circles. They noticed she was awake, but it seemed nobody knew what to say yet, herself included.

She inferred this room was one of the cells in the brig. Suffice to say, they had lost. She felt around for her Poké Balls, but they were gone. Frostbite, Primeape, Lucia. She tried not to think about it, but they were probably gone forever. Leviathan was going to join Wyvern. Ali, Specs, and Rabies, too. And it was all her fault. She hugged her knees.

“There’s gotta be something we can do,” said Jason, finally, at nearly a whisper. “Someone can pretend to be sick, and then we jump the guard. Something.”

Krissy shook her head. That wouldn’t work. It would only get Jason or Travis a black eye. She didn’t know how to tell him it was time to give up—to try to cope. This had ended as soon as she’d missed her offer to join Team Rocket early.

And that was all Travis. He would have gained the most by her saying “yes,” but he tried to save her anyway. Had he known that meant throwing away everything else? She suspected he had. And since she wasn’t worth that much to him, that made him a moron. He couldn’t have picked a worse time to act like one of the selfless idiots she had so foolishly idolized in books.

Her eyes welled up. She had truly found those friends she’d wanted from the beginning. She should have known better than to look for them in the first place.
 

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Very excited to have three chapters of this to read! And review.

Really enjoyed spending time with the three disaster adults, and to find that even when they were teenagers, they were still disasters. Well, Derek is an adult, but he's still Derek. What I liked about this was that the age difference between Jen and Hanna is just enough at that age that Hanna really comes off as the "older protective" person, and Jen is still young enough that everything is an adventure. Shows through in how Hanna is ready to end her journey, and Jen thinks that she can keep traveling forever.

But my favorite part of Hubris Island is when the three disasters meet up at the Center, and they're all nonchalant about their conditions.

It was interesting to go from Hanna searching for Lugia to Travis's chapter, and how he wants to be able to just travel the ocean. Like now it makes sense why he's so focused on training Water Pokemon. He needs them to accomplish that goal.

Also didn't realize it until this chapter that the three kids still match the "starter triangle" with their three main Pokemon. Jason has a Fire-type with Rabies, Krissy has a Grass-type with Lucia, and Travis has a Water-type with Wyvern. Despite not all of them having traditional starters, they still manage to get that standard trifecta. Kind of wonder if that was by design.

Travis also continues to be my favorite of the kids. He's just a good kid, tender with his Pokemon. Yeah, Jason's going to rib him about giving up the match to Bugsy (that sheriff joke really was "boys will be boys"), but Travis was so worried that he'd hurt Wyvern. And I like the touch of Travis figuring that he'd know better than the nurses at the Center about what's going on with his Pokemon.

That evolution scene was magic, by the way. Just a trainer and his Pokemon, And the whole chapter achieved what I'm sure you set it out for it to do: Made it more heartbreaking that Wyvern is captured, and made it more understandable why Travis is so connected to his Pokemon.

As for chapter nine, I knew that there was something going on with Krissy's father, but could not guess what. She always knew to avoid looking in his eyes. Makes sense now! Only bit of negativity I could add is that the scene where Gengar is revealed didn't feel like it had a lot of emotion to it? Kind of felt like Krissy's reactions were very matter-of-the-fact. Might be only because she was being attacked by Gengar, but IDK. Felt like something was missing?

Liked that Travis was the one that answered for Krissy joining Team Rocket to get Wyvern back. Can't wait to get in his head about how he feels about Krissy now that he knows all of this. And can't wait to see how Jason's handling it.

And can not wait for the disaster adults to make their return to the story!
 

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What I liked about this was that the age difference between Jen and Hanna is just enough at that age that Hanna really comes off as the "older protective" person, and Jen is still young enough that everything is an adventure.
It's sentences like this that make me feel vindicated in keeping a spreadsheet with each character's birthday and the date each chapter takes place for every fic I write, lol.

But my favorite part of Hubris Island is when the three disasters meet up at the Center, and they're all nonchalant about their conditions.
I think that might be the funniest scene in the whole thing, and it's one of the first parts I wrote (this is the other chapter that was originally a one-shot). I hadn't even decided what Derek had actually been up to to cause his injuries; I worked backwards from the joke description to write his scuffle with Larvitar.

It was interesting to go from Hanna searching for Lugia to Travis's chapter, and how he wants to be able to just travel the ocean. Like now it makes sense why he's so focused on training Water Pokemon. He needs them to accomplish that goal.
Something I think about a lot is what kind of goals trainers can have besides getting all the badges and becoming the champion. I think in Travis's mind it's fuzzy whether he wants to train water pokemon so he can travel the ocean, or if he wants to travel the ocean because he loves water pokemon. Kind of a chicken-and-egg situation, probably.

