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CHAPTER 19: Killer Instinct New

GingerTheBarnOwl

Bug Catcher
Pronouns
she/her
"Diglett'zzz Tunnel again? I dunno, bucko...He's a Rock-Type, and the Diglett are both Ground AND Steel-Types. It might be a bit too much!"

{Don't worry, Rotom. It looks like most of the Diglett have gone back underground, so they shouldn't be much of a problem. And the Zubat we run into should be a cinch for him, right? He's got a MAJOR advantage there.}

"Well, that's true. Bzzt!"

A shrill screech pierced the quiet cave atmosphere, and the image of fluttering membranous wings came into view.

{Here's one of those flying pests now. Tyrunt! Show this Zubat who's boss!}

I chucked his Poké Ball, and the scaly brown Pokémon materialized on the ground in front of me, seeming slightly dubious about his opponent.

{I don't like the look of this thing,} he grunted.

{Just do your best against it!} I called out to him. {You're the one with the double type advantage here, so it should be easy!}

{Well...Alright, then...}

He assumed a fighting stance and let out a low, threatening growl at the Poison-Type fluttering before us.

{What kind of moves do you know?}

{Well...I know how to Bite.}

{Let's start off with that, then!}

He nodded back at me, then charged at the Zubat, mouth wide open. Before it could zip out of the way, he clamped down right into the small Pokemon's middle, and it emitted a pained squeak before falling to the ground, completely motionless.

{That's how you do it! Excellent, Tyrunt!}

{Um...What do we do with it?}

{What do we...do with it?} I repeated back to him. {We just leave it. It should get back up on its own soon and fly away.}

{...I don't know about that, Alpha.}

I tilted my head in confusion as I peered down at the Zubat...A crimson puddle was beginning to form around the Pokémon, spilling from the gaping holes in its caved-in middle, which sat without a rise or a fall in sight.

{Wait...Did...did you...?}

"Ah, yup. Looks like it's pushin' up daisies," Rotom confirmed. "Thingzzz like this just happen sometimes..."

{Isn't that what you wanted me to do, though?} he asked me.

{What, I...? No,} I answered him, glowering down at the Royal Heir Pokémon, not at all happy with this. {What gave you the idea to flat out KILL it? You were supposed to fight it and only make it faint, not do something like that.}

"Ah, hey, come on, g-go easy on him, boss, " my PokéDex buzzed. "I mean, h-he's only been restored for half an hour. And that was how Tyrunt fed themselves back then! So a Zubat bit the dust...It could have been worse, right? There are too many Zubat in here, anyway! Besides, lotzzz of other Pokémon eat each other, too, remember?"

I sighed deeply.

{...I suppose you have a point, Rotom,} I decided. {But still. Unless I give you specific instructions to do so, you aren't allowed to kill other Pokémon under any circumstances, Tyrunt. Understood?}

{But...What are we supposed to eat, then?}

{There are lots of things we can choose from. You should see what they have at the Thrifty Megamart. It's a PARADISE of food. And the best part is you don't have to kill anything.}

{Can we go there after this?} he asked.

{Ah...Maybe wait until after the Grand Trial. In the mean time, I guess...well...I guess you can eat the Zubat, since it's already dead? May as well not leave it here to rot.}

{That works alright.}

I watched him, a bit apprehensively, as he picked up the dead Pokémon in his jaws, flung it into the air, and then with one quick snap, slid it down his throat. Something panged deep inside of me, despite my initial concern over the situation.

...Was I right to be upset with this?

It was food, after all.

Don't shun what he was made to do.

...What YOU were made to do.


The phantom voice in my head caught my attention, my eyes still glued onto Tyrunt eating the unfortunate Zubat. That voice...I wished it would just go away and never come back ever again. It'd almost lead me to do terrible things in the recent past...But I'd changed since my days of ripping strange creatures that found their way into the Paddock to shreds. I was a civilized creature, now...Right?

Well, one thing was for sure; whenever I found just what or who was behind me gaining the ability to understand such concepts in the first place, I'd be sure to thank them.

{Alright, Tyrunt. Let's see if we can find more Zubat. But make sure not to KILL anymore, understand?}

{Yes...I understand.}

"Say, bucko. Since we're on the topic of hunting and stuff, I wanted to ask you. What exzzzactly was it like hunting the way you did back in your old home?" Rotom asked, seeming curious about the whole ordeal.

{Well...Usually something would be let out loose into our Paddock...Most often, it was some sort of pink creature that ran around on all fours and...It made the most awful-sounding squeal. Especially whenever we were right on top of them, and when we caught them...We always thought they were stupid, but looking back, it seems to me that those things were at least smart enough to know just how much danger they were in.}

"Oh, wow...How'd you guyzzz do 'em in?"

{We had...a lot of ways of doing it. A bite to the head paired with a quick jolt to snap the neck, a swipe of the hand to the throat, throwing it against the wall...Once it was down, one of us, usually Beta, used the big claw on her foot to slice it's stomach open. She got to eat first; she was the Beta, after all, and Alpha didn't partake in our hunts...He was a human, so he didn't eat in such a manner.}

{And then, when Beta was done, what did you and your old pack do?} Tyrunt asked, sniffing into a crevice and disturbing another Zubat. I sighed at the question, and answered them grimly.

{We...tore whatever was left to shreds like we hadn't eaten in days. Flesh ripped, bones crunched...Blood flew all over the place.}

I breathed in through my nostrils, almost able to smell the heavy, metallic scent of the red liquid that spilled from everything me and my sisters ever killed. What was worse was that the mere thought of it made me hungry.

{To think,} I continued. {At one point in my life, I saw that as nothing more than what I had to do to survive...Now that I know I have other options, I can't help but feel shame over it.}

"Aw, come on, Echo. Sure, it was pretty brutal, but like I said it'zzz how the food chain works! In fact, didn't the Professor feed you with big ol' slabzzz of meat for a couple days while we were there? They probably came from something like a Raticate, or something! Bzzt!"

{Did it?} I chittered.

"Yep! Hey, you know, we actually have a lot of Rattata and Raticate in these partzzz! So much that people are actually concerned they'll overpopulate and eat up all the food. Then there wouldn't be enough to go around for other Pokémon, and they would...um...Well, a lot of them would starve to death, probably. The Yungoos and Gumshoos prey on the Rattata themselves, but...only during the day, when there aren't as many around, so it'zzz not quite as affective as people thought it'd be. Call me crazzzy, but I don't think people would mind you helping to pick some of them off! Kzzrt!"

{You...think so?}

"Wouldn't surprise me! " he exclaimed. "Hey, next time we see one, let'zzz take it out! I don't like those things much myself..."

{I'll...think about that,} I answered. {In the mean time, let's keep it up and battle out way out of the cave.}

"Got it! Hey, there's another Zubat right up there!"

Sure enough, there was, and we engaged in combat. As we continued to fight our way through Diglett's Tunnel, it turned out that Tyrunt did know a few other moves besides Bite; Stomp, Tackle and Dragon Tail to be exact. I was pleasantly surprised at just how powerful his Dragon Tail was compared to his other moves, and it was able to knock out most Zubat in just one hit. The only problem was that with those it didn't one-shot, the Pokémon became disoriented, and flew after us...in the opposite direction we were in. So we got no chance to beat them if they toughed it out. Therefore, we resorted to using the move only after we'd inflicted a bit of damage with his other attacks already, and with every battle, Tyrunt continued to get stronger and more adept to the battlefield.

Zubat weren't the only Pokémon we ran into, however. There were still a few Diglett roaming around, and with Tyrunt having a bad type matchup against them, I opted to return him and use either Red or Dartrix in his place. Being my two strongest Pokémon, they were able to handle them without a sweat. I was pleased by their strength; despite both being part Flying-Type, their Fighting and Grass Type Moves would give Olivia's Rock-Types something to watch out for. Surely at this rate, the next Grand Trial wouldn't prove much of a challenge for us, either, would it?

But a quick stop at the Kokikoni City Pokémon Center would do us some good before the fight; as tough as we'd gotten, I wanted everyone in peak condition, just to prepare for any tricks Kahuna Olivia might have up her sleeve. That, and the fact I needed a drink. And some potions...And maybe some more Poké beans, if the barista had any for us this time around. My to-do list had suddenly become longer again; at that rate, I wouldn't be battling the Kahuna until the evening. Not that it was a bad thing, but if I took TOO long, Olivia might head home for the night and I'd have to wait until tomorrow.

{Rotom, what time is it?}

"According to my internal clock, it'zzz 5:12 p.m.!" he buzzed as we turned down Route 9 and headed into the city again. "Oh, way to time our pit stop; having a battle like the Grand Trial during the hottest part of the day might do a number on ya! Zzt!"

I nodded, then continued down the road and turned into the Pokémon Center. I knew the drill; heal the team, buy some potions, and order something from the cafe. On paper, it sounded like we'd be in and out, but I wanted to take my time a little; I'd rather arrive at Memorial Hiil right at dusk when it started to cool down. With that in mind, I stocked up on more Super Potions than I expected to, and then Rotom and I got into a conversation with the barista on how me and the Tyrunt we'd just restored could communicate with each other and how I could utilize that in the Grand Trial. Upon hearing all of this, I got my wish of having my supply of Poké beans replenished, since he was just as hopeful that I would complete the trial as I was.

{I think I remember someone else saying something about an island where I can collect my own Poké beans for my Pokémon. Is that the case?}

"Oh, the Poké Pelago! Yes, yes, Pokémon stored away in PCs are transported over there, and they enjoy themselves on the islands until their Trainer calls them back out! It's to the far north of Ula'ula Island. You can only get there via flying, though, so it'd be useful to have a glide Pokémon on your ride pager."

{I do have a Charizard I can call; I want to be at Memorial Hill at dusk tonight, so I shouldn't spend too much time walking around in the heat of the day...I might see if I can restock on beans there at some point, then. With five Pokémon on the team, I'm may need a lot.}

"Yep! Frankly, I can't wait until then! Bzzt!"

{I can see that...} I chittered. {Well...It's about time to head down there. Thanks for the drink and beans, mister.}

"Good luck against the Kahuna!"

With that, I headed out the door, turned back south and trotted along the side of the road, leaving Konikoni City once more and taking Route 9 towards Memorial Hill. As we headed towards a curve and into a valleyed section of the road, I caught sight of a maze of hedges up ahead. And when we entered into the maze, I saw that the path was lined with smoothly cut stones in several places, decorated with intricate engravings and flowers placed in front of some of them. They each had someone's name written into them as well.

{So, Rotom. Why exactly is it called Memorial Hill? What are we remembering?}

"Well, Memorial Hill is a cemetery! The old, mighty families of Alola were buried here when they died, so it'zzz sort of a historical landmark, you know?"

{Oh...Is...That what you do with friends and family that've died?}

"Sure is! And there's another cemetery back on Melemele Island, too! A lot of Ghost-Type Pokémon tend to linger around places like those...Probably becauzzze they like to give people the spooks, and graveyards sometimes give off that creepy aura. Especially during the night...Guess it's a good thing Tyrunt knows Bite! That'll teach any Ghost-Type that triezzz to tangle with us, won't it?"

{I would think,} I replied. {...Hey, wait a minute. Didn't you say you were a Ghost-Type too, Rotom?}

"Well, yeah, but I'm not one to find enjoyment in scarin' people out of their skin. Other Rotom, though? I hear they like to sneak into houses, possess whatever machine they can on the sly and play poltergeist! Soundzzz freaky, huh?"

"Eesh..." I hissed, shuddering a bit at the idea of such a thing. {But you're different from them. You wouldn't do that, would you?}

"Never to you, bucko! Now, an unsuspecting Team Skull grunt on the other hand..."

{Ha! That'd be fun to watch!}

"No kidding! Hey, it'd teach 'em for threatening to give me a toaster bath! I might be an Electric-Type, but if this Dex went in that water, I'd be fried with it! Hey, maybe I should possess their toaster! Then they might-"

{Be here right now.}

"Huh?"

We'd just gotten out of the cemetery. Blocking the path were two of those familiar-looking skull grunts, and it looked like two other people had beaten us to a confrontation with them. By the looks of their own uniforms, I guessed that they were members of the Aether Foundation...That gave me some reassurance.

But even so, it didn't look like the grunts would be giving up the Pokémon without some convincing.

"Team Skull! For the last time! Give back that Pokémon!" the first demanded. The squabble must have been going on for a bit before I arrived.

"Lo-o-ow...?"

When I tilted my head to see where the noise came from, I realized that the grunts had a hostage in the form of a Slowpoke: I recognized it by the look of its tail, which I'd seen all over the place in the Thrifty Megamart.

"Hey! Yo! Don't gimmie trouble! I'll reduce you to rubble!"

"That's right! We gon' sell this Pokémon and make bank, and we won't make no bones about it! You want it back? You're gonna have to get past us to take it!"

The one Aether employee was starting to look nervous about the situation, and the other turned to face her.

"Stand firm! Think of what the president would say!" he ordered. He had a bit of a different styled uniform, accented with green, and looking more slick and business-made than meant for field work.

"That's what you always say, Chief, but you don't lift a finger yourself!" she snapped back, seemingly annoyed with him.

"You haven't a clue what you're talking about. Why, I am the Aether Foundation's last line of defense! What would become of it if something were to happen to me now?"

His snobbish aura even captured the attention of Team Skull. They hadn't said anything themselves, but the look in their eyes told how unamused they were better than any words could...And frankly, that was the one thing I'd ever agreed with them on.

The 'Chief' turned slightly, seeming to think for a moment about what he should do, and was quick to spot me out of the corner of his eye. He nearly jumped right out of his lab coat upon seeing me, and once he did that, everyone started looking in my direction.

"Aw, naw..." one of the Team Skull grunts muttered. "That's Scarface, ain't it?"

"Looks it, from what I heard. Hear 'bout what she did to Grunt?"

"Which grunt?"

"The grunt with the marks on his face!"

"What'd she do?"

"She gave him the marks, you bonehead!"

"Oh..."

"You know what this creature is?" the Chief asked them.

"Oh! Allow me to explain, Aether Foundation members!" Rotom stepped in. "Believe it or not, she'zzz a trial-goer! We were just on our way to meet Kahuna Olivia now! Word about us has been spreadin' around the islandzzz lately, so a lot of people already know about her, but if you wanna know more, Professor Kukui is your best bet!"

"Ah...And how strong is your team, Miss, eh...What's her name?"

"Scarface," the other grunt chimed in without skipping a beat.

"Would you two stop with that for once!? It's ECHO! Not Scarface! Get your facts straight! Bzzz...!"

Rotom slid away into my bag for safety before the hooligans had a chance to threaten him again like the last time.

"Echo, you say...Ah...Well, then!" he perked up, regaining his composure. "If you're a trial-goer, and you've made it to Akala Island, that must mean you have a fairly strong team on hand! I ask that you fight in my stead and rout these Team Skull ruffians. I will bestow honor upon you, if you do!"

{I don't know why these thugs aren't afraid of me by now,} I growled. {...I intend to change that, though.}

"Ready to know what defeat tastes like?" the first grunt challenged, pulling a Poké Ball out. "I was born ready for this, yo! Raticate! Show 'em!"

He tossed his fighter out into the field, and upon seeing the Raticate, I cringed. It was worn and battered from previous battles, not to mention quite a bit older-looking than most of the other Pokémon I'd seen in the wild so far. It was safe to assume that its Trainer was not taking care of it right, but knowing Team Skull I wasn't that surprised.

"So who you gonna send out to get beat, huh!?"

{...The newest member of the team. He needs to practice showing you guys a lesson, anyways.}

With that, I tossed the capsule into the air.

{Tyrunt! Let's go!}

The ball opened, and the Royal Heir Pokémon materialized on the ground before its opponent, letting out a sharp snarl of a battle cry.

"Raticate! Take 'em down with Pursuit!"

The Pokémon huffed, then got down on all fours, pursuing its target at a not-so-impressive speed. I wasn't really sure if it was it's natural weight dragging it down or the fact that it barely had the strength left to fight.

It would make it an easy opponent, at least.

{Try your Dragon Tail on it, Tyrunt!}

He turned and readied his tail, and it started to glow purple as he drew it back. The enemy Pokémon was nearly upon him when he sent it flying into its face, and upon the impact, the Raticate was thrown in the opposite direction and rolled to a halt on the ground right before its Trainer's feet.

It got back up within seconds, but it was obvious that it was struggling.

"Come on, Raticate! Don't be such a bag o' bones!"

"Rrrr..." it growled back at him.

"Don't just stand there! Take 'em down with Tackle!"

It started running at us again, and Tyrunt lowered his head as the Raticate approached, readying a headbutt.

{Get up to speed, Tyrunt! Counter-Tackle! You're head is harder!}

At my command, the fossil Pokémon began to charge at his opponent head on. Each of them were readying a collision against the other, skulls pointed forward, and finally, the two fighters made contact.

...There was an echoing CRACK, and with a flick of his head after the initial hit, Tyrunt flung the enemy to the side.

Again, the Raticate rolled limply across the field before tumbling to a stop...But this time, it lay there motionless except for the shallow rise and fall of its middle as it struggled even to breathe.

It tried to lift itself back onto its feet, a dazed, hollow look in its eye, and it scanned the battlefield looking for its attacker. Despite Tyrunt standing merely a couple yards away from it, the Raticate took several long moments to acknowledge his presence. When it finally did, the black and tan Pokémon fell on all fours and stumbled forward, though it seemed to get weaker and weaker every second.

...I knew that glazed look in the creature's eyes all too well.

It didn't have much time left.

It's on its way out.

...Finish the job.


I tensed. No. Not that again. I shook my head in denial of what it was telling me to do. I couldn't do that. It had a Trainer, anyways. I couldn't...It was...Besides, it was only a matter of time before...

...But seeing it suffering like that, getting worse every second...Was that what its last moments were to be like? With increasingly worse pain until it finally lost its last bit of life...?

...Maybe it's not as wrong as I think.

I took a deep breath, and let it out as a shaky gurgle, and I called out to the fossil Pokémon still awaiting my next command.

{Tyrunt...} I chittered.

{Alpha...Is it...?}

I nodded, emitting one more sigh before I gave out the final order.

{...Use Bite.}

He nodded grimly in understanding, then approached the Raticate, locking eyes with it for just a moment as he drew near and placed his powerful jaws on its head.

{...I'm sorry it had to be like this,} I heard him growl.

The Mouse Pokémon let out a sigh of its own, almost sounding content as Tyrunt steadied it with his foot and jerked his head off to the side. There was another crack, and the Raticate twitched its toes ever so slightly before falling completely still.

Everyone stared at the scene playing out on the battleground. The grunts, the Aether employees, me myself...None of us really wanted to believe what'd happened, but we'd all witnessed it with our own eyes.

There was no denying it...That Raticate was dead.

Its owner was staring directly at me now, eyes wide and his form as still as stone. I simply shook my head at him, and he staggered backwards.

"Yo...I...What'd you...?"

"Dude, snap out of it! We ain't got no more Pokémon. She could do THAT to US with her OWN snappy jaws if she wanted, if her puny Tyrunt can do that!"

