Review Tag

[WildBoots]

I reviewed chapter 1 of Casting Off!

Looking for a review of Continental Divides. (The content warnings are at the top! If any of those are triggers for you, DM me and I'll provide some alternatives.)

 

[Starlight Aurate]

Provided a review for the latest chapter of Continental Divides!

I'd like a review for... anything in my sig? I'd prefer one of the later chapters of Drowning, but the one-shots Carraig na Coinnle, Under a Bed of Clover, or Keeping Friends will also work! (Keep in mind that Keeping Friends is not Pokemon, it's Yu-Gi-Oh!)

 

[K_S]

It's been a incredibly long time since I've done anything like this but I hope this review for "Under a bed of clover" works for you.

I've the intent to get to read "Drowning" but per time constraints picked the shorter work you offered.

As I'm unfamiliar with how to do links on a forum LINK to review I made a bit of a guess using the menu and a google search, please drop me a line if I did it wrong.

As for my work... I'll toss up three links for whoever wants to go through whichever takes their fancy with a quick descriptor for each, the links will lead to my ao3 account as I don't have a lot of time to actually post things on another median.

Transversal An attempt at a Manga 'verse game crossover with a dash of canon destruction as an aside.
EDITED 10/21... So I missed that part where it's supposed to link to the home site... sorry. I'll post the others here when time permits. Transversal, Forum Version is available up to chapter 4.

Dodging Consequences an Anime/Game AU with a dash of reincarnation, incomplete but enough up to get a gist of where things are going.
Edit 10/21: added the forum version, Dodging Consequences for easier reading.

Two paths to One End, is a monster of a fic it's basically been a WIP for years. I just wrapped it up but it's probably only a good suggestion for someone with a lot of time on their hands. If you do go for this one.. it gets close to mature post chapter 36. I think I've set up all the approp warnings in the tags so I'd glance there before going too deep into the work itself.

 

[Flyg0n]

I'll give this shot! I left a review of my thoughts on the first couple chapters of Dodging Consequences here

And I'd dearly love some feedback on my main story, Legendary Adventures!
Here's the link to it ffn: HERE

Or on forums (although all the chaps arent up yet)
There's no real warnings, its a trainerfic following an OC on an original plot.

 

[BlackHairedPsycho]

I enjoyed Legendary Adventure. It was a good read and I would recommend.

Here's my work, Legends Legacy.

 

[Negrek]

I enjoyed Legendary Adventure. It was a good read and I would recommend.

Here's my work, Legends Legacy.

Awesome! Thanks for moving the game along. In the future, please do include a link to your review, though, so I don't need to track it down--I wouldn't have guessed you'd put yours on FFN, for example.

 

[Flyg0n]

Reviewed legends legacy! Was very fun, highly enjoyed.

Pokémon - Legends Legacy: A Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Adventure

With the disappearance of the Legendary Pokemon, Dungeon appearances have significantly increased. This is historically a bad sign, but it doesn't matter much for Team Disaster (yet). Join Rio, Scales, Pana, and most recently Blue as they uncover the mysteries still left in the world, try not to...

forums.thousandroads.net

I would love a review on either
Home is Where the Hoenn is
Or (preferably)
Legendary Adventures

 

[canisaries]

Reviewed the first chapter of Legendary Adventures.

I'd like a review on my favorite child, my beloved son, Hunter, Haunted. However, I understand that it is quite graphic and contains things some people would like to steer clear of, so I'm also putting up Seiren as an option. I'd really prefer a review on HH, though, so I request those that can to give it a try. Thank you.

 

[WildBoots]

I reviewed Chapter 2 of Hunter, Haunted (about 600 words)!

I'm throwing Continental Divides back into the ring. The top of the thread has detailed notes on content, but the short and the sweet of it is a fair amount of cursing ✅ small amounts of blood (like, nosebleeds) ✅, drinking and smoking ✅, and political shenanigans ✅. If you think it'll be too triggering for you (or if you're already caught up) and you really want to play tag, DM me and I can suggest some alternatives.

 

[BossCar]

I left an review on Continental Divides on A03. Hope that’s okay.

Speaking of A03, The Price of War is up to Chapter 20 there, so I’d check it out over there. https://archiveofourown.org/works/27177500

I feel like the early chapters are a bit weak, but I think my chapters have gotten better.

 

[Negrek]

Ah, sorry for the confusion--the way this thread works is, you review the story of the person who posted before you, and then submit yours for review. So for the moment the story on the docket remains BossCar's The Price of War!

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

ah whoops sorry.

 

[BossCar]

Ah, sorry for the confusion--the way this thread works is, you review the story of the person who posted before you, and then submit yours for review. So for the moment the story on the docket remains BossCar's The Price of War!

The title’s been changed to Reaching for my Future. Just fyi to everyone.

 

[K_S]

Meh, the game's been in lock-mode for a while so it's an understandable mistake to make. I actually PMed Bosscar to make sure they were still present on the site and asked if it was OK to read/review their work. I got a green light to tackle a later chapter on the ao3 site. So here is its review...

my review

I'd like a bit of feed back on Transversal please.... though if you (whoever descides to tackle it) could tollerate getting up to chapter 2 when they drop a line? I'm presently hammering out some fixes for sentence structure on chapter one and don't need much more feed back on it... just the time to actually sit down and do the work on it. Chapter 2 and everything after it has basically been untouched and I'm concerned about clarity from that point on up.

transversal

 

[Blackjack Gabbiani]

Reviewed Transversal, though I feel like I'm missing something. Did you delete a lot of it or something? Other reviews refer to events that aren't anywhere in the chapters there at present.

I would love, love, love for someone to read Obsession please. I've been working on it for 20 years and it's kind of my magnum opus. I know the first few chapters aren't very good but I can't really redo them until the fic is finished, which may be *another* 20 years at the rate I'm going. It just got Best Expansion of Canon in the 2020 Serebii fic awards so I must be doing something right! Haha...haha...

 

[canisaries]

Reviewed chapters 1-5.

I'd like a review for Hunter, Haunted. Be wary of the content warnings if you go for it. If you don't want to read something rated mature, I'm also fine with a review for Seiren.

 

[GrayGriffin]

Left a review for the early part of Seiren here.

I'd like a review for my new fairytale anthology, please!

 

[kintsugi]

only just now realized I spelled "fairy tale" wrong for the entirety of this review, smh, gonna go fix that.

I'd like a review for the envy of eden, please!

 

[K_S]

Reviewed chapters one and two of "envy of Eden". Hopefully, it's alright.

the review

I've no stipulations or particularities on what I want looked at in my fic. So whoever takes it, go wild on whatever tangent you want I guess.

I have a new fic to offer to the chopping block, it's RD, so don't expect perfection.

Roost, a gift fic

Just be mindful it's earned its trigger warnings which are.
Child abuse (discussed) murder(discussed) profanities (thanks Green and Will) and child abduction (discussed)

 

[Navar]

Reviewed the first chapter of Roost. Neat story, might read more if I'm not busy, as I really like the manga universe.

My story is here. I'm no really looking for grammar feedback, at least not during the early chapters, as I've already done all I could to edit them. Mostly just wanting the opinions on the story and what could be done to improve the prose, and perhaps descriptions, I feel like these are my weakest points, heh. And in terms of characterization, it would be nice to see someone comment on that as well. Hope whoever picks this enjoys the story!