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Pokémon The Kalosian Journeys (A pokemon journeys epiosde 108 and forward rewrite!)

Chapter 7 New

kingvoid

Owner of the famous Void-Greninja
Location
The way of the void
Pronouns
he/him

Chapter 7: Surprising Visits!​




The morning over Lumiose City didn't break with a sunrise; it broke with a heavy, grey humidity that clung to the obsidian spires of the mansion like a shroud. Inside, the atmosphere was even heavier. Ash stood on the reinforced balcony of the master suite, his hands gripping the cold marble railing. He wasn't wearing the tailored blue suit or the high-collared mantle of the "Obsidian King." He wore a plain black hoodie, the fabric fraying at the cuffs, and his eyes, usually a sharp, tactical matte-brown, were glazed with a boredom that felt like physical weight.
Beside him, Serena leaned against the stone, her crimson dress a sharp splash of color against the dark architecture. She watched the way his fingers drummed a rhythmic, restless beat against the stone.
"Are you feeling bored?" she asked, her voice a soft hum that usually acted as his primary stabilizer.
Ash didn't look at her. He kept his gaze fixed on the perimeter fence, watching the National Corps guards pace their synchronized routes. "Hm. Nope. Not at all."
Serena hissed a soft, skeptical breath. "Oh, as if I don't see that expression, Ash. You’re looking for a glitch. You’re looking for a reason to pulse your resonance. You’ve been staring at that gate for twenty minutes hoping an Anomaly would try to crash it."
Ash finally turned, a small, weary smirk tugging at the corner of his mouth the "Bully" energy surfacing just for a second. "Fine. You caught me. It feels so... boring, Serena. After killing AZ, after the 15,000 bHz clash, the world just feels quiet. It feels like the volume’s been turned down to zero. I’m waiting for the other shoe to drop."
"The other shoe isn't a monster this time, Ash," Serena replied, her gaze shifting to the driveway. "Sometimes, the quiet is the reward. You just don't know how to live in it yet."
Just as the words left her lips, a yellow cab rounded the corner of the boulevard, its tires screeching slightly as it pulled up to the massive iron gates. Ash’s posture shifted instantly. His shoulders squared, his eyes sharpened, and for a heartbeat, the air around him began to vibrate with that familiar, low-frequency hum.
"Someone’s here," Ash whispered, his voice dropping into that deep, "Leader" register. He reached for the customized Pokéball on his belt. "Clemont! Goh! We have a visitor at the gate. No bHz signature, but they’re bypassing the security protocol."
The cab door swung open. A woman stepped out, wearing a simple sun hat and a practical cardigan.
"Mom!?!?" Ash yelled, his voice cracking as the "King" persona shattered into a million pieces. He leaned so far over the balcony he nearly tipped over. "What is she doing here? Why is she at the gate?"
Before he could process the shock, the other doors of the cab flew open. As if it were meant to be, Grace stepped out, her designer clothes looking impossibly bright against the dark pavement. She adjusted her sunglasses, looking up at the mansion with a look of pure, aesthetic disapproval.
"Mom?" Serena gasped, her own "Queen" composure evaporating.
Then the backdoors of the cab opened to reveal Goh’s mom and dad. Goh, who had been walking through the foyer with a cup of black coffee, stopped dead in his tracks. He looked at the monitors, then at the driveway, and his jaw dropped.
"What are you guys looking at?" Goh asked, his voice shaking. Then he saw the screen. "Mom and Dad? What are they... how did they even get past the regional blockade?"
Down in the driveway, Delia Ketchum looked up at the balcony. She didn't see the "Obsidian Heroes" or the "Vigilantes of Kalos." She saw three teenagers looking down at her like lost Wingulls.
"STOP GASPING AND HELP YOUR PARENTS OUT A BIT, WON’T YOU!" Delia yelled, her voice carrying a maternal authority that 15,000 bHz couldn't touch.
They didn’t wait. The three of them ran downstairs as fast as they could, their heavy tactical boots thudding against the polished marble floor with a loud, uncoordinated clatter. There was no "stealth," no "resonance," just the frantic energy of kids who realized they were about to be lectured.