"Screw it, then! Take your dumb Slowpoke! Good luck and good riddance! Come on bro, let's scram!"

The two grunts scrambled past us and disappeared into Memorial Hill, thoroughly intimidated. The owner of the Raticate didn't even bother paying respects to it; he simply abandoned the dead body where it lay.

The Slowpoke that'd been behind them wasn't really aware of the situation at hand, but Tyrunt approached it anyways, nudging it and examining it with his keen nose just to make sure the Team Skull grunts hadn't done anything to harm it, either.

He nodded back to me, letting me know that it was fine. And to show the (still shocked) members of the Aether Foundation that I meant no harm to this Pokémon, I went over myself, carefully scooped the pink Pokémon up in my clawed hands and brought it over to them, passing it on to the field employee.

"Uh...Thank you. For that," she told me, still a bit shaken. "Yeah...Those Team Skull thugs have been after Slowpoke a lot lately. They...cut off their tails and sell them to try and make a profit, since they're so valuable. It doesn't really hurt them, and they grow back quickly, but...It's still not right to just hack them off without any consideration for the Pokémon. Especially with wild Slowpoke like this one, since they need their tails to fish."

{...You're absolutely right,} I nodded, Rotom re-emerging from my pack to translate for me. {Team Skull couldn't care less about the wellbeing of the Pokémon they train. Or steal, in Slowpoke's case. It seems like they have a history of it, judging by...}

The two of us looked back at the Raticate corpse on the ground, then turned back to face each other. The human sighed, the expression on her face softening.

"...I watched you out there. I-it's not your fault. Really, it isn't. Tyrunt are only so strong, and Tackle isn't a very powerful move anyways. If that Raticate had been well looked after, then you...You wouldn't have had to do what you did. And I'm sorry it came down to that."

{In all honesty,} I chattered. {I'm at least glad that it's not suffering anymore. Not under Team Skull or from that head wound.}

"Yeah...In this line of work, it's not uncommon to see neglected Pokémon having to be put down."

"Hmm...There are too many Raticate on these islands anyways," the Chief remarked, not seeming to care much for the deceased Raticate himself. "And the same goes to their pre-evolved forms. Overpopulation can be just as much a problem as dwindling population, you know...And maybe what you did will teach those ruffians to finally wizen up a bit. As for you...Despite the performance I just beheld, it seems to me that you are a very skilled Trainer who cares deeply for other Pokémon like yourself."

"'Other?' Uh, pardon us, mister, but she'zzz not a Pokémon herself."

He rose an eyebrow at Rotom's claim.

"...No? Well, then what on earth is she?"

"Something called a 'Velociraptor,' according to her. Like I said, the Professor can tell you more about it! He's the one who found and studied her in the first place, after all! Bzzrt!"

"Professur Kukui, ah yes...But anyways, where was I...? Oh. As I was saying, Miss, erm...'Echo,' if I remember right?"

I nodded.

"Well, then. For your vigilance in the face of danger, I should like to reward you. When you complete your Grand Trial, meet me at Hano Grand Resort in Heahea City. From there, we will board a ferry to the Aether Foundation Headquarters, and I shall grant you a tour. Sound good to you?"

{The Aether Foundation Headquarters, you say...? I might be interested. You do help Pokémon, after all, and that's one thing I can get on board with.}

"Excellent. See you there. Come along, Intern! We have things to do!"

"You mean I have things to do..."

The Chief simply rolled his eyes and headed off, the employee following not far behind.

"Hey, thanks again for the help. Good luck with the Grand Trial! Although, I might, ah...do something about that Raticate. I'd take care of it myself, but it seems like the Branch Chief here has other plans for me."

{I'll think of something.} I assured her. {Good luck with the Branch Chief.}

"Heh, yeah...See you, then."

She ran to catch up with the Branch Chief, who was already halfway through Memorial Hill, seemingly unaware that his underling was not following him.

"Well, that wazzz certainly something, " my PokéDex buzzed. "Your thoughts? "

{The intern was okay, but I don't really know about that Branch Chief guy,} I remarked, sending a bit of a glare in his direction. {There's something about him that just rubs me the wrong way.}

"Yeah, I know what you mean. And if what she was saying about him not actually doing anything to help anyone is true, then that's an extra red flag goin' up there."

{It seems that way...Now. The Raticate. Should we bury it in the cemetery, Rotom?}

"I don't think people are being buried in Memorial Hill anymore, much less Pokémon. I don't think it'd be a good idea to disturb the grounds...And another thing; it looks like Tyrunt's thought of another idea."

{What? What do you-}

I turned back, and watched as the Fossil Pokémon rose his head. Both the Raticate's now gaping side and Tyrunt's jaws were spattered with blood.

{...Are you EATING it, Tyrunt!?}

{Yes...What about the conversation we all had in Diglett's Tunnel?}

{Yeah, I remember, but...I was talking about WILD Rattata and Raticate. This one was TRAINED. Eating a trained Pokémon isn't right, is it Rotom?}

"Well, probably not...But to be fair, I don't think that Team Skull grunt isn't coming back for it. And Tyrunt's already started on it, so if you're hungry then now'zz your chance to grab some grub!"

{Well...It'll fill us up and energize us for the next battle, I guess. And didn't you say it was Raticate meat that the Professor gave me in the Lab?}

"That'zzz what I said!"

{Well...Alright, then.}

I shrugged, then approached the already partially-eaten Pokémon, steadied it with my foot and tore a chunk out of its side. I smacked my lips a bit at the sensation of the creature's fur in my mouth; back when we lived in the Paddock, my sisters and I had always eaten the fur on a creature, be it fine or thick. But having not eaten anything that still had fur on it since my arrival in Alola, it looked like it would take some getting used to again.

"So, I'm actually kinda curious myself...What's it taste like?"

{Hm...I'm only now realizing how fatty this is. The actual meat doesn't taste half bad, though.}

"A Rattata would probably be a bit leaner, since they don't sit around their nest all day. Keep that in mind when you start lookin' for stuff in the wild!"

{Why do you ask? Did you want any?}

I tore a small chunk from the Pokémon's ribcage and held it out towards him, but he floated backwards away from it.

"Ah, no, that'zzz fine," he assured. "I'll stick to the beans."

{Once we're done here, I'll have to get those out,} I growled. {...I hope nobody we know sees what's going on here. They'd probably get the wrong-}

"Um...Is this a bad time?"

I rose my head, and there stood none other than...

"Uh-oh."

{Oh, no...} I chattered. {I just...It...It's not what it looks like, Hau.}

He continued to stare at our meal, eyes wide.

{...Okay, it's exactly what it looks like. But it was a mercy kill! I swear! Besides, this is what the Professor fed me while I was at the lab, and...! And...Ah...}

I gave up there, certain that Hau wasn't at all convinced. To my good fortune, however...

"Uh...Well, I mean...You can't live of malasadas, I guess. And the Professor feeds a lot of Pokémon he looks after Raticate meat, so..."

He shrugged.

"Eh. I'm not one to judge."

"Phew..." I breathed. {For a moment there, I thought you were gonna freak out.}

"Well, I almost did," he admitted. "But, like, that's a Raticate. Not a person. No way you'd ever do that to me or Lillie, I know that much."

{Certainly not. Ah...What brings you this way, Hau? Off to battle the Kahuna, too?}

"Actually I heard you were headin' this way over at Olivia's shop, so I wanted to watch the fight! See what you and your Pokémon have got up your sleeves! I probably won't battle her myself until tomorrow morning, so if I can take a few notes while I'm at it, that oughta be good!"

{Not a problem with me. Rotom. You still have the time?}

"The time right now izzz 6:25: p.m.! And according to my internal thermometer, the temperature's starting to drop!"

{Perfect. We'll be on our way, Hau.}

"Awesome!"

{Right after we finish dinner.}

"Oh."

He deflated slightly.

"Eh...You guys are halfway done anyways, so that's fine."

"Hey, Echo. Make sure you clean up your face before we head out. If the Island Kahuna saw you like that, she'd probably have a lotta questions for ya! Kzzt!"

{Noted...But if we walked up to a couple Team Skull grunts like this...}

"Ha! We're terrible, aren't we?"

{To Team Skull? Wonderfully terrible. But to our friends? I'd rather be terribly wonderful.}

"Heh heh...Well put, there, boss."
 
CHAPTER 20: Setbacks New

GingerTheBarnOwl

Bug Catcher
Pronouns
she/her
{One more time! Hit 'em with Aerial Ace!}

It turned out there were a couple of Trainers past the graveyard, and I found myself battling one that'd spotted me in the field, and he sent out a sturdy Hariyama as his fighter. Little did he know that I had two Flying-Types to use against him, and the next thing we each knew, Red had struck once, then twice, and the enemy fell to the ground in defeat. The opposing Trainer returned his Pokémon, then congratulated my win.

"Ha! You played that battle well! GG for short!" he told me. "Though if you're on your way to battle the Island Kahuna, I advise that you be careful when using Flying-Types against her. You can hit her Rock-Types with super-effective moves, but they can do the same right back! And they're pretty burly to boot!"

{I have that kept in mind,} I assured him. {I do have an Eevee and a Tyrunt on the team too, so they should balance things out well enough.}

"Tyrunt, you say? Well, well...Fighting Rock with Rock. Sounds like a battle! Good luck to you!"

I nodded, then weaved back through the beaten path among the grass to where Hau had battled someone else. Judging by the huge grin on his face, I guessed that it'd gone pretty well for him, too.

{Did you win?}

"Heck yeah, I did! That guy had a pretty scary-lookin' Gyarados, but all Raichu had to give 'em was one Thunderbolt and it was down! And his Staryu was no problem...We weren't even scratched!"

{Raichu...?}

"Huh? Oh, yeah. Didn't tell you 'bout that, yet," he remembered, extracting a Poké Ball. "Well, I'm about to! Come on back out, Raichu!"

His Pokémon materialized before him, and it turned out to be, quite obviously, the evolved form of his Pikachu. It hovered in midair, sitting on the flat end of its tail and staring up at me with its round, blue eyes. It'd come a long way from the little Pichu I'd first encountered it as.

"Chu..." it squeaked, clenching its tiny fists in attempt to impress me.

{Yeah, you remember me, don't you?} I snickered. {But you're not so scared of me anymore, huh?}

"N'aw, he ain't," Hau nodded. "Hey, check this out?"

I nodded, and Hau bent down to face the Electric-Type Pokémon, reached his hand out and gently rubbed one of its bright yellow cheeks.

Instantly, I detected a scent coming from that spot. I stepped closer to better analyze the aroma, and it turned out to smell something like...

{...How many Malasadas have you been feeding your Pokémon, Hau?}

He snorted, then chuckled.

"That's not malasada you're smellin', pal," he corrected lightly, still overcome with giggles. "That's a pile of maple syrup-drenched buttermilk batter that's been pan-fried to perfection and stacked as high as Mount Lanakila, is what it is. Wafting out right from Raichu's cheeks."

{...A what?}

"You don't know what pancakes are!? Aw man, you really missed out back at your old place, didn't you...? Why don't we all go out for breakfast one of these days and I'll show ya? They're not exactly malasadas, but they come in a close second for me!"

{Sounds delicious...} I nodded, intrigued by the idea. {Tomorrow, maybe?}

"Sure thing! I got time!"

{How about Lillie?}

"The more the merrier!" he answered as we turned and headed up the path. "You know I was about to suggest that myself!"

{Speaking of which...When did you see her last?}

"Oh, I met up with her at the Dimensional Research Lab earlier today! She and the Professors told me about the whole thing with the wormholes, and the DNA analysis stuff, and that freaky-looking thing you went up against from some other world...MAN. That thing's not somethin' I'd wanna run into."

{No doubt about that,} I agreed grimly. {It'd snap you up like a malasada...I should know.}

"Yeah...Well, we don't have to worry about it here in Alola, so that's good!"

{Unless the Ultra Wormhole reopens and it finds its way through...}

"Oh...Well, I...didn't think about that. Huh..." Hau realized. "...But if the hunch is right and something DID save you from certain doom by bringing you here, then I doubt it. You don't need to worry about it anymore. Trust me, alright?"

{Well...If there's anyone I can trust, I know one of them is you.}

"Ah, come on, I'm goin' red, buddy! Hey, let's step it up! It's the Grand Trial or-"

"So...You're the one that Gladion was talking about, are you?"

"...Bust?"

Someone spoke from not far behind us. We turned around to face a...pretty strange-looking human. Female, wore lots of pink and black, didn't seem like the friendly type. And judging by the skull-shaped caps on either side of her head, that signified that she was...

"Hmph...You don't look so scary to me. 'Specially seeing who you decide to hang out with."

{Are you KIDDING me...?} I snarled, not at all happy with the situation.

"Cut the growling stuff," she snapped, rolling her eyes as she approached us. "...I'm Plumeria. And it's my job to keep Team Skull together. I'm like a big sister of some sort to all these numbskulls. They're plain stupid, most of them...But apparently, we both agree that some dummies can be cute in their dumbness."

"You callin' me stupid?" Hau insinuated, not looking very amused either. I shot Plumeria a glare and curled my lips a bit to expose my teeth.

"Yeah, you know what I mean," she answered, standing her ground. "You wouldn't want me picking on your dumb brother...So you can imagine that you picking on all my dumb brothers and sisters is really annoying me, then, right?"

{In case you didn't know,} I chattered, keeping the growl in my tone as Rotom translated, staying behind me all the while. {YOU thugs were the ones bothering other people, and us 'picking on your brothers and sisters' is just us defending ourselves and our Pokémon. Apparently, you're not much brighter than them.}

"And apparently, YOU have the nerve to kill and eat my brother's Raticate."

{It was SUFFERING! And the head injury it sustained from a Tackle attack-just a TACKLE!-It would have killed it anyways because it was in such horrible condition! Maybe it would still be alive if you low lives actually TOOK CARE of your Pokémon instead of letting them get to that point! Why do you think we don't want you making off with our teammates!?}

"Wait, hold up," Hau interrupted. "...That Raticate actually belonged to one of the grunts?"

{Long story. Just know that it was old, neglected and fatally wounded by just a TACKLE attack,} I answered him.

"Oh...Still, that's pretty brutal, gotta say."

"See? Even Mr. Malasada King ain't too keen on that. It's messed up...And now I'm gonna mess YOU up!"

She showed off a Poké Ball and tossed it upwards.

"Golbat! Teach 'em a lesson!"

The creature emerged; an evolved form of Zubat, it appeared to be. Same colors and similar build, but unlike Zubat, it possessed eyes, and it was a LOT bigger.

But I had someone who knew how to handle those just fine, and a bit of an extra challenge would do him some good. I chittered to Rotom to take cover in my bag again, and the minute he went inside, I pulled out my own Poké Ball and threw it in the air.

{Tyrunt! Start this off with Tackle!}

I called out the Fossil Pokémon, and he growled at his adversary before going right in for the attack.

One of the advantages I found with not being able to speak like the humans was that they were unable to understand the orders I gave my Pokémon, and therefore wouldn't know what I told them to do until it'd already been done.

"Oh, no ya don't! Golbat! Fly out of reach and Confuse Ray that thing!"

The Flying-Type cried out eerily, and a strange-looking series of lights emitted from its gaping mouth, surrounding Tyrunt and twirling around him like a swarm of mosquitoes.

When they finally faded, the Royal Heir Pokémon didn't look so concentrated anymore. He kept running, though, and was now heading not for the Golbat, but rather the one COMMANDING it. Plumeria leapt out of the way just before Tyrunt could plow her down, prompting him to finally slow down and shake his head.

"What've you got this thing DOIN'!?"

{Alpha?} he called. {Wha...Where did everyone go? What's going on?}

Something was wrong with him, I knew there was. And it probably had something to do with the Golbat's Confuse Ray attack.

{Snap out of it!} I crawed. {Shake that confusion off!}

He shook his head from side to side vigorously as he tried to clear the fog in his brain. He was vulnerable in that state, though, and Plumeria took advantage of it.

"Now we got him! Poison Fang!"

The Golbat dove in for the attack, fangs bared and excreting a sickly purple substance, ready to attack. But it was at that moment that Tyrunt finally regained his concentration, and looked up just in time to spy his target approaching.

{Counter it with Bite! Quick!}

The Fossil Pokémon growled in understanding, then opened his jaws, leapt up at the enemy and clamped down on its OWN open mouth, locking jaws with it. The Golbat shrieked at the sudden attack, and its cries only got louder when Tyrunt violently shook it from side to side then threw it across the battlefield. The enemy Pokémon tumbled over the ground towards its Trainer, but as soon as it stopped rolling it got right back up.

This Team Skull Pokémon seemed to be in better shape than the Raticate from earlier, so I was at least hoping the same thing wouldn't happen again.

The Golbat flapped its wings and became airborne again, eyeing Tyrunt with an angry glare.

"Try again, Golbat! Confuse Ray!"

{Dodge and try to lure it in from above!}

Tyrunt was able to duck and tumble beneath the Confuse Ray attack this time, and as he approached the spot beneath where the opposing Pokémon was hovering, he barked at it, calling for it to come closer.

{Come on!} he teased. {Too scared to fight me up close!? Coward! I dare you to battle me face-to-face!}

"He's askin' for it, Golbat! Wing Attack!"

It stooped down and started to fly at my Pokémon again. But they had no idea what we were up to.

{Alright, Tyrunt! Stomp! Get it back on the ground!}

He jumped up right in the nick of time, and once the Golbat was right underneath him, he pushed both of his feet down overtop its head, putting all of his weight onto it. Again, the enemy shrieked, and Tyrunt snarled at it from above.

{Excellent! Now, finish it off with Dragon Tail!}

He got off his opponent, letting it stand back up for only a moment before he spun around and whammed it with his tail, sending it hurdling across the field and falling flat on its back.

...And this time, it wasn't getting back up.

Plumeria let out a frustrated growl as she returned her fainted Pokémon.

"So, you've got a type advantage against me..." she sneered. "But I'm not the only one with a bunch of tricks up her sleeve!"

She pulled out her second fighter.

"Salandit! Let's go!"

The Toxic Lizard Pokémon emerged, and let out a threatening hiss upon entering the battlefield. I scoffed at the sight of it, though; my Salandit had not only looked five times prettier than that one, but she had also fully evolved into a Salazzle by then.

And Tyrunt STILL had the type advantage.

{You still game, Tyrunt?}

He nodded back to me with a smile on his face, then faced off against the enemy.

"Poison Gas!"

{Hold your breath and go in for Dragon Tail, Tyrunt!}

He took a deep breath and ran right through the cloud of gas the enemy shot our way, and ran right out of it unscathed as he continued to charge. his tail aglow.

"Dragon Rage, hurry!"

{Duck and tumble!}

He tried to dodge the attack, but at that point, he was too close, and the next thing I knew, he was engulfed in the purple energy, and it was the next moment that it exploded in his face, throwing him off to the side. He tore up the grass as he slid across the battleground, looking like he'd taken a beating.