Also didn't realize it until this chapter that the three kids still match the "starter triangle" with their three main Pokemon. Jason has a Fire-type with Rabies, Krissy has a Grass-type with Lucia, and Travis has a Water-type with Wyvern. Despite not all of them having traditional starters, they still manage to get that standard trifecta. Kind of wonder if that was by design.
I wish I could remember whether it was by design or sub-conscious. Looking back at the one-shot history, Wyvern was definitely the first one to be set in stone. Rabies debuted before the chapter fic, but I'm not sure when I decided he would later be Jason's starter. Lucia was last, and it's quite possible I picked Chikorita to complete the trifecta. I'll say if it was intentional, it was because two earlier decisions made it the next logical step.

(that sheriff joke really was "boys will be boys")
I'm proud of the sheriff joke, by which I mean "the opposite of proud."

That evolution scene was magic, by the way. Just a trainer and his Pokemon, And the whole chapter achieved what I'm sure you set it out for it to do: Made it more heartbreaking that Wyvern is captured, and made it more understandable why Travis is so connected to his Pokemon.
Thanks! If that scene wasn't my favorite one to write, it was close.

As for chapter nine, I knew that there was something going on with Krissy's father, but could not guess what. She always knew to avoid looking in his eyes. Makes sense now! Only bit of negativity I could add is that the scene where Gengar is revealed didn't feel like it had a lot of emotion to it? Kind of felt like Krissy's reactions were very matter-of-the-fact. Might be only because she was being attacked by Gengar, but IDK. Felt like something was missing?
I'll probably take another look at that scene, see if it's possible to get the sensation across better. That's one I definitely want to land.

Liked that Travis was the one that answered for Krissy joining Team Rocket to get Wyvern back. Can't wait to get in his head about how he feels about Krissy now that he knows all of this. And can't wait to see how Jason's handling it.

And can not wait for the disaster adults to make their return to the story!
Good news, then!
 
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Chapter 10

It was eight o’clock in the morning when Derek walked up the path to the mansion with a folder of misinformation under his arm. He had to roll his eyes when the place came into view. It was exactly the sort of overbuilt, tacky, nouveau riche monstrosity his dad would rail about whenever one of them went up within five miles of Ecruteak. The old man had hated the “new-vogue rich” bastards almost as much as he hated the old-money rich bastards. Derek wondered two things: why he still thought of his dad as “the old man” even though he hadn’t lived to be much older than he himself was now, and how he could be thinking about idle nonsense when he was in sight of Mariano Russo’s front door.

Derek wished he hadn’t just thought of that, as now the fact he had come this far without anyone showing up to slow him down felt more ominous than fortunate. Even if the mansion wasn’t Johto HQ proper, he had expected at least minimal guard to be present. Instead, this might as well have been any other (large, ugly) house on any other clear, quiet morning. Derek’s old crippling fear of showing up at the wrong address suddenly boiled up, but it passed quickly because he would be safer at almost any other house, after all.

The instructions from Lewis were to take the rear entrance, so Derek veered off the main walkway and into the open grass between the mansion and the woods. Nobody ran out to intercept him. Where the hell was the security? Maybe they were watching with closed-circuit cameras, but that did nothing to stop someone in his position from throwing a brick through a window. Then again, considering Russo’s personality profile, it was possible he was just waiting for someone to be dumb enough to try something like that.

Derek rounded the corner to the back of the grounds, and a familiar face in a Grunt’s uniform was leaning next to a steel door. Lewis’s anxiety was obvious in his step and in his eyes as he hurried over to him. “The hell took you, Brooks? I’m skipping my post for this!”

Derek went over in his head the attributes that everyone he knew in Team Rocket associated with him: curt, jaded, bitter, not-hobbled-by-neuroticism. Most of these came naturally. “Tough shit. This ain’t exactly on my way to the office.”

“Whatever.” Lewis pointed to Derek’s folder. “Stuff you’re selling’s in there, right? Let’s go talk.”

Derek pointed at Lewis in turn. “I told you. Russo’s eyes only. Guy who writes the checks or nothing. I ain’t getting short-changed on this one.”

Lewis bit his lip and looked over his shoulder. Derek knew the pattern. He was counting on the decision getting punted to someone else first. “Look, man…” muttered Lewis.

Derek reached into his pocket. He couldn’t take any chances today. “Will this do it?” He flashed a bill: a hundred-hundred. Getting Rockets to do what you wanted was even more expensive than getting them to leave you alone.

It was a foregone conclusion this would get him through the door, but Lewis hesitated longer than Derek had anticipated. Finally, he swiped the note. “Okay, fine. Follow me.”

Lewis unlocked the door, led Derek in haste around a few corners, then pressed the call button on an elevator that looked twice as old as the rest of the house. Thirty seconds later, the car arrived. The inside looked even older than the out. As they descended with a jerk, Derek tried to decide whether staying silent all the way down would make him seem more suspicious or less. Fortunately, Lewis made the choice for him. “Man, but you picked a weird day to see the boss.”