By the time they reached the grand front door and hissed it open, the parents were already stepping into the foyer. They stood there, looking around at the sheer, cold fanciness of the mansion. The obsidian pillars, the glowing blue data terminals, and the sterile white marble were met with varying expressions of shock.
Delia was the first to speak. She ran a finger along a nearby stone pedestal and looked at the grey smudge on her skin. "Wow. Won't it hurt to clean a bit, Ash? This place is a palace, but it feels like a museum."
Ash’s sinister smirk was nowhere to be found. He stood there, his hands shoved deep into his hoodie pockets. "Mom, we didn't have the time yet. We were too busy with... the work. The underground remnants, the bHz tracking"
"The only work you’re gonna do now is sit down for a proper meal!" Grace interrupted, walking past Ash as if he were a piece of furniture. She reached Serena and immediately began smoothing out the wrinkles in her crimson dress. "Serena, honey, you look strong, you look mature... but this mansion is far too moody. It needs some life. It needs some color. It looks like you're living in a tomb, dear."
Goh’s parents wrapped him in a hug so tight it effectively knocked the "Reaper" persona right out of his system. Goh stood there, looking smaller than he had in months.
"We saw your speech, Goh!" his mother said, her eyes welling up. "So sharp! So serious! You sounded like a grown man. But we brought your favorite snacks from home, because we know you’ve been living off nothing but coffee and data. Look at your face, you’re all skin and bones!"
The group moved as a chaotic, loud wave into the main living room. The mothers were already talking about "rearranging the light" and "airing out the dampness," but the chatter stopped dead once they saw it.
In the center of the room, sitting on a high-backed velvet chair that was clearly meant for Ash the chair where he sat when he planned the "Bite of Ash" strategy was a big, four-foot Dedenne plush. Its bright yellow fabric was a loud, happy scream in the middle of all the cold marble and obsidian.
"Woah," Goh’s mom whispered, her voice dropping into a sudden, hollow silence as the excitement of the reunion disappeared. The reality of why they were actually there was the reason the house felt so empty despite the luxury hit them all at once. "What’s this big plush for? Is it a gift?"
Ash stepped forward, his footsteps silent on the marble. He reached out and touched the plush’s big, soft belly. "It's a placeholder..." he said, his voice dropping into a quiet, raw register.
Then Clemont walked out of the kitchen. His footsteps were slow, his shoulders slumped. He didn't have his lab coat on. He looked at the four parents, then reached out and touched the soft fabric of the plush’s ear.
"For the little girl who should be sitting here," Clemont said. His voice started to crack, the "Science Bro" logic failing him completely. "She wanted it as a beanbag. We... we just didn't want the chair to stay empty. We thought if we kept the chair filled, the room wouldn't feel so... quiet."
Delia’s eyes started pouring out water like a fountain. She didn’t say anything about the house being dirty, or the clothes being moody, or the white marble being too cold. She simply walked toward the chair, then past it, and pulled Clemont into a crushing hug.
"Oh, what a sad, sad boy," she whispered, her voice thick with the kind of grief only a mother can navigate.
The silence that followed wasn't the "Peace of the Grave" Ash had talked about at the restaurant. It was a human silence. Grace stood by Serena, her hand gripping her daughter's arm, realizing that the "Queen" she saw on TV was really just a girl trying to hold her friends together while they all bled internally.
"Alright," Delia said, pulling back and wiping her face with the back of her hand, her expression turning into one of fierce, domestic determination. "No more 'King' talk. No more 'Reaper' talk. No more of this 'Obsidian' nonsense for one night. We are going into that kitchen, we are making enough food to feed an army, and we are going to be a family. Ash, grab the bags. Clemont, show me where the stove is. We're bringing the light back into this house."
The Obsidian Mansion finally had a heartbeat... and it sounded like a mother’s love.