He got back up, though, and gave the Salandit his best roar. It wasn't much more than a long bark, but it was a battle cry, nonetheless.

"Nice one! One or two more oughta do it! Fire up another Dragon Rage, Salandit!"

It trilled menacingly as it fired up its second attack, but I was ready to counter it.

{Wait for my signal, Tyrunt! Start running!}

{On it!}

He started his approach again, and Plumeria's Salandit continued to fire up its Dragon Rage. And once Tyrunt was halfway there...

"Now! Fire!"

{Jump to the side!}

The ball of energy flew out of its mouth and hurdled towards Tyrunt, but the Fossil Pokémon was able to skid to a halt, kick his leg and dart off to the right of the attack just as it whizzed past him, leaving both Plumeria and Salandit surprised.

{Now keep running and go in for the Tackle!}

He snarled again, and before the enemy had a chance to fire up another Dragon Rage, he charged up his speed and rammed head-first into the opposing Pokémon, then swung his head and threw it off to the side. It crashed into the side of one of the cliffs we were by and slid down to the ground, landing on its stomach. It started to get back up, but it was obviously struggling. We just needed to give it one more push.

{Now use one more Bite before it can get back up!}

"Flame Burst! Maybe we can burn it!"

The enemy Salandit fired up flames in its mouth and shot them at Tyrunt as he approached. But the Rock and Dragon-Type Pokémon was barely even phased by the collision.

And before it had a chance to try and burn him again, he was already on top of it, and he clamped his jaws down on the Pokémon's middle, shook it wildly then flung it back towards its Trainer. The Salandit lay where it landed, motionless except for the rise and fall of its middle.

It was still alive, but there was no way it was getting back up to battle.

We'd won.

{We did it! You did great out there, Tyrunt!}

{I did?} he grinned. {I-I mean, ah...Of course I did! I learned from the best, after all!}

"Oh! Did we win, boss?" Rotom asked, peeking out of my bag. I gave him a nod, and he floated back out, taking a look at the unconscious Salandit on the ground before us.

"Ha! You sure showed them how it'zzz done! Heh...That Salandit's still alive, though, right?"

{It's still breathing; don't worry about it. It should be fine as long as this one at least has the decency to take it to the Pokémon Center.}

Plumeria huffed, then returned her Salandit to its capsule.

{So what were you saying about messing me up?} I teased, Rotom translating for me again.

"Hmph...So you are as strong as he said you were," she acknowledged. "Not too shabby, I'll give you that...But mess with anyone on Team Skull again, and I won't hesitate to show you how serious I can get."

{Oooh, I'm terrified. I might have to use THREE Pokémon instead of ONE next time, and I'll have to use one that'd evolved at least once already. I couldn't possibly imagine anything worse than that.}

"You're not the only one who knows how to train and evolve Pokémon, ya Cretaceous cretin! You know how to kill and eat them, though..."

{And you know how to steal Slowpoke and cut off their tails, as if that's much better.}

"We need the money those tails are worth!"

{Because you're too lazy to earn it the right way like the rest of us do?}

"OH. So that's how you wanna play, huh, Ms. Moral-high-ground? Well, I'll have you know that-"

"Hey, hey, guys, guys! Come on..." Hau interrupted, stepping between us a bit. "This argument's gettin' too heated. Let's chill out, huh? Besides, we-"

"Did I ask for you to preach to us?" she snapped at him. "Why don't you step back down into place like the pushover you are? You're the Melemele Kahuna's grandson, and you're the weakest simpleton I've ever seen in my life...Shameful. I can imagine how disappointed Hala must be in you...And the only reason he doesn't say it outright is probably because he pities you so much. He pities what you turned out to be...And this thing, whatever she is, she probably does, too."

I expected him to laugh it off and call her crazy for ever thinking such a thing, and the same thing was on my mind...But Hau just fell completely silent then and there.

He just looked at me, then at Plumeria, then back to me again. His head lowered, and he backed away from the two of us, then turned away and wandered back into the Akala outskirts, looking like his heart had just been torn clean in half.

I turned back to face Plumeria, and frankly, I was speechless myself with what she'd said to him...But she didn't seem to think much of it.

"What? You know it's true as much as I do," she told me. "And if you don't like it, why don't you scratch me like you did my brother on Melemele? Or did he rub off on you so much that you ain't got the nerve yourself anymore?"

{...That's it.}

"While you're at it, maybe you can prance on down to the Malasada shop and gorge yourselves on-"

WHAM

All it took was a quick spin and she was on the ground.

I hardly even realized what I'd done until the last moment. My claws were clean, and my teeth were white, but Plumeria was down.

{...So THAT'S what it feels like to use Dragon Tail.}

She groaned as she sat back up, trying to regain the wind knocked out of her...She tilted her head up to behold a set of bared teeth and an angry glare. I was able to deal with them threatening to take Hau's Pokémon, and even threatening to beat him to a pulp, since they did that to everyone. But THIS? This wasn't something I was going to let slide so easily.

{...Apologize to my friend,} I snarled, Rotom doing his best to incorporate my angry tone in his own voice. {Then get out of here and never bother us again. And SHUT UP about your 'brothers and sisters' who cause nothing but trouble for everyone around here. Hau is a thousand times the brother to me than any of them could ever be to you, and you don't even realize it...THAT'S what's pitiful.}

"Psh," she scoffed, a smug grin on her face. "I'm not as easy to sway as the grunts, you know. Try and make me!"

{Alright.}

WHACK

"OW!"

That one struck her across the face.

{Are you swayed now? Or should I call out my Hawlucha and have him practice his Karate Chop for the Grand Trial? You'd make a nice rock to smash.}

"...Fine," she finally caved. "But only because you're so insistent!"

I scanned around for Hau, and finally spotted him heading south, about to make the turn back onto the coastal cliff. I barked to get his attention, and he slowly came to a stop, stood there for a moment, and then looked back at the two of us. I called out a couple more times, and he started to head back towards us, his head hung all the while.

...He seemed so lifeless compared to what he'd been just a few minutes ago. He almost looked ill.

{...Well?}

She rolled her eyes and faced Hau, still looking pretty displeased by the situation she was in.

"Alright, alright...Sorry for bein' a jerk, or whatever," she spat, turning back to me. "...Happy now, Scarface?"

WHAP

"AUGH, you son of a...WHAT'S THE PROBLEM NOW!?"

{Just get out of here.}

"Jeez...Professor Kukui wasn't all there when he gave you that Trainer's passport, huh?"

{NOW!}

"Alright, alright already!" she replied as she headed back towards Route 9. "But don't think you've seen the last of me! Either of ya!"

Finally, she disappeared around the corner. I turned to face Hau; he had risen his head at that point, but it was clear that he was still pretty upset by what he'd been told.

{...You do know that's not true, right?} I asked him. {Team Skull isn't anymore honest than they are pleasant.}

"Well...I mean, I hope it's not true," he replied. "They've poked fun at me for stuff before, but...That cut me pretty deep just now, you know?"

{I can imagine...Why do you think I got so angry at her?}

"Heh...Yeah. Guess that's proof enough that YOU don't think that about me," he nodded. "But, like...Someone sayin' something like that kinda does make me wonder if I'm really living up to people's expectations, you know? You ever feel that way about stuff?"

{Hmm...I can't say I haven't.}

"Yeah?"

{Yes...I felt like I wasn't living up to my full potential at one point. But...}

"But what?"

{Well...That was what earned me THIS.}

I raised a claw and tapped at the jagged scar streaming down the side of my jaws.

"Oh. Oh, dang..."

{But I guess you can't try to fight your way to the top without taking a risk of some sort,} I figured. {Besides, I was all on my own trying to achieve that goal. You, though? You're not alone in this. I'm backing you up, and so are the Professor and Lillie. Every step of the way as we go on this Island Challenge. That's my new goal. And it's yours...And since we're both on the same path walking side-by-side, that means I'M not alone, either. And I couldn't have found a better companion to find myself taking this journey with. You're not a disappointment. You're a role model, you're my friend, you're...}

I paused.

{...No. You're not just a friend to me anymore, Hau,} I corrected myself. {If there's one thing Plumeria said that had any truth to it, it's that you...You're my brother.}

His eyes widened a bit, and his small smile grew bigger still.

"...You really think that, huh?"

{I do...Plumeria and her underlings don't have anything on us. Trust me...We'll show 'em one of these days.}

I nudged him with my elbow, and whatever sadness remained in his eyes seemed to fade in an instant.

"...Heh...You said it, Echo," he replied. "Ha ha...You know, if I'm your brother, I guess that makes you my sister, right?"

{It does, doesn't it?}

"Yeah...Guess Rotom here was right when he said I was like, a cool uncle to your Pokémon, huh?"

"Yep! I called it! Ha!"

"You sure did," Hau nodded. "...So, should we keep going? Can't wait to see you go all out against the Kahuna!"

{I was just about to say something along those lines,} I replied, looking at the path ahead and into the clearing. {...Let's go in.}

We headed past the twin statues lining the path and looked up at the entry into the ruins.

{So there are the Ruins of Life, are they Rotom?}

"That they are! The people on Akala Island vizzzit here to pay their respects to the Island Deity Tapu Lele! Kzzt!"

"Yeah...But speaking of visiting, where's Kahuna Olivia at?" Hau wondered aloud. "You think she might've gone inside?"

{Well...There's only one way to find out, I suppose,} I decided, heading closer to the opening in the earth. {Come on. Let's see if-}

"Hey! Hold on, Echo! Hau!"

We both turned and looked behind us to see both Professor Burnet and Lillie coming our way. The latter was pink with embarrassment.

"Sorry to trouble you two," the former told us. "But Lillie got herself a little lost in Heahea City, so I decided to bring her to you guys."

"Oh. Uh...Yeah! Not a problem with us!" Hau grinned.

"Ha ha...Yeah...I got a little sidetracked while trying to find my way here," Lillie admitted sheepishly.

"I'll say," Burnet nodded. "She says she spotted some more of those Team Skull grunts on her way there, and she lost her way while she was trying to stay out of their sight."

{Oh, for the love of peace. Team Skull is EVERYWHERE!} I crowed in contempt. {I just had to deal with them TWICE within two hours! Can't they just pick ONE island to cause trouble on!?}

"I'm afraid they never learn their lesson," she replied, shaking her head and sighing. "I just hope that'll change someday soon...I've gotta go, now, though. The Masked Royal is having a match in half an hour, and there's no way I'm going to miss it! See you fellas!"

She turned and headed back down the pathway, and we turned to face Lillie.

"So, uh, Lillie," Hau said to her. "Echo and I were talkin' about this not too long ago. You free tomorrow morning?"

"I think so," she nodded.

"So, ah..." he continued, turning ever so slightly pink in the face. "You keen on meeting us at one of the breakfast nooks in Heahea City tomorrow for, like, some pancakes and stuff like that? I dunno, just a thought...I mean, if you're busy, then I-"

"Actually, that sounds pretty nice," she answered him. "First thing in the morning?"

"Oh. Uh...Yeah! Ah...Rotom buddy, where's the nearest breakfast place?"

"There'zzz one just in between the Pokémon Center and the Game Freak Office building southeast of the Dimensional Research Lab!"

"Awesome...Hey, what kind of ratings does the place have?"

"Oh, you're doin' your homework on this, huh? I couldn't imagine why..."

"Chill out, Rotom. I'm not gonna want to eat at a place with horrible reviews."

"Because you wanna impress."

"DUDE!"

Rotom burst into a fit of giggles, and Hau just stood there, turning redder still.

"Haha...Heh. According to my database, the place has overall 4.2/5 starzzz," my PokéDex finally answered him. "Not too shabby, if I do say so myself! Bzzt!"

"Thank you...Okay. So, what brings you here, Lillie?"

"I came here for Nebby," she replied. Both of us noticed the tiny gaseous Pokémon trying to escape from her bag again. "Well...More accurately, I was brought here. But you know what I mean...It's funny, really. Nebby's fascination with the Ruins and always wanting to go to them..."

"Pew!"

It'd finally escaped its confines and was now hovering low to the ground among the three of us.

"Why are these Ruins so important to you, Nebby?" Lillie asked it. "What do the guardians mean to you?"

"Pew...?"

It didn't seem to understand, its attention focused on the entrance to the Ruins of Life. All of us looked into the mysterious cavern...

And all of us saw the silhouette emerging from the darkness.

Lillie jumped, unnerved by something so unexpected, and Hau stepped in front of her, Poké Ball in hand. I narrowed my eyes to try and peer into the darkness, but by the time I was able to make out the shape of the figure, it had already stepped into the evening light.

"A-ha! There you are. Perfect timing!"

"Oh..." Hau sighed in relief. "Kahuna Olivia. It's just you."

"So it is," she nodded as she approached us. Lillie beckoned for Nebby to go back into hiding, and when it refused, she stepped in front of it. "Sorry I had to ask you to come all the way here, Echo. Tapu Lele summoned me here to clean up the Ruins some, and I wasn't about to refuse."

{Wait,} I responded. {The Island Deity actually called you to come here?}

"Certainly so. We Kahunas don't just preside over the trials of our respective islands; we tend to the Guardian Deities' Ruins, as well!"

{Erm...How did it call you here?}

"Oh, it usually makes a noise; it's loud enough for all of Akala Island to hear sometimes. Ha! But when it calls, I come...Good thing I'm finally finished with that business. And so are you, regarding the three trials. Right?"

I nodded.

"Well then, I think it's high time we had that Grand Trial, don't you?"

{I've been looking forward to it for hours,} I chattered, already clutching my first pick for the fight.

"So have I..."

She grabbed a Poké Ball of her own, and Hau and Lillie stepped over to the side, watching from a distance.

"You better prepare yourself, Echo! Me and rugged Rock-Types are gonna show you everything we've got!"

The very moment the sun disappeared beneath the horizon, we called out our first Pokémon, and the Grand Trial I'd been preparing for all afternoon finally commenced.
 
CHAPTER 21: Rocking the Trial Grounds New

GingerTheBarnOwl

Bug Catcher
Pronouns
she/her
"Nosepass! Show them what you're made of!"

{Kick this off with Hone Claws, Red!}

My Hawlucha landed elegantly on the ground before me, facing off against the enemy as it materialized midair and fell to the ground with an audible "THUD."

"Pass..."

Having already received his first command, Red slid his claws against one another to sharpen them, not attacking just yet. But Olivia saw it as a chance for her to take advantage, and she went in for it.

"Thunder Wave! Maybe we can paralyze it!"

The strange-looking Rock-Type sent out a sputtering jolt of electricity our way, too fast for Red to avoid, and the attack hit him head on...

But he simply shook the Thunder Wave off as if it were nothing, then smirked confidently at the opponent.

"Oh! Thunder Wave doesn't work!" Rotom announced. "Red'zzz ability must be Limber, then! It prevents paralysis!"

{That's good news,} I responded. {Alright, Red! Go in for Karate Chop!}

He kicked off of the ground and into the air, claws glowing red, and shot down towards the opponent at blinding speed. The collision kicked up a massive amount of dust, and through the cloud, I could see the enemy Nosepass. The attack had done a number on it, but it was still standing.

"Use Spark!"

The Rock-Type charged up again, the electric energy now engulfing its entire body, and it charged at my idle Hawlucha at an alarming speed for something so clumsy-looking.

{Counter with another Karate Chop!}

I was a moment too late. Right when he'd finished firing up his attack, the opponent slammed into him, sending him hurdling across the field. It did some damage, but not enough to down him; Red pushed himself back up and brushed off the dust from his feathers before making another intimidating pose.

"Cha!"

"Try your Rock Slide, Nosepass!"

{Take to the air again, Red! And hone in as close as you can to finish it off!}

The Wrestling Pokémon spread his wings and became airborne on my command, and Olivia's Nosepass started hurling enormous boulders into the air out of nowhere. He weaved through two, flew over another, barreled to the left to dodge a forth, one more to the right, and then performed a flashy corkscrew as he readied to dive beneath the last rock...

Only to get his timing off, and the boulder fell overtop of him as it came careening towards the ground.

He squawked in agony as the rock crashed into the earth on top of him, expose hand going limp. Had he fainted?

"Cha...Ru-CHA!"

As suddenly as he'd been struck by the rock, it was in pieces. He'd used his Karate Chop to destroy it, just like we'd done during Mallow's Trial.

Although his fighting spirit still burned, it was obvious that he wouldn't be able to take anymore attacks very well.

{Don't mess around anymore!} I called to him. {We can save the fancy stuff for another battle! Focus! Use Karate Chop one more time!}

He looked back at me, seemingly unamused, but still stood tall and spread his wings again.

"Use Spark again, Nosepass! Maybe we can finish him off first!"

The enemy fired up its Electric-Type attack again and started to charge, but by the time it was close enough to strike, Red had successfully prepared his finishing move.

"Haw...Lu..."

He drew back his glowing hand, and then...

"CHA!"

He struck his target right in the center of its giant red nose.

The Nosepass flew over the battlefield towards its Trainer and landed on its side...And it wasn't getting back up.

She returned the Pokémon, then pulled out her next fighter.

"Not bad... But if Nosepass wore your Hawlucha down, wait until you see what else I have in store!"

She called out her second Pokémon, and it materialized on the ground, emitting a sort of scratching noise of a battle cry.

It actually looked a bit like a Wimpod, but with a few notable differences, such as its two longer front appendages, the red-tipped wings it had coming out on each of its sides.

{Huh...Interesting Pokémon. What kind is it, Rotom?}

"Allow me!"

He zipped around the creature, and it looked at him curiously with its big, round eyes.

"Scanning...Scanning...Scan complete!

"Anorith: The Old Shrimp Pokémon! Said to be a Bug-Type Pokémon progenitor, it uzzzed its eight wings to swim through the ancient ocean, and it was surprisingly quick! However, they wouldn't survive as well in the ocean today, since the water composition has drastically changed since then. Huh...But by the lookzzz of it, I guess they don't do so bad on land, either! Bzzrt!"

{Ancient oceans...So, is it a Fossil Pokémon?}

"That it is! If you'd chozzzen the Claw Fossil instead of the Jaw Fossil, you'd have one, too. Crazzzy, huh?"

{That is crazy,} I agreed. {...But it's not what happened, is it?}

"Alright, Anorith! Smack Down! That ought to finish it off!"

{Use Roost!}

Red took a knee and started to recover his lost health. But by the time he was finished, the rock launched by the enemy was too close to dodge.

...Thankfully, it wasn't all that powerful, and Red had already healed quite nicely by then.

Even so, the fire in his eyes was slowly dying, his fervor draining as he became more exhausted with each move. And Potions didn't recover energy as much as they healed wounds.

I pulled out his capsule, and he turned to me, shaking his head, insistent that he still had enough in him to take on one more opponent...But it was clear that he didn't.

{Return, Red, } I said to him as he was sucked back into his Poké Ball. {You did well enough.}

As I stored him away, I pulled out my own second fighter and tossed his ball in the air.

