Pokémon TCG2: Doduo Adventures - Book One: TCG Island

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Here for the Mini Blitz, reading Chapter 5! It’s been some time since I last checked out the fic, so I may end up misremembering some parts.

Wow! Thanks a bunch for stopping in, @MegaAbsolOfDespair ! I always love to see readers get farther in the fic!

The chapter starts with the gentleman having a duel against David. If I remember correctly, he’s one of the Science Club members, right?

Correct!

I remember the previous chapter focusing on the Science Club.

Also, correct. I split the science club into two parts due to the drinking scene with Rick in the previous chapter being so long.

Either way, the gentleman wins the duel!

After that, the next battle is against Joseph, which the gentleman wins once again. After that, we get a scene showing more of Rick’s eccentricity, which I remember enjoying!

I’m excited to see the next chapter, which will probably be at the Fire Club.

Indeed it will! I look forward to your next review whenever you get to it.

I do think the duel scenes were a bit too detailed and took up most of the chapter’s contents.

At this point, I get mixed results on that. You tell me there are too many details. Spiteful Murkrow tells me there isn't enough. This tells me I might already have a good balance. There is no way to please everyone, after all.

By the way, I like the feature of extra text when you hover over the card names.

Thank you!! It's such a pain to implement, but I can't ignore how much the readers enjoy it, so I'm in the process of implementing it in all chapters. I have it complete through chapter 12 so far.