Derek was anxious to know whether this was good luck or the opposite. If it meant Russo was less likely to actually grant him an audience, it was great news.

“That right?”

“Yeah. Big family trouble. Got most of us pretty on-edge, just so you know.”

“Appreciated.” It was indeed good luck, then. No Rocket was going to want to talk to Russo directly today, and the longer they gave Derek the run-around, the greater his chances were of giving someone the slip.

Just to keep his mind occupied, Derek tried to think about what “family trouble” could mean. Russo’s bio listed only two immediate family members. Ex-wife Penelope was reported in the local newspaper as having disappeared nine years ago, but recent police intelligence suggested the Rockets had covered up her suicide. Daughter Lucia, born 2006, was journeying and otherwise had nothing in her file except a photo from when she was five. It was also possible the trouble could be coming from extended family. The elevator screeched a little as it came to a stop. Derek put these thoughts on the back-burner.

The basement put on no pretensions of being anyone’s home. The hallways were cold, dim, and industrial with steel floors and exposed pipes where they had skimped on the ceiling. “Boss is awful particular we do our business down here,” said Lewis as they walked. “Sucks, but can’t really blame him for wanting things quiet where he lives.”

More like he wants it easier to trap intruders, thought Derek. Not hard when there’s only one way back up.

They walked by a number of Rockets in a circle who wore stone-serious, nervous expressions. Lewis wasn’t kidding about the base being “on-edge.” Then, they passed a pair of Grunts moving the other way who seemed relatively at ease. One of them was showing off his newly acquired hardware: a familiar black Poké Ball. “…just got it from the quartermaster. Think he’s got some left if you want one.”

“Nah, I’m gonna lay low today. Hear they’ll be standard issue in a month or t…”

Derek took note that some people’s jobs were about to get a lot harder. As for Lewis, he was looking increasingly anxious. It was as if he wasn’t quite sure where they were supposed to go. Derek was trying to figure out whether it was better to appear impatient or indifferent when Lewis came to a sudden stop in the middle of an intersection.

Lewis took a hesitant look down the other hallway, then called out, “Hey, Slate! Got a minute?”

Another Grunt who looked too old to still be a Grunt stopped in his tracks. He stood with his back to them for a few seconds, but when he finally turned around and approached them, Derek failed to keep his surprise from showing. This was, beyond a doubt, the same one who’d captured Wyvern. Fortunately, Derek had a ready excuse for being surprised: Slate’s right eye was barely visible behind a swollen mass of black and blue. It was easier to count the stitches than to see the pupil.

Slate gave Derek a cursory-but-stern looking over. There was no obvious recognition on his end, which was expected, but still a relief. Then, he faced Lewis. “What?”

“Got a guest here. Can you entertain him for a few while I find an Admin? I’ll cover half your night shift.”

It took Slate several seconds to decide. “…Deal. We’ll be in 105A.”

Lewis flashed Slate a thumbs-up, then was gone. Slate turned around again. “Come on.”

Derek followed. Now that he knew what room they were going to, it reminded him to note the numbers of the rooms they passed. He was going to have to navigate some of this place by himself. They were on 116N. After a few turns, he had the numbering scheme figured out, but it would still require a touch of guesswork to get back to the elevator in case things went south.

Then, Derek spotted the holy grail: open door, lights off, computer monitors on. 108E. Just the place for Hanna to work her magic. Unless he found somewhere better, this room was his destination once he got away. That was one uncertainty down with only a mountain of them left.

A minute later, they arrived. Slate unlocked the door, opened it, and gestured Derek in first with his thumb. Derek didn’t like having a Rocket to his back for even two seconds, but he took the risk and walked in. The room was nothing but four close walls with a small table and two chairs. Rocket facilities came standard with dual-purpose rooms for hospitality and interrogations. Derek took the chair closest to the door and sat casually with his body facing Slate. He wanted to seem compliant, but not intimidated.

Slate made no issue of Derek’s choice of seat. He closed the door behind him and took his place on the opposite side of the table. They weren’t making eye contact. Now Derek had to choose between letting the time burn until Lewis showed up with an Admin or trying to get something out of Slate. Obviously, the man was having a bad day, so the question was whether Derek could exploit that. The risk of missing an opportunity seemed worse than the risk that this would backfire.

“Real shiner you got there. Get caught cheatin’ at cards?” Always best to lead off with the obvious, and therefore unsuspicious.

Slate scowled and shook his head. “I don’t get caught. Hun’erd percent unprovoked—hadn’t even said a word yet. Goddamn Ice Punch.”

Derek winced. Ice Punch fit the symptoms, all right. “You give the other guy worse?”