TO BE CONTINUED​

 
Chapter 7.5 (Teaser New

kingvoid

Owner of the famous Void-Greninja
Location
The way of the void
Pronouns
he/him

Don't copy ma flow​

Chapter 7.5: The Kitchen Sovereignty​



The transition from the hollow silence of the living room to the frantic energy of the kitchen was like watching a black-and-white film suddenly burst into Technicolor. Delia Ketchum hadn't even taken off her sun hat before she had effectively annexed the industrial-grade kitchen. The "Marble" high-tech appliances, designed for efficiency and sleekness, were now covered in flour, cutting boards, and a chaotic array of Pallet Town spices.
"Ash, don't just stand there leaning against the marble like a brooding statue!" Delia shouted over the sizzle of a frying pan. "Peel those onions. And Goh, honey, put that Rotom-Phone away. If I see one more data chart before dinner, I’m going to personally recalibrate your frequency with this wooden spoon."
Goh jumped, nearly dropping the device that held the "Black Files" of every criminal in Kalos. "Yes, ma'am! Onions. Right. I’m on it."
Across the island, Grace was moving with the precision of a Rhyhorn racer, though her current obstacle was a pile of Kalosian greens. She looked at Serena, who was standing awkwardly by the sink, still wearing the crimson dress that cost more than a mid-sized sedan.
"Serena, dear," Grace said, her voice a sharp contrast to Delia’s warmth. "You look like a Queen on that balcony, but in this kitchen, you look like a girl who hasn't held a whisk in a month. Tie your hair back. We are making a Magost Berry glaze, and I will not have 'Marble’' dust ruining the flavor profile."
Serena smiled, a genuine, tired sparkle returning to her blue eyes. "Yes, Mom."
The mansion, which usually vibrated with the low, 850 bHz hum of Ash’s resonance, was now vibrating with something entirely different. It was the sound of clinking silverware, the bubbling of stew, and the sharp, rhythmic chopping of vegetables. The "Tense" air of the Geosenge aftermath was being scrubbed away by the sheer force of maternal will.
Clemont sat at the small breakfast nook, watching them. He still looked hollow the hug from Delia had cracked his shell, but the grief was still leaking out. He looked at his hands, the same hands that had built the "Ultimate Void" sensors, and felt a strange sense of uselessness.
"Clemont," Goh whispered, sliding a pile of peeled onions toward him. "Help me with these. My eyes are watering, and I can't tell if it’s the onions or the fact that my mom just told me I have 'narrow shoulders' for a Reaper."

 

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
Review for

Intro and chapter 1

I swear this piece is half ninja. it disapaered under me amd took my firat review with it.

Introduction
hi i am a pre-teen who likes pokemon here is my shonen take on pokemon journeys
the main core stuff of the story :
1.Ash is not ten he is eighteen here
2.There is one year for every gen like in kanto he was 10 and in kalos he was 16 showing his growth in alola he was 17 and now he is 18
3.We will meet a king from XYZ
4.Villains will be there but not like your usual giovanni


Gaaaasp, no gio?


5.Moves that don't exist will be here
6.Power scaling here is known as bond hertz or pokespirit
7.Domain expansion
8.Ash is more mature here and can take hints of intimacy
Characters
1.Ash
2.Serena
3.Clemont
4.Goh
5.Bonnie
6.Prof cerise (idc about yall saying "the spelling is wrong" i will spell it this way)
I will uploading this very soon
Post your feedback
Character descriptions!
Ash : Ash is now 18 its been 2 ye- 2 YEARS! since he went on his journey through kalos he is brave intimate and mature and his battle IQ is stated to be about 200 and his IQ is 130.
Goh : Goh is Ash's companion here he is also 18 and he likes data but not that much of course!
Serena : Serena is ash's companion but more special then Goh , you'll see why later ,she is 18 too , she loves macrons and performing.
Clemont : Clemont is the smartest one in the group his IQ is a staggering 170 even if his machines blow 99.99% of the time his Battle IQ is 110. he is also 18.
Bonnie : Bonnie is Clemont's sister and is the only one in the group who is 9 her IQ is 110 and her Battle IQ is about 70.
Cerise : Is addicted to data and wants to archive Ash's phenomenal power he is stated to be 37 years old. His IQ is about 150 and his battle IQ is 90. and he doesn't have any family now due to a failed experiment that killed them.
[DISCLAIMER: this series includes romantic things like kissing and dropping f bombs and deaths and very very graphical]

well the intro helps a bit... i tapped out of the anime after orange islands so i'm dreadfully behind...

Chapter 1: Obsidian Beginnings

The air in the Cerise Laboratory usually smelled of ozone and sterile data, but today, it felt heavy like the atmosphere before a catastrophic storm.
Ash Ketchum, eighteen and standing a head taller than he did a year ago, wasn't looking at a monitor. He was staring at Goh’s Frogadier. The blue Pokémon was practicing its Aerial Ace, but to Ash’s eyes, the movements were... slow. Simplified.
"The form is good, Goh," Ash said, his voice deeper, carrying the weight of the Alolan throne. "But it’s hollow. There’s no Pokespirit behind the strike."