{It's gonna be Fossil against Fossil, Olivia!} I announced, Rotom staying quiet as to not spoil the surprise. {Tyrunt! Time to shine!}

The Royal Heir Pokémon formed from the red light before its opponent, and gave out his best roar to scare his opponent. But the enemy Anorith simply narrowed its gaze at us.

"Think we didn't come unprepared for enemy Rock-Types?" Olivia remarked. "Anorith! Show them your Metal Claw!"

With that, the creature started to make its way across the field. I was impressed by how fast her Nosepass was, but THIS? If it was this fast on land, I was scared to see just how fast it was in the water where it used to dwell.

{Tyrunt! Roll off to the side and stun it with Stomp!}

{Will do,} he growled back, a faint indication of a smile on his jaws.

Anorith might have been fast on its wings and claws, but Tyrunt had one thing it didn't: well-developed legs. And he used those legs to push himself off to the side just as his opponent was about to slash him with its steely-glowing claws, then to push himself back and SLAM his foot down right on top of the Anorith's head. The creature seemed to emit a surprised squeak as it was struck, and stayed put after the impact, completely dazed.

{Now's our chance! Use Bite!}

He opened his mouth and bore his teeth, readying the attack...

And then, all of a sudden, his fangs started to glow white!

{His teeth are glowing...What is that, Rotom?}

"I'll tell ya what it izzz! It looks like our buddy Tyrunt just learned the move Crunch!"

{Crunch?}

"It's like Bite, but a LOT more powerful! Zzt!"

Olivia looked as though she was about to call out another attack, but before she could give her Anorith another command, Tyrunt let out a snarl and clamped down onto the Anorith's middle. Again, the enemy Fossil Pokémon let out a suppressed shriek, and he thrashed his head about with the creature in his jaws before finally tossing it to his side. It landed on its back, exposing its soft underbelly, before unsteadily pushing itself back up. Tyrunt's new Crunch attack had taken a lot out of it.

{Excellent, Tyrunt!} I called out to him. {You've almost won already!}

{Just following your orders, Alpha!} he smiled back. {We've both almost won!}

{Finish it off with Tackle!}

With that, he started to charge at the Anorith, tail glowing and his yellow eyes focusing on his target.

"Oh no you don't!" Olivia called out. "Metal Claw, one more time!"

Before I could order Tyrunt to dodge, he rammed RIGHT into the attack, and the enemy slashed him once across the legs right when he drew near enough to knock him down, then a second one to the side, and then a particularly powerful swipe right to his face. He let out a bark of pain as the tough, scaly skin on the bridge of his snout broke, and his earthy brown scales began to run red.

{TYRUNT!}

He shook his head from side to side, trying to shake away the stinging pain of the gash on his face with little avail.

"It's distracted!" Olivia realized. "Take him down with Bug Bite!"

The enemy began to advance on Tyrunt, who was still bothered by the wound on his face.

{Snap out of it, Tyrunt!} I hollered. {Hurry! Prepare your Dragon Tail!}

{Huh...?}

{Dragon Tail! You've almost got it!}

{It hurts...}

{Just this last move! I promise! Finish the job!}

Trying to ignore the pain that not only wracked his face, but now his entire form, he fired his Dragon Tail up as best he could, the light emitting from it sputtering a bit.

{Wait for it...Wait for it...}

The Anorith skittered closer, its mandibles now exposed as it prepared its attack.

{SWING!}

He grunted as he spun around and slammed his tail into the enemy as best he could. And it hit once, twice...

THREE TIMES before he stopped spinning and looked at his opponent.

The opposing Fossil Pokémon was on the ground before him, eyes closed and even more badly battered than Tyrunt.

It was down.

She returned Anorith to its Poké Ball, and I took the chance to pull out a Potion and apply it to the gaping wound on my Pokémon's face. The gap closed and the bleeding ceased, but there was still a faint tan mark indicating where the last Metal Claw had landed on his face, obstructing the darker brown scales around it.

I sighed at the sight of it; Tyrunt did bear several of my own traits, such as my eyes and build, but he didn't deserve to bear the scar. I hoped it would go away soon.

{...Did I do good?} he huffed, still fatigued from the fight.

{You did more than just 'good,' Tyrunt,} I told him. {You were amazing.}

{I was?}

"Are you kiddin', buddo!?" Rotom exclaimed. "You RULED the battlefield out there! Bzzt!"

{Yeah...He did rule the battlefield...}

The very moment I said it with my own mouth, it dawned on me.

Tyrunt...The Royal Heir Pokémon...who rules the battlefield like a...

{That's it,} I gargled.

{What's it?} he asked, looking up at me intently.

{Your nickname. I know what it should be.}

His eyes widened, and his jaw fell slightly agape in anticipation.

{You're name...} I gurgled. {...is King.}

He beamed, and proudly stood taller than ever, the white plumage on his neck puffing out as much as he was himself.

{I take it you like that?}

{I couldn't have wished for anything better,} he said to me. {...I'll live up to that name with everything I have in me.}

{I'm sure you will,} I nodded. {...You've fought well. Best you rest for the remainder of the fight.}

{Are you sure? The Potion really helped. I think I can keep going! I...I don't want to stop until I DROP!}

{I don't know, King. It might have healed up your face well enough, but it didn't do much else. Besides...}

I looked up to see Olivia calling out her third Pokémon.

"Your Tyrunt may have beaten Anorith, but he won't fare so well against this! Lycanroc! Come on out!"

The Pokémon materialized, and then rose from its hunched position, tilted its head up, and let out an echoing battle cry.

"Awowwwwwwrrr!"

The Pokémon was taller than either of the last two by a significant amount, and sported a white and blood-red coat of fur, its immense claws and mouthful of teeth gleaming in the light of dusk. This Pokémon not only looked far stronger than the ones we'd already beaten, but the glare in its scarlet eyes told me it meant business.

{...This last one might be a bit much for you to handle.}

Tyrunt pouted, then reluctantly stepped toward his Poké Ball.

{I guess you're right...But when you have your next Trainer battle, can I go first?}

{I'll see to that.}

He nodded in satisfaction as I returned him to his capsule and pulled out a different one yet again.

{Alright, Dartrix! Take over!}

My partner formed in front of me, and he immediately spread his wings to display the blade quills he kept stored in between his feathers.

"Krrrrroooooo!"

"That's how you wanna play, is it?" Olivia asked. "Then we'll play the offensive card on both ends! Lycanroc! Use Rock Tomb!"

{Dodge and counter it with Razor Leaf!}

He flapped his wings and lifted off the ground as the rocks summoned by the enemy came flying towards him, and swerved off to the side just in time to avoid being hit, and then he extended his left wing and shot out three glowing blade quills at the Lycanroc, too swift to dodge. They struck the opponent right in the face, and it snarled as they made impact, the glow of its eyes becoming brighter.

"Use Bite! We'll whittle it down first before bringing out the big guns!"

The opponent got down on all fours and began to advance on us, jaws open and ready to attack.

{Razor Leaf, one more time!}

He fired up his blade quills again, but Olivia saw the attack ahead of time.

"Hard left! Then pick up speed!"

It narrowly evaded our attack, then honed in on Dartrix all the way, having already gotten uncomfortably close. We had no time to avoid its jaws clamping down on my partner's wing and thrashing about with it in its mouth before he was thrown off to side.

{DARTRIX!}

Before he could flap his wings and return to the air, he crashed into the side of one of the cliffs surrounding the Ruins and slid back down to the ground, his wing wet with both drool and the blood starting to leak from the bite wound.

"Kroo...Koo roo..." he hooted as he unsteadily stood back to his feet, shaking the moisture from his wing the best he could before turning back to face the enemy Lycanroc.

There was a fiery glow in my partner's glaring gaze, and it only seemed to intensify the longer I looked at it...I vaguely remembered that look, but I couldn't pinpoint when I'd seen it before.

{Razor Leaf, one more try!}

He let out a deep, ominous-sounding trill, then spread his wings and aimed his attack, the blade quills hidden in his plumage glowing ever brighter. And it was odd, but I could have sworn that they looked bigger than normal, too...

I found out why when he shot one at the opponent.

The long, thin, pointed blade quill landed right at the Lycanroc's feet, having seemed to have narrowly missed its mark. But the very next moment, it burst with energy, exploding right in the enemy's face and forming a strange, clear barrier around it. The Pokémon yipped in both pain and shock as the attack, and I stared on myself, just as bewildered as our opponent.

And it was the next moment that Dartrix landed, and the glow in his eyes grew even brighter, then began to spread over his face, then head, then down to his talons. I finally realized what was happening.

...He was evolving. Again.

From beneath the white light, Dartrix grew taller still; his leafy tail fanned out, becoming bigger and longer than ever before, and the leaves on his facial disc spread all over his head and draped over his shoulders.

The light dissipated, and there stood my newly-evolved partner Pokémon, a Dartrix no more.

"Drrrit twoooo..."

He grabbed one of the vines on his newly-formed leaf hood with the shorter feathers at the ends of his now-spotted wings, then extracted another long blade quill, set the back end of it on the vine, pulled it back, and then let go. The projectile flew at the still-stunned enemy at blinding speed, and it caused yet another explosion when it made impact.

When I unshielded my eyes from the dust that'd been scattered, I saw the enemy Lycanroc lying there in its stomach. It tried to push itself back up, only for its arm to cave in, and it fell once again, wheezing as it collapsed into a faint.

The Grand Trial was complete. We won.

"How lovely..." Olivia remarked, seeming unamused by her loss.

As the Kahuna returned her fallen Lycanroc to its ball, my avian partner turned to face me; now, he was just as tall as I was, and his now red and yellow eyes, leafy hood and dark mask of a facial disc made him a far different Pokémon from the dandy Dartrix he'd been before.

One thing was for certain, though: he looked INCREDIBLE.

{Rotom,} I chittered. {What kind of Pokémon is he now?}

"Guess that'zzz my cue to scan!"

He zipped around the Grass-Type to collect the necessary data.

"Scanning...Scanning...Scan complete!

"Decidueye: the Arrow Quill Pokémon; the evolved form of Dartrix and final form of Rowlet! It can nock and fire an arrow quill at an enemy in just a tenth of a second, and itzzz shots nearly never miss their target! Unlike its Flying-Type pre-evolved stages, Rowlet and Dartrix, Decidueye is a Grass and Ghost-Type Pokémon, so it's completely immune to Normal and Fighting-Type attacks! Bzzt! Nifty, huh?"

Decidueye straightened out his leaf bow, which was now red instead of green, and awaited my response.

I nodded in satisfaction; his new form looked better than I could have ever imagined.

{INCREDIBLE, Decidueye,} I crawed. {You really are an amazing partner!}

"Dwit, dwit!"

He bowed courteously, displaying one of the arrow quills he had tucked in his wing.

{What'd he say, Rotom?}

"He said that he'll continue to make you proud in the days to come! I should agree. Such a naturally skilled archer would certainly know hizzz way around the battefield! Zzt!"

{A what?}

"An archer! Someone who fires arrowzzz and fires 'em well!"

{...That's it.}

"What's it?"

{"Archer"...How about that for a nickname?}

"Not very original with naming thingzzz, are ya, boss?"

{Oh, come on, Rotom. I like it. What say you, partner?}

The Arrow Quill Pokémon nodded and smiled in response. It was all the answer I needed.

{It's settled, then. That's your name, fresh upon evolution!}

"Dritt dwoo!"

Archer seemed more excited simply by the fact he'd gotten a nickname at all than what it actually was. Either way, however, both of us were satisfied.

"Hm...Well...Coal must be pushed to its limit before any sparkling diamonds show through."

Kahuna Olivia stepped forward, no longer disappointed at her loss.

"Evolving mid-battle and downing my partner with its first ever Spirit Shackle...That's certainly one way to pass the Grand Trial with flying colors! You and your team really are something, Echo! Now, you wouldn't mind me seeing your Trainer Passport for a moment, would you?"

I dug the booklet out of my back and handed it to her, and watched as she got out the stamp, pressed it onto the page, and wrote down my accomplishment. She handed it back to me, and I admired the pink completion stamp before reading over the written text beside it.

"Akala Trial Completion"

"With this stamp, all Pokémon up to Lv. 50 will obey your every command."

"Aue! That was AWESOME SAUCE!" Hau cheered. "Man, she may know Icy Wind, but if I wanna step up to your game, I gotta evolve Brionne! Hey, maybe we'll get there when the team and I take on the Grand Trial ourselves! We've done all the other trials, so we could do it whenever!"

"Hmm...Perhaps when the sun shows its face again, Hau, I'll test your strength," Olivia told him. "It seems quite late at this point."

She was right; by now the sky had turned an inky blue-black, and the stars sparkled against it. There was just a sliver of sunlight still shining over the horizon and turning it teal, but soon it would be gone for the night.

"Yeah, I guess you're right," Hau understood. "S'pose I should find a place to roost for the night...You wanna bunk, Echo?"

{Sounds like a plan to me,} I nodded.

"Dwit dwoo!" Archer agreed.

"And, ah...How 'bout you, Lillie? Wanna hang with us for the night?"

"Oh...Thank you, Hau," she replied. "Yes, I would. If you don't mind, at least."

"No, no, not at all!" he replied. "Let's head on out, then!"

I returned Archer to his capsule, and we all left the Ruins of Life, bound for the city.

"So, get this," Hau said to us. "Just before I met up with Echo past Memorial Hill, I ran into this weird green guy and his assistant, or intern, or somethin' like that, and helped him out of a Team Skull jam. Said he was from the Aether Foundation, and he wanted me to come to Hano Grand Resort when I finish my trial. Crazy, huh?"

I was surprised enough to not register seeing Lillie tense up out of the corner of my eye.

{Weird...The same exact thing happened to me,} I chittered curiously. {And, ah...You saw the aftermath of that battle.}

"Heh...Yep."

"Ooh, the Aether Foundation?" Olivia marveled. "I wonder what they would want with the two of you?"

"Guess there's only one way to find out!" Hau shrugged as we passed through the cemetery. "Hey, uh, Lillie. You gonna come with us there?"

"U-um, I think I'll stay here!" she answered quickly, seeming on edge. "We'll all have breakfast tomorrow, I'll watch your Grand Trial and then I'll...um...go browse the clothing stores again! Yeah! Got a pretty big to-do list for tomorrow, so..."

"Oh...Okay. Hey, at least we'll all be together tonight and tomorrow morning, right?"

I nodded at Hau, then turned to face Lillie.

{Is...something the matter?}

"Who? What? With me?" she responded, somewhat curtly. "No. Nothing's wrong. Nothing at all."

{Are you sure about that?}

"Positive. I'm just...not fond of Very Large Floating Structures, is all. Not as sturdy as land."

I could tell she wasn't being completely honest, but I decided not to pry into the situation anymore.

{Well...Okay,} I nodded. {Rotom. Any hotels in the area?}

"We could stay at the Tide Song Hotel for the night! It's a tad pricy, but it'zzz really the only place in Heahea City to spend the night. The good news izz that they give a discount to Trainerzzz participating in the Island Challenge! If you three pooled your moolah together, that'd probably turn out alright! Bzzrt!"

"Sounds good to me!" Hau exclaimed as he picked up speed. "Come on, let's step it up!"

{Way ahead if you, Hau!}

"Hey! You guys!" Lillie called out from behind us. "Wait!"

{Hmm...}

I skidded to a halt, and Hau did the same soon after.

{Maybe we should stay together,} I decided as she caught up to us. {I mean, the last thing I we want is to run into any Team Skull members in the darkness of night. Right?}

"Ha...Yeah. No kidding," Lillie nodded nervously. "Hey. A-at least I know you can handle them...!"
 
CHAPTER 22: Strange Things Are Happening New

GingerTheBarnOwl

Bug Catcher
Pronouns
she/her
ANOTHER QUICK A/N: when younger me was writing the first version of this chapter, i was simultaneously getting into the undertale. at the time, i thought it would be funny to throw a little easter egg-type reference into this...skip to today, and now present me doesn't know it it's funny or cringe, so you can decide that for yourself. ಥ_ಥ
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"So just four big ol' stacks of our classic pancakes, huh? We'll get right on it then!"

"Thanks for that!" Hau called out as the waiter left the able we were all sitting at.

"So, Echo," he addressed. "How'd you sleep last night? First time sleepin' in an actual bed...Cool, right?"

The room we stayed in at the Tide Song Hotel the previous night only had two beds available, as all the three-bed rooms were immensely popular this time of year with families, and had all of them had been booked already. Hau and Lillie had agreed to bunk in one, leaving the other for me.

And despite it being completely normal for the humans, I found sleeping in a bed to be a somewhat strange experience.

{To be completely honest,} I admitted, trying to keep my tired eyes open. {I think I'll stick to using the ground for my bed. It's a lot firmer, doesn't cost a thing, and I don't get tangled up in the grass like I do in the covers. Not to mention having to risk putting holes in it with my feet...Besides, I had a REALLY weird dream last night, and I think my lack of rest might have had something to do with it.}

"Oh...Sorry to hear that, cousin. Hey, at least we know that now, right?"

I nodded in agreement.

"So, what was your dream about, Echo?" Lillie asked.

"Bzzt? Did it have anymore to do with your old home?" Rotom chimed in, equally curious.

{I...don't think so, really. The place in the dream seemed completely foreign to me.}

"What was it like?" Hau inquired, taking a sip of his Pinap Juice. "Spill the beans, bud!"

{Well, I was wandering around this...sort of a dark marshland. It was damp and cool, and there were glittering stones along the dirt walls.}

"Ooh...Soundzzz kinda pretty, actually."

{So I found this bridge of flowers growing along the water.}

"Uh-huh, yeah..."

{And I followed it over to a smaller part of the marsh.}

"Did you find anything interesting?" Lillie asked.

{There was a bench there. And I look underneath the bench...}

"Yeah, yeah?" Hau urged, dying to know what happened next.

{And there's just...A quiche sitting there.}

"A...quiche?" Lillie repeated.

{Yep. A cold quiche just sitting under the bench like someone left it there.}

"...So didja eat it?" Hau asked.

{I picked it up, but Rotom's alarm started beeping before I got the chance to put it in my mouth.}

"Oh. Heh heh...Sorry, boss. If I'd known, I'd have kept quiet."

{No worries, Rotom. Besides, if I want a quiche then I can always just fly back to the Thrifty Megamart and buy another.}

"Oh, a bit more keen on the Charizard Glide now, are ya?"

{Hey, if I've done it three times already and know what to expect, then it should be fine, right?}

"Heck, yeah!" Hau exclaimed. "You conquer that fear o' heights like you conquer Team Skull!"

{I plan to,} I nodded. {So, after we're done here, we're all gonna go back to Memorial Hill to watch you take on Kahuna Olivia, and then once you're done with that, we'll all head back here to Heahea City, Lillie is gonna go find the Professor, and you and I are going to head over to Hano Grand Resort to see what the Aether Foundation wants, is that right?}

"That's the plan!" Hau nodded. "Uh, hey Lillie. You sure you wanna stay here? I mean, we don't want to leave you in the dust or anything."

I shook no in agreement, still wondering why Lillie seemed so tense whenever the Aether Foundation was merely mentioned, as she was now.