Slate pounded the table. “Couldn’t. It was the boss’s fuckin’ daughter.”

“…Yikes.” That was certainly one for Lucia’s file if Derek ever learned more about the context of the exchange. He didn’t want to assume, but it was possible some things ran in the Russo family.

“I’m swear to god, this kid is a fuckin’ witch. I mean a biblical, hell-spawn, blood-sucking sorceress.”

Derek nodded. “Sure looks like it.”

“You don’t know the half of it! That little shit already made me lose two Ursaring and a Golbat! She even summoned some mystery asshole with a Tyranitar, and everyone thinks I made that part up!”

Derek lost all composure in his expression. Below the table, he dug his fingers into his leg just to keep himself from flipping out. He needed a quick excuse for looking so shocked. “Two Ursaring?”

“Eight years ago. This one kid had twin Teddiursa with big paws—that’s how you know they’ll be good. I gave up two weeks’ pay so the Admin would let me raise ’em, and two months’ pay to keep ’em after they evolved. And now they’re gone. Eight years gone.”

Derek was only half-listening at this point. Lucia. “Krissy.” Fake name, not a nickname. We didn’t think to look up Russo’s family. Violet City’s database would have had the picture from her license. It wouldn’t have taken us five minutes. I could have gotten her put on the missing list, too.

Slate continued to rave. “Fuck! If there was ever a kid who needed to lose some molars, it’s this one, but who’s gonna try anything? And get this: We finally get her and her stupid toadies locked up this morning, and I can’t touch her!”

Derek’s hands shook. It was too late. They were here. The Rockets had them. Russo had them. For a split-second, some idiot part of his brain thought it was lucky for them that Krissy was the boss’s daughter, but that was nonsense. If anything, it made the whole situation twice as dire. Whatever was coming to them, it might come slower, but it would surpass sadism.

“You know what? Fuck it. I’m gonna do it.”

Derek didn’t want to betray anything in his voice. “Hm?”

“Oh, nothin’ much. Just thinking it wouldn’t be a problem if her little pals had a few more bumps and bruises on ’em. Might get her thinking. And I know one of them that really deserves it.”

Everything stopped for Derek. Whatever his original plan here had been, it was far from his mind now. A new plan was already taking its place, and even though he didn’t know the whole thing yet, he knew the first steps. He reached into his back pocket for a pack of cigarettes he’d never opened because he didn’t smoke. He took one out and asked, “You got a light?”

“Yeah, one sec.”

Derek gestured the pack toward him. “Want one?”

Slate looked surprised for a moment, but then he said, “Hey, that’d be great. Thanks.”

Derek got up and began to approach on his left—Slate’s right. The Grunt’s attention was on his pocket as he dug out his lighter, and his bad eye left Derek out of his field of vision. Derek came to within a pace of him and still saw no hint of realization. Slate didn’t know that Derek could no longer allow him to leave the room. Before he could look up again, Derek grabbed his head and slammed it into the metal table.

Slate was dazed enough that he didn’t scream, but he wasn’t out. Derek dropped the cigarettes and hoisted him to his feet. He pounded his fist into his stomach once to knock the air out of him, and again because he was mad. Slate doubled over, which made it easy for Derek to drive his head into the wall. The Grunt fell to the floor in a heap and didn’t move an inch from there. Derek, on the other hand, had to stagger backwards and grab his chest, hyperventilating.

As he struggled to bring his breathing under control, he bent down to check the Grunt’s vitals. Pulse was still there. Derek wasn’t a killer yet, but he realized that everything else had changed. If there had been any chance before of his getting out of here entirely covertly, that was gone. Lewis was still on his way with an Admin, and they were only going to draw one conclusion from this scene. There was no way Derek could hide the body—no, hide Slate. He wasn’t just a body, yet.

Derek closed his eyes and tried to focus. He had to treat his cover as blown now. That meant he was probably fired, but the thought only barely crossed his mind. All that mattered was his only shot of getting the kids out of here. He slapped himself in the face, took Slate’s keys, and made a beeline for the door.

He opened it. There was nobody in the hallway, so he could lock the door behind him unnoticed. Then, he picked a direction and hurried in it.

He didn’t know where to go. The kids might not even be on this floor, and he didn’t know how to get to the lower ones. Then, he heard footsteps approaching the corner in front of him. He stopped in his tracks and looked for the nearest door. It didn’t matter if anyone was inside. He found one a few paces behind him. Locked. The footsteps were getting closer to the intersection. Somehow, he fit Slate’s key in the lock on the second try despite his shaking hands. It clicked.

The room was unlit, and once Derek closed the door behind him, it was pitch black. He allowed himself a few seconds to breathe, but it didn’t help much. He clapped a hand to his forehead and muttered, “Fuck. Fuck. Fuck.”