Whike i get ash is canonically older (your helpful notes squared that up) i'm a bit baffled as to the emphasis on his height difference and voice changes. Unless they happened recently.

Curious to see spirit explored...


Goh looked up from his Rotom Phone, his eyes bloodshot from a fourteen-hour "Data Grind."

I thought everyones eyes looked like that. Bet goh lives off energy drimks too...


"What are you talking about, Ash? The math is perfect. His velocity is top-tier for his level."
Ash didn't blink. He felt a phantom itch in his chest—a literal tugging on his soul that stretched across the ocean, all the way to the Kalosian woods. The Bond Phenomenon wasn't just a move anymore; it was a heartbeat he shared with a King.

Blinks. Methinks i mised a lot of canon.


"He's hitting the target," Ash whispered, his eyes beginning to shimmer with a faint, obsidian blue light. "But he’s not deleting it."

The computer heavy analogy seems almost digimon in flavor.


Across the room, Professor Cerise froze. On his massive wall-sized monitor, a needle labeled [pokespirit] suddenly spiked from a calm 40 bHz to a screaming 850. The cooling fans in the supercomputer began to wail in agony.
"Ash?" Cerise's voice trembled, his 'Data Addiction' kicking in as he scrambled to record the anomaly. "What are you doing? Your molecular density is... it's shifting! GIVE IT TO ME! Give me the readout on that pulse!"

Ummm it seems like Cerise is going to.get a front view reading on wjats happening. Wonder if the walls are.gunna survive?

Ash ignored the Professor. He turned toward the window, looking toward the horizon where the Kalos region lay.
"Goh, pack your bags. " Ash shadow-boxed a single, lightning-fast jab into the empty air. The friction caused a miniature sonic boom that shattered a nearby beaker. "We’re going back to the roots. It’s time I showed you what a 100% Sync actually looks like."

One... i'm wonder when ash went from happy go lucky to casually does property damage to his host.. intentionally (aged uo after all doesnt mean grim dark, his word choice and stoicsm compared tonhis younger attitude are planting warning signs he went all grim dark)

In the shadows of the lab, Cerise’s eyes widened. He didn't see a student anymore. He saw a glitch in the universe that he needed to archive.

I mean company he keeps and all that probably isnt helping... Cerise reminds me of Colorless from Plasma a bit... if the man got a bit more energetic?

The Kalosian Journey had officially begun.
Ash and Goh got on a plane to Lumiose airport
Ash and Goh finally reach lumiose airport where they are greeted by Clemont and Bonnie
Since its the same line the second ash and goh could be replaced by they...

The air felt fresh and alive Ash relived his first time landing in Kalos with Alexa

Interesting way to show off flashback...
Ash "Hey Bonnie how have you been?"
Bonnie: "Ash! Clemont says i'll get my first pokemon today!"
Ash: "Woah Bonnie really which one?"
Bonnie: "Ash you know which one its obviously dedenne"
Ash "Oh yea where is it anyways?"
Bonnie "Hmph its sleeping."
Clemont "Bonnie come on let's go"
Ash and the gang go to the Lumiose woods , where Greninja spends his time defending Kalos from team Flare's corrupted vines
The air was dusty and corrupted Ash was very excited to see Greninja again!

my geeky mind immediatly went vines=memes because part because of all the little tech nods part becauae sleepy...

also saw 2x corrupted right next toneach other thought you might want to change it up.


Ash suddenly feels a familiar feeling like the Kalos league again
Cerise was just screaming "Ash, this isn't possible your bond hertz is rising above the normal level! GIVE IT TO ME"

Ash ignores Cerise's weird behavior and whispers to Goh "Please act like your range is cutting out he is annoying me"
Goh cuts Cerise video call acting like his range was cutting out
Ash feels the feeling getting stronger he can feel Greninja

feelsnthe feeling? What does that feeling feel loke, heat, tingling, aura trying to pjsh out of his body... also why is ash so empowered w a tie to a king?

also feel and feelong are roght next to each other on tje same line...