"No, no, it's fine. I don't mind doing things with the Professor for a while," she insisted. "Besides, we'll all meet back up on Ula'ula Island later today anyways, won't we?"

"Yeah, we will, but...I dunno. Guess I just feel kinda guilty about it."

"Hey, Hau, it's okay. There's nothing you need to feel guilty about. Hey, you've already set my day off to a great start by inviting us to breakfast, so you get a pass! Hee hee...!"

"Heh...Okay, I'll take your word for it."

"Alrighty! Four stacks o' classic pancakes!"

Before we even realized it, the waiter had put out three steaming, sweet-smelling stacks of the griddle-cooked goodness before us. And soon they would all be topped with a coat of melted butter and drenched in syrup on top of that.

One thing was for certain: I was NEVER going to get tired of human cuisine.

"So, the forth one, here," the waiter continued, the last platter still in his hand. "Who's it for?"

That was when Hau and I showed off our Poké Balls.

"Well, I wasn't about to let my Raichu miss out on this," he replied.

"Oh, HO, those are gonna be some happy Pokémon!" he grinned, placing the meal on the table. "You folks enjoy! Just make sure they don't cause any havoc, 'kay?"

"Will do!"

The moment he left for another table, we opened up all of the capsules and let out our teammates. Red, Archer and King all ruffled their feathers in anticipation, while Sassafras and Grace wagged their tails in excitement. All of my Pokémon were on the verge of drooling once the scent of their breakfast hit their nostrils.

And so were Hau's.

"Bri..."

"Raiii, Chu...!"

"Noi, noi!"

His Noibat flitted around eagerly, then landed on the table, already eyeing up the fruit-flavored syrups off to its side.

"Ya want the Mago Berry Syrup on yours, Noibat? Comin' right up!"

It landed on his head, turned upside-down over his face and smothered him with affectionate licks.

"'Ey, come on, now! Save that for your breakfast!"

{So, there's more than one syrup flavor here?} I asked, eyeing up the different bottles myself. The three bottles aside from the maple one looked like they were made from different kinds of berries.

"Yep," Hau nodded as he prepared his Noibat's food, the Pokémon hopping up and down where it stood in anticipation. "I still recommend the maple, though; this is your first time eating the stuff, so why not go for the classics before delvin' into the nitty-gritty of it?"

{Fair point,} I nodded, looking to each of my Pokémon to get their preference. {What about all of you?}

Everybody voted maple except for Red and Sassafras; the latter was eyeing up the Razz Berry syrup, and the former was, to our surprise, insisting that he didn't want any syrup on his, simply turning his beak up at the bottles and shaking his head. It didn't look like there were any flavors there he liked.

"Ru, Haw-Lucha."

{What'd he say, Rotom?}

"Huh...He wantzzz to know where the hot sauce is."

The table erupted into laughter, and the Wrestling Pokémon simply rolled his eyes and covered his pancake with butter and cinnamon instead before eating it.

{How about you, Rotom? You and Grace are pretty small, so you can probably split.}

"Same azzz you fellas! Just lemme get outta this thing real quick!"

The last thing I wanted was for the PokéDex to clatter to the tile floor, so I grabbed hold of it just as he zipped out of the device and darted freely around the rest of us.

"Kzzzrt!"

Everything was set up for everybody else in no time flat, and before one could say "bon appetit," we were all munching away.

{Wow...} I gurgled, mouth full. {Now THIS is fine dining.}




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"I'm gonna ask one more time in case you changed your mind. You SURE you don't wanna come with us?"

"Positive. But thank you anyway, Hau," Lillie answered, perhaps a bit too readily. "Clothes aren't going to buy themselves, are they?"

"Okay, then. Guess we'll be headin' out for now. See you this evening!"

{Good luck here in the city.}

"Yeah! Get yourself somethin' snazzzy, why don'tcha? Zzt!"

She giggled a bit at Rotom, and we parted ways, Lillie and Nebby heading west to meet the Professor somewhere and me, Hau and our teams heading east for the resort, Rotom's map displayed just in ront of us as we went along the paved road.

"MAN," Hau huffed as we headed back along the road. "...Not a good idea to have underestimated that Lycanroc, was it?"

{At least Brionne pulled you through the rest of the way, right?}

"Yeah, but...WOW. I won by, like, a HAIR. Did you SEE that thing's teeth?"

{King's are just as sharp.}

"In that case, I don't wanna battle your Tyrunt anytime soon!"

Hau had just earned a very narrow win against Kahuna Olivia. His Noibat and Raichu were both out pretty quickly once they were on the field, despite being able to take out her Nosepass. It was his Brionne that stole the stage, being able to take on both her Anorith and Lycanroc with her trusty Bubble Beam, although she was also nearly defeated by the Wolf Pokémon's powerful jaws and claws, let alone it's mighty Rock Tomb.

"But hey, still a victory. Just gotta make sure we do a bit more grinding next go around for the Grand Trial on Ula'ula, am I right?"

{Probably a good idea,} I nodded as we continued along the street. {Which way, Rotom?}

"It'zzz not far! Just keep on going straight and we'll be there in no time!"

{Excellent. Come on, Hau, let's pick up the pace!}

"Hey! I can't pick up as much pace as you, y'know!"

I was careful to not let Hau fall behind as we ran down the street, passing the beaten path of Route 9 on our left as we drew closer to the red flag displayed on Rotom's map.

I looked up to see that we were passing over a bridge, a large white gateway on either side of it, and the coarse paved road beneath us smoothed out into sleek tile.

"Welp, here we are!" my PokéDex announced. "Ooooh...Classy-lookin' place, ain't it?"

{Whoa...} I marveled. {It certainly is.}

"No kiddin'."

Hano Grand Resort was something to behold; it had vibrant flower beds, swimming pools, lounge chairs, a boat dock, and even a walkway down to a small beach, and there were people and Pokémon everywhere enjoying themselves to the fullest. I was already impressed by it, and this was just the OUTSIDE. The actual building was MASSIVE, and the pearly white walls were trimmed with bright tropical orange accents. I knew the Aether Foundation wasn't actually treating us to a stay here, but just inviting us to meet them here was something special by itself.

"...Wonder what kinda fortune you need to spend a night here?" Hau wondered aloud. "Ha!"

"Oh, only a small fortune of 10,000₱ a night. Bzzt!"

{That much!?} I squawked.

"Well, it IS an upper-crust place," Hau reminded me in an amusingly exaggerated gentleman's voice. "Therefore, only upper-crust people have the money the hotel needs in order to maintain its upper-crust condition."

I let out a raspy chortle.

{True...Shall we go in, my good man?}

"Ha! Most certainly."

"Wow...If you two looked the part, you'd be some pretty convincing aristocratzzz!"

We all continued to laugh with one another as we approached the door. There were two bellhops manning the entrance.

"Welcome to Hano Grand Resort!" the one on the left greeted us, his gaze diverting to me, then to Hau, then back to me. "...Say, are you two the trial goers that the Aether Foundation said wanted to meet with?"

{That would be us,} I answered, Rotom nodding in confirmation.

"Ah, I figured so! The Branch Chief gave us a...pretty detailed description of you, Ms. Echo...He's waiting for you just inside!"

"Have a Grand time!" the bellhop on the right chimed in, flashing us a smile as we entered through the doors.

It was even MORE impressive inside. The arcs forming the gateway along the entrance bridge were made of wood rather than white iron, and flowers lined the fountain pools flanking either side of the walkway. There were fountains EVERYWHERE; by the seating, in the corners, and one giant one came cascading down like a Waterfall above the front desk. It was certainly a sight for sore eyes.

"...Wow."

{Double wow.}

We finally looked where we were going, and saw a familiar figure standing there before us.

"...So you've come at last," he greeted us.

Hau and I exchanged glances with one another, then approached him.

"Yep. Just like we said we would be."

"Ah, do forgive me. We have met once before, and I have yet to properly introduce myself," he realized, frowning a bit. "...You may call me Faba."

"Well, glad to make your acquaintance, Mr. Faba," Hau greeted, extending a hand. I was eager to do the same, and he shook with both of us, the slightest indication of a grimace coming to his face when he made contact with our hands. And he withdrew his own just a bit too quickly. Odd...

"Yes, well," he continued, clearing his throat and attempting to brighten his mood. "I told you before that I would be taking you both to Aether Paradise for the Grand Tour, seeing what you each did to help us before, correct?"

{You did,} I nodded.

"Excellent," he replied, a mildly forced smile on his face. "Now, while we're here, I might as well tell you two a few things about Aether Paradise in advance, shall I?"

We both nodded again.

"You see, as the name suggests, Aether Paradise is a veritable paradise for Pokémon that floats far out into the sea surrounding the Alolan archipelago. It is an artificial island, made entirely from human technology, for the protection and preservation of Pokémon. And as a trustworthy adult who keeps his promises, I will prove to you both that this is the absolute truth with a complete tour of the paradise."

That last part kind of caught us off guard, and Hau and I looked at each other again for a moment. The same thought went through each of our heads.

That's kind of an odd thing to say, isn't it?

Sure, he wasn't some Team Skull hooligan, but there wasn't any doubt that Branch Chief Faba was a bit on the strange side.

"Are we ready to depart?" he asked us.

We shrugged and nodded, ultimately deciding to let his peculiar remark slide.

"Good, good. Do follow me," he told us as he started off somewhere. "Aether Paradise will truly amaze you. So let us enjoy an adventure upon that grand vessel that will take us across the high seas! Ah...By which I mean to say, the ferry. There is one waiting for us on the docks outside."

As he lead us back out the front door, we each stifled laughter again. Yeah, he might have been a little weird, but at least it was funny sometimes.




...



The immense white structure floating on the sea seemed to loom higher and higher above us as we drew nearer and nearer to the entrance. We passed underneath the water way, then towards the dock, which was as pristine and white as the rest of the floating structure. When we finally stopped and got off the boat, Faba turned to face us again.

"Here we are, you two. This is Aether Paradise," he told us. "Now, since this facility is created for the conservation of Pokémon, we have installed the latest technology to ensure their safety and well-being, which includes fenced-in areas which people cannot enter normally, high surveillance of all activity through the latest security measures, and of course, precautions taken to keep the Pokémon sheltered here from being stolen and/or captured by either lowly criminals or overly eager Pokémon Trainers. As a result, your Poké Balls will not work in here, due to the jamming signal broadcasted throughout the facility to prevent them from functioning against untrained Pokémon."

{Huh...Clever.}

"Guess we'll have to wait to add to our team until we get back to the mainland, huh?" Hau teased.

"Indeed so," Faba responded. "Now, follow me once more, if you will."

We trailed behind him, and he came to what looked like an elevator of some sort. It wasn't like the one in the Dimensional Research Lab; it was fairly large, and had glass walls that one could see out of instead of just being a closed-in rising and falling cabin...And it was triangular. An interesting shape for an elevator.

The platform lowered, and someone stepped out of it, turning to face the Branch Chief. A female, it looked like, her white uniform accented with pink in contrast to Faba's green.

"Excuse me, Mr. Faba."

"Yes, excuse you!" he nearly snapped back. "What is the meaning of that form of address? I have a title for a reason! How else will anyone know how important I am?"

Again, Hau and I exchanged odd looks with one another. Maybe he wasn't as amusing as we initially thought he was.

The other human sighed in discontent.

"Yes, Branch Manager Faba," she corrected herself. "As I was saying, what did you call me for?"

"You remember how I said over the phone earlier that I was putting you in charge of the tour for our two guests? The one in particular?"

She peered over his shoulder and spied the two of us. Hau gave her a friendly wave.

"Oh, yes, I see!" she replied, eyes still on me, seeming slightly curious. "Yes, I remember."

"Wonderful. I must go speak with the president about our conservation efforts on Akala. Simply show the children around and give them the rundown, and by the time that's said and done, the president and I should be done with our discussion. You can take them to meet her at that point. Am I clear?"

"All clear, Mr...Branch Manager Faba," she quickly fixed.

"Good. I'm off then. Have a pleasant time here, children."

He bot onto the elevator and disappeared above us before we had time to say anything else. Once he was gone, the second human heaved a sigh of relief.

"Phew...That guy can be a real piece o' work," she muttered to herself before clearing her throat and turning to us, a warm, genuine smile on her face.

"Welcome to the Aether Paradise, Echo and Hau," she greeted us. "My name is Wicke."

"Alola!" Hau greeted. "You know who we are, huh?"

"Yes, I do. One of our employees told me about your meeting on Akala Island," she told us. "Particularly yours, Ms. Echo. And about how quickly word is spreading across the islands about you and your Island Challenge."

{Oh...I see...}

I swallowed, backing away a bit and refusing any eye contact. No doubt if the employee from Memorial Hill had explained everything to her, she'd have included the rather unfortunate incident we had with Team Skull's Raticate. She seemed to catch onto my train of thought, though.

"Oh. The incident with the Raticate, yes," she realized. "She explained to me that it wasn't your fault...I'm much more intrigued by the fact that you saved the Pokémon Team Skull stole. And the same goes to you, Hau, for what you did."

I heaved a sigh of relief myself, and Hau backed me up.

"Yeah, she's awesome, really," he told her, putting an arm around me. "We pretty much hit it off from day one, you know?"

"I can see that," she remarked. "Thank you both very much for your help! Let me show you around. The main entrance is just on the floor above us."

She pressed a button on the elevator pad, and the platform came lowering back down for us to board.

"Shall we zip right up there?"

It was a short but smooth ride up to the next floor, and it wasn't long before I caught sight of a few Pokémon. They were hanging around the two front desks with their Trainers, looking fairly content.

"This is the main entrance," Wicke explained to us. "You can have your Pokémon healed at the reception desk there, if they need it. Do they?"

"Oh, jeez..." Hau hissed, suddenly looking pretty ashamed. "I forgot all about the PMC. And the team just got done gettin' pwned by Kahuna Olivia...Guess it's a good thing there's a place here for that, huh?"

"Oh, don't beat yourself up about it. All Trainers make a slip-up here or there. Besides, at least you realized it."

"Yeah, guess so...Better go do that, then."

While Hau went over to heal his Pokémon, Wicke and I sort of wandered around the elevator as we spoke.

"So, you and Hau," she said to me. "You're both trial-goers? Hoping to become Island Challenge Champions?"

{That's what we're going for,} I confirmed.

"So I suppose you must both be around eleven, right?"

{What...Age-wise?}

She nodded.

{Well, Hau is a yes to that question, but me...} I trailed off, Rotom casting a curious glance my way, waiting for what to say next. {I'm...Well, to be completely honest with you, I'm actually...not a hundred percent sure...how old I am.}

"No?"

{Most of my past before coming to the Alola region is really fuzzy. Except for a few things I remembered fairly recently,} I explained. {I never kept track of how much time passed at my old home. I didn't count the weeks, or months, or years...I only acknowledged the sun and the moon rising and falling as passing days. But I didn't count them either.}

"Huh...I see," she mused. "The Professor's been spreading more information about you through the Alolan officials since the wormhole theory surrounding you got out to the public. He said that he wasn't sure how old you were, either."

{Wait...Does that mean if I'm any younger than Hau, I'd have to stop doing the Island Challenge?} I asked, Rotom gasping alongside me in utter horror at the thought.

"Oh, I doubt that," she smiled. "According to him, your x-rays showed that you were fully mature, but still fairly young. We aren't sure how quickly your species develops from a baby to an adult, but biologically, compared to humans, you're definitely old enough."

"Argh..." I gurgled, relieved to know this. {Thank goodness.}

"I suppose all children must yearn to take a journey of their own choosing when they get to be an age like that. Why, in some fields, they're hardly even children anymore. Especially seeing that Trainers tend to be seen by their Pokémon as parents, or the like."

"Oh, yeah, you'd be right about that!" Rotom buzzed. "You should've seen Grace when she hatched from her egg!"

"Grace?"

{Oh. This one right here.}

I pulled out a Pokémon Ball and opened it, and the small, yet elegant young Eevee materialized on the floor before us.

"Vui?"

{We're at Aether Paradise,} I told her. {This here is the Assistant Branch Chief, Wicke.}

The Evolution Pokémon turned to face her, and her brown eyes lit right up.

"Eievui, eievui!"

She bounced in a circle around the human, then sat down before her. She trusted her immediately.

"Oh, she's a dear. You seem to have a strong bond with your Pokémon."

{That I do. All five of them.}

"That's wonderful. I'm glad to know that you're a dependable Trainer."

"Okay, that's all finished!"

Hau returned from the reception desk, and Grace circled around him as he approached the elevator again.

"Ha! Miss me?"

"Vui, eievui."

"Alright. Now that you're finished healing your Pokémon, Hau, would you two like to see the conservation area on the next floor?"

We both nodded, and we were on our way up again with just one more press of a button on the keypad.

...The conservation area was green with plant life, with various trees and bushes growing outside the fenced-in walkways and a few vines trailing along the walls, and there were even a few manmade water bodies and hills in some places. It was like a specially-crafted ecosystem, sheltered from the rest of the wild world and its many dangers.

"Wow!" Hau exclaimed, thoroughly impressed. "This place is awesome!"

{I could certainly get used to it,} I remarked, admiring the scenery.

"We keep Pokémon that have been harmed or pursued by dangerous people here," Wicke explained to us. "Like, for example, Pokémon that have been targeted by Team Skull."

I snarled at the mere mention of their name.

"I know. It's terrible what some people would do to a Pokémon just to benefit themselves...But it's not just people. Some are simply facing natural threats. Therefore, you may find a lot of rare specimens here. Some species of Pokémon need a little more protection than others...Like Corsola, for instance. They are quite terribly overhunted by a Pokémon called Toxapex. So much so that the latter species tends to leave bits and pieces of them behind at it trails along."

I cringed at the thought of such an image.

"Yeah," Hau nodded. "My gramps is always saying that nature's got its cruel side, as sure as it gives us blessings...But can the Aether Foundation really protect all of the Pokémon that are out there in need of help?"

"Well, nature does still have its own balance," Wicke acknowledged. "Sometimes, it can be difficult to judge how much we humans should try to affect that, can't it?"

"True. I mean, the Toxapex still have to eat something, right?" Hau chortled. "Hey, but the Aether Foundation is pretty amazing! I'm kinda surprised you decided to set up camp in a place like Alola. I mean, it's a pretty small region compared to places like Galar and Sinnoh. Not as powerful, either...What prompted that idea, huh?"

"I couldn't say," she answered plainly, not seeming to know the answer herself. "It's hard to know for sure just what our president is thinking sometimes. She can be a bit of a 'wild card,' as one might put it."

{Huh...So, is she one to make a lot of quote-unquote 'strange decisions?'}

"Well, not always. Once her ideas are explained a bit, they tend to make a bit more sense...You know, since we're on the topic of President Lusamine, if you're ready to meet her then she should be here in the conservation area right now."

"Oh, heck yeah! This should be pretty interesting, huh?"