This was idiotic. There was absolutely no way he could find where they were keeping the kids if he couldn’t be seen. That left the unsubtle option of using Tyranitar to pulverize anyone who crossed his path, but that was untenable. Even supposing he reached them that way, it would be war by the time he got there. The Rockets would have disabled the elevator by then to trap them, and he didn’t want to risk calling in Hanna and Marie to extract them in the chaos. He continued to swear under his breath. It was impossible.

Then, he stopped swearing. The answer had been in his pocket all along. He might not need to find them at all if Hanna could. They’d never tried calling Travis because he probably would have blocked them right away, but if there was a time to try, it was now. He pulled his phone out of his pocket and prayed to have some luck for once.

There were only five names in his contacts, so it took only a few taps to dial Hanna. She picked up right away.

“Ready?”

“No, wait!” Derek was almost too loud. He brought himself under control and moved farther away from the door.

“What’s wrong?”

What wasn’t wrong? “They’re here. The kids are here. I don’t know where, but the Rockets have them.”

Hanna was silent for several seconds. “…Oh my god.”

“Listen. This might be our only shot, so we’ve got to get it right. You need to call Travis, hope someone picks up, and lock on.”

“Is that going to work? What if they took their phones?”

“Then I’ll think of something else! Maybe a guard’ll think it’d be funny to answer it! If that happens, bring Jen and Summer and come out swinging. If it’s too hot to handle, teleport out again.”

Derek thought he heard Jen asking something on the other end.

“I mean,” said Hanna, “we can do that, but say Travis still has it. What if there’s a Rocket in the room and he hurts him for trying something with his phone?”

Derek dug his fingers into his arm. “It doesn’t matter. They’re going to get that hurt and worse if we do nothing. Lead with a text and try to convince him. Send it in code so it looks like nothing if a guard reads it. Whatever!”

There was another vague noise from Jen on the other end, but Hanna wasn’t answering. “Hanna, please. I don’t have much room to do anything from here. I… I’m stuck. I need you to try this. They need you to try this.”

More noises from Jen, and then a few words from Hanna that weren’t directed at her phone: “…Get off me! I’m gonna answer him, okay?” A short pause. Then, Hanna said, “We’ll do it. Sit tight. I’ll call you right back.”

Derek was one tap away from hanging up when he heard a few more words: “Be safe. We’ll get you out next.” She hung up first.

He fumed. Who was she to tell him to “be safe?” Wasn’t he the only one who actually had any business being down here? He had been preparing for an infiltration mission like this for years. Even if Jason and his idiot friends had just stuck to training from the beginning, Derek would have made it here eventually. This was never about his safety, and he had to keep it that way for their sakes.

*********

Travis felt hollow. It was probably because he had skipped dinner the night before. He was staring at the wall, which hadn’t changed in the last hour. Other things that hadn’t changed were his shoes, the floor, the ceiling, the fluorescent tubes in the ceiling, and Jason. His friend continued to walk in circles, and every few minutes, he would say something to the effect of how they had to do something, or an example of what they might try. Then, Krissy would give a curt, expert reason why his idea wouldn’t work, and it was back to silence. This all repeated like clockwork until Travis wanted nothing more than for all the clocks to stop. The only choices were to wait for things to get worse or to make things worse themselves, so it would be best if everything just froze.

He had to wonder if it wouldn’t feel so bad if it weren’t all his fault. Krissy’s Rocket friend had summed it up earlier: “Are you willing to do anything to get your Pokémon back?” He had said “yes” then, because he was still a liar.

Hell yeah, we should fight Team Rocket,” when he meant, “Hell no, we’ll freaking die.”

I’m going with Wyvern, easy. He’ll clean their clocks,” when he meant, “I’m going with Wyvern, because Leviathan’s weaker, so I’m going to keep him as far away from the action as I can.”

Yes,” when he meant, “‘Anything?’ How can I possibly know that?”

And now, he knew the real answer was “no.” He wasn’t willing to offer up one hostage to get another back. That was the hard, awful truth, even though he already knew if anyone ever asked, he would say he shut down Russo’s offer because it was an obvious trick and the creep was never going to free Wyvern, anyway. Even at the end of his rope, Travis couldn’t handle the thought of being honest about something like that. He was pathetic.

A buzz in his pocket cut short his internal discourse. It took him a moment to realize what it was. His phone hadn’t gone off since he blocked his parents’ numbers last year. Jason and Krissy stared as he pulled it out.

“…They didn’t take your phones?” whispered Jason.

Krissy felt for her own pocket with a look of disbelief on her face, but it reverted to a look of bitter resignation. “Why bother? Who would we call?”

In one sense, she was right: Travis didn’t get the feeling the police could even make it down here. But some inexplicable, almost optimistic part of him knew the Rockets had simply made a mistake.