Out of nowhere a big vine radiating a energy that other Corrupted vines radiated but this one was one of the biggest he sensed in the forest
This was the Mother Vine this vine is the root of all Corrupted Vines if Ash defeated it the terror the vines caused would end

well jopefully ash can win against saod vine. Speaking of the word vine saw 6x instances od nit in... one line...

Goh "Ash i got this Cinderace will beat it to a pulp."
Ash "Goh you already don't need to i can defeat it no prob!"
Goh "*laughing* how are going to defeat that with a pikachu *laughing harder*"

tips head either goh is earning an aplus in "ignores canon" or ash os going to show off and fiwld it without a mon...

Ash "Oh i won't be using pikachu ... Greninja lets go"
Suddenly Greninja appears from the trees ready to fight
Greninja "Nin-ja!"
Goh "*Laughing even harder* you're gonna beat a grass type with a water type *still laughing*"
Clemont "Don't underestimate Ash even if he has the type disadvantage he can still turn the tides"
Ash "Come on Greninja use Ice Beam!"

i hesitatw to call a vine a grass type... much less one riddled with corruption... but between gohs cpmment and ashs use of ice beam hes got a ppint...

Greninja uses a ice beam dealing a little damage not that much but enough to show he has a weakness
Goh brings out Cinderace
Goh "Cinderace use Pyro-Ball!"

A super effective move but the Mother Vine absorbs the kinetic energy from it Goh is shocked and suprised it did nothing!
Ash uses his insane battle IQ to invent a new move
Ash immediately bonds with Greninja and ready to fight

so the combats written a lot like an anouncer would narrate...

so bonds as in x/y evolution, gigamancing, z movong, or actual merging (theres so mamy cues from dragon ball z its a slioper slope here) i think itd help to slow doen a little and show what ash is actuallyndling and how kinetic energy being absorved loos lome ect to make the fighting more personal...

as a system tho cpmbat hasnt strayed far from the games formula yet...


Ash "Greninja use Ice Impact!"
Greninja "Nin-Ja
Goh "Ash that's not even a move!?!?!"
Even if it wasn't a move Ash's sheer B hrtz (bond hertz) was so powerful that he signaled telepathically that "condense a ball of water into your hand and just as you hit the Vine Freeze it into Ice"
Now The Mother Vine was frozen solid with sheer power of Ice Impact

Clemont "Ash you really used your bond with Greninja to improvise a new move! that's Genius!"
Now the finishing blow was required to finish it off!


? Why is genius cappitalized? Is it a name?

Ash "Greninja! , use Aerial Ace!"
This shatters the ice and ends The Mother Vine's Corruption
The air (that) was eerie and dark now shifted to a happy and pleasant atmosphere.

Serena was just practicing for her next performance in the Lumiose woods and heard the clash
Serena "Pangoro Follow me!"
Serena rushes to the area where she heard the Impact
She knew greninja was here and knew that she would hear some clashes but she didn't expect one this powerful!
She reached and saw a crater with smoke coming out the dust clears out and she sees ash
Ash "Serena! Long time no see!"
Serena "I always missed you Ash so great to see you again and greninja such a big clash didn't except that"
Ash "Missed you too!:
Greninja "Ninja!"
They head to a hotel to rest.

Ash said to Serena "Hey Serena, Wanna go to a macron cafe tonight?" Serena replied "Yes!" Bonnie giggles and whispers to Clemont "Look Ash is inviting Serena to go on Date!" Clemont says to Bonnie "Hey Bonnie knock it off"
Transition to night
Lumiose City at night was a sea of neon, but the Macaron shop was a quiet sanctuary of warm light and the smell of toasted sugar. Ash, Serena, Clemont, and Goh sat at a circular booth.
Goh was staring intensely at his Rotom Phone. "Ash, I’m still trying to process that 'Ice Impact.' My sensors recorded a localized temperature drop of absolute zero for exactly 0.01 seconds. That shouldn't be physically possible for a Greninja......"


i dont remember goh being married tonhis tech tjis hard in canon.. is this a fanon reinterpretation?

Ash leaned back, looking much more relaxed than he did in the woods. "The data doesn't matter, Goh. It’s about the Pokespirit. When you stop looking at the data, you start seeing the soul."
Serena laughed, placing a tray of colorful macarons on the table. "You’ve definitely grown up, Ash. You sound like a philosopher now instead of just a kid who wants to battle."
"Two years and a throne in Alola will do that to you," Ash said, his voice dropping an octave. He looked directly at Serena, not missing the way she blushed.

snoets. I'm thinkong some background showing what experiences in those 2 years helped him change migjt help a bit bridge this ash from most peoples concepts of canon ash... bjt for nkw his presemce is an exlerience....