Wicke nodded and motioned for us to follow her again, and we all headed down the pristine white pathway. There were a few employees along the path, some surveying the area and others tending to Pokémon. There were lots of different species out and about the habitat; a few Grimer exchanging grunts, a Meowth grooming itself in the safety of a tree, a Starmie sitting along the edge of the water with a Corsola...And there was some sort of small, pale blue serpentine Pokémon swimming alongside us. It peeked its head out of the water, the white fins it had for ears perked curiously. Grace, who was still outside of her Poké Ball, gave it a chipper greeting.

"Eie, eievui!"

"Mooouuuuuuh...?"

It tilted its head off to the side, and I stopped to look at it.

{That's an interesting Pokémon,} I remarked. {Rotom. Can you do a scan? They never said anything about PokéDex scans not being allowed here.}

"On it!"

He got a bit closer to the Pokémon.

"Scanning...Scanning...Scan complete!

"Dratini: The Dragon Pokémon! It izzzn't very strong, so it prefers to live on the floors of lakes and riverzzz, eating whatever food sinks down to the bottom. It'zzz constantly growing, so it sheds its skin on an almost daily basis! While it's fairly weak in this stage, it evolvezzz into the sleek and strong Dragonair down the line, which then evolves into the extra powerful Dragonite! Kzzt!"

{Wow...If there wasn't a rule about Poké Balls around here, I might be tempted to catch it. Ha!}

"Hey, Echo! Where'd you go, huh bud?"

{Oh. Guess we stayed put for too long.}

I followed the humans' scent trail to track my party down again, and we continued down the fenced pathway. It wasn't long until we came across a small balcony of sorts, where two other humans were tending to even more Pokémon.

"My sweet Pokémon...I promise I'll keep you safe. I'll protect you with my love..."

Was...that her? She certainly looked different from the other employees, and did have a sense of authority about her. She perked up when she heard us coming up from behind her, and turned around to face us. Wicke bowed lightly, then motioned towards the two of us, and the president nodded in understanding.

"Ah...You must be Echo and Hau," she told us. "I've heard a great deal about you two...Welcome to Aether Paradise: the Aether Foundation's own private island. I am the president of the foundation. But please, just call me Lusamine. I'm so glad we got to meet."

"Pleasure's all ours!" Hau greeted.

{I should say,} I agreed. {Anyone who's goal is to protect Pokémon is on my side.}

"I am glad to know that, Ms. Echo. And I'm glad to know that there are people like you two, who travel the islands to learn more about Pokémon. It's unfortunate that there are people out there not like us, who harm Pokémon for own selfish reasons, or even for profit. Isn't it, though?"

{Erm...What about for food?} I asked, just to be sure of her thoughts on that.

"Oh...The Raticate incident? It just so happens that thinning the Raticate population would benefit the colonies overall. There would be more food to go around for not only them, but other Pokémon as well...Besides, you never really intended any ill will towards the Pokémon, is that right?"

{That is right.}

"Just as I thought...Anyways, that is the reason why I am here. To look after these Pokémon in need...I will be like a mother to them and shower them with love. Even Pokémon from distant worlds, far from the Alola region, are worthy of my love."

"Vui?"

"Oh...?"

She looked down at Grace, who was standing just an inch or so from my foot.

"Is this little one yours?"

{Yes, she's mine. Hatched her from an egg I got at Paniola Ranch. Say hi, why don't you?}

I lightly nudged her with my snout, urging her to greet the president.

"Eie, vui..."

She gave her a strange look, and shrank back, staying fast where she stood.

{What's the matter, Grace?}

She simply shook her head.

"There's nothing to fear, little one," Lusamine told her, bending down and reaching a hand out towards her. "Why, I wouldn't dream of-"

"Eie, VUI!"

She finally sprang forward a bit, but certainly not to be pet. Her ears were pinned backwards, her tail seemed to be twice as bushy as it normally was, and she bore her mouthful of small, but sharp teeth at her.

{Grace!} I snapped.

But right after snapping at the president, her ears drooped, her eyes glossed over with fearful tears, and she shrank back behind me even further.

"Eie, eievui..." she whimpered, still staring contemptuously at Lusamine.

"Oh my goodness...I didn't mean to scare her. I do apologize."

"That's funny..." Wicke thought aloud. "She was really happy to see me."

{I know...Rotom. Any idea what's gotten into her?}

"Uh...No offense, Ms. Prezzzident Lusamine, of course," my PokéDex explained. "But in a nutshell, Grace here sayzzz that she thinks there'zzz somethin' off about you."

The president's eyes widened ever so slightly at the remark.

"Aw, chill out, lil' dudette," Hau assured her, to which she lifted her ears just a bit and relaxed her tail. "She's probably cool. In fact, it's amazing what she's done around here, you know? All of it is, Lusamine! I don't know how you did all of it so quickly! You're, like, not even much older than us, are you?"

"Oh, you sweet boy!" she giggled. "I'm already over forty!"

"Oh, you are?"

I drew my head back in surprise. Over forty? Really? She definitely didn't look it.

It took a bit longer for it to sink in with Hau, but when it finally did he was even more shocked than I was.

"Wait, WHAT?!"

"Oh, you...! The right style does wonders, you know," she replied. "As a matter of fact, yours is a tad bit wanting, hm? Oh, I'll have to take you out sometime and help you pick a smashing new outfit."

"Uh...L-like what you wear?" he asked. "Man...I don't think anyone else would be able to pull off that kind of look as well as you do! Except maybe a friend of mine..."

"Oh, don't you worry. You just leave everything up to me. Trust me-children would all be much happier if they'd only listen to the adults around them. I should-"

She was cut off when a sudden loud noise shook the area, and the entirety of the Aether Paradise seemed to tremble.

We all looked around, suddenly on the alert, once it stopped.

"That tremor..." Wicke rasped. "Did...did something happen on one of the lower floors, perhaps?"

Another noise sounded off, coming from the opposite side of the balcony, and we all turned to come face-to-face with...with...

What on earth was THAT!?!

A gaping hole formed in midair right in front of us, not attached to any surface, as though it was a hole in the air itself. And something floated out of it before us.

Something EXTREMELY strange.

The amorphous creature gracefully glided down towards the ground, its white, semi-transparent form mildly glowing blue, and its flowing tentacles streaming down from its faceless head, which seemed to glitter in the light.

We were all shocked by the sight of it, but Lusamine seemed more in awe than frightened.

"...Did you come," she whispered. "...From another world...?"

"Brr-rrr-rrr..." it garbled, swaying a bit.

"Agh! Miss Lusamine! Get back!" Hau warned her, eyes wide with panic. "That thing's...not right!"

She just ignored him, still drawing closer to it.

"Oh, you poor creature..."

This wasn't good. What was going on? What was that thing? What did it want? Was it dangerous!?

And why on earth was Lusamine just getting closer to it like that when it could possibly ATTACK!?

{Wait, WAIT!}

I screeched for her to stop, and wedged myself in between her and the odd being...

Only to startle it.

And that, in turn, made it angry!

"Brr-RRR-RRR!"

It the blink of an eye, a bright red light exploded from it, and it started to prepare an attack.

The paradise might have been a safe haven for Pokémon, but it didn't look like there was a way out of this battle.

{Grace! Hop to it!}

"Eie, vui!"

She leapt out in front of me to face it, and it launched an odd glowing pink attack. Fortunately, it honed in more slowly than we anticipated, and she was able to dodge it.

{Great! Now, go in for Swift!}

She launched her array of stars at the opponent, and every last one of them made its mark...

But the attack ended up doing very little damage, if any.

{Uh-oh...}

"Eievui..."

In return, the enemy creature fired up a spray of acidic purple fluid, and shot it right into Grace's middle.

"VUI!"

She was flung into the air, dazed and battered by the time she hit the ground again.

{Grace?}

"Eie...vui..."

It was obvious by that display that she didn't have much a chance against it. Of course, she was still the weakest member of the pack, and needed a bit of extra practice, so I decided to spare her from fainting.

{Return, Grace. You did what you could,} I told her as I returned her to her ball. As soon as she was back, though, I called out my next fighter.

{Archer! Show 'em what we got!}

The Arrow Quill Pokémon materialized before his foe, and readied one of his projectiles just before his talons hit the ground.

"Dwit, dritdroo!"

"Brrr-rrr..."

{Spirit Shackle!}

As soon as I said it, the arrow quill shot towards him and made a direct hit. To our good fortune, it did a load more damage than Grace's Swift had.

"Brr-!"

"Dwit dwit!"

{That's it! Now finish it off with Razor Leaf!}

"Droooo, drit-DOO!"

He fired up his sharp leaves and hurled them at the strange being, and it didn't take much else for it to fall in defeat.

{We did it!}

"Drit-twooo!"

He trilled cheerfully as came back over to me, spreading his wing out victoriously.

"Brr-rrr..."

The strange creature we'd just defeated floated back up into midair, then seemed to flicker, becoming even more transparent.

And then, just as suddenly as it was there, the unidentified creature disappeared.

All of us stared at where the mysterious entity had been. One thing was for certain; what had just happened was phenomenal.

"So it's true..." Lusamine whispered to herself. "...I still need that Pokémon...I need to get it back."

"Did you say somethin'?" Hau asked her.

She smiled, but her expression seemed a bit strained.

"...That creature we just saw was undoubtedly an Ultra Beast," she told us, a flash of strange light entering her bright green eyes. "An unknown being from another dimension that suddenly appears from the Ultra Wormhole."

The Ultra Wormhole. The same thing, according to Professor Kukui and Burnet's theory, that brought me here in the first place. I was there when the wormhole opened...Was there a connection to that creature and me, perhaps? Was...I an Ultra beast? It was strange to think, but considering everything else, I didn't put it out of the realm of possibility.

"It looked like it was suffering," Lusamine continued. "Like it pained it to be in this strange place...I can't bear to see that happen. I will save it...And I will love it!"

She turned to the two of us again.

"...Thank you. Both of you...Thank you so much."

{I...didn't hurt it, did I?}

"Dwit, dwit?" Archer chimed in, seeming equally concerned.

"No, no...I believe it will recover," she assured us. But again, there was something about the tone in her voice that wasn't a hundred percent genuine. "Of course, it was natural for you to want to protect an adult like me. Seeing how much we do to protect you children...I will tend to the Ultra Beast in good time."

"Well...Okay, then..." Hau shrugged, seeming a bit off put himself.

"Oh. Wicke," she addressed. "These two are still in the middle of their Island Challenge, aren't they?"

"Yes, Madame President."

"I would like you to deliver them to their next island, if you will. I have to make sure that none of our poor resident Pokémon were harmed in anyway by what occurred...And I will need to speak with Mr. Faba about exactly what happened downstairs. And of course, I will have to start preparing the foundation for our newest and perhaps greatest duty yet: the protection of the Ultra Beasts!"

"Oh, yes ma'am! Certainly!"

"Thank you, Wicke."

"Bye, Miss Lusamine!" Hau bid her, and she waved back before turning and leaving to tend to her duties.

"I'll see you two off to Ula'ula Island, then," Wicke told us as we boarded the elevator once more.

"Man...Never thought I'd see anything like that," Hau remarked as we descended towards the docks. "Dang, we gotta tell Professor Burnet about this the next time we see her! AND Professor Kukui!"

{Good idea,} I replied. {And we'll have to tell them about that Ultra Beast that we faced off against.}

"Yes, I think it would be best if you did that," Wicke agreed with us as we got off the elevator and headed for the boat. "I am very glad I got to meet you both, and I hope you both have wonderous adventures on your Island Challenge. Oh, and I got you each a little something for you to remember your visit by."

She handed us both a bag of familiar-looking treats.

"So I've heard, you're both quite fond of Malasadas. Especially you, Hau."

"Oh, YEAH!" he celebrated. "Thanks a million!"

"It's the least I can do," she smiled. "Remember to share with your Pokémon!"

"Will do!" Hau assured her as we boarded the ferry that was waiting for us. "And thanks again for everything, Ms. Wicke!"




...



"Hoooo, boy...My heart's still kinda racing, you know?"

{What? Over the whole Ultra Beast thing back at Aether Paradise?}

"Yeah...You?"

{My heart isn't racing over it anymore...But I do have a lot on my mind.}

We were well on our way to Ula'ula Island at that point, nothing but the vast expanse of open ocean to be seen outside the window.

"Dang, though...The Ultra Wormhole is real, and so are the Ultra Beasts...The world is just way too biiiiig. And we still have more things to discover on Ula'ula Island, too!"

{I know...We're really small in this universe when you think about it...It can be kinda scary to think about sometimes, can't it?}

"Maybe. But there's still plenty of good things to think about in life, aren't there?"

{That's true...}

"Like malasadas!" he gave as an example, pulling one out of each of our bags. "How 'bout we dig in? It'll ease your nerves as much as it'll fill your stomach!"

{I couldn't have said it better myself.}

"A'ight! Let's chow down!"

He was already starting to eat his when he was finishing his sentence; an amusing thing to witness.

{So...Hate to spoil the good mood we got going on here,} I continued. {But don't you think Lusamine was kinda weird?}

"What? About the whole 'finding me an outfit' thing?" he joked, his speech muffled by the malasada in his mouth.

{Well, not just that. She seemed to be trying a little too hard to be nice to us, and...well, then there were the weird remarks, like you just said. And then the strange things she said about the Ultra Beasts...There's something about her that just rubs me the wrong way. It took me a bit to see it, though...Makes me wish I'd paid more attention to Grace's behavior earlier.}

"Huh...In hindsight, I can see your point," Hau nodded lightly. "But I mean, she IS the president if the Aether Foundation. She's got a lot of stuff on her plate, so she could just be stressed out over everything, you know?"

{I don't know...}

"Hey, come on. Let's not be all grim and gloomy. We've got an Island Challenge to look forward to!"

I nodded, and we both dug into our Malasadas some more.

"Ahhhh, so GOOOD...Aw, shoot, I already ate the whole thing!"

I chattered a laugh. No matter how bad it got, things would never be grim and gloomy as long as Hau was around.
 
CHAPTER 23: The Illusion of Control New

GingerTheBarnOwl

Bug Catcher
Pronouns
she/her
"Land ahoy!" Hau announced as we stepped off the ferry and back onto dry land, heading up the stairway to get a better look at the place.

{So this is Ula'ula Island...I like the looks of it.}

The city we had arrived at had a warm and inviting feel to it, and it wasn't quite as sleek and modern as cities like Hau'loi or Heahea, and especially not as polished as Aether Paradise for that matter. Some of the rooves of the buildings sloped inward, and came to points at their corners and apex instead of just being flat, and the roads were made of cobblestone in place of asphalt. The surrounding nature incorporated itself into the city very nicely, flowers blooming on the trees along the paths and long shoots of bamboo growing up from the ground and towering over us.

"Yeah, it sure looks different from Melemele and Akala Island," he agreed. "...Hey, I got an idea!"

{What's that?}

"What say you and I pitch ourselves a battle here? New island, new challenge, am I right? We gotta prep our teams for the trials ahead!"

{Well...I'd have to run into the PMC over there really quick first. Grace took a bit of a beating. Be right back.}

"Sure thing. I'll still be here!"

A quick dash i and out of the Pokémon Center and I was ready. And it was no sooner than when I stepped out the door that I saw Hau readying his first Pokémon.

"You ready?"

I nodded and let out a confident snarl.

"Alright, then! Let's go, Eevee!"

{Grace, this one should be easier on you!}

Both Eevees materialized on the battlefield. Hau's gave off a low growl, and Grace simply stood her ground and stiffened her form.

"Eievui...!"

"Go in for Tackle, Eevee!"

{Use Swift!}

The enemy Pokémon honed in on us, only to be struck by the array of never-missing stars right in the chest, sending him flying backwards again.

"Ooh, a critical hit right off the bat! You're startin' this battle off with fire, Echo!" Rotom buzzed.

{Good job! Now, Sand Attack!}

She kicked up a cloud of dust and hurled it into the still-disoriented Eevee's face.

"Vui!" it yipped, staggering backwards again.

"Come on, Eevee, you can break through it! Use Bite!"

"Eie, vui!"

Hau's Eevee managed to shake the sand from its eyes, then pounced onto Grace and sank its needle-like teeth into her leg before we had a chance to do anything else.

"EIEVUI!"

"That's it, Eevee!"

{Quick Attack! It's in close range so it should hit hard!}

"Eie, eie-VUI!"

She shoved him off with a swift kick of her back legs, then used them again to shoot herself up and towards him, ramming her head right into his. The enemy Eevee staggered backwards, disoriented by the attack.

"Come on, lil' dude! Shake it off!"

"Eie, vui...Vui!"

He shook his head vigorously, then gave Grace a glowering look, emitting a low snarl at her. She backed up a bit, put off by his display of aggression.

{He's using Growl!} I told her. {Don't let it intimidate you. Counter it with Baby-Doll Eyes! It'll confuse him, for sure!}

"Eie, vui!" she nodded back, and the very next moment, she made her eyes all big and cute-looking, and even fluttered them at the opponent to further throw him off guard.

"Vui?"

He looked pretty put off by her reaction to his Growl attack; probably figured she would be pretty badly scared. But it didn't work as planned for him.

{Now!} I ordered. {Pile on the Swift attacks!}

"Vui!"

She launched her next array of stars, and they made their mark, as they always did; Swift never missed its target.

"Eie!" the enemy hollered.

{Keep it up!}

She shot out two more series of the projectiles, and the opposing Eevee scampered around the battlefield attempting to avoid them, only for them to gain on him even more with each passing second, and before any of us even knew it, they had stuck him again.

Once, then twice, and on the third hit the Eevee lost its footing and skidded to a halt across he ground, completely drained and dazed.

It was out.

{Nice work out there, Grace!}

"Vui...Eie, vui..."

{Grace?}

For the third time, she started to glow, and the faint indications of changes developed beneath the white light.

Again, she was resisting evolution.

{You remember what I told you, right?}

"Vui, vui eievui...!" she groaned, still trying to fight its affects.

{What'd she say, Rotom?}

"She'zzz still not going to evolve, she said! She knows it izzzn't an Umbreon she's turning into, and she's that determined to prevent evolution until she knowzzz she can!"

{Grace, I said it before, and I'll say it again. I DON'T want you to forcefully stop your evolution. If you keep resisting it, then...Well, I don't know what might happen, but I doubt it'll be anything good!}

"Vui, vui...Eie, eie-VUI!"

But just a few seconds after I said it, the glow dissipated, and she heaved out a breath of relief. She'd stopped it.

{Agh...I don't want this to happen again, Grace,} I said to her.

"Vui, eievui..." she mumbled, still steadfast in her decision. I sighed, then pulled out her Poké Ball.

{You did really well, though,} I praised as she was drawn back into the capsule. {Take a rest...You probably need it after all that.}

"Hope she'll be alright there," Hau thought aloud, though still readying his next Poké Ball. "Think you should take her back to the Pokémon Center after this and ask them about what's goin' on?"

{I'm considering it,} I replied, reaching for my second Pokémon as well. {But not before we wrap up this fight.}

"I gotcha, cousin! Noibat! Take over!"