“No,” he said. “They were focused on the Poké Balls. Or they still think kids are too young for cell phones. They just didn’t think to check.”

Jason pointed at the phone, which kept on vibrating. “Well, who is it?”

Travis flipped open the screen for the first time in months. He didn’t recognize the number on top, but underneath it read: “hey herd u needed a lift, give me a call! H”

He couldn’t believe it right away. He was tempted to say whoever it was had the wrong number, but everything added up too well. “It’s Hanna. She wants to bail us.”

“What?” Jason couldn’t believe it either. “Does she know? There’s no way.”

Maybe she knew, maybe she didn’t. All that mattered was the computer she probably had ready along with her Alakazam. It seemed too good to be true.

“The Pokémon,” said Krissy. “We can’t leave without them.”

It was too good to be true.

…Or maybe not. “She can help us get them back. If Jen’s there and she brings her Arcanine, we’ll be good.”

“Yeah, but…” Jason trailed off. He must not have known how to say what Travis knew was on his mind.

Krissy had no problem saying it. “Wyvern.”

Travis bit his lip.

Then, he started tapping a reply.

“Travis.” Jason walked up to him. “You don’t have to. We’ll think of something. We can get out of here on our own and save Wyvern too.”

Travis’s message was this: “pkmn outside door. need firepwr pls”

He hit send.

A text came back almost immediately: “u got it. pls call now”

“Look,” said Jason, “we don’t know if she’ll actually help get the others back! What if she just sends Marie and rounds us up as fast as possible? Then it’s over!”

Travis had already considered Jason’s point, and he didn’t care. Of course he wanted to save every last one of them. Maybe Hanna would stick to her word and maybe she wouldn’t. But the fact was, the situation was the same as in Russo’s office.

He looked at Krissy. She was staring at the floor again. Travis didn’t know if Jason understood, but they had to get her away from this place at all cost. The things Krissy’s father had done to and meant to do to her were worse than anything he could ever do to him, Jason, or the Pokémon. Most of the what Travis had hated about her, other than her simply being a girl, he now suspected had never really been her. He had to wonder if he and Jason made it worse every time they hyped her up as “ruthless,” “stone-cold,” or “bloodthirsty” after she embarrassed some trainer in a battle.

There were a lot of words he wanted to take back. He wasn’t sure if he would ever work himself up to it, but for now, he could hit “call” and try to make up for it that way. In his head, he begged and begged Wyvern to forgive him.

*********

Hanna’s phone lit up. Travis was calling. She pressed the button to answer, and at the same time, the program on her laptop kicked into gear. She whispered into the mic, “Don’t hang up.” This was it.

Jen cracked her knuckles. “Here we go.” She pressed the button on Summer’s ball, and the Arcanine appeared next to her. The hotel room was small, so it was a tight fit with two people and two Pokémon. Jen rested her hand atop Summer’s head. “Marie’s taking us to a fight, girl. Be ready.”

Summer made a low growl. Hanna wasn’t convinced she understood this meant teleportation, but she sounded ready. First, though, the program needed to finish running. Hanna looked at the thousands of lines of logging information flying up the screen. Usually, it was half-done by this point, but there was really no telling. “Come on…”

Marie made a growl of her own and spun her spoons.

Marie, Hanna asked in her head, how are you feeling?

Marie sent a psychic pulse instead of words. It put a healthy-enough blue tint in Hanna’s peripheral vision, but it didn’t feel terribly strong. By Hanna’s best guess, Marie had enough in her for at most five Teleports. That meant it wasn’t quite a good day, but on a bad day, she might only be able to manage three, so they were lucky. It was enough to get the kids in one go, then Derek with another.

The program was still running. Did it always take this long, or was it just her?

Finally, a window popped up with a satellite map of the outskirts of Violet City. It zoomed in to a spot a few dozen yards away from a mansion. “Got ’em.”

It was the longitude and latitude, anyway, but in this case, Marie needed more than that. Hanna put her hand on the Alakazam’s back and let her take complete control of her retinas. She saw a hazy vision of the same spot as on the map, but from the ground.

Go down.

The vision dove underneath the earth and only stopped moving when she saw the outline of a hallway. That wasn’t it, but there was always some degree of error with phone GPS. Check the walls on either side. Beyond one wall was dirt, and beyond the other was a broom closet. Down again. This brought them to another hallway. In front of them was a door with two human shapes in front of it. They passed through the door and into a room with three smaller silhouettes in it. There.

Hanna got her own eyes back, then motioned to Jen. “Ready?”

“Ready.”

Jen leaned in to grab Marie’s shoulder.

Bring Summer too. Jen’s got her.

Okay. Got Summer.”

Hanna took a deep breath. She tried not to think about how many years it had been since she was last in anything resembling a battle.

Go.