Bonnie giggled from the next table over. "Clemont, look! Ash is actually looking at her! He’s not even eating his macaron yet!"
Clemont adjusted his glasses, looking nervous. "Bonnie, shush! Let them have their moment."
As they ate, the conversation flowed easily, but Ash could feel the romantic energy between him and Serena humming it wasn't like b-hrtz it was love at first sight serena resonated golden
"Serena," Ash said suddenly, standing up. "Let's walk. Just us."
Goh looked up, confused. "But we haven't finished the Data Sync on the..."
Clemont grabbed Goh’s collar and pulled him back down. "The data can wait, Goh. Trust me."

Ash and Serena walked out onto the balcony of the shop, overlooking the Prism Tower. The wind caught Serena's hair, and for a moment, the 'King of Alola' felt like just a boy again but a boy who finally knew what he wanted.
"Ash?" Serena whispered. "You’ve changed so much. You're... stronger. But you feel different."
"I spent a long time chasing the horizon, Serena," Ash said, stepping closer. "I realized that being a Master isn't just about winning. It's about who you want to share the world with when the battle is over."

I see pairongs are not gping to be a question in this story, at all.

He didn't wait for her to drop a hint. He didn't wait for a sign.

um ew... turn off that. Bet she swoons into it though.

Ash reached out, gently cupping her face, and pulled her into a firm, meaningful kiss.
The air around them didn't explode with ice or shadow. Instead, the Prism Tower behind them flickered with a soft, celebratory gold. For the first time in years, the "Obsidian" light in Ash's eyes softened into something human.
Serena pulled back, breathless, a radiant smile on her face. "Took you long enough, Ash Ketchum."

yeah, called it. I'm not much for romance so i'm not going to comment here.

Ash smirked, the 'King's' confidence returning. "I had a lot of training to do. But I think I finally got the timing right."
RIP DENSE ASH

Well that was an experience. Thanks for being patient and thanks for sharonf.
 