{King! Let's get 'em!}

Both Dragon-Type Pokémon materialized on the battlefield at once. King snarled, and the Noibat screeched.

"Kick this off with Supersonic!"

"Noi, NOOOOIIII!"

The piercing scream of the tiny opponent rang high and loud enough to disorient just about anyone, and especially someone with arms too short to reach up and cover his ear holes. It was so intense for him that he began to bang his tail against the ground, perhaps in an attempt to fight off the horrible sound.

{You can break through it!} I called out, my own gurgly voice muffled by the sound of the attack. {Use Crunch!}

{Wha...}

He caught his thrashing tail from the corner of his eye, and then, without any warning, started to run in circles chasing after it!

{What are you doing!?}

A moment later he'd gotten close enough, and clamped down on his own tail with his powerful glowing jaws. And the next he was screaming in agony at the pain of the damage he had mistakenly inflicted upon himself.

"Ha! A Supersonic attack from something like a Noibat will confuse just about ANY Pokémon!" Hau cheered as his Noibat finally stopped making the awful sound.

King was staggering around the battlefield, looking about ready to fall over. He didn't seem to realize that the noise had stopped, so I made some of my own.

{King!} I cawed. {Try your Dragon Tail!}

{Huh...?} he gurgled back. {Dragon Tail...?}

{That's right! Go for it!}

He shook his head again, a bit more lightly than what was usual, then blinked a few times to assess his target.

"Absorb!" Hau commanded.

Just as the enemy began to approach, Tyrunt's gaze hardened, his bright yellow eyes fixed heavily on their target.

His tail started to glow, and just when the opposing Pokémon was about to latch onto him with its teeth and drain his energy, he spun himself around and whammed his tail right into the enemy.

There was a burst of energy, and the next thing we knew, the Noibat had collided with its Trainer, sending both of them falling to the ground. Hau examined the tiny Pokémon in his grasp, and it hung their limply, its steady breathing the only sign of life in it.

"Dragon Tail, huh...?" he remarked as he returned the fainted Pokémon to its ball. "Yeah...In hindsight, I probably should've taught Noibat a Dragon-Type move before getting too serious."

He shrugged it off, then sent out his third Pokémon.

"Not bad. But let's see how well your Tyrunt there can take this! Raichu! Show 'em what you got!"

The Mouse Pokémon let loose a few sparks as he formed on the battlefield from the glowing red light, and he sounded off a not-so-intimidating battle cry.

"Rai- CHU!"

{King. You still okay to fight?}

{That Pokémon?} he chuffed confidently. {It doesn't look so tough. I can take him on, no doubt!}

I cast another glance at the still-bleeding wound on his tail that he'd given himself.

{Positive?}

{Absolutely!} he barked.

{Well...Okay,} I nodded. {It is a Psychic-Type. See how much your Crunch attack does on him!}

"Use Psychic!"

My trusty Fossil Pokémon bore his mouthful of sharp teeth again, and they started to glow the moment he kicked off into a charging sprint. But in return, the enemy conjured up a pretty decent-sized aura of psychic energy around him, and it glowed a bright fuchsia as he fired it at us. King tried to bust through the energy by leaping forward and into the air towards the Raichu, but that only ended with him being thrown backwards and slammed back onto the hard ground.

"Grack!"

{King!}

He emitted a low, pained growl as he rose back onto his feet. The Psychic attack had apparently done more damage than either of us had anticipated.

{Are you okay?}

{I'm fine,} he insisted, still trying to shake off the mentally-trying affects of the move. {I'll give Crunch one more try.}

{Careful out there, King. That Raichu is stronger than we thought!}

{Maybe...But can it withstand a powerful Dark-Type move!?}

The moment after he finished speaking to me, he charged back up into another sprint, and honed in on the enemy Raichu once more.

"One more Psychic!" Hau ordered. "Don't let him hit you!"

The enemy Pokémon fired up another wave of weaponized energy, and King's fangs glowed white at the same time as he leapt into the air and opened his gaping jaws.

There was a crash, a cry, and a cloud of dust scattered across the arena. The wave of Psychic energy dispersed into the atmosphere from beneath the debris, sending the thick dust off with it.

And there on the battlefield lay both fighters. King was battered, bruised, and clearly knocked out cold, and Hau's Raichu was the same, except sporting a series of bleeding puncture wounds along where the Crunch attack had landed instead of scuffs and bruises.

It was a draw between them.

"Whoa..."

{Wow...}

"...One thing's for sure: your Tyrunt really knows how to fight."

{I should say the same about your Raichu.}

We both returned our fainted Pokémon, glad that we were so close to the PMC.

{Well, King...You did it. And you did good.}

"Great job out there, Raichu. Go 'head and rest up."

But as soon as we finished praising our downed fighters, we each extracted another Poké Ball and called out our next ones.

"Come on out, Brionne!"

{Archer! Let's end this!}

Our respective Grass and Water-Type starter Pokémon emerged from their capsules and onto the battlefield.

"Brrriiiii!"

"Dwitdwit-droo!"

"Start this off with Icy Wind, Brionne!"

{Razor Leaf!}

Archer fired up his array of sharp leaves, readying them for launch, and shot them at the opponent, who had already fired her Icy Wind attack. To our dismay, upon colliding with the cloud of frosty air, the leaves froze solid, and plummeted to the ground.

"Ha! We worked on that one in the Lush Jungle!"

{Huh...Not bad. But let's see how well you handle a Spirit Shackle!}

Archer took the cue to attack, and pulled an arrow quill from his wing, aiming it and shooting it in just a fraction of a second. It twirled around the target, struck the ground, then burst out in an eerie purple explosion. Hau's Brionne was thrown back in an instant.

{Nice work, Archer!}

"Dwit, dwit!" he chippered, turning his head to face me with a grin on his beak.

"Bri..."

The enemy Pokémon slowly lifted herself back onto her front flippers, looking very unamused.

"You okay, girl?"

"Brionne...Bri, bri!"

She called back to him and nodded before turning back to face Archer, an angry glow in her usually docile gaze.

"Alright, then! Icy Wind, one more time!"

{Try another Spirit Shackle!}

The moment Hau saw my Decidueye reach into his wing, he called out one more time.

"Roll off to the side!"

He was just in time. The arrow had already fired by the time he'd finished giving the command, but the Pop Star Pokémon was still able to roll off to the right of the arrow as it hit the ground, and she tumbled out of the way of the impending energy burst. She was quite a bit faster than she was the last time we'd battled. Perhaps Hau had been improving on her speed as well, given that she didn't have much in the way of legs to carry her away from danger.

But he seemed just as surprised as we were.

"Whoa...Nice one, Brionne! How'd ya get so quick, huh?"

"Bri...Bri..."

The glow in her eyes intensified, still locked onto her opponent.

{Wait a minute,} I chattered to Rotom. {I know what that glow signifies...!}

"I know it as much azzz you! Brionne is about to-"

"BRI!"

And just like that, the telltale glow spread down from the Pokémon's eyes and engulfed her entire body.

All of us stared in awe at the sight of it. From beneath the blinding light, the change began. She became larger, more streamlined, just as Archer had. The ruffs on her body spread out, and their colors began to shimmer even more.

The light dissipated, and revealed Hau's former Brionne, which had now become...

"Pri, ra...?"

"Whoooooa..."

I let out a raspy gurgle of amazement as the newly evolved Pokémon turned to face its owner. Her top half was a pristine white, and her long, flowing tail was a deep ocean blue. A streamer of blue hair now flowed gently out from her head in the hazy ocean breeze.

A stunningly beautiful creature, had I ever seen one.

{It's amazing...} I chattered to Rotom. {Can you get a scan?}

"On it, boss! Bzzt!"

He approached Hau's partner, who tilted her head to the side curiously as he gathered the data.

"Scanning...Scanning...Scan complete!"

"Primarina: the Soloist Pokémon! It uzzzes its mesmerizing singing voice as its key weapon in battle, both entrancing opponents and controlling the power of itzzz attacks! The melodies it knows are passed down from one generation to the next, and they say there izzzn't a sight more fantastical than a Primarina leading its colony in song under the light of a full moon. Ahh...Soundzzz relaxing just to think about!"

{It's already a fantastical Pokémon without the moonlight or the song,} I remarked. {Ah, no offense, though, Archer.}

My Decidueye wasn't bothered by my comment. Rather, he seemed just as in awe as we were, staring at the Pokémon with wide eyes. Finally, his expression relaxed, and he nodded, seemingly satisfied by something, then turned to face me.

"Dwit, dwit droo. Trrrrill."

{What's he saying, Rotom?}

My PokéDex turrned towards me as well, a confused look on his screen.

"Uh...He sayzzz he wants to call it a draw."

{What? Archer, why?}

"Dwit, dwit, drrrroo drit dwoo. Troo trrrrril..."

{What'd that one mean?}

"Direct tranzzzlation? 'Tut tut; I'll tell you in good time, Master. Just let this one go..."

I rolled my eyes, but ultimately allowed the forfeit.

{Hau. You wanna call the match off? Archer says he doesn't want to fight anymore right now.}

"No? Huh...Well, okay. But I guess you win by default, 'cuz you still have more Pokémon that can fight!"

"While that izzz true," Rotom pointed out. "Neither of them have a good type matchup against a Primarina! Sassafras is part Fire-Type, which is weak to water, and Red is part Fighting-Type, which is weak to Primarina's new additional typing: Fairy! Kzzrt!"

{She's a Fairy-Type now?} I asked. {What are they like in battle?}

"They're good niche Pokémon against big and tough Dark, Fighting and Dragon-Types! And they can hold their own pretty well in neutral matchups too! Though they tend to attack a bit better than they defend...And they aren't good picks against Steel, Poison and Fire-Typezzz."

{Interesting...I wonder if we'll ever have one on the team.}

"Well, one thing's for sure: Hau beat ya to it! Zzt!"

"Guess so. Ha!" Hau nodded as he approached his starter Pokémon and stroked her snout in praise. "Awesome job out there, girl. You wanna stay out of your Poké Ball and be with us for a while?"

"Ri!"

"I take that as a yes," he grinned. "So, we goin' back to the PMC, Echo?"

{That was the plan,} I answered, already turning to go that way. {Come on. The nurse oughta know how to deal with Grace.}

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"Hmm...So you say this has happened three times over the past few days?"

{That's right. And the last time was just about fifteen minutes ago,} I told the nurse at the front desk. {She seems to get worn down by it every time it happens. I assumed that resisting evolution wasn't very healthy, but I wanted to consult a professional first.}

"Well, might I say that that was a wise decision of you as a Trainer," she nodded and smiled. "While it doesn't happen very often, I have seen cases of Pokémon resisting the process of evolution before. Usually either because they simply don't want to evolve, or because they think they might disappoint their Trainers by becoming something they don't want."

{That's the case with my Eevee here. Back when I was doing the Akala trials, we encountered a wild Umbreon. And seeing how awestruck I was by it, she decided that she was going to evolve into one to please me...I know that Eevee has multiple possible evolutions, so if she's resisting over and over again she must know that she's turning into something other than an Umbreon.}

"I see...The forced resistance of evolution can be physically taxing on a Pokémon, since it uses up quite a bit of energy. Especially in the long run..."

"So, this could be a problem if it isn't stopped," Hau guessed.

"Yes. A fatigued Pokémon is a lot less likely to win any battles, and much more likely to get badly hurt."

"Vui..." Grace whined, not enthralled by the thought of herself being groggy and disoriented on the battlefield.

{That's bad...} I gurgled. {Nurse. In order for an Eevee to evolve into an Umbreon, they have to evolve during the night, right?}

"That is true," she nodded. "But the second key factor is that they have to be particularly close friends with their Trainer as well."

{I see. Well, I know that part is already in place.}

"Eievui!"

Grace sat up straight for a moment, then pushed up onto her hind legs to press the tip of her snout against my own.

{I don't usually go looking for a fight past sundown unless it's something big, like a Grand Trial,} I remarked. {Do you think if I took her into battle more often during the night, that might work?}

"Perhaps," the nurse replied. "But until the right conditions are met, you may consider an Everstone for her to hold."

{Everstone?} I asked. {What's that?}

"This right here," she told me, pulling out a smooth, round grey rock from the desk shelf. "We keep supplies like this on handy for Trainers looking to build their teams a certain way. These stones have a peculiar effect on Pokémon in that they prevent them from evolving if they're holding it. So it may help your Eevee until you can work something out."

She handed me the stone, and I presented it to Grace. She sniffed it curiously, then took it in her mouth and looked back up at me.

"Vui, vui eievui!" she chippered through her clenched teeth, and she proceeded to tuck the stone into the thick mane around her neck.

{You don't think it'll fall out of there during a battle, do you, Grace?}

"That's actually less likely than you might think," the nurse informed us. "An Eevee's mane is fairly good at holding things. It would probably only fall out if she were hit by a particularly hard physical attack."

{Huh...That's convenient,} I remarked. {Thanks again for healing our Pokémon back up.}

"Anytime. We hope to see you again soon!"

All we had to do next was stock up on some more healing items at the PokéMart and we were on our way.

"You didn't buy a whole lot...You get a confidence boost?" Hau asked as we headed out the door.

{No. Just short on cash,} I answered, a sheepish, toothy grin plastered on my face. {Used most of it to buy the Jaw Fossil back on Akala and most of what was left to help pay for the room at the hotel.}

"Oh. Well, at least you got King, now!"

{Wanna know something interesting?}

"Always!"

{When I went to get King restored from the fossil, I was so excited about it that I just...took the fossil in my mouth at the counter and ran over there. And apparently, me having it in my mouth, sort of...Mixed in some of my DNA into his genetic code by accident.}

"Yo, what?"

{Uh-huh. So technically, King is...Part Velociraptor.}

"...Whoa..." Hau rasped. "So, are you two, like...blood related?"

{I...guess so.}

"That's AWESOME!"

{And did I ever tell you that he and I can directly communicate with each other?}

"REALLY? Like, ACTUALLY understand each other word for word?"

{Exactly. Our dialects are a tad different, but it still clicked the moment we started speaking to one another.}

"Man...Wish I could do that with my team."

"You know, I already serve as Echo's tranzzzlator!" Rotom piped up. "If you wanna know what one of your teammates has to say to ya, just ask me!"

"When? Like, now?"

"If you want, sure! That's okay, right, boss?"

I nodded, and Hau smiled excitedly and proceeded to release his Noibat from its Poké Ball.

"So, what's on your mind, lil' buddy?"

"Noi? Noi, noibat...Noi, noi!" it chippered.

"What'd he say, Rotom?"

"He said, and I quote, 'Me? Food izzz on my mind...Can't wait for lunch!'"

The three of us chortled. For such a small Pokémon, Hau's Noibat definitely had a big appetite.

"Ha! Well, it ain't that much further off, so don't worry! In the mean time, how 'bout we do some exploring while we wait for Lillie and the Professor to show up? Get to know the place a bit more, huh?"

{Sounds like a plan,} I nodded. {Rotom. Any places of particular interest on your map?}

"Well, there'zzz the library, the community center...Oooh, the Malie Garden sounds interesting! Bzzrt! It looks really big...And the entrance is just ahead to our right!"

{Well, what are we waiting for? Let's check it out!}

"Hey, wait up, Echo!"

We turned a hard right, and the cobblestone beneath our feet smoothened into stone bricks, and the sidewalks melted into lush, green grass. Before either of us even knew it, the city around us had disappeared, and in its place sat a vast, verdant field, which bloomed with countless plants and was teeming with wildlife. A body of clear blue water wound through the green like a ribbon, gold-lined bridges connecting either side.

It was a paradise. A paradise for people, for Pokémon...For creatures like myself. It was strange and bittersweet, how much the garden already reminded me of my old home.

"Wow...Pretty sweet, ain't it?"

{It's wonderful...} I chattered. {What kinds of Pokémon do you suppose live around here?}

"I'm about to go find out! With all this tall grass, there's bound to be something strong hiding in there! You game?"

{I...think I'll just sort of wander around for now, really,} I replied. {I'd like to take in the atmosphere a bit before engaging in any battles.}

"I gotcha. You wanna meet back up towards the north end once we're done?"

{That's a good idea.}

"Awesome. See ya then!"

He ran off into the tall grass, and I continued down the walkway. As I passed over the bridge, it occurred to me that this seemingly natural landscape was still touched by the hands of man. Perhaps it was even formed by the humans in the first place, seeking a retreat from their daily city lives. It was so peculiar, yet it seemed so normal, how the humans I now intermingled with could shape the world around them, change it...

...Control it.

Were the humans able to control an entire planet in the manner I'd seen so far? Or at least most of it? It had seemed that way for a while back in my old home, where the humans oversaw nearly everything, and they worked to right wrongs and make things go according to a plan. It seemed that way my whole life there...Until the fateful day we were let out of our paddock to go up against that horrible beast. Where did such a thing come from? Owen had presented a ripped-off piece of its flesh to us to smell so we could track it down, so they had obviously known about it. But the humans could make enclosures for us, so that we wouldn't run wild...Why couldn't they have made one to house that monster in? Were they doing it at the time, and it just wasn't done yet? Had it outgrown its old paddock? Had it...

...Had it ESCAPED?

Did they let us out thinking we would help them get it back in?

If the humans could supposedly control an entire planet, but not something that lived on it with them, then...Were they even REALLY in control over the earth in the first place?

And if they weren't, then...who was? Was ANYONE really in control over ANYTHING? What if the concept of control itself was just a figment of-

"Oof-Hey!"

"Huh?"

I'd apparently been so deep in thought and so immersed in the scenic garden that I hadn't been paying much attention to the PEOPLE around me, and I accidentally bumped someone off to my side by mistake. Once the mild shock wore off, the yellow-clad human turned to face me, looking slightly flustered.

"Ah, sorry about that!" he stammered. "Boy, I really need to look where I'm goin' in here more, that's the third time I've...run into..."

He trailed off when he finally processed the sight of me, eyes widening.

"Oh...You...You're the..." he stammered. "You're that Trainer from Melemele Island everyone's been talking about."

{The news has spread this far already?} I chattered. {I didn't think it'd gotten all the way across Akala yet.}

"Yeah, yeah, it has! I've heard it all over!" he informed me. "Ah, and you're the Rotom PokéDex she uses to speak with! Oh, my gosh...Echo, did they say your name was? Wow. I...I-I apologize for the inconvenience, I didn't think it'd be YOU. Ha...This is crazy, I haven't been here for that long, but news has been getting around, and we've all heard of you, and what you look like, but now you're ACTUALLY here. Just...Wow...Y-you're taller than I pictured."

It seemed as though the humans were fairly impressed by me at this point. But if they thought I was tall and fast and smart, then what would they think if they saw someone like Blue, or even Charlie and Delta, if they'd ended up here instead of me?

"Wow..." he continued to marvel. "I...I gotta pitch a battle with you!"

{Me?} I crawed. {You mean...Right now?}

"If you're up for it! Whadaya say? Let's do it!"

Without any further ado, he pulled out a Poké Ball and sent out a fighter.

"Persian! Let's see what we got!"