The hotel room vanished. Hanna’s body began to turn in contradictory directions, but since she knew where they were going, it felt like diving straight forward. Then, they were in another small room, except this one was metal, and they were suspended two feet in the air. Any psychic detachment Hanna was still experiencing collapsed when they landed on their feet with a loud noise.

“Aaaah!”

Jason was sprawled out on the floor almost right underneath Summer. That was close. She looked around. There were Travis and Krissy, and there was the door.

She heard a muffled voice. “The hell was that!”

Jen reached down and pulled Jason to his feet. “Get behind us! Move!”

Hanna heard someone working on the knob as the kids scrambled for the far corners.

“Summer,” said Jen, “get rid of him.”

Summer breathed in, and as soon as the Grunt opened the door, she bellowed so loudly it made Hanna’s ears ring.

Fuck!” The Grunt bolted from the doorway. Summer was about to charge after him, but Jen stopped her.

“Wait!”

Amid a rush of noises and swears from outside, Hanna heard several Poké Balls opening. Into the room burst two Raticate, but Summer torched them before they could get close. They squealed in pain and skidded to a halt. In the close quarters, Hanna could feel the heat on her arms, which is why it took her a moment to realize something was wrong. She didn’t know how many balls had opened, but it was more than two. That, and her forehead felt far too cold for all the fire Summer had just breathed.

As Summer leapt forward to sink her fangs into one of the large rat Pokémon, Hanna’s eyes darted about the room. “Marie! Watch out for a—”

Her gut was right, but it was too late. A spot on the wall grew dark, and out of it shot a mass of deepest black. Before Hanna could even finish speaking, it struck Marie square in the forehead, and she slumped to the floor. Shadow Ball. Only now did Hanna see the Haunter floating near the ceiling, and she completely froze up. She couldn’t remember what she was supposed to do in this situation.

Summer Roared again and the two battered Raticate skittered to the door, but the Haunter only flashed its disembodied claws and shadow-fangs. At the same time, Hanna felt a rumbling sensation and low noise in her brain. Marie was using Psychic. It built slowly at first, but then there was a spike. It hit her like a rock made of concussions. The Haunter’s eyes went dark, and it fell straight down. It didn’t land with any real impact: All that remained on the floor was a lumpy shadow and a small pool of something faintly purple.

Hanna started breathing again. Her head was still pounding. She heard running feet from down the hallway, but they were moving farther away. Jason, Krissy, and Travis ran past her for the door, while Jen chased after them and told them to hold on, or something to that effect. They must not have felt the Psychic attack if they could still move and their ears weren’t ringing. Hanna put a hand to her temple and looked at the Haunter. Marie must have broken apart most of the poison in its body on a molecular level. She didn’t know if the Haunter was still alive, or if that was the right word for Ghost-types, but she hoped the kids would assume it had fainted.

By the time Hanna managed to shake off her headache, Jen was back inside along with the kids, who were clipping the last Poké Balls to their belts. “Okay,” said Jen, “We’re all good here. Let’s blow this joint before they come back. Summer, stay on the door!”

Then, Jen and the kids noticed Marie, who was still on her knees. They stared.

“…Is she okay?” asked Krissy.

Hanna already knew what the answer was, but she needed specifics. She dropped to Marie’s eye level and felt her forehead. Marie? Marie? …Oh, shit.

Marie opened her eyes a crack. She sent Hanna a psychic pulse. It was so weak, it didn’t even make it to Hanna’s eyes.

How many more can you do, girl? You’ve got to say how many. I can’t tell.

“…”

Marie?

“…One.”

A pit formed in Hanna’s stomach. “…She’s got one teleport left in her.”

Jen was in disbelief. “What?”

Hanna ground her teeth. “…And I think she’s going to pass out right after she uses it. Give me your phone.”

Jen pulled her cell out of her pocket, and Hanna swiped it with too much force. She brought up Derek in the contacts list, and waited for two rings too many for him to pick up. “Derek?”

He didn’t waste a syllable. “Status?”

“We’re here. We have the kids—”

“Then teleport out. Now.”

“Hold on! We have the kids, but Marie’s not good. She can only do one more trip, so you have to meet up with us first, or you’ll be stuck.”

Silence. Why wasn’t he saying anything? Hanna stood up. Maybe they’d have to meet him partway there. “Derek? Where are you? Listen, we need to—”

“Go.”

Hanna’s mouth stayed open, but she couldn’t say anything. Everyone stared at her.

“W…”

“I said ‘go.’ Get the kids out of here, now. I can handle myself. I’m not unprotected.”

“Derek, that’s nuts! You just said a minute ago—”

He didn’t raise his voice in volume, but he shouted with his tone. “Hanna! They’re children! They’re our only priority, now move it before you’ve got Rockets to deal with!”

