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It didn't come as much surprise that Diyem knew Brisa was there, but it sent sparks down her back all the same. She once again considered her options. She could walk out. She could interrogate this charizard for the information those who'd already departed had not thought to seek. Demand...

I'd like to volunteer for reviewing, writing, and art. I'm a renaissance cat.

Hi Umbra! Sorry to keep you waiting for your catnip review. To compensate for my delay, I've read the first two chapters. I have to say, they were a pretty fun read! There's a lot being done right here. Characterisation is clear and distinct mostly through expression and dialogue, the prose is...

Player Type: Front Lines Character Name: Brisa Escarpa Aliases: Brisket, Bzzap, Breccia, Bolas, Bitch, Bronte, Zeraora of the Outworlds Species: Mountain Luxray Ultra Familiar: Zeraora Luz Shadow: Sombra DM control: Full Basic Personality: Somewhat terse, and uncomfortable with uncertainty in...

Well, this was cute as heck! It was a pleasure to read, and pretty breezy for its length. As a piece of xenofiction, Finding Mahoun does a lot right. The social structure and lifestyle of the rattata and the threatening world they live in are communicated well and make sense; these aren't...

5m, done in a state of 😢 about how much i could actually get done inside the time limit. Can you tell what body parts I had less time to do? I can. Oof. next person pls droaw my D and D pc she is called Gauri and she is a tigre as you can probly tell she is a total badass n redy to kill...

This is a tricky one for me. I don't really "do" favourites, and there are countless pokémon I'm about equally fond of. Still, I'd have to say that Mewtwo is definitely up there for more or less the same reasons as yours! He's been a long-held minor fixation of mine for a bunch of reasons, and...

Hi, Chibi! It's been a while I know, but it's time to finally give this a review at last. Great work, and I'm keen to read on!

Hey Nebby! I'm glad to finally be leaving a comment on TCATS, it's about time. This is a pretty strong opening chapter — I have a sense of Shine's character and an investment in seeing him get the answers (and peace) he needs, the setting feels fuller for having the kind of details I really...

My (F9, 18 in human years) human partner (F19) went to live away from home to attend uni and left me behind. Instead of waiting for her to come home, I also left and made a lot of changes to my lifestyle and appearance. I don't expect she'd recognise me if we ever met each other again, but I...

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Dropped a review yesterday, forgot about this thread though! 😬

I loved this! It was pretty short and sweet (bittersweet?) by my judgment, and absolutely worth the read. The integration of graphical elements, the minor format screw, and lore/mechanical details from the games were all implemented well and I'd say they really paid off. The plot was compelling...

Hi there, Canis! It sure has been a while since my last review, huh? Sorry about that, my brain is just constantly on the fritz. Anyway, Whelp: this is some of your best work, in my opinion. Everythnig you told me you wanted to be doing in HH came to the foreground of this piece. The dark...

Hi there! Here for the Catnip Circle, and this is my first time reading your work. First up, I have to say that this fic really isn't my personal cup of tea, by which I mean I wouldn't normally read a story with this kind of premise or vibe. So what I've done is I've tried to think carefully...

Finally read and reviewed a chapter of TMoA!

Hi Cress, sorry to take so long in getting round to this! Let's go~ First off, as I've been saying on Discord for a while now, I wish you'd have some more confidence and pride in your own writing. Your prose demonstrates real proficiency as a writer, and you are on equal footing with any...

As per a discussion from April 1st on the 'cord, here's the thread where you can explain what your fic is about, when you really get right down to it. It's easier to show the concept than explain it: Me, explaining my fanfic: Q. What is Different Eyes about? A. It's about social isolation...

I wanted to get 10k words of any kind of prose fiction written. I'm most of the way there, and it's mostly been Different Eyes, so I guess that's a success! Without Camp NaNo I doubt I'd be as far in as I am.