The Pokémon materialized on the field and struck a fighting pose; it was a sleek, elegant-looking creature, with long, pointed whiskers and a cream-colored coat, and it let out a deep, trilling noise as it rose its head, somewhere in between a purr and a growl.

"Prooowwwrrrr..."

{Wow...What kind of Pokémon is this one, Rotom?}

"That'zzz my cue!"

He zipped around the opponent to gather the information on it, dodging a few curious swipes of its front paw as he went.

"Scanning...Scanning...Scan complete!"

"Persian: the Classy Cat Pokémon! Its lithe muscles and lean build allow it to remain completely silent as it moved around! It's very popular with higher class people, but behind its elegant appearance lies a vicious temper, as it hazzz a tendency to lash out at people for little to no reason. Like its pre-evolved form, Meowth, Persian has an Alolan regional variant, which sportzzz an even softer fur coat and a rounded face! Bzzt! Wow..."

"Ha ha, yeah...He can get a bit uppity sometimes, but he does me good in battle!"

The Pokémon rose its head up higher, enjoying the praise.

{What's its typing, Rotom?}

"Pure Normal-Type, boss!"

{Normal-Type, eh? Well, let's see how well it does against Fire!}

I pulled out a Poké Ball myself, and sent out my own fighter.

{Sassafras! Show 'em how we do it in Alola!}

My equally elegant Salazzle formed on the battleground, and she let out a trilling hiss as she rose up on her hind legs.

"Sssssrrrrrrr...!"

"Alright, Persian! Start this off with Fury Swipes!"

"Grrr-OWWWR!"

{Counter with Flame Burst!}

As the enemy began to advance on us, claws extending, Sassafras fired up the glowing orange flames in her mouth and shot them at the Persian just when it seemed on top of us. It snarled in pain as it flew backwards, but managed to land back on its feet with a nimble flip.

"Mrowwwr..."

"Try a Quick Attack!"

{Dragon Rage!}

The Toxic Lizard Pokémon attempted to finish charging her attack before the Persian could hone in, but it's speed turned out to match our own; a sprint-charged headbutt sent her off her own feet, and the glowing orb of draconic energy burst out in the sky above like a firecracker.

"Now go in for Fury Swipes! You're close enough!"

"Srrrr..."

My Pokémon emitted another low trill of a growl, then stood still on all fours, looking very deep in thought. Even the opponent seemed curious by this behavior.

{What's she doing?} I wondered aloud.

It was the very next moment that she flashed white, just for a split second, then rose back onto her hind legs, looking like she'd just figured something out.

"Sal-RRR!"

"Holy moly, Echo! I think we got a new thing goin' for us!" Rotom suddenly exclaimed. "It lookzzz like our buddy Sassafras just learned the move Nasty Plot!"

{Nasty Plot?} I repeated, the name of the move leaving an odd feeling on my tongue. Sassafras? Plot nastily? It didn't seem like something she'd do. {What does that do?}

"She juzzzt thinks about her next move for a moment, and then the move raises her Special Attack by a whole lot! It'll make her special attacks FAR more powerful! Zzt!"

{Is that so?}

"Yep!"

{Well...} I gurgled, a grin inching its way across my muzzle. {If that's the case, then go in for Flame Burst again, Sassafras!}

"Sal-ar!" she nodded back, looking equally pleased.

"Come on, Persian!" the opposing Trainer called out. "Fury Swipes, hurry!"

The Persian snapped back into concentration, then rose its foreleg for the attack, baring its mouthful of sharp teeth while it was at it.

But it was already too late.

The flames, now glowing with more energy than ever before, shot right into the enemy and engulfed it, burning gold as they collided. Red and white sparks flew out from all sides, and when the explosion finally died, it revealed the Persian on the ground, knocked senseless and its golden coat singed.

"Persian. Return!"

He withdrew his fainted Pokémon, then pulled out another.

"Not gonna lie, that was pretty dang good...But your Salazzle won't do so well up against THIS! Come on out, Marowak!"

{Fighting Fire with Fire, huh?} I told Sassafras, readying for the opposing Ghost and Fire-Type to materialize. {Lets's see how our Dragon Rage does against-}

"Marowak!"

Wait...What?

That didn't look like the Marowak I'd seen at Wela Volcano Park. The bone it carried had no flames burning on its tips. and it was a sandy brown color instead of a deep maroon. It looked more like an overgrown Cubone, really.

"Uh oh...That's a KANTONIAN Marowak, not an Alolan one like the onezzz here!" Rotom pointed out to me. "A pure Ground-Type? Against a Salazzle? This izzzn't going to be very pretty. Bzzrt!"

{We can at least give it a shot and see what she'd got!} I decided. {We can always switch! Sassafras! Dragon Rage!}

She fired up the glowing orb in her mouth without missing a beat.

"Counter that with Bone Club!"

"Rooo-WAK!"

It swung the bone in its grasp at the attack just as it was about to land, and sent the orb flying back towards us. Fortunately, Sassafras was slick and quick enough to weave out of the way in time, and it burst into midair right in front of me, just a yard or so away. I could feel the force of the energy as it exploded, and was grateful that it hadn't gotten the chance to make impact with ME.

"Now, Marowak! Bonemerang!"

{Dodge and use Flame Burst!}

Again, she darted off to the side, but not before the enemy Marowak threw its bone right in the direction she was going. To my dismay, it had predicted our evasive maneuver, and the hard white club slammed smack into my Pokémon's face as it whizzed by, spinning as it went.

{SASSAFRAS!}

"Slrrrr..."

She was badly disoriented by the attack, and struggled to stay on her hind feet. I was just about to call out another attack when the bone twirling through the air made a U-turn, and headed right back for her again from the OPPOSITE direction!

{Look out!}

Again, I was a moment too late. The attack made impact, and it took whatever was left in my Salazzle out, as the very next minute, she was down on the grassy ground, worn weary and knocked out cold.

It seemed as though I HAD overestimated her.

{Return, Sassafras...You did well.}

She was drawn back into her Poké Ball, and I pulled out my next fighter...A pure Ground-Type? Archer would have a hay day.

{Let's take 'em down, Archer! This one should be easy for you!}

The Arrow Quill Pokémon materialized on the battlefield, and flashed an arrow to intimidate his opponent.

"Drit-droo!"

The opposing Trainer seemed flustered by the sight of my Decidueye; perhaps he didn't have much in the way of coverage attacks.

"We do have one thing up our sleeve, Marowak!" he called out to his Pokémon. "Use Fling!"

"Rowww-row-AK!"

It hurled its bone club at us again, but Archer and I were one step ahead.

"Take to the skies and dodge!"

Before I even had to give the order, he had already spread his wings, and just before the bone could collide with him, Archer was airborne, and had already risen several yards above our heads. The Fling attack spiraled, then came back to the attacker, who grabbed the bone as it watched the enemy circle above.

{Now! Razor Leaf!}

"Droooo, Dwit DWIT!"

He summoned his trusty blizzard of leaves around him, and they cascaded down onto the Marowak with such speed and intensity that it seemed to turn the air of the battlefield green itself. There was a cry from under the flurry as the leaves made their mark, and then, as suddenly as it'd rang out, it went silent.

The leaves finally dissipated, and they revealed the Trainer's Marowak lying motionless on the ground, its hide covered in cuts left by the sharp foliage.

"Marowak. Return."

He withdrew his fallen Pokémon back into its ball, then looked up to face us as we approached.

"Ah...That was...incredible! I heard you were pretty good, but...WOW. I still got a ways to go, huh?"

{Well, so do I,} I replied. {We all do...Seems like everybody wants to be the best Pokémon Trainer around here, don't they?}

"A lot of people do. That's what the sport is about! Ah...But there can only be one best, can't there?"

{Who's the best Pokémon Trainer right now? Do you know?}

"The best? In the world? Out of EVERYONE? Wow. Well, uh...The Kanto Champions are both pretty strong. They're always challenging each other for the top spot, so they kinda take turns on the Champion's seat...Been at it for years. And Lance is the Johto Champion, where I'm from. REALLY good with Dragon Types. Steven's got an entourage of Rock and Steel-Types that I hear are near impossible to beat, Cynthia's Garchomp is a MONSTER. Man...I'm not sure I can give you a definitive answer to that. All of the Champions would probably have to take each other on in a battle royal down at the dome to find out! Ha!"

{Huh...You don't suppose either of us could be up there on the level of the Champions one day, do you?}

"Well, it'd be a long, winding road to the top, and not everybody gets there...But never say never, you know?"

{I don't think I will...Not yet. Not after everything I've learned so far...}

"Ah...Well, thanks for the fight. But I gotta run. My girlfriend's down by the tea shop waitin' on me. Catch ya around!"

{Bye.}

He was off in a flash, leaving me, Rotom and Archer standing there in the midst of the garden by ourselves.

"Wow...Even the people around here who AREN'T localzzz are still super friendly! Bzzrt!"

{Rotom.}

"Yeah, Echo?"

{...Do we control our Pokémon in battle?}

"Um...What do you mean?"

{Like...Are we, the Trainers, really the ones running the battle? Or are they the ones in charge during the fight?}

"Well, ghee, I would think the Trainer controlzzz the Pokémon. Granted the Pokémon is willing to listen."

{And if it's not?}

"Uhh...Well, then I guess it would be hard for the Trainer to control the Pokémon if it didn't wanna listen, but with some discipline and negotiation, it wouldn't be impossible to sway it. That's just how it workzzz between Trainer and Pokémon. You both have to work things out side by side!"

"Dwit-droo!" Archer agreed.

"Hrmm..."

"Um, any reason you're asking stuff like this, boss? I mean, no offense, but...It seemzzz a bit out of the blue."

{I don't know. Before we started up that battle, I was...questioning a few things I thought I knew for sure.}

"Oh...Doezzz this have anything to do with your old life back with your sisters?"

{Sort of, yes...}

A long silence followed. There was a lot to say about what I was thinking, but I wasn't sure how to put it into words.

{...Well, I'll think more about it later. Why don't we wander around and train up for our next trial?}

"Oh! Sounds good, boss!"

{Archer. Wanna stay out of your ball and follow us for a while?}

"Drit, drit!"

{I figured you would...Let's go.}

I kicked off the ground and set into the tall grass, my two most trusted packmates close behind. But even as the breeze blew in my face and all of my troubles wanted to simply wash away with the tide, I couldn't shake off what I was thinking of earlier.

The matter of control, and how the world really worked, continued to turn the wheels in my head. What WAS control? How was it attained? How was it supposed to be used? Did it have any real purpose in the big scheme of things?

...Did it even exist at all?

And...Did HUMANS worry about things like this like I was? Maybe I was just overthinking things again; I realized that I'd been thinking a lot of existential things lately. Why did I worry so much about things like that? There was so much more to think about. So much more that was BETTER to focus on. I had a new home to explore, a new and still-growing pack of Pokémon at my side, human companions to help guide me...What made me ponder such things?

A rustle in the tall grass cut my thought off and grabbed my attention.

Archer withdrew an arrow quill. and the enemy waddled out of the grass and confronted us...A Psyduck. Not the most worthy opponent, but it would do for some extra training.

"Psy?"

{Seems like a decent first opponent,} I said to myself, digging out King's ball and releasing him. {Alright, King! Give it a good Crunch!}

{I'm on it!}

As the battle engaged, I finally felt more at ease...I decided to wait to look for answers to the questions I had until I actually needed them.
 

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I'm baaaacckkk!! I reviewed a few times in the past but now I'm gonna get to do it again! With all new fresh thoughts.


Everything about this is VERY WRONG.

It's pulling me closer.

It won't stop!
Love me a good prologue, and this keeps it nice and succicnt. Very isekai/PLA energy, also reminds me of PMD in a good way.
Get yoinked Echo!
Another beast!?!

This one looks different...Not as big. On all fours. It doesn't smell bad. It's white and gold, and it's glowing like the daylight.
Hello Arceus! Looking back I wonder if this is just due to the situation or if there's a little divine interference that we'll see this play into later in the fic. Did Arceus choose her or simply give her a second chance? I guess we'll see!
Ocean.
Ocean.

How did I know what I was looking at? I'd never seen the ocean before, and I never picked the idea, or even the name of it up from anywhere. I just...knew.
It's cool that Arceus (presumably) gave her a little language upgrade. Its both interesting and a little mindbending to think about how she's now been given the context to understand the world around her. Also a useful shorthand to justify catching her up to speed on stuff so she can be a trainer
It turned out I knew a lot of things now; so much that it almost made my head hurt once I realized it, as though the words had been crammed right into my head, swimming around faster the more of them I realized were there. I was on a beach, and small waves crashed onto the shore. I watched the foaming ripples as they were drawn back into the sea, only to return just mere moments later. The sight of it was mesmerizing; hypnotic, almost. For a moment, I felt like I could watch this all day.
I enjoyed this description here of her overloading on all these words and understanding all these strange new words about the world around her.
For the first time in my life, I actually understood what they were saying; word for word.
Human language comprehension! :quag: Now that is very useful.
Now those were words I didn't know, that I hadn't somehow figured out. Blood loss? Operating table? What were they going to do to me? What was wrong with me?
At the same time I do appreciate there's just some words and concepts she doesn't quite get, especially complex ones or human ones it seems.
To think, just the other day I had almost...

...What happened the other day?
A little sprinkle of amnesia as a treat
Their conversation became an incoherent muffle as they ascended and disappeared up the stairs...And the moment I knew they were gone, my eyes shot open and I quietly stood back up.
Clever girl
The faint smell coming through the tiny seams between the two ball halves did smell like meat or prey.
Its kind of neat that apparently she can scent mon from inside the balls, so I can only presume they're not digitized in this verse but rather its spatial compression.
Only then realizing my hunger, I was determined to get it out, so with a flick of my wrist, I threw the object across the room, expecting it to crack open and drop some of what it had inside.
This mental image is glorious. First moment of being a pokemon trainer!

Also for a hot second I remember how I was worried that she was gonna try to eat poor Rowlet since Rowlet is prey
and much rounder than a thrush.
much much rounder lol

This is still just as delightful to read as the first time I read it. Nice and punchy, a good balance of elements in the first chapter and not too long either. We get a nice bit of whump as Echo copes with the injuries she got during jurassic world 1. Poor thing. I really enjoy Echo's internal narration as she discovers more about her new situation and cognition. And all her immediate self doubts and frustrations with being the runt and weakest when Lillie calls her strong. Immediately gives her some good characterization and important hints just which raptor this is.

Also the first bonding moment between her and Rowlet was super cute. I liked how she was immediately like "FINALLY I AM ALPHA" but she's not mean about it or anything, it just excites her to have someone look up to her, and then her immediate next thought is how she can try and look for her siblings :(. (But also, having seeen JW... sorry Echo.. :( )

It also happens to be a pretty fun approach to not name her at all in narration, not until later as I happen to know. Its not entirely obscured from the audience if they've watched JW but it is unknown to Echo herself which gives a solid setup to have her fret about this and I happen to know we'll get a cool scene about that later.

{Is your neck alright?}

This time, it was Beta speaking.
Its telling bit of characterization for whats going on here and why Blue/Beta is the one who comes to check. I happen to know here that its the key trait the others lacked - capability of empathy, so its great that it is hinted at here this early.

Also I really like the flashbacks we get to her time growing up with the pack.
"No...I've scoured every species catalogue on my bookshelf AND on the net, and I can't find anything on it. It hasn't been documented by anyone in any region. And I can't find a genetic match to the blood sample anywhere. Her DNA shares quite a few genetic similarities to the incomplete Electric-Type specimen found in Galar, as well as a mix of reptilian genes found in species like Sceptile and Haxorous, and even traces of amphibian DNA...But none of those three species share even a quarter of her code combined."
I think its super neat that she shares all these trace similarities of "reptilian" stuff with other reptilian pokemon and parts of Arcto/Dracozolt.
"I don't know...She has extremely weak aura readings compared to any other Pokémon discovered so far; too weak to even use battle moves.
YESSSSS I love this bit of worldbuilding about how pokemon are essentially aura based and this is tangible thing that can be detected. And that this is also what lets them use moves.
If she were wild, it would've encapsulated her. If she already had a ball, she'd be coated by a protective barrier that would prevent illegitimate capture.
Another tasty bit of worldbuilding about how pokeballs work here to prevent capture of already tagged mon.
Hmm...Not sure 'bout that yet, either. Who knows? Maybe she'd like to decide herself when the time comes."
I like that even if she's not pokemon they prefer to defer to her, since it also implies a lot about how pokemon are regarded in this world. Basically, even if she is or isn't a pokemon, she sort of resembles one, and they treat her sort of like one, which helps show how pokemon are treated well still and they'll defer to the name she chooses.
"Whoa, whoa, whoa, hold on just a second, Rowlet!" the Professor exclaimed, seemingly amused. "What'cha doin', buddy? Ah ha...I mean, you two can be friends, but she can't be your Trainer, nah!"

Rowlet hooted at him in disdain, a scowl having spread across his white face, and he gained a bit more of an intimidation factor in spite of his small size.

"Ah come on, Rowlet, don't give me that look."
ahaahh sorry Prof this isn't up to you
He puffed his feathers out stubbornly, then flew to the ground, grabbed the Poké Ball and tossed it at me. I instinctively responded by grabbing it in my jaws before moving it down into my hands. Rowlet then proceeded to tap his beak on the ball, which reduced him back to a glowing mass and sucked him back inside. All I did in response was stand there, still dumbfounded by how such a contraption worked.
< 3 I adore captures like this where the pokemon themselves go "Nope this one is mine"
"I mean, lookit'chah...You look awesome!"
Hau's immediate reaction being that she looks awesome is great
I never really acknowledged just how big and sharp my own were; only those that belonged to my sisters...
A nice bit of characterization woven in here how she never takes time to think anything highly of herself.
I was somewhat tempted to turn them into a meal, seeing how small they were, but they were very fast and very nasty, so I figured it would be best to find food elsewhere.
First reminder here of her predatory instincts >:}
"That's an echo."
{wiggles eyebrows}
...An echo...

...What was it about that word that made it so familiar?
{wiggles eyebrows harder}

Chapter 2 is great. We get some fun flashbacks to show "Omega's" experiences back home, and her relationship with her siblings, which is turn gives us good insight into her as a character. She obviously doesn't think much of herself as far as heirarchy or power, not believing Lillie when she's called strong and not thinking much of her claws. Also she's very excited as I said to be the "Alphe" in her relationship with Rowlet.

I love that Rowlet is the one who ultimately chooses her though. They bond nice and quick but he's joining her pack just as much as she has claimed him. Also a great choice of starter since Rowlet is the best birb and best starter.

Hau is charming and sweet here, and I like his immediate sense of acceptance towards Echo. Also the dialogue here is simple but really solid. Each character talks very distinctly and in a way that the speech is easy to follow without dialogue tags.

Now that Echo has officially claimed Rowlet as hers and even done her first battle I can't wait to reread and see the rest of her journey towards becoming a trainer and doing the island challenges!

All in all, gud fic, can't wait to reread and review, I hope you are able to continue writing this!



 
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