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Chapter 7.5 New

kingvoid

Owner of the famous Void-Greninja
Location
The way of the void
Pronouns
he/him

Chapter 7.5: The Kitchen Sovereignty​




The transition from the hollow silence of the living room to the frantic energy of the kitchen was like watching a black-and-white film suddenly burst into Technicolor. Delia Ketchum hadn't even taken off her sun hat before she had effectively annexed the industrial-grade kitchen. The "Marble" high-tech appliances, designed for efficiency and sleekness, were now covered in flour, cutting boards, and a chaotic array of Pallet Town spices.
"Ash, don't just stand there leaning against the marble like a brooding statue!" Delia shouted over the sizzle of a frying pan. "Peel those onions. And Goh, honey, put that Rotom-Phone away. If I see one more data chart before dinner, I’m going to personally recalibrate your frequency with this wooden spoon."
Goh jumped, nearly dropping the device that held the "Black Files" of every criminal in Kalos. "Yes, ma'am! Onions. Right. I’m on it."
Across the island, Grace was moving with the precision of a Rhyhorn racer, though her current obstacle was a pile of Kalosian greens. She looked at Serena, who was standing awkwardly by the sink, still wearing the crimson dress that cost more than a mid-sized sedan.
"Serena, dear," Grace said, her voice a sharp contrast to Delia’s warmth. "You look like a Queen on that balcony, but in this kitchen, you look like a girl who hasn't held a whisk in a month. Tie your hair back. We are making a Magost Berry glaze, and I will not have 'Marble’' dust ruining the flavor profile."
Serena smiled, a genuine, tired sparkle returning to her blue eyes. "Yes, Mom."
The mansion, which usually vibrated with the low, 850 bHz hum of Ash’s resonance, was now vibrating with something entirely different. It was the sound of clinking silverware, the bubbling of stew, and the sharp, rhythmic chopping of vegetables. The "Tense" air of the Geosenge aftermath was being scrubbed away by the sheer force of maternal will.
Clemont sat at the small breakfast nook, watching them. He still looked hollow the hug from Delia had cracked his shell, but the grief was still leaking out. He looked at his hands, the same hands that had built the "Ultimate Void" sensors, and felt a strange sense of uselessness.
"Clemont," Goh whispered, sliding a pile of peeled onions toward him. "Help me with these. My eyes are watering, and I can't tell if it’s the onions or the fact that my mom just told me I have 'narrow shoulders' for a Reaper."
Clemont let out a weak, shaky laugh. He picked up a knife, his 170 IQ focusing on the simple, geometric perfection of a diced onion. "The math of a stew is much simpler than the math of a bHz spike, Goh. It’s... refreshing."
Ash, meanwhile, was working in silence next to his mother. He felt the "Obsidian" edge in his soul receding, replaced by a grounded, heavy warmth. For eight years, he had chased the horizon, always looking for the next battle, the next badge, the next "Master" title. But standing here, smelling the Pallet Town stew, he realized that the "King" persona was just a suit of armor he wore to keep from falling apart.
"You're thinking too much, Ash," Delia said, not looking up from her pot. "I can feel your brain whirring from here. You're trying to figure out how a dinner fits into the 'Declaration of War' you gave on TV."
Ash paused, his knife hovering over a potato. "It doesn't fit, Mom. The world is still broken. AZ’s remnants are still out there. The 'Anomalies' haven't stopped existing just because you're making stew."
Delia stopped stirring. She turned to him, her expression serious. "The world has been broken for three thousand years, Ash. It’ll be broken tomorrow, and it’ll be broken a hundred years from now. But your friends? They’re breaking now. Clemont hasn't looked at the sun in three days. Goh looks like he’s forgotten how to breathe without a monitor. And you..." she reached out, wiping a smudge of soot from his forehead, "you look like you’ve forgotten that you’re eighteen."
"I have a responsibility, Mom," Ash said, his voice dropping into that deep, Kingly register. "The League gave us immunity. They gave us the leash. If I don't hold it, who will?"
"Let the girl hold it for an hour," Delia whispered, nodding toward Serena, who was laughing at something Grace had said. "She’s the only one who isn't afraid of the monster you think you've become. Now, finish the potatoes. The 'Heroes' need to eat."
Dinner was served at the long, oak table the one usually covered in maps and bHz charts. Tonight, it was covered in white linen and steaming bowls of food. The four parents sat amongst the four vigilantes, filling the gaps in the conversation that usually hung heavy with grief.
They talked about the old days. They laughed about Ash’s first battle with Brock, about Serena’s first performance, and about the time Goh tried to catch a Magikarp with his bare hands. For two hours, the "Obsidian Heroes" didn't exist. They were just kids.
But as the meal wound down, the silence returned, settling over them like a soft blanket. They all looked at the four-foot Dedenne plushie sitting in the chair at the head of the table. Delia had placed a small bowl of fruit in front of it, a silent acknowledgement that the "little girl" was still part of the family.
"The silence is different tonight," Clemont whispered, looking at the plushie. "It doesn't feel like a grave. It feels like... a memory."
"That's because memories aren't supposed to be cold, Clemont," Grace said, her voice uncharacteristically soft. "They're supposed to be lived in."
As the mothers began to clear the table, refusing to let the "Heroes" lift a finger, Ash walked out onto the balcony once more. The Lumiose night was bright, the neon veins of the city pulsing below. But he didn't scan for bHz spikes. He didn't look for anomalies. He just looked at the stars.
Serena stepped out behind him, wrapping her arms around his waist. "Gonna cry, Ash?" she teased, her voice a soft, romantic echo of his own sinister taunt.
Ash leaned back into her, his heart rate a steady, peaceful 60 bHz. "Not a chance," he whispered. "But I think the 'Monster' is taking the night off."
"Good," Serena replied, resting her head on his shoulder. "Because the 'Queen' wants to see the sunrise without having to check the monitors."
Downstairs, the sound of a mother’s laughter echoed through the vents, and for the first time since the world broke, the Obsidian Mansion felt like it was finally, truly, standing on solid ground.



TO BE CONTINUED​

 
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kingvoid

Owner of the famous Void-Greninja
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he/him
Very intaresting review
Review for

Intro and chapter 1
erm what the sigma?
I swear this piece is half ninja. it disapaered under me amd took my firat review with it.
greninja is doing shi rn
Gaaaasp, no gio?
i cannot confirm or deny that
well the intro helps a bit... i tapped out of the anime after orange islands so i'm dreadfully behind...
um very bad for u bro
Whike i get ash is canonically older (your helpful notes squared that up) i'm a bit baffled as to the emphasis on his height difference and voice changes. Unless they happened recently.