She knew he was right. It made her sick, and she wanted more than anything to tell him off. She wanted to tell him he was too important to leave behind, either. But they were children. Derek was an adult, this was his job, and she had to trust him to know what he was doing. She closed her eyes. “Okay. We’re going.”

“Good.”

“Be care—” He hung up. “…ful.”

Hanna wished he were here so she could slap him. And while she was at it, they could all escape together like they were supposed to. She shut the phone and tossed it back to Jen. “Everyone, get close. Jen, get Summer back in her ball—it’ll make it easier.”

Jen looked absolutely stricken, but she seemed to understand and didn’t argue. Back in the ball Summer went. Jason and Travis approached slowly with their heads hung, but Krissy didn’t move.

“…He’s here?” she asked in a small voice. “Derek’s here?

“Yes,” said Hanna. “He’ll be okay—he’s a professional. But we have to go.”

The only word to describe the look on Krissy’s face was “horror.” She nearly came out of her skin. “No! We can’t!”

She tried to dart toward the door again, but Jen caught her by the arm. “Krissy! Come on!”

Krissy struggled and screamed. “No! No! They’ll kill him!

Hanna stared at Krissy, and then at the boys. She could see it in their faces: They believed her without question, like she was an authority on what both Derek and the Rockets could handle. Hanna was missing something, and she was terrified to know what. A feeling from deep inside told her they couldn’t leave yet, and it wouldn’t be so easy to shut it up.

*********

Derek put the phone back in his pocket. He closed his eyes, let his back rest against the wall, and allowed himself to breathe. It was over. Thanks to Hanna and Marie, they’d finally done what they’d set out to do. The kids were safely on their way home.

He opened his eyes again. It wasn’t that simple, of course. Safe for Krissy meant away from home, and it probably wouldn’t be wise to let her go off by herself. And then there was Travis. His trainer’s journey was probably over for good, as was Jason’s, but that was nothing compared to how his Pokémon was still trapped. It would have been so perfect if things had gone according to plan—if they’d been able to lure them back by saving Wyvern. But there was no chance of that happening now.

Derek put his face in his hands. He knew it was selfish, but he couldn’t stop himself from thinking about how this was the end for him, too. He’d blown his cover and had nothing to show for it. There was no way the higher-ups would forgive that kind of mistake. He was going to lose his job. He’d only survived this long because of this niche he was hiding in: this existence where he so rarely had to speak as himself. He could remember the last time he’d needed to find a job—the crushing uncertainty and constant worry that had nearly driven him to the unspeakable.

I can’t go back to that. No. No. I can’t.

Go back? Hell, he couldn’t even leave this basement. He’d never make it to the elevator without being spotted, and once they found him, there was only so long he could try to fight his way out. There were too many of them. And he wouldn’t allow himself to be captured, so he’d just die first.

Then, everything in Derek’s head shifted. What had seemed so heavy now felt terribly, dangerously, wonderfully light.

They couldn’t fire him if he was dead.

How had he forgotten over the years how much sense that made? It made everything so easy. There was nothing stopping him from going after the grand prize. He was going to fight his way to Russo and give him a choice: hand over all of his encryption keys and other electronic credentials, or get dismembered by a Tyranitar. That meant Derek would either succeed and come out as a hero, possibly with enough results to save his employment, or he would fail and just die.

Dead people didn’t have to apply for jobs. Nobody ever stabbed a corpse with millions of impossible questions about its shallow work experiences so far and watched it squirm in its own inadequacy.

And nobody would have to tell Jen that her brother had killed himself. He would just be a casualty in the line of duty. If anything, this was his best chance to avoid death by actual suicide.

Surely, she could live with that.

Derek walked to the door and opened it. The hallway seemed bright and inviting. He walked to the nearest intersection slowly and with all the confidence of someone who no longer has any reason to hide. As he went, he unclipped Tyranitar’s unassuming Poké Ball and fiddled with it in his hand.

It only took two turns for him to find what he was looking for: literally any Rocket. As luck had it, he had found a small crowd of them, including Lewis and an Admin. He was pretty sure he recognized the Admin from intelligence reports. Poor bastard only had Psychic-types. This part wouldn’t be hard.

Brooks!” Lewis, it seemed, took some exception to his presence, presumably because he had seen what shape Slate was in.

Now that there was no reason for him to put on an act, Derek could let the full extent of his contempt for Lewis and everyone like him out in the open. “You took too long, fucko. I said I wanted to see your boss.”

Lewis stared at him like he was speaking a foreign language.

Derek continued. “So go get him. Now. Tell him it’s police business.”

The Rockets all brought out Poké Balls of their own. The Admin snarled, “You don’t know who you’re messing with.”

Derek almost laughed. It was like the Admin was setting it up for him on purpose. “That’s my line.”

It was all so straightforward. Victory or death. Win-win. He wound up to throw the ball and finally—after fifteen long years—get to work.
 
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