Curious to see spirit explored...
yea the anime cannonically has a 9 month distance from alola and journeys due to kukui's baby and yes they did change recently.
I thought everyones eyes looked like that. Bet goh lives off energy drimks too...
No they don't, and bro lives off coffee tons of it.
Blinks. Methinks i mised a lot of canon.
bro ur cooked bro u are cooked i reccomend u watch the team flare arc of xyz and the ending of it to get a bigger grasp on the story , it mainly revolves around xy content

The computer heavy analogy seems almost digimon in flavor.
do not speak of digimon on this thread bro.
Ummm it seems like Cerise is going to.get a front view reading on wjats happening. Wonder if the walls are.gunna survive?
bro is um tracking the surrounding area's bhz, so bro saw a massive spike.
One... i'm wonder when ash went from happy go lucky to casually does property damage to his host.. intentionally (aged uo after all doesnt mean grim dark, his word choice and stoicsm compared tonhis younger attitude are planting warning signs he went all grim dark)
it is very grimdark and he had that change from xyz's team flare arc i will give a full rewrite of the alolan league instead some random shenanigans
I mean company he keeps and all that probably isnt helping... Cerise reminds me of Colorless from Plasma a bit... if the man got a bit more energetic?
IDK what to say on that shi
Since its the same line the second ash and goh could be replaced by they...
bro its a diff line 💀
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Interesting way to show off flashback...
flashback no it's the same feeling.
my geeky mind immediatly went vines=memes because part because of all the little tech nods part becauae sleepy...

also saw 2x corrupted right next toneach other thought you might want to change it up.
VINE BOOM sound effect. and i don't wanna change it I LIKUH A CHICKEN TIKKA MASALA
feelsnthe feeling? What does that feeling feel loke, heat, tingling, aura trying to pjsh out of his body... also why is ash so empowered w a tie to a king?

also feel and feelong are roght next to each other on tje same line...
I will specify the feeling and how many damn spelling mistakes do u have , and ash is OP as shit training arc happened here is his physique from the training as a reference
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ok ts the physique he has op as shiit
well jopefully ash can win against saod vine. Speaking of the word vine saw 6x instances od nit in... one line...
it is 2 lines bruv


tips head either goh is earning an aplus in "ignores canon" or ash os going to show off and fiwld it without a mon...
Goh is gonna earn a F- in my fic's battle logic
i hesitatw to call a vine a grass type... much less one riddled with corruption... but between gohs cpmment and ashs use of ice beam hes got a ppint...
The meta reason is its funny and the in fic reason is Goh is wrong here it doesn't have a typing Goh is assuming.
so the combats written a lot like an anouncer would narrate...

so bonds as in x/y evolution, gigamancing, z movong, or actual merging (theres so mamy cues from dragon ball z its a slioper slope here) i think itd help to slow doen a little and show what ash is actuallyndling and how kinetic energy being absorved loos lome ect to make the fighting more personal...

as a system tho cpmbat hasnt strayed far from the games formula yet...
Bond as in the battle bond from xyz with Ash and Greninja having a battle bond form
? Why is genius cappitalized? Is it a name?
I may not confirm or deny that.
i dont remember goh being married tonhis tech tjis hard in canon.. is this a fanon reinterpretation?
bro loves his tech bro go- nvm
snoets. I'm thinkong some background showing what experiences in those 2 years helped him change migjt help a bit bridge this ash from most peoples concepts of canon ash... bjt for nkw his presemce is an exlerience....
That will be shown in some like time
I see pairongs are not gping to be a question in this story, at all.
Romance the thing is romance is heavy in this story
um ew... turn off that. Bet she swoons into it though.
Amourshipping fans will hunt you for that sentence.
yeah, called it. I'm not much for romance so i'm not going to comment here.
Your choice.
Well that was an experience. Thanks for being patient and thanks for sharonf.
lots of spelling mistakes and couldn't grasp your thoughts clearly
Thanks for the review here is a SKULLCANDY VOUCHER and a voucher for chicken tikka masala at raj chicken